A Fan's Notes

(reflections while reading Laura's Story)

[used by permission]

 

 

Chapter 318:

// This chapter starts with a couple of nice dynamics at play

//  This chapter starts with a couple of nice dynamics at play.  I so love this time that you show.  The sweet lassitude that fills one after great fucking.   I am so there as Laura is lazily tracing a finger up and down Bonnie's back and ass as she lies spent on the bed.  I so love to always trace your body and feel my fingers rising and falling as I trace the lines of your body.  I especially like doing this after a hard sweaty fuck and I feel your perspiration slicking my finger as it glides along your body.  I will sometimes get up on my knees and start to stroke, rub and trace your sweet body.  I can just feel my finger gliding along Bonnie's sweet back and pressing a little harder as it flows over her ass cheeks.  I so love to play with a woman's ass.  I usually soon find myself bending over and kissing and nipping your ass and then finding my lips traveling down into your ass cheeks and then pulling open to lick, suck and then tongue drilling your asshole swooning as I feel my tongue snaking into your shit pipe and worming and twisting tasting your sweet ass candy.  I like that I get to think such thoughts with you because you are the only author to give us this sweet down time between fucks where you just lazily stroke and trace your lover.  With others it is sex and then the story is over.  The second dynamic that you show is the caring of women for women.  we never get to see women actually revealing themselves in other stories.  Other authors give us background information but never any true sharing of their inner thoughts or doubts like [Bonnie smiled and opened her eyes but did not move her head off the sheet.  "You think every part of me is beautiful," she said, drowsily.  "How can I believe you?  I'm just a poor little pickaninny who works in a sandwich shop.  How can I be beautiful?  How come I ain't in the movies if I'm so beautiful?"]  I so feel for bonnie.  I think she is beautiful.  There are so many "beautiful" females always trying to make it in Hollywood or on the runways and only a few make it.  luck is such a big factor.  Most of us just have to make a life for ourselves.  I do wonder if bonnie truly applied herself in school.  I find so many youths today (and probably in my time) just don't apply themselves and then they find they don't have truly marketable skills and are then in Bonnie's situation.  I just hope she is a hard worker and she will advance if she has a good boss.  Else, move on and find someone who truly wants to work with and promote talent when they meet it.  I just hate seeing bonnie calling herself a "pickaninny".  I hate seeing anyone beaten down.  I am just happy that Laura is there to give her pleasure that only great fucking brings one.  I feel I can so face the world and strive after I have been fucked good and hard.

//  it is cute how we see that Laura is distracted from furthering the next round of sex by Bonnie's words.  She is like me in that she hates to see women who are down on themselves.  I always want to buck you up when I hear such words.  You are now able to do something else that is cool.  In fact you are the only author able to really do this.  You show Laura comparing Bonnie's self image with amber's self image.  This is just so cool.  Only by creating a universe that has time actually flowing in it can have the main character comparing her lovers.  It is so cool seeing this.  It is so true that money does tend to give one a very positive image of oneself.  Money makes life a lot easier and not having it makes it tough.  if they had been born in each others stations I can guarantee that amber would be saying exactly the same thing as bonnie.  I am just so happy that I have an author that shows such dynamics and then has a character who truly cares.  It pains her to hear Bonnie's words of semi defeat.  What really makes me smile is her wanting to help.  I love reading of characters who care and try to help.  She offers to get a friend to get her a job.  That is just so cool to read.  I get to do some of the hiring and it kills me to read resumes that so clearly say please hire me and let me prove myself and I can't because so many more have the qualifications for the job.  It so cool to read Laura helping without strings attached.   One theme of a lot of stories is a woman using her position to help but expecting something in return.  Makes for great stories but I like the positive in stories too.   I read somewhere that the true measure of a person is when they do something for a person and expect nothing in return.  You make Laura that kind of person.  Thanks.  I hope she can get bonnie that city job.  What is really, really cool is that you are showing great character traits and still show Laura stroking and now massaging Bonnie's body.  I love post coital time when you are stroking and squeezing your lover in that relaxed way that says you are bonding and yet you both know that soon you will be rutting again in heated fucking. 

//  you show that with [Bonnie nodded and looked serene.  "You stopped," she said, smiling lazily.       It was true.  Laura had stopped rubbing her delicious back while she cogitated seriously on job opportunities for Bonnie.  She resumed, leaning forward to kiss her between the shoulder blades.  She let her lips trail along the smooth, hard flesh below one of them.       "How does that feel?" she whispered.        "Feels like my pussy be getting all oily wet," Bonnie giggled softly.]  what is really so cool about this is that you are the only author to do this.  This coming alive again after a great fuck.   One shot stories always end with the copulation because that was the point of the story to begin with and thus is fulfilled with the initial fucking.  the other multipart stories I have found simply don't show this.  They may fuck a long time but never rest and then fuck again.  There is always a parting then maybe longing and coming back together but never the sweet post coital time that so quickly morphs to hot fucking again as love once more stirs.  I miss this dynamic and wonder why other authors don't show this.  I guess they are telling a sexual story while you are telling a life story now that I contemplate it for a moment.  A couple of nights ago Joann and I had been fucking so hard.  she ate me out with wild gusto and then we tribbed in classic scissors and I came so fucking hard as I jammed, squealed, twisted and jackknifed as she rode my cunt to ruin as it spasmed and convulsed fucking bliss to my spasming eyes and cawing throat.  she then rode my face as I gobbled wildly and came so wet and hot as her juices filled my mouth to overflowing and I looked up seeing her titties quake and roll as her body jolted and swayed as she groaned so gutturally.  We then rested and cuddled and I was soon stroking her back just like above.  I so love to stroke and rub my cheek up and down her back and feeling her sweat on my cheek.  I am so an ass girl.  I worked her back and got straddled over her knees and was bending over kissing and massaging her bubble butt.  I loved her moans as I licked and kissed and got my fingers into her crease and spread open and began to lick and drool into her ass crease and licked up and down with broad tongue strokes and made sure to let her feel my tongue on her rosebud as it clenched and puckered.  Soon I was tongue drilling and then French kissing as my tongue invade her rectum and soon I was tongue fucking as she humped up.  I kept drooling into her shit hole and soon I had three fingers rotating and pumping.  I was stroking her thighs and ass with my free hand when I heard my baby moan out "fist my asshole ba-beee".  How could I refuse such sweet words.   I was swooning as I drooled more of my spit into her asshole as my now four fingers and thumb worked in and soon I was in up to my third knuckles as I watched her sphincter stretch and bulge around my knuckles and then I groaned as my hand slowly twisted, pressed into her rectum and I felt that warm heat envelop my hand.  I smile remembering her asshole quaking around my hand as I slowly worked in and formed my love fist.  Slowly stroking deeper as she keened and quivered.   I so swooned as I looked down seeing my whole wrist disappear and appear all glistening with ass juice on the out stroke.  Slowly I worked and soon I was concentrating as I stroked my fist deep up her shit hole and deep into her belly as she gurgled and I watched my slut roll some and begin to massage her tits with one hand and masturbate her clit with the other.  Gods it was so perfect as I hunched down and rammed her asshole up my forearm as my fist twisted underneath her ribs.  I kept pumping as I watched her masturbate and soon she was stiffening and jerking and then divine load torturous groans were cawing from her throat as her body was jackknifing on my fist buried in her belly as her legs kicked and spasmed and hands worked her tits and clit with expert self love as she cum and cum with sweat rolling off her writhing flesh.  I so love feeling my woman going limp around my fist as it strokes the last ergs of pleasure from her flesh.  She begged for me to keep it deep in her ass as she came down and keened and juddered as I snaked it down her colon and through her sphincter as it produced aftershocks and seizures of pain that is in and of itself so fucking pleasurable.  The perfect balance.   I rolled her on top of me and used my ass slicked right hand to run through her hair and stroke her back as we kissed in languid love before we suckled her ass off my fingers as went to sleep the sleep of spent angels. 

//  I am really besotted to see all this dialog here.  I know I carp but I can't help it when I read other stories and the characters don't talk beyond the initial seduction.  Here we see Laura contemplating getting bonnie a decent job and how bonnie in her sweetness is grateful and still a little disbelieving.  I have to smile as the laments a little at not having Laura more to herself.  I sometimes feel that way but try to control that feeling.  We need to let ourselves soar and find as many partners as possible.  I so swoon when new women come into my bed and when I get to fuck angels together.  I so live to fuck hard with many partners and feeling all my fuck holes being hammered hard at the same time.  Bonnie is so pure and sweet in her wishing that Makeeda didn't already have the majority of laura's time.  I just wish she would share bonnie with Makeeda and then they would be rocking all their worlds!!!!  Like how you work in a little detail like Laura pinching Bonnie's hard thighs and we find out just how tone Bonnie's body is.  I so love the little details that you tell the reader.  I get so tired of the mannequins in other stories while you are always giving us new little neat facets to your women that sprinkle throughout your stories.   I have read a few sweet one shot stories where a character helps another through simple decency and beginning love.  But in the multiple part stories it is nada, nope, zip.  It is funny that when they can pursue such topics because of the containing story they simply don't.  I like how you aim for so much more than simply sex in your stories.  This again makes them so much more like real life.  I like seeing the hope that bonnie is beginning to feel over getting a better paying job.  Unfortunately, it takes money to live comfortably in this world.

//  I guess I have made it clear that I love sex and a lot of it.  I love reading and watching porn.  But I do get tired of the stories that do not offer more sometimes.  The one shots I can understand.  No one seems to want to give more than the others before them but one shots don't allow for much development.  A multi part story though can delve deeper and only you show this.  Women like me and Laura crave and need new women in my life but this comes with a price sometimes.  Only you show this.  New love can make one starry eyed and wanting to focus only on that person.  I can't have that and have learned over the years how to see this and how to deflect and educate.  Just like you show with Laura.   I love how you show Laura seeing this and gently helping bonnie to see the truth.  Other authors just seemingly have mindless women fucking and having a perfect understanding all the time.  I seek and find women who are free loving and this helps but with some newbies I must show them the truth like Laura here and some I have to stop seeing when they can't understand my need for freedom and that I already have my archangels in my life.  Wow, I am just amazed how you take it beyond sex like no other author.  [This rang an alarm bell deep in Laura's mind, alerting her to an issue she meant to revisit at the first opportunity.  Over-dependence on her attentions by any of her lovers was a red flag for Laura that she sought to lower as quickly and diplomatically as she could.  Fortunately, in Bonnie's case, if she could get her a better job, with perhaps more upside potential than the sandwich shop one, then Bonnie's life would be fuller; and she would probably attract a wider selection of sexual partners, probably of both sexes, than she did now.  Laura found her so compellingly simple, sweet, and sexy that she could not see how this could fail to be the case.        "You just need to branch out," Laura murmured, nuzzling her lovely black ear.  "Find some other bed buddies . . . you know . . . like me."]  bonnie is smitten and Laura is doing it and yet she goes further by wanting to improve her life situation.  That is just so freaking cool.  Wanting bonnie to have a "fuller" life.   I do have to agree that the better one finds their economic situation the better our sex life can be.  If one is simply barely surviving and working hard for that it has to limit you sexual possibilities.  I am just thankful that I don't have to worry about money.  I so love reading Laura's gentle ways.  I so know stroking a newbie lovingly and talking softly to her helping her open up and explore all the joys that life has to offer.  I love reading you dealing with these issues.  This makes your story more than the other multipart stories.  Like I say, I love sex but having the extra things that you have just make your stories so special.  I am smiling at bonnie wondering if Laura is only pushing "lesbo" experiences and Laura telling her that sport fucking guys is okay.  I find nothing wrong with fucking guys as thrill fucks but I just know that they don't have anything to offer beyond the sack.  I get so tired of the male ego.  I love men who are just out to have great fucks and aren't into trying to control me or any other woman.  I know there are a lot of cool guys out their but I am not interested in them.  only women can give you the total brass ring.  I do have to agree with bonnie that most men are losers.  I try to find the men who are great in bed.  I let my bi angels find them for me or try investigate and see if they are good like I did recently with Nirita and mike.  Since I am not interested in anything beyond sex I don't have to usually worry about any odious male ego issues.  I love Laura giving bonnie all the options. 

//  I love hanging with Anthony and Eric.  they are just cool.  They are male and charming but don't try to rule and oppress anyone.  I was out with them last Friday night with Tisa at a bar at the ocean front.  I was Eric's date and it was cute watching our waitress obviously coming onto the brothers.  It was humorous her flirting and yet giving me and Tisa the eye looking a little afraid.  She couldn't help herself and I fully understand.  They are devastating good looking and witty.  Her name tag told us her name was Faith.  She was a Hawaii girl with other races mixed in.  We asked her to join us when she hinted she was about to go on break.  We then learned she is Hawaiian, Japanese, English and Irish.  I so love the beauty when races come together.  We all flirted with her and Anthony in his sexy, easy way let her know that we were all open with each other and were into swinging and then asked her if she wanted to come home with us.  She was so damn cute with her nervous swallow and her whispered "yessss".  We went to a club down the strip to listen to some music and meet her when she got off work.  She followed us back to my house since my sweeties were off with their own angels.  Joann would flay the brothers alive but I am allowed to bring men home as long as they are not there when they come home and they were both going to be off and not back till Sunday afternoon.  and definitely make sure to change the linens.  Tisa and I let the brothers have Faith between them on a sofa and we sat on the other.  I drank a coke while they had some mixed drinks and faith relaxed and we felt love rising in the air.  The brothers love watching lesbian sex and of course they asked faith if she had ever had made love to another woman.  We could tell that she had never slept with women by her actions during the night.  She nervously replied no and was nervous and nonplussed nervously glancing at us.  We know our cue and Tisa turned to me and our mouths came together hungrily and we clenched as we fell to the floor and got on our knees and kissed deeply as our fingers quickly began to loosen and remove clothes.  I felt my body love shaking and pulse pounding as Tisa got my slacks and panties around my knees and I gagged when she stroked my cunt heatedly and then slipped two fingers into my tight cunt and started to pump me hard as she kissed me deeply.  I soon got my fingers into her cunt and we kissed deeply as we fingerfucked each other heatedly as our free hands clenched each other and gripped tits  that we had exposed.  Gods I was in heaven as we worked each others bodies expertly.  I smiled and pulled Tisa tighter to me as her head swooned onto my shoulder and I now slammed three twisting fingers into her soaked cunt as I felt her juices running down my pumping fingers.  suddenly her body was undulating wildly against me as harsh moans gibbered out of her throat as her sweaty neck and face wallowed against mine.  I so loved feeling our tits mashing and grinding as her body jolted and humped into mine as I reveled in the sounds beside my ear as she cawed her ecstasy.  I held Tisa up till felt her recovering and smiled as she pushed me down and removed my slacks and panties as I shucked my blouse off as she fell onto my cunt with her mouth and sucked me off so fucking good and soon I was jackknifing and crying out as a devastating orgasm ripped my womb to shreds whiting out my mind with ecstasy. 

//  I relaxed as Anthony came over and sat down with us as we watched Eric bring faith mouth to his and they kissed deeply.  I smiled lazily as I sat up and watched them quickly remove their clothes and I swooned over her full,  firm b-cup titties that were slightly upswept, with slightly puffy nipples and her lovely light brown skin.  She got on the floor and started to suck Eric's cock so good.  She pumped her head up and down his shaft and used her right hand to pump his shaft as her head corkscrewed his cock and stuffed his cock into her cheeks making them bulge and making my cunt start to quiver again.  I so loved seeing Eric's hands on the back of her head and helped it pump his pistoning cock.  soon they were on the sofa and got in spoon and I felt my cunt spasm as he sank his cock into her shaved cunt and began to pump her cunt with long, hard, steady strokes.  There heads were against the arm rest to anchor them and loved the sounds of slapping flesh and the way her body received his cock and jolted to it.  several times she got on her knees to lick her cunt off his glistening black dick and then he fucked her pussy some more until he pulled out and began to fingerfuck her asshole with a finger as she grimaced but she didn't pull back at all and waited eagerly when Eric guided his bulbous cock head to her sphincter and pushed his dick into her shit pipe.  Sigh, she had been moaning but now she cried out moaned as his dick started pumping into her asshole as her face slashed and grimaced.  She started to rub her clit as he really began to pound her asshole so fucking good.  He fucked her good and then pushed her off and guided her to the floor and guided her head to his dick and I felt my womb flip when she gripped his shaft and pumped it as her mouth latched onto his dick and pumped her mouth up and down his shaft and corkscrewed her head.  By now Anthony was naked and Tisa was giving him head beside me on the floor.  I continued to watch the action on the sofa as I watched Faith butterfly stroke his cockhead making him groan so hard.  I loved how they fucked so good on the sofa.  I especially loved when he got her on her back and gripped her ankles and held her feet in the air and pounded his cock into her asshole deep and hard and the way she groaned and cried out as her asshole was squired.  She would pump her head up to look down her belly at Eric pounding her asshole as her face froze and slashed.  I turned my head and watched Tisa taking Anthony's dick down her throat with slow pumps of her head as Anthony leaned back and groaned in deep pleasure.  I knew we must begin to teach how to give deep throat later.  Several times Eric pulled his dick out and got Faith on the floor to clean his dick before he pounded her to a devastating orgasm with her ankles squirming in his grip in the air as he pounded her shit good and then pushed her head against the armrest and hooked her legs with his arms and gripped the armrest and now pounded her cunt so fucking hard with his pumping hips as she squealed and moaned as she gripped his arms and back with her roaming clenching hands.  Soon she came again as her ankles jerked in the air and her head kept whipping right and left as Eric's sweat dripped all over her body as it jackknifed and flipped as much as her folded position allowed and then I felt fire burn out my cunt as Eric strangled cried out "Fuuucckkkkkk" as he slammed his hips down to spew semen into Faith's still spasming womb making her have a final two flips of crushing ecstasy I could see.  I then turned and started sucking Tisa off as she sucked Anthony off.  I inhaled her cunt meat into my devouring, sucking mouth as her juices poured into my gulping mouth and moving up to super suck and tongue lash her clit making her grunt explosively and suck with gulping spasms on Anthony's cock filling her mouth.  Soon I was rewarded as she lifted her mouth off his black cock and groaned harshly and moaned long moans of crushing bliss as I watched her face slash and judder.  Then as she recovered she moved her head back to Anthony's twitching cock and swallowed it and supper sucked with cheek hollowing sucks and soon Anthony was deep grunting like a pig as his cock spasmed dick seed into his cousin's hard sucking mouth and I watched some of it leak out and she then pulled off as his cock stopped twitching and kissed me deep as we swished his semen between our mouths with our flailing tongues.  Sigh, and the sex was only beginning and the next morning we took Faith's lesbian cherry.  We sucked her off so fucking good as the brothers watched and I laid back as Tisa gave her instructions as she sucked me off to two crippling orgasms and then I instructed her in my techniques as she sucked Tisa off twice.  Within a day we had her skill levels way up and now she loves cunt meat as much as dick.

//  now I am having to smile as we see Laura planning sweet anal invasions of Bonnie's virgin asshole.  gods know I am always trying and almost always succeeding in getting virgin's assholes.  I so love working my magic and sliding my dick down your virgin shit hole and making you die from it.  like Laura I am willing to take my time.  Women are so brainwashed in this that I am willing to take the time to take their assholes.  I have found that offering mine so quickly speeds up the seduction.  Seeing me lose my mind and I know it builds in them a feeling of having to give back since I gave to them.  I so love taking them in my trembling arms after they have fucked me so good in the ass and whispering to them that I need to take their asshole and please baby do it since I have given you mine.  The fairness that most women have simply makes it a given so many times.  Have to love Laura's thoughts [Some day you'll be like Dawn or Carmela or Ty, begging me to fuck you in this marvelous ass, my sweet, Laura murmured to herself.  But until then . . .] I can't wait.  I know I will be swooning!!  One thing I love about your story is the time line of your story.  We get to see Laura thinking of other anal whores and how she plans to add bonnie to the list.  I have found that most women quickly get addicted to it and crave it.  only you with your story line can do this.  I can say this because the other multi part stories simply don't even try.  Their loss.   It is the sense of time that makes everything flow and you use it to the fullest.  Such a nice development seeing that they have been resting for a hour and only now is Laura beginning to love bonnie again.  Sigh, I so love the pacing of your stories.   Needlessly, to say I am loving this part of the story.  What little ass fucking I get in other stories is so bland and straight to the sphincter so to speak that it looses what it should be.  No specialness.  I love how you show Laura working down Bonnie's back to get to her lovely upthrusting ass.  I so know to take my time so they are swooning by the time you reach her ass.  I am smiling as Laura takes her time and bonnie is cooing as Laura licks and nibbles her ass.  I have to smile as she gives her firm moons love bites making her squeal.  I love doing that and growling like a lioness as their ass jumps up for me.  this is so how to seduce virgin assholes [She loved taking the time she had never taken before to explore every inch of Bonnie's sweet body, kissing every inch of each round moon, then running her lips down to the crease where it met the top of Bonnie's thigh, and exploring that with her tongue.  It was many long minutes before she even ventured into the deep, dark valley between them, rubbing it first gently with her forefinger, which sank a little deeper with each pass.       Bonnie said nothing, but Laura could notice her breathing subtly accelerating.  She whimpered softly once.  She was still smiling dreamily.]  I so love to work down your ass crease until my tongue is making full flat tongue sweeps up and down the deepest depths with full cat swipes making you groan.  And slowly making sure my tongue is first gently swiping, then lingering to lathe with wet, drooling circular motions and slowly beginning to press in.  a little while back I got Julia back in my loving arms.  She is a mother and a sometimes lover.  Hard to make our schedules mesh plus she has taken one of her little girl's friend's mother as a lover.  She had resisted my anal overtures in the past but I was trying again.  I was like Laura here but having tried before I was trying harder yet again.  I noticed right off the mark that she was being very receipt to my anal advances.  I was massaging her ass cheeks as I licked her crease and she only moaned as I pulled her meaty ass cheeks apart and slowly drilled my stiffened tongue that had only been pressing now drilled into her asshole.  I swoon tasting her ass on my tongue as I slowly began to pump it in and out her asshole loving how it clenched and gripped it.  I clamped my lips to her rosebud and sucked with my clamped lips as my tongue probed and wiggled in her sphincter making her groan so good for me.  I soon had two fingers pumping in and out her asshole and licking off as I went back and forth finger pumping and tongue fucking.  I nearly squealed when she begged me to "oh god, fuck my asshole!"  I was a blur as I got my favorite dick strapped in and lubed up.  I got her up on her knees and her head down on the mattress and felt my eyes so focused on her shit hole as I massaged it with my cockhead and then slowly pushed in as she gasped and cried out softly.  I kept pressing her back down as she would try to rise up and I kept cooing to her to relax baby and take it baby.  I loved how it was so hard getting it in and sinking down her anal highway and how her asshole bowed out and gripped my dick at first.  It was hard to get it loosened up and pumping.  I took long minutes getting her ass loosened up and letting my cock do no more than ride an inch in and out as it bowed and sawed.  After much loving stroking her asshole was loosened up and I was pumping hard and deep as she gurgled, sighed and moaned cried.  I held her hips strongly to pump my shaft deep into her clenching asshole.  I pulled out and shoved in hard making her cry out and swoon as I pounded her hard making our flesh smack and her body jolt forward.  I so loved seeing her head jolt and hair jerk and bending down and kissing her back and reaching underneath to grip and pulp her tits and pull her nipples hard with twisting pulls.  She came violently as I pumped my shaft into her exploding asshole as she jumped and twisted.  I held my cock deep in asshole and as she revived I pulled out and smiled seeing ass juice flow and run down her thighs as I slide my cock down and shoved deep into her dripping cunt.  I soon had her ramming back into my punishing thrusts and pulled out and slammed deep into her asshole making her cry out and slam back into me with punishing thrusts as she growled out to pound her asshole good.  I pulled out and reached forward and pulled her around by her hair and got her mouth in front of my waving dick and moaned to her to taste her asshole on my dick and I moaned as she didn't even hesitate to swallow my dick and corkscrew her head and suck so fucking hard while bobbing on my dick.  I raped her asshole and cunt so good as she came yet again with her hands clawing the bed as she twisted and jackknifed as her tits flopped and body shook as she moaned so gutturally.  I later found out her lover, Lisa, had been telling her she had watched some gonzo porn and wanted to explore anal sex.  She wanted to be fucked in the ass and do atm and a2p but they were both still so nervous and hesitant.  She wanted me to teach her and now I know she has taken Lisa's virgin asshole and eagerly gave hers to Lisa.  I so love teaching.  Julia has set up a love nest tryst with her and Lisa next week.  Lisa wants to do hard dp sex.  I can't wait!!!  Hopefully, I can get them to do multi partner sex soon.

//  of course I have seen some anal sex in other stories.  I know bonnie is not ready yet but you still show things that I don't see in other stories.  I love how you have them bantering as they sex play.  It is so neat to see women actually flirting during sex.  You just never, ever see that in other stories.  Only dialog to promote the story.  Never just women having fun during sex.   Now that I have said that, it really hits home.  Other stories shows the excitement but only you show them having actual fun.  One shots can't because this takes time and getting to know your women.  it takes time to get to the point where you know you woman enough to do this.  I love that you take the time and then do it.  it is really amazing to not see this in other stories with multi parts and thus a time line.  Now you show that pacing that I so love [Without breaking the rhythm of her kisses and caresses, Laura reached up for a pillow and pulled it down, gently maneuvering Bonnie so that she could slip it under her hips, thus raising her ass up and exposing the festering, wet, dark pink slot of her lovely pussy just beneath the swelling black moons of her ass.  Now Laura's voracious mouth could roam across the sweet lower regions of this marvelous girl with ease, and soon she was nipping and sucking the smooth ass flesh that was closer and closer to Bonnie's swollen, puckering wet vagina, and making Bonnie quiver and clench and whoop softly.]  one thing I have marveled over the years is how you show the pacing of great fucks.  Other stories things just happen.  They don't really show us anything and the ones that do, the Harem author, just somehow looses it even though he uses so many kilobytes in his sex scenes.  One thing I marvel at is how economical you do it.  your stories sex scenes are not really that long and yet it is still so fucking hot and beautifully paced.  You show the flow of events and describe them wonderfully but you do it with so little words that I am amazed.  Others are too limited and some drown us in details.  I know I would definitely be the later.  I just shake my head in amazement how you show so much with your limited prose and know time after time how to phrase each sex phase to let the reader see and feel what is happening.  You show us and keep the heat constantly ramping until the womb rending final confligeration.  I so know that stuffing a pillow under a belly or ass to get her pussy or asshole just right for tongue dining.  Sigh, instead of just going for heaven like most authors you show Laura slowly moving down to Bonnie's swollen, running cunt.  And your choice of words!!  No other author says things like "festering, dark pink slot, swelling black moons" and such.  And the way you describe Bonnie's cunt as Laura moves in.  my mouth is watering so wishing I could be the woman gobbling her divine wet cunt.  I talk about magical moments and you give me here ["Oh, I want your pretty pussy," Laura cooed to her, now touching the warm wetness with two, three fingers, rubbing Bonnie's exposed clit, dipping lower with her head, trying to get her mouth on it too.  "Scoot your ass up a little higher, honey," she coaxed Bonnie, who quickly complied, rising a little on her knees to make her pussy more available to Laura.       "Unnhhhh!" she gasped softly as Laura began to lick and suck her oozing cunt the same way she had been licking and sucking Bonnie's ass moons.]  Just the detail of rubbing Bonnie's oily slit with Laura's fingertips.  I would never remember to write though I have done that so many times in the past.  It is this that makes you a true master!  And those sounds! as Laura begins to lick and suck Bonnie's puckered, swollen cunt.  I so feel myself groan and love clench as my mouth finally begins to devour the cunt it has so wanted.

//  you know show the ramping that I so love.  we see Laura now attacking Bonnie's cunt in a full on love assault.  I so know that slurping, tongue drilling and full throat sucking of a swollen cunt.  munching on her cunt flesh and tongue flailing and sucking in her inner cunt petals making her wail and her hips fly off the bed.  making your woman dying for it.  you show us this with you're your divine vocalization ["Ohhnnngggg . . . uuummmnnnn . . . oh Laura . . . oh shit oh god . . . yes . . . yes yes . . . unnhhhhhh!" she babbled incoherently, shimmying her terrific ass up into Laura's face and hand.]  I love reading the thoughts of characters and I am smiling as Laura thinks to herself that she is going to make bonnie cum so hard.  I am always thinking this and love seeing this confidence in Laura.  One cool detail you give here is you telling us of the soft snuffling sounds Laura is making as she devours cunt meat.  I am not sure I have ever seen this detail by another author.  When one is gobbling cunt meat in wild gluttony you can't help but make lots of soft grunting noises as you suck in cunt meat and mouth devour.  I get so tired of the silence of other stories and you show us the rising excitement of Bonnie's need and love.  I so love how you show bonnie working her cunt into Laura's mouth.  I so love it when my woman is grinding her cunt into my mouth and I sucking it inside out and trying to suck her clit off.  Only you catch this love and want.  I am mental fist pumping as Laura works her fingers into Bonnie's ass crease and is now stroking and pressing in on Bonnie's asshole.  seducing her and making her ready for later invasion.  I so love how you take your time.  Chapters to get bonnie in bed and now chapters of seducing her asshole for eventual invasion.   I almost always get my asshole and take it so sweetly.  You now give me that communication that I so love ["Unh . . . unh!" Bonnie gasped as she swirled her beautiful round ass back and up into Laura's face.  "Oh!  Oh . . . Laura . . ." she panted, looking over her shoulder, her face screwed up in a sweet agony of sexual pleasure.  "Put . . . put your hand in me.  Like before.  Please."]  in other stories it just happens.  I can't remember other stories have their characters request and plead for a certain sex and then making it happen.  It is the aggressor always leading the sex.  So often I plead for something and get it and I gladly I listen to my lover and go where she wants if she wants something I wasn't immediately planning on.  I will get mine later.  I so live to give my sluts what the need and want.  Again sweet words like "face screwed up – sweet agony".  I so love the descriptive words you use to make the sex so fucking hot and special.  I would be surprised too to have such a newbie request a vaginal fisting but I would I gleefully comply.  I love women being aggressive in expressing their needs.  I never hesitate to fist a lover when she requests it.  I so love to feel a fist sinking into my cunt and down my clenching asshole.  feeling that fist pounding my cervix or snaking down my colon into my belly making me gag and swoon. 

//  another I like is you show positions beside the classic positions.  Usually when you fist a vagina you do it from the front.  Of course you can to it in other positions and you show this.  Other authors simply do the basic and tried and true so speak.  They are always seem to take the path most traveled to flip the frost poem.  I can just smell Bonnie's festering cunt as it beckons to Laura.  I so love to feel my hand being enveloped in hot slick heat.  I love the details that you give.  I have read a few stories with fisting and the fact is simply stated and maybe a little pumping.  You tell of Bonnie's supper tight cunt.  I love fisting all pussies but really tight one's make my womb flip as I feel your cunt gripping and clenching my fist as it twists and plunges into your cunt deep.  love the detail of making the wedge and folding the thumb underneath.  Never once got that in any other story.   It just goes in somehow.  I love to work my fist in as I drool spit all over my hand my hand or use lubrication if some is needed but getting a cunt nice and supper wet and drooling spit to help along.  I just swoon as I feel that heat covering my fist and your spongy cunt petals gripping my fist.  I like how bonnie is wrought up.  Getting a woman so fucking worked up makes the finishing love kill so easy.  She is getting what she craved from her lover and now her body is just simply ready to explode.  Only you show how stroking the mental needs of your woman along with her physical makes her ready to go up like an ammo dump when the love kill is administrated.  With the quietness of other authors during the ramp up to the big O they simply don't deliver this ["Unhhhh!  Unngggmmnnnhhh!  Ohnnnnggg!  Umpphgghhh!" Bonnie groaned and panted, nearly there, nearly there.       And Laura was equally vocal, though completely incoherent, she realized.  She seemed to answer every one of Bonnie's grunts and moans with sympathetic grunts of her own.  "Mmmmm . . . unnnnuummnnnnn . . . ungghhh!  Ohnnnggg!  Ummmmm!"       "Ooonngggg!  Laura . . ." Bonnie panted wildly, her face contorted with fierce pleasure.  "Harder!  Do it . . . ooonnggggg . . . do it harder!"]  If a story has none of this then they simply can't capture this.  Never does a story have any sounds like this until the orgasm itself and even then it is usually silent.  I really mean that.  I have come to find that so weird over the years.  even the quiet women grunt and groan even if softly but a woman revels in it.  they way you show authentic sounds just makes your stories so rad.  I mean how can this not excite a woman hearing all these rutting noises of heated fucking.  With all the stories I have read only you come close to capturing the varied sounds we make while fucking.  you are alone in this.  Alone.

//  and then you deliver the love kill.  You work your woman up just so you can deliver this ["AWWWOONNGGGG!" Bonnie suddenly cried out, her luscious smooth body flipping and jerking spasmodically, but not enough to expel Laura's plunging hand.       Laura actually had a chunk of Bonnie's marvelous ass between her teeth just as the spasm hit, and of course it slipped out as Bonnie's ass cheek clenched into a hard ball.  But her forefinger remained embedded deep in Bonnie's clenching asscrack, and she pressed her fingertip sharply against the girl's anus, rubbing it for maximum effect, and still slobbering hungrily over the gleaming black moons of Bonnie's ass as the wrenching shocks of Bonnie's orgasm ran their course.        It wasn't quick.  Bonnie came unbelievably hard, whinnying into the sheet, her body quaking and straining, until the last excruciating drop of sweet pleasure had been squeezed out of her multiple orgasms.  Even after that she laid face down, gasping and whimpering and twitching, with Laura's forearm still sticking up out of her impaled cunt.  Laura wiggled her hand gently, as if about to withdraw it.]  sigh, such perfection.  I am just sitting here marveling at yet another crushing orgasm that is really a harrowing orgasm.  it is just amazing how you deliver and others haven't.  I get so freaking tired of stories that just say that the woman came without any of the details that you give us.  You give us the stunning scream of fucking bliss that is simply ripped from her throat.  only you truly capture this.  A few authors do use caps in their screams but it is the same scream over, over, over and over if you get my point and the Harem authors has nothing but sentences in all caps and no guttural sounds that we make.  You use rarely and never the same one twice in a row or even close to a row.  Then you actually describe the orgasm with such loving details.  I can actually see in my minds eye the pummeling of sweet ecstasy that bonnie is sweetly enduring.  I can just see the staining of her muscles and the way the her body is jolting and twisting as ecstasy explodes out of her shredding womb.  The thing I so love about fisting is the feeling of being connected to my lover.  I so love to feel a cunt exploding and spasming on my fist and wrist as it twist and strokes her through her orgasm.  I especially like to back off some if my face has been on your belly or ass and watching my forearm jolting and gyrating with your body spasms.  The wet heat that covers my fist and your juices leaking out and running down my forearm.   Stroking my fist deep up an exploding asshole or maybe pounding your inner O ring as I feel your pulse hammering through your shit hole on my wrist.   Feeling your pulse accelerate as your body is pumped full of sweet endomorphins.  I so swoon when I'm ramming my fist deep up her shredding asshole and stroking under her ribs and then twisting out to let her feel my knuckles traveling down her belly.  Only to plunge deep again and again as she's screaming and wailing as her body jackknifes wildly as you watch your fist jolting and shaking as it slicks with ass juice and she simply fucks herself out and collapses in a heap as she shakes and mewls and sobs in ecstasy.  You so fucking capture the whole fucking thrill of fisting.  I love how you show us both the length and strength of her orgasm.  I get to revel in the sweet pummeling of her flesh unlike what other authors give me.  I simply can't get over how they leave everything so bland and boring.  Only you describe the beauty of the female orgasm.  I so love to leave my lovers like bonnie here.  Spent and satiated.

//  other authors always end the fuck after the orgasm.  I have gotten so tired of this.  You show us the sweet post coital time.  That time of sweet sharing and bonding.   Many times I have been stopped from removing my fist by a lover pleading for me to leave it in to let us continue our sharing and bonding.  I am just thankful that one writer captures this.  I love the little moments of humor you give with Laura calling bonnie a minx and bonnie not fully understanding the reference.  It is these little moments that truly bond women to each other.  Bonnie is right when she says men like it when you grip their cock with your pussy or asshole.  I love hearing them hiss when I grip their cock while it still sensitive and milk it with my fuck hole.  I love feeling it on my tongue, fingers, fist or forearm but it simply can't be the feeling that a man gets on his dick the lucky bastards.  Had to chuckle at the image Laura gets with bonnie telling her she has attempted to fist herself.  We have all done that some ourselves.  You can usually get it in but the pumping is pretty difficult to do right.  I feel why do yourself when you can plenty of willing women to stroke your fuck holes.  Still it is a nice change of pace and it can make your fuck mate simply go nuts with the show.  The longer your arms the easier and fortunately I have long arms.  You show at the end of this sweet fuck how the fires of love once more ignite as long as strength remains in the flesh [Laura hated this kind of conversation.  She grabbed Bonnie and pulled her back down onto the sheet on her back, running one hand all over Bonnie's beautiful small high breasts, so firm and upswept, and kissing her cheek and then her high cheek bones.  "Nobody with Choctaw Indian cheekbones like these, you marvelous creature," she said, tickling Bonnie under her arms and diverting her into a friendly tussle that ending in a romantic kiss, and ultimately in another sweet sexual clinch during which Laura received payment in full for her recent sweet labors.]  I love how you show them once more fucking but of course you show us how it starts sweetly only to once more begin that ramping only you capture so fucking well.  The reader doesn't get to follow but one know that sweet womb rending orgasms await.

//  I like how you change your pacing from time to time.  One thing you do in your stories is have us in Laura's day to day life and her home life and job experience.  But sometimes you have us go from bed to bed with two lovers.  It is just so nice to have this different focus.  Keeps everything fresh and vibrant.   Then you give us that back and forth communication that I so love.  cute them having to wait for nyomi's daughter to go to sleep.  Sometimes seems like they never will.  I am so happy to see Laura trying to help out bonnie.  I have never seen another story in erotica where a character tries to get another to help a third.  I have to smile as Nyomi is teasing Laura about bonnie.  I know she may be a little jealous but she is mainly teasing.  I know that Nyomi will try because you have made it clear that she is a good person.  I love how even your selfish and self absorbed are still basically good, especially after you get to know them.  I think few people are basically rotten through and through.  Have to chuckle at Laura hissing when Nyomi teases her.  She has come a long way but still has a little of the green eyed monster in her when she is teased or confronted with a sudden challenger to her affections, especially with Makeeda.  Keeps the fires burning I guess.   In fact I see that Nyomi is thinking the same thing.  It is true emotions do make you fuck harder and more urgently.  Like the strip show that Nyomi puts on for Laura.  I can't recall recently reading this in any other stories.  I so miss other authors not having their women sexily undressing for each other.  Have to love the detail of Laura's little doves being overwhelmed with nyomi's bigger tits as they clench and rub against each other.  I love pulling Joann, Simonette, Kapri or Kia close and feeling their small titties mashed into mine and covered as we clinch and roll around.  Then again medium or full tits are divine as our tits mash and roll all over each other in constantly dynamic shifting as tit meat is compressed and nipples dig.  Finally the kid is asleep and divine matters can now proceed.  ["I guess you're right about that," Laura panted, filling her hands with the woman's magnificent breasts, running her thumbs across Nyomi's very large dark brown nipples.  "You have about the largest areolas I ever saw," she murmured, feeling her mouth water for them.  "And look how those lovely tiny bumps rise up all over them when I do this."        "It's because they want to be sucked by you," Nyomi purred, her eyelids growing heavy.  "Nobody in my life ever sucked them like Laura does."]  I so love how you describe your women's anatomy.  I get so tired of simply not knowing.  I can see that Nyomi has those wonderful large areolas like my own.  Then you show Laura mouth watering for them.  I so feel my salvia filling my mouth when I know I am about to dine on your tit meat.  I love all areolas and nipples but these are a treat.  Small ones I just concentrate on the nipple and try to suck off or gnaw like a bone with my kinky sluts which most are.  Most women love hard when lovingly shown what it gives.  I too hear my women moan out how much I love their tits.  I can just suck, suckle and maul forever.  I love to work your tits while I am fingerfucking you or helping another woman fuck you as she eats you out or is using her fingers or appendage to love a fuck hole while I work your tits.  I so love to work my thumb or finger back forth over large nipples and feeling that stiffness and making them bend and yaw if long enough making my whores writhe and moan for me.  then the communication that only you give.  You show us Laura telling her woman how she loves her titties and Nyomi murmuring back her need and love.  only you give this tender interaction between lovers.  You give us a universe where this tenderness can exist and then you actually show it.  I love this connection you have between your women and that the Harem and Sandy author don't.  it just adds a whole other level to the story.  I do so love women with large areolas.  Dodie, Maria and Shari have such succulent tit meat.  I just try siphon off and with dodie and Shari theirs steeple so much as I feel them under my tongue as I lathe and tongue slap making them die for me.  I so love go grip under the areola and squeeze supper hard and suck voracious their bulging nipple and areola squeezing out over my crushing hands as they gurgle from my loving ministrations begging in harsh moans for harder and meaner as I take them to heaven.  I love to have it done to me.  when masturbating I love to take a tit with both hands and stuffing my turgid nipple and steepled areola into my mouth and just love suck and rub with my clenched teeth and gnaw my throbbing nipple.  Using one hand to roughly bend and pull up to my lips and work my magic as I use my other hand to masturbate or pound a dildo or vibrator up my pussy or asshole as I love myself as totally as possible.  I so love working myself so hard as I feel my body suddenly detonating with womb searing explosions as I kick and trash as I try to keep sucking and fucking myself to sweet nirvana.

//  have to smile at the daughter next door but that being safer than having her innocently blabbing to grandma about her mother's new predilections.  Children can be a serious crimp in ones life style I have to agree.  Wish brainwashed women could be more understanding when their daughters discover their true natures.  I love this detail ["Hhhhhh . . . hhhhhh!" Nyomi panted, already very aroused, looking down at Laura's tongue on her wet nipple.]  when I see or feel your eyes on me that just makes me focus even more on my loving you and taking you to heaven.  I feel my womb clench and flip when I look down at a woman loving my tits and seeing her eyes slit and burn as she lets me see the pure slut in her soul as she pleasures me.  feeling her body half lying on mine as she pumps and mauls my tits as she devours my tit meat making me swoon and fall deeper in love with her.  Oh geez you are so fucking perfect in your sex [By now Laura had Nyomi's entire large nipple in her mouth.  She cradled Nyomi's beautiful firm round breast in both hands and devoured Nyomi's hardening nipple with patient skill, pinching it with her lips, sucking it with her throat, gently gnawing it with her teeth, until Nyomi was making little soft screeching noises deep in her chest.        "Mnngghheee . . . mnngghheee . . ." she half-wheezed, tossing her head, grimacing with intense pleasure.  "Oh shit . . . you do that sooooo good!"        "Well," Laura teased.        Nyomi laughed briefly, squinting down her body at Laura.  "Okay, well.  Do it some more.  Oh god, it feels good!" ]  I guess you have an unfair advantage over other authors because you actually tell us of the loving occurring.  I get so tired of bland mush from others.  I have been reading some het stories and they are just as bad as the gay / bi stories.  I feel kind of cheated but I do put myself in the stories and get enjoyment out of them but not like I can with your stories because of all this loving, you so lovingly you give us.  I so love the feel of a breast in my hand.  I love all sizes and how they fit or overflow my hands and what I can so with your tits.  Mashing and crushing small tits into your chest or taking bigger tits and mauling, squeezing, stretching and rolling in my strong hands making you melt and your eyes roll back and spasm so fucking long as you moan and gibber for me.  me asking if you want it harder and you moaning back please and more.  I am so their as Laura is love sucking and gnawing nyomi's nipples.  I would be taking her harder and meaner and making her love it but I so love reading how Laura is simply making her die for it.  You show it with your wonderful words and vocalizations.  I marvel at how only you show this pleasuring and the affects it is having.  Other authors insist on basically telling us that woman A is sucking woman B's tits and that is about it.  no describing of the taker and giver.  How working breast and pussies is just so fucking divine.  No dialog and no expressing of need and love.  no details like head tossing and grimacing.  Just silence both in their vocalizations and in their actual loving.  no details thus no heat and excitement.  I have felt tempted to write some of these authors and reference your works to tell them how to write better sex scenes.  Take the story where you want but please learn from the master on how to really deliver a truly stupendous sex scene.  They could learn so much if open to instruction.  But there style is theirs and it is no where near yours.

//  one thing that I like is you show Laura leading women to discover new things about themselves and help them realize their inner desires.  Laura leading bonnie onwards in her awaken to her true lesbian self and making Nyomi want to fuck constantly with her daughter just next door.  I had that happen recently with Sari.  Most of her mates are pretty much committed lesbians with no time to explore the male cock.  they're too happy wolfing down cunt meat.  But I had shared tales of being fucked mainly by black males with them and how fucking awesome it is.  Sari came to me and shyly told me she fantasized about being fucked by black men.  I smiled and asked her if she wanted one, two or more.  I saw her eyes light up and she thought for a few moments and said she wanted to be dp'ed by two males and me there to make it a tp.  She wanted me there to feel safe.  I told her I had just the guys in mind and arranged for Anthony and Eric to keep their next weekend free.  I took Sari over to their place Friday after work and school for her.  We came in and I smiled seeing sari's nervousness.  I smiled at such bashful innocence.  Anthony fixed mixed drinks to relax everyone, especially Sari.  I just lipped my glass.  Soon she was loosened up and they made small talk as I saw the brothers eying her hungrily as they edged closer.  I could see Sari enjoying their obvious desire.  Black men love banging Asia chicks.  It is a big fantasy to fuck them and I was helping them fulfill one of their fantasizes that don't get very often.  I had told them to go slow at first to let her flow into the sex.  Anthony tilted her face and locked lips with hers and slide his tongue deep into her mouth.  I loved how she melted and they quickly unclothed her and themselves as Eric settled on the floor and started to devour her already swollen cunt.  they both can eat some damn good pussy.  Sigh, I loved how Anthony worked her mouth and full tits and Eric sucked her cunt hard and tongue lashed her rigid clit.  Eric gripped her ass and jammed her cunt into his hard sucking mouth as Anthony got up on his knees and pressed his thick, rigid cock into Sari's lips and she eagerly took his cock into her mouth and started sucking as she pumped his cock with a fist.  It was so beautiful seeing their black flesh enveloping her brown body and all giving pleasure.  she was sliding her mouth up and down his cock to the back of her throat and lip clamping tight to super suck making Anthony groan so hard.  Eric was snuffling and now fingerfucking her cunt as he sucked.  No way she could continue on and after a few more minutes of this divine connection she was crying out and groaning so fucking hard as her body jolted and humped spastically as Eric super sucked her clit making her twat jerk and surge off the cushions.  Anthony's was pumping his shaft with his fist to let her ride out her orgasm.

//  as she came down he pulled her up and around and aimed his twitching black shaft and settled her down on his black dick.  I groaned along with sari as it sank ever deeper into her cunt as she pumped up and down slowly and I saw her inner cunt petals gripping his veined shaft on the out strokes.  After a few minutes she was pounding up and down hard as their flesh smacked and sweat was beginning to bead and flow down their heated bodies.  Eric was up on the sofa now so sari could suck off when the fucking was not to energetic.  After a while Eric sat down and she mounted his bulbous cock head and squealed as it slide fully up her clenching cunt and now Anthony feed her his hard cock.  she switched partners continuously stopping often to suck her cunt off their dicks.  Finally, facing away from Eric she got her feet on his thighs as he leaned back into the sofa and aimed his dick into her shit hole and got that look you only get as dick is sliding up your asshole.  it was so beautiful the way her face froze and slashed and she gibbered out her pleasure, pain and sank her shit hole onto his dick.  soon it was stroking in and out her clutching rosebud a few inches.  Gods, I was swooning watching her asshole initially bow and clutch his dick so hard but gradually loosen as it sank ever deeper into her shit hole.  I asked her how it felt having a black dick sliding deep up her asshole and I moaned along with her when she gasped moaned it was "heaven".  Soon he gripped her hips as she gripped the back of the sofa and slammed her asshole up and down his cock as she sucked off his brother.  I so loved the sound of sweaty flesh slapping.  She got her feet on the sofa and stood up and bent over at the waist and sucked his ass juice covered dick off and moved over and mounted Anthony with her body facing him making him groan as her asshole greedily ate his dick.  she was crying out to "slam my gook asshole … tear my teenage asshole wide open … pound my shit hard!"  this just made them slam their dicks harder into her grunting, sweating body.  she took turns mounting them as she made sure to bend over and lick her ass juice off moaning "I so love tasting my shit all over your black dick" and such.  I so love a dirty talking whore.  She would corkscrew her head and sometimes get down on her knees and slowly take their cock down her throat making them gasp and groan out hard as she deep throated them.  I am smiling remembering them swearing "goddamn, mother fuck and look at her swallowing your dick" and other loving words.  we always make sure to teach all our teenage sluts and other newbies how to deep throat if lacking that skill.  The brothers and I felt our pulses leap as we saw her throat bulge with black dick sliding deep into her gullet.  I had to clench my forehead a couple of times I felt such intense pleasure seeing her Korean mouth licking and so lovingly sucking her ass cream off their thick, veined black dicks.  the way her eyes closed and her cheeks hollowed out as she super sucked their cock crowns and then pumping her head hard up and down the shafts to the back of her throat and then slowly taking a thick shaft down her throat and coming up and off with thick spit roping and dropping off coating her tits and belly with spit along with her sweat making her look like a total fucking whore.  I just felt my love for her deepening.  The way she greedily remounted them taking their dicks deep into her clutching asshole.    She came screaming as Anthony pounded her asshole hard.  he let her ride it out and then laid back on the sofa and moved his rigid prick to her cunt and slide it in deep and anchored it there as Eric mounted her up raised rump and slammed his dick into her loosened sphincter making her cry out in pained ecstasy.  Gods, they fucked her hard as she croaked out to call her a gook, whore and worthless slut.  They happily complied asking her how it felt to have big black cocks fucking her gook ass and did her slant eyed cunt like nigger cock pounding it.  she could only squeal and whinny "yes … of fuck yeah … deeper / harder" and such.  I was masturbating furious to the show as I needed relief from all the hot fucking.  I felt my womb winding tighter so deep in my belly each time Eric ripped his cock from her asshole and I saw her ass juice smearing his black dick and running down her thighs in milky trails and the way her sphincter was all jagged know and pulsing as he gaped her for me and then walked around to her head and she wolfed down his bulbous cockhead and veined shaft.  Her head jolting strongly as Anthony now had the freedom to slam his dick up into her cunt with full force.  Then back to her asshole Eric went and slamming it in balls deep after lining up and torpedoing his dick fully up her shit hole making her howl and sag down into his brother's hard body.  they pounded her for like fifteen minutes as her body was slow to prim to another orgasm but now it was building as she grunted more gutturally and cried out more random cries of ecstasy and bliss.  The brothers sensing the end coming were slam fucking her so hard her head was like it was hit by a pile driver as it lurched and jolted with Eric slamming his thighs into her ass.  She screamed like she was being garroted or something as she jackknifed between them as Eric held her hips in his crushing grip to torpedo her exploding shit hole.  She wallowed and cried out as continuing waves of bliss caused her body to writhe and toes to curl as I watched the tops of her feet slam down into the sofa cushions.  I had had a monstrous orgasm masturbating and I just watched with temporarily satiated eyes as the brothers growled out "fucckkkkkkk" and the other "godddddammmmmmmmmm" as they now thrusted viciously as their cocks spasmed out hot bolts of dick seed into her womb and colon.  Gods, I love watching a male coiling and striking as his dick spews semen deep into a woman's willing, receptive body.  I know sari feeling their semen blasting into her womb and down her asshole prolonged her orgasm by a few spasms she told me later.  And the beautiful thing, the fucking was really only starting.  Sari and I had hot, awesome lesbian sex while the brothers recovered and then more het fucking with both of them or singly as they may need extra time to recharge.  We fucked the whole weekend with Tisa joining us Saturday night.  Gods, we were totally fucked out by Sunday night.

//  love the detail of Laura spending long minutes working nyomi's tits.  I know I keep harping but other authors except the Harem author gives no freaking details.  Just that the titties were sucked.  Zip on anything else.  Grrrrrrrrrrr.   Thank the gods for you.  Now you give me that humor I so love ["Damn it, would you shut up about her?" Nyomi snapped crossly, lifting her head up long enough to glower at Laura.  Then it plopped back down.  "I'm . . . sorry.  Just . . . oh, just go on . . . and quit thinking about her.  You're supposed to be thinking about me . . . about fucking me."]  it is these little moments that make your women so fucking individual to oneself.  Seeing her rising need and willingness to go for it and the torpedoes be damned to borrow a cliché.  I can just hear the tone of voice.  That is what I so love about your stories.  I can just hear the tone because you have made these women so alive and real.  You can only show things like this when you established that they are regular lovers and now truly sharing their souls along with their bodies ["I'm begging you now.  How's that?  No more waiting.  I'm begging.  Just . . . you know . . . do your magic.  Just kiss and suck my pussy.  I'll come so fast.  I know it.  You've really got me aroused.  You know how to do that."        Laura kissed her nose affectionately.  "That's not begging.  I want you to beseech and implore me.  Really grovel."        "Oh god . . . you bitch!" Nyomi laughed.  "You are such a bitch.  Why do I luff you so much?"        "Mmmm, because I make you pant," Laura murmured, again kissing every exposed part of Nyomi's thrilling body she could reach with her lips.]  I am just smiling reading this.  Lovers teasing each other and ramping up the heat at the same time.   I so love it when I get my woman to curse me like this and I can so hear the need in their voices.  I love making my bitch beg for it like she is in heat.  I know I have done my foreplay job so fucking well when I sense and hear this sexual desperation.  Only you develop things to the degree that this really comes across in the story.  Other stories the sex just happens without any true interaction.  The woman simply goes down on the other in a way they make seem mechanical.  This is true interaction and women falling deeper in love.  I can't really add more than this magical dialog.  This is not something that is extraordinary in real life it is just so rare in stories that it just leaps out when I finally get to read it in erotica fiction.  Love the detail of Laura kissing every centimeter of nyomi's body that she can.  I love you showing this.  I get so tired of other authors only focusing on the face, breast and pelvis.  There is so much more!

//  now you use your powers to describe things so completely and loving with nyomi's passion flower.  No other author has ever, ever describe a woman's pussy.  this I have found totally freaking weird after I discovered your writings.  I mean this is the end goal no matter who or how you are taking your woman.  It is just weird.  I so love meaty pussies and Nyomi is blessed with one.  I am happy I get to know what her passion fruit looks like.  I just bury my face in such pussies and totally devour with all my skills and passion and make my women wail and explode all over my face.  I too think of a woman's pussy as a flower.  A flower that I must pollinate!  Geez, I'm head lulling with words like gorgeous, thick, floppy, hot pink and with a vivid description of her swollen, large clit.  [Nyomi writhed and arched her back, making her body even more breathtaking than usual.  Laura quickly slid down between her thighs.  Nyomi's pussy was one she frequently daydreamed of love-assaulting in this particular way.  The black orchid, as she always thought of it.  A gorgeous wet flower with thick, floppy black petals and a vivid hot pink interior, with a formidable round bud at the top.  Nyomi had a very large clit, not as big as Randi's giant, but still pretty big, a protuberant bulb that invited the most passionate attentions and that was very sensitive.]  I love how you show Nyomi begging for it and how she is ready to explode with little effort and Laura reading her wantonness and holding back just enough to keep taking her higher and not delivering the love kill.  I so love reading my slut and holding her just below boiling over and just dining on flowing, swollen cunt meat and greedily gulping down her juices pumping out her convulsing cunt.  as I have complained about the lack of describing the physical body I find a lack of describing the actual loving.  only the Harem author gives details but his just lack something that makes me feel like blah.  You show us how to love a red, wet, swollen cunt humping in love [What could be more heavenly than to have your mouth on Nyomi's beautiful, aroused, wet pussy?  Her bulbous, shiny, pinkish clit was already protruding proudly from its sleek hood at the top, as if daring Laura to tongue and suck it aggressively, and so Laura avoided it scrupulously, kissing and sucking everything else, taking one of Nyomi's big cunt lips into her mouth and toying with it, then the other, then insinuating her tongue as deep as it would go into the hot glistening sleeve, and wiggling it, feeling Nyomi's whole body quake and quiver with need.]  Sigh, this is how to work a woman's pussy.  plus, I love seeing a writer making it special.  What is more heavenly than dining on cunt meat.   Breathing in deep her pungent love scent and gulping and reveling in her sweet juices filling your mouth and flowing down your gulping mouth.  only you describe the clit.  Period!  I so love sizing up a newbies clit and then devouring it.   having to tease a seed size clit out and then tongue flashing and mashing with my lips.  I have read that no matter the size the clit the nerve endings are the same.  I have seen that smaller clits are much more sensitive.  Love making women with small clits wailing and flopping with a direct assault on her clitty.  Pulling that hood back and then just tongue lashing and supper sucking as she comes so violently for me.  I so love reading Laura mashing her lips into nyomi's cunt and then working her tongue deep and flailing for all I am worth.  I love this and stiffening my tongue and just pumping my face into your cunt as grip your hips or ass to help pound your cunt onto my love tongue fucking with hard pumps of my stiff tongue feeling your cunt lips mashing into my mouth.  big lips like nyomi's just envelope my face and I love feeling their heat on my lips and skin and if a really wet pussy getting her juices all over my face and hearing those divine squishy sounds and sometimes even splattering a little as I feel the splatter all over my face making me a crazed love slut devouring you.

//  I like how you show Laura pushing the limits again with Nyomi now.  I am smiling great big as she teases nyomi's rosebud now.  I so love to work a sphincter that is virgin to anal fucking and knowing that soon it will be mine.  A few have slipped through my fingers but I always think that I can work to make it a reality.  Again, it is the flow of time that I so love in your stories.  Maybe she will never deflower their assholes but we get to see the possibility.  One shots can't even do this and the other authors just make it happen immediately with anal virgins.  I have taken many on my first attempt but I had to work for it and read them so closely to see how to further my seduction and then be willing to back off and try again.  With the other multi part stories it just happens.  Even if the woman had never really considered it or opposed it they just melt for it immediately.  I have had some women who were anal virgins but wanting to lose their anal cherry but those are the novelty so to speak.  I like you showing reality of having to cajole along and seduce.  I so love self loving and being a voyeur like here [She grabbed her own large breasts in her hands, squeezing them hard and twisting and pulling her own swollen, dark nipples in a way that made hot spurting fires squirt through Laura's own pussy as she watched, seeing Nyomi descend into a true, roiling, surging ocean of need.  Nyomi began to whoop softly and urgently deep in her chest, despite her promise to be as silent as possible.  Laura realized that she could not control these helpless whoops and gurgles and gasps of incoherent sexual hunger.        "Unnnmmgghh!   Ohhh!  Ooohhnnggg!"]   I feel my womb flip and contract when I see a slut loving herself as I devour her.  I want all women to love themselves and revel in watching it.  I so love to see big titty women squeezing and mauling her tits and working her nipples.  Twisting and pulling harshly making their pelvises buck into my devouring mouth.  Seeing Hillary pulling her swollen nipples up until her pillowy udders are taunt and twisting her wrists so her fingers twist her nipples and seeing her breast actually twist as she hisses and moans like the whore she is.  Grabbing her tit with both hands and stuffing her nipple into her mouth and trying to gnaw and suck off.  I am smiling at seeing Nyomi losing control and starting to vocalize her building pleasure.  I love making my sluts lose control and fully vocalize their pleasure.  even the quieter ones huff and chuff with that desperation I so love and need to hear.  It inspires me.  only you show the rising passion and need.  Others are just so boring bland.  They just don't make it magical like you do.

//  you show the reader that Nyomi is definitely ramping up to the end game.  Again only you show this.  Others just say they are fucking and give a detail here and there but fail to show how women work up to the finish line.  Then you show how one goes for the love kill.  [The glistening red meat of the interior of Nyomi's beautiful pussy was tangy and hot against her tongue.  She devoured it with singular skill and insatiable desire, now rubbing the tightly closed little aperture of Nyomi's rectum with one fingertip, while finally consenting to suck the girl's hard, throbbing clit to encourage the arrival of the sharp convulsions she knew were only seconds away.        "Annhhhgggg . . . ohhh!  Ohhmmngggg!  Unngghmmnneee!" Nyomi gasped and gurgled, churning wildly now, digging her heels into the mattress, pumping upward with her spastically jerking pelvis.  "Oh yes . . . oh yes!  Oh god . . . yes!  YES!"]  it is always the small details that makes something so special.  The things that you give the reader.   I can just see nyomi's heels digging into the mattress in helpless need.  Her body doing anything possible to make her cunt press harder into the mouth devouring it.   Laura is still working her asshole like I do.  Of course by now I would hope to be fingerfucking her asshole making her die from it.  I can hope!  And the sounds.   the sounds!  this is something else that I have found weird over the years how it is either silence, all caps or the same sound over and over.  you show the variations of sounds we make.  We may have a favorite but we even do that different and make other sounds along with our favorites.  Of course I smiling as she zeroes in on her large clit and begins to love suck it.  I so love working your clit and taking you over the edge to nirvana.  Sucking that love bead and feeling it so fucking hard on my tongue or in my lips and feeling it maybe even getting that just little harder as it explodes and sears her master with fucking bliss.  Recently, I was over at Camille's and she had Sawana in her bed and was sucking her off with all her vast skills.  Sawana has a pea sized clit that pokes out of its clit all shiny and glistening partially from its hood.  I have experienced this technique of Camille's but got to see it up close again and so fucking swoon at watching a master.  Sawana has average lips that run the length of her slit.  Camille likes to press in above and below your clit with her thumb and index fingers and squeeze your clit up and getting it all bulging and exposed from its hood.  The bigger the clit the more that beautiful pearl just sits up their for devouring and love torturing.  Camille had Sawana's pulsing clit all pushed up and taunt in its nest of cunt meat.  She drooled spit all over it making Sawana moan and head thrash and she lowered her mouth and began to butterfly swat her clit from all angels at the same time her tongue was moving so fucking fast.  Poor Sawana was now whooping desperately and her pelvis was surging and pumping desperately.  Suddenly Camille mashed her mouth down and clamped onto her clit and began to give it cheek hollowing love sucks as she pinched her fingers harder I could see her grip pulsing as Sawana now wailed and screamed as her body jackknifed and flipped violently as it juddered right and left as she came exulting. 

//  have to chuckle at the trying to keep quiet and not succeeding.  It is cute how you have added this little twist to the story, trying to not awake nyomi's daughter and not succeeding time after time.  It is very awkward such situations.  I just leave it to her to explain.  I just sit and cover up and smile pleasantly and see how she plays it.  young children are easy.   it is the teenagers you have to look out for.  Especially the girls, the boys may be jealous but they so understand the concept of getting some.  Love the love kill of course [A strangled cry of ecstasy ripped itself from Nyomi's constricted throat.        "Ummnngghmmgggnneeeee!" she wailed, a piercing cry.  "Unggghhh!  Ohnnmmnnggeeee!"         Her entire voluptuous body went into long, wave-like spasms, rolling and surging with the flow of a tumultuous orgasm through her flesh, and Laura held on for the ride, her lips pressed closely to Nyomi's pussy as the palpitations gradually died away after nearly a minute or two of fluttering.  After her first piercing cries she managed to get control of herself and merely whimpered softly through the rest, but in truth both of them were caught in the fierce rapture of her climax for long minutes.        "Oh shit . . ." Nyomi finally gasped, blinking, leaning up on one elbow, trying to regain her senses, her startling grey eyes still foggy and streaked red with sex. ]  thanks is all I can say with the love kills that you deliver.  You show the wonder and ecstasy of great fucks.  No author in the gay, bi or het world comes close.  They except for you and the harem author simply say they basically cum.  There may be a cry or two and told her body is cuming hard with a few descriptions here and there of how her body is cuming.  The only problem I get a few motions not really described and without any heat or love in it.  it is just written while you make us seem like we are there.  I wish I could figure out how to say this better but their works just lack that something to make them special.  I have always loved how you ramp up your foreplay and then the loving to the devastating end where you deliver a truly awe inspiring orgasm.  a goal every woman has every time we make love to our partners.  It is just our nature.  Your pleasure first and then mine, thus, we both (or more) win.  I live to hear those cries of ecstasy being ripped from star struck throats as I watch if at all possible as her face crumples and slashes and her eyes bulge, spasm or roll back.  feeling and seeing her body being pummeled by bliss in the infinite ways that it can be pleasured.  One never knows how a woman will cum.  She may tend to cum a certain way but it will always have nuances and subtlies and often she cums in ways off the norm that we both just revel and bask in.  working her body through the orgasm to make it as long as possible and drink down as much cunt nectars as possible.  To wring her body to complete exhaustion if possible.   In reading your stories I can so feel the power of the orgasm crashing through the love slut's body.  I am so there with Laura as her mouth is glued to Nyomi's rupturing cunt and feeling every jackknife and surge of nyomi's body.  I so revel in feeling my head being jammed back and rolling with you or rising and falling with your cunt as it jackknifes, spastic humps or flips rip your soul to shreds.  Only you allow me to live in words what I live in life.  Thanks!  I love how you capture a woman groggily coming out of her orgasm and looking at you bleary eyed and a little disoriented.  Knowing you have delivered a supreme fuck that has taken your woman to heaven and back.  I so love to look at a body spent and sweaty that only a few moments earlier was being tortured by pummeling bliss that was making her body so rigid and full of spasms and now it is soft and compliant as I pull her into my clenching embrace and our sweaty flesh entwines as lips kiss and nip her upper body and slowly move to her mouth and mate tight as tongues flow deep in deepening love as her body aftershocks and mewls as her body reacts to my body pulling her tight.  Feeling her body respond to my sweaty flesh sliding and grinding into her body as legs and arms twine pulling tight to feel our spent heat and love as often I feel our sweat mingling and flowing as we kiss so deeply.   Gods know my womb hitches when I am pulled tight after my love slut(s) have made me cum so fucking hard and now we bond in sweet post coital bliss.

//  like I say, I so love your stories because I feel like a voyeur right there with the hot fucking which I so love.  I love seeing sex right in front of me.  Simonette, Hillary and Camille for a long time loved for us to do the basic Gone with Wind or Slave girls in Roman times over and over.  Basically Simonette and I would treat them like slaves in the antebellum south or roman times and whip and abuse them and then rape them in both of their fuck holes with lots of fisting.  Over time it has morphed into what I call Masterpiece Theatre.  I don't get to go to too many but recently I made one at the pad Hillary's father is renting for them near their university.  Nice to have a daddy with lots of money.   They had their fold out sofa setup and Shameka got up and sprawled on it.   I was sitting on the back wall along with Simonette, Kia, Emily, Judy, Sawana and two girls I meet that night for the first time two white girls Kathy and sandy.  Shameka is a pretty light skinned black / Puerto Rican mix.  She has such dark eyes and long hair in big curls and thick suckable lips.  her loose halter top showed beautiful soft little titties I know flop and whiplash like hell when fucked good.  Which I knew was coming.  Two must themes in their shows is the girl is a "virgin" to girl sex, will be abused physically and verbally and will be anally raped repeatedly and goes from hating it to loving it.  like a porn movie I know but oh so fucking hot.  I have found women so know how to get into fuck roles and go with it to the max.  I guess giving yourself totally makes it so easy to do.  We know what we like and go for it.  Hillary and Camille walked in looking all pissed and went to the sofa where Shameka made a show of ignoring them reading a fashion mag.  Camille ripped it from her hands and threw it across the room and screamed at her that she had stolen money from them again and give it back.  She acted big eyed and innocent and they screamed at her some more as she coward and professed her innocence.  They then pinned her to the bed and Hillary shoved a hand into her shorts pocket and pulled out a folded wad of money.  They screamed at Shameka and told her she was going to get it now for lying and she was sitting up crying and looking like a doe and saying she would never do it again.  Viciously Camille slapped her hard sprawling her down onto the mattress.  They then fell on her and snarled at her they were going to rape her and make her suck their cunts and make her their lesbian whore.  She cried "nonononon …. Pppppleaasssseeee …. I'm so sorry" which was reward with a few more vicious face slaps and they now ripped her halter top off and since she was braless they now smacked her soft titties meanly making loud smacking sounds and making them whiplash and whip to the sides and they smacked and pulled her nipples up cruelly stretching her tits out and then mashing down and then Hillary grabbed them and pulled taunt by her fingers twisting her nipples over and jerking her tits up as Camille slapped them making them judder and roughly pull out of Hillary's fingers only to have her reach down and grip her nipples again and twist and pull up and taunt as they were smacked some more.

//  they then got out some belts and whipped her all over her body as she writhed, screamed and cried big wet tears all over face.  They even got out a cane and whipped her across the bottoms of her feet making her jolt and writhe and then canned her ass and twat with loud smacks making her whimper and cry out.  It was so fucking hot seeing that cane land across her ample ass or twat and hearing her scream out in pain and see her body jerk away from the strike.  I loved seeing the dark belt and can marks all over her body and the way her ass was so fucking dark with all the welts and cane marks.  The way she was moaning piteously but still she was so obviously reveling in it.  Her nipples were so fucking rock hard and her cunt, pelvis and thighs were soaked and glistening with running fuck juice.  They threw her onto the floor and sat on the edge of the bed.  They used her hair to roughly pull her head to first Hillary's cunt and ordered her suck her off to an orgasm.  she pleaded no weakly and acted like she was being forced but I noticed twenty seconds into gobbling Hillary's pussy she was mashing her face in hard and eating pussy like a pro.  Sucking her cunt inside out and stiffening her tongue and tongue fucking with wild thrusts of her head and lashing / polishing her clit and soon Hillary was screaming out as her body jackknifed up into Shameka's devouring mouth.  she spent herself and Camille reached over and dragged her over to her swollen cunt and distended clit.  no pretending now as Shameka latched on and sucked her stalk clit like a dick and worked it for five minutes with some dreamy cunt hole devouring and tongue fucking and back to clit swallowing and Camille was bucking and twisting as she used two hands to grind shameka's face into her cunt as she sucked her upper cunt into her mouth and worked her magic as Camille went multiple and wailed as her upper body rose like a foot and slammed into the bed several times as her womb was ripped to shreds deep in her belly filling her with fucking bliss.  Hillary had gotten synched in and threw Shameka onto the bed and hooked her legs and pushed back and shoved her cock into her swollen cunt and began to fuck her with a hip swirling thrusting.  Gods her cunt was so beautiful as that white plastic dick plowed her hard and deep.  Then Hillary pushed her on back and got in a pushup position and pounded her box as her heavy hooters feel all over shameka's face as she grabbed them and sucked her nipples wildly with cheek hollowing sucks.  Soon she came gurgling and moaning deep in her throat as her head lulled over to the side and her eyes rolled back as body undulated and shook as divine spasms rocked her body.  not letting her rest Camille pulled her on top of her and shoved her black, thick cock deep into her cunt and Hillary mounted her asshole and they dp fucked her with powerful strokes as her body came alive and she jammed back and down as their sweaty flesh smacked and jolted.  I swooned when Hillary pulled out and rolled on her back and scooted up and Shameka leaned down and atm'ed her cock with hard sucks and Camille pushed her off and Hillary roughly guided her onto her dick and speared deep into her cunt making her gurgle and get into a beautiful fuck rhythm until Camille shoved her dick into her asshole and they dp'ed her hard and good with Camille pulling out a few times and stepping over shameka's shoulder and pushing her ass smeared dick down for Shameka to clean off with as she moaned and ummmmmmmed her pleasure.  by now all the girls were all over each other but I resisted joining because I wanted to watch the show until the sweet fucking end.  I moaned seeing Shameka sagging on top of Hillary as they pounded her fuck holes as she moaned and shook with their thrusts as her body mashed out Hillary's tits and her head lulled on her shoulder.  After a few more minutes Camille got even more aggressive smacking her ass with loud smacks now.  She then reached down  and using a hand full of hair she pulled Shameka up to her hands to and used her hair to pull Shameka into her slam thrusts as Shameka moaned and kept crying softly "shit, shit, shit".  Camille growled at her "fuck you goddammed  light skinned house nigger" and jerked her back into her slamming thrusts as she got up on her feet to slam her dick straight down her shit hole.  I could see Shameka ramping up as she moaned "oh god, your dicks are filling me up" and she moaned more gutturally and then softly cried out "ohhhhh god…shit…. I can feel you dicks rubbing in my cunt" as her moan scaled up and suddenly she was coming violently with a loud long scream and I could see her breathing harshly for her next scream and just as it got started it got choked off as Hillary reached up and gasped her violently shaking her head as shameka's eyes rolled back and drool flowed out her mouth.  she released her grip and Shameka gasped for breath and started to moan harshly until Camille grabbed handfuls of her hair close to each side of her head and pulled back viciously bowing her back and her face was cawing up at the ceiling as squeaks and spittle sprawled from her open mouth and suddenly her body was detonating with horrible body jolts as another orgasm bloomed in her ruined womb and shredded asshole and her arms shot out so stiff and rigid and shook in the air as her fingers spasmed and clawed like a macabre Frankenstein and her voice still cawed and choked as her tongue extended and spasmed for all to see as her body shook violently and she died from coming before our eyes.  they kept her so fucking taunt as she barely chocked in breath to keep her orgasm exploding out her fuck holes.  Hillary was slapping her tits on her juddering chest making her soft titties explode to the sides and judder making her nipples jolt pure pleasure to her soul I know.  Her  whole body just kept spasming violently until suddenly the last spasm exploded past her soul and her arms flopped down limp and her head lulled to the side her tongue hanging out and they released her and gently laid her down on Hillary as their mouths instantly mated and new deeper love flowed between them I could so clearly see.  I moaned as Camille unhitched her strap-on and sucked clean before lying down beside her sister and Shameka and moving her limp body over onto of hers as they now kissed deeply as Hillary kissed and stroked shameka's back, neck and asshole cooing to her softly how beautiful and wonderful she is.  Sigh, such beautiful sex and the night was still young. 

//  I am chuckling when Alana again catches them in bed and this time clearly having sex even though she is not exactly sure what it is.  I was already masturbating by her age if I am guessing her age correctly but I know I am extreme exception.  If I had caught my mom and a woman at that age I would have so wanted to join them and give and take pleasure.  at least that is what I tell myself now.  I see absolutely nothing wrong with incest as long as the child is not being taken advantage of and that is unique as each child.  I think even then I would have been ready.  Over the years I have been caught in the sack by a few children both boys and girls.  The boys are more accepting and when older are more like wow and horny at the lesbian sex while the girls are definitely more possessive and jealous of their mother's affections though I am talking emotional here.  I love Alana calling her mother's vulva "kitty".  That is just so precious.  I get the picture that Alana is a beautiful child like her mother.  I do hope that fires are being ignited that will take hold later and that her and her mother will one day know the pleasures of incestuous love.  as long as Alana chooses it then I am all for it.  most may think that is perverted but I think I am liberated.  The real taboo of incest after maturity is genetic and with kids involves trust and not abusing it but after a child is old enough to choose then let nature and love takes its course.  Okay, enough of morals 101 by barb.  Nice little trick of Nyomi to give Alana Benadryl.  I have been with a mother that used that trick with a sleep inducing medicine.  I am just happy to read how positive and life affirming Laura and Nyomi handled the situation.  They really got across how beautiful and natural it is for two women in love to express love physically.  If Alana has a bi cell in her body she will feel much more comfortable in exploring it because her mother showed her the truth of lesbian love.  no freaking out or lying or feeling ashamed of her natural desires.  What  a beautiful thing to teach a child.  I so hate the religious right brainwashing their children.  So many shuck it off as soon as possible and I love being able to help directly and indirectly with past loves and now my teenage lovers seducing moral majority girls and showing the truth.  Of course a lot of them are bi sluts boffing both boys and girls.  Those zealots would shit their pants and slacks if they only know the truth.

//  I think in some other stories you do have some fucking with interludes between trysts.  The problem is as they are written it is just words on the page.  They fuck and are just told they rest some and then fuck again.  Well that is true but they just make it so bland and dull.  They don't actually bring the women or men for that matter into the story.  Sure men just want to fuck again but they even make them duller than they are in real life.  Here you show the flow of reality and then the lovers feeling sweet lust warming in their veins.  They never give me sweet things like Nyomi slowly removing her robe to let her lover gaze hungrily at her body.  I can just see her nipples in the rippling light of the candle.  Feeling my mouth water before I even get my lips and tongue on her body.   ["Let me check on Miss All Ears."  Nyomi left and returned, all in fewer than two minutes.  "Gone," she whispered.  "Snoring.   Cute."   She slipped out of her robe again, this time more slowly, letting Laura gaze at her incredible statuesque body, her large dark circular nipples glimmering in the light from the fat candle she had lit earlier.  Then she again slid under the sheet with her.  "Here, come to me, my luff, and let me fuck you until you beg me to stop."        In seconds she had Laura panting rapidly, then mewling softly.  Nyomi had needed very little practice in girl-girl love to become an expert, and in a minute or so she had Laura keening and twisting and bucking gently.  Laura was so aroused by having previously brought the beautiful Nyomi to her thrilling orgasm, and by having to wait this long while Alana went back to sleep, that she was teetering on the edge very quickly, kept there only by Nyomi's clever skill, mostly in imitation of Laura herself, at prolonging the sweet agony.]  you also give us as usual that sweet dialog.  It doesn't have to be lines of dialog to get across the sweet emotion flowing between lovers.  Just the right line spoken with that smoky voice can set one's pussy one fire and make your nipples throb with passion.  Like how you show that making your lover cum fucking hard just primes one's body for hot fucking.  I can just feel my body flood with waiting passion when I make my sluts cum hard.  watching a woman flip and buck just makes me burn.  Hell, watching a stud slamming fuck a fuck mate, watching his muscles ripple and flex makes me hot.   When with multiple partners and I see a stud slamming his dick deep into his sluts asshole or pussy and he scream cursing or growling like only a man can as he slams his spasming dick into her emptying his nut sack into her I just kind of go crazy and just fuck my stud even wilder as I want to feel his power slamming his semen deep up my colon or womb.  Plus, as I keep whining, other authors just have them fuck without any character.  Here you show us Laura all wound up before the fuck even starts and now Nyomi is using her new skills to prolong her pleasure.  no other author has this.  The deliberated prolonging.   All other authors fuck full speed ahead.  No nuance.  This is great but please show some variety in your lovemaking techniques.  Reading the same fuck over and over gets so tiring.  The beauty of your work is that each fuck is different and thus fresh and so invigorating.  You can only fuck in so many positions and themes but we make each one unique by what we and our lovers bring to the fuck and only you show this.  You always have.

//  you once more show that rekindling of love that only you show in your stories.  With other authors I only get to see one and done basically.  They fuck and then that is it or they just keep fucking.  I do that a lot myself but I also need to rest and cuddle a lot too.  I love how you show both and not just the former.  With new lovers and extremely horny fucks you just keep going but his is often how one loves.  Resting and sweet post coital time and then back to heated, searing fucking.   sex of course brings women close but sweet post coital brings us even closer.  But love must take its course and I can just feel nyomi's weight on me as she is getting close to Laura to start loving and inhaling Laura's coral nipples.  I love feeling my lover's weight as they lean into me to get my nipples and tit meat into their mouths.  I just love the heat and feeling of closeness and if all we are sweaty how our flesh slides and grinds and feeling like a slut.  I love how you tell us the color of Laura's nipples.  White women have a huge range of color variations on their nipples and areolas just like women of color do.  Mine are sweet pink that just drives my black lovers crazy as they try to suck my nipples off and swallow them.  I love my rough lovers that slap, pinch, stretch and twist them making them all red and giving me that pain I so love and need.  Leaving marks on my breasts marking me as their slut.   Of course I make their own beauties darken and swell too.  I love paybacks!  Sigh, your word pictures.  I can just see Laura's doves in nyomi's hands as she squeezes them and roughly sucks Laura's nipples of cheek hollowing sucks.  That is so fucking hot and with my rough lovers we would be love pulping those doves and working those nipples so hard and fierce making each other gurgle, squeal and groan so gutturally.  Then you are so willing to not do oral only.  I love seeing Nyomi being all confident and mounting Laura for a sweet cowgirl trib fuck.  I love how Nyomi is taking the lead in giving and taking pleasure.  gods, I can just feel her cunt mounting mine and pressing into mine as she grinds and sweeps her soaked cunt into my mine and grips me however she will and grinds away taking us to heaven.  I love being on the bottom and feeling your juices flowing down onto my humping twat and soaking us both and feeling our mounds mash and clits dig and drag.  Love to sometimes do what Laura does and take the time to pull our lips away and hoods back and let our clits really bump and grind and feel all that slimy cunt flesh on our raw exposed clits and hair rubbing if not shaved.  I so love to gag and hump in helpless love in trib fucks.  Love the detail of nyomi's tits swirling and flopping.  One has to be flat chested or have small firm tits to not get any rolling.  I so love to see and hear your tits flopping and this is such a sweet position for it.  just gazing up and seeing them roll and if really working seeing them roll, whiplash and flop.  Getting all heated up and seeing the sweat bead and roll off and splatter off if working hard.  I just love to totally relax my belly and splay my thighs and let you trib my aching cunt.  love how you show things varying with Nyomi bending down to for some sweet French kissing and how Laura sucks her nipples while in range.  You so show how fucks bend and flow.  I love how you capture the real life of fucks.  Makes my womb lurch and fills me with the need to masturbate furiously.  You show this so clearly with [Nyomi was bearing down on her, looming over her, grinding, pumping, churning.  Laura could feel the large, thick flaps of Nyomi's cunt lips crushing into the open wet slit of her own spread pussy, and pushing and rubbing against her swollen clit, and it was certainly enough to tip her over the edge.  She fell into a sweeping wave of hot, pulsing bliss, her helpless cries gargled and then smothered by the pillow, which she snatched over in front of her mouth at the last second.        "Ummmpphggmmmggnnff!  Ohmmmnngggfff!  Arrrnnggmmnnff!" she grunted into the pillow.        Nyomi, who had seemed briefly about to come herself, did not, but she flung herself down onto Laura, hugging her and kissing her as the sweet spasms of Laura's climax began to feather away and dissipate into long, slow, shimmering sighs of ecstasy.  But she never really stopped moving, and seconds later through the fog of her own afterglow Laura realized that Nyomi's body was flexing and shuddering, and she was moaning softly into Laura's shoulder.  She was coming after all.        "Ohhhhnnnnnnnn!" she moaned softly, not a sharp, exuberant outcry like before, but instead a soft, almost sighing moan.  "Ahhnnnnnnn!"         "Oh yes, honey, oh yes!" Laura murmured to her, stroking her shoulders, again caressing her magnificent breasts, which were hard not to keep touching.        They were awkwardly contorted together like this, and yet they didn't dare to move for fear of bringing a premature end to this sweet bliss.  Finally, though, Laura could not breathe, and Nyomi feared getting a cramp.  They disentangled their limbs and stretched out side by side, embracing.]  I know I highlighted a lot but this is just so perfect.  The hot tribbing and then showing Laura falling over the edge and having a womb rending orgasm that has her screaming into her pillow with helpless bliss.  I so luxuriate in my body flooding me with sweet tearing spasms of fucking bliss.  Feeling my body jolt and twist with fucking ecstasy and how my arms and legs often kick and thrash or get all rigid and spasm with my arms hitting the mattress or floor all stiff and hard over and over or feeling my heels wallowing and digging as I use them to fulcrum my pelvis up into your mouth, fingers, cock or fist as waves of crushing pleasure explodes out my clit and fuck holes.  Then you show how their orgasms are different.  Again only you show this.  Just by saying this I show how your orgasms are so beyond the generic.  I so love how they are spent and lying on top of each other.   I am a strong girl and love being on the bottom and feeling our sweaty bodies all lying together and wrapping our limbs tight as I pull you close and mate our mouths tight and let our tongues dance in deepening love.  I so love to feel sweaty tits mashed and crushed between us as we kiss and stroke.

//  I like how this chapter ends.  Nyomi is negotiating or really begging for some more loving.  it is all good natured but still she needs more cunt meat.  I know that hunger where a lover has to leave before I am satisfied and I am whining for more loving.  I am also the one who has to leave because of work or other angel commitment.  If other angel I will bring along if I can.  That kind of depends of both sets of angels though.  I have to work to keep money coming in.  sure wish I was rich like Amber!  What I really like is how you show Laura again asking Nyomi to help bonnie and of course Nyomi does and makes sure she gets more pussy the next night for her effort.  Everyone wins!  Being serious I really like this because it is so positive and I have never seen this in a multi part story.  I have seen a helping hand story a few times in short one shots but never where it is a story cycle.  It is just sex.  Hey, that is great but I miss seeing positive role model women where I get to see them living and being helpful and loving.  If anything, it is usually more taking advantage of people.  I just love the positive spin of your stories.  I have seen so much growth and positive attitude building over the years in your stories.  Seeing women like Randi, Dee Dee, Deshona, Jane, Makeeda and others I am probably missing.  This is simply makes your stories so much more than just erotica.  It is life and the positive side of life.  There is much negativity in this world I am happy to find an author that stresses the positive aspects of life.

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Chapter 319:

//  this chapter starts with Laura dreaming of a former archangel.  I am not sure if I can remember a story starting like this.  I am smiling thinking about Laura dreaming about her lovers.  I can understand why she is dreaming about Deshona.  This was a woman who truly touched Laura and so how knows to fuck like a wild woman in bed.  I too dream about my lovers all the time.  I will lie in bed thinking of my angels and past great fucks and going through in my mind how I want to fuck them again and pairing off with favorite pairings or putting new combinations together.  I have thought that Laura seems to hold back on her dreaming and masturbating about her lovers when she is in a relationship with a main archangel.  I never restrict myself.  I have to smile at her sense of chivalry but I am just too wanton to hold myself back I guess.  I tend to go for what I desire.  I had recently been fucking Shavondra and Lakita and was dreaming of them with La'Tonya and Belissa and them getting fuck abused.  I got so wet and when I awoke I masturbated fiercely to my dreams and had two good self induced orgasms.  I then that morning called Lakita and told her of my dreams and filled her in on Belissa and La'Tonya and their abilities.  I could hear desire and told me she and her sister where in.  I then later called Belissa and told her I had new "victims" to fuck abuse.  She laughed at my attempts at humor.  That night she called back and told me to bring them over tomorrow night.  I then made arrangements with the sisters and they were free.  I just leaned back on the sofa giving myself mental high fives for all my loving work.  I drove to the sisters and they followed me to Belissa and La'Tonya's new home.  La'Tonya let us in and I noticed Kapri was in the living room too.  I was a little surprised but I was pretty sure I knew why she was there and I felt my pussy getting wet and my nipples tingling.  They sat on the main sofa and I sat on the small sofa with Kapri.  After a half hour of small talk and getting to know each other Shavondra kept looking over at me.  She was clearly wondering when the fun would start.  We all knew why we were there (Kapri was here to do me I was pretty sure – but that little sliver of doubt made me shiver with anticipatory lust).  I felt my womb clench when La'Tonya asked Lakita suddenly if she was fucking pervert for fucking her sister.  I loved how she suddenly looked so bitchy and menacing.  That Lakita was an abomination against God and nature for having sex with her younger sister.  Lakita got a mean look on her face and told La'Tonya "mind your own business, you fucking bitch!" and attempted to get up.  I felt my body getting tight with lust.  La'Tonya grabbed her by her long hair and jerked her back down hard and then smacked her hard making Lakita's head jolt to the side.  Shavondra screeched and started to get up to come to her sister's aid but Belissa blocked her back into the sofa when she tried to get up and cursed her "keep quiet you fucking whore!" and slapped her several times cruelly.  My cunt was getting fucking soaked watching Lakita and Shavondra getting slapped around, their hair pulled and now their clothes being ripped off.  I felt my eyelids spasm seeing them fighting but not really fighting and when Lakita's bra was ripped off her areoles were already engorged.  I felt my womb spasming deep in my belly watching La'Tonya and Belissa easily slapping aside the sister's arms and grappling hands.  The sisters were obviously easily being beaten down.  It was so fucking hot as I felt my panties getting soaked.  Kapri suddenly snarled at me "you fucking condone their incestuous relationship don't you.  You fucking whore!"  I turned to her and snarled back "what's it to you, you fucking nigger".  I felt my head explode to the left when she smacked me hard and I was driven into the cushions as she slapped me down and shoved me hard into the cushions as she sat on me and began to pull my clothes off roughly while still smacking my face from side to side and pulling my hair jerking my head up off the cushions making me scream in pain and then jamming and wallowing the side face down into the cushion as cried and cursed her.  I fought with her but she easily slapped and jerked my arms aside and smacked me repeatedly and choked me severely making my eyes roll back and drool all over myself. 

 

//  I was struggling weaker now and heard the sounds of slapping and crying as Kapri now pulled up my light sweater and nearly strangled me getting it off as it rubbed roughly over my face and got caught in long hair.  I struggled and cried out as I choked and gasped me some more and felt my head roughly pull through the opening.  As I got my bearings she slammed me down into the cushions and roughly pulled my pants and panties off.  She pulled my legs out and got me stretched out and roughly shoved my legs open and began to slap my cunt with hard slaps making me scream in pain and then she slapped my tits hard with both hands making them turn red and leaving finger marks on them as she tore my bra off ruining it which only made my cunt get wetter.  I moaned as they handcuffed Lakita and Shavondra's hands behind them and Kapri had me grip my elbows behind my back and used Velcro wraps to bind my arms behind me.  We were made to lie out with our feet supporting our lower bodies and our upper bodies on the cushions.  We were all moaning and weeping as we watched them get out their floggers and cat of nine tails.  I watched as the sisters were now flogged cruelly with strikes on their tits as La'Tonya and Belissa wind milled their floggers across their tits and bellies.   They then used long strokes of their arms to deliver loud cruel blows of their floggers.  Soon I couldn't watch anymore as Kapri started in on me.  I felt my womb flipping in my belly as those tassels stroke my breast, belly and cunt over and over and then a full arm strike making me moan and roll right and left as they worked us up and down our bodies.  They can be really mean and I felt the flogger striking my throat and my face with stinging slaps making me weep and groan in need.  When you are with experts you know you are totally safe.  I heard Belissa say it was time for the "cats to play" and I groaned hearing Shavondra scream out "pleassseeeeee" and Belissa snarled at her to "stick that cunt out bitch".  I watched as Shavondra got on the balls of her feet and jutted her cunt forward and up.  Belissa pulled her cat-of-nine-tails back and let fly and it landed with a loud whack on Shavondra's vulva making her scream.  I was screamed at to get my cunt up as was Lakita and now we were screaming as our cunts, bellies and tits were cruelly struck over and over again by the whips.  I felt my clit sear me with pain when Kapri hit it fully with the whip.  They took their time to aim and make sure their strikes did maximum damage as our bodies had welts and dark marks on the sisters and red marks all over my front and sides.  I could hear Lakita breathing growing harsh through her sobs and moans.  She started to quake and I could see her body getting tense as her swollen nipples were engorged and rock hard.  She cried out for La'Tonya to whip her nipples harder and La'Tonya now concentrated her efforts on her nipples with cruel strikes.  Lakita is a complete pain whore and her face just contorted and slashed horribly as her body humped lewdly with strong upthrusts of her pelvis and suddenly she was screaming as an orgasm exploded out her womb and her body jackknifed wildly as La'Tonya used a foot on her belly to keep her in place and dropped her whip and gripped both of Lakita's nipples and squeezed and twisted them making Lakita wail and flip and twist as much as the foot and hands cuffed behind her back would allow.  She just cam and cam wildly as she screamed three more times as she went multiple because Kapri the slut had abandoned me and feel to her knees and buried her face in Lakita's cunt and was trying to suck her distended clit off making Lakita just die form it.  Needless to say Shavondra and I were in desperate need by now and we were soon taken care of so fucking well and the loving was really only starting!

 

//  I am smiling at getting to see the rare side of Laura masturbating.  I have noticed over the years that she seems to only masturbate rarely.  Only when she is been alone for awhile and really focused on a woman do we get to see her masturbate.  I see her thinking of Makeeda even though Deshona is firing her soul.  I think she feels guilty to masturbate to thoughts of another.  I don't feel any such thoughts.  I love to freely think of the lover on my mind while I am masturbating or masturbating to women I have seen on TV or one the street and thinking of fucking their brains out.  Putting women together in my mind and playing out hot sex trysts.   Then I try to make as many of them as possible come to fruation.  I so love to fuck in new combinations.  I so love making love happen.  Seeing Laura masturbate brings to mind something I have observed in a lot of women.  it is amazing how many women and even men don't admit to masturbating even when they were teenagers.  I just roll my eyes and if asked I tell them I masturbated my pussy raw as girl and still jack off all the time.  I tell them that no one can give you the orgasms that your own hand can.  I just fucking lose my mind when I jerk myself off.  I was with amber and veronica a while back in my bed.  I wanted to love fuck them without the normal posse.  It is obvious they are each other's archangels.  We had been fucking heatedly and were resting for our next round of hot fucking.  I started to rub my pussy and I saw Veronica look scandalized and amber blushing profusely.  I languidly asked them to masturbate along with me when Veronica gasped out she "never" in that classic voice and amber just shook her head no.  I absolutely knew these two total sluts had to be constantly masturbating.  I was stroking my pussy but stopped and sat up.  I kept telling them to tell me the truth and looking at them with my serious eye.  I could see that amber was the easier nut to crack and cooed to her lie back and stroke her pussy.  she looked shyly over at veronica and put a folded pillow behind her head (the fucking pro) and started to stroke rub her flat chest and squeeze her nipples as her breathing increased as her twat slowly started to instinctively hump and one hand ran down her belly and began to run up and down her already wet slit.  I cooed to her if she was a fucking slut and whore and her body just kept hitching and her fingers got more desperate as she pinched her small nipples and was now pounding her cunt hole with two fingers as the other hand flew to her clit and began to rub furiously.  Soon her pelvis was writhing up and down as she pounded her cunt and her buzzed her clit so fast her hand was a blur.  I had to smile as Veronica eyes kept traveling from amber's face as it slashed and jerked and was now beginning to slam back into the pillow as sweat was now filmed all over her body.  her neck corded up and her eyes bulged and suddenly she was jackknifing as long guttural groans were ripped from her throat as four cruel spasms throttled her sweet young flesh as she kept pounding her squishing cunt and buzzing her rock hard clit.  slowly she came down as she now languidly stroked her spent cunt and her head lulled to the side.  She slowly came to and sat up looking all dreamy.  I asked her if she wanted to watch Veronica masturbate and she moaned "oh fuck yeah".  Veronica was all blushed and looking scandalized but I noticed her nipples were rock hard and her cunt was soaking wet.  She reached over and pulled over a long silver rocket we had been using earlier.  She started sucking on it and twisting it as she gave it head.  Amber gave her her pillow and veronica asked for a second and laid back.  gods, my womb melted as she started to kneed and her c-cup tits and pulled and twisted her nipples and stroked her belly and thighs with confident self love the lying whore.  Why do women lie! about this normal urge we should exercise for all our lives.  We do it all the time at that age and often all our lives.  I watched her run two fingers up and down her slit and then started to fingerfuck herself and then circle her clit while one hand loved her tits.  She was humping lewdly and grabbed the silver bullet and turned on medium and slide it deep into her cunt and began to fuck herself with long slow strokes.  I loved how it got milky with her juices as she now used her other hand to fork and rub her clit.  I moaned as she pulled out to clean off with hungry sucks and lewd full tongue licks up the shaft and then stuff deep back into her clinging cunt.  loved seeing her petals clinging and riding out her vulva on the out strokes.  I felt my eyes spasm when she got a knee up and tilted over and pulled the rocket from her cunt and slide it over her hip and into her ass crease and she stiffened and groaned when it started sinking into her asshole.  she loves anal as much as vaginal penetration.  It was so beautiful watching that vibrator stroking in and out her ass as she sank all ten inches that she could into her shit hole.  Several times she pulled it out to suck clean and then shove hard into her asshole making her judder and shake.  She started getting wilder as she pumped her asshole hard and was slapping and rubbing her muff hard with her palm as her cunt made those divine squishy sounds and cum splattered and slavered her pelvis and belly.  Suddenly her head rocked back and a loud scream tore from her throat as she pelvis rose up off the mattress and juddered hard as demented groans escaped from her throat as now savage convulsions ripped her womb wide open deep in her belly and her right hand sort of spasmed and she ripped the vibrator out of her ass so hard that she lost her grip on it and it flew onto the floor as it buzzed obscenely as her body continued to jolt and jackknife as she cried out as a second orgasm throttled her soul with pure fucking bliss.  She comes wet and the mattress was soaked and her belly and pelvis dripping with cum.  So fucking beautiful and now amber and I were ready to fuck yet again and soon veronica was hungrily joining us as got into a daisy chain of hot sucking and the love just flowed from there.

 

//  as a masturbation aficionado I love the details but I have seen that when we do see Laura pleasuring herself when don't get to see the details.  This is private that the reader doesn't get to share.  Plus, I get the feeling that Laura doesn't revel in masturbating like I do.  She does it only when the pressure is at supernova and needs relief.  I would love to see how she plays and strokes herself.  I always love the little humorous insights you give us into her life and by inference that we have in our life. [ "Unnnhhhh . . . ahhhnngggg!   Oh!  Ohhhhnnngggg!" she groaned, coming in a beautiful seizure.        Again this woke the cats.  They blinked and stared at her with infinite, ethereal patience, then went back to sleep once again.  After a few minutes of luxuriating in her fantasy and kissing Makeeda's image in her mind about a thousand times, she got up and dressed for work.]  I of course love the sounds of Laura cumming and feeling with her that ecstatic feeling of your whole body convulsing with fucking bliss as your fingers claw and toes curl and your cawing out your fucking bliss as you work your cunt and tits and maybe asshole.  like the cats blinking at Laura as only cats can do.  I do think it is sweet that she thinks only of Makeeda.  I would be thinking of my sweeties and the other women I am dreaming about and pairing them as I again masturbate to crushing orgasms.  I sometimes masturbate until my cunt can't take anymore.  I so love having a worn out cunt and clenching asshole after a long bout of self loving.  when one fantasies about ones loves it can only bring you all closer and even more ready to share love and heated fucking.  it just fires me up and often gives me new ideas about how to fuck ourselves into a coma.  I am smiling at the cats staring at Laura with those slit eyes and then showing their disdain like only cats can.  I am so their with Laura as she can't get Deshona out of her mind.  I so know having a woman in my thoughts and not being able to get her out of my thoughts and calling her and begging if I have to see her like yesterday.  Telling her how I am going to suck her pussy inside out and work my titty magic and how I will pound her asshole so good if she so inclined.  I so know how to make my angels hot for it.  what I like about your stories is the fact that Laura can do it.  we have the flow of time and the character development to see Laura pining for a past lover.  It is nice to see real lust and want in a story.  One parts by their nature can't capture this and the Sandy universe is only like on day four and the harem author doesn't have any magic in his stories like you do.  We can feel Laura's real passion for her former archangel.

//  I am smiling as I see Laura calling Deshona and leaving a sexy message and getting Deshona all hot and bothered and calling her back and telling her to keep her pussy ready for when she gets back.  I like how we have to wait for Deshona get back.  you show real life and how we have to deal with it.  I am smiling as I hear the heat in both of their messages.  I don't think I have ever seen this in another story.  I love to have phone sex with my angels and talking my baby to orgasm and having her doing it to me.  I am happy to see an author show this.  Wow, I can never really see how you will pace your stories.  I know if I wrote this story then Deshona would be coming home and Makeeda would be away and out of the way but she comes home for three weeks.  I just have to give you credit.  I have to smile at Laura and her exclusiveness.  I would be taking Makeeda with me to fuck gloriously with other angels (after much getting her to see the light – hope does spring eternal).  Once I make a rendezvous with an angel I have to so try to keep that love tryst and if I have to break it then I make a new one as soon as possible.  Often I bring my other angel along and let the love just so soar.  I so love the nervousness of newbies to multi partner love and how my angels just devour them along with me as we take her to such a fucking heaven that she is completely hooked.  I am smiling at Makeeda telling Laura she won't be having the roving eye because she is so worn out.  I am chuckling because I may be worn out in the morning but as the day goes by I can just feel my batteries recharging and then raging if an angel text, email, calls me or a work angel tempts me or a hopeful newbie catches my eye.  I so love how they tell each other that they will be waiting for each other with the idea their will be no other but both know they be dining on sweet cunt meat as they wait.  I know Laura will and Makeeda seems to find at least one woman to tempt her heart and pussy.  I just wish she would dine on pussy around the globe as she travels and then regal Laura with those stories upon her return.  I can dream can't I.   again I love the fact that I can't predict your pacing.  I want the sex to start like immediately of course (I'm a slut I know) but love reading it not happening immediately.  A contradiction I know.  I am smiling as we see that Laura has been playing Deshona's message over and over getting wet each time.  I would be feeling like a volcano about to blow I think.  She is finally able to call Deshona and they banter like only you show.  I so love the sexy talk that you show and the love banter.  Other stories just never have any talking on the phone really and the few lines is just basic boring dialog.  Enough to move the story along in a strict linear mode.   Nothing special while you give us lines like us [Deshona laughed softly.  "Imagine what my pretty little black pussy is like wanting Laura to be all over it inside and out."]  only you ever have this gentle wit of one lover talking to another lover.  The harem author has his three dweebs for humor but only you show genuine wit.  Wit is such a love weapon and I love seeing it in your stories.  Gods know that this would have my pussy on fire for Deshona. 

//  it is the little details that I so love in your stories [She arrived at her house in Burlingame at almost the same time Laura did the following day, driving up in her silver Mercedes just as Laura was getting out of her white Camaro.  Both were still dressed in their tailored business garb, looking crisp and professional, though perhaps a trifle wilted at the end of a busy day.  They could be meeting like this for an evening conference, or perhaps a real estate deal.]  to me this is a little snap shot of their lives.  Seeing their every day selves professional selves.  Seeing them and knowing the neighbors have no idea they are lesbians and will soon burying their faces in each other cunts and making each other writhe and cum so fucking hard.  I get a blast knowing that people all around us have no idea what sweet lesbian debauchery is happening right under their noses.  Geez, I love writing something and now seeing that Laura's thighs are quivering with rising lust.  I so know that feeling.  Recently I drove over to Julia's house and parked beside Stacy's car.  I was humming looking at the neighboring houses and smiling thinking my thoughts of if they only knew.  It was dusk and I felt my eyes bulge as the politician's wife opened the door in the nude all sweaty and hair wet and lank on her forehead and on one cheek.  Stacy was standing behind her smiling and reached around and started to massage her tits hard and twisting her nipples as I walked in and closed the door.  The lights were dim as I stripped right their and roughly pushed Julia to the wall as soon as I got naked and sank to my knees.  I buried my face into her shaved cunt and started to suck her cunt inside out and tongue lash her clit with fervid skill.  I looked up as Stacy worked her tits with her mouth and hands and moved up to kiss her deeply as she pulped Julia's tits.  I gripped her ass cheeks and squeezed them as I wolfed her pussy down.  I was now pounding her cunt with three fingers as it squished and splattered all over me and super sucked her clit as she started to shake and writhe and she cried out as Stacy moved to suck her nipples super hard to let her cry out her bliss as I glanced up to see her head pounding the wall making her see stars I know.  She screamed out again as one hand gripped Stacy's head and the other mine as she moaned so gutturally "oohhhh fuckkkkkkkkk' and "don't stop, don't stop, don't stop".  Gods, we were now even sweater and messier as we got back to her bed and fucked so gloriously.  Late that night I swooned as Julia got on her hand and knees and I pulled her big, firm ass cheeks apart and watched Stacy drool copious spit into her rosebud and started to work her fingers into Julia's tight shit hole.  I so loved Julia's moaned gibbering as Stacy worked all four fingers into her asshole and then thumb and up to her knuckles.  I got my cheek on her lower back and loved moaned along with them as Stacy's knuckles oh so slowly worked into her sphincter and Julia hissed and groaned but I noticed she was humping back to get Stacy's love fist into her shit hole.  I felt my eyes roll back as Stacy's hand slide into her rectum and Julia just juddered, shook and moaned.  Stacy let her colon distend and relax as she whispered to Julia that she was making her fist and she could feel her woman's pulse on her wrist.  Slowly Stacy started to pump her fist slowly in and out a few inches as I watched her wrist get slicked with ass cream and watched her pound Julia's inner sphincter ring.  Gods, it was so beautiful as Stacy worked her love fist and soon she was ramming her fist deep into Julia's belly as she twisted her love fist and I watched her forearm getting all slicked and shiny with ass juice.   Bending down to lick up and seeing Julia getting all spacey looking as I sat on my knees and feet.  I moved up to her face and licked and kissed her face as I asked how good Stacy was making her feel and she keened each time Stacy sank her forearm up her asshole and she moaned out as her eyes half rolled and spasmed that Stacy was taking her to heaven.  I started to squeeze her tits and pull her nipples and then moved to her hips as I sensed the end coming and began to buzz her clit with my right hand and began to slap her ass cheeks with my other.  Stacy was smacking her other cheeks I wasn't and began to lunge her fist down her colon and twisting back and forth at its deepest and then snaking down hard and pounding her sphincter to then ram deep, twisting and hard again and again.  It was so fucking perfect as Julia let out a blood curdling scream of pure fucking bliss and then started to jackknifing and thrashing as Stacy stroked her fist deep throughout her long and torturous orgasm as moaned so gutturally as she shook but continued to ram her ass back into Stacy's fist as she came completely for us.  I am smiling seeing and hearing her in my mind's eye as she whimpered and cooed as Stacy removed her fist and we licked clean as we cuddled.  Of course after Julia recovered it was Stacy that was fisted for my voyeur enjoyment and then they double fisted me as I reveled in feeling their fists rubbing against each other as they worked my cunt and asshole so fucking good.  I simply can't describe how heavenly it feels to feel my fuck holes filled so full and feeling Stacy pounding my cervix and Julia ramming her arm down my shit hole and making my organs quiver as her fist sinks underneath my ribs and finally cuming so, so, so fucking hard as I thrashed and wailed my fucking bliss as Stacy bent down and tried to suck my clit off as I went multiple.  Life is just so fucking perfect sometimes.

//  geez, that humor again ["Come on," she said, smiling with sweet sarcasm, leading Laura up the steps to the front door, "we better get inside before we cause an earthquake out here with our horniness.  The rabbits and the possums are all going to commence fucking their ears off out here on the front lawn."        "Oh . . . are you feeling that way too?" Laura asked airily, feigning a vague disinterest.]  I know I keep harping on this but you are the only author to do this.  It is like seeing diamonds in the garbage like a story I read long ago.  I know your wit has stood you in good stead over the years.  women simply love wit.  One really cool thing here is the fact that we are reminded that Deshona is a changed woman.  She was once very cold and bitchy and yet with Laura's love and patience she is now still maybe a little remote but to her lovers she is now a caring, giving lover.  Laura got through to her and changed her with her love.  you are the only author to show any true change in her characters.  The others are given to us and locked in time.  Of course like all things we change over time.  I like seeing this and showing how love and attention can make women grow and soar to new heights.  Only by creating this universe and actually letting time flow in it can you show this.  And you are so cool because you actually do it.  The sandy and harem author never show growth and achieving of potential.  By adding this you make the women so more life like and therefore the reader is sucked into the story and thus when the sex occurs we are totally in the story.  It really makes for some devastating orgasms let me tell you while masturbating to these stories.  I am smiling as they have now reacquainted themselves and done a little dance of delayed love but now nature must take its course.  [They kissed in a long, lingering, expressive way, not insatiably passionate as Laura had thought they might be, but instead taking their time, a deeply friendly as well as smoldering kiss, full of sex and touching affection, lasting several minutes, very wet.          "Nobody kisses like my Laura," Deshona whispered, sliding her wet lips across Laura's cheek to her neck and her ear, letting her tongue burrow into it.  "God, I miss you.  I envy the singer."]  I have always thought of your stories as a series of coming together.  Usually your stories start with Laura simply living her life and then she comes together with her angel.  Then they come together on a personal level and then the first kiss, then the seduction or foreplay between lovers, then the foreplay, then the sex and then the orgasm.  a stage that we pass through in life to reach the heavenly end game.  Not sure how to express clearly but you make each chapter so special because you capture this flow between lovers.  Other stories have this of course.  Moving from A and passing through B to get to C.  but they almost always miss something.  The one shots don't have the time and kilobytes and the multiple part story writers in the gay / het worlds simply don't capture the magic like you do.  I think a lot of it has to with the fact that you have made these women into women.  the others are just characters that have sex in the final act.  You have taken the time and effort to make Deshona herself.  She has depth and her own qualities that set her apart form Makeeda and Laura's other recent lovers.  With other stories it is merely the physical differences but with your stories it is the person herself that is so different.  You show that realism in stories make them so superior.  One can just feel the love and longing in Deshona for Laura.   Because of this I felt my belly spasm when their mouths came together in gentle love.  I so know this loving with a long time lover.  No burning hunger with the first kiss.  Letting your lips caress and tongues insinuating between outer teeth and gums and sweeping in languid love as your slut moans and quivers in your arms and probing her teeth until they part and I slide my long tongue deep into her mouth and twine around her tongue and spear deep as I feel her shake and take a peak and often see her eyes lids fluttering or her eyes rolling back as I clench tight.  I so love to start with a deep soul kiss and then kiss her eyelids and nose and cheeks and then run my tongue to her ears and make her mewl and melt as I tongue fuck her ears before devouring her mouth with my tongue taking her mouth stronger and more forcefully as I now clench tight and run my thigh between her legs and press her twat along my thigh as I make my whore hump with instinctive love as I kiss her deeply and roam my hands and caress her back and run through her hair as I whisper to her how much I love her and need her.  And if the time is right tilting her neck and clamping my teeth into her throat and giving her cruel hickey making her mewl and sometimes scream.  I love it when they spasm and sometimes almost pummel me with their hands and fists as their limbs spasm for me and then their hand clenches in my hair and rams my mouth into their throat as I now voraciously suck their neck flesh and bruise them marking them as my total slut.  Gods know I love it when I feel my neck pushed roughly to the side and your teeth sink into my flesh and I feel my flesh pumping through your teeth as you suck hard and or fast making me judder and usually cry out in helpless pleasure as my knees weaken and as my belly turns to jelly deep in my core.  Makes me totally helpless to your love.

//  I like how Laura deflects Deshona's comment about how lucky Makeeda is.  I like how Laura uses wit and charm to deflect her comment about how lucky Makeeda is to be in Paris .  I too know how to deflect and distract.  I find one way or another to get my angels to understand I am taken and let me teach you the true way.  From time to time I have to leave a sweat angel behind if she is to possessive or if she can't handle it or needs to find her a one on one angel.  I try to make sure that doesn't happen but sometimes it must.  Sigh.  I always miss an angel when I lose her like this.  I so want to keep all my angels.  Of course that can't happen and that does free one up to find new love.  I always hunger for my new love angel.  I like the fact that you have a story that allows Laura to have to come up with ways to keep her angels happy with what she can give.  I find fucking their brains out and showing them new lovers is so easy to get them to see my viewpoint.  Women love pussy and giving them all they can devour makes them so fucking happy.  The ones that can't see that, I must move on from.  I find most women eventually see the light like Deshona if you carefully show her the way [Deshona nipped her earlobe.  "I know how to make you forget," she whispered.  "Let me freshen up.  That's a clever way of saying I have to use the bathroom.  You know your way around.  I'll meet you in the bedroom in three minutes.  There's a bottle of champagne in the fridge if you want to pick it up on the way."]  I love hearing my angel telling me that she is going to fuck me blind and make my womb explode in fucking bliss deep in my belly.  Confidence and sassy assurance just makes me melt and I know it makes my babies melt for me.  then you give me that humor that I always like.  Only lovers who are comfortable and have come to know each other can show this banter.  Again you have created a world that allows this.  Thank you for the world and then actually bringing real life into.  While I love the sex in " Sandy " and "Harem" it so Hollywood in its scripted stories.   I like reading about women who seem real to me.  and it is the little things that you capture like nipping an earlobe.  It is the little things that make love and sex so fucking rad.  Things that I love and know I would forget to write myself.  Feeling my ears being nipped simply makes my womb flip and flop in my belly as I feel my belly melting in love her my hungry slut lover.  Then you have that banter I so love.  a back and forth between lovers.  I cannot remember one story other than yours where the women or men / women make those small little comments that your lover chuckles and you feel that little something in your brain that says to you your lover is simply so fucking rad.  The conversations in other stories is not their or if there, it is so cookie cutter.  I love how Laura and Deshona take her original comment about needing to pee and running with it.  this is real life mirth between lovers.  Yeah!

//  in passing earlier Laura talked of Deshona's growth but here we see it fully delineated [And she was as cold as the sharpest, most frigid icicle, peremptory, contemptuous, even mean to Laura, who did not take long making it clear that she was fatally smitten and would not take no for an answer.  It seemed she had labored for months to break through the ice.  And when it finally happened, she found that the fire under the ice was hot enough to melt diamonds.  A new kind of relationship had been born for both of them, one that certainly could be called 'love,' and also certainly 'lust,' but that did not require them to possess each other to the exclusion of all others.  Indeed, for a while, almost another year, Deshona had continued her tormented connection to Charles, and Laura had fallen deeply into another kind of love with Sara.         And yet there remained a sacred little place both of them guarded for each other.  It was a very unsentimental and yet a deeply reverent feeling they shared, made doubly strong by the fierce physical hunger they had.  They could feel the pull of each other across the continent.]  what is so beautiful and rad is the fact that Deshona has grown and we have gotten to see it.  this is growth that is beyond whether or not she has accepted her true lesbian desires.  Of course I want to read about women truly embracing their true sexual nature.  I too love reading about women who with love and support are able to grow and change their basic selves.  I find most people don't really want to change but then again a lot will if giving love and guidance.  Laura by taking the punishment she did was able to reach the woman who was hiding behind her frigid barrier and help her shed that shield.  I say a lot, that only you do this, but this is so true her in all capital letters.  Deshona has shown this growth and I saw it in Dee Dee, Ada and Randi big time and in others to a lesser degree.  It adds so much to this story arch that has spanned the years.  you show how people can evolve and change over time.  This makes the fucks that Deshona have shared recently so deep and loving.  it is the history over time that so clearly shows up in the chapters that involve Deshona.  Nothing else in erotica is close because no other author in erotica tries to capture this.  They cannot capture the hunger that you mention here because they don't even care to go there I believe.  I don't think a story could have held up over three hundred chapters without it.  Yours probably could have because of the womb rending sex (best – period) but still after so many years it would have gotten boring for you to write I am sure.  The Sandy author backed off for months on her story because she told us that she had gotten bored.  When you are just putting sex scenes together I can see that.  Here we have great sex but we get to see women change and grow and new real life situations occur and people change and grow and sometimes move on.  This is real life and makes your story stand up over time.  I am just thankful that you have taken the time and effort to create this wonderful universe of living, breathing women.  I just keep thinking about how far Deshona has come.  It really is amazing to see this type of stuff in an erotica story.  Not only do you show her growth but the nuances of how she clung to her loser husband for way to long and how it lead Laura to fall for Sara.  Like I say, so many layers you add to the story and it is not needed since this is erotica, but by adding it you make these stories so much more.  If the reader so chooses they can fall so deeply into these stories and thus really become one with these women.  thus, when they make love we can truly be their with them and feel their womb rending orgasms as if we are there.  So fucking lovely!  My pussy thanks you!!!

//  you continue the sweet character interplay with them bantering about how Laura had to work to seduce Deshona and teasing about using the bathroom.  like I say I can't get enough of this bantering.  I am thinking again here, and, yes no other author in erotica has these sweet little moments.  I have to smile at Deshona being so embarrassed at being a squirter.  I have found some women are embarrassed by this but when I revel in it and my other love sluts we soon teach them to be proud that their pussies are so blessed.  I remember the second time we brought the Emily and her girls over to Shari , Cindy and Tameka's.  I was watching Shari driving her face deep into veronica's sweet white pussy.  we had been fucking for a while and veronica was working for like her second orgasm.  she was on the floor humping up desperately as her so white fingers were clawing into Shari 's scalp as she cried out and moaned gutturally.  I saw Shari 's cheek hollow out as she super sucked veronica's clit and then tongued fucked her with hard head thrusts and back and forth.  It was so beautiful as I watched veronica's pelvis rotate up and Shari's black face buried in white cunt meat seeing those pale cunt lips engulfing Shari's full lips and her guttural groans as she mauled her sweet lover's cunt.  suddenly, veronica was squealing like a stuck pig and she got up on the balls of her feet and I watched her toes curl into the carpet to help hump with desperate heaves of her hips as her upper body jackknifed and shook wildly.  Suddenly, Shari 's face went back a few inches as I saw cunt juice ejaculating out of veronica's rupturing cunt.  I saw Shari 's  surprised look as her open mouth let sweet cunt nectars pour out as more soaked her face.  Veronica was jerking Shari 's head forward desperately as she whimpered gutturally "sucksucksuckpleasesuck".  Shari got her bearings and opened mouth even wider and mashed her face into veronica's fuck hole sucking and tongue flailing for all she was worth.  She now gripped veronica's ass and pulled up hard and I watched Shari choke and gulp as cunt juice splattered and squirted out around her clamped mouth soaking her face and hair and Veronica's belly, pelvis and thighs.  Gods it was so beautiful as veronica had a second orgasm that ripped her womb wide open as more cunt juice squirted from her rupturing cunt as Shari tried to swallow it all and the excess was now running off her face in rivulets and webbing her black hair.  Finally the storm passed and veronica was totally spent as she pulled Shari up and they kissed in deep languid love and let their sweaty and cum covered bodies meld and slide together in deep, pure interracial love.  I am just so happy that veronica totally accepts her body and revels in her sweet pussy giving us such a sweet gift of love juice.

// I like how you kind of take it full circle [Deshona giggled again, a sweet, girlish giggle that was so out of character until you knew her as well as Laura did.  She was ordinarily very frosty and curt and all business, so that these little moments of girlish mirth and playfulness were a total revelation.  She shook her head.  "No . . . I keep that to myself.  Sometimes, thinking how you make me come, it makes me come that way with them too.  See how magical you are."        Laura made a face.  "Pressure.   Pressure pressure.   Now I have to live up to that reputation."]  you are now showing the new Deshona and juxtaposing the old Deshona so the reader can have it reinforced.  The growth that she has experienced.   It is just so cool to see this in a story.  Over the years I have seen women become so much more and a few who have become so much less.  There is no need to dwell on the negatives and I like how you show the positive and what love can do to a woman.  I like reading of Deshona thinking of Laura and her vast skills and letting that help her cum harder.  I will often think and daydream as I am being eaten or fucked.  Thinking of past great fucks or thinking of how to have great future fucks and then using my memories or horny thoughts to help the current fuck get even hotter.  I believe in driving my body as hard as possible to have awesome orgasms.  I find that most of my lovers know who to totally rock my boat.  Most have their own special skills and talents to make my cunt and asshole explode with fucking bliss.  Again you bless us with humor.  Your humor is the gentle Ellen DeGeneres kind of humor that I so love.  that easy humor that just makes you smile gently.  Humor that makes lovers just relax with each other.  You then give us the banter that only you show.  I know I keep going on about it but you are the only author to show women just having that intimate dialog that we have.  All other authors only have lines in their stories that make the story move forward towards the sex.  That is alright in short one part stories but I sure that all multipart story writers would give me at a little of the dialog you usually give me each chapter.  Dialog that just happens between women.   dialog that has nothing to do with plot and moving the story forward.  It  allows me to think I am actually there with these women as they share life and love.  you then show us them starting to kiss and their fingers digging through clothes to clutch into their lover's body.  I love this time of first coming together and taking the loving to that first higher level.  I love to feel clothe between us because soon I know I am going to be removing it.  I love to strip fully before fucking but a lot of my lovers like to fuck in various stages of undress or in sexy wear.  It is a nice change of pace but eventually I am getting us naked!  Deshona is a lot like me I think in that she likes it rougher than Laura.  Laura is bantering about using the "Emperor" on her and we see her immediately perk up.  I am cheesing big time here as I think of Deshona's eyes flashing and her nostrils flaring as her need of being deep dicked rise up.  Then I am smiling as Laura is doing her usual flummoxed self as she senses that Deshona is looking for a nice hard fuck.  This is clearly show by this [Deshona gave her a sexy smirk, then flounced over to the magnificent mahogany bureau and opened one drawer.  She pulled the entire apparatus, harness belt and all, out of the drawer and dangled it in front of Laura, holding it by her thumb and forefinger.  "I would never forget twice," she said, solemnly, then broke into another devilish grin.        The Emperor was an extra-large strap-on dildo that Deshona especially favored since it reminded her of her husband Charles's huge penis.  She might hate him now, but during the years of their marital struggle he had often fucked her doggy style into excruciating star showers of coming with a skill that she claimed only Laura could rival.  The Emperor, strapped to Laura's crotch, had, according to her, brought her even deeper ecstasies than Charles had ever procured her. ]  I can understand why she thinks that few can make a good cocksman.  A lot of men I guess  just thinking having a dick is enough or don't get the experience to be truly good.  With a lot of women they just don't understand it is all in the hips.  You have to use your hips like a man to be a good cocksman.  I love training women how to use strap-on right.  I look at it as flexing and pumping the hips and not trying to use the whole body in that wooden way that takes away so much from a good strap-on fucking if that is all you do.

//  a couple of weeks ago Joann brought home a cute redhead from work.  She was a new paralegal to do legal research.  Her name is Rachael.  She has a cute face that grows on you more as you look at her pretty hazel eyes and auburn eyebrows.  She has nice hips and beautiful full gourd tits.  We fell on her like starving wolves and dined on her cunt, tits and asshole.  we kept paring up in all different combinations.  We then rested and showered and gave ourselves nice enemas to get us clean on the inside and the outside.  Maria and I knew that it fuck the hell out of Joann first night.  We got synched into our favorite strap-ons and let Rachael pick one out.  I could see that she was a little nervous and not overly skilled watching her actions and body language.  Joann got on her knees in the middle of the living room and started giving us a blow bang.  She was bobbing, corkscrewing and lip locking for all she was worth.  She was sucking me off and I gripped her hair with both hands and began gag fucking her with pistoning hips and then jerked her head back and slapped her hard with my dick and threw her over to Maria who now gagged fucked her and then slipped her large dick down her gagging throat and slapped the back of her head spiking it deep and thrusted with her hips so drive it fully down her gullet and then ripped her head back to let her breath and gag as spit roped off her dick and onto her tits and belly as she gasped.  Maria reached over and grabbed Rachael's hand and guided it to Joann's hair and got her fingers to grip her hair and using her hand jerked her over to Rachael roughly.  As Joann moaned and awkwardly kneed over in front of Rachael and began to wildly suck her cock with slobbery sounds.  we encouraged Rachael to hump her hips and whispered to her how to rotate and thrust her hips when she did it so woodenly and stiffly like so many women do at first.  We keep crooning to her how to do it and pretty soon she was getting the hang of it as she started to ram her cock into the back of Joann's throat making her choke and gag as Rachael started to really get into making Joann's head rock back and with our encouragement tilting Joann's head to the side and pushing her cockhead into her cheek and roughly pushing it out the side of her mouth.  we told Rachael to throw her down on the sofa and she did and we got Joann on her back and head over the edge of the sofa and guided Rachael over to Joann and guided her cock down and told her to fuck Joann's throat.  gods it was so beautiful as she hesitated at first but was soon slamming her hips down and fully burying her long dick into Joann's gullet making her throat bulge obscenely as spit was soon flowing down her face, over her eyes, forehead and into her hair and dripping off onto the rug.  We took turns fucking her throat hard as we started to jerk her off and twist and suck her nipples.  It was fun making sure she came so fucking hard as Rachael was gripping the sofa back cushions so she could slam her dick down Joann's cawing throat as her hips now pumped like a seasoned pro.  It was so fucking hot as Joann came with her throat stuffed with dick as she jackknifed and eyes roll backed as she came gasping and coughing as Rachael pulled out to let her breath and then gripped the underside of her head and held her head steady to slam her dick so hard and deep and pulling out to let her caw groan and get her breath some more before skull fucking her hard again.  We then threw her down on the floor and quickly tp fucked her.  We let Rachael take her asshole first and we moaned as she moaned sliding her first dick into an asshole.  we smiled when Maria got up from Joann's mouth and walked back and helped Rachael pull out and told her to let Joann suck her shit candy off her dick.  Rachael's eyes bulged and spasmed as she walked around and slowly feel to her knees and held her dick up for Joann and I looked to see her eyes roll back as Joann latched onto her cock and wolfed it down and whispered up to Rachael that her asshole tasted so fucking good on her cock.  Rachael was so fucking hooked.  She was no anal virgin but she was an ATM virgin and I felt my womb flip when she was offered Joann's cock that took her asshole first and didn't even hesitate as her mouth clamped onto her cock and gave fierce sucks and her tongue lapped up all over Joann's dick.  I so love seeing women learning to do more than they have in the past.

//  I have really loved how Deshona has a kinky side that she loves to explore.  I like it that some of your women have this side but not all.  I love it that the women in Laura's life who love kink are always making her flustered.  I giggle now that Makeeda is asking for it rough and seeing Laura blanch.  I always find it amusing that Laura denies her inner kink angel.  I mean she and Karen and earlene used to so hard core love abuse each other.  So I am smirking as [Deshona slowly pulled the bedspread and the top sheets and blankets down to the foot of the bed.  "Oooohhh, I so love it when you're mean.   Remember when you spanked me . . . and then . . . oh god, my heart flutters just remembering it."        Laura pulled her close and started removing her blouse again, kissing each smooth swatch of bare dark brown skin that came into view.  "I remember it . . . and if you don't shut up and get undressed I'm going to spank you again.  And then you won't get fucked by The Emperor, which we both know you want."        Deshona giggled softly and began unfastening Laura's buttons too.  "I don't see why you can't do both," she said, nipping Laura's ear lobe, getting Laura's blouse free and tossing it away onto the floor.        "Hey, careful there!" Laura laughed.  "I'm billing you for every piece of ruined clothing."]  again you show growth though.  Once Laura sort of tried to walk away from her inner kink she was at first almost, hummm, searching for the right word, scandalized?, to describe her reaction when an angel made it clear she was needing some rough loving.  it has devolved to getting flustered anymore.  I have noticed that Laura tries to deflect her angels requests by increasing her loving and trying to distract them.  I see she often succeeds by overloading their pleasure centers and moves it in her direction.  I mourn for what is lost (yes I am selfish!) but I love it that you show that life morphs and changes.  In other stories once something is mentioned it simply happens.  You show in your stories where one woman or another sometimes bends her lover to her will.  That is what happens and I like reading it in your stories.  It is women cajoling and worming their will.  Never overpowering, abusing or running rough shod over her lover.  It is women loving and working their will.  It is so cool reading real women interacting and actually being real women with each other.  I just feel that other stories are movie scripts that have dialog and interaction to just allow the story to move forward.  Nothing wrong when I get womb blistering sex!! But the additional you give is so fucking rad.  Then you show that bantering again that I so love.  I never get that nipping of a earlobe in other stories.  I have always loved your pacing that knows how to start slow and build the fires until they are raging into womb rending orgasms.  I am sighing because I can sense that Laura is once again going to move the sex away from the full kink that Deshona desires.  Oh well with a sigh.  Lets read and see just how kinky they get.

//  I am smirking thinking how Laura and I kind of opposites in this.  Women come to me for the kink that they crave.  A little while back sari called me and laid out her plans to bring over a cousin (a few times removed) for some fun and games.  She told me that Susie was a senior at a private school and told me that they needed for us to get together.  The would be dressed in school girl outfits and I was to dress up as a principle and disciple them.  She had told Susie all about me and they were dying for it.  Sari and Susie are lovers whenever they can get together.  Two day later I got some texts telling me to come to Sari's house the next night since her mother would be away.  I dressed up very professional in a blouse and slacks and loafers.  I went straight to her house and rang the door bell.  I love being in this situation.  Knowing that soon kinky sex is happening but not the exact details of the fucks to come.   I had my business brief case full of toys.  I was greeted by sari and felt myself love shake when I saw Susie standing behind her.  She is tall and very slender with dark skin color and so dark eyes.  I was immediately in love.  their school girl outfits made my womb quiver.  So formal and Japanese looking to my eyes.   we went into her living room and spent some time getting to know each other as sari chatted on and we felt love beginning to simmer.  I sensed it was time and opened my brief case and pulled out a legal pad and hu-hmmed and told them we had some issues to work out.  I started to berate them for poor grades and even poorer attitudes.  They started to blubber and tell me that I must be mistaken and then started begging saying they would do better as I started to scream at them and started calling them gooks, slant eyed Orientals and why in the hell were we letting trash like them into our country.  I sneered I was going to have them deported as they now cried and clung to each other.  I told them I was not satisfied with their answers and pulled out my short handled flogger and let them see the tassels.  I moved over to where they were on the sofa and gripped Susie by her hair and jerked her head back and spit in her face and slapped her hard as she moaned and then slapped sari with a vicious slap that made her cheek turn red.  I started to pull and tug on their clothes roughly as I screamed at them to get their yellow asses naked as they quickly stripped with trembles and fumbling fingers.  I dropped my flogger and quickly stripped too.  I was so fucking wet and my nipples where rock hard and full engorged.  I smiled and felt my womb flip as sari and Susie's naked bodies were exposed and I saw their shaved cunts all swollen and soaking wet and their nipples also rock hard and sticking out like little erasers.  I loved looking at Susie's flat chest.  I mean totally flat but her nipples looked so beautiful sticking out so hard and long on her chest.  I stomped over to them and gripped Susie by her hair again and slapped her viciously on both cheeks as she sobbed and moaned and threw her down onto the floor and gripped Sari by her cheeks with one hand and asked her if she was a fucking gook and she moaned yes.  I then slapped her hard with vicious slaps on her left cheek as she sagged onto the floor and I then grabbed her hair and pulled her up roughly as she screamed and I slapped her other cheek hard as she sobbed and groaned in pleasure. 

//  I got my flogger and used my left hand to get my tassels all bunched and just right (thank you LaTonya) and then started giving them full armed strikes on their tits and chest.  I felt my womb sear in its juices as I struck Sari's tits as they jiggled as I did first one and then the other and then both.  Then moving over to Susie an searing her chest with my perfect strikes as she cried out and moaned.  Moving my strikes down and making their bellies turn red or darken with Susie and then working their thighs and back to their tits.  I then ordered them to lean over the sofa cushions and blistered their asses with my flogger.  I reveled in the loud sounds of their asses being struck over and over and their sobs and moans of pleasure.  after their asses were nice and red I ordered them to turn over and got them to get their backs on the sofa cushions and spread legs opening up their pussies.  I got out my cattail and told them they needed to be shown what happens when gooks don't perform well in school.  I then go on my knees and pulled the cattail back and snapped it and struck Sari's right thigh near her pelvis.  She screamed in pain and her legs shook as I then struck her left leg as she wailed and then gave her two rapid strikes to her cunt as she wailed.  I asked her if she was punished enough and she whimpered no.  I felt my eyebrows rise.  I was impressed.  I barked at her to present her cunt and she lifted it up and humped as I moaned and then told her count to ten as I struck her cunt.  I love shook as she cried out and gasped out the numbers as I whipped her pussy with my cattail as I bent it back and let it fly as it snapped into her pussy and got three tip hits right on her clit making her scream.  I felt my cunt dripping cunt juice as I watched sari cunt humping up lewdly as she yearned to expose her cunt so I could whip it fully.  I told her punishment was over and she collapsed and slide onto the floor.  I moved to Susie who had been watching us with cat eyes.  I asked her she deserved to be punished and she looked me right in the eyes and in sexy purr said yes and she was even badder than Sari.  With that same purr told me her nipples needing punishment too.  I got her to lean back and stood up and aimed and began to whip her nipples as she writhed and screamed.  She started crying for me to stop but the safe word was never used and I so noticed her hands never moved to cover her nipples and she never even began to roll over.  I felt my womb spasming in my belly as she cried for mercy and yet she kept rolling her head back to arch her back so her nipples stuck up so hard and easy to strike which I did making sure to hit her chest and rib line and belly to let her nipples rest a little and make the rest of her body throb pleasure to her clit.  I finally moved down and gave her some rapid thigh and cunt mound strikes making her collapse and sob deeply.  I let her rest for a minute and then barked at her to get her ass up and present her cunt which I made her count to ten as I made sure to work it hard and good and hitting that clit with four perfect strikes making  her scream and wail.  I asked them if they had learned their lessons.  They whimpered yes and I lifted sari and Susie to the sofa and then buried my face gently to Susie's cunt and ate it with total gentle love and focus.  She came after only thirty seconds with a churning and wallowing orgasm with spastic grunts and groans.  I then sucked her off to a second orgasm as she went into convulsions and guttural groans.  Sari had recovered and I sucked her clit and tongued fucked her with wild gusto and she came for me twice as I sucked her off to screaming, jackknifing orgasms.  We made love long into the night.  I was awoken in the middle of the night to find my wrists were handcuffed behind my back.  I had felt them rolling me onto my side and handcuffing me but pretended to sleep since I could here their excited under breath talking and smelling their cunts getting wet and hot.  I was "awoken" and they snarled at me that I was going to be punished for being such a "fucking white bitch".  They rolled me onto my stomach and got on my back and made sure to use their ass to jam me down into the mattress and grabbed my hair and wallowed my face into the mattress and pulled my hair cruelly making my head bow back making me caw and choke for breath.  I saw that it was Sari pulling my hair as Susie was in front of me and she started slapping me making my head explode from side to side and spitting in my face and using her palm to wallow her spit all over my face.  They then flogged and spanked my whole body making my ass, back, belly and tits all nice and red.  They used my cattail on me and had to moan how to use it and "suffered" as they learned how to judge distance and make the tip whiplash as I screamed as they got their skill up and a nipple, ass or my clit was hit especially well.  I am such a whore.  Sari was flogging my tits as Susie used a vibrator in my cunt and was rubbing my clit as I had such a mind blowing orgasm that I nearly blanked out as I screamed and screamed and jackknifed wildly as I had a multi orgasm as Sari gave my clit a few hard strikes of her flogger.  Smiling now remembering Susie screaming at her when she accidently got her hand struck when she didn't move off my pussy fast enough.   Then they rode my face hard to several orgasms each and moved me to the edge of the bed and I gagged and gibbered as Susie slowly sank her fist into my asshole and then sari worked her fist into my pussy and soon I was double fisted to fucking heaven.  I was sobbing in such fucking nirvana as I felt Susie ramming her fist underneath my ribs and pulling it down to my sphincter and pounding it like I had trained sari to do.  I came so fucking hard as Sari pounded my cervix an Susie did short jabs of her fist a few inches with her forearm buried up my shit hole as I screamed so fucking hard as my head pounded the mattress and feet kicked wildly in the air as my bent legs spasmed violently.  They slowly pulled their fists free and sat beside me and leaned down and we all cleaned off my ass from Susie's fist / forearm and my cunt of sari's fist.  I loved the soft moans of tasty contentment and the slurpy sounds of tongues licking up my love juices.  After I finally recovered I nearly swooned as sari and Susie got on their knees with their cheeks pressed into the mattress leaving their asses high in the air.  I used spit and their cunt juices to get their assholes lubricated and loosened and soon I had my fists buried up their beautiful assess.  I just stared at the beauty of my wrist jutting out their yellow assholes.  I was in heaven I started to work their colons pounding their sphincters making my girls caw and judder and then began to work it deep with twisting plunges letting them feel my knuckles caressing their organs deep in their bellies.  I felt my teeth grit and myself grunt as I pumped my fists deep in perfect time down their shit holes.  I was moaning seeing my forearms slavered in ass juice bending down to lick up in happy gluttony.  My babies were playing with their tits and nipples and soon they had one hand working their nipples and the other their clits as they rubbed furiously and I could see Susie pinching and forking in and squeezing her clit between furious rubbing.  I moaned at them to time it to come together and I am moan smiling as I can so clearly see in my minds eye as they huffed and chuffed to each other about getting their and sari was trembling wildly holding it back as Susie quickly reached their peak and gauging them I cried at them to cum hard "CUMCUMCUM….cum you fucking GOOKS CUM!!" and they just started jackknife explosively and rocking wildly as their bodies were torn apart with pure fucking ecstasy.  I had to use my arm buried up Susie asshole to jerk her back roughly into place to keep her from spasming and collapsing to the side as my arms were pulled and jerked roughly as they went both went multiple and just came and came as wails and harsh groans filled the room along with plenty of fuck's, GODDAMM's, and shit's.  I pick up small details during great fucks and I can so clearly see me looking back and seeing the tops of their feet pounding the mattress or spasming and wallowing as Susie pounded the mattress with her right hand and sari was clawing and trying to rip holes in the sheets with her clawing and clenching fingers.  the stuff sweet dreams are made of.  I had a small orgasm myself as they spent their young wombs on ecstasy and they collapsed into sweaty messes on the bed with my arms fully buried up their shit holes.  I felt such love for them with my fists so deeply buried up their assholes.  I just felt connected to them and moaned along with them as I slowly pulled my fists free from their ruined assholes.  I got between them and they each half rolled onto me each with a head on a shoulder and tit.  We all snuggled together as I caressed their sweaty faces and hair with my ass covered fingers and we pulled the sheets up and drifted off to sweet dreams of renewed love.

//  you now show them disrobing each other.  I like the fact that you use words like "scrabbling" describing Laura undoing Deshona's bra clasp.  Again I think, taking a minute here, authors just have the clothes come off.  Maybe a bra is removed here and there but you don't get such cool descriptions from them.  They just saw the bra is taken off.  Again, you miss so much by glossing and almost trivializing something that can add so much heat to the moment.  Freeing each other of clothes to expose wanton flesh and then feasting on divine flesh.  I so love to expose your upper body and devour it and then really devouring your tits as I go back and forth between kissing you deeply and sucking your neck and working your ears, shoulders and chest before siphoning your nipples down my throat yet again.  You show this and thus make your stories so fucking hot.  I am smiling as I see that Deshona and Laura think like I do [Now their upper bodies were naked, their hands racing, unable to decide whether to dive lower to get rid of the remaining clothes or to stroke and knead and dig into the flesh already exposed.  Deshona was sucking her neck, her shoulder, while Laura was filling her hands with the woman's gorgeous firm round breasts, the melons, as she teasingly called them, lightly pinching and twisting Deshona's nipples.]  I so love this time of exposing flesh and filling my hands and mouth with your delectable flesh.  I so feel my pulse leap as I super suck a nipple or feeling our tongues twine deep in your mouth as I move my face up and tilt to mate our mouths as tight as possible to help me worm my tongue down your moaning throat.  then kissing your face all over and then drilling my tongue into your ears and sucking your neck and maybe giving you a hickie.  I am so happy that you always remember to show these moments.  Sadly I find other stories just go from mouth, to breast to vagina basically.  I so love to be disrobing as we are standing with legs between thighs or on our knees where we can really work each other's heated willing flesh.  Then you show that working of wills that I so like.  They both are hornier than ticks and are trying to get at each other first.  You never see this yearning of "equals".  In other stories the lead protagonist always leads totally.  I can I can see that since most one shots sort of demand that since erotica is not about long stories generally.  Still the longer stories and other multipart stories always have a clear lead.  But once you get to know a lover and if not a clear sub then often you will have this time of equal loving and devouring until one or the other works her will and takes the lead.  Like real women.  you so capture life when you show this.  We get to see them going for each other's titties and we see ["Oh darling, I love these beautiful boobs," she gasped, sucking one of Laura's nipples so deep into her mouth that Laura let out a soft little yelp, more of shock than pain.        "Aiieee!"         But they had done this so often that Deshona did not even stop to inquire if she were hurting her.  Instead, she moved her mouth to Laura's other nipple and sucked it just as hard.         "Unnnuunnnuunnn!" Laura half-grunted, pushing her breast into Deshona's face. ]  I of course really love how Deshona is going for the rough and how it is making Laura's cunt melt with need and love.  I so love rough loving.  I love to grip my lovers tits and just super suck her nipple super hard and deep into my mouth and swallow as much as I can and then slowly move my head back as I slobber suck, tongue bath and bat and then as I get her nipple to the front of my mouth using my teeth to rake and raze.  I so love how this makes them whimper and love shake.  I love the sounds I get like you show.  This is what makes your stories so fucking good is you show the sounds of good rutting.  I live to make my sluts gasp, gurgle, moan and all the other sounds we make.  I so love working tits with total focused love.  giving the love bites and sucks all over and working the undersides if large enough.  Most of main sluts are kinky like me and often we are pulping, squeezing making nipples flare for hard sucks and teeth work and slapping hard making them jiggle and whiplash as they redden or darken.  I so love to have my tits love abused as I feel them stinging and paining me as I watch your hands pulp them with sinking fingers and twisting hands and seeing your hand smacking my tit and feeling that burning pleasure making my clit jump and quiver as I watch them shake and slosh from side to side as I moan and feel my eyes roll back in pained ecstasy.

//  What you have always captured so well is the ebb and flow of fucking.  other authors just have one person lead totally and then when the act is over a lot of stories end here.  Especially in the het world.   But we women have been blessed with bodies that can go and go compared to men's bodies.  So many authors in lesbian erotica just fail to show how loving so often flows from woman to woman and position to position.  I mean sure, once the love kill is ready to be applied we give our total focus and will settle into a desired position but before then and we let our foreplay take us where it will and authors just don't capture this.  I know other authors would have Deshona lead until Laura has an orgasm and then Laura would do her.  But you show Deshona taking the lead to begin with and then Laura surging and taking the lead and now attacking Deshona's firm mellows with gusto.  I so love that back and forth as me and my angel(s) are devouring each others tits, mouths and upper bodies in turn as we take turns making each other so happy.  I am their as Laura is supper sucking her tits and love squeezing them.  making her woman so fucking wet for the fucking fuck to come.  I am smiling as Laura begs for some gash and Deshona is willing to bend a little and let Laura dine on her cunt even though she is dying for the emperor.  I know that total focus on wanting something and not wanting to divert but it is so nice to give into your woman.  Watching her happiness and seeing her get fired up as she gets her way knowing her happiness will lead to the fucking I am wanting.  I just love you showing these dynamics between women.  I love all facets of sex but I always need some gash feasting somewhere in the fuck if doing women and I need to feast on dick orally doing guys.  I am just so oral I guess.  Again I like how you show women demanding their desires and not being so mute and listless as in other stories.  I love seeing Deshona demanding her will and see Laura moving fast to deliver [Deshona's black eyes blazed.  "Then fuck me, you bitch," she breathed.  "I can't take any more."        Without a word, Laura slid down to the end of the large bed, where they had pushed The Emperor.  She had it strapped on and fastened in place in under thirty seconds and returned to Deshona's widely spread thighs, unable to keep her eyes off the beautiful inflamed red gash of the woman's gaping pussy.  "Better turn yourself over, my darling," she drawled.  "If you have a specific position you're requesting."]  I am smiling as Laura is gazing at Deshona's festering gash.  I so know that staring at a woman's slit or asshole.   feeling my body love shaking as I move my cockhead to your fuck hole and knowing I am going to fuck you so well.  I of course love the communication that you are always showing.  What woman doesn't melt when she is asked her thoughts and desires.   It makes us melt for each other.  Men just don't do this.  I will whisper to my lover if she is ready for my love dick and I love watching her whimper, mewl and shake for me.  then letting my cockhead slide up and down her soaked slit or rubbing around her rosebud as she love shakes for me.  letting my spit drool out my mouth if over her asshole and letting it lube up my cock and her asshole for the invasion and seeing how it makes my slut whimper for it.  I like how you show Laura getting strapped in fast and furious.  I love you showing the rising love and need.

//  one thing you do so well is capture is the details without overwhelming the reader.  You know how to move things forward hotly with such an economical use of words.  It is truly masterful [With no further delay, Laura moved up between her thighs and lodged the head of the monster in the wet, dark red, shiny groove of her swollen pussy.  Extending her arms forward, she ran her hands sensually all over Deshona's beautiful back, reacquainting herself with its exquisite shape and smoothness.  Pushing with her hips and sliding the enormous Emperor into Deshona's tight but slippery pussy, she also gloried in the pleasure of feeling the warm smooth flesh of Deshona's back under her fingers.         She loved it, she loved every inch of it.  She leaned forward, with the Emperor now embedded completely in Deshona's body, and pressed her naked breasts into it while she kissed the nape of Deshona's neck, holding up the cascading curls of her hair with one hand to expose it.  Deshona shivered and moaned softly. ]  sigh, I can just so clearly see this.  The wonderful little details.   Other authors just say basically one woman fucks the other with a strap-on and the basic position but it is dry and not fulfilling generally.  But using words like "monster, shiny groove, exquisite, cascading curls, etc." just makes your stories rock.   You make it magical Laura moving between Deshona's thighs and putting that pillow underneath Deshona's pelvis.  I am tactile so I love seeing Laura doing Braille on Deshona's back.  I so live to feel you total body underneath my fingers as I map it with first my fingers and then my mouth.  plus, you show that penetration so fucking well.  I get so tired of no details of the penetration.  I am there with her as she moves forward and sinks her love dick into her woman's swollen, soaked cunt.  I just groan as I sink my dick into your cunt and pump my hips forward sinking my dick deep into her yearning cunt.  I so love feeling a tight pussy clutching and milking my dick.  I can't feel it like a man but I know it is happening and that is enough for me.  I know that sinking my cock into your body and getting close and letting my fingers and hands work what part of the body I can love.  you are the only author, yet again, that shows this.  Others just use the strap-on here while you show Laura using her mouth and fingers.  this adds more than a hundred percent to sex I believe.  You are now pleasuring her whole body driving her wild.  I so love this lying our bodies together in het fucks and feeling my tits mashing into your back or our titties melding and grinding.  Love the kissing and sinking her cock all the way into Deshona's body.  I love taking large strap-ons and dicks sunk fully up my fuck hole.  I love being in a position and looking down my body and seeing my woman's long strap-on or black buck's dick sliding fully up my cunt and or asshole.  seeing Anthony's eleven inches balls deep into my cunt or asshole just makes my womb contract and being slammed fucked by such live cock or plastic as I am cuming so fucking hard as I groan gutturally, curse and jackknife wildly feeling those poles slamming so hard and deep up my spasming and exploding fuck hole(s) taking me to heaven with such heavenly seizures of fucking bliss.

//  nor do you mention something and just forget it.  you make it clear that Laura is truly loving Deshona's back as she flexes her hips to work her cock in and out of Deshona's cunt with a loving rhythm.  We see her continue to work her back with her fingers and mouth.  I just get so tired of boring sex with only the words of a strap-on fuck occurring and not showing these ways we increase our giving and taking of pleasure.  I have never seen another talk of worming you hands underneath her lover as she is pressed down into the mattress and cupping her breast and squeezing and pulling and twisting her nipples.  You loving is just so complete.  By showing us these things you so clearly show that ramping up that leads to such fantastic sex.  It is the totalality of fucking that makes for such mind blowing orgasms.  You show it.  by doing the loving beginning of the fuck you are then able to take it so much fucking higher like [ Mmmmm."   Laura began thrusting harder, deeper.  She could see Deshona wince as the full length of the super-large dildo speared her tight pussy.  "Like this?"        "Auunggghh!   Yes!  Like that!  Ummnngghh!"         Laura straightened up to an almost perpendicular posture now, beginning to fuck her in earnest, as Deshona wished to be fucked.  She stretched out her arms and grasped her with each hand on either side of her neck for good leverage, filling her hands with the muscles that ran from Deshona's neck to her shoulders, holding tight, jabbing the massive cock deep into her body.        "Unh!   Unh!" Deshona grunted, still wincing.  "Auungghhh!" she groaned as Laura gave her an especially sharp thrust.  "Oh shit!"        "Too hard?"         "No!  Ummnngghh!  Yes!  Do it hard!  Like that!  Owwnccchhh!  Oh shit!"]  sigh, I so love reading your stories of het fucking.  I am groaning and feeling my belly tighten as you show us Laura thrusting her cock hard and deep into Deshona's willing cunt.  I so need to feel your dick slamming hard up into my cunt and asshole.  making my body jolt and judder as I feel hard dick sliding deep.  I so love to feeling your power and seeing you rising above and then seeing you working your pelvis to spike your cock into my clenching love hole.  I love to look down at my slut and see her body jolting and tits giggling and knowing I am the one doing the pile driving.  You are just so fucking good as you show Laura gripping Deshona's shoulders to help give her leverage.  The reason I mention this is because I don't think I have ever seen this in other stories.  It is always classic straight up fucking in stories.  Never leaning forward to grip the body or bed or headboard.   I just love you showing all the variations.  Then the verbal cues that you never fail to give.  The non verbal sounds that only you use.  I absolutely mean that.  I have never seen one story that uses the totally non verbal sounds.  maybe arrggh,  ungh but that is it and when they do use these few sounds they almost always make them super long.  Now sometimes I do make that kind of sound but not every time like these authors do.  You just know how to marry it all.  that driving of a dick hard into willing flesh, gripping her body to help drive it in hard and then the sounds.  what more can you ask for.  Plus, I love the freaking aerial ques.  I love hearing my bitches grunting and gurgling as I pound fuck their holes and I have to smile because what I ask / bark is do you want it harder and it is almost always yes!! and then I just pull out deeper, pause that fraction of a second and then I just slam my dick so fucking hard into your willing flesh and I really pound fuck you and take them harder and harder as I get my cues to take them to heaven with a hard pounding het fuck.  I find guys just know how to pour on the heat.  I guess they have a whole life time to learn unlike most women who come onto strap-on sex later in life and they don't have their peers to help teach like guys do.

//  thinking of the emperor makes me think of Anthony and his brother.  I was other there a little awhile ago with Tisa.  We had dropped over before going over to her place to fuck but we go sidetracked.  Tisa has a key to his place and we went in and immediately heard the sounds of rutting.  As we entered we saw a naked beautiful light skinned black woman with big tits on her knees in front of Anthony sitting on the sofa bobbing on his rock hard dick.  we went and she glanced up at us and smiled as she continued to suck and bob up and down his dick.  he was groaning and croaked to us that this was Shavaris and she was sucking his dick so good.  He then groaned hard as her cheeks hollowed out and she twisted her head right and left and pumped his massive shaft below her mouth with both hands.  We quickly stripped and were fondling each other as we watched Shavaris lower her hands to his heavy testacies and began to squeeze them as we watched her mouth slowly inch down his throbbing cock as Anthony gurgled and winced and groaned.  Tisa and I were squeezing our own and each others tits and fingering pussies.  I loved seeing Shavaris's long hair fall forward and she pulling it over her shoulder and seeing her lips down near the base of his shaft.  We watched her tongue licking his shaft lewdly with her gullet full of his dick.  she rose up and off his dick and spit flowed all over her chest as she gasped and pumped his shaft and then sucked his nuts deep into her mouth and swished as she looked at us sexy.  She sucked him off for like ten more minutes deep throating him and sucking his cockhead with expert skill making his hips lurch and lunge.  It is so hot watching a woman give expert head and seeing her rise up and then going down his shaft and seeing her throat bulge as it is filled with hard black cock.  Tisa and I continued too stroke each other as Anthony laid down on the sofa and Shavaris laid down in front of him and lifted her leg and I groaned as she spit on her hand and lubed up her asshole and I watched as she got her bung hole lubricated and Anthony slowly shoved his huge dick into her shit hole.  She keened and froze up as his dick slowly snaked up her asshole.  he paused after four inches where in her ass as he pulled her face over and kissed her deeply as she squeezed her tits.  He then started to pump his hips and soon he was slowly pumping almost his whole shaft in and out her asshole.  gods it was so beautiful as his deep black shaft was soon glazed with ass juice and soon it was milky with it.  she was grunting and groaning as he was now slamming his thighs into hers and making her full tits shake and lurch forward and her full top tit all sloped down on her other tit as he pounded her.  She pulled herself forward and slide to her knees and looking at us used her tongue to lick up and down his shaft and hummed as she licked up her ass cream and then dove on this cockhead and super sucked and cleaned it up and then he got her on her belly on the sofa and shoved his dick into her asshole and gripped the sofa arm to pound her down into the sofa as she cried out and then came so fucking hard as he pounded her good.  He pulled out and sat on the sofa and fisted her by hair and drug her over and she moaned as she licked up her anal gasm off his dick.  his cock was milky with her cum juices.  He then sat her down on his dick as it slide fully into her spasming cunt and pounded her good as his nut sack was slapping up as he rabbit fucked her hard and then lifted her up and slammed her down on his dick back into her asshole as she cried out gripping his shoulders to help slam her shit hole down on his hard pounding upthrusting cock .   he fucked her hard until he lifted her up and threw her down on the sofa and he shoved her head down to his cock on his belly and told her to use only her tongue and he groaned as she used it to lift into her mouth and she twisted her  mouth on it as he groaned and he fucked her hard again and again until she had another anal gasm of epic portions.  She was temporarily spent and I climbed up on the sofa and slide his slicked dick into my asshole and whimpered as it breeched my sphincter and slide deep into my colon.  Soon I felt my tits flopping and rolling as I felt his hips slamming my ass as I felt his cock spearing me balls deep.  now, I was gripping his strong shoulders and jamming myself down as he violently upthrusted spearing his dick fully up my spasming asshole as I felt pure ecstasy building in my asshole.  I was lifted up and dropped onto the floor and I dove down on his dick and licked and sucked clean before remounting with my asshole and cunt in turns as I dismounted myself a few times and stood up on the sofa and bent over at the waist and sucked for all I was worth his bulbous cockhead.  I smiled as I watched Tisa and Shavaris in a hot on their side sixty-nine as they snuffled and grunted.  I got on the sofa spoon and cried moaned as he slide his dick fully up my pussy and pounded me so fucking hard as my body slammed forward with his power.  I felt my head buffeting the sofa arm as his power buffeted and shook me.  he would pull out and slam deep into my ass and pound it and then back to my cunt until I came screaming with a gut wrenching orgasm that had me jackknifing and lunging back into his dick and then I went multiple when I heard him yell out to me to take it BITCH and I felt his hips slamming wildly into me as his cock was speared into me and held for a few seconds as it would spasm semen into my womb and then he bruising my hips would lurch back and then slam forward slamming me so fucking hard as his cock spewed another bolt of semen into my exploding womb.  I was one happy bitch let me tell you.  We fucked him a few more times watching him spew semen into Shavaris and finally his first cousin.  Then later back at Tisa's we had fun with Shavaris late that night and into the morning.  We did her first double fisting as I pounded her cervix with my love fist as I watched Tisa's so black forearm sliding and twisting deep up her colon until she came so fucking hard as I felt Tisa's forearm rubbing past my fist as punched deep into her body.  I watched Shavaris's body start to stiffen and get sort of hard jerking going as her eyes bulged like she dying and then her head rocked back and this demented cawing and spittle spray made her look so angelic as her body was spasming wildly and her arms would spasm suddenly and flop as her feet kind of juddered like in a hurricane.  Tisa timed it just right and gripped a hand full of hair and pulled her head back cruelly and screamed at her to "cum again you fucking black bitch! …. Cumcumcum".   Tisa had pulled her forearm out most of the way and now lunged it completely down her shit pipe as she twisted if fully as if felt knuckles pass over my fist as her fist slammed hard and fully up her shit hole.  And boy did she cum so fucking hard as her spasm even got wilder and harder and she strained for breath as Tisa kept slamming her head back with hard vicious short pulls making her tits shudder and strain on her chest.  Tisa released her hair to let her ride out the remains of her orgasm as she would shake violently as hard aftershock rock her.  She is a total bi slut looking for great sex and soon I know I will feel her fist sinking hard up my asshole.  I can't wait!!!

//  I like how you show fucks.  Other authors just talk and say that they are fucking but give the essence of fucking and thus you can show how fucks can and are different.  What is greater is you show how the same fuck can morph.  I have an easy trigger and most of my babies do but some are like Deshona and have to "work" for it.  I sort of do that when I want to time my orgasm with someone else's and I know how to tighten my muscles in my belly and thighs and concentrate on my mental triggers and can usually time it if I am being worked like my babies know how to do me.  you so lovingly show ramping up of fucking yet again [But she wouldn't consent to the violent, hammering climax just yet.  Oh no.  There was much more pleasure to be had from slowly—maybe a little roughly, but still slowly—plowing Deshona from this angle, and she intended to extract every scintilla of it.  She rubbed her gorgeous back and kissed it, dangling her own small naked breasts over it and letting them caress it too, which she knew Deshona could feel.  She slid the Emperor in and out of Deshona's slippery, tight, clinging pussy in a slow, steady rhythm, also running her hands all over Deshona's taut little buns, letting her fingers dart daringly into the deep crack between them, even tickling Deshona's pinched little rosebud.]  I always love reading your total loving.  watching Laura stroke Deshona's tight body and then using her tits to sweep across her back.  I so love to do this and mash my tits into your body.  especially when I am half lying on you as we are slamming tongues down each other's throats and our arms are gripping and clenching and our tits are mashed and nipples poking and raking as we drive each other crazy with love and need.  I am smiling as Laura teases Deshona's rosebud.  I have gotten most of my women's asshole who first refused me.  I find fucking their brains out and driving them crazy with my foreplay and making sure to work their assholes more and more and getting that area pouring pleasure into their clits and brains makes them weaken more and more.  I so smirk as I sink my tongue into their rectum and stroke love to their rosebud and start to fingerfuck with more and more fingers until I am groaning as I watch my cockhead slipping through their virgin sphincter and seeing it disappear as your sphincter is gripping it so tight and I swoon knowing I have taken another asshole and soon I will be pound fucking it so good and hopeful with others oh so soon.  You show as usual the sounds of love fucking as we hear Deshona rutting and them urging each other one and letting each other know how much they love fucking each other.  Only you capture this.  Even the harem author who uses so many kilobytes doesn't do it.  Only you are so spot on when it comes how we communicate in bed.  this is one of the first things that really captured me about your stories.  I love your theory about hitting Deshona's g-spot doggy style.  I can fully see your logic.  It is all about angles.  Being tall I can easily fuck you from all angles. 

//  I have always like the way you spice up your fucking with sweet details.  I keep harping because I get so tired of stories that just don't give anything.  They just make the fucks so boring and dare I say commonplace.  Gasp!!!  The one thing they are most guilty of is the lack of pacing and flow.  It just happens.  They make it so bland and listless it is like watching something on a etch-a-sketch in the hands of a kid.  You kind of hopefully know what is going on but that is.  They just don't show why we are fucking.  they have it happen then tell us the woman had a great orgasm.  now details and no point of views or hearing what the women are thinking.  It cripples what the scene could provide.  You instead provide this [She picked up the pace.  Deshona might have said that her climax was getting close, but she didn't yet exhibit any of the telltale signs.  She was panting and mewling and squirming under Laura's thrusts, but true wild desperation had not yet set in.  Laura plowed her slowly, but lovingly too, still caressing her back and her taut buns, leaning forward to kiss her shoulderblades, then thrusting deeper, summoning strangled groans from deep in Deshona's chest.         "Unnnrrruunnggghhh!   Ohnnggg!  Unnnrrruunnggghhh!  Oh shit . . . Laura . . . you do it so good !  You're better than a man!"]  you show the ramping of the fuck but also the ramping up in Deshona's body.  I do get in other stories something about her getting there but no details.  You show how Deshona's body is responding physically to Laura's loving assault.  Her gasping and squirming.   The details! The details that other authors don't give.   You show what Laura is doing beside thrusting her hips.  It is the details that give one the total picture and truly allows the reader to get into the fuck on the page (so to speak) and really get into it.  even in this short passage you show the ramping I swoon over.  increasing the heat and taking your woman and yourself to that higher level of heaven.  You just show it throughout the whole fuck.  It is amazing considering how rare it is in other stories.  And of course I love the sounds of rutting.  I read a few other stories recently by new authors to me in het and gay world and still no unique sounds like you.  They deprive their stories so much by missing this.  I remember Karen coming still from the first stories and how those sounds so totally fucking hooked me on your stories.  I too have heard so many times over the years how great a cocksman I am.  I find it a challenge to make sure I fuck as good and better than the men almost all women have been fucked by.  I do have to admit that true pros I can't outdo but I can sure as hell match!  A lot of my sluts know how to fire me up though and get me to really produce.  I was with Tisa last week at her place and plowing her hard doggy style.  She was gurgling and her tits swaying as I pounded my hips into her ass.  She looked back with a snarl and almost spit out at me that "give it up you white bitch, you can't fuck like a brotha!"  I felt my eyes bulge and my pulse flare and sank my fingers into her hips/ass and really lunged my dick hard into her tight cunt.  I just lunged with all my strength and loved watched her whole body judder and her arms collapsed and her face sank into the mattress as she moaned gutturally and rose up and pounded her harder as I watched her face grimace with primal pleasure.  I pulled my cock out and took its smeared head and used one hand to push into her rosebud and lunged forward hard making her cry out in pain.  I sank my ever hard dick into her rectum and gave her a moment to recover and then began to stroke it ever deeper into her shit pipe.  I was in a frenzy as I was soon pounding it balls deep into her asshole making her whimper and body jolt as I slammed fucked her down into the mattress.  I reached down with one hand and pulled her head up cruelly as I pulled my dick out and flopped down on the bed and guided her head to my dick lying on my belly and barked at the nigger to use only her mouth.  I moaned as she moaned and used her tongue to guide my dick covered in her ass juice into her mouth and I felt her cheek on my belly as she sucked and tongued my cock before she gripped it and rose up on her hands and sucked my cockhead clean and used broad tongue strokes to clean the whole shaft.  I threw her down onto the bed and got her spoon and shoved deep into her cunt and fucked hard and then back to her asshole and kept changing holes and moaning as she would spin over and lick clean her combined juices.  She finally mounted my reverse missionary and I pounded her cunt.  I reached up and fisted her afro and jerked her head hard and would pull back stretching her throat taunt as she cawed and her eyes roll back before relaxing and using her hair to slam her back onto my cock as I was using my heels and hips to slam into her womb over and over.  finally, a devastating hard orgasm exploded out of her womb as she squirmed down into my body as our tits mashed and ground and sweaty bellies pounded each other.  Her whole fucking body was spasming hard as her face and cheek wallowed on my shoulder and cheek as my hands in her hair helped her wallow into my shoulder.  Finally it started to subside and she lifted her mouth to mine and our tongues twined and fought in deep love from mouth to mouth.  I loved feeling her spent sweaty body pressing me down into the mattress.  You show the ramping right up to the devastating end love fuck [Laura speared her, hammering her beautiful petite body into the mattress, clutching the base of the dildo with the fingers of one hand to hold it steady.  Deshona's whole flexing body erupted in fierce, rupturing shudders.         "Awwonngggg!" she howled, grimacing and coming in sharp agonies of pleasure.  "Oh god!   Auunngggmmmnnn!  Unghhhmnnneee!"         Laura, unable to stop herself, leaned forward, sliding her hands under Deshona's shuddering body, embracing her from on top very hard, mashing her own breasts again into Deshona's naked back and filling her hands with Deshona's round globes at the same time, squeezing her as she came, burying the Emperor as deep as it would go in Deshona's spasming pussy.        "Unnnggghh!   Mmmnngguuunnnggg!" Deshona groaned incoherently as the most devastating spasms waned into more bearable shocks, still quivering in Laura's fierce embrace, her pelvic shudders now subsiding slowly.  " Angghh !   Unmmnngghh!" ]   I can't really add anything to this.  Only the harem author gives anything like this and one other author I can't recall his name.  he writes lesbian erotica but he hasn't written much lately.  Both of them when I first discovered I loved their orgasms.  At first.   The problem is that after I read more of their stories the orgasms became boringly the same.  the second author is scant on details really but he knows how to make his women scream.  The only problem is now I now I know that they always scream all caps and long and drawn out.  every single woman has cum this way.  It just takes away after the third or fourth story when I absolutely know how the woman is going to cum.  The harem author just hammers you with kilobytes but something is missing again and they are all the same.  he can get to me through sheer kilobytes but still it the same.  only you keep it unique.  Each fuck I simply have no idea what is coming and how the woman will cum.  Each orgasm is unique.  I mean you can only cum one way but it is the fuck that makes it unique and you so show it.  you make me feel in your prose what my body feels when I cum so fucking hard.  only your stories do this to me completely.  I have read other one shots that slayed me but yours is the only multi part story that just shatters me time after time.  With well over three hundred plus stories and I am still hooked like I was when I first discovered Laura so many years ago.  Before I move on I just have to say again I love how you show the little things beside the main fuck.  How you so clearly make it clear that Laura is slamming her dick so deep into Deshona's spasming cunt making it explode so much harder.  The little things like reaching underneath Deshona to work her tits to throb and thrum out additional bolts of fucking bliss to Deshona's brain and clit.   you so show it all and I am so thankful.

//  you continue to give the details even though the sweet fuck has ended.  I find in all other stories the story (any details at least) cease after the orgasm.  most often the story end especially if a one shot.  In the longer stories the sex scene simply ends and then the story immediately moves onto the next scene.  That is so unfair to the women in the story.  They never get to revel in sweet post coital time and that sweet sharing it brings.  I like seeing the detail of Laura no longer pressing Deshona so hard into the mattress.  I love to pressed down and so do dodie, Joann, Shari , Camille and Hillary.  we really love feeling that weight.  All like it to some degree but we are sluts for your weight enveloping us.  Then you give us that humor that makes a person so unique and vibrant [Deshona, without opening her eyes, gave her a wan, half-destroyed smile.  "No . . . I've gone to heaven.  My pussy is now in heaven.  It's not coming back."]  I have seen humorous situations and some jokes in other stories but never the witty repartee between lovers like you have shown me again and again over the years.  I am famous for my one lines like here.  It just makes my angels smile, laugh and melt for me so big time.  Therefore, of course, I love seeing it in print.  I have always thought of Laura and Deshona as so prim.  Laura always can't wait to get the strap-on away from her after the job so speak and Deshona is embarrassed by her squirting.  We always make sure to lick and suckle our love cocks clean thoroughly.  We just lie back and let our lovers lick and suck clean.  I so love to look down my belly as my love sluts are moaning, murmuring and slurping clean.  then seeing Deshona blushing over her squirting.  She should be so fucking proud and happy!  Never be embarrassed at what your body does when it comes to good hard fucking and exploding orgasms.  I was the sisters hillary and Camille earlier this week and watched as Camille quickly stripped Hillary and simply devoured her sister's mouth and tits as she jerked her off.  They were on their knees as they gripped each other and wallowed against each other.  I swooned when Camille turned her sister's head over hard and sank her teeth into her neck and gave her a vicious hickey as she pounded Hillary's cunt with one hand and gripped her hair with the other wallowing Hillary's neck into her devouring mouth.  needless to say Hillary started keening in a high pitched wail and came violently with her cum running down and off Camille's plunging fingers as her cum splattered.  Camille had put down a beach towel and laid Hillary down and mounted her and wallowed as they kissed deeply and she moved down and pulped and swallowed her swollen nipples and engorged areolas.  I was masturbating slowly feeling my womb starting to quiver and tighten so deep in my fucking belly.  I watched Camille slowly work down Hillary's voluptuous but so tight undulating belly and kiss, lick and muzzle her belly and ribs making Hillary cry out and plead for it trying to push Camille down but Camille was on a mission and took her time making sure to really drill and suck Hillary's belly button making her laugh and whine for it more.  Finally Camille's rich chocolate black body settled between her sister's medium brown thighs and began to dine on swollen, red, black cunt meat.  She did it all.  she sucked her cunt inside out and sucked her outer and inner lips into her mouth and devoured and stretched out making Hillary scream in pleasure.  I came so fucking hard and flopped around watching Camille's head pound her stiff tongue into Hillary's splayed cunt.  as I was recovering I watched Camille use her hand to rub Hillary's clit super hard and fast as her mouth mauled Hillary's cunt.  she backed off a moment and moaned "cum for me babeeeeeee" and buried her face into her shaking mound.  Suddenly Hillary's head was pounding the floor and her arms slamming the floor too as Camille's head was forced back an inch as a hug spasm of cunt juice was flooding her mouth to way overflowing and now splattering all over her face.  One knows it is cuming but the force is really strong and just overwhelms you when she squirts super hard like now.  Camille lowered her face as the squirt subsided and the next gush hit her right between her closed eyes and sprayed all over face, hair (webbing it – making my womb flip) and all over Hillary's belly, thighs and tits.  Shari mashed her mouth in again and I watched her cheeks work as her tongue flailed and I saw hillary have several full body contractions as Camille choked and snuffled but keep her mouth glued as excess cum ran down her chin and cheeks.  Camille let her sister rest about five minutes as she muzzled her belly and spent mound and moved up to kiss her deeply and suck her nipples hungrily as Hillary started to revive.  Then she again assaulted Hillary's cunt and moaned to her to "gush for me again – babbeeeeeee".  Soon Camille was tongue fluttering her clit and fingerfucking her hard when Hillary began wailing and her pelvis spastically humped up from the floor and juddered as she squirted all over Camille's face and hair making Camille smile with her big toothy smile as she then mashed face in hard and swallowed Hillary's final spurts.  She let her rest again, longer this time and then started up again.  (Hillary is like some porn starlets I have seen in that she can squirt over, over and over.)  She sucked her cunt so hard and good.  Finally, Hillary gripped her head with big handfuls of cum soaked hair and moaned as she humped desperately and started talking dirty like Camille loves it "suck my squirting cunt you fucking slut … ohhh god eat my goddamn black  cunt Camilllllllllll … suck it you fucking nigger … ohhh god… suckitsuckitsuckit …. Ohhh GODDAMMMM …. I'm cummmMMMIIINNGGGG".  Gods, such things burn themselves into my memory.  Suddenly Camille was choking again as her head was rocked back by hot squirting cum and cum squirted into her face and hair yet again as Hillary used her grip to run Camille's face up and down her literally exploding cunt as Camille moaned and eyes rolled back and spasmed as she was completely soaked in cum like the fucking whore she is.  It is so heavenly seeing those full body spasm rocking Hillary as her faced slashed horribly and she groaned so deep in her chest like a total fucking whore.  I loved watching Hillary reveling in her body and what it can do.  I wish all women had her confidence and pride.  I am just so glad she has had lovers who have taught her to revel in her gifts.  I was smiling so easy and big as Camille scooted up a little and laid her smiling face on Hillary's spent belly as her cheek soaked in Hillary's  cum that was splattered all over her spent body and watching Hillary lazily run her fingers through Camille's totally soaked and fucked up hair and ran her fingers through the stiff clumps and gently stroked her forehead as she whispered how much she loved her and Camille moved her lips to Hillary's smooth belly and gently kissed and muzzled it.  such beautiful incestuous love.

//  I am smiling at the sweet post coital time as they talk of girlfriends and even Charles and no anger or rancor rises its ugly head.  I am so happy that they have grown and matured that can openly talk of past and current loves without the pain of the past.  I used to feel so for Laura when her stomach would "curdle" at the thought of her angel in the arms of another woman or man.  You have allowed your women to change over the years and grow which again is unique.  The few stories that have gone on over the years the characters are basically the same.  the harem author changes the facts to try and keep the women true to real life situations but their characters are still locked into whom they were when they were first written.  Only you allow your women to live and change.  One thing that has always made me smile about your stories is the sheer playfulness that you show [Deshona pinched her in the side, and Laura yelped and squirmed briefly away.  "Don't you pull back from me, Laura!" she commanded.  "Come here and kiss me and tell me how much you love me or how much you would love me if you didn't already love the singer."]  it is the these little moments that truly bind your soul to your love angel.  Of course you need great sex to make it work but it is these little magical moments that are the glue to hold everything to together.  You have to be able to live with the person as a person.  You need this gentle sharing to live and love a person.  One night stands are great but to live with a person you need the love and compassion that you always show.  This is two women who love each other.  You can just see it in their playful banter and open sharing.  It makes them so real and alive.  Oh geez, I see that Deshona may be moving to the east coast.  Sigh, I hope that doesn't happen.  I so hate to see lovers leave my life like this.  It has to happen because life is such but I do hate it.  I am happy to see that Deshona is not certain.  Heck, tell jill to move to the left coast.  I am told everyone wants to live in California anyways.  I am smiling at them talking about having to get the beautiful Latina Lupe fully liberated and desiring wild hard lesbian sex.  I so love the body type and think she looks a lot like my divine Maria and her full voluptuous body made for devouring and hard fucking.  I sure hope she is fully liberated by Deshona.  And that she shares her with Laura!!  In fact a few months ago Maria got a personal assistant Susie at work.  She is a sweet brunette with beautiful light brown eyes and slim, petite figure.  Maria was smitten and immediately started to seduce the sweet angel.  She is married but was feeling neglected and lonely.  Maria knew exactly what she needed.  Maria was full of complements for her great work and she was melting with the praise.  She took her out to dinner for her great work and quickly worked her defenses down.  About a month ago, she had to go to new york on assignment and took Susie.  The first night she easily seduced her.  Maria told us how innocent and naïve she was.  How she was so sweetly hesitant and unsure of herself.  By the end of the week and half she was a wild wanton slut in the bed.  she went from saying nonono to give me, give me and demanding what she wanted.  Maria told in great detail how Susie at first was almost frightened of going down on her and by the middle of the first week was almost raping Maria when they got back to the motel room and burying her face deep into her cunt and sucking it wildly and when Maria seduced her asshole she gave it freely and screamed like a whore when Maria slammed her dick balls deep into her shit hole and she gladly took her cock atm and licked and sucked it clean when Maria gave her love dick.  how she took to raping maria's asshole and doing atm and atp to Maria.  how Maria spread her ass cheeks wide and offered her shit hole to Susie's fist and how Susie got into it totally and pounded her forearm down maria's colon while kissing her back and jerking her clit off as Maria worked her tits and she came so fucking hard she almost passed out.  and how the slut embraced her and shared her ass juice covered arm and as soon as Maria was half way recovered got up on her knees and cheek on the mattress and drooled hand fulls of spit on her palms and lubed her asshole and then spread her cheeks wide and held her quivering sphincter open for invasion and Maria did.  She told us in loving detail how she wormed her fist into her asshole and felt her pulse hammering on her wrist and then how she pounded her forearm down her shit hole and pounded her sphincter with her fist before ramming deep again and again.  She moaned at Susie to slap and rub her own clit and pull her nipples and moaned more as Susie got crazier as she worked her body along with Maria.  working her body totally, Susie started to quake violently and guttural groans filled the room.  How Susie came with a horrible double anal gasm that had her kicking and jackknifing violently as demented groans and tormented cawing flowed from her slashing face and throat.  I smiled as she told us how a horrible full body spasm had Susie toppling over and kicking and writhing on the mattress like a dying snake.  Maria told us how she had to move with Susie's toppling and jackknifing body on the mattress to keep her arm in line with Susie's shredding sphincter.  how Maria pulsed her hand as she pounded it deep into Susie's colon.  Susie's orgasms just destroyed her as the violent spasms dissipated to sweet aftershocks of fucking bliss.  Maria told us she swooned when Susie croaked to keep her fist deep in her belly to let her fully ride it out.  how beautiful her light brown forearm looked buried in Susie's white ass.  I smile as Susie has been revived.  She is now a confident and vibrant woman again.  She and Maria have been fucking a lot lately and soon she will be shared with us.  I guess we would have already but Susie has taken to the lifestyle and has seduced a woman at her apartment complex and is fucking her senseless when she is not with Maria.  I so love see women liberated. 

//  I see more of that gentle sharing and bonding when Deshona is fingering Laura's soaked cunt and breaths to her how wet she is.  That is just so romantic that it makes me ga-ga.  It is this kind of romanticize that makes me swoon.  I never ever see this kind of gentle loving in other stories.  I kind of get extremes.  Either authors give me nothing in the way of details or it is just the mainstream stuff of straight undescriptive sex.  Nothing like this.   I kind of understand this.  I think this more in depth stuff takes a certain skill level and on top of that a level of sophistication that I am assuming they don't have.  You have it and are able to use it.  This sophistication clearly shows in your writings.  I am smiling because I sound so elitist but the facts are the facts.  Part of what I am talking about is the humor I keep loving [Deshona gave her an intimate smirk.  "You know how I feel about Laura's pussy."  She began sliding down Laura's body, kissing her way down.  "I believe I'll indulge myself in a little worship."]  I just don't find this elsewhere.  I never get to see other women display verve and wit thus I really dig Laura and her women's wit and related dialog.  It is this totalality of story that makes me write so much.  If I write other authors it is a few lines of support.  They just don't touch me like your stories do.  You know show Deshona taking her time making love to Laura's passion flower.  I love to attack your body with total focus and love but I too know when to hold off the love kill.  With a good share of women it takes a while anyways and that makes easy to love assault but with women like me and like my main archangels we have easy triggers and we know how to prolong our fucking and feasting.  We also know how to delay the trigger inside ourselves.  How to relax physically and mentally to try and delay one's ecstasy.   Of course sometimes the orgasm just explodes out of taunt wombs to scald the one's mind and clit.  by showing us this we can just see Deshona focusing and reading Laura's body and knowing when to back off and divert to delay Laura's hair trigger clit.  making her body fill with taunt need and making explode at a time of her choosing.  I usually find I will delay it but then I just to have to have her sweet juices and pour on the heat and take her over the edge before I had planned on it initially.  I will just make you cum for me again is all.   hehehe.  Deshona continues to work her magic ["You know," Deshona grinned, looking up and skillfully fucking Laura's oozing, blossoming pussy with two long fingers, "I had the very best teacher.  She taught me to make her wait.  Wait . . . and wait . . . and wait . . ." ]  I love the love taunting that just makes me mewl and thrash my head in need.  I will often curse you at times like this and try and grab your head to mash your face into my cunt but if I sense you really don't want to finish me off I will back off but a girl has to try!  Love the fact that Deshona is acknowledge her teacher's loving ministrations.  I love it when my newbies lovingly tell me how much I have taught them and shown them the truth.  Sigh, the love dialog you give us.  I again say that you only you this again.  I never get sweet dialog between lovers during sex just silence.  Nothing like this ["Oh darling, are you getting too tense?  Are you getting close to the big one yourself?"        "Yes!"        "Are you going to come in my mouth?  Too bad you don't come like me, a whole river of it, so I could taste it.  Because you taste pretty good.   Ummmm, yes, you do.  I love the taste of you."        "Unh!  Unh!" Laura grunted desperately, her pelvis shuddering with need.]  one never gets anything even remotely like this in any other story.  I just marvel at how other stories have the women stop communicating once the story starts.  It would be cold and sterile if women never communicated like they do in these stories.  I just love talking like this and being talked too such.  It is just wonderful to read like it is to hear it in person. 

//  I have to smile at Deshona making one last comment about Makeeda and how she wishes she could see Deshona working Laura's cunt so lovingly.  I never do this with women how have female lovers but my bi sluts I do sometimes ask them what their husbands would think if they saw me doing them.  I will ask if they are my equal and of course they say they are not.  I sometimes smirk wondering just how truthful they are.  I mean when Tisa is telling me how I fuck her better than Anthony or Eric ever did I know that is not possible.  They are expert cocksmen and I have heard her moaning and gibbering out how they are the best.  It just adds so much heat to the fucking I have found.  I just like the fact that you put this in your stories.  You just add so much real life to your stories.  It makes your stories so vital.  Of course the sex is something to write home about to [Quickly Deshona pressed her mouth to Laura's pussy, taking Laura's clit between her lips.  At the same time she pumped her vigorously with the two fingers that were already inside her pussy, pumping, fucking her fast, sucking her hard.  Laura nearly disintegrated as the wrenching shocks of her climax suddenly cracked her writhing body almost in half.        "Aunngggghhhmmnnggiieee!" she cried out, making a great leap off the bed, then falling back to the mattress in a flailing, churning mass of clenching flesh.  "Anngghh!   Ohnnn!  Unh! Unh!  Ohhnnnnnn . . ."        The fire streamed through her.  Deshona's mouth on her throbbing cunt seemed to summon forth fresh spasm after fresh, sweet spasm, making her come longer than usual, then finally feel the twinges fade into soft fluttering.  And still Deshona's mouth was pressed to her pussy, now licking tenderly, now kissing it. ]  sigh, yet another soul crushing orgasm that the reader gets to thrill in.  I so love reading your stories because they are so spot on.  I so revel in taking my whore's clit into my mouth and super sucking and tongue lashing as my fingers are pounding her cunt as it splatters and squishes for me.  I just feel her body filling with that divine tension and wild trembling and how her pelvis so often starts to buck and undulate so strongly pushing my mouth back and mashing my lips.  I so live to have my woman's body giving me that divine tightening and looking up her heaving belly and seeing her face so fucking slashing and eyes bulging and then you see that moment when her orgasm fully grips her.  This is something that only you so fucking show.  You show with sweet prose and divine vocalizations the female body being ripped to shreds with fucking bliss.  I so live to feel a cunt rupturing in my mouth and feel a clit quivering uncontrollably as my tongue lashes and buffets and the screams and wails of fucking bliss that fill my hears.  No other author makes me feel great sex like you do.  Only you.   I just marvel that you have done this for so many chapters and that every chapter has such divine fucking.  I still hunger for each new chapter to see which woman will be in it and what the sex will be and how you will show us the soul crushing orgasms. 

//  you end sweetly with Laura making a wise crack about Deshona taking on a lover in Toronto and Deshona firing back [Deshona smiled primly, and for a moment Laura could see in her face the cold, aloof, imperious Deshona of old, the one it had taken her so much energy and ingenuity to break down.  "I would hope that the most promiscuous and besotted-by-jungle-fever lesbian in all of California isn't going to make cracks about my few little dalliances."  She raised a supercilious eyebrow.         Laura laughed out loud.  "You got me," she laughed, grabbing Deshona's wrist and pulling her down to the mattress so she could rub her still-tingling naked body against her flesh everywhere.  "I can't live without you.  I've got to have more." ]  this is so perfect and precious.  Only you give us true life scenes like this.  Only you.   It just makes them so alive and real.  I know and trust that you will never stop doing this.  Your sex is divine but it is this real life moments in your stories that make it so perfect.  It just makes your stories rock so much.  Of course this mirth and giving ends the story with them rutting in sweet love yet again.  A perfect ending to a perfect story.   Loved it as always.

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Chapter 320:

//  one thing that I find cool is how after reading this story line for so many years you give us a beginning that I can't remember reading before.  Maybe I have with so many chapter but I think this raw hunger a the very beginning of a chapter is new and certainly fresh [They were no sooner inside the door than they began tearing at each other's clothes.  Of course at the airport they had already kissed ravenously, gluttonously, in front of everyone, not caring what anybody thought about these two beautiful women trying to inhale one another, just as Makeeda exited customs.  Laura had assaulted her, grabbed her and devoured her, and Makeeda had welcomed the assault greedily, clasping Laura in an embrace that felt like two steel claws.]  you could have stated the chapter earlier in the timeline but you decided to show us their raw wanton hunger for each other immediately in this chapter.  This is cool.  I love the build up and development in each chapter but by doing this without preamble you show their deep love and lust for each other.  You are driving it home that Makeeda is Laura's main archangel par excellence.  I find it interesting how changing the pacing and when we come into Laura's story can affect how it effects the user.  Of course I love the sex starting immediately!!  I am so there as we see them clutching and mating mouths tight as long tongues slither deep into groaning mouths.  I so love clutching my lover tight with gripping fingers and wallowing my thigh into her mound and rubbing as our mouths mash and bruise as tongues stab from mouth to mouth and I feel her ass, tits, torso and ribs underneath my fingers as I stroke and grip.  I so love to pull my slut tight and working her body as she works mine.   Feeling pure love flowing so freely.   Even with the rising heat you work your gentle humor into the story.  You have used the cats in the past for humor and you do here with them running away in fear at the sounds of rutting coming from Makeeda.  I can just hear the sounds that are scaring them.  What really made me smile was the play with words "peering out at this earthquake of physical desire " .  with them living in California and earthquakes being so real for them I just love the juxtaposition between their desire and mother natures potential fury.  I so love wit and I smile so big every time you use it in your stories.  It just flows into the story so naturally.  It just happens like real life gentle humor that happens in real life.  You are so dead on with it.  sigh, your pacing is so perfect.  You show them quickly moving to the bedroom as they strip exposing their delectable flesh.  I so know this time of getting clothing off so we can fuck heatedly.  I so live to get naked and fuck heatedly.  I find it sweet that Laura is concerned about how tired Makeeda may be after her travels.  I almost always want to fuck but if my archangels are not up for it then I will happily get them to bed and tucked away and go to another bed, sofa or even floor and masturbate to crippling orgasms.  I so love loving myself that I never hesitate to masturbate when the situations call for it.  I so love to make love to myself.  I just love how you show the caring of Laura.  Other stories are so bland in general.  Many stories also have a certain callousness about them.  so often the "fucker" has no regard for the "fuckee" so to speak.  Especially in the het world stories.   I love the gentle, touching caring that you show so much in your stories.

//  about a month ago I went to pick dodie up from the airport.  Most of us use long term parking and get ourselves to and from the airport but dodie hates it and needs to be taken and picked up.  She abhors taxis when she is alone.  Dacie was with me.  We had decided to take Dodie to a nice Italian restaurant.  It was in the early evening and she could leave the dance studio in Stacy's cable hands with Frankie and Giovanna down in Florida at conference.  When we picked up dodie she was tired but happy from her trip to visit family in Connecticut .  We went to the restaurant and had a scrumptious meal and just chatted it up.  We both love Dacie's easy way.  She is fifty-two but has kept herself in great shape and is still so fucking tone.  She works her ass off to keep fit and toned.  She is half American Indian and I love the slightly darker skin tone and her deep brown hair with grey highlights that are so smoking.  Dacie had had a long term partner but when they broke up last year she has been more open to our loving ways.  I was driving back to the studio to drop off Dacie when Dodie told us to drive back to her house.  Dacie turned around to tell her she needed to go home but I heard her voice trail off.  I smile knowing why.  I had been watching dodie in the rear view mirror and I could see the heat now sufficing her face.  I watched her looking straight at Dacie and licking her lips and sucking on her lower lip.  Dacie turned back around with a look of flustered heat on her face.  I know from Giovanna and knowing Dodie that coming home always fills her with fucking heat.  I felt my cunt getting so wet soaking my panties as my nipples rasped against my bra.  We got to Dodie's and hurried inside and turned into her living room.  Dacie jumped up onto Dodie and wrapped her legs around her torso and their mouths were clamped so tight as they moaned and grunted.  I was kissing Dacie's back and unzipping her sundress and unclasping her bra.  I kissed her light brown skin as I stripped myself down.  They finally broke their clench and as they panted they stripped as I stood watching.  I wanted dodie to lead.  Dodie pulled Dacie over to the sofa and sat down with Dacie facing her and sitting on her thighs as they again kissed deeply as their tits mashed and grinded as Dacie began to hump Dodie's belly.  I got on the sofa and again kissed Dacie's strong back and ribs.  Reaching around and worming my hands in and pinching and twisting Dacie's nipples making her jolt and groan harder into Dodie's mouth.  I loved feeling her body writhing and humping as I kissed and nipped her warm flesh.  Dodie after a while wormed out from underneath her and positioned her on the sofa and feel to her knees and sucked in her succulent cunt meat.  She has long wavy cunt lips that dodie gobbled and stretched them making Dacie writhe and cry out in pleasure.  I moved close to Dacie and kissed her deeply slamming my tongue down her throat and wrestling her wet tongue.  I took her orange size tits and pulped them and moved down often to inhale her nipples and swallow half her tit meat and gluttonously devour and suck hard and gnaw her areolas and nipples.  I loved taking my hands and pulp squeezing her breast making her areolas bulge and nipples strain as I tongue rasped and teeth raked making her face slash and thrash side to side.  Dodie was working her clit and fuck hole so fucking good.  Dacie is more like Deshona and only now was she beginning to stiffen and jolt towards her orgasm.  I smiled looking down as dodie was now wedge fucking her steamy cunt with hard thrusts as she super sucked and tongue lashed her shiny, bulging clit.  I gripped a tit with both hands and squeezed as I supper sucked her nipple deep in my mouth.  the dam broke and she shrieked out her bliss as she bucked and jackknifed violently as dodie pressed in and used her left forearm to keep her roughly in place as she pounded her cunt and lashed her clit with her clamped mouth as Dacie just cum and cum for us.   She was wrung out and covered in sweat by now.

//  dodie was on a mission and quickly sucked me off twice to orgasms that had my whole body jackknife and convulsing so strong I thought my muscles were going to rip off my legs.  I then got dodie on the sofa and on my knees I wolfed down her cunt as Dacie got her left leg between dodie and the sofa back and the other on the floor and mashed her cunt down into Dodie's mouth as she sucked Dacie's cunt as she ground it down into her mouth.  sigh, so perfect.  Watching Dacie's toned ass cheeks humping down into Dodie's face as I watched Dodie's hands gripping her ass and hips to help drive Dacie's cunt down.  I was a demon as I sucked Dodie's fuck hole and sucked her cunt meat into my mouth and slapped and wormed with my tongue and buzzed her clit with my fingers and tongue.  I made her cum so fucking hard as she screamed into Dacie's cunt as I then pounded her cunt with my own wedge and sucked her clit and then whole upper cunt into my mouth and super sucked as pounded her splattering cunt as she worked up to a second wild bucking, leg scissoring orgasm.  it was perfect as suddenly Dacie cried out and I could tell her hands were clenched into Dodie's hair and jamming her mouth up into her exploding cunt as she humped down with spastic jams of her pelvis as she groaned dementedly and suddenly screamed out FFFFUUUUUCCCCKKKKKK which was followed by harsh weeping moans of pure ecstatic pleasure.  I went to masturbating as they recovered and watched as dodie left us and came back with two large strap-ons and started to strap in and handed the other one to me.  Dacie go on her knees and sucked our long dicks so fucking good.  I loved watching this successful business woman giving great head as she slobbered and bobbed on our cocks left roping strands of spit stringing from her mouth to our cocks as she bobbed on us in turn.  Dodie lead us into her bedroom and got Dacie on the edge of the bed and Dacie had her head leaning over the edge and supported by the mattress side.  We then slide our dicks down her throat and were soon slamming our dicks down her throat as she moaned and licked our harnesses as we sank our cocks down her throat and would pound our dicks down and over her tonsils and ridges of her windpipe.  I love looking down at a pure slut and seeing her face and hair soaked in her own spittle from a good hard gag fuck.  We got her up on the bed and she mounted me as her soaked cunt greedily ate my cock as it slide up deep into her cunt.  I started a slow rhythm of love as she moaned and pressed down onto me as we kissed deeply and our tits mashed.  I felt dodie getting in position and paused as she wormed her bulbous cockhead into Dacie's sphincter and pushed strongly as her cockhead slipped into her asshole making Dacie bit my shoulder as she groaned.  Soon we were pounding our dicks into her willing, straining flesh.  She ground into my body as I wrapped my arms around her torso and slammed up as dodie raped her asshole.  I loved feeling Dacie's body jolting into mine as we fucked her.  I felt dodie pull out and knee around and swooned as Dacie lifted her head and dove on Dodie's dick and wormed her head on Dodie's dick and then dodie bent down and let me taste Dacie's sweet asshole.  she went back and heard her moaning how beautiful Dacie's asshole was and slammed her dick deep into her shit hole and slammed fucked her hard.  I was so fucking happy each time dodie pulled out and let us feast on ass juice making sure sometimes I got the first divine sucks.  Finally, Dacie was ramping again as dodie got up on her feet and was pounding straight down into her asshole going balls deep and just as Dacie started to cum she reached forward and gripped her short hair but long enough to get a good grip.  We let Dacie start her orgasm as she cried out and started to jackknife violently and only then did dodie suddenly jerk back with her strength and pulled Dacie back until her eyes were looking at the ceiling as her breath wheezed and fingers clawed the air and her whole body jolting massively with killing spasms of fucking bliss.  Dodie threw her head forward and gripped her hair with one hand then gave short vicious pulls making Dacie caw and gasp.  We sensed more was possible and kept pounding her so fucking hard and she started to moan gibber ohgod..ohgod..ohgod in such a deep sexy voice.  I got a gods gift view as her eyes bulged and face slashed horribly as a second orgasm blasted out her rupturing cunt and asshole.  she started to shriek again as her finger clawed into the mattress.  Dodie was gripping her ass cheeks hard now in a death grip to slam her dick hard and deep into Dacie's exploding shit hole.  I reached up with both hands and gasped Dacie as her eyes roll backed and spasmed and spit sprayed and drooled out her twitching lips.  I relaxed my grip to let her gulp weakly before gasping again several times as I felt her hands weakly clutching mine and pulling as I gripped tighter and jerked her head viciously as her eyes rolled back again  her fingers weakly spasming against mine.  So fucking hot.   I finally released my grip fully as her orgasm passed into cunt searing aftershocks.  She weakly collapsed on me with gasping gulps and demented moans.  I swooned feeling her sweaty body on mine as she weakly lifted her mouth to mine and our tongues twined in slithering hot wet love.  And later it was me having my hair pulled hard and being gasped.  Kind of like a perfect circle.

//  I love how you show the steps of hot love making.  I have gotten so tired over time how everything is usually skipped to get to the main sex.  We miss all the disrobing, kissing and groping and going straight to the main sex act.  Other authors miss so much when they don't show these moments.  This time of foreplay and initial lovemaking is what heats one womb making it ready for further stimulation and giving one soul crushing orgasms.  Thus, I love seeing [Laura was not wearing a bra, and so they eagerly mashed their naked breasts together, kissing voraciously, clanking teeth, sucking tongues.  Now they stopped talking, being too busy devouring each other.  They fell onto the bed without bothering to pull down the spread.  First Laura was on her back, then Makeeda was on hers as they swarmed all over each other, sucking and biting and probing and squeezing.        "Ahhnnn!   Ahhnnn!  Oh god . . . I love you!" Laura panted into Makeeda's shoulder, gasping with sharp pleasure as Makeeda's lips sucked one of her nipples deep into her mouth.]  it is these details that make your writings so fucking awesome!  I so swoon at the sight of them crushing their tits together as they clench and slam tongues down each other's throats.  I especially love sucking tongues.  I love to latch onto your tongue like a cock and giving it head.  Bobbing up and down your tongue as I suck on it supper hard to fill it with stimulation.  I smile seeing in my mind's eyes my slut's eyes juddering and rolling back as they swoon in my strong arms as I give their tongue head.  Again you are the only author to show this "swarming" of initially coming together.  This is sad since this misses so much.  I love this time of first coming together in hot heat.  Where both of you are groping and clutching as your clothes are being ripped off and mouths and hands are roaming and clutching.  I so love to crush you to me and jolt you into my body as I feel our bodies grinding and mashing.  Our tits mashing out and nipples digging as thighs rub against muffs.  Humping like bitches in heat as our arms entwine and hands clutch as flesh begins to heat.  I just love how you show this heat.  All the gasping and moaning as we work each other's flesh.  I like how you show first one lover on top and then the other lover.  You show how at first both women are filled with lust and both are surging against each other and one cannot know at first who is the leader and who is the follower.  Everything is in flux and waiting to find out.  only you show this and it just shows so much heat by showing it.  I can't get over how much detail you show so quickly where other authors leave everything so blank and bland.  I love the details so much.  I am smiling as they confess their love and need to each other.  I always smile when you have your characters tell each other how much the love and care for each other.  I get so much silence from other authors.  They never let their characters even talk much less telling each other how much they have missed each other and need each other.  These author simply says they missed each other and don't let them express this themselves.  You way is so much better.  You perfectly capture it here ["Me either," Laura laughed softly, embracing her with fierce passion.  "Fuck me.  Love me."]

//  you show them still surging and rolling but finally Laura takes the lead like someone must ["I want to fuck you with my pussy . . ." Laura panted, parting Makeeda's hard thighs and slipping one leg under one of hers.        She knew they were both so horny for each other that a quick, hot little bit of tribbing would bring them both to the edge.  This way they could fuck face to face, and kiss, and look into each other's eyes when they came.  The instant their pussies came together, mating in a wet, warm tangle of slippery flesh and filaments of crotch hair, the ooze of their deep love and hunger began to flow though their bodies from one to the other, slowing them down, throbbing through their veins, easing them into a smooth, gyrating rhythm of sensual hip churning.  ]  I just love how you have Laura expressing her desires and then making it happen.  I love to have my woman take control but then again I love to take charge if my slut is submissive or I sense it is time for me to lead.  I just get so tired with other stories just making something like trib so bland.  It just happens.  The authors just tell us that they start doing trib usually.  They never tell how the legs are positioned and then how there are so many positions.  It is always on the side lying scissors with most authors.  That is classical of course but there are so many variations and you explore them.  I notice you like the sitting up positions best it seems.  I love them all.  I love it when we are grinding and humping our twats in heated in love as we are clutching and gripping each other.  I so often just gag and spasm in my lovers grip me as our cunt meat grind and slip against each other.  I so love to feel our juices slavering our cunts and pelvises and running down our thighs and making that love spot of love underneath us.  I so know that losing yourself in your woman's eyes.  I just love to stare and feel the heat and seeing her eyes drupe and getting heavy with love and seeing her face and eyes slash when our cunts sear each other in wet heated need.  I love how you show that trib fucking can often make you slow down and just grind in sweet love.  we have tribbed for hours it feels like as we lie back and just hump and grind up and down the v's of our legs as we swoon, gag and get our cunts, pelvises and bellies are slavered in fuck juice as our lubricated cunts grind in warm, wet love.  I so fucking love how you words like sensual, throbbing, deep love and hunger.  So perfect and romantic.   You now do something that other authors just never do.  You show them actually changing positions during their trib fuck.  In all other tribs I have just seen them (in a not very well described way) get in the classical trib scissor fuck and in a bland way they fuck.  You show them getting in their first position and then how they change positions and get face to face and Laura lying on Makeeda and getting their thighs pressed in on their cunts and humping as their thighs get slavered in wet love juice.  I so love this face to face tribbing as our pelvises rock and sweep as we kiss deeply and gag in love.  then they get back in their original leg underneath trib so they can hump their cunts together again.  You give us that gentle digging of Laura calling Makeeda by her real name.  I have to smile at her teasing her lover over her "stage" name.  it shows their deep love for each other.  I just love reading these gentle sharing moments.  I can not remember any such moments during fucking with any other author.  You may have it before or after the lovemaking but never during the actual fuck.  I love these moments of sharing and I am so happy that one authors shows this.  I don't see Infinity much because she is so busy and likes to get Joann one-on-one when she can.  I love the stories of hot heated fucking I hear.  Last Thursday afternoon after work she called the house and I heard her going to phone message and heard her begging Joann to pickup if home.  I picked up and told her she was with some "friends" and I heard her pout on the other end.  I was thinking of going out to a near by swing club since Maria was with Samantha for the night. I was going to look for some action but loved talking to infinity.  I felt my cunt convulse when suddenly infinity started flirting with me telling me how beautiful she found me and that she missed our times together.  I told her I was all alone too and she shyly asked if she could come over.  I cooed back please hurry.  She whispered she would be here soon.  I was love quivering.  I got into a beautiful sheer light green negligee on that so highlights my eyes.  I greeted her at the door and I loved seeing her eyes flare with hot love and lust.  I took her hand and lead her to our bedroom.  She told me to undress her.  I took my time undressing her of her blouse, slacks, shoes and under garments.  I loved exposing her rich caramel flesh and kissing, licking, nipping and stroking her body as I exposed it.  I loved kneeling down and removing her slacks, shoes and panties.  I kissed and muzzled her thighs and belly but avoided her mound knowing it wasn't time.  She lifted me as I got her nude and brought my mouth down to hers and we kissed heatedly and I moaned into her mouth as her tongue wrestled and slithered so deep into my mouth and she sucked my tongue so good and then I slammed my tongue into her mouth and I raped it before she pushed her tongue roughly back into my mouth and raped my mouth, gums and cheeks.  I felt my knees weaken as she gripped my hair with her strong hand and tilted her mouth to jam them tight as her tongue flowed everywhere in my mouth and trying to slide down my throat.  she removed my negligee slowly and led me to the bed and laid me out and climbed on top of me and we now writhed as she clutched and swarmed me.  I was swooning with my head lulling and eyes slitted as she mauled and pulped my tits as she sucked my nipples and areolas voraciously.  I loved how she bunched my tits together and mashed her face into them and sucked and nipped and pulled my nipples out and licked and kissed the undersides making me whimper in pleasure.  I love her weight as she lied on me to love me and feeling that weight moving South and settling in and ate me out so fucking good.  She knows how to please a pussy and soon I was jackknifing violent as my upper body rose up and juddered only to slam the mattress as I juddered up a few more times only to crash back down.  She sucked me off again and then slide up my body and settled to the side so our cunts were mashed into each other's thighs.  Gods, it was so heavenly as I felt her cunt rubbing up and down my thigh as it humped and mashed and how my leg was soon soaked in her juices.  I gripped her ass cheeks as she humped and helped grind her cunt onto my thigh.  I moaned as she gripped my hair again pulled my face up as she mated our mouths tight as she took my mouth with expert skill.  I could feel her body beginning to shake and tighten as he humping got more violent and needy.  She was mashing her cunt so fucking hard with hard down slams and then rough up and down sweeps and then rising up on the down stroke and then slamming down again and rubbing hard over and over.  I loved seeing her face over me as she leaned on her elbows and growled at me to grip her ass harder as I slammed her cunt down into my thigh and helped her cunt rub and mash my thigh in its sweeps.  I watched her face slash more and more horribly and I saw that moment when her orgasm crossed from building to crashing as her eyes got that orgasmic flare and her face froze that second and suddenly her head was thrashing and jerking up and down as felt her cunt spasming and sloshing out hot cum all over my thigh as she gibbered and groaned deep in her throat as her pelvis now just pounded up and down on my leg as her cunt immolated and exploded on my leg.  A wail slowly built up and then shrieked as her head slammed into the crook of my neck as she cum violently as her body ripped her with dire orgasmic spasms of fucking bliss.  She worked her body and got every last erg of pleasure possible.  I loved her spent body lying on mine as she moaned I was so fucking good as she weakly brought her head up and our mouths mated and tongues flowed in languid love.  I so loved resting and fucking through the night.

//  wow! what an insight to Laura [Even though Laura rarely thought of herself as the dominant aggressor, she realized that with her other lovers she was often on top first, the one to assume the superior position first.  But with Makeeda it had always been a fifty fifty split, with neither one dominating the other for long, and this time was no different.  Even though she started out on top, evidently Makeeda's urgent lust was so compelling that in a few moments of twisting and pumping and writhing together, Laura now found herself on her own back, with Makeeda perpendicular to her, pushing her own pussy down into Laura's and gyrating rhythmically and almost maniacally.]  I love reading the self introspection of your main character.  in the few multipart stories you can kind of see the characters proclivity but they never let us see the inner working of their protagonist's mind in a real meaningful way.  It is the standard things you expect from erotica.  But you know how to make it personal and caring for the reader.  The others are hot in their way but you know how to make like we are really their with Laura and that makes it so hot.  I like seeing that Laura is aggressive with most of her lovers since they are normally newbies.  But once they become experienced and with her main archangel of the time I have noticed she lets them lead when they want.  They is how I am.  I will lead gladly but will instantly become submissive if I have a dom lover(s).  I just love to have myself ordered around and fucked abused.  It just makes me so fucking wet just thinking about it and I cum so fucking hard as I am loved raped and abused.  I love it that you now showing another way to trib fuck.  Like I say you normally get nothing being described in trib fucks and now you are showing us a third trib fuck position.  I just love how you show that during lovemaking you can just flow from position to position during a sex act.  You absolutely don't get that in other stories.  Whatever the initial position is they basically stick to it to orgasm is reached by one partner and then maybe switch to another for the second.  Only you show it flowing during the fuck.  Thank you.  It is just so neat to get three positions described when other authors only say they trib fuck and maybe briefly tell of interlocking the legs.  I so love this position.  It is so rad to be lying back and watching my lover jamming and sweeping my cunt as my leg is over her shoulder or waving in the air at some angle.  I love to watch their chest.  Even flat chested ones like sari's Susie is so cool as I watch her nipples move and gyrate as she pounded me down into the carpet as she grunted and sweated.  All titties move so different according to size / firmness and how energetic my slut is.  I so love to watch dodie or Shari's in this position as their full firm tits flop and whiplash but titties like Hillary or Shavaris that more whiplash and roll violently when they start to wildly pump.  I love how you can watch shockwaves flowing through their tits as they jam and sweep up and down.  Just makes me moan and groan and my cunt convulse in added pleasure.  you show us that ramping that I so adore [ "Mmmggghhh . . . ohnnggghhh!" Laura grunted softly, pumping back, hearing the bed springs begin to sing, also hearing Makeeda's low whimpering as she relentlessly jammed her groin into Laura's, bringing them both closer.        "I . . . missed you . . . so . . . much . . ." Makeeda panted as she pushed her flowing pussy into Laura's, holding one of Laura's legs in mid-air, her fingers caressing Laura's calf, her teeth gnawing her own lower lip, her hazel eyes flashing and pulsing.  "So . . . much . . ." ]  such sweet emotion while in the throes of heated fucking.  my womb is quivering reading this divine trib fucking.  I can just feel our cunts mashing and sweeping in mashing love.  I just swoon feeling our cunts grinding and our cunt juices flowing all over our spasming cunts and slavering our pelvises and thighs.  Like I say most authors have their women fucking in silence and hear you show them grunting out their love for each other.  I so love to grunt and gasp out my love to you and urging you on in our lovemaking.   Gees, I love the detail of Makeeda gripping Laura's calf as she uses it as an anchor to work her cunt into Laura's.  just so fucking perfect.  Love the sounds of the springs groaning.  I can just feel my body working harder when I hear springs groaning or the bed thumping the floor and the headboard pounding the wall.  It just sounds like rutting love to me. 

//  like I say you capture so well the relentlessness and ramping of fucking.  I get so very tired of no details of other author.  You have already given the reader so much detail and yet you give us more.  We see Laura gripping Makeeda's hips to help her grind down into her own splayed cunt.  that is just so fucking beautiful to read.  I so know these times of gripping my lover to help her grind or spear my willing flesh.  I can just feel my womb spasm deep in my belly as I grip your body like this to help you drive me to ecstasy.  Feeling my fingers digging into your sweaty flesh as they press in hard and have to grip hard because our sweat is making everything slippery and hard to grasp.   Gripping hard and slamming you into my body making me caw and head lull as I drool and groan so deep in my throat.  then you show us the inner thoughts of Laura.  We almost never get to read the inner thoughts of women in other stories while they are fucking.  we may hear before or after the fuck to help move the  story along but never during the sex act.  I love these moments that you show.  I sure think them and I love having an author showing us these moments.  I too have had these thoughts of trying to time orgasms and how I am going to work your body and not have my plans go as initially planned.  It is the flow and morphing of great sex.  Adjusting to your slut and the fuck to drive each other to pure ecstasy.   I am smiling just reading this.  Wanting to kind of control your body and the fuck but you woman is taking you so fucking well you just surrender yourself to her and the fuck.  I love seeing Laura realizing that Makeeda has complete control of the fuck and letting her take the lead.  Just more of that positive emotions that you show so well.  Totaling surrendering yourself to your lover.   Only you show these inner thoughts and desires.  I just like how you marry the physical and metaphysical.  Sigh, you show how surrendering yourself to your woman can give one heaven on earth [And Makeeda got her way.  Laura began to come almost before she even knew it, feeling her writhing body turned inside out by a sharp, wrenching blast of scarifying ecstasy.        "Auuoonggghh!" she howled, almost leaping off the mattress, except that her body was pinned to it by Makeeda's bearing down on her.  "Oh!  Oh!  Auunnggghhh!"        "Mnnn . . . mnnnngggg!" Makeeda grunted, fucking her with rough, overpowering love, and grunting as her own climax began to rip her body, only a few seconds after Laura's.  "Auunnnggghhhh! Mmnnggiiieee!"         They thrashed and groaned and came in fierce aftershocks for at least a minute, clasped tightly in each other's arms, whinnying and mewling into each other's ears.]  I so know this type of orgasm.  one that explodes out of a rupturing womb or shredding asshole.  I so love that feeling of having my body suddenly ripped apart by an orgasm that is just hammering and ripping my body apart.  Sometimes I feel like a sledgehammer is slamming into my body as blow after blow or crushing ecstasy is hammering me down into the mattress or floor.  I can just feel my body judder and wallowing down or sometimes my upper body just spasms up or I feel that throttling that makes my juddering body rise up like four or five inches and then I slam my body down and bounce into the plane below me.  sometimes I just keep rising up and slamming myself down as my head slams down and I cry out and thrash my head before rising again only to slam down over and over until the throttling passes and I limply lie, caw and get those full body jerks and spasms that makes me moan in pure heaven.  I am smiling as I see Makeeda follow her lover into sweet orgasm.  I so love it when one orgasm triggers another's orgasm.  it is just pure love calling to each other.  With men it pure fucking sex.   I remember I was fucking Marcus and Aaron as they slammed my body so fucking hard and deep.  I was groaning into Marcus's shoulder as Aaron slammed his crooked cock down my asshole as I groaned and shook.  I was just relishing this great dp fuck when suddenly Aaron gripped my ass cheeks in a death grip and growled, screamed "fffffffuuucccckkkkkkk" as he slammed my ass with punishing blows as I felt her cockhead spasming his dick seed down my colon as I jammed and slide over Marcus and suddenly he gripped my ribs in a punishing grip and he slammed up hard and I felt his rigid spasming body wallowing against mine as I felt his dick blasting semen into my womb with hurt spurts as his straining body would judder and mini hump up that just little bit more into my pressing body as more boiling semen was blasted into my womb.  Out of no where my orgasm just bloomed like an explosion as I screamed and juddered, jackknifed between these strong black studs.  I had looped my arms underneath Marcus's head to pull him close and I just gripped his head so hard into my neck as our cheeks wallowed in sweaty heat.  I so loved feeling his hard, sweaty body grinding mine as our bodies bonded as they emptied their nut sacks into my willing flash.  How their strong fucking just suddenly took control of me and ripped a heavenly orgasm from willing flesh.

//  you now give us that sweet post coital time that you are always giving the readers.  A time of sweet sharing and loving.   you show us Makeeda collapsing down onto her lover and them sharing their closeness and love.  you show the weight of shared love.  I so love to feel my slut all exhausted and prostrated down on top of me.  you are the only author to show this.  If the sex continues they just kind of get right back to it.  with other stories they always snuggle down to sleep but never this close sharing of body weight and heat.  I like how you let the readers know of Makeeda's strength.  I so love power in fucking.  I love women with muscles or are extremely toned because they have more power than so many women.  it is so true that men just by their biology are so much more dense than women and can simply pound fuck us to heaven.  I so love feeling power in women.  I just help them to realize they have more power than they may think and how to pound me hard with their fingers, fist and strap-on.  I like Makeeda telling Laura that if fucking Laura so hard makes herself come that hard then Laura can prepare for more such fucks.  That is music to my ears.  I am so loving that Makeeda is turning into a more kinky woman than I could have ever thought.  Of course Laura is telling her woman to feel free to fuck her like this again and again.  What woman doesn't love being pound fucked to heaven.  We just love feeling our bodies being pummeled by sweet loving power taking us to nirvana.  I have to smirk at Laura whipping away the sweat from Makeeda's forehead before she kisses her there.  I would be kissing and rubbing my cheek in her sweat.  I just love sweat.  I want to rub and slip against it and feel it dripping all over as you are above me fucking me well.  You give us that sweet communication that only you again give.  I get so tired of no talking between women during sex.  This so helps one to bond with their woman ["God, I've missed this body."        "Oh, that's all I am to you?  A sexy body?"         Laura kissed her soulfully.  "You are everything to me.  But I do love this fantastic body, too, you know."]  great sex brings you close but this truly cements your love with your women.  letting your woman know how much you worship her body and soul.  Other stories miss so much by not showing us these moments.  I am thankful that one author understands showing us these little moments of sharing.  You then take it that little bit further that I can really, really say I have never seen from another author.  You give us sweet post coital time but sometimes you  take it so much further.  You show us the actual life of your women.  we find out that Makeeda is really beginning to win an audience with her vocal talents.  This is just so cool.  We are not just sharing their sweet closeness that hot fucking brings but how Makeeda's life is really starting to take off.  It is just so life affirming to see and experience this.  You are so unique in this.  By showing moments like this you really make your women so life affirming and positive.  I like hard kinky sex but I also love seeing women living their lives in a positive way and women truly loving each other.  Wow!  sometimes you really take me somewhere I never expected.  It seems that Makeeda met Shontay and bedded her on her visit to Paris .  That is just so fucking rad!  Of course one part stories can't really do this and the other multi-part stories never have a meeting like this and then have the main protagonist deal with this.  What I also love about this is we get to see real growth by both women.  I think Makeeda had become so frigid before Laura came into her life she would have let this wonderful fuck pass her by.  What I really like also is the fact both of these women were kind of frigid before Laura came into their lives and now they are so much warmer and willing and able to find love where it shows itself.  This is the growth that I write about when I reflect on your stories.  This is just so wonderful to read.  I can just image these two women giving each other multiple womb shredding orgasms that left them both spent and sweaty multiple times throughout the night.  Not only do we see growth in Makeeda and Shontay but we see it in Laura herself.  She gets a little jealous and a little querulous but when Makeeda gives her the eye she calms down and then wants to know the hot details just like I would be demanding.  I am just beaming seeing this.  This is her main archangel and a former angel spent a night fucking her brains out and Laura is not freaking out and having her stomach "curdle".  I love it!  Laura has grown and matured.  If she has the right to love her angels then so does Makeeda.  Nothing else in erotica even comes close to this.  I love being surprised reading something and boy this is a surprise.  Hurrah for Shontay for thawing out and having multiple women in France and for taking Makeeda for a lover.  Again, wow.

//  oh geez, bless Makeeda.  I am moaning as she taunts Laura that to get any details Laura will need to get her box of kinky goodies and force it from her.  I am really falling for Makeeda showing this kinky side.  I just wish that Laura would let her inner kink slut loose and give Makeeda what she craves and deserves.  I think I know where Laura is coming from.  I used to hold myself back some in this area but once I let go I am willing to go for broke so to speak.  I have marveled at how you show multiple things during sex you also kind of show this here.  We see Makeeda going for kink and you show humor at the same time [This time she let one hand stray down Makeeda's smooth but hard and muscular back to her ass, caressing it first, then pinching one firm round asscheek sharply.        "Yiiiaaeee!" Makeeda winced, her body jerking in a spasm of pain.  Then she burst into laughter.  "You shit!"        "Can't take it, eh?" Laura teased her, smiling.]  you are the only author to blend gentle humor into her story.  Other authors I guess are just to focused on the basic idea that erotica is a sex story.  This is true but are able to add so much more with cool details about your women and this gentle leavening of humor into your story.  Of course I am loving where this is hopefully going.  I fear Laura will hold back but Makeeda is pretty persuasive I have found.  I always feel I should go for it.  I have by going to sally's house when I can.  every Thursday night she sponsors a night of bdsm with other special nights.  She has the three story house with a amphitheater on a back corner of the house.  I have seen some in magazines setup up for movie watching.  This is setup for bdsm with a stage and a grid over the stage to allow various things to hung down for use.  I had watched several shows one with Belissa being flogged, whipped, electrocuted, bound and fucked like hell by her woman.  They even have a curved rack that had Belissa stretched out and pulled taunt as she was flogged and fucked with a dildo hard into her yearning cunt.  Gods, she was so hot all bent down her belly so much higher than her stretched out arms and legs and head lulling to the side hanging down as La'Tonya raped her spasming cunt.  They had her all oiled up and she looked so fucking hot glistening like the slut whore she is.  I saw some guys get cock abused by some women in leather and stilettos.  I had to cringe and smile at the ass fucking these women administrated.  How the hell those guys can still piss and ejaculate is totally beyond me.  I was almost horrified by that but masturbated to the women getting their due.  Couples around me were fucking and masturbating along with me.  after my third show La'Tonya who was sitting beside asked me if I wanted to be in the next show.  I looked her straight in the and whispered yes.  the next Thursday I took off early and took a long shower and gave myself a nice warm enema and drove to Sally's and was taken to a room where I met a woman who gave me a sheer nightie to wear and I saw a beautiful Asian / Caucasian mix.  I found out her name is Lisa and is half Thai.  She is seventeen and just finished her second year of college with a sum cum lade.   She is so intelligent and funny.  La'Tonya and a woman with light complexion and get black hair came in.  I have seen her work once and her name is Kathy.  I was asked by Kathy if I had a safe word and told her "red" and she asked me about my pain limits and I told her I was a pain slut.  La'Tonya was watching and Kathy asked me I had any limits and Lisa piped up that she had no limits.  I turned and looked at her challenging face and I told Kathy that anything Lisa could take I could too.  I really wasn't to sure but I was not about to be upstaged by a teenager.  We were taken out through a door at the back of the stage and we were soon tied up and hanging from hooks hanging down.  Lisa had some type of iron interlocked rings holding her arms and hands behind her back and on the balls of her feet while I had a bar through my hooked elbows behind me and arms lashed to the bar and hooks at the end of the bar where hooked up to chains to keep me in place.  Kathy came out with her floggers and whips and La'Tonya with hers.  Kathy was my master and soon I was being verbally humiliated and slapped hard and my hair viciously pulled.  We were positioned so Lisa and I could watch each other.  I loved watching Lisa getting slapped and cursed as her long shiny jet black was fisted and pulled cruelly making her head jerk and pulled back making her caw and gasp.  Then the floggers were pulled out and the loud strikes filled the room.  I was moaning as I felt my body from my calves to my upper chest struck with repeatedly cruel blows.  I saw Lisa's full c-cup tits jiggling and whiplashing with the cruel blows.  they then put nipple clamps on and weights making our nipples burn.  Gods, my breast were full of molten liquid pleasure as they struck my tits and those weights jumped and jerked making my nipples scream pain and pleasure.  finally they pulled out their wand vibrators and we had to say please and count to ten before we could cum.  I have to admit that really makes one have fucking awesome forced orgasms.  I was screaming as my twat was humping lewdly and Lisa was cuming violently as her body jolted with horrible jackknifes.  We both had three orgasm ripped from our burning cunts. 

//  I was groggy as they unhooked us and got us free and then brought out a rubber pallet and got us on our backs and inside legs and arms lashed together and our other legs up in the air bent at the knees and our ankles tied up and suspended by ropes tied to the grid.  I am smiling as they took turns with their strap-ons fucking our fuck holes as the other one flogged us and caned the bottom of our feet.  I came so fucking hard as Lisa and I kissed and muzzled as much as we could in that position.  I smile remember La'Tonya asking Lisa what hole she wanted fucked first and she purred out her asshole.  a slut after my heart.  We wolfed down our ass juice as they ripped their dicks out of our spasming assholes and "made" us clean them off repeatedly.  They then got out some candles and my eyes bulged out but I glanced over at Lisa and only saw raw lust.  I breathed in deep and hissed out my breath when hot wax began to splatter and strike my belly, vulva and clit.  I had to scream some at that.  They walked the wax up to my tits and made my tits scream as hot wax coated my tits and nipples and back down to my cunt.  the bitches then used a cat tail to start whipping off the heavy wax splatters.  We had several more fucked and vibrator induced orgasms.  I was getting a little loopy by know and stood weakly as Lisa supported me as they got lots of rope out and I watched fascinated as they put us in suspended bondage.  Lisa was in a horizontal position held up at several points by rope with her tits lashed and bulging out through the tight bondage as they squeezed her tits through ropes slatted at the top and base of her tits.  and I was tied up with one foot on the floor and the other leg folded and suspended up in the air.  They were taking it easy on me since it was my first time.  They tied my tits up with clenching rope cinched at the base of my breasts and pulled to tight.  I watched my tits turn purple as my breast bulged and strained as my nipples throbbed and sparked raw pleasure to my clit.  More sever flogging that had cunt juice running down my legs again and I was groaning as I watched Lisa's body being flogged up and down her suspended body.  they placed electro pads on her tits and had a box with a dial they started making her scream as they shocked and jolted her tits.  They then put a plug in her asshole and shocked her their too as she was reduced to sobbing and begging for more.  Kathy came up to me with her box and pads and asked me if wanted to play too.  I moaned yes and soon I had the pads on my breast and I felt my teeth clench and grind as she turned the dial and made my tits fill with fucking fire and felt like my tits were being throttled and full of jolting clenching.  Kathy told me not to scream as she turned the dial higher and higher and of course I eventually cried out along with Lisa.  Gods I felt my cunt juicing even harder and soaked.  She put her box on a crate and slammed her strap-on hard into my wet cunt and fucked me so good as she shocked me from time to time until I came again with a soul blasting orgasm.  If not for the rope holding me up I would have collapsed.  I watched Lisa being fucked in the ass hard and then Kathy walked over and whipped her face with her cock making her whimper and groan which got so much more guttural as La'Tonya fucked another orgasm out of her shredding shit hole.  She then walked over and let Lisa lap clean as Kathy slammed her cock into her asshole and La'Tonya pulled her nipples and slapped her strangled tits before shocking some more and soon she had another orgasm that made her scream and her body jerk and jolt in her suspended bondage.  It was so fucking beautiful watching her cum so hard for our audience.  They then came over to me.  I whimpered as they crammed the electrode that had been up Lisa's ruined asshole into my tired sphincter and Kathy released my strangled tits and put the patches back on my throbbing and burning tits.  La'Tonya started to electrocute my asshole as Kathy made the pads on my tits send searing shocks into my aching and now screaming tits.  They kept electrocuting me as I began to thrash and scream in pained ecstasy.  Shocking me at the same time and alternating their shocks making my body jolt and thrash as I was now so fucking worn out and weak.  I would have been on the floor a wrung out wad of spent flesh if not for the suspension bindings.  They eventually tired of their electric play and tag teamed me to another two orgasm.  pounding my worn out asshole and pussy and pulling out and letting me tiredly lick and suck off as they kept asking me if I love my asshole and I moaned "oohhhhh yeesssssssss."  They used a small wand vibrator making my clit explode and sear me with fucking bliss as they gripped the rope to pound their dicks so hard and fully up my exploding asshole.  I could feel my tired sphincter trying to tear itself apart on the plunging dildo's savaging my sweet asshole.  I had observed Lisa watching my savaging as she hung suspended her hair all messed up and lank from sweat and cum.  We were then untied and released and we snuggled with our mistresses and we told the audience how much we loved the fucking.  what we liked best and how great our mistresses were.  I relied "yes" when I was asked if I would do it again.  Truth be told, I can't wait! and I told them!!  In the back room Lisa told me I did a wonderful job out there.  I kind of smirked at her and told her thank you.  Since then I have had Lisa over to the house and we have made sweet hard love.  she is such a fucking whore just like me at her age.  I so loved flogging those tits, cunt and ass for myself and loved having her do it to me and the cunt lapping and strap-on sex was just awesome. 

//  you now spend time actually letting your women talk to each other in something other than directly sex.  I mean it is about sex but it two women teasing and making each other hot while making it clear how much they desire each other.  You show that Laura and her women desire each other on more than just a purely physical level.  You have always captured very well the emotional bond between women.  other authors just never seem to get show this.  I guess it probably is more difficult to show hot sex and yet at the same time develop the women as persons and give them unique personalities.  I have come to anticipate what new things you will show us about each of the women in Laura's life and how Laura herself has grown.  Things like seeing the rising kink in Makeeda and the fact that Shontay has seem to grow and is now so much more comfortable in her own skin.  How she is so less frigid and able to share herself and not blanch with other people knowing her lesbian desires.  I just love the fact that she openly came into Makeeda's night club openly with two women on her arms.  I like how you build your women up and not tear them down.  You have always captured so well the ramping up of things.  Here you show their play and foreplay ramping up to some great delicious sex ["Are you going to tell me how you fucked Shontay's long, skinny body and made her squeal and whimper?  Or do I have to spank you to get you to confess?"        Makeeda turned petulant, insolent, rolling away, pursing her sensual lips defiantly.  "I'm not telling you a thing, you little bully.  I'm stronger than you are.  You know that.  If you touch me you'll be sorry."         Ooohhhh, Laura thought, this is getting to be fun!  I'm getting horny as hell.  I'll bet she is, too.  She lunged for Makeeda, who had scooted off to a corner of the huge bed.  "Come here!  I'm going to punish you."]  I like the threat of course of hard kink sex but I also like the obvious fun they are having with each other.  I get this of course from other stories but this is the fun of rutting women.  they never really show them truly enjoying each other's company just for the sake of each other's company.  Here we know they are going to fuck the hell out of each other but you are still showing us how much fun they have with each other.  I like the relationship qualities of Laura's relationships that you show.  Other stories are bland without them.   the one shots I understand but the multipart stories miss so much when they don't allow their characters to show the reader how much they truly like each other as persons.  I like Makeeda crowing about her strength.  It makes me wet when dodie or Joann tell me how they are going to take me or when men look at me so hungrily and I know they are going to fuck me so hard and long.  I just love the mirth!  I can hear the humor and love in their tones of voices.  Only you give me these little things that are so precious.

//  you know something just dawned on me.  I am not sure I have ever read spanking or bdsm in other stories really.  I know they are out their but I tend to avoid the straight to the core bdsm stories because they tend to have a mean core to them.  I want to be punished and abused but I want it in the context of love and caring.  I came across something set in Germany in the late thirties and it was full of bdsm but it did nothing for me the little I read because it was so mean and heartless.  Some others are the right tone I guess but these tend to be long and so boooorrrrriiinnnnggggg.  You never make it boring!  Plus, I never know when it will show up.  ["I'm gonna spank you sooooo hard!" Laura threatened, nevertheless smiling.        Realizing that Makeeda was right, she was stronger and quicker than Laura and would always stay just out of reach, Laura lunged desperately, wildly for her again, this time grabbing her, overpowering her and forcing her onto her back.  The thrill of all their warm, naked flesh rubbing together in this violent tussle shot through them both.  Laura rolled her over and began smacking her luscious dark brown ass with the palm of her hand, spanking her sharply and without mercy.        It was such a sexual thrill that she wondered how either of them could stand it.        "Owww!   Ungghhh!  Oh . . . oh shit!  Owcchhhh!  Shit!  Laura, that hurts!  Aiieeee!  Owwnnnncchhh!" ]   I know which women like it rough but it doesn't happen all the time with them.  like me, I love it rough but not all the time.  It has to be the right mood which for me is quite often I must say.  I am always ready of course but my partner might not be and I don't want to ask for it every time so it won't get boring.  Just let it happen like you show.  This just sprung up organically in the story.  I like that about you.  You are not using a script in your story.  Forcing something to happen just to make it happen.   This feels right what is happening between Makeeda and Laura.  It just flowed from recent events and how they prompted and teased each other.  You just capture real life so well.  Again I like how you show that Makeeda is actually stronger than Laura and that Laura has to really work to get the upper hand with Makeeda.  You show how just wrestling with your lover is so fucking hot.  I love feeling our flesh writhing and mashing as we grapple with each of trying to get the upper hand.  Love the phrase "violent tussle".  I can just feel them struggling with grappling hands and bumping bodies.  I am really smiling with Laura lunging "desperately, wildly" and finally getting the upper hand.  Again I can just feel the loving fun and sexual heat between them.  how Laura gets the upper hand and takes advantage of it and beginning to blister Makeeda's ass like she deserves and needs.  What is so rad about this passage is how you show the sounds of them struggling.  I know if I saw this in another story I would never hear the sounds of Makeeda grunting out her pain and crying out to her woman her pain (and need).  I know I would just be told she was being spanked and that loud sounds filled the room without showing me the sounds.  I get so freaking tired of the silence in other stories.  I guess the silence in other stories just bowl me over when I see them in your stories.  It is funny that Laura tries to avoid such scenes and I have them sometimes leap on me.  we were down at Dodie's house at the outer banks.  Sunday morning I took some of the women to the park and communed with nature in the early morning.  When I got back they went to the beach and I went back to Dodie's.  I smiled when I heard rutting coming from several of the rooms.  But not from dodie and frankie's I saw when she and Giovanna came running up to me all pissed and agitated that dodie was acting like a "fucking bitch".  I went into her bedroom and sure enough I could see she was in one of her moods.  I asked what was going on and got them all going at once but soon saw that dodie had totally overreacted as usual.  when I told her that she jumped up on her feet on the bed and screamed at me that I always sided against her.  She did look cute in her cutoffs and her tight baby doll but I had to tell her to apologize to Frankie and Giovanna.  That was the wrong thing to say.  She screeched and jumped off the bed and landed on me driving me to the floor.  Dodie is only an inch shorter than me and like me she has a wnba power forward's body.  I was kind of stunned and the bitch got me in leg scissors around my torso and was grappling with me trying to bend me back to submit.  That wasn't going to happen.  We fought as we squirmed and rolled around bumping into the furniture but I knew I was in trouble as she tried to squeeze me half to death.  I was having to spend most of my energy keeping her legs from crushing me.  I gasped out to Frankie and Giovanna in the doorway that I needed some help.  The fucking bitches looked at each other and that was the last I saw of them as they fled.  That really pissed me off.  For the next fifteen minutes we fought and struggled.  Dodie is stronger than me and I am not allowed to use anything but basic wrestling moves but I have endurance.  I kept fighting back.  I almost got things reversed but she would get that damn scissors lock on me again but eventually felt her weakening.  I twisted around to face her with her legs still clenched and locked behind my back.  her shirt had rolled up above her sweaty, now red tits and I gripped it and gritted my teeth and jerked her up and slammed her down into the floor.  The third time broke her hold and I quickly got her in my own leg scissors and squeezed her ribs as I ground her face into the carpet and gave her right arm a nice arm bar lock.  The bitch was exhausted now and I got up and ripped her top and pants off and rustled through her dresser and found a couple pair of hose and tied her wrists and ankles up.  I gripped her by her hair and pulled her up as she weakly sputtered and told me to "fuck off bitch".  I slapped her face from side to side and fisted her hair and jerked and twisted her head up and down as I smacked her now red cheeks again and again to make her shut the fuck up.  I threw her down onto the bed and stripped and sat on the bed and roughly pulled her over my legs with her ass nice and high.  I gave her one class A ass blistering.  I loved how my palm stung as I slapped her firm ass cheeks over and over and used both hands to keep it going as she blubbered and cursed me.  she kept calling me a "fucking bitch" as I would rise my hand high and smack down making sure to cup my hand to make it loudly slap her ass.  I reached with my left hand and fisted her hair and jerked her head back and kept super taunt as I continued to whip her ass hard as she cawed and was now beginning to moan.  I now massaged her red ass cheeks between slaps as I felt my thighs now soaked in Dodie's juices as she humped my legs like a bitch in heat.  She was now moaning and begging me to frig her off.  I reached underneath her humping pelvis and rubbed her slit and forked her clit as I continued to slap her ass cheeks with ringing slaps.  I made sure to strike her ass super hard as I rubbed her muff with rapid strokes making sure to mash and squirt her clit with my hard rubbing fingers.  dodie is so fucking beautiful when she comes hard.  I could see the tension growing as her moans got more desperate and deeper in her chest.  Suddenly, her head was rocking back with hard spasms as her cunt was slamming down now into my fingers and thighs as full body spasms rocked her body as her tied wrists and ankles jerked and wallowed on the bed or over the side of the bed.  I gripped her ass to help jam her cunt down into my legs as her body would tighten and then spasm again as pure ecstasy erupted from her shredding womb and basted my legs and fingers in hot searing love juice.  She slowly ran out of gas.  I unbound her bindings and rolled her onto her back as she looked at me with a slutty satisfied look.  I could see she was going to sleep.  I smiled as I put my clothes back on and got a short handled flogger and ridding crop and stuffed in my back pants pocket.  I then went looking for Frankie and Giovanna.  I found them outside and stalked up to them and gripped them by their arms and shook them taking them back inside.  I am smiling seeing the other women's knowing looks as they watched me taking the cowards away with my pain implements jutting out my back pants pocket.  Needless to say they were soon shrieking and pleading as I whipped and flogged them mercilessly and made them suck each other off as I whipped the sucker until she had sucked her slut off.  They were totally wiped out after I made them suck each other several times as I made sure to keep them encouraged and focused with occasional whips and slaps after the first round.  Can't be but so cruel.   I was rewarded by two grateful, submissive sluts as they lovingly sucked, fingerfucked and dildo fucked me to four mind blowing orgasms. 

//  you show this with how Makeeda is whinnying and screeching in pain and yet she is not moving her ass at all.  you show how you read your woman.  You make it clear that this is what both women want.  I just don't find that in other stories really.  There are some on nifty that the sub is willing but they are written in some Victorian way that is soooo long and boring that I can't get through the staid prose to get to the good stuff and that is so boring that I can't just get into it.  the  rest is always about taking a woman without her consent and breaking her.  That I don't like at all and, thus, I have come to avoid the whole genera.  I don't enjoy such negativity.  You show that Makeeda is willing by the fact that she is keeping her rump in place and even clenching and rising it up to receive the loving slaps.  You show that this is being driven by love and lust.  This can in no way be mistaken for meanness and true inner spite and cruelty [And apparently it was working.  Makeeda squirmed.  Her face was contorted with pain, and tears streamed down her cheeks.        "Owwnncchhh!   Oh shit!  Stop, Laura stop!  God . . . that hurts!  Aiiieee!"         But still she made no move to escape.  Laura's hand cracked into her bare ass again and again.  Laura herself was so caught up in the sexual excitement of the moment that she was breathing too hard to speak.  And Makeeda knew it.  Looking over her shoulder, she could see that Laura was so deeply entangled in the sexual magic of this activity, as she herself was, that anything was possible.]  there is no humiliation of the soul and breaking of wills.  I think this is so important to show when rough sex is being shown.  When love and need is guiding one to this kind of loving then the author needs to show this.  Otherwise it becomes a totally different story.  You always show the positive even in the kink!  I must point again how you actually let your women talk during the sex and we can hear Makeeda's pain and pleading.  In most of the stories you just have the author tell the reader that the woman is being spanked and how she is writhing in pain.  Showing it is so much better.  You so masterfully show women being love abused.  It makes my womb flip and cunt convulse and juice when I am abusing a slut and she is crying out and begging me to stop and she is in no way trying to get away (for show only) and  never uses the safe word.  I was recently at Belissa and La'Tonya's house and we had La'Tonya strung up with ropes tied to her ankles and wrists and stretched taunt to hooks in the walls.  She could writhe and move some but she was basically immobilized in a standing position with arms straight out and legs spread wide.  Belissa was sitting on a sofa with Kapri and Camille.  I walked around La'Tonya as she gave me fright eyes and jerked her arms testing her bindings.  I let her see my short handled flogger and she moaned and begged me not to use it.  I pivoted around and stroke her across her tits making her cry out as I began to windmill her tits hard and then went to focused full arm strikes as she cried out and her mascara started running down her face as I moved to her ass and got it nice and deep bronzed colored.  Form time to time I moved in close and smacked her face, tits, ass and cunt with loud stinging slaps.  Making her face jerk to the side and her tits whiplash and her ass cheeks quiver and jump.  Gods, my cunt was running juice down my thighs in fucking need and heat.  Seeing her arms and legs all pulled taunt just made me crazy as I began whipping her arms and up and down her legs as she jerked and writhed and cried big tears as I walked around her and flogged her tits, belly and ribs and getting out my cat tail and working her nipples and cunt hard as she screamed and sagged in her bounds.  She was groaning and weeping as I fell to me knees and sucked her off twice as she humped lewdly and tried to jerk her limbs out of their sockets as she came with violent jackknifes and full body spasms and long torturous groans.  Belissa untied her and got her on a rubber pallet and got her tied on her hands and knees to immobilize her then and I raped her asshole so fucking hard, deep and good.  I loved ripping it out and gaping her asshole for her audience and shoving it in deep with a powerful lunge as she screamed out for them as she sagged and moaned.  Pulling out and viciously pulling her head up by her hair and slapping my ass covered dick all over face as she grunted and moaned before letting her feast on her asshole.  asking her if is loves tasting her own fucking asshole  and she love moaning back "oh yesssssssss … I love tasting my sweet asshole".  of course I have been in this same exact place and getting loved raped and I so love and need it.

//  I love how you show communication between your women.  you show us women telling each other how they make each other so hot for it.  I have always enjoyed your give and take in your dialog.  I never get this from other authors.  It just amazes when reading your stories and then not seeing this in other stories.  I can't get over how other authors simply have no communication between their women.  I would hate to live my love life like that.  They have their women communicate up to the point of making love and then just fall mute until the fuck is over.  thank goodness for your writings that show women letting each other know what they desire and want.  You now show them communicating their direct need and how this morphs the fuck [Quickly, Makeeda twisted her body to half-face Laura.  "I want you to fuck me with that strap-on!" she said in a half-desperate voice.  "That one with the ridges.   Quick.   Can you get it?"       "It's in the living room.  In my bag."        "Get it.  Please!  Quick."        Laura hopped off the bed, naked as a jaybird, as the saying went, and dashed to the living room, where she snatched up her small valise, which was behind one of the easy chairs.  The cats peeked at her in awe from behind the furniture.  She was back in the bedroom in a flash, quickly adjusting the apparatus, watching Makeeda's eyes widen as she saw the long ridged stalk jut suddenly out of Laura's groin.  Laura grinned at her.        "Open wide, you naughty little thing, and take your punishment."]  I can kind of see why authors may avoid kink sex like this.  This kind of sex is not usually the end game.  They are simply incapable of changing gears it seems.  You are always able to masterfully handle these change of scenes.  You have shown your lovers ramping and taking the spanking as high as possible and now you show that communication I so love.  other stories never very the sex act once it starts where of course normally it does morph and flow.  Sex tends to flow like you show and for this to happen women must tell each other what they want and need.  Like I have said this doesn't happen in other stories and thus we never see the flow of great lovemaking.  Other stories really only have one sex scene since they can't morph it like you do since they don't have communication.  Or you get that silent moving from one completed sex act to another one but you don't get that smooth flow like you show.  I have wondered how they can have their women make love with no communication.  I so love hearing the need in Makeeda's voice and seeing Laura rushing to grant her wishes.  I just love the dialog in your stories.  Plus, you give us those little humorous moments that only you give.  I can just see the cats peering around the furniture wondering when it will be safe to venture out again.  I never see such humor in other stories.  You give us those little moments too.  Seeing Makeeda's eyes flare with desire when she sees Laura's cock waving before her.   Knowing soon it will be plowing her soaked tight cunt taking her to heaven.  I can so feel my eyelids getting heavy with desire as I see a strap-on or live dick waving before me and groaning thinking of it sliding down my throat or slamming deep into my cunt and or asshole.  I am just smiling thinking of your pacing.  You so know how to show it.  you ramp from the beginning till the end of the story.  You just amaze me how you do it chapter after chapter. 

//  oh geez, sometimes I don't just seeing it coming [But by this time both of them had trouble preserving the charade.  Still clearly tense from sexual need, Makeeda rolled onto her back and parted her deliciously shaped dark brown thighs, exposing the entire long inflamed seam of her aroused black-edged pussy, the interior of which glistened hot red and shiny, and looked up at Laura with deeply submissive eyes.  Laura slid up between them and lodged the head of the dildo in the wet groove, then pushed it home almost violently, ripping it up into Makeeda with a force that was perhaps sharper than she expected.        "Ungghh!" she grunted, wincing as the long, ridged shaft pierced her body.  "Oh . . . shit!"]  Laura normally controls her rougher instincts and thus I am moaning as she slams her dick home.  That is how I love to be taken and to take my sluts.  You just so capture the moment of penetration so well.  I have never read in another story the vivid descriptions that you give you your women's cunts.  How they are swollen, wet and red waiting for love.  I mean nothing.  Never any descriptions of her thighs like here as you nestle between them getting ready.  Never a mention of her inflamed slit calling to you.  It just happens with a bland that the strap-on is basically inserted into the woman's vagina.  Of course it isn't that bad but it sure is close.  The physical is not really mentioned and not any emotion or how the penetration occurs.  It just happens like in a medical tome.  They make it so bland and boring.  The above is not boring.  I can just feel the power of Laura taking Makeeda's passion flower.  Using words like "almost violently, ripping it, with a force" and then telling us and letting us hear Makeeda response to her hard, deep penetration.  Geez, I can just feel Laura's love dick slamming deep into Makeeda's wet, tight cunt.  you just make the penetrations so fucking rad!  Reading our stories makes me swoon over being penetrated.  Feeling Anthony's eleven dick sliding so hard and deep up my spasming cunt as he rams me down into the bed.  being on my hands and knees and feeling Aaron's thick bulbous cockhead pressing in on my sphincter and feeling him jamming it through making me grimace and claw the sheets as I feel his hooked cockhead traveling down my colon making me gag in pleasure.  or my babies are slamming me with their ever hard strap-ons buffeting and slamming my body.  moaning as first my baby with her long dick in my ass stilling as my other angel slams my cunt hard with her slamming, upthrusting cock and then as she tires she stills and my other baby slams her dick hard and balls deep into my quaking asshole taking me to heaven and back.  you make me feel this when I read your stories.  As I say you now how to pace your story through coming together, foreplay, start of the fucking and continue to show the pacing ramping up as the fuck commences and the lovers really get into it.  I am amazed how other authors just have them so woodenly fuck.  They just make it seem so bland with no sense of power, heat, urgency and that filling of ones' body with rising fire and energy as that dick penetrating your fuck hole(s) is simply making you tense and vibrate with rising need and fire.  You capture this ramping so well.  You capture something here that I haven't seen in another if my memory is true.  That is the sounds one makes when you are plowing your woman.  The gritting and huffing as you are slamming your dick home.  The urging on and the occasional moans as your clit is worked by the harness and any appendages you have stuffed up your cunt.  the growling and cursing that being in power gives one.  the urging on and calling your slut a fucking whore and wanton slut as you fuck her hard watching her body jolt and judder with your hammering thrusts.  Plus, you capture how often you get close to your woman as you fuck her with your love cock.  of course other authors don't really give any details but the positions are almost always pure porn positions.  The lovers are separated from each other as they fuck.  They never clench or mash together.  Of course we fuck from these positions too but it is usually a back and forth thing.  One doesn't get in wooden pose like other authors use and then never let the fuck flow with the surges and ebbs that het fucking brings.  They just keep everything so stiff and apart it seems to me.  plus, you give the details.  I love slam fucking my slut in the classical missionary position and looking aside and seeing her pulling her legs wide by her ankles or feeling her legs around my torso or hips and going by the tightness knowing whether she is locking her ankles as I feel her legs humping to help me drive my dick deep into her cunt.  makes me swoon and slam fuck her even harder as she squeals and gurgles her love for me.

//  like I say, you show the ramping until the glorious end fuck erupts out of rupturing womb and or shredding asshole.  [It was such a wild fuck that Laura was amazed it could last as long as it did.  She found herself wondering if they had ever fucked this crazily.  Maybe once or twice.   Maybe not.   Makeeda was squirming and writhing and shrieking, Laura was grunting and thrusting sharply, and the bed creaked and shook with the violent motion of their striving bodies.  Laura devoured Makeeda's perfect breasts, and still fucked her hard, her own body contorted into a pile-driving mechanism of lust, plowing her, piercing her with love, sucking Makeeda's swollen black nipples until she squealed.        "Aiiieeee!   Ohnnggg . . . oh shit!  Oh god!  Auunngghnnmmm!  Owwnncchhh!  Unh!  Unh!  Yes!  Yes!"        And then she began to make an unearthly sound deep in her throat, a wild, eerie angel's cry of supreme rapture, and Laura knew she was beginning to come.  Makeeda's body suddenly relaxed into long, flowing undulations instead of the sharp, jerky, convulsive spasms that had been wrenching her only moments before this.  Then, out of the undulations she rose suddenly into a fierce stiffened state, quivering and gasping, and then from that immediately dissolved into twitches and strangled shrieks of ecstasy.       "Auunnngghmmnniieee!   Ohnnnggghiiieeee!  Unmmmmmm!  Ungh!  Oh . . . oh . . . auunnnggghmnnnniieee!"          She wailed and moaned and sobbed through a long, wrenching episode of intense coming that was nothing like what Laura had seen her do before.  Not the 'I'm dying' orgasm that resembled a grand mal seizure, or the other more normal kinds of climaxes akin to what ordinary women had.  This was a cataclysm of a new kind for Makeeda, at least when she was climaxing in Laura's arms, a fiercely intense thunderclap followed by a long, twitching release that summoned sweet sounds from her throat that Laura had never heard before.]  so much to love and this I have been able to revel in for two hundred and thirty chapters.  I love how you use words like "wild fuck, amazed, fucked this crazily".  This shows the reader just how exuberant this fuck is.  I can just feel the power of Laura's thrusts of her dick into Makeeda's groaning body.  I can just feel my hips coiling and striking my cock hard and deep into my sluts fuck hole.  I just love using my power and hearing the sound of sweaty flesh slapping and slamming against each other.  You show and tell us what Laura is thinking and feeling and you show how Makeeda is being affected by her fucking.  I am totally amazed at how authors don't show how the woman being made love is being affected by her loving.  she is kind of left blank to me and you are only told by the author that she is being eaten out, fingerfucked or dildo fucked.  They for some reason don't give you details of what is being done to her and how she is reacting to it.  it is sad and kind of weird.  These authors usually say after the fuck is over that the woman is overwhelmed and maybe said during the fuck how she is loving it and it is mind blowing but they just don't show the reader the actual fucking and its affects.  Again it is kind of weird to me.  I am really smiling here as we see both women making all kinds of noises that are described and the bed is signing as they thrust against each other.  I am smiling more as the end game is reached.  We see Laura doing two things at once like only you do.  I love how she is suck swallowing Makeeda's nipples as she is still thrusting wildly.  I have found other authors never do this.  One thing at a time is their motto.  Thank goodness women know better.  I am just happy to find an author that understands this.  Sigh, your orgasms are still so masterly.  I just love how you show it morphing as it continues to pummel Makeeda's body with fucking bliss.  I so know this changing of how my orgasms throttle me.  you capture the morphing of lovemaking so well.  I just love reading this paragraphs of fucking bliss on earth.  I am just agog over how you are able to take the reader into the fucks and captures so perfectly a pummeling orgasm that is simply tearing a woman apart with almost unbearable pleasure.  no body comes close to your skill in this.  The harem does have long orgasms but he just doesn't have the eye to capture the true specialness of  great fucks.  Only you show wonder and diversity of great fucks.  Doing it over and over again is truly a miracle I think.

//  I so love a good hard het fuck.  I have gotten comfortable enough to see the brothers Anthony and Eric on my own.  I normally need a woman with me when I fuck guys but they are cool and not possessive and just love to fuck like me.  I was over Anthony's with Eric and they did me so good.  I loved being on my knees in his bedroom naked with their cocks in my pumping fist as I sucked their deep black dicks with all my skill and passion.  Bobbing up and down and corkscrewing my head on their bulbous cockheads and feeling them fisting my hair and gag fucking me as my spit drooled and roped down my chin and all over tits and belly.  Feeling them tilt my head back and sliding their long dicks down my gullet rubbing over my tonsils and the ridges in my windpipe making me groan and gag.  I so love to have a big dick removed from my mouth and seeing my spit all over them dripping and roped off.  They got me up on the bed after sucking them off good and I had Anthony on his side letting me feast on dick as Eric slide his beautiful cock into my cunt spoon and I groaned around Anthony's dick in my throat.  I gurgled feeling him filling my cunt and ramming his hips into my ass making my womb quiver and jump.  I felt my cunt simply flooding with fuck juice.  Soon I was on hands and knees as Eric slide his dick down my throat and I groaned around it as Anthony slide his bulbous cockhead into my anus and shoved it deep as I pumped my head moaning in pain and pleasure up and down Eric's shaft.  I loved having my head driven down his shaft as Anthony pounded me forward with his black dick.  I felt him grip my ass cheek and pull his dick out and then cried out as he torpedoed his dick in and out my asshole making it gape as he tongued my gaping shit hole before shoving his dick into my cunt and fucking hard before slamming deep into my bung hole again.  He pulled out and fell to his knees before me as I gripped his shaft at the base and licked with broad tongue strokes savoring my ass cream and cried out as Eric shoved his thick shaft fully down my shit hole making me gurgle and sink my fingers into the sheets as he pounded my shit hole so good.  I loved how they played ring around the asshole letting me atm their cocks covered in my ass juices as I lunged onto their cockheads when they bobbed into range and sucked and licked clean.  soon I was dp fucked as they filled my fuck holes and pounded me so hard making me judder and slide all over the brother on the bottom.  I so love men and their strength and denser bodies.  Lying on Anthony's belly with my ass as he plundered my asshole and Eric was slamming forward burying his prick in my pussy with jamming thrusts.  Groaning as Anthony gripped my ankles in the air and pulled back tilting me back on his stomach as his dick fell out and Eric shoved his dick deep into my asshole and stroked hard.  pulling out and stepping forward over our bodies and tilting down and letting me suck his smeared cockhead clean as I moaned.  Back to my torso and pounding my cunt before slamming my asshole again as Anthony kept me tilted and then back to my mouth before Anthony settled me down again and shoving his cock back into my ass and Eric took my pussy again.  Sigh, like your stories positions kept changing as I was now on the bed in spoon as they took turns pounding my asshole as I licked and sucked the other's cock.  then rolling over as that brother scooted up and I fisted their cock and sucked clean as I pumped his shaft.  Back and forth I rolled and had a horrendous orgasm as Eric fucked my shit hole so fucking good as it gripped and spasmed on his dick make him groan and curse as I sucked Anthony's cock with cheek hollowing sucks.  Then finally mounting Eric as he slammed my cunt and Anthony slide his black prick into my ass and they slammed fucked me.  I could feel my body ramping up again and was biting Eric's shoulder as my hands clenched and pulled up on the sheets.  I felt my body beginning to spasm uncontrollably as my head tilted back and juddered.  The brothers sensing my approaching orgasm gripped my body hard in their strong hands and lunged their dicks hard into my fuck holes in an alternating punishing fuck.  Suddenly I was groaning gutturally as wild undulations and straining spasms ripped my body and I shrieked in insane pleasure as the brothers cursed groaned as they lunged into my fuck holes and I felt their cocks spasming dick seed into my colon and womb making my cum so much harder and stronger.  I reveled in feeling their cocks spew semen into my fuck holes with multiple spasming thrusts.  We rested for a few minutes and I got up and went into the living room and got on his computer.  I simply can't do post coital with guys.  They came out in boxers and played video games.  After a couple hours I knew they were ready and went over to them and ripped off Anthony's t-shirt I had been wearing and feel to my knees and pulled off their boxers roughly and feel on their hardening dicks.  I loved sucking them to rock hard erection and seeing their cocks lengthening out of their foreskins.  I sucked so hard and sank their cocks completely down my throat.  I loved it when they got my head over the edge of the sofa and skull fucked me hard.  I moaned around their dicks sliding down my throat fully and feeling their nut sacks pounding my nose, forehead and cheeks as they slammed my throat with their dick meat.  I loved feeling my drool flowing down face and soaking my hair.  They got me on the sofa and lied down spoon as I sucked Anthony off and Eric took my asshole and banged me hard as I jammed forward helping me suck off his brother.  It was so easy to slide to the floor and atm Eric's cock with cheek hollowing sucks before Anthony roughly pulled me up on the sofa and I was now spooned again and he shoved his full length up my spasming asshole as I cried out and feel on Eric's dick sucking it glancing up and seeing his pleasure which only filled me with more pleasure as I sucked and bobbed on his prick.  Gods I loved how I just rolled back and forth feasting on black dick.  soon I was on the floor with the brothers again dp'ing me so good.  I felt my womb beginning to flip and decided to go for it.  I have come to feel safe with them.  I had talked to Tisa and found out that they often slapped,  choked, and pulled her hair to crushing orgasms,  Anthony was beneath me and reached down and gripped his hand and put it around my throat.  his eyes flared and Eric saw it too.  I told them to fuck me like I was Tisa.  I felt my breath choked off as Eric began to slap my ass hard.  I felt my breath cutoff as my womb flipped.  Anthony let me gasp in breath and then slapped my face hard making me groan deep in my throat.  we had been grunting and groaning but the brothers started to growl and curse me.  I felt my womb flipping and my nipples throbbing as they called me a "white bitch" and "white trash whore who loves black dick" and other such hot degrading things.  they would slam their dicks so hard into my willing flesh and ask me if I loved to have niggers fucking me with their big black dicks.  I could only moan yes and groan deep in my throat.  Eric had been gripping my hips and shoulder for purchase but he know grabbed my elbows and walked his hands down to my wrists and pulled back hard bowing me back as I gurgled and moaned as he pounded my asshole with his lunging hips.  Anthony slapped and super squeezed my tits making them throb and pulse pleasure.   I began to shake and stiffen with small spasms as I felt my orgasm coming on quickly.  I felt Eric grip my hair with both hands and waited.  I began to wail as my orgasm suddenly erupted from my rupturing womb.  He pulled back viciously as I felt my body convulsing wildly as I stared at the ceiling and then back further as he slammed me hard as his cock jumped in my asshole and blasted semen down my colon.  Anthony gripped my tits and pulped them as my areolas flared out his clenching hands as he screamed goddamm as he lunged up and I felt his dick twitch spasming in my cunt as I felt fiery bolts of semen battering my womb as I went multiple as Eric wallowed my head down on his brothers shoulder as I gulped in moaning breaths and he several more times wrenched my head back and jerked it viciously as Anthony choked me as my eyes flowed tears and rolled back as I felt my breath choked off and released only to be choked off again as I died from pure fucking bliss.  Men are good for something sometimes. 

//  you now show that sweet post coital time that I so love.  it is so refreshing to read women sharing like this in erotica.  It simply doesn't happen with other stories.  If you get anything it is that drowsy going to dreamland holding each other.  Of course that is the end game but you usually have that sweet time of communicating and snuggling that I so love you capturing.  That time of lying on each other and enjoying the weight and intimate heat but eventually having to shift to get comfortably arrayed.  I love your weight on me but not forever.  I like it longer than almost anyone I have met but eventually you do need to get to the more side by side.  I just love the warm intimacy you share.  Then you add the humorous touches that you grace your stories with.  We have Makeeda teasing Laura about here weight.  Only lovers who are totally comfortable with each other and really love each other can tease in this way.  They both know that there is not a hidden agenda and no rancor is hidden inside the words.  It don't see this in other stories because they don't want to deal with subtle emotion.  They just focus on the main idea of sex and you delve into emotion and character development.  I am just so happy now that Laura can hear that Makeeda spent a night with Shontay now and not go to pieces.  I like the way that Laura has grown.  No other long term story has allowed their characters to grow and change like this.  I like how Laura can speak of Shontay in a generous and loving way.  In the past she would have gotten mean and vile.  The story ends with them once more beginning to make sweet love.  a sweet way to end the story.

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