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A Fan's Notes

(reflections while reading Laura's Story)

[used by permission]

 

Chapter 225:

This chapter starts with the only woman that has a nickname, my precious "Inky". I have come to so adore her. She is such a gentle soul and just beams like a lighthouse when she smiles. Oh yeah, she has a body that was made by the gods for lesbian sex. Her body is made to be fucked long, hard and deep. I have to admit that at first I thought she was not the prettiest girl in some of the photos, but when I just looked at her pictures to get ready for this chapter I just gazed at them with lust and longing. She has become a woman I would be proud to have on my arm and anyone who made a comment about her "lack" of beauty would have me to deal with. I am totally amazed at those full breasts on such a small frame. I would definitely inhale her nipples and just gently suckle after sex to bring us truly close.

I am simply in love with Inky's phone mail message. Again, there is nothing else like this in lesbian erotica. Their characters never have conversations that are multi-layered. I simply love it when you write in [] what the voice is telling us. I love this and it again shows real life how so many emotions can flow in just a simple short conversation. I don't blame Charise being querulous with Laura. She needs some loving and Laura is not available. I would be upset in her situation too.

Now Laura gets to the situation with Deshona. While they have mended the damage from past conflicts to a large degree, it can't be the same as along as the cad ex-husband is in the picture. Deshona is wasting time with this loser, big time. Laura can't truly bond with her like the past with this foul odious man in the picture. Thus, when Charise calls Laura, she fills Laura heart with joy. [She loved Charise with a kind of flame-bright purity that could not be compromised, and her desire to see the sweet young girl was almost palpable. She could feel it in the pit of her stomach, in her chest, in her throat. Just to see her, to touch her cheek! It's all I want!] Charise has a purity about her that inspires this kind of reaction from Laura. Unfortunately, even this is tainted a little. Charise has let some guy pressure her into fucking without a condom because he "doesn't like it". I really hate men who are so damn selfish. I really, really want to hurt them. This creep is bullying this poor sweet angel. I would like to see him try and push me around before I broke him over my knee. Of course Laura was horribly jealous over this. Humorously,

she then contemplates Jane's jealousy over her and Charise love tryst. And of course Charise is jealous back but Laura can't stop reflecting on the hot fucking between her and Jane. I simply love how Jane fucks so roughly with an animalistic hunger. I simply love all this jealousy and angst between these women.

I thought the coincidence that Laura notices here is so true. How the last time she meet with Charise was after her first tryst with Deshona and now she calls right after her most recent meeting with Deshona. I am always noticing strange coincidences like this. Things that if I saw in a movie I would go "oh how contrived." The phone calls has now planted Charise into her conscious. Laura can't stop herself from driving by her house and pickup spot. I can fully understand Laura here. She so wishes to be with her darling Inky. During this time Laura gives us some angst fretting over cheating on both Randi and Deshona with their rivals. It is fun to read when Laura is in all a twitter over her various lovers and trying to balance them all. Happy to see that Laura got a night with Randi. I always love Laura seeing one of her angels besides the main angel of the current chapter.

Charise finally calls again in on a workday morning and tells Laura she wants to cut class to see Laura. I love how Laura despite the fact that she desperately wants Charise she tries to get her not to cut class. Again this shows Laura's goodness, she is willing to sacrifice sex with this child goddess. Of course, Laura quickly melts and tells Inky that she'll call in sick and pick her up. In this situation I would do the same exact thing. I simply couldn't refuse this opportunity to fuck this wonderful angel. I really liked several lines of dialog here ["Of course I'm not. I'm dying to see you. But you can't cut school. For one thing, it's against the law." Charise giggled. "I done a few things that's against the law. Fucking with you is one of them."] I think of Charise as so innocent but she shows such maturity sometimes with lines like the above. She really knows what the score is. Then I just love the general humor of ["You can't be sick," Charise teased her. "Then we won't be able to do what we want to do."] Have I told you how much I love your dialog? It is so vital and alive.

Laura changes out of her work clothes and picks up Charise during a rainstorm. I love how describe Charise here [Charise was standing on the corner where Laura usually picked her up, buried in a huge blue parka with a fur-lined hood, looking like a shivering, tiny black waif, a small child even, not the hot-blooded but sweet-natured little angel of sex Laura knew her to be.] I love how you make her so vulnerable here. I know that Laura will keep her safe and warm in her bed while she fucks into a stupor of sexual bliss. I liked the jealousy that Laura shows about not wanting any guys around Charise when she picks her up. That would be the last thing I would want to see, let me tell you. I can feel the throbbing in Laura's body as she basks in Charise's presence.

I love how you describe Inky here [Now Charise turned on the double-pixie smile, the heart-stirring smile that made Laura quiver every time. She was not beautiful and even verged on the homely, with a flat nose and incipient bags under her eyes. But this pixie smile made her seem like the most beautiful creature on earth, and it melted Laura's heart every time. She realized that Charise's appeal was made up of these contradictions: the almost ugly face transformed by the half-beatific, half-sensual smile, the slender girl's body sporting a woman's beautifully-formed, full breasts, the knowing eyes mixed with the girlish mannerisms. All of it jumbled together in her darling Inky to make the girl a fierce lodestone of lust, and Laura's stomach was churning with anticipation by the time they reached her apartment house.] It is funny; before I started reading this chapter I looked at her pictures and totally overlooked all the negatives. She has grown on me to the point that they don't exist anymore. I just see the beauty of that smile and her twinkling eyes and those breasts of hers. I simply can't get over their complete perfection. I could nurse from her for hours before eating her pussy for hours and many orgasms in my hungry waiting mouth. I would swallow and savor every drop of her love juice.

It is funny the change that overcomes Laura once she arrives back at her apartment. Immediately she starts to fear her neighbors Jane and Kendra. It was funny to read all the shit they put Laura through but I am so happy that Laura doesn't have to worry about Kendra butting her nose in where it wasn't needed anymore. I love how you describe the jealousies that Jane and Charise have over Laura. It is a shame they are so jealous over Laura since they started out with sharing Laura. They missed many chances for great sex with Laura together. The old green-eyed monster has ruined many a relationship. I like how you show the different personalities of Charise and Jane in how they handle their jealousy. [Jane was crazed and unpredictable and nasty. Also, hotter than the tongs of hell when she and Laura finally got past her jealousy to intense, insatiable sex. Charise pouted, and dropped sly, cutting remarks, sometimes even playing on Laura's guilt by portraying herself as too ugly and too black to compete with her rival, which was also Jane's interpretation.] Love how these girls are so different in their personalities. Your

women are all such individuals. Each woman is a real live breathing personality.

Instead of running into Jane they run into busy body Kendra. Kendra who is always beating Laura down because she is inviting these teen angels to her bed. These girls are high school girls who are old enough to know what they want. There is nothing wrong going on here. Kendra does know how to make one feel bad though. I guess I can understand in a way though, it is always easier to be understanding until it is your daughter that is being slept with. Seeing Laura with a teenager must always ignite her concerns. I am so glad that Jane has the strength to pursue her true desires. It is kind of funny Laura almost making it to the elevator and safety and then who is coming out but Kendra. Geez, almost home free.

One thing I always liked about Kendra was her aggressiveness. She was always such a passionate lover. I like the way she grabs Laura's elbow to make a point. I think this show that fire I love when these two women fuck. I just know she would make my womb just explode with shockwaves of pleasure. I like the fact that Jane still gets to have Laura despite Kendra's prying and trying to prevent nature. I really miss Kendra but I am happy that she moved way. I hated her trying to stop Laura from pleasuring her young lovers. Then she is like Sholandra who has a big liking for Mr. Penis. I guess we will never get to see her again. Like I say, I disliked her badgering Laura, but she sure knew how to fuck so well. I loved her total abandon while fucking. She is definitely a beautiful woman [Worse for Laura, Kendra looked absolutely ravishing herself. Even though she was bundled up for the rain, her red-gold hair was only partially covered by a scarf, her hard, curvaceous body was artfully encased in a stylish raincoat, and her shapely legs were visible. Laura had kissed and stroked that hard body and wished she could do it again.].

Kendra doesn't stop her venom. She proceeds to make Charise feel bad. Finally, Laura gets herself and Charise in the elevator and Kendra keeps berating all the while until the closing doors cut her off. That is a funny mental picture. They finally get to Laura's apartment and Laura starts to bask in the idea that they have a whole school day of glorious fucking before them. I know my pussy juices would be running down my thighs with that thought. Still, despite that thought, one can't but help having Kendra's poisonous words affect one. Laura does beat herself up some because of it. She worries about the fact that Charise is with her and not in school. [But Kendra had come close. Laura still felt a sour, hard bubble of shame inside her. This lovely black schoolgirl belonged in class, not here in the apartment of some closet lesbian pervert who was about to enjoy the young thing's beautiful adolescent body all day. I feel like pure scum, Laura realized. How can I be such a shit? I should take her right over to that school this instant and make her go.] Actually, it is nice to read this conflict in emotion. Other stories always have the seducer have a total disregard for the age factor and any moral questions about the situation. I feel some of this same emotion when we fuck Tifeshon and other girls in the past. Joann and Maria like the stories never worry about this really. We are cautious and have total faith in these young women to protect themselves and us. I do worry some on the moral things, but I just remember how I was at Tifeshon's age. I was so happy to make love to adult women. I learned so much from those wonderful women. I owe them a lot. It is amazing how age changes one's perspective.

I am so happy that Laura is able to able to put the vitriol out of her system that Kendra put there. I will miss the passionate fucking she engendered, but I will not miss her superior attitude she always had. I can't wait for another visit form her fiery daughter. I just realized that they are so alike, Kendra and Jane. That is so cool. They both are basically the same persons. They both are wild and fuck with wild abandon and extremely jealous. The one common thing they agreed on was the desire to fuck Laura. I can't blame them on this one at all. Hehehe. Laura's libido immediately starts to revive when sweet Inky starts to disrobe [She wore—Laura realized, now that Charise had removed the parka—a gray athletic jersey of the sort you could buy at Wal-Mart or Target, and of course her jeans, damp from the rain. We'll get you out of those wet clothes, my dear, Laura thought. I can't wait to run my fingers over that delicious smooth skin. And to kiss you everywhere.] I have admired and love how Laura is so totally in tune with her libido and quickly becomes infatuated and sodden with desire with each angel she is with.

Laura has totally forgotten any reservations and her body thrums and sings for her darling Inky. You give us a wonderful kissing episode to set the blood to boiling [Charise said nothing but offered up her lips. Laura kissed her very slowly, not even touching her body until they had been kissing a full minute. For the first thirty seconds, they did not even open their mouths but just moved their lips together in a yearning, emotional rhythm. Then Laura's tongue slipped into Charise's mouth, coiling with hers, inviting Charise's back into her own mouth, her blood beginning to pound through her excited body.] I like how you describe Charise offering her lips to Laura. That is so sweet and innocent. Charise is probably the least complicated woman that Laura knows. All she wants to do is offer her body to Laura. She has no agenda other than Laura's love. I truly treasure her. She is so fucking beautiful. I am simply in love with her lithe body and a voluptuous woman's breasts. A few other authors give nice kissing details, but only you make it truly romantic.

I think this describes me when I run my hands up Tifeshon's blouse [Laura slid her hands under the bottom of the jersey, running them over Charise's smooth, naked back, so resilient and fresh and supple. I want her, she thought, desire humming through her body. I want her so badly. She may be a schoolgirl, but I want her more than anything!] Only you describe something so simple and yet it is so fucking hot. Other writers have their women run their hands underneath clothing, but it is always just to remove the clothes. Some may enjoy it while doing it, but still, it is only to remove the clothes. You are the only writer that allows their heroine to revel and bask in this act that does set one's body on fire with desire. Only you talk of the quality of a woman's skin and feel of kneading one's muscles. Only you use words like "resilient, fresh and supple". By doing this, you add so much to your stories. These simple embellishments, almost of themselves, make love to these women.

I smile so much when I read of Charise asking Laura to call her "Inky". That is just so romantic. I love how it means so much to them. When others call Charise "Inky" they mean it with derision. I love how Laura and her have changed this into a deep meaning of love and emotion. This just packs so much emotion. Laura is wise to cherish this lovely young woman ["You don't realize how much I like it," Laura murmured, lifting up the athletic jersey, pulling it gently past Charise's hair and over her head. "I want to kiss your whole body all over, that's how much I like it."] Cute how they joke about wrinkly elbows.

Now Charise gives a little "surprise". She is pregnant. Oh geez, I really, really hated hearing that. This poor little child woman is simply not ready for the responsibilities and changes this will bring into her life. Sigh, oh well. I could kill that boyfriend not wanting to use a condom because it "ruins the feeling". I could wring his neck. I wish people would use the protection that modern science has provided us. A woman must protect herself. Oh well, time to get off my soapbox. Laura is so cute herself, she might be a little alarmed, but what she really is hot and horny. All she wants to do is get to the sweet nooky that is hiding in Charise's pants [ashamed to be feeling more lust than concern. She was very alarmed that Charise might indeed be pregnant, but she was filled with the urge to fuck her too, to swarm over the sweet thing and fuck her madly. Right below this flat, gleaming black tummy, and below the nest of tight black curls of hair just beneath it, was the gorgeous pussy she so desired. And it was probably moist and blooming, ready for her eager tongue.] Again, instead of just saying that she wanted to get into her pussy, you give all these warm details of her beautiful lower torso and quim. Only you make the woman's body the temple it is.

Charise quickly gets in a seductive mood. This so sweet, the way she just hitches her fingers underneath her panties and pants and inches them down her legs, removes her shoes and then yawns her thighs wide apart to expose her treasure to Laura who is kneeling in front of her. GEEZ, that would have made me insane with want and desire. That is just so Fucking Hot. It is amazing how such a sweet child can be so seductive. I know my belly would be quivering jelly right now. Now Laura finishes undressing and we get some of that great skin color contrast and sweet kissing. My sweet Charise then shows her teenage age when she giggles about Laura having a bigger dick than that fucking loser, total cad, I want to throttle boyfriend.

I am swooning here with all this worshipping of the female body. Other writers give sex, a few even great sex every once in a while, but only You celebrate and worship the female body and spirit [Charise loved being worshipped by Laura, and she sat on the edge of Laura's bed patiently while Laura removed the rest of her own clothes. Then, without even pulling down the bedspread, Laura pushed her down on it, filling her hands with Charise's naked breasts and kissing the girl ravenously. She kissed her neck, her ears, her throat, her shoulders, her clavicles, the smooth underside of her jaw, her cheeks, her nose, her eyes, her forehead, brushing aside the bangs, then kissing the bangs too. I love you, I want to eat you alive! she thought, stroking the girl's deep black, phenomenally smooth skin.] I feel only lesbians really know how to worship their lover. You are the only writer that loves and caresses the whole body like real lesbian lovers. I know that Charise is in total heaven right now with this complete worship. This is how I make love to my women and I expect and desire the same in return.

I love how Charise talks to Laura and tells her of her great desire and her need to have it done hard. Like the reference that only Laura and Charise's own hand can make her come. Love the reference to masturbation. Love Laura's direct question ["Do you want me to eat your hot little pussy?"] I love how Laura, like women in general, does what her lover wants. Here by her constantly cooing to Charise "my darling Inky". This is women in love. Now we get down to some serious breast worship that only you make magical [Laura rolled onto her back, rolling Charise up over her at the same time, so that the girl's full, firm, delicious naked breasts dangled in her face. She held the dark globes in her hands, squeezing them, watching Charise's coal-black nipples swell, the centers popping up, the gleaming black areolas shiny, puffed up. She fed one into her mouth, sucking it in deep, hearing Charise sigh, feeling her body grow tense.] I love having a woman over me feeding me her breasts. I love it when they cram their tit flesh into my waiting mouth. You then give all the details that only you provide on breast worship. Only you make breast loving truly magical.

All this breast worship quickly gets Charise to the critical level and Laura moves down to her pussy which you always lovingly describe [Laura rolled her again onto her back and slid down between her thighs in one fluid motion. She loved Charise's beautiful, shapely black pussy, and it was just as beautiful as ever, puckered and swollen, shiny with running juices, the interior fiery and inflamed, the little whitish bead at the top engorged, sticking up.] You never fail to make them sound so yummy with your descriptions of being swollen with excitement and love. I nearly swooned when I read this just now [Laura pressed her mouth to this festering, oozing nether mouth of Charise's pussy, sliding her tongue up into the warm squinchy channel, stabbing it in deep. Charise gave a soft whoop, her lovely, supple body undulating as she approached the culminating instant. She was digging her fingers so hard into her clenching, glossy black thighs that Laura was afraid she might tear the skin. Laura grabbed both of the girl's hands in her own, the quickly pressed the flat of her tongue against the hard little bead of Charise's clit, knowing the girl was only a split second away from a crushing orgasm.] I absolutely adore that detail you use of a woman in helpless rapture clawing her own thighs in wild, lost abandon. I just love anything involving thighs. You then continue this divine cunt worship and of course Charise has a wonder to behold orgasm. [And then, her hands squeezing Laura's, her pelvis jerking spastically in sharp little twitches, she began to come, the breath locked briefly in her lungs as her body seemed to levitate off the bed before it started shuddering from violent shock waves.] Love that bucking and levitating of hips in orgasm. Very nice detail of Charise squeezing Laura's hands in helpless pleasure. I love doing that with my lover. It really makes you feel close, that clasping of hands and feeling the spasms in them. I always love it how Laura keeps her mouth glued to a woman's cunt until all the possible pleasure and cunt cream has been gotten.

You so often describe the time after the orgasm. Again, you are the only writer to really write of this. A few will say they cuddle, but that sounds so chaste and none incest sisterly. Only you give the details of lovers coming down from the high. This shows lovers sharing, caring and bonding [and Charise began to relax, still panting and mewling helplessly, her eyes glazed and reddened, her toes still curled from a thrilling climax. Laura didn't hurry her to return from paradise. She was content to feel this deep intimacy, her mouth still glued tenderly to the girl's throbbing pussy, her hands still clutching Charise's hands, her fingertips somehow sensitive to every pulse traveling through the sweet girl's slackening body as Charise drifted back from her pulverizing sexual explosion.] I think this shows so clearly that sweet coming down from a monster orgasm. The sharing and just being in tune with your lover. That physical contact between you and your lover. I will take this over just the plain old "cuddle" that other authors give. They always make me think of het sex. So many men 'do' just roll over. Once the sex is done, it is over. Lesbians keep it going and truly bond with their bedmates.

Now after the sweet physical afterglow, Charise and Laura do something else that only you really do, they communicate after the immediate sex. I love how Charise is just overflowing with compliments and Laura is bashfully deflecting them in her modesty. Like that mental picture of Charise plucking her nipples in telling how Laura made her feel while inhaling her nipples. Now Charise shows some of her schoolgirl age with her breaking into giggles when talking about getting the double-headed monster and fucking Laura with her "own dick". Those giggles really make me smile great big. Geez I had totally forgotten about Charise looking under the bed and finding the four-headed monster and rope. I can just see Laura's mortification. This reaction is priceless [Laura held up her hand. "Stop. Please. It's none of your business. Somebody left it there. It wasn't me. I just forgot to get rid of it."] Charise shows her age some more when she is totally shocked by the idea of someone using the rope to tie Laura up. I like how you play with dynamics. Will kinky sex ensue? You have a little back and forth between Charise and Laura here. The reader is left waiting with anticipation. However it turns, we will be the winner. Finally, Laura steers Charise away from the kinkier sex and back

into her bed with admonitions to proceed with fucking her with "her own dick".

Here you again show your uniqueness. Almost all other authors just have their characters get it on immediately. You always have that oh so sweet gentle buildup [They kissed, a long, sensual, emotional, stirring kiss, during which Charise dropped one hand to Laura's pussy and began massaging the wet, soupy slit in slow, rhythmic swirls. Letting herself be lovingly fucked by Charise was a special thrill for Laura. Charise took it very seriously, as Laura did too. There would be no rushing, no hurry, no hasty groping or graceless penetrations.] I think that says it all. I love the observation that Inky is into making "love" and how she is the only person to say that Stephanie Seymour looks like Laura. That just shows Charise's sweet loving nature. On top of these little emotional gems, Charise is showing her expertise in breast loving. Laura shows her usual jealous self when Charise admits she would do Stephanie if she got the chance. That is so cute.

You have some more of that dialog I so love. I can never get enough of it. Charise remarks that she can deep love suck titties also. I love how you have Laura asking her if she can "fuck hard" too. That gives me a little flutter. I nearly swoon with this preparation for fucking [Laura bit her lower lip as she watched Charise carefully rub one fat end of the monstrous dildo up and down in the wet groove of her open pussy. When it was sufficiently smeared with her buttery juices, and Laura herself was tense from anticipation, Charise began to push it inside.] This is so fucking hot. Other authors just say their characters have their cunt fucked by the large double-headed dildo. Only you seem to know how to make it truly hot by telling the reader what is actually happening. You describe how the dildo ["Uhnnnn," Laura gasped involuntarily, feeling her labia spread, stretched tight, by the huge fat pole pushing into her cunt. "Oh!"] I simply can't understand why other authors don't do this. You finish Laura's impalement with nice details and those wonderful descriptions of having one's cunt completely filled with cock

[Charise smiled and twisted it, holding it with both hands, slowly corkscrewing it into Laura's tight slit. Laura was amazed each time she felt it at how massive it was. Even Marshall's, the largest cock she had ever felt, was no match for this enormous pole, which felt like a baseball bat. Charise pushed it into Laura's pussy until she was completely crammed with it, her body throbbing and aching, feeling totally stuffed and impaled on this huge rubber cock.] This explains to the reader why this fucking is wonderful.

Love how you show Laura feeling that light touch of pain that quickly disappears into bliss and begging Charise to fuck her hard. I love how Charise is just gazing at the dildo penetrating Laura's cunt, stretching it, cramming it full. I love watching my dildo at work. Love how you never stop talking of the stretching and cramming of pussy with dildo and Charise getting that glazed eyed look of intense fucking. Love that visual of Laura mouthing to Charise "fuck me". Now Charise feeds the other into that beautiful cunt of hers and they get into position for some intense fucking. Love how you detail Charise holding the monster in the middle to keep it in perfect position to start the heavenly festivities. Love that description of Laura watching a teenager fuck. Last Friday night Tifeshon and her cousin Lakita (yes some incest) came over. It is heaven watching those young faces getting that shocked look of a crushing orgasm hitting their young faces. That is simply divine heaven on Earth.

I love how you always racket up the rhythm. You never allow your characters to fall into that boring full speed ahead that 95% of the stories have. You so often start slow and then build the rhythm and heat like real life. Love how you detail the bed creaking and them bouncing in their exuberance. Now some more wonderful details [She reached up with both hands and grasped Charise's moving breasts, squeezing the full globes lovingly, kneading Charise's large, thick nipples with her fingers as Charise began to pump hard, driving the fat, fake cocks up into her body and Laura's more forcefully with each hard thrust. She opened her eyes and leaned forward, pushing her breasts into Laura's hands and pumping vigorous with her hips, piercing Laura's pussy with the dildo, and her own as well.] As per usual with your writings, you keep your lover doing multiple things like real lesbians. We stroke, caress and love the whole body. Love how you are always describing these wonderful angel's bodies. You make these women so real.

I love the animalistic grunting we have here. This is two women fucking in lust, sunk in an animal haze of fucking. Now we have Charise releasing her grip on the dildo [Now releasing her grip on the middle of the dildo, which Laura knew was firm and resilient enough to stay in place no matter how hard they fucked since both ends were buried deep in their two pussies, Charise leaned down even further over Laura, kissing Laura hungrily and fucking her sharply at the same time, gasping and whimpering as the huge shaft pierced deep into her own pussy too.] I love this throwing myself on my lover and kissing and clutching her. I love the fire that Laura is stoking in Charise's young body and mind. She is teaching her how to fuck like a woman. I love how you allow your women to make love in so many wonderful and loving ways.

I love how your women grunt and moan like animals in a rut. You are the only author who allows her women to really and truthfully vocalize their pleasure. Now they decide to try and have a simultaneous orgasm. Oh geez, this next scorching paragraph has it all. Describing how they vary their fucking, all those beautifully adjectives and or adverbs (sorry, not sure which all the time) of wild fucking and then your wonderful words of having your cunt pierced with a big dildo [She and Charise had never had such savage, rapacious, scorching sex together. Though they reached powerful orgasms, they were usually slow and deliberate, loving, tender, firm but not violent. But now, they thrashed and struggled and fucked each other fiercely, jamming their groins together, spearing each other's pussy with the massive thick toy, groaning and even shrieking aloud as it stabbed deep into their bodies, until they were both trembling and shuddering on the edge of a fearsome climax.] Like I like to rhapsodize, this is true, wanton fucking that all women dream of. They achieve their simultaneous orgasm with much glorious shrieking of rapture. They still continue to stroke each other's body trying to increase their pleasure. Thank you for showing how lesbians love. Love that detail of Charise slumping onto Laura's body as her crushing orgasm hits and she just shrieks out her joy and rapture while lying on top of Laura. This alone would almost make me come.

I love how Laura tries to coax another orgasm out her lover's body. I often shoot for this and so do a lot of my lovers. They know I'm capable of this, as I have found a lot of women are though some need a cool down period and some need hours to recover. Thank the gods I'm not cursed with that. Laura is so sexual that I just love her [On the other hand, she herself was such a thoroughgoing, insatiable fuck-pig that she knew it was not enough for her. She rolled Charise onto her back and began fucking her again, this time with herself on top, fucking Charise slowly, sensually this time, not the savage, thrilling kind of fuck they had just gone through, but a more rhythmic, erotic one. Charise blinked and looked up at her, her face still showing the stunning effects of her last orgasm.] I love Laura teaching this angelic teenager what her body is capable of. These are lessons that Charise will always be thanking her for. Again, you show that sex has so many rhythms. The last was rough and animalistic and this one is going to be slow and sensuous.

I love how Charise croaks out ["Laura . . . you tryin' to kill me," she panted.] Yes, she is, she is going to be killing her with loving pleasure. Laura now starts the rhythm of love up again and once again squeezes those great "10" breasts of Charise. They are fucking perfection. I can never get enough of your women expressing themselves to each other [Even in the grip of fierce sexual feelings, Charise beamed her enchanting smile at Laura. "You just go right ahead, then," she panted. "I love being fucked by you, Laura."] Now you show two women lost in lust and fucking each other's brains out and the sweet afterglow of stupendous orgasms [The pace had quickly returned to its past frantic nature, and they were now attacking each other like two crazed sex fiends, fucking in quick, sharp jabs, kissing, scratching, sucking, biting, dissolving in a maniacal, thrashing delirium of sex that had both of them coming again in under a minute. This time Charise gave a loud whoop, her lithe young body flexing under Laura, its sleek ebony smoothness and deep gloss giving Laura an extra erotic charge as she too began to whinny and groan in the throes of a stupendous and electrifying climax. They clung to each other, twitching and whimpering and moaning in a whirlwind of shared coming, each wrenching spasm seeming to flow between their mated flesh, even their warm, rapid breath mingling as they kissed in a passionate culmination of an incredible moment.] The very first thing that attracted me to your writings was the exuberance and sheer joy you show in your sex. There is one other writer that shows this joy but he can't capture the magic of the actual sex like you. Only you are able to show both the emotion and the physical. You are able to show the physical by the vivid and sharp details you give of these women first fucking and then coming with orgasms that are divine. I guess other writers just assume their readers will surmise these type of orgasms. They are so wrong. The writer must give the reader the details necessary for the reader to live them with the characters.

They come down from the high and Charise is just so full of wonder over the divine sex she experiences with Laura. In her innocent ways, this must seem like the most rare of magic. Laura reflects on her innocence and worries about her own perceived depravity. Fortunately, Charise is wise. She totally loves what Laura is able to give her. She cherishes this like I would if Laura was my teacher. It is so nice that Jane and Kendra are away and they can fuck in peace. I am so thankful that Laura has her own place now where she and her angels can scream out their orgasms in peace and privacy. I love how they have a whole afternoon to fuck in slow languid sex. I love fucking like this. Fucking and then resting and then fucking some more. Charise is so lucky to have Laura in her life.

Another thing I like about your writings is you don't use every possible seed you plant. Charise discovered Laura's rope and yet they don't go down that road. Other writers <<always>> use something like this if they bring it up. You show how life is fluid and not everything happens. You then have Laura wanting to continue and give Charise another orgasm but Charise's poor pussy is completely worn out. I love having that problem. Other writer's just keep going in perfect harmony. They both keep going and run out of gas at the same time. Only you show that sometimes one just runs out of gas before the other.

You then touch on Charise's pregnancy and what to do about it. I know that no other writer would come even near that one. You then have Charise beaming because Laura digs her so much and sees her for the angel she is. I hate that white people and even light skinned black people tease her about her dark skin. I love women who are dark in color. It is a complete turn on. That is truly touching how Laura weeps a little for Charise when she drops her off because she so young and forlorn. That would really tug at my heartstrings too. I would so want to help her in anyway I could.

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Chapter 226:

This chapter starts with Laura reminiscing about her exhilarating time with Charise. I always chuckle when she worries about taking advantage of Charise when in reality Charise generally leads the sexual events. I think I would have felt some doubt and confusion on how to help my darling Inky with her problem. Unfortunately, it is her problem and she must live with the consequences. Geez, I wish women would always protect themselves from pregnancy since most of the time the fucking guy won't (though the fear aids has increased some condom use I'm sure). Now Kendra appears like clock work at five o'clock pounding on Laura's door and immediately starts to give Laura the riot act. I always chuckle when Laura is getting the treatment from one of her women. I also chuckled when Laura despite the tongue lashing (not that kind) still finds Kendra sexually irresistible.

Though I love Laura, I still have to chuckle the way Kendra gives her the business. Though I do find it funny, I always hated Kendra a little for always giving Laura such a hard time. I guess I can understand it. She thinks she is being society's watchdog, but still, I hated her interfering with Laura's life. I will have to admit though, that this arguing produced the heat for excited and animalistic fucking which always, always turns me on. So, I guess it is a fair trade off. I will miss Kendra's rough love making.

I love the way you describe Kendra's dress while she is outside Laura's door giving her the business. Again, you are the only author who is willing to actually describe her women's attire. The attire Kendra is wearing is very hot [It had stopped raining, and she now carried her raincoat over her arm. Her red-gold hair was startling, and her amazingly hard, curvaceous body was highlighted by a tight, pale violet knit dress with a plunging neckline.] This visual alone gets the blood to starting to simmer. Then you mention her wild contact lenses. I am not sure any other author uses ones attire to set the mood. It is amazing because a woman fully clothed can be one of the sexiest sights in the world. A flattering outfit that hides all that wonderful flesh in just the right ratio, just begging to be released for some sweet loving.

Finally, Laura relents and opens the door to Kendra and her berating. The closer Kendra gets to Laura the more her body affects Laura [Laura relented. She opened the door, feeling very guilty, and let Kendra come in. She tried not to look extra hard at Kendra's body, but it was difficult since the tight knit dress—indeed, the whole body itself—was especially designed to draw the eye, anyone's eye. Kendra didn't exactly want to go unnoticed.] I love the confidence Kendra has in her body. She is hot and she knows it. She has a body made by the gods to be fucked long, hard and deep.

I really loved the references to Roman debauchery. Kendra is looking for a Caligula hiding in some corner. Just love all the visuals [She looked around Laura's apartment, as if expecting it to be strewn with grapes and pillows and manacles and weird, ingenious sex toys, Laura thought, as if Laura had been screwing poor, vulnerable Charise from pillar to post in here all day, while Kendra was at work.] Now Kendra starts sniffing and smells sex in the air. Laura tries to scoff her off, but I know what Kendra is saying. I can smell pussy from a mile away. Kendra knows sex and its smell. Laura has been busted. Like Laura's comeback that she sprayed pine scent. Laura then plaintively asks Kendra why she is attacking her. I think it is just Kendra's nature to be combative.

Laura tries to defend herself when she tells Kendra that Charise is sixteen not fifteen and that she might be pregnant. Kendra shoots back about giving a gynecological checkup and counseling services were especially devastating. Kendra seems to know how to go for the jugular. She now remarks that better Charise's twat is being eaten rather than her daughters. We being the reader know the truth. Jane is not allowing herself to be denied the sweet hard loving she needs from Laura.

Kendra is effective and wears Laura down to the point of her almost crying. That I don't like, though Kendra does have a point. Laura gulps to herself that Kendra has no idea that she and Jane have been burning down her bed over the last few months. That would make me smile inside. Kendra does have a point about being a mother and worrying about your daughter and who she is fucking. It is a mother's nature to worry about your offspring. I like Laura's rejoinder about Charise being pregnant and that is what her mother should be worrying about. Kendra does have an effective reply when she remarks that most mothers probably are more worried about their child being gay than being pregnant. That is just so fucking wrong of society.

I like the observation here [Kendra shrugged. Her magnificent hard round breasts jiggled a little under the tight knit dress. She saw Laura's eyes fall to them, and a tiny smile of satisfaction curled the corners of her sensual mouth. Laura knew that people, mostly men but probably some women too, had been looking at them all day like that, giving Kendra a little tickle deep inside her pussy.] You make it so clear that Kendra is a sexual animal that is totally hot in bed. Laura finally hits the mark when she says [Now Laura smiled meaningfully. "It didn't keep Jane's mama from sleeping with one," she said pointedly. "Again and again."] Kendra can't help but be touched and smiles. This opens the floodgates to Laura's desires. She now reflects on the orgasms she has shared with Kendra in the past. Her recent tryst with Charise is washed away with fresh desire for Kendra. Laura pushes aside all the confusion that Kendra is trying to create in herself. She invites Kendra in for some wine. I love how you show these women lusting for Laura. Kendra's eyes going opaque with desire. Kendra still has the strength to resist though. Damit. She begs off because she needs to cook for Jane.

The thing I didn't like about Kendra was her capacity to be outright cruel. A cruelity that is calculated. Other women in the story can be mean, but I always get the impression they are lashing out in pain and confusion. Kendra is cool as a cucumber when she is being mean. This being a prime example ["Oh, don't look so disappointed," Kendra snapped. "You got to nuzzle that homely little sister's black snatch all day. I'll tell you, girl, that's one ugly little nigger. What happened to your taste?"] That is totally uncalled for. So many people only look for great physical beauty and miss treasures like Inky. I think Inky is beautiful. That personality of hers just makes her beam like a heavenly celestial body. So many women miss these treasures by only looking for physical perfection.

I am so happy that the sexual fires that Laura feels building for Kendra disappear with Kendra's venom against Charise. That kind of talk is a real thrill kill. Kendra being herself is throwing out barbs all the way out the door [She lowered her voice to a threat, which was nevertheless laced with amused pleasure. "And quit looking like you'd like to rip off my dress."] Laura is glad to remove her venomous presence but she probably does have that look. I would not miss any opportunity to fuck this woman into screaming orgasms. I would definitely make sure she got real acquainted with my collection of strap-ons. I would show her who really has the best "Mr. Penis". Laura now basks in the memories of sweet, sweet Inky [Refusing to sulk, she poured herself a glass of wine and gazed out the window at the great view from her apartment, remembering the experience of being coiled together in a writhing seizure of ecstasy with Inky, earlier that day. If

Kendra couldn't see the sweet, pure, luminous beauty and sexual attraction of this girl, then more the pity for her. Inky wasn't plain or ugly at all, if you knew her. She was radiant and incredibly desirable.] I am so thankful that Laura is the kind of woman who looks beyond the physical to see the inner essence. I think all her women are beautiful, but Laura is definitely not into only superficial traits. She may first be attracted to their physical gifts, but is always their personalities that really draw her in and fan the fires of her desire.

It is a little humorous when Laura now gets a phone call and it is Kendra on the phone line. She has discovered that Jane won't be home for hours and wants Laura to come up. She even gives an apology that Laura sees right though. It is not sincere. Kendra's desire for lesbian love has won the day. Kendra may be mainly bi for male cock, but what woman in their right mind could refuse Laura? I smiled when Kendra gets cross when Laura is at first demure. But Laura being my girl starts to remember all the hot fucking with Kendra and whispers she will be right up. In fact it so soft that Kendra has to ask her to repeat but Laura is already on the way. I like that desperation. I have fucked a few women I didn't really like. I always try to act nice and proper so it is easy for me to be nice to get me some dynamite pussy. Fiery woman are so often total sexual fuck animals and I could never refuse the opportunity to fuck such hot women.

I so dearly love what Laura finds when she gets to Kendra's door [But Laura was already on her way. Kendra met her at the door, still wearing the violet knit dress, and the contact lenses to match. Only now her eyes were glowing with sexual fires she had been disguising or suppressing earlier. She shut the door. Her face came very close to Laura's, so close that Laura could feel Kendra's warm breath on her cheek.] This can be such a hot dynamic when a woman who has been fighting her inner desires and gives in to her lesbian lust. They are totally desperate with fuck need. A need I am only too happy to fulfill. Kendra apologizes again, but Laura doesn't really care now. She wants to fuck desperately and is willing to overlook Kendra's venomous remarks. A good sweet fuck can cover a multitude of sins.

Kendra knows how to move things forward [Kendra backed Laura into the wall next to the door, brushing her smooth, sensual lips against Laura's other cheek. Her jutting, hard breasts now touched Laura's, though both of them were still fully clothed. Laura couldn't keep her eyes from dropping to Kendra's cleavage, and all the smooth, dark, satiny skin of her neck and throat and chest.] Laura tries to get out a defense of Inky but her carnal desires are fogging her mind. Kendra completely drives these thoughts from her mind with a sweet sensual kiss. When Laura inquires why Kendra invited her up we discover that Kendra is ready for a walk on her wild side. She prefers male cock but desires what only a woman's tongue can provide. I don't mind this so much form bi women. Just remember to come to me most of the time when you are ready for real love. I smiled when Laura informs Kendra that her tongue is working just fine.

Kendra being her self-centered self remarks that Laura is still looking at her like she wants to rip her dress off. I get the feeling that Kendra thinks everyone wants too. She is probably right. You bring out for the reader the violet contact lenses. I have seen a few people with these kinds of lenses and it really throws me for a loop. Kendra is still throwing out the barbs but now they seem more alluring, the whole dynamics have changed [Kendra grinned sarcastically. "Promises promises. I wonder if the neighbor can handle a real woman instead of a schoolgirl."] She is goading Laura to make Laura fuck her hard like she likes it. I am smiling great big here when Laura gives her a hard love bit on the earlobe. Kendra squeals in shock and demands what the hell is Laura is doing. Laura's reply only stokes Kendra's fire for rough fucking [Laura smiled. "Love bite. I thought you were woman enough to take it."] Kendra now drags Laura to her bedroom with promises of what a fucking "this woman" is about to dispense. I love how they are goading each other for some nice rough fucking.

I always like it when Laura reminisces about her past sexual experiences. She remembers the hot fucking with Kendra and being discovered by Jane and how this has led them now having exuberant sex themselves. Now Kendra takes their rough sex to a higher exciting level [Before she even knew what was happening, Kendra had grabbed her arm and twisted it behind her back, pulling it up so hard that it really hurt. "What are you doing?" Laura winced, looking over her shoulder.] I like to be roughed up in my sex whenever I am given it. To be "taken". You are the only author who is able to capture this dynamic and not degenerate the lovemaking into anything demeaning. Just good healthy rough sex. Kendra releases Laura's arm when Laura threatens and now kisses the back of Laura's neck. I know both of their pussies must be flooding with warm love nectars. I shudder a little when Kendra whispers to Laura that she wants Laura to

rough her up.

I always just so love your descriptions of foreplay [She slid her hands under Laura's sweatshirt, cupping Laura's naked breasts in both hands. Her fingers found Laura's nipples and rub-pinched them while their hungry mouths met and tongue-fucked heatedly.] Oh yeah, this is how you get your body trembling with need. Laura whispers she doesn't want to hurt Kendra. With these two women, one never knows how the dynamics will work out. Kendra brings out the animal in Laura. Laura whines to Kendra to get her dress off and Kendra once more shows that alluring self-confidence ["Mmmm, you and a hundred others," Kendra smiled. "You got first dibs, though. My pussy is thrumming hard for you, honey."] Love that "thrumming" of need. As usual Laura's kisses all the upper body of Kendra. I will never tire how you make love to the whole body. I love kissing a woman's complete body. I smiled when Kendra removes her alluring dress with a "ta-da" holding onto the dress with one hand. I can just see her posture with those hips thrown out to one side. I just loved Kendra's self-posing.

You now give the reader one of your patented word pictures that just lovingly caresses Kendra's near naked body [She wore a very abbreviated electric green thong and a deliciously low-cut champagne lace bra that made Laura's whole body quiver. Kendra was built just as well as her beautiful daughter, but her spectacular body was honed and shaped by years of working out. She was not as dark as Jane either, more like Randi, a rich milk chocolate hue, sleek and svelte, her body highlighted by curves that had been artfully accentuated by careful body-sculpture. It was not a grotesquely beautiful masterpiece of muscle, like Brandi's, but a really beautiful—and shockingly, stirringly sexy—body that surely drew attention wherever Kendra went.] I feel that these word pictures really help the reader to get so much closer to these women. You allow us to really to get to know these women's bodies as well as their personalities that make them unique. All these details make them real to the reader, and thus, when the sex does start it is like we are there in bed with these heavenly angels.

I am grinning like the Cheshire cat here when Laura tells Kendra that Jane must be jealous of her mama. What is so humorous is Laura's fear in this slip of the tongue and then the discovery that Kendra's vanity saves the day. She only sees it as a complete ode to her own beauty. Got to love a woman who is that self absorbed. Laura has made Kendra wet and that has Kendra's total attention. I love how Laura runs her fingers over that divine skin. Kendra's temperature is rising ["You take it off," Kendra murmured, raising her own hands to Laura's naked breasts, caressing them aggressively. "You the one who wants what's inside. I just want these. I want to feel them and squeeze them and kiss and suck them. I don't ever feel this way about any other woman but you, Laura. What is this magic spell you got over me?"] I am just happy that Laura has this power over this powerful woman who fucks with an animalistic intensity that makes my pussy quiver just thinking about it.

I think Laura tells a secret when she confesses that no man loves Kendra's body like she does. I think that is how all lesbians are. Only we truly worship a woman's body for the divine temple that it is. Men are just too selfish to see this. We worship the whole woman. We now have the sex getting serious [Kendra, not as dark as Jane, had nipples that were really not black but a deep, rich, dark brown caramel color that Laura could simply not resist, and she had one in her mouth in a second. Kendra gave in for a moment, throwing her head back, moaning softly as the pleasure spread through her flesh from Laura's skillful lips on her sensitive nipple. But she could not give in completely and pulled Laura, who was still wearing her jeans, down onto the bed with her.] You never miss an opportunity to further show the reader these beautiful women's bodies more completely. Then you show the raw hunger that such a body inspires in ones own flesh and what this loving produces in the one receiving love.

Kendra can't quit put Mr. Penis down but she can agree that Laura knows how to focus on her breast like no man knows how. Laura shows her some more [Laura held both hard, amazingly round globes in her hands and sucked Kendra's dark caramel brown nipples hungrily, until Kendra was twisting and whimpering with pleasure.] I can just feel my nipples being set on fire by a hungry loving bedmate. Laura soon has Kendra whimpering that yes, not even Mr. Penis can make her come Like Laura can. She is right, nothing can compare to lesbian lovemaking. Love this little visual detail ["I'm going to do more than touch it," Laura breathed, sliding her hand down Kendra's flat belly and under the edge of the flimsy green thong, ruffling the curls of Kendra's pubic hair with her fingertips.] I can just feel those curls running through my fingers. Kendra shows a propensity for reciprocity. She will not let Laura advance on her until Laura sheds her clothes so Kendra can easily have her sweet body.

I love how all the rancor has been left behind and now they are playfully rolling around on Kendra's bed trying to get Laura's clothes off. I love how the second Laura's jeans and panties are off; Kendra buries two fingers deep into Laura's clasping cunt. Kendra immediately starts to pump hard and assaults with her free hand one of Laura's little doves. She quickly sucks a nipple in deep and draws hard on it with a little teeth action. Kendra compliments Laura on being such a great teacher. I love how you detail Kendra's skill here [At the same time, she moved her fingers rapidly in and out of Laura's pussy, grazing Laura's engorged clit with her knuckle, rubbing it hard, making Laura's body jump involuntarily, making her body arch up off the bed, bringing a sharp groan of pleasure from Laura's throat. "Ungghhhh! Oh god . . . yes, oh Kendra, right there! Ungghhh! Do it again!"] You always give beautiful details and then show how this action has a wondrous affect on the recipient.

You have that communication I so love with Kendra whispering to Laura if she is enjoying it and then promising a big shattering orgasm. I like you showing the varying technique one can use to make your lover squirm [Kendra flirted and teased Laura flagrantly. She moved her lips and hand to Laura's other breast, tormenting it equally, bringing Laura even closer as her hand continued to massage Laura's tingling, pulsating pussy, though now she kept her knuckle away from Laura's sensitive clit, saving that caress for the ultimate moment. As she licked and sucked Laura's excited nipple, she gazed up into Laura's eyes.] I love to have my lover flirt while pleasuring me and then making that deep eye contact. I can just feel the electricity flowing between us in moments like this. More of that beautiful communication when Kendra asks how Laura wants to come, now or later and Laura tells her ["Either way . . . I'm going to come," Laura gasped, writhing, almost unable to speak, watching her stiff, saliva-wet nipple disappear into Kendra's sensual mouth.] Hot visual which I always hunger for.

With this next paragraph of breast worship you show both the technique and affect this is having. I am now often shocked by how other authors usually just say the woman sucked the breast or some other basic way and say the other woman basically got excited. They never give the details that you do that truly make it exciting to read. [She felt her breast fill with heat and her nipple ache and throb wildly as Kendra sucked it hard, digging her teeth into the edge of Laura's areola, making Laura caw and whimper and move her hips in quick, involuntary motions, urgently seeking release. She was shocked over how quickly she had arrived at this point, after a dozen orgasms earlier in the day with Charise. But now she was hurtling toward another sharp convulsion, her body seething and roiling inside with hot pounding blood and fuck-need, and she wanted Kendra to fuck her in the worst way, fuck her hard, hard.] This is what breast worship is all about. You show the heat and the beautiful feelings that having your tits consumed before your very eyes does.

Laura begs for release and Kendra can't resist saying that Laura needs her and not a teenager to make her get off. Little does Kendra know that Charise has pummeled Laura's body with sweet tormenting bliss. Laura now calls Kendra a bitch and tells her to make her come. Kendra smiles and giggles. I think she likes nasty talk like I do. I loved to be called all the names in the book when I'm fucking. Kendra finally scoots down and [She slid down Laura's undulating body and lovingly spread Laura's pussy open with her thumbs, slipping her tongue into Laura's hot core. Laura had had some thrilling sex already with Charise throughout the day, but she was very aroused by Kendra, and this tongue-penetration, with Kendra's mouth pressed hard against her streaming pussy, was enough indeed to trigger a stupendous explosion. Kendra licked her wet slit hard and fast, tonguing and sucking Laura's engorged, throbbing clit forcefully, but Laura was already coming almost from the very first touch of her tongue tip.] Your making my belly and womb do the familiar "Laura clench". This is hot hungry lesbian sex. I love to have a woman mash her mouth to my hot streaming cunt after I have been excited by great foreplay. I know that feeling well, having my cunt exploding soon after a woman does her lamprey act on my kitty and making me come with quick shocking violence. Pumping my juices into her loving mouth.

I like the fact that you detail how an orgasm at the end of a long line orgasms has a totally different quality to it. After one's flesh has been strained by past pleasures it makes the last orgasm so intense and almost painful in nature. [Her body streamed with fire, and she groaned loudly, thrashing in the sheets of Kendra's bed and clenching as a sharp, almost excruciating orgasm—almost painful, the tail end of a great many others through the day, fierce and cutting, as Charise had described her own last one—gripped her shuddering body. "Aunngghhh! Oh! Ungghhh! Auungghhhh!" she groaned, grimacing and arching, her whole body stiff and shattered by fierce shocks of pleasure. Again recalling Charise's words as her whole body throbbed and screamed through this ferocious climax, she realized that this was the longest, most intense orgasm of all, and it seemed to be forever before the sharp spasms began to wane and release her over-stressed flesh.] Other writers only write of their women coming hard while you detail the kinds of orgasm that can sweep ones body. I can't recall any other author differentiating their orgasms at all. It is all the same boring "they came hard". Again, I find this a little strange since I know that everyone has experienced how orgasms can have their own individual personality so to speak.

Kendra her usual conceited self thinks that she alone is the cause of Laura extremely long and intense orgasm. Kendra is grinning with pride over Laura's pleasure. Women loving the pleasure they give their bedmate. I will never tire on how you make love to the whole woman and not just her mouth, breast and vagina. And when you do get to these zones you give such loving details. [It was now Laura's turn, and she began slowly, stretching out next to Kendra's wonderfully hard body and caressing every inch of her warm, firm, dark flesh, kissing her shoulders, her breasts, holding the firm round globes and kissing every inch of each one, ending with her mouth at Kendra's large, caramel-colored nipples and giving them the full treatment, teeth and all, until Kendra was whimpering and biting her lower lip, panting, her fingers clawing gently through Laura's hair to her scalp.]

Kendra's body is now humming with sexual fire and mentions that if they go downstairs that they can use the four-headed monster. Laura wants nothing to do with that. I can fully understand. Once one is in full oral mode I don't want stop. I love oral and always want my full share of cunt candy. Kendra is a fast comer like Laura and Laura decides that today she will make Kendra wait for her orgasm. Laura will draw it out and reduce Kendra to a helpless ball of need and vulnerability. That is always a fun game to play. Stringing you lover along until they are about to snap from the tension and then bringing them to a crushing orgasm with all the attendant screams of rapture. Since Laura is satiated from all her orgasms she has the calmness to prolong Kendra's pleasure. Kendra figures this all out when Laura starts by kissing and caressing Kendra's feet and calves and slowly works her way up. I totally agree with Laura's observation that men almost never do this kind of lovemaking. Kendra may love Mr. Penis, but they never give her this kind of loving. Laura then reflects on the beauty of Kendra's hard body. Nice hard muscles without the unnatural hardness and large mass. Kendra is total femininity with steel underneath.

Laura caresses Kendra's lovely lover legs [Laura kissed and caressed her shapely calves, lingering especially with her lips in the deep smooth hollows under Kendra's knees, very sensitive to her kiss. Kendra, very aroused, giggled nervously, her legs flexing instinctively, as Laura explored them painstakingly.] Laura slowly moves up and Kendra naturally thinks that Laura is going to dive into her fiery swollen muff, but Laura only [She paused only briefly at Kendra's puckered, swollen pussy, flicking the glossy wet labia with the tip of her tongue, even letting it dart into Kendra's clit, bringing a sharp intake of breath from Kendra, who almost jumped out of her skin with pleasure.] I love doing things like this when I am in tease mode. Other authors say their characters tease their lovers but they never really give the details that lets the reader smile with the teasing and enjoy the little hot detours to make you lover jump with bolts of unexpected pleasure before you head back to teasing.

Kendra is now telling Laura that she needs to be given satisfaction but Laura tells that she is just going to have to wait. Laura now reaches Kendra's lower belly and marvels over how taunt it is. There is no evidence of childbirth. A combination of good genes and hard work. She moves up to abs that are hard as steel and nicely defined and yet still feminine. Perfection itself, not overdeveloped like Brandi's. Still, both are made for cunt rubbing, especially Brandi's. Laura now does something I like to do [Laura rubbed her cheek against the hard muscles, kissing the smooth ridges and running her fingertip along the delicious edge made on both sides by Kendra's ribcage.] My cheek is sensitive so I feel like I can feel each individual hair on a woman's body with them. I just love running my cheek along long expanses of a woman's body. Now Laura kisses Kendra's belly everywhere, something I like, especially when it causes a woman to breath harder and I can just feel that when I kiss their bellowing tummy.

Laura slowly increases the heat by starting to gently stroke Kendra's excited pussy, stroking the lips but not penetrating or working the clit. Laura continues to kiss Kendra's lovely belly. Laura slowly moves up Kendra's hard torso and moves to get a little more breast loving in [This time Laura sucked and tormented Kendra's delicious large nipples harder, more aggressively than before, knowing from experience how it aroused Kendra. She held both of Kendra's breasts in her hands and squeezed and sucked them both sharply, digging her teeth into the areolas hard enough to make Kendra whinny softly and scrabble her fingers again in Laura's hair, squirming frantically, her whole body writhing and undulating helplessly now. Laura knew her purpose was being accomplished.] I love the contrast that Laura is setting up her. She is gentle to Kendra's quim while she aggressively attacks her breast. I know this contrast must be making the nerves in Kendra's body fire off with sexual fire.

Of course this now has Kendra gasping out her pleasure. Now Laura starts loving the whole woman again that I so adore in Laura [She buried her face between the beautiful firm mounds, pinching and twisting Kendra's stiff wet nipples, then moving her mouth up to Kendra's neck, to her ear, whispering hot obscenities to her.] Now you have Laura talking dirty to Kendra. This is a big turn on for me, both giving and receiving. I love being called a slut and told what my woman is going to do to me. Me, I love saying fuck and calling myself a whore and my lover a slut and describing to them how I'm going to fuck them to oblivion. I have the proverbial potty mouth sometimes. I love it when Laura tells her women how she going to fuck them and all they can do is gasp back "PLEASE" fuck them just like Laura describe. I never tire of all the communication in your stories.

I like how you just continue this teasing on and on. Other authors will say they teased their lover and that means they are not licking their pussy right away. You on the other hand have honest teasing. That prolonging of gentle foreplay that leaves one nearly dying with need. Other authors are so focused on the two main erogenous zones to the exclusion of all else but you encompass a woman's complete body [She turned the writhing Kendra onto her side and slipped behind her, caressing and kissing her naked back, rubbing it, massaging it, biting Kendra's shoulder muscles and her shoulder blades, running her hands up along the front of Kendra's body and grabbing her breasts, squeezing them roughly. After a minute of this she descended, dropping to Kendra's ass, a beautiful ass though not in the elevated class of her own daughter's, Jane's, ass, which was one of the rarest of all, but still a lovely, smooth, round, hard ass, so hard that it was even difficult to get a chunk of hard ass flesh between your teeth, though Laura managed.] I really marvel at how other authors just have this tunnel vision on tits and pussy (though I certainly understand their allure).

Another thing I love about your sex is how your lovers are so in tune with their bedmate. Laura can sense that Kendra is going to pop before she is ready and eases off on her love attack. Instead of biting Kendra's ass she gently licks it and slowly turns Kendra over. Kendra's wants to be loved rape with some nice deep penetration but Laura must have some nice tender cunt meat first. My eyes nearly popped out when Laura turned Kendra over to find [All her caresses up to now had aroused Kendra so thoroughly that her pussy, wet before, was now a mess of shiny juices and inflamed, glistening tissue, a hot honey pit of love, fiery red between buttery black cuntlips all swollen and open like a receptive blossom. Laura knew she had to be very careful because she had never seen Kendra so frantic for a climax, keening and whimpering and churning her hips frantically.] I will never tire of the unique and alluring ways you create to describe a woman's love swollen passion flower, all ripe for the consuming.

Now we get to wholesome pussy devouring. I have sat her and thought for a few minutes and I can think of only a few stories where the author gives any rich visual details. Your writings are chock full of them, making my pussy all wet and swollen itself [Carefully, she began to lick the outer edges of Kendra's pussy, running the tip of her clever tongue up and down the slick, glossy labia, burrowing it into the creases, circling the engorged nub of Kendra's clit at the top. This treatment seemed to drive Kendra almost completely insane with fuck-hunger, and her desperate mewling and whimpering grew even more pronounced. She now pinched and twisted her own erect nipples with her fingers, gasping and pumping her hips wildly in the air, pushing her streaming, inflamed vagina up into Laura's mouth, wanting a rougher contact, dying to come.] I love how all this loving lapping reduces Kendra to calling Laura a "bitch" and for Laura to finish her off. I love it when I can reduce a woman into this need. When she loses her reserve and control and talks dirty and pumps her cunt wildly into my hungry mouth, begging me to finish her with a mind-blowing orgasm. I always get a little jolt when I see those pumping hips in your writings. I so love having a wet love swollen cunt humped into my longing, loving mouth. Plus, I never tire of your women pulling their own nipples in a desperate need to increase their pleasure or as in this case trying to push themselves over the edge into sweet orgasmic bliss.

I like this next part because you have Laura being totally in tune with Kendra's overwrought body. Laura determines she can give Kendra's clit several loving hard strokes of her tongue. Kendra really goes nuts and Laura picks up on those little micro tremors in Kendra's pelvis that signals her orgasm is fast approaching. Laura quickly gives her a little love nip on the hip to distract which causes the hoped for cursing and name calling. You know you are doing it right when you get that response. I like the observation that Laura makes [Again Laura was reminded that this woman was certainly the strongest, most athletic woman, except for Brandi Pearson, that she had ever been to bed with. Kendra was helpless with sexual need, but she wasn't weak or passive, and her powerful, muscular body was coiled and surging and tensile with repressed strength.] I always loved this about Kendra, the great power within her body that always produced such deep animalistic fucking and the attendant orgasms. She has the strength to love you hard and deep.

Laura chuckles at her potty mouth and decides to try and take Kendra through another round of being taken to the edge. I love how you remember to use the spoken word to help in one's devilish plan of teasing ["Oh honey, you have the loveliest wet pussy, and I'm so hungry for it," she murmured teasingly to the writhing, groaning Kendra, knowing how these words aroused her even further. "I'm going to give you everything you want . . . everything."] Of course this gets Kendra to keening her need for relief. In a really cool twist you have Kendra realizing that Laura is taking her for another cycle and decides to help Laura along, knowing the orgasm will be worth it. This is a Totally HOT Fucking visual [She slid both hands down to her crotch, into the crease between her thigh and her inflamed pussy on both sides, and pulled the swollen flesh apart for Laura's tongue, knowing that the end of this could only be sublimely powerful.] Wow!!!!!

This next part is simply a masterpiece of rapturous divine mind blowing sex. You are the only author who knows how to build up to something like this next part. You have used beautiful details but almost as important, setup an atmosphere of love and teasing that then allows you to go for the coup de grace and finish Kendra off with an orgasm that most be ripping apart that wonderful hard body of hers. I am simply stunned and must bow down on how you develop and then deliver such a magical moment as this [She knew she couldn't hold out any longer. Kendra was reduced to a twitching, mewling, quivering mass of need, her gorgeous naked body clenching and straining and arching in the fruitless attempt to climax, the final miracle that Laura was withholding from her, fiendishly bringing her close only to refuse her the final blessing. Now Laura gave in. Without warning, she slid two fingers up into the squinchy wet warm channel of Kendra's tight vagina and began to fuck her with them. At nearly the same moment, she began to attack Kendra's flaring, distended clit with her tongue and lips. She tongue-lashed and lip-pinched the hard little bulb, raping Kendra's flooding pussy with her jabbing fingers, and in only seconds Kendra started coming, groaning loudly, her muscular body, shiny with a thin film of sweat, shaking and straining. "AUUNNGGHHHH! OHHNNGGG! UNGH!" Kendra grunted, her body now dissolving into long, undulating waves as the sharp spasms of a shattering orgasm wrenched her.] Other authors only say they sucked the woman's pussy hard where you actually tell us exactly what Laura is doing to Kendra's channel and clit. Plus, you have all caps in your screams of rapture thus telling the reader (since you don't over use them) that this is truly a wonders to behold orgasm.

Now Laura goes for more gold. She gives Kendra that needed moment to let her body come off that highest of plateau. I have found you need to give just that little pause else you might wear her pussy out too quick. I need just that few moments to recover; too much direct stimulation while still trying to come down from an orgasm can really wear my pussy out fast. Laura know turns her palm up and starts to explore Kendra's upper channel to see if she has that most magical of nerve bundles (I can't remember if Laura has ever found it in the past). I love how Laura finally adds clit sucks to prolong the pleasure as much as possible [And then she began to come again, this time so violently that Laura wondered how they were both able to stay on the bed and not roll off onto the floor. Kendra was strong. Her shuddering body rose off the mattress, surging and flexing, a beautiful sight to Laura, her incredibly firm and round breasts moving but not jiggling, swirling instead in tight circles as her body shook, her dark nipples swollen and gleaming. Laura wanted to watch her as much as fuck her, but she wanted to fuck her more, and she continued probing, sucking Kendra's clit too, bringing on another climax, and then another one.] I will never tire of how you describe a woman's body flexing and

jerking off the mattress in shattering waves of orgasmic bliss. Plus, you are the only author who shows a woman's breast riding around on her chest as she trashes around. I love how you give the detail of blood flowing into a woman's tits during orgasm, swilling her sweet flesh and nipples. I love seeing that blush bloom on their upper chest if the skin color permits and the sweat that often blossoms.

Laura finally lets Kendra come down when she senses she can't draw any more pleasure out of Kendra's straining flesh. They then enfold themselves in each other's arms and legs and coo to each other in love and bliss. I like Kendra calling Laura a hurricane. That is cute and made me smile. It is nice to see Laura's modesty when she is demure over Kendra's praise of her being better than Mr. Penis. I mean like duh, of course she is. They then fall asleep in each other's arms. I should have seen the next part coming but didn't. Jane walks right up to the edge of the bed before she awakens her mother and Laura. I definitely understand Kendra nearly jumping out of her skin when she realizes they have been discovered in bed yet again.

Though sometimes Jane can be a little trifling with her almost insane jealousy, she is just so damn cute with ["Hi, Mama," Jane smirked. Then her eyes shifted to Laura, first to Laura's face, then down to her naked breasts. "Hiiiii, Laura," she drawled sassily, smirking even more.] And then this line [Looks like you two been having an orghee," Jane said. "Can't leave you alone for a minute."] I think I would be screaming at my daughter like Kendra is here if she was being this sassy when she had me this compromised. Laura knows it is time to get dressed and leave. I like how she goes to Kendra and tells her to not let this intrusion ruin the great sex they just shared. I smiled when Kendra told her she did well with a big fat happy smile on her face. Cute ending with Jane waiting by the door with a big smirk Loved the parting line [Laura gave her a knowing little smile. "It's or-gee, Jane," she whispered back. "Remember? Or-gee. Like in g-spot."] That is almost an instant classic.

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Chapter 227:

It was a surprise to see Cecilia appearing like this. I can see she that she getting close to the magic date. I like how you describe her as looking so angelic and happy. Most pregnant women do seem to have that glow. It was humorous to read Laura whining about all her 'darlings' getting pregnant on her. I can sympathize with her. She doesn't want any of her women taken away from her for any reason.

I grinned when Laura freaked and opened the door because of 'appearances' only to have Cecilia close it again, then chastising her. People won't consider sex with Cecilia so obliviously pregnant. I then chuckled at the use of 'ubiquitous' and Cecilia getting it from a crossword puzzle.

I really like the idea of a married pregnant woman coming to Laura in her office and showing her milk swollen breast to Laura to tempt her and then sharing a sweet emotional kiss. I like a married woman desiring and waiting for passionate lesbian sex. It was funny how Laura jumped the gun. Cecilia is saying that she will have the child in a few weeks and Laura is ready to jump her then and their. Cecilia has to tell her to wait a minute girl, she will need some time to heal. That was very humorous.

Though out the whole time, we get to see Cecilia being her usual sweet self. She is one of Laura's sweeter lovers. She doesn't have the fire or dangerous crazy jealous streak of a Deshona or Jane. It is nice to have this contrast between sweet and nice and fire and angst. Cecilia just has that sweetness that puts one at ease. I really dig her.

Now Tamara appears. I like how their story starts with Laura being friendly and asking to help Tamara in her hour of need. Sex was not a part of her initial plans. I know Laura wants her, as do I, but she is just tying to help a person she knows and likes. Tamara is probably totally innocent at this stage. She is the type that a simple request to forget it is enough to bury her true feelings and desires. Geez, I wish 'straight' women would always listen to their body's and their soul's instead of what society says.

I like seeing Laura being the 'knight in white armor' here. And then she is chivalrous and opens the car door for Tamara. I like the subtle cut that Laura can't remember Tamara's boyfriend's name. I wonder if she has dropped the loser by now. Any man that takes a woman away from Laura is a loser in my book.

I always love when Laura can't stop herself from devouring her women with her eyes and noticing each little detail of their beauty. I then like the deep hunger it sparks in Laura and her hot pussy. Now they get to Tamara's apartment and Tamara continues to act as if there is no history between them. I've had that happen a few times over the years. I find it very frustrating. After making a woman scream in ecstasy they then let society fuck up their minds. I'm glad Laura gets her back in bed and fucks her brains out.

I see this is where Shayla is introduced. I really like her gentle way. She seems almost angelic. I hope Laura gets to fuck her again. I love how Shayla so easily accepts Laura and lesbian sex. What is cool about how Shayla is introduced, she is only a pretty woman in a photo. Nothing more. All you have done is introduce her. As yet, Laura has developed no desire for her. At this point, we have to wait to see if anything develops from this casual introduction.

Now Laura just stares at Tamara. She is not going to let her off the hook easily. Laura doesn't make it easy for Tamara to pretend like nothing has happened. Tamara deserves to squirm. I love seeing Tamara with her fidgeting fingers. Her inner desires are showing, betraying her calm exterior she is trying to project. I like the point counter point ["Thanks for helping with the boxes," Tamara said, a signal for Laura to leave. "Oh . . . no trouble. Would you like to go out and . . . have dinner or something?"] It is like the Tom Petty song 'Won't Back Down'.

I hate society making women think they are fat when their weight is just fine. This made me feel sorry for Tamara. The body of a goddess and she can't enjoy it. Tamara is smart to want to keep her shape, but this is ridiculous.

Then Laura uses one of her patented lies to Tamara (I dreamed about you). I don't feel bad about this at all. The way I look at it, Tamara has been lying to Laura and Herself since she started denying the wonderful night of sex and debauchery in the hotel room. Laura must make Tamara see the truth of the situation. Tamara wants Hot Lesbian Sex. Fortunately, Tamara is vain enough to fall under the lie's spell. She loves being the center of anyone's attention.

Again Tamara betrays herself, if she didn't want anything to happen she would not be flirting with her eyes. She wouldn't be giving Laura subtle hope and new avenues to attack her defenses. She wants to be conquered and taken into Laura's loving arms and made sweet love to. The way only a woman truly can, having your spirit made love to as well your body. If a person truly doesn't want to be seduced, they won't be. The person allows nothing to get started. Tamara instead does the exact opposite. She flirts and lets her weak arguments be easily overcome. Smart girl.

I like how Laura uses the ploy of leaving and stopping the seduction. I have had quite a bit of success using this tactic myself. You just have to know when to use it. Laura only uses it after she sees the first major cracks appearing. Again, if Tamara didn't really want a seduction to occur, she would have allowed Laura to leave. End of chapter, of course we all know she wants what only Laura can give her.

I love this description of Tamara's further weakening defenses [Laura turned back. Tamara was suddenly very pliant, receptive, her eyes throbbing, her smile ambiguous but not hostile. Laura lifted one forefinger and ran it tenderly over the girl's full lips, touching them sensually and skillfully, her eyes never leaving Tamara's.] Tamara lets Laura caress her. Tamara is subtly letting Laura seduce her. Humm, maybe that is part of Tamara's game. She enjoys the seduction as much as Laura.

I really loved the warm sweet emotional kiss. I love the details.[ Laura brought her lips close enough to brush Tamara's, still looking deeply into her eyes. She brushed their lips together sensually, then pushed hers forward, moving her mouth slowly into the curves of Tamara's. They kissed without touching, just letting their mouths press and curve together and communicate the deep, throbbing emotions and sexual stirrings they were both feeling.] Sometimes, you need to start slow to allow the heat to build. Then you show the true hunger in your kisses. Usually by then, they are the ones raping your mouth.

[It seemed like a long time before either opened her mouth, but then they both slowly did it at once, and their kiss became more complex, more emotionally moving, wetter and warmer. Laura was very reluctant to invade Tamara's mouth with her tongue, feeling that it was too aggressive for the still-skittish and indecisive girl. Instead, she touched Tamara's brilliantly white teeth with the tip of her tongue, then slipped it up under Tamara's upper lip, running it back and forth in the warm crease.] I dearly love it when you give these warm details of kissing. Geez, I love how it starts with just their mouths touching and then Laura caresses Tamara's face and then kisses her neck without permission, even though she asks for it first. Then some sweet ear worship.

Finally, the home run, needless to say I really really love it [Laura embraced her while she was shivering. Now they kissed ravenously, Tamara returning everything equally, her arms around Laura, her mouth aggressive, her fingers digging into Laura's flesh through her blouse. As they devoured each other, Laura's hands dropped to Tamara's ass, squeezing the firm, resilient cheeks through the thin summery dress. Oh god, I want this girl, I want to rape her! she realized.]

I liked the final verbal reassurances and seductions that Laura showered on Tamara to breakdown the last of her defenses. A little more thrust and parry. I love Tamara admitting to herself ["You want to come, don't you?" Laura coaxed her. "Remember when you came in my arms? In the bed at the hotel? When you came all those times? Wasn't it good?" "Oh god . . . yes! I never came like that before." She furrowed her brow slightly, her eyes worried. "Or since, either."] I think I would give in with that realization myself.

Had to chuckle [seeing Tamara in the flimsy nightie Laura had given her would give a blob of protoplasm a woody,].

You may find this crazy but I like little things like this [Laura smiled, looking down at the narrow bed. Small, but it will do, she thought. "Turn around," she murmured, turning Tamara by gentle hand pressure on her shoulder.] It just seems so real and loving. I love your physical seduction and back worship. I have always loved how Laura just worships a woman's skin as it becomes available to her. I have come to love how she kisses and caresses a woman's back.

I remember the last Tamara chapter that Laura had to do all the work. It was a real pleasure to watch Tamara actively participating this time in taking off Laura's clothes and being so obviously excited by it. I always love when you say that the nectars are flowing in Laura's pussy.

I'm telling you, I love all this soul kissing and kissing of each other's upper body. I simply adore all this kissing. It is simply hot. They don't call it upper persuasion for lower invasion for nothing. This is what girl – girl love is all about ["I want to eat you alive," she breathed, giving voice to her earlier silent thought, kissing Tamara's lovely neck again, her bare shoulders, her collarbone, her smooth chest, cradling one perfect breast in her palm and running her tongue all over one of Tamara's beautiful large nipples.] Sweet foreplay that ignites the fire for the melt down. I love how you describe the warm spittle on a woman's breast after her lover has bathed and lathe it with her mouth. And always the way your women throat suck the nipples and tit flesh.

I love how Tamara started out tentative with her suckling of Laura's breast but as her confidence in her ability to please increases so does her adore and she then hungrily starts to devour Laura's breast. I love how her innate skill quickly reveals itself [Laura planted a palm on each side of Tamara's head and threw her own head back, pushing her breasts down into Tamara's face, feeling the insides of her pussy melt and run with warm nectars as Tamara sucked her nipples thirstily. She moaned softly, exulting in the hot, throbbing pleasure of this moment. "Ohhhnnnn honey . . . oh honey yessss!" she gasped, biting her lower lip as Tamara's unrelenting lips tugged and pinched and sucked hard at her sensitive nipples.] I believe that women instinctively know how to please each other, if they will just listen to their bodies. Oh yeah, that was simply fucking HOT. Only you give the details necessary to make breast worship the hot experience it is. Other authors only give a sentence or two about making love to a woman's breast. That is not even close to the time necessary. Again, you alone give us what we need.

Now time for some nice trib. I love how you describe Tamara's cunt. You always lovingly describe these women's pussies. Your descriptions make each unique and makes me want to bury my face in each and every one. With your trib fucking, I love how you talk about the positioning necessary and then once in position you start the rhythm. Others talk about just ramming their cunts together. They make it sound so coarse and rough. Only you make it the sweetly emotional event it is. I love how Tamara almost swoons immediately with first contact.

Another thing you show is your women actually making eye contact and sharing their bliss with each other [One of the things Laura loved about pussy-to-pussy fucking was the opportunity it gave her to hold the eyes of her lover, to look into her eyes, to enjoy the intense feelings passing over her face, while they both swirled their hips relentlessly, going for the final bell.] This can be almost as hot as the actual sex. Again I love how you describe your women keeping their pussies together after the orgasm to share the after shocks.

Wow, this is really nice detail ["Mmmm, you like this?" Laura murmured, taking one plum-colored nipple between her teeth, tugging the hard aureole, at the same time flicking the protruding center nub with the tip of her tongue, flicking it hard and fast.] Oh yeah. I never know what visual detail you are going to give me.

I love it when Laura decides to unleash the tornado of lust on her women. I hope that when Tamara comes back that she learns not be so afraid of Laura's lust. That she learns to revel in it. I did feel Laura's frustration when I was reading these chapters during my first read through and these women were running away.

I really love how you describe pussies ["Oh honey, you have such a beautiful pussy," Laura purred, enchanted by the fleshy dark lips of Tamara's love chute, which were a little larger and thicker than most, parting to reveal the juicy slit that was aching to receive her tongue.] Needless to say, I loved Tamara's earth shattering orgasms. I love it dearly when you describe a woman being torn apart with pleasure. I love the little details [She came in sharp, wrenching shocks, her body flipping and surging off the bed, her legs scissoring, her pelvis churning in wild, spastic gyrations.] It is these details of the orgasm itself that add so much. As I have said, other writers just say she came hard with some hip thrusting. After two or three times of that, it gets completely boring.

I loved how Laura attacked the berry of Tamara's clit while gripping her ass check with her free hand, while using her other hand to probe the depths of Tamara's spasming cunt. Got a kick out of Laura holding on for dear life as Tamara's pelvis bucks and jerks all over the place with her all caps orgasm shrieks of ecstasy. You actually make me believe these women are dying of rapture. Many times I feel my belly clinching deep down in my womb in sympathetic shocks.

I was glad that Laura gave her a g-spot orgasm. I "almost" felt sorry for Tamara with the strength of this new orgasm ["Aiighhhiieee!" Tamara screamed, suddenly realizing that a horrific orgasm, sharper even than the last one, was about to devour her quivering flesh. "Unhh! Oh . . . oh god oh god! Unngghhhiiiieeee!"] Hopefully, she will come to willingly give herself to this. That Tamara will come to love this sex without all this guilt. Listening to her desires and not what society tells her she should want. If not completely, at least not enough to do something stupid like running off to Europe. I loved her dying of pleasure [Instead, her body seemed to stiffen, then shudder through long, rolling assaults of hot bliss, then relax, then stiffen again and resume the whole sequence, her face transfixed by a sublime trance of burning rapture.] As I have said before, no other writer is in the same universe as you.

I can understand Tamara confusing great sex with love in this situation. It is like having a whole new world opened for her. Laura did the only thing you can do in this situation. Lie, to do anything else in this situation would have been cruel.

I liked the sweet after glow and then Tamara so willing giving head now that she is in "love" with Laura. Happy that Laura showed Tamara it is all right to kiss with each other's love juices all over and inside your mouth.

Nice ending with Tamara gladly agreeing to an all night orgy of lesbian sex. I was sadden to see her run away to Europe soon after this chapter. I am oh so happy to know she will soon be back. That will be a devastating fuck fest I do believe.

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Chapter 229:

I see that this chapter starts with Tamara. Everything seems sunny and pleasant. After their last night of passionate sex, Tamara has become a sex kitten. She seems anxious to be in Laura's presence now. She makes bedroom eyes with Laura now in public. Now Laura has to worry about Tamara being too forward with her overtures. Sort of like the best of times, the worst of times. It is amazing what love will do to a person. It is amusing to see Tamara's jealousy over Randi. I can only guess she feels threatened by her beauty. I can't remember from previous chapters any run ins between the two. I like how she almost preens with happiness when she discovers that Laura is not having anything to do with Randi. Tamara is so childlike and innocent. Probably makes it easier for that football cad to control her. Hopefully, she will wise up.

I always love it when Laura feels a pleasant pulsing deep in her pussy when she is around one of her angels. I like Tamara's summery dresses that cling to her body. One thing Tamara does know how to do is show off her assets.

Then we get another dose of pain from Randi and Deshona. Both trying to make Laura pay for perceived past indiscretions. They know the way to really hurt Laura is to sleep with a person Laura considers a rival (Rhonda & Charles). I know that has to hurt her. I am always glad when one of her angels appear to take away the pain with some sweet fucking. I can really sympathize with Laura in the board meeting having to watch Randi flirt with Rhonda and then having Deshona being cold and aloof and then informing Laura she is having dinner with her ex-husband (though she refers to him as husband). Deshona can be real cold and frosty when she wants to be. I would be a little afraid of her when she is like this. (Liked the mental picture of Deshona hobbling around on those crutches acting like a bitch.)

I really feel for Laura when she tries to get Deshona to thaw and is so cruelly rebuffed. ["Can we have dinner tonight? God, I miss you so much." Now her eye message changed from 'I know what a slut you are' to 'Take pity on me and let me make love to you, I can't stand it without you'. Deshona, who was no slouch, clearly had received both messages. She looked deeply into Laura's eyes. "I'm sorry, I'm meeting my husband for dinner."] I can just feel the pain and desire. I really do get into this story and feel the various characters feelings. I love getting into stories I really love and trying to feel what the characters are feeling and understanding their thought processes and why they do what they do.

Then Randi is spiteful in the bathroom mentioning Rhonda and alluding to their fucking. Again, though, you show some nuance here. Though Randi is spiteful, she shows some compassion [her manner contradictorily soft and sympathetic.] Randi feels the need to strike back at Laura, but her feelings for Laura still show through. Then she starts insulting Tamara some. Though all these emotions and events are negative, they are necessary to make these women complete. They have feelings and when hurt they lash out. This makes them human with strengths as well as weaknesses. Laura is getting beat down and needs some loving in a bad way.

I sometimes wonder if other authors are afraid to develop their characters completely. If you keep them simple and cardboard you only focus on the sweet and good. You go further and show that these women are real. They are basically sweet and good but the do have faults. Like you and me and everyone else. This makes them breath. You do this in way that doesn't demean them or show them in an unfair light. You merely show them to be dynamic and allow them to be alive with multiple traits and actions. Thank you for letting them be alive and vibrant.

Then Laura got a phone call from Marshall about Jane and her normal jealous behavior. Laura didn't show it, but she must have some fear about Jane spilling the beans so to speak. That girl is just so unpredictable. The situation is kind of humorous except that a man was involved. Guess it isn't to hard to guess to my orientation is it. Hehehe.

Then Tamara breaks the lunch date she had setup to go out with Stewart. Grrrrrrrr!!! I just want to scream out "get a clue girl". Dump the loser. Any football player that has to play in Europe sucks! This is the capper to a bad day. Then we see Laura becoming more attracted to Ada. A mere change of hairstyle is enough to start Laura's lust to building. As Laura comes to know these women more, her desire rackets up. Again, many times Laura lust is a slow growing event. Laura has come to know these women and as she does, her lust increases.

Then we have the chance meeting between Laura and Tiffany. I love the fact that Tiffany is the one who invites herself over to Laura. She initiates the events that are obviously sexual in nature. I love the fact that once these women have tasted the love that Laura has to offer, they are hooked, even if they run away from it, like Tamara. They will always hunger and long for it. I was very happy for Laura to find Tiffany. I am always happy for Laura to get some loving when the world and worse, her women are trying to beat her down.

I love how Laura descends on Tiffany immediately once inside the door. Her hurt has driven her into a lustful fit. I like the humor of Laura making a funny face and Tiffany's response to the love assault ["You one horny lady, Laura," Tiffany giggled, fending her off. "Ain't you been getting laid enough? I thought you had lots of other girlfriends all giving you their pussy every old night. Here you are clawing on me like I'm fresh meat. Away! Down girl!"] & ["Hands down," Laura admitted. "Did you say, 'Pants down'?"] I always love this joking and cute dialog between these women. Yours is the only erotica that puts a smile on my face. I really love these women.

As usual, when you describe a certain area on a woman's body you do it in loving detail [Tiffany was a tiny little thing, but she did indeed have an exceptionally beautiful ass, right up there in the 'incredible' category with Chanitra and Jane. It was high and round and hard and out-jutting, an incomparable masterpiece of two firm black moons, perfectly spherical and mouthwatering, with a delectable dimple in the flesh just above each peerless cheek.] It is so easy for me to see that you worship the female body.

I love the way that Laura slithers her tongue into Tiffany's mouth and they start talking of Laura penetrating Tiffany's asshole with her tongue. How Tiffany acts shocked but quickly agrees that she loved it. I love how Laura worships all parts of a woman's body. I love how Tiffany's ass turns Laura on and how she squeezes the ass cheeks so firmly. One thing I can never do is predict what sex acts will be performed. I never feel that you are repeating yourself because sex by its definition is repetitive. It is how one approaches the act that keeps it fresh. Needless to say, I feel you always keep things fresh and vibrant. Pooh on anyone who doesn't think so. You are a treasure because you are able to keep the sex fresh and alive.

Humm, like the subtle offer to tie Tiffany up, testing the waters so to speak. Now we wait to see if the seed that has been planted will grow. I like how Tiffany keeps talking about taking it up the 'booty' with Laura and Daemon. Makes me wonder if she is intrigued and desiring the same.

I have to agree with you. When I make love to black women, I love the skin color contrast. It is a super turn on. You once remarked that you wondered if this might bother some people. I sure hope not. These are beautiful women who are black. They should mean nothing negative or bad. I would hope the world has gotten beyond that. I hate prejudice. I know it hasn't disappear everywhere, but one can wish.

I as usual love Laura slowly taking Tiffany's shirt and bra off then attacking her tits and nipples. Only Laura and her women make love to a woman's breast like women do. With passion and hunger. I like how Laura comments about the lovely little doves hidden by Tiffany's shirt. I love this, finding a woman is more endowed than her clothes lead me to believe.

I really like this paragraph. It has simmering building heat and raw hot lust all mixed together [Together they hurriedly stripped off Laura's clothes and Tiffany's trousers. She kicked off her shoes. Laura unclasped her own bra and tossed it aside, brushing and shimmying her own naked breasts against Tiffany's, one of which was still damp from her saliva. They embraced again and kissed, now slipping their hands under each other's panties, clasping each other ass, Laura feeling her heart and blood soar as she finally dug her fingers into the springy miracle of Tiffany's round naked buns.] Always like the reference to salvia on the breast. I also like it when the women throw their clothes around in their haste to get naked.

Oh geez, my lust meter went off the scale when Tiffany tells Laura she wants to be tied up, roughed up and treated a little mean. That is a girl after my own heart, as long as she can give it back to me in spades. I love to be dominated by short women. It makes me all tingly and slutty feeling inside.

I liked the feeling out process between the two. Laura making sure about the offer. Not wanting to have any misunderstanding about what is being offered. Tiffany making it clear over and over again, 'take it'. My blood simmers just thinking about it. I love how she makes it so obviously clear ["I ain't gon' let you take it, unless you really take it!" Tiffany glowered at her, trying to goad Laura into going further. "Now, take it."] I love the detail about Tiffany's eyes going glassy just thinking about being 'taken'.

Laura ties up her wrists and then flips her over to tie her ankles to the bottom of the bed. Now tiffany really, really starts to fight big time. She wants a pussy not an ass rape. Here you are able to make it clear throughout the whole process that Tiffany wants exactly what she gets. She is 'play acting' to the max. With women I don't know well, I use a 'safe word' because in the past I have had women scream like bloody murder and fight like banshees. I stopped because I was afraid I was going to far. They would then stop in mid scream or kick and just look at me like a dope and get after me for ruining the 'mood'. Kind of humorous in retrospect. You never degrade your women. This is still lovers loving each other, just sometimes roughly.

I chuckled when Tiffany thinks she can stop things with the threat of screaming. Laura brings out the little red rubber ball. [Laura realized that she probably did mean it. In one fluid motion, she retrieved the red ball gag from the top drawer of her dresser and straddled Tiffany's waist with her thighs, slipping the ball into the girl's mouth before she knew what was happening, then fastening the small harness. "Ummgggphhh!" Tiffany grunted into the fat red ball in her mouth, her eyes filled with fury.] I chuckle because Tiffany got she wanted. Laura is taking it.

In stories where the woman is actually taken against her will, I won't start or if I realize while reading I stop. I have come to avoid stories that are designated as (MC). Love is given willing and never taken against a woman's true will and desire.

I always like it when Laura reaches underneath a woman on her stomach to pinch and twist her nipples. This is something that I have never seen another writer do. Then Laura kisses and worships Tiffany's back. Laura is always worshiping her women. You are always so positive in your portrayals of these women and their interactions.

I love how Laura just worships a woman's ass and the details that only you give. The way that Laura massages and strokes a woman's ass. The way she kneads them and then licks them. The way she will slowly work her tongue down into the crack. The way she will then pull the ass cheeks apart to fully expose and then lick the rose bud. Then the way Laura will open it up slowly by using the fingers to gently pry prod and then insert into, then finally using (or only) the tongue to start to fuck the asshole. Again only give ALL the details. Other authors rarely talk about anal sex and usually that is just straight to some dildo sex. Some will talk about a little tongue penetration but with none of the details that make it so great. I mean, how can one get excited and worked up over a single sentence or two if I'm lucky two. Other writers just don't give me the details one needs to build a mental picture.

With all this great loving, tiffany goes from "fighting" Laura to ["Ummmnnggphh!" Tiffany moaned, first holding her ass steady while Laura slowly tongue-fucked it, then beginning to swirl it in a gentle rotation back and up into Laura's face.] Her body has overcome her mind, she really wants everything that Laura is giving her.

Now Laura is ready to take it to the next level. She carefully considers what toy to use. I like the idea that she takes time to think about what to use to penetrate Tiffany's ass, to pick just the right toy to bring her pleasure and not pain. I like the visual a lot of Laura putting oil on her fingers and lubricating the double headed dildo in front of Tiffany's face. That is hot, with Tiffany in such a vulnerable position and knows what she is about to get.

Then instead of just inserting the dildo you have laura first lick her some more and then prepare the way with a lubricated finger and then [Ignoring her, Laura slipped her other finger in with the first. By now Tiffany's tight asshole was well-greased and it opened fairly easily to accommodate the extra finger. Laura fucked her with the fingers more and more rapidly, and Tiffany turned her head, pushing her face into the sheet, mewling in a low, guttural sound.] I can't even begin to tell you just how HOT this all is. It is simply perfection. Then she just inserts and rams the dildo home. Oh yeah! I love how Laura then stops for a moment to gaze at the dildo piercing Tiffany's asshole.

I like how Laura pleases as much as Tiffany's body as she can. She pumps her with the dildo, fucks her pussy with two fingers and uses the other hand to reach underneath her to twist her nipple. Laura always does everything possible for her lovers. I always love it when Laura mashes her nipples into her lover's backs and grinds them in to arouse herself. With all this loving, Tiffany quickly stops fighting and starts to pump and swirl her hips into Laura's thrusts. Now Tiffany is helping Laura to pierce her ass. Her screams (stiffled) of "rage" have giving way to animalistic moans of rising ecstasy.

It is cool how Laura pumps them into two not one orgasm that totally destroys them. I love how Laura so gets into the sex. She lets go of the dildo and really rams it home with increasing urgency. She is totally turned on by the sight of Tiffany's body moving towards orgasm. Now Tiffany achieves orgasm [Tiffany simply howled into the ball gag, her howls completely muffled and strangled by the ball in her mouth, her face grimacing as the first shock waves of a killing orgasm struck her. Her body stiffened under Laura, a clear sign that she was going to come, and then exploded into wild spasms. "Mmnngghiieeee!" she wailed, coming in fierce, repeated explosions, definitely a more powerful orgasm than she had ever had in Laura's bed before.] I love how Laura is able to make her women reach new heights of ecstasy and rapture.

I love how Laura goes for the second orgasm. To come twice, so close together really tears my pussy up and makes my womb feel like it is being turned inside out. Needless to say, I LOVE it. [And as usual, Laura could not stop there. She was so consumed by hot, urgent lust for Tiffany's small, lovely body that she continued fucking her, even though Tiffany was obviously sluggish and drugged from the after-effects of a killer orgasm herself. But the long, thick, hard tube sliding in and out of their pussies, aided by Laura's insistent gyrations, soon had them locked into a second fucking rhythm, slower, more relentless than the first.] This time Tiffany doesn't fight it and lets her body respond freely until she has second glorious crushing orgasm.

I like Tiffany's initial response when the gag is removed ["Ohhnnn!" she moaned, wincing again as Laura carefully pulled the long, hard snake out of her tight asshole. "Oh . . .shit!" She glowered at Laura over her shoulder.]

I like how Tiffany is immediately ready to reverse the situation and tie up Laura and ass fuck her with the dildo. Tiffany may have meant take her cunt, but is obviously pleased by the turn of events. I think her actions and words say she loved it ["You told me to 'take' it." Tiffany swallowed, chastened, raped, reamed, overwhelmed by it. But a thin smile began to spread across her face. "I meant take the pussy. You know I meant that."] She shows no anger and instead she smiles. Yes, I think she wanted it.

I like how Tiffany is ready to give it back and how Laura is ready to be taken ["You turn over on your stomach," she commanded, half snarling it. Laura was enjoying the role of victim. "Why don't you fuck me on my back? Then we can look at each other while you do it."] I like the way they are ready to trust each other when they surrender complete control to each other. This again shows the deep connection between Laura and her women. Laura is quickly tied up with wrists above the head and legs spread eagle (roughly I may add) pillow under the ass, totally vulnerable. Throughout this, she is getting turned on by just looking at Tiffany's body at work. Tiffany herself is [Tiffany looked absolutely hypnotized by sex, electrified by this electric moment]. I can tell more dynamite sex is about to ensue.

I thought it was cute how innocent in this Tiffany was in ass fucking. The way she hesitated and didn't want to use her finger to fuck Laura's asshole. I liked the way she got it lubricated while oiling the dildo and accidentally slipped it into Laura's asshole. Once she discovered how great it is, she immediately gets into it and fucks Laura's ass with her finger. She is learning. I really like the little detail of rotating the dildo to get it to drill into Laura's ass. That was a real nice touch.

Then you make something simple like inserting the dildo into Tiffany's cunt into something special [Tiffany was now carefully inserting the other end of the dildo into her own pussy, watching her fingers intently, watching the thick cream-colored hard tube slide up between her glossy black cuntlips, slick with fuck-nectars. Her eyes rolled up, and she threw her head back, which made her small breasts jiggle and thrust forward.] Other authors would just have said she inserted the dildo into her pussy. Wow, big deal. Then this great line [stuffing Tiffany's tight little pussy, her glossy wet black cuntlips clinging to it like a mouth] sigh.

I have always loved the way your lovers often lean over while doing dildo sex and mash themselves into their lovers. Here you have some sweet fun with Tiffany swishing her tits over Laura's mouth. Really loved the detail of Tiffany planting her hands on each side of Laura's head and then pounding Laura's ass with the dildo. I love that your lovers use their hands to stimulate the pussy and especially the clit to make the ass penetration that much more devastating.

I think this captures anal sex about perfectly [Unnghhmmnngghauunngghhh!" Laura cried out as a hot spear of ecstasy seemed to pierce her entire thrashing body at once. Fortunately, her mouth was pressed against Tiffany's chest, between her breasts, and only a tortured, half-smothered moan escaped into the room. A hot gusher of liquid fire seemed to travel from her ravished asshole to her throbbing pussy and then up through the rest of her spasming body, completely overwhelming her, leaving her gasping and whimpering into Tiffany's small breasts while Tiffany herself lay on top of her, writhing and moaning as each new shock of her orgasm wrenched her.] Love the tortured screams being stifled between Tiffany's breast. That was a cute touch.

Of course I loved the comment that Tiffany was starting to like sex more with Laura than with Daemon. That is the way it should be. Hehehe. I totally agree with Laura also feeling a little discomforted by this confession of Tiffany. Laura most always keep her freedom to service all the wonderful women. Tiffany must not get into a position to be like Shontay and making constant demands. I love this girl and her desire for rough sex, but she needs to let Laura be free to give all her women the joy they deserve.

I was happy that Laura didn't let Tiffany take the sex into the SMBD road. I love it at the level of this. I don't mind the tying up of hands and feet to be immobilized, but anything more than that, for me, is overkill. Lately, Laura has been right on the beam. Just enough rough stuff and immobilization to get the blood boiling.

I love it when your women have the slow emotional fuck to balance the almost wild out of control fucking. It is again a nice balance.

I like how the chapter ended with them doing something mundane like eating dinner together. It is a shame that at their parting in the parking lot, they can't kiss freely. Oh well, I completely understand Tiffany's thinking. Finally, I was happy to hear Tiffany confess she can't live without anal sex, as long as it is a woman administrating it.

Hope Tiffany appears again sometime in the future. She is my kind of girl.

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Chapter 230:

This chapter starts out cutely. Laura is going over in her mind all her lovers and the problems she is having with them. Some are avoiding her and some she is half way avoiding herself. I love reading of Laura having to worry about her love life. Her first concern is how Tamara is avoiding her. Laura is rightfully upset that Tamara is running away from the truth. Laura fucks her to heaven and instead of Tamara running to her arms and thanking the fates for exposing her to what true loving is: Lesbian Love. I remember how Tamara ran away from Laura after their second tryst. Instead of reveling in the truth she ran away. I remember feeling very angry with her. Running away from a great thing. I think so many straight women really, really want to give in and accept their true lesbian self but society from the beginning of time has been designed to keep women from accepting their true lesbian selves. I think Tamara epitomizes this truth. Fortunately, she has discovered the truth. I am hoping that her and Dawn are simply and plainly fucking their brains out. I am so happy for Tamara that she has discovered the sweet truth.

Now Laura has to worry about some indiscretions. Laura has fucked some of her women's men in their lives. I will have to confess this part of Laura's cycle had me a little worried when the guys started to appear with a little more regularity. I don't mind the guys every once in a while because of the hot penetrations that occur. I'm just happy it doesn't occur to often, especially now that she has discovered strap-on sex. I love reading of women being fucked up the ass because I like doing it so much. It is cute when Laura worries about her women getting all discombobulated with her inability to refuse pleasure when it presents itself. Both Tiffany and Kendra must know that anyone they introduce Laura too will want to fuck her. She is a beautiful woman who has a great aurora about her that just draws people in. Laura is so much more than just looks. Both women and men can't help but be attracted to her. I will have to admit that I will be glossing these chapters eventually. I love reading Laura being penetrated by huge poles of rock hard love. Can't blame Laura for worrying. What person doesn't want to have

their cake and eat it too? Tiffany is a fuck bunny who fortunately doesn't suspect anything.

Unfortunately for Laura the same can't be said for Kendra. She comes pounding on Laura's door. It seems that Jane is being her usual jealous self and is squealing on Laura about Marshall visiting her. I always admired and longed for Kendra because of the way she dresses. She knows that she is totally hot and makes sure her attire makes this very clear [As usual, Kendra looked ravishing. Her hard, glossy, shapely body was well-displayed in a tight pale blue sheath dress that dipped low to show off her deep cleavage.] I love confidence in women and women who flaunt their beauty. If you got it, flaunt it.

I had to chuckle when Laura tries to dissuade Kendra from her anger. First by giving the innocent act and then trying to get her inside so the neighbors won't hear her ranting in the hall. I had to chuckle and blanch a little when Kendra says in a high voice that she is a "perverted dyke". I don't hide myself but I want to be in control of when that information is given out. I would be dying there. Finally, Kendra comes inside though I wonder if Laura is doing the wise thing here. I fully understand what she is feeling when she gazes upon Kendra here [Even though Kendra was angry, apparently devoured by jealousy, Laura wanted her. Somehow the bristling energy and hot, nearly choleric fury of her anger made her wildly attractive and desirable to Laura. It made Kendra's muscular body tense and lithe and fiercely erotic, and Laura knew if they fucked now, it would be an almost deadly conflagration.] I love to be dominated by my women when they are in the mood for it. I love to be fucked hard and roughed up and I know this kind of energy and dynamic are soon to guarantee this kind of fucking I sometimes crave. This is the reason we play games with Joann when she is feeling frisky. I have a few other lovers that when I go to them I know we will be roughing it up. I'm usually the sub but sometimes they need me to be the dom. I'm happy to do it, but I prefer being dominated. Though it is fun spanking, slapping, roughing up a woman from time to time. I confess the power is such a turn on. I can't remember this chapter before I read it, but I'm hoping for some rough animalistic fucking. I am hoping that Kendra does make another showing. I think Laura needs to teach her about a woman's "Mr. Penis".

Laura true to her nature can't resist the beauty that is before her [She knew she couldn't hide her desire either, because her eyes caressed Kendra's bare, dark brown shoulders, her throat, the valley between her hard breasts, her shapely arms, her gleaming black calves.] I am like this, I am totally besotted with the beauty of women. I smiled at the comment that Kendra changes her comments from Laura will fuck anything to Laura will fuck anything "black". The heat racketing up with all this energy sizzling between them. Kendra is powerfully drawn to Laura and can't but feel it despite her anger. Laura feels it because of the powerful nature of this emotion, despite her being attacked. Kendra is like a lot of women. They are happy to share on their terms but when you want to fuck the women they introduced you to on your terms this can lead to a lot of problems. Kendra introduced Laura to Marshall and shouldn't be surprised if they have developed a desire to fuck each other. She should be encouraging it from my viewpoint. This should draw them all closer for more great three-way sex.

Now we are starting to get some music to my ears, though if I heard this from a woman really that angry at me and that strong I would be running for the hills ["I ought to slap the shit out of you, you bitch," Kendra sneered. "You goddamned lily white candy ass lesbian sex fiend!"] I loved to be talked like dirt and then roughed up before I am fucked senseless. I don't want this anywhere near all the time but it sure does spice up your life. It is just a wonderful dynamic to revel in. I love being made to feel like a tramp and a whore. It makes me wet and so very hot and horny. This is the reason we play our games with Joann. She loves for us to "fire her up" and then she gets to get all pissy and bitchy and make us pay for our indiscretions and lack of decorum. Laura in her anger goads her to lash out and Kendra does and really lands a good one to a stunned Laura. Laura then gets rocked by a second slap. Whoa. This stuff done in real anger is always so intense. It is hot but this something I want to avoid in real life. I love playing a game with seeming anger but I know to flee from the real stuff. I am a firm believer that cowards live to run away another day.

I have read other stories, or should I say I started to read other stories that have violence in them. I always stop when I get to them because it always comes across as so gratuitous. They are just having violence and rape just for the sake of having it. I hate stories like that. Stories where they are simply violated for the sake of doing it. Your stories on the other hand never come across like that to me. You always have a very valid and believable reason for the violence. The violence is generated by genuine conflict and heated emotion. Here Kendra rightly from her viewpoint feels violated by Laura for sleeping with her male lover AND her daughter. Then Laura has the gall to goad her. It is natural for a high-tempered woman to strike out like this. Then it is also natural for Laura's anger to boil over and for to lash back in self-defense. Thus, the physical blows and blood drawn fits the story. It is not gratuitous but a result of real life conflict and jealousies.

Laura finally strikes back and draws blood. Laura does what is so human nature and tries to place some of the blame on Marshall ["He helped," she croaked softly, backing away from Kendra.] Of course this doesn't mollify Kendra at all. Then it was a cool and cute dynamic of Laura seeing Kendra's blood splotching her dress and Kendra's reaction ["Oh shit . . . look what you've done to my dress, you bitch!" she snarled. "Goddamned dress cost me a hundred and twenty bucks."] I think she is almost more angry about her dress than all her other ills she is ranting about. Laura tries to be conciliatory about the dress but Kendra has other ideas when Laura approaches her [Laura had approached her, trying to be conciliatory, thinking Kendra's anger had dissipated somewhat. But she was wrong. Her eyes fiery, Kendra grabbed Laura's arm and twisted it behind her back, hard, encircling Laura's throat with her other forearm at the same time.] Feeling that pain and that strength would have be me weak kneed if I was in this situation. It would be a strong mixture of fear and arousal. If I have fucked violently with a woman in the past I would be seeing where this is going. Since I am strong myself and have a lot of martial arts training and there are few situations I can't control if I really had too. I never want to make anyone this angry for real but I love getting into the "script" so to speak and letting a woman abuse my like this.

I have a weightlifter lover Dodie who is strong with a strong dom trait. When we get together when her husband is away we sometimes get rough like this. I love feeling her power as she takes me roughly. I pretend to try and fight her off but she always overcomes me. Just like I'm dying for it. Pleading always adds to the dynamic ["Unngghh! Owww! Please . . . Kendra, please!" Laura gasped, whimpering, and yet fiercely aroused sexually at the same time. "You're really hurting me. I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you. I didn't mean to do it! Please, let me go!"] Though here, Laura is really trying to reach Kendra and get her to cool down. At first Kendra reacts by giving her another light chocking and shacking but when Laura turns her tear streaked face to Kendra [She turned her tear-stained face, looking over her shoulder at Kendra. Looking into Laura's welling eyes, Kendra suddenly released her hold on Laura's arm. With her other hand, she spun Laura's body around and grabbed her in a fierce embrace. Her blood-smeared mouth came down on Laura's, and they began kissing like crazed wild animals, more aggressively and demandingly than they had ever kissed.] I think you capture two things here. The less obvious one is that Kendra stops her attack of Laura. I

think this shows Kendra in a positive light. So many people have a mean streak in them and they just want to continue hurting people and things in their life. Kendra on the other hand has been deeply hurt and has become a little crazed but just the sight of Laura's real distress crumbles her anger. Kendra is not naturally violent or a mean person. She just went over the top for a few minutes.

The second you capture perfectly is how this rough emotional confrontation can lead to such an exciting dynamic. When you have fucked excitedly with a woman in the past, a woman with high-strung emotions, getting those emotions in an uproar can so often and fairly quickly turn sexual. All that past sharing and passion quickly comes to the surface. It is amazing how letting those emotions and physical exertion out just goes straight to your pussy. Though I have only had a few times where some real anger was involved it quickly turned to hot sex. I have never had a "Kendra situation" where the woman was just plain out angry. I would be running for the hills. True outright anger is not a turn on for me. Sometimes some jealousy comes into the mix and sometimes Joann may bring an "issue" into the sex. But that is okay because that only inspires her to some really good rough sex. With me, in this situation we are both going into it trying to goad each other, it is amazing how quickly you get into it and you really do get physical with each other. Everyone wants to get the upper hand. I love how Kendra is ramming her tongue into Laura's mouth. Too much great sex has passed between them in the past for all this passion to not turn into this channel. Kendra is a woman of passion who needs strong hard sex to truly satisfy her. Kendra really does need to embrace her bi-sexuality more fully. In her case, why not have sweet pussy and rock hard big black dick too.

Now we are getting into the wonderful rough sex. Kendra is still angry with Laura and curses even as she is trying to ram her tongue down her throat. Laura tries to get Kendra to understand the love between them but Kendra is still a little crazed ["Oh . . . why do you have this effect on me?" Kendra asked, kissing, half-biting, Laura's neck, raising both hands to Laura's breasts and squeezing them mercilessly through the tee shirt, so hard that Laura again gasped in pain.] Part of me wishes that Kendra would get a clue and realize that she has strong lesbian tendencies and Laura's influences in her life but then we would have to sacrifice these animalistic fucks and that just wouldn't do since they are inspired at this time by anger and hurt feelings. Kendra needs to keep her fiery demeanor and haughty nature to produce these wild routs of animalistic passion and physicality. If they meet again hopefully Kendra will remember the past passion and embrace it without the real anger. Laura pleads but gets a strong slap for effort. Her pussy must be flooding like mine would be. Before she can land another blow they quickly do what we women do instinctively, they go for each other's hair and start pulling and rolling around on the carpet. I know that well, I love all that sweaty exertion and panting for breath, trying to impose our wills on each other. I usually make sure to lose in the end.

It is such a fucking hot dynamic when Kendra's thigh gets between Laura's thighs and she starts a slamming of Laura's cunt. Laura being my girl only starts to get off on this. I have always loved to trib thighs but you taught me the sweet pleasure of lying back and opening my thighs and letting my lover work her thigh and then ram her hard thigh into my sopping cunt until I explode in screams of exctacy. Laura expresses her rising pleasure and need ["I want you. God, I want you to fuck me," she panted in a guttural, animalistic plea to Kendra. "Please!" "Oh Laura," Kendra's eyes rolled up. "You are one evil white bitch."] Kendra's heart can't help but melt at such an impassioned and true plead of need and love. Kendra really deep down loves Laura. I just wish she could accept that. Laura helps Kendra get her shirt off and since she is not wearing a bra, Kendra has immediate access to her lovely doves, which she immediately goes for. Kendra is almost swooning with her need for Laura ["You sure have some beauties," she said, shaking her head. "I wish I didn't want you back so much. You are such a little shit and a slut. You trying to ruin my life, girl."] Hopefully, Kendra will appear again. Maybe a little distance will make things clearer to Kendra. She needs Laura's lesbian loving to truly make her complete.

I really love this next paragraph, there is no actual sex in it, but you use this paragraph to so lovingly describe the women and their great beauty [Laura let one hand caress Kendra's thigh, the one still wedged between her legs, the one Kendra had been grinding up into her pussy. It was a marvelous thigh, glossy and hard and shapely and black, coiled muscle, lithe power, tense and alive. While Kendra lowered her mouth to Laura's breasts and began to suck her nipples thirstily, Laura ran the zipper of the blue sheath dress down Kendra's back. With the dress now open, she had only a brief moment to unfasten the clasp of Kendra's bra before the sensations Kendra's mouth aroused in her throbbing nipples overcame her.] The vast majority of other authors can't get the sex close to right and you do that and then give us these beautiful paragraphs that just caress these women and show the subtlety of great lesbian fucking. The disrobing of your partner and suddenly having your body overwhelmed with sweet sensations that your partner is producing.

You now capture the dynamic of rough sex so powerfully [Kendra pulled back momentarily. She merely glowered at Laura with her now-familiar mixture of urgent lust and barely controlled fury. She and Laura quickly removed the rest of their clothes hurriedly, then grabbed each other like two wrestlers, groping, squeezing, embracing, lying down again on the floor. It was as if they didn't trust themselves to speak but had to fuck quickly and heatedly, just to clear the air.] I love this kind of intense powerfully fucking. Kendra tries to inhale Laura's nipples with loving violence and soon Laura is begging for the thigh ["Fuck me with it . . . fuck me with it . . . unnhhhh!" she chanted to Kendra, running her fingers up and down the hard, flexing muscle of Kendra's thigh, feeling the warm juice flood her hungry pussy. "Fuck me . . . hurry!"] Kendra promises to use it well and hard.

This is a technique that I learned from you. I had never thought of opening my pussy up and using the thigh to crush down into it. It was always the traditional tribbing kind of fuck. No ramming just rocking and grinding. I am so happy I learned this way. I love that opening up of myself and having that thigh roughly rubbed into and rammed into my aching slit like here [Even though Laura's pussy was already a gaping hot-pink cauldron of burbling fuck-juice, Kendra used both thumbs to open her cuntlips even wider, exposing the slick wet inner flesh of Laura's vagina, all glistening and runny and swollen. Then she brought her thigh up into it quickly, embedding the long, sharp ridge of hard muscle along the top right in Laura's vulnerable slit. Laura nearly fainted from pleasure when she felt the smooth, sleek skin and hard strip of muscle press into her open cunt. "Anngghhh!" she groaned, eyes rolling up, back arching. "Oh god!"] That is a beautiful hot fucking detail of Kendra being the one to open Laura's slit for the fucking. Beautiful. I so love that opening of my vagina for such a loving rape. Makes me feel all vulnerable and gushy inside.

Kendra starts the loving rhythm and you show why this is such a devastating technique ["Ungh! Unghhh! Ohnnggg!" Laura groaned softly with each thrust, feeling the thick, hard, corded muscle of Kendra's thigh mash into her pussy, crushing her throbbing clit with each fierce blow.] Of course I first shared this with Joann and Maria but it is Dodie who has the thighs to really do this right. It is funny, when I first introduced this to her she was completely flummoxed. I had to really coach her and reassure her that I could take it. She has the developed muscle to really tear into your pussy with. My other women who have fucked me like this have been wonderful but Dodie has the build and power to really pulverize me with loving hard thrusts. I loved feeling my juices saturating her thigh as she pounded me to heaven. The first time I came so hard I screamed myself horse and became disoriented. Needless to say, when I regained my wits, Dodie was on her back frantically rubbing her pussy getting her juices flowing fast and smeared all over her cunt for me to thigh rape her. I loved how she grasped me with her strong fingers as I pounded her pussy to a gushing, screaming orgasm.

I love how you detail that rough can be oh so good. Gentle is nice and I love it and I wouldn't want rough all the time, but a good rough fucking just takes me to heaven with rapture [She began churning her hips, pushing her aching pussy up into each crunching thrust of Kendra's hard thigh, grunting and moaning and twisting wildly under the fierce, punishing strokes, closer and closer to a killing climax. And Laura's wild fuck-mania seemed to arouse Kendra's lust and fury even more. She started whooping insanely, her face crazed with anger and torn with sexual need too, and she flung herself down onto Laura. With both hands she scooped up one of Laura's breasts and fed Laura's nipple into her mouth, digging her teeth into it so that Laura yelped hysterically.] I just love fucking with every ounce of power in my and my lover's body. Using our power to give and receive as much pleasure as possible. How a little bit of pain can really drive one insane with pleasure. The right level of pain is such an enhancer to great sex. Just have to keep it at the right level.

Kendra pounds her thigh into Laura's gushing cunt and continues her rough assault on her nipples. I love how you as usual show that you can do several things to pleasure your lover at one time. I am so often amazed at how all almost all other authors only allow their creations to do one thing at a time. They show so little imagination. All this pounding soon delivers the goods to Laura ["Unngghmmnnggiieeee!" Laura screamed, coming in hot, clenching spasms, hammering her elbows into the carpet, writhing and groaning and coming again. "Auungghhnnmmggiieeee! Oh god! Ungghh! Unghhh!"] I always exalt in your women's cries of rapture since I am a screamer myself. I so dearly love to vocalize my pleasure. Society tries to quiet our desires to express ourselves but my answer to them is fuck off. I try to free other women from this curse. Love that detail of Laura pounding her elbows into the carpet in helpless pleasure. I love being driven insane with pleasure and losing control of my body like this. I love doing it to others. Makes my heart swell with love and pride. When I do this to my lover I know I am giving her the utmost pleasure. This is what I live for.

I love it when my lover senses I can come again and gives me what I need to achieve that blissful high immediately again [Kendra was still powerfully fucking her as if she had not even been coming, ramming her thigh up into Laura's aching, spasming pussy, bunching up Laura's breasts in both hands and mauling Laura's throbbing nipples with her mouth and teeth. A third, horribly deep and scalding, orgasm engulfed Laura, brought on by this continuing brutal attack, and she now nearly passed out in the grip of it, gasping and squeaking and gagging for breath as her body shuddered in excruciating rapture.] I love it when my lover is in tune enough with my body to do this for me. I love stringing a few orgasms back to back. It really tears my pussy apart and makes my womb explode with exctacy. Have to draw the line at several in a row or my pussy will be so raw and sensitive that I won't be able to have sex for the rest of the night.

It is an interesting dynamic how once the sweet sex has abated that Kendra's anger quickly surfaces again. Laura is able to quell it with sweet fucking but Kendra feels too wounded to not have it quickly resurface again. Kendra starts to hurl insults and glares at Laura but Laura's libido is in full control and she knows she must turn this building anger back into sexual channels [Laura winced. Clearly the anger wasn't gone. It had only been briefly in abeyance. Laura didn't know exactly why she herself could still feel this way, especially after three crushing orgasms—probably the usual hunger for Kendra's fantastic naked body—but she flung herself forward before she really knew what she was doing, almost tackling Kendra, though from a sitting position, bringing her down onto her back, with Laura on top this time.] I love Laura for being so sexual and using love to diffuse rough situations. Kendra needs lesbian loving to stoke her fires. Kendra needs to release all this foolish anger. Anger only destroys one from within. Hopefully with distance, Kendra will not have such antagonizing against Laura if they meet again. I just hope

Kendra is wise enough to let her passions produce more rough animalistic fucking. She craves it. Hopefully, she will know how to reach down into herself to produce the right dynamics to produce more of this beautiful rough sex.

Please forgive my French but FUCK!!! This next part is really hot. I love how things get so rough and heated in this next part. Kendra brings real anger into the mix but you show that now the anger is dissipating though it is still present. You show this by showing that Kendra with all her strength could easily be throwing Laura off herself if she so chose. She doesn't choose to. She lets Laura take her in the rough way that she secretly craves. With her strength she could easily control Laura if she really chose. Instead she allows Laura to [She writhed and wriggled, but Laura knew how strong Kendra was and knew that she could put up more resistance if she really had wanted to escape. She also knew that she herself would be wetter than the ocean after fucking someone as torridly as Kendra had just fucked her, and she slid her hand quickly down to Kendra's crotch, finding a wet, gooey mat of hair and warm, oozing cuntlips, slippery and gaping. You want it, darling, and are you ever going to get it, she thought .] Her sopping wet cunt makes it clear that she is completely turned on. When I am the one being roughed up my lover knows my cunt is absolutely flooding with fuck cream. It makes me so wet and horny and dying for my turn to be abused and taken. You are simply the only author to capture this dynamic and give it the justice and love it deserves. For this you have my eternal gratitude.

Laura is now in a frenzy and she takes Kendra in a way that makes the blood boil with desire [For some reason, this response turned Laura into a blazing whirlwind of fiery passion and revenge. She flung herself forward onto Kendra's body, grabbing one hard round breast and digging her fingers into the spongy ball, sucking Kendra's black nipple deep into her mouth, then pinching it hard with her fingers as she sank her teeth into Kendra's wide areola. At almost the same instant, she formed her small hand into a fist and pushed it up into the warm, greasy channel of Kendra's swollen, puckered pussy, twisting it and driving it in deep.] I love how you show this loving violence and this taking of your lover through her protests, though you know she really wants it. Fortunately, Laura has a small hand and is able to insert her fist fairly quickly into Kendra's waiting cunt. Kendra's cunt being a soupy mess makes it a lot easier. This is not a mystical union here, this is the rough taking of a strong woman whose body is strong and can take this kind of loving violation. A woman's whose body will be torn apart with pleasure from this invasion. I kind of envy women like Laura and Joann. Their small hands make fisting a little easier for them. They can quickly work a fist up your cunt. I love Laura for her rough taking of these women. Women like Randi, Tiffany, Deshona, Shontay and Kendra. Women who need rough fucking from time to time to give them a deep soul satisfying fuck and in some cases like Shontay to really prove you are willing to fight for their love.

Laura continues her love assault. She continues to attack Kendra's nipples and cunt. I love how Kendra continues to play the game and curses Laura and cries to be let go. Again, with her strength she could stop Laura any time that she really wanted to. Laura notes to herself that there is none of that mystical connection with Kendra with this fisting. This is a revenge love rape. Kendra pummeled her cunt into sweet bliss with a good thigh fucking and now she is going to give back to Kendra with her fist. Kendra is slowly forgetting to protest ["Ohhngggg . . . oh god shit . . . you're gonna make me come!" Kendra wailed, beating Laura's head with her fists, but also pumping her plundered pussy up into the strokes of Laura's fist, groaning when it sank deep into her tight slit. "Ungghh! Owwnnhhh! Oh god! You bitch! You . . . fucking dyke! Unghhh!"] I have to admit that the idea of Kendra hitting Laura with her fist at first makes me blanch. I have several rules with rough sex: no clenched closed fists (loose are okay), no haymaker blows i.e. no deep bruises and don't draw blood with a blow (avoid mouth and nose). But after thinking again, with Kendra's strength, if she were really hitting Laura with her fists, Laura would be knocked out. I think these blows must be very muted with loose fists and thus acceptable. In fact, my head is lulling. You are the only writer that allows me to feel all this with your superior writing. I can feel Laura's fist plunging up my clasping cunt and conversely feel and hear Kendra's blows and curses. Hehehe. I get to experience it all at once. Your writings are a wonder to read.

You continue to pour on the details that almost overwhelm the reader. I never cease to be amazed at how you give so much detail and other authors don't give any it seems except for a few and they tend to repeat themselves and lack the focus and heat of your stories. Other authors would have long ago ended this sweet fuck but you are not done yet [During the next few seconds their striving, flexing, glistening, sweating bodies almost became one body in the surging, clawing, pumping violence of a sexual union they had certainly never shared until now. Laura bunched up one of Kendra's marvelous breasts in her hand, squeezing it so sharply that Kendra's nipple swelled up like an overripe, shiny black plum. Then Laura nearly swallowed it, ramming her hand deep into Kendra's pussy at the same, rubbing the edge of her wrist against Kendra's erect clit, feeling the very depths of Kendra's delicious, slippery body shudder as Kendra began to come.] You continue to saturate the reader with loving details of this love rape. You detail the plunging fist, which others never give. They just have it happen. How boring. You need to show the feelings and how it is moving up the vagina to truly make it hot and real for the reader. I love how their bodies are sweaty with exertion. I always bask in your love rapes.

Finally, Laura is rewarded for all her hard loving work with a beautiful orgasm from Kendra ["Auungghiiimmnngghiieeee!" she screamed, undulating, churning, groaning, coming again, hammering her elbows against the carpet as Laura continued to fuck her hard.] Laura keeps plunging her fist deep into Kendra's spasming cunt and produces another crippling orgasm. I so thank you for having your lovers sense when more fucking can produce more crippling orgasms while your lover is plateuing from the first orgasm. I dearly love the sounds of Laura's exertion as she works her fist into Kendra's love plundered cunt. As Kendra comes down from the divine heights of orgasmic bliss you never fail to paint a woman's body in such loving light. Other writers just say their came hard but never describe the woman coming. It is like having someone trying to explain a Monet without actually seeing it. It just doesn't do it justice. This should be used as model by other erotica writers [Kendra lay twitching and whimpering, sucking air, trying to get her breath, her body still straining and quivering as the aftershocks of another orgasm passed through her beautiful, glowing flesh, her skin now glistening with a film of sweat that the struggle had brought on. She was very beautiful at that moment, her muscular body a masterpiece of curves and delicious hard flesh, her red-gold hair tangled and stuck in wet strands to her face, which was still locked in a sexual seizure.

Finally, her whimpering subsided, and her eyelids fluttered open.] This is how I would want to describe one of my lovers shuddering through an orgasm I have drawn from her sweet flesh. I love making them all sweaty with mussed hair stuck to their wet flesh.

I think it so cute that Kendra is hoarse from all her screams of rapture. She still won't let Laura kiss her on the mouth the bitch. I guess she is still too angry. Then she produces the bombshell that she is moving that Saturday. I was so sorry to read that but in the long run it is for the best. It is kind of like Randi moving to the East. Kendra and Laura are too intense for each other. If Kendra does reappear, I do hope that they are better able to mesh their souls. I hope for dynamite sex without all the raucous contention over lovers. Of course Laura is terribly upset by this news. She is losing two lovers since Kendra is also removing her daughter. Kendra can't take the competition of having both her daughter and lover desiring and making love to Laura. Can you really blame them?

Despite these claims of needing to get away from Laura she admits that only Laura can really fuck like she does. No man can come close to the pleasure she can provide. She says she will be going back to only cock in the future. Is she completely nuts!!! Anyways, she tells Laura that since she is going away that she wants Laura to fuck her in the ass as a kind of going away present. At least she hasn't gone completely nuts. They go to Laura's bedroom and use the quadruple bent four-headed dildo to fuck themselves to nirvana. I love the idea of them screaming out their pleasure. If Kendra makes it to Laura's new condo I can just hear the sweet music of love coming from their love raptured throats. I love how Laura declares that Kendra can't resist her but Kendra says she herself has broken up relationships and she will resist Laura. Hopefully, Laura will prove to be the one in the right. It has been forty chapters and I feared her return would never happen but you have given me hope recently. Only the future will tell. A girl can dream can't she?

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Chapter 231:

This chapter starts with Laura getting more comfortable around my angel supreme Ada. I am not sure how long Laura has been falling for this voluptuous goddess. I have loved how you take your time in developing these relationships. Laura is not a one-night stand kind of woman. She only makes love to women she has gotten to know on at least some level. It is interesting to see Laura's attraction increase for these women. It is humorous with Ada because Laura has to get over this "voice" that Ada sometimes has. I have come to wonder about and dread ever hearing this "voice". Fortunately, for Laura while they are working together and they talk on a causal work and friendly environment the voice is dormant. As Laura discovers more about Ada we discover that she is single and thus potentially available. I love how you show Ada to be so friendly and a woman who seems to exude compassion and understanding. I love her body but it is her personality

that really cements it for me.

They now commiserate with each other about how they are devoting their complete selves to the company and don't really have many love pursuits. Of course Laura is hiding her plethora of lovers. Laura thinks to herself that even though Ada is her boss she can't help but desire her [Laura thought, staring deeply into her large black eyes, letting her own eyes caress the phenomenally smooth dark brown skin of Ada's cheek. For fun I try my darnedest to get beautiful women like you to let me fuck them. I would so love to slide my tongue up into your lovely wet pussy. Can you read what I'm saying with my eyes? I wish you could.] Now the "tennis" is mentioned. I then noticed that this is the chapter before one of my all time favs. I still reread chapter 232 often. I so adore Ada when Laura gives her her first lesbian orgasms in the shower. Such sweet screams of rapture and divine pleasure being sweetly crushed from every pore of her body. Laura's pussy moistens with the thought of them getting together on the weekend to play tennis and the hoped for possibilities that might present themselves to Laura.

Laura now goes home with a tune on her mind thinking of the upcoming weekend with Ada. She putters around the house and gets into a robe preparing for bed. Her doorbell starts ringing and though she is tired she thinks it might be one of her teenager lovers. I love that she has this possibility of such lovely young flesh to partake of. I love helping late teenagers further their lesbian education. Once they have partaken of the sexual fruit I long to further their education. With thoughts of Mavis or Charise she uses the intercom to discover Deshona. Not only is it Deshona but her voice has the definite qualities of being drunk with much slurring of words. Of course Laura rings her in. There is no question of this because she would never not desire to help and comfort any woman in her life. It doesn't matter that currently there is great tension between them. Deshona is hurt with catching Laura with her face in Randi's twat and Laura is angry with Deshona for restarting her relationship with that loser husband of hers.

When Deshona gets to Laura's apartment you immediately remind the reader as to why she is such an arrow to Laura's heart [She was beautifully and expensively dressed, as usual. This time she wore a fur coat, a silver fox, very classy, and under it a pale mint evening dress that scooped low to reveal her considerable cleavage. As if to emphasize the beauty of her throat, her perfect clavicles, her smooth dark brown chest, and the deep valley between her large breasts—so big, as Laura often thought, for such a petite woman—Deshona wore a genuine pearl necklace, with pearl earrings to match. She actually looked stunning, but one look in her eyes told Laura that she was as drunk as a skunk.] I so love it when you lovingly describe these women and their attire. You are the only author who really decks these women out in killer outfits that I so love to read about. I really like how Deshona is always wearing those killer pearls to show off her throat and cleavage. Here you also, as you always do, talk about other areas than the main areas like her throat, clavicles and chest. Thank you for showing us the complete women. I am so thankful for the photos but your loving descriptions always make my pussy moisten on its own.

With Deshona's entrance into Laura's apartment we find she is not drunk, she is falling down drunk. You have some very nice touches with your visual and audio cues to Deshona's drunken state. I always like the getting of beginning sounds of words backwards [Tee martoonis and a bubble dourbon]. Then latter on you have Deshona trying to grab a hold of Laura to try and initiate some sex and would have fallen down the front of Laura's body if Laura had not supported her. I can just see that sliding down of Laura's body, destination the floor. We find that Deshona and her husband whom we discover is Charles had an argument in the middle of a restaurant and Deshona went storming off. Deshona gets testy with Laura of all people when talking about Charles and then Deshona starts to accuse Laura wanting to fuck her like her husband. Deshona is implying that they only think of her as a fuck and don't respect her mind and soul. Of course we know that is wrong with Laura. Of course she wants to partake of Deshona's sweet flesh but Laura sees so much more. She loves and respects the total woman. Laura is attracted to her personality and the obvious business skills and abilities.

Laura being the nice person she is thinks of Deshona's needs first. Laura wants to get her sober and tells Deshona she will make her a pot of coffee. Laura is tested by the aforementioned Deshona falling into Laura's body. I know that feeling Deshona's large tits rubbing my body as she slides down it would set my blood on fire. But like Laura I would control myself. I have no desire to make love to a woman who is not in control of her thoughts or actions. I am always enraged when I hear stories of guys using the "date rape" drug. The idea of knocking a girl out with a mickey in her drink just so you can fuck her makes me want to rip their balls off. With the alcohol lowering her inhibitions, Deshona ["Ooohhh, see? You do want to fuck my brains out. Come on, let's go do it. My pussy is hungry for some hot lesbian screwing."] With her inhibitions down Deshona shows she is really a lesbian waiting to shed society's brainwashing. Deshona now starts to drag Laura down the hall toward the bedroom. Deshona's repressed need is making her demanding.

Laura decides that if Deshona is so incessant to fuck why not give in since she still has her wits about her enough to desire sex. Plus, she will get the thrill of fucking Deshona while that prick Charles won't get any of her sweet pussy this night. I love the detail of Laura helping to get her expensive jewelry off and Deshona having to 'really, focus to get her earrings off. I like this real life moment that other authors don't give me. It makes sense that despite Deshona being drunk she would protect her expensive jewelry. It is so obvious that Deshona really values her expensive wear. I love the description of Laura so loving her woman as she undress for her [While she had her back to Deshona, Deshona unzipped and slithered out of her evening dress, letting it fall around her ankles. She was wearing devastatingly sexy black lace underwear, panties cut high on the thigh, bra cups dipping low under her firm round breasts. Laura was agog.] I always can't wait to see what expensive wear Deshona has on her clothes.

Now near naked, Deshona lies on the bed and beckons for Laura to get naked and get on the bed and fuck "five no six times". Deshona's motor is really running now and is having its effect on Laura's libido. I really smiled with this next part [Laura could see her own hands trembling as she lifted the flannel nightgown over her head. She was consumed by sexual excitement, hungry for Deshona, hungry for her body and everything else, disappointed that Deshona was a little drunk but otherwise pulsing with hot desire for her. But by the time she stretched out next to her, Deshona had passed out.] I think you handled this drunken horny woman demanding sex and then passing out with great aplomb. You were humorous and so on target with your characterizations. Sometimes this whole thing falls flat with other authors. That is so cute that Deshona goes from demanding sex to passed out in so short a time. That is really humorous and would have me chuckling if this had happened to me.

Laura kisses her shoulder and runs a finger over her bra and down into the valley between her breasts. No reaction. Laura ponders only a little about trying to rouse her for fucking but decides [On the other hand, she thought, maybe I could bring her out of it with a little coaxing. But then, resigned, she decided to let her sleep. Deshona was very lovely, lying there like that, completely passed out, in her sexy black lace underwear. She was, in her sleep, almost too pure to touch. Laura could only love and desire her, which she did in silence, finally pulling a loose blanket over her before getting up to shut off the lights.] Laura is simply too pure to try such a thing. Laura goes to bed and the next morning showers while humming a song to herself. I always wonder about the mood Laura is in when she is humming one of her songs to herself. Usually she is feeling content I think. Nice little touch you give of Laura checking on Deshona and finding her in a fetal position. It is the little touches that you don't have to give but you do and thus add so much to the story. It is these small things that add so much.

Deshona finally appears in one of Laura's short terrycloth robes. What is so wonderful is Deshona's full figure makes the small robe bulge open and Deshona has, I'm quite sure not fully tied it tight on purpose. She is already starting her aborted seduction from the night before. Laura's eyes quickly zero in on the fact that Deshona has removed her bra. Ah, sweet debauchery is about to commence. My pussy can't wait!!! It has been so long since I have read this story I can't remember any of glorious fucking I know awaits me. Yeah!! I always chuckle when Deshona talks about herself or Laura looking like "shit". I love Deshona's aggressiveness here [When Laura turned her head, she was staring almost directly into the big round balls of Deshona's wonderful breasts, only half-concealed by the flimsy terrycloth robe.] Deshona is already on the prowl. Laura offers to fix her breakfast but Deshona wants to know if a certain someone fucked her last night. Laura pleads innocence. I always love Laura's lovers when they get saucy with her ["My body is a temple," Deshona said, her voice heavily laced with irony. "Didn't they teach you that as a kid? I like to know who's worshipping in there."]

One thing that most other stories don't really do for me is that initial part of a sexual interlude. It just happens with no details and just so boringly TV like. The characters are always so overheated and clothes are flying everywhere. Now of course, this does happen a lot but it happens many other ways like you show here [Instead of answering, Laura playfully moved her head forward a few inches so that her lips came to rest between Deshona's firm, half-naked breasts, pressing against the warm, flat skin between them. She kissed it sensually and with her fingers slipped loose the sash of the small bathrobe. It fell open, and she swept the thin lapels aside, filling her hands with the round, springy globes, feeling the thick, protruding bullets of Deshona's nipples against her palms.] I so love how your lovemaking so often starts with such mirth and happiness. This slow starting that will soon have them shrieking with pussy tearing orgasms. You have always brought a smile to my face while reading these stories.

They joke a little bit about Deshona having a headache and Laura fucking it away. I always love how your women joke with each other. I like this next part [She bent to kiss Laura's mouth, while Laura still held her naked breasts in both hands. It was a long, warm, exploratory kiss. They had not kissed in weeks, and the aching in Laura's heart was so intense that it almost hurt physically.] It is just so real life that other authors don't really capture. A simple thing like bending over to kiss your still seated lover. You continue with this real life accelerating of lust with Laura now rising so they can kiss ravenously and Deshona can now start to remove Laura's robe so she can get at Laura's sweet flesh. Deshona gets the quivers from Laura's clever caresses. You continue your wonderful dialog with Deshona getting Laura's robe loose and telling Laura she has a nice ass for a "white girl" and Laura telling her flattery will get her everywhere. I love this line by Deshona [Deshona raised her hands up Laura's body to her breasts, lightly pinching Laura's nipples. "I guess the scrambled eggs'll have to wait. I'm feeling kind of runny down there . . . ready for some action."] You always allow your women's humor to show through.

Deshona gasps out wondering how they could have stayed apart for so long. Laura rightfully recalls that it is Deshona who started seeing her loser ex-husband. It is Deshona who has been messing with the dynamic here. Of course, Deshona did catch Laura with her face buried in Randi's sweet pussy. Despite all these thoughts Laura quickly [He could never do for you what I can do, Laura thought, digging her fingers into Deshona's marvelous small body, driving her tongue deep into Deshona's open, receptive mouth.] Laura is always able to put aside the negative past and partake of the fruits of the present. Laura now gets serious and does begins to devour Deshona in the way only a lesbian really knows how to [She held Deshona's large, round breasts in her hands, finally having the opportunity to enjoy them again, running her mouth and fingers all over them. Deshona had told her that no man, including Charles, had ever made love to her breasts the way Laura did, and as usual she surrendered them to Laura eagerly, arching her back, quivering, mewling softly as Laura's tongue toyed with her jutting nipples. "Oh! Oh . . . god! Oh Laura . . . I've missed this! Yes! Suck it, please! Oh yes! Unhhhh! Bite it. Bite it like you did last time."] I always love it when Laura's women are totally overwhelmed with her loving ministrations. Women new to lesbian love are almost always shocked to discover that their breasts can give such pleasures because the men in their lives don't know what the hell they are doing.

I have always loved Deshona's breasts. They are so round and large. I have always loved being their with Laura when she [But the round balls of Deshona's breasts were so hard and her spreading areolas so flat against the taut surface of flesh that it was difficult even to suck the whole thing into your mouth, though Laura managed. Teasingly, she sank her teeth into the soft, sensitive corona surrounding the upthrusting nub of Deshona's nipple, making Deshona gasp.] I love working a large treat into my warm mouth where I can love torment it. I have smiled when Laura pauses in her assault because of the loud gasps her women make when she devours their breasts and they always tell her to not only continue but also do it harder. Sweet music to my ears. Laura does what I like to do [For the next minute, Laura moved her mouth from one wet, erect, pointing nipple to the other, back and forth, sucking, gently biting, pinching them, until Deshona was almost delirious from sexual arousal. Laura, still holding her damp breasts, slid up to kiss her mouth again.] I love taking a woman's tits and bunching them up and then devouring them until they are delirious with need and want.

Deshona quickly begs Laura to finish her. I love her cries that with men in her life she has never come quickly but Laura makes her come so quickly. I have had this happen with a lesbian virgin with a het past. They have told me that they just can't come or find it very hard. Then you quickly make them come with a screaming orgasm and then repeat it and they are almost like your love slave for the night and can't wait to get back into my bed for more. They are just so filled with wonder. I know some guys have skill but I also know a lot don't. You now have your women fuck in a way that I'm not sure if I have read in stories from other authors or if I have it has been a long time. They fuck each other digitally. [They lay face to face, each with her hand in the other's groin, kissing, their breasts touching, their fingers moving in a gentle, deliberate rhythm. Laura wanted to lick her exquisitely beautiful pussy, but there would be time for that. Right now, she wanted to gaze into Deshona's eyes while they fucked, wanted to do it face to face, wanted to enjoy the seizures of bliss when they were reflected in Deshona's contorted features.] It is a very nice change of pace to work a woman's cunt with your fingers until she comes for you. This way is blissful but I love kind of cradling her in my arms and working a couple fingers up her cunt and working her clit with my thumb and just gently whispering to her how much I love her. How hot she is. Telling them to

come on my fingers. I coo to them telling them to let me see their eyes when they come. It is so fucking powerful seeing a woman's face up close when it is being slashed with exctacy. One thing I like about this position is they always clasp your body to their body when the orgasm makes their body start jack knifing and spasming in bliss. They just can't help themselves; they need that anchor while their womb is shattering with spasms tearing their torso apart. I love those fingers digging in and feeling teeth as they burrow their mouth in your shoulder or neck as they whinny.

You now show us that Deshona is lubricating copiously like normal and her cunt is giving off its wonderful aroma of arousal. The wonderful thing about this close mutual frigging off is feeling all that wonderful flesh squirming against your own [Laura was not exactly under-aroused herself. The feeling of Deshona's delicious naked body undulating against hers, and Deshona's fingers inside her own flooding pussy, had her wound to a tight pitch. Somehow, as often happened, looking deep into Deshona's eyes while they fucked also had the effect of raising Laura's sexual temperature a few more notches.] Love feeling all that love juice and sweat building up on our bodies and that close eye contact always makes my pussy pump out more love juice. It is just so heavenly to look your woman in the eye and see her pleasure and her arousal. The desire to come and the desire to have your own flesh reach that blessed state. Women always want to give as well as receive. Other authors always have their women just go full speed ahead with no evidence that the women want to prolong their pleasure while you constantly show that women often want to prolong the lovemaking to wring out all the pleasure possible.

As you so often do, the reader thinks the heat has reached maximum levels and then you add yet more heat making the lovemaking totally incendiary ["I don't know if I can help it," Deshona panted, now gyrating her hips more frantically, pushing her wet pussy hard into Laura's hand. "Put your finger into my ass. Like you did last time. Unhhh! Oh god . . . it's so good with you!"] Geez, you are the only author who shows how women add that additional stimulation to take themselves to heaven. That is just so fucking hot to read. Having a finger worked up your ass when your body is already excited is such a lightening bolt of pleasure to your ass and womb. You now show the game that Deshona plays. After every anal invasion she claims she never wants anything else EVER up there again and yet she very willing accepts and even requests each subsequent invasion. I love that game you show here. The playfulness of sex that other authors never ever show.

Not only do you add elements to the lovemaking you are constantly giving the sweet little details I have come to crave [Deshona shivered sharply as Laura's tongue invaded her ear, and this brought her hand in Laura's crotch jerking up, jabbing her fingers deeper into Laura's pussy and simultaneously rubbing the bone of one finger against Laura's swollen clit. Laura just about went over the deep end.] As you usually do you capture any manner of lovemaking that you choose to explore. It really is amazing. For me it is amazing how you keep the basic sex itself super hot and still give us the little details that makes everything exponential. Now Laura takes her cunt cream lubed finger and does Deshona's bidding [Deshona's crotch was already so wet and warm, buttery and slippery, that it was no trouble for Laura to slip her forefinger out of the girl's snug slit and slide it up between her buns, where with a little push it popped easily into her asshole. Laura immediately drove it up deep into her ass.] What I love about your writings is that you are telling about the actual penetration and then tell the reader of plunging the invader deep in the waiting asshole. I Love It. Of course Deshona's eyes roll up with supreme bliss.

You now start to bring them to the heaven with a fiery finish [They were pumping, gyrating, kissing, whimpering and panting in a fierce, urgent heat, hurtling closer and closer to the ultimate spasm. Laura managed to get her thumb into Deshona's squirmy, greasy pussy where her finger had been, so that now she was gripping the girl rather like she were holding a bowling ball, with a finger up Deshona's ass and a thumb in her cunt.] Another detail I have never seen in print; a finger in the ass and the thumb in the cunt both plunging. We call that the six pack. I love having both holes worked like this. You can really work the holes hard like this. I can remember one time Joann was plunging away on Maria like this and she sing songed "bad girls get fucked up the ass" Of course you now capture perfectly everything I just commented on [This allowed her to push and pull hard with her hand, fucking Deshona in a quick burst of rapid, plunging motions. It was enough to tip Deshona over the edge, and she began to come in torrents, flexing and groaning as a fierce, throttling orgasm suddenly gripped her writhing body. "Ummmnnghhiiieeee!" she cried out, clutching Laura's naked back with her free hand, her nails digging spastically into Laura's flesh. "Ungghh! Oh! Aunnghhhhhh!

Onngghmmmnnggiieeeee! Oh shit! Oh! Unngghhhiieee!"] Yip, that is about what happened to Maria. I am so thankful to discover a writer who leaves absolutely no doubt that the woman receiving is having a soul crushing orgasm. The reader needs to see her facial reactions, body language and screams to truly experience their rapture.

Nice detail of Deshona's twitching and thrashing is making her fingers go wild in Laura's cunt quickly driving Laura over the edge into her spasming and screaming orgasm. Despite all the body spasms they look into each others eyes as much as possible seeing [The expression of overwhelming rapture on Deshona's face was the sight Laura had been craving, and she managed during her own climax to let her eyes linger on it, drinking in each sharp grimace of intense pleasure.] This is one of the things I live for is seeing a woman's face torn like you describe. Nice little detail of Deshona's asshole being so sensitized that Laura starting to remove her finger produces a monster aftershock of extreme pleasure. Laura holds her tight and finally removes her finger of pleasure and Deshona tells her flat out that no one fucks her like she does, especially her loser ex-husband.

We now have a little negotiating. Deshona wants, no, needs more loving. Being a workday though, Laura knows she must go in and get work done. I feel that ways sometimes. Got to do your job to support your life. That really sucks sometimes. Deshona plays on Laura's goodness when she complains of her headache coming back. She knows this will hook Laura. Laura decides she can spare another hour of sweet fucking. I know I would have. Nice little comment of Laura being happy that Deshona didn't drive to Laura's last night and took a cab. She genuinely worries and wants the best for her. They communicate with some sweet banter about Laura taking advantage / not taking advantage of Deshona in her stupor. Deshona decides it is time to get serious [Now Deshona's mouth on Laura's breasts became more aggressive, insistent. She sucked one of Laura's nipples into it deep. Her teeth gently ringed Laura's areola, threatening, making Laura's breath quicken.]

They quickly stoke their flesh back to a fever pitch with Deshona taking the lead [Deshona might be a little hungover, but it didn't keep her from rolling Laura onto her back and swarming over her like a whirlwind of lust. She kissed and stroked Laura's naked body feverishly, sucking her nipples and french-kissing her navel, caressing Laura's belly and her thighs, pushing them apart, revealing the hot, oozing crease between them.] I so love my women being aggressive in their lovemaking. The next line just hit me with something. Of course in lesbian erotica there is plenty of women giving head but I am not sure I have ever read a character beside yours where they make it obvious that so love what they are about to devour, again I find that so very weird when I think about it. Fortunately, you give us reality ["Oh, I have missed this beautiful pussy, beautiful Laura's beautiful pussy," she purred, parting the wet, swollen vulva with her fingertips and running the tip of her tongue up and down both sides.] This is the love a lesbian feels for her little piece of cunt candy heaven. This is what we live for.

I love how Laura grabs Deshona's head to make sure it has nice tight snug fit on her pumping cunt and thinks that yes this is heaven. Laura quickly decides she needs to have Deshona too and begs for some 69 action. Of course Deshona smiles and asks ["My little clit is already singing to you and your tongue, Laura," Deshona breathed. "It's singing 'Lick me . . . suck me!' Can you hear it? Top or bottom?"] Since Laura is on her back she chooses bottom. If I have a choice I always take bottom. Other authors just have the women get right at it while you [With a sly, promising grin, Deshona slowly turned her body around, straddling Laura's head with her silky black thighs. She lowered her lovely pussy, gaping and sculptured like the dark curling folds of a beautiful shell with a wet coral-pink interior, to Laura's waiting lips, bringing her own mouth down again to Laura's hot, festering pussy at the same time.] This is women savoring the moment and trying to prolong the anticipation of having that tender cunt meat finally meeting your mouth. I love seeing a beautiful cunt slowly approaching my mouth and smelling its sweet fragrance as it gets closer and closer. I love being on the bottom and getting that close intimate feeling of having a woman's pelvis closing in and enfolding me with its heavenly embrace.

They bring their aching cunts to each other's famished mouths and slowly dine on sweet tender cunt meat aching to be devoured. They begin with sweet slowness to savor the tangy vaginal flesh before them. You now show some of the reasons I so love being on the bottom [The feel of Deshona's large, round breasts pushing into her belly, punctuated by the hard pebbly nubs of her nipples poking into the smooth skin, aroused Laura almost as much at first as the painstaking skill of the tip of Deshona's tongue as it explored every corner of her pulsing wet cunt. She ran her fingertips along Deshona's gorgeous smooth back, suddenly groaning as Deshona's tongue took a teasing, preliminary stab at her clit, which was already throbbing and swollen again.] I love how gravity makes all sensations stronger. The feel of her thighs flanking my head, her nipples digging down into my belly. Also, I have free access to run my fingers along her body and explore to my heart's content. The bed or floor is not interfering with my explorations.

They are soon cooing and gasping their pleasure to each other and Deshona goads Laura on with [Deshona, grinning ear to ear, looked back over her shoulder at Laura, whose eyes fluttered open long enough to catch her grin. "Just my pussy will be fine, girl. You go right ahead and have your fill of it, hear?"] Deshona knows how to inspire serious cunt munching. Oh geez, head lulling time [Laura smiled back at her. She moved her hands forward, cupping Deshona's delectable naked buns in her hands and pushing down, bringing the girl's flowing, inflamed cleft down into her lips. At the same time, she slithered her tongue up into the sopping-wet trench, and Deshona herself went wild, groaning and quivering as Laura had been doing seconds ago.] This is when it is time to get intense, this grabbing of ass checks and pulling down roughly your cunt meat and gobbling that sweet flesh in an absolute frenzy. I love working the asschecks and helping her setup a humping rhythm into my starving mouth and flaying tongue. I just love massaging ass cheeks in this position and running my finger up and down her crack and maybe a possible invasion if the mood is right.

They are soon writhing together and rubbing their slicked flesh together in groaning exctacy. You then show them opening each others clams to get at the tender meat waiting inside [Laura explored the delicious, wet, glistening red seam of Deshona's beautiful pussy excitedly with her tongue, pulling apart the glossy black labia and slithering her whole tongue in deep, pinching and squeezing the girl's perfect, hard little asscheeks and slipping her fingers threateningly into the crack between them, feeling Deshona's small, silky body shudder in response, hearing her nearly uncontrollable moaning.] You really know how to capture the essence of sex and make it so hot to read. You describe how as your excitement grows your tongue just becomes a buzz saw on each other's cunt and how your cunts are just pumping out love juices in excitement. You now show that divine feeling of an orgasm building deep in your flesh, the pressure building for the eruption of screaming bliss [She could already feel the incredible pressure swelling within her body, within her raging blood. The two of them seemed to be moving and undulating together as one body, their flesh infinitely sensitive to the slightest pressure, their cunts throbbing in response to the most intimate kisses and penetrations.] I love this devouring of flesh and the resulting exctacy and how it is heightened when you are able to get in sync with your lover's body and start heading for the ultimate simultaneous orgasms.

Oh geez, I feel an intense masturbation session coming on very, very soon [The puckered, wrinkled orifice of Deshona's pretty little anus, which Laura had earlier invaded with her finger as Deshona was now doing to her own, winked at her from the deep crease between Deshona's marvelous smooth buttocks, and Laura could not resist. Deshona's asshole was still partially greased from the earlier invasion, and her warm cunt juices seemed to be flowing everywhere, coating Laura's tongue and lips, so that it was an easy matter to pass her finger through them, lubricating it again, on its way into the dark valley. "Oh! Ummgghh!" Deshona gasped, suddenly freezing, then undulating more urgently as she felt Laura's long forefinger re-enter her backtrack and slide up into her ass. "Ohhnn . . . god Laura, yes!"] Another divine penetration of the asshole for Deshona the lucky girl. I love the detail of Laura running her finger through Deshona's copious juices to grease it up and then plunging it back to its waiting home. I just feel that finger working back up to it's second home. A home that has been waiting for its longed for return. As always you capture that supreme moment of penetration, especially when you are not prepared for the flood of exctacy coming form your now impaled asshole. Those feelings sparking out to your clit and womb.

Deshona quickly works a finger into Laura's asshole giving the same pleasure to Laura. You now show us graphically how to really bring your lover off [she sucked the girl's clit between her lips, and more of Deshona's warm, dripping pussy, sucking her cuntlips into her mouth too. Deshona went wild, writhing and whinnying crazily on top of Laura, returning the favor by devouring Laura's throbbing, jangling clit almost as violently, sucking part of Laura's pussy into her mouth too.] I love working a clit but especially when the game is almost up and each suck and stab has such a strong affect upon your lover. It really inspires to add even more heat to your ministrations. You now have the truth that in 69 it can be so hard to give the concentration necessary to bring your lover off with yourself. It is a torment I love having but often one gets off and either you bring her off later in the same position or move into another position to finish her off. Here though they are going to reach heaven together.

You now capture that supreme moment of reaching simultaneously orgasm together [One second they were still gasping and mewling and feverishly fucking each other, and the next second they were both squealing uncontrollably in the throes of sharp, repeated, fiercely intense jolts and shocks and spasms of a sensation almost too severe to be called pleasure. "Mmnngghiieeee!" Laura erupted, her mouth falling open to emit her sharp squeals, but her tongue still feverishly stroking Deshona's clit. Deshona groaned suddenly, and then her body rumbled and jerked, and equally uncontrollable squeals came from her throat. "Anngghh! Ohnngg! Unh! Ummnngghiieee!" she squealed, her body now undulating wildly and flexing on top of Laura, who could feel the hard big bullets of Deshona's nipples almost scraping across the smooth skin of her stomach.] Of course I love the divine rupturing sex but it is the little details that make my pussy sing. The sounds of you and your lover's squeals blending together. Laura still making sure to work Deshona's clit even though her mouth is nearly paralyzed in exctacy. Finally, feeling Deshona's nipples digging into Laura's belly as she trashes. That is such a huge turn on for me.

I am so thankful I discovered a writer who shows that it is often possible to go for the brass ring again. Though their mouths are not working to well at this moment they start to pound their fingers into each other's assholes and start their bodies climbing yet again to the sweet heights that only two women can reach with another woman. They soon get their mouths working again and bring themselves to another scorching orgasms. Quickly they achieve their goals [Without warning this time, Deshona came again, whinnying deep in her chest as an unmercifully intense climax shattered her writhing body. She spewed too, her pussy gushing suddenly onto Laura's lips and tongue just as Laura herself was wrenched again by a second killer orgasm, which seemed to center all sensation on Deshona's forefinger, which was embedded deep in her throbbing asshole. The warm pussy juices that drenched her face somehow had the effect of making her come even harder, so that she was still reeling from a crushing ecstasy when the panting Deshona climbed off her body and collapsed beside her, rolling onto her back.] Few women spew like this but it is wild when you do run into one and she just drenches your face with her juices or your ready and it runs down your parched throat. When I first find one I usually get it mostly on the face unless they warn me, then I'm ready to swallow as much of this unique juice that I can. Not sure what it is, but I'm sure it is not piss so I'm okay.

I love Deshona's cries that only Laura can do this to her. Deshona is her usual self and is shocked at her spewing and starts trying to clean Laura's face. I love Laura's response to this ["I wish you could come all over my whole body," she said, solemnly. "I mean it."] What a cool, endearing thing to say. They kiss sweetly and Laura knows she is falling for Deshona again and yet knows that Deshona is fickle and will most probably go running back to that loser ex-husband. The only thing I can think is that she is just sucked into the routine of it all. Hopefully, she will one day figure out she doesn't need this loser and get a woman(s) in her life instead (of course only after much future fucking with Laura and now others). It is sweet when Deshona asks Laura to quit and come work for her when Laura is driving her home. Laura knows Deshona is way too fickle with her affections for Laura to risk all like this. Laura is very wise. I noticed that once Deshona is about ready to reenter the het world she once more dons her cool frosty bitch mask. It seems obvious to me that only women can reach the real warm women that truly exists. I will hope for her.

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Chapter 232:

I just want to start off with saying that I really, really love this chapter. This is because this is where Ada is seduced into lesbian love. I get dreamy just thinking about it. Of course, I love all your chapters, but this resonates with me because of the seduction and Ada's sweet personality. I think I have said before, my holy trinity in this story arc are dawn, Mavis and Ada. I am really attracted to their personalities, but, of course, I love their bodies. I love Ada's full voluptuous body. I love Mavis young lithesome body and I love dawn because she is so fucking beautiful. I love all your women, but these three stand out.

I just want to thank you again for giving me this beautiful story arc that has given me so much pleasure for close to a year now.

I think that Ada went into this chapter on a conscious level totally innocent. The previous chapters just make her so open and innocent seeming. I do think that on a subconscious level she may have wanted this to happen. I think this way because of the upcoming events. I think her conservative upbringing hide her desires even to herself.

When Ada appeared in her "Venus" outfit, my lust went off the meter. I know exactly how that outfit looks. I've watched Venus many a time in that outfit. I know she said she wore it for the fellas, but wearing that outfit with a new friend, hummm. Okay, I'll give her the benefit of the doubt here. About that outfit, I love it on Venus. That is one of my fantasy's, making it with Venus and Serena. Actually, I like Serena better. I just love her thighs. My dream is to do them both at the same time and watch them bury their faces in each others cunt. I believe they would be fantastic fucks.

I can feel for Laura having to look at Ada's puffy nipples under that outfit. Geez, that would be tough to have to look at without being seen and trying to hide my lust. Then to have to look at her beautiful ass and thighs to boot. Pure torture. During this time Ada's Texas twang appears. This appears when she is nervous. Is she worrying over Laura's impression of her? Okay, again it could just be her desire to look good in general.

I really enjoyed the whole tennis foray. I like to watch Laura just having a good time with her loves. I enjoyed them just having fun and enjoying themselves. It makes them seem so human and everyday, like real people. But, it was also enjoyable watching Laura being tormented by Ada's goddess like body. Plus, I love the loving way you describe Ada's ass.

I like the way that Laura had convinced herself that nothing was going to happen. This makes the actual seduction all the more exciting and hot when it finally does occur. I thought it was so cute when Laura tried to catch a peak of Ada's nipple when she pulled her sweaty outfit away from herself trying to get comfortable. Can't blame a girl for looking. I know I would be drooling by now with all that visual torment.

Then the shower. Wow. I again am a little curious about the soap not being in the shower, but again, I'll have to give Ada the benefit of the doubt. I love how she beckons to Laura. That just makes it so hot and cute. Laura being called up to the shower on the second floor, sort of like a siren calling to the lost sailor, "come to me and my sweet embrace." I love how Ada has to coach Laura to come into the shower with her. Finally, she almost has to command Laura into the shower with her ["I'm waiting. I need you to soap my back."]. Okay, no doubt this time, somewhere within herself, she wants it to happen. Bad. Again, her nervous twang appears. Ada invites Laura into her shower, even though she had observed Laura showing her lust by the way Laura was devouring her breast on the tennis court.

You give us true seduction. I just read a story that was a little hot but the seduction was just so boringly "pornographic". They meet and almost immediately start to have sex. Your seduction is so true to life. This is how it happens. Others stories are only rutting. Your story provides sweet emotion. Your building it up over chapters, and then making the actual events so life like make this seem like real life and not merely a story. By taking your time, you allow the reader to come to truly know these women and discover what makes them unique and thus desirable. These stories could be happening down the street from me right now.

I really like how they started out so gentle and almost innocent with their back washing. This allows the heat to be slowly ratcheted up. I just love all the details of Laura's back washing. Especially how she rubs her thumbs underneath Ada's shoulder blades. You can just see the worship that Laura has for Ada's body. Again, you are the only author to show lovers luxuriating in each others body by the giving and receiving of massages. This is always such a perfect time to worship your lover's body. I love how we can hear Ada falling under Laura's spell with her increasing vocalizations of pleasure.

Then Laura gets to her ass. Laura immediately starts to turn up the heat. I love Ada's little quip about kissing the boss's ass. Nice little chuckle. Ada's vocalizations start getting louder and more desperate. I like Laura's controlled approach to seducing Ada. Laura realizes that Ada must be brought along gently and not rushed. She uses slow heat to get her conquest. I loved how Laura overcame Ada's timid ness over having sex. She brought her along with the right balance of seduction and verbal support. I love Ada's choked whimper that signals her total surrender to Laura's desires.

I absolutely adored the way that Laura just worshiped Ada's breast. Then the way she devoured her nipples. I just adore the way she concentrates everything on her breast worship. I love how you describe it getting hard and pulpy in Laura's mouth. Finally, I loved how Ada held her breast for Laura.

Needless to say, I love Ada's pussy: [Ada's crotch hair was bushy and dense, though sparkling everywhere with jewels of water droplets, and with her fingers. Laura parted it to reveal the long swollen wet red gash of her pussy. It was a lovely fat pussy, a glistening blossom of juice, with thick black cuntlips and a clit almost as large as Randi's enormous nub, a whitish, distended grape a the top, peaking out from it's glossy wet hood, beckoning Laura's tongue.] That is a pussy to dream about. It is truly worthy of worship and devout attention. I feel sorry if Ada has never had anyone to give her head before. This is something that everyone should get to experience, doesn't matter who does the administrating.

Again I just love how you describe a woman's cunt and how Laura makes love to it. Here is an example, [With her fingers she again spread aside the wet hair, exposing the inflamed crease of Ada's excited pussy, then slid the tip of her tongue into the warm, buttery pit.] & [Parting Ada's cuntlips with her fingers, Laura slid her tongue deep into Ada's tangy, oozing slit, tasting the warm, gooey nectars that lubricated it so abundantly, then sliding the flat of her tongue slowly across Ada's large clit as she withdrew it. This technique nearly made Ada come unglued. Her fingernails bit into the naked, wet flesh of Laura's shoulders.] Just these sentences are miles above what others authors write. You just keep on going from there with beautiful description after beautiful description. I can't get enough of this and fortunately for me, you keep delivering it to us story after story.

I like how Laura coaches Ada to put her hands on her shoulders and to hold on to her. That she, Laura, will make sure to support her. Laura is letting Ada know that she will make sure that nothing happens to her. That Laura will protect her.

Then we get into the heart of Laura's feasting on Ada's oh so beautiful cunt. I love it when you describe the smells and tastes of cunt cream. Again, you are the only one who gives me what I crave. I love how Ada starts the ages old instinctual grinding and swirling of her hips and cunt up into Laura's hot hungry mouth. I love you describing a woman digging her fingers / fingernails into her lover, usually through sheer lust or ecstasy. As the heat increases, I love how Laura pulls the sheath covering Ada's clit up so she can attack it, so one can thoroughly lick, slurp, and suck it.

I loved how you describe Ada's clit swelling and hardening during orgasm. That is just so FUCKING hot. I love this description of the prelude to Ada's orgasm [internal quaking deep inside Ada's belly that announced a fierce eruption]. Then the actual orgasm. What can I say, your judicious use of caps during the screams of orgasm just make them so devastating when you do use them. I know Ada must be dying from ecstasy. Oh geez, I feel my belly fluttering a little just thinking about this beautiful orgasm.

I really liked and chuckled when Laura uses the word 'fuck' so sassily. These lines just make me smile. She keeps using it until even Ada has to give in and admit she enjoys hearing Laura use it. Poor Ada, she must fight so hard to overcome her conservative upbringing, messing up her ability to truly enjoy her body.

I love how Laura gets worked up and demands a second shower orgasm. Got to love that girl. Can't get enough of that beautiful clit. I love this [Laura embraced Ada's entire pelvis with both arms.] I really love that description. You then finish off Ada with [Laura's arms were already tightly around Ada's frantically churning hips, and with opposite hands she cupped Ada's buns, digging her fingers into the spongy flesh, sucking Ada's clit relentlessly. AAUUNNGGHHH!" Ada groaned again, so loudly this time that it was a nearly deafening cry of crushing rapture.]. Sigh, sheer perfection. The first time I read this, I think I nearly had a mini orgasm just from reading it. There is just something about wrapping your arms around a woman and grabbing her ass and jamming your face into her cunt as she orgasms. Then, there is still one more paragraph of extreme sex as Ada's orgasm continues to shatter her. It is a good thing her hands are on Laura's shoulders as her strength deserts her.

I liked Laura's vulnerability when she becomes afraid that Ada will now send her away now that Laura has given her two bind blowing orgasms. Maybe now Ada is totally sated. We quickly find out that she is ready for a lot more loving. I always like seeing Laura's vulnerability. It makes her seem so human. I like how Ada is just beaming and is totally ready and committed to giving the same pleasure back to Laura. This in turn shows Ada gentle and caring personality.

Once they get into the bedroom and Laura lays herself on the bed, I love her saying to Ada, "come love me". For me, that is just a touching line.

Now that Ada is on the bed with Laura she devotes her entire attention to giving head to Laura. I really like this about her. Despite her conservative upbringing, she doesn't hesitate to devour Laura's pussy. She keeps her mouth and tongue busy and keeps her mouth glued to Laura's pussy during Laura's entire orgasm. Oh yeah, she is a quick leaner who quickly gets into it, once her internal barriers are lowered. As usual, your women totally devout themselves to each other.

As the story ends we learn some facts about Ada's past. I would love to beat the snot out of the guy who hit her. I absolutely hate that in a man. How weak. I loved it when Ada showed her vulnerability when she becomes afraid that Laura will tire of her. This makes a person so real when they reveal their insecurities. In the vast majority of erotica, the characters are always so sure of the situation. Of course, the situations are almost always just mindless rutting. I'm so happy that Laura spends the weekend with her. Then you end it if with that cute and touching scene where Laura gets Ada to beg her for sex. Hopefully, over time, Laura can get Ada to be totally comfortable with sex. Hopefully, Laura will be able to make it out to Dallas sometime in the future. Now she has two women to service out there.

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Chapter 233:

I like how this chapter starts with Laura reflecting on the differences between Ada and Deshona. Before I go on, I want to draw attention to what I just typed. The differences between the two above women. Only you give us true "characters" that are fully developed and fleshed out that we can see and notice their differences. When you make these comparisons I can immediately see these differences. Most stories don't really develop their characters. Even when they spend time describing them, ninety-five percent of the stories still don't develop their women. They are still basic cardboard cutouts. Usually the sweet innocent or the repressed woman trying to find sex and happiness in the city if you will.

You on the other hand are able to say that Ada and Deshona are different and the reader who has been reading along will instantly know what you are talking about. The reason is because the two women mentioned have been developed into living and breathing women who have totally different personalities and the way they react to their worlds. Deshona is cold and indifferent. She is a woman who can seem like an iceberg until you get through her walls of bitchiness and then bam, she is a "fuck-slut extraordinaire." Ada on the other hand is a RR repressed woman who has just had heaven shown to her and she is filled with wonder and thankfulness. She has been awakened to her body. Unfortunately, as events have shown she is still afraid of herself and her awakening to her sensual nature. I dearly hope that Laura gets to give her another dose of loving and have her become more comfortable with her true inner sexual self. What I love about this is that what you said about Deshona and Ada is so true because you have taken the time to develop these characters that you can then make these observations about them. Hollywood doesn't usually do this well as far as I am concerned. Their characters are one thing one week and something else the next, thus I have given up on them. Your characters stay true to themselves chapter after chapter.

As you know, I find Ada to be one of my favorite characters in the story. It is not because of her sex goddess body. It is mainly because I find her to be such a sweet person. She is completely loving and caring now that Laura has awakened her body to great sex. I love how you describe Ada as being so full of gratitude and giving. I love the way they coo to each other and Ada uses sweet little terms of endearment. Ada is such a sweet uncomplicated woman. She is not playing any mind games. Her only problem is her fear of herself.

It is fun to read Laura going down a long list of girls she has to worry about and service. I love the fact that she has to juggle so many women. I can understand her trepidation about sleeping with her boss. That always has the potential to cause problems if the relationship sours. I see here Laura thinking about April and how April is getting kicked around some by the power struggle going on then between Laura and Rhonda. Several times throughout the chapters April would come up and I always felt like she was coming in a distant second. She seemed so forlorn. I am so happy that she now has Yolanda in her life. They seem like teenagers in their exuberance with each other. Randi continues to be herself playing mind games with everyone who comes into her presence. Still in a way, she seems almost innocent about it. She can't conceive of any other way to be. I mean, doesn't the world revolve around her. I know that is how she thinks.

Then we get the angst of Kendra and Jane leaving. I could feel Laura's pain at this forced separation and the obvious tension in the air. If I were Laura, I would have been mourning this situation also. In a way it is for the best. Kendra and Laura always fucked in an exciting animalistic energy and danger, but Kendra was just a little to wild and unpredictable. I loved seeing the look of aching desperation in Jane's eyes. Her and Laura have fucked so gloriously. The beauty of writing this now is that I know that Jane has defied her mother and gotten together with Laura to have glorious fucking. That fuck in the shower stall is in my all star mental library let me tell you. That is such a beautiful picture of Laura smearing shampoo on two fingers and piercing Jane's asshole with them, twisting her fingers while she rams them deep up Jane's rectum. Yum!!! I think it is kind of cute her pondering who will leave next only to find soon Tamara and Ada are about to depart. I remember reading this story through the first time and really feeling for Laura with all her angels fleeing from her. Since I always feel for Laura, I felt her heartache and despair.

Then Mavis calls and all I can say is YES! As you know, Mavis is one of my favorite angels. I just love that smoldering sexual smile of hers. She looks wise beyond her years. I love her body so much. She has a body that is made to be fucked and fucked hard, long and deep. I like Laura teasing her about pimples. Only a teenager could you tease like this. I find it sexually exciting having to arrange getting together with Mavis. Working around her mother and her restrictions. I remember having to do that at Mavis age. Having my own car really helped, all I had to do was come up with good reasons for being out.

Here again, Laura immediately starts focusing on Mavis's beauty and instantly desires her greatly. Laura and I are so much alike in this. We find all the women we hunger for to be perfection. I don't favor any one body type. She goes from dreaming of Ada's voluptuous body to Mavis's lean small breasted body. To her both are equal in their perfection. I like how Laura and Mavis banter and tease each other [Now Mavis could tease back. "How you know I ain't gonna steal everything you got and run away to Mexico or something?" "Because I've got something I know you want more than all my stuff," Laura whispered suggestively into the phone. Mavis laughed at the other end. "Want it bad, too," she confessed. "I been missing you, Laura."] I just love that almost innocent banter between Laura and her teenage lovers.

Kind of cool, Laura driving to a 7-11 to give a school girl her apartment key. Ah sweet debauchery. I find it totally all right because though she is physically a school girl, mentally she is a woman ready for love and lesbian sex. She knowingly chooses without coercion. This is how I was at this age. I craved older women who knew about life and how to make sweet love to me. I learned so much from them. This is knowledge that I pass on now when the opportunity arises.

I love the actual transfer of the keys. Kind of had the feel of a prostitute leaning through the window to complete a transaction. I love how Mavis bores into Laura with her knowing fuck me eyes. I fully agree that Mavis seems to have her sexuality smoldering just underneath her sixteen year skin. I would never be able to resist her either. I love how she [Mavis was repeating the effort right now, giving Laura her most smoldering gaze, since she knew what effect it would have. She knew Laura could not resist her. "You can just wait till tomorrow night, Laura," her eyes twinkled. "Now don't be getting all in a lather."] It is amazing how some girls are so mature so early and know how to use their body and wiles to make a woman putty in their hands. Women who have learned to use their body to make sweet love to you. I can fully understand Laura's fears about the situation. Legally, this is against the law. But, with Mavis we are talking about a woman in girl's body who is actually the sexual aggressor. It is Mavis leading this seduction and not the other way around. Mavis would never turn against Laura out of spit. The only thing that would endanger things is if Mavis got caught "red handed" and felt the need to save herself. Her Laura is so smart to be careful and prudent here. I think

that Mavis, Jane and Inky would always protect Laura.

A little sweet interaction with Ada. Ah, I love that woman. She is so graceful and delicate with the situation. I think of Ada as "class". Of course, Laura, had to lie to have sex with Mavis. Laura is right; sometimes she is a slut (nothing wrong with that). I just think so much of Ada. She had to be a little suspicious about Laura's excuse about being with her mother and the way she stumbled with her excuse. Instead of making a scene or getting all jealous she handles it with total class. Also, I think she is mature enough to not want to claim Laura all for herself. She just wants to get her share of loving. I'm happy that tomorrow night Ada gets her turn. I so totally love her complete abandon with her orgasms. She seems so shocked each time she comes with Laura. She acts as if she has never dreamed such pleasure is possible, she was messed up with RR indoctrination and then probably bad lovers. Hopefully, she will make another appearance in the not to distant future. I have got to love that euphemism "playing tennis". I am glad that they did end with a date for Ada to come by tomorrow. I will always want my angel Ada

to get all the loving she can from the arch angle Laura.

I shared Laura's shock at seeing Eric ramming his cock in sweet Mavis's young pussy. That was not what I was hoping to see. Since this chapter had Mavis's name in it and not a dash with Eric's name also I was not so pleasantly surprised, though I quickly warmed to it. You make even me enjoy reading het sex. I would have loved to have caught Mavis rubbing and stroking her pussy in a masturbating frenzy, dreaming of Laura. I can understand Laura stifling a cry by biting her knuckle. I think I would have bitten it off if I had been in Laura's place. Despite all my cries of forlorn whatever, I fucking love the sex. You are so good, you make the het sex hot. Don't want any, but I love reading your hot dishes of it. You immediately make the sex so hot. The way that Eric is lifting up Mavis's ass each time he spears her delicious cunt with his massive dick. I can just feel the power. Unfortunately, this is something that most women can't give, that raw ass

pummeling power. Only a few women I have known have the power to really pound you deep and super hard. Instead we use skill and technique and power we can generate, a more than fair trade off.

I love you describing Mavis's cunt lips clinging to Eric's cock. The black on white contrast would be an extra turn on, big time. This is something that you have always described with the het sex and now with the strap-on sex. That is a visual that nearly makes me swoon to see my lover's inner lips clinging to my dildo as I draw it back to stroke back into her tight pussy. I like how Laura instinctively feels for Mavis. The only thing Eric has going for him is a huge dick. He seems to have little skill, unlike Rob and Marshall. Again Laura's gentle nature feels alarm for the ramming that Mavis is receiving. It does anger me a little that Eric is actually hurting her. This is not moans of pleasure or Randi, Dawn, Deshona or Shontay getting off on some rough sex. I think you do capture with Eric some of the bad characteristics of a lot of men have. A lot of ramming with little skill or regard for their female lover. Now of course, Laura's next thought is that she wants to ravish the girl next. I love it. I know that Laura knows how to make Mavis die of pure pleasure. She will make "love" to Mavis and not just ram her beautiful cunt.

It is still such a nice visual, Mavis's arms going from lying on the floor to grasping Eric's back and stroking it with her fingers. Of course I would much rather it be

Laura's back with her plunging a dildo deep to Mavis's cervix. I love the way your women groan as the dick / dildo slides deep into their cunts. I just loving hearing

my lover moan from my ministrations. I Think I do understand why a man loves plunging his cock into a woman's cunt and hearing her moan and whimpering. It

sure drives me wild. It makes me feel so sexy and strong, knowing I'm giving her such pleasure.

I'm glad Laura arrived to give Mavis the orgasms that Eric was not cable of giving Mavis. I often wonder how many men fall into the Eric mold. A lot of wild plunging uncoordinated thrusts without true skill. Fortunately, for Eric, he has a really huge cock. I feel women by contrast always try to focus on their lover and our lovemaking is focused on our love partner and her needs. With a strap-on, our every stoke and thrust is for our lover's benefit. I am always so attentive when i use a strap-on, listening to my lover and seeing her body language. I always my lover to tell me how she wants me to fuck her, communication is so key.

I had to chuckle at Laura going back into the hall and making noise to let the two love birds now that she has come home. I wish I could have seen Mavis's body all slick from lovemaking and that "sappy" grin on his face. I love the way Laura almost wails when some of Eric's come almost gets on her carpet after he removes his battering ram from Mavis's sweet cunt. That was a nice humorous moment and touch of real life. I like how Laura tries to cow Eric about Mavis's age, but of course Laura has to back off because she has been drinking from the same well. I give Eric credit for not backing down and reminding Laura he knows the score.

I love Mavis's reaction to being caught [Mavis smiled at her deviously, at once the shiest and the most seductive smile she had ever given Laura, one that said: You caught me, but I know you still want to fuck me.] This all gets back to Mavis and those mysterious eyes of her. She can seem both so innocent in one photo and then in the next she looks some oriental lesbian player from the Karma Sutra. She seems almost ancient and wise with sexual knowledge. I would love to fuck her and then look into the depths of her eyes when she reaches orgasm.

Eric is all right in that male ego kind of way. He was right in that Mavis did want what she got. At her age, she has to be curious about sex in all its forms and would most probably wish to experience a taste of male cock. Hopefully, she will shortly learn that a woman can most happily do without it. Can't blame him for wanting to get some great pussy from Laura and Mavis. What Sholandra doesn't know won't hurt her. Even if Sholandra doesn't get together with Laura anymore, hopefully she is getting some sweet pussy somewhere. One would think any woman who has tasted the forbidden fruit must satisfy her addiction. Eric refuses to be cowed and invites himself to any party. I have to admire his confidence and almost boyish charm here. I have to say I'm happy because of all the delicious fucking that ensues. Eric says it himself ["Can't have the dick without the head," he said.] He is totally brash.

I agree with Laura, I wanted Mavis all to Laura. I loved chapter 263 with this sweet pairing and such dynamite fucking. It definitely had my cunt sopping wet and caused a few masturbation frenzies. I love when these two fuck. It is simply scorching. While this chapter was great, I was really looking forward to the sweet depravity that Mavis brings out in Laura. Still, I have to admit; you really know how to serve your het sex. I blush that it turns me on so. Laura always knows how to milk all the eroticism out of any situation and this is no exception.

Now its Laura's turn and she CAN make Mavis come now that Laura has gotten Mavis to remove all that nasty semen. ["Come on, darling, let's give this beast a lesson in how to make a woman come," she teased. Mavis giggled. "Okay. We know how to do that, don't we." She looked at Laura with her burning, devastatingly sexual eyes as they entered Laura's bedroom. "I ain't had one since I saw you last, either. I really need it."] I almost feel for Mavis. She has to wait to come into Laura's loving arms to get the orgasms she deserves. Hopefully, she will find her some nice gay girlfriends to fuck her brains out when Laura can't service her needs. Love how Mavis shows her schoolgirl age with her giggling. I would love to have Mavis gaze into my eyes with her sexual eyes and then fuck me into a sweet delirium of sexual bliss. I bet she could do it.

I love how you make it so clear where Mavis's affections truly lie. [Mavis's eyes burned with love for Laura. She may have, in a passing whim, let Eric nearly fuck her lovely young pussy to a pulp on the floor next to Laura's sofa, but when it came to True Love, her heart beat passionately for Laura only. Now she looked at Laura like a small child would, which made Laura feel guiltier than ever.] I guess I can understand Laura's feelings her, but Mavis is a woman in her wants and needs. She needs what only Laura can provide her. Hard lesbian love making. I love how Laura's women are so enamored with Laura as well as they should be.

I really love the dynamic of Laura taking Mavis from the living room into her bedroom, all the time wishing they were alone. They quickly strip and lay down on the bed. I can't blame Laura for wanting to push Eric from her mind and gets Mavis to also. He was not invited and thus not prepared for mentally. I then love the interaction where Mavis asks if Laura is mad at her and then declares how Eric "raped" her. Of course she can't explain how she got naked without ripped clothes if Eric "raped" her. Of course Laura immediately removes any anger from herself she might be feeling. Laura knows how to expunge these baser emotions and concentrate on the love she feels for these women. She lets the positive control her life and not the negative.

I love how Mavis remarks that next time, Laura can rip her clothes off, now that is a hot picture, let me tell you. I love how their passion for each other immediately burns bright for each other. Of course you immediately have Laura running her hands all over Mavis's young body, caressing and clutching it. Pressing that lovely sweet flesh to her body. I had to chuckle at the exchange about Mavis cleaning her pussy out good so Laura won't get any icky sperm on her tongue. Can't blame her for that. That would probably freak me out. I love how you as usual stoke the fires of love [Mavis kissed back, caressing Laura too, her back, her ass, then raising her hands to Laura's breasts. "Love you too. Love these. I kept thinking about these." She raised her gaze to Laura's, looking up seductively with her deep-sex killer hot eyes from under her heavy eyelids. "Thought about sucking them . . . like you suck mine. Hard."] As always, you are loving the whole body. I absolutely adore the way that Laura makes love to a woman's breast. I can fully understand Mavis dreaming about it.

Then they spin around into a 69 and attack each other's breast. I love that. You describe it beautifully of course. [Laura swirled her tongue around the small, swollen black tent of Mavis's areola from which the rubbery center rivet of her thick nipple protruded, pinching it lightly with her teeth, just to give the girl an exciting extra sensation. Then she felt liquid fire squirt through her own cunt as Mavis did the same thing to her nipple, sucking it hard and lightly biting it at the same time. "Oh!" Laura cried. "Oh god . . . Mavis, yes! Ungghhh!"] Love how you show Mavis learning from Laura and immediately putting that knowledge to use. Of course you give exquisite details of Mavis's breast becoming aroused and then how having your nipples done right sends fire straight to your cunt. Love the way they get so aggressive and just maul each other's tits. Love how Laura rolls Mavis over onto her back and abandons the breast 69 and thinks about heading south for nirvana.

Then Mavis makes her sweet demand for a good fist fucking (which I always hunger to see). I love how Mavis pulls Laura up from her pussy to make her demand. She uses those eyes of hers [Mavis had remembered. Her hot, scintillating eyes implored Laura. "Oh, darling," Laura gave in with a sigh.]. Mavis has not forgotten Laura's promise from last time. I know I would never forget a promise like that. It again shows Laura's good nature that she worries about leading these women into depravity with these acts of lesbian love. It is funny; it seems to me that it is the opposite. These young girls are really seducing her into these acts of love.

I love how Laura tells Mavis she is about to get what she wants, ["Are you wet for me, honey?" Laura purred, kissing her round, gleaming shoulders, the delicious spooned shallows under her clavicles, sucking her small breasts again, kissing the flat smooth expanse between them, which was very wide since Mavis had such small breasts. "Are you wet for my fist?"] I love how only you truly show a person making love to a woman's whole body. Other writers just don't seem to have any imagination; they just stick to the mouth, breast and ass. In the last paragraph you don't even touch any of the main erogenous zones. That is so hot, Laura purring to Mavis, "are you wet for me". I can't blame Eric for breathing heavy and getting hard again with this show going on before his eyes.

As Laura arrives at Mavis's succulent cunt [Laura slid between her thighs, kissing her flat, smooth, very black belly, rubbing her nose in Mavis's pubic muff, feeling the black wiry hairs tickle her nostrils and sucking in deeply the thickly aromatic odors floating up from Mavis's aroused pussy. It was not one of those long, slender, wavy slits, those exquisitely sinuous black-lipped cunts that Laura so worshipped in some of her girlfriends, but a smaller, puckered black rose, like a hungry mouth, fiery pink and runny inside, with a tiny clit almost completely hidden by a smooth little fold of black skin at the top.] I can never get enough of the details that you use to describe each woman's vagina. You paint such perfect and beautiful word pictures of them. I can just close my eyes and see them and almost taste them as I bury my tongue deep into their moist depths. As I so often say, you make each unique and a treasure to behold. I love how Laura slides her tongue into Mavis's pussy and how this makes Mavis's hips quake in pleasure. She gives Mavis's clit a few tentative swipes but she is so overwrought from her pummeling from Eric and now this she is one the edge. Laura has no choice but to fist fuck her now before she pops.

Once again you give me such rich details of the fist fucking. Sometimes you can get you hand in quick, but usually you do it like you describe here. First, you start with a couple fingers and slowly increase the numbers until you form the wedge. Then you describe it going in beyond the knuckles and then it slips home. [Laura slid two fingers into the oozing warm crease of Mavis's pussy and began sliding them in and out, kissing her sleek smooth dark inner thighs, including a third finger, still keeping up the slow, sensual rhythm, then introducing a fourth, until her fingers made a wedge, now joined by her thumb, which she forced gently further and deeper into Mavis's yielding pussy with each soft thrust. "Unh! Unh!" Mavis panted softly, looking down wide-eyed, watching as Laura's entire hand finally slid into her cunt.] I think it is lovely how you make this so sensual with Laura kissing her thighs and using such gentle strokes to slide the fist home. This is a loving and sensual fuck.

Then you give the sweet detail of the tight snug fit. Then you actually tell us about the plunging of the fist into the cunt and twisting the fist and the always in pressing vagina walls. How you use the wrist to stimulate the clit. I love how you tell of the receiving woman, Mavis in this case, ramming her own cunt onto the fist. Only you tell us this. One of the things really sets you apart from other lovers is that you are always adding details beyond the main act that your lovers are currently engaged in. This is a prime example [Mavis clenched her teeth. She pushed her pelvis up into Laura's hand, still embedded deep in her pussy, grunting softly and quivering. Her small breasts shook, her gleaming black nipples stiff and pointing. Laura, wanting to touch every part of her sleek, lean, naked body, wanting to devour and consume and fuck her desperately, reached out with her free hand and covered one of Mavis's small, swirling breasts, squeezing it, fucking Mavis now with her fist, first gently, then more roughly as Mavis's body jerked and surged under the approaching onslaught of her climax.] Other authors never go beyond the basic act. You on the other hand describe Mavis's tits rolling around on her chest her nipples stiff with arousal and describing her lean beautiful body. Then you have Laura adding to Mavis's pleasure by squeezing Mavis's tit. Other authors never have their characters do more than one thing at a time. Again, I think it is that lack of imagination problem again. I love how you tell of the shocking intimacy this act engenders. Others just say they fist fucked, big deal.

As usual you keep pouring on the details and giving the reader paragraphs of nirvana. Other authors are satisfied with an entree while you give a full five course meal [Laura never held anything back from her, which was why Mavis loved doing it with her, and this time was no different. She leaned forward over Mavis's thrashing body, pushing her fist deep into the girl's tight cunt, plunging it in even deeper, pulling it up to the edge, the inflamed black-lipped mouth of Mavis's crammed pussy, then plunging it deep again. At the same time, she knew she had to have this small, beautiful breast in her mouth when Mavis came, and she scooped it up with her hand and sucked Mavis's hard nipple into her mouth, still ramming her fist into Mavis so roughly that Mavis groaned in a kind of demented sexual agony just a split second before she came.] I am just so thankful that you are writing this sexual odyssey. You are the only author bar none who actually gives the details that actually make this seem like love making. Other authors don't give the details necessary to really visualize the sex and thus get into the act and they make it seem so short that I'm afraid to blink because I'm afraid I will miss the sex. You give the length and descriptions necessary to make it beautiful.

I'm glad Laura didn't break out in the giggles hear. I would have found that disconcerting myself. I can understand Laura being filled with so much happiness though. Bringing that much pleasure and joy to a woman is an almost holy experience. Again only you show your characters trying to draw out the pleasure as much as possible. Other authors almost make it seem like, she is starting to come, might as well as stop now. You on the other hand [Laura kept sucking her hard little nipple and fist-fucking her in long, slow strokes until she felt Mavis's straining body ease up, and heard her desperate groans turn into softer, relieved whimpering. Her undulations subsided, and her breath grew more normal. With bleary, reddened eyes, she gazed down at Laura, who still had Mavis's wet, hard little nipple in her mouth. Laura smiled up at her, seeing the effect this crushing orgasm had had on Mavis by the blasted expression in her devastatingly sexy eyes. Slowly, exaggerating it, she released Mavis's nipple from her mouth, giving it a sensual swipe with her tongue as it cleared her lips.]

Now Eric rears his "head" so to speak. The male is back. Even Eric is stunned by the hot sex he has just witnessed. I like how Laura decides to help him make Mavis come since he probably can't do it on his own. He has the battering ram but not the skill set it seems. Though, raw power does have its merits. Oh yeah, hot fucking sex is on the way. Since Mavis doesn't know about dildos yet, I can see why she would want this monster inside her. Penetration does feel heavenly. Laura being the conductor she is sets everybody up in the proper position.

Eric does show a little imagination. Positioned behind Mavis in a spoon position to penetrate her from behind while lying on their sides. He does kiss her back and squeeze Mavis's tits and nipples. I was happy to see some skill from the boy. I thought it funny that he is still loose on the trigger and can't take any head from Laura. Eric gladly takes advice from Laura on how to make the situation incendiary. Shows that Eric is smart enough to listen to the maestro. Poor Eric only knows how to ram his cock into Mavis. [She guided the swollen, purplish head of his enormous erect prick up into the gaping, wet, black-lipped, pink slit she had just been raping with her fist, watching the look on Mavis's face as Eric drove it all the way up into her. "Unhhh!" Mavis's eyes rolled up. Eric simply buried his mammoth cock in her body so that Laura could see little but a half-inch of the pale shaft protruding from her stretched pussylips and impaled furrow, followed by the taut sack of his balls.] Again that lack of skill showing again. You have to tailor your lovemaking to the woman. With Dawn, if she is lubricated with some foreplay or past orgasm, then bury your cock / dildo all the way on the first stroke and she would like it to be a pile driving stroke to boot. With a girl who is basically a virgin to this kind of sex, you start off slow. I fear most men tend to be like Eric and not Rob alas. Laura has to instruct him to use some patience and skill. Then having to tell him to talk to Mavis in the first person. That is humorous and I feel somewhat typical of the male beast.

Having written the above it is a beautiful picture of Mavis being slammed and filled with cock (of course I would prefer a dildo). It is obvious that once her cunt gets accommodated to the size and girth of Eric's cock (or my dildo), she quickly gets lubricated and she is now ready for deep slam fucking. Those deep sensual fuck me eyes would drive me insane with lust for her body. I just wish I was the one slamming her, but I would also be using great technique with my power to drive her insane with pleasure. Eric does have the right idea of mauling her tits; he is in the perfect position for doing this.

Of course Laura has now joined the fray and is starting off her lovemaking with sweet sensuality [she began kissing Mavis's wonderful smooth body, kissing her very black, silky abdomen, so taut and flat between the delicate cambers of her ribcage, then her navel, a delicious 'innie,' then her flat belly]. Again only you have this making love to the total woman and not just the mouth, ass, cunt everyone else does. [Already Mavis was squirming and whimpering, becoming even more desirable to Laura and Eric as her sleek, writhing body responded to their passion. Mavis loved sex, and this was exciting new territory for her. She moaned and writhed as Eric began plunging his hard, punishing cock up into her more deeply, more roughly. He was becoming more excited too, and Laura realized there was little she could do now to control his 'mad rapist' frenzy. And of course, she too was becoming overwhelmed with lust for Mavis's lovely young body.] I have been in this position many a time. Watching a bedmate rip a dildo into a pussy right in front of my face. I could lie there for hours just watching it, the cock sinking into the depths and watching the lips cling on the outward stroke. Breathing in deep the smell of excited pussy. Listening to all those delightful sounds of a wet cunt making all those watery sounds, the sound of slapping thighs. These are all things you have captured at one time or another in your stories. This is just one of the reasons I love them so. You always engage all my senses.

[She could see the swollen little berry of Mavis's clit peak out from it's tiny hood each time Eric jammed his rock-hard piston up into her splayed, engorged pussy, cramming it so tight that Mavis's glossy black vulva stretched, and the little hood receded. The little berry then disappeared for a second when he pulled his wet prick out again, then reappeared when he slammed it back up into Mavis. "Ungh!" Mavis gasped, wincing as it began to stab deeper into her. "Unghh! Awwongggg! Unh! Oh!" Laura pressed her lips to Mavis's little clit, feeling the hard ridge of Eric's stiff cock thrusting in and out of Mavis's tight pussy just below her chin. He was fucking her harder and harder now, grunting and groaning himself at the same time, his own groans tangling with Mavis's whimpers and quick yelps of pain as his long, fierce cock stabbed deep into her young pussy. Laura realized that no matter how roughly Mavis might have been fist-fucked by her sister Brenda or by Laura, neither one of them had jabbed their hand as deeply into her cunt as Eric was thrusting his hard cock. "Oh god! Oh god!" Mavis cried out, squirming wildly between them, churning her hips more rapidly too, pushing her clit into Laura's mouth.]. These paragraphs capture so much that other authors just don't have the imagination to do. I just know that other authors would say that Laura sucked Mavis's clit while Eric fucked her from behind. You on the other hand give tons of visual details

on how Eric's cock is stuffing Mavis's tight cunt and how this works the clit hood. You then as always give us the love whimpers of Mavis. I so dearly love these vocalizations. Then you capture the feel of sucking a clit with a large dildo or "cock" sliding in and out of the vagina. It is a blast feeling that sensation. I love how Mavis is squirming more and more. I think by now the pain is becoming the pain of sweet fucking and oh so pleasurable.

Geez, I love the detail of Eric nearly lifting Mavis off the bed with each savage stroke. I must admit that men just have the raw power to give this kind of slam fucking. Only my lovers who have been very athletic have been able to slam fuck me like this. What I really love was Laura mauling Mavis's clit [Laura sucked the girl's clit hungrily, digging her fingers into the sleek muscles of Mavis's thighs, tongue-stroking her clit between sucks, trying to make her come fast.] Laura shows her always present consideration [Eric's cock exploded with jism inside of her tight pussy, forcing Laura to release Mavis's clit from her lips as she could actually feel the rhythmic, muscular jerking of his cock as it spurted. She was also reluctant to add to the intensity of Mavis's shattering orgasm by sucking the girl's throbbing clit any harder.] Sometimes one can have too much stimulation and you show this from time to time. I find it hot and a lot like me how Laura gets off on others pleasure [At the same time, she luxuriated in the sexual release they had both experienced, their smells, their agonized groans, their straining flesh.] Had to chuckle at Laura sending Mavis back to the bathroom to clean her quim out again of that disgusting sperm.

I can fully understand Laura's rising desperation. Having watched her two fuck mates have crushing orgasms and not yet experienced one yet would have me climbing the walls by now. I love to give to my partners, but a time does come when I need reciprocity. I think Eric's observation is so on target ["I wish I could come like you women do," he confessed to Laura. "You guys seem to come with your whole body. Like, she really shook from the inside out when she came."] Women come with everything that we are. A first class orgasm does rip apart a woman's body with sweet raging waves of tormenting fire. I feel like my pussy is being turned inside out and my womb is exploding with pleasure and my whole body is filled with electricity stretching me to the breaking point. Oh yeah, women have the best orgasms, especially if a lesbian is fucking your whole body and soul.

I do have to admit I love Laura giving head to Eric. You make it so sensual. It is a hot visual. If my woman wants it, I will give her dildo a first rate BJ if she so desires. Some women really get off on this. One good thing about a dildo is that it is always ready to go and doesn't need pumping so to speak. I'm thinking if I had I a cock, it would start to swell if Laura told me that she wanted it up her tight asshole. Sigh, I do wish they could come up with a dildo that could react like the real thing. Sucking it too life like Laura is doing. Using little love sucks and then caressing and sucking the bulbous head hard and deep and taking the shaft to the back of your throat and feeling it pulse with life. I love doing that to a dildo, but one can't recreate the beast coming back to life and its warmth and throbbing. It is a shame that hasn't been recreated yet. Sigh, maybe one day.

I like it when Laura and her women luxuriate in the white and black contrast of their skin. I found it humorous that Mavis had no idea what Laura was getting at about being fucked at the same time by Mavis and Eric. When I read this over a year ago for the first time I was surprised by its originality. I had never considered having my ass fucked with a dildo and my cunt fisted. I'm just to linear sometimes. I have since added this to by repertory and Joann and Maria also. We have almost put each other in the hospital we come so hard. That being filled up and having those invaders ramming into your body is just mind blowing. I love how Mavis is totally flummoxed by what Eric and Laura are doing. She is still an innocent in many ways.

Oh yeah, I love how you describe having one's ass penetrated by a big invader. I love that paralyzing feeling that gives way to white heat of ecstatic pleasure. Only you detail that feeling of pain turning to pleasure. I have had a few women who don't seem to mind having a big dildo rammed up their ass without some anal foreplay and slow opening. I'm not one of those. It hurts! going in let me tell you, until my sphincter starts to relax and loosen. But once I get accommodated, I love to have them pull the dildo out and then penetrate me again. Love that pain / pleasure of reentry. My women tell me they love seeing my grimaces of pained pleasure and grunts of pained pleasure. I often place my hand on their thigh or hip, kind of lightly holding them back. They just keep ramming me. I love that feeling of being rammed through my fake motions of mercy and pleadings of going easy. Joann like me really whimpers when she is first getting ass fucked (soon she is pleading for you pound it in deep and hard). Other writers just have them fuck away and never show this dynamic at work. Only you give the reader the pleasure of getting to experience the slow emergence of pleasure over the pain.

Mavis is still humorously clueless to what is about to happen. She thinks Laura is lubricated enough to have Eric's eleven inch cock in her pussy, why the need for baby oil. I wish I could have seen Mavis's face when she finally understood what is about to happen. You capture what I was talking about earlier perfectly [Eric had found her backtrack easily enough with his fingertip and was pulling it open for the huge, swollen head of his cock. Laura's eyes watered as she felt the spongy knob on top of the hard stalk pushing against her anus, seeking entry. "Unh!" she gasped. "Oh!" Laura clenched her teeth as she felt the huge, rock-hard stalk sliding up into her ass. The water in her eyes spilled over and ran down her cheeks. It felt like a baseball bat was being shoved into her. She had forgotten how gigantic it was, how it made your whole body feel like it was just a painfully tight sleeve for this enormous, flexing, throbbing prick. Her body was paralyzed by white-hot pain for several seconds. "Ungghhh!" she grunted helplessly, shaking, sucking in gulps of breath desperately, hoping for the pain to pass.] This is pretty much me. I am always amazed how this turns me on so. I guess it is like childbirth I have been told. The pleasure of it totally overcomes the pain involved. Of

course Eric doesn't have skill or self control but Laura's pleading gets through. I'm glad that Eric backed off and didn't cause her undo pain. I hate to see Laura receive any true pain. Women are just so in tune with this that that is almost never a problem I have found. They instinctively know how to fuck their partner in the way they truly want it.

I like it when Laura goes into teacher mode and instructs Mavis on the basics of what needs to be done in a situation. I have noticed her doing this with all her teenage lovers. Teaching and coaxing them on how to be better lovers. These girls are so lucky to have Laura instructing them on how to be sensational lovers. All their future (hopefully women) lovers will be very appreciative of this instruction. I love how Mavis has to be reassured that Laura wanted her to fist her ["Are you sure?" Mavis asked in a tiny voice, clenching and unclenching the fist, the one Laura wanted to feel inside her pussy, a beautiful small black fist she had felt there before. "Yes! Hurry!"] Mavis was a real sweetie here. She shows her gentle nature also. She wants to fuck Laura desperately but only if she knows she not causing her true pain.

As I noticed so many times you make the initial penetration so beautiful [With a baleful look, Mavis slid closer and dropped her hand between Laura's thighs. Laura parted them, aided by Eric, who held one of Laura's thighs up with his hand since Laura was lying on her side. This exposed the festering, juicy trench of Laura's wet, glistening, magenta-colored pussy, and Mavis slipped the wedge made by her fingers into it quickly, as if she didn't want to prolong Laura's agony. "Yes!" Laura grunted softly. "Ungghh! Yes! Awwonnnnngggg!" Mavis's whole hand slipped inside Laura's cunt, up to the wrist. Laura was now penetrated front and back, and almost unable to bear the intensity of the sensations that filled her quivering body. "Oh god . . . oh god!" she panted, gnawing her lower lip as she felt Eric beginning again to move his cock up and down in her tight back channel, and simultaneously feeling Mavis bring her fingers together into a fist inside her pussy, feeling Mavis's knuckles rotating against the inner walls of her engorged slit.] What can I say? As always you give me those of so sweet details that I so crave. The

way Eric helps with the penetration, describing Laura's love swollen cunt, her grunts of penetrations, and the wonderful feelings of this totally thrilling double invasion.

With sex like this the only way to fuck is hard and deep and this you capture perfectly [Her eyes caught Mavis's eyes, the girl's pulsing, throbbing, scintillatingly sexual eyes, just as Eric nearly lifted Laura's whole body off the bed with a deep, stabbing lunge of his huge cock deep up into her flaming ass.] Oh yeah, my cunt is pulsing and getting wet reading this. I thought it was cool how Mavis, once she overcomes her initial reluctance then plunges her hand into Laura's tight cunt and starts twisting it. She gets drawn into the frenzy. [Mavis joining in the rhythm in spite of her initial reluctance, being swept up in the hypnotic sexual whirlwind of the moment, gently pumping her fist into Laura's throbbing pussy, then increasing the force of her thrusts, until Laura was nearly overwhelmed by the surging, plunging invaders of her body.] I love making a woman comfortable with something new that she has never done before. Getting her turned on and then totally accepting of a new facet of lesbian lovemaking. I find they always go nuts when they get these new experiences.

I was totally turned on when Laura gets Mavis to suck her nipples and holds her head with both hands to make sure that Mavis sucks her tits hard. I love this desperation in Laura. I love it when Laura gets aggressive and demands that her women bite her nipples, hard enough to send fire through her body. [But Mavis's mouth and fist quickly brought her back to life. Mavis sucked Laura's throbbing nipple more aggressively than she ever had before. Laura, whose hands had fallen away from Mavis's head under the piercing impact of Eric's pile-driving cock, now grabbed her again, pushing her breast maniacally into Mavis's face, grunting and growling in a horrible fit of burning lust. "Suck it . . . bite it!" she panted. "Yes! Ungghhh! Oh yes! Aunngghhh!" She felt Mavis's teeth sink into her areola, which made her whole writhing body stream with flaming rivers of excruciating pleasure. At the same moment, Mavis's fist reared into Laura's aching, plundered pussy, her wrist bone raking and mashing Laura's swollen, jangling clit, and Laura nearly fainted in a paroxysm of sensation so acute that she knew a horrific orgasm was traveling to meet her like a huge, unavoidable locomotive bearing down on her at a blinding speed.] I love how you are able to strike that balance with your rough

sex. You keep it form tipping over the balance into SM. This is just women who want their sex rough but you never denigrate it and make it cheap. It is always consensual and within the bounds of normal rough natural sex. Love how you interspersed Eric ramming his cock up Laura's ass while you are describing what Mavis is doing to her cunt and tits. I am always amazed that other authors can't give the reader these great details, especially the way you are able to give details beyond the main act happening currently.

This is what I call an all star orgasm [And now the peak was near, and they knew it. They began pumping and squeezing and sucking and raping Laura without mercy, feeling her writhing body stiffen and shake in the preliminary convulsions that came just before her orgasm. And then it was there, a crushing, wrenching blow that made her black out briefly as it engulfed her straining flesh. It was like being hit by a ton of bricks. All the breath seemed to leave her body, replaced by liquid fire being pumped up through her ass and pussy into the rest of her throbbing body. "AAAUUNNNOOWWNNGGGGGG! ANGGHHH! UNNGGGMMHHIIEEEE!" she cried out, when the breath finally re-entered her lungs.] And it continues for four more paragraphs. Wow. I myself felt stunned after this orgasm.

A little aside, I thought it a hoot how Laura makes an observation while she is getting fucked to oblivion that the guys who repaired her bed did a great job because it is holding up to all the pounding that is going on. It is strange how the mind can drift to the strangest of thoughts during sex.

I like how Laura runs Eric off. I can't blame Eric for raking Mavis with his eyes and Mavis is so sexual I knew she would have to flirt with him. Hope that Mavis stays away from Eric. Laura loves her and wants to shower that love and passion on her. All Eric wants to do is fuck her pussy, end of story. The difference between what Laura wants from Mavis and what Eric wants is day and night. So my thinking is get rid of the man, puuu-lease. [It had been thrilling, but she was in love with Mavis and wanted the darling girl to herself, to kiss her and fuck her alone. She felt cheated.] Don't get me wrong, it was great sex, but I long for the next chapter with just Laura and Mavis, alone. With this parting I know that the sex will be incendiary.

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Chapter 234:

This chapter starts with Laura experiencing some severe angst. I quickly remember that the previous chapter was the one with Mavis and Eric. I really remember this chapter even though I haven't read it in a few months. I so remember the delicious fucking. I so love reading of cock plunging deep up a tight cunt and asshole. I so love reading how you describe these cocks plunging deep up a spasming cunt or clenching asshole. Plus, I got the idea of being fisted up my cunt while another lover is wildly pistoning her hips and driving her cock hard and deep up my love aching asshole. Wowee, the orgasms I have had have nearly made me black out. During the aftermath of Isabella we met Shari at a restaurant and picked her up and soon she was home with us (my archangels, Dodie and Frankie) and she's a complete slut so we love her. She saw us do this and she was pleading for some of this action. Dodie laid down on the bed and guided her lubed cock up Shari's ass and was soon slamming their thighs together while Shari got that beautiful look only a woman gets while her asshole is being plundered. That look of intense sensations of pleasure and some pain flooding your brain with pleasure. After some beautiful fucking they paused and Joann slowly worked her fist into Shari's tight cunt. Wow. Shari nearly died she came so hard from Joann's fisting and inhaling her clit down her throat while Dodie slowed down and gave her a hard vicious deep up slam fuck. It was so beautiful watching her face getting that tension and her eyes started staring off into space and suddenly she was screaming and her body just filled with wild spasms while Dodie grabbed her hips to piston her hard and fast down onto her upthrusting cock. Joann just pumped and twisted her fist deep into her spasming cunt while pulling her clit flesh taunt while we watched her cheeks working as her tongue buzzed sawed her clit. God, she was just crushed with deep womb shattering jackknifing spasms. She just collapsed on top of Dodie and swooned for a while love drooling cutely. It is just so rad feeling that cock and hand working against each other and that thin membrane between your asshole and cunt that one can't help but come like this. I think I will be rereading this wonderful chapter very soon. I sooooo loved Mavis ramming her fist up Laura's tight pussy while Eric ripped his large cock viciously up her spasming asshole.

I always feel for Laura when she is hurt when her other lovers form attachments to each other. I really can't blame Eric for desiring Mavis. I mean who wouldn't want to make love to this vixen with the mystical eyes. I would make love to her forever if I could. She is simply so fucking beautiful. With Mavis I really can't blame the sixteen year vixen. At that age she is just really starting to realize her sexual powers and of course she wants to use them. While I think she should spend time only with women; I myself fucked guys at that age. Still, at this age, Mavis doesn't have the sophistication to show her desire to be with Eric out of Laura's vision. She is simply acting on her natural desires. Laura loves so deeply that it hurts her to share her lovers though I think she is evolving on this some. She seems more willing to share her lovers. I noticed she recently thought of her and Sara sharing Brad. I would love to see this but I just hope that Sara is wise enough to see Brad as only a sport fuck and keep her focus where it should be. That focus being on Laura while getting the strange she needs on the side, just like Laura does. It will be interesting to see if this wonderful tryst occurs. I know Sara would go wild on his cock. Sara simply knows how to fuck like the wonderful lover she is. I would love to see what wisecracks she would come up with and how Laura and Brad would work her body in a beautiful symphony of love.

Okay, I got to the next part of the story and all I can say is HEIN-oouusssss. This is where we discover that Tamara has run away to Europe with that complete loser of a football boyfriend. I am simply dreamy now that I know that she has dumped him and Dawn has let us know that she is now a complete lesbian slut who buries face deep every chance she can now in Dawn's oh so beautiful pussy. I am simply so happy that these childhood friends are now deep lovers. Now I just hope that the "rainbow" coalition can become complete with Shayla coming back from New York and makes it a perfect trifecta. Unfortunately, for Laura, she can't know the future like I do at this time. I was really angry when I read that she had fled. How could a woman (though they do too often, sad to say) run away from this [Laura blushed beet red. She knew she had not seen Tamara around and had wondered why. After all, the girl had fallen deeply in love with Laura, honestly and completely in love, after Laura had found her g-spot and made her nearly perish in a string of glorious orgasms. She had been so in love that even Laura had been mildly embarrassed.] I may seem a little silly by getting upset over a story but you really draw the reader into the story to the point that we feel the emotions and empathize totally with the situations that you present. Tamara simply ran away from the first real emotions she has probably ever felt. I bet men in the past never truly touched her soul and Laura's was the first to reach down into her heart. She then panics because it is a woman touching her and she freaks. I hate what man's world has done to us women way too many times. I am just so happy that I know that Tamara eventually came to her senses and came to Laura and Dawn. Fortunately, Laura had awakened Dawn's true nature and now Dawn and Tamara are together as they were meant to be. It must be so beautiful watching these two beautiful women making love to each other almost every night.

I see this is still when Laura and Rhonda are out to spit each other. I am so happy that cantankerous situation has largely resolved itself. Sigh, it is so sad that women can be so cutting to each other. I really, really agree with the theory that the reason we can get this way is because man's world crushes our individuality and tries to prevent us from having any power and this how we try to compensate by trying to pull rank on EACH OTHER when we should be attacking the rules and constructs of man's world that keeps us down. Okay, enough soap box for now. Rhonda unfortunately does know how to cut with the best of them [At work, Rhonda dropped a malicious bomb on her by casually remarking, as they passed one another entering and leaving the restroom, "Hi, Laura. Gosh, must've crushed you to see that stunning young Tamara Taylor just quit like that, eh?"] She knew exactly what she was doing. She knew this would kill Laura. Geez, I guess I can't really blame Laura for hating Rhonda at times. Rhonda cuts Laura as hard as she can. I just hope they can keep the ax buried. Rhonda shows her wistful desires when she moons over Tamara's beauty and reveals that she tried to flirt with Tamara but got nowhere. I think this proves that an honest personality will win you a lot more pussy than a cool sophisticated but haughty (as Rhonda seemed then) personality. Many women can sense this and can be easily turned off unless they are simply seeking a one night stand and won't have to worry about tomorrow. I have fucked such women with this thought in mind. Some I never saw or fucked again and some I found were more like Deshona and now Rhonda and found they were real live women but you just had to get past their bitchy front. Of course, some of them were really bitches.

Laura is able to flee after Rhonda has finished gashing her over Tamara and Randi. I can fully understand Laura feeling totally crushed here. This is a triple blow to your stomach. A lover fleeing from your loving arms, a harpy slashing and gashing you and worrying deep in your soul over an angel maybe going astray with a man like Randi did recently with Rob. I can really feel and empathize with Laura's plight here. I hate to see people in pain. It just makes me clench in sympathy. I can handle one blow but when I get hit from multiple angels I too will get totally blue and depressed. This is when I need good loving to revive my soul and id. Wow, I think this may be the first time where we see Laura starting to resist the siren call of severe bondage and SM that Karen has called to Laura with. She has used this kind of love and pain to kind of exorcize her spiritual pain through the physical pain. I simply find that a little weird. For me I would hurt in both places now. I am so happy to see Laura starting to resist this call at self immolation. I love to be roughed up but that strangling of one's breast and being hit with whips that actually cut and deeply bruise is just past my desires though I fully support women who go for this. We all need to feed our souls what they crave for. I am just happy that Laura's soul has weaned itself off these darker pleasures. There are so many more pleasant ways to bring oneself the sweet pleasure that stirs the soul.

To prevent herself from going to Karen and the dark pleasure she can provide Laura instead drives to the apartment where she and Tamara fucked so romantically and stirringly. I can fully understand her being drawn to this place with Tamara so suddenly and shockingly leaving like she did. Trying to recapture some of the loving magic that they created with their bodies and souls. That special rapture that only sweet lesbian fucking can produce. I think is very romantic Laura driving back to the place where she and Tamara fucked so heatedly. In fact it made Tamara [She loved me, Laura thought, mawkishly, embarrassed to be going over and over it but unable to forget it. I loved having her love me. It meant she would let me have her again and again, and that Stewart didn't matter. Did she really just take off like that?] I can remember being confused and very angry when I read this chapter the first time. How could she run away like this? Of course, I have experienced this to many times where I couldn't get her to come to her senses I felt so forlorn and forsaken. How could they deny the truth? It hurt me of course, but I felt angry with them for denying themselves what they now knew deep in their souls. How could they turn away from the truth I had shown them? Of course I know the truth. Man's world and all their rules, society brainwashing and the hijacking of religion to use false dogma to crush women and our true desires for each other. I am always so sad when I see women succumb to man's world and don't listen to their true selves. They will forever be haunted by what they have given up.

Laura in a daze goes up to Tamara's door and [Laura found it hard to believe. Almost in a daze, as if sleepwalking, she parked her car and moments later found herself ringing the doorbell of Tamara's apartment. Or former apartment. The door was answered by a young, slender black girl who looked vaguely familiar. Then Laura saw the long braid coming directly out the hair at the top of her forehead. The girl in the picture! Layla? Shayla? What was her name?] It is just so sweet Laura being drawn back to this love nest where such sweet heated fucking occurred. I too would be drawn to this place in such a circumstance. Trying to understand how she could run away from me when she was obviously in love with me. How can a woman run away from a woman who made her scream in total complete rapture? I so hate man's world for this. Laura is greeted with the woman she had observed in the photo while with Tamara. I love how you just so show the fates and life leading one on. Let see where it goes. I already like Shayla [The girl smiled at Laura. She had a beautiful, open, friendly smile, betraying no suspicion or annoyance. "Yes?"] A great smile is just so killer and instantly makes me like and want you.

Whoa, this is where we meet my avatar Dawn. Yeah!!! I simply adore how she loves her sex just like I like it. She loves smooth and gentle but also needs lots of hard and nasty. Shayla being so nice makes it obvious that Laura is welcome by opening the door for Laura in welcome. Shayla commiserates with Laura when she tells of Tamara's sudden departure. I love this little detail of angst [Laura knew her face must have sunk, and she could even feel her shoulders slump in disappointment. On the other hand, she remembered to stand up straight again quickly. It wouldn't do for her to seem like a rejected lover.] I know my shoulders and face would have fallen actually hearing someone close to my love telling me how she just ran off on me. It would really kill me. Shayla now invites Laura in when she sees her distress. I love her sense of compassion. The world needs all of this it can get. We women need to support each other as much as we can. Oh yeah, I am so happy to get my first glimpse yet again of he beauty that is Dawn [Now Laura caught a glimpse of another black girl inside. This one, though not beautiful by any standard definition, sped like an arrow straight into the depths of Laura's overactive libido. She was very black, like Cecilia or Charise, and had flashing, ambiguous eyes. Her dense, wiry hair was drawn up in a broom-like spray behind her head, wrapped in a bright yellow scarf. She was wearing jeans and a big, loose sweatshirt. The girl at the door saw Laura looking at her, and Laura quickly covered by smiling and accepting the invitation.] I have come to so love this woman with the squint smile and easy going ways who fucks like a total fuck slut. For me it is sweet, sweet, Ada first, then Mavis of the mystical eyes and then my beloved Dawn. She has got a body that is simply designed by the gods for hot, hard sweet fucking. I so wish I could feast all night on her divine gash. I could eat her pussy all night and be begging for more in the morning. I can just feel her thighs clamping around my ears as she pump, rams her cunt hard into my hard sucking mouth as her screams of crushing bliss fills our bedroom.

They make greetings and Laura discovers their names. Oh geez, we discover that Shayla is going to New York tomorrow. That would have my always hopeful mind fall a little. I am always happy for a woman to advance herself but my selfish part always wants them near so I can love them and seduce them if not already in my bed. You now start to paint your word pictures I so adore of each new woman that enters the story [She was a slender, half-formed slip of a thing, but this made her nearly burst the buttons of her man's white shirt with pride, though it was clear that her breasts were small to nothing. She had a dancer's body, almost a female sprinter's body, very athletic, not an ounce of fat, only sleek muscle, from the little that Laura could actually see, but not the bulging, glossy, grotesque muscles that a bodybuilder like Brandi had, or even the impressive muscles Kendra sported from working out all the time. Shayla's were the muscles a dancer needs to spring and sail through the air, or to spin perfectly in one place, to leap, to bend but not break, to arch and soar and descend with superior grace to the floor.] I have always adored how you truly describe your women. Other authors really tell me nothing and you flood me with sweet details that just makes me drool for these women. I love discovering Shayla's lean body build and her small tits made for lesbian loving. Sleek muscles that still have great power coiled in their slender fibers. I really smiled with the comment of nearly bursting her shirt with pride over her accomplishments. You go girl!! I simply love Laura and Dawn applauding Shayla. I love how positive and life affirming most of your women. Most of your women are just the bomb and the more selfish ones like Dee Dee, Taneesha and Joy you still make so loveable by showing their weaknesses as well as their strengths that Laura quickly discovers and helps fan to life.

I am so like Laura [She liked them both as well as feeling a powerful sexual attraction to Dawn. But she couldn't look at her very intently since she didn't want to seem rude and intrusive, and she was also afraid her lust would show.] I so want new women but one does need to show the couth that Laura's shows here. For seductions to be successful I definitely believe in taking things subtle and smooth until they are helplessly in thrall to you and then you move in for the love kill and totally rock their world. Dawn makes her leave and I have to chuckle at Laura "biting her tongue and twisting her fingers" to keep her libido in check. Plus, I always love how the fact that Dawn has a boyfriend and how Laura feels she will never have a chance. I always love reading how Laura is so sure she won't get her girl and then feeling her joy and elation when her woman finally finds her way to her bed where she is supposed to be. Once Dawn leaves, Laura focuses back on Shayla [In seconds, though, the door shut, Dawn was gone, and she and Shayla were alone. Shayla, it quickly appeared, was one of those people who are at ease anywhere, in any situation, and never made nervous by anything. She was relaxed and friendly, as before. It was Laura who was nervous.] I love reading of Laura's butterflies. I like women like Shayla who never meet a stranger. They just make you feel so welcome and comfortable. We discover though Shayla seems calm, she is all jittery on the inside thinking about her wonderful opportunity. I am very, very happy for her. I grew up with the saying "good luck is where hard work and opportunity cross." Shayla deserves this.

I simply adore this description of Shayla [Shayla brewed them both a cup a tea, while Laura watched. She also realized that Shayla was one of those people who were not intrinsically beautiful but nevertheless very attractive because of their natures, because they radiated a kind of comfort with themselves and genuine interest in others that was irresistible. Shayla had a sort of bulbous nose with a flat front which on many women would have been flagrantly homely, but on her it was barely noticeable. She had a few unpleasant acne scars on one cheek, and not perfectly straight teeth, but her smile was radiant and stirring, and she moved with a grace—obviously a dancer's grace—that Laura could only envy.] When I first went back to look at her photos I first saw that wonderful smile and the way her eyes just seem to sparkle. I noticed the nose and teeth but her beaming face just made those fade and when I focused on them after perusing her beaming face they just seem to be beautiful additions to her smile until I think she is a complete fox that I would be so proud to have on my arm anywhere we went. All the time thinking don't you guys and fellow dykes wish you were me. That it will be my tongue buried deep in her bucking cunt and her mouth licking my cunt for all she is worth. I love these "less" than perfect women. They so often have great personalities and will simply fuck your pussy until you totally worn out and completely besotted with sweet lassitude.

You tell us what she is wearing and how she sweeps her hair back in a loose bun except for that totally cute dangling braid. I always hunger to know exactly what hue Laura's woman's skin color is [She was not nearly as black as Dawn; instead, her smooth skin had the rich deep milk chocolate color of Randi or Ada.] I so adore and love to fuck women of color. I will fuck anybody but I prefer women who are not of Western European stock. I sometimes feel a little funny like Laura in my preferences. Ever since I was a little girl I have always been attracted to Latinas, black, Mediterranean, Oriental women and then women like myself "white". I love all women but if I had a lineup of all types, just going by looks I will pick women of color just like Laura. They make small talk which I have always loved reading in your stories but Shayla must know the truth ["I guess you were sleeping with her, eh?" Shayla said, apparently without any devious intent, as if she were asking if Laura and Tamara belonged to the same bridge club. But Laura, as usual, was totally flummoxed and actually choked on her tea. She gulped and spluttered and coughed, holding her fist to her mouth, turning purple. It seemed like one of the most embarrassing moments of her life. She was aware of Shayla pounding her back and asking if she was okay.] I have always smiled when Laura is totally horrified when her lesbian ways are brought to light. It makes Laura totally cute and precious. Plus, it makes her so human and obvious to the reader that she is honest and genuine in her feelings and dealings. She is just enjoying Shayla's sweet presence. Shayla must have some idea about Laura's desires and is naturally curious.

Through Shayla we learn quite a bit about Tamara. We discover that even her friends know she is a "surface" kind of girl. She doesn't seek the deeper answers in life but is totally genuine and kind hearted. This is a quality that many of us should seek a little harder. We find her boyfriend is a total loser who can't make it here and is thus going oversees and unfortunately Tamara is totally hoodwinked by him. Fortunately, I know she has dumped him for Dawn's sweet loving arms for long nights of sweet lesbian debauchery. I sure wish I could watch their intense sweet lovemaking. I know Tamara is totally addicted to Dawn's love cream and gets as much as her greedy mouth can get every night. Shayla lets Laura and the reader know that Tamara was indeed smitten with Laura. Constantly saying Laura this and Laura that. This makes me even more upset knowing that the only reason she went with that loser was because she was running away from Laura and the truth of her true lesbian nature. Grrrrrrr.

I am smiling at Laura's mortification and being flattered at the same time. Laura tries to hide her sexuality from all but her angels. I don't flaunt it but I don't deny it either. Joann really exasperates Maria and me sometimes when she doesn't mask our true selves in public sometimes. One does need to be careful out there. I can't blame Laura for wanting to keep herself hidden from man's world because it can still be a very crappy world out there. Laura is able to choke out that yes they were indeed lovers and that it was wonderful. I hope Shayla picked that up. Shayla can understand how two such beautiful women would want to make love to each other. We also discover she is a little envious of Tamara's beauty and how she got the guys. It is natural that on looks alone most people will gravitate towards innate beauty initially. I love how Laura's innate goodness is fanned with Shayla lamenting over her perceived lack of beauty [Laura wanted to bite at this invitation, to tell Shayla how fetching she was herself, and that she shouldn't let a gorgeous but vacuous airhead like Tamara make her feel inferior. But she decided quickly it would make her seem too predatory. Not only a lesbian, but a horny one eager to fuck every pretty young girl in sight. Still, it made her look differently at Shayla. This lovely young girl, why wouldn't men want her? Laura could suddenly recognize a yearning in her own mind and body that she understood very well.] I too have fallen hard for Shayla. I think she is beautiful and I simply love her easy going friendly manner. I would so love to take her to my bed and make her scream out in helpless rapture. Savoring and moaning as I swallow her love cream from her pumping and spasming cunt. I so long to make a woman feel like she is the most special woman in the world when she is in my bed. I will give you my all.

Laura compliments Shayla on her unique hair braid and Shayla is duly shyly thankful. I love how you show this [Laura smiled at her during a long, fairly uncomfortable pause, and then self-consciously looked away, aware that she was giving Shayla the smoldering, sexual stare she reserved for those she desperately desired.] Many times during a seduction you do have these moments of discomfort. You are really the only author to show this and then show how we proceed the seduction along. You show real life when you do this. You show how two women interact and the steps in the dance of love. How a woman must read the situation to make sure you get your woman in your bed. Shayla now admits to having had a sexual interlude with a fellow dancer though the woman didn't rock her world. Heinous. I know I go about how women are such great lovers but of course some are a little lacking I fear. I find almost all of these are still too nervous from man's brainwashing or totally self-absorbed. I get the feeling this woman was probably a prime a dona. They know discuss how so many professional dancers are gay, which I have heard also. They both admit to wanting to bed Baryshnikov. He always seemed so girlie to me. Oh well. Shayla is a little surprised at this admission of bisexuality but Laura knows how to refocus Shayla's attention ["Did you ever think about trying it again?" she asked gently, but kept her eyes tightly riveted to Shayla's. Shayla held Laura's gaze without flinching, then looked down at her tea cup. "Not until now," she whispered.] Oh yes, sweet love is in the air.

I am smiling and feeling warm inside when I read of Laura's body suddenly recharging with the scent of love in the air. I know that feeling of adrenalin pumping in my veins and feeling my body getting all antsy, craving sweet loving. I so adore your sweet flow of events. Laura asks to take her jacket off and if Shayla will dance for her. Only you give me these sweet moments of real life [Shayla grinned and shook her head. Her one long black braid dangled in front of her face bizarrely, and she crossed her eyes in a clownish frown, looking at it in front of her nose. "See what I mean?" she smiled.] Shades of Sara. I love Laura's answer to Shayla's questions of if Laura truly wants to watch her ["Then change," Laura smiled. "How often to you have a devoted audience of one?"] All true performers do crave audiences. Shayla must dance for Laura. She wants to show her prowess but I think she also knows that if she dances she will be like Sherazade dancing for her master and this can only mean sweet loving is about to commence. I like the observation by Laura upon Shayla's return how her lean body is even more flattened out by her tight white leotard. I know that white on black must have been beautiful. I like the thought of Shayla changing in the room where Laura and Tamara fucked so heatedly and exhaustingly. Coaxing as many orgasms as possible out of love exhausted pussies.

I love to dance but I just go with the flow the music and let my body move to it. To watch a woman who is professionally trained to dance is something almost mystical and totally sublime. I saw on PBS a master Kabuki dancer dancing to one of Bach's sonatas for solo cello. It was freaking beautiful. They way he would snap his fan open at just the right time that acted as a base beat. I sure wish I had that on DVD. I know Laura must be totally mesmerized by this woman performing so wonderfully to Bach's music. Frankie teaches at a local dance studio. She can just so move to the music. She has danced for me her dances of seduction that have left me panting. I wish you could see her doing her dance of the seven veils with her veils slowly disappearing until she's dancing in the nude before us before we fall on her lack a pack of starving wolves. I love seeing her smirk of satisfaction as we drool all over ourselves. I love how the dance comes to an end [The stark white leotard contrasted thrillingly with the deep rich dark chocolate of her skin, a contrast Laura always found fascinatingly erotic anyway, now hypnotic and scintillating as Shayla showed off her amazing physical skills. When the music stopped, she was panting and shiny with a thin film of perspiration. This aroused Laura even more. She clapped, genuinely excited, as Shayla bounced over to the CD player and shut it off.] I have just rubbed my face in Frankie's perspiration getting her scent all over me after she has danced for us. Frankie really loves dancing for us as a group and each of us have gotten our individual lap dances by now when we have had

her by ourselves.

Of course Laura is effusive with her praise which Shayla basks in. I know that Shayla was dancing for Laura's affections so this is the next natural step [Feeling bold in the aftermath of this exciting performance, and liking Shayla very much, Laura went over to her and carefully disengaged the long braid, freeing it to dangle again in front of Shayla's face. Shayla's eyes were on hers the whole time, and Laura brushed the braid to the side so that their mouths could come together. They kissed slowly, without any aggressive passion or insistence. Shayla's mouth opened to Laura's searching tongue after a while.] I so love these moments when we have arrived at sweet love. Moving to my woman and taking her gently in my arms and bending my head in for our first kiss. Seeing her eyes watching me and then closing as our mouths touch. Feeling her soft lips for the first time and how our lips melt and meld together. I so love my first kiss with any lover. With a new lover I get the thrill of newness and discovery. With new lovers I love the sense of hesitancy you usually have in discovery your woman's body and her mouth. I so love that first feel and taste of my lover's lips.

Like Laura I quickly start my hands exploring my lover's body. I will start off like Laura here just skimming along your body learning your unique curves and the firmness of your muscles. I like doing this with clothes and then removing your clothes and feeling your skin and muscle without any barriers to interfere with my tactile perusal of your body. I like how Laura has other lover's to compare Shayla's lean body too. I like doing that with my lovers. I love their uniqueness and worship them but it is still fun to compare. I so love how you start slow so you can show [But Shayla was superbly conditioned and supple, and her body seemed to melt willingly into Laura's as they kissed and embraced more eagerly.] I love feeling my woman melting into my arms. I know I'm doing my job when my woman melts into my embrace. I love feeling her body responding to my ministrations. I love meeting women like Shayla [Laura felt a hot squirt of sexual fire shoot through her whole body at these words. Things with Shayla were so natural, so relaxed. There was no complicated flirtation or anxiety, as with so many others. She and Shayla enjoyed one another. Shayla had loved dancing for Laura, and Laura had loved watching. And now they were going to enjoy thrilling sex together, and it was all so relaxed and natural. Laura was filled with wonder.] A woman who is totally relaxed and at one with herself and knows how to seek pleasure when it is offered to her. This woman is simply and plainly nice and easy going. A woman who wants pleasure and knows how to go for it.

It is a cute dynamic when Shayla says she wants to make love on the sofa and not in the bedroom since that is where Tamara and Laura made love. I think I would blush at that. I love making love in the living room. I so love a woman removing her clothes for me [With a fluid motion born of many years spent pulling leotards on and off, she peeled the garment off and was completely naked. Being a few inches shorter, she looked up expectantly at Laura in the dim light, since the room was much darker now that she had pulled the drapes. Laura removed her own clothing in a hurry, feeling very conspicuously dressed since Shayla was now stark naked.] I know I would be stripping like a whirlwind here. It is time for sweet fucking. I love fucking in natural dimmed light of daytime when the drapes have been pulled closed. I always have found this so romantic. I so adore the transition between sensual seduction to raw wanton need [Laura cradled Shayla's face in both hands and kissed her mouth more heatedly, driving her tongue in deep, feeling her own passion rise and throb and ache inside her body. She somehow went from tentatively embracing this marvelous young woman with the half-formed body of a child to clasping Shayla urgently, hungrily, digging her fingers into the girl's supple flesh, kissing her in a ravening fit of wanton need.] I so love wrapping my woman in my arms and spreading my fingers and digging my fingers gently into her to draw her close as I tilt my head to get our mouths mated as I drive my tongue down her throat. My women just melt for me. I love the warmth I feel when I have a woman cocooned in my arms. Our bodies pressing together everywhere and heating each other up for sweet loving. I so love claiming a woman's mouth as my own as I slither my tongue around hers, exploring her mouth before I ram it down her moaning throat. They just murmur and thrum in pleasure.

They breath out their adore for each other and then Shayla melts me with ["Come here . . . lie down with me and let me kiss you forever."] Wow. I would be cross-eyed over that line. Oh yeah, I really like this next paragraph [Laura pulled her own onto the sofa, which made creaking, squeaking noises as their flesh pressed against the worn leather. She enfolded Shayla's naked body in her arms, feeling their small breasts brush and then press together, feeling Shayla's warm breath on her neck. Laura really was rhapsodically enchanted by this lean, delicious, graceful naked woman in her arms, filling her lungs with Shayla's welcome odor, the faint scent of sweat mingled with the ripe, thick, pungent fumes of aroused pussy that she could detect wafting up from their crotches.] I love the little details of the sound of the sofa as they press down into it and the fact that is leather which feels so cool and I love the smell of leather. I love them enfolding each other in their arms and drawing each other close. I love feeling our tits mashing and working against each other. With smaller tits I love feeling my tits burying them with mine and feeling their nipples digging hard into my encompassing tits. With women like Maria and Dodie our large tits just compress and roll against each other as we writhe together. It feels so Fucking Wonderful. I so love getting my nose filled with your sweat and musk. I just breathe in deep getting all heady with your scents. I love the smells of a woman's body. I simply am addicted to the smell of aroused pussy. I just breathe in deep and savor that musk deep in my lungs.

Sigh, I love reading of them all twined together kissing and stroking each other as they ram their tongues deep in each other's mouths exploring every crevice and tasting each others tongues deep in each other's mouths. I so love pulling a woman on top of me when in a make out session. I am an Amazon so I can take your weight as I curl my legs around and on top of yours and just running my hands all up and down your back and squeezing your ass. I love feeling our bellies bellowing against each other as our tits mash and squirm together. Many times we start up humping and grinding our cunts together. I so love coming like this my body slamming and bucking up against my woman as I scream into her neck or around her tongue plunging down my throat as I gag and scream in blissful shocks of cunt rupturing bliss as I jackknife into your body. My women kown to press me down and grind me down into the mattress, floor or cushions. I so adore that weight and our sweat slicked bodies slipping and slapping each other as each spasm pummels my body and makes it jump up and into your body. I think I get an extra spasm of bliss with those jolts of jostling bodies. I like Shayla even more when she tells Laura she comes fast when she is excited like Laura is making her and that her pussy is simply sopping wet with cunt juice. Yum!! Soon Laura will be feasting on divine cunt cream.

Laura knows she is close to some dreamy fucking and sees the opportunity for some [Laura realized that it was a perfect opportunity for what she yearned to do. Sometimes pussy-to-pussy fucking could be hard to bring off since it took a lot of grinding and patience and care to keep your cunts together and your clits touching, but if you both were so aroused that you were about to come anyway, the merest touch of your wet, open pussy against hers was often enough to trigger the bomb.] This is true. This way of lovemaking can last for ten, fifteen minutes or longer if you want. I love just lying on my back and sensually sweeping our cunts together feeling those pleasurable rumbles of cunt warming pleasure as your cunts and clits rubbing and grinding. Many times you do move on to other positions but you often do just ramp up until you're wildly bucking and using her leg as a prop and rudder to jam and ram your cunt into hers as she digs in and does the same. I love feeling our cunts jamming and juddering together if we come together and rising off the bed as we scream our throats raw will our joint crotches buck wildly together and feeling the thud back to the mattress and feeling your belly coil and your cunt just ruptures as your groins lock tight again and rise up in sweet shared shattering bliss as you clench your teeth and jam for all your worth as your slippery cunts gush and drip with burning rapture until they thud down again. I love feeling my eyes roll back as my body boils with burning pleasure. Then holding that leg tight to you as you judder and get those oh so heavenly spasms of aftershocks as your mated sopping wet cunts make a big wet spot on the mattress as you just coo and drool in blissful love. I will just turn my face into the mattress and mewl and drool all over the sheet.

I love teaching women new things and I like Shayla's response ["Oh!" Shayla gasped, quivering helplessly in Laura's arms. Her eyes blinked open. "God, I've never done that. Yes!"] I love being the teacher but I am always ready to learn new things. Wow, I really like the detail of Laura looking hungrily on Shayla's lean beautiful body and especially her mouth watering mouth sized tits. I would be drooling to devour them but Laura knows that she will have them soon enough. I love how you always tell the reader what is actually happening. Other authors say their lovers are tribbing and pretty much leave it at that while you [as she carefully slid one leg under one of Shayla's, bringing her wet, pulsing groin up so that her inflamed, oozing pussy was only inches from Shayla's gaping slit, the edges jet black and shiny with juice, the interior glistening and ruby-red. Shayla watched everything in deep fascination, glancing up into Laura's eyes in the instant before their two swollen cunts came together.] You tell us what is actually happening and you always lovingly describe their love swollen cunts dripping with arousal. I simply adore your descriptions of each your angel's vaginas. I love reading each and every line of every pussy of your women. I will NEVER tire of this. Yip, pretty much my reaction when our pussies mate in love ["Ahnnn!" Shayla gasped, eyes rolling up, as she felt the contact.] I so long to feel that pleasure again and again.

This is a great way to describe that feeling of raw cunt meat grinding into each other [Laura was too overwhelmed even to make a noise. Her body filled with liquid fire that seemed to flow back and forth between her own throbbing pussy and Shayla's, the raw, wet flesh of their most intimate parts sliding together and causing intense, unbearably sweet sensations.] I love that feeling of my cunt just basting in our shared juices. All that warm pleasure filling my womb and slowly building toward nirvana. I like the detail of Laura looking up Shayla's body and seeing her faced slashed with extreme pleasure. I love scissor fucking in the classic on your back or side position because it allows me to watch your body and seeing your sweat beading and running and your hair becoming darker and sticking to your skin. The way your muscles play and the way your tits move on your chest. The visual adds so much to my pleasure. I love it when we make that smoky eye contact that just makes us jam our cunts harder into each other with building love and desperation. I so long to hear my women say such things ["Ohhh Laura . . . it's so good," Shayla gasped, looking down at their joined pussies, moving her body with the exquisite grace she was capable of, sliding her cunt against Laura's and throwing her head back as the sensations poured through her.] You capture that eye contact I so love and I always feel a thrill when my woman throws her head and just keens in helpless rapture. I really love it when they throw it back so hard and long their tendons just stand out and they always clench up when they get like this. I just know their cunts are pumping such pure pleasure into their brains when I see that. It just makes my own womb melt with shared love.

I love how you always give the details of the lovemaking [Following Laura's example, she slipped two fingers down to spread her cuntlips apart, as Laura was doing, and make the pressing together of their wet warm cunt flesh easier. The result was a heightening of the intensity to an even higher level, so that they both sank into a hot delirium of need, gyrating vigorously, gulping air, whimpering, clutching one another's naked thigh, urging each other toward the final release.] I love the details of them opening their lips to get all their raw wet cunt meat and clits working hard against get each other. My cunt feels so alive and throbbing with pure pleasure as our sodden cunts grind together towards immolation. I love how our rising desperation just gives us the strength to dig in with our elbows and hips to really grind and surge our sopping wet cunts together in rising need and love. All this work is for this wonderful result that only you really show [Laura used her forked fingers to guide her own clit into Shayla's, feeling them mash together just as Shayla's body seemed to be wracked by a fierce jolt of coming. "Yes, baby . . . yes," Laura panted, gyrating her own pelvis frantically, feeling her own body erupt only a fraction of a second behind Shayla's. "Auungghhh!" Shayla cried out, her body buckling, then thrown back by the force of the shock. "Oh yes . . . oh aauuAUUNGGHHHH!" Laura followed close behind her, feeling a huge hot bubble of molten sexual lava burst inside her and flood her veins.] I so live to hear our love nest filled with our screams of rapturous coming and the sound of sweat slicked bodies slapping and grinding together in ecstasy. I so love those screams that start off kind of normal volume and just rise in timbre to pure shrieks of pleasure so intense and pure it must be screamed out with all your strength for the gods to hear and be envious. Sometimes my women just start lightly crying and after such an orgasm it is so intense and pure. I just encase them in my loving arms and hold their still twitching body close to mine and share their bliss. I often cry softly with them I am so happy with them.

I so love your writings because other authors say they came and just leave at there where you always show your women wringing each drop of pleasure possible from each fuck like women who are in tune with themselves do [Both of them nearly collapsed under the impact, and yet at the same time their bodies were surging and pushing together, their hot, throbbing cunts sliding and mashing together in a slippery, wet union. They undulated in unison, groaning and whimpering, sunk under successive waves of intense ecstasy, until the spasms began to wane. Even then, then did not want to move, to break the connection, the hot wet kiss of their throbbing pussies, their groins mated and pulsing with the aftershocks of a stunning shared climax.] I so love doing what you show here. We need to grab all the pleasure our bodies can give us. I love that sweeping of rupturing cunts in a tight scissor lock giving pleasure back and forth as our cunts just saturate our groins and the bedding underneath with warm, thick girl cum. I will often turn you on your back and just lick up your love juice from your sodden cunt and pelvis. Like a true lesbian they then push me down and clean me off before we lie together and twine our bodies and legs and draw each close as we twine our tongues deep in each others mouths in languid love. I had to smile great big at Shayla's shocked joy at this new thing called lesbian lovemaking. They decide to get some towels to clean up a little. It does get a clammy if you let yourself cool down. We keep towels in the nightstand for this or just rub off the excess on the sheets if necessary though we like to stay sweaty and covered in come if active or we will just pull the sheets and blankets up as we twine together in sleepy love.

I love how Laura never misses a chance to look and absorb the beauty of her lovers as Shayla walks to the bathroom [Shayla hopped up and disappeared in the direction of the bathroom, giving Laura a chance to gaze unobserved at her graceful, slender, naked body from behind. She had a delicious, long, and sinuous back though without the curves and shallows and cambers that gave a back such as Deshona's such thrilling beauty. Instead, probably because of dancing, Shayla's muscles were all long and smooth and evenly formed. She was also long-waisted, with narrow hips, and a rather flat though charming little bottom.] There is nothing more beautiful on this green earth than the female body. Period. I so love a woman's body I have made love to. I cherish each woman's individuality. Laura compares Shayla's body to some of her bubble butt girlfriends and realizes that her body is kind of androgynous but it is still beautiful in its own way [What made her remarkable was her sweet, honest, relaxed, forthcoming nature, and her resonant woman's sexuality that was completely authentic and quickly made you ignore the fact that her thin slip of a body was not especially sexy in itself.] Once a woman's personality has captured my heart I soon find her body to be a work of perfection. I am big believer in focusing on the things you find alluring and soon her whole body is so fucking alluring you absolutely must have her in your bed fucking her brains out.

Shayla comes back with some towels and they clean up a little before Laura grabs her drags her close on the bed. They both need more intense lesbian fucking and they need it now. They love coo to each other how natural their lovemaking is with each other while it wasn't with the first woman Shayla made love to [Shayla shook her head. "Nothing like that. She was kind of . . . pretentious. Know what I mean? Being a lesbian was kind of a political act with her. She hated men and said women had to stick together. It was more like voting than fucking."] Sad but true. Women need to keep the political side of things in sight but, geez, keep it like secondary. Live our lives for ourselves and when we have time kick man's world's ass. I truly think a lot of guys would like to shuck all this crap that man's society heaps on women especially and even men. Laura, like me, loves Shayla's humor and soon they are hugging and muzzling, exciting their bodies for more lovemaking. Laura knows that they can make love longer now that their bodies have gotten their first orgasms in.

Now Laura is ready for some of Shayla's lovely small breasts and kisses her way down Shayla's neck and chest until she [Shayla's small breasts may have been unremarkable by comparison with some Laura had made love to, but they fell into the category—like Jonelle's, or Mavis's—of being just enough round, firm flesh to fit completely into her mouth, nipple and all. And Shayla's nipples were small, coal-black, soft nubs that seemed extremely sensitive since she gasped and quivered just from feeling Laura's tongue teasing them. "Oh! Oh yes!" she panted, watching Laura suck first one, then the other entire breast into her mouth.] I love small tits just for this reason. I love to swallow a tit whole in mouth where I can love suck with all my might and love lathe and bat her nipples and curl my tongue all over her nipple and areola. I just make their cunts melt. I love manipulating a tit with my hands and no matter how small you can always play with them. I will squeeze in around the base of her tits with my hands and get it all raised up and just fall on it with my mouth and try to inhale her whole tit down my throat while wildly flailing with my tongue. It makes my small titted women writhe and whimper with pleasure. I always love to pinch, squeeze and pull nipples while loving them but I do it extra with small titted women. I love pulling that nipple out and stretching her small tit out. It just makes their breast burn with pleasure. I find women just love it when I focus so much on their small tits. Some women even don't give them enough love and I can almost guarantee that men don't.

Geez, you really know how to make lesbian lovemaking just jump off the written page [Even though she was sucking each little breast completely into her mouth, Laura started slowly, not devouring the delectable little mounds but sucking them gently, licking the small nipples with the back of her tongue, and pinching them against the roof of her mouth. But it excited Shayla wildly, and therefore Laura too, and soon she was really sucking them hard. They were lying face to face, side by side on the sofa, but Laura quickly rolled Shayla onto her back and slid on top of her, now pinching her wet black nipples, which were growing more rubbery and erect by the second, and kissing her mouth hungrily. "Your mine, you're all mine now," she panted. "I'm taking you, you just lie there and let me have every inch of your lovely body."] You are so right when you tell of Laura starting slow to ignite the fires of love and then stoking it into a raging inferno. I so love working a nipple in my mouth feeling it become turgid if not

already stiff with need or sucking supper hard with furious tongue swipes and curling around the nipple to try and make it that little impossible bit harder. I have made women scream when I work their nipples supper hard like Laura does. They love it. I love telling a woman she is mine when I take and subdue their body and totally consume it with complete focus, adore and love. My goal is to make their cunts rupture with so much bliss they are simply screaming, thrashing and calling my name with sheiks of helpless love and need. I so love hearing my name screamed out especially when it gets all sibilant and drawn out as their throat seizes with total helpless pleasure as their cunts geyser out so much bliss their muscles simply seize up.

I have made all my small titted lovers say this [Shayla's eyes rolled up as Laura's fingers twisted her small, hardened nipples. "God, I love it when you suck the whole thing in like that. Do it again."] They love it as you so clearly show. Oh yeah, time to turn up the heat [She gave Shayla a repeat performance, this time scooping up one small breast in both hands and trying to swallow it, then doing the same with the other. Shayla went wild, twisting under her, moaning and undulating.] I love small titties because I can swallow them whole like this. I love giving a whole tit in my mouth and sucking super hard and start growling and move my head back and forth like a dog with a bone. They love feeling my mouth pulling their tits with each head whip back and forth. My women just go nuts when I do this. I love it when

they grab my hair with both hands and jam my mouth down onto their tits if bigger or right down on their ribcage if flat chested and screaming for me suck harder and whip my head harder. They are so totally mine when I reduce them to this and I so dearly love it.

Laura knows it time to move south for some sweet tender wet cunt meat. I love how she just kisses and muzzles her wonderful dancer abs. Frankie has very taunt stomach without the ripping we weightlifters have. I love the detail of Laura kissing down to her public patch and then moving up and kissing and stroking her stomach some more. I love to give slow sensual love stokes with my tongue and then rubbing my cheek to warm it up. I love to ply with my fingertips as I love massage and press in on your belly. This is a secret I have and share. Women just love having their belly massaged hard and their lower abdomen really focused on. For me it is a supper big time erogenous zone. I can almost come from just having my lower belly loved in such a way. My cunts just melts and gets my pelvis and thighs all slavered up with warm cunt juice. And of course what woman doesn't love having her belly button made love to [Her lips reached the top fringe of tight little black curls that formed Shayla's pubic patch, but instead of sinking further, Laura kissed her way back up the girl's smooth belly to her navel, a slight 'outie' that tempted her tongue. She teased it until Shayla was actually trembling and grabbing her head with both hands, forcing it down, dying to feel Laura's mouth on her inflamed pussy.] I love loving a woman's belly because she will soon be grabbing your head and almost sobbing for you take her hot festering cunt in your hot starving mouth and finishing her off. It is time to deliver.

I love hearing Shayla's whimpers of need and Laura's "oh yes". I now get another one of your loving word pictures of a woman's vagina [She wanted to kiss the girl's oozing quim as much as Shayla wanted it, and now she slid between Shayla's yawning thighs and saw it up close for the first time, a lovely festering flower, deep glistening ruby red inside, with thick, meaty black labia folding out like the petals of a gorgeous, juicy blossom. Shayla's clit was so small that Laura could barely see it under the small, sheltering tent of skin at the top of her pussy, but she gently pulled the flesh apart with her thumbs, and the tiny bead emerged.] I will never tire of these beautiful word pictures of paradise on earth. I to like to coax out a smallish clit to my starving eyes knowing that soon that wonderful seed will be inside my mouth and in my lips. I so love pulling a hard clit through my lips and feeling it pull threw and into my mouth where I can work my magic on it. I love their love cooing and then Laura makes her first licks on Shayla's wonderfully sensitive clit [Shayla's hips quivered, and she arched her back gracefully, her body fluid and skilled in movement even in this extreme state. Laura touched Shayla's exposed, tiny clit with the tip of her tongue, and Shayla groaned, arching even more stiffly, as if much closer to an orgasm than Laura had thought she would be yet.] I love working a clit and having my woman's body get all tense like this. I know I'm pumping pure pleasure into her clit with my loving, starving mouth. You now show again women communicating their need and love for each other (which, sadly only you show – this communicating while making love) ["Mmmm, you like that," Laura whispered. "Oh god, yes! I love it!" "I guess I'll have to do it some more. But I'm afraid you'll come. I don't want you to come yet. I want to lick this beautiful pussy for a long time before you come." "Ohhhhh Laura . . . I want to come! Please do it! God, you make me feel so good!"] If we fucked in the silence that other authors portray sex would lose so much of its essence. It is this communicating that just makes the body fill with need and such pure happiness that it makes the resulting orgasms so much stronger and makes the giver feel so much pleasure and happiness. Communication is absolutely necessary for great sex in my opinion and only you show this in your writings. Thank goodness I found an author who so understands this.

Laura senses her impending orgasm and backs off with kisses to her lovely thighs and belly. I love kissing anywhere and so enjoy these detours away from an over stimulated pussy. I love kissing and licking soft skin and supple muscle. You show as always that you continue to use your hands in lovemaking [Laura's hands were busy too, stroking Shayla's hips, her long, thin waist, rising again to her breasts, still damp with the residue of Laura's own saliva, kneading and lightly pinching her small, erect nipples, while her tongue returned to Shayla's shiny, gaping pussy, licking slow, tender swaths up and down the girl's swollen cuntlips.] My hands are always busy on your body and I love seeing my woman settling down again from her excitement and then getting back to work on her festering pussy and starting to lick and suck again savoring all her delicious cunt cream and feeling her body start to hitch again and seeing her breathing get all hot and heavy again. I so love running my tongue up and down your groove feeling all that heat and wetness. One must now start to explore one's cunt candy more deeply ["Mmmm, it smells and tastes so good, darling," she purred, now letting her tongue slither in between the warm wet folds and creases, pushing it as far as it would go into the hot pit of Shayla's throbbing cunt.] I so love probing and tongue fucking a hot sodden cunt. I so love pulling your petals open and then tongue fucking hard with my head pistoning for many hard strokes then burying my mouth deep and flailing my tongue in all your sopping wet folds and finding your secrete nerves if I know them to make you jump and scream. Then curling my tongue too scoop out dollops of love cream to pay for services rendered and then starting all over again with another round of tongue fucking until it is time to finish her off.

I can't really think of a better way to finish a woman off than this (though one always needs to keep things varied and unexpected as you always show) [Laura slid both hands under the girl's small, naked buns and squeezed them, scraping the flat of her tongue up across Shayla's tiny, now-bulging clit, knowing it was so sensitive and ready to pop that Shayla would come in only seconds. A deep shudder gripped the girl's supple, writhing body, and then she went quickly into stiff, wrenching convulsions, coming so hard that even her breath couldn't escape. "Hhhh! Hhhhh! Ungghmmmnnggghhaaauunngggghhh!" she finally groaned in a strangled, clotted voice as the breath caught in her lungs finally escaped. "Oh! Oh! Unnngghiiieee!"] I so love using the flat of my tongue and pressing down hard and whipping my hand back and forth. I love feeling that bead, pea or marble raking back and forth across my tongue knowing that each scrape is driving my woman wild with pleasure. Plus, the feel of ass cheeks clenching and spasming as you clutch and pump while she is coming and helping her hump your mouth. To me this few seconds of pure bliss are the most perfect time I have ever had. I love all sex of course, but feasting on an exploding cunt while massaging her ass cheeks and feeling her thighs clamping your ears and your head is pumped back and squeezed is just pure heaven on earth. Especially when your muffled hearing is filled with exultant groans and screams of a woman dying from pleasure exploding out form her rupturing cunt and womb. I so love feasting on exploding cunt until her body simply gives out and she crashes back down for the last time and she just mewls and jerks as you gently lick and clean her cunt up getting every last drop of love dew you can find before slowly kissing your way up her body to take her in your arms and twine your tongue deep in her mouth and around her tongue to let her taste her sweet, sweet essence.

Wow, again you capture what I was just thinking [Her long dancer's legs flipped and jerked in the air, her toes curling visibly and her abdomen clenching to reveal the smooth rolling strips of hard muscle as she pumped her flowing pussy up into Laura's mouth, groaning and arching her back as fresh spasms, then another orgasm, shook her long, slender body. Laura had to pull her face back momentarily so as not to get bumped in the nose by Shayla's rising pelvic bone, which jabbed up and down as her hips surged and bucked. Mewling and moaning softly in the aftermath, Shayla finally slumped back to the mattress after a long bout of intense climaxing, fluttering her eyes and laughing in soft embarrassment as Laura slid up to kiss her.] Oh yeah, you capture the details. I love flailing arms and legs and fingers clawing or toes curling in pleasure so intense it flails the body and tightens tendons in bliss. True detail that if you lose contact with your cunt during orgasm you need to back off until you're able to glue your mouth to her cunt again during a momentary pause. I have seen stars many times from a cunt jamming my mouth. The momentary pain is so worth the pleasure I derive from feasting on a cunt tearing itself inside out. I need to try to make the spasms all the more dire and intense to give my woman all the pleasure I possibly can and that requires mouth contact if I'm doing her orally. I want to finish you off all the way with my mouth if I am going down on you. I so love oral sex. Sometimes when we get a little orgy together Dodie and I always start it off us lying on our backs side by side and letting the women take turns riding our faces. We will continue until the dynamic changes or we tire out but we want to have each woman come at least once in our mouth. We love to have faces covered with sweat and girl come running down our throats, cheeks and down into our hair until it is all matted and slutty looking. We have lain long stretches of time on our back until our mouths simply can't take anymore letting women come repeatedly all over our faces and we want more and more. We both love to have women riding our faces hard and jamming hard into our mouths, chins and our noses as women ride our whole face. Ones mouth will be sore but we so love it. Of course it is nice when we get repaid with some nice tongue action and finger fucking while sucking and coming along with our women. Life doesn't get any better than this.

I really agree with this [She could not even speak, and Laura didn't want to infringe on the stunning quality of this sexual moment by speaking herself. Just let us feel it, she thought. She really came hard. God it was beautiful.] I love sharing orgasms like this. I so love hearing from women (usually hets) when they exclaim that they never come like that before. When lesbians and bi women tell me this I know that I say the same thing to them. At the time I do mean it. Almost all my regular lovers and new experienced lovers have made me come so hard I thought I was going to die it was so intense and pure. Shayla needs to ditch any fucking boyfriends and find un-politically correct lesbians and discover real loving like Laura is showing her. They are so correct when they talk about being in tune with each other's body. It is this knowledge and desire to be in tune that makes lesbian loving the purest form of pleasure on earth that there is. Had to smile at Laura's blanching when Shayla asks if Tamara came that hard. Laura demurs using Tamara's flightiness as an excuse where I would have been exclaiming "hell ya she came that hard and repeatedly, just like you are going to tonight". I think Shayla really nails Tamara on the head with this observation ["She was in love with you. She couldn't talk about anything else. I think she ran off to Italy with that big dope Stewart because she felt exactly the way I feel right now. This is just too wonderful to be true, what we did together, and it really fucks up all your other plans."] I can so remember being angry and confused the first time I read this chapter. I soooo hate women running away from their true lesbian self and back to some worthless fucked up man. GRRRRRR!!!!

I love this after intense fucking [Laura stretched out next to her, embraced her, kissed her. "If it was that good, maybe you'd like to try for another," she murmured, nuzzling Shayla's smooth black neck, wanting to veer away from this uncomfortable subject.] Some sweet post coital time before the next round of sweet fucking. I so love this next part because you capture the essence of a woman's scent and I fucking LOVE this detail of muzzling underneath an earlobe [But it wasn't at the moment. She was very aroused by Shayla and definitely didn't want the evening to end here. Having come twice, and pretty violently the second time, Shayla now exuded a faint, thrilling, musky odor that aroused Laura even more. She pushed her nose under the girl's earlobes to inhale it. "I love your sexy smell," she purred. "It makes me horny."] I love smelling our musk filling the air along with our beading pure smelling sweat. I love smelling a woman's scent during lovemaking.

Shayla is immediately ready to give back. She has some prior experience but I think she would have gone down quickly on Laura no matter her experience level. I find almost all newbies do and only a few have been like Tamara and I had to wait to the second and once third time for them to go down on me. And when they do I have been lucky because they have all loved it. I was recently reminded of Lynn back in college. She was a cheerleader I somewhat easily seduced my sophomore year. Her football player boyfriend was a dud in and out of the bed. What I'm remembering now is how she went crazy went she went down on me. I had brought her off twice with my mouth and pumping fingers up her asshole since she told me she loved anal and when she went down on me she used some of my tricks and a whole ton of enthusiasm after her first taste she went crazy. I chuckle now because she quickly sucked me off to a monstrous orgasm and then after lapping up my come vacuumed locked by clit to an earth shattering second orgasm. What killed me was she didn't know to stop and almost immediately attacked my clit a third time with wild hard sucks and her hard mashing tongue and I was so spent I couldn't push her away and my poor pussy exploded again with an orgasm so hard I screamed out several all cap screams and promptly fainted. I remember moaning and my eyelids fluttering open to see her face next to mine filled with panic. Her face was slavered with my come. She even had my come in her brown eyebrows. She simply destroyed my pussy. I can usually fuck for hours but not that night. I know I walked funny the whole next day. She got down right poutty when I wouldn't let her near my pussy the rest of the night. I fucked her a few more times and she got all pissy and cried when I wouldn't let her fuck me back that night. She quickly learned and was soon an expert pussy licker who quickly embraced the bi life style. Yeah! We fucked regularly for the rest of her time before graduation. Women really want to give back like you show here.

I love newbies but experienced lovers have a special charm all their own [The next five minutes were exquisitely pleasurable to Laura, who lay back and surrendered her body to Shayla. Unlike some girls, Shayla was not uncertain about her ability to please. She was tender but firm, licking and probing Laura's pussy with her tongue until Laura was twisting and churning uncontrollably.] Like I say women desire to always give back. A man after two great orgasms would have rolled over and gone to sleep but a woman needs to give back. Love this communicating and inquiring that shows women at their best ["Want me to put my fingers in?" Shayla asked, absorbed by her activity, anxious to make it as good for Laura as she could.] This is so fucking true.

I really love how Shayla finishes Laura off [Laura came only seconds after Shayla slid two fingers up into her aching slit. It was not the usual wrenching, jolting orgasm but instead a soft, blossoming, ever-intensifying hot cloud of bliss that enveloped her whole body. She lay quivering in its thrall for nearly a minute, only whinnying softly as wave after wave of sweet pleasure coursed through her body. And when Shayla, still with her fingers in Laura's pussy, slid up partially to embrace her, she came again, shuddering and gasping in Shayla's arms, looking straight into her eyes, as a stunning aftershock gripped her body. "Auungghhhh! Oh god!" she moaned, writhing, shuddering in a fresh spasm of killing sexual pleasure.] Love how you show orgasms can be so fucking different and all of them are so special that we need to cherish the memory of each orgasm if possible. I love to be pummeled but when I lie there with sweet waves of crushing bliss coursing through my body like the tide sweeping me out to paradise I just bask in this sweet soft intensity. I love how orgasms like this just seem to roll and throb in my very bloodstream killing with me soft fucking bliss. I know Shayla must have loved feeling Laura's pussy contracting and gripping her fingers as she rammed them deep and hard into Laura's spasming cunt. Sometimes I just close my eyes if doing you just digitally and try to focus my chi and absorb each minute flutter and clench of your spasming and rupturing cunt. As Dee Dee would say it is just so "rad".

Shayla is beaming that she made Laura come twice and remarks that Laura looks like that model from Victoria Secrets. I have always loved how Laura doesn't have a vain bone in her body as shown by [Laura shook her head again and laughed, beginning to recover from the dual blast of her orgasms. She pulled Shayla down and rubbed their naked bodies heatedly together. "It's only me. I'm no movie star. But I love being in bed with you, Shayla."] What a beautiful thing to say. I will have to use this line in the future; it is precious. I will never tire of how you are just so witty and make your women so alive

and vibrant like ["Can you stay the night? I'm almost already packed. We can just screw and screw. I want more. Hope you don't think I'm too greedy."] and Laura's response [Laura grinned, reaching for her. "I accept your invitation. Come here, greedy."] They fuck exuberantly throughout the night [They slept—very little, much interrupted by exhilarating fucking—on the sofa with a blanket thrown over them, and by morning they were barely able to get up when Laura's alarm rang, so busy had they been during a night of prolonged and exhausting sex. Shayla pouted at the door.] Sigh, to fuck throughout the night with plenty of rest breaks to recharge the batteries for intense fucking.

Shayla was the complete bomb. I sure hope she comes home one day and Dawn and Tamara can simply rock her world and fuck her into complete oblivion of bliss and love. I would love to see them complete the "rainbow' that Dawn spoke of and form a divine trinity like Joann, Maria and I have. It would be so beautiful. They are all such special women that deserve to spend their lives together bringing each other happiness and such joy in their bed. Of course they will need their angels on the side but their focus will be on themselves. A girl can dream can't she?

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Chapter 235:

The first thing that I noticed and have noticed over and over is the way that Laura focuses so strongly on the woman that she is with. I just love the way that Laura feels that she is the with most beautiful creature on the face of the planet. She is almost undone by Randi's beauty. She just stares at Randi and absorbs her beauty. Laura does this for each of her women. Laura looks at each woman's innate beauty. I think you and I do the same. With Randi, Laura gets the double pleasure of her changing hairstyle.

Another thing this chapter had and your last chapter (256) mentioned was Laura sleeping with other women. I like the idea that Laura is having fantastic sex with other women beside the main focus of each story. I just feel that Laura deserves a steady flow of the beautiful women gracing her bed. I know these women feel the same for Laura. I feel only she gives them truly great sex. I think she also connects with them on a spiritual level also. I just love Laura's sexuality.

I think Laura again shows her basic good nature by how quickly she is able to overlook the past pain and conflict with Randi. All she has to do is look at Randi and all she can do is feel love and longing. I think that Randi feels kind of the same. She wants to put the past behind her because she wants Laura also. The main difference is that she wants Laura to punish her. I love it.

I love the feeling out process by Randi and Laura. Even though they long for each other, they still have to feel each other out and see how they are to reconcile. Back and forth they go, feeling out the situation. I love how Randi is making sure that Laura wants to "fuck" her. When Laura is telling Randi that she loves her, Randi's first reply is "you do want to fuck me?" I can almost her a little doubt and worry. Randi wants to make sure that Laura's fire for her has not dimmed. She need not worry. I loved this dialog between the two of them ["I can't stand it. It's almost eleven thirty. We could go somewhere for lunch." "I just saw you making a sandwich." "I'm not talking about that kind of lunch."] They know how to push each others buttons.

I see this is where the Gibson's make their first appearance. I feel for Laura having to worry about them hearing her and her women. This is because Laura sometimes and her women often scream like they are being killed when they have their orgasms. (Hopefully, Laura will get her own place soon.) I can see why we have all this screaming, with all the skills that Laura has developed over the years. It seems it doesn't take long for Laura to pass this knowledge on to her women.

Once Randi has made sure that Laura still desires her, she sets in motion the future events by immediately letting Laura know that she has been very "bad". She really hammers that point home. She continually goads Laura to make sure she gets the abuse she wants. I love how this immediately gets Laura's libido into overdrive. They are able to tap into each other jealousies to make for scorching sex. They know how to tap their darker emotions and yet keep them in check so no permanent damage is done to their relationship.

Randi continues to put the heat on Laura once they arrive back at Laura's place because of the "toys" she tells Laura all about Nate. She makes sure that Laura knows about Nate sticking his dick in her mouth and her ass. I'm not asking, but I do hope somewhere down the road that Laura rewards Randi for these comments with a dildo up the ass and let Randi give some head to Laura's dildo.

I felt Randi kind of got some of her own medicine when Rhonda dropped her for Stevie. It is kind of neat to read all the vitriol being spewed here. I always felt sorry for Rhonda when she got her heart kicked around. I have picked up from time to time her trying to get closer to Laura. I'm glad that has finally happened.

Now Randi goes for the final goading by telling Laura that she had slept with Rhonda again. Not only that, but that Rhonda made her come and come and come. She makes sure that Laura understands that Rhonda is a fantastic fuck. I love this priming of the pump ["Randi batted her long eyelashes. "I declare, Miss Laura. Did you get me over here with the intent of having a 'lesbian orgy'? Is that how you put it? What you gon' do, spank me and fuck my black pussy?" "Good god, I really do think you mean to rape and despoil me. Help."] That is just so coy and cute. Since it is part of the game, Laura conveniently overlooks her indiscretions with Deshona. Now the stage is set for the incendiary fucking.

I have to agree. Green lipstick is absolutely hein-ouuuuuusssssss.

I love how Laura is instantly hot and wet for Randi. I love the fact that Laura is just so physical. She can't wait to get her hands and mouth on the girl. I like how Randi acts coy with Laura, plays with Laura, delaying the fucking for a few minutes. Again this is a bonding and true sharing of emotions. Needless to say, I love it. I for one, love to see a woman take her clothes off for me. That slow exposing of sweet flesh is just so delicious and erotic. Especially the bra and panties. It is enough to make me slather and foam at the mouth. I love how Laura is starting to suffer at the end of the strip tease [. "Would you hurry with the tattoo? I'm getting pretty horny."] I can hear her plaintive tone. Let's get going and fuck please, is what she is telling me. I love how Laura delays her own clothes coming off to give Randi her undivided attention. They both want that attention, one giving, one receiving.

I love how Laura closed the door this time. This shows she is serious in the debauchery that is to follow. Randi is going to get the punishment she desires. Then Laura pushes her against the wall and rams her tongue into Randi's mouth. You did this with Deshona in her last appearance (chapter 250). That is just such a hot visual.

I absolutely adore Randi's clit. I remember the first time I came across a really big clit it was like 'what the hell'. But as I quickly discovered you can completely love maul such a delicious treat. They do get all rubbery and tumid. I just love tormenting them.

Now Randi turns up the heat by telling her about her hanky panky with Rhonda and Nate. Geez, she is making sure she gets the punishment she wants. I remember reading chapter 256 and Randi's reaction to the handcuffs. I had totally forgotten about this chapter. She acts like she never saw them before in chapter 256. This just shows me she is role playing the role of victim. I love all her cursing and weeping. Despite all she says she never really tries to get away. It is all for show. She wants everything she gets.

I love worshiping a woman's ass. I love its shape, taste and feel. I like how Laura first start by gently massaging it and rubbing and squeezing it before she gets rough. Then she does get rough and starts spanking. I love doing and receiving. When I'm receiving, I just love the pain and how it turns to sexual fire deep in my pussy and belly. Doing it is just such a turn on. Making my lover whimper and die for it. I've never done it in true anger, though I've acted like I was furious. I love how Randi just squeals and moans in pain and I know pleasure. They really do mix together.

Then I love how Laura lets anger fuel her desire even more. She then rams her hand into Randi's cunt. Just like Randi wanted and really rams it home. Then she immediately slides a finger up her rectum and then her tongue. By now Randi is screaming. I just love how you describe this rough sex. As you know I love receiving this. You make it so on target. You are able to make it clear that even with all this extreme passions it is still mutual. Randi wants it. Tiffany and Deshona want it. Even with all the screaming and whimpering you never make it into a true rape. There really is only love and desire here. You never degrade the woman receiving it. You are able to show this is just women who desire rough sex. Other stories show rape and complete degrading of women. (I stop reading immediately when I come across this). That is something I would never want to see here. I have no fear in you doing this because I have total trust in your love for these women. These women love and desire each other.

Laura's shows her true gentle nature by her immediate feelings of contrition over her actions. Even though Randi immediately shows her sass [Stunned, her face still wet from her own tears, Randi gave Laura a bleak smile. "You didn't even kiss my tattoo, you bitch," she half whispered, her voice so hoarse from screaming that she could barely get the words out. "I've been having fantasies for weeks about you kissing my tattoo."] She quickly shows that she desired exactly what she wanted. To be taken and raped and fucked out of her mind.

I think Randi is cute with her desire for Laura to kiss and worship her tattoo. It is another touching and sensitive moment. It is a moment of sharing.

Another thing I like is how I never know how your sex is going to flow. I thought since Randi got her due that now Laura would gets hers. Instead you surprised me with gentle fucking. These are the types of surprises I love. I like how Laura says no more whipping of Randi. Randi's response is basically, listen 'bitch', I'll do what I have to do get you riled up enough to give me the abuse I want and need.

I love how in their mutual masturbation Laura just surrenders her body to Randi's ministrations. I love how Randi gently coaches Laura into her orgasm ["now, Laura" Randi whispered]. I love how Randi tells Laura to look in her eyes as she rubs Laura off into a mind blowing orgasm. Then Randi bores her eyes into Laura's eyes and into her soul during the orgasm. This says it all [ "And through it all, she kept her eyes open and fastened hard on Randi's, letting the sweet, pulsing rapture grip her body but never flinching for a second with her hot gaze, letting Randi see her deep love and her endless desire as each successive orgasmic shock moved her]. This is total submission which shows total love and trust. It is that tender touch after the brutal rough sex. Then they doze in each other arms like true lovers.

Now Laura goes to return the favor. I love how Laura paces herself as she eats out Randi the last time to make it last. I love how you describe her opening her labia with her fingers to tongue Randi's fuck hole. Again, when you give these kind of details you are almost alone. Sometimes a miracle will occur and I will get a detail like this, but only you give it to me over and over and over and over……..hehehe. Needless to say, I LOVE it. I love her wanting it to last and last and whimpers when it doesn't. I love how Laura connects with Randi during her orgasm [Laura held Randi's clit gently between her lips, not sucking any more, but feeling the hot, sexual current of connection that ran between their two bodies via her lips encircling the throbbing nub of nerves.] This is hot fucking sex and bonding all wrapped up together. Finally about the orgasm itself you again are the only writer to concentrate on a woman squeezing her own breast and pulling her own nipples. Others mention almost in passing but you concentrate on this. Also, your facial expressions you describe are truly priceless.

In ending I loved their sweet parting and promises of more incendiary sex tomorrow night when they plan to meet again.

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