• Chapter 323
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Chapter 323:

//  I really like how this chapter is starting.  I call this slice of life [They were meeting for dinner, though Laura, speaking for herself, did not know how they would get through dinner without wholesale sex breaking out right there in the restaurant for all to see.  Just a glimpse of Nyomi was enough to light raging fires in her pussy.  That was what Nyomi was responding to, jocularly of course, right now.         "Did you bring it?" she whispered to Laura as they finally exited her cubicle, leaning close, conspiratorial.        Laura grinned tightly.  "In the car.   Why, can't wait?"        "Watch it," Nyomi whispered.  "You're going to make me blush.  Then everyone will know we're fucking." ]  What is so great about this opening is that we are dropping into the middle of Laura and Nyomi's life.  The initial seduction is past that the vast majority of stories concentrate on.  That is a story that has been repeated over and over.  I love reading a good story that I have read again but still it is the same story.  I love reading a story that is not the same thing all over again.  I love the idea that we are eavesdropping in on an intimate conversation that is sexy but will not lead immediately to sex.  This is how lovers talk to each other.  Most stories they are not lovers yet so we can't even see this.  This just feels so real life to me.  You capture it so well and it just fits.  You make Laura's interactions with each of the women in her life unique.  It is unique because each woman is unique.  You allow your women to be individuals.  I have marveled over the years how you make each woman so distinct and loving (even the one's who can be bitchy).  There are some other multipart stories out there but they don't even try to get this deep into their women's lives.  Even though they may be multi part I find most still focus on a short period of time.  Thus, again they can't explore these smaller points of a story.  The small moments of our lives that are insignificant in the grand scheme of things but are really important to the development of true affection and longing.   The sexy whispering between lovers that makes your pussy tremble for future hot fucking.  I have not seen anything from the Harem writer in awhile.  His story covered time but the story really only tried to keep the continuity near to real life.  He had major plot happenings in his story but never a small moment like above.  Thus, he kept his story like a movie script that is kind of predictable.  Yours never reads like a script.  It FEELS like real life.  That is a big difference.  There is a subtle depth to your stories that others just don't come close to touching.  You make me care for these women because you are willing to share the small moments of their lives.  Plus, you show genuine emotion.  This is not raging lust but gentle longing and true caring that your are showing above.  This is two real life women hot for each other and subtly teasing each other.  I so love reading it because I have done it so many times.  This again draws in the reader.  You show the emotion in Laura  by seeing how she reacts to her lover's body.  I feel this so much.  Just being near an angel makes me shiver and my pulse rise thinking of again devouring her totally or her me.  I am smiling at Nyomi asking excitedly if Laura brought the strap-on.  I too have lovers almost whimpering begging for me to have brought my strap-on.  Bringing my lips to her ear and whispering that I did and soon it will stroking so deep into her cunt or plundering her asshole and she will be licking her shit off my dick while looking me in the eyes and loving it.  Feeling them love shake against me and moaning softly for me.  I know if I was writing erotica I would not write stories where I fleshed out my women like you do.  Why? Because it is hard!!  One last thing I like about how this story starts is the simple fact that you are giving us great dialog.  Most stories are really so silent with their stories.  They have dialog that leads directly to the fucking but not this loving flowing dialog that shows gentle affection.  A few stories I think do have dialog but they are so long and boring without the payoff in the sex department that makes it worthwhile reading.  I have marveled over the years how you do character development each chapter and are able to balance it with the sex.  You give us both in a balance that strikes true every chapter.  I love seeing how some women like Deshona and Randi have grown over the years.  Heck, Laura has grown so much.  You have done this and still delivered so many chapters of womb searing sex.  I can still remember finding your stories and nearly going crazy they were so good.

//  Plus, it is cool how you show the little things that women have to deal with.  One is not supposed to show romance in the office.  It might be all around but you are not to flaunt it and especially gay love.  I fuck women in other departments but never at the office.  People have gotten fired for that.  I love how Nyomi is so sexy and flirting with Laura.  I love confidence in women and I love seeing Nyomi knows that everyone wants to fuck her.  If one is hot one should know it.  I love the confidence and power you show in your women.  I too know that low voice one uses when talking to a lover at work so others that you don't want to hear will know what is happening right under their noses.  So many hets can't really contemplate that lesbian sex is happening right under their noses.  I love it.  I just love your dialog.  No one comes close to the things that your women say ["I don't know about you, but I'm hungry for something other than food."       Nyomi grinned sexily, her white teeth flashing.  "You lecher.   Take me home quick and fuck my ears off with your big fake dick."]  Like I said, other stories are so pat and follow the same old script that they never even get close to the witty, hot language that you use.  Their language is so boring and non imaginative.  They almost never say things that make me grin like Nyomi is here.  A little while back I was with Kapri whom I hadn't seen in a while and we went to dinner and a play and she did this whispering in my ear if I had my "dick" for her nigger booty.  I grinned and whispered in her ear "I am going to split your fucking booty in two Nigger!  I am going to rape your asshole so hard you fucking slut!  Then I'm going pull it out and shove my dick down your throat and make you suck your shit off my cock you fucking black cunt!"  I loved pulling back and seeing her all glassy eyed and breathing more rapid and shallow.  When we got home I fucked her half to death the poor girl.  She was totally wrung out when I finished fucking her!  I am just so thankful that I stumbled across your writings.  Wow, this is kind of deep [Laura suddenly felt even more intimate than usual, as if she were part of the family, coming into the house through the darkened garage, into the kitchen.  Nyomi was waiting for her.  "You forgot the package."]  I too have felt this and would never have thought to put this in a story.  You are so good!  Like I keep saying it is these little moments that draw women together in ever deepening yearning and love.  Like I say, I simply wouldn't have even thought of putting this in a story and, thus, I amazed to see it in a story.  I have to wonder if Laura deliberately forgot the "package".  I will do things like this just to make my women ask for it even more.  It makes them more my love slut for my complete taking.  I always want to make my new angels my total whore that I can plunder as hard and deep as I long for.  Putting the lust in their eyes that Nyomi is showing here. 

 

Long Digression

//  I so love putting that lust in women's eyes and then helping them reach the heights of lust that I have helped them long for.  Veronica and Amber have risen to high school and are now fucking guys also.  They are like me.  They consider themselves lesbians but want to explore their bi side.  They are running into the same problem that I did back in high school.  Guys simply need time to build up their skill level.  Those that want too.   It is amazing how often I hear of men who simply don't satisfy their women in the bedroom.  It is sad.  I especially care for the women and do all I can to help! but to not know what truly great sex is really a drag for anyone I feel.  They had been whining for a while about wanting to get some great fucks from guys but were feeling really let down.  Some could get them off but they were seeking the kind of fucks I told them about.  Feeling skilled cocksmen plowing your fuck holes and fucking you hard and deep.   They are still learning to be bold and were hinting all around about me setting them up with some of my fuck buddies.  I could only comply.  I didn't tell them while I was setting it up that I was arranging a marathon fuck session of hot fucking with Eric, Anthony and Steven.  I have come to really treasurer them.  They so know how to fuck and are not all into control and domination.  They will fuck the hell out of you but don't try to cow or subdue a woman's spirit.  Plus, I have come to trust them completely in the bedroom and they have big black dicks!  I know that they can be trusted to fuck abuse me and any partners I bring and not harm us.  I have nearly died from cuming so hard with their dicks raping me mercilessly as they slap my face, tits, ass, thighs, belly making me squeal and cry, drag me around by my hair, spit in my face, pull hair  so hard my neck is all bent back my throat totally constricted and feeling their fingers clutched around my throat gasping me to heaven.  They especially love me because I bring them sluts that love the rough sex just like me.  I know Veronica and Amber and their desires to be loved raped, abused and would die from it just like me.  I had told them to arrange to spend Friday night with me.  Only when they arrived did I tell them that three studs I had regaled them with stories about would soon be over.  I am smiling great big still hearing their screams and squeals of happiness and the way the bounced around like only girls at that age can do.  The total exuberance of youth.   It is sad really that we loose that innocence and sheer ability to show happiness and letting it rock your world like that.  Oh well, I still got a lot of happiness just watching them bopping up and down clutching each others arms and simply laughing with happiness.  Sigh.

 

//  Our black studs arrived about fifteen minutes later and the girls gushed and flirted wildly seeing their handsome smiling black faces and their totally buff physics.  We sat in the living room and they set the girls so they had a horny black buck sitting on each side of them on the main sofa.  They flirted for a while and the girls told Eric, Anthony and Steven about themselves and they were very attentive.  I had told them to make sure and be interested in the girls and their life stories.  The girls simply ate up the attention.  I am smiling seeing Steven start to stroke Amber's arm and Anthony stroking Veronica's leg and tracing her ribs.  Eric sitting between the girls started playing with their necks and hair.  Gods I love sluts.  The girls simply got all limpid eyed and yielding.  I was getting excited seeing new love taking root.  Anthony tilted Veronica's head over and their open mouths came together as he shoved his tongue deep into her mouth and took it.  Eric took Amber's mouth with his mouth pressed tight and the black / white contrast so beautiful as Amber shuddered and moaned so deep in her chest.  I loved seeing black fingers unbuttoning their tops, unclasping their bras and unbuttoning / unzipping their jeans.  Soon the girls and the studs were naked.  I moaned seeing hard nipples, wet cunts and rock hard dicks.  I had stripped too and started to stroke my kitty and pull / pinch my hard nipples.  I moaned seeing Steven get settled between Amber's legs pushing them out and shoved his face into her pussy and started to suck her off like a wild man.  He loves pussy and men who love pussy are so fucking awesome in the way attack a pussy.  He was sucking so hard on her clit and swallowing her cunt meat and pulling it taunt in his back pulling head.  Then lapping his tongue deep into her cunt hole and up her wet slit and over her rock hard nubbin making her cry out in ecstasy.  His head lapping and pumping as he sucked her pussy so fucking good.   The way his tongue slithered up and down her slit making her shudder and gurgle.  I loved seeing his black face pressed deep into her pink cunt surrending his black lips his locks hanging down his back.  The girls were being kissed so deeply and the brothas sucking and squeezing their tits.  I had told the guys that Amber breast only have the smallest swellings and to make sure they were given their do.  Eric had his mouth glued to her chest sucking so hard as I saw his tongue wiggling against his cheeks as he swiped her nipples hard making her squeal and writhe.  She was getting that dazed look she gets as she is being taken to a devastating orgasm.  Anthony was sucking hard on Veronica's nipples and pulp squeezing her now full c-cup tits since I had told them they wanted it rough like me.  His black hands pulping her so white tits and her light brown nipples sucked deep in his sucking mouth.  He slide a hand down and began to jerk her off with two fingers pumping her wet cunt his fingers so slimed by her running juices.  I was slamming two fingers up my cunt and my other hand buzzing my throbbing clit.  The sound of sodden cunts being fingerfucked hard filled the room.  Our cunts splattered cunt juice as fingers rammed deep and knuckles pounded into our swollen mounds.  Eric was squeezing in with his hands in around each of Amber's tits to push her little swellings up and giving her nipples rapid deep throat sucks working hard on her little titties for a long minute and then moving over to the other one.  Back and forth he worked her jangling titties. 

 

//  Sigh, so fucking perfect.  Amber's hands were clutching around in helpless pleasure.  Then one hand buried itself in Steven's hair and pulled his dark black face hard into her cunt the other hand slamming the sofa back.  She cried out and then roared her shattering pleasure as Steven buried his face in her exploding cunt gulping down her copious cunt juice spasms as Eric still sucked her nipples so fucking hard.  She bucked and juddered like a million volts were shattering her spine and then Veronica jerked forward and nearly folded over as her cunt exploded on the fingers that were now raking her g-spot and Anthony's thumb masturbating her clit.  She slammed back and her heels dug into the carpet and she wallowed back into the sofa and jackknifed wildly as she now wailed and called out "Fuck me you fucking NIGGER!"  He had been sucking hard on her nipple her tit squirting up through his gripping hand.  I could see the muscles in his forearms tensing as he redoubled his raking of her spongy nerve bundle and squeezed her tit even harder making her nipple bulge and swell as he buried it deep in his mouth and sucked with all his might his cheeks hollowing out.  Gods, a second orgasm erupted that made her wail and scream as she violently jackknifed and flipped as much as his pressing hands would let her.  I like male strength at times like this.  Like I say, Steven loves pussy so he easily slide over when Veronica came down from her orgasms finally and slowly ramped up sucking her off.  I had a breezy orgasm that only wetted my appetite.  I watched Steven snuffling now as he devoured more white pussy.  Anthony had sat further away from Veronica and leaned her down as she gripped the base of his cock and he moaned when her mouth greedily sucked his dick head into her mouth and started to bob on it as she pumped his shaft with hard strokes.  I got on my knees between Eric's legs and swallowed his throbbing nine inch dick into my mouth and started to suck hard on his beautiful black cock feeling his dick head sliding up and down my tongue as I bobbed.

 

//  I loved looking up and seeing Eric's pleasure so obvious on his face as I sucked his cock.  I rose up on my knees and pushed out my tongue and then let his thick cock slide down my throat feeling his thick dick head sliding down my throat.  I gagged and moaned feeling Amber squeezing my throat around the dick buried in it whispering how beautiful I looked with my nose in his belly and seeing my throat bulged out and feeling his dick head sliding up and down my gullet.  I then watched Amber get up and stand up on the sofa facing Eric and arch her pelvis forward and mash it into his mouth.  He started to gobble her cunt gripping her ass cheeks and I watched him hump her forward as she rotated and ground her cunt into his face.  I would rise up Eric's thick dick and hack out tons of spit soaking his cock and nut sack which I used to pump his shaft and fondle his soaked balls.  Bending down to suck his heavy nuts into my mouth and swishing and licking all over.  Seeing him shudder as he ate Amber's pussy harder.   Glancing over and seeing Steven slowly eating Veronica's pussy and Anthony leaned back on the sofa arm as Veronica took most of his dick down her throat watching it bulge out and her slowly rising up drooling spit like a waterfall over her fist pumping his dick.  I have taught them so well.  We sucked along happily and soon I watched Amber's head rocking back high above me her legs clenching as she jammed her cunt forward.  Eric massaged and mauled her ass cheeks his fingers sinking deep into her ass cheeks making them red showing his grip marks on her clenching ass cheeks.  He drove her cunt hard onto his  plunging tongue and sucking mouth.  I could see his mouth working wildly.  Suddenly, I heard Veronica cry out again and looked over.  She was bucking and shaking violently as Steven had swallowed her whole upper cunt and stretched it out his tongue active like snake I could see through his cheeks.  I loved how she still gripped Anthony's cock with her spasming hand as she cumed with full body shaking spasms of fucking bliss.  I swooned seeing her body freeze and then shake horribly like she was being garroted.  Her eyes sightless in that slutty way as she cawed deep in her chest with rib rattling moans of pure fucking ecstasy.   I think Veronica cumming sent Amber over the edge and she gripped Anthony by the head with both hands and groaned so gutturally deep in her chest as she moaned cried and her shaking body ground her cunt so hard into his devouring mouth.  I could see her juices running down his chin and cheeks and then down his throat with shiny cunt juice.  I loved watching her body buck and sag only to jolt upright rigid and tight, shaking wildly her hands clenching his head for support. 

 

//  I am smiling because guys are guys after all.  Almost immediately we all had black cock buried in our pussies.  They knew they had gotten their charges off and now it was time to meet their needs.  Eric and Anthony were on the sofa with Amber riding Anthony's eleven inches into her tight young cunt whooping and gurgling as she slowly worked his dick fully up her cunt.  Veronica was pumping her cunt up and down on Eric's thick dick her face slashing as she mashed her tits into his face letting him suck and bit her nipples making her whinny and caw her soul deep pleasure.  I was doing doggy facing them as Steven slammed his manhood fully up my dripping cunt.  He gripped my hips and my trapezes to slam me back into his perfect proportioned nine inch cock making me gag and shudder as pure pleasure was pumped into my cunt.  I so loved feeling my body being jolted by his slamming thighs and my hanging tits whiplashing around.  The way his gripping hands moved form hips to my shoulders to my ribs squeezing in so hard to slam me back into his piledriving cock.  I so love watching black dicks impaling white pussies and seeing milky cum slathering their dicks and dribbling down their nut sacks.  By now all our cunts were soaked and stretched and they were slamming their dicks into our wombs making us shiver, shake and moan like gibbering whores.  I watched Amber dismount Anthony several times to lick her cunt off his dick and then bobbing on his dick taking half of it into her throat to clean off.  Then mounting him again and now watching it disappear all the way up her cunt his dick head buried in her almost sixteen year old belly.  Veronica was whooping and cawing riding Eric hard her young tits whiplashing up and down and Eric first slam fucking up hard and fast and then slow stroking his dick into her spasming cunt.  His thick shaft stretching her out.   I watched everything shaking and jolting up and down as Steven raped my cunt with punishing thrusts his fingers sinking into my hips slamming me back into his pile driving groin.  My tits whiplashing and clit throbbing and jolting with my pummeling.   I was clenching, slamming back impaling myself on his perfect black dick.  I watched Amber dismount again to suck her cunt off Anthony's dick and now mounted him, her back to him her feet on his strong thighs and pumping and swirling her cunt up and down his hard up plunging dick.  I felt my womb tightening both from the pounding Steven was giving me and watching Amber swirl her groin in tight circles her ass cheeks swirling on Anthony's thighs before riding up and down again his nuts jolting up and down with his violent up thrusts.  Only watch her swirl her groin on his dick buried again in her womb his dick fully sunk into her fifteen year old cunt.  Suddenly, my clit exploded making me growl and groin so deep in my chest as I jackknifed and jolted on the cock pounding my exploding box.  I could feel my cunt milking and spasming on his hard prick as my cunt pumped hot steamy cum out my cunt.  I looked down underneath me seeing my cum drip off my mound and his plunging prick.  I adored how his powerful strokes made my whole body judder forward with his power.  I looked up when I heard Amber scream out Fuuucckkkkkkkk! and saw her slamming her cunt up and down Anthony's eleven inch dick.  He was on the balls of his feet to let him slam his dick in a blur in and out her swollen cunt.  Her cunt exploded and her whole body shook with dire spasms, her head jolting forward and then to the sides as she now groaned so loud in soul deep pleasure and weakly cawing to Anthony to keep fucking her which he did hard with pile driving thrusts up into her gushing womb her juices sluicing down his plunging cock.  Veronica was bucking up and down still like the whore she is stuffing her white titties into her black lover's mouth as Eric swallowed and pulped her young white tits leaving red marks all over them.  I watched Amber dismount Anthony weakly and shakily get on her knees between his legs and lifted his twitching cock from his belly and licked up the dark black shaft with obscene slow licks looking up at him I could tell by the angle of her head.  She shifted so I could watch when I croaked I couldn't see.  I shuddered seeing her lick up with slow tongue strokes all around his dick and then swallowing his dick head and hard pumping and twisting her head on his cock crown groaning and drooling spit down his shaft as she pumped.  I am smiling seeing the young slut so quickly recovering ready for more hard fucking.

 

//  Steven had slowed letting me ride out my orgasm and I watched Amber again mount Anthony with her back to him and got her feet on his thighs and lifted his dick and pressed into her sphincter.  I moaned seeing it push and push and then pierce her shit hole.  I groaned more seeing her face scrunch up and her head lull forward her sweaty hair hanging down.  I then felt Steven pull out my happy pussy and press his dick into my asshole and I squealed feeling it split my shitter open and sink roughly into  my rectum.  My own head hung in sympathy with Amber as we shuddered taking our lover's dicks into our shit holes.  I ground my teeth feeling Steven sawing his hips working my asshole loose.  I groaned in ecstasy feeling my asshole radiate out that pained pleasure that I so cherish.  I raised my head and watched Amber getting her asshole opened up.  Her O ring still bowing on Anthony's dick still not able to slide deeper into her young tight asshole.   They slowly worked their bodies as I watched Amber's shit hole so slowly open up allowing his black cock to start working into her butthole.  I moaned watching as Anthony started to pump his cock in and out her asshole still bowing but letting his thick cock start to slide into her colon.  Soon both Amber and I were jolting and keening as big, thick black dicks were pumping hard into her sphincters.  Veronica finally came violently her young fifteen year old body thrashing and spasming horrible with blissful ecstasy.  I had to smile as Eric now gripped her hips to slam her up and down slamming his dick so hard and deep into her exploding young pussy.  I loved feeling my asshole raped and swooned watching Amber pumping her groin up and down in a swirling motion to work her asshole completely as now Anthony's dick was buried fully up Amber's colon at times as she would grind her ass cheeks into his groin.  Then Anthony holding her half way up his cock and slamming his dick so hard and fast his balls were a flopping blur the sounds and then plunging her down hard and then slamming her with jack rabbit thrusts their sweaty slapping flesh merging with the sounds of Steven slamming into my sweaty, striving body.  Veronica had recovered by now and rose up and guided Eric's nine inch thicker than normal dick and slowly ground it fully up her asshole as she groaned and grimaced but kept working hard to sink it fully up her shitter and now all three of us white women were being pummeled by beautiful black dicks up our assholes.  Amber worked her asshole so good, sometimes her feet on his thighs and sometimes on the floor as her body juddered from his hard fucking of her young, tight asshole.  I watched Veronica kneel up and settle on the sofa and lift Eric's cock from his sweaty belly and lick it clean with loud slurps before he leaned her down on the sofa her head pressed into the arm and her legs pulled up onto the sofa side saddle and he pushed his dick fully up her spasming shit hole as she grimaced, cawed and moaned her pleasure.  I felt my asshole clutching and milking the dick pummeling it and the tension again forming deep in my belly.  I watched Anthony lift Amber up and back his dick sliding out her ass and flopping on his stomach and seeing ass juice drip out onto his groin and down her thighs.  This only made the tension in my belly tighter.  He dropped her on the floor and she got on her knees and lifted his eleven inch dick and clamped her mouth on it and sucked hard pulling her mouth off with loud pops before diving again on it and sucking / twisting her head before sucking up and off his dick with that lewd pop noise that I so love.  Anthony's face twisted as he growled at Amber "How does your shit taste on my dick—you fucking white cunt!"  She moaned back "Like candy Anthony" as she licked up his dick purring as she licked up her ass cream and then swallowed his dick head and again sucked up and off his crown before immediately diving again on it.  I couldn't take anymore.  I am so attuned to my senses.  My asshole simply exploded into an anal 'gasm of epic strength that had me jackknifing my body up and down in horrible spasms of crushing bliss as I groaned long torturous groins of pure pleasure.  I sagged down on my cheek on the carpet and just gibbered with Steven pumping my exploding shitter so fucking hard prolonging my pleasure.  It just went on from their.  I watched first Amber and then Veronica have anal orgasms that had their whole bodies writhing and jackknifing.  I loved how Veronica's moaned this time like me while Amber's orgasm had her screaming out with her joy.  We all then got on our knees and sucked off our men.  I had Steven cum in my mouth while the young tarts took their bucks down their throat and had them cursing as their dick heads unloaded semen behind their Adam's apples and straight to their bellies.  I so felt my belly spasm in aftershock seeing Amber's nose pressed in Anthony's belly as he roared his orgasm out and his hips spasmed jerking his dick head up and down her lower throat.  I so love feeling a dick emptying its semen down my gullet but then I also love tasting your semen in my mouth and swishing around before I swallow. 

 

//  We had another round of hot fucking before I sent the bucks off and told them to come back tomorrow early in the afternoon for the hard grudge fucking.  Me and my girls cuddled and kissed softly until Veronica said we should take a nice bath to clean off before fucking again.  We had fucked in the sunken bath before and I smiled in rising love need.  We went into the main bath and I got the bath going and put in some bath oil and bubble bath.  Joann and Maria love to take baths where I am more of shower girl.  I got settled in the middle of the bath and immediately Amber settled her legs over my shoulders and my knees underneath her sacrum and Veronica supported her shoulders and upper back with her arms and knees.  I dined on fifteen year old cunt meat and Veronica kissed her woman with such love and pulled and twisted Amber's little rock hard nipples.  Sighs, she came so hard her legs kicking up a storm of water and soon I had Veronica's body lurching and jackknifing as I loved feeling her body writhe on my knees.  Amber pulping her tits out her squeezing her hands and her mouth kissing Veronica's neck and face through her screaming, thrashing orgasm.  I am too big for them to handle me like this and I got on the ledge around the tub and Amber stayed in the bath and Veronica sat on the steps leading up to the bath.  Gods, they sucked my cunt so good back and forth leaning my body first right and then left as they took turns sucking my cunt inside out and pulping, sucking so good on my titties.  They finished me off with Veronica pushing my tits together and wolfing down both nipples back and forth and Amber fingerfucking my cunt so hard raking my nerve bundle her other hand rubbing and squeezing all over my clit.  They whispered for me to cum for them and I did.  I wailed and jackknifed so hard.  My ass rising from the ledge and slapping down hard my back wallowing on the ledge between spasms before my ass pumped off the tiles with another womb rending spasm as I cursed and screamed my pleasure.  One leg kicked in the air and the other making tidal waves thrashing around in the bath.  The fucking whores then led me shakily to the counter.  They helped me jump on the counter and settled me over the large sink and sucked my cunt so fucking expertly.  I used the depression to let me hump up and down desperately with powerful thrusts of my cunt first in Veronica's mouth.  She pumped my cunt hard with three fingers and soon I was wailing as I again jackknifed and flipped wildly my body smearing the mirror with my wallowing and slapping body.  I was loopy eyed by now as I came down and I blearily watched Veronica get up and hop on the counter and start jerking herself off and Amber settled between my legs.  I moaned a long drawn out moan feeling her mouth latch onto my clit like a lamprey.  I was near spent and it took me longer to cum which the whore used to suck my cunt so fucking good feeling her tongue so deep up my cunt wiggling and her mouth trying to suck off my clit and then again feeling her tongue so deep spearing into my cunt.  She worked up and down my slit until I finally felt those first heavenly tightening spasms in my womb.  She sucked harder sensing my orgasm approaching and suddenly wormed her first two fingers into my shit hole and then twisted / slammed my shit hole.  Within thirty seconds I was screaming out goddammmmmmmmmm over and over as I clenched one hand on her head and jammed her face deep into my cunt making her lips disappear in my vulva as it exploded and I humped with mighty heaves my cunt gushing cunt nectars which overflowed her mouth and smeared her lower face and neck.  I was gritting my teeth and squinting to keep my eyes open so I could watch her beautiful face devouring my twat as it pulsed out pulses of searing ecstasy to my roasting brain and broiling veins.  I was totally spent as they dried me off and led me to bed.  I went to sleep quickly hearing them rutting and feeling the mattress rock with their loving.  How nice going to sleep with sweet fucking right beside.

 

//  The next day our men came back and I had put some quilts down in the open area of the bedroom.  I asked the girls again if they wanted a rape fuck like I give them and they smiled and enthustically shook their heads yes smiling at our studs.  We all quickly stripped and I sat on the bed.  I told our studs to "fuck the living hell out of them!  Fuck them like you fuck me!"  I had already told the girls that I could trust them to give them hard grudge fuck and do it all.  We were all using the standard "red" safe word.  I felt my cunt clench when Anthony threw Amber onto her knees and Steven twisted Veronica's arm behind her and jerked her down to her knees.  They whimpered and mock cowered as they started calling them fucking sluts and white whores.  They took their hard big hard black dicks and started to pistol whip their faces their thick cocks slapping and slashing their faces with painful smacks.  Their faces showing their smacks with the red marks they were leaving.  I moaned and masturbated watching the girls faces grimace and their slutful moans as I heard the sound of heavy dicks striking teenage white slut's faces.  They barked at them to suck them off and soon they were skull fucking them so hard their dick heads slamming the back of their throats spit cawing and choked up which had their chests, tits and stomachs soon wet and glistening with their drooled spit.  I loved seeing them pass the girls around like whores.  Removing their dicks from their hot sucking mouths and gripping their cocks at the base and slapping their faces so hard with their wet dicks leaving their faces all covered in their own spit from the dicks slapping all over their faces and scalp.  I am swooning seeing in my mind's eye Anthony clenching Veronica's hair with both fists and slamming his dick into her mouth and Eric hooking this thumbs in Amber's mouth to stretch it out and open to slam his dick hard into her throat.  All the gagging and hacking sounds and copious spit choked out.  Then the way they raped all their fuck holes with vicious dp and tp fucking.  Seeing their sweet young bodies buffeted and pummeled by plunging dicks and hands gripping and throttling their limbs and torsos.  Seeing Amber's head resting on Veronica's ass cheek and Anthony ripping his dick out of  Veronica's gaping asshole and Amber eagerly sucking and licking clean all the while her asshole was being raped by Steven.  Sweat dripped off all their bodies and the girl's hair now lank and jerking from their pummeling.  How the girls approached their orgasms all stiffening out and groaning deeply with gutturally fucks, goddamns and shit mixed in.  I had cum once but was primed and waiting only to buzz my clit and clench my belly and thighs.  I could see Amber's face schrunching and eyes slitting while Veronica was staring wide eyed and face frozen in a slash of dire approaching ecstasy.  The guys could sense it and Eric reached up and got his hands around Veronica's throat and Anthony gripped her wrists and started to stretch her back.  Steven was doing Amber spoon and was slam fucking her shit hole his hands around her throat.  The girls were staring at each other and I could tell they were in perfect sync.  Suddenly, they stiffened and began to buck wildly and screams started to wail from their throats only to have them choked off cruelly.   Eric and Steven clenching their windpipes shut and shaking their heads with hard cruel jerks of their strong hands.   Anthony pulling hard on Veronica's wrists twisting her body back as Eric choked her.  Horrible full body spasms shook them violently as their tongues and eyes bulged and Amber drooled all down her chin.  They let them breath as they gulped in heavily as their bodies rocked with the dicks viciously slamming up their exploding fuck holes.  Amber wanted to collapse but Steven pulled her up harder and bent her back by his hands around her throat and choked her off again as a wail was stopped mid scream.  Veronica was wallowing all over Eric's chest as he was choking her again and Anthony had released her wrists to grip her ass and was slamming his dick fully up her shit hole as it spasmed on it and had it now coated liberally with spent ass juice.  He pulled out and then slammed it fully up her asshole with long hard cruel strokes.  They sure now how to take you multiple and the girls I could tell started into yet another orgasm each as they jackknifed and bucked violently again as they were allowed to breath only to be gasped several more times as their eyes now rolled back and their heads lulled limply as their orgasms and gasping took them to the distant stars of orgasmic bliss.  Slowly they collapsed from exhaustion gasping for air and shuddering all over with strong aftershocks.  The guys slowly decoupled from my young protégés and now it was my turn as I was viciously tp fucked.  A couple of masturbatory orgasms had me primed.  Slapping me, pulling my hair and gripping and shaking my body violently and then doing it harder and gasping me through three orgasms.  The girls had recovered and they did them again hard with lots of abuse I had just "suffered" through.  I lazily watched Veronica's head pulled back to look almost behind as Steven slammed her asshole doggy and Eric was on his knees in front of her choking her as she cum and cum eyes rolling back and nearly spasming out her skull.  Her tongue lulling out her mouth as soundless groans choked out her throat.  Sigh, so beautiful.   The way they did ring around the asshole on Amber and pounded her so hard and pulling out and sinking on their knees in front of her and she sucking their blacks cocks clean all milky with her vaginal and ass cream.  She came again on Eric's dick in her cunt and Anthony's slamming fully up her asshole and Steven slapped her viciously as she started to cum and then gasped her as her eyes rolled back her body had full body seizures of pure ecstasy.  I am feeling my womb tremble hearing her weak gasped moans and cawing and then hearing those divine sounds of guttural groans choked off and seeing her mouth working but no sound coming out.  Just the way I liked to be gasped.

 

End of  Long Digression

//  I am smiling at Nyomi being so happy to not have her little girl around.  I sort of make it rule that you have to make it possible to fuck me away from your children.  To many problems otherwise.  I hate keeping quite and then getting the surprise in the middle of a hot fuck.  A little while back Julia's little girl came upon us fucking like banshees.  She is still too young to understand what she saw but she was frieghtened by the way her mother crying out with me plunging my fist up her asshole.  That was damn awkward having to stop with my fist underneath Julia's ribs all frozen.  It is amazing how something can go from supper hot to no specialness what so ever.  Then having to pull my fist out and just sitting their like a I don't know what.  Laura tends to not like it wet after sex and that is how I felt then.  It took Julia a long time to get me back in the mood and that is almost unheard of.  This is what I like thinking or hearing ["To hours of hot lesbian fucking and screaming, with no little girls to eavesdrop.  God, I'm glad I met you!"]  Like I say you so know how to show pacing and then the dialog I keep squealing about [They sipped their wine but could no longer control their impulses, now that they were alone and no one could see them.  Carefully, each placed her wine glass next to the valise on the kitchen table, and they effortlessly came into each other's arms.        "If you don't kiss me I'm going to die of longing," Laura whispered against her smooth dark brown cheek.        "You are lethal, Laura," Nyomi whispered back, brushing noses with her.  "When you showed up at the office, and I saw you across the room looking for my cubicle, I got wet."]  So many other stories just don't have this subtle increasing of love and lust.  I think most is because we never get to know the women well enough to see this.  It is two women coming together that we never really get to know because there is simply not enough time to get to know them.  Most stories take less KB than your stories and a one shot simply don't give enough time to let their women bond and get close enough for these wonderful lines.  Some stories are long that I have tried to read and they have lots of setup but again they never have this kind of dialog.  They have plot devices that they use and solve but never the loving hot dialog.  Many get to the bedroom with hot words but not this gentle wording.  I think you could have made a good screen play writer.  I love how you show them effortlessly putting down their glasses and coming together.  I love the hot words.  I see some hot words like this but never anything like I got wet seeing you across the room.  That is divine and special to read.  I guess other authors just don't have the imagination to set this up and then deliver the line.  I really am trying to think of a story like this from another author and I can't come up with anything.  I have read touching lines during a high moment that the story has worked towards.  But never lines that just happen because the women love each other.  The other is easy because you have set it up.  This is hard, delivering this in the "moments of life" that you so capture.  Geez, I can just see them coming together as they rub cheeks whispering to each other.  So gentle and hot. 

//  I so love how you show the beginnings of things [Now they kissed, slowly, sensually, creatively.  They were unwilling to hurry.  They sucked each other's tongue and lips.  Laura ran the tip of her own tongue under Nyomi's upper lip, making her giggle and knock her knees together.]  I just so bemoan the lack of the details that you supply from other authors.  I just feel my womb quiver when I read your details.  When you give these details I can just feel my tongue slithering between your lips and gums sweeping along your teeth begging entrance and then slithering in deep and taking your mouth for mine.  Gagging as I feel my long tongue wrapping around yours squeezing and then sliding down the top of yours and down your throat and pumping it in and out moaning into your mouth as I swallow your moans.  I so want to kiss you deeply feeling your body love shaking and melting in my love clasp as I pull you tight to me our tits mashing and legs parting to let belly and groins mate and hump in rising love.  Cute detail of the knees knocking together.   I love reading the dialog of them telling each other how much the want to fuck each other.  In other stories you see dialog that propels them into the bedroom but I am so surprised in how I don't see any simple dialog.  Simple back and forth of women expressing horny need and desires.  I guess again they treat their stories like dialog from a screenplay that has to propel the characters into the bedroom while you get them there and still allow them to talk like real life women.  That is totally awesome!  Again that humor that so slays me in a good way [As they went down the hallway, past Alana's empty bedroom, Laura peeked inside.  "Won't be the same without her," she grinned.         "It certainly won't," Nyomi cracked, looking back over her shoulder, more acid in her voice than there was in Laura's.  "The little shit, getting in the way of Mommy's sex life!"]  You take the sting out a few lines down letting the reader that Nyomi loves her baby but loves the freedom of not having her around for the night.  Like I say I love the humor you put in your stories.  I find it is a rare bird that never tries to be funny at least from time to time.  Thus, I find it so bland when I don't see humor in stories.  It makes your stories sparkle like gems.  I love how you are willing to move things slowly at first with them coming together again and kissing sensually and so slowly disrobing and kissing delicious skin that comes into view.  I so love to kiss and muzzle your divine body as it comes into view.  I find this is so normal with women but simply want to strip and get to the fucking with men.  Strange how the dynamics are so different and yet feel so right for each sex.  I spend time pondering such weird things.  Love this line [She sensed that Nyomi wanted to explore new ground but was reluctant to come right out with it, preferring to skirt the edges.  That was okay.  Laura would not push it.  She would let it unfold gradually.  Anyway, she was getting far too much pleasure from undressing this gorgeous woman to let anything else interfere.]  You are the only author that brings up the concept of pacing in her stories.  You show it again and again with the flow of the story.  But you also show it between the women.  I am so hyper aware of this.  Sensing it with my archangels and newbies alike.   Sensing it with regular lovers how they want to change things up or do something that is out of the norm for them.  Or move at a different pace than their norm.  With a newbie focusing on her and moving things forward when necessary and allowing them to lead if they are up to it.  I just love it in your stories.  It makes each chapter so alive and different.  I recently found a set of stories that had Dakota Fanning fucking some young starlets and the six chapters read exactly the same.  The sex was the same and the flow of each story was exactly like the previous one.  I loved the sex but the same sex and pacing just made it bland by the third chapter.  Read them for the sex but I would have enjoyed them so much more if the author had used variety in the stories to make them sing and thrill each chapter being different and unique.  The author didn't and it took something away.  You are the master of this.  I love it of course.  I just like you saying that Laura is going to let things happen.  Go with the flow.  I never see other character's thoughts in other author's stories.  Things just happen in that B movie Hollywood way that makes a story ho-hum.

//  You now give the reader the small details about their women that I so love.  You actually tell us of their lacy undergarments; the color and the pattern.  You then allow your women to tell each other how hot they find the lacy underwear and how it makes them hot.  I think that is one reason women like me so much is I actually gush and really extol the virtues I find in you.  I guess I am just less reserved than most.  I was reading an article recently about how women can be so catty with each other and I have never been that way.  I have gotten way more than my share over the years but the desire to retaliate has not been there.  I guess I am just so confident in myself that I have never felt the need.  Fortunately, those fires tend to cool with age with women.  We become wiser and find there are more important things to concentrate on, though, cattiness can still rear its ugly head from time to time.  I read in another article that most of this comes from men keeping us beat down and we compensate by this self indulgent self attacking.  I think it is right but I have to think that men are sort of innocent of this.  Especially, younger males.   We all have been branded and brainwashed to some degree.  Okay, stop it! And back to the story.  I like this next part a lot [As on their first encounter, Laura was again captivated by the marvelous odor of Nyomi's body at the end of the day, when whatever perfume she had applied in the morning had mixed and mingled with her natural body scent to form this sweet and, to Laura, erotic smell that seemed to fill her nostrils and her head with hints of devastating and potently emotional sex.  It was amazing.]  I too am so attuned to your scent.  I find men's virile sweat and scent hot and intriguing but the smell of a woman and especially a woman in heat simply intoxicates me.  I love the smell of a woman who has just come in from outside on a hot day.  The smell of her light film of sweat and natural body odor.   How the sweat looks on her skin and the way it makes her glisten.  The way her perfume merges with her body scent like you describe.  Taking off her clothes or smelling her pillow and sheets that have covered her body and swooning over smelling the essence that is unique to her.   You know it just hit me that is something again that only you bring out.  I mean I am trying to think of another story that talks of her scent before the rutting and nothing comes to mind at all.  They say that smell has the power to illicit the strongest emotions.  I find this when I smell a fragrance and immediately I am taking back to my childhood and memories flood me of that time and place.  I am so there as Laura is feeling her groin starting to clench and boil with rising love smelling Nyomi's essence. 

//  You now give us a nice subtle strip tease [Laura rarely performed, usually being too eager for her lover's body to take the time, but now she was in the mood and did a clever little striptease for Nyomi, revealing the better parts of her body slowly, smirking sexily like a pole dancer, thrusting her hips, holding her bra to her breasts with one hand while it was already unfastened.  Nyomi watched, fascinated.         "You are so gorgeous.  You are one beautiful white girl, Laura.  The fellas must be shooting themselves right and left when they find out you'd rather be fucking with me."]  It is nice when you show such things.  You are smart enough to not show this often so the reader doesn't come to find it old.  I love to strip and do my dance of the seven veils.  Swaying my hips and thrusting my pussy out for you and jiggling my ass in your face.  Swirling around the room doing my subdued Mike Jagger imitation.   Bending over and cupping my tits and rubbing them in your face and enfolding your face and rubbing your cheeks with my big hooters.  I find women tend to swoon and men get very aggressive when I do this.  Like how the sexes are different.  Last week Camille and I picked up a white stud at a Jazz bar and we were dancing and strutting before him kissing deeply and slinking all over each other before I feel to my knees on the sofa as he sat and cupped my tits and smothered his face with them pressing in on his cheeks.  I loved how he grabbed my ass and mashed me forward and then backed up and gripped my tits hard and started to maul them as he sucked voraciously on hard, thick nipples making me cry out in pleasure as Camille settled on her knees behind.  She reached around me and started to stroke and finger fuck my dripping cunt.  Brad sucked and pumped my tits so good and rammed his tongue down my throat then back to my nipples as Camille jerked me off with her free hand clutching and stroking me ferveredly.  I cummed so fucking hard as I wailed and thrashed in their grip as Brad gripped my hooters hard and sucked and raked my nipples hard as I jerked and full body seizures shook me so fucking hard as my cunt kept convulsing pure fucking bliss to my brain and gushed cunt juice out splattering all over Camille's fingers, hand and onto her sofa.  I am feeling my belly clench feeling her thick nipples poking my back and Brad's mouth latched so hard on my nipples sucking so good making my cum so fucking perfect as he worked both of my rock hard nipples back and forth.  I am smiling at Nyomi telling Laura how lucky she is.  I find this is something that women do and men don't.  This constant words of gentle love and stroking that women tell each other as they make love.  Hearing this makes you melt for your woman and want to fuck her so long, hard and deep.  Fucking her again and again to hear such sweet words once more whispered or groaned to you.  Like how you tell us that many are turned off by Nyomi's confidence.  If a man shies away from a woman who shows strength or if a woman gets jealous of that strength then they are not really worthy of you anyways.  A man loses out with me totally where a woman I still want to fuck at least a one night stand but if your can't handle confident women in your life then I don't normally want to be around you except for hot fucking.  I like to bond with my angels and this is a real thrill kill for me.

//  One thing I have constantly bemoaned most stories is how things are scripted and the script never seems to have real communication between the women during their love making.  It just happens without any real connection.  Of course a lot of sex is like this at the beginning but once lovers get to know one another more and more communication naturally flows from your relationship and you always have shown this.  I am of course swooning at their first coming together in a full love clench.  I am feeling my pulse leap feeling their tits mashing and nipples poking as bellies press and thighs slide into groins and arms pull tight.  I so need this when we are making love.  Feeling our bodies clenched tight and titties grinding and bellies rubbing as twats rub along thighs and groins.  Groining into your mouth as our tongues duel in hot love and spear back and forth and sucking on lips and tongue and running my tongue along your teeth and gums before plunging deep into your throat again before once more sucking on your lips and clenching your lips between mine.  You actually show this with Laura and her women.  The coming together of wanton bodies and clenching and grinding.   The feel of their bodies grinding and that heat making sweet sweat start to bead.   They are beginning to rut that leads to sweet explosive orgasms.  You now show that communication that I so adore and only you give.  You actually show Nyomi making her needs known and Laura eagerly following her needs.  I know Laura like me likes to get some oral in first but Nyomi wants to great straight to het fucking and like me, Laura totally agrees.  I want to fuck you blind and will do whatever you want (well almost anything) to get you their.  I hate mysteries and I can't wait to find out what Nyomi is not telling Laura.  That would really make me slam my dick hard and completely up your pussy and pound fuck your butt hole.  But, again I just love the communication and you showing the give and take between lovers communicating so that they can take each other to the heights of Olympus.  Sigh, I am smiling great big at the double penetrator falling out and Nyomi being both curious and aghast at the sight.  I love how you are planting the seeds of future anal pillaging.  I always try to take a newbie's anal cherry if not plucked but I will take my time if necessary.  I love how chance works for one.  I know Laura was not Machiavellian in this but the fates are working for Laura.  I know someday her dick will be plundering Nyomi's sweet shit hole.  I almost always get my woman's ass.  One just needs to read your woman and wear her defenses down.  Seeing a woman having a horrendous anal 'gasm I find makes them really weaken and often are almost waiting for the next anal seduction no matter how soon to give it to me or my fellow angel.

 

Long Digression

 

//  I like how you show that rising need.  I find you never know when love will bloom and that need will suddenly flare.  In days of old I used to maintain the yard wherever I lived.  Good simple honest work.  But I don't have the time anymore and I would rather get my aches and pains from working out (both the gym and bed!).  For three years I used a young man that did excellent work.  I don't like using professional services because they are always  hurrying.  He did excellent work but graduated and went to college on the left coast.  Evidently, he most have put the word out that I paid good and was extremely fair.  A girl showed up and said she wanted the work.  She was cute and I let her in.  We talked and she said she was an excellent worker and would do whatever I wanted.  Her name is Ashley and was fourteen at the time.  She was nervous and talking fast which I found curious when she suddenly said she knew I was a "Lesbian" and she didn't want me hitting on her.  The way she said it, the look on her face instead of making me mad, made me laugh my ass off.  In fact I was rolling on the ground.  When I find something hilarious it is fucking hilarious.  In fact she started to finally get pissed I was laughing so much.  I finally recovered enough to let her know that she was safe but I was going to make sure she did her work excellently "since I am a "Lesbian".  She kind of gulped.  She turned out to be an excellent worker.  She has worked on the yard since.  She had worked one and half seasons and I have watched her blossom and begin to fill out.  I had to lust some I must admit.  As she matured I watched her start to wear more revealing clothes and boys sometimes showing up to talk and neck with her.  I loved looking at her tone legs and light brown almost auburn hair.  Her tits started to fill out and I she has what I call "bottle cap" nipples that rest on top of her firm tits.  She has almost double stacked nipples that make the top of her breast bulge up like delicious pairs.  I had watched her grind her titties on several young bucks chests as the kissed.  But she would send them off soon enough and get back to work.  She has always asked for extra work to make more money.  I like flower beds and lots of shrubs that she keeps looking beautiful.  I always wire her account when she had done the work.  Over the last year and half we have talked and she has seemed curious with out really being interested so I let her be.  She has learned all about me and my archangels and my predilections.  In the back of my mind I still remembered her words and I have enough on my plate.  Over the winter I didn't see her for three months but she showed up the first weekend in April ready to work.  I felt my pussy spasm seeing her body had really filled out.  Her titties had gotten more plump and her hips filled out.  Her face was more mature her light green eyes beguiling.  She was even taller now about five foot eight.  We had emailed some and I knew she was between boyfriends.  I noticed she was showing more interest over time but I was still holding myself back from even responding at all.  I figured after her words she would have to come to me.  I fortunately have plenty of angels to keep me happy.

 

//  First weekend in May it was hot here.  On Sunday I had work for her on a new flower bed.  She had asked to come early and take a shower so she would be ready to go to the mall with friends and could I take her.  I said sure.  She got to work at seven and was done by ten thirty.  She was quite covered in dirt and bark.  I showed her the main bath and let her choose and she said she would take a shower.  I laid out some towels and she put her change of clothes on one of the chairs in the corner.  She took a long shower I could hear.  I went to check on her finally and she was in our bedroom combing out her hair with a towel wrapped around her.  The bottom of her ass was hanging out and her tits made the top bulge.  I couldn't help eyeing her which she saw.  I smiled and made I couldn't help myself motion.  She was set so I went to leave when I heard her softly call my name.  I turned around and looked at her.  She reached up and put her fingers in the knot in her towel and tugged it and her towel fell off.  I moaned seeing her barely c-cup tits and their huge nipples upswept and thickening before my eyes.  Her shaved cunt swollen and pink.   She looked me in the eye and licked her lips.  I moaned how beautiful she was.  I pulled my top off and reached behind me and unhooked my bra and pushed my workout shorts down along with my panties and I shivered hearing her gasp and breathily tell me I was beautiful.  I stepped up to her and I whispered to her "I am going to fuck you totally Ashley—I will take everything I want from you".  I felt my belly clench seeing her eyes get dreamy and her body get all soft for me.  I pulled her to me and lowered my mouth to her upturned face.  Her mouth was parted and I used my tongue sweeping her teeth as she widen her mouth and I slammed my tongue down her throat as she melted for me.  I carried her to the bed with baby steps and ripped the comforter off the dress pillows flying.  We feel to the bed and our limbs naturally twined and pulled tight as my tongue explored her mouth fully and twisted my tongue around hers making her keen into my mouth.  I gagged feeling her hard nipples poking and dragging over my tits and upper belly.  I gripped her hair and jammed her neck over and savagely sucked her neck into my mouth and pumped it viciously between my gnawing teeth.  I adored feeling her body shudder and hump desperately against my body her long torturous groans right beside my ears filling me with ecstasy.  Her wet twat humping my thigh making it wet with her juices.  I scouted down and siphoned in a thick, pulpy, turgid nipple and sucked long and hard my tongue batting and lathing continuously and then sucking hard as my head slowly pulled back as I pulped squeezed her breast and so slowly let her bulging nipple slip through my lips and teeth my tongue slapping her rock hard nipple and steeped areola.  I smiled seeing and feeling them in my mouth swelling full of hot pumping blood.  I swooned feeling her hands clawing my shoulders and her whole body shaking and her loud moans of pleasure.  I worked back and forth making her face freeze and then slash wildly.  I worked her thick nipples over and over feeling their spongy texture underneath my tongue and gnawing teeth.  I then sat up and got her on her knees and then slipped two fingers up into her soaking wet cunt and started to suckle on her nipples like a starving child and finger fucked her tight, clenching cunt.  I felt her juices sluicing down my hand her cunt folds gripping and sucking on my plunging fingers.  I worked her hard until I felt her beginning to shudder more and now hooked my fingers over and started to rake her spongy nerve bundle while gnawing on her nipple.  Sigh, a full throated scream of pleasure filled the bedroom as she cum with violent jackknifes and shudders as I looped my free arm around her torso to hold her to me as I raked her nerve bundle and sucked her other nipple hard with my teeth sawing over her swollen areola.  I worked her down and then laid her down on the bed and slowly kissed her deeply as she swooned and then worked back down pulping her tits now and sucking slowly on her nipples making her whimper before heading south and working my magic on her pussy.  Sucking her off once before finger fucking to a second orgasm while I again sucked on her nipples and kissed her deeply back and forth.  I love newbies as she took over and sucked me off with desperate need and wild enthusiasm.  I gave her little pointers and reveled in looking down and seeing her barely sixteen year old face buried deep in my cunt as it exploded in her mouth my juices overflowing her mouth and then she suddenly wallowed here whole face in my cunt from her hair to her neck which made my eyes bulge out my sockets almost as now a second orgasm exploded out of no where and I now gripped her hair and ground her face up and down my exploding cunt feeling her trying to suck in all my cunt juices she could and tongue lash my clit as it slipped over her furiously working mouth.  She surprised me by moving up and started tribbing my cunt with her pussy humping and swirling my swollen cunt.  She really worked it good and rose up on her hands and humped hard until she cumed hard her face slashing as I pulled and twisted her pulpy nipples.  I then flipped her on her back and headed south.  I had softly asked her if she could cum a lot and she gave me that smile only a teenager can and said "Yeessssssss!"  I smiled seeing she had a kitty like mine.  Always hungry for more fucking.   I sucked her off and inserted two fingers into her pussy and worked her fuck hole as I sucked her little berry down my throat.  She cum so hard for me as her body bucked up and down as I drilled her pussy and my lips sucked long and hard on her clit my cheeks hollowing.  I let her rest as I licked gently over her spent cunt, groin, belly and thighs.  I was ready to begin my anal seduction.  She had told me in the past she didn't let anyone fuck her ass.  I bent her legs slowly back and began to suck and lick her pussy making her love groan for me.  I then licked down her perineum and then back up, back and forth.  Making her whine and shudder for me.  Then I did not stop at her perineum and began to lick and tongue her rosebud.  Her head rose up and looked at me with big eyes before her head thudded down.  I smirked and worked my tongue into her shit hole and lovingly fucked her shitter with my tongue moaning feeling her sphincter clutching my tongue.  I worked her cunt and asshole back and forth with my tongue working deep in both her cunt and asshole.  I then worked hard on her cunt and clit inserting two finger into her pussy.  I worked getting her deep in the fuck and slowly drug my fingers out her pussy and slide over her perineum and pressing and circling her asshole.  Her head came up again and shook "no".  I smiled slowly pressing in harder on her sphincter.  Slowly I felt it loosening and I simply slide my middle finger all the way up to the third knuckle feeling her asshole pulse and suck on my finger.  I slowly began to pump it in and out her tight butt hole.  I moaned seeing her head come up again with a shocked look that told me she was already feeling the pleasure that anal penetration gives a woman.  I sucked harder on her clit and slowly worked her asshole open with my pumping finger.  I supper sucked her clit and sucked her cunt hole with deep throat sucks and then pulled my finger out her asshole.  Her head came up and her eyes shot wide open when I shoved my finger into my mouth and sucked up and down the finger that had been pumping her asshole.  She moaned her eyes rolling back her head thumping the bed again.  I worked her like this until I had two fingers working her asshole.  She came so hard for me as I sucked her clit and squeezed a nipple with my other hand fucking her asshole through her horrendous orgasm making her jackknife and flip with crushing ecstasy.  I rode her face to wonderful orgasm my hands clenched behind her head mashing her mouth to my rupturing cunt as it gushed her mouth to overflowing again coating her face with my steamy, sticky cum.

 

//  We rested and then took a shower where we sucked each other off as we wailed and bucked  our backs and heads almost violently against the tiles as hands jammed faces deep into exploding cunts.  My fingers again fucking her asshole as she now pressed down into my up plunging fingers.  I sucked them clean again as she moaned watching me suck her ass juice off my fingers.  I fixed us a salad lunch and drank lot of juice to replenish our depleted bodies.  I then took her back to bed and strapped in my favorite nine and half inch dildo since I know she was no virgin to cock.  I fucked her hard and deep missionary reveling in her thighs gripping my hips her arms looped over my back as her hard nipples ground into my titties.  I am shaking remembering her cuming so hard for me her body bucking up into my grinding and humping body our tits mashed and nipples poking and feeling her thighs gripping my hips so tight as she lunged and bucked up into my plunging dick.  I then got her strapped in and she did me doggy since that is easier.  She really got into and I told her slap my ass and rake my back.  She was slam fucking me in no time and I cumed so hard on her pistoning cock.  I then flipped over and open my arms and legs and gagged feeling her slipping her cock deep into my belly and soon had a good rhythm going and fucked my pussy good as we kissed and she bunched up my tits supporting herself on her elbows as she siphoned and gnawed my tits.  I begged her to pulp my tits and I gagged feeling her fingers sinking into my tits and roughly kneading them and then kissing me when she sensed my orgasm approaching and I screamed my love into her devouring mouth.  I recovered slowly as we muzzled and kissed.  I then got my harness back and slipped in and got her spoon and took her pussy with slow loving thrusts of my dick and then hard, fast pounding as her whole body shuddered and shook.  I slipped my left arm underneath her shoulders and gripped across her upper chest and slipped my dick out her dripping pussy and moved it to her asshole.  Her sweet faced turned towards me and she moaned "no—please don't—it will hurt."  I pressed in harder feeling her sphincter start to give way.  I gripped her body tighter and looked her deep in the eyes.  I was hesitating, giving her time to pull away if she truly wanted.  She didn't.  She was shaking her head no, whimpering "please don't" but her eyes told me all I needed to know.  I shoved my hips forward and she screamed out as my dick head shoved several inches into her rectum.  Her body shuddered and she wept softly as I worked her asshole open.  I whispered to her that your asshole has millions of nerve endings and your clit only fifty thousand.  I whispered to her to relax and let me take her to heaven.  I pumped my hips softly feeling her asshole bowing in an out as I took her virgin asshole.  She was sagging but I noticed she was beginning to push back into my in thrusts.  I had her top leg lifted and gripped her tit and palmed her thick nipple.  I felt her shit hole finally loosening and my dick slowly worked fully up her asshole as she gagged, whimpered and I noticed smiling now in a soft slutty way.  Long low moans of deepening pleasure.  She gasped out "my asshole is on fire … oh god it feels so fucking good!"  She was rocking back into my thrusts now and I kissed her shoulder and neck as I murmured my love to her.  I fucked her virgin asshole for long loving minutes.  I slipped my dick from her asshole and rolled on my back and gripped her shoulder and rolled her over and scooted myself up towards her face.  "Suck your shit off my dick Ashley … show me you love me baby." I cooed to her.  She lifted my dick from my sweaty belly and looked at her thick ass cream all over the dick head and coating the shaft to her asshole ring near the base.  "Let me see your tongue honey! … pleeaseeeeee!" I begged her.  She slowly extended her tongue lewdly and put it at the base of my dick and slowly licked up to the cock head.  Her eyes had been full of doubt at the base of my dick but by the time her lips reached the cock head I could see a total change.  She moaned and began to lick up my dick hungrily cleaning it off before pumping her head hard on my dick head.  She corkscrewed her head and moaned out "God … (swishing her mouth) I love my shit!" and again pumped her head on my dick.  I slipped it back into her asshole spoon and fucked her hard and moaned and felt my eyes roll back when she pulled off and twisted over and eagerly sucked off her shit juice moaning to me she loved tasting her asshole and later telling me it was better than chocolate making my eyes roll back again.  I would pound her asshole hard and fast making her body judder against me her firm tits jiggling.  I then stilled the pumping of my dick with most of it out her asshole kissing her shoulder.  Waiting long moments and then slamming forward with all my strength my thighs slapping hard into hers as she wailed her pleasure my dick disappearing fully up her asshole.  I would push her forward off my dick and Ashley lazily rolling over, lifting my dick and sucking it clean.  The next time I whispered at her to use only her tongue and moaned seeing her press her cheek into my belly and used her tongue to flutter over my dick head before using her tongue to lift it off my belly into her greedy mouth and listening to her hungrily suck her shit off my dick.  I then took turns going between her asshole, pussy and her mouth until she came with a wailing and wildly jackknifing orgasm with my cock pounding her asshole.  She begged for me to keep it in her asshole and then to fuck her ass again.  I did her doggy and groaned as she was now eagerly pulling forward and turning around to lick her ass off my dick.  I pounded her to another anal 'gasm as she had collapsed onto mattress and I got on my palms and toes to slam my dick straight down into her exploding shitter.  I flexed my ass cheeks pulling up and then slammed with all my force fully burying my dick in her exploding shit hole.  Again and again I speared her butt hole mercilessly.  I finally collapsed onto the bed myself both of us temporarily exhausted.  I had an arm over my eyes and smiled feeling her lift my dick sucking her asshole off my dick and purring the whole while.  Soon she was raping my asshole and pussy with me cleaning my shit off her dick.  I moaned for her to slap me and pull my hair and curse me which she took to like a duck to water.  I had an devastating orgasm as she did me spoon with me rolling off when I recovered to use my tongue to lip her dick into my mouth and made her go gaga seeing me take all nine and half inches down my throat.  I loved feeling her slapping my ass as we did doggy again as I slammed my cunt and then asshole back onto her dick.  I turned my head and croaked for to pull her dick out my asshole and split my cunt in two.   I felt my eyes spasm seeing the total slut look in her eyes as she pulled her cock out my sphincter and dragged it over my perineum and lined up her cock head and rubbed up and down my vaginal opening worming through my distended vaginal lips.  I gagged sinking down my cheek on the mattress when she speared my cunt and fucked my wildly.  Back and forth she worked my pussy and asshole now on her own moving her dick between my clenching fuck holes.  I could feel my womb tightening in my belly as she savaged my fuck holes.  As I started to cum I cried out for her pull my hair hard and she did making my cum so violently as I choked for breath sprayed spit everywhere as my asshole immolated itself on her slamming cock.  I loved how she kept slamming her dick into me.  One had pulling my long hair the other clenching my ass cheek to anchor herself as she slammed my exploding shitter.  I finally came down and felt her jerk my hair and called me a worthless fucking slut and to suck my shit off her dick.  I moaned at how she already knew me so well.  I tiredly pulled forward feeling her dick slip out my asshole and slowly turned around.  I saw my shit juice covering her dick head in a creamy, yellowish glazing.  I lowered my mouth and caught her waving dick between lips and sucked it into my mouth and lovingly sucked it clean looking her deeply in the eyes as I felt our love tightening and growing.  I knew soon I would be gasping her and teaching her the love of my fist in her pussy and asshole.  I so love new love.

 

End of Long Digression

//  I really like this next part for several reasons.  [Laura gave a playful snarl, finally dropped her bra and grabbed Nyomi, whose magnificent full firm breasts were already naked.  She mashed her own breasts into Nyomi's and kissed her savagely.        "Mmmm . . . nnnggggg!" Nyomi growled through the kiss, her hands flying over Laura's naked back, grabbing her ass, sliding up to her breasts.  "Fuck me with your hard dick," she panted.  "Right now.   Hurry." ]  You show that total loving that we women use in real life and other authors don't show.  They always and I mean always! just focus on the main three areas and not to much on the first.  They might give one sentence on kissing then a little on breast play and then some on the oral.  You give so much on each area and then you focus on all the in betweens.  I love how you describe things.  By using the word "savagely" we can just feel the intensity of their kissing.  How their tongues are dueling and Laura is in charge slithering her tongue around Nyomi's and down her cawing throat.  The in between you give is the clenching and titty mashing that really heats lovers up.  I so love feeling our tits flattened out and mashing as our nipples dig, poke and scrape over soft titties.  You show hands working heated flesh and showing how she first works Laura's ass and then tits.  With other stories I would think their women are amputees (no disrespect meant).  I say this because hands are not really mentioned if not working titties or pussy.  They just seem to disappear at times in their stories and I find that so boring.  You just capture the totality of fucking so well it makes my pussy quiver and get really, really wet.  You then show that communication that is so lacking in other stories.  Here we see your women communicating need and acceptance.  I just love the idea that we hear your women expressing desires and need and their partner rushes to satisfy it.  I really, can't think of another story that shows this.  Spontaneous communication in the moment that leads and morphs the sweet fuck.   Nyomi is expressing her wanton needs knowing her lover will strive to give it to her.  I love how positive this is.  [Laura kissed her body ravenously, waiting for her to go on.  Nyomi was not shy.  If she wanted it, she would say so.  Laura busied herself kissing and sucking the woman's magnificent large breasts, mouth-mauling her big dark brown nipples, squeezing the firm globes with her fingers while she sucked.  Soon Nyomi was cooing and gurgling and stroking Laura's hair while her body came alive.  Excited little bumps appeared all over her large, wet areolas.]  What is cool here beyond the great descriptive prose is how you show the progression again of hot fucking.  I can almost guarantee that all other authors would immediately lead to the strap-on fuck.  Instead you show Laura working Nyomi's body even harder to get her ready for the penetrative sex to simply rock her world.  Getting her tits on fire and throbbing and zinging pure fire to her fully engorged clit.  You show the effect on Nyomi and how she is stroking Laura.  You always remember to show the reader the full coming together of your women and that is why you writings are so superior. 

//  I am so there as Nyomi is begging for Laura to work her other nipple hard and suck like only she knows how.   I teach my sluts and angels my skills but I am the master.  I so love to try and suck your nipples off and pulp your tits until you are besotted and gurgling for me to take you tits even harder.  Getting in position if I can and really sucking your nipples during your orgasm sucking them in deep and pumping my head hard and then lifting my head and letting gravity slowly, oh so slowly drag your tit and nipple through my hard sucking lips and rasping teeth.  I make my angels whimper and cry out that I am making their clit jump off their cunt and that their tits are on fire with pure ecstasy.  I love being a master.  You now show that wonderful give and take that I so love about your stories.  Laura wants to move South and get some divine gash but Nyomi is having none of it.  She needs Laura's love cock and needs it now.  I simply love how you show women negotiating their lovemaking.  With men it is basically a given that you give yourself to their whims and let them lead.  But women we get to converse, push and prod our desires and the dynamic of how it will go is what make it so fucking rad.  You now give me that unscripted dialog that I so cherish and love ["Yes!  By you.   Pretend you broke in here and found me naked, like this, needing to be fucked."       "Oh, a fantasy!" Laura smiled.  "I am an evil rapist.  An evil lesbian rapist."        "Oh god, even better," Nyomi smiled and half-gulped, her face lit with a half-satirical smile.  "Devour me.  I dream of it."        Laura snarled playfully.  "Lie back, you bitch."  She pushed Nyomi's thighs open roughly.  "I'm going to have my way with you.  I'm going to fuck your black pussy."]  This is just so spontaneous to me.  It is what comes out in the moment when women are hot and in need.  Other stories have never hit me like this dialog just did.  Their stories are so boring in their script and dialog.  One story is like another and doesn't have the feel of life that your stories do.  I get so tired of lovers in other stories basically fucking in silence and the reader never gets to experience the real women that they are having dynamic interaction that just makes dialog spring forth like this.  Reminds me of about four months ago I read in the local sex magazine basically "black female seeks white female to explore dark fantasies" that had my attention let me tell you.  I can just feel women looking for hard kinky sex.  I made contact and we met at a local black swing club that I frequent fairly near the home.  I had to fight off the regulars especially the women.  I love it I must fear.  Justina came in wearing the outfit to look for and I nearly swooned.  She is about five three with dark complexion and hair to her shoulders and those large eyes, nose, high cheekbones and forehead that make me wet.  We made small talk before I lead the conversation to her fantasies.  She is in the process of getting a divorce and wants to explore her bi side and fantasies she has had since she was a teenager.  I thought at first she wanted bdsm but discovered she had "rape" fantasies.  She didn't want a male doing this fantasy.  She had lusted after a white female teacher back in high school and dreamed of her raping her after class.  Having her cherries taken by her teacher after she ripped her clothes off and roughed her up.  She was definitely intrigued by the idea of bdsm and I made a date with LaTonya and Belissa.  (Sigh, the first three times we were the subs and they worked us into a spent, aching mess.  The last time, last week, we were the doms and Justina simply wore LaTonya out.  She had done Justina each time to get her primed for revenge I know.  I have never seen LaTonya savaged like that.  The fucking whore is light skinned enough to show all her marks and she was covered in them and Justina was now canning her ass and thighs and the fucking whore had a shrieking jackknifing orgasm hanging in her chains.  The way the chains sounded as LaTonya's wrists jerked so hard the metal biting into her flesh as her body jackknifed and half twirled in her hanging chains.  Justina was herself stunned by it all.  LaTonya was still whimpering and jerking and I told Justina to get a cat tail and whip her pussy and she would cum again.  She kind of blanked eye got it and started to savage LaTonya's swollen sopping wet cunt.  Her impreciseness I think made it better for LaTonya.  I told Justina to move up at random and whip her tits and belly which she did making LaTonya pant and cry out in extreme pain but her pussy was so swollen I saw as I savagely worked Belissa and worked her sodden cunt to extremes with my wand.  Finally, Justina got on her knees again and concentrated now and sent blistering strikes against LaTonya's swollen cunt as LaTonya got on the balls of her feet and humped her cunt up and forward totally exposing her clit.  Finally, two hits back to back on her clit sent her screaming all caps and jackknifing again in dire bucking, wallowing death throes of crushing ecstasy.  I then told Justina to suckle on LaTonya's pussy and clit and she would go multiple and she did and so did LaTonya.  I loved seeing LaTonya all spent gyrating her cunt into Justina's mouth glued to her pussy sucking it lovingly and so gently her tongue lathing her now spent cunt and lapping up all the juices she could and slithering her tongue so deep into LaTonya's pussy to get it all.  We cuddled and slept for a few hours to let our slave sluts rest.  We then we pounded their assholes and pussies the rest of the night.  So many orgasms and atm to make me a happy dom.)

//  I let Justina know I would take her exactly how she wanted and then some.  I told her I was an expert in kink love and "raped" many women and was "raped" all the time myself.  I love women "raping" me making me submit.  I told her of how recently, Tisa and I were "raped" by Anthony and Eric.  Gods, they made us cum so fucking hard as they ripped our clothes off after jumping us going to Tisa's car after coming out the bar we had gone to.  It was so fucking hot as they threw us in Eric's suv and drove us back to his place where they ripped our clothes off and violated all our fuck holes savagely all the while cursing, slapping and pulling our hair.  Making us cum so violently as they gasped us cruelly.  I could tell that Justina was in awe.  To deliver her fully into my arms I made some calls.  I called up Kapri, Julia, Veronica and Amber whom I had "raped" recently so Justina could see I was into the fantasy and knew the limits and more importantly the ability to deliver the hard fuck love kill.  They all gushed about how good I was and how hard I fucked them.  I had to smile great big when Kapri volunteered to be raped like now.  Justina was now all glassy eyed.  She was ready to go but I told her I wanted her to wait several days to make sure.  Gods she whined and begged saying she had been wanting this for yearrrsssss!  I could only give in to such need.  She gave me directions to her house and asked if I had a strap-on.  I smirked and told her I never leave home without one.  I don't think she ever saw those commercials.  I asked her if she wanted her asshole "raped".  I cooed to her I would make her die from anal orgasms.  All she did was shake her head "yes" with a glazed look in her eyes.  She gave me directions to her house.  I asked her again if she was sure about this and didn't she want to wait and sleep on it.  She looked me in the eye and said "no" with smoking lust in her eyes.  She told me to wait thirty minutes and then go to her home and she gave me the key.  I left after forty five minutes to make sure and found her house, rang the door bell in the rhythm we agreed on to let her know it was me and let myself in.  I listened quietly and stalked the house until I peaked in the back bedroom and saw her in a cute pink nightie putting some hair lotion in her hair in front of her dresser mirror.  I quietly snuck into her bedroom and sprang upon her.  She had told me to rip any clothes she had on off, curse her, call her a nigger and such and to rough her up rough and hard.  I fisted her hair and jerked her off her chair as she cried out.  I was smacking her face super hard and jerking her hair so hard she was jerking up.  I barked at her that I was going to "fuck your nigger cunt … and bust your black goddamn asshole open you fucking nigger bitch!"  She squealed and tried to fight me off but my Amazon build easily subdued her as I ripped her nightie until only shreds were tattered and hanging from her neck.  My nipples were so hard as I slapped her down to the floor and used my foot to keep her pinned and kicking her somewhat rough to keep her down as I stripped and my strap-on sprang out.  I reached down and jerked her back to her knees and skull fucked her.  I snarled at her to open her mouth wide as I fisted her hair and slammed by dick into the back of her throat viciously.  I felt my cunt clench as I watched spit roping out and falling all over her sloshing tits, belly and my thighs.  I jammed most of my favorite dick down her throat making her choke repeatedly and then threw her down on the bed and "raped" her so good and hard.  Her butt was bouncing off the mattress I was slam fucking her so hard missionary rolling her over for spoon and then back again until she cum so fucking hard squealing and cawing deep in her chest.  I made her suck my cock clean of her cunt juice and then got her doggy and took her asshole as she begged me to stop but I noticed her asshole pressing back into my dick most of the time.  I took her butt hole roughly and loved watching it bow back at first and finally loosening as I began to take her asshole hard.  I pounded her hard and ripped it out and jerked her around by her hair and barked at her to "suck your shit off my dick nigger!"  She was hesitant and I kept snarling at her but not forcing the issue.  You never know about atm and a woman's limit.  I will not take something from a newbie if she really, really isn't ready to give it.  I find most resist and then give in and love it.  I will coerce and seduce but I won't make a woman do something she really doesn't want to.  I can seduce with time if necessary.  I always find letting a woman do me first, the thing she won't do, almost always leads me to taken the cherry I so desperately want the next time if not within minutes of finishing me.  This was a rape fantasy so I was very, very aggressive with her.  I poked her mouth with my dick but she kept her teeth closed as my dick head brushed over her teeth between her lips.  I was about ready to back off and try to seduce her atm cherry again a little later when she opened her mouth and slowly, softly sucked in my dick head creamed with her asshole.  I moaned seeing it so slowly my dick head disappearing through her pursed lips.  She started to bob on it softly and immediately started moaning and bobbing harder.  My eyes rolled back and I had a mini orgasm watching her loose her atm cherry.  I felt my womb flip watching her grip my dick with her hand and really bob and twist her head sucking her ass of my dick.  I barked at her if she loved sucking her shit and she moaned "ohhhhh yessssss … I want morrrreeeee".  Sigh, I did her doggy and spoon pushing her off and jerking her by her hair to force her mouth down to my dick for to lick her shit off my dick and soon she was pulling herself off to clean with famished gusto looking me in the eyes as she licked up the length of my dick.  Swirling her tongue all over my dick head before swallowing my dick head half cleaned of her heavy coating of creamy milky mixed shit juice with her leaking cunt cream.  I would reach for hair and fist it and jerk her head cruelly with hard jerks to and fro.  Moving from position to position I made sure to violate her body with cruel physical assaults.  Jerking her head hard and then jerking it still so I could slap it hard with resounding slaps across her cheeks that made her face lurch to the side.  The way she did cowgirl and pulled up and sat back between my legs.  Leaning forward and lifting my cock and looking at me as she slowly sucked my cock into her mouth and bobbed clean before taking most it into her throat to get all the juice.  Another orgasm for me!  I made sure to pulp her full b-cup tits squeezing her nipples out my clenched fists and wolfing down and trying to suck them and her areolas off.  I smacked her tits hard making them jolt and whiplash from side to side as she whimpered and groaned deep in her chest for me.   Slapping her tits and then slapping her face making it jolt from side to side.  Spitting all over her face as it lulled to the side and wallowed my spit into her face, making sure to really work her eyes with my spit and into her beautiful hair.  She came like three times as I raped her and the last time she was spoon my cock pounding into her womb and I gasped her hard, but still letting her wheeze air, as she barely squeaked and sprayed spit and came with a multiple orgasm that throttled her into near unconsciousness.  I loved seeing her eyes roll back and spasm uncontrollably as her body twitched and jerked spasmodically.  She finally unrolled her eyes after like twenty seconds and softly moaned and looked at me with dreamy eyes as strong aftershocks made her body jerk and tremble as I clutched her to me feeling the divine tremblers rippling into my sweaty flesh.  I jerked off for her as she recovered and then she ate me out like three times.  Deep into the night I awoke her and gave her a pair of handcuffs.  I showed her a flogger on the bed.  She handcuffed my wrists to the bed and I told her to "rape" me.  Take revenge for the brutal fuck I had given her.  She looked unsure at first but I humped my already swollen cunt at her and whimpered that I needed to be punished.  That I needed to be punished.   That I loved it so much, how I had put another nigger in her place.  Pleasseeeeeeeee I begged her.  I whimpered at her to look at my now soaked, swollen cunt and rock hard nipples.  That I needed it.   I begged more and saw the fire coming into her eyes.  She picked up the flogger and I hissed out yeesssssssss.  I whimpered to her to not hold back and give it to me hard from the first blow.  Oh gods did she.  I had red marks from my throat to my feet and loved how my skin burned and ached from the savage flogging she gave me.  I whimpered at her to slap my face and spit on it and pull my hair hard.  I loved the way she slapped my face with slaps that filled the room and spit into my face wallowing it all over my face and hair.  Soon my face was soaked in her spit and loved feeling her palm roughly spreading it all over my face before she savagely slapped me again and again making my cunt hump lewdly up off the bed.  I was loving the all the pain and pleasure, plus, the knowledge that she had learned so much from already.  She was copying me so well.  She finally uncuffed me having beat me into total submission like I had needed it.  She made me come so hard whipping me mercilessly and sucking me off and then taking my strap-on to me and pounding my pussy and asshole to ruin.  I whipped my head back and forth when she gripped my tits with both hands and pulped and rolled with my encouragement.  Teaching her how to suck nipples and areolas down one's throat with hungry deep throat love sucks.  Then smacking them so hard making them deep red and hurting like hell which only made them throb and push pure pleasure to my brain and clit before pulping my nipples out her clenched hands and wolfing down yet again.  Had to give her pointers on technique at times as she pounded my box and asshole.   She loved watching me cum so fucking hard for her and the way I would hungrily suck my asshole off her dick with total wantonness. 

 

//  You now hit the reader with that beautiful descriptive pose and hot sounds of initial penetration that makes me almost crazy with want ["I am going to nail your beautiful black ass right to the mattress," Laura snarled again, squatting between the woman's gorgeous, sleek, parted thighs and lodging the slightly bulbous head of the dildo in the now-blossoming, wet, dark pink groove of Nyomi's splendid pussy, between the floppy black cunt lips, glistening with cunt dew.        "Unnnggggghhh!" Nyomi groaned as Laura slid it home.  "Oh god!" ]   Sigh, so beautiful.   I know I was just ranting about spontaneity but this so shows it.  Most women love being dominated and this makes them melt for me when I talk to them like this.  Then you actually describe the woman's passion flower.  I have always wondered over the years how mannequin the women and even men are left by other authors.  I just sort of see that bland features of a mannequin that leaves one untouched.  I can so see her wet pussy opening up for Laura as she brings her love cock to her honey pit.  I noticed that about your writings right off that you actually describe your women's faces, bosom, ass and pussy.  I have read porn since I was a early teenager and I can't remember another author except a few in penthouse forum that did a good job.  Of authors that write multiple chapters only you.  I peruse different authors on asstr, nifty and literotica and still only you give us prose and descriptive loving descriptions.  Thank goodness I kept seeing these Laura stories on new stories list at asstr.  Then you give us the sounds of penetration that makes my pussy clench and belly tremble.  I so swoon when I feel that phallus sliding deep into my cunt or invading my rectum.  I so gurgle, groan and whinny and I am again thankful that I have found an author to capture this.  Geez, just rereading the above lines and I am just gently smiling at the adjectives and adverbs you use to describe your women's love flower.  So special as I swoon.  I like how you start the pacing slow as she strokes her strap-on in and out of Nyomi's sopping wet pussy.  That is why I am such a big believer in foreplay when I know my dick will be plundering your fuck holes.  Getting your cunt wet and open and letting your juices slaver your groin and letting it run down over your perineum and soaking your asshole for invasion.  I am smiling as Laura mounts her lover and is working her hips to slowly stroke her dick in and out of Nyomi's cunt.  I love looking down or back and seeing my lover's inner cunt lips clinging to my stroking dick as all that stretching and tension in her cunt makes her simply melt for me.  sigh, only you show your lover running her hands over her woman's over her woman's body.  I so love to stroke, grip and squeeze your whole body from your calves to the top of your head as my hands reach as far as they can in missionary.  Squeezing your tits like Laura her and siphoning your nipples down my throat as I watch your face slash and throat work as I make you caw.  Reducing you to a whore and feeling your body getting more frantic like Nyomi here.  I so love how you capture the slow beginning that works your slut into a frenzy of need that you can exploit.  Only you again show this ramping.  One fucks like this to get this from your love slut ["Fuck me harder, Laura!  Fuck me fast.  Fuck me harder!  I'm going to come.  Please!"       Laura held her face in both hands and kissed her hard again.  "Oh, you don't want it to be over too quickly, do you?" she teased Nyomi, still fucking her with a slow, relentless motion, determined not to be rushed.       "Yes!  I need it!  Please!"]  this is why I start slow and work your body up tight with need.  I will finish you off with a slam fuck that makes the bed bark and sing as the legs judder and the headboard bang the wall.  By ramping up when I deliver the love kill slam fuck I make my sluts die for me.  Wailing and shrieking as their body flip and jackknife for me.  You show how the verbal word adds so much.  Hearing your woman beg for it and then fucking the living shit out of her as she convulses underneath me as my cock slams into her womb or plunders deep up her shit hole.

//  Again you capture the power of the spoken word [Laura leaned close and began pumping her harder, whispering into the marvelous shiny dark whorl of her left ear.  "I've got a secret for you.  I need it too."  Then she stabbed her wet tongue deep into Nyomi's ear.       "Unh!   Unh!" Nyomi grunted softly as she felt the dildo begin to spear her harder.  "Yes!"       "I'm going to fuck you so hard," Laura panted, now picking up the pace even faster.       "Unh!   Unh!  Unh!  Oh . . . Laura!  Ungghhh!" ]  I love reading this because this is how I talk to my sluts and you so capture the whimpering this feels your women with.  I so love hearing this and it inspires me to really pound your shit good.  On the receiving end I revel in feeling your dick slamming deep into my belly or up my ass making me shake, mewl and cry out in rising ecstasy.  You just so capture the way a fuck progresses as you are now ripping your dick hard into your loves body.  I so love feeling our bodies slap and grind together in missionary.  Our tits mashed and bellies wallowing and slapping as I hunch up to slam down into your womb with my big dick.  gripping your tits and love crushing as you whimper and devour your nipples down my throat before mating our mouths tight and slamming my tongue down your throat before kissing your face and shoulders and do this over and over as I vary the course and tempo making you melt for me as my hips slam my dick home.  Ramping up like you show.   Only you show this.  I mean others simply don't catch this for some reason they just kind of fuck until orgasm occurs and yet the authors just don't show the ramping that makes sex so rad and wonderful.  And of course you deliver the love kill so perfectly [She now began thrusting and spearing Nyomi's impaled pussy so hard that her lunges rode Nyomi's ass up off the mattress.  Laura slammed the shaft into her, again and again, spearing her, stabbing her, hearing the wild squeals that erupted from deep in Nyomi's throat as she finally received the hammering she had begged for.       "Aiieee . . . aiieeee!   Mnnngghiieee!  Oh . . . oh Laura . . . oh . . . anngghhh!"       " Anggh!  Anggh!  Anggh!" Laura grunted as she ripped the dildo into Nyomi's beautiful, tight pussy, lunging into her, sucking her neck again, her damp shoulder, inhaling and exulting in the woman's spicy, sexy scent, frenching her ear again, but never relenting in her hard, pounding thrusts.        "Mnngghiiieee . . . . oh !  Ungghh!  Ohnnggg!" Nyomi gasped and sputtered, churning and pumping back as much as she was able, squirming in the rumpled sheets and squealing as a clearly inevitable orgasm began to engulf her.       "Oh honey . . . oh honey . . ." Laura panted to her, now encircling her neck with one arm while still steadying the dildo with her other hand, crushing Nyomi to her and impaling her on the stabbing strap-on.       Both of Nyomi's arms suddenly flew up to clasp Laura too behind her neck, which gave her added leverage to jam her pelvis down hard on the thrusting stalk.  And she exploded in a cacophony of squealing.       "Annnggiieeeee!   Annnggiieeeee!  Oh . . . Jesus!  Annnggiieeeee!  Oh shit!  Ohhnnggggggg!  Oh Jesus!"        Her long, opulent body went into violent convulsions, forcing Laura to hold on tightly, though it was barely necessary since Nyomi herself had her in an iron grip, her arms still locked around Laura's neck as she rode out the most intense, shattering moments of her climax.]  This is why I fuck is go give my women orgasms like that and to have orgasms like this.  I mean this is why we fuck.  I am shaking my head at how well you capture the wonders of sex with so little kilobytes.  I tried to read several het stories with lots of humiliation of black women and hard sex.  The women love it in the stories and I love the idea of hard dicks slamming deep and hard up pussies and assholes.  The only problem was the sex was anemic and almost not there.  He set it up but there was no payoff.  You need details!! to get the reader into the story and feel the orgasm!  The dick was just put in the vagina or rectum is how it was basically described.  They used hotter words for the orifices but it was wasted because their was no payoff with the sex.  He has setup a nice world but then forgets that you need hot sex to truly deliver.  You show the dildo simply pillaging Nyomi's love box and the force of Laura's body slamming down into hers.  Plus, you show how you use your hands and mouth to work her upper body to really overload her body with sensations to maker her cum wildly.  Again, I have yet to read another author that shows this.  Men are not good at this and I cum really hard with them but we women do this and it should be captured.  And even if men are not good at the total loving you still need to show how wonderful their dicks feel punching deep into your willing body and the sounds and feel of their powerful thrusts slamming into your willing flesh.  Nope, I don't get anything and it sucks!  And you always remember to show the love kill with how Nyomi's body is simply dying from Laura's loving ministrations.  I just gaze down at you if I am not raping your mouth or kissing some part of your body.  Watching your face freeze and the slash for me and simply crumple as it twists and wails of ecstasy are ripped from your throat as I feel your body convulsing and flipping up into my punishing thrusts and finishing you off as I grind down into you and mash you deep into the bed as I wallow you into the bed or floor as our sweaty bellies wallow and our tits are mashed and flattened with nipples poking out hot screams of pleasure into our tit meat.  Gripping your hair and jerking your head into the mattress and then slowly mating our mouths as I slither my tongue deep into your mouth making your orgasm prolong as our love flows from tongue to tongue.  Sigh, only you capture this and I so thank you.  I wonder sometimes if this comes natural to you or did you develop this skill?  Your skill in this is just so perfect.

//  I love how you show that Nyomi is totally blasted by her sex with Laura.  You show the women and Laura all spent (temporarily) and all languid with that wondrous afterglow that great orgasms fills one with.  I so know that pulling my love slut to my sweaty body and feeling our sweaty bodies all slippery and slipping and sliding against each other.   We pull each other tight as arms and legs twine and titties mash and nipples poke as mouths come together in slow, deep tongue exploring love kisses.  Moaning softly as tongues twine and slither in spent love.   Clenching her body and pulling her tight hard as I feel our bellies wallowing making my womb and pussy begin to come alive yet again.  Other authors just have the orgasm and don't make if fucking special which makes me wince almost.  I love how we find the difference in women.  Nyomi is pulling Laura tight to her and she has to ask to be able to breath.  I want to be crushed to your body and I slowly teach my sluts whom are not like this to crave and need it also if I have the pleasure to fuck them often.  I like how you show the interaction of women.  I swear other authors always just stop the story or scene after the sex is over.  No sweet post coital time and sweet sharing and conversing.  I get tired of how incomplete other stories are.  Yours are complete gems that can live so totally on their own.  You now capture the difference that women have in their loves of sex.  I have noticed for a while that Laura is not a great fan of sex standing up.  Here we see that Nyomi loves it.  I just love that you allow us to see this.  I never ever get to see things like this from other authors.  I never get to know the women well enough to discover what a favorite is.  Even the multi part stories never really let us know what the women like.  I love the sex but the authors never let us get into the women's lives and thoughts and never get to see a fav pop to the top.  I like how Nyomi tells us that she loved her husband pounding her in the shower standing up .   Women just don't have the strength or inclination to really pound their women thus, so I love men for that.  I have seen over the years that Laura is not a devotee of doing it in the shower.  I think she likes the water aspects of it but the having to clench to stay upright and worry about toppling she finds a turn off.  She does it for her lovers and does it excellently and I smile seeing her indulging her lovers.  I love it.  I love fucking in the shower and often getting out soaking wet to fuck heatedly getting my slut all wet with the shower water and our rising sweat.  Me I love grinding down on a hungry woman's mouth and fighting for that balance as my womb is shredding deep in my belly.  A little while back Veronica, Amber and I went to the mall cruising for young chicks.  I am now the older visiting sister.  They picked up two cute black girls Jalessa and Sophia.  They are both juniors in high school.  They are both tall and slender with high firm tits.  They were walking around the mall holding hands and leaning against each other and were easy to pickup.  The girls brought them back to the food court and our table.  They flirted with them telling them I was their older visiting sister.    They asked if they could come back to Amber's house and I said of course if their mother's said it was okay.  They called and told their mothers what I have come to find a ubiquitous "we are spending the night at a friend's house."  We were soon back at Amber's house and in the living room.   I feigned tiredness and told them I was tired and going to bed disappearing down the hallway.  I went into Amber's bedroom and stripped naked and rubbed my pussy and worked my nipples rock hard moaning thinking about all the young pussy I was about to devour.  I was love shaking thinking of dining on new black cunt meat.  I snuck back down the hall after about fifteen minutes and smiled seeing them all basically nude except the sista's socks were still on.  How cute!  Veronica and Sophia were on the sofa their legs spread and being eaten out by Jalessa and Amber respectively.  I love seeing who is dominate and gets their cunt meat first.  I silently padded behind Jalessa who was on her hands and knees her face mashed in and rocking into Veronica's cunt.  I got on my knees and gripped her ass cheeks massaging lovingly burying my face into her wet cunt and spearing my tongue deep lapping up her divine nectars.  I loved seeing her face lurch forward and then rise up and looking back in shock and wonder and then burning lust promising me soul crushing orgasms from her thick lips.  Gods, later, the black vixens sucked my cunt inside out.  We fucked so hard and long.  We slept in Amber's and her mother's bed.  I got up and fixed myself a light meal in the kitchen and started when I felt Amber's nipples pressed into my back and her lips on my neck.  I scooted us to an open area in the kitchen and she sank to her knees looking up with raw wanton hunger.  I stepped forward and pressed my swollen cunt into her mouth and started riding her face so hard gripping behind her head to ride my aching cunt up and down her sucking mouth and deep spearing tongue up my fuck hole making me groan so deep in my chest as my head kept rocking forward as my hair hung down and I watched my vulva flare around her devouring mouth.  She inserted two fingers and pumped my flowing twat and shook her fingers working my clit from inside my sheath.  My sodden cunt making obscene wet noises as she pumped and rattled her fingers in my cunt folds making me gag in helpless pleasure.  I was in fucking heaven.  Soon my womb just exploded making my head whip back and forth as demented deep throated moans filled the room.  I felt my toes clenching on the vinyl floor as my whole body spasmed and rocked.  The fucking whore timed it perfectly.  I was coming down as she gently lathed my spent pussy and she suddenly sucked my entire clitoral hood deep into her mouth and started tongue batting and spearing as her fingers now hooked and raked my spongy nerve bundle.  It only took fifteen seconds and a second shattering orgasm rent my womb to shreds sending scalding cascading waves of fucking bliss pouring into my brain and clit.  I wailed and shrieked and shook violently and suddenly my legs weakened and Amber helped my stagger to the floor.  I made a chair screech as I drug it with a clenched hand as my body slowly toppled before letting it go as it nearly fell over.  My sagging body broke her lip lock but she quickly changed positions and sucked my clit hard again into her mouth and prolonged my bliss as my legs spasmed and scissored kicking the kitchen table legs and the chairs as my body rocked and spasmed in bliss.  Gods, that was a great orgasm.  And later the next day we took their anal cherries, ass to mouth and ass to pussy cherries.  I so love teaching teenagers the wonders of great strap-on sex. 

//  One thing that I have always like about your stories is the easy humor you use throughout your story.  I never really see humor in other story that is organic to the story.  One other author has used it but it had some outside characters kind of like a Greek play with the chorus adding humor.  Your humor is part of the story.  [Nyomi took her hand and pulled her off the bed toward the bathroom.  "Not half as hot as what I'm going to do to you after you get all wet and soapy.  C'mon, chicken.  I know my Laura.  She could come standing on her hands in a crowd."]  This is not contrived to be funny.  It is just women sharing their love through humor.  Then we see Laura giggling at the one liner.  I just love this being shown.  Humor can so make a woman your total loving slut.  Breaking down silly barriers that then allow me to totally consume you and take you to heaven.  I love how you show rising lust.  They are waiting for the water to get hot and they come together in a total body clench I know.  I can see their tits mashed, bellies wallowing and legs hooked as they kiss each other deeply feeling their cunts slimming hips, thighs and bellies.  I can feel my belly melting in love during such times.  Sigh more humor ["Want to get wet?" Nyomi winked.       "I am so wet already . . . what can it hurt?" Laura winked back.]  You just so capture real life showing this.  You then show how the moment is so much hotter than anything else when you give yourself totally to the moment and your fuck mates.  Right now, Nyomi is totally hotter than ever to Laura with her now soaking wet in the spraying shower.  I so know that feeling.  The moment is always perfection to me.  I too love to fuck in the shower.  Coming out of the shower and not drying off to fuck immediately or being totally soaked in sweat and fucking as bodies slip and slide against each other.  I just love how you show Laura running her hands all over Nyomi's wet body.  You just don't see this in other stories.  They get right to the main fuck and miss so much by not showing the foreplay and then the rising and ramping up of need and want as your lover's body fills your clenching and stroking fingers.  Then swallowing a bulbous nipple and just deep sucking it as your lips clench on it and your mouth is drawing hard on that divine treat as your woman gurgles and jolts against your body as you pull her tight.  I love to loop one arm around your body pulling you hard to my body as our bodies mash and wallow and use one hand to pulp your tit as I love suck your nipple hard with my clenched lips and sucking mouth.  Then the little details that you besot the reader with.  How Laura's hair is all plastered to her head immediately while Nyomi's hair gets that webbing and only slowly droops.  Sometimes my angels have to put on a cap.  Their hair can't quite take soaking like white person's hair.  I like how you show the changing of pace.  Laura is taking the lead but now Nyomi takes the lead.  You show her superior size easily lets her take the lead.  I use my Amazon build to lead when I want but my short lovers love how submissive I can be and taking me so hard and love raping me if that is their desire.  I get so tired how other authors just keep things so scripted.  If A is leading then A will lead to the end.  B can never take the lead and that really sucks.  I love that I found one author that understands this and shows this.  I love seeing Nyomi beginning to consume Laura with hungry sucks of her nipples and deep throat kisses feeling your tongue deep in my mouth.  I love having my tits devoured with lots of kissing thrown in.  Makes me so fucking wet and almost swooning with love.   I love the history of this story.  Laura thinks briefly of Ada and how she used to play with her wet hair in the shower.  Only a history allows this juxtaposing of events.  Something we all do but only you can show this by this divine story arch you have given us.  And then showing how such thoughts can simply be consumed by new love [And yet the thought of Ada disappeared in a flash as Nyomi began to consume her like the fuck-demon she had become as Laura and she had grown more and more comfortable with one another.]  I so love reading how women loosen up when they get comfortable with new lovers.  I have had so many lovers that started out shy and reserved and I soon have them into raging tigers that are begging me to take them completely hard and deep and then are clawing at me almost.  Too totally fuck me to hell and back.  You are the only author to mention this.  Again, something to set up above the mediocre rest of the pack so to speak.

//  I love reading the thoughts of Laura.  I don't get to see to much of the thoughts of women in other stories while they are fucking.  I have hated not seeing their thoughts.  You so show the heat and want.  I so know that being devoured to the core of one's honey pot.  I so love to plant my feet a little forward so I can use my upper back against the wall to grind and hump my cunt into your starving mouth as the shower spray is hitting us.  One can usually adjust the water or move in the bigger stalls if one wants to let the spray hit one as you want.  Me I love to feel the water pelting my shaking and juddering body as I feel your tongue spearing deep into my cunt, or drilling my nipples or plunging down my swooning throat.  have to love the little details you give the reader.  I can take pain but I have lover's do just what Nyomi is doing here.  Putting a towel underneath her knees so she can totally focus on eating some steamy, white pussy.   I have had many a lover need to adjust to get comfortable so she can dine in total enjoyment of my swollen, dripping red cunt meat.  Sigh, you so fucking capture the moment of first contact and or penetration! [Laura, having done this before herself, understood perfectly.  She smiled down at Nyomi and obliging parted her wet, shiny thighs, then let out a low, soft moan as she felt both Nyomi's fingers and her tongue touch her aching, oozing pussy at the same time.       "Ohhhhhnnnnnnnn!" ]  I too love to concentrate on the face of the woman who is about to bury her face into my pussy and groaning so hard as I feel her lips sucking my long cunt lips and worrying them and then her tongue sliding into my cunt and worming around making me judder and shymy my pelvis in helpless love.  Gods, I so gag feeling a hot tongue and fingers slipping into my aching pussy.   only you make me feel the heat and love and thus I adore your stories.  Wow, you are just so fucking perfect with your details [For some reason the hot shower water seemed to soar in volume and quantity at exactly this instant.  In her mind Laura knew nothing had changed, but everything had.  The water roared in her ears and bit into her flesh, and Nyomi slid two fingers up into the clenching sleeve of her cunt, and Nyomi's full, sensual lips enclosed her throbbing clit and began to suck, and Laura went happily mad with a crackling, steaming surge of lust.       Her wet body sagged against the glass wall of the shower stall, but she bent her knees enough to maintain a little leverage by pushing her ass back against the glass, and then she pushed her pelvis forward, gyrating a little, pushing her pussy into Nyomi's mouth and fingers, knowing that  she might lose balance if she had to do this for long but that it wouldn't be necessary since she was going to come in about ten to twenty seconds.]  I know I say that only you capture things but his "tunnel vision / hearing" one gets when one's soul is being pleasured is definitely only captured by you.  Your eyes so focus and you see almost every pore of her skin as her face laps you cunt.  Hearing so loud the sound of plunging fingers in one's swollen cunt.  The intense feel of our bellies as they wallow while we kiss lying in a love clench.  I think a lot of it is you put a lot of your self into the stories and, thus, can tap these memories.  Other authors are just writing stories where you capture life.  Therefore, you are able to bring that life into the stories and make your stories sign with it.  I so love how you mention Nyomi's full lips.  I too love watching black women's full lips working their magic on my body or another's body.  One of the most beautiful things in the word is watching two black women kiss deeply as their thick lips mash and massage and I watch tongue slither in cheeks as they plunge back and forth.  Hillary and Camille joke about their boot lips when they are kissing each other like famished whores.  Seeing tongues slither and duel as their mouths open so one or the other can give head to her sister's tongue or sucking her sister's lip into her mouth and stretching out as she worries and pulls on it as her tongue swipes the tender lip jutting between her thick lips.  I so love the way they quake and mewl doing this to each other.  Or trying to pull and suck their sister's nipples off while hands pulp full heavy tits.  Using them to perfection on each other's soaking wet cunts and kissing with sealed lips their sister's pulsing asshole.  I love watching them mashing their face in hard, their big ass cheeks smothering their faces if not pulled apart.  Seeing those lips sealed tight around a spasming O-ring as tongues are wiggling in and licking tasty asshole and shit juice.  Geez, you so capture how you grind your cunt into a face when your body is up against the shower stall.  By showing the surging and grinding you so capture the essence of this kind of hot fucking.  Words like leverage, sagged, gyrating, etc. tells the reader what is happening.  How Laura is swooning but still struggling to grind her love aching cunt into Nyomi's starving mouth.  Plus, I love reading that Laura knows her orgasm is approaching.  Sometimes my orgasms simply explode out of no where but usually one can feel those oh so divine tremors deep in your belly and thighs, those sudden contractions that tell you a truly horrendous orgasm is forming deep in my womb and that its birthing will simply ripe my soul apart with writhing, screaming bliss.  I love that first sense and the ramping up that fills my body and soul with that awesome tension that suddenly snaps into fucking bliss and nirvana.  I see this in Laura and thus love her character totally.

//  Sigh, you capture perfectly the back and forth of hot love.  How one lover's need and rising lust inspires the other and back and forth.  Nyomi is now slamming her fingers hard and deep into Laura's spasming cunt because seeing, feeling, hearing and tasting Laura striving higher is making Nyomi crazy with need to make her lover cum.  That is why women are superior lovers.  We connect with our lovers and feed off them.  Men can fuck you to heaven and back but it is usually a solo voyage that is helped mightily but one misses the connection to your woman as your body is striving for perfect bliss on Earth.  Geez, my womb is trembling you writing how Laura forces her eyes open to watch Nyomi looking up at her as her mouth is trying to suck her clit off and her fingers are pounding into her mound making those sodden sounds of wet love that I adore.  Then you capture the verbal like no other.  I have often moaned about how I don't get the sounds of love making.  The raw animal sounds we make and as important the grunts and gasped encouragement and desperate love that two women give back and forth.  The woman receiving cawing out her pleasure and need and the woman giving basking and encouraging.   You simply capture that perfect here.  We see Laura's passion and Nyomi rising to it and encouraging it in a perfect feedback loop that is taking both higher and higher.  [ "Oh god!    Oh shit!  Yes!" she gasped.        "Oh honey . . . oh honey!" Nyomi responded, briefly glancing up at her and smiling, her beautiful face contorted as if in sympathy or parallel need with Laura's arriving climax.]  This is how women connect and make each other cum so violently and perfectly.  Other authors may have a little dialog (almost never) but they never show the connection that you do.  You actually show back and forth between your women.  This is how we communicate.  The other stories are so silent it is disheartening.  Plus, I love how you show the woman doing the loving is filled with the same need as her woman.  You don't cum with your slut but you just feel her elation and joy and it inspires you with so much pleasure that your own face flushes and slashes with shared pleasure.  I so love reading you capturing this.  I love how you show the flow of lovemaking.  We hear Laura grunting out more sounds of rapturous love and Nyomi now demanding that Laura cum for her.  Men want you to cum to flex their ego and of course it helps our egos but our primary focus is taking our angels to heaven and back.  I so love hearing Nyomi saying "do it for me".  She needs Laura's orgasm as bad as Laura does.  Then of course you show the payoff ["AWWOONGGG!" she roared, her roars then bleeding almost instantaneously into sharp squeals as her body shook and sagged back against the glass.  "Mnnggeeee!   Oh!  Mmnnggghhheeee!"         Laura's shrieks reverberated off the walls of the bathroom and shower stall.  Nyomi literally held her up, as she continued to come, shuddering in fierce, jolting spasms.  She pushed against Laura's groin with her face, and her shoulders pinned Laura's flexing thighs to the glass wall.  Laura gasped and gurgled and screamed again, holding herself up precariously with her hands gripping Nyomi's head, as the last sharp spasm gripped her body.         "Anngghhhmmnneeeee!   Oh!  Oh!  Oh yes!  Ohhhh!" ]  Sigh, like I say only you capture the true wonders of cumming.  Other authors lose so much by not giving us the sounds and the adjectives and adverbs.  They just tell us the orgasm is occurring while I am there living Laura's orgasm as it is shredding her womb to shreds as it floods crushing ecstasy to her shattering soul.  The last time in the shower was last week.  I get home first and puttered around for a while and then needed a shower to relax from work stress.  I was washing my hair when the door opened and I felt someone getting in.  I rinsed the water out of my eyes and saw that Joann was beaming up at me.  She hugged me her head nestled against my belly her firm titties against my lower belly and groin.  I felt my pussy clenching and my nipples hardening.  She glanced up a me smirking and called me a whore.  I smiled and said I couldn't help myself around such a sexy Latina fox.  I could tell she was tired and I washed her back and hair and then her whole body as she luxuriated in my ministrations.  I thought I was not going to get lucky.  Suddenly, Joann dropped to her knees before me and pushed my thighs wider and buried her face in my cunt and started lapping me hard with her expert skill her fingers soon slipping into my clenching cunt sleeve and pumping and raking my vaginal walls.  I was positioned so the spray was slashing my throat and lower down my body.  I hefted my breast and sucked my nipples and twisted my nipples making my cunt jam into Joann's devouring mouth.  Gods, I basked in ten minutes of pure heaven.  I felt my orgasm slowly forming.  Sometimes leaning forward as my stomach spasmed wildly making me bend into the shower spray soaking my hair again and running down my face as I looked straight down at Joann gobbling my cunt and trying to suck my clit off.  I love feeling the water quickly soaking my already soaked scalp and then running down my face to drip off everywhere.  Her free hand stroking my belly, ass cheeks and thighs.   I would straighten up and groan out my rising need and love feeling unforeseen spasms rocking my body making my thighs shiver wildly.  I felt my orgasm approaching oh so slowly, getting closer and I fought the last seconds of my approaching orgasm making it grow fierce in my now spasming wildly cunt.  Gods, the dam broke and my twat convulsed so strong I thought my pussy was tearing itself inside out.  Joann immediately pulled her fingers out my clenching cunt and jammed her face as hard and deep as possible feeling her tongue flailing deep in my exploding cunt her open mouth sucking down my raw, hot wanton cunt nectars pulsing out with each wrenching spasm of my cunt her hands digging now into my ass cheeks jamming me forward into her gods inspiring mouth.  Her nose mashing and jarring my clit as her mouth glued itself to my fuck hole her tongue spearing deep up my pussy lapping down my hot nectars.  I had bent over and the shower spray pounded my back and head falling off my face in heavy droplets as I wailed and my face slashed horribly as my body shuddered and jammed forward and back as Joann sucked my cunt inside out prolonging my ecstasy.  Squinting down and seeing her burning, squinting midnight eyes staring back up at me telling me my cunt belonged to her first and foremost like it is supposed to be.

//  You so capture the wonders of rapturous sex and then you show how angels make the sex extra special [And then it was suddenly over, replaced by the hot sting of the shower water against her skin, though she could still feel the slow pulsing and throbbing in her pussy and her womb as Nyomi slid her fingers out and gave her aching clit one last, loving kiss.  Still holding Laura's sagging, wet body, she rose up from the floor and embraced her, kissing Laura with warm, friendly sensuality, pinning her back against the wet glass.]  I so swoon after going down on a woman taking her in my arms and pulling her tight as I slither my tongue deep into her mouth after it has been plunging in her pussy or asshole.  Letting her taste her essence on my tongue and in my mouth.   You are so romantic showing that last loving kiss to a spent clit.  Rising up from such a position slithering up her spent body and letting her feel my body rubbing up, letting our tits mash and worm over each other as I take you in arms and mate our wet bellies and force my tongue down your throat as I pull supper tight and twine our legs as we kiss in deepening love.  More romance with Nyomi pinning Laura's body with her own and letting them feel their hot bodies pressing and mashing.  Only you ever show this sweet post coital time.  I find other authors kind of jarring with the way the end their sex scenes.  Wow, real sweet time here with Nyomi expressing the truth that going down on your woman makes a woman as happy as having it done to her.  Just that giving that I talk about.  That is what men can never understand.  By giving totally you get so much more back.  Then them washing each other's temporarily spent bodies.  I so love these bonding moments with my women.  This sharing and gentle love that makes the sex so much more devastating.   I love sharing like this with new women and especially newbies.  I just hook them totally on lesbian sex with this total sharing.  Taking a woman who is not sure and making her into a total lesbian sex slut.  Then you actually love your women to communicate in the small little asides that lovers share ["We are bad for each other, girl," Nyomi finally whispered when they finally took time out to kiss.  "We like to fuck each other too much."        "How can here ever be too much?  I'm just worried that the hot water will run out."        "It will," Nyomi acknowledged ruefully.  "Any second now.   We have to move back to the bed."]  Other authors never have dialog that is just the women sharing.  What dialog they have is just to move the plot forward to the point that sex occurs.  They never then allow them to just talk and fall deeper in love with each other.  Their women never get to talk and learn more about each other.  Some stories tell us they are falling in love but the reader never gets to see any of the conversations and sharing that led to the falling deeper in love.  You show this and it makes your stories so special.  Sigh, you also show the negative side we women bring to things.  The jealous jabs at Bonnie and Makeeda by Nyomi.   The beauty of this story is the fact that it can even happen.  No other story line has the arc to support this.  Only your love of Laura and the discipline to continue to write this story for so long allows the reader to see these petty emotions by the women in this story.  I like how you show that Nyomi has her emotional warts too.  She is good natured about her jealousy.  She knows that Laura is fucking Bonnie every chance she can and that Makeeda is Laura's archangel.  I would be a little peeved by such pettiness but again humor can deflect so much.  I sure wish Nyomi was saying that to me.  Soon Bonnie would be eating her hot box to ruin as I ate Bonnie from behind.  Joann, Maria and I would be plunging our hard dicks down her three fucks holes and "making" her suck her ass off our cocks as we constantly changed positions plundering her three fuck.  Hooking her on dp, tp, atm and a2p and maybe some deep anal fisting.  Such barbs make me start planning such things.  I have rocked women's worlds after such jabs.  I so love how you have set this up.  I think this story has been going on for close to twenty years now and the reader is so rewarded by all this interaction.  Wonderful, just wonderful.

//  I now like now Nyomi talks about how aggressive she is and how she can just tell that Bonnie is not the sexual dynamo that she is.  Bonnie is hot once you get her going but Nyomi's engine is already purring and ready for action.  I like how again you make your women actual living and breathing persons.  Other stories never try and develop the individual characters of their women.  They really can't because of the nature of their stories.  One shot stories just don't give one the time to develop anything more than the basics.  With each chapter about a certain angel you fill in more and more of her character that makes the reader just fall for them so hard.  I am happy that Nyomi is not like how Randi was in times past.  A little jealousy makes me hot but a crazed creature is a real thrill kill let me tell you.  I can just see that Nyomi is working herself up with her hot talk about Bonnie.  I know she is thinking she is going to show Laura that she is the better fuck.  I love sluts who fuck with total wild abandon.  I love taking shier flowers and bring out their inner slut and then their kink slut.  I so love seeing them taking all I have to give and then fucking me so hard and deep in return.  Nyomi I wouldn't have to work to much to totally let go.  Yes, I know I have a big ego sometimes.  I like how Laura is deflecting here.  She is telling Nyomi "don't you wish you knew".  I do this all the time when I need to, but I am constantly planning on taking things further.  If you talk of another angel like this I work to make it happen if I can.  If you are talking about someone I feel that deep down you want her.  I love helping angels discover each other if I can.  I like reading your women leading things where they want it to go ["Like this one," Laura murmured, still caressing Nyomi's thigh, not even daring to imagine how it would feel crunching into her pussy, which was now pulsing at the mere wisp of a thought.          Nyomi looked down at her hard, dark brown, very shapely thigh, at Laura's paler fingers caressing it.  "You mean my thigh?"]  I like you showing this.  Other stories would just have it happen.  You show Laura letting Nyomi know her desire and letting Nyomi discover this need and feeling her desire to satisfy her woman lead her down this new path.  Shaping and leading the path to new delights.  One thing I have always loved about your stories is the sense of crossing barriers and taking women to new heights.  I had fucked Janice a few times usually alone but twice with A'drea and Samara.  She was about to go out on a long cruise.  I just knew I had to take her anal fisting cherry.  She was in my bed and we had been fucking long and hard.  We were covered and cum and dripping sweat.  I had her on her hands and knees and was tongue fucking her asshole and then finger fucking it with three fingers.  I had tried to get her to fist my asshole but she simply refused saying it was "not natural".  I argued how that could be but didn't want to fight but I knew I was running out of time.  I had worked all four finger into her asshole and was slowly inserting my thumb when she pulled away violently and barked at me to "Stop it! you fucking Bitch!"  Wow, that hurt and I immediately started crying great big as I sat down on the bed.  She softened and took me in her arms while I tried to pull away.  She had really hurt me with the tone of her voice.  She stroked me and softly kissed me.  She cooed and I slowly stopped crying feeling our titties mashing and poking.  She slowly broke our clench and I watched her slowly get on her knees and lower her torso until her face was on the mattress.  I watched her curiously as she then reached back with her hands and clenched them in her ass cheeks and pulled on them hard exposing her loosened rosebud which she clenched for me making it pulse.  I moaned "Oh baby!" and soon had my four fingers and thumb in her asshole and felt my knuckles rotating over her sphincter.  I drooled tons of spit into her shit hole and all over my fingers.  Janice's face was scrunching up and I loved her soft deep breathing as she relaxed.  I pressed in and moaned feeling my hand slip into her shit hole.  She gasped and gurgled as I felt her rectum enveloping my hand.  I moaned I could feel her pulse on my wrist.  I slowly twisted my wrist feeling her sphincter clutching my wrist.  I pulled back until my hand slipped free and moved forward.  I lifted Janice by her hair with my left hand and looked her deep in the eyes and smeared my palm all over her face moaning as her tongue licked over my palm and I then smeared the back of my hand all over my face.  I got behind her as she got her ass in the air again and slipped my hand into her asshole and rotated it and pumped it softly before slipping out and smearing it all over her face and hair marking her as my complete anal whore yet again.  I did this several more times the last time telling her to grip my wrist and she slowly smeared it all over my face and hair as I moaned and licked her fingers curling my tongue between her fingers.  I got behind her yet again as I slapped her ass cheeks hard making her squeal as she pulled her ass cheeks wide to again expose her raw, loose asshole.  Now I slipped my fist in and cooed to her look in the mirror over the dresser.  She rose up and moaned seeing my white forearm jutting out her ass.  I rotated right and left and then formed my fist and began to stroke it into her anus.  I moaned feeling her sphincter pulsing on my wrist and now lower forearm as I stroked her colon.  We watched my forearm sinking up her colon.  My forearm slipping forward and then back as my fist pounded her inner sphincter as she cawed and shuddered.  I began to stroke her harder and deeper as she keened and shook at times violently.  She groaned out she could feel my fist in her belly.  I worked my arm slowly and then would lunge down her shit tunnel my fist twisting as Janice cried out and shoved her ass back into my twisting pumping fist.  I loved how she would sag down onto her cheek only to surge back up and look over watching my forearm work her shit hole.  She lunged back on a hard stroke and she gasped seeing my upper arm jammed into her ass crack.  I slowly pulled it back until my wrist was rotating against her sphincter and then I lunged it back up her colon as she shook violently and cawed out her tits swirling underneath.  She gasped when I told her to look in the mirror after I had fully sunk my forearm up her asshole and she saw the crook of my arm in her ass crease as I twisted my fist underneath her ribs.  Rotating my fist as I pulled back down her colon and the lunging up to the elbow my fist again underneath her lungs as she juddered violently randomly making her heavy tits shake for me.  I reached forward and pulled a thick nipple hard making her cry out and shudder harder.  She pumped back into my plunging fist as I again and again jammed my upper arm into her ass crease as I twisted my fist deep in her belly.  She gurgled out how great it felt and I whispered to her to jerk her cunt.  She settled back down and reached up with her hands and started to pump her pussy with two fingers and forking, rubbing her clit.  I could feel her whole body tensing up and getting those sudden spasms that told me she was ramping up.  I started backing at her suddenly to "cum on my fist you fucking nigger! … cum you fucking black cunt! I said cum Bitch! cum you fucking nigger! … cum you goddamn nigger!" the last very loud!  She loves being called a nigger by her lovers.  Her body suddenly stiffened and then a long torturous groan was ripped from her constricted throat.  Her body shuddered that started from her groin and then spread to her whole body.  I pulled my fist to her sphincter and then lunged down her shit hole to bury my fist underneath lungs.  Her body shook violently now as pure spasms erupted out her fuck holes her hands working her cunt hard to prolong her pleasure.  I smiled seeing her lower legs jerk and rub across the sheets.  I pulled my fist back down her colon and then lunged it hard up her exploding shitter until my fist was again almost underneath her sternum.  She cawed and gurgled as the last stunning spasms throttled her.  I could see she had drooled all over the sheet with a big wet spot by her mouth her eyes all dreamy and lost in pleasure.  I could feel her orgasm waning as I slowly helped her to lie out on the bed.  I felt my belly melt with love hearing her moan softly as strong aftershocks shook her spent body.  I had my fist fully up her ass and I started to pull it out but Janice whispered to keep it in her belly.  I did for a few minutes as I felt her asshole clenching my upper forearm when another strong aftershock gripped her spent womb.  Finally, she let me slip it out and I rubbed it all over her sweaty face and then we licked it clean.  Sigh, soon it was me looking into the mirror and watching Janice fisting my asshole.  I gurgled feeling her slip it out and kneeing up and gripping my hair and jerking my head up and rubbing her palm and back of her hand all over my face, neck and hair.  Working my asshole all loose and slipping out several more times and the last time smearing her hand all over her face and fisting my hair and barking at me to stick out my tongue and then rubbing my face over her face and "making" me lick my shit juice off her face.  I groaned so deep and hard seeing her entire black forearm up my asshole and hearing her gasp she could feel my pulse on her arm as it pumped me.  Nearly dying from pleasure feeling her fist plunging up and down my colon.   I loved watching her face grit as she slammed her black fist up my shit hole.  I gagged feeling her pound the inside of my sphincter and then collapsing her hand and slipping out my clenching o-ring and watching her move up and then her palm mashed into my face and her fingers getting my hair all greased with shit cream and letting my tongue worm all over and around her fingers.  Hissing as she slipped her hand back into my shit hole, feeling her fist form and then lunging down my shit tunnel.  She started to fork, rub and squeeze my clit.  I could feel a horrible orgasm forming deep in my belly and reached up and started to twist and pull hard on my nipples.  I felt my orgasm coming and then it suddenly hammered me with sledge hammer blows of scalding pleasure flooding my veins.  I screamed and screamed out my pleasure as my body bucked and jackknifed as pure scalding waves of pleasure filled my veins with pumping ecstasy.  I slowly stretched out on the bed as Janice pumped my asshole several more half strokes snaking her fist half way down my colon and then slamming up underneath my lungs.  I felt her other hand's fingers still rubbing over my twitching clit.  I was totally spent.  I too begged her to keep it up my asshole.  I love feeling my asshole all stretched out and her fist in my belly.  Finally pulling it out and then smearing all over our faces and the kissing and licking each other's faces as we lied on our sides and cooed and stroked for now satiated bodies.  Soon we were all sleepy and I rolled her half on me and we went to sleep basking in our love feeling our sweaty bodies glued together as she softly kissed my face all over moaning she could taste our shit all over my face.  I loved how she went to sleep with one hand clutching a tit and her cheek on the other.  Can love get any more pure than this.

//  I really can't believe how good your dialog is in your stories.  This is two women leading each other one and making each other simply hot for it ["She used to sit in a chair and let me straddle one of her incredible thighs.  Then she would grab my hips and rub me back and forth on the muscle, all the time flexing it and cramming her thigh up into my pussy until I . . ."        Laura had to stop.  She could feel the hot blood pounding in her neck.  Her breath was short.        Nyomi was looking deep into her eyes and could see the embers and sparks of momentary sexual dementia there.  "You don't have to go on," she said in a hushed voice.  "I can see what it did for you.  God, I'm envious."        Laura smiled with an elfish twist.  "Do it for me and I'll do it for you."]  I get so tired not reading this in other stories.  The women just move from position to position hopefully.  So often the sex is kind of one act.  I mean often sex happens without much conversing but usually there is at least some directing and requesting.  Here when you are leading a new lover or showing a regular something new you have to let them know what you want and then maybe have to describe if something new to her.  You show this.  I love how we can see that merely telling Nyomi of her time with Brandi, Laura is setting her woman's blood on fire with a now raging fire of thigh trib fucking.  I so love to trib like a bitch in heat.  Grinding my cunt to ruin on your thigh, hip, belly, ass or sometimes whatever.   I am just happy to see this in print again.  Hollywood has many faults in its movies but it does capture better than porn these little moments.  I just wish this could be made into a series on some cable channel where we get the womb shattering sex but also get the extra things you bring to the story.  I am smiling seeing Laura's breathing getting short.  This happens to me all the time.  Everyone calls me a whore because describing what I want or telling some angel or buck a hot fuck gets my breath short, nipples rock hard, sweat rising and cunt wet and swollen.  I am often ready before we even get out of the starting blocks.  I am a total slut and love it.  I am smiling softly reading Laura saying you do me, I do you.  I love saying such things and then delivering.  Have to love the fucking in the chair.  I like fucking in chairs and sofa because of all the angles you can work for leverage and good hard ramming.  I like how you use the whole house to fuck.  The bed is great but there is so much real estate to fuck in the house.  I feel one should use it.  I love the little asides you put in your stories [The vision of Nyomi's statuesque naked body preceding her down the half-darkened hallway didn't help.  Nyomi had a long, flawless back and a substantial, curvaceous rear end, which Laura suddenly felt a hot craving to sink her fingers into.  I want to fuck her.  I want to fuck her first, Brandi-style.  After all, she just did me in the shower.  It's her turn.]  I so love looking at my women all the time.  Feeling my love simply flaring for them yet again and feeling my body love shaking and getting all wet again for them.   You show that you love your women by the loving words you use to describe them.  I can just see Nyomi's back walking before me.  The way her ass cheeks work up and down as she walks.  I know I would be tempted to push her into the hall wall and sinking to my knees and pulling her ass cheeks open and licking her ass crack for long minutes before working my long tongue into he rectum and sucking her cunt and licking up her slit over her perineum and rosebud.  I would so love to make her cum with me rubbing her muff, her asshole spasming on my tongue buried up it.  To feel her ass cheeks bucking back into my face and them quivering uncontrollably all over my cheeks and forehead.  You so clearly show the lust in Laura.  I love getting to read her thoughts.  You are showing what I talk about.  Your angel has just made you cum and now you feel with all your being that you need to make her cum.  It is just what we feel and want.  Men always aim to pleasure their dicks while we aim for orgasms of course but we really aim to take our women to heaven over and over. 

//  It is just so cute seeing Laura looking for the perfect thigh fuck location.  I simply adore thigh tribbing.  Feeling my cunt ground and mashed into convulsing heaven [Laura shook her head.  "This is much better.  Solid.   Straight.   Anchored to the floor.   Not too pillowy and soft.  You can really get your leverage in a chair like this."        Nyomi made a long, droll face.  "The voice of experience speaks."        Laura sat down in it before Nyomi could.  She held her arms up and outstretched.  "Lucky you.   You get to go first."]  When you are leading an angel it so sweet seeing her following your lead docilely.   We see again the humor that you are famous for.  I just adore hearing wit in my women.  It just makes me smile and my nipples throb and pussy pulse.  I so wish I could see dialog like this in other's stories.  We also see Laura leading things how she wants.  I like seeing a woman leading things and taking firsts if she so wants.  I am just smiling with Laura hurrying into the chair so she can feel Nyomi's fat cunt immolating itself on her thigh.  I can just feel my womb flipping when I know hard fucking is coming that will once more scald my mind with pure fucking screaming bliss.  How can Nyomi resist such a sweet love offering.   I am smiling even bigger seeing Nyomi temporarily nonplussed by this new experience but already she is warming up to the new experience.  I so love seeing that in newbies.  Leading and teaching her of new things.  I so love watching a woman going from being shocked at the idea of sucking her ass off my dick to soon seeing her sucking so hard on my dick getting all her ass juice and begging for more.  I see Laura thinking what I think.  She is in teaching mode.  She will love feeling Nyomi's cunt immolating itself on her thigh.  With Nyomi going first she will learn from a master.  She will register on even a subliminal level the techniques and the power to really fuck your woman good.  WoW!  You simply are the best, hands down, at capturing that first moment of something [Slowly, almost reluctantly, though not really, Nyomi approached Laura with a tiny smirk of sexual excitement pursing her full lips.  She straddled Laura's thighs with her own, slightly squatting, so that the wavy, protruding lips of her beautiful black pussy were only inches away from Laura's thigh muscle.        "Like this?" she said in a whisper.        "Like that," Laura nodded, also whispering, as if to speak would be to violate this solemn moment.         She ran her hands over the smooth, faintly rippled muscles of Nyomi's gorgeous midriff, letting them rise to her full breasts, cupping them and squeezing them gently.  Slowly, Nyomi lowered her groin onto Laura's thigh.  She sucked her lower lip between her teeth as her pussy lips met the skin of Laura's thigh.  Her head lolled back, and her eyes closed.]  I swear, any other author would just have them walk in the room and Laura get in the chair and Nyomi mount and starting tribbing away.  Not you!!  You have setup a dreamy sequence of the initial idea, exploration and walk to the chair of trib and now you keep it going.  We see Nyomi moving slowly with her senses being overwhelmed with the new experience.  Geez, seeing her purse her full lips.  I would feel my blood raging at this sight.  Then you describe her divine pussy as it settles down to Laura's love thigh.  Like I say, you show pacing so perfectly in your stories.  Then swooning seeing Laura tracing Nyomi's body with her fingers.  Gods, I can feel her full tits in my hands as I first cup them and then pulp as she moans like a complete whore.  Then seeing Nyomi head lulling as her pussy makes its first kiss on Laura's thigh.  You capture these moments so fucking well.  Through your prose my thigh is feeling wet feeling Nyomi's pussy coming into contact with it.  The last sentence highlighted shows so much.  Other authors are so mechanical in their stories and description.  Just having something happen without making it special is a darn crime.  The slowness of this sequence is what makes it so freaking hot.  At the normal pace that most authors use one loses just how magical this moment is for Nyomi.  It is the firsts that really draw lovers together.  By slowly leading things forward is setting Nyomi up for a truly soul shattering orgasm.  I so love producing such orgasm in my newbies and my main angels when I learn a new twist or they in turn show me one.

//  Like I say you actually show the hot sex progressing.  I get so freaking tired of the women just getting in position and simply fucking without any setup and showing of how the women are arranging and moving the fuck forward [Laura made the necessary adjustments with the fingers of one hand.  She wanted Nyomi's pussy lips to be completely open so that she could feel the hot, wet meat of her beautiful cunt directly pressing against her skin.  This took only a second, and Nyomi, realizing what Laura was doing, helped by lifting herself a little for an instant.  Then, they were mated, and Laura could feel the slippery warm wetness of Nyomi's spread vagina pressing into the flesh of her thigh.]  It is the little details.  Like seeing Nyomi lifting her twat up so she can let Laura get all the angles right and then lowering her twat back down and both of them gagging feeling Nyomi's wet cunt immediately sliming Laura's thigh with her excitement.  I so feel the love rising along with my woman as we work to make the fuck perfect.  I so feel and see the slut in my women when we start to trib.  As the wonderful sensations of cunts grinding in love sends pure fucking pleasure to each other's brains as clits are mashed and ground and your juices are slicking flesh for sensuous or feral grinding according to the dynamic or need.  There are just so many variations and angles that come into play when one tribs.  You then show the sounds of women rutting.  I have always adored your sounds.  I think that was the first thing that really grabbed me about your stories.  I can still remember being blown away when I first heard the sounds you used in Karen and Laura's initial trysts.  You show here the soft grunting and snuffling women make when make love at the initial easy going first stages of a great fuck.  Another thing I have loved about your stories is you show both women expressing themselves vocally.  I get so freaking tired of other stories only having the woman receiving making any noise.  The women giving almost always make snuffling and divine sounds of munching cunt meat or working tight assholes with tongues and fingers.  We naturally grunt, snuffle and exhale hard making our women feel the magic of our love.  You show this!  No one else does.  I was hooked from the start by this capturing of the sounds of lesbian love.  Then you show the vocalizations reaching that next level when the love fuck is morphing to the hard driving fucking that leads to womb shredding orgasms.  ["Oh shit.  Unhhhhh!  Mmmnnuuummnn!" Nyomi grunted softly.          The upright, straight-backed chair gave Laura lots of leverage, which was why she had picked it, and now she could dig her heels into the hard floor, pushing her ass down into the seat, and really jam her thigh up into Nyomi's groin.  She did this repeatedly, bringing soft, semi-hysterical whimpers from Nyomi.        "Unnnunnmmeee!   Unnnunnmmeee!  Oh shit . . . Laura," she panted, twisting her head from side to side, shimmying her full breasts into Laura's hands, gnawing her lower lip.  "Oh shit . . . it's so good!  You can do it harder."]  Geez, the details.   I can guarantee other authors would just say that they were tribbing in the chair where you show Laura digging her heels in for leverage and using her ass as the fulcrum.  Gods, my twat is juicing reading Laura jamming her thigh hard into Nyomi's divine black cunt.  I can just feel her cunt mashing and rubbing my thigh as it juices heavily drenching my thigh and running down the sides and dripping off to the floor.  Now you show Nyomi starting to lose it and we can hear it in her voice.  I love making women curse when I fuck them into a wild shattering orgasm.  Encouraging the shy flowers to cut loose and shuck man's brainwashing.  Nice detail with Laura working Nyomi's full tits in her fingers.  I love to pulp tits like this and then work down to her hips and jam her down hard making her swoon and become my total love whore.  Watching her face slash and hearing her squeal in helpless pleasure as she starts to thrash around for me.  I love how you show this intimate connection that women share when they trib.  Men can't really get into this.  Steven, Dale and Ronnie really, really love to eat pussy.  They always suck me off to orgasm often more than once in a night the little angels.  It sorts of endears them to me and I do things with them I just don't with other men.  I have several times mounted Steven's strong thigh and tribbed to orgasm.  He was totally perplexed when I did it the first time.  He smiled when he saw what I was doing and helped my grind by flexing his thigh and rotating up into my weeping cunt and gripping my hips to really help grind down as I cawed and cried out in helpless pleasure.  But still, he enjoys helping me reach orgasm but the connection we women share while tribbing just doesn't happen.  I had to mount Ronnie 's hard stomach.  He runs track at Hillary and Camille's school and his stomach is a masterpiece.  He was slack jawed when I kneed over his stomach and lowered my swollen cunt onto his stomach and started to grind and swirl my wet cunt on his stomach gagging in deep soul stirring pleasure.  Again he got into flexing and pumping his stomach up and gripping my hips to help me grind.  I was gaga looking down seeing his obsidian stomach glazed with my cunt juice and it flexing up into my swollen white pussy.  Wolfing down my nipples and pulping my tits when I leaned down on my palms to grind forward and back.  Back and forth I went bending down up and down grinding in happy abandon my tits flopping and swirling wildly on my chest as I approached nirvana.  Falling forward to grip the sheets by Ronnie's beautiful black face and jerking up hard to get maximum pressure as I mashed my cunt as hard as possible up and down his surging stomach.  He saw my orgasm when my eyes flared wide open and stuffed his mouth full of my nipple and sucked so hard while pulping my tits in his strong hands.  Gods, I screamed all caps as my cunt ruptured and poured out cunt juice in hot spasms soaking his stomach, back and making a large wet spot underneath him as my head jerked and spasmed violently as I tore at the sheets in spasming fingers.  I felt my clit throbbing so hard as I drug it across the hard plains of his stomach.  My body would judder wildly and then mash down hard on his stomach mashing my cunt hard into his hard stomach as I flexed my pelvis to hammer and rotate grind my cunt into his stomach.  I had a second orgasm on top of my first.  It was so fucking awesome.  It would have been more so if Ronnie could have connected on the soul level but the shattering physical was more than enough. 

//  Like I said it was awesome but I missed the soul connection.  Late last week I had to visit a vendor across the river in the morning and called Hillary and Camille to see if I could come over the night before.  I felt myself getting warm all over when Camille answered and told me they couldn't wait for me to visit.  I arrived around six thirty and was greeted by Camille in a nightie at the door and her mouth was on mine as soon as the door was shut.  Gods, her tongue twined with mine as her big tits mashed into my tits and belly.  Soon I was naked in their bedroom as the sister's swarmed me.  We fucked heatedly for a long time as our hunger for each other flared and erupted.  I so loved eating their fat cunts, heaving bosom and feeling my tongue deep in their assholes.  We finally exhausted ourselves.  I slept with them on each side of me.  I guess about an hour later I awoke with Hillary on my right her head drooling on my shoulder and Camille on the other side on her side her ass cheeks against my hip.  I started to massage it gently and tracing it with my fingertips basking and reliving her cunt exploding several times in my mouth and gulping down her spewing cunt juices and the excess soaking my face.  Soon I felt her wiggling and shimming against me and she got up on her elbow and smiled at me over her shoulder.  She moved up and mated her mouth tight to mine and slithered her tongue down my throat as my eyes rolled back.  I felt Hillary awakening.  I gripped Camille's head with both hands as we tilted our heads and tongues twined and jabbed between mouths in deep love.  I inhaled deeply feeling my right nipple siphoned by her sister's thick lips clamped tight on my areola her head pumping and mouth sucking.  Camille got up and scooted back and mounted my left thigh and began to pump hard on it as she immediately gagged and drug her swollen cunt hard up and down my thigh.  I put all the pillows behind me and I was angled up watching the show as her tits swirled.  She sometimes gripped my hips or ribs and other times played with her tits pulping them then one hand moving down to masturbate her clit.  Sometimes my view would get occluded when Hillary moved in to kiss me with her long tongue slither down my throat making me gag.  Moving down to suck my tits and cupping the outside of my heavy tits and burying her face between them and wallowing her face in my cleavage kissing and sucking my tit meat making my hips lurch up off the bed in spasm humps.  Watching Camille leaning forward her palms beside me on the bed and moaning dementedly as she ground her cunt hard up and down my now soaked in cunt slime thigh.  We fucked for five minutes like this at least.  I loved watching Camille swirl upright on my thigh and then fall forward straddling my torso as she ground forward and back her tits whiplashing as her palms pumped into the mattress.   Camille was now again sitting up and riding roughly up and down my leg.  Hillary had gotten behind her and was pulping her tits with hard squeezes and kissing her neck.  I loved seeing her cunt rise up on the back stroke and the jamming down and totally mashing her cunt into my thigh as it upswept and then ground back down my thigh.  Over and over she kept grinding as her body started to jolt and shake as Hillary now pulped her tits her fingers cruelly twisting and kneading her sister's tits and as Camille started to judder helplessly and caw as her head lulled back on Hillary's shoulder.  Hillary then twisted and pulled hard on Camille's nipples and with hard jerks whispering to Camille "Cum you fucking nigger! Cum on Barb's thigh you goddamn nigger!"  Camille's whole body suddenly exploded up and back into Hillary's body as her cunt spasmed out hot cunt juice all over my thigh with hot gushes of cunt nectars.  Her head wallowed in Hillary's neck as she wailed her ecstasy and her body shook violently as Hillary used one hand to tilt her head over and she sucked her neck into mouth and sucked in the flesh and pumped it hard.  Camille's body had spasmed up on her flexing knees and Hillary's other hand whipped down and two fingers plunged up Camille's cunt and pumped hard as she raked her sister's g-spot and a second orgasm exploded out.  Her body slammed down into mine her cunt and sister's knuckles wallowing and jerking down into my hip bone and belly as her cunt convulsed more waves of searing cunt nectars over my hip and groin.  I felt a mini orgasm make me shake violently watching her body shake and judder wildly her head all jammed over.  Her sister's mouth sucking her throat into her clenched teeth as Hillary pumped her fingers.  Her hand mashed into my body as she continued to work her sister's g-spot.  The total slashing that consumed Camille's face and gurgled caws of shattering ecstasy.  I was well rewarded for all my loving ministrations.  Hillary straddled my face and I felt her thick thighs squeezing my ears and head as she rode and ground her beautiful thick cunt into my starving mouth.  I groaned so hard feeling my tongue flailing in her steamy cunt folds and sucking hard on her bugling clit.  Reaching up to pull and twist her nipples and pulp her gourd tits.  Gurgling, my head lurched up feeling Camille stroking my inner thighs pushing them out and then feeling my head surge harder when her mouth glued to my cunt and she started to eat me out slowly and sensually like I was her sister.  So much sweet love flowing in all directions.

//  I so love making my sluts beg for it harder like you show Nyomi begging for it.  I so feel that women need to always go for the brass ring that only total commitment to hard fucking gives one.  I so love watching a woman die from pleasure before my eyes as her pussy, asshole or both are exploding from pure fucking pleasure.  Sigh, the humor and the intense married together.  It is humorous reading the chair almost becoming unstable from Laura really humping and flexing to pulp Nyomi's cunt with her surging thigh.  I love to make the furniture bark and sign when I fuck or am being fucked.  I think that we are fucking like we should and the sounds of it fills the room.  I so love how you show women communicating and urging ["Oops!  Too hard!" Laura laughed softly, clutching the sagging Nyomi so that she wouldn't fall.        "Do it again!  Oh god . . . you're going to make me come!"        "I hope so," Laura grinned, feeling a hot surge of sexual arousal herself as they began squirming and rocking together more violently.  "Are you close?"        "God, yes!" ]   If anyone wonders why I keep harping on this I ask one simple question.  Find this kind of intimate dialog between lovers as they are making love in another story.  The connecting and communicating between two women sharing their love for each other.   I have read a lot of stories on the Internet over the years and I think I am being fair when I say that I have not found any.  A few stories have been good about capturing good hard sex but this intimate dialog I can't just recall.  Notice the silence between the women once the sex begins.  Then go back and go to the sex in a Laura story and I think you will see the difference immediately.  I love how Nyomi tells Laura she is about to come.  What woman or man for that matter is not fired up when they hear their lover's almost helpless crying out they are about to cum.  It can't help but fire you up to fuck her harder to take her to the divine finish line.  I am smiling as Nyomi is surging herself down as Laura is pumping up.  I can just see her hooters rolling and flopping.  Then you show us her jamming forward for leverage and mashing her tits into Laura's face.  I so love being where Laura is right now.  She sucks in her nipples and starts to voraciously suck down.  I will suck your nipples and areolas off making you scream in pleasure.  Sometimes I pulp your tits but usually I do what Laura does and grip your hips in a bruising grip to grind your cunt down as hard as I can as you approach heaven on earth.  Love how you detail the way Nyomi is mashing her tits into Laura's face.  There is a big difference between tits pressed into your face and mashed flat into your face.  I love how you show the difference.  And of course you deliver the love kill ["Oh!  Oh!" Nyomi cried out, throwing her head back, jamming her flooding cunt down onto Laura's thigh muscle.  "Unnnunnmmeee!   Oh . . . oh shit!"  She pushed her whole upper body into Laura's face, mashing her breast into Laura's mouth and yelping as Laura sucked and bit her swollen nipple.  "Oh god!   Ohhhhh godddddd!  Unnnnnhhh!"        "Oh yes, baby, oh yes, honey . . ." Laura panted to her, knowing Nyomi was just milliseconds away from a fierce explosion.        "Anngghhnniieeee!" Nyomi cried out in a fierce shriek, her large, strong body suddenly twitching and jerking, then slumping forward onto Laura, her hands clinging to Laura's shoulders as the rumblings of an earthquake climax rolled through her twisting flesh.        Laura held her tightly, feeling the quakes in her own body, and smiling at the ragged breathing and squeaks escaping Nyomi's constricted throat.  She kissed Nyomi's neck and felt Nyomi's large, wet nipple, which she had just been sucking, pressing into her own breast.  She patted Nyomi's hair, still damp from their shower.]  Of course I need and crave my orgasms but this is why I really fuck.  To take my women to heaven over and over.   You start most of your fucks slow for we are not always at a white hot heat level at the start.  You show the slow beginning that then ramps up to soul blistering nirvana.  It is the working up that shatters the mind with pure fucking bliss.  Again both women expressing their love to each other.   When my women encourage me on in my orgasms I just feel my orgasm lengthening and second orgasms suddenly blooming out of no where making me scream in bliss as I feel my cunt and or asshole tearing themselves inside out it feels like as pure fucking ecstasy is pumping hotly into every cell of my spasming limbs and whitening out brain.  The sounds of love that you capture.   I think it doubles the pleasure that I feel in reading your stories.  You capture the sounds and just as importantly, you don't use the same one's over and over and over.  I swear that some authors don't vary at allllllll!!!!!  IT just takes away from otherwise pretty hot stories.  I am swooning over you capturing how Laura is basking in Nyomi's orgasm.  Feeling her leg drenched in cum and the feel of each spasm racking Nyomi's body telescoping into her body through their shared clench.   This is why I so love to clutch a woman's body to be as she orgasms just so I can feel and share her orgasm on that skin to skin level.  Feeling our sweaty bodies jerking and sliding wetly as orgasms shake our bodies in coiling love.   As the orgasm starts to wind down coupling mouths tight if the positions allow as our love flows from our twining and probing tongues.  I find this so prolongs the spasm rippling out my pussy and asshole.  You so capture love with Laura's soft kisses and gentle caresses as Nyomi's now spent body is resting against hers.  You so capture the totality of great fucks.  The gentle the beginning to the spent soft landing.   Only you take the reader through the complete gamut of a total hard fucking love fuck.  I so love to pull a spent lover on top of my body and feel our sweat slicked flesh pressing and slipping as our tongues communicate our deepening love.

//  I am smiling goofily reading Nyomi tiredly croaking to Laura that she thought she knew all about fucking.  I so love learning a new trick or variation.  I especially love teaching newbies and teenagers the wonders of sex.  I am not a cherry picker as a rule but I love young teenagers and showing them there is so much more than just oral and fingerfucking.  I so adore newbies and taking their lesbian cherry.   Taking a women's anal cherries that have never given to another.  Taking some high school or middle school girls rectum with my tongue, fingers, strap-on and fist makes me swoon with pleasure.  I was taught so much at that age my women my age now that I feel that I need to make sure that teenagers are shown what is possible and our birth right and man has so tried to deny us.  I was taught by "cougars" at their age and now I am the cougar.  I have taught my teenage protégés so well.  I have to smile at Laura getting a towel.  When I have slimed your body after tribbing I want to lick it off if I am not totally exhausted or the fucking doesn't lead us forward towards something else.  Now you show women basking in their renewed love and the tightening in bellies that tells one that more heated fucking is needed immediately.  [She sat on the sofa next to her.  The last few moments had made her very horny again, and she never could keep her hands off Nyomi's marvelous naked body anyway.  She began stroking and caressing it everywhere.        "Hold on, girl," Nyomi giggled softly.  "I just busted my nut, so to speak.  You're next in line, not me.  I want to prove that I'm as good as that muscle bound chickie you made it with."        Laura winked at her.  "In your dreams," she breathed, knowing how it would incite Nyomi.]  This is one thing I so love about the female body.  How quickly we can recover and be ready to fuck again right after gut wrenching, womb scalding orgasms.  I just love the banter.  They are joking but I know that Nyomi is going to fuck Laura with her all to try and prove she is just as good as Brandi.  In this we are like men and thankfully so.  I don't mind being equaled but I will fuck you with my all and with total focus to make sure that I am giving you the best orgasms of your life.  I want you addicted to me.  I too do what Laura is doing.  Inciting and goading my women one to fuck me harder and deeper.  I so want to be totally consumed by you.  I find this really works with men.  Grunting out that this guy or that guy fucked me better.   Then crying out as hard dicks are slammed down my throat or speared up fully my tight cunt and asshole.   I am groaning seeing Laura stroking Nyomi's thighs as she kisses her softly.  I am tactile so I swoon whenever you show this.  I so love to just trace and follow the contours of your body in the start of lovemaking.  Tracing what I will soon be taking and now clutching and pulling hard on.   This chapter is just so full of beautiful dialog [Nyomi looked down at Laura's fingers on one sleek black thigh. She grinned.  "You want to feel that against your pretty little wet pink pussy?"        Laura snarled at her playfully, kissing her cheek, her mouth, her neck.  "I want to be destroyed by you," she murmured.  "Think you can do it?"        Nyomi growled back just as playfully.  "Honey, you better not let the genie out of the bottle.  She may just change your world."]  Like I say, there is nothing else like this in erotica.  Not on the Internet and in the books I used to buy when I was young.  This give and take between women.   I am sitting here just shaking my head thinking of how only one author captures this.  Some try but they drown out everything by being to verbose.  You move the story forward, develop situations and characters, have blistering sex and you still capture the little moments with wonderful dialog.  I am just amazed at how you have done this for 323 chapters now.  I so love Laura totally opening her body and her soul to her lover.  I so believe in totally letting go to you to let you take me to heaven and back.  Thank you for capturing his dynamic.

//  One thing you have always avoided is the cookie cutter syndrome that other authors always seem to fall into.  You have them move over to the sofa to bask in post coital time and we have Nyomi taking Laura here on the sofa.  In other stories I am sure that the sex would have been part A was here and now part B will be in the same exact space.  You show the dynamic flow of thrilling sex.  It morphs and flow and one most go where it leads.  Fucking on the sofa is one of favorite spots with all the dynamics it allows.  ["Mmmmm . . . ohhnnnnn, you're good!" Laura moaned as Nyomi's mouth found her breasts, and Nyomi's hands pushed open her thighs, and one of Nyomi's own hard thighs began to move smoothly up and down in her crotch.        Laura grabbed Nyomi's head in both hands and mashed her mouth into Nyomi's, so hard that their teeth clanked together.  "I want you to fuck me harder than you've ever fucked anybody," she hissed softly.          "That won't be a problem," Nyomi grinned wickedly.  "I've never fucked anybody but you.  I've always been the fuckee, before this."        "Now you're on top," Laura murmured to her, clamping her thighs around Nyomi's and egging her on.  "Do it.  Do it hard."        "I don't want to hurt you."        "I'll come before you hurt me," Laura promised.        Again Nyomi grinned.  "I'll bet you will."]  I just love how you capture so fucking perfectly the flow of love.  I so hate other stories just having their character mount a woman without details.  Here we see Nyomi push Laura down and then spread her thighs out for her thigh.  Other stories it would just be get on the sofa and they got in the position to trib fuck.  Of course I love the soul kissing.  Gripping a face tight as our faces tilt and lips mash and teeth clank before tongues plunge deep into swooning throats as love is deepened.  I gag when our tongues swirl and twine in moments like this.  Then the communicating yet again.   Wow, this chapter has a lot of it.  Laura urging her woman on.   That is me.  I want it all.  I will tell my lover how I am going to take her completely.  I fuck them hard and watch them closely to make sure I am not taking them too hard.  Backing off and then ramping up again until they are totally addicted to hard fucking like me.  I love corrupting women to hard, filthy sex and having them come to me begging for it.  I just know Nyomi's blood is  boiling by now with the desire to really ram fuck Laura's swollen pink cunt with her black thigh.  I so die from it watching a black or brown thigh fucking my cunt like this.  I love white too of course but a woman of color's thigh just makes me swoon from the color of her thigh.  I like how you show that Laura has planted the seed and watered it so well.  Nyomi is totally fired up to fuck her hard.  You capture so well the flow and ramping of sex.  I wonder if you plot this or do you just let it flow as your write the story.  It is so natural flowing.  I like seeing Nyomi getting to experience new things.  I love receiving but giving is special too.  I know the feeling of power that Nyomi is experiencing for the first time in being the physical one is simply rocking her world with new vistas that are suddenly before her.  I find most women go nuts when they get to be the aggressor and do the fucking. 

//  Geez, your details and first contact are just so swooningly special.  I felt my pussy flutter reading that Laura's pussy already swollen and ready is open for Nyomi.  Her labia lips are all splayed out on her vulva and ready to be grounded and pulled to and fore by Nyomi's love thigh.  I just smile reading such wonderful details in your stories.  Not getting them in other stories simply makes me swoon when I read your chapters and get inundated with these sweet details.  I can feel Laura swooning feeling Nyomi's thigh riding up into her furrow.  I so know that gagging and head lulling feeling my pussy grinding up against your thigh as it settles into my soaked cunt to sensually ride me or like here getting ready for a supper hard almost grudge fuck.  I just feel like I am opening myself to you totally when I splay out my legs and feel your thigh just ram fucking my juicing cunt and my lips stretched, mashed while my clit is squirted and pulped into blissful nirvana.  Hearing Laura begging for it and swooning.   Those delightful vocalizations  that only you capture.  Laura's raw hunger as she is crying out for Nyomi to fuck her harder.  I so know that feeling.  Clutching you to me if I can and gagging as my head lulls and I caw out my rising love for you.  The history of the story allows a nice dynamic to occur here.  Because of the story arc of this story Laura can think back to past wonderful fucks like she is thinking back to Brandi.  I so love to think of other lovers and how wonderful my current lover is like my past lover.  Then Nyomi makes all thoughts of Brandi flee as she fucks Laura with her all.  In the now, Nyomi is the greatest trib fucker  around.  I so love how you show this in your stories.  And then how you keep the fuck scorching and moving forward [ "Awwonngg!" Laura shuddered as Nyomi's large, hard thigh crunched into the flaming furrow of her pussy.  "Oh god!   Ungghhh!"         She clenched her teeth and groaned as thrust after thrust lifted her body slightly off the sofa cushions, then let it settle back down to receive the next punishing, surging thrust.  On top of fucking Laura with her hard thigh, Nyomi was also devouring her with her mouth and trying to squeeze her to death with her hands.  She was literally all over Laura, sucking her neck, biting her ear, inhaling her nipples, encircling her waist, biting her shoulder, pumping, surging, embracing her roughly, and hammering her thigh up into Laura's groin, exactly as Laura had requested.]  You so capture the flow of great fucking.  Nyomi is ramping up quickly in her excitement and Laura is simply dying from it.  I love how you show your women so vividly dying from great fucking.  Other authors are so freaking bland that I can't ride along during the actual fuck most of the time.  I usually have to wait for the end to hope that the author finally delivers something to me.  With you I am getting all amped up along with Laura, my pussy so swollen and wet and my nipples rock hard and throbbing along with my clit as I so really get into your stories.  I have long lost count of the number of shattering orgasms I have shared with Laura and her women.  I had a golly whopper the first time I read this story.  So many times I have  been screaming and flipping on the bed praying I wouldn't spasm the wrong way and send the laptop flying off the bed.  I so adore feeling my pussy and asshole spasming and clenching on my probing / pumping fingers.  Riding out another wonderful Laura induced orgasm and tiredly but happily licking my fingers clean of the cunt and ass juice that had soaked my pumping fingers.  You show here that total loving that all women do (well,  a few had to be shown but once taught they never forget).  Men focus on their dick while we focus on our women.  I so love you showing Nyomi concentrating on ramming her thigh up and down Laura's swollen cunt, riding her furrow with intense focus and rising skill.  But you so clearly show the totality of lesbian sex.  Nyomi is kissing her voraciously and consuming the rest of her body that she can reach with her starving mouth.  The total embrace that only you capture and that slipping and sliding of sweat slicked skin as titties mash and bellies wallow all the time hammering her thigh into Laura's soaked twat.  I again must say that I am so thankful to know of one writer that so captures the greatness of hard love fucks.  You so capture it all.  The sounds, smells, the feel of skin on skin and the pressure of rubbing bodies.   The way women use their hands and mouth to love the whole woman.  I so love how Nyomi is working from Laura's tits and chest I am sure up to her mouth and ears.  That is how to love a woman and I love reading it in your stories.  Plus, I have to love the details of your fucks.  The way that Nyomi's angle and momentum is lifting Laura's groin up with the upstroke and then as she sweeps back and down it lets Laura's cunt settle on the sofa for the next ram thrust.  Plus, you are so clearly showing the power and "violence" of this love rape.  I so gag and feel violent shudders ripples through me during such hard love fucks.  Feeling my cunt pulped and my lips drug hither and yon making me gag in helpless pleasure.  Whew, just reading this bit again is making me hot and steamy down South.

//  It is obvious I love hard, rough sex.  So I am really loving this grudge fuck without the grudge.  It would get boring reading if you only did rough hard fucking.  What I love about your writing is you show the ramping.  Sometimes the fuck starts really rough and goes from there but that is the exception.  The way you make hard fucks special is the ramping that you show.  Writing this I realize that other authors don't really give any gradation to their lovemaking.  It is always that middle of the road sex.  Not a gentle, breezy love fuck or a hard piledriving rape fuck.  Just that middle of the road i.e. bland fuck.   They give me the kiss, suck boobs and then eat pussy.  That is great of course but when it is described blandly it really quickly loses any heat and ability to make one's pussy wet (well I do get wet but that is me – they are not hot – I'm just very horny all the time).  I may get wet with their stories but your stories make my panties a sopping wet mesh and when I masturbate to your stories my whole groin is slavered with fuck juice and the bed is soaked underneath my ass from the delicious cunt juices flowing heavily out my clenching cunt that then explodes and spasms out hot pulses of scalding love juice all over my groin, perineum and down my ass crack as I scream my fucking ecstasy along with Laura and her oh so sweet angels.  But you don't give me bland middle of the road.  Most of the time you show how fucks have their own history and flow.  They start slow and ramp.  Usually they ramp up in urgency and effort and if kinky like me then rougher too.  You really capture that ramping up that scalds wombs with bliss and sometimes you throw in kink.  I am so here as I am following this divine fuck.  You have made it clear that this is a hard, driving fuck from the beginning.  Nyomi is hot for this new kind of fucking and Laura goading her about Brandi has filled Nyomi with raw burning passion to prove she is this "Brandi's" equal.  I so love to goad lovers on and reap the fruits.  You show Laura encouraging her on here with moans and pleas for harder.  I can just feel my cunt being pulped here and the sounds of slapping, squirming flesh and our labored breathing filling the room with our need and rising love.  Leading one to yet another orgasm that simply fills one with the sweetest pleasure on Earth  ["Mnnngggiiieeeee!" she cried out, squealing and screeching as fiery lightning strikes pierced her flexing body.  "AUUNNGGGHHHH!" she heard herself roaring.  "Oh!  Oh!"  She closed her own thighs tightly on Nyomi's plunging thigh and rode it wildly, grunting and gasping as fresh waves of this scorching orgasm ripped through her.        "That's it, baby . . ." Nyomi panted into her ear, still fucking her hard with short, rocking, ramming thrusts of her thigh.  "You come hot and hard for Mama.  Unghh!  Unghh!"        "Oh!  Oh!  Mmmnnggiieee!" Laura shrieked as another squirt of sexual fire leaped through her writhing body.  "Oh shit . . . oh shit oh god!"        And then they both seemed to collapse together, in the same instant.  All motion ceased, except their heaving, gasping lungs, as they tried to gulp down enough air to stay conscious.  Laura was still on her back under Nyomi, but surprisingly Nyomi's weight did not seem onerous, and she ran her fingertips along the sleek smooth muscles of Nyomi's back while waiting for both of them to revive.  Nyomi lifted her head, a slow grin spreading over her beautiful face.]  Sigh, another orgasm that is making me love shake and my pussy wet.  I so love your details.  Like Laura clamping her thighs tight on Nyomi's marauding thigh.  I can just feel her leg between me thighs as the sweaty flesh squirts through my clenched thighs and jams my slit and rides up and down roughly lifting my body up on the savage in / up thrust making me gag and shudder in love.  It just dawned on me that you capture something truly special about orgasms.  Something that other authors miss in their blandness and lack of details.   You capture the pulsing of an orgasm.  Other stories just basically say that the person is coming.  They may say the guys cock is spurting which shows the pulsing I'm thinking of but they don't develop it.  Just reading Laura's orgasm I can feel the pulses of her orgasm shattering her with fucking ecstasy.   Other authors just make the orgasm one event that loses this divine pulsing of intense orgasms.  Their orgasms are not really described anyways and simply don't come close to your expressions of supreme orgasms.  I think you capture this pulsing by your short paragraphs which in shows the passage of time by their nature.  You also show this by describing how your women are fucking each other which shows the surging of their bodies and how Laura's body is being throttled and how Nyomi is continuing to ram her thigh up and down Laura's swollen, wet cunt.  Love how you show Nyomi exerting herself with her vocalizations of grunting as she works her thigh hard.  Then you show that pulsing when "another squirt of sexual fire leaped through her writhing body".  This just so captures the roiling sexual thunder that hits your body as it is still thrashing and spasming form the orgasm in general.  You so hit that throttling that backs off oh so slightly and allows the next wave to crush you soul with bliss.  That is one reason I love to clutch or press my fingers into a woman's flesh as she is cuming.  Feeling that tension and shaking in her body.  How you can feel that slight easing up as a wave passes and then feeling her body jolting with hard hammering blows, or shaking violently up in force or stiffening like she is being electrocuted as she writhes and cries out in ecstasy.  I so love feeling the waves of your orgasm tearing your soul apart with bliss I put there.  I so love it when men are slamming their bodies into my groin jamming me down into the bed as they impale my womb with their slamming, spewing prick flooding my women with their hot semen or bashing me forward in doggy as their cock spasms hot cum into my fuck hole.  Or how a man will arch his back and clench his ass to wallow his groin into my willing flesh and feeling his body surge forward grinding even harder into me each time his dick spasms his semen into my groaning flesh.  This is how women grind into each other when tribbing feeling their body surging as each wave of their orgasm throttles them as their cunt mashes itself into some part of my body soaking me in their juices.  Again, it is something that only you capture.  So many things that only you capture.  Thank the gods!  Only you do orgasms the justice they desire.

//  You now give us that sweet post coital basking time.  Nyomi collapses down onto Laura's spent body and they feel their bodies fitting together as tits mash and bellies wallow.  I am smiling as she asks how she ranks in thigh fucking and Laura's crowns her the new champion.  I love my women preening and me being able to stroke their confidence and the letting them know I love them so much as they fuck me to the heavens.  Letting them know I simply adore them and long to fuck them over and over.  Sigh, you are so romantic [She pulled Nyomi's face down to hers and kissed her passionately.  They squirmed happily together, enjoying the touch of their naked bodies, and kissed again, a longer kiss this time, with plenty of mingling tongues.        "I think we might have to make this a regular part of our repertoire," Nyomi murmured against her cheek, flexing her thigh muscle just enough for Laura to feel it tensing against her pussy.  ]  I so swoon with love as our tongues twine and languidly move from mouth to mouth as our love is deepened.  I feel my body glowing as our tongues twine and slither tightly making our wombs tremble with reawakening need.  I am smiling seeing that Nyomi is already addicted to tribbing.  I find that all women love trib fucking so much.  I so adore your little touches like Nyomi flexing her thigh in Laura's spent, wet, open cunt.  So often such a move gets me going again and we are soon tribbing again in heated love as we move around changing angles and body parts before moving on to other acts of divine lesbian love.  I love how you show women wanting to explore new horizons once they see what is truly possibly [Laura made a sad face and pulled her back down, luxuriating in the feel of their naked breasts mashing together.  "We'll just have to make up for it when we have the chance, my darling," she breathed into the shiny dark brown whorl of Nyomi's beautiful ear.        Nyomi's grin was wry and devilish.  "Next time I think I'm ready for that double thingee of yours.  The one that goes in both holes.   My god, I nearly wet my panties when I saw it."]  I am so happy when a woman comes to me begging for new experiences.  So many times a woman has not given me her asshole only to give it to me so soon in the future.  I just feel myself love shake as my cock is pressing into her sphincter and I see it slowly sinking in as she cries out in pain and seeing her face scrunch up in pain as I invade her virgin asshole.  Feeling her asshole so tight on my cock and seeing it bow out as it grips my dick tight.  Slowly loosening up and sinking it ever deeper into her colon as I see her face swooning and pleasure sufficing her face and love shaking body.  Soon my cock is buried up her shitter as I pound fuck her to heaven with an anal orgasm.   Often pounding several out of her rosebud addicting her forever on dicks slamming up her spasming colon.   Often soon my fist is pounding up her shit hole as she cums oh so violently for me as she jerks her clit and pulps her tits for me with my fist buried beneath her ribs making my arm jerk almost violently as her body flips and jackknifes for me.  I so love teaching women to be total anal whores.  Just like me!  Wow, what a romantic way to end a chapter ["Can't we slow down for at least a few minutes?" Nyomi asked, surfacing for air.        "No," Laura shook her head.  "Whatever made you think I could stop wanting you?"        "At least let us go back on the bed where it's more comfortable."         "I'm all yours," Laura promised, following her back down the darkened hallway to the bedroom.]  Funny, how authors never end their stories like this.  With hot fucking yet beginning again.  I think it is that following the same old script that is as old as the hills.  Fuck in the same manner as every other story and end with the story like they always do.  Sex is over and it is time for sleep or the story ends on a post script type ending showing their lives some where down the road.  Only you focus so tightly on your women and allow the story to end in so many manners.  In showing this you so capture life and it makes you stories simply sing with the song of life.  We are so fortunate to have your stories to set the gold standard.

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Chapter 324:

//  I like how this chapter starts out.  we see how life can bring such unexpected joy to ones life.  Laura gets a phone call from Carmela out of the blue.  I just love reading this so much.  Yours is the only story where we get this.  For one thing, only a story like yours can do this.  Other stories being one shots can't even have this happen.  Their stories have to happen in the now.  Something can not happen a year later.  I have seen a few other multi part stories but one of them is still only over a week in time.  The harem author doesn't do anything sweet with his time line.  Another author has some black women being humiliated story arch but it is poorly written for my taste and the sex is so unimaginative and simply has no romance what so ever.  In his defense, there isn't suppose to be any but still, with boring sex it should have something.  I just love seeing women interacting and subtly working their wills on each other.  I have received so many phone calls from women needing to see me and I may be reserved but I do too make such phone calls.  I so love talking to my angels and hearing them say such things to me [ "My loss."        "No, mine.   Anyway, don't you think you'd like to be one of the outside parts of a chocolate sandwich?  You know, I'm eighteen now.  Not even illegal any more."        This was bold.  Laura could feel a hot little pinch in the center of her pussy just hearing the words.  She had done the 'chocolate sandwich' thing before with Carmela, once with Brad, several times with Joy.  The memory of it was enough to persuade you to quit your job on the spot and dash over to wherever this delicious creature was calling from.]  I love the subtle humor and the way you show it bringing on the fuck hunger that so rages in my veins.  Women quickly learn what inflames their woman libido and makes her hunger for her body.  What I really love about how this is shaping up is the desire by Carmela wanting to bring her current lover to Laura.  I so love it when an angel brings me a new angel to help her devour.  I love reading the racial part of this dialog.  I have thought so much recently how I see so many interracial couples now.  Looking back it seems to have just exploded into normalcy.  I wonder if this has been nurtured by the Internet and all the interracial sites on it.  And how this has influenced porn video.   I think all this interracial fucking has helped loosen the mores of society.  I think stories like yours helps young women to see that interracial love is normal and divine.  I really think such porn is helping society.  Not only interracial love but gay love as well.  The more young persons can be exposed to such things the more they will see that such desires are normal and right.  I am smiling seeing Laura feeling her body filling with lust for Carmela.  I so know that raging desire that a phone call or text messages can fill me with at work.  I am smiling at how you show the cattiness of women.  Carmela can't keep herself from taking a shot at Makeeda.  She wants more of Laura and I can understand how she is feeling.  I am constantly having to help newbies understand the situation and not try to keep me to themselves.  I help them to understand all the pleasures that multiple lovers bring one.  One should always have many lovers gracing ones bed.

//  I am happy how you show growth in your characters.  In the past, Laura at first kept thinking I am "straight".  She slowly got over that song.  That is something I have to help some newbies to understand their suddenly surging bi lusts.  To embrace their new desires and continue fucking men also.  I have helped some marriages I know when I satisfy women's needs and help their self esteem and teach them how to have great pleasure.  Some learn from their wives and some lose out when they refuse the instruction they are lovingly offered.   I just love reading Laura no longer falling apart over her need for multiple women.  Makeeda understands and encourages her woman to satisfy her needs.  Makeeda is so loving and understanding with the understanding that she too can satisfy her needs and Laura now accepts this where in the past she would have felt her "stomach curdle".  She has grown beyond this and I love reading it in this story.  I have seen zero growth in any other story.  Just sex.   Maybe some melodrama hand wringing over sexual situations but no true insights to the characters.   The reader never sees any growth of a character and how they come to understand themselves or their others any better.  Everyone is simply stuck as to how the story started.  Thank you for showing the flow of time and how people evolve and change.  Most persons will grow if they are given time and you show this.  Some don't and some devolve but you show how love and nurture can make women so grow and become more than they were.

 

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//  I love reading all the ways that sex is initiated in Laura's story.  That is how life is when you have multiple lovers.  About a year ago, Joann and Maria finally formed their own business.  They wanted to be in charge and make all the decisions.  Plus, they wanted to make sure the business had a female orientation.  Two months ago they hired Esther.  She is a young cute Jewish girl fresh out of college with her accounting degree working towards her CPA.  She has cute high b-cup tits and nice hips.  She does have a sort of sad expression naturally it seems.  She is very serious.  Within two weeks of her hiring, Maria took her lesbian cherry and since then the three of us together and separately have been fucking her blind and she is simply insatiable in her appetites.  She has since made love to most of the small staff.  The business has been slow to grow with this economy but it is starting to take off.  I loved introducing her to Dodie, Frankie and Hillary, Camille.  Gods they fucked her like tigers devouring a fresh lesbian kill.  I can't wait.  Next week end I will take her to visit La'Tonya and Belissa to take her BDSM cherry properly.  We have fucked her hard and deep but not the full chains, floggers and such.  Joann, Maria and most of the staff are off getting trained on some new software.  Esther and a few other staff are holding the fort down.  Last night I was taking some down time and lounging watching Tivo Heroes and Fringe.  I had taken the day off and kept it quiet so I could rest my frazzled nerves from work and rest up from recent fucking.  I was in sweats and XL t-shirt when the doorbell rang around seven.  I went and was surprised to see Esther.  I let her in and felt her eyes hungrily devouring my bra less titties.  We sat on the sofa and I froze the TV and asked her what was up.  We made small talk about the office and how much she missed her workmates.  I could feel her longing and her eyes on my tits and looking hard at my crotch and I felt my pussy starting to quiver and get wet and my nipples slowly stiffening.  I had really wanted to watch some shows and later masturbate to some streaming video.  I looked into Esther soft beguiling eyes and slowly reached behind her head and slide her toward me as I scooted forward.  We both moaned deep in our chests as our mouths came hungrily together and tongues twined and probed deeply from mouth to mouth as she crawled on my thighs and straddled me as she began to hump my stomach and our titties mashed as she sucked on my tongue making me gag.  I loved how she worked her pelvis humping my stomach like a bitch in heat.  Soon we were stripped naked and I had her lying on the sofa as I half laid on her and started to siphon her nipples back and forth pulping her b-cup titties out my clenched fist and then love massaging them as I sucked her nipples slowly through my lips making her cry out and writhe.  We kissed deeply between sessions of my loving her titties.  Then I rolled us over and she was on top.  She loves to kiss all over my breast.  Lifting them and kissing the undersides and along the secret crease and all over the slopes of my tits.   She then sucked my nipples deep into her mouth and rocked her head as she worked my nipples against the roof of her mouth and then doing my slow pull through the lips trick making my legs see saw on the sofa as I gurgled and thrashed my head in helpless pleasure.  We loved each other breast for a long time now humping hips, bellies and grinding our sodden twats against each other.  I loved how she swirled and humped   her twat down riding it over my quivering, soaked mound making me belly clench and pelvis jump in pleasure.  I clenched her ass cheeks and helped her hump and loved feeling her ass cheeks clench on the up thrust on the back swirl to again jam down into my cunt on the forward swirl.

//  At first she was totally passive when she started her lesbian lifestyle but now she can be a super aggressive love tart.  She pushed herself off me and settled onto the floor and adjusted my thighs and pulled my ass to the edge of the sofa and buried her face into my cunt and started lapping and sucking my cunt so fucking good.  I was gurgling and groaning as she worked my slit and tongued my fuck hole so deep and lashed my clit.  Moving over my perineum to slither her tongue into my asshole, then French kissing it her lips sucking as she probed my rectum with her tongue.  She worked my cunt and asshole with her now expert skills and I came so fucking hard her head rocking back as she clutched my thighs to keep her mouth glued to my cunt as I bucked and jackknifed violently as wrenching spasms tore my womb to shreds so deep in my belly.  I then got on the floor and she sat up on the sofa as I jerked her cunt meat over the edge of the sofa and purred to her that I was going to eat her pussy so good.  I really worked her pussy and clit good as I tongue lashed, butterfly stroked her clit, and deep throat sucked her clit while I fingerfucked her soaked cunt my knuckles pounding into her cunt as it squished and splattered cunt juice.  Loved all the sodden sounds of a soaked cunt pounded and my fingers making obscene noises as I flipped my hand over and raked her vaginal walls and worked her cunt folds as her pussy made loud squishy and sloshing noises.   I sensed her orgasm on the precipice and sucked her whole clitoral hood deep into my mouth and now raked her spongy nerve bundle hard and fast and she slammed her hands onto my scalp her fingers clawing as she now bucked with full ass clenching heaves her pelvis wildly bucking into my mouth my head jamming back.  I felt her cunt pulsing out hot waves of cunt juice over my flexing and raking fingers, running out and soaking my hand and now down my forearm.  I adored her guttural groans and a few screeched moans of shattering bliss.  She slowly came down.  I got her to hook her hands around my neck and she sat up and I encouraged her to clench her legs around my waist as I got up.  I carried her now limp body into the bedroom.  The bed was already turned down and I laid her down on the bed and laid down beside her as we cuddled and kissed.  Almost immediately she recovered and moaned for me to straddle her face.  I rode her face as she sucked my cunt so good and reached up pulling and squeezing my nipples until I was wailing and grinding down hard as my cunt tore itself inside out gushing hot cum to overflowing in gulping mouth and soaking her face in my juice.  We sucked and fingerfucked each other through several more perfect orgasms of shared love.

//  We stroked each other as we drifted off to sleep.  I was awaken a few hours later by Esther kissing my face lightly.  I looked up at her looking down at me.  She was on her knees and her palms by shoulders.  She then mated our mouths and kissed my deeply making my nipples harden and pussy get so fucking wet.  She moved to my tits and gripped a tit with both hands her elbows on the bed and pulped it as she devoured my nipple with such hard loving sucks making my cunt hump up in raw need.  She pulled it through her lips like I had taught her and then would pump her head while sucking so fucking hard on my nipple and then gave it broad tongue strokes like a dog licking a bone making me keen in pleasure.  She planted her knee in front of my groin and started to flex forward hard and ground her knee and lower thigh into my pussy.  I gagged in helpless pleasure my head rocking back into the headboard.  She wallowed her leg into my swollen cunt and then started rocking back and forth slamming her knee and leg into my cunt.  I gripped her ass and slapped it with both hands encouraging her as she made the bed rock and squeak our heads hitting the headboard with loud thuds.  I spread my legs wide to open my cunt to her loving rape all the time thinking of Laura, Nyomi and Brandi making my eyes roll back and spasm.  She was up on her palms now and was slamming and then wallowing her knee into my soaking wet cunt that had soaked her knee in twat juice.  I loved how her violence rammed my head back into the headboard with loud thuds as the bed was rocking.  She was staring down at me with serious burning eyes and then she would  lower her face and kiss me roughly our lips mashing and teeth clanking with our bodies jolting and wallowing with our hard fucking.  She would rise up and pump hard making me gag and then after a while kiss me wetly again.  Then she suddenly moved her leg up and slammed her thigh at the hip into my cunt and slide it roughly up cunt in a fast pump and worked my cunt down to her knee and immediately rose her leg up and slammed her thigh at her hip and slammed it down into my now wildly throbbing cunt and slide her leg forcefully up my cunt until I felt her knee jamming my cunt and then she lifted and slammed down her upper thigh into my wildly pulsing cunt and slide her leg up to her knee and slamming down again and again.  My clit was mashed and pounded and I felt my labia all stretched and pulled up and down by her pumping thigh filling my belly with such estastic pleasure.  I felt my neck tightening and head lifted off the mattress as my head strained forward and I gripped her ass cheeks with rictus clenched fingers and helped her slam fuck my cunt with her slamming and grinding leg working up my cunt and then slamming down again.  I felt my belly tightening and my neck so fucking tight as my head juddered helplessly on my stiff neck.  Suddenly, the damn broke and my head slammed down into the mattress as I wailed my shattering ecstasy.  I flipped up into her crushing and mauling thigh and shrieked my helpless pleasure as my cunt convulsed hot cum all over thigh.  She rode me hard and pulped my cunt and labia lips as wave after of wave of mind shocking pleasure exploded out my cunt.  She eased up letting me ride out my trip among the stars.  We then moved into a sixty-nine and I so loved sucking on her meaty cunt stretching out her labia lips and clitoral hood.  Pulling my head back and feeling her cunt meat in my mouth as it pulled taunt before mashing my face up to swallow her clit.  Slapping my tongue all over it in my mouth filled with spit making her groin jam down, driving my head hard into the mattress.   I felt my womb shaking wildly in my tummy as she stretched out my own labia lips and clitoral hood.  She snapped first and I loved how I felt her rising up on her palms so she could grind and jam her cunt down into my face and mouth.  I moaned in delirious happiness her cunt convulsing hot waves of cum into my gulping mouth my tongue buried deep into her cunt guiding her boiling cunt nectars down my starving throat.  When she recovered she mashed her face deep into my cunt sucking for all she was worth and pumped my cunt with two fingers until I cummed with violent belly tearing spasms of fucking bliss.  We sucked and fingerfucked each other to another orgasm each.  What is cool is somehow I was again with my head up against the headboard and Esther on her knees and palms near my shoulders.  I looked up with slut filled eyes and cried out in pure love when she planted her knee in front of my cunt and looked into my eyes with pure heat and fire and slammed it forward into my cunt and again thigh fucked me so fucking good and hard.  I felt my womb melting as she wallowed her ass around grinding my cunt before again doing her hip to knee thigh grind up my cunt making me whimper in total pleasure as I gripped her arms jamming my cunt forward and up into her pile driving and then wallowing thigh.  I felt my eyes bulge wide open  and my head rocked back my forehead jammed into the headboard and my head again and again bashed into the headboard with her wild surging thrusts.  I felt my whole body filling with painful tension as I fought off my orgasm for almost thirty seconds.  I heard Esther chuffing and whispering "cum Barbara—cum Barbara—cum for me" and I suddenly couldn't see with the pure white light exploding behind my eyes as I screamed all caps my fingers spasming into her biceps as I wailed with loud screams of pure fucking love and ecstasy.  I jackknifed in wild thrusts, my body trying to twist over but her thigh now grinding continuously up and down my exploding cunt held me in place as my cunt convulsed and my womb was ripped inside out making me scream again all caps "I love you Esther—Keep Fucking Me!!"  Gods she rode my cunt with slamming thrusts now her hip slamming into my cunt and riding up to her knee and so quickly slamming her thigh and groin into my cunt and riding up her leg again and again and I had another orgasm suddenly erupt making me scream in a voice now becoming hoarse as my hands now tore at the sheets my fingers trying to ripe the sheets to shreds as each spasm made me jerk the sheet clenched in my gripping hands with desperate jerks of my arms up feeling the sheets all pulled taunt in my grip.  The wave would pass and I would slam my arms down into the mattress only to slam them up and feeling them jarring halt as the sheets pulled taunt and I try to tear them to shreds as I moaned gutturally now as two more devastating spasms tore my soul to shreds.  I slowly came down as she lightened her pistoning and then stilled at she lowered her sweat soaked face and we kissed in deep love. 

 

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//  I am smiling as we see a dilemma that Laura's angels are having to experience now that Makeeda is in the picture.  Laura has to be true to her archangel and when she is in she will be seeing only her.  I have lovers like that.  They can only see me when they are free and I have to try and fit them in when their husband or sweetie is away mainly.  They have to find time where they don't have their archangel there and their children if any are away some place.  I cannot normally deal with the Nyomi situation.  I don't mind the teenagers as much.  If they come in upon us they can at least understand what mommie is doing.  I don't want to deal with the little toddler.  I have had a few teenagers over the years being fucking angry, shocked, flabbergasted and I could tell one boy would have gladly joined if he could only have figured out how.  His mother dying of embarrassment prevented me from getting some nice incest going.  He smiled at me and gave me a thumbs up later when I met him at his mother's.  She had explained the situation and he had told her he was cool.  That was years ago.  I think now I would have worked like hell to make it happen.  Sigh, opportunity lost.  Love the whining dialog ["You make it hard on a girl," she said dryly into the phone.  "Carmela, look.  This isn't a good conversation to have on my office phone, okay?  I do want to see you.  And to meet Stacy.   But Makeeda is coming home this afternoon.  I can't see you for a few weeks.  Sorry.  Give me your number and I'll call you next time she goes out of town."       "How long will that be?" Carmela whined.      "Don't know for sure.  Probably three, four weeks."       "Shit.  You are a definite party pooper."]  I just love seeing this real life stuff in your stories.  When one is having sex with persons in a relationship then one has to work to find time to tryst and fuck gloriously.  I have striven to find partners like me and they me.  A cadre of women that are into open relationships and multiple partners.  We realize that the way to keep the home fires burning bright is constantly adding hot spice that only new and or multiple partners can bring.  Again, one part stories can't even begin to go here.  They are limited by their nature.  The other longer stories simply don't share the day to day.  They setup a narrow focused story and they adhere to that story no matter what.  I see so much potential in other stories but they don't do anything with them.  I think of how bland their stories turn out to be and how sublime your stories are.  Your story arc seems to me like a more believable version of "desperate housewives".  I have never watched a show of it but the trailers show women seeking hot connections.  I understand their going over the top to hook fickle watchers where your story is so subtle with it and I know that this conversation is happening so many times every day across the country.  Women desperately trying to connect with a hot angel for intense fucking and not being able to make the connection.   Being delayed that makes one almost stomp one's foot in frustration.   I say that because seeing "How long will that be?" is exactly how I say that as I stomp my foot in frustration as I try to cajole, whimper and try to coerce my angel to my will.  Let me tell you I get really whinny and sometimes pissed when I think we are going to get together and it doesn't happen.  About six weeks ago LeAnn called and begged for some hot fucking.  Her husband was going on a business trip and her daughter was staying at her grandmother's.  I was very happy to make a date and passed up several other trysts to spend a glorious two nights with LeAnn.  The day of the tryst I started getting frantic texts telling me her husband's trip had been postponed.  I finally got in touch with her and I was hot.  I whined that I had passed up several hot parings to be with her.  She was apologetic and started crying which calmed me down.  I then consoled her and told her to hurry up and arrange another time but please try and be sure.  I told her I wanted her so badly and I could taste her pussy in my mouth and feel my tongue probing deep up her asshole and her nipples rasping the roof of my mouth as I swallowed them down my throat.  she was hoarse with need and happy again when we hung up.  We soon had another date setup when her husband did go out of town with some buddies and her girl stayed at a friend's house for the weekend.  Gods we fucked like total whores for the weekend.  As soon as the door was closed we were in a full body clench and mouths pressed tight as we devoured each others mouths.  Soon we were in the bedroom with my face buried in her cunt.  I pounded her pussy and asshole with my fingers as I used every trick I knew to make her cum violently.  I sucked her off to two quick orgasms and then slowly worked her up to a third orgasm to make sure she understood that she was my slut for the weekend and show her again what I give her.  I am shivering feeling again what she did with her mouth on my nipples and pussy.  We fucked so hard and deep with my strap-on as we plundered pussies and assholes to ruin.  I smiling again thinking of us all cuddled and smooching between fuck sessions.  I have been working on her and she is close to seducing another stay at home mom down the street.  The woman has been sending signals since she moved in a year ago and I have slowly worn down LeAnn's silly resistance.  Leann sees me as her romp on the wild side but I know when she falls to Laurie's charms she will be so more hooked on cunt meat and soon I will have Laurie too.  I just have to be more patient, which I hate when I can sense new cunt meat in the near future.  Again, I just want to say I love how you show the humor of the moment.  Carmela is not trying to be funny but the moment and her frustration leads to humor of the moment.  I have always enjoyed these moments in real life and really, really enjoy them in your story.  They are extra enjoyable to me because I never get them else where so when you deliver them I am smiling and chuckling.  I thank you for giving me such moments that make me think real life.

//  After a long delay we see this [She called the number Carmela had given her.  "Finally!" Carmela said in place of a hello.  "You ought to be glad I didn't just jump off the bridge or something while waiting!"        "I am," Laura smiled into the phone.  "You don't know how glad."        "I've got my period, you bitch," Carmela said, but now not with any hostility.  More disappointment than anything.   "We have to wait.  How about Friday?  I should be fine by then."        "What about Stacy?"        "She had hers about a week ago."  Carmela grew coy and seductive.  "Think you can handle two at once, old lady?  Stacy's like this flaming nymphomaniac.  You won't believe it."]  I love all the emotions that you show in this little snipette.  First you actually have dialog in your stories.  I am constantly amazed at how little there is in other stories.  There is really very little.  A lot of your stories is simply your women talking to each other.  This makes your stories so much more like real life.  We are social animals and need to communicate and I am thankful that one author captures this.  Then we see first some anger, patience by Laura, then after the negative emotions are expressed we see love again blossoming.  I am so happy when I am talking to one of my angels and we are discussing about how we are going to consume each other.  One thing such dialog shows in your stories is the confidence that you infuse your women with.  They know they are hot and let their lovers know it.  I so love it when a slut tells me what she is going to do to me and then fucks me blind.  You show your women planting the seeds of need in each other and how these little seeds can grow and become all consuming.  I can just see Carmela's pretty face all serious and yet smiling as she is seducing her cougar for so hot loving to come.  I know I constantly tell of how only you do this and that in your stories but I can really, really say that only you bring up women's menstrual cycle.  Like I say, you bring in real life into your stories.  I so love how I can hear the tone in your women's voices.  Your dialog is so spot on that when I read your stories their voices have inflections as I read them.  Boring dialog that other authors give has me reading their stories in a monotone because they don't draw me in.  Their loss, since their stories don't draw me in and thus, the sex loses something when the payoff comes.  I like how Carmela is pumping up Stacy and her sexual appetites and abilities.  I will tell you point blank that I am going to fuck you blind and then prove it.  this shows confidence in yourself and your lovers.  You have always been so positive in the portrayal of your women.  So many other authors just keep them bland and never let them state their thoughts and their confidence.  I so love the fact that your women are not mannequins.  Each woman is so individual and I so love visiting them each chapter. 

//  I am smiling yet more seeing the delicious dialog that just keeps going.  Line after line of women love taunting and firing each other up.   Flirting about how hot the sex will be.  Gods, such flirting simply makes my cunt convulse and juice.  Getting phone calls and text and pic texts at work that make my cunt all steamy and my nipples so hard that I have to do mantras to calm down so it is not obvious that I am Horny!  Plus, you dialog has so much humor it in.  So I kind of get a twofer from you.  I get dialog that others don't give me and on top of that you are giving me dialog that is witty.  I love it!  I like how you show that you to sometimes find a love nest.  I have that problem sometimes.  I definitely can't bring fellas around the house with Joann and Maria around.  That is forbidden.  Plus, the dynamics sometimes lead me to not wanting to bring my angels around when my archangels have their own angels over.  I see that Laura is impressed by the wealth that Stacy's family has.  I kind of notice things like that but I am not impressed.  I guess I live in such a house now but that is not important to me.  The important thing is whether the house is a home.  I too have to make sure my humor does not ramp up into perceived sarcasm.  I like seeing the little facets of Laura.  You adding yet more layers to the women in your stories.  Like you do here when we meet Stacy [She was greeted at the door by a very attractive though unsmiling blonde girl wearing a thick black bathrobe.  "You must be Stacy."        Stacy's eyes were dark blue, large, and unblinking.  She still did not smile but looked at Laura as if she could see directly through her to the street.  "You must be Laura."]  Humm, I see this the reserved kind of woman that needs to have her control stripped so you can fuck her long and hard as she writhes and cums so violently for you.  I kind of like how we are wondering how difficult Stacy is going to be.   Sometimes, things can be a little difficult when new pairings are involved.  I just love that everything is not smooth flowing in your stories.  You then remind the reader that Stacy is the jealous type.  Ah, that explains her behavior  She may be reserved but her green eyed monster is making her more so.  I have always loved that you let the readers read the thoughts of Laura.  You give us little insights into Laura.  We see here that Laura senses the situation and decides how best to proceed.  I always to try and find out if any jealousy will rear its ugly head when new partner combinations arise with spouses or lovers bringing in a angel or archangel.  I will usually tell them I will put the major blast on them and make them the focus of my initial lust.  All women melt when they are the center.  I just have to tell my angel "now don't you get jealous on me" as I explain my strategy to them.  I sometime sense it rising up but then give them so intense foreplay and get them to join in on my seduction of their partner.  But in some circumstances I use the ploy that Laura uses here.  I sort of make the woman acknowledge me and accept my presence.  I just stay relaxed and smile benignly at them and let them work it out.  Sometimes a tryst has not happened initially when the green eyed monster happens but usually the next time flows so much sweeter after some arguing I am sure.  A few times it doesn't and I sigh for the love that is missed.  So I like seeing Stacy's eyes lightening just that little bit when she invites Laura in.  I am fist pumping because I know the battle has been won and soon I will be dining on her sodden cunt and hopefully delicious rosebud and then feel my tongue snaking deep up her clenching asshole. 

//  I am smiling great big reading the following because it reminds me so much of me.  I too am a person who is greatly attracted to women of color.  The darker the better.   I grew up in an area full of Latina's and fell in love with them but since I moved here in college I have been surround by oh so lovely black females and teenagers and have fallen so hard for so many.  I simply shudder with the thought of devouring some new black woman's cunt and asshole and taking her fuck holes with my cock.  Black and Latinas are so passionate.  That seems to be the rule and not the exception where with white women your chances of a cold fish are higher.  Shudder.  Also, I find white women to be so much more bitchy I fear to say.  All wanting to play mind games and getting all pissed off if things don't go as planned.  Of course Black and Latina women do go nuclear when they do get mad.  Makes for great make up sex though.   [I figured she might be, darling, since you're naked under that robe, Laura thought but did not say.  She could see enough of the girl's gorgeous, creamy skin to be intrigued.  Some blondes, like Rhonda, had very pale, milky skin, but some like this Stacy had a rich peach shimmer to their skin that nearly made Laura salivate.  True, she was devoted to coal-black girls like Carmela, but beautiful skin of any hue was alluring in its own right, and she could not take her eyes off Stacy's, the parts she could see anyway.          "In here," Stacy said, leading Laura through the house, which was elegantly and expensively furnished, as she had expected.           "Nice house," she said, being polite.        "Thanks."  Stacy's voice was toneless, colorless.  "My parents are away.  They won't bother us."        Oh, good! Laura thought, half-sarcastically.  Because I think some loud moaning might happen.  I wonder what you look like under that bathrobe.  Yummy, I bet.]  I go on about the shades and hues of women of color but Laura is so right that white women have it too.  Especially during the warmer months with their tan lines.   Their colors are so unique especially when you factor in freckles, moles and where a lot of sun has made that subtle change in skin tone.  I like how Laura is so in tune when she says that beauty is still beauty.  I guess a rose by any other name.  I find it humorous hearing Laura's comments about Stacy's looks and longing to get her robe off her to devour her body with her eyes.  There are times at work where I miss sentences where I lose focus.  A beautiful woman is explaining something to me and I totally miss it at first because I devouring her with my eyes and mind.  Dreaming of her cunt humping desperately into my mouth as it explodes or I see my cock lunging fully up her tight asshole as she wails from dying with pleasure and pain as I rip it out and drag her around by her hair and watch her hungrily licking and bobbing her butt hole off my big cock.  I like how you make your stories full of layers.  You are showing us Stacy's jealousy but in a natural understated way.  It is obvious but you are not over doing it like a half hour sitcom.  Stacy is letting her feelings be known that she is probably doing this for two reasons.  A) she likes to fuck, a lot and B) and maybe as important or more so, she loves Carmela and wants to make her happy.  Thus, we see this seeming ambivalence.  I suspect she both does and doesn't want to proceed at this time.  I love how you show this complex nature of Stacy and let the reader read into the story what they think is going on.  I always notice these situations and work hard and fast to seduce the reluctantee into our loving arms.  I always feel that if she is there and not obviously coerced she wants it.  That soon myself and her archangel will have her thrashing and gutturally groaning usually with sharp cries of ecstasy thrown in as we simply devour her and blast her soul with orgasm after orgasm of womb rending ecstasy.

//  You then spend the next part of the story clearly showing the jealousy of Stacy.  I have always admired your ability to move the story forward at what feels is just the right level for erotica on the Internet.  You move the plot forward and do not bog the story down with unnecessary details or long digressions that are not important to the story.  You clearly show that Stacy is being bitchy with just enough to make the reader feel it and then want to see how it will be resolved.  That is something that you are good at.  Setting up situations for Laura to resolve so hot fucking can occur.  The story now surprises me.  Usually Laura has to work to extract herself from difficult situations but Carmela takes matters in hand like I would because she is a total fucking slut like myself [Laura nodded.  She seemed to realize only after it was happening that Carmela was snaking her tongue into her ear, the one she had been murmuring into.  Shivers suddenly shot through Laura's body, and she cringed and giggled.        "Ooohhhh . . . that tickles!"   She tried to dodge away but Carmela would not relent.  She stabbed her tongue into Laura's ear again.        "Why don't you fuck me?" she murmured.  "She'll loosen up and join us.  I promise.  We just have to get her interested."        Carmela had untied the belt of her robe so that it now gaped open, showing Laura all the treasures within, treasures she had delightedly plundered many times in the past.        "Maybe you're on to something," she whispered back, unable to keep her hands from darting inside the robe.        She grasped and squeezed Carmela's full, springy, naked breasts, running her thumbs over Carmela's thick dark caramel nipples.          "Take me back over to the sofa and fuck me, Laura," Carmela whispered.  "I want you to.  Did you bring your strap-on?"]  I so love women who take control and lead.  I am always happy to lead where necessary but will gladly follow if you will lead.  I love how Carmela sees her lover acting silly and knows her so well.  The sight of her angel fucking a hot woman will turn her on and inflame her innate desires.  I think Carmela and I are a lot alike.  We both like bending women to our wills.  I so love shake and shudder when I take a newbie and seduce her to my loving arms and I am sucking her cunt down my throat and I feel such elation when I take a virgin asshole and watch my dick plunging fully up her shit hole and then pulling out and seducing her virgin mouth and I am watching her sucking her shit juice off my dick with wild gusto.  Seeing that initial hesitation and sometimes out right revulsion and working my magic and she is so soon simply glowing sucking her shit off my dick and eagerly turning around to suck off more shit juice with wild glee.  I am so happy seeing loving move forward with Carmela's straightforward boldness.  She sees a problem and takes control.  I so know that opening my charms to women and having hot fucking so soon insuring.  I would be love gagging seeing Carmela opening her robe and exposing her beautiful doves and cunt.  I know my mouth would instantly be filled with saliva with my wanton hunger filling me.  I so love how you show the little things.  Like Carmela slithering her tongue into Laura's ear weakening her will to Carmela's will.  I am a slut when my ears are kissed and stabbed like this.  My cunt just gets instantly wet.  I really like the detail of Laura using her thumbs to work Carmela's thick, already hard nipples.  I so love to cup your tits at times like this and love massage them and thumb over your nipples and grip them with my thumb and first two fingers and work them with slow squeezes and twists on the stems making my woman jolt and mewl for me.  Sigh, I see so much of me in Carmela.  She is leading and seeking more.  Asking for the strap-on and already implying that she wants to be dp'ed.  She is after pleasure just like me at her age.

//  I like how we get to see the sweet manipulation of the situation.  We see Carmela and Laura eagerly helping to move the events forward.  I like how Carmela knows her woman.  That Stacy is a complete whore who is not jealous really when it comes to hot fucking.   She knows that Stacy will melt for the situation.  That Stacy instead of getting angry can only be getting hot and horny.  I so love seeing a woman coming over to the realms of hot slutty fucking.  Taking a woman over the edge and hooking her on multiple partner sex.  Soon having her begging for more with her partner.  I like how you show them looking over at Stacy slyly to see the effect they are having on her.  One needs to judge the affect you are having in case you need to change tactics slightly or increase the acceleration.  I love Carmela's way.  I believe myself in the blast formula.  Over whelm them with sweet temptation and sensations.  Sigh, I can just feel my hand slipping inside Carmela's robe and moving over her warm, perfect shoulders to move the robe off her body and exposing it and gasping at her beauty.  I love how you tell us that Carmela helps to quickly strip Laura of her clothes.  I get so tired of cloths just disappearing in other stories.  This is just skipped totally way to often.  I can just see their rising fuck hunger so evident as Carmela helps Laura strip down.  I love the little dialog moments as Laura laments that it has been to long.  I too say things like this when I have not fucked an angel in way to long.  I just want to worship at her altars and once more memorize every part of her body as I take it totally and repeatedly and she mine.  Now you are making me smile as Laura again backs off when she is supper sucking Carmela's nipple.  I am constantly smiling and egging Laura on when she backs off on her hard nipple sucking.  Me when I hear those gasps I only ramp up.  I make my women die from it.  The only time I really back off is when I am sucking their nipples after I or we have given her a devastating orgasm.  I will suck and pull on their supper sensitive nipples and sometimes it is painful in that way that is shockingly pleasurable.  But I must back off when the effect would lose the desired affect.  I will back off and read her very closely to gauge the perfect time and then I swoop down and again attack her nipples with deep throat love sucks and head pulling making them writhe and whimper their nipples are on fire and clits are threatening to spasm off their cunt.  I have made so many woman cum again from this or make aftershocks just last and last.  I don't use this that often.  Just enough to let them know I could use at any time and make them my total fuck slut yet again.

//  Sigh, you so capture great tittie loving and how to bring in a third woman into the hot love fuck [ Ummm , I really like to suck these," Laura smiled, returning to her feast.        She cupped both of Carmela's beautifully shaped breasts in her hands and proceeded to devour the girl's large, bulbous nipples with shocking lust.  For her part, Carmela smiled and moaned and lay back to enjoy every second of it.  Her fingers fluttered in Laura's hair, and she arched her back slightly as if to push each breast further into Laura's mouth.        "Yes . . . yessssss!" she hissed, twisting and squirming under Laura's lips.       It didn't take long for Stacy to be drawn into this happy maelstrom of passion.  Laura felt a hand pushing away one of her own and from the corner of her eye saw Stacy's pale fingers enclosing one of Carmela's dark breasts, the one she wasn't busy sucking herself at that instant.  In the next moment they were both sucking Carmela's nipples, one each, and Carmela was writhing and gurgling with pleasure.       "Unnnuunn . . . unnuunnn!" she moaned, twisting, panting, watching their mouths on her saliva-wet breasts.]  You are the only author that makes these moments so special in the story.  I can just feel my lips around Carmela's thick nipple and sucking it so hard as my tongue lathes and tongue slaps that turgid nipple.  Other authors just say the woman sucks the nipple while you say things like "shocking lust" which just tells the reader how much hunger Laura feels for Carmela.  You then show the woman receiving pleasure.  I get so tired how authors never really describe the details of the woman receiving.  They just say she is in heaven but never show us that helpless fluttering of groping hands and that arching of the back to stuff her nipple deeper into my starving mouth.  Moving my arm underneath her arched back and jamming her body up and then really deep throat sucking making her melt and whimper for me with thrashing head and limbs.  You then show Stacy joining and simply falling on Carmela.  I can just feel the magic in this moment.  I feel my soul leap up in pure joy when a seeming reluctant woman joins our tryst and devours the sweet flesh before her offered on the alter of fucking love.  I love how you show Stacy being confident in her hunger.  She pushes Laura's hand away from the breast she is about to devour it and take it for her own.  I can just see the fuck hunger in her eyes as she siphons Carmela's other nipple deep into her mouth.  I am shaking my head and feeling my cunt spasm and getting wet again.  Your sounds are so dead on and again seeing Carmela writhe with your beautiful word pictures.  Having both nipples sucked at the same time is simply divine  I so adore looking down and seeing both of my nipples and large aureola sucked deep into hard sucking mouths as hands pulp and pump my throbbing tits making my head thrash and body hump lewdly.  I so love seeing Stacy brought into the love fold.  It is so hot to look over and seeing a woman devouring the other breast as you work yours.  This usually leads to us coming together to kiss in deep hunger before going back to our tit meat or one or the other moving up to kiss our woman's shoulders, face and mouth.  Back and forth and in all directions often snaking our hands down to jerk her off.   One working the cunt hole the other clit until she is bucking, jackknifing and crying out in the throes of ecstasy.

 

Alert: Another Lengthy Digression

//  I am reminded of something that happened recently with Veronica.  She had been sending me texts and complaining to me when we were together about one of her core subject teachers.  She was hot but Veronica was dishing a lot of hatorade on the woman.  She did not let her students get away with anything it seems and was a hard grader.  I kind of liked those kind of teachers.  She would tell me how she wanted to scream at Debbie and all the in school suspensions that Veronica was serving because of her.  Veronica would tell me how she would stare at Debbie dreaming of sucking her titties, cunt and slamming her strap-on up her asshole if she wasn't such a bitch.  After a while she stopped whinnying about her and I just assumed that she had adjusted and adapted like you have to do in life.  She gave me directions to an apartment complex and told me to bring my favorite strap-on.  She told me in a smoky voice that I would be slamming it deep in both of her fuck holes.  And how she loved sucking her asshole off a hard dick.   She then told me that my dick would be slamming up a new tart's shit hole and did I want that hummmmmm.  I was wet let me tell you.  I loved driving to a new address knowing   new pussy and asshole was coming my way.  I googled the address and found it without to much trouble and cursing.  I was thinking I was about to dine on some sweet teenage pussy and plunging my cock deep up that tight pussy and tighter butt hole and wondering what her teenage offering might look like and then wondering if maybe she had seduced a milf, or something in between.  I rang the doorbell and Veronica let me in.  I drank in her teenage beauty and then I saw my soon to be lover and smiled my most winning smile as I walked up to her on the sofa.  I looked at her closer and her sweater with Veronica's school logo on it and her late twenties sweet angelic face looking up at me.  She stood and I just knew then that it was the "dreaded" teacher.  She was the right height and her dark brown eyes and dirty blond hair to her shoulder blades told me it was Debbie.  She hugged me tightly and I felt my pussy tingle and nipples pulse feeling her little titties pressed into my upper belly.  We sat and I know my slight perplexion showed on my face.  I was soon filled in how Veronica had kissed her deeply in after in school suspension.  The school was all but empty and Veronica was emboldened to take her teacher as a lover.  Veronica had marched up to her desk and simply kissed her and felt Debbie melt immediately.  Debbie told me she felt her resistance fade away with Veronica's tongue dueling hotly in her mouth and that night Veronica was here fucking her wildly.  I had to admit I was impressed with with Veronica's boldness and Debbie letting it happen.  I know she was surprised and shocked but then I have to give her credit for letting love continue to grow.  It seems Debbie is the total bi slut.  She is fucking the principal (male) and two teachers (one female, one male all married).  I fear I was already wondering if I could angle some more pussy and hard dick.  She knew that Veronica would not betray her she told me.  That she wants her for sex and not love and won't have to worry about her getting crazy and doing something stupid.  It seems she had had Amber and Emily and now I was about to have her too.  I love how Veronica shares her new sluts like I do.  Gods, I love total sluts like myself. 

//  This was not about seduction.  She pulled her sweatshirt over her head and I moaned seeing her high firm tits exposed.  They are firm and conical shaped with her aureola draped over the end and her nipples hard and poking.  This makes her nipples puffy by the shape of her titties.  She smiled at me "I know you want them.  Show me that magic Veronica tells me about."  I leaned into her and swallowed her right tit into my mouth and sucked so hard and tongue lathed as she gurgled and relaxed.  Veronica leaned in also from the other side and they kissed deeply their heads tilted to mate hard and slither tongues deep.  I worked her titties loving working her aureola slowly through my lips and sucking mouth.  We were soon all naked and I continued working her titties and kissing her sliding my long tongue down her throat.  Veronica was between her legs burying her face into her cunt and tongue fucking her hard and working up with her wiggling tongue through Debbie's puffed slit lashing her labia lips and sucking hard on her clit.  I would get up on my knees and feed Debbie my nipples and groan so hard as she sucked and pulled on my nipples her hands gripping my tits and pulping hard like I love it.  Veronica had told her my likes I could see.  I would get back down and suck a nipple deep into my mouth.  I would angle my head while sucking her tits so I could watch Veronica work her magic.  She started to finger fuck her with her middle finger and then index finger too as Debbie's cunt squished and splattered cunt juice.  I loved it, working Debbie's tits and then kneeling up and letting her work my tits hard.  We worked her body with total love and focus until her body slammed back into the sofa back.  Her body flipped and jackknifed as she wailed and wallowed her cunt spasming hot twat juice into Veronica's mouth and all over her face.  Then I was on the sofa with Veronica between my legs as she sucked me off and Debbie totally focused on my breast and mouth.  I loved how she worked my whole tits kissing them all over especially the undersides and hefting them up and sucking on them like pastries as I whinnied and gurgled.  I cummed so hard for them as Veronica gulped my cunt juice down and then wallowed her face into my trembling pussy as it after shocked and slimmed her whole face.  Then watching Debbie lewdly licking it clean.   We then did Veronica to several orgasms with each of us sucking her off and swallowing sweet teenage cunt juice.  We moved to the bedroom and Debbie's king sized bed.  We sucked and fingered fucked to more devastating orgasms and had a sweet daisy chain that had us cumming in turn in each others mouths as our chained bodies bucked and humped lewdly as we sucked and fingerfucked in hot love.  I loved how we were totally soaked in sweet and cum by the end of our marathon fuck tryst.  We dozed for several hours. 

//  Debbie woke us up and told us to shower and use her enema to get cleaned up outside and inside out.  She was wet from her shower.  Veronica and I went into bathroom and gave ourselves warm enemas.  We then showered in the small stall.  We washed each others backs and we were massaging and washing our pussies and titties.  Veronica slide down and latched her mouth onto my cunt as I got my feet planted a little forward so I could pump up hard with my flexing ass.  I clenched my fingers in her scalp as I looked down at her sucking my cunt with total focus her tongue lashing my clit and sucking on my labia lips as she inserted first two and then three finger into my cunt and pounded my flowing box.  I pulped my tits and lifted my nipples to suck on them in turn as I squeezed hard my tit and pulled my head back stretching out my nipple.  Soon I had a screaming wildly bucking orgasm as my cunt exploded in her mouth as my body would heave and  I rose up to the balls of my feet as I shook violently my cunt convulsing as I sucked my nipple so hard to prolong my ecstasy.  She worked me through my orgasm to prolong my ecstasy.  I slowly recovered and got her pressed into the wall and latched onto her throat and hooked a leg up and sank all four fingers into her cunt and wedged fucked her cunt with slamming thrusts as I mauled her neck and barked at her to lift a tit from time to time and I sucked it deep into my mouth and sucked as hard as I could on her nipples.  Gods, she came so hard as my slamming thrusts jammed her body up and into the shower stall wall hard as her free tit wallowed as her body shook with hard tremors.  I felt her body suddenly, stiffen and slammed her cunt as hard as I could and sank my teeth into her nipple that gets puffy when she cums.  She screamed all caps as she gripped her hands hard into my shoulder and ribs as her body bucked and slammed into the wall as more wails filled the shower stall.  Her legs gave out and I helped her slide to the floor as her body convulsed and her face slashed like she in dire pain.  She finally recovered and I turned off the water and helped her up as we toweled off the excess water.  In the bedroom we strapped on our strap-ons and Veronica led me back to the living room where Debbie was lounged back on the sofa her legs spread her pussy wet and nipples engorged as she ran her fingers up and down her swollen cunt and rose her left hand and squeezed in on her puffy nipples first one and then the other making her body lurch and judder.  She told us that our fucking in the shower had made her so fucking hot and she needed to be fucked real bad and real hard.

//  We walked over to the sofa and sat beside her and started to play with her cunt and breast as Veronica pulled on a nipple and kissed her deeply.  We stroked her kitty and sucked hard on her nipples as she reached down and started to pump our cocks.  I moaned running fingers up and down her soaked slit and playing with her splayed labia lips.  Playing around her cunt hole and then running two fingers deep into her cunt and slowly pumping her cunt and playing with her inner folds.  I would pull out and feed my fingers to Debbie and myself while Veronica sank her fingers deep into her clutching cunt and pump her sodden cunt with her raking fingers.  After ten minutes of deep throat sucking her nipples and slithering out tongues down her throat while fingerfucking her wet, flowing cunt she slide to the floor and turned around and started to give our ever hard dicks hard bobbing head.  Her hair flouncing and her hands gripping the shafts as she took first my dick to the back of her throat and rising up to drool copious spit all over it as she pumped her now spit soaked hand on my shaft.  Moving her head over and now sucking on Veronica's black eight inch dick with thick veins.  She sucked on it and licked up and down the shaft and opened her mouth wide and swallowed the fake balls and moaned like a whore.  She gave us wet, sloppy head for long minutes and then rose a little higher on her knees and took Veronica's dick down her throat her nose pressed hard into Veronica's belly licking her plastic scrotum.  Rising up and leaving her mouth wide open, thick slimy sheets of spit falling out her mouth soaking Veronica's dick and harness as she dove on the dick and got the spit all over her face as she took her dick up and down her gullet.  Then she did deep throat on my cock as I gripped her head and jammed her nose into my belly with short hard vicious jerks of my hand.  I moaned hearing her hacking out tons of long strands of spit all over my dick and belly.  She did deep throat a few more times on us before I got up on the sofa and leaned back my head on an arm and straddled her over me and guided my dick up to her slit and ran my head up and down her slit feeling her swollen cunt rubbing over my dickhead before I slowly sank my dick into her tight cunt as she shuddered and kissed me deeply.  I fucked her slowly as her head came up and Veronica got behind us and Debbie took her dick into her mouth and bobbed and twisted her head on it.  We fucked lovingly like this for a long minute before Veronica got a knee up on the sofa and I watched her drool spit onto Debbie's rosebud.  I saw her fingers working now massaging her rosebud and Debbie's head juddered when Veronica penetrated her asshole with her thumb and started to pump it loosening her shit hole.  She then brought her dick up to her sphincter and started pushing it into her shitter.  I slowed my strokes until Veronica's dick sank several inches into Debbie's shit hole.  I loved how Debbie gurgled and cried out as her asshole was pried open by Veronica's big black dick.  The way her head juddered and shook her facing slashing as her throat cawed out in pain and pleasure.  I slowly fucked her wet cunt as Veronica worked sinking her black prick ever deeper into Debbie's butt hole until most of it was disappearing up her shit hole now getting wet with her ass juice.  We then started to pump her with long strong strokes of our dicks sinking deep into her belly.  We fucked her slow and then hard our hips flexing to slam our dicks fully into her groaning flesh.  I loved how her head would sag and then surge rigid as we fucked her hard.  Soon we were all sweaty as she cried out and moaned out " ohhhh   fuccckkkkk " over and over and would suddenly cry out loud moans of pleasure.  We were fucking her hard as she juddered more and more and suddenly she was crying out she was cumming along with demented moans as we worked her flipping and jackknifing body through her orgasm.  I moaned feeling her body bucking and wallowing her tits hard into my tits and seeing her face crumpling in shattering bliss right in front of me.  I gripped her ribs hard and loved how my sweaty hands had to work to keep their grip on her sweaty ribs.  Clenching my ass to slam my dick fully up into her cunt and pulling half out to slam deep into her womb over and over as I viciously fucked her through her orgasm high.  We slowed our stroking as she rode out her orgasm and then started ramping up again.  We fucked her with our big dicks with slow strokes flexing up to fully bury our dicks into her tight fuck holes.  Veronica pulled out and walked up to the sofa arm and Debbie dove on her dick an sucked it clean with hard bobs of her head and I moaned seeing her lips so tight as she twisted her head on the dick head.  We fucked her hard and deep now.  Veronica slamming forward to slam her dick into her shitter.   Pulling out and gripping the base of her shaft and torpedoing her dick fully up her asshole again and again as Debbie howled and cried for it harder.  Her head lurching forward and her tits rubbing up and down my tits as we pummeled her.   She moaned she wanted to suck our dicks and we decoupled as she slide to the floor. She licked / sucked clean Veronica's dick with slow bobs of her head and then licking up the shaft and butterflying the cock head moaning how good her asshole tasted before swallowing it again and hard twisting her head as her cheeks hollowed out with her hard sucks.  I love bitches that give great head to strap-ons.  It so turns on her inner slut along with mine!.   She then slowly turned to my dick and looking up to my eyes and swallowed my dick head slowly and bobbed so slowly cleaning her cunt off my dick as she looked me in the eyes deeply and moaning how her cunt tasted like honey.  We got her up again on the sofa and roughly slammed our dicks into her fuck holes.  We pumped her hard as we shoved her off our dicks several times to "force" her to suck her cunt and asshole off our dicks.  Veronica got down on the sofa and Debbie guided her dick to her cunt and slowly sank down until their mounds were mashed together and I then got positioned and pressed my cock head into her rosebud and then slammed my hips forward and slammed my thighs into her ass cheeks as all my dick slammed up her colon.  I swooned seeing her head rock up and a demented groan of pure guttural anal pleasure gurgle out her throat and shudder before slowly sinking back to Veronica's shoulder as I fucked her shitter good and deep.  We slammed fucked her with our dicks see sawing in and out and then one of us really slowing our thrusts to a slow in and out as the other coiled and slammed our hips up or forward to slam our dicks hard into her groaning flesh.  I loved watching Debbie's body shaking with our dicks slamming into her body.  Watching her asshole clutch my thick shaft and pulling my dick head to her sphincter making it bulge on the crown and then slamming balls deep making her keen in helpless pleasure.  She was gibbering now and as her slippery body grinded over Veronica's.  She was tensing up and she cried "fuckkkkkk …. Godddammnnnnn—so fucking intense!  Oh god so fucking intenssseeeee!  … ohhhhhh fuccckkkkk … goddamit fuck me hard!"  We gripped her body and slammed into her crying out flesh.  I gripped her ribs hard and pumped her back and coiled my ass cheeks and slammed my dick again and again into her shit hole.  We fucked her hard her body juddering and then she screamed out fucckkkkkkkk! all caps and was jackknifing and flipping wildly as we clenched her down and speared her wailing flesh over and over as she groaned deep in her chest with death like rattles interspersed with sudden gooodddaammnnnnn! as we continued to pound her box and asshole.  Veronica and I watched Debbie push up to her palms on the sofa cushions her head thrown back as she wailed and cursed her shattering ecstasy.  Veronica used the opportunity to clench her hands over Debbie's tits and crushed them into her chest as she ground her palms into her chest crushing and grinding her rock hard nipples as her hips lunged up off the sofa to spear her womb over and over and mine slammed forward to split her asshole in two.  It worked "I'm cummmmingggg againnnnnnn!—goddddammnnnnnnit!" she gurgled, wailed as her body flipped strongly again suddenly as her head would jerk hard spasmodically in all directions as harsh guttural moans escaped her clenched throat.  We worked her through her orgasm and she sagged down onto Veronica and they kissed deeply.  We pushed her to the floor and we leaned back on the sofa holding our dicks up.  She blearily gripped my dick and licked up the shaft and then sucked her lips off my dick.  She then did the same to Veronica's dick.  I had to ask her which one she liked best.  She smiled at Veronica.  "I love my pussy" but she then turned her head and smiled at me with pure slut in her eyes "But my asshole is so sweet—I love sucking my asshole off Barbara's dick" she breathily said as she then swallowed my dick head and slowly twisted her head right and left and then licked all around my dick head before again slowly twist, bobbing on my dick head.  So much loving atm action made my eyes roll back as I moaned out.  I was moaning at her slut soul and knowing I would soon be doing the same for her and Veronica.  I so love multiple partners.

 

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//  Here we see that Laura is moving south and Stacy is concentrating on Carmela's tits.  There are but so many sex acts so it is the variations that give it spice and verve.  I like how you state things.  That at first Stacy was kind of on her own but quickly got in synch with Laura to love Carmela.  I find that partner fucking almost always leads to this between women and men too.  Women especially want to bring their fuckee to heaven and do all within their power to do so.  With men it works if they are true bladesmen and have the skill to do it.  I am sure that Stacy is proving to her woman that she can give as good as Laura and is sucking those nipples extra good and deep.  Plus, I like how you show variation.  Laura knows that Carmela wants to be dp'ed fucked but she will have to wait because the fuck currently has taken it in another direction.  That is something only you do.  Other authors, once they start a fuck it will always go in the direction that they initially laid out.  You show passion and desires so often morph fucks into new and such exciting ways because they are unscripted.  This you capture perfectly.  You now capture the sounds of true fucking like only you do ["Unnggg . . . unnngghhh . . . oh shit . . . you guys are going to make me come . . . anngghh!  Ohnnggg!  Ummnngghh !"        " Ummmmummmummmm," Laura could hear Stacy smiling and humming at her happy task, trying to swallow Carmela's enchanting young breasts, squeezing and sucking them passionately, as she must do often, lucky girl, Laura thought.        She realized that she too was humming and gurgling excitedly as she pulled Carmela's beautiful black cunt lips open even farther than they already were and plunged her tongue as deeply as it would go into the squinchy wet pink meat of her pussy.]  You are simply the only author by far to capture all the different sounds we make while fucking or being fucked.  This was the first that alerted me that you were an unique talent.  Other authors have some sounds but they are the two to five over, over, over and over again.  I think I have made my point.  It gets to be ridiculous seeing the same sounds in maybe three or four fucks in the same story.  It is off putting after a while.  First, show some imagination and second, please, capture real life.  Then you do something that only you again show.  The women doing the gobbling making their own snuffling sounds.   Just the mechanics of working our mouths will make noises when it is stuffed with titty or cunt meat.  Then the sounds that women make when they are happy as they purr along devouring their women.  I get so tired of the silence that other authors leave their women in their stories.  For me, to hear my woman being loved making love noises and hearing my own snuffling and then here adding the snuffling of a third lover just makes my heart soar and sing and I love reading it in your stories.  Thankfully, I can always go back to your stories when stories lack so much of the magic you capture.

//  Again you capture the moment of penetration when you Carmela's hips lurching up off the cushions when she feels Laura's tongue penetrating her vagina.  You are the only author that captures this.  Other authors just say that their character starts eating out her woman.  You in each chapter capture those little moments that make sex so awesome Rad!  It is capturing these little moments that make your stories so special.  Then you capture the dynamics of multiple women lovingly taking their slut to heaven.  Other stories are so drab and mannequin and don't show how Stacy's reserve is cracking and is showing happiness that Carmela is responding so divinely to their ministrations and the reader can see her positive nature in being so happy that Carmela is receiving so much pleasure from Laura.  She started out catty and jealous but her love for Carmela is thawing her demeanor just like you have shown Deshona thawing over the years.  I love seeing the positive attributes of your women.  You show the ramping up that I so love in your stories.  Her cunt is being devoured while her nipples and tits are being mauled and siphoned.  That loving assault that only multiple women can give.   I like how you show Laura listening to Stacy snuffling as she devours Carmela's tits.  I so listen to all the sounds of sex around me.  I love the snuffling you are capturing here and the sounds of a sodden cunt being devoured or penetrated.  The sounds of the fucker and fuckee that only you capture.   I again am just so thankful that one author remembers to capture the total dynamic of fucking.  By capturing the whole picture you make the sex so much more devastating for the women in the story and for the reader reading along like here [Unh . . . unh . . . unh!" Carmela grunted, pumping wildly.  "Ohnnggg!"         "Yes!  Yes!" Laura heard Stacy chanting softly.        Together they held her and Carmela began to come in violent waves, groaning and churning frantically as the sweet spasms began to wrack her.        "Aauunngghhhhh!" she roared, flipping and surging off the sofa, almost throwing both Laura and Stacy to the side.        But they held on and swarmed back, clutching her heaving flesh, squeezing her hard as she continued to come.  There was something wildly, piercingly intimate and pleasurable about this instant, Laura thought, as she clung to Carmela's thrashing, quivering body.  She and Stacy barely knew each other, and yet here they were love-mauling their common friend, caressing her, sucking and fucking her into a sweet delirium of ecstasy, all three of their bodies linked in this delicious union as Carmela gurgled and gasped through the last, waning twinges of her climax.]  Sigh, your orgasms are just so Rad!!  You show the beginning tensing and coiling and then the devastating main spasms wracking her sweet flesh as her body bucks and jackknifes violently and then you show her body lightly convulsing through the beginning of sweet, divine aftershocks that makes ones womb melt and spasm so hard in pure fucking pleasure.  You make all this possible with words like "pumping wildly, violent waves and last, waning twinges" this takes the reader through the whole orgasm and basks in the pure pleasure searing Carmela's soul with ecstasy.  I love how you tell the reader that Stacy and Laura are having to clutch Carmela's body extra hard to stay anchored so they can continue their loving ministrations.  I have seen this hinted at from time to time by others but you bring it front and center how often you have to do this if dynamics require you keep the loving assault going full bore.  I like your little observations.  How you may not really know a woman but in sharing yourselves in loving a common woman between you just draws you together.  I can just feel new love bonding us in times like this.  Sharing so intimately just leads to women bonding and becoming intense lovers.  Sigh, your word pictures you paint of these two women loving Carmela just makes the reader fall into this love fuck and feel it in their deep neither regions.  How you have done this after so many chapters is really amazing.  It is over ten years ago I read your first story and I am still loving each chapter as I get to devour them.  Then going back and enjoying them again and again.

//  One thing I have always liked about your stories is that they don't end or fade out after the sex is over.  So often the story just ends or the women don't really do anything after the sex and the scene kind of fades out and then the new scene starts.  You allow your women to communicate and interact.  I love how we get to experience Carmela's stunned reaction to what her lovers did to her.  That is what multiple lovers can do to you.  You simply overwhelm your love victim and shatter her soul with pure fucking pleasure.  I just love you bringing it front and center.  You now give us that post coital banter that only you do.  Carmela is still giddy and wanting more and Stacy is happy but being coy letting her woman know she has needs too.  Just that happy give and take that lovers do when they are totally happy with each other.   It is so positive and I love you showing it.  I am smiling seeing their loving banter.  We now see that Laura is a lot like me.  I love all women but I am drawn to women of color first.  If I had to choose I would always go black or brown first but then I love all colors really.  I too look at the total woman like Laura here.  We see the total beauty of Stacy.  Her blond hair and dark blue eyes.   I so notice these things and how the skin color of white women is really varied and unique also.  I believe in loving all the colors so I keep my options totally open.  I love the color dynamics that Laura so loves and having multiple women of one color fucking a woman of another color is so fucking awesome.  Seeing multiple black women swarming my body as they take me to heaven over and over and then diving my face deep into their swollen black cunts and driving my tongue deep up tight black assholes sends me to the heights of heaven.  I love how you show the interactions of these women [She glanced briefly downward to see Carmela transfixed, watching them raptly to see what would happen next.  What happened next was that Stacy raised her hands to Laura's naked breasts and cupped them both, squeezing them gently.  "You have the boobs I always wanted," she whispered to Laura.        Laura leaned forward and kissed her sensual lips lightly, just a grazing kiss but a familiar and friendly one, an invitation to more serious, hungry kissing.  "They're all yours now," she murmured, looking down at Stacy's hands.]  I so love watching hot sex and I love seeing Carmela being like me.  You again show that pacing I so love.  One sex act has just been full speed ahead and yet you show it slowing down again so the ramping can begin once again.  Sometimes you go from full speed to full speed but usually with women it starts slowly.  With men I so love how they pass me around and fuck the living hell out of me like a fucking street whore.  Pounding their dicks deep and hard into my wanting cunt and asshole and driving their dicks wet with my juices down my throat as I caw and choke out spit.  But with women it is almost like you show here.  We just want to start slow and merge together so we can then ramp up to soul shattering orgasms.  It makes the orgasms so fucking strong and your stories so fucking hot.

//  I like the change of venue as they move to the bedroom and the large inviting bed.  One thing I have loved about this saga is how Laura can compare lovers.  Yours is the only story that has covered enough time to allow this.  [She kissed and sucked Stacy's neck, then her shoulder.  She raised her hands to Stacy's breasts and cupped and squeezed them.  They reminded her so much of Jonelle's, just gentle swellings really, with large nipples, though not dark like Jonelle's but instead creamy with this glowing peach-toned skin that invited her lips.  She was quickly kissing Stacy everywhere and sucking her big, soft, dusty rose nipples hungrily.]  I know of two other stories in the lesbian genre that are long by chapter count.  One is only covering a week.  It has many, many women and nothing like this.  Many encounters by the six or seven main characters but none of this comparing lovers bodies.  The other has covered many years and involves Hollywood and those type of female characters.  I don't watch much TV beyond science and history so I don't know these women.  Again no comparing of one angel's body with another.   Not only that, but I could not tell you really what these women look like in real life.  Since I have not seen them I have no idea what they look like.  And going from this story arc, I still don't!  I know if you had chosen to use real life characters you would have described them to give me their full features.  Now you give pictures but I was able to get a good idea of their build, basic measurements and the structure of their face, hair, legs and arms.  I have always loved how you show so much love with your characters by so lovingly describing them.  I can just feel the gentle love Laura is feeling for Stacy thinking of Jonelle and they way you describe her siphoning in Stacy's nipples.  I just feel and taste them in my mouth as I begin working my oral magic on them.  You so know how to make your fucks so romantic.  Other authors just have them almost woodenly move from position to position.  You show Laura's fuck hunger for this beautiful if reserved blond.  I love how she gets her body on top of Stacy's and grinds her body down feeling their bellies wallow and titties mash.  Instinctively lining up twats so they can mash, swipe and grind rub as groins swirl and grind in gagging love.   I so gag in helpless love at these moments.  Looking my lover deep in the eyes as our bodies hump in instinctive love.   Kissing her like Laura all over her face.  Seeing Laura love all of Stacy's body as she moves south.   One thing you never forget to show is how you love the entire body.  Planting kisses and rubbing all the way to the passion flower.  You are the only author who shows this body to body contact.  I lament not seeing it in other stories.  They just have them kiss the face, breast and pussy and avoid the rest of the body like the plague.  They miss so much by doing this.  You show that a woman's body is made to be loved entirely.  It makes your sex both hot, passionate and yet still intimate and embracing.  It so draws in the reader for this [Stacy had a beautiful pussy.  Laura was not used to licking and sucking a lovely pink pussy like this one, having been burying her face in black beauties for so long, but she realized that when you came down to it there was really no difference.  Maybe a minor aesthetic twist.   But eating this one was amazingly exciting.  It was long and had wavy pink lips and a rigid little white seed of a clit at the top, which she was quickly sucking and jabbing with her tongue, making Stacy whimper and raise her hands to her own small breasts, squeezing and twisting them frantically.]  I think I am exactly like Laura.  I am so deeply in love with the pussy that I am currently devouring.  I so love fucking multiple women as I find each of their pussies so lovely and endearing.  I even feel something with multiple men.  I find each dick so unique as I am sucking hard on them and feeling them sliding down my throat.  I so love to lick up and down a throbbing, hot shaft tracing the veins, wrapping my tongue around their girth as much as possible and running my tongue all over their cock head crown and glans before hard bobbing on their hard fucking shaft.  You always seem to be able to show ramping in your stories.  The build up ramps up for the reader.   Then the foreplay starts slow and then accelerates.  Then you show how fucking starts slow and then ramps up for the love kill.  I guess other stories kind of show this but not really.  Sex is just that way.  But you are able to bring it front and center in each chapter.  I am really impressed by our ability to do this well over three hundred times now.  You show this by Laura moving south and devouring some white pussy for a change and dearly loving it.  The way you describe Stacy's wavy pussy lips (only you do) and then attacking her little seed clit with loving sucks as one gazes first at that whitish organ and then feeling it on your lips and tongue as you deep throat suck it with hard and then loving sucks.  I so swoon devouring new pussy like this.  I will spend long minutes learning your pussy but eventually I feel that urgent need that fills Laura now.  The need for the love kill.  I am smiling as Laura inserts several fingers into Stacy's hot, cunt and starts to pound her squishy cunt with hard thrusts and is now voraciously sucking on Stacy's clit.  Another perfect example of the ramping that I so love.  Which always produces this ["Mnnngggiiieeee! " Stacy suddenly cried out, then arched and strained as deep shuddering gripped her flesh.  "Ohnnggggg!  Yes!  Yes!  Mnngggiieeee !"         Her beautiful lean body rose off the bed in a sharp spasm, then fell back, thrashing and twitching until the sweet spasms of her climax began to wane.        "Oh!  Ohhhhh !"        "God, she's as quick as you are," Carmela exclaimed softly, smiling and gingerly hugging Stacy's still-squirming body from one side, kissing her shoulder.  "I told you you two were alike."]  I so live to make my women cum like this.  I love to grip your hips and feel your body bucking and shaking wildly as your groans and cries of ecstasy fill the room.  I can just feel your body arching and that subtle change of angle and pressure of your cunt grinding into my mouth.  Gods I love watching and feeling your body bucking up off the mattress like here when my angels give me this.  Gripping your ribs and helping your body to buck up like this and then feeling the tension ease and help their bodies slam back down into the mattress and floor.  I don't do this all the time but the change up makes them cum so hard for me.  Sigh, you are so romantic the way that Carmela is holding and kissing her lover in total happiness in the pleasure that another brought to her lover.  I so love Carmela.  You are just so awesome how you show so many different women in your stories and make the each unique and different.  Carmela is so open and sharing while someone like Deshona and Amber would be so much more prickly to this situation until seduced into it where Carmela went for it.  I love all the different women you have put in your stories!

//  Wow, you really capture the dynamics of hot three or more fucking [Laura, her mouth still smeared and shiny with Stacy's pussy juices, slid upward, grabbing Carmela and rolling her to the side, leaving Stacy to sigh through the last moments of her ecstasy.  Carmela, without a word, quickly understood their priorities and enfolded Laura in her arms, kissing her ravenously.]  This is how you fuck with more than one partner.  It just moves and morphs as lovers give and take and take each other to the stars with mind ripping orgasms.  I am smiling seeing Carmela quickly getting into the new dynamic as they clench and rub and bring their mouths together and hugerily kiss.  I love tasting a cunt in a woman's mouth and I know Carmela is getting hot tasting Stacy in Laura's mouth.  Like you showing how the sex can morph so quick with Stacy still hitching and gurgling from her just finishing orgasm.  You mainly have Laura fuck one on one but you show you can capture this dynamic also.  Just more great story telling.  Plus, I get the bonus of you being so verbal in your stories.  I love how you capture the words of hot fucking.  Carmela here telling Laura she cums quick and she is going to make her cum quick now.  I am so surprised how other authors simply cut off dialog once the sex starts.  With het sex this is kind of normal or a lot less than lesbian sex but still even it has words between lovers.  I get so tired of the silence of other stories.  Women just like to talk and egg their lovers on and tell them how they will deliver hot loving and then doing it.  I am smiling as Laura siphons Carmela's perfect nipples and feels the fires raging even hotter in her belly.  I too know that feeling and get it from just rubbing against you and stroking your body hard with my fingers.  I just feel my pulse hammer and cunt flutter and clench.  Carmela sensing that Laura is ramping up moves South and bury her face in Laura's festering, clenching cunt.  I so know that hunger when I can sense my lover is close and I need to move south and deliver the love kill immediately.  I so love how you show Carmela giving her all for her lover [ Carmela took this very seriously and began to fuck Laura with two fingers and suck her clit wildly.  Laura wondered if she had ever come so fast.  Her body clenched, and a pocket of air seemed to burst inside her throat as a fierce uprush of hot coming wrenched her flesh.          "Auunnggghhhh!" she half-roared, surprising herself and Carmela too, her body flipping and jackknifing sharply as a crushing blow of coming shook her.  "Auunngghhh!" she roared again, still twitching and shuddering, almost gagging on the piercing second spasm, then sighing and going limp.]  This is how I feel when I am fucking my woman.  I want to give you the best orgasm I possibly can.  I feel you make sex so positive when you show this.  Other stories totally miss this dynamic I feel.  They may show it by the romantic nature of the story but you capture it in the sex itself which I so love.  Romance is great but romantic sex marries to it and makes both so much more.  I love how you show this orgasm and it is not like the first orgasm in this story.  I get so tired of getting hot when I see a great orgasm in a story and then lose a lot of steam so to speak when the second orgasm is exactly the same and then deflate when the third orgasm that the author tells is again exactly the same.  A while back I came across some stories that focused on Dakota Fanning and two identical twins in some show.  The sex was good and hot and had atm in it so I was fucking happy.  That first sex scene really hit me hard.  Then the second coupling was exactly the same and then the third.  Same orgasm with each woman getting strap-on fucked and the same exact vocalizations and the atm sex was exactly the same in the story.  It had six parts I think and I was almost bored by the last couple parts because the women were still cumming the same exact way as they had the fist time in part one.  You make each orgasm unique.  I love reading new chapter for many reasons.  Plot developments, pairings and seeing how the orgasms will be.  Each chapter is so fresh because of great plot development and because each coupling and resulting orgasms are so fresh and unique.  Sex has only so many variations really and it is how we fuck that makes for great sex.

 

//  I love how you show the aftermath of great sex.  We see Carmela's face all smeared with Laura's cunt juice.  I love looking down and seeing a sweaty faced smeared with my cunt or seeing a woman's face all covered in sperm all over her face and hair.  I never see this that I can remember in others stories.  I also like how you show Laura's head lifting off the mattress to look at Carmela and then thudding back to the mattress her strength limited.  I know that feeling so well.  I have the strength to look down or up and then I see something so fucking hot and my belly contracts hard as my womb spasms in hard aftershocks and my strength fades and I feel the back of my head hitting the mattress or floor as I moan out my spent love.  It is the little moments that you so capture that I love in your stories.  I love how we see how Carmela is so lovingly selfish as she is anxious to get her favorite fuck going ["Now we can do our chocolate sandwich," she said brightly, with a pixie but devilish smile.        Laura and Stacy looked at each other, half in disbelief.  Stacy smiled wanly.  "Selfish little thing, isn't she," she murmured, still unsmiling, though her dark blue eyes glinted with reawakening sexual fire.        Laura grinned.  "That's my darling Carmela.  Never a dull moment.  'Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me, I want to feel diiiirrrttyy!'" she chanted, quoting an hilarious line from an hilarious movie.        Carmela pretended to be glum, the corners of her voluptuous mouth turning down, making Laura want to rape it with her own.  "You guys are making fun of me."]  I am smiling as the delicious dialog that we get to see.  As I constantly moan I don't see this in other stories.  Once the fucking starts everything gets so quite between the women.  I would hate such a silent word if I had to start fucking without communicating with my lovers.  I just love the mirth and love that I see with this witty and loving dialog that I see in your stories.  I am just so into your dialog.  I so love this time of knowing that soon big hard dicks will be sinking hard and deep into my love fuck  holes.  It just kind of dawned me that this is kind of like Laura's first time with strap-ons.  It was with Rhonda and Yvette and it was so delicious.  To have Laura lose her strap-on cherry after so long.   Seeing her cumming so strongly and enjoying it so much after shying for such a long time.  That is how Infinity was.  She was dead set against it and made it clear that even Joann did not force the issue.  Being a client of Joann's kept her in check I think.  She loves dildo's but thought of strap-ons as so heterosexual  Kind of how I felt about anal fisting once upon a time being so gay.  She came over unexpectedly one night with me plowing Maria with my strap-on.  We have a keypad entry system that lets us know when a special angel is at the door.  I went and opened the door with my strap-on soaked in Maria's juices.  She could come in and do what ever she wanted I told her.  She followed and watched us fuck like hets.  She seemed amused but hot.  She then showed up some more and requested that we fuck het for her but made no move to join.  We would try to get her to join in but she was not interested until one night she was and she has not turned back.  She has really, really gotten into it.  Beginning of the week she was over again having Joann and Maria show her why she should leave Joann's old company and join their new firm.  We had fuck straight lesbo sex and rested and now it was time for the dicks to fuck.  I was dripping wet with need watching Joann on the bottom with Infinity straddling and guiding her dick into her dripping cunt and fully impaling her cunt on it and Joann slow stroking it deep into her womb.  Then Maria all excited stilling them and spitting into her asshole and using her middle finger and then index finger too to open her butt hole up and then roughly invaded Infinity's rectum and watching Infinity shake and judder as her asshole was slowly stretched out.  Watching Maria pump her dick slowly and seeing Infinity's asshole bowing out and then in with the strokes as Maria at first couldn't really penetrate her shit hole.  Slowly loosening it up and soon sinking her cock all the way into her shitter and seeing it start to get that dreamy asshole cream down to the base.  Infinity loves it rough and Maria started slapping her ass and pulling her long hair as Infinity gurgled, moaned and whooped.  Joann was busy pumping her shaft lovingly and then hard into her tight pussy and love siphoning Infinity's nipples down her throat.  They were working her good when Maria pulled out and kneed to in front of Infinity as I got positioned behind her and slammed my dick all the way up her butt hole as she cried out and swallowed Maria's dick and sucked hard on it as her atm pacifier.  She bobbed and sucked so good on the dick pounding the back of her throat.  Soon I was in front of her watching her runway model face all dripping in sweat licking up my dick I was holding up as her pink tongue slowly licked her shit juice off my dick and then swallowed my dick head with slow inching into her mouth and she slowly bobbed and twisted her head making my eyes roll back and making me groan out goddammmmmm.  The way she came so hard with my dick in her butt hole pounding hard as Joann slammed her womb with her dick head and Maria slammed her dick into her throat as Infinity jackknifed up and down and wallowed all over Joann.  Gods I love sluts as she got us on our backs and rode our dicks all the way up her cunt and shit hole.  Her bubble butt grinding and slapping our groins and thighs.   Watching her little titties flop and flounce and watching her cum first on Maria and then Joann's dick as sweat flew off her face.  She was so hot pumping up and down our dicks pulling our cocks out her cunt or asshole and dragging the dick head over her perineum and sinking the dick into her other fuck hole soaked in the other fuck hole's fuck juice.  We all moaned at how she pound her asshole on one of our dicks and then pull up and would settle between our legs and look at us with hot eyes as she bent her head down and sucked her asshole off our dicks telling us how much she loved sucking her asshole off our dicks and saying her shit tasted like sweet candy.  Then  moving to one of us she had not just fucked and guiding our dick into her cunt and impaling her twat on the dick that had just been buried up her shitter.  Gods that is so fucking hot.

//  I like how you give the little details in your stories.  The time has come for the strap-ons and they don't just magically appear.  We see Stacy going to get her strap-on and Laura getting hers out of her carrying bag.  It is a small thing but the small things add up.  Me being the kink slut that I am I love this next part.  [ Carmela nodded, without demur.  "We do a little 'master and slave'.  Hope you don't mind.  It's not politically correct, but we both have the wildest orgasms."        "I'll bet you do," Laura said, gulping a little in astonishment, but hiding it.]  I do this so much in my life and I find plenty of willing black women to totally "fucked up" as they like to say.  Maybe they and I are just attracted to each other.  I find that the ones who don't like it at first once they are seduced into it they can't get enough.  O f course they are constantly turning the tables and completely abusing me.  I also love having men fuck abuse me, especially black men.  I love feeling their power and watching their black dicks pumping hard into my mouth and throat and looking down or back and seeing their black, hard dicks sinking deeply into my willing fuck holes.  There is a kind of Gone with the Wind club up in the capital that I hope to go to soon.  I have an invite.  I fucked a black woman who goes to the home/club constantly and says I am a natural.  You just have to give them something that they can use against you in case you feel like exposing some of these powerful black women / men.  I had her help me fuck some middle school girls which she helped my fuck to complete exhaustion.  She took some photos with Kim's fifteen year old face buried in my pussy and my fist fully buried up her asshole.  I think they are safe.  I just love the abuse while I am being fucked.  Having black men slamming their dicks deep into my asshole and then "making" me do atm and then slamming hard and deep up my tight cunt and filling all three holes at the same time as their power buffets and jolts me until I am cumming so fucking hard yet again as I am choking and screaming around a dick lodged down my throat as my body is jackknifing and flipping wildly with pure fucking bliss as my love studs are slamming their dicks so deep and good into my exploding cunt and shit hole.  I am so happy that Carmela is so in tune with her inner kink slut and is not afraid to go for the brass ring hard.  I am smiling at your humor again.  Stacy reappears with her strap-on and sasses her lover about wanting it in both fuck holes and Carmela beaming happily fuck yeah.  Again and again you show us the mirth between lovers and, thus, fill your stories with happiness and pure positive emotion.  I am so happy that one author captures the exuberance of great sex.  Other authors miss much by not showing us women communicating and teasing each other.  This is what binds and brings women together and I am so thankful to find one author that knows how to show this.

//  Wow, you now capture something that I almost never see in others stories.  We find that Carmela likes to have her pussy spanked while being fucked up the ass.  I like it any time!  A few times ago I was at Hillary and Camille's place and I was up on the bed by their hips  and I was smacking both of their sodden swollen cunts.  They had masturbated with dildos and were primed when I barked at them to get those goddam dildos out of the way as they whimpered and shuddered for me.  I then proceeded to smack their cunts and tits so hard.  Cupping my hand at times to really smack their cunts hard as they wailed and humped up lewdly into my hard strikes.   Bending forward and slapping their tits very, very hard making them whiplash to the side or flopping against the tits twin and whiplash and giggle for me.  Sometimes moving up to slap their faces from side to side as they cried and pleaded for mercy which made me only smack them harder.   I barked at them to masturbate each other as I smacked their tits and faces so fucking hard until first Hillary cummed so fucking hard flopping wildly and nearly rolling off the bed which made me slap her ass cruelly until she finally groggily roiled over and started fingerfucking her sister now as she sat up and used her other hand to masturbate her candy cane clit.  Soon Camille was shrieking and screaming out as I slapped her face from side to side as she bucked and flipped for us dieing from pure fucking pleasure and pain.  Listening to her sodden cunt squish with her sister's fingers slamming fully up her exploding twat, Hillary's knuckles slamming into her swollen mound hard.    I have to give you credit for touching so many bases in your stories.  I truly never know what you will do next.  I love being surprised and then feeling my pussy getting wet reading your hot, so on target sex.  I like how you show Carmela getting into the rough sex to come.  ["Oh good, then I can spank the bad girl's pussy before we . . ."        Carmela looked excited and alarmed in the same instant.        "You may not know this," Stacy said, climbing onto the huge bed with them, "but your little black darling likes to have her pussy spanked while she gets fucked in the ass.  Makes her come extra special hard.  But I can't do both things very well at the same time.  We usually have to do the spanking, then the fucking."]  I like for me women to get into the role playing.  Stacy is going to spank Carmela's cunt nice and good and she is showing the trepidation and fear that she should.  I know I want it but I so need to get into the mood of the sex if rough sex is in the offing.  Again in other stories I never this kind of dialog at all.  I mean in all the years I can't recall another author that has the women communicating at all between themselves during the sex.  Setting each others pussies on fire with need.   Telling each other what they want or informing a new party to the sex what they like or what their partners like.  Here we see Stacy helping Laura to better understand the dynamics that Carmela's likes to help them fuck her to greater highs and to simply let Laura know what Carmela hungers for.  So positive again in your stories.   I just love seeing Carmela's eyes rolling up as Stacy repeats her threat of a pussy spanking.  She is getting into the fuck and it is so hot to read.  I always get into the kink, bdsm fucks.  Sometimes Veronica, Amber or Shari fall out of character so speak.  Instead of cowering and cringing they are smiling and crying out how much they love it.  A few weekends back Shari, Cindy and Tameka were over Dodie and Frankie's.  It started out with us white girls drawing straws to pick a nigger to whip and fuck and I got Shari and took her to a bedroom.  I stripped her clothes off roughly and proceeded to whip her with a belt.  She kind of ruined it for me when she started smiling and cawing out "more" and "I love it!"  I threw her to the floor by her hair and started to blister her ass, back and thighs with my belt but she was still smiling and grunting harder.  I stopped and told her this was a real thrill kill.  She needed to get into the act please.  She sat up on her ass and looked at me grimacing at her roasted ass.  I heard Cindy suddenly crying and begging next door as Dodie screamed out at her what a "fucking worthless nigger" general abuse  and "fucking boot lip" she was and suddenly I heard Cindy slammed into the wall several times as she cried and blubbered.  Then more curse screaming and racial epitaphs as I heard the sound of a flogger striking sweet flesh for a long time.  Then the sound of Cindy's body being slammed into the wall again and again as Dodie racially demeaned her and then more  shrieks as Dodie flogged her mercilessly.    Shari looked at me solemnly and shook her head yes demurely.  I spit in her face and slapped her hard as she now cried and whimpered "please, I love you" and "why are you doing this to me!" in that pleading tone that makes me so fucking hot.  Now her face a picture of pleading and fear.   She can so get into when she remembers to stay in character.  To be fair she rarely slips out of character.  I never do.  I love the theater of it all I guess..   I called her a worthless nigger and a fucking piece of black shit as she moaned and loved shook.  She can only suppress so much.  I gripped her by her hair and twisted my fist in it and jerked her down to the floor her head whipping down as I then wallowed her face into the carpet as she cried and whimpered so fucking hot.  I then whipped her hard up and down her belly and tits as she shrieked and cried beg tears for me.  I loved how her body would jerk wildly as my belt blistered her body and loud shrieks filled the room.  I was inspired by Dodie.  I meanly tilted her up by her short hair and roughly jerked her to her feet.  I then slammed her into the door repeatedly as it rattled and her heavy tits mashed into the door and flopped as I jerked her viciously back  as I banged her into the door over and over and then threw her back down on the floor and wallowed her face into the carpet as I spanked her ass.  I whipped her hard and long and then used my foot to harshly (but not to hard) kick her  ribs and used my foot to roughly roll her over.  I then twisted her nipples with mean hard twists and pulped her gourds.  Gods, this was so much better when my slut is fully in the game.  Soon I had my strap-on raping her cunt as she cried out for mercy and then only so slowly acted like she was being seduced into my slave as her legs clenched my hips and arms looped over my back as I nailed her to the floor over and over her body reverberating back into mine and then a scream of pure fucking pleasure by my ear as she cummed so fucking hard for me.  Then I took her asshole making her suck her shit off repeatedly until she cummed with full body spasms and death rattles moaning out her spasming throat.  The next night the ghetto girls picked straws and Tameka got me and soon I was wailing as she took her revenge for the grudge fuck Frankie had given her.  Gods she whipped, spanked and chocked me to heaven over and over as I "had" to eat her grinding cunt and mashed asshole in my mouth over and over and she nearly ripped my asshole in two and fucked my cunt to ruin. 

//  One thing I have always loved about your sex is you show the flow of great fucks.     To often other authors just say that the strap-on or dick is inserted into the woman's asshole.  It is just so unimaginative  It takes so much away from the story when they leave out so much.  You show Laura lubing up Carmela's asshole and then opening  it up with her finger.  I so love to drool spit or use cunt juice to lubricate your shit hole and  then open up with my finger(s) or tongue.  I so swoon feeling my tongue penetrating your shit hole as your sphincter pinches my tongue.  By actually showing us the fuck you draw the reader in.  I guess leaving a lot out will kind of forces the reader to use their own memories but by leaving so much blank it looks like a canvas with no paint.  You give enough details to get the reader hot and bothered.  We see how the fuck progresses with your prose.  You give just enough details to bring the reader into the fuck so deeply and then let us add our memories to the fuck to make it divine[ Now she was guiding the head of the greased dildo between Carmela's fantastic round buns and into the dark crack, helping it in with her fingertips, finding the aperture she had opened seconds ago, inserting, pushing . . .        "Unngghh!" Carmela gurgled and gasped as it slid slowly into her ass.        Immediately Stacy began slapping Carmela's pussy again, this time harder and faster.  Carmela's thighs quivered, and she moaned softly, stiffening a little as Laura pushed the strap-on dildo deeper.          "Ungghh!  Ohhnnnnnn !"         Stacy began to spank her pussy harder.  Slap . . . slap . . . slap!          "Oh shit!" Carmela gasped, her eyes rolling up again.        "Is it good?  Is it really good?" Stacy kept asking her, smiling now, the first time Laura had ever seen an actual broad smile break her face.]  I can just see my dick sliding up and down Carmela's perfect ass cheeks and then pushing deeper as I seek her rosebud for delightful taking.  Sigh, it is the sounds that are just he bomb.  Like I say other authors keep their women quiet during sex.  They are allowed to make cries during orgasm but never leading up.  The ramping up of sex that I adore is always done in silence.  Just hearing Carmela moan as her asshole is taken makes my temperature just rise and I can feel the fever taking affect when my whores moan and groan for me like this.  Plus, the communication!  We hear Stacy egging her woman on with hot words as her slaps on Carmela's pussy fills the room.  Just that egging on I know is making Carmela's womb contract hard deep in her belly which we can see by the eyes rolling back.  I really like it when my women talk potty mouth and makes me devour them even harder.  I am smiling seeing Stacy smiling.  I like how you show Stacy slowly thawing to this divine love fuck.  I have always felt that great sex opens so many doors.  You have shown how women can at first appear one way but once you get past their defenses you see a whole new woman.  Sigh, I so love kinky sex.   I can just feel my cunt humping up as it is slapped so hard or a paddle or whip is blistering it with searing pleasure and pain.  Looking down my sweaty, heaving belly and watching wide eyed as I watch your palm slapping hard into my soaked cunt and it makes squishy sodden noises and sometime sweat and cunt juice splatters as I moan like a street whore my head lulling to the side as  I love drool and my eyes judder hard in their sockets.  It is always cute when Laura falls into her auntie talk.  Sigh, the pacing is so perfect.  Laura is stroking her cock spoon deeper into Carmela's shit hole as she slips an arm underneath Carmela to pull her close as Stacy strikes her cunt hard with her hand.  So tender and rough at the same time.  This is one dynamic that mutilate partner can bring to sex.  One can take one tact and the other woman another tact.  Your control of pacing is so perfect ["Ummnnggeee!  Oh!  Ummngggeee !" Carmela shrieked softly, twisting and squirming but not trying to evade the blows.  But suddenly her eyes flashed wide open, glaring at Stacy.  Laura could see that there was a striking connection there, a signal, a clear sign they had been here before.  "You better . . . fuck me . . . before I come!" Carmela panted.  "Please!"]  We hear Carmela shrieking but softly.  Other authors are always over the top from the beginning to the end.  You know how to show fucks usually start more slowly and then ramp up.  Again, other authors never the give small details like how Carmela is twisting and squirming as her pussy is flailed and her asshole impaled.  Then you show that communication that I love.  We always see your women telling each other their needs and how the other moves to satisfy their need.  Plus, your story has another advantage here.  The time line of your story.   Laura and Carmela have been lovers but so have Carmela and Stacy.  Only time together would allow Carmela to communicate so with her lovers.  It takes time to learn your woman's likes and her hot spots.  The ability to just listen to a few words or how her body is reacting to know instinctively what to do.   I love the raw pleading we hear in Carmela's voice.  So many other authors just have flat dialog that I don't feel any emotion in their dialog.  No need or raw need.  Here I can just hear the pleading quality to Carmela's entreaties.  Only your stories have this quality of communication and it is always so on target.  This dialog just makes these moments come so alive and makes the reader care for them and feel their raw fuck hunger and how it is satisfied.  Only you do this.

 

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//  I so love sex and love with new combinations like Laura is experiencing here.  I went to a jazz club that many of my black lovers frequent.  They had a singer who specializes in Motown songs coming back in town.  I was going by myself since my babies are not into jazz and Dodie was busy with some of her angels.  I went in and  I immediately saw Tisa at a table with two good looking blond bucks sitting on each side of her.  I felt my belly lurch when I got a little closer and saw that they were definitely brothers with faces close to the same but not quite.  I walked up smiling and watched Tisa closely to judge her reaction.  I was sure she was planning on a night alone with her white male lovers.  I stood smiling and making small talk.  I saw the brothers eying me as I was eying them.  I felt my pussy clenching looking at their handsome faces and strong arms and chests shown off by their tight fitting shirts.  Show offs.  But I could see that Tisa saw them looking me over with interest and lust in their eyes.  I told them to have a good night and enjoy the show.  This guy could really belt out the oldies.  I picked a table near the wall and had a good view of the stage and the table where I could look at Tisa and her soon to be fuck mates.  I was getting comfortable when Tisa came over and sat down.  She looked at me with a perplexed look and asked why I didn't join them.  I told her I knew she wanted to have her brothers to herself.  She laughed and told me I thought to much.  We then talked about her dates, Mike and John.  A friend she had told me about Rochelle had fucked them and had nearly died she came so fucking hard and often.  They were twins and Mike had a ten inch dick and John had eight inches with a cute slight side twist.  Rochelle had said they nearly fucked her black ass in two.  I told her she was one lucky "puttie cat".  She rolled her eyes and told me to stop being "silly" and  to come to their table.  She gripped my hand looked me in the eyes and smokily told me that I would watch her get hammer fucked by her dates.  Then it would be my turn and then we both tag team our cocksmen.  She told me to plan to call in sick tomorrow.  I already knew that later this night I would feel dicks plunging up my fuck holes and black cunt jammed hard into my staving mouth.  I joined them and enjoyed the show flirting with the brothers.  I loved watching Tisa whisper in their ears what was to happen tonight.  The way their eyes lite with fire and their stares of wanton hunger so much clearer on their faces.   I was already trembling slightly thinking of watching up close big whites dicks slamming up Tisa's dark black body seeing those white poles fully disappearing up her beautiful black pussy and butt.   I followed them back to Tisa's apartment. 

//  Sigh, we were soon in her living room stripped naked.  I got in a chair as she got on her knees in front of her sofa and gripped their cocks and started to stroke them looking up with slut filled eyes at her buff white lovers.  She slowly pumped them and then latched her mouth around Mike's thick ten inch cock.  Her mouth clamped tight on the thick shaft and my belly lurched as I started playing with my slit and pumping my tits.  I melted looking at the interracial love before me.  She started to pump her head hard taking his cock to the back of her throat and bobbing hard.  She pumped hard and then moved over to John's dick and swallowed his smaller cock and sucked hard with her afro jerking with her head bobbing and loud slurping sounds filling the room.  She went right and left her spit roping to the white cocks.  I loved how she fondled their balls and would lower her head and swallow their nuts and suck on them in her mouth and pump her head, then licking up their hard, throbbing shafts to swallow their cock heads to start pump hard again.  She moved them over to where the kitchenette meets the living room.  She has a funky chair there.  Shaped kind of like a gentle wave.  She got Mike to settle into the chair and she straddled him and gripped his shaft and guided it to her cunt and rubbed up and down her slit making herself shiver and moan getting it wet with her juices.  She then stilled and slowly impaled her swollen cunt with this thick shaft.  She kept lower her pelvis until her ass cheeks were jammed into his groin.  I loved watching her gag and love swoon.  the back of the chair leans back and she placed her palms on Mike's chest as he leaned back and began to pump her cunt slowly up and down his thick shaft as he started to pump up making her whimper and moan deep in her chest.  John stepped to the side of the chair and gripped her afro and lowered her mouth to his waving cock and she swallowed it as she slow pumped her cunt on his brother's upthrusting dick.  They fucked slowly sensually for a long while.  Mike lifted her up and got up and John got on the chair and Tisa lowered her cunt and impaled her sloshing cunt on John's dick and they began to sensually fuck, at first at least.  Soon they were fucking harder as Tisa leaned forward and gripped the back of the tilted chair back that rode up.  She was now slamming her cunt down onto the dick that was slamming up hard into her cunt.  Mike was jerking his meat watching his brother take Tisa's pussy.  I loved how he patiently watched his brother getting Tisa's pussy.  Tisa was ripping her head around groaning constantly now her tits flopping and swirling.  Mike moved in and cupped her tits and squeezed her nipples hard as she whooped and slammed up and down.  I got up from the chair and padded over and fell to my  knees and guided his dick to my mouth and clamped tight on it and started to pump hard on his shaft.  I jerked and twisted my head on his dick.  I couldn't hold myself back from such beautiful fucking.  I sucked and pumped his shaft as I watched his head rock back and he groaned hard.  I glanced over and watched Tisa's face slashing and started shaking wildly and cried out she was cummmingggg and began to flip and jackknife as she still slammed her groan up and down on the dick impaling it.  She cummed with long rolling spasms of ecstasy gripping and throttling her body.   She rode out her orgasm as her face now dripped sweat and sweat ran in rivulets down her body.  John lifted Tisa up and she got shakily to her feet and Mike pulled his dick from my mouth and sat down on the chair and John guided Tisa back over to the chair.  They turned her around and guided her feet up between Mike's thighs on the seat and she reached back to grip the back of the chair. 

//  Mike guided his dick to her asshole and gripped her hip with the other hand and pushed her down as his dick started to penetrate her butt hole and then slide in as she shook and I saw eyes losing focus again.  She growled as his dick slide up her shit hole and he groaned out how tight her asshole was and gripped her hips now and worked her asshole up and down his dick as it sank ever deeper into her colon.  John had stepped up to me and I started to suck his dick with long sucks groaning tasting Tisa's cunt on his dick.  I watched Tisa's asshole at first bowing but now loosened up and Mike was slamming his dick hard and fast up into her colon.  He pounded her hard his thighs slamming up into her ass cheeks.  Her tits flouncing and whip lashing as she gurgled.  She slammed hard down into his pile driving thrust up into her shitter.  They would fuck hard and fast and then slow down so Mike could slide his dick slowly in and out her asshole sinking its full length up her shit hole. Tisa grinding her firm ass cheeks around on his thighs before riding slowly up his thick shaft again his dick now coated with shit cream. They fucked slow and fast a few times and after a slow rhythm Tisa lifted off his dick and settled on her knees beside the chair an lifted his dick.  She looked at her ass juice on his cock and moaned licking up his veined shaft with long, slow broad tongue strokes and then curling her tongue all around his thick dick head and glans.  She then started to suck on it with slow bobs of her head sucking her shit off his white dick.  She mounted him a few more times only to pull off and lick, suck clean again.  I was keeping John happy with me sucking his dick with enthusiasm.  I would suck with hard head bobs and then looking up at him slowly take his dick down my throat my tongue swiping the bottom of his cock and then licking his scrotum with my nose in his belly.  Tisa mounted Mike facing him and I looked over as they fucked with Mike's dick now slamming up her cunt.  I smiled and told John that Tisa's asshole was hungry for his dick.  He smiled down at me and straddled the chair and spit into her rosebud and then swirled his dick head over the spit and then pushed his dick hard into her shit hole and buried his dick into her shitter.  I kneed over to the side of the chair and watched up close watching their dicks plunge deep into her willing body.  Her tits were mashed into Mike's chest her head resting on his shoulders her face constantly slashing as she reveled in the dicks raping her cunt and asshole.  I loved how John flexed and pulled back to slam his dick fully up her asshole and then ripped it out and gripped her ass cheeks pulling on them making her asshole gape.  I loved getting close and seeing her almost perfectly round asshole with runnels around the perimeter of her bung hole pulsing wetly for me her asshole wide open.  We both drooled spit into her gaped asshole and he slammed his dick fully up her asshole making Tisa cry out in ecstasy.  They pummeled her a minute and John pulled out and walked up to where her head was jolting now as Mike slam fucked her cunt her body lifted up by her grip on the back of the chair again.  John lowered her head to his waving dick and she siphoned it into her mouth and she bobbed hard her head undulating up and down as she cleaned her shit juice off John's dick.  He went back to her asshole and slammed it balls deep back up her asshole making her shriek in pained ecstasy.  He did atm a few more times.  He was now gripping his dick at the base and slamming it deep and pumping his hips to keep it fully buried in her shit pipe and then ripping it out as her asshole gaped and clenched and then slammed it down through her wet gaping asshole fully burying it and then ripping it out pulling back six inches and then slamming forward with a hard clenching of his ass cheeks burying his dick fully into her again and again as Tisa sagged back down her tits mashed flat againt Mike's hard chest.  They gripped her body now and slammed fucked her so hard her head lurching up and forward with pummeling her body was receiving.  I watched her hands clench on Mike's head and her cheek pressed against his cheek as her eyes scrunched up and her face slashed.  I watched her whole body begin to shake and then suddenly she was wailing and crying out as her body flipped and jackknifed as much as it could with the brothers gripping and slam fucking her down.  Her body convulsed as she drooled and her eyes rolled back as her violently orgasm rocked her and shook her hard with dire bliss.

//  The brothers fucked her hard until the orgasm began to wan.  They got her up and guided her to the middle of the living room and John got on his back and Mike led Tisa over John and pushed her down as she straddled his cock and got on her palms.  I was back in the chair stroking my kitty watching the dick that had just plundered asshole still glistening with the liberal coating of ass juice fully bury itself into her tight cunt.  I moaned at the wicked sight seeing that thick cock now pumping fully up into her belly.  Mike got on his knees behind them and slapped her ass cheeks hard to still her and then  pushed his dick into her bung hole and then lunged his hips forward fully burying all of his dick that could go into her shit pipe.  They were soon slamming their dicks into her willing flesh.  I loved how her tits swung and whiplashed as her head whipped around and I could see her strength returning.  She rammed back into the thrusts and whinnied as they impaled her hard and she reveled in the pleasure that dp fucking gives one.  Feeling first the dick in your cunt making you crazy then focusing suddenly on the dick slamming up your asshole and then going crazy feeling their dickheads thudding over each other on that thin membrane between cunt and colon.   Gagging and feeling my head whip around as I can't focus on anyone thing as I'm being taken to heaven yet again.  The pleasure that I knew that Tisa was now feeling.   They fucked her hard with powerful thrusts of their hips slamming their dicks deep into her belly and asshole.  I was swooning seeing her body buffeted and her tits sloshing as her body jolted forward with the power of their bodies slamming into hers.  She slipped forward, got on her knees and turned around.  I watched with slitted   eyes as she gripped their dicks at the base and looked long at the dicks with a close inspection.  She lowered her mouth slowly to Mike's dick all smeared with her shit juice and sucked on the crown with long slow, soft twists her head before she began hard twists of  her head and popped her mouth off and croaked "asshole" and then John's dick was in her mouth and sucked hard on it bobbing and popped her mouth off it and smiled "cunt".  She went back and forth croaking "asshole—cunt" back and forth.  Mike then asked her in a throaty croak "Which do you like best—you fucking black cunt".  Tisa was gripping both of their cocks again and made a show of thinking and slowly lowered her head and swallowed Mike's dickhead and sucked on it hard with slow twists of her head.  She finally rose up smacking her lips "My asshole tastes so fucking sweet.  I love my cunt but I love sucking my shit off white dick better" she said sluttily lowering her mouth to Mike's cock and sucking on it again with slow long loving sucks.  They dp fucked her hard again and again as she cleaned off their cocks and they changed fuck holes repeatedly.  Finally, I could see that Tisa was approaching nirvana again.  She was straddling John with Mike pounding his dick into her raw, open asshole.  He was pulling his dick head to her sphincter only to plunge it fully into her colon as her body juddered and jarred forward.  Sometimes pulling out and looking at her gaping, clenching butt hole and then lunging forward hard slamming his dick fully up her colon making her whole body judder and wallow on his brother's hard body.  I felt my belly clutching hard as Tisa keened and groaned so gutturally and her face was now a constant slashing of helpless pleasure tearing her face into harsh grimaces and brief angelic looks before more pure pleasure again twisted her face with raw pleasure.  John had now gripped her tits and was hungrily sucking on her thick nipples his heels dug into the carpet to slam his dick into her cunt while Mike now straddled them to slam his dick down into her asshole pounding it straight down.  I know it was slamming into the dick plunging up her cunt.  Gods, that feels so fucking awesome.  Mike gripped her hips hard to help bury his dick fully into her shit hole.  Tisa's head ripped back and she gave this deep throated cawing groans as  her body convulsed and flipped wildly as I got close and watched her eyes shock wide open sightlessly as her body continued to convulse and then the brothers were growling and Mike almost shouted out "goooddddammmnnnnnnn!" as he slammed down and kept his dick buried fully in her asshole as it spewed hot bolts of semen up her butt hole.  John was slamming his hips with wild thrusts each time his dick convulsed hot semen flooding Tisa's cunt.  I loved how they all convulsed in wild counterpoint their bodies working separately as they shuddered and bucked.  I loved how they were all soaked in dripping sweat and Tisa's body convulsed up to shake wildly and slam down as a second orgasm shattered her soul as her clit responded to the cocks spasming dick seed into her womb and colon.  The way her face slashed and her teeth gritted and demented moans escaped her clenched teeth.  Finally, she came down from the stars as the brothers gasped for breath.  I loved how when they pulled out of her semen leaked out her cunt and loosened asshole.  John laid spent on the chair and Mike was prostrate on the floor with an arm over his eyes a goofy smile on his face.  Tisa sat down beside the chair and licked John's dick clean and slowly sucked the cock head clean and then lowered her body to lean over Mike's chest and gripped his now beginning to wilting dick and licked it lovingly before sucking it into her mouth and cleaning it clean of her shit hole.  I shuddered knowing that as soon as the brother's recovered I would be the one receiving such a great love fuck.

 

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//   One of the things I have admired about your works is how you are able to move the story forward, keeping it hot and yet not using all that many kilobytes to move the story forward.  The harem author has really long sex scenes.  Pages are devoted to each fuck and yet you are able to generate a lot more raw sexuality and sheer hotness in your stories with so much fewer words.  You are able to make each paragraph count in your stories.  You simply know  how to pace your stories and capture just the right details and nuances to move things forward and keeping them hot.  Sigh, this is a perfect example.  You have Stacy moving from kinky foreplay to shoving her dick deep into her woman's hot, tight cunt.  Sigh, only you use words like inflamed and gaping slit. Plus, your use of dialog and vocalizations during sex allow you to show the true fucking heat of great sex.  I can  just   feel through Carmela's grunt moan and her cursing that shaft sinking deep into her cunt.  I so swoon, gag and curse when I fell a hard shaft invading deep into my fuck holes.  Plus, you always remember to actually tell the reader that the strap-on is slamming deep up a fuck hole.  Other authors simply say that the woman with the strap-on starts fucking her woman and simply give no details and the sex just goes so bland without the details that you give.    [Stacy smiled and relented, sliding quickly into position.  She inserted the head of her dildo into the wet, inflamed, gaping slit of Carmela's pussy and shoved it in deep.        "Anngghhhh!" Carmela groaned, wincing as she felt the large shaft fill her cunt.  "Oh shit yes!  Oh fuck!"]  You do this throughout your story.  Over the years I have been so pleasantly surprised.  At first I was stunned at how good you write your sex scenes.  Now I have come to expect it and you never disappoint me.  I can't wait to see what will be in the newest offering.  I enjoy the character development and plot entanglements but of course it is the sex I finally need.  I am like a little girl getting a present the night before Christmas with your stories.  I like how you capture the back and forth of great sex.   You show how Carmela's writhing between her lovers is inflaming their lust and they are ramming her harder and harder as they all ramp up.  Only you capture this ramping up of great sex.  How it builds in steps.  Others are so bland in their writing they are simply not able to capture this.  You continue to keep the sounds of hot rutting flowing that keeps the sex so fucking hot.  I admire how you so capture the sounds and communication of great sex.  It really does inflame the soul.  Sigh, I see that Stacy has a lot of me in her.  Laura can see that Stacy is really getting into ramming her dick hard and deep into Carmela's tight cunt.  I have been told so many times over the years I get that hard, mean look when I am grudge fucking you.  You just get into the fuck and really revel in spearing your cock deep into her fuck hole and seeing her writhe, jerk and cry out in helpless pleasure which only makes me coil and slam my dick even harder into your clutching cunt or butt hole.  I love seeing that look myself when I am being rammed fuck.  Seeing a woman or man's face all slashed and snarling as they are slamming and spearing me with their cocks as they jerk my body forward or up and feeling them clutching me to fuck me harder and I am clutching them to pull them hard to me to feel our bodies merging, wallowing and jamming as we wildly fuck.  I know that Carmela revels in seeing that maniacal look in Stacy's eyes when she is fucking her like this.  You always give the information that the reader knows that this is a rough love fuck and not something that is just cruel that so many authors do [She rammed Carmela with her dildo, jabbing her groin up into Carmela's, grinning with an almost hideous pleasure when Carmela yelped and groaned.  But Laura, having been there herself, knew that Carmela was hardly suffering.  She was completely submersed in the sweet delirium of being sexually devoured and consumed by them, as she had wished to be, and each piercing thrust of the strap-on dildos into her body made her shriek with pleasure that could only be exceeded by the final fiery spurt of her coming orgasm.]  You make it clear that this is totally desired by Carmela.  I like how you always make this clear.  A couple nights ago I was prostrate almost on top of Maria as she slammed her cock into my spasming cunt piercing my womb repeatedly with piercing thrusts and Joann was straddling my hips and leaning forward on her palms and was was spearing her dick into my shit hole as I moaned and now tiredly cried out at random as my cunt and asshole blasted pure pleasure back and forth and I felt my tits wallowing all over Maria's our rock hard nipples poking and dragging as their hands clutched and gripped me hard.  Pounding and pounding me towards yet another crippling orgasm.  They were now snarling at me and Joann reached up and gripped my sweaty, lank hair and twisted her fingers in it and Maria gripped my throat with both hands sensing my orgasm cumming.  Suddenly it hit me like a hurricane as I wailed and bucked wildly as pure fucking pleasure consumed me yet again.  Then they were jerking my hair and choking me violently as they screamed at me that I was white whore , a fucking cunt and worthless nigger lover which made me immediately go multiple as my brain simply whited out with pure pleasure as Maria stopped choking me and urged me up and gripped my tits hard and started to suck and rake her teeth up my nipples back and forth as her hips bucked her dick in and out my gushing cunt and Joann continued to spear my shit hole with savage thrusts pulling so fucking hard on my hair with short hard jerks making my eyes roll back and spasm as I screamed my pure joy to the gods.  I finally came down with harsh aftershocks consuming me as archangels roughly decoupled from me and laid on their backs.  I loved feeling the big wet spot on my body as I slowly and tiredly licked and lovingly sucked first my cunt and then asshole off their love cocks.

//  You always have great sex in your stories but sometimes you show how sex just reaches the stars ["Unngghhmmmnniieee . . . oh!  Oh!  Yes . . . harder!  Ummnggghhh!  Oh . . . oh dear fuck oh shit unghhh unghhh!"        They were all lying on their sides, but the excitement of it all goaded Laura into rolling over on top of Carmela, pulling her over, so that Stacy was now on her back, Carmela facing her, with Laura on top, plunging her own fake cock into Carmela's asshole deeper with each thrust.        "Aoooohhnnnnggg!  Oweennggg!  Unnmmggghhh !" Carmela groaned, wincing, quivering, only seconds away from coming, Laura knew.        Her eyes caught Stacy's long enough to grasp that Stacy knew it too, and together they pumped and pummeled Carmela into an excruciating string of shrieking orgasms.        "AWWONNGGGG!  OH JESUS OHHHHH FUCK ANNGGHNNIIEEEE!" she wailed, her lovely hard young body writhing and squirming inside the hot sandwich they had formed, pinning her between them as they ravished her flesh with sharp, hammering thrusts.        The first wave of her orgasm left Carmela limp and whimpering semi-hysterically, and yet continued thrusting from both sides quickly had her peaking again, gasping and panting and flexing, her curvaceous black body sleek and supple in their clutching hands, her beautiful face torn by the fresh ecstasies they were bringing her to.        "Oh!  OH!  Yes YES!  AGAIN!  Ummnmgghhmmnnggiieeeee!  Oh!  Oh!"        "Yes . . . honey . . yes!" Laura heard herself murmuring into Carmela's delicious black ear while she again buried the dildo deep in Carmela's throbbing ass.]  I know this is long but this is just so fucking awesome.  I write these in fit and starts and I had a break here.  I had time to wonder why this hit me so hard.  The orgasms are super duper but I realize that the three way sex simply bowls me over when Laura is involved.  You are the only author that brings the wonders and specialness of three (+) sex to the printed page.  Just the flow of the scene you again show how it is ramping.  They are pounding the living shit out of Carmela and she is loving it.  I can just see her sweaty hair jolting with the force of the cocks slamming deep into her belly and bowels.  I can see their sweaty bodies slipping, sli+ding and grinding.  I have come to think that other authors almost put glass between their women.  The only part that touches is the tongue or strap-on.  You always capture that delicious skin on skin  contact and how you use your body and hands to love the whole woman.  One thing I like about your sex is you show changing positions.  Most authors in their stories just keep the women and men too in the basic beginning positions and leave them there.  Hopefully, a good fuck lasts a while and most of the time you will want to change positions some where in the fuck.  I love seeing Laura taking control and rolling Carmela on top of Stacy and now ramming her dick all the way up Carmela's shitter.  I can just feel my belly clench and nipples throb when I am watching my dick slide fully up my slut's butt hole.  Seeing it get all milky with her ass cream.  Slamming my dick all the way up her shit hole and arching my back and pressing forward to keep it buried up her shitter and swirling my hips to let her feel my dick deep up her colon.  I so make my women caw and groan in deep guttural pleasure as they feel my dick held deep up their shit hole.  Listening to her chuff and keen as I take her to heaven.   Or sitting right beside an angel as a fake or real dick is slamming hard and deep up her shitter often pulling that beautiful dick out and sucking clean before I guide back to her asshole and roughly shoving it in and then groaning along with my slut as it is again buried in her colon.  Plus, you show Carmela moaning and crying out and this is what inflames the fuckers to really ram fuck your woman.  It was your vocalizations that first capture me all those years ago when Laura and Karen had their first trysts.  I can still remember who is this author!  I was so stunned by the beautiful vocalizations I was reading.  It inflamed me like I know it was inflaming the women in the story.  You are making my pussy spasm here as Laura and Stacy get in synch knowing that Carmela is on the precipice of cumming hard.  I know they are reading her body and how it is shuddering and flexing and you show Carmela's cries of approaching nirvana.  Again this is fucking awesome!  Women express their coming ecstasy.  Only you capture this and you show it is inspiring Laura and Stacy to take Carmela over the top with their now savage thrusting into her willing flesh. Then you show that this is a golly whopper orgasm with the all caps screams of crushing pleasure.  What I love is you only use all CAPS rarely.  I know several authors that have some great sounds and shouted words of cumming but it is always all caps and it is the same words and sounds during every sex scene.  Sure they are great in the first story but each succeeding story after the first one loses steam as the sameness quickly becomes boring and even distracting to the sex.  I simply never know what kind of orgasms your women are going to have.  Just like real life.  It is how the woman comes that makes sex so fucking awesome and you capture this.  Sigh, Carmela is so like me and you capture how a great hammer fuck can so easily go multiple.  I have a big strong body but I love how you show that usually you are temporarily squeezed out of strength. Showing Carmela for a long moment prostrate on Stacy but how getting cocks pumped into your two fuck holes can so quickly revive you as your body takes over and you instinctively push back into the dicks ravaging your loosened asshole and stuffed cunt.  Your fingers clenching into the sheets or rug and jamming back as you gag and sweat is dripping off your face and tits as your body is again stiffening and I feel my eyes bulging out and teeth clenching as yet another orgasm is making me scream and jackknife wildly like Carmela here.  Sigh, I thank you for showing this glorious fuck with all the details that only give.  How even within a fuck it can ebb and ramp again to pummel your body with the bliss that only fucking brings.  I thank you for having Carmela screaming out "again" as she is cumming so hard again.  Only you give us these small true life details that make sex special.  I am just happy that one author doesn't let me down in her sex scenes.  I can just see Carmela's body surging and bucking up and down as her lovers repeatedly bury their pricks into her spasming and clutching fuck holes.  I simply loose my mind during such times as I feel my mind first concentrating on one fuck hole and then the other and spastically bouncing back and forth as they and my throbbing aching nipples are pulsing wildly as pure pleasure is simply burning in my veins and muscles as I twitch and jackknife out of control as I wail and sometimes slam my fist into the mattress as I am losing my mind with pure fucking pleasure.  You can be so romantic as Laura murmurs into Carmela's ear as she still plunges her dick into Carmela's sweet spasming asshole prolonging her pleasure.

//  I like how this fuck session is so intense.  Because this is satisfying a primal lust of Carmela's she is so into the fuck and is cumming so hard and often.  I like how you are showing her women giving her exactly what she wants because they love her so.  I am in awe seeing Laura and Stacy taking Carmela towards a third soul searing orgasm.  When you enter such a wondrous zone it is truly magical.  You  are simply the master!  You show how sex has ebb and flows even within the hot fuck.  You show Laura and Stacy now now sliding their dicks deep into Carmela's fuck holes but with slow sensual strokes.  I love that time of backing off and I am floating and feeling strong aftershocks as my lovers slowly stroke their dicks into my spasming fuck holes.  Lying prostrate on Dodie or some strong woman or man's hard chest and groaning with long sighs as their dicks stroke my trembling cunt and clutching asshole.  You capture this.  Other authors would simply keep fucking wildly or stop the sex scene because of lack of imagination.  Plus, you actually let us hear Stacy chuffing from her hard fucking of her lover and seeing the fire in her eyes.  I love seeing that spark in a person's eyes and knowing that I am going to be fucked so hard.  The you show the fuckers actually reading their fuckmate and seeing if more is possible.  Women are so special and I love you showing this so clearly in your works.  You capture pure fucking heat and romanticism at the same time.  You are remarkable.  Plus, you show how it can be so fucking subtle.  Carmela clenches her thighs and begins to instinctively swirl her hips into the stalks filling her fuck holes.  I am just amazed.  Not because you have written this but because you are the only author to show the small facets of sex.  It makes the orgasms so much more fucking intense and satisfying.  Your readers are truly fortunate to have you in their lives.  This reminds me of the last time I was with Eric and Anthony.  They had hammered fucked three womb shattering and muscle rending orgasms out of my straining body.  I was now lying with my butt on Eric's groin my hands beside his head as he pumped his dick into my worn out asshole and Anthony was in front of us pumping my cunt my legs in the air guided by Anthony's hands at times to keep them up and my fuck holes opened up for pumping.  I was just floating like Carmela enjoying the pumping and basking in their maleness and enjoying the flutterings and twitches I was feeling and not expecting any more orgasms.  Groaning and cawing out my pleasure softly.  Just enjoying watching Anthony's face grimace and sort of snarl and the sweat dripping off and twisting my head  and looking back and  down at Eric looking up at me smiling as he pumped my shitter.  Anthony then tilted me back by pushing my legs back and Eric's thick dick slipped out my asshole and Anthony jammed his eleven inches hard up my shit hole and pumped it savagely before pulling and tilting my down so Eric could again squire my asshole and Anthony slide his ass juice covered black dick fully up my cunt making it spasm a little.  Still no orgasm coming but I loved the lewdness.  Back and forth I was tilted sometimes Anthony getting up and stepping forward after stroking my butt hole and gripping the back of my head and jerking forward as I swallowed his bulbous cock head and he helped me bob on his thick, veined shaft as I moaned tasting my sweet shit and felt my sweaty lank hair jerking .  Sucking clean before he again impaled my cunt.  Sometimes feeling Eric slip his dick up and pounding my cunt as I sucked his brother's cock clean of my shit juice.  This  continued with their cocks in various fuck holes and I was looking up at Anthony as he slammed his inches into my cunt and Eric was gripping my hips to slam me forward impaling me fully on their black dicks.  Anthony saw and croaked out "The goddamn white cunt is going to cum again!"  He had seen my eyes flare and my whole seize up and he knows me so well know now.  Immediately, Eric reached up and around my body and gripped my tits and started to pulp squeeze them knowing me so well too.  They fucked me harder and more deeply their dicks slamming deep into my belly.  All different variations of dicks in my fuck holes.   I loved Anthony pushing more forward and back and slamming his dick into my puckering asshole and raping it with his eleven inches and then roughly pulling out and now standing beside me and gripping the back of my head with both hands to slam my mouth on his dick his thick cock head slamming into the back of my throat making me choke and drool spit all over his dick hanging on it with thick strands of spit that broke off and soaked my neck, tits and belly.  Eric now started slapping my tits hard with his lashing hands making them whiplash into each other and jiggle around before he slapped them again one and then the other.  I loved how my tits whiplashed and body jolted.  I was sucking Anthony's dick when Eric growled he wanted to fuck my cunt with me facing him.  Anthony backed up and I slowly turned around and pulled his dick out of my asshole and looked down seeing his thick dick all covered in my ass juice and covered with my cunt juice that had run down my perineum.  I ran his dickhead up and down my slit and circled my cunt hole.   I looked down as his dickhead slowly disappeared in my pussy and looked up at Eric's intense eyes loving seeing his dick going straight from my asshole sliding fully up my cunt.  I leaned forward and he looped his arms around me and started to slam fuck my cunt with wild thrusts.  Soon Anthony gripped my hips and we stopped fucking and I gagged feeling him impaling my asshole with one slow impaling thrust.  Now I was slammed fuck and Eric pushed me up so he could voraciously suck my nipples.  Soon I was cumming so fucking hard as I wailed and jackknifed wildly as Eric again crushed my tits into his hard chest as I cawed and groaned gutturally into his ear as I had a second orgasm feeling my womb pierced and colon ravaged and then Eric's head rocked back and he arched his back and he slammed his dick fully up my cunt and held his dickhead in my womb as it spasmed and jerked his dick seed into my shredding womb.  I was totally fucked out again as Eric ran out of steam and Anthony slowed.  He pulled out and told me he wanted to cum in my throat.  I looked at him weakly and thought why didn't you cum in my asshole dammit.   Can't you see I'm fucked out.    Looking at his dick jerking on his sweaty belly though again filled me with strength and I weakly dismounted his brother and laid my body across his strong chest and lifted his dick and started to pump and suck on it with loving bobs and locked lips.  I sucked him for a few minutes and then moved up on my knees and extended my tongue fully and took his dick down my throat as he growled out what a fucking slut I was.  He groaned and cursed as I pumped his dick up and down my throat  drooling out spit on the up thrust of my head using the spit to help me pump his thick cock.  I did this until his hands clutched on the sides of my head and jammed my nose into his belly as his hips lurched up and and I gagged feeling his dick jerking four times as it spasmed dick seed down my gullet and to my stomach.  Gods I was one happy slut as I choked out spit and semen and drooled it all over his beautiful black cock and then happily and lazily licked and softly sucked clean. 

//  With your judicious use of dialog you propel the story forward [At this Laura saw a rare smile cross Stacy's face, and she began accelerating the pace.  Laura followed.       "Oh . . . yes . . ." Carmela panted.  "I think . . ."        "Oh yes," Laura grinned.        Stacy actually grinned back at her.  "Oh yes.  She's going for three."]  I just love how you show subtle.  Carmela starts to croak out she is cumming again but her body overwhelms her ability to continue speak.  So subtle and perfect and only you capture these little things.   Seeing and letting the reader see Stacy thawing and now smiling as she is anxious to take her woman to yet another orgasm.  I so know that thrill of knowing that I am going to take a woman to yet another orgasm and knowing it is simply blowing her mind with wonder and pure fucking pleasure.  Only you use dialog to move the sex forward.  This gives the small breaks in the action to let these details soak into the conscious and then prepare the way for more hot fucking sex.  You do this so well using dialog, word choice and great action sequences to make you sex simply wondrous to read and makes my pussy so fucking wet.  Especially when I am masturbating to your stories!  Sigh this is why we fuck like rabid animals for orgasms like this [This one took a little longer.  Carmela had expended the first, easy flush of her sexual release already and had to grind and shudder toward the third explosion, but by now all sense of time was thoroughly obliterated for all of them, and Laura settled into a firm, pumping rhythm in synch with Stacy's hard thrusting from below, until Carmela again began to whoop and gasp and gyrate more and more wildly.       "Ungghh!  Anngghhh!  Ohhnnmmggg!  Ungghh!  Yes!"        By now they were simply one synchronized orgasm machine, three become one, surging and grasping and pumping and squirming, both Stacy and Laura pinning Carmela's writhing body between them and striving to bring her to her last, thrilling, shrieking moment of pure ecstasy.  And it was almost there.  And then it was there.  Carmela let out a sharp, whinnying cry and went into convulsions.        "Anngghiiieeeeeee!  Oh shit oh Jesus oh shit!  Anngghiiieeeeeee !"]   I like how you show us that Carmela thinks she will cum immediately but her tired body needs a little more loving to reach orgasm.  I so know those moments of waiting for your asshole and cunt to once more immolate themselves into scalding ecstasy.  Feeling that tension and then suddenly it snaps and I am once again screaming and jackknifing wildly as I clench and spasm in perfect womb rending bliss.  I just love your details as you show Laura and Stacy falling into a perfect synch of pumping shafts sinking their dicks fully into Carmela's shaking and groaning flesh.  I so love looking down and seeing a dick slamming deep up my slut's cunt and watching my strap-on fully disappearing up her shit hole with my jackhammer thrusts as we take her heaven.  Then you show the actual orgasm hitting out of no where and she is once more immolated with pure fucking bliss her face I know rent asunder with wild grimaces, teeth gnashing and or eyes spasming or shocking wide open.  And as always the divine screams of pure fucking bliss.  Only your sounds pass the test.  I mean it.  Not one other author has come close to capturing the sounds of female rutting like you do.  How you do it chapter after chapter is a wonder to me.  Sigh, I love reducing a woman to nerveless, sweat covered slut like Carmela here.  I just as much love watching it happen right before my eyes so I can bask in all the hot fucking.

//  I like how you end the chapter with some humor with Laura reflecting on their language and how they are not religious.  I have always loved your subtle humor.  You then end with the wonders of multi partner with Stacy and Laura moving over on the bed so the hot loving can continue.  More love is about to happen as the chapter ends.  How perfect for a perfect chapter.  Especially with this as the last lines ["Mmmmm, you're more fun than I thought you'd be," Stacy murmured into Laura's cheek, squeezing Laura's breasts and kissing her neck.  "I want to fuck you."        Laura smiled, her hands running all over Stacy's lean, beautiful body too.  "I'm sorry our little chocolate sandwich didn't try to get us all together sooner," she murmured back.        They glanced over to see Carmela smiling at them with a bemused, half-destroyed, but very pleased expression on her smiling face.]

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