A Fan's Notes

(reflections while reading Laura's Story)

[used by permission]

 

 

Chapter 284:

 

Ah, I think I like the way this chapter is starting [Joy was waiting for Laura, sitting on her steps when she arrived home from work, her long arms folded across her raised knees, her legs bare and brown and sleek (and long, long), reminding Laura of the sweet treasure that was hidden between them.] Young love is in the air. I have come home or been waiting for lovers myself over the years. I remember when I was Joy's age waiting on a mature lover making sure to arrive just before she got home or hiding down the street and waiting for her to show up. The beauty of it was that no one suspected we were lovers because I was a girl. I loved it. The world so doesn't accept us as of yet, that I could be very bold at times and no one saw it. I so loved playing with man's world. I love how you never miss a chance to begin describing your lovely angels. We are immediately reminded of Joy's long length and the beauty of her skin color. I so know of that treasure that lies between every woman's thighs. Oh geez, it seems that Carmela could not wait to tell Joy that she is now getting some of Laura's sweet loving and now Joy is turning hellcat on us. I see that despite Carmela's sweet demeanor she can be a little devious. I see that Laura is like me in the sense that she tries to be quick on her feet. She is surprised at this turn of events but she realizes that there is some good coming of this. The idea that she and Carmela are lovers is out and now she can turn the events to her favor. She knows that Joy is besotted with her and she should be able to placate her and soon have her understanding and dying to have a threesome. It is so easy to be warm with your lover when she is being catty when you are feeling [She smiled down at Joy, unable to suppress the clear sexual warmth that permeated her body merely on seeing her sitting there.] Now all I have to do is get her focusing on her warmth for me and all will be well. When you love someone you just naturally want to get past the rancor and back into each other's loving arms.

I so love how you make your spitfires so loveable. When Laura responds reasonably to Joy's catty remark about fucking Carmela behind her back we now see her fear and vulnerability that makes you melt for her [Joy made a very fetching moue with her mouth. She looked down at the asphalt of the street, then back up at Laura, squinting, looking like a small child who couldn't make up her mind. "Did you like her better than me?"] When you show us this little girl side of Joy the reader just feels for her and wants to love her. She is not being evil she is just afraid that Laura is now in love with Carmela and not her. I can understand that fear of not being adequate and I would be dying to take her in my arms and soothing her fear and then fucking her pussy lovingly and deeply with my hungry tongue and plunging fingers. I so love reading Laura's calmness and loving response to Joy's accusations and I love seeing how sometimes you have to work to get your woman totally mollified ["Oh, Joy." Laura sat down with her on the steps. "You know how I adore you. It has nothing to do with that. You know, she's very lovely, just like you. I know you know that. You've been to bed with her lots more than I have. You wouldn't want to deprive me of that pleasure, would you?" Joy nodded. "Yes. I would. I want you for me. I don't want her to have any of you."] I am always working on women who are jealous and selfish in getting them to stop this silliness and then teach them to hunger for all the pussy they can get. Life is so much better when you fully share yourself with others and them with you. I so love making newbies and the jealous

types into raging lesbian sluts like myself giving and taking all the loving they can get. Life is to fucking short to waste on stupid negative emotions. Sure they crop up but we should put them behind us as quickly as possible and with as little rancor as possible. Another thing is to simply let go of any hurt and pain. Forgive and move on. Of course that can be hard to do but I am doing so much better as I get more mature with age. Now if I could only stop the aging part. Oh well.

Now Laura plants the wonderful seed of her and Joy having a threesome with Carmela. Joy is not a mean or truly selfish girl. She immediately takes to the idea like the wonderful lesbian slut she is. Sigh, unfortunately she does insist on calling Carmela a "bitch". I so hate we women always calling each other that name. Unfortunately, I still do myself when I am all mad and riled though I am constantly getting better. To Laura's credit she doesn't let this ride or fester. She confronts Joy on her nasty feelings and we discover ["Because she tried to steal you from me. And she's so . . . fucking pretty. And she has those nice big titties, and that big ass. I'll bet you did like her more than me and you're just being nice. She comes fast, too. Not like me. All you have to do is say 'Let's do it,' to her and she nearly starts coming. I'll bet you liked that."] I so feel for Joy. Carmela is truly a stunning young woman. When I am out with my archangels or with Dodie and now her Frankie I am with tens. They are simply stunning. I know I am a high number but not the perfection of my closet loves. Sometimes they need to stroke and love coo to me that they think I also am perfection to them. I hope that Carmela is doing this with Joy. I think I can sense a deep love between them and hopefully when Joy is not being weak she can sense and revel in the complete love and devotion that Carmela must lavish on her. I bet that Carmela thinks that she is the luckiest girl in the world to have Joy as her bedmate. It is so easy if one is not careful to fall into the trap of thinking of oneself as inferior. I love how you have made Joy and Carmela so different and yet stunning and lovely. They are almost like ying and yang. I think they just compliment each other. I just hope they don't let jealousy ruin a great thing they have going on.

I like how you show the caution we must show in the world. Laura has to look around to make sure no one is looking before she leans in with an almost innocent intimacy to whisper in Joy's ear that she loves making love to her, Joy, and loves to work on making her come hard. I sure wish the world was open enough to let women love each other in public without fear and allow adult women to take lovely teenagers under their wing to teach and love openly. Sigh, maybe one day my sisters in the future will have this freedom to love and teach young lovers in the joys of love and lust. Joy simply melts at Laura's heart felt admission. I wish we could always be proud of our bodies and not compare it to other women's bodies negatively. When a woman keeps her body in shape she should be happy with it. You are right when you highlight how we often wish we had a different build and measurements. I so love all body types and love women with that lean whippet body build. They are such hungry fuck animals in my bed that I so love fucking them long, hard and deep. I am so happy that Laura has allayed Joy's insecurities and now invites her inside so she can prove it. Unfortunately, the fates are not being kind. Joy's father is home and she must go home. I love seeing how Joy used getting the mail as an excuse to see Laura. I will use any excuse to be in an angel's presence. I want to revel in your proximity. It is proximity that leads to hot loving. This is how I would feel in Laura's position [Laura tried not to appear crestfallen. She had a free evening, and the prospect of rolling around naked in the sheets with this delicious girl was very alluring.] I never want to be denied sweet pussy when I think I am close to getting my woman. I always want to fuck.

They make some more pleasantries about Joy's home life and trying to get a time set up for the hot three way fuck they are dying for. I had to smile indulgently at Joy making Laura promising to not fuck Carmela again until all three can fuck together. I would give this promise also. Normally I would gladly fuck Carmela behind Joy's back since one should never miss a chance to share love but I think here I would have to honor that agreement. Carmela has already proven she has loose lips when it comes to keeping sex a secret from Joy. I think she loves Joy so much that she must share and at that age the desire to compete is so great. One must not destroy beautiful relationships for short term gain. With time I can teach them to gladly share my love between them. For now I would have to also honor their wishes. I love reading what happens next. Laura goes inside and knows she needs some sweet release after getting worked up. Yeah! masturbation time. Instead of lying on her bed and masturbating thinking of Joy and Carmela she pulls out the mystical Stevie tape and quickly jerks off to a crushing orgasm. I wish I had such a tape to view over and over again. What is out there on the porn market is so boring and not much good. Watching Stevie or I come hard on tape or DVD would make my pussy so hot and come so easily. I, like Laura, would love to watch myself come. I wonder if Rhonda has moved on from Stevie and her manipulative ways. It would have been cool to have seen Laura and Rhonda turn the tables on her with a loving assault to even the score. I like how Laura sees Stevie in Joy's lean beautiful body and sees them both coming in her mind's eye. Laura doesn't think about doing the nasty with her sweet cheerleaders but I would not hesitate. I am always fantasizing about my women. I can just see Joy on the edge of one of our sofas leaning back with her legs spread wide and her legs pushed back with me setting on the floor in front of her and just so sweetly tonguing and licking her pussy and then pushing my tongue in and starting to tongue fuck her softly and then with more force before licking and sucking her pussy. Sucking her lips out and gnawing and then moving up and licking and sucking her clit and then licking down her slit and then moving down and teasing her asshole that just puckers out for me. Then moving back up and working her pussy, then clit and back down to her asshole and now forcing open and starting to tongue fuck open and now fucking her sphincter hard with my tongue. Just keeping moving around and sucking, licking and tongue fucking. Then pushing her back a little more to make that bridge between her cunt and asshole stand out and then licking and sucking that area hard. I find women love to have that area worked hot, wet and hard. It is so sensitive and ignored.

Then just working for twenty more minutes of sweet cunt meat and tender asshole dining before moving up and sucking her clit into my mouth and sucking in and out fast while whipsawing with my tongue and now pumping three fingers in her cunt and two in and out her sweet clasping asshole. Sucking and pumping both fuck holes in time or counter time until she simply explodes and her pelvis is simply exploding off the cushions into my hard pressing face and wildly plunging fingers. Looking up and seeing her slashed face and her arms flailing or wildly pinching and pulling her nipples while her elbows are

chicken-winging for all her worth. Fucking her hard until I sense the time is right to start gentling my sucks and pumping and bringing her back to earth with my fingers planted deep in her holes and now gentle lathing of her tired clit before removing my fingers and licking clean before I clean up her wasted cunt and all that cunt juice that dribbled down her ass and into her yummy asshole plus any ass juice that has coated her asshole. Yum!!! And then I have Carmela to fuck!! Yeah!

We now discover that abstinence is not a good thing. Joy's dad does not leave on his business trip for another ten days and the two teenagers are about to go crazy. It seems that they have to make love at Joy's place and now they can't have their mini orgy with Laura or even sex between themselves and it is showing. They are both calling and whining about not being able to see her and have their three way fuck. I had to smile at Carmela trying to get Laura to let her sneak down for some loving but Laura wisely refuses knowing that the chances are great Joy will find out. While Laura is tempted she does resist though. Just thinking about sucking Carmela's wonderful black pussy would have to weaken the strongest saint. I love Carmela's youthful passion and emotions [Carmela sulked a little on the other end but finally gave in. "He better leave soon," she threatened, "or I'm gonna die of waiting."] Laura is not suffering as much since she has Sara but the poor girls are getting desperate. I know I would be wearing by pussy out masturbating. I so love masturbating and pleasuring myself that I probably would be hanging alright. I want my pussy but if I can masturbate crazily I can survive until the drought is over. Finally, Joy calls and informs Laura at work that her father is finally going on his trip. I had to smile at Laura saying she will get off at six and meet them soon after and then having to stew in her own juices the rest of the work day knowing that as soon as she can get away from work she will be having these two wonderful fuck angels in her bed. Such sweet torture thinking of blistering sex waiting for you. I love it when I get a phone call or one of my work angels suddenly makes it known we can meet after work for some loving. I simply can't wait to get away and fuck them blind.

I had to smile at Laura's consternation when she gets home and doesn't see Carmela's car or the girls waiting for her. She worries like anyone would until she realizes that they are smart enough to not both be waiting on her doorstep and must be at Joy's place. Instead of waiting for them to come to her she decides to go to them. I love how she just walks down to Joy's place. Just act natural and like nothing is going on and no one will think a thing. We women are just such perfect angels that man's world tags us with that we can simply walk right down the street to an angel's nest and no one will even notice if you are just a little careful. I love how society's stupid rules sometimes work to our favor. I have to love how the girls answer the knocking on their door with youthful, mirthful giggling. To be so young and innocent and full of pure mirth. I am still happy and smiling but one can never recapture that youthful exuberance. In fact Laura's adult mind wonders a little if maybe they aren't playing a game on her ["Laura . . . what a surprise," Joy said, trying to keep from smiling. Carmela appeared behind her, peeping over her shoulder, grinning with sheepish glee. "Hiiiiii Laura." For a brief second Laura wondered if she had been made the butt of some stupid adolescent joke. Don't be paranoid, she told herself. "Hi, guys." "Well, aren't you going to come inside?" Joy said ostentatiously, holding the door open wider for her. They were both wearing their cheerleader outfits. Oh god, they planned this, Laura thought, blushing, also tickled to the core with happy lust.] I love how you show the doubt and then elation that one can feel in the same situation. I must have faith in my angels but sometimes an action or word can set my heart a flutter in trepidation when there is no reason for it. Of course there are those times when danger is in the air and one needs to be cognizant of those times also and think very, very fast.

Wow, I have had cheerleading girlfriends do a routine for me before but never two at once. I am very, very envious of Laura here. I love again the youthful inexperience of the girls. They have this all planned out but are now not sure how to proceed. It takes Laura's gentle prodding of asking them to show her their routine that gets them past their stage fright so to speak and now they can once more continue their planned seductive show. I sure do love their youthful love of life you so clearly show [They looked at each other and burst into gales of laughter. "We want to show you something," Carmela laughed, barely able to contain her mirth. "Come here, Joy."] What I really love here is am sure other authors would have them do a seamless, flawless dance of the seven veils while you more perfectly show them as true living breathing teenagers who constantly break into giggles and outright laughter and still put on a damn sexy show with lots of dips, bending, leg kicks and crotch shots for Laura. I have a thing for twirling their pom-poms in those circular motions with limp wrists while gyrating around. Wowee, makes me hot. I love how you so quickly describe their stunning beauty that other authors always forget to show [Laura was absolutely consumed by stark, ravening lust as she stood there watching them. She had of course imagined how it would be to have them both together, but this was a paradise far beyond her feeble imaginings. Joy, taller and leaner than Carmela, was also lighter-skinned, her legs long and thin, her breasts high and bouncing under the cloth of her uniform. Her wide, sensual mouth was slightly open in an alluring pout, the gap between her upper teeth making Laura's pussy flutter. Carmela was much darker, shorter, but beautifully formed, her legs perfectly shaped, her body thicker and more curvaceous, her dark skin smooth and gleaming, her breasts moving too under her uniform but not bouncing since they were so firm. Her thick, puffy nipples made bulbous shapes under the yellow cloth that made Laura's mouth water.] You snared me early on with you descriptions of these women. You tell us about the actual woman. Other authors just tell us, maybe, the size of their tits and ass. What a cardboard cutout. You show us everything like I so long to know and revel in. I have been besotted by your descriptions of how your women's body are just so damn sexy in their clothing and how this can be hypnotic. The hiding of treasures that soon you will be revealing for your happy eyes to devour in lust and love. All I can say is thank you for your loving prose of your women's bodies and letting their unique personalities shine forth.

I love how you show that Laura so revels in the moment. She loves the contrast between their skin colors and their different builds and feels like this is the first time with them, though she has fucked both. Just the dynamic of them both being together and doing their sexy routine must make it feel so unique and wonderful to Laura. Laura is like me in that she lives for the moment [They smiled saucily at Laura, who had fucked them both and yet felt that she was seeing them for the first time. Something about them being together and putting on a performance for her like this made them seem entirely different and wildly fetching to her.] One must respond to such passion and youthful spirit. I am chuckling when Laura declares her lust and begs for a kiss. The girls act all coy about Laura trying something "fresh" and demurring. I love the Mohammad quote. I am so there when Laura takes them in her arms [She quickly crossed the few feet separating them and scooped them both up in her arms. She buried her face in Joy's smooth, long, brown neck and let her lips travel up to Joy's earlobe, nipping it hungrily. Then she turned her face to Carmela, catching her mouth and slipping her tongue rapidly between Carmela's parted lips. Meanwhile, her hands crawled rapaciously all over their bodies, feeling their warm, springy young flesh through the cloth of their cheerleader outfits, finding the gaps where the tops overlapped the skirts and slipping her fingers under them to caress each girl's velvety soft skin.] I so love scooping up my archangels or other pairs of lovers and just letting my mouth and hands roam all that sweet flesh as they take mine and each others. Such sweet fire and passion. It is just so rad moving from one hot mouth to another and trading all that hot spit as you have all that flesh to clutch and press against.

I am chuckling as only you would have Java now get all hyper and wanting to play and probably getting jealous and wanting to make sure "she" is the center and not her master Joy. Love Laura saving the day when she suggests they go down to her house and how to do it discreetly [Both girls went quickly from solemn despair to total relief. Laura explained to them that they would have to go one at a time, a decent intervals. No sense in arousing the curiosity of the neighbors. "I'll go first. Then Carmela, after five minutes or so. Then you, Joy. Another five minutes."] Love how you show the turning of the emotions from despair to elation in the girls. This is why older lovers are so great. They know much better how to work the situations that one's inexperience can't yet handle. Had to smile at Joy's whining that they had better wait for her and how Laura uses a long hot passionate kiss to allay her fears. I love how you show the girls just so zeroing in on the passion around them when Carmela stares so intently at their loving kiss. I always find passion and sex to be just so riveting and I know it was even more so for me at their age. Laura then goes down to her house to wait for their arrival. I can usually read people pretty well and I didn't see Carmela being so forward. Maybe she did actively seduce Joy like Joy described. The last chapter had me wondering. What has led to my change in thinking is how she immediately removes her top and shows off her braless breasts to Laura when she arrives at Laura's apartment. She knows they should wait for Joy to arrive but just doesn't care. She wants to have Laura now and let the fates do what they will. I have to love her desires but she should really wait for her archangel to arrive. Archangels know how to delay their own enjoyment to make it so much better for her other archangels.

I am strong but I too would be weakening quickly like Laura here if Carmela was doing this for me [She turned from the window to Carmela, who again cupped her breasts in her hands, lifting them slightly, which was hard since they were so firm and out-thrusting already. She looked down at them, as Laura was doing, and brushed her thumbs over her thick, bulbous nipples, until the telltale tiny bumps sprang up on her wide areolas.] I love how only you show the subtle aspects of lovemaking. Other authors miss these little moments that make lovemaking so wonderful and potent. I am a sucker for sass and self-confidence and would be drooling when Carmela responds to my commands of wait with [Carmela tilted her head and smirked again, eyes sparkling. "What if I don't?"] I really have no defenses against such devastating self confidence. It makes me so totally your slut. Fortunately Joy arrives before Laura or myself would weaken. I have to smile at her appraisal of the situation she finds upon her arrival ["Cunt!" she snarled at Carmela. "Couldn't wait, could you!"] Other authors always have things flow along so sweetly and perfectly. While you show how so many women are just plain jealous and super competitive. They both want to have the upper hand with Laura even though they are archangels to each other. Sigh, so human and so accurate. Joann herself can get real competitive if Maria and I forget she is the alpha wolf of our pack. Laura uses her maturity and uses her knowledge of their relationship to quickly suggest that she and Joy give Carmela exactly what she is craving; hot fucking. Of course Joy [Joy's face burst into a smile. Laura knew it wouldn't take much to get past her initial anger to her essential good nature. "Right. Maybe we should," she said.] Joy and Carmela are in love and it doesn't take much to fan their love for each other into a pure flame of love and lust.

That is such a cute picture of the girls shedding clothes and entering Laura's bedroom with only their panties and sneakers on. Now we get to see where Laura and I differ. I like to think Laura and I are the same in our love of life and our angels and how we try to be fair. Where we differ though is our reaction to aggressive behavior. The girls jump Laura and drag her down to the bed and are wildly groping and assaulting her body. Laura is stunned and a little alarmed by their rough passion. She uses her maturity to invoke a maternal response in the girls and getting them to back off. I love how you show Laura and the girls working out what they are comfortable with and how to proceed. Me I would have encouraged the girls to take me roughly and rip my clothes off and fuck me hard and rough. Love the admonishment to the girls to get their shoes off her bed. I love her having to mother hen them. Stuff like that doesn't bother me or Joann but I can so see Frankie or Shari barking the same thing with a new lover. I have to smile at her barking at them a little about almost ripping her expensive business clothes. I love how the girls are contrite but unbowed. They weren't doing anything wrong. They were just [She slid off the bed and began unbuttoning and unzipping while they watched, not really stunned but certainly chastened by her words. "Sorry," Joy said contritely, reaching down to remove her sneekers. Carmela did the same. "We were in a hurry," she confessed softly.] I love how you give us these small moments in life that makes your story so alive and vital.

I love how you show them ogling each other as they remove the last of their clothes. There is nothing more beautiful than a woman's body slowly being revealed as her clothing is removed. The first sight of your woman's breasts, especially when bending down to remove her lower clothing and her breasts are hanging out for your eyes or seeing her mound being revealed for your first loving sight. Oh yeah, I love how this is progressing [Oh god, I'm going to die of happiness, Laura thought as she approached the bed and stretched out on it with them on either side of her. They both scooted closer until the flesh of all three bodies was touching. She felt Carmela's warm breath on the backs of her shoulders.] I so love feeling my lovers snaking around my body in a serpentine dance of love. Love the detail of feeling your lover's breathe on your body. I really like seeing Laura taking charge and leading the girls when they question of how to proceed appears. Laura needs to use her maturity to teach her young protégés. She starts kissing Joy and now moving down her beautiful upper chest and suggests they both give her "a ride first". I love how Carmela just wants to fuck and now all their competitiveness has disappeared to be replaced with simmering love. We now start to delve into why multiple lovers has such a special appeal [Laura already had one of Joy's delectable, swollen brown nipples between her lips, and Carmela quickly followed suit, cradling Joy's other round breast in both hands and sucking her nipple completely inside her mouth. "Ohhhhh!" Joy sighed, grimacing with pleasure, looking down at them both sucking her breasts, a sensation she had probably never felt until now: both at once. "Oh god! Nnnnnnnn!"] Nothing is more heavenly than having both of your tits being sucked at the same time and four hands love squeezing and mauling them. I so love how Carmela has learned from Laura already to use two hands to cup and squeeze your woman's tit to fully work it with love and focus. Squeezing and digging your fingers in to pump pleasure into her love swelling tits.

Sigh, I love how you make sure the reader sees the woman receiving is getting so much pleasure. They have Joy squirming on the bed now and panting hard. I so love to leave my helpmate working her tits as I slide down her body kissing and licking and breathing warmly on her body as I work toward her spasming and scissoring legs as I slip over her pelvis and settle between her yawing thighs and just look at her soupy wet cunt begging me for my tongue. Then preparing her cunt for my love tongue [Laura slid down between Joy's yawning thighs, spread Joy's inflamed pussy lips even further open with her thumbs, and was just about to sink her tongue into the warm, glistening pink pit when she heard the doorbell ring.] Seeing all that wet red cunt meat waiting for my tongue to start licking, sucking and tongue fucking. Now you give us something that totally floored me. The door bell rings. Now who in the hell could that be. We are reminded that Sara is in Ann Arbor helping Dee Dee getting settled in and making sure she is still on the wagon. I am going down the list of women. The doorbell ringer is not going away. Finally, she goes to see who it is and my mouth nearly fell off when [She was pretty cross by the time she reached the door and peered through the little distorting peephole. There was Brad Dickinson, making a goofy grin at her. Oh, double shit, she thought, unfastening the latch, annoyed but unwilling to continue the deception.] Wow, only you would give us this delicious twist of fates. I know I am maturing. In some of the distant past chapters when a man suddenly appeared I would be disappointed but now I am thinking how fucking delicious this tryst will be with hard live cock plowing up tight pussies and maybe a delicious asshole. Nothing wrong I guess with a taste of strange and the girls should have a taste of dick to see what it is like. Get some dick from time to time but that is all they can really give you. All the emotion and support only we women can truly give. I know that Joy and Carmela are in for some intense and dreamy fucking. Brad has skill and seems to be an easy enough going guy. I guy like Brad who can really fuck is a rare find.

I always thought that Rob and her other male lovers Laura saw kind of regular in the past were so conceited but with a little charm. Brad has so much charm and is not the pressing, conceited type of person. He is charming as he tries to assess the situation and try and get some. He is in the area on business and thought he might head over and see if can hook up with Laura. He is obviously trying to get some but he is not being overly pushy about it. He banters with Laura about her appearance and tries to charm his way into a shower with her when she uses that as an excuse. As usual when you tell fibs they have a way of growing on you. She is trying to get rid of Brad nicely when the fates step in like they should at this delicate moment ["Oh . . . I . . ." Laura blushed, stammering, confused, and a little sexually excited too. Though she hadn't thought much about it since, she had enjoyed fucking with Brad. The idea of doing it again sent a hot little tingle through her pussy, already pretty aroused from the business with Carmela and Joy in the back bedroom. In the split second it took her to understand this, she realized that Brad was looking past her, over her shoulder. At almost the same instant, she heard the telltale giggling. Her head whipped around just in time to see two naked, dark brown bodies dash back into the shadows of the hallway.] I have to love these little vixens. They must have been eaves dropping on the conversation and are now making sure that Laura is not successful in shooing Brad away. They want to some hard cock plowing deep into their young bellies. I can foresee such delicious fucking ahead. Yum!!!

My opinion of Brad rises immeasurably with [When she looked back, Brad was grinning more than ever. "Guess you're busy," he said. "Maybe I should come back later."] He is reading the situation and letting Laura guide what happens. Most men would try to barge in and get in on the action but Brad is a gentleman and letting Laura tell him if it is okay. He is okay with his charm and manners. Poor Laura is totally discombobulated with trying to handle Brad in front of her with his witty rejoinders and behind her the girls are acting up and stage whispering to let him in. That is a hoot to read but mortifying to contemplate being caught so red handed so to speak. I have to smile at Laura freezing up and having "time stand still" and suddenly she feels her wonderful vixen sluts [There must have been a momentary suspension of time, because suddenly she felt both Carmela's and Joy's warm, delicious naked bodies pushing against her. She could feel the warmth of their flesh through the fabric of her bathrobe.] Sigh, I so love sluts who love pleasure like I do and are willing to do what is necessary to get the intense fucking we need to find true happiness. I have to give Joy and Carmela credit. They are so forward and adventuresome that even Brad is made off balance and not sure how to proceed. His dick must be throbbing in his pants but he seems a little stunned at these black angels coming on so strongly. I have to admit that not really understanding all the dynamics would make anyone a little nervous. This is a man with a huge public persona and he knows this is jail bait but he wants them and is just getting used to having such beautiful teenagers actively invite him in on an obvious lesbian tryst. What a lucky guy!! What person could turn down an opportunity to fuck with Laura, and two black teenage angels? No one is who!

The tension is broken when Joy makes a double entendre about joining the party and "Want to come." That is funny. This gives Laura the opportunity to invite Brad in and I have to smile at the girls running back down to the bedroom. I know they must be so proud of themselves. They now have two adults under their complete thrall. They now have both sexes at their beck and call. I think I can feel Brad's amazement at the turn of events as he enters Laura's house and now the twin teenage seductresses have almost vanished in thin air to his stunned eyes. I think I was totally right about Carmela and Joy desiring to put their love slaves even more completely under their spell [He followed her down the hallway into the bedroom. The sight that greeted them was wildly erotic. Joy and Carmela, knowing they would be discovered like this by Brad and Laura, were coiled sexily together on Laura's bed, kissing heatedly, each girl groping with her hand in the other's wet, inflamed crotch. They were writhing and panting in a way that Laura knew had at first been theatrical but soon had become very urgent and natural.] I have to love these sluts who so are so in tune with their sexuality. I so wish that all girls were so allowed to be open and in tune with sexuality whatever their bent. I know only being with women truly makes you happy but I so hate the world trying to crush our desires and striving for happiness. I so admire Carmela and Joy for knowing themselves and their desires and going for it. They started putting on a show I am sure but I know that feeling myself. I will be doing something to entice and seduce and I soon forget all about that and I am totally focused on my angel and loving her with my all. The rest of the world simply disappears when you are loving your woman. Plus, I know that sex is too wonderful to not have it set you on fire when it is right before your eyes. I know Brad must be feeling his cock jumping avidly in his shorts as he watches these two angels all coiled together obviously swallowing each other's tongues down their throats in moaning pleasure. I know my panties would soon be a sodden mess witnessing this.

I love Brad breathing in awe to Laura over where she found these beauties as they continue to copulate and Laura flittering that she found them in the neighborhood and then sexily dropping her bathrobe (another cock jumper I'm sure) and flirting to join them when he is ready. A woman must let it be known she is just as good as her bedmates when it comes to flirting and how well she fucks. I know I am good but sometimes I feel the need to preen and let it be known I am one great fuck. I so love how you so fully describe your women and show how we are so worshipful of our angels like Carmela of Joy here [By now on the bed Carmela again had the upper hand, with Joy supine underneath her, sighing and squirming as Carmela caressed and kissed her long, naked body. "Don't you love how long she is?" she smiled at Laura as Laura joined her and cupped and squeezed Joy's luscious small round breasts. "When I first saw her, I couldn't believe anybody had a waist this long."] You can just feel Carmela's worshipful love of Joy and how she just worships her body and loves Joy for her unique charms. I think so many us take for granted the ones we love. Revel in what makes them so special and let them know you see their special charms and love those charms. I love how you tell us of Joy squirming on the bed in building need as Carmela loves her. I think Carmela wanted Joy the moment she first laid eyes on her and Carmela being the beautiful slut she is went out and got her. Carmela is such a special young woman. Sigh, Carmela is kissing her way down a heaving and palpitating belly as she heads for paradise and Joy is swooning in love ["Ohhh! Oh yes!" Joy gasped, twisting and arching her back now, her eyelids fluttering uncontrollably, looking more wildly desirable than ever to Laura, who nearly forgot about Brad until she felt the bed sag as he climbed onto it beside them.] I so love how you show sweet foreplay simply melting your women with need. Other authors never really show how foreplay sets you on fire and makes you a whimpering, drooling wreck for love.

I know Laura's feelings here when she is a little envious that Carmela gets to feast on Joy's tender red, sopping wet cunt meat but she is a giver and knows she will get hers soon enough. I so often let others go first just to keep everyone happy and satisfied. I so love Carmela for her wanton ways [At first she had been a little envious of Carmela now getting to feast on that puckered red gash of pussy, so long and enfolded by such sinuous black lips, that she herself had earlier been ready to invade with her tongue, but the moment Brad arrived the whole dynamic on the bed changed. Carmela noticed his arrival too and adroitly posed her body so that her breathtaking naked ass was uptilted halfway into his face, the wet, swollen seam of her own blossoming pussy clearly visible below the dark, swelling moons of her delicious rump. Brad ran his hand over the firm moons, almost in awe of Carmela's beautiful naked body, while Laura smiled at him and then returned her attention to Joy's rubbery wet nipples, which she was sucking and tonguing into a nearly unbearable ecstasy for the girl.] Sigh, I so love how you describe Joy's beautiful long pussy. I crave and need every delicious description you give me. I have to love how Carmela immediately puts her lovely ass in front of Brad just begging him to do some unspeakable sexy wicked things to her booty and seeping wet cunt. She reminds me of me at her age. I always offered my body to my lovers begging for hard deep fucking. I love how you always show what your loving is doing. Other authors may give us some detail of the loving while you flood us and only you will show the woman receiving simply writhing on the bed form the intense pleasure flooding her body.

Joy is vocalizing her increasing pleasure with those beautiful moans that are such sweet music to my ears. Had to smile at Brad's grunt of pleasure and please don't let me come yet watching all this hot action. I love how you tell the reader that the lovers in play know that this is Joy's special moment and all must either love her or watch the beautiful play going on before them. Usually when you have multiple partners you pair off in whatever couplings and fuck but sometimes a fuck becomes so dynamic that all must simply focus on it and bask in the glorious fuck happening before your senses like how

Carmela is giving Joy her all making sure she doesn't have one of her little sneezes of an orgasm [She knew Carmela was thinking the same thing because of the way she was heatedly devouring Joy's beautiful, shiny, wet pussy, slurping and sucking it, stabbing it deeply with her tongue, then sliding two fingers up into the buttery, gaping pink slit and frigging Joy hard with them while she sucked Joy's clit maniacally.] Watching intense, passionate sex is so hypnotic that you simply can't help sometimes just stopping what you're doing and simply ogling in shared love and lust. I so love watching a beautiful woman burying her face in her lover's steamy box and simply going wild on it. Sigh, I love how you have your women devouring gash and adding pumping fingers in a tight clasping cunt at just the right time. I so love your words like maniacally, devouring, slurping, stabbing, etc. that makes your writings so fucking hot. I love being rewarded for my wild passionate gash gobbling with ["Ahhhh! Ungghh!" Joy cried out, wincing and shimmying her hips and pelvis into the air, thrusting back into Carmela's loving assault.] I so need to hear your vocalization of rapture and feeling your cunt humping back into my devouring mouth. I so love feeling my head rocking with your cunt pumping hard into my mouth.

I am so there as Laura pumps both of Joy's beautiful little tits with her hands and love squeezes her tits making her nipples swell up for her devouring mouth and pinching fingers as she alternates back and forth. I am so thankful that I have an author who gives me dynamic breast play instead of the so boring suck a little and maybe squeeze a few times. Always the same thing where with you I never know what you will deliciously serve. Of course by now Joy is keening and humping her cunt wildly as her lovers pleasure her to the depths of her soul. I love how you always show the ramping up of passion and love [Neither one of them was paying any attention to Brad at the moment since Joy's long, lean, velvety brown body was writhing and twisting under them, and Joy was pumping her pussy into Carmela's hand and mouth and keening frantically. "Unh! Unh! Unh! Ounngghh shit ohhnnggg unh ungghh!" she panted, feverishly, churning, bucking.] It is so clear that Joy is being transported to heaven by her loving lovers. You make the passion so clear and evident in the woman receiving pleasure. I so love and cherish what you offer us. Oh god, you now give us the dirty talk that I so love and that I know adds so much to love making. All women want to be sluts and when they give in to their true natures such talk sets their souls and pussies on fire like [Since Laura was closest to her face, and also knew how hot words had worked for Joy the past, she began to murmur to her. "Oh honey . . . you have such a beautiful body . . . Carmela and I love fucking you so much . . . are you going to come? Are you close? Are you almost there? Do you want me to suck your nipples again . . . like this . . . and like this?" "Aooowwwnnnggg!" Joy cried out, pumping even more vigorously.] Hearing such words whispered in my ear set my cunt on fire and makes me go wild like Joy here. I so love humping my cunt into your mouth but I can just feel my cunt jumping hard into your mouth with an involuntary spasm of hot need and joy with such words. Talk to me like a common whore and I am just so fucking happy.

I have to smile with joy and mirth with Laura sensing that Joy is going to reach the big O and how Brad is holding his cock in simple awe at what he is witnessing. Heaven has finally arrived for Joy [Suddenly Joy's lean, flexing body seemed to levitate directly up off the bed. She fell back with a sharp thud, and suddenly she was ripped apart by a fierce, throttling orgasm. "Auungghhh! Ohhhh . . .

woowwwoowwoowooowwwooooonnngggg!" she howled, her body clenched by several sharp seizures, a climax more wrenching than Laura had ever seen her have. "Ahhnnngggg . . . ahhnnngggg! Ungghh! Oh!"] I so love eating gash for the sheer pleasure and joy of feasting on tender red cunt meat and swallowing delicious pussy juice but my woman's orgasm itself is part of my payment. I so worship each time I make a woman come screaming and humping wildly into my devouring mouth. All the while I am watching spasms and wild flips destroying her flesh as hopefully legs and arms are twitching, thrashing or clawing the sheets or my scalp. I love it sometimes when my woman's feet start hammering my ass or back in helpless rapture if she had rested them there before her orgasm. It hurts sometimes but I so cherish feeling her passion being drummed helplessly into my body in her pure pleasure.

I love how Laura and Carmela strive like all lesbians to prolong the pleasure by hanging onto Joy's bucking body to continue sucking and pumping her to continue her pleasure. Laura wishes to fall upon her again and try and make her come again but the dynamics won't allow it. Instead, she basks in this beautiful picture [Carmela smiled up at her as Joy's undulations began to subside, her lips and chin and cheeks all shiny with Joy's pussy juices, her black eyes sparkling with the delight of having made Joy come this hard. Together they stroked and soothed Joy until she came down completely from her wild ride.] I so love seeing a woman's face covered in come juice and seeing the pure happiness she has received just by sucking her woman's cunt. All women who have accepted their true selves revel in diving deep in their lover's gash and gobbling all the cunt flesh they can. Another thing I so love about this little passage how you show the love and close bond these women share. They so gently and lovingly bring Joy back to earth with gentle stroking and love cooing. This adds so much to the sweet afterglow and something men just seem incapable of. They may fuck you good but once it is over don't expect much post coital interaction. Still, as long as they fuck you good who cares. I look at them as just something to fuck and then get the hell out of the way as soon as possible. This is how Dodie and Frankie are. They don't kick them to the curb but once the festivities have ended then the men know to quickly go on their way like it is supposed to be. Brad has been a good little boy and now seeks his reward. He interjects himself in an unobtrusive manner. He merges with their bodies and begins kissing and stroking their flesh putting himself into the action. I had to chuckle with Laura using Kendra's nickname for dick, "Mr. Penis." I had to smile as Laura slides down to get some warm dick and Carmela slides down with her but it is so obvious she is new to cock and is very unsure. She is so lucky to have Laura teaching and guiding her and leading her to new sexual pleasures. I may not be a devotee of the male species but their cocks do have a special purpose all their own. A man does have a power and innate skill when he has been blessed with true skill and talent. Can't really stand the man but I do miss what their cock can accomplish. Dodie and Frankie are working on me and I have matured to the stage that I can accept being a lesbian and still wanting a man's dick from time to time. Maybe one day. Oh geez, this is way beyond cute [She smiled up at Brad. "Want a little suckee?"] Brad is about to get a class A blow job I think.

Had to smile at Laura taunting Brad about being ready to come from watching Joy come so exuberantly. He does have control but it is being tested. I have to smile and say "go girl" as she makes sure to bring Carmela along and is gently encouraging her to get closer to Brad's manhood and humorously introducing these strangers to each other and making the transition to hot fucking so much sweeter and easier. One should always work to make the fucking hotter and better. I have to smile at Carmela almost hypnotized by this cock before her very eyes. She is bewitched and already dreaming of taking that head in her mouth and going down on the shaft a few inches I'm sure. The deep throating will come later when she has learned the skills. I am always sadden how most other authors just do a sex act and dive right into the middle of it while you show the delicious foreplay and ramping up like here [Laura bent her face down and licked Brad's swollen, twitching cock from the edge of his balls all the way up to the ballooning head of it, swirling her tongue around the flaring bulb at the top, then licking her way back down to his balls again. Brad's breath whistled past his clenched teeth as he inhaled. His pelvis even quivered, so intense were the sensations Laura's tongue inspired in his hard shaft.] It is this gradual ramping up that allows you to enjoy your feast and for the receiver to go nuts with pleasure. I so miss real cocks for this reason. Feeling them twitch and jump and hearing the guy grunt and whistling breath when I make his cock jump. I so loved kissing and stroking a cock head with my lips and tongue before getting serious on it. Licking the crown and exploring that flare where the head balloons out. Kissing and tongue stroking that shaft and working down to his balls and licking them and sucking them into your mouth and rolling them around and then stretching his nut sack out while tongue lathing his sack. Dammit, you just can't do that to a dildo. I really miss these kinds of games. I so love making anyone quiver and spas with my ministrations. I want to make anyone I'm loving die from it.

I have to love how Laura takes control of the situation and gently encourages Bard to hold it in and leads Carmela on her new trek of self discovery. Laura gets her to bend closer to the cock and encourages her that her innocence will not stop her from being able to give and receive pleasure from giving head to this live twitching cock. Laura is such a gentle loving teacher. I love her teacher mode of watch and then copy me ["It won't hurt you," Laura teased her. "Look, do like I do." Carefully, really afraid now that he would indeed spurt before either she or Carmela could torment him some more, she opened her lips and took the huge head of his cock inside her mouth, swirling her tongue slowly around the velvety bulb, not sucking hard, not really even sucking, just holding his cock gently in her mouth while he and Carmela watched. "Unhnhh! Ohhh!" Brad groaned.] You capture so well that taking a young girl or newbie to lesbian love under your wing and guiding and showing her the wonders of lesbian sex and here even het sex. I love how you show Brad's body literally vibrating with pleasure as he clenches for self-control and Laura is giving head like I love to do to cocks whither alive or plastic [His whole body seemed like a knotted piece of gristle, just dying to explode. Laura ran her tongue under the flaring head of his prick to the stiff shaft, licking the bulging veins, then the pronounced crease where the head of his cock swelled out from the stalk, then the head itself again. Finally, she pulled back a little, still holding his wet, throbbing cock in her fingers, and turned to Carmela.] I too love to trace pronounced veins and really love to work the head of a cock. I even tried to worm my tongue down their pee hold to much explosive breath sucking and pelvis jumping I do remember. I so loved working the bottom of their cock head and that area where the head has that little flare of flesh that connects where the cockhead parts on the bottom of their cock. I always found that area to be very sensitive and I loved sucking, licking and teeth racking and making them groan deep in their chest with fucking pleasure. I found this one good way to make them come when I was ready to be rewarded for my services with a hot load of come exploding in my mouth or sometimes pulling out and letting them have the fun of squirting all over my face or tits. I always wanted their come in me and not on me but some begged for the visual and I was always happy to comply.

Laura is in full teacher mode as she gently encourages Carmela to take Brad's cock and start sucking it. I love how you show she is still a little skittish and needs Laura's loving encouragement to move forward with renewed confidence. I had to chuckle with Carmela's question to Brad if he wanted her to suck his cock and he basically says "duh". Of course he does! What man wouldn't dream of having a beautiful black teenager sucking his cock? I lick how Carmela has a sexual spark with Brad. I think Carmela naturally forms this connection with all her lovers. It seems she easily seduced Joy and Laura swiftly fell to her charms and now Bard is enamored. She is such a wonderful fuck slut. I really, really love this girl. Laura is adding to the fire by coaching Carmela on how to suck and talking about getting splattered with come which must have made Brad's nut sack clench and inflame Carmela's rising lust for cock. Again, I have read enough erotica now to know that other authors would have Carmela just start giving wild head while you show real life ramping up and Carmela's tentativeness with this new experience [She watched while Carmela gingerly approached Brad's erect, pulsing cock, still shiny and wet with Laura's spittle. And as she watched Carmela take his jumping, rock hard member in her long, tapering black fingers and lower her half-open mouth closer to it, she also became aware of Joy stirring beside her, moving closer to them.] This is just so perfect how you show this languid ramping up of the sex I so love reading. I see that Joy is reviving. I love how you are showing the flow of lovemaking when multiple partners are involved. How lovers come in and out of the lovemaking as spent flesh revives and the dynamics shift and flow.

Joy is my kind of girl. Now that she is revived she wants to know what is going on and makes sure to rub her beautiful tits and nipples on Laura's back knowing this will excite her. I love how Joy's mind works. Laura thinks about doing something with Joy but the show and heat from Carmela and Brad is simply to hot now not to watch. Carmela has now taken his thick shaft and is now sucking some nice throbbing head and warm meat. Sigh, I sure miss that from time to time. I love cock. I just have no use for the man attached. I have always so enjoyed how you make it absolutely clear how the person

receiving pleasure is on the threshold of paradise from their lover's ministrations [Brad seemed nearly in agony, his body tense and coiled, his muscles rippling as he tried to hold back his orgasm until the last second. Laura knew the feeling. He wanted it to last. Carmela was beautiful, and she was doing a beautiful, slow, sensual job on his throbbing meat, curling her long tongue around it, peppering the stiff shaft with hot little kisses. Laura felt Joy pushing against her, then gently moving Laura out of the way.] I so love watching my women go down on my cock and giving sensuous head like this. Watching her love the head and curling her tongue all around it and kissing and lip pinching the shaft up and down. Or opening her throat and deep throating for all she is worth. Watching my cock slide down her throat and coming out all covered in ropey salvia before plunging down her throat again. Some women love for me to grab their hair or head and just fuck their throats with my cock. Lord knows I love it. I love taking

as much as I can in the classic position or laying down and tilting my head back and letting even the biggest cock slide down my throat and just letting my woman fuck my throat long and deep as I suck and tongue the shaft on the out strokes and give her head lots of loving attention when she holds the head in mouth for ministrations before beginning to plunge down my throat again. I love feeling my gullet stuffed and my uvula pressed back. I love seeing my salvia coating and hanging off in strands and dripping off on the out strokes before plunging down again into my open loving throat.

One has to love Joy's enthusiasm when Carmela lets her have her turn [Joy nodded. Graciously, Carmela scooted a little to the side and let Joy take his wet cock into her fingers. Laura didn't know whether Joy had ever done this either, but she didn't waste any time sucking Brad's stiff, jumping, reddish ramrod. She took it into her mouth and began almost to gnaw it vigorously. Laura immediately realized she should have told Joy to go easy too, as she had told Carmela, but it was too late.] It seems Carmela is a lot like me when she lets Joy take over the sucking of Brad's cock. I had to smile and again love how you show your women's personalities so clearly. Joy is an aggressive girl in her tastes and desires once they have been awakened and simply devours Brad's cock. It is her nature to aggressively attack this thick cock beckoning to her. Of course he comes immediately and his savage cries of joy startles Joy off his cock and Laura's prediction of a spewing facial comes to pass with jets hitting Joy's face and Carmela's tits. I have to love these teenagers love of sex which so reminds me of myself as the come gets all over the faces, breast and fingers ["Oh! Ahhhh! Oh god . . . look!" Joy and Carmela both gasped and giggled as they watched his squirting cock, wincing and dodging as the white gobs of cum flew through the air at them.] Laura being fastidious gets some towels to clean up with where I would be licking up the come and encouraging Carmela and Joy to join me in cleaning up their semen bath with their sensuous tongues licking sexy flesh. Licking up a come like this can only excite the flesh for more intense fucking.

After Laura helps Carmela get cleaned up she must drag her down on the bed and start consuming this heaven sent fuck angel ["Ohhhh . . . Laura . . . wait a minute . . ." Carmela said, but Laura was not to be denied and already had her hands and mouth all over the girl's delicious black body, sucking her flesh, her smooth black bottom, her thighs, her stomach, working her way up to Carmela's breasts, which Carmela had now cleaned off. "Ohhhhh . . . oh yes! Oh . . . Laura!"] I so love hearing those mock cries of "no" and "hold on" and soon have their true desires being vocalized as I set their bodies on fire. All women want to be worshipped and fucked heatedly. I am all dreamy here reading Laura getting to lick, suck and knead all this beautiful flesh. Making the fires rage in Carmela's cunt and working up to her tits to devour in gluttonous glee. I am so there as Laura now bunches up Carmela's lovely titties and now squeezes them hard to get her nipples all rubbery and jutting for some nice tongue lapping and lip pinching before sucking them in hard and deep. I love how her impassioned sucks have Carmela mock crying out she is doing it too hard. Laura being the gentle soul she is immediately stops and feeling bad asks her if she did it too hard. Love the response you almost always get from such deep throat love sucks [Carmela's black eyes were throbbing and swirling with fiery sex need. She glowered at Laura, who was momentarily afraid she had offended or hurt the girl deeply. Then Carmela shook her head. "God, no," she gasped. "Do it again!"] I find women go nuts when they experience this the first time. They never knew that breast loving could be so wildly pleasurable.

I love how you show the fluidity of lovemaking. Carmela pleads for more tit mauling but Laura is too hungry for tender red sopping wet cunt meat and begins sliding down Carmela's undulating body. How can one resist this siren call of seduction and passion [It was a delicious, puckering, red mouth nestled between Carmela's yawning black thighs, a juicy little feast which Laura began to devour immediately, luxuriating in the tangy wet flesh. "Oh Laura . . . oh Laura!" Carmela whooped, grinding her pelvis, bucking her wet pussy up into Laura's hungry mouth. "Oh Laura . . . I'm going to come . . . yes . . . I'm so close . . . so close . . ."] I so love how you describe her lovely little fuck flower and how her thighs open wide for her adoring lover. Laura wastes no time in devouring her passion pit and slurping up her yummy cunt juices. I love how you make it clear Carmela's pussy is all wet and "juicy" with tangy juices. I so love exploring your entire flower. From the outer petals to the depths that my questing tongue can flair and probe for divine cunt nectars and the feeling of wet heat on my tongue and mouth and flowing juices burbling out to my gleeful mouth. I so love the feel of a pussy grinding up into my devouring mouth and the whooping of building need in my woman.

I love how you so expertly capture the flowing ecstasy of multiple lovers flowing and merging as the dynamics change. I can just picture Laura all laid out on the bed with her mouth pressed tight to Carmela's pussy and her body stretched out an relaxed on the bed. It is kind of instinctive to have your legs spread in comfort which so easily allows this [Neither of them were paying the slightest attention to the other two on the bed, which allowed Laura to be momentarily shocked when she suddenly felt Joy's mouth pressing into her own pussy. Joy had slipped down behind Laura, who was stretched out between

Carmela's legs, and was now burrowing her own tongue up into Laura's soupy slit. Quickly, Laura pulled her knees up a little and raised her ass to give the girl easier access.] Women recover much faster than men and our basic nature makes us want to as quick as possible rejoin the loving and commence to giving back the pleasure we have already received. I know that Laura's wet red seam must have hypnotized Joy with need and I can just see her scooting around in my mind's eye and lying herself down and worming in and burying her mouth into delicious quim. Pressing her mouth in tight and feeling her face up close to Laura's rump as she starts to simply devour her soupy wet cunt. I have felt that wonderful jolt so many times with me loving my current woman and suddenly getting a jolt as another angel starts to love my body. Multiple partners is just so fucking great. I so love one-on-one but it simply can't flow like it is here. I so know this feeling ["Unhhhhh!" she gasped, looking briefly back over her shoulder. "Oh god, Joy . . . yes! Yessssss! Unhhhh!"] Looking back and just smiling great big back at your wonderful lover.

Of course Laura starts to now swirl her hips into Joy's devouring mouth. Ah, giving and receiving pleasure is just so fucking great. I have to smile at Brad staring thunderstruck as he witnesses raw lesbian lust before his very eyes. It is reviving his thick cock though I see. Hehehe. Lucky stiff (pun intended). Carmela has already reached the precipice and falls into paradise ["Anngghh!" Carmela cried out, her flesh suddenly stiffening, her body stretching, her thighs leaping spastically. "Ungghhh! Oh! Oh!" "Yes, baby . . . do it!" Laura almost commanded her, well aware that whatever she said now was pointless

since Carmela was erupting in a ferocious orgasm anyway. "Auunngghhh! Ooggnnnhhmmmnngggeeeee!" Carmela screamed, her beautiful body flipping and clenching as she came in successive sharp spasms. "Ohhnnnnnnn!"] I so love the cunt cream a rupturing cunt pumps to my starving mouth but I so need the savage screams of unbridled joy and the wild thrashing and undulations that only you truly capture. I so need to see my woman being absolutely being destroyed by my loving ministrations. Like Laura I am always love cooing and gently trying to urge my lover on in her orgasm. I find words add so much to my orgasms and found it helps my lovers. Usually I give soft and gentle but some lovers like Joann, Dodie or Monica need me to call them a cunt and whore and almost order them strongly to come harder and deeper. They just grimace and make that hard eye contact as their contractions and spasms slash and tear their face apart with ecstasy. Cindy has the cutest habit of lifting her head a couple inches of the bed during the beginning of her orgasms and making eye contact if possible and I can just see the spasms rippling through her neck as it jerks up and forward as her breath hisses and her lovely expressive eyes seem like they are going to pop out. You usually get one or two spasms of this before her head flops back to the bed and now the deep screams of rapture pour forth from her star struck soul. I so love looking up over her mound and down her petite body and watching this heaven on earth show before my eyes. Life doesn't get much better than this.

As Carmela starts to come down from the pinnacle of ecstasy, Laura is beginning to be overcome with the rising passion Joy's mouth is causing in her quiver pussy. I love how you continue to show the dynamic flow of serious and focused lovers [She pushed her face into the sheet between Carmela's thighs, her head still engorged with the sweet, thick, musky odors of Carmela's spasming pussy, and uptilted her crotch even more to Joy's mouth. The feeling of Joy's tongue darting in and out of her pulsing, buttery slit, then stabbing her exposed clit, was enough to make Laura climb the walls. She knew she was going to come as quickly as Carmela just had. She was concentrating on the sheer pleasure of Joy's tongue stabbing her pussy when she felt them manipulating and maneuvering her body, felt Brad's strong hands on her hips, and looked over to see him opening the drawer of her bedstand, obviously hoping to find something there. Joy had slipped under Laura and was now lying on her back, with her mouth still in Laura's crotch.] So many sweet details. You, only, let the readers know of that heady, dreamy smell of a satiated cunt as its sweet fragrance overcomes your senses with its divine essence. I have often had my head on the bed between my lover's thighs or maybe lying on her thigh or belly as another woman simply overwhelms me with sweet pleasure so much so I can't pleasure her at the moment or I am lying on her spent body as a woman starts taking me to paradise. I so love how you are willing to change your positions in lovemaking. Over authors seem to get tunnel vision and always lock their characters into the position they started with. That would be so boring. While you show the flow of lovemaking you avoid that temptation I have seen in others to have their women and or men constantly moving around so much that I simply get a headache trying to read or watch. Only you show that real life flowing and coiling of dynamic lovers. Sometimes you do feel the need to move around with some verve and rapidity but that is really the exception. This is how you pair off in some number and fuck to fulfillment or for long sensuous minutes of focused fucking until you may feel the need to change partners or positions with your current partner. You as usual you just nail it right on the bull's-eye. I am in awe at your divine skills. Here you show Brad shifting Laura for an obvious anal invasion and Joy dreamily turning onto her back while making sure to keep Laura's cunt glued to her mouth. I can just see in my mind's eye Joy grasping Laura's hips and using that as her fulcrum to twist herself over onto her back and keep Laura's divine cunt meat pulled tight to her devouring mouth and flailing tongue and sucking mouth. Sigh, such a beautiful picture.

I have to give Brad credit again when he makes eye contact with Laura and gives her the opportunity to back out of letting him slide his big cock up her asshole. Cute observation of Laura being so sunken in fuck hunger she doesn't mind her sheets getting splattered with baby oil. Her need has overcome her fastidiousness. I love being reduced to raw need like this ["Ohhhhh . . . please!" she heard herself whimpering, now not wanting to come too fast, knowing what was going to happen in a second, and yet being driven to excruciating limits by Joy's busy mouth on her pussy.] I so love being reduced to whimpering and pleading for my hard deep fucking. Oh yeah, I love that feeling that Laura is experiencing here of two fingers piercing my sphincter and starting to fuck my asshole working that sphincter open and feeling those fingers plunging up my bowels knowing soon long hard dick will spearing up my asshole. I am not one of those girls who take a cock easily up the ass. I am like Laura here [She could feel the flesh and muscles of her arms and legs quivering. For a moment the pain was too intense to permit her to come, but she knew that would pass, and in seconds the pain would quickly turn into an added stimulus, making postponement impossible.] For me, this pain is what makes my anal orgasms so fucking rad and wonderful. I love how the pain so soon fades to fucking bliss mingled with some discomfort with occasional sparks of pain when my lovers are grabbing my hips hard and simply pile driving their cock(s) deep, hard and fast up my rectum making me die from pleasure. I love feeling that pole up my shit hole as Joann would say and feeling her thighs slapping mine as she pumps hard. I have to smile and nod in agreement at Laura's almost demented moans of pained pleasure and how you wonder each time how your asshole is going to survive having that thick cock or maybe two cocks seesawed up my clenching and spasming asshole.

I have to sigh as you once again show that ramping up of the lovemaking. Brad has allowed Laura to get adjusted to her bowels being filled with cock and is now starting to saw it into her ass. Now Joy is adding a finger into Laura's tight pussy to accompany her fevered cunt lapping. So like real life the ramping up of the heat of lovemaking. Suddenly her veins are filled with fire and has one of those orgasms she is blessed with that crushes the air out of her lungs for the first few spasms. Then it returns for ["AUUNNGGGHH!" a loud groan finally escaped from her constricted throat. "Annggrriiuuhh! Annggrriiuuhh!" she grunted each time Brad ripped his cock into her ass.] I so love all cap screams of joy and bliss. I always love to have my women continue hammering their cocks into my body as my orgasm first blasts me prolonging my fucking seizures of bliss. I love how Laura's spent body settles down on Joy and I noticed that Joy is gladly accepting that weight. I love to feel my lover's weight on me. It doesn't get to be crushing on Joy because Brad is a man with skill and staying power and he keeps the lovemaking moving forward. He gently moves Laura to the side to get some of Joy's beautiful pussy. I have to admire his thinking here. Laura is so lucky to see this beautiful love dance right before her eyes [She lay glassy-eyed and slack-mouthed beside Joy as Brad enterprisingly crawled between the girl's thin thighs and guided his cock with one hand into her long, inflamed pussy. "Ohhhnnnnnn!" Joy moaned, her eyes rolling up, as the fat stalk slid up into her body.] I so love seeing a cock sliding deep into a tight clasping pussy. It is one of the most beautiful sights on this earth. I never tire and long to see my lover's eyes rolling to the back of her head. I know she is being pleasured soul deep when I get to witness them rolling.

Always love the small details like Joy's fingers fluttering around and grasping Brad's shoulders. Details no one else gives me. Cool how you show the dynamic totally changing between Laura's final wild fuck configuration to this slow fuck dance of sensuality. Only you capture how lovemaking can vary so far in such a small amount of time and you show it so effortlessly and naturally where I fear if others tried it would seem so forced and contrived. You somehow capture real life time after time. I so like seeing Laura and a revived Carmela completely hypnotized by this delicious fucking. Watching Joy's tight cunt clasping her invader and those lips clinging on the outstroke. What girl doesn't love watching this? You show again how women so love to help their partner reach heaven with loving action or with words like here [Carmela was whispering to Joy, something so low that Laura could not even hear it. She scooted closer and heard Carmela, who was now also squeezing Joy's breasts with one hand, saying, "Is it good, Joy? Is it good to feel his thick hard cock in you? Do you like it? Is he going to make you come? Is he going to fuck you hard?"] Women are so unselfish and giving right down to the marrow of our bones. I have to chuckle how Carmela's words of lust to Joy set Laura on fire especially with the visual of Joy's love box being so expertly fucked. You once again show how the loving is so dynamic with multiple lovers. There is no more room to love Joy's body so Laura changes her focus to the body available to her [There was hardly any room for another hand or mouth on Joy's body, but she could get her hands on Carmela's, and so she scooted around behind the girl on the bed, and clasped her from the rear, pushing her own naked breasts into Carmela's smooth warm back and hungrily nipping the black flesh between her neck and shoulder.] When the fuck hunger is raging in your veins you need to love someone's body and do it now.

I have to smile again as they watch enraptured as Brad fucks Joy's tight box and Laura starts whispering to Carmela that she wants to fuck her. Of course Carmela humorously chides Laura that she doesn't have a cock but Laura tells her she does and quickly gets her ribbed strap-on out from her hidden cache. I wish I could see this look from Carmela ["Oh my god." She burst into her light-of-the-universe smile, her teeth almost blinding white. "You've got to be kidding. Is that for real?"] I so love showing women new vistas of lesbian lovemaking. I simply can't get over what wonderful fuck slut Carmela is and how quickly she gets herself positioned for some sweet fucking [Obediently, still smiling, Carmela lay back and spread her thighs for Laura. She knew how tantalizing her naked body was and ran her hands over it slowly, watching Laura's eyes on her, watching Laura's eyes lick her dark skin, her sleek, smooth flesh. She ran her hands down to her inner thighs, letting her fingers graze her inflamed and greasy cunt

lips, pulling the skin at the sides so that they parted to reveal the puckering red seam Laura had earlier devoured and was now going to fuck.] I so love a tease and a woman who knows her body is hot. I am always making smoky coy eye contact and massaging and lifting my tits to my lover and framing and diddling my pussy before her very eyes setting her on fire for me. Arching my back and spreading my thighs opening my fuck hole for her avid gaze. One should do everything possible to turn the heat even further up. I love women knowing they are hot and almost taunting you with their body. I so love how you show how a loving lover makes the act of penetration so special and loving [She looked down to her crotch as Laura lodged the bulbous head of the fake cock in the groove formed by her swollen cunt lips. Then her eyes rose and caught Laura's as Laura slid it slowly into her, still holding it with one hand. Carmela bit her lower lip. She grimaced a little, then moaned, feeling it ride in deep. "Aunnnnnnnhhhhhhh! Oh . . . Laura! God, it's so hard!" "Does that feel good?" "Ohhhh . . . yessssss!"] Men are just anxious to fuck and make their dick happy where women introduce their cock with love. Guiding their shaft in with slow love and making sure there is time to get accommodated if necessary and then slowly ramping up the heat unless you really know your lover and know when to ram the living hell out of her from the very start. Dodie is the kind of girl that sometimes loves to banged and slammed fucked right from the start. Again that communication that I so love. You should always caress your lover with sweet words and cajole her pleasure to higher levels. I love asking the obvious and getting the grunted, moaned, hissed or shouted affirmative response.

We see that Brad and Joy have reached the slam fuck stage of their fuck. The bed is bouncing. I so love the descriptions of Brad fucking her relentlessly and grabbing her hips to drive his cock hard and deep. I so love grabbing my lover and just launching my hips to bury my cock deep and hard with strong strokes or rabbit fucking her box and making her vibrate with my rapid fuck jabs. A good hard fucking always produces this ["Ummnnggg . . . ohhnnmmgggg . . . ungghhh . . . ohhhhnnmmmeeee!" she keened, clawing his back and shoulders, thrusting her pelvis up to meet each thrust, now even wrapping her long legs around his jabbing hips and wincing as Brad's cock sank even deeper into her body. "Awwwonnnnggg!"] When one is well and truly fucking your woman you just reduce her into a complete fuck slut going for the brass ring. I love hearing those animal moans of pure pleasure purring out of my woman's throat when I am loving her. I so love wrapping my legs around my lover's hips when she is slam fucking me. Opening and uptilting my fuck hole for deep spearing. I so love to feel those legs twining around my hips and maybe locking ankles behind my back to really allow her to throw her cunt up into my pile driving thrusts slamming her back down to the bed as throws herself up into my hard loving thrusts. I love all that energy and slapping and squirming flesh. Cute detail how Laura wanted to fuck Carmela slow and sensuous but such strenuous fucking right beside has her soon ramping up the speed and power of her thrusting. It does sort of draw you in and inspire your passion and competitive juices. You always want to match or exceed what you see happening before your eyes when doing the same basic act. Laura being a woman is kissing and stroking Carmela's face and upper body, increasing her pleasure.

I am smiling great big as Brad has slammed and jab fucked Joy to a screaming orgasm of pure pleasure ["Aiiieeeeeee! Unngghgiaaiiieeeee!" she suddenly cried out, long, sinuous body flexing and shuddering under his plunging prick, her arms leaping out to the sides and hammering back into the mattress, her pelvis leaping spastically into the air as she came in an overheated fury. "Oh! Ungghh! Aiiiieeeeeeeee!"] I so love reducing my woman to this screaming shuddering body of primal pleasure and ecstasy. I always just smile goofily when I see arms spasming and slamming the bed or her elbows digging into the mattress or her fingers clawing the mattress as she uses the leverage to uptilt her pumping twat into the air as high as possible as her arched back will allow or even better when she sometimes lifts up with digging in feet and that twat is just helplessly spasming high in the air. I so love seeing that juddering of her pelvis and belly and then her twat just jumps up that extra straining inch of fucking ecstasy that is always accompanied with a pure scream of pleasure or that clenched sibilant hissing if her throat and mouth have clenched up in that rigor mortis of helpless pleasure. I have to agree with the observation that Laura and Carmela have slowed their lovemaking simply entranced with the fucking and orgasm right beside them. Who can't help but stop and observe such a beautiful sight?

Once Joy's orgasm starts to ramp down Laura begins to once more sensually fuck Carmela with sweet whispers of forthcoming pleasure. Brad is a true cocks man and his cock is still alive and raring to go. He scoots over to this fuck and again asks for permission to join. I really like this guy with the great manners to never intrude where he might not be wanted. Laura asks our sweet fuck angel and I have to love her response [Carmela's eyes were murky with unasked questions and smoldering sexual emotions. She didn't seem entirely capable of answering the question. But, after a considerable pause, she nodded. "Want you too," she panted to Laura. "Oh, I'm not leaving," Laura grinned. "I can't let you go. I'm stuck to you. I'm stuck in you."] Carmela is so like me. She so wants all the fucking pleasure she can get. Even sunk deep in a fuck trance she reaches out for more. I love her whispering to Laura she wants Laura to not leave this divine fuck. I love Laura's gentle witty remark and the love so evidently flowing between them. I wonder if Carmela has grasped that this scenario is clearly leading to her getting dp fucked. Let's see. Oh geez, they lovingly move her around to a spooned position and we discover [She kept fucking her, more gently now, caressing her face, kissing her mouth. "Do you want him in you too?" Again dreamily, Carmela nodded. "Like you? Like he did you?" "You sure you want that?" Carmela again appeared to think it over for a moment, then nodded. "Yes."] I too did not hesitate the first time I was asked to be fucked up the ass. I had dreamed of it while finger fucking my asshole and then having girls lick, ream and finger fuck my asshole. I was so ready for my first true anal fucking. I fucking loved it!!! The whole thing. The penetration, the pain and then the fucking orgasm as she speared my ass and I rubbed my clit off to a monstrous orgasm of screaming bliss.

I like how Laura always sees the humor in a situation like I do. She sees the humor of this local political giant taking his career in his hands to join this fuck party. In my opinion I admire his willingness to take a little risk to get such fucking pleasure. At least Laura won't have to worry about him black mailing her. Laura being the gentle soul she is makes absolute sure Carmela knows what is about to happen and I have to love Carmela's response of [But Carmela was not in the mood for reasoning. She nodded, almost eagerly. "I'm sure." Why, you darling little slut, Laura thought. A girl after my own heart. You dearly love fucking, in whatever form, don't you.] I bet Dawn was like her at her age. Sigh, again another masterpiece of initiation of great sex and the initial penetration ["Ahhhhhh!" Carmela winced and moaned, looking over her shoulder where Brad was quickly prepping her tight little asshole with his oiled fingers. "Here . . . honey, let's make it easier on all of us," Laura panted to her, rolling onto her own back and bringing Carmela over on top of her, holding the strap-on dildo in place with one hand.] I so love worming my fingers up an asshole especially one that is a virgin asshole knowing I am the first to invade her most private of erogenous zones. Knowing that soon or maybe the next fuck my cock will be pumping that asshole hard and deep and even savagely if she loves that kind of fucking. I have said I like Laura comparing her lovers and I like Laura comparing Brad's dick with some of her male lovers of the past and watching him lube his cock for his second anal invasion of the evening. Lucky guy!! Had to smile at Laura's sphincter spasming a little over her recent reaming. I so love those spasms of remembered fucks. It really makes me tingle and my clit do that mini throb in time with my building pulse.

Laura starts kissing Carmela to help her get through her first anal invasion. Kisses can soothe anything but sometimes that soothing is a matter of degree like here ["Unnnhhmmmggg!" Carmela whimpered, opening her sensual mouth to Laura's, coiling tongues with her as Brad made the first penetration. "Oowwwnnggghhh!" she howled, tearing her mouth from Laura's, as the head of his hard prick slipped into her ass.] I know that feeling of kissing my lover while getting that second cock up my ass or cunt or getting that cock beside an existing cock in my asshole or pussy and ripping my mouth away to hiss, grimace or howl and having my lover constantly moving my mouth back to hers to once more twine our tongues with her swallowing my animalistic groans now flowing out my throat in helpless keening of pleasure. Having all three holes pleasured like this is as close to heaven as I think one can get. Eventually, things settle down to where we can get some serious French kissing done while her fuck holes are plundered hard and deep. I am dreamy reading of Laura constantly reacquiring her mouth and Frenching her deep while love cooing to her to hang on. She is making this anal fuck so dreamy and soul ripping great that Carmela will be an anal slut for life and I know soon will be slipping her tongue and fingers up Joy's willing asshole until they can get their own strap-ons . These are so my kind of girls. You show Brad to be a considerate lover again as he lets Carmela get accommodated to his cock in her ass before he starts fucking her. Great lovers of any sex are a treasure. Laura senses that orgasms for all three are imminent but knows she might not come with her partners. I love how you show that not everything is that perfect synchronous timing. Whenever an orgasm happens is fantastic and this trying to always come at the same time is not wise anyways. Let the orgasms come when the come and give your all to your woman and heaven will be reached every time.

Sigh, now the supreme pleasure of getting dp fucked [Carmela was now impaled and skewered on the dildo and Brad's stiff cock, sandwiched between Laura and Brad, moaning and quivering and mewling as they began slowly to fuck in and out of her body, moving in a concerted rhythm, taking it easy on her, letting her adjust, but then, when she began whimpering less, picking up the pace. Laura held the dildo steady with one hand while she thrust her hips upward, encircling Carmela's hard body with her other arm and pulling the girl down into her, getting an added thrill by the feeling of Carmela's smooth, warm flesh undulating against her, and Carmela's large, stiff nipples rasping against her own.] I know that Carmela must be in heaven feeling those cocks buried deep in her belly. I love how you say that she is sandwiched between her two lovers mewling and quivering in a deep swoon feeling those poles in her as they start to saw in and out of her fuck holes. She has considerate lovers who keep things nice, slow and gentle until they sense she is getting accommodated to her love invaders and start to ramp up their pumping. I am swooning with the detail of Laura using an arm to pull Carmela down and snug against her body so she can feel every square centimeter of her delicious skin sliding and rubbing against her body. I so love feeling you and your weight on me when I'm on the bottom of dp fuck. I so love being on the bottom. Love it when our tits are mashing and rolling against each other as our nipples dig and drag across their mates. Nothing is better than pulling your lover close as you're pumping your cock up into her fuck hole and another lover is drilling down into her spasming asshole. I love this basic position because her face is so close and I can see that pleasure slashing and ripping her face with wild grimaces of pleasure and long eye rolls to the back of her head.

Nice detail how their sensual fuck has developed a nice calm slow tempo of sawing cocks sluicing deep up her fuck holes and slowly sliding out to once more slide deep back in. They are in that hyperaware state of sensing all the details of this now love fuck. I know Carmela must be swooning which you show here [Laura could hear Carmela's panting above everything else, partly because Carmela was face to face with her, and her body was pressed down hard against Laura's. She looked up into her face but Carmela's eyes were tightly shut as she swirled her pelvis back into Brad's downward thrusts and Laura's upward ones, though Laura was for the most part only holding steady, not really thrusting hard, figuring that the mere feeling of the long dildo shaft running across her clit as Brad fucked her ass would be enough stimulation to send the lovely girl to heaven in only another minute or so.] This makes so clear that Carmela is swooning with sweet sensations flowing out of her impaled cunt and asshole. So love the detail of Laura hearing Carmela's panting so close to her ear. A sound that makes me both dreamy and inspiring me to fuck you even harder and deeper. So true that swirling of hips to help those cocks bury themselves deep up your belly and bowels. Laura is correct in her reading of Carmela's impending orgasm ["Oh god! Unnhhhhh . . . oh god!" she gasped, her head turning from side to side, but now looking more like she was in an excruciating rapture of sexual pleasure instead of the pain Laura had initially seen in her face. "Oh god, yes, honey, you're going to come aren't you," Laura panted back, now beginning to rock her hips and thrust a little harder herself as she knew the moment was arriving.] Love how Laura sensing the end is near goes from keeping her cock buried deep as an anchor to counterpoint Brad's delicious down thrusting into her by now beginning to spasm asshole to starting to thrust her own cock more forcefully up her tight sleeve.

I have to smile at Brad's face getting red and his muscles clenching as he ramps up sensing Carmela is about to come and is letting his control slip. Sensing the end is near he does what I so love to do and is now starting to viciously ram his cock down hard and fast into Carmela's by now hyper sensitive asshole. I find almost all women love to be finished off hard when your love raping their juicy tender asshole. Brad is now giving Carmela his all just like he did earlier for Laura. I love how as Brad ramps up his stroking and Carmela is groaning more often and loudly and Laura is love cooing to her to hang on, the finish line is almost here. I so love it when I hear this gurgled by passion struck angels ["Oowwmmggg . . . owwwwaiiieeee!" she yelped, her cheeks now slick with tears, her eyes beseeching Laura. "Oh god . . . too hard! Ungghhh! Ouucchhh! Too deep! Oh . . . Laura! Ungghhh!"] I always notice when I hear such beseeching they are still swirling or throwing their hot pussy or tight asshole into my plowing stroking. They are just ramping themselves up for the big O that will take them to heaven. If any thing they even fuck back harder even as they are panting and pleading that it is too much. Heck, I do the same thing and all I want is even harder and deeper and my fuck sluts are just the same with a few Tamara's here and there that truly do need only gentle fucking when taking my cock. Finally Brad cracks and with a roar gives several extra hard and deep thrusts that sends Carmela over the edge into heaven ["Owwnngghgh . . . oh Laura . . . AUUNGGMMNGGNIIIEEEE! Oh! Oh! Mnnnggnniieeeeee!" she wailed, thrashing around spastically on top of Laura, her body wracked by a ferocious anal orgasm that Laura kept going by her own now-vigorous thrusting of the strap-on dildo into Carmela's spasming pussy. Laura kept fucking her, and Carmela kept coming, though not as intensely, while Brad slumped forward, caught himself with his palms on the mattress, panting furiously, then held his body steady so that Carmela could finish her sweet ordeal. Meanwhile, the added thrusting Laura was supplying was stimulating her own wet, aching pussy under the base of the strap-on dildo. She knew she was going to come, was desperate to come, but didn't know how it would happen. Her hands were still fluttering over Carmela's smooth, flexing back, embracing her, caressing her as Carmela skimmed through the last, exquisite but dying spasms of her orgasm.] Sigh, I know I have done my part of the job when the woman we have been fucking screams out in all caps and simply goes wild as her body is pummeled with excoriating bliss of a crushing orgasm. I so love to keep viciously ripping my cock into her body until I sense that it is time to slow and then stop. Lesbians can always sense this because we are so in tune

with our lover's body and needs. Love the detail of Brad all slumped over but catching his weight with his hands. I know that Carmela sweaty body must feel so good lying spent on top of Laura's body. Of course now Laura's body is now all stoked and in need of some loving or self gratification to get her own explosive orgasm she richly deserves.

The spent lovers Carmela and Brad disengage and get off of Laura who now removes her dildo and is looking for some sweet relief. I get like this thinking to myself "hey, it's my turn here". As lesbians always do, I am delivered (unless everyone else is simply destroyed and I then just flip onto my back and happily diddle myself into a crushing orgasm. Sometimes a girl must take the problem in hand so to speak). But this is rare because lesbians live to please and give back like here [Almost without thinking, she slipped out of the hip harness and stretched out on the bed, half-hoping that someone, anyone, would touch her, kiss her, grope her, fuck her, bring her the sweet release she desperately needed right now. From out of nowhere Joy was suddenly swarming all over her body, kissing her shoulders, her neck, rubbing her young breasts against Laura's.] I love these teenage angels who are so in tune with their true lesbian selves. Joy has seen the toy-play and desperately wants to fuck Laura with her cock and of course Laura is only to happy accept. I love how Joy is a quick study and just from observing is ready to buckle up and mount Laura for a nice het fuck. It is time to rock n' roll [It was pretty easy, Laura knew, and in seconds Joy was poised between Laura's spread thighs, looking down at Laura's aching, wet, blossoming pussy, holding the glistening dildo in the fingers of one hand, and smiling down at Laura as if Christmas was about to arrive. To make it even more exciting for them both, Laura ran her hands down to her crotch and sensually massaged the flesh of her inner thighs on either side of her inflamed slit, pulling the swollen lips open even further, letting Joy see the shiny pink inner depths, all gurgling and swimming with warm buttery cunt juices.] Love the description of Joy looking like Christmas has arrived early. I know Joy must be thrumming with happiness with her stupendous orgasms and now she gets to fuck her teacher with her own dildo. Life is treating Joy real special this early evening and she knows it. Oh yeah, a confident woman exposing her vagina with brass and verve that can only say fuck me hard and deep. I so love confidence in women. Nothing is prettier on this earth than a woman's passion flower all swollen and opened for your devouring gaze. Feeling that heavenly sight filling your veins with raging passion for serous loving.

As I have said before I so love the spoken word in your stories. Here you show us that hot sexy speak to inflame your lover, then youthful exuberance and finally begging your lover for some intense fucking ["Fuck me, honey," she said huskily, looking dreamily up into Joy's eyes. "Fuck me with your big hard cock." Joy laughed so spontaneously at this that her high, young breasts jiggled sexily, and Laura was overcome by a hotter lust even than before. "Please . . . " she beseeched Joy, dying for it. "Please. Kiss me and fuck me, honey."] Because other authors never let their creations really talk the reader never gets to see their true personalities and the little moments in life that make life so special. Everything is always so serious in other stories and lack the mirth that really leavens and spices up life. Joy expresses her newness to the game but is ready to continue [Joy could do it. She lodged the head of the dildo in the wet, aching channel of Laura's pulsing cunt and slowly pushed it home. All the time her eyes were on the dildo disappearing into Laura's tight slit, while all the time Laura's eyes were on Joy's face, until she felt herself nearly swooning with pleasure as the hard stalk filled her tight sleeve. She could feel Joy's taut, slender thighs pressing against the inner flesh of her own thighs, even feel the base of the strap-on pushing against her cunt lips. Oh god, it's heaven! she thought as Joy, obeying directions, leaned down to kiss her too.] Again you so capture that moment of penetration that I so love and cherish and detail the pleasure and joy the receiver is receiving from her fuck. I have come to find weird how other authors never let their creations mentally tell us their pleasure. I almost feel sorry for them. I know the pleasure Joy is feeling as she watches what is now her cock disappearing in her lover's body. It is quite hypnotic. I really love that detail of Joy burying her cock until Joy's thighs are pressed against hers and she feels the harness against her twat. I so love that sensation because that means her cock is buried balls deep in my belly. Plus, you always show how loving is so much more special when you bring your lover close to your body and rub, enfold, caress, stroke and kiss. I so love kissing my lover when she is fucking me good with her cock.

I love seeing the raw passion here with Laura bringing Joy's mouth down roughly to hers and driving her tongue deep and hard into Joy's mouth and rapes it with intense love. I can just feel their tongues slipping, sliding and wrestling with each other. Laura gives some gentle instruction about holding her cock to keep it steady and the passion continues to ramp up with Laura using the spoken word to inflame both her and Joy [Laura nodded violently. "Oh god, yes! Fuck me hard and fast. Please, Joy. Do it now. Fast, hard as you can. Hold on so it doesn't slip out." Joy began grinding her hips, at first slowly, then more rapidly and energetically. With one hand she held the dildo in place, and with her other she squeezed Laura's breasts enthusiastically. "Unhhh . . . unhhhh! Yes . . ." Laura panted to her, grinding back, feeling the long stalk slide in and out of her pussy, feeling the wonderful convex ridges on the shaft ripple along her sensitive secret wet flesh. "Ohnnggg . . . do it harder, honey!"] Words simply make my blood boil within my veins with fevered fuck hunger. It inspires Joy with more violent thrusting which is exactly what my lovely slut Laura is craving for. We both like our cocks plunging deep into our bodies when the finish line is coming into view. I am just so thankful I have found one author who loves sexy dirty talk as much as I do. Nice detail of those ridges rippling along Laura's inner sleeve. Dildo's with those unnatural projections, shapes and curves are such a beautiful change of pace that keeps het fucking so special. What man can do that!

You now bring us to the finish line with such a beautiful final conflagration ["Oh Laura . . ." Joy panted, feeling their teeth clank and glance together, pulling back a little and ramming Laura even harder now with the dildo. "Oh Laura . . . you're so beautiful . . . unhhhgggg!" "Auunggghh!" Laura cried out, hanging on the edge now of a ferocious orgasm. "Yes . . . yes . . . yes! Ungghh! Ungghhh!" "Oh Laura!" Then there was the split second of silence Laura always recognized, the brief moment when time was suspended before the obliterating, crushing, galvanic explosion. Then the dam gave way. "Auunnngghh! Owwwnnggghhhiiinnmmmmeeeee!" she wailed, flipping and surging off the bed into Joy's body, feeling her pussy impaled on the hard shaft, feeling it penetrated even further into her because of her wild thrashing and vigorous pumping. "Unngghh . . . uhnnngggghhh . . . oh! Aunnggiinmmmnneeee!" she screamed, coming again, or was it just a following spasm from the first excruciating convulsion. "Ahhh . . . ahhh . . . ohhhh!"] So many wonderful details intermingled with this earth shattering orgasm of pure fucking bliss. No other author has spoken of teeth clanking in our frenzied devouring of each other's mouth with the fires are raging in our bodies. Oh course Joy is still whispering to Laura just how beautiful she finds her adult teacher lover. Then you so clearly show the pleasure that is rocking Laura's world with primal bliss that is shredding her womb and reducing her pussy to a swollen satiated fuck flower all soupy and creamy with fuck juices. I so love how you clearly show how your final wild undulations of passion will make that cock plunge even deeper up your cunt as you are wildly throwing your pelvis up into the final killing strokes of deep love. Oh the screams of pure pleasure that I so need to vocalize when I am coming and need to hear when I am loving my women. I simply need to hear your rapturous cries of passion and pleasure. I now without a doubt I am giving you my all when I hear and see my women being ripped apart with a killer orgasm.

I often feel like Laura here when she wonders if she has ever come this hard in front of the girls or Brad. I too feel like each monster orgasm is the best I have ever experienced and if I will ever match it in the future and I always do. I so love sex and can't imagine what life would be like if I couldn't get my loving almost every day like I need. I had to chuckle with Laura's uncontrollable laugher when Joy asks Laura if she alright. I have had other women break up like this. The first time I was little pissed until I could see the true underlying love and sheer exuberance underlying mirth and giddiness. Women can always sense a little consternation in their lover and know how to let her lover know exactly what she is feeling like ["Oh god, yes! I am so okay you wouldn't believe how okay I am," she grinned, pulling Joy down again and this time kissing her not as roughly as before, but more emotionally. "You fucked me so good . . . god, I came so hard."] Men are too wrapped up in themselves to even worry about our needs and emotions after they have gotten off. Pigs. I am all dreamy eyed with Laura pressing Joy close and telling to keep her cock in her some more so they can feel their love flowing between Joy's cock and Laura's womb. I so cherish these sweet moments of post coital time of bodies all entwined and held close, especially when we are languidly twining our tongues in spent love.

They finally realize that all their love cooing and post coital closeness has an audience. Laura jokes them about them being jealous but how can there be jealousy in such a loving environment [Brad smiled, but Carmela was more aggressive, laughing with them and piling on. She slid over on the sheet and pressed her warm body against both Laura and Joy, throwing one arm over Joy's back. "Me next," she laughed. "I get to do it to her next, Joy."] I love how Carmela just wants to fuck and fuck. We find that Joy is just as randy for more loving when she claims it is her turn since she is all worked up from loving Laura so hard and well. She needs to calm the fire raging in her pussy. Since their post coital time is over, Laura gently starts nudging Joy and she dismounts Laura slipping her love cock from Laura's spent pussy. Now the girls are ready to have a simmering het fuck between the two of them. They have new vistas to explore and revel in. Joy removes the strap-on and Carmela immediately straps in and is soon burying what is now HER cock into Joy's sodden cunt. I so love reading that they fuck sensually and intimately for twenty minutes before Joy and Carmela succeed in have assimultaneous orgasm. They are learning so much from Laura and her helper for the day Brad. We find that Brad has had time to revive once more and he and Laura fuck themselves to another crushing, heavenly orgasm of shared bliss. Sigh, this has been one intense love session. Like how their spent bodies are making this last orgasm so painful in its blissful intensity. Spent flesh always gives such wonderful orgasms that seem like sweet pain as your mind whites out with screaming fucking bliss that is almost to pure to endure but what I always strive for again and again.

Laura is spent and sees that they have been fucking gloriously for an hour and half and is thinking a nice solitary bath would do wonder for her right now. She is contemplating how to gently encourage them to leave when Brad announces he must leave and get home and sleep for an early meeting the next day. I like the gentle camaraderie here as Laura escorts Brad to the door. I love the picture the girls left Laura with when she leaves to escort Brad to the door [Joy and Carmela, still coiled lazily together on the bed, giggled softly. The long, ridged, wet dildo still jutted obscenely from Carmela's crotch. In truth, both of them looked so delicious to Laura that she wondered if her desire for a solitary bath were not capable of being postponed.] I often feel the fires reigniting in my pussy after I think I am totally spent. Seeing my beautiful angels in such supine positions of love and rutting many times sets my pussy on fire for yet another round of intense fucking until my pussy is once more feeling like it is tearing itself inside out and I am screaming my pained bliss to the heavens. I so love fucking my flesh into complete exhaustion. I have to admire the girls here. They have responsibilities and are going home to study. They know that they need a good education to have a lifestyle that we all dream about having. They know that they will be fucking with Laura in the future. I see Laura is angling for a little more pussy (I love it!) [Laura kissed her. "There's more than one kind of homework." Carmela, now dressed too, approached them from the side and forced herself into the embrace. "We know the kind of homework you like, Laura," she teased, offering her mouth. At this rate we'll be back on that bed in seconds, Laura realized as she French kissed Carmela too. But Carmela and Joy, feeling the same thing, pulled away gently. "We were telling the truth. We do have homework. We've got to go."] I admire responsibility but I know I would be making arrangements for our next tryst for more intense fucking. I would need these angles so badly. Of course, I need all my angels badly. I love how Laura and her angels dreamily talk of their next tryst and doing some more energetic het fucking. I so hope we are there. These are two teenage foxes to die for.

This has been a great chapter. I just want to say again how I love how you so perfectly captured the fucking when multiple partners are involved. So often in stories and much worse on film the lovers are switching positions so fast my head is spinning and I know they can't really be enjoying themselves. Lovers do mix and match and do flow from couple to couple when the dynamics lead that way but for the most part you pair up and fuck until you both come or one comes and then you get someone else to do you. A partner who has been giving also or maybe a revived lover. Only you capture how the

lovemaking just flows so languidly and lovingly form lover to lover. Again you have proven beyond a shadow of a doubt that you are the master supreme of lesbian erotica. No one else comes close.

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Chapter 285:

 

// cute deshona calling with sara in her bed and querulous /

plaintive

tone. i know that hunger you feel for a lover you haven't seen in

awhile and wanting them so bad. i have had been in the presence of an

angel when the husband / boyfriend or their mate is calling. it can

be

funny, nervous or a little uncomfortable according to the situation

and

dynamics involved.

// i think you are right, it is amazing how angelic most women are

when

the are sleeping. so innocent and soft. makes my heart just melt for

them like laura's is here with sara.

// like how you show them having to work to have their love

rendezvous. other stories always make the stars align perfectly for

the

tryst to happen immediately where you capture how one's life is often

full and you have to fit your angel in. hopefully quickly but

sometimes

it does take a while. with me it just makes my blood simmer with need

that i have to relieve with other angels but i still hunger for you

until i can have you. i have always loved laura's hunger for her

women.

// love how you use the phone message deshona leaves to show the

reader

how she has grown as person and is now so able to feel deeply and

passionately. i have really enjoyed watching deshona grow as woman

and

person. plus, she is wonderful to watch fuck. hehehe.

// you capture perfectly that feeling of seeing a love after a long

absence and feeling once again your love for her. only you are able

to

capture this because only you have created this wonderful universe

where

your women can exist, breath and grow as people and have the time

reference to allow this falling away and coming together. i can just

feel the magic flowing between them as their love for each other once

more flames to life. love how with time we see that deshona has

changed

her look. like real life again. i have loved this story arc for

these

little things you invest in your story.

// had to chuckle over their memories of taneesha. they feel anger

and

some jealousy on deshona's part i guess and all i would want is to get

the two of them together with me in bed. incest is best they say.

// i think this perfectly captures deshona's growth as a warm caring

woman ["I guess if I can't kiss you I'm going to pop, too,"

she

confessed. "I feel this big burning, swelling bubble of emotion

for you

here in my chest, you know?" ] wow, this is not the woman you

introduced us too years ago. she has grown into a woman i would

hunger

to have in my life and bed.

// wow, i really enjoy their first kiss of smoldering love. love the

merging of mouths and moving their heads to get the deepest connection

as their tongues duel in hot love and building love. i so love

dueling

with my lover's tongue and exploring her mouth deeply as she does

mine.

i can just feel my cunt melt like laura's is here. sometimes my

lover's

have to hold me up as i get all weak kneed and i feel my belly turn to

jelly. only you capture this magical merging of souls through lover's

hot devouring / plunging tongues deep down each other's throats.

// i had to chuckle at the humor of deshona's melons. they truly are

wonders of the universe and would inspire such mirth and jesting in

me i

am quite sure. again, i love how you are the only author to really

the

capture the mirth and joy that love brings in your life and just makes

such clips flow between lovers in in love and lust.

// wow, love the emperor - i want it fucking my cunt and asshole like

now and sliding down my throat. you know me, the bigger the better.

i

love how deshona is now seeking out such things like her own cock to

please herself and her lovers. she is truly growing. i love the

girth

as such a cock is pounding deep in my fuck holes or stuff my throat

and

such a monster make me work not to gag. length doesn't get me but

girth

does. women love seeing me taking their cock down my throat

especially

when it has just come from my cunt or ass. makes them fuck me all the

harder. yumm!!!!

// i have to chuckle and admire the story of the "emporer's

purchase".

i love how the hot, hot fucking with dee dee inspired the hunger and

need in deshona to get the emperor and only you would have a muslim

taxi

man purchase it for deshona. i guess most people wouldn't get the

humor

of how this must have affected his sensibilities but hey, fifty bucks

is

fifty bucks.

// i am so happy that deshona is starting to embrace her lesbian self

with this new woman and hopefully many more. again you are showing

your

women growing and changing. we see deshona becoming a complete loving

woman and it is because of laura. without this universe you have

created for deshona to live in we could never have seen this growth.

thank you again for this wonderful place we get to visit each new

chapter.

// love the game of feigning anger and how quickly deshona reacts to

laura's overtures of anger. i love this kind of kink myself and will

never turn down some good old spanking and getting roughed up. i so

fucking love it. deshona is like me but not as much. she acts like

"like hell you will" while i do that and do a lot of

snarling and

puffing up which makes my humiliation and being taken down so much

hotter and fucking rad for me. i do love seeing this kink in your

stories. only you just make it flow in and out of your story and make

it so natural to the story like it is in real life for women like me

and

arch angels who love this kind of hard, rough sex. joann and i love

to

be "broken"; dodie loves to be overwhelmed by strength of

will and body

while maria is the submissive slut who just wants to spanked, slapped

and jerked around.

// had to smile at another small moment that only you give with

deshona

wearing a lacy pink bra just because she knows it will drive laura

wild

with lust. again real life lovers doing the little extra for her

lover. love the subtle strip-tease they give each other. only you

have

shown the slow, slow removal of clothes by yourself or by your lover

all

the way to the wild stripping of clothes in wild lust. again you

need a

universe like this to show us the range of possible happenings.

// i love so the game you so wonderfully show of deshona barking her

defiance and laura acting affronted and that first wonderful smack

that

makes you ass suddenly blaze with pain and your body tense with shock.

of course with sluts like deshona and i our cunts soon start to burn

and

run with copious fuck juice as that pain quickly ignites our wombs and

clits with fucking burning needy pleasure.

// i have read a few other spankings but they just don't spend the

kilobytes necessary to make it so fucking special like it is in real

life. they basically just say it happens where you detail that first

hard whack and its aftermath and then you just build and build to the

nuclear explosion that always results from such blissful spankings.

// i love how you just take us through the spanking and how deshona

is

just destroyed by it with fucking pleasure and fucking need. the

clenching buttocks, the howling and shimming of the ass up into the

blows because you so fucking love it and how your cunt just gushes all

over the place leaving a big wet spot. i really love this new sound

of

pained pleasure ["Ayyii . . . ayyii . . . ayiii!"] the

gods know i have

made this sound and ones like it so many times since i was young

teenager. i have always loved getting spanked and roughed up. love

how

you show and tell the reader that all those sounds from deshona are

only

tinges of pain and are really deep guttural cries and vocalizations of

deep pleasure burning deep in her ass and womb and just waiting to

explode out to rend her womb and cunt with scalding waves of killing

fucking bliss as your burning ass is jerking up in the air or slamming

or squirming hard into the bed, sofa or floor or your lover's leg it

getting little girl style. yip, been this and seen this so many times

in my life ["Oh god . . . oh GODDDD that feels good! Ungghhh!

Auunnggggg!" Deshona groaned, again looking around at Laura

fiendishly

pummeling her ass, her lovely face wet with tears and contorted in an

expression of piercing sexual need.] you are simply a goddess in

capturing this so well.

// i have never mentioned my kink love of having my pussy slapped but

you capture it hear. their is nothing better than having your pussy

slapped hard with a loving palm that just makes you come and come with

screams of fucking bliss. and then you capture what happens sometimes

when your body just takes control, the detail of one's thighs clamping

down on laura's hand or a lover's face. crushing that hand or face as

hard as you can to your cunt as you hump hard to grind every ounce of

pleasure you possibly can from the moment.

// deshona ejaculates again and is embarrassed dang gone it. the

more

come the better as far as i am concerned. i want a big wet mess.

wished deshona loved her own come. i sure love mine. i so love to

lick

my lovers spent cunt, pelvis, thighs and belly clean and love to clean

up my own mess when masturbating. i try to teach every woman i have

met

who was squeamish like this to learn to love her own come. most i

have

succeed with thankfully.

// i love this next part because we get to see a woman dining with

long

lasting hunger on tender, red, wet, sopping cunt meat. deshona has

had

her orgasm and now being a true woman immediately hungers to devour

some

sweet tender pussy of her lover. i love how she nestles down between

laura's spread thighs and just gorges on her hot wet cunt. i so love

just lying there and devouring my meal of pussy. licking, sucking,

nibbling, stabbing, butterflying, broad and narrow tongue strokes.

focusing all over her pussy and down to her asshole and back up to the

clit like deshona here. pussies were made to be devoured completely

and

only you give the loving details of this. i like how only you show

that

often we will detour and slip up and get some nice tit meat and then

drive our tongue down our lover's throat letting her taste her own

sweet

come like deshona here. giving your woman your all. i love how laura

hungers to taste her own essence in deshona's loving mouth as their

tongues coil and duel in hot love.

// i know deshona's consternation when laura's orgasm is silent. i

want to see your body ripped apart with helpless cunt rupturing

pleasure. i want you to scream. i almost feel cheated when this

happens to me though i know sometimes i too have these orgasms that

just

make me come with that heavenly floating feeling that doesn't make me

do

my normal thrashing and screaming like i am dying from hot fucking

pleasure. my reaction is exactly like deshona. i need you to comfort

and reassure me that i did indeed deliver a fucking stupendous orgasm

it

was just the quiet kind that we sometimes have. i much prefer giving

the truly harrowing kind. it makes my soul sing with joy and

happiness.

// sigh, i love your post coital time of gentle twining, stroking and

kissing. that time when souls just flow and intertwine in sweet,

sweet

love. i too like to pump my lovers for info about their other lovers.

i want to know. heck, even the guys if they can fuck and i can get

some

juicy narrative. i just love hearing about sex and seeing how people

interact. unlike laura, i try and succeed for the vast most part to

not

compete so i would be egging deshona on with rhonda and helping and

hoping that start a hot tryst that i could then make a threesome.

yes,

i am a complete slut. heheheh, i am what i am.

// YAH!! no more fucking charles the prick - love the line [Deshona

might be happy to be rid of the prick, but maybe not The Prick.] humor

so spices life. i hated the fucker from the beginning. he was never

worthy of such a fine fox as deshona. i am just so happy that she is

discovering sweet lesbian loving now and freed herself of that

complete

loser.

// love the breast worship details we get as laura starts loving

deshona again. only you really capture the arching of your back and

how

you desperately try to cram your aching nipple and tit flesh hard and

fully into your lover's sweet sucking, licking mouth. grabbing her

head

(only you show) and pulling her down into your tit and how you often

just stare down with that hard stare of love and lust as you watch

your

woman making your tits burn and thrum with hot fucking pleasure

sending

warm waves through your body and hot arrows piercing your beginning to

melt and quiver cunt. i love to have my breast worshipped hard like

deshona here. i find most like it hard to some degree at least though

some like that soft loving which i am only too happy to give. just

give

me verbal and body language queues and i will give you exactly what

you

want.

// had to smile at deshona using lovemaking to avoid talking about

rhonda also. we women are just to secretive and competitive

sometimes.

// i have to smile and love how their dildo fuck starts with laura

getting on her back and deshona mounting her. i love fucking like

this

into my lover. coiling and using the mattress to get my cock

hammering

deep up her pussy or asshole. oh gods yes, i am so there as deshona

slowly impales herself completely on her lover's cock. i love getting

that cock balls deep and feeling our bodies touching. i feel so full

and loved. it just makes me get that giddy rising feeling deep in my

belly and womb and makes my pussy just clench and lubricate freely.

getting ready for the divine fucking to commence. i so love to fuck

big

fat cocks. i'm an oral girl but i need plenty of penetrating fucking

too keep my happy too.

// again only you give the details. the times i read other stories

with dildo fucking they basically just fuck with no details of the

positions or techniques used. you show us how it can go all ways.

sometimes you just pound your pussy down on your love cock and use the

bed or your lover as a grip to ram and slam down on your cock or maybe

see-saw rapidly and not so deep to make your pussy burn and scream

with

that wicked rippling the cock produces pistoning so fast in and out

your

tight clasping cunt. then you often do what they do here and you draw

your lover down where you can devour her tits and hot, sweet mouth

while

your lover rocks her cunt up and down your cock. such heaven this

produces as sweet tit fills your mouth and you dine and then release

and

scoot up and devour her mouth with your deep plunging and coiling

tongue

making her your complete slut as your cock continues to rock and

plunge

up her sweet pussy or hot asshole.

// ah the sweet details and communication [They were wrinkled and

erect

and shiny with her warm saliva, darker than before from the engorged

blood she had drawn into them, pointing and stiff between her

lips. "Bite them . . ." Deshona panted. "Bite

them a little . . .

please. Not too hard. Ohhhh! Just a little . . . yes! Ungghh! Oh

yes!" "Mmmmm, we're turning a little kinky these days,

aren't we,"

Laura purred to her, lashing Deshona's wet, erect nipples passionately

with her tongue. "Are you sure?"] communication that

allows you to give

your woman exactly what she wants and needs and thus taking her

completely to heaven

// while they have not entered slam fuck mode yet i love seeing laura

using her hands on deshona's hips to slow her down. like all women we

want to draw out our delicious fucking. only you show how lovers work

and communicate so we are giving maximum and taking maximum pleasure.

only you show the communication necessary to achieve this heaven on

earth. other authors just don't want to take the time to show this i

guess. their missed opportunity and our loss. i am happy to have one

author who recognizes this and delivers. i get dreamy as you describe

how they are drunk with love as they settle into that sweet rhythm of

sensual fucking where your bodies just fuck in that sweet love rhythm

where bodies are in perfect sync. you just kind of float into a

universe of perfect harmony as your lover's body is rocking and

merging

with yours as your cock so sweetly works in and out of her body. i

swear we can feel our souls just flowing through our cock. there is

just something about fucking your lover with your cock and that

connection. it is almost mystical. i get a mystical feeling with a

good deep finger fuck or fisting but still a good dildo fuck has its

own

special magic i will never forgo and desperately need to feel on a

regular basis.

// deshona is ready for the finishing move and moves onto her stomach

to be penetrated from behind. her personal favorite which i love

knowing. i had to smile at laura loving deshona's ass and seeing if

deshona will rise to the bait but deshona knows what she wants. i

love

you showing how lovers subtly communicate and use expressions and body

language to get our souls in perfect sync for super hot fucking.

// sigh, i sure love your way with words ["Mmmm, good thing I

love your

sweet pussy too," Laura murmured, again introducing the swollen,

bulging

head of the huge dildo into the wet, puckered, fiery salmon-red groove

of Deshona's splayed cunt.] i am nearing swooning as laura slides her

cock fully into deshona's fully lubricated cunt up to the hilt and

deshona's heavenly moan of deep pleasure. again, it really hits me

how

only you show that lesbians love the whole body. here we see laura as

she love massages all of deshona's wonderful perfect back as she

sensually works her cock in and out of deshona's goddess like pussy

and

body. like reading how we contrast our lovers like laura does here

with

this sensual fuck and the wild athletic fucking with her cheerleader

lovers. we all do it and i love reading it.

// sigh, why is it only you who really captures the essence of deep

soul fucking [Now that The Empress was lodged deeply in Deshona's

cunt,

Laura could ride it harder and rougher without fear of it slipping

out.

She gripped Deshona's smooth shoulders and began to rear up, gently at

first, then more vigorously, thrusting the hard shaft deep into

Deshona's writhing body with each forward plunge. Now they were no

longer flowing in their original smooth, smoldering rhythm. Everything

had jumped up a notch. Laura could feel Deshona's body under her

straining and flexing. Deshona was moaning constantly, and yelping

softly when The Empress rammed into her pussy too deeply.

"Aawwonngg! Ohnnggg! Aawwonnggg!" she cried out, wincing,

and yet

swirling her ass back into Laura, as if wanting it deeper.] you are

the

only author to capture the flow and energy of fucking and how it

almost

morphs during the fuck from the direction and energy level of the

beginning. sometimes it stays slow and soft from beginning to end and

sometimes it is wild and athletic from the start but it is almost

always

some variation of the above, again, i am amazed at how

"same" all

others make the sweetest on act on earth seem. two women making love

is

simply magical and should be presented as such.

// oh geez, i love how deshona and laura fuck. they are strong,

passionate women. deshona wants and laura delivers that pummeling

slam

fuck that just makes your body sing. i so love to feel my lovers

coiling and slamming their hard cocks deep and hard into my fuck

hole(s). i need to feel the power and penetration of deep spearing

love

thrusts and slapping of bodies as they slam fuck me. giving, i love

to

feel my cock plunging up their fuck hole and feel my body slapping

down

or up into theirs. i love that delicious sound of sweat slick flesh

slapping. i love producing this in my women

["Uunnnnhhuuunnhhhh!"

Deshona groaned, her head tossing back and forth on the sheet, her ass

uptilted to Laura's increasingly sharp thrusting. Laura stabbed

the

dildo deep into her pussy, knowing how it sprayed fiery sparks of pain

and unbelievable pleasure through Deshona's body as the huge shaft

sank

deep into her clinging pussy and rammed against her cervix.

"Aoouunggghh! Oh Laura . . . uhhh . . . uhhhh . . ."] i so

love

spearing my women and just seeing and feeling their bodies starting to

quake and quiver and hearing that clotted breathing and demented moans

and often screams / curses announcing the approaching orgasms. we

women

just instinctively feel our lovers coiling their wombs; striving and

working towards paradise.

// wow, of fucking wow, i didn't see this coming (which makes this so

fucking rad when your lover springs it on you unexpectedly)

["Aauuooonnnnnhhhggggwww!" she howled, but then stopped as

Laura yanked

back on her hair so hard that for a moment her voice was totally

throttled and crushed. She was being speared in the pussy by The

Empress, and Laura was fiercely yanking back on her hair, bowing her

lovely back and stretching her throat, all in the same moment, which

sent her into a raving delirium of coming, a torrent of spasms that

seemed to keep rolling in rapid shockwaves through her convulsing,

clenching flesh. "OOWWWNNGGGHMMMNNIIIEEEEEE!" she

cried out a

horrible, murderous shrieks that somehow also vibrated with a rich

overtone of almost unbearable ecstasy. "Anngghhhnnmmmiieee! Oh!

Ohnngg!

Anngghhhnnmmmiieee! Oh Laura! Oh . . . oh . . . Laura!

Unngghhhmmnngggiieeee! Oh shit!"] i am swooning here feeling my

throat

doing symphatic clenches as it relives such delicious, vicious head

yanking. it makes me nearly black out from such severe pleasure it

produces in my rupturing cunt. i so love this and being lightly

choked

during coming. it makes me scream all caps when i get enough air in

my

lungs. i so love that taut feeling in my back and belly when i'm

drawn

back like a bow and i love those short vicious hair yanks while they

jerk my head all around too. it really does make you come so fucking

deeply and heavenly. i live so fucking love hard fucking.. only you

capture this and i so fucking thank you for this.

// i so love reading and knowing what deshona is feeling when she

croaks from a throat destroyed temporary from coming to keep laura's

cock buried deep in her spent and happy pussy. i too love to feel

that

hard cock(s) buried up my cunt and or asshole. i just feel so

connected

to my lovers as a current of love just flows between us. lying all

slumped on each other as our sweat soaked bodies just radiate love to

each other as we slowly recover and come back to mother earth. i so

love that weeeee high as their cocks are slide out of still sensitive

cunt and asshole and feeling those heads slipping free and give me one

last love jolt.

// had to smile at deshona fingering her scalp. i also do that

after a

good hair pulling. makes my scalp just tingle with echoes for long,

long minutes of happy memories. i have to smile great big at

deshona's

feigned displeasure when her tone and body language makes it totally

possible that laura gave her some more loving hair pulling over their

love weekend.

// like deshona finally divulging the name of her new lover. i have

found that hot intense fucking can make most women all dreamy and

ready

to tell you just about everything you would want to know. i love

pleasuring them to this happy relaxed state. i know i have done my

job.

// i had to smile at deshona calling a time out and them eating

before

we know more divine heated fucking takes place. one does need to take

your breaks to refuel and take power meower naps to recharge the body

for more heated fucking. i love how you show us these beginnings of

divine weekends of heavenly fucking. trysts that just make the body

sing and soul soar with shared pleasure.

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Chapter 286:

// like how the chapter starts with amber and laura lazily nuzzling

each other after napping a little after great, intense fucking. only

you really capture that sweet post coital time or when lovers have

gone

to sleep in each others arms and awake to share again their simmering

love for each other. i so love to hold my lover close like here and

feel her body all pressed or twined with mine. love spoon and feeling

her tits pressed into my back and feeling her limbs around me. makes

me

feel so safe and loved.

// i like how amber has really focused on the fact that laura is so

special as a lover and a woman. laura is so modest she can't see her

own specialness. one should never get a big head i think..

// wonder what the present is --- (love laura wearing the bracelet for

amber) Yippeee - it is a new wonderful woman to seduce, arthell. love

the name.

// i love how you have laura getting heated just sitting and talking

with her naked lover. just being in the presence of this lovely woman

is making her pussy begin to thrum again with renewed lust and love.

// amber is demure about her thoughts on arthell but ones gaydar is

usually accurate with a few spectacular failures but still, often you

know before she does. one can just often sense when a woman can be

seduced, often long before she knows. i love getting the

"sense" and

then starting the seduction. i don't go after stone cold hets like

joann or maria. why go through all that. go for the women you are

pretty sure you can seduce into your loving arms is my motto.

// like the real life location of arthell's classes. like you using

real life places in your story. went on the web and read all about

her

college. makes me feel a little closer to arthell. i like amber

giving

in this way. being a mentor. you make it so plain that all these

women

have their shinning positive qualities. had to smile at amber

"knowing"

laura's type. being drawn to the girl next door. i love beautiful of

course but i am a real sucker for the girls next door of the world

who i

have found are just so giving and simply animals in bed who fuck like

banshees. i get teased some by my arch angels because of my tastes

but

i basically stick my tongue out at them and go

"ummmaaaaaaa" at them. i

love my girl next door angels.

// had to smile at laura's nervousness at wanting to do a good job

with

her public speaking. people would never know how nervous i am but

try i

and be like laura and use all my skills to hid it.

// had to love laura whispering to amber where arthell is. i love

amber for working to make this happen. i so believe in networking and

using lovers and friends to help find new lovers and new women to

seduce. i so love fucking new women and love my angels who help me in

this and i of course help them. i love amber for being so cool and

self

assured and not jealous. she is what this world needs more of.

// i am so there as laura's pussy tingles with her first sight of

arthell. so often my first sight of a new potential angel makes my

pussy tingle and nipples taunt with desire. i love how we discover

that

Arthell is not classiclly beautiful and yet laura still finds her to

be

attractive and desirable. i find this combination to be so deadly

[Arthell was exactly what Amber had described. Pretty in a plain sort

of

way, not drop dead gorgeous by any stretch but perhaps even better

than

gorgeous. She was completely real, normal, sweet, and friendly.] i

live

with two 10's and they know it and desire such (but will sleep with

any

willing woman if offered) but i am so attracted to the above. a great

smile always captures my heart. you give us your usual wonderful

details. i simply love how you describe arthell. maybe most would find

her nose a little to big and mouth large and lips thick and yet you

make

it clear she is still a total fucking hot fox. i chase women like

this

all the time. i love them to the depths of my soul and, yes, my

pussy,

hehehehe. it is the rare woman i don't desire i too am a sucker for

great smiles. thank you for giving us a world with women who have

that

unique charm that overcomes the perceived lack of perfection. i

believe

almost all people have that certain perfection. simply see it. you

have to be beaten with the ugly stick or the fat stick to turn me off.

you then flood the reader with the details that make her so fucking

lovely. her skin color, her full breasts, her lanky frame and sweet,

sweet smile. i think we are alike in that we see the beauty first and

then the slight imperfections are almost meaningless.

// like how laura quickly finds their shared taste for jazz and uses

that to start building the bridge to arthell's soul and then her

sweet,

sweet pussy. just listening can get you so far. by the gods i love

amber asking laura to take arthell home since she can't take her home

like she promised. amber is my kind of slut. she knows how to

network. i am so attracted to strength and self assurance.

// i am so like laura here ["Of course," Arthell laughed,

throwing back

her head a little, showing off that gorgeous smooth dark brown neck.]

i

so notice everything about a woman i want in my bed.

// i am smiling as laura's pussy tingles and her desire starts to

simmer as she basks in arthell's presence in arthell's parents house.

just being near arthell is making laura fall all the harder for this

sweet angel.

// like how laura is spending time with arthell without being overly

aggressive. i have found that just setting the hook is enough to

eventually get you your pussy. just be your usual charming witty self

and you will almost always get your woman (well not always dammit). i

know the nervous as you weigh you options and try and decide on how to

move. sometimes it can be so hard to read but i am willing to take my

time like laura. let her subconscious work on her and do half if not

most of the work for you. just give her time to recognize her

desires.

if she doesn't let man's fucked up brainwashing get her then she will

be

yours eventually. you have to risk she will clamp down and then deny

herself and you the possible sweet loving and fucking you both so

deserve.

// had to smile at the rhonda and bitchy cat remarks. sigh, the

competition still lives on it seems.

// not sure if i have seen laura so aggressive when she pleads and

then

almost demands that amber chase off her current lover. i too know the

need to fuck almost anyone when something doesn't go right in my life.

i need the release and comfort of an angel to soothe my pain and other

negative emotions. i always feel so much better after some great,

heated fucking. me i would have preferred the threesome amber offers.

i never, ever turn down the opportunity for new pussy. i always think

of what i have missed when i don't get some pussy i know i could of

had.

// i really resonated with laura's statement of wanting arthell to

like

her. i like to connect with my lovers on some personal level. i will

"fuck" like amber is implying but i will take more if i can

get it. i

still do the pickup scene from time to time and targets of opportunity

but i do like to get to know you and see the "real you".

// like the banter between amber and laura. i am easy going but i

will

rise to the bait and play the word games of ranking and thrust and

parry. i can't quite control my competitive streak either.

// love the "gaydar oscillations" and how amber tells laura

that arthell

needs wonderful teachers like herself and laura and they often don't

see

their own needs and true desires as clearly as we do. i really do

feel

almost all women have the desire it is just so clouded by brainwashing

to see. one must decide on if it is worth the effort. me i try and

avoid stone cold hets. the challenge and the work is too much. i

leave

them to joann and maria who i must say always get their girl and wow

are

they sluts in bed and very demanding for hot wet red sopping cunt

meat.

they never can get enough. still, they are able to sense it also and

avoid the truly unreachables ones. though they will never admit that

a

woman is beyond their reach but i have noticed them turn aside when i

point out certain women. i get the "i'm not interested".

yeah, right.

// like the sheets not being changed. i love the smell of sex and

rutting. it turns me on.

// woo-woo, i love that thrill of seeing my lover remove that piece

of

clothing that revels her lovely perfection to my starving eyes. then

you give us the jolt of seeing our lover strap into her strap-on and

know that soon that cock will pumping hard and deep in your fuck

hole(s). i get that clench deep in my belly and womb that just makes

me

shake hard and my eyelids flutter with need and want.

// i like how laura refers to their past fucking and how this fuck

(laura getting dildo fucked) is new in their trysts. i love the

history

you bring to this story arch. you have created a continuum that

allows

this. no other author has ever done this.

// i have always loved your humor and love the remarks about rug burn

and amber knowing she is a spoiled princess. then the remarks about

not

being a "big" but "little" liar and the

"black" and not "white" lies.

only you really capture the mirth in relationships. i am known for my

wit and use it to my advantage and love reading of it in your stories.

// love amber's total focus on devouring laura's body and reading her

body and making laura quiver and caw in raw wanton need. i love how

only you tell of moving away from her quim and loving other areas to

bring her down when she is about to pop and how you read her body to

keep her on that plateau just below the precipice and how you can just

play with her and get her to the point she is shrieking for it and

wildly thrusting her sodden cunt into your mouth begging for release.

i love reading my woman's body and making it taunt like a bow before i

deliver the love kill

// love laura begging for amber's purple cock and how amber runs it

up

and down her groove, teasing her slit and rubbing her clit with sweet

promises of divine deep thrusting fucking other authors always just

thrust it in while you know how to vary it to keep it fresh and

fucking

hot. i live to reduce my women to this wanton slut state which you

capture perfectly here [sliding up between Laura's yawning thighs and

grasping the thick purple stalk in one hand, guiding the large bulbous

head on the end of it toward the inflamed wet furrow of Laura's pussy.

When it reached Laura's greasy, swollen cunt lips, Amber, holding the

shaft in the middle, rubbed it up and down in the puckered furrow

without pushing it inside. "Unnnnnn!" Laura gasped,

looking down at

her crotch, seeing the shiny purple monster that was about to

penetrate

her body. When the bulbous head brushed against her clit, she could

feel

tiny hot tremors stream through her pussy. "Ohhnnnn!"] i

live to make

my women die from wanting it.

// oh god, i love how amber teases laura if she wants it all and

makes

her croak it and then buries her cock to the base. i so love feeling

that cock sliding deep into my clenching cunt or asshole.

// humm, you now show something else that other authors in their

sameness forget to show. variation. they always just start stroking

while you show how to use variation. amber just holds her cock deep

in

laura's belly and after much kissing, cooing and body stroking starts

to

swivel her hips and starts the love rhythm in the slowest, sensual

gear. one should fuck all ways to keep your women dying from not

knowing exactly what technique you are going to use and when and for

how

long and how you will mix it all together this. this is supreme

lovemaking and only you show this.

// always love how you show your women loving the whole body. amber

is

burying her cock deep up laura's tight cunt and she is kissing laura's

upper body adding so much to her pleasure. other author's are so

boring

with their mono-demensional fucking. love the whole body to make your

woman die from coming so hard.

// had to smile at laura seeing stars when her cervix gets rammed. i

too love that ramming, i just need more depth to get there. recently

dodie and frankie have been sharing a new lover with me. she is only

4'11' and with a pussy perfectly matched to her body, i.e. small.

when

we dildo fuck her we need to use our smallest ones to make sure not

hurt

her. with the right size we all three can be pumping her hard and

fully. i loved looking up a few nights back and seeing her face all

squeenched up as i rammed my cock up her tight cunt and dodie

straddled

her hips and pounded her cock down hard into her spasming asshole and

then seeing frankie's knees appear beside my head as she lifted her

head

up and back a little and started deep throating her cock down her

throat. i must say we fucked her into a complete stupor. hehehe.

// i love how only you capture that continual whispering and love

cooing to your lover to take her higher and higher. then i love the

ending slam fuck with amber pinning laura to the bed with deep love

thrusts and laura's climax crushing with slow waves of killing

pleasure

[Expecting to have a sharp, jolting climax because of the vigorous way

Amber was fucking her, she instead had this warm bath of agonizingly

slow, paralytic muscle rending that left her gasping and cawing with

ecstasy. "Ohhnnnnnnnggggg . . . unnnnghhhaauunnnggghhh . .

. oh oh

god oh . . . dear . . . oh god . . . unnnnghhhaauunnnggghhh!"

she moaned

as another wave overtook and buried her] i love how you show again how

orgasms can be so different. i never know what my body is going to

bless me with when i fuck and i so dearly love it. i so live to fuck.

// always love how your lover's coil after sweet fucking. love the

cute detail of laura releasing amber's breast she had been sucking so

she could gulp down big gulps of air to survive her cunt rupturing

harrowing orgasm. been there, done that. only you capture these

sweet

moments of good fucking. only you capture the sweet post coital time

so

well [All this went on for a very long time. Like Laura, Amber never

wanted it to be over and would cling until the dawn, if necessary,

holding tight, kissing Laura's cheek, her forehead, whispering

meaningless, half audible things to her, while Laura gently floated

back

to earth. After an interminable period of small, happy pussy spasms,

things began to settle out for Laura, who stirred groggily under

Amber's

lovely body.]

// cool how you show that sometimes one needs to use some lubricate

when you fist your baby and how one must give one's nipple a rest from

to much loving. again only things i have seen you capture.

// sigh, you make sex so magical with your loving words [At the same

time she was sucking Amber's swollen, puffy black nipple, she dropped

her hand between the girl's silky thighs and began to stroke Amber's

lovely wet pussy with two fingers. Amber's thighs yawned wide, and she

stretched out as if to give Laura full access to her lean, supple

body.] i so love opening my legs for my lover and giving myself

completely to her.

// you are so right in that lubricant makes fisting easier though i

love to use my lover's juices and some spit to get the job done but i

will always use lubricant when i sense it is necessary or i know

already

she likes me to use it. just take one's time to work your love fist

in

and i give you so much credit to show this in your writings. i have

never seen another writer touch this subject. over the years, you

have

touched so many subjects. you are to be so commended.

// love the intimacy of your fist fucks [Again their eyes locked as

Laura approached the moment of penetration, sliding again between

Amber's thin, yawning thighs, brushing Amber's sensitive pussy lips

with

the tips of her fingers.] Then you always detail with such loving

details that working of the fingers and the wedge into her tight hot

cunt and then feeling your fist slipping into your lover's cunt and

feeling her pussy gripping and loving your fist with wet heat. i just

judder usually as i feel her cunt enveloping my fist and sliding down

the back of my hand and up my wrist. i have had mini orgasms at this

time if i am wound real tight. gods, i love that spongy inner sleeve

gripping and loving my hand as i start the love rhythm up and start my

fist working deep with loving twists and some mini finger flutters to

make her scream.

// cool observation of laura loving making amber lose control since

amber is so cool and such a aristocrat. i know lovers love making me

act the slut if they have seen my calm cool demeanor i show the

outside

world. they love seeing the slut in me. i know laura's heart is

singing with amber's lose of control. i love how you describe amber

"whimpering". i so love making my lover's whimper and caw

with helpless

need.

// geez, you kill me with the sweet details and then you always find

a

way to describe it that just blows me away [Laura smiled. She too was

fascinated by the sight of her hand inside Amber's sweet, glossy black

cunt, engorging it, making the distended outer lips shine and swell.

Amber was so wet that the fine filaments of blonde hair on Laura's

wrist

were shiny with clinging nectars. Amber's sleek wet pussy lips seemed

to

enclose her hand like a hungry mouth eager to suck down Laura's whole

arm.] this is far above the usual dry dissertations that i read. i

just clench deep in my womb when i read these, even if i have read a

chapter ten plus times it still hits me hard. just give the chapter a

rest and then revisit and once more my womb is clenching and my pussy

lubricating liberally.

// you so know how to ramp it up with what started slow and loving

ramps up to loving forceful thrusts deep into her grasping, clinging

cunt and driving her wild with fucking pleasure. i so know that

feeling

that amber is feeling her as my lover plungers her fist hard and deep

up

my by now spamsing cunt as my whole body starts to quiver and spasm

and

feel my neck cording up as my eyes roll to the back of my head. i so

know that fucking killing bliss is only moments away as my body tenses

up for heaven.

// love your description of amber's clit as laura consumes it before

her orgasm [Laura couldn't resist bending down and forward, taking a

few

hungry, passionate swipes with her tongue at the hard, swollen berry

of

Amber's clit. It felt like a warm, slippery, hard little marble

sliding

across her tongue, and she closed her lips over it, sucking quickly

and

sharply. "Anngghiiiiee!" Amber suddenly shrieked, her

body

stiffening and shuddering in midair.] i so live to make my women do

this. i can just feel their pleasure and our love flowing as i finish

her off with some nice deep love thrusts to make her orgasm completely

devastating. i had to smile at the wonderful slut amber is reaching

down to grasp laura's arms to ram her cunt down onto laura's fist. i

so

love grabbing ever ounce of pleasure possible from every fuck. i so

dearly love the orgasm that destroys amber with wild convulsions and

screams of fucking bliss. this is simply heaven to read and feel in my

body as i read [Then the dam burst. Amber simply exploded with sharp

spasms of coming as a huge, crushing orgasm wracked her straining

body.

She flipped and surged off the mattress, again grinding her spasming

cunt down into Laura's hand, gasping and gurgling, then crying out in

sharp groans as the excruciating pleasure of her orgasm raked her

shuddering flesh. Laura looped her free arm around Amber's

thrusting pelvis, cradling the girl's jumping hips, just to make sure

they still stayed linked through the violence of this shattering

climax. "Auunnggghnnmmggiiieeeee!" Amber wailed, her

hysterical

cries tailing off as the most piercing part of her orgasm began to

wane,

her body now quivering and flexing instead of shuddering violently.

"Ohhhhhhh! Unggghhh! Oh . . . god!"] i live to give my

woman such

killing pleasure. i love hanging onto my woman and pressing her down

as

her body is just convulsing with killing spasms. i know that

resistance

just makes you pump harder which only pours more pure pleasure out of

your rupturing cunt. i just feel so complete and loved when i have

delivered yet another killing orgasm to my wonderful lover.

// love the kissing of amber's belly as her orgasm dies away, i love

feeling those dying ripples as my woman's orgasm fades into heaven

// love the keeping of your fist in your lover's cunt just sharing

your

duel bliss of heavenly sex.

// love how you end the chapter with some love banter and amber

bucking

up laura and telling her to give arthell a chance to fall for her

charms. i think amber has a very accurate gaydar. mine is very

sensitive to a women who are open and friendly and not prudish. so

often just by being nice, attentive and focusing on them they just

seem

to fall for you. one almost has to chance it with such a beautiful

woman as arthell. just go slow and get her used to your ever more

intimate presence and then work your magic slowly and more often than

not you can get your woman. just be prepared for some failures which

always suck mightily.

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Chapter 287:

// i like how you show at the beginning of this chapter how sometimes

the fates don't just align themselves. you show that sometimes you

have

a hard time getting together with your angel. other stories always

just

make it happen immediately and with perfect synchronicity. i can

understand their avoiding this. they have small stories that have to

focus quickly on the payoff. you on the other hand have created a

world

where you can take the time to show how real life sometimes just gets

in

the way and you have to go with the flow and make new appointments and

dates. they write stories and you show life.

// arthell finally makes it to laura's work place and laura is her

usual nice self and shows her around. she is doing all she can to

teach her. of course, laura is lusting after arthell and just being

around her is turning her on. you are really the only author who

makes

it clear that just viewing your woman in her clothes can be such a

turn

on. i love how clothes in its subtle way can highlight and tantalize

her beauty and lovely assets. i love how clothes can just do such

wonders to a woman's breasts and the way pants or the right skirt

highlight her ass and legs. i just love gazing and dreaming of what i

will do once those clothes are lying on the floor.

// i love the banter that laura uses when she is talking to arthell

here. she uses humor when talking to arthell about her job. i love

humor and use when i can to help me get my woman and life in general.

why not see the humor in the situation.

// i love seeing laura deciding how to take it to the next level.

again because you give us a time flow you are able to show us this

almost groping on how to proceed with a seduction. weighing of

options

and the situation and how to proceed. other smaller, one shot,

stories

simply can't do this. i know that taking the risk to get her in a

more

informal and hopefully more intimate environment. i so love reading

this in your stories.

// i always love it when you start telling the reader why laura is

falling deeper in love with her current angel. you always tell us of

the little things that ensnare your heart with lust. like perfect

white

teeth and how lovely her legs: long, thin and a wonderful shade of

brown. other authors only focus on the tits, ass and always perfect

face. those are great of course but a woman is so much more and only

you really capture that. i enjoy this part a lot [They were not

really

well-shaped, the part from the knee down anyway, but very thin, and

yet

she wanted desperately to rub her cheek against them.] it doesn't

take

me long to desire and want the whole woman. what might not seem so

great at first soon become perfection as her personality ensnares my

soul with love and lust.

// now at laura's apartment laura starts to probe this delightful

angel

and see how receptive she is to true loving that only another woman

can

give. i, like, laura am always trying to get my my hoped for conquest

really comfortable around me. getting in comfortable (more revealing)

clothing and relaxed environment in our house or a date place. start

getting her comfortable and opening up where you can really start

seducing her with your kindness, gentleness and rapt attention. i can

just see them opening up and melting for me. i so love watching a

woman

falling under my love spell. i know as i see that dreamy look

appearing

that if all goes well that soon they will be in my bed dying from

coming

so fucking hard.

// sigh, had to laugh at rhonda's expense. the cat remarks are damn

right funny. love laura's stammering over her lies.

// loved reminiscing with laura over how her and karen first became

aware of their true lesbian natures though i guess karen is more bi

with

the strange being women. her loss.

// had to smile at laura wanting to see arthell change into laura's

top. i will always angle for as much as i can get as soon as possible

but like laura i know to play it cool and reel her in slowly if i

must.

i so believe in getting them comfortable and relaxed first. it makes

the seduction so much quicker and easier i have found. let her fall

for

your personality and charm first and then you have so much easier time

getting to her sweet hot pussy.

// i am so there reading laura "looking for a moment of

opportunity".

i often smirk to myself as i am seducing a woman and we are chatting

or

doing something together on a "platonic" date and i am

smiling at her,

talking and laughing with her and i am dreaming and plotting her

seduction. sometimes i share this after the seduction and share our

mirth and happiness over my success. i love it when they thank me by

opening their thighs yet again for my hot mouth or they are parting my

things for another round of devour barbara's pussy.

// i love reading as laura and arthell converse and laura is trying

to

find a way to get closer to arthell and finally asks arthell to have

dinner with her. i love when the answer is "no". not all

initial

seductions are successful and only you really show this. then again,

you show the fates stepping in which i am so very attuned to too.

while

in the kitchen they break a glass and fate has them come close

together

and laura must now listen to her heart [Laura took the ice cube from

Arthell's palm, which was still wet. But her eyes never left Arthell's

face. This lovely girl. Her smooth dark brown cheek. She smells so

good.

I've got to kiss her. Oh god, Arthell, please understand. Don't push

me

away.] i know this time. you have made progress in her seduction and

you suddenly have a moment that simply can't pass and take a chance.

let see what happens. one must act when such beauty is before you.

// sigh, laura advances are not reciprocated. sometimes one advances

are not totally accepted or even wanted. in times past i have been

slapped, hissed at, cursed and a few simply lost their minds with me.

i

just keep cool and contained. fortunately i haven't had all that many

of these and a few of these i still seduced later on. but usually you

get the sometimes almost ambiguous results here. this always fills me

with hope. if they don't freak then i know i am connecting. i just

need more time which i can usually get. i just play it cool and be

contrite and take total responsibility. i play the noble knight. i

know it really scores me points. if i can just get them to continue

to

be around me i know i can usually wear down their defenses. i feel

deep

down they want it. i just have to get them to acknowledge their true

desires. here laura is appropriately contrite and tries and succeeds

in

defusing the situation and letting arthell control the pacing. i see

such hope that arthell is just denying herself and she truly wants to

pursue this option. she is not some right wing religious fucking

kook.

she is a woman who just needs to have laura show her the truth. laura

knows it is up to the fates when they part. i thank you showing this

doubt on laura's part. one never knows if you will succeed. you try

and stack the cards in your favor but you can still fail. i love

seeing

laura's doubt and fears because i have them too. whenever you risk

much

you can lose much. rejection kills.

// i love seeing arthell not pushing laura away when they part. she

wants to continue to be friends. i have heard this many times over

the

years and sometimes it remained this but so often i have fairly soon

seduced her into my bed and i then really fucked her brains out. i do

that any ways but i really focus and make sure she dies from coming so

fucking hard that she becomes addicted to pussy. i live to make women

lesbian or bi sluts.

// a month passes and laura like me thinks it is over. if i can't

see

you to keep you falling for me then i know i have probably blown it.

then the fates step in like i so love. laura takes a not often used

way

out of the office and sees this [Arthell was wearing white shorts,

white

socks, white sneakers, and a sleeveless yellow top. She looked like

she

had just wandered off the tennis court, fresh, wholesome, athletic,

her

long thin dark brown legs glossy and smooth.] i would be elated but

my

pussy would have clench hard seeing this. if they know how i feel and

dress like this i know i am almost there. they want it even if they

don't really know it yet. they will soon be burying their face deep

in

my hot steamy cunt eating me out as if their life depended on it. i

so

adore each time i seduce a new woman and she didn't even know she was

helping me do the work. they so fucking want it, even if it is on a

subconscious level. i just need to figure out how to bring it to the

fore like i so adore reading laura doing. only you show how sometimes

you really have to work to get your woman. they don't always just

fall

into your loving arms.

// i so love reading that arthell is initiating their time together.

i

so love seeing the subtle signs of her falling under my spell. after

a

woman knows my orientation and desires and she still wants to be in my

presence alone and dresses like arthell i know she is mine. i just

have

to lead her along slowly into my loving arms and bed. i am smiling

reading laura weighing the situation and making sure she plays her

cards

right. one must do everything possible to get your new pussy.

// i am smiling as laura plays demure and arthell gets a little

pissed. i love laura making arthell the aggressor in inviting her

into

her parents house. i love getting her to take the lead in her

seduction. it so loosens them up and weakens their defenses. i so

love

watching them melting before my eyes. i so enjoy the subtle signs of

her falling under my spell.

// i have heard this many times ["See," she said, as she

handed it to

Laura. "We can be friends without having . . . that other stuff

. . .

get in the way."] sometimes it is true, but usually i have her

in my

arms fairly soon leading her into the delights of saphic love.

// oh gods i love how you observe the whole woman and why this beauty

so quickly ensnares one's heart [It had been torture for her the whole

time, looking at Arthell, looking at her bare brown legs, her

deliciously shaped bare arms, her gleaming shoulders, the thrust of

her

fine young breasts through the thin yellow top she wore. Smelling her,

being blinded by the glint of her even white teeth, falling into her

flashing black eyes, enchanted by her conversation. It was impossible

to

keep 'that other stuff' at bay for Laura.] how can one's pussy not

love

such women. i must have women such as arthell. they are so fucking

beautiful. her smile is simply killer and i know her personality

quickly blends all her features into a woman that simply makes your

heart and pussy melt with love.

// oh yes!!! fist pumping. arthell is requesting ["I thought

about it

a little bit. When you kissed me. I thought about that."

Laura

tilted her head to the side a little, waiting. "Do it

again?"

Arthell said, in a softer, more tentative voice this time.

"Nothing

else. Just that? Before you leave?"] such sweet music to my

ears. the

seeds i have planted have taken root and now i can finish her

seduction.

// laura takes her time in kissing arthell and is content to kiss

with

only her lips until arthell's body responds and her lips and teeth

part

and laura quickly slips her tongue inside arthell's sweet mouth. oh

geez, heinous, arthell backs off even though her eyes are glazing and

her breathing is accelerating. i like laura backing off and letting

arthell control the flow though my pussy would be screaming and i

would

be getting very frustrated to somewhat pissed. other women just force

the issue and grab her face and plunge their tongue down their

seducee's

throat. i guess, joann, maria and dodie know their women because they

just melt like butter. had to smile at arthell's sweet drive

carefully

as laura leaves.

// the little tart makes laura wait another month before she calls.

fortunately, laura has other angels to fuck. i hate it when i get

strung along like this but i always content myself with other angels.

this gives me the calmness to wait them out if i must. still i am

pulling my hair out when i come across these skittish colts you have

to

constantly let them take their lead and let their line run out once

more

and you have to reel them in again. women can be so elusive. at

least

men know what they want. pussy or butthole!!!!! i am so glad that

she

is not letting this eat at her and kill her like days past. just be

patient and let what will be, be.

// a month lapses again before arthell contacts laura. i am patient

but i must admit that by then i would have written her off and would

be

pissed but i know that once i hear my potential angel's voice again i

almost always melt and quickly banish all negative thoughts and once

more concentrate on winning her love. laura lets arthell off the hook

with her banal excuses as to why she hasn't called. why focus on

something negative. instead flood her with positive vibes to get the

seduction rolling again is my motto. i know my pussy would be singing

arranging to go over to arthell's house with her parents out. i have

been in similar situations with women whom have initially rejected me

or

have known my proclivities and still invited me over when they are

alone

and the "other" is away. i know the fates are so likely

aligning in my

favor and soon i will be dinning on tender, red, sopping wet cunt meat

and making her scream in thrashing orgasmic bliss. oh yeah, this is

one

of the things i so live for. i so adore dining on new pussy.

// had to smile at the sweet interaction of laura needing a drink

when

she arrives at arthell's because of traffic and arthell not even

liking

handling the vodka since she doesn't drink. it is the little touches

of

individuality that makes your women so alive and vibrant to me. then

we

see that arthell is not the flirt and is dressed very demurely. she

wants it but is hiding it. oh yes, i love the variation of women and

how i seduce them.

// i so feel laura's elation at this sweet moment ["You want to

have

our little kiss right now, so we can just relax and go listen to some

music?" Laura gazed, mesmerized, into her eyes.

"Something about

kitchens, isn't there," she cracked softly, more to get over her

own

nervousness than anything. Arthell continued to look at her

expectantly since Laura had not really answered her question.

"I

really would like that," Laura murmured. "I would like that

so

much." "Good. Me too. I thought about last time a

lot." "Me

too." ] a chance to once more work my magic on my angel to be.

// my pussy is melting as they step into each other's presence and

laura caresses arthell's divine face and then encircles her waist and

draws her close as their mouths mate and explore and oh so soon their

tongues are coiling and slithering and then arthell sucks laura's

tongue

into her sweet hot mouth. yes, the slut is emerging and i know that

soon when the kissing becomes so ardent and she is leading that her

final inane walls are crumbling and soon she will be coming so fucking

hard in my mouth as her cunt pumps hard into my flailing tongue and

hard

sucking mouth and the devouring of her whole fucking cunt. i will

make

her cunt simply explode into my starving mouth and swallowing all the

sweet juice she has to offer.

// i am smirking and doing my little head tilt i do when i find

something a little cute and yet exasperating. i have to love the game

of arthell still playing the game of putting little halts to the sweet

game of love. except now, all laura has to do is suggest they

continue

and arthell acts coy and is maybe a little confused by her new found

desires but she now quickly accepts all invitations to continue. she

is

slowly awakening to her true lesbian self. i love the game (as long

as

they don't drive me absolutely fucking crazy with much hair pulling)

as

they finally melt in my arms and are soon opening their thighs wide

and

whimpering and begging for me to make them come again and are almost

begging to devour my sopping wet cunt and loving it as they thrum and

humm as they devour with wild abandon. what they may lack in skill at

first they more than make up for with wild enthusiasm and with my

gentle

coaching they learn oh so fast.

// i love how only you show lovers taking each other in their arms

and

pulling each other oh so close as your tongues are coiling and

plunging

deep showing your love for each other. i have always adored how you

show so much more than just kissing (like real life). i'm melting

reading this ["Nothing to be afraid of," Laura whispered to

her, now

letting her lips slide across Arthell's marvelously smooth dark cheek

and down to her long lovely neck. "I've wanted to kiss your

neck since

I first saw it." Arthell let her do it for a minute. She

panted

softly into Laura's hair. Laura could feel her fingers digging

spasmodically into her back, through her blouse. Touching Arthell's

smooth dark brown neck with her lips was pure heaven.] this is what

foreplay is all about. it so cool when you have laura back off on her

kissing when arthell starts to get skittish and she then melts with

the

romantic kissing and soon they are ramping up the passion again with

deep plunging tongues down each other throats. only you show that

lovemaking often involves a slight reversal. others are always full

speed ahead. so boring and repetitive.

// geez, the sweet foreplay just so fucking flows under your pen

[They

kissed and hugged, stroking each other through their clothes, Laura

stroking Arthell more than vice versa. Finally, they had wriggled

together so much that Arthell's sweatshirt rode up a little on her

back,

exposing some of her smooth warm skin, and Laura's fingertips

accidentally brushed it. Arthell acted as if she did not notice.

Laura did not remove her fingers. She caressed the warm, taut skin of

Arthell's lower back and slipped her tongue deeper into Arthell's

mouth.

Arthell began breathing even harder.] of course arthell noticed

laura's

fingers but her true lesbian is awakening and despite her protests we

all know her pussy is now telling what she needs to do. hot lesbian

fucking.

// i have to smirk at arthell's continued hiccups in the seduction

and

quickly reversing and leading things forward. i have experienced

these

variations many times in my life and you just have to read the tea

leaves and make sure to not spook her and lead her along slowly and

soon

you have your new angel's cunt humping hard into your loving mouth. i

so agree when arthell exclaims that no man can kiss like a woman.

only

we truly know what we love. i am smiling great big at laura's

"I want

to kiss you all over." now arthell doesn't freak and only

pauses a

little and quickly agrees to more kissing. i would be so mentally

fist

pumping now. i have told her the end game and she is continuing. she

is mine!!! i love you showing how humor can be so effective in your

loving ministrations [Laura removed her hand from under Arthell's

sweatshirt. She slapped it with her other hand, looking at it crossly.

"Bad hand. Don't do that again."] i have always used humor

to put my

new women at ease and make them smile and chuckle. it makes them melt

for me which i so adore.

// i am so happy that laura has no problem telling arthell about her

first time with a woman. i think in earlier times she would have

gotten

flustered i have always enjoyed watching your women change and grow

with the years.

// wow, this is really tender [Arthell softened and grew kittenish.

"Oh, I wouldn't do that." She lay her head almost

submissively on

Laura's shoulder.] she is still playing her game of delay but she is

melting before our eyes. i know i would be melting when arthell

brings

their mouths hungrily together and immediately twines their tongues

hard. i can just feel the wet heat as our passion rises higher and

higher.

// loved the whole seduction of arthell and how you show how some are

so skittish even when it so clear that to you that she wants it but

you

must overcome all the brainwashing that man's world heaps upon us. i

myself will take my time and let her lead things while i constantly

let

her know i want her and i just keep letting her know that i find her

beautiful and she's wonderful in both body, mind and soul. i am no

vampire or serial killer who tries to overwhelm and conquer my woman.

if it is meant to be she will be in my bed eventually and if not i

respect her decision. she may be an idiot but it is her decision.

// i love how the final seduction arrives and arthell is weakened

with

awaking need and want for a woman's touch that laura has planted deep

in

her soul. once a woman tastes the forbidden fruit she will always

crave

a woman's touch and now it is time for laura to show her what only

woman

can

// love how you show laura wearing down arthell defenses with each

round of kissing and how arthell is getting more aggressive with each

round as her true lesbian self is awakening. how arthell starts

initiating the kissing and driving her tongue deep into laura's hungry

mouth.

// i love how you show laura sensing it is time for the love kill and

ups the heat and being the supreme lover her instincts are right,

arthell is hers.

// i love how you show laura sensing it is time to complete the

seduction and rackets up the heat by unclasping arthell's bra and then

cupping and squeezing arthell's tits and without asking for permission

to proceed. a great lover knows when it is time to finish off the

love

kill. laura senses deep in her soul that arthell is ready to yield to

her true lesbian voice even though she may pretend to resist with

feeble

protests. i so know when they are only for show and to make the

ultimate seduction more magical as i take her and make her my complete

love slut begging for me to get her off again and again.

// sigh, such sweet lovemaking. the slow loving of arthell's breasts

with kissing of the valley between, kissing all over and squeezing and

loving her stippling aerola. you make breast worship so fucking

special

and magical. all this foreplay before sucking that sweet nipple into

your loving mouth for magical loving that makes almost all women swoon

like arthell here.

// i had to smile at laura being a little shocked when arthell starts

saying fuck all the time. i shock some women because i am so proper

and

polite outside of the bedroom. even with maria, joann, dodie and a

few

close others i still stay prim and proper until it is time to fuck

then

i let my gutter personality out and they still get a kick out of it.

for me that is such music to my ears knowing i'm releasing a woman's

true inner lesbian slut. i work to make women scream and curse from

burning pleasure coursing through their veins.

// again you show a skilled lover moving to up to kiss her lover and

her upper body before moving back down to devour her blood filled tits

that are screaming for your hot mouth to love them again. i love how

you show laura loving all the secret places on her lover's breasts

making

arthell beg for more.

// cute laura having to prompt arthell to move to the bedroom for

privacy since arthell is too passion addled to think straight.

sometimes i have to get a lover to cool her jets a little when i get

her

too excited in a place where her lover or husband / boyfriend might

come

in on us. i want my pussy but i ain't stupid either.

// had to smile at arthell's last thought of maybe stopping when

everyone knows that is such bullshit. she is ready for lesbian

fucking

// love how arthell is now kissing voraciously and helping laura to

get

themselves stripped down for hot fucking. i love making a hesitant

woman an active participant in our lovemaking. i know i'm reaching

her

true inner slut and that she will soon be coming so hard and going

after

my body with an almost wild hunger which i am oh so happy to fill.

hehehehe. i am so giving aren't i?

// always love how laura talks to her lover as she kisses her and runs

her hand underneath arthell's panties. the right spoken word simply

makes your woman burn with fucking need

// i so dearly love how laura senses that arthell is now her slut

when

she gets her fingers under arthell's panties and senses there is no

need

to stop and quickly buries two fingers deep up arthell's hot steamy

cunt. i so swoon when i reach heaven.

// i love the final stripping of the last of arthell's pants and

panties and i can just feel the joy and need burning in laura's body

knowing she will soon be dining on hot steamy young hot red wet cunt

meat. i have recently developed quite a taste for teenager's myself

and

i love dining on hot young tender cunt meat knowing that often i am

the

first adult woman to have her. my protégé is cutting quite a swath

through her high school and is quickly building up her own network of

which i am getting some. yeah!!!!

// only you give us the wonderful detail of arthell have only a

double

bed and laura slipping onto her knees to get in proper position to

really gorge on new tender cunt meat. of course i swoon at all the

loving descriptions of arthell's wonderfully beautiful pussy. you

tell

us in loving detail the colors, thickness and length of her pussy lips

and her clit hood and make me drool over her bulb of a clit just dying

for my hard sucking lips and butterfly stroking tongue and then hard

slapping / bathing tongue strokes.

// had to smile at arthell saying she comes slow, like that is a

problem. more time to devour sweet pussy girl!!!

// i always love for my lover's to watch me love them like arthell is

doing here and i always encourage and coach on helping a woman to

pleasure herself while i am loving another part of her body. a woman

deserves all the pleasure her body can give her. i so swoon with

happiness as i watch squeeze her tits and pull and twist her nipples

like arthell here. seeing her face get those sharp grimaces of pained

pleasure as she adds bolts of self pleasure. or seeing her rubbing

her

clit hard and fast as i dine on her cunt or asshole. women need to be

freed mentally to seek as much self pleasure as possible.

// i love reading of laura reading arthell's heating body and knowing

like a great lover that she can change the loving (trib here) and

still

finish arthell off with her mouth later when she, laura, senses it is

just the right time.

// sigh, i love scissors fucking but i so cherish this face to face

trib of mating groins or thigh to pussy tribbing here you can devour

your lover's mouth and upper body and let your hands roam and stroke

and

knead your lover to maximum affect while you mash your tits together

(when not hand mauling or mouth devouring) and just generally squirm

your whole fucking body together as your sweat slicked bodies slide

and

you start to feel the perspiration just running off your bodies in

rivulets of heated fucking need and pleasure. their are so many ways

to

rub and fuck like this. i love to rub hard and then when the end is

nearing to just start humping like a dog in heat. moving your sodden

cunt over a thigh and just grinding our cunts until they erupt in

scalding spasms all over each others thighs or simply humping hard and

ramming our cunts together and trying to keep it going as my body

jackknifes and spasms. i love to be on the bottom and have my lover

screaming as she rams her pelvis down into mine driving me deep into

the

bed on hard into the floor. i come so fucking hard throwing my cunt

up

to mashed and smashed down again and again in fucking bliss and much

hard groaning and screaming.

// love the communication that just flows from your pages of lover's

expressing needs, pleasure and building love for each other that can

only be fully expressed by cunt or anal rending, scalding orgasms that

just make you scream in helpless pleasure.

// love how you tell the reader of minutes of this hot tender trib

fucking and seeing laura's mental thought process as she decides to

finish arthell off with trib or her mouth. either way arthell is

going

to die from coming so fucking hard.

// geez, sigh, i so love reading as laura decides to finish her off

orally and gets on her knees again and we see how a hot tribe leaves a

cunt all swollen, wet and spread open like a flower inviting her lover

to finish her off and devour it completely. sigh, the details of of

fingers slipping in and quickly pumping up a hot, tight, frothing

pussy

while you spread up the clit hood so your lips and mouth and give it

the

loving it so desperately seeks.

// this must be quoted to do it just (what all lesbians live to give)

[""She dug her elbows into the mattress and lifted her

entire pelvis,

gyrating it maniacally into Laura's face, whimpering, panting crazily.

With her two fingers Laura fucked Arthell's tight wet pussy rapidly,

giving her the whole range of sensations, penetration, fast plunging

fingers, hot lips fastened to her clit, sucking hard and rhythmically.

She knew there was no way Arthell could hold out for long. The girl

was

in a sexual frenzy, pumping and shimmying her hips, gasping and

gurgling, then crying out as the frame of her small twin bed hammered

against the wall next to them. "Oh fuck! Oh . . . Laura!

"Auunnggghh! Oh . . . oh yes! Oh . . . now!" "Now,

honey?" "Oh

fuck, yes! FUCK! UUUNNGGNNNHHHHH! AAUUUURRRNNGGGH!"] This is

how a

lesbian finishes off her lover. giving her everything she possibly

can

to make her orgasm as powerful and soul rending as possible. i so

love

giving those to deep love suck to a rock hard clit that is just

saturated with come that is leaking, flowing or exploding out a deep

spasming, rending cunt. some orgasms are silent but many are some

variations of the above. i constantly encourage my quieter and new

loves to express their pleasure. don't let man's fucked up rules and

brainwashing keep you from showing me and any other present lover just

how wonderful we are making you feel. i so love talking to my lover

during sex and through the orgasm trying to make her come as fucking

hard as possible.

// i see that laura is doing what i love to do here, concentrating on

arthell's face as her soul is slashed and ripped apart with pure

fucking

pleasure. i am not sure which gives me more pleasure, my own orgasms

or

watching my women come from my ministrations. you just feel the

connection when you make her come from just yourself though i derive

great satisfaction from working with another or even watching.

nothing

is more perfect on this globe than a woman having a truly harrowing

orgasm and being a part of it.

// arthell is completely stunned like so many newbies who have only

experienced men in the past. i know their are a few male superstars

out

their but almost all lesbians quickly develop into superstars so we

almost always deliver the goods so to speak. as i have found, arthell

is now ready to give. it is rare the uptight woman who can't give back

and those usually only need several love sessions before they become

wild lesbian fuck sluts begging to bury their face hard and deep in my

spasming cunt and simply going fucking wild. sigh, the sacrifices i

make to make my newbies or starving bi married sluts happy. hehehe.

// some women do seem to have that innate skill but often some

teaching

and direction is required. here laura decides to start arthell easy

and

show her how to let laura trib on her thigh to initiate arthell into

the

world of giving pleasure.

// i love how laura positions arthell and then herself and then

lowers

her own body getting that thigh mashing hard into her splayed, wet

cunt

and then embracing arthell hard so their bodies merge and tits mash.

i

so love this position as i hump like a bitch in total heat on her

thigh

as we embrace tightly and squirm. oh yeah you capture the bliss of

encircling arms and deep french kissing as breast mash and my cunt

melts

like butter on her thigh that is quickly slavered and soaked with cunt

juice that always leaves me mewling and my eyes fluttering in the back

of my head in fucking sweet bliss. i so swoon just thinking of that

spasm that rocks my body and my body clenches as i feel my neck

cording

and my eyes fluttering without any control on my part as my eyes roll

back and i just moan in my lover's mouth as her tongue plunges down my

throat making me her fuck slut.

// arthell may be a newbie but as soon as she realizes what laura is

doing she clenches her thigh and adjusts to make it ride up harder

into

laura's splayed, gushing groove. arthell is a woman and we just can't

help giving all we can to our lover. women deserve this and men at

best

are just fuck toys to be thrown away as soon as you are done with

them.

women were made to loved by women and we instinctively know how to do

it. men must learn. give me my hard fake cock and i will show a

woman

what almost all men can't do.

// i can feel the wonderful feelings flowing through arthell as laura

jackknifes and spasms in her loving arms with her screams so near her

ear and seeing laura's slashed face up close. she has just discovered

heaven on earth has two faces, giving and receiving.

// love arthell sweeping up some of laura's cunt juice and licking it

off. i love licking up come and will often lick up the mess i just

made

on my woman so i love it whenever your lover's lick and taste their

lover's come and especially their own. i still so love masturbating

just so i can taste my own come and sweet asshole on my fingers.

// how sweet as arthell asks laura to spend the night. she knows as

soon as she rests they will be fucking again after arthell's sensitive

clit rests. i love how some of your chapters end with that sweet time

between fucking like here with the ordering of pizza. how you capture

real life and make your stories sing with authentic joy and life.

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// poor laura. she gets what is for her a bombshell. she is lying

in

sweet sara's arms after some intense fucking and sara makes a

reasonable

request to see another woman. a nurse who works in her building. me

i

would be high fiving her and tell her "go girl" and

encouraging sara to

fuck her brains out and oh by the way do you think she is open to a

threesome. yes, i'm a slut and damn proud of it. laura has grown

though. in the past, she would have totally freaked and now she

merely

becomes sedate and reflective. sara is sweet and humorous trying to

make her wishes known and accepted. i so love her manner. i have

some

of these qualities. being fair and using humor. still, i can see

that

the rocked of laura's universe is being shaken.

// i have to smile and applaud at laura's acceptance of the fates.

she

knows she needs strange and now we see that sara has the same needs

and

knows she must let sara explore these new desires. she is sad where i

would be elated but her fairness is going to let sara explore though

with a heavy heart. i am happy to see an author explore the more

complicated emotions of relationships. other stories only touch the

passion and not the emotions of their women.

// i like seeing laura feeling petulant and then overcoming her baser

emotions. i too catch myself having such negative thoughts and if i

catch them i stomp and crush them with all my might. i hate being

negative though sometimes i still am. sigh, i'm complimenting sara

and

then she gets a little pissy when she is reluctant revealing the race

(black) and the woman's name. i run into this a lot. this

competitive

shit gets real tiring sometimes then again i must remember what i just

wrote. if i give freely i always feel you should give freely back.

// you touch on something here. the dynamic of the other lover. it

adds so much fucking spice to life. here all this talk of sara

dallying

with another fires up their lust and they soon fuck with animalistic

passion. hearing my current angel talk of other women fucking them

or,

heck, even hets and bi women talking of giving head or getting plowed

makes me so fucking hot and wet. i love how sara succumbs to laura's

heat from this talk ["Oh! Oh! Laura!" Sara hammered her

fists on Laura's

shoulders, half-laughing, half overcome by this sudden sexual

attack. No wonder she wants this delicious body," Laura

panted,

slurping and sucking Sara's silky dark flesh with exaggerated lust.

Oh honey . . . oh honey . . ." Sara panted, converting quickly

from

protest to participation.] i so love hearing about sex because it

really fires me up.

// sigh, angst. sara is all dreamy and expresses her love after

their

intense fucking but laura is left wondering. she is not the sharing

kind and knows this has to change the dynamics of her love for sara.

we

will have to wait and see.

// wow. one thing i like about your story is i can never tell who is

coming next. from out of the blue, shontay emails laura that she is

coming to san fran and wants to visit. i love reading laura's

reaction. she has to reflect on shontay's bitchy, frosty manner but

that so soon fades as she remembers their hot fucking. i can

overlook a

lot with a woman i only screw. they know to reign it in some with me

and let us enjoy the passion we share. laura is basically positive

about people like i am. most of us are all right and we should ignore

our small warts and such. of course, when laura finally talks to

shontay on the day of her arrival, shontay is a bitch to belie my

earlier words. yes!! i so love reading laura using gentle words to

get

shontay to see her actions and shontay really melts when she realizes

how she is acting. so many women will cool off if you give them the

chance. shontay is a great woman, she just has some mannerisms that

are

not so nice and yet again i have seen growth in her manners. love and

showering of affection can make so many women grow. laura is a

princess

in giving her love so freely and purely.

// i am smiling great big as elation flows through laura when shontay

invites laura to her apartment. i so know that rush when you get that

invitation to a lover's nest where you know intense, heated fucking is

going to occur. i can feel the rush run through my body and pussy

getting wet in lust. if i have time before the rendezvous and i'm

inclined i will lie down on my bed and frig myself to a cunt rending

orgasm. i need to let off a little lust steam. i so love making

myself

come hard before i go off for some good fucking. i always know laura

is

ready for good hot fucking when she is singing lyrics and humming a

tune. she may not love shontay but she knows that when this woman

lets

go she fucks with an animalistic hunger that needs lots of hot pussy

to

satisfy. i have liked shontay when she lets go and fucks like the

slut

she truly is. some women are so brainwashed by man when they try and

suppress their natural hunger for sex. nature gave us these bodies to

fuck and we should as often as possible. why else are our bodies

capable of such sheer bliss and fucking ecstasy that only cunt / anal

rupturing orgasms provide and that only women truly know how to give.

// when shontay greets laura she is shocked by her beauty. again i

get

to see the growth that i have always loved in your stories. when

shontay first met laura she was always dressed severely and her hair

pulled back in a tight bun. she clearly screamed that she had been

beaten down and did not see her own beauty. this is simply so

heinous.

this is the whole fucking world. men keeping us down, women fighting

for power and attacking each other and the world and all that damn

advertising making women feel bad about our body. i have meet so many

women beat down. i was brought up to see my own beauty and the beauty

of others. laura with her love and attention and constant bucking up

has made the metamorphous that is now shontay [But here she was in the

lobby, wearing a stylish peach-colored frock with a short skirt, with

her lovely dark brown hair in soft billows around her head, her

astonishing pale brown eyes lighting up with genuine gladness as she

saw

Laura approach.] i so love seeing a woman coming to see her beauty

and

showing it to the world.

// had to smile at shontay's smug observation that laura "knows

what

she wants". i can only spread my hands and shrug when a woman

pegs my

true desires. i just give them my most brilliant smile. i love laura

undressing shontay with her eyes. though the dress is flattering it

doesn't show her mouthful tits and delicious rump. i so love knowing

a

lover's body and just seeing her mentally without her clothes while we

are out and i'm seeing in my mind's eye her naked beauty and her body

just convulsing in wild undulations of hard coming with her body

covered

in sweat and screams and hard groans flowing from her slashed face.

laura is so sexual and i adore her for it, like here [Shontay was the

color, Laura had often though in the past, of pale clover honey, her

skin smooth and flawless, and Laura could well recall having been

locked

between those long smooth legs, rubbing her cheek against them,

kissing

Shontay's inner thighs . . .]

// i had to smile as they walk back to shontay's place and she is

still

be a little crabby. unfortunately a lot of women can be a little

bitchy. sometimes i have to bite my tongue but knowing that soon i

will

be dining on hot sopping wet cunt meat can put a smile on any girl's

face. plus, when you know the true woman and know her more kind and

gentle nature then you so easily overlook the more snitty side. just

keep stroking them to bring out their best. of course, some women can

test the bounds. rare is the women who simply turns me off by her

personality alone. i so adore how you let your women communicate and

banter [Shontay looked down at Laura's bag. "Planning to stay

over? They

might charge me extra." She winked again, clearly meaning it as a

joke. "I don't have to stay if you don't want me to,"

Laura said

softly as they entered the elevator. They were alone in it, and

Shontay's room was on the twelfth floor. She did not answer Laura's

question, letting it hang. Finally, she looked back over her shoulder

as

she led Laura down the hall to her room. She was grinning.

"I'll

let you know."] only you have lover's just bantering and

talking in

general. i have always been hooked by this real life feel to your

women.

// Yes!!! Shontay has truly become so vibrant and alive. she now

has

three french lovers, two females and one male. i guess i can forgive

her that. hehehe. plus, the way she says it i get the feeling her

two

women are her main lovers and the male is for a taste of strange. i

think i can understand it. her male american lovers had stunk and

this

one is probably very good in the sack. of well, i understand some

strange from time to time. i am just so happy that because of laura

she

is experiencing the wonders her body has to give.

// had to admire laura as she adroitly turns shontay's occasional

surfacing sarcasm and turns it smoothly with gentle words that makes

shontay just melt. i try to learn my women real well so i can quickly

diffuse such situations. i love reading laura getting turned on when

shontay uses "black cunt". such language always makes me

instantly

wet. my lovers know i can't resist such words. i love women who are

strong and know their beauty so i love shontay love taunting laura. i

love for my lovers to tell me they know i want them and to talk dirty

doing it. i can feel my womb quivering with such hot words of love.

// had to giggle when shontay starts to heat up. she loves her new

french lovers but only laura fucks like the lesbian succubus she is.

i

love the word "fuck" and love seeing shontay getting hot

hearing it.

talk dirty baby!!!

// sigh, i love how only you show your lovers slowly undressing their

woman and kissing her beautiful skin as it becomes exposed and the

lifting of hair to kiss the nape of her neck and shoulders. kissing,

licking, tongue stroking and sucking to get the fires burning. i love

the observation of shontay's skinniness down her back. yumm, more

things to kiss and nuzzle. things that other authors never tell us

about their women. what is that makes them unique. like you show

here

[Maybe her back had a little less flesh on it than many others, but it

was the color of pale honey, silky and smooth, and had a lot of

seductive cambers and indentations and dips and protuberances to kiss

and tenderly suck, and even though inhibited from going lower for the

moment, Laura's lips were busy visiting them all.]

// only you give the details of all the skin worship i adore and how

the dress is finally pulled down and the camisole pulled up. it is

these little moments that i recall that make me tingle and moisten up

and then i stoke the fires hotter with the memories that come next. i

love the little details that set my soul on fire with remembered

buildup

and then fucking ecstasy. it is memories like this that i masturbate

too so that my cunt feels like it tearing itself apart as i plant my

heels hard as my rupturing cunt is humping in the air as my fingers or

dildo are slamming up my cunt and or asshole as the other, if free,

hand

is buzz sawing my clit making me scream all caps with violent spasms

and

jackknifes of fucking bliss. only the memories like you provide can

provide the raw fuel to give oneself such fucking bliss. the gods

know

i have jerked off to many a screaming orgasm reading your stories over

the years.

// sigh, the details!! a lover turning to look over her shoulder to

look at you as you finish undressing her torso and you make that smoky

eye contact before your mouths come together and your tongues are

dueling and flailing their love deep in each other's hot mouths. i

had

to smile at shontay's demure ways. i am always trying to get my women

who are such to loosen up. some it a constant battle but i love

trying. love the observation of her golden skin hue. i so love your

little observations of your women. i recently took a new lover who is

half black and Puerto rican and i simply love her golden hue. i just

kiss and worship all of her lovely skin. i can just kiss and rub my

cheek all over her body and have several times already. i'm addicted

to

her skin color. plus, she has serena williams thighs and i just have

fits of love as i kiss and worship each square inch as i work up to

her

totally soaked, humping cunt begging for my eager mouth. she comes so

hard and wet for me.

// i am melting with them as they come together with their naked

upper

bodies and melt into each other as tongues plunge deep down the others

throat as your arms pull your lover tight and bodies rub flesh and

mash

tits together. then i love reading laura turning shontay over to

worship her back. you sure convinced me to lavish slavish love on my

women's back. they soooo love it. they often leave a nice wet spot

for

me on the bed. i love reading laura straddling her buttocks and

starting at the neck and working down in that slow sensual manner that

just makes your women melt. you show laura starting at the nape of

the

neck and that moving of hair if necessary to love lavishly and loving

each spinal ridge. i so love doing what laura does, things like

frenching ears, riding your cunt on her thighs and buttocks and just

loving with fingers, mouth, tongue and sweeping / mashing of my tits

across her back. i love the mewling and sexy groans. i know i am

giving her the pleasure she so fucking deserves.

// of course when one is loving their woman's back one can't help but

eventually getting to her lovely butt. this is always the end game of

my back worship for me. i must love your ass. i am besotted by a

woman's rear end. i am like laura in that i must lavish such

attention

to my women's ass [She kissed the upper slopes of Shontay's buns while

doing it, then flung them off the bed and passionately attacked

Shontay's beautiful bottom for real, squeezing and sucking and kissing

Shontay's firm golden cheeks until Shontay was gasping and

wriggling. "Oh . . . oh . . . oh god, Laura . . . oh god

that feels

so good . . . oh yesssss!" "I love your ass,"

Laura panted. "And I

love your sweet pussy . . ." She couldn't keep her hand off

it.

Even though she was mouth-mauling Shontay's beautiful ass, she dipped

one hand under it and rubbed the wet, swollen lips of Shontay's pussy

with the tips of all her fingers. Shontay undulated under her

caresses,

panting more and more uncontrollably.] i always love how you show

that

more than one thing can be done at time. i almost never read such

things as loving her rump while you rub or frig her pussy. women know

how to multi-task unlike men. we try to give as much pleasure as

possible.

// now you show something that only you do. the change of pace.

other

authors always just have things flow in such a linear fashion.

lovemaking is often like this but then again it is full of twist and

turns and changes of pace. we are individuals and this puts the

infinite spice in lovemaking. here shontay stops the rump loving and

changes the dynamic for some face to face loving. i love seeing this

in

print. and i really love reading this ["That's better,"

Shontay

murmured, still touching Laura's wet pussy, but with her other arm

encircling Laura's neck, bringing her face close for another hot, wet

tongue kiss. They started slowly, kissing sensually and rubbing

each

other's pussy gently, though insistently, but the heat level slowly

grew

until they were groping harder and sucking each other's lips, clanking

teeth, panting and mewling.] oh yeah, i love that face-to-face and

that

clenching and rubbing while your hand gets slavered with cunt juices

as

your cunt's start that love humping and your tongues are fiercely

dueling in hot love. i so often just feel my body spasm and my eyes

roll in the back of my head in so much fucking pleasure. i sometimes

just feel my body stiffen and vibrate in pure fucking pleasure all

the

while straining my mind to make sure i'm still frigging my woman while

i'm keeping my cunt humping hard into her deep plunging or clit

swirling

fingers. i so fucking love it.

// sigh, fucking bliss. i so love reading laura's orgasm slamming

through her body and straining her body with cunt searing ecstasy. i

love reading the small details only you provide. the gasped words of

coming and then the sounds of a body grunting, groaning, screaming its

heavenly orgasm. spasming and flopping on the bed and bringing your

lover close as your body flips and surges in blinding bolts of

fucking,

spasming bliss. love the love nip on the throat and digging fingers.

i

so love feeling those fingers clawing and digging into my body as I

watch her face slashed with such beautiful intense pleasure.

// now you show that recovering from heavenly bliss and then

finishing

off your woman like only lesbians do [For some reason, Laura was

flooded

with a fresh influx of sexual frenzy, probably from knowing that she

was

about to make Shontay come. There was a shiny spot of her own spittle

left between Shontay's wonderful honey-gold shoulder and her neck,

left

there when Laura had bitten it just before coming herself. She

immediately opened her mouth and sucked this piece of Shontay's flesh

back into it, sliding two fingers up into Shontay's inflamed wet pussy

and fucking her frantically with them. Next she sucked her way up to

Shontay's long, smooth, aristocratic neck, then to her earlobe, which

she nipped lustfully. "Oh god, I love to fuck you!" she

whispered,

remembering how dirty talk had always ignited Shontay's most violent

orgasms. Shontay's thin, long, flexing thighs clenched a little,

and

her body jumped in a sharp spasm. "Anngghiiee!" a tight

squeal escaped

from her throat.] oh yeah, the details of working her body and then

making her body come. i so love seeing the pleasure i'm giving her

showing up in her divine body. i always swoon a little when i read of

neck sucking and hickeys. it just makes my cunt spasm hard and flood

with fuck juice. i don't mind having people see my love marks when i

choose to not hide them. i bet they wish they could see the others

lower down. hehehe.

// oh fuck, i love doing this during her orgasm if the dynamics allow

it

[Laura, knowing she was coming, pinned her to the bed, rolling on top

of

her and hand-fucking her relentlessly. Another hard flinch, and then

Shontay went into quick, spastic convulsions, whinnying softly deep in

her chest. Her long, angular body undulated under Laura's, and her

muscles contracted in a rolling rhythm of quick orgasmic fluttering.

"Oh! Ohhnnnnnnn! Ohnnnnnn . . . god, Laura, god . . .

ohhnnnnnnn!" she

moaned, clenching, sighing and gurgling for a long minute, then coming

out of it almost as quickly as Laura had come out of her own climax.]

you really are the only author to mention this frantic rubbing and

clenching in orgasms. i always find it strange that other authors

always have their women fuck in "space" so to speak. their

women always

fuck with a certain distance. they bring their women to orgasm with

their mouth, fingers or dildo and never have the desire to try and

share

it more intimately through close body contact. i have come to find

that

strange. i so adore riding my lover during her orgasm and feeling

each

and every shock and spasm and flip. if i'm in this situation and on

the

bottom and i can do it i will clutch my lover tight as i come

screaming,

groaning, cursing and just thrilling as i feel my flips, jackknifes

and

spasms slapping and squirming against her sweat slicked flesh. a

couple

nights ago my protégé, simonette, was finishing me off with a good

hand

frigging and she suddenly bent in and gave me a hard hickey and i just

fucking spasmed like a board and screamed all caps as she ground down

on

me with her body as she continued to pump my spasming cunt hard as i

went multiple. that was fucking heaven on earth let me tell you.

// it is cute reading of shontay being drowsy after her orgasm. i

don't think i ever get drowsy with my first few orgasms. i may be

wiped

out and completely lethargic but i quickly recharge which i am so

thankful for. it takes a lot of fucking to wear me out.

// now you show us where things don't always go as planned.

sometimes

your angel doesn't quite desire what you may want. laura shows

shontay

her ribbed strap-on but shontay is not really interested. she has a

male lover in france she lets fuck her sometimes and he satisfies her

taste for cock. knowing shontay's new confidence i know he must be a

swordsman and know how to give hot, hard pleasure. i smiled seeing

laura stutter a little over the rejection. i always want my

suggestions

to be jumped on but i like laura am gracious about it. i mean

sometimes

i demure from what a lover wants so i must be willing to compromise

and

travel others paths sometimes. it is only fair.

// oh yeah, maybe shontay doesn't want a cock but she remembers their

hot trib in a chair. oh yeah. i love reading of shontay's smoky eyes

as she looks at the chair in her room. i was actually introduced to

this in such an environment. i remember her getting me in position in

the chair and i thought she was opening me up for some heavy duty

pussy

gobbling when she mounted the chair legs. i remember looking at her

strangely until she lowered her hot twat and then i just swooned.

// i so love reading of how that now that laura knows the end game of

their next fuck she embraces shontay and starts stoking her body in a

body clench and mating of mouths and plunging / twining tongues in hot

love. i so love the body clench and all our flesh pressing and that

friction of heated flesh squirming while tongues duel hotly. then you

give us the hot words of love i so adore hearing and speaking and

strangely other authors never write ["Are you going to let me

suck your

beautiful pussy first?" Laura murmured against her soft light

brown

cheek. "Such a beautiful pussy . . . your little chatte noire,

and you

waste it all on those lucky French girls and that guy Michel, when

here

I am dying for it . . . dying to slide my tongue right up into it . .

."] how can you fuck in silence like other writers would have

it.

heinous.

// sigh, while other authors just have their women move from kissing

to

eating pussy by always jumping over the middle ground you show what

they

are missing [While she was murmuring softly to Shontay, she was also

descending with her mouth and hands down the girl's long, angular,

naked

body, nuzzling her flesh, sucking her dark caramel nipples again,

still

descending, kissing every inch of Shontay's long midriff, every silky

soft ridge of long muscle, every inch of smooth, downy skin, every

rise

of surfacing rib, until her lips reached the upper edge of Shontay's

raven-black pubic patch, which she felt bristling against her chin.

The

ripe, musky perfumes of Shontay's aroused cunt filled her nostrils.]

i

want to love and fuck my whole woman. i simply must consume all your

flesh. i want to taste, feel and smell you whole body. i love and

need

it all.

// i'm smiling at shontay's looking down at laura as she descends

toward her wet gash as laura loves her. i notice she is giving that

intense stare of love and need. i get that while i'm loving my women

and i love that smoky eye contact as our love flows between us and

then

hitting the right spot and seeing that neck go nerveless and seeing

her

head flop and beginning to hear her moans and groans of need and want.

yip! shontay lets out a love moan as laura's lips reach and caress her

sodden cunt. i so love those moans i almost always hear when i give

my

woman's pussy my first licks and caresses with my tongue. i have

arrived home. i so adore your descriptions of your women's vaginas

[her

pussy lips were actually very black, and her pussy itself was small,

not

long at all, a snug little glistening magenta slot, all juicy and wet

inside, her labia swollen and gaping. Laura wasted no time in pouring

her worship all over it.] i never get enough of your word pictures of

your women and especially their heavenly vaginas.

// sigh, this is a perfect gloss of pussy dining [She sucked and

tongued and licked it for about five minutes, at first going slowly,

not

wanting to accelerate Shontay's arousal too quickly, instead letting

it

percolate and simmer, avoiding Shontay's clit until the later stages.

Finally, with her thumbs she spread open the small hood concealing the

magic bead, which in Shontay's case was tiny but extremely sensitive.

Laura licked it carefully, watching Shontay's face as the girl

grimaced

with pleasure and whimpered.] start slow and build up the heat and

simply love every square centimeter of her pussy every which way you

can

all the while gobbling down all her sweet juices while basking in each

visual grimace of pleasure, sounds of her love and need she is

vocalizing and feeling her body under my tongue and fingers and

feeling

her cunt humping my mouth. this is perfect heaven on earth.

// laura wants to continue her cunt worship and ramp up some clit

devouring but senses that shontay is near her end again. i love you

writing how lovers read their lovers. only you bring this front and

center with loving words. plus, laura senses that shontay's tiredness

from her travels are going to limit her endurance. one does need to

keep track of such things if you have something special in mind and

laura sure does here. i'm telling you, only you show the change of

pace

[Laura pulled back, not abruptly, not wishing to disturb the flow of

Shontay's increasingly urgent sexual rhythms, but slowly, kissing her

tense thighs, then her smooth, flat belly, sliding upward until she

held

her and they were face to face.] i adore this needless to say.

// they cross the room to the chair and i'm smiling as shontay fears

her screams will be heard but laura promises to swallow her screams

down

her own throat. this is a huge turn-on for me. i love to have my

woman

plunging her tongue down my throat while i'm screaming my ecstasy down

her throat. these lip locks by their nature mean we are usually in a

tight body clench and i can feel her body so hot and close as my

usually

sweat slicked or soaked body is squirming, slapping against hers as my

screams just explode around her tongue plunging deep down my throat or

around or twined and dueling tongues. i know such kiss / clenches

always gives me a least one extra hard spasm or jackknife of fucking

bliss.

// you really do describe it so beautifully as shontay gets on the

bottom and gets her rump on the edge of the chair and folds her body

on

the bottom of the chair and laura mounts the arms of the chair. i'm a

bottom girl most of the time and i simply love how this opens my cunt

up

for divine ramming. i love feeling my woman just ramming and grinding

her cunt down hard ramming me back into the chair. when on top with

my

lovers like dodie, joann and maria i know i can just ram their cunts

hard and just slam fuck them as they desperately hump their cunt up

for

hard cunt to cunt ramming. we have nearly torn chairs apart i think

in

our orgasmic throes of shared ecstasy.

// oh yeah, i love reading of that sagging you get when your wet open

cunts make that first contact and those first grinds of mating up your

cunts just make pure pleasure pump through your veins. oh yeah,

grabbing the back of the chair to get the leverage to start your

initial

grinding with that heavenly pounding of cunts to follow. i so adore

the

end game when i'm on top grabbing that chair back and i'm just slam

fucking my current slut and she is crying out in ecstasy and she is

gripping my midsection to help me ram down into her and our upper

bodies

are squirming and mashing. i love our sweat running splattering as we

ram hard our love for each other. oh yes, you show how their is so

much

to loving than the basic love position you are in [She too had

forgotten

the sheer intensity that this position could summon. With her arms

extended over Shontay's head, her hands gripping the back of the

chair,

her naked breasts swished in Shontay's face. Shontay's hands quickly

came up to them, as she had done their first time, squeezing Laura's

breasts and immediately feeding one of Laura's aching nipples into her

mouth. She sucked it hungrily. "Auunngghh!" Laura

half-growled,

hissing with sharp pleasure. "Oh yes!"] i so love how you

capture the

complete loving that lesbians do for each other and for ourselves. we

go for it all.

// i'm always ranting about the end game but this is what makes the

end

game so divine. long minutes of slow sensual cunt grinding and gentle

humping while breast and nipples are devoured and swallowed and you

are

clutching and stroking your woman feeling her divine flesh and working

muscles as the two of you grind your love for each other. [Shontay,

while groaning and whimpering as Laura jammed her cunt into her crotch

rhythmically, was also making sloppy, wet, sucking sounds as she

slurped

and mouth-mauled Laura's nipples, and somehow these wonderfully

obscene

noises ratcheted up Laura's lust to an even higher notch. Her nipples

were on fire, and she even dropped one hand from the top of the chair

to

Shontay's head, pulling it from behind, forcing Shontay's mouth even

harder into her breast.] oh yeah, i love those sounds of lovemaking

and

so love reading it. i am a very aural girl and just the sounds of

lovemaking makes me so hot and wet. love seeing laura pulling shontay

in hard into her tit. i love seeing women going for all the pleasure

they can. the gods know i go for the most pleasure possible.

// love reading the change of pace necessary to keep the fucking

going. working your bodies to keep the fires raging as hot as

possible

without coming. working to increase our pleasure. love the nipple

love

nips for those squirts of sexual fire. sigh, they make eye contact

and

they just wordlessly fall into a sensual fuck rhythm. they may have a

strained relationship but this kind of deep soul fuck and can heal so

much past pain. just feeling pure pleasure and love flowing between

your perfectly synched bodies. i so adore this time of bodies in

perfect harmony of lovemaking.

// like the observation about it being hard to hump while kissing in

this position. it can be done but not with as much force. i love

the

variation in your fucking. that is what makes lovemaking so rad is

the

variation. oh yes, it it time to ramp up. shontay is breathy asking

laura to "fuck" her. i so love that word and always spurs

me on.

shontay is ready to be "raped" and laura grabs the chair

back to get

maximum leverage. i so need to feel your cunt simply slam fucking me.

only you really give us those transition moments between the sensual

fuck and the ending going for the brass ring fuck ["God, I know

I sure

am," Laura gasped, kissing her again savagely before beginning to

accelerate their grinding and slow pumping.] it is these moments that

make you the author supreme you are.

// i may not have much use for men except for their cock but that

doesn't mean we shouldn't fuck like them when the time is right [Laura

pushed her slippery wet pussy down sharply into Shontay's inflamed

seam,

grunting softly and jabbing forward with her hips, grabbing the back

of

the chair hard for leverage, fucking her like a man would fuck her,

roughly, hungrily, demandingly, completely.] i love a good hard fuck

whether giving or receiving. some women only want the feminine touch

and i'm happy to give it but i really, really love the good hard fuck

that just makes your whole body thrum with fucking pleasure. sigh,

you

capture things so perfectly. shontay's humping her cunt up to really

mash into laura's grinds and thrusts and shontay's clutching of laura

and laura really grabbing the back of the chair to make sure she is

now

slam fucking shontay's splayed and perfectly titlted cunt. i just

love

drool when someone like dodie, stacy, polly or abby (strong women) are

just slamming and grinding their cunts down into me and driving my

back

into a chair like this or on top in a more traditional trib fuck as

they

huff and puff with by now crazy thrusts and grinds. looking up and

seeing their scrunched up faces as they concentrate to hump me hard

and

on the pleasure radiating from our molten cunts as they grind and

flood

with fuck juice all over our groins and their sweat is splattering and

running in rivulets down into my face and body and pooling and running

off me. yes, this is fucking supreme.

// i love your showing how we should always vocalize our pleasure and

encouraging our lovers like laura is. first love cooing and then

ending

with shouting for shontay to "come". it is amazing how

just hearing

that love order can make your cunt simply erupt with scalding spasms

of

fucking bliss. of course you show what the end game is (and what

other

authors almost always cheat me on) ["Yaaunngngggg!" a

savage, clotted

cry tore itself out of Shontay's throat. In the space of a few

seconds her long, lean body went stiff, then went crazy, flipping and

jackknifing almost off the chair. Laura, who was coming herself, was

barely able to keep their bodies from separating, but she did it by

dropping her arms from the top of the chair and embracing Shontay with

them hard, mashing their bodies together, then shuddering and

undulating

herself as a soaring, gushing explosion of an orgasm wracked her own

flesh. "Ohnnnnmmmnngggg! Auunggghhhhh!" Laura

groaned, shaking and

clenching as a supreme climax wrenched her body almost too much for

her

to enjoy the cataclysmic nature of Shontay's.] only you seem to go

beyond they "come hard" and tell of the generic spasm or

two of orgasm.

ho-hum. wake me up. what the reader needs is the loving details you

give us and all the adjectives and adverbs necessary to give the fuck

the color and variation that each fuck gives us. i have really come

to

find it weird that other authors refuse to do this.

// wow, now i get a special treat. i happen to love having my women

do

this to me when they feel like it ["Oh honey . . . oh

honey!" she

gasped, grabbing Shontay's lolling head in both hands and pushing her

mouth into the girl's just as Shontay erupted in a piercing scream of

ecstasy. At least it would have been piercing, Laura knew, had it

issued

directly into the hotel room, but instead it was blocked by her open

mouth. She swallowed Shontay's screams of pleasure, and for Laura it

somehow made the entire experience more intense than ever, as if she

were swallowing Shontay's orgasm at the same time that it was raking

and

wrenching Shontay's body.

"Mmmnnggrrrrnngghmmmnngghhbbrrr!" Shontay

shrieked into Laura's mouth, her body still clenching and jackknifing

as

each shattering spasm of her climax ripped through her.

"Aunnmmmgggh!

Unnnmmrrrggghhh!"] for some reason i don't like ball gags or

four

fingers cramming my mouth during orgasm but i just melt and die from

coming when a woman savagely kisses me and simply rapes my mouth as my

screams are simply devoured down her hot throat. sigh, this is so

fucking hot and dreamy that my cunt is really making a mess of my

panties just reading this again. a state i am more than willing to

put

myself in again and again. gets me hot for some intense fucking.

// love the dreamy afterglow. before laura can dismount, shontay

pulls

her close for some love kisses and cooing. love that post coital time

of just gentle murmurs of love and stroking and kissing of spent

languid

love. i love how they just stay in their love chair nest and love

bond

a little. only you give me this most cherished of times of languid

love. thanks.

// they finally untangle themselves from the chair. love the banter

about laura "raping" shontay and how shontay is now so open

about her

desires and wants. love also seeing that shontay has grown and can

now

joke about laura's other angels. she now has her own angels and has

moved on from her petty jealousies. i love reading the banter of the

more hot fucking we know they will do when they get a power nap and

the

chapter ends on such a dreamy note ["Touché, mademoiselle,"

Shontay

murmured back, again spreading the hair away from Laura's sticky

forehead before kissing her very emotionally. After the kiss they

dozed and cuddled, and soon Shontay was actually asleep, as she had

promised. Laura must have watched her for half an hour before nodding

off herself.] simply puuuuurrrfect.

 

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