• Chapter 314
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Chapter 314:

//  I have to like how this chapter starts.  Laura is both fretting over having too much and not having enough.  I have always smiled when I see this in myself and in others.  On the one hand Nyomi is totally demanding her time.  I so know that wonderful dilemma.  You have seduced a newbie to the right side of life and she simply can't get enough pussy and you must feed the need.  I so love it.  I almost never get enough.  Then you show the other side.  Your loving efforts are not rewarded like they should be.  I myself try not to worry too much.  If I dwell on conquests that are so slooowww or fail then my confidence flags so I don't.  still I really do.  I fret and worry if I have done something wrong and why is she being so stubborn when we both know she really wants it deep down.  Again I like the fact that your stories allow this.  You have setup a universe that allows the reader to see this exciting dynamic.  It can be frustrating at the time but it makes the eventually love kill so extra special.  You are the only author that is willing to take her time when the story demands it.  most stories are one shots so the seduction has to be successful.  With the few other multi-part stories it is always the one time love kill or the woman is always and I do mean always seduced on the second effort.  Here you show that Laura has spent so much time getting to know bonnie and has tried once and failed and yet their gentle friendship remains.  This always tells me they want it.  allowing me to be in their presence still working on them and continually weakening their defenses and silly arguments.  You show the complete ranges of seductions.  From the women that are ready to roll in the hay now because they have been actively wanting it to the Bonnie's of the world that need to slowly coaxed and brought along until finally understand their true inner natures.  Thank you for showing the whole gamut.

 

//  thinking of Laura needing a break that is what I tried to do two weekends back.  my sweeties were at a conference and my other angels were all doing things and I made an effort to not connect and not go to any clubs or parties.  I wanted to relax, try and read the l( atest Harry Potter and maybe masturbate a few times over the weekend.  Saturday morning Emily called up asking to come over with Joann and a friend and I told her I was tired and wanted to rest.  She whined and complained but I was firm.  Then a little later Kapri called saying she needed some rough punishment and wanted to come over for it.  she had been on the receiving end with Hillary and Camille when me and two or three other women basically abused the hell out of them and fuck them blind.  She was desperate for the rough loving that she knows we can deliver.  But I had to explain that I had no partners in crime.  She demanded I find some and got quite bitchy when I told her I couldn't and she hung up on me after some nice cursing and calling me a white bitch.  I know she was trying to steam me into action.  I like our house because it is behind some wooded lots that we and our neighbor own and one side is government property that will not be developed.  You have to go down a hundred yard down a wooded lane to get to our lots.  We are in the middle of suburbia but yet still feel isolated.  There is lake behind the houses and our neighbor has a nice ten foot high privacy fence along our property line.  The other side of his house is wetlands so it won't be develop.  Nice and private and away from prying eyes that lets up play nice and safe.  I was reading at the table in the kitchen when I started hearing noises in the backyard.  I looked out and got a little pissed when I saw Emily, Joann and an Asia girl with nice long legs and high firm tits that I could clearly see in her string bikini.  They were all wearing revealing bikinis and swinging off the tire on the tree and into the lake.  I just rolled my eyes.  So much for obeying adults.   I watched how they played and kissed and groped each other in their play.  The other side of the lake is also government property so it is pristine so I knew I my lovebirds were safe.  They saw me looking and waved their hands for me to come out but I suddenly had an idea.  I called Kapri and I smiled when she immediately barked yes in the phone (got to love caller id).  I told her to stop dishing the 'tude and come over.  I had arranged something for her.  She got all pleasant suddenly and signed songed she was coming right away. 

 

//  I called the girls in and found out the Asia girl was Korean and her name is Sari.  Geez, her long black hair, midnight eyes and yellow-brown skin was making my pussy quiver along with the other two angels all wet and smiling hungrily at me.  they immediately got close to me looking at me with slut filled eyes.  Oh gods my cunt was getting so fucking wet.  But I had to be strong for Kapri for a while.  I told them a beautiful black woman was coming over and she needed to totally fucking abused and raped hard and deep and could they do it.  I also warned them she can talk major shit and to not take it and make her pay for it.  be very, very cruel to her.  They just smiled great big and giggled.  the little sluts had brought their own gym bag of toys they had bought and toys we had given them.  they wanted to play but I told them to do it right for Kapri that they needed to greet her at the door and then go with the flow but they needed to slap, drag her around by the hair, kick her on the floor (but not to hard) and such and then rape all her fuck holes and I told them I wanted them follow any instructions I may be inclined to give.  I was shaking thinking of being a porn director. 

 

//  a short while later the doorbell rang and Emily ran to get it.  Kapri came in the living room looking confused and asked "what the fuck!?"  I told her that she wanted to be fucked raped and these girls would be doing it.  she looked at the girls and barked out that they were fucking kids and I told her yeah, but Dodie and I had trained them well giving her their names.  She just stared some more and got a haughty look as I saw her nipples getting rock hard as they poked through her tight baby doll since she didn't wear a bra.  Sure enough she started her ebonic trash talking insulting their youth and lack of supposed experience.  She then zeroed in on Sari and insulted her heritage and complained on how Koreans were always fucking over the black man and sistas.  She got right in her face and was doing her head bob and weave while zigging her index around in Sari's face.  I felt sorry for Sari.  I could see that Kapri just assumed that she knew this was her stick and nothing but an act, (Kapri's eyes were lidded by now and her nipples long and rock hard and I could see a wet spot forming on her light blue tight shorts.)  Sari was supposed to know but Kapri's force of personality had overwhelmed her I could see. I was about to say something when Emily came to the rescue.  She fisted Kapri's hair from behind and jerked her head around and down some and smacked her so hard her head just exploded to the side as the sound filled the room.  Kapri was staggered as Emily and Joann grabbed her arms and jerked her down to her knees and told Sari to smack the fucking nigger good.  Sari stepped up and still hesitated.  Kapri looked her in the eyes and whispered "do it bitch", and when she still was hesitant "give it to me, Sari … please".  She continued to look at her with cat eyes as Sari slowly raised her hand and then smacked her hard as Kapri moaned long and deep in her chest.  Sari now slapped her face hard from side to side and started calling her a fucking black whore and worthless nigger with our encouragement.  I smiled as Emily and then Joann reached down with their free hands and pinched and pulled Kapri's long nipples so hard through her top.  I barked at them to rip her top off and they surprised me.  Joann started to jerk it off and it got caught around Kapri's head and hair.  When she saw her head stuck she twisted the half off shirt around her neck and started to drag her around the floor by it and jerking Kapri so hard her body lifted up as Kapri choked and cried out for mercy.  I had gotten out some belts and paddles earlier and they jerked her pants down to her knees and her head still in her shirt and they got her on her hands and knees as they now stripped naked as she trembled.  I told Kapri they were going to whip her like a fucking nigger slave back in the old days.  She cried out for mercy and then shrieked as the girls now whipped her mercilessly as she writhed and screamed.  I so loved the sounds of her screams and the whips and paddle striking her beautiful black flesh.  After a minute, I told the girls to rip her cloths off so I could see her eyes when they whipped her.  They ripped the shirt to shreds as they half strangled her pulling if off her head and jerked her pants off along with her shoes.  they threw her tattered shirt and pants across the room.  Kapri knows how to get into it.  her eyes were all big as she pleaded with them to let her go. She was crying "sorry" and she would never 'dis them again.  She just started shaking all over and crying "no,no,no" as they picked up their whips and paddles.  I felt my cunt pulse and run nectars down my thighs as they whipped her all up and down her body.  Their strikes making her jerk and roll around as they whipped her pussy and small titties hard making her shriek and cry pitilessly.  I loved how her body would jerk violently when an especially good strike really hit home.  After a good long time of good whipping, they sensed that they had done their job.  They dropped their implements of pain.  Kapri was all doe eyed and docile as they now gently stretched her curled body out.  She looked so beautiful with her face smeared with tears and eyes swollen from crying and her hair all disheveled.   For a while at least she was submissive and quiet.  No trash talking now I smirked to myself.  They gently spread her thighs and Sari snuggled between her thighs and proceeded to suck her off to an orgasm that had her flopping up into a sitting position twice before crashing to the floor again as she groaned out gutturally as her body lurched and jolted massively.  I so loved seeing Kapri's hands gripping the back of Sari's head and jamming her mouth deep into her cunt as she used her head as anchor as her body rose up into the near sitting position and quaking all over before crashing to the floor and jolting horribly.  They led her to the sofa and Emily and Joann took turns sucking her cunt off as Sari and Kapri kissed in deeping love I could clearly see.  Kapri just stared in her eyes with a lost look when Sari came up for air before raping her mouth again with her tongue and then moving down and swallowing her nipples with long hard sucks and lots of tongue licking and then more deep throat kissing until Kapri moaned gutturally and cried out as Emily sucked her cunt inside out and Joann forked her clit while sari twisted her nipples and kissed her sweet forehead as she came so fucking hard with another monstrous muscle straining orgasm. 

 

//  I then ordered Kapri to suck each of them off which she took to like a whore in heat.  I watched first Joann and then Emily sucked off to humping and crying out orgasms as they grabbed her head and humped spastically as they jammed her mouth with their exploding cunts.  When she got to Sari, she put her palm against Kapri's forehead and wouldn't let her mouth suck her cunt.  She asked Kapri if she wanted her pussy and she moaned / cried "ohhhhh yes".  Sari kept pushing back against Kapri soft lunges while asking if she wanted her pussy and did it look it beautiful to her and Kapri kept moaning yes and please.  Kapri was pushing hard forward and Sari finally lifted her hand suddenly while moaning "Suck!" as Kapri's head lunged forward and slammed into her cunt which she immediately devoured with wild sucks and deep face mashing.  Needless to say, soon Sari was bucking and screaming through a devastating orgasm.  I had gotten strapped in with my ten inch cock while Sari was sucked off and got on the floor and pulled Kapri over and pushed her head to my cock which she got soaked in her spit as she sucked it hard and down her throat as the girls got strapped in.  soon she was mounted on me as I fucked up into her cunt as the girls took turns raping her asshole as she grunted and moaned as they pulled out and walked around and let her clean off as they other girl mounted her and fucked her asshole hard.  Sari happened to be fucking her asshole as she approached her orgasm and I barked at her to pull her hair hard as I choked off Kapri's air and she suddenly fell over into her anal 'gasm.  I watched her eyes roll back and spit flow out her mouth as I then let her breath some before chocking again as Sari kept jerking her head back making her throat taunt in my choking fingers.  she just came and came.  We fucked her slowly after her body stopped jolting and jackknifing and I wormed my dick into her asshole and started to fuck with long smooth strokes as her body came alive again.  I smiled at Joann and told her ride her dick in on top of mine and I watched up close as Kapri's face slashed and her eyes bulged as we started fucking her double anal.  I came myself from the pressure and friction making me rabbit fuck her shit hole as she moaned softly how great it felt "oh gooooddd, it feels so good both of your dicks fucking my assholllllle".   The girls took turns riding on top of my dick and then atm Kapri's hungry mouth.  I told the girls so smack her ass as they fucked her and loved the loud sounds filling the room.  How Kapri's face  slashed and her eyes squeezed shut as she squealed in pain.  I felt my cunt spasm when she would cry out her asshole was too small but she kept jamming back taking the invaders and feeling one of their cocks slipping out her tight O-ring and then feeling them jamming it back in as she cried out in pain and pleasure.  we fucked her until she had one more golly whopper orgasm with her thrashing and crying out as we pounded her fuck holes until her poor body was spent and satiated.

//  you simply show how love can flow in so many directions.  I am writing this thinking of other stories and how same they are.  The virginal youth or suppressed woman who always gets seduced on the second try if not the first.  Or the scenario of how the lesbian desires just spring to life or just below the surface simmering.  This is how it is in the Harem stories.  The actresses or singers just instantly turn on with the seduction.  If they resist the first time then they quickly are seduced the second time.  Now I find this to be true a lot.  Once I have planted the seeds it is amazing how quickly the fruit of love blooms but again often it doesn't and this is what you capture.  You have no formula.  You make each woman an individual that I guess tells you how she will be seduced.  Each woman has been a treasure as I have watched Laura seduce her to her true inner nature I believe every woman has.  She may suppress it but it is always there.  You show how one never knows how love will flow [Bonnie was shy, fulfilling Laura's prophecies.  Her voice was barely audible.  She wasn't shy when she was doing her job, nor had she been when Laura had eaten dinner with her in her apartment.  But now that the terms of their relationship had altered, now that she knew why Laura was attracted to her, that it was physical as well as friendly, she was shy.  "Cooking tonight.   More slum gullion.  Thought you might want to have dinner."]   I can't remember where the woman being seduced leads the seduction in other stories.  They keep to the lion and the hunted theme.  I have so often found that once you plant the seed and water it you often get them leading the seduction, once they are ready within their souls to move forward.  I love how you show this.  I simply can't remember when bonnie was first introduced.  Five or six chapters ago?   It is this slowness that makes this moment so special.  I so love the soft hesitant voice that I love hearing.  I know they are still fighting within themselves but love is winning.  That soon with this date or the next she will be in my bed dying from the pleasure that only a woman can give.  I plan on how I will savage her pussy with soul rending orgasms making her addicted to lesbian loving.  making her cum again and again as I take her to heaven so hard and often she simply can't live without it.  watching her dine on my sodden cunt with wild enthusiasm and dire need.  With hets I know they already love cock and how I will fuck them so good and long.  If anal how I will pound their asses so good and if not anal how I will start seducing and soon I will be pounding my dick so deep into her exploding colon. 

//  other authors just have things flow without dialog.  It is the dialog that really leads seductions and I miss it in other stories.  I mean how else do you seduce a woman that is a het newbie.  You have to lay the foundation and then build upon it to make love bloom.  Like here [If someone offered me a million bucks, I wouldn't want it more, Laura's inner voice was crowing happily.  But she restrained her delivery.  "Why . . . I think that would be wonderful.  If you can hang around until about five-thirty I could give you a ride."        Bonnie snorted and snuffled nervously.  "I don't think so.  That's an hour and a half.  I could be home by then on the bus.  I could already be cooking.  Why don't you just come by when you get off. "        Laura smiled.  I can't wait, my darling.  "I'll be there with bells on," she said brightly.  She didn't know exactly what that meant, but her mother always said it.        And somehow this brightened Bonnie's mood; maybe her mother always said it too; or maybe it was simply that Laura had accepted her invitation.  She was upbeat.  "Good.  I'll get down that bottle of vodka and have it ready for you."        Laura clucked into the phone.  "Bonnie!  You act like I'm a closet tippler or something."        "Only kidding."   This easy badinage was thrilling to Laura, and she guessed it might be to Bonnie too.  "See you then."]  it is this communication that I so love about your stories.  This is how you seduce a newbie into your loving arms.  Others stories simply don't have this dialog.  It seems kind of barren.  I mean it is not always required.  When one goes to a lesbian bar, lifestyle club or answer an add in a magazine or on the Net you know exactly what you are hungering for and one doesn't have to get to know a woman to find the keys to her heart.  Sometimes you meet a woman and you just feel it and again communication is not really required for the love kill.  Most one shots have some dialog to get them knowing each other but never this easy banter of just two women getting to know each other and enjoying the company.  Just talking.   The other multipart stories simply had none of this.  You never really see what it is that attracts these women to each other.  With newbies you have to first get to know them.  sex will not happen without it and when stories don't show this I think again, not real life.  If the woman is hot for it okay, but in real life newbies need to be nurtured and loved before sweet fucking can occur.  What is really nice about the above dialog is that it is just everyday talk and banter.  The harem author just comes on to the newbies so forthright and without any subtle skill that you have to use to advance the love kill most of the times.  There are times where it is not needed but not every time like other authors.  This dialog just makes everything so alive and vital.  I love it!

//  I like how you have shown that just meeting a woman at her little job can lead to such love.  You just never know how that will play out.  One so often has to work for the love kill but sometimes she just falls into your lap so to speak.  The way other authors make it happen and in the porn movies (all the time) does happen thankfully sometimes.  From time to time I still load up the bike on the rack and drive down to the beach early in the morning on the weekends and ride around enjoying the sun and breeze and ogle the girls.  I had ridden around a few hours and parked the bike (after chaining very securely) and walked around and entered a mom and pop convenience store for some refreshments.  I had on a very tight one piece with gay pride colors splashed on one shoulder just to let the knowledgeable know.  I looked at the checkout island and noticed a pretty white and black girl working the registers and naturally went to get in the line of the black girl.  She was about five foot seven and slender with high little b-cup titties setting pretty underneath her green outfit.  She had midnight eyes and sensuous lips and a scarf in her hair.  I had noticed her checking me out so I was looking forward to flirting with her.  I saw her eyes boring into my shoulder as she smiled at me and she started the flirting talking about my purchase of taffy.  We talked and flirted and saw her name was Shavondra.  Loved how she spelled her name with offset letters on her name tag.  I went to go when she called out to me and quickly wrote something on the back of a left receipt.  I went outside and smiled when it was her cell phone number and that she was off at 1:00.  I decided to walk back in a little before 1:00 and she just beamed at me from behind the counter.  When she was off she met me outside and I discovered she lived four blocks from the ocean front in an apartment with a roommate.  I drove her back as I learned she is nineteen and a freshman in college.  The apartment was airy and pretty.  We talked a few minutes in the living room and talked about ourselves.  She told me that her roommate was a nurse at a hospital pulling a double shift so I knew we had plenty time for love.  She then told me she wanted to get comfortable and out of her work clothes.  I relaxed back in the sofa waiting hungrily because I knew this slut was about to offer herself to me and I was going to consume he totally.  My nipples were rock hard and aching and my cunt all wet and quivering which I saw her noticing hungrily before she had left as she stared at my tits as I breathed and my nipples lengthened for her.  She came out a minute later, totally naked and looking oh so beautiful as I took in her high firm tits with her little nipples all rock hard and her shaved cunt glistening with cunt juice.  I stood up and slide my bathing suit off as she walked towards me with slut heat in her lidded eyes.

 

//  we came together like two starving wolves as our mouths mashed together and our arms snaked around each other gripping tight as our tongues roughly, wetly snaked from mouth to mouth devouring and raping mouths.  I wanted to take control sense she was so young but her power had me swooning.  I gripped her harder and jammed my leg between hers and started to ride her wet cunt up and down my thigh as she groaned and I tilted her head over and I clamped onto her dark black skin and sucked her skin in hard and gave her a vicious hickey as she moaned a beautiful "aaaugghhhhhhhhh" deep in her throat as she gripped my body harder and juddered in my arms as I felt her jamming her cunt harder into my pressing thigh.  I was in fucking heat.  I jammed my tongue down her throat as she gagged and sagged against me my total whore for the moment.  Soon I knew I would let her take control.  I pushed her back and told her to look at my thigh as it raped her flowing cunt.  She gripped my shoulders staring hard at her black cunt mashed and grinding up and down my white thigh.  Gods, it was so fucking beautiful.   I then sucked her nipples hard and jammed her cunt down more roughly.  I felt my pussy quiver as I saw her eyes flaring and her body starting to jolt.  I barked at her to cum on my fucking leg as I then kissed her deeply feeling her breath huff into my mouth.  I pulled back and watched as her faced slashed horribly and then a cry of piercing ecstasy filled the room as she jackknifed and flopped in my arms as she came so fucking glorious.  I felt my cunt spasming as I felt her cunt juices slicking and running off my thigh as she came with such powerful jackknifes in my clutching hands on her ribs as her face just slashed and guttural groans flowed from her throat.  She was staggering and I threw her down onto the sofa and fell to my knees and immediately started sucking her off as I sucked her lips and munched on them before supper sucking her clit and tongue fucking her fuck hole with hard pumps of my head.  I pushed her legs back and licked her perineum and soon my tongue was invading her rectum as she grunted and humped her hips up before I sucked her cunt into my mouth and munched and tongue drilled her slit before moving up to her clit and back and forth.  I loved her hands gripping my head as she bucked wildly and told me to suck her black cunt like the white slut I was.  She came so hard and long as I polished her clit and fingerfucked her spasming fuck hole with three fingers as she wailed and lurched up and flopped right and left.  Soon she recovered and roughly pushed me down into the sofa and sucked me off twice with expert skill.  After the first orgasm she got me on my knees and leaned down on the sofa as she sucked my cunt from behind and rubbed my clit as she drilled my asshole with her strong tongue pulling ass cheeks wide before eating my cunt like a mad woman.  I smile feeling that sofa cushion  against my cheek and my face at times wallowing face down into the sofa as I cried out and moaned as she ate me out so good and slide her tongue down my shit hole.  I knew that intense anal sex was in the offering.  I came squealing and jamming back into her mashed face into my ass as she sucked my cunt inside out as she swallowed as much as my cum as she could though I looked underneath my wallowing body and saw my juices flowing down her chin and dripping off making my have a few more wrenching womb spasms.

 

//  we rested for a while and then Shavondra said lets take a shower.  I followed her into the tub and she closed the curtains.  I noticed a enema bag with nice rectal nozzle and asked about it.  she looked me straight in the eye and told me "my roommate and I like anal sex."  She then told me that if I liked her I would love her roommate.  How everyone comments on how much they looked like each other.  I shuddered knowing she meant incest.  Shavondra seemed like a normal, healthy, sex hungry whore and I smiled thinking of the lucky sister or close cousin.  I was exposed to incest when I was a teenager and don't have a real problem with it.  I think it is so hot fucking your own family.  I would loved to have fucked my sisters and mother if I could have.  I would change things if could.  we washed each other and sucked each other off again as we braced ourselves against the wall and screamed our new love to the heavens.  We then gave ourselves a nice warm enema to get ourselves clean on the inside.  We got out of the shower and partially dried off and went to the bedroom.  She went to their dresser and took out a thick eight inch strap-on and strapped in.  She told me she wanted to rape me and fuck my asshole sooooooo gooooddddd.  She took control and kissed me deeply as I felt her black cock pressing into my belly.  Now she gave me a cruel hickey as I screamed out my pleasure.  she fisted my hair and looked in my eyes and I shook my head yes with enthusiasm.  She jammed me to my knees painfully and whipped my face with her cock as I reveled in the humiliation and loud smacks.  Soon I was pounding my head up and down her dick and then gagging as she jammed it down my throat and rode it over my tonsils.  I loved how she jammed it out my throat and I felt my spit flow out my mouth as she tilted my head back and spit in my face before skull fucking me over and over.  I love having my head jammed down on a cock fucking my throat and jammed into the back of my throat with hard rabbit strokes.  She mounted me as I pulled my legs back and started slamming my flowing cunt.  I squealed and cried out as she nailed me to the bed as I felt the pleasure flowing and she pulped and bit my tits and nipples.  I came with a womb searing orgasm as I thrashed and groaned gutturally.  She let me rest while we kissed and muzzled then she moved into spoon position and told me to lift my leg as I felt her cock head now pressing into my sphincter and I croaked "ohhhhhh goddddssss yessssss" as I felt my sphincter resisting and then loosening as her dick slide into my rectum.  I cried out in pain as she let my o-ring accommodate its invader and then started to pump her dick in and out my asshole.  I loved its thick length stroking my colon as she picked up speed and force.  Soon my body was jolting from her slam thrusts.  She fucked me for a few minutes before pulling it out and fisting my hair and telling me "suck your fucking asshole off my black dick you fucking Lilly white cracker bitch!"  I moaned as I felt my head pushed down and gripped her balls and lifted her dick and dove on her cock pumping my head hard and fast as I corkscrewed my head up and down her dick.  she pulled me up viciously making me cry out in pain as I felt her dick slamming back up my asshole hard and deep.  I was moaning and gibbering continuously as speared me and "made" me do atm over and over.  I was in heaven as she now speared my cunt before fucking my asshole and back forth as I cleaned her cock off.  She pulled my head over and looked me deep in the eyes and whispered she wanted to slap and gasp me.  I could only let my eyes roll back and spasm as I groaned out softly "yeesssssssss".  I felt her left hand grip my chin and jaw line and then my face was jerking with hard slaps as my face reddened with short vicious slaps.  Then she suddenly jerked my hair with long hard pulls making me cry out and slapping my face so fucking hard with slaps from her hand now rising high in the air jolting my head form side to side.  I was in pained heaven.  I felt my orgasm beginning to approach and I felt her hand gripping my throat above my larynx so I knew she knew what she was doing.  Her fingers were soon digging in making me gurgle and gasp as I reveled in the pressure now gagging and choking me.  She whispered what a slut I was and shook my head choking me and then slapping my face down into the mattress making me cry and weep tears as she slammed fuck my asshole so good.  Suddenly both hands were truly gasping me as I couldn't breath and her fingers were sunk into my throat as my orgasm just exploded from my shredding womb.  My heels were wildly kicking the mattress as one hand ripped at the sheets and the other was weakly pulling her choking hands as I came so fucking hard.  she pounded my head into the mattress as she choked me and I felt my body twisting and jackknifing as she choked me extra hard and then relaxed letting me get some harsh gulping breaths in as I screamed out and felt my eyes bulge almost out my eye sockets when she strangled it off as I now went multiple and was having horrible jackknifes and my legs were scissoring violently as I just came and came as I was gasped and then allowed to breath before gasped again.  I loved how she slammed my head into the mattress as she choked and gasped me.  the way the webbing of her hands and her fingers jammed into my throat.  when I finally came down from my harrowing orgasm she pulled out and scooted up and pushed my limp head over to her cock on her sweaty belly and I weakly lipped it into my mouth and sucked and licked clean as she stroked my face and sweaty hair all the time telling me what a white whore and slut I was.  How she was going to share me with her "roommate" soon.  I just felt my belly lurch and jolt.  Later that afternoon I showed her I was a master myself as I raped her asshole over and over and gasped her to heaven and back.  I so loved seeing my white hands wrapped around her throat as I choked her watching her eyes bulge and face slash horrible as her body flipped and flopped through four orgasms as I took her twice over.  sigh, doing her piledriver as I pounded her cunt and asshole and reaching down and choking her as I lifted her head up and shook like a rag doll as it flopped all over as she gagged and tiny squeaks before choking off completely as her eyes rolled back and her mouth drooled spit heavily.  I gripped extra hard making her face slash before releasing her throat and gripping her hair with both hands making sure she felt my strength in my fingers gripping her hair and scraping her scalp.  I made sure to give her head hard short jerks forward and back as she swooned and moaned deep in her throat.  I called her a fucking nigger and gripped her hair with one hand and smacked her face so fucking hard as she cried and wept.  I slapped her a few more times as I noticed her groin was doing its circular fuck dance as my cock rammed up her clenching shit hole.   I gripped her hair again with both hands and jammed her neck back making her scream in pain as I jerked forward again making hard eye contact and twisted and jerked her head hard as she whimpered and started pulling on her nipples as she moaned and gibbered out "yessssss, oh fuck, harder" and such.  I slipped my dick into her spasming cunt and slammed her cunt with all my force making her whole body jolt with my powerful thrusts.  I worked her head and neck some more and then choking her hard again for good measure and then threw her head down onto the mattress and seeing it bounce and lull to the side as he gulped hard breaths and drooled while I ripped my cock from her clenching cunt and spearing balls deep into her asshole as I pulled her legs forward.  I smirked at her tired, weak cries of pained ecstasy as I torpedoed my dick into her asshole hard and fast as she came so fucking hard the last time as we kissed and I pinched her little nipples as she whimpered, groaned and thrashed up into my pressing body.  I so love feeling your body mashing and thrashing against my sweaty body.

 

//  I like reading of the workings of a characters mind.  Other authors just have things happen with no seeing of a character's thinking.  Here we see Laura sizing up the situation like I am always doing.  She go for being subtle like I believe until one is sure the love kill is going to happen then I move in for the kill quick and blow her mind and pussy and maybe asshole apart?  Like Laura my first thoughts are full speed ahead but then I analyze the situation and like Laura think of how I can be subtle and move her more quickly into my loving arms and bed.  you again show the humanness of your characters by showing such things.  Then you show how you slowly learn more things about an angel.  Things that make you smile and think happy thoughts [Bonnie greeted her wearing an apron that said: Even Cowgirls Get the Blues.  Laura could not suppress a grin.  This was a side of Bonnie, evidently, that she had not seen.]  it is these things that truly flesh out a woman beyond just her physical charms.  This is what binds souls in deeper love.  You show them moving closer by the easy banter again.  Banter that only you show.  I keep harping on it but this banter is one thing that makes your stories so special.  This is real life and not the scripted stuff that others give me.  hey, a script is great but real life is better.  By showing the subtle way to love you show how one truly moves a novice newbie to love.  A woman who is only now discovering her true self like ["Just a little splash of Sprite will be okay.  You're joining me, aren't you?  Remember . . . I don't want to be the only drunk at the party."          Bonnie poured the drinks very methodically, giving herself a tall glass of Coke with a little vodka in it.  "Can't stand the taste," she reminded Laura.         Laura came up behind her, before Bonnie could reach for the full glasses and hand her one.  She put one hand on Bonnie's shoulder.  "Here," she murmured softly, "let me help you off with the apron."]  sigh, I so love this moment when the banter and subtle maneuvering is over and it is time to take your woman and make her your total slut and whore.  To devour her so completely that she will never forget and become addicted to cunt meat and devastating orgasms that only a woman can give over and over and touch her soul as you touch her true inner essence.  I so adore the love shakes and doe eyes I get when I take my newbie and make her mine.  How they just melt and whimper for me.

//  by taking your time and developing your story over chapters you are able to give us this totally magical moment [She slid her fingers to the side, caressing Bonnie's smooth black cheek again, and moved her face closer, brushing Bonnie's lips with her own.  Laura knew from experience how to make it a very slow and romantic first kiss, and Bonnie helped by tilting her head a little to the side so that their mouths melted more easily together.  Neither opened her mouth at first, being content to press her lips to the other's mouth lightly but expressively.  Then Laura slowly but surely began to insinuate the tip of her tongue between Bonnie's lips, and Bonnie obligingly parted them to let it in.        Up to this point only their lips touched, and now their tongues, as well as Laura's fingertips still caressing Bonnie's cheek.  But slowly, as the lengthy kiss wore on, they began to press the rest of their bodies together, and Laura's arms slowly encircled Bonnie, until she was holding her close and kissing her more hungrily.  And wonder of wonders, Bonnie was kissing back.]  I so love this moment when I am taking my woman and making her totally mine.  I so love to feel your face in my fingers as I stroke your face and bring our mouths together.  I so love taking it slow at first and letting our lips do the dance of love like you show.  Feeling them stroke and press as we slowly increase the pressure.  I so love to insinuate my tongue between your lips and start to stroke your teeth and if still hesitant to run my tongue along your gums and run it back and forth going between your upper and lower gums as I press stronger and stronger.  I find this usually breaks any silly resistant along with my arms pulling you close as I massage your face and neck with one hand and the other is clutching your back, ribs or stroking your tits as I feel you begin to love shake and mewl.  I so swoon as my tongue flows into her mouth and I take it for my own.  I start slowly but quickly ramp up as I twine my long tongue around yours and slide all over it and stroke your cheeks and worm underneath your tongue and explore before snaking on top again and sliding down your tongue and exploring the back of your mouth.  I so smile as my new slut gags and judders in my arms as I feel her totally melt for me.  I love to tell them to stick out their tongue and latching onto it and sucking it hard and give it head.  I make women squeal and melt with this trick.  Roping my arms around you and pulling roughly to my body as I am now spearing down your moaning throat and my hands are beginning to strip you down as I stroke and massage your skin as I peal off your clothing.  I always want my whore to kiss back and will run my tongue along your tongue or up the roof of your mouth and over your teeth encouraging you to follow my tongue into my mouth and let our tongue wrestle and twine in new love in my hot mouth.  mashing our lips tight as we now devour each other like two starving wolves.

//  I love hearing the compliments that Laura gives bonnie as they kiss telling her how beautiful she is.  I so do that.  You need to tell them why they are so beautiful and why you want to fuck them so badly.  Love them continuing to kiss hungrily.  I so love pulling roughly to me as our tongues flow from mouth to mouth and our spit is flowing also and roping between slobbering mouths.  I work hard to get my new slut to do this or letting me easily guide along [Bonnie winked and crooked her finger.  She took Laura's hand and drew her over to the wall furthest from the kitchen, swiveling the panel to expose the large Murphy bed behind it.  She caught Laura's glance with a significant flash of her dark eyes.  Then she carefully lowered the bed and pulled down the blanket.]   I work so hard like Laura to build this need in my newbie to make her dying for it.  recently, Hillary, Simonette and myself went to Camille's campus for an outdoor concert.  I have to smile remembering a young, shy black girl coming over to introduce herself to us.  I was obvious she had her eyes on the sisters.  Me and Simonette sat back and watched them quickly have the girl swooning between them with all their compliments and hand stroking her flesh which was exposed with her high cut offs and tank top showing off her full c-cup tits.  I like her hair cut to frame her heart shaped face and her African nose and thick lips.  she was from a small town in south Carolina and was thrilled to be away from home and I could see why.  Camille suggested we go back to her place to listen to jazz.  Samantha was all nervous but nearly tripped over herself accepting.  Needless to say once at Camille's they had her between them on the sofa while we sat on the floor and relaxed listening to the music as Camille lowered the lights to a soft glow.  Samantha was breathing heavily now as Hillary tilted her head her way and took her mouth hungrily.  The poor girl simply melted and flowed into her arms as Camille quickly stripped the girl.  She started to protest weakly that this was wrong but Camille silenced her with a searing kiss while pulping her tits making her moan helplessly as Hillary slide to the floor and clamped onto her cunt and attacked it with all her skill.  Soon Samantha was rotating her hips into Hillary's mouth and devouring Camille's mouth with slobbering, hungry kisses.  Gods she came so hard as she bucked and groaned gutturally as Hillary sucked down her cunt nectars and rubbed her clit with super fast strokes.  I sort of lost track of things as Simonette and I got naked and started fucking each other.  But I glanced from time to time and saw our newbie sucking off first Hillary and then Camille.  I loved seeing her first hesitancy and then trying to bury her face into their cunts and sucking their clits almost savagely.  They made sure to clamp their thighs around her face and grip her head to mash her face into their cunts when they exploded into her gulping mouth.  soon Simonette and I had her as she cried out in bliss as her body was consumed by four lesbian sluts that made her womb shatter and mind white out with pure bliss.  I have to smile.  She was no virgin but she sure got an education that night.  We got strapped in and soon we were gang banging her ass hard.  she was shocked at first but we soon overwhelmed her resistance as we love assaulted her body.  Later, Camille took her virgin asshole as she pleaded she was not into anal sex and cried out in pain when Camille thick cock slipped into her bunghole.  Camille went slow and didn't really force her will but simply let nature take its course.  I loved seeing her asshole bow out as it tightly clung to the invading dick in her shit hole.  Soon it was slicked with ass juice and Camille was stroking it deep and long.  Camille pulled out and Hillary slammed her dick into her body making her cry out again with that look only anal sex gives.  Her head was drupe down in her doggy position as she groaned and shuddered.  She was in heaven clutching the sheets when Camille gripped her hair and lifted her head up and pressed her cock into her lips.  the girl opened her mouth as her eyes bulged and quickly became addicted to her ass candy.  We took turns raping her asshole and an anal orgasm bloomed from nowhere and she screamed and jackknifed mightily.  We soon got her between us with Hillary on the bottom and we initiated her into the pleasures of dp sex.  I got up close and watched her asshole and cunt being punished and moaned licking her ass of the cocks ripped from her spasming asshole.  she came twice more with shrieks and screams of bliss.  I loved how she bite Simonette's shoulder during her second orgasm and her fingers were tearing at the sheets as her eyes squeezed shut so tight as tears of pure sexual blessed flowed from her eyes.  I am having to smile as Camille is now having to service her needs over, over, over and over.  poor girl.  Not.

//  I can feel the thrill that Laura is feeling seeing this divine angel giving herself freely to her.  I so know that victory feeling and knowing that I have seduced another woman to the truth and light.   I like how you make this feeling magical and not mechanical like the harem author and the Swedish hand ball team stories.  I love sex of course but the emotion is what makes it perfect.  Again you besot the reader with the sweetest details that only you give.  [She kissed her mouth and her smooth black neck and her shiny black ear, nuzzling her hair, digging her fingers into the hard round resilience of Bonnie's ass—that spectacular ass!— through her jeans for the very first time.  Though not as obsidian-dark as Dee Dee or Dawn, for example, Bonnie was darker than Nyomi, whom Laura had most recently been nuzzling, and as usual Laura found her delicious black skin a huge erotic turn-on.  Bonnie passively accepted Laura's acute physical hunger, letting herself be kissed and caressed, but finally pulling back to pose a sensible question.]  I get so tired of just reading they kissed.  I want the details that you give.  I love how you show loving the whole face and neck and then commenting on Bonnie's attributes.  With the harem stories he simply never describes his stars and if I don't know them then I have no real idea about their bodies.  Love how you show Laura's history and how she can compare these wonderful angels skin color and assess.  I so love women of color skin color and the almost infinite variations that make the mind swoon.  I am smiling as bonnie is being consumed by Laura.  That is the state I am always working for with a newbie.  Make her totally mine.  I am grinning great big at the small moments and humor that only you work into your stories [Bonnie turned down the fire on the stove and returned quickly to Laura to turn up the fire there.  "What do we do now, get undressed?"        "Well . . ." Laura pretended to think it over.  "It's usually easier when you're undressed.  Not always, but usually.  I think . . . we should help each other undress.  Me first.   I'll help you out of these jeans."]  I am a sucker for wit.  I use it every chance I can and I find it gets such results.  I am thankful I am able to use it so well.  It opens so many women's legs!  I can just see Bonnie melting with these words.  I am thankful that you show this.  Some stories have a sweet story but miss these little moments and the long stories just don't have it.

//  I am smiling again as Laura knells down to unzip and remove Bonnie's jeans and panties.  Geez, I so love how Laura and I do a lot of the same things ["You know, you have a beautiful ass," she murmured, standing again to face Bonnie, but keeping her hands under Bonnie's panties, happily clutching the hard round moons.]   I so love clutching and gripping a beautiful firm ass and letting them feel my strength and passion.  I will often clutch your ass and pull hungrily to my body as I slam my tongue down your throat and hump your mound into mine or my thigh making you whimper and mewl with rising love.  Humping your cunt up and down my mound as we groan and our feel our panties or sodden cunts mashing and squirming in wet heat and need.   I love seeing Laura testing the limits and wishing she would go further like me.  I so know that heat of clutching a nice ass in your fingers and squeezing and humping.  Knowing you are going to love it totally if she will let me.  I have to smile at bonnie saying her asshole is too small for cock.  so much to teach.  I like Laura suggesting a finger or two.  That is just the start!  I never tire of ass loving.  last night I was over at Shari , Cindy and Tameka's place.  I feel my cunt getting wet remembering having Shari on the bed all spread out and I was between her thighs with her on her stomach.  I was kissing and massaging her whole back and legs and finally zeroed in on her ass as she moaned and shimmied her ass into my face.  So much to kiss and lick as I worked down the sides of her rumpus maximus and was licking and sucking her inner ass crease before tossing her salad and working her sphincter and using my thumbs to pry open and sliding my tongue deep into her asshole.  tongue fucking and French kissing with my all as she sighed and groaned.  I know I spent at least fifteen minutes tonguing and fingerfucking her asshole before using a deep red but plug to work her shit hole.  Gaping and then mashing my face in and tonguing her rectum wildly and sucking her corn hole for all I was worth.  Holding her asshole open so Cindy and Tameka could easily tongue fuck her asshole and French kiss it deeply.   I then sat back and masturbated as they fisted her asshole and pussy at the same time.  They are all so deeply black and I swooned seeing Cindy's forearm up her asshole twisting so deep and hard as Tameka ram fucked her stuffed cunt.  Shari kept crying out how good it felt feeling their fists rubbing against each other in her fuck holes.  The way Cindy kissed her hips and ass as she plunged her forearm up her asshole and the way Shari just juddered and keened.  When she came it was almost violent the way her body jackknifed and leaped around and flopped on the bed.  her lovers were on their knees and riding it out.  It is just so obscene and beautiful to see a woman's arm jerking as a cunt and asshole is spasming around the fist embedded in it and the way Cindy and Tameka's arms jerked and jutted in the air and spasming around as Shari thrashed and groaned in deep ecstasy.  I quickly ramped up to join my orgasm to hers.  For me just seeing those black arms jutting and thrashing out Shari's black ass and cunt made my orgasm so fucking intense that I couldn't keep from screaming all caps and flopping around on the bed myself before I rose up on my heels and neck and had several painfully long full body spasms as a second orgasm ripped me with pure fucking bliss as my new orgasm throttled my brain with sheer ecstasy.  Oh gods, I can still feel my fingers buzzing my clit and my other hand pulping my tits. 

//  I see bonnie is still demurring on anal fun.  A challenge I would definitely have to rise to when next we meet and I start yet another seduction.  Love reading the praise that Laura heaps on bonnie.  You can never tell your angel enough how wonderful she is.  I so love reading your praise.  It is genuine that it is obvious that you truly adore the female form.  I love how you take your time to get them naked with finally the last article coming off [Now Laura embraced her again and kissed her while unfastening her bra behind her back with the fingers of both hands as they kissed.  "I guess I was.  I didn't know whether you'd ever give in, though."       She skimmed the loose straps down Bonnie's long arms, and Bonnie flung the bra across the room into a chair, her firm naked breasts jiggling only slightly.  She looked down at Laura's pale hands that quickly scooped them up.  They were perfectly shaped and round and high upswept balls, with medium sized black nipples that were swollen and a little shiny.          "Look at our skins together," Bonnie said softly, in wonderment.  "Here . . . take yours off too."]  I love fucking in any way but I love best fucking totally nude.  I want to feel all of you all over me.  I so love how you show the subtle things like unhooking the bra as you kiss deeply and you remove that garment and can now truly devour her.  So love the detail of skimming those straps down and off her arms.  It is the little details that make me swoon upon reflection.  The little moments that lead up to heated fucking.   I too so love that color contrast.  With women of color you just never know how the shades will play out.  I am smiling at bonnie remarking that loving women is more gentle.   That is so true.  Even when I am taking them hard they tell me either that they only trust women to fuck them hard or that women just know how to press the buttons in the right way.  I so love taking a woman to abuse heaven and watching the cataclysmic orgasms I give them when I do.  I love the power of men but just the sound of woman's voice as she screams at me or orders me around and the feel of her hand as it slaps me is just more special.  I guess seeing women take power and control is a pure turn on for us.  Love the details.  Them kissing each other deeply as the hold and massage their tits.  I love starting like this and then bringing our bodies together as our tits mash and rub against each other or our chest if a big difference in size and our arms are clutching desperately and thighs are humping hard with slow sweeps on sodden cunts.

//  again I revel in how you are constantly giving compliments in your stories.  What woman doesn't swoon at such loving words.   I just makes you want to fuck with your all.  Plus, you are giving the small details about her bone structure and her tits that add so much to your characters.  Like I say, other authors just don't give them for some reason.  ["I love your boobs . . . they're so beautiful," Laura murmured as she and Bonnie lay down face to face on the bed.  Laura held the lovely round globes in her hands.  "They're high . . . like your cheek bones."]  love how you make things romantic with details like lying down face to face and gazing in deep love into each other's eyes as your bodies ignite with fire and need.  You now start the breast loving I so love to read and give me the added, plus, sweet dialog that I truly love reading [Laura did not reply but began a full-scale love assault on Bonnie's delectable breasts.  She held them both in her hands, reluctant to spend attention on one at the expense of the other, and so squeezing them both and moving her hungry mouth from one shiny, saliva-wet black nipple to the other one, sucking them, lip-biting them, stabbing them with her tongue, then sucking them harder, so hard in fact that Bonnie shuddered and rose up off the mattress, keening deep in her throat.        "Unnggeeeee!   Ohmmm! Unggeee!  Oh shit . . . that's hard!"        "Oh, I'm sorry, honey, is that too hard?" Laura asked, sliding up and kissing her face, very concerned.        Bonnie's face modulated from a sharp grimace into a smile.  "Oh no.   It kinda felt good.  I just wasn't expecting it.  Nobody ever did that to me before."        "Sucked you?"        "Just that hard."         Laura gave her a contrite smile.  "I get a little carried away."        Bonnie tittered softly.  "You should feel how wet it made me.  You did that and I started to gushing."]  you continually show the ramping up of love that I so love.  With all the gentle seduction and kissing we are primed for the rising heat as Laura starts her true love assault.  I have always smirked as Laura continually asks if she is being to rough.  I know when I am truly hurting them and will try to induce them to embrace some sweet pain but if they truly have a low threshold then I happily back off.  I find this to be the exception.  I find most women love harder loving to some degree at least.  I so love the details you provide.  I usually just read that the nipples are being sucked while you tell us that Laura is moving from tit to tit; sucking; lip biting; tongue stabbing and increasing the force of her loving.  this is details!  And you show how bonnie is being pleasured by her facial expressions and her words of joy and pleasure.  this is how women communicate with actions and words.  I like how where Laura stops I ramp up.  When I first loved assaulted Sari I was sucking her tits nice and hard and started to love pulp with moderate force.  I so adored her head thrashing and wild grimaces of dire pleasure.  I asked if she loved it and she croaked yes with face slashes as I supper sucked.  I then asked her gently if she wanted it harder and I smiled great big when she whimpered yes.  I started to work her full b-cup tits with harder squeezes as I tongue drilled her nipple and started to saw my teeth up and down her nipples as she writhed and groaned hard.  soon I was pulping her tits with hard squeezes as I made her tennis ball sized tits bulge out the top of my squeezing hands as I teeth raked her nipples and supper sucked while tongue whirling making her cry out in pleasure.  rolling her tits in my hands and then mashing into her chest cruelly as my I rotate my palms hard making her nipples bend and squirt around as I mash her tit meat right and left.  Then gripping and pulping again as then clench and pull taunt and from time to time bending down to more gently suck and massage before working hard again making her writhe and buck.  Last week her Joann and my Joann were loving her deeply.  Our joanns were between her thighs on the sofa sucking her off in grunting, snuffling tandem making her cunt hole and clit sing in ecstasy.  I loved watching them switch between her clit and cunt and pushing her legs back to drill her asshole.  I helped with my tit mauling and from time to time slapping her beautiful tits harshly making them whiplash from side to side and turning red as she cried out and begged for it harder as my hand really then went high.  The smacks were so fucking loud as her tits just jolted right and left and jiggling as my hand rose for another good swat.  My hands feeling the sting also of my hard slaps as her nipples where so rock hard.  she came suddenly with wild, violent jackknifes as my Joann was kneeling low and pushing her head up and sucking her cunt inside out and her Joann was kind of half rose up on her knees and her head bent down so she could suck her clit with cheek swallowing sucks.  Gods, an ear splitting scream blasted from her mouth as her eyes rolled back and her arms were flailing and pounding the sofa.  I was doing my part.  I had bent back down and pulping her tits with hard squeezes.  I had my knuckles rapping each other to pull her tits close.  her nipples and areolas swelling out the top of my pulping hands as I went back and forth rapidly and tongue drilled and sucked her nipples with supper sucks.  I grimaced when her hands thudded onto my scalp and her fingers dug in and clamped hard as terrible spasms ripped her body and made her fingers dig in as a second orgasm now ripped her mind to shreds in fucking bliss and ecstasy.  I felt so connected in deep love as she came so hard for us. 

//  I like how you show little detours in loving.  Laura is ready to feel Bonnie's dripping wet cunt and moves her hand south for some exploring and you show how women let women control the fuck.  Bonnie grabs the hand and asks for some more kissing.  I always smile when a woman asks for more kissing.  I like you show this trust in your partner to freely ask for what you want and the partner gladly doing as requested.  I have to smile as you show innocence.  It is so sweet how you show this.  Other authors just forget to show that a newbie is nothing but innocence with their first loving.  it makes your newbies so human and real.  You show this with bonnie wondering if it is alright to call this fucking and can she please suck Laura's tits.  I am touched when I see such innocence and doe eyed.  I always make it clear that they can totally fuck me in any way they want.  Gentle or hard I am your girl.  I will teach them all they need to know about sweet lesbian fucking in all its aspects if they wish.  You draw the reader in so much by making your women so real.  I love seeing a newbie progress like [Bonnie kissed her way down Laura's bare shoulder and upper chest to her small, perfect breasts, holding them in her slim dark hands and examining them closely.  "Yours are so . . . beautiful."        She paused before saying it, as if finding the right word were difficult.  But then she began kissing and sucking one as if she had done it all her life.  Laura relaxed and let the warm, sensual feelings flow through her body.  "You're good at this," she whispered, caressing Bonnie's forehead.       Bonnie grinned up at her.  "Beginner's luck.   You like it?"       "I love it.  Do it harder."]  I see more of that wonderful innocence with bonnie searching for the right words to express her new enlightenment.  She is real and alive!  Plus, I have always loved how you show what Laura is thinking.  It is so cool seeing Laura basking in their new love and letting her soul prepare for womb ripping sex.  Like the gentle encouragement.  Sweet words just make women go crazy I have found.  I can just feel their mouth working faster on my tits or sucking harder on my pussy when I give them sweet words of praise.  I love seeing bonnie soon making Laura writhing in pleasure as she works her tits more aggressively.  I so love lying back and letting my new lesbian whore totally consume me.  like this detail that I think only have used [Her hands flittered over every part of Bonnie's smooth, naked body that they could reach, then pulled her up so she could kiss her mouth again.  There was no substitute for a deep, searing soul kiss.]   I know this so well.  My moving my hands all over your body.   Stroking and tracing it making you feel even deeper love for me.  I have seen women just melt for me as I trace their face, upper body and ribs and along the crease between their thighs and hips.  I so love to see that total melting and surrender in their eyes and knowing I will soon totally consume them.  plus, I have to agree with the pulling up for soul deep kisses that open a woman's heart and thighs.  You are just so romantic!

//  Needless to say I have to love this next part.  I so adore your details.  I know I keep harping but I love how you show what is happening.  I just so know that other authors would now say basically "Laura now kissed Bonnie's ass and started to like her asshole" and "Bonnie loved it".  now is that boring or what.  Maybe a little more but I am sure not much more.  Like I say, the harem author is better than most but is always the same.  Another cardinal sin.   I like how you tell how Laura finds it "supremely" enjoyable.  And the fact that bonnie is so proud of her ass.  She should be with awesome ass.  I love you showing the confidence of a woman.  Love how you show us that Laura is spending a lot of time loving her ass.  I can just kiss, lick, knead and bite your ass forever I feel.  You show that here  [ She maneuvered Bonnie onto her stomach and began the supremely enjoyable task of making love to this hall of fame bottom.  She knew this was their first time, and Bonnie was proud of her ass but not yet into anal sex, and so her attentions had to be limited to kneading, kissing, gently biting, and other non-invasive caresses, but that was certainly enough for the present, and she spent a good five minutes lavishing an extraordinary amount of skilled lechery on these marvelous twin black moons.        For her part, Bonnie enjoyed every second.  She squirmed and clenched her firm round buns, and panted and giggled and squirmed some more, tensing up only briefly when Laura's tongue snaked in between the hard bubbles, into the dark secret crease between them, which was extra deep because of the firm  swelling mounds.        "Ooohhhh!   Ooohhhh shit . . . that feels . . . that tickles!  Ummnnggghhh!  Oh shit, it feels good too!"        "You like that?  You want me to stop?"       "Don't stop!  Unhhhhh!  Oh shit, that feels good."]  I like seeing Bonnie luxuriating in the loving she is receiving.  You so show how women love being worshiped and adored.  I have to really love Laura working down into her ass crack and licking that deep ass crease with long hard strokes of her tongue.  I love running my long tongue up and down your ass crack lick a cat preening itself.  Forcing my tongue into the crease and running up and down with the flat of my tongue making you quiver and moan.  I love big asses feeling your cheeks smothering me in their warmth and musk.  I always believe in asking how I am doing.  I want them to express their pleasure because it so makes them want even more and letting me take them more and more.  I so love assess and even more their assholes.  I love taking an anal virgin and feeling her jolt when my tongue starts to caress and lick around her rosebud and I press my lips tight and give her a loving kiss all gentle with more licking.  Then slowly kissing more forcefully as I suck hard on sphincter with my tight lips and then start to lick more forcefully and start to tongue drill letting her know that soon my tongue will be invading her asshole and soon everything else.   I have made so many go so quickly form my tongue snaking  their asshole to my fingers and then my pounding cock and most my love fist stroking deep up their bellies. 

//  I am smiling as Laura tells bonnie how she dreamed of making love to her.  I make sure to do this because I just see them melt for me.  to let them know how I dreamed of them and hungered for their body.  How I could see, smell and taste them.  How I could hear their guttural groans of ecstasy and how I am going to make them scream in pleasure.  I just preen seeing the love shakes and their eyes flaring and becoming heavy with desire.  I am surprised at how little I see this in other stories.  I like reading the positive reinforcement.  Laura continues to tell her new lover just how lovely she is.  A few stories may start with this praise but once the seduction is done the basic silence comes back.  one must always tell your angel just how wonderful she is.  It just makes her give herself so completely to you.  Which of course leads to paradise on Earth [Laura went on kissing it, but it became harder and harder for her to ignore the sweet, puckered, festering wet pussy just below Bonnie's curvy black moons.  The wonderful pungent odor alone, the odor of female in heat, was enough to curl her toes and fill her body with sharp lust.  She rolled Bonnie over gently and began to lick it.        "Unh!   Unh!" Bonnie gasped immediately, very aroused by Laura's passionate attack.  "Oh!  Oh shit!"]  I so love this moment of settling between my woman's thighs and gazing and smelling your wonderful cunt.  I do my foreplay homework so I always find a wet, sodden cunt that is dying for my mouth to devour it inside out.  I love to just gaze down at a vulva and take in all its details.  Brushing the hair aside if necessary and gazing with love and need at your cunt petals, your slit and your clit.  thinking to myself how I will devour your festering cunt.  I just breath deep while I think on how I will attack your cunt lips, savage your cunt and tongue and fingerfuck your fuck hole.  I usually start slow, and then ramp up but with a current lover I will sometimes devour in a wild gluttonous snuffling that makes their cunts just jump up and jam my mouth in bucking pleasure.  I just get so fucking horny and needful smelling your cunt nectars and seeing your mound and thighs glistening in the light covered in fuck juice if you are a wet one.  I so love those initial sounds of pleasure as my mouth makes first contact with your vulva.  I just love settling in like Laura and dinning on your pussy and slowly working deeper and harder with my mouth and face loving the ambrosia of taste and smell and my ears reveling in your vocalizations of pleasure.  this is something that you have always captured so well.  The pacing and the details that show the seduction, foreplay and now the beginning of love making.  I can just feel Bonnie's cunt in my mouth as I start to work her pussy.  her wet slimy cunt meat flooding my mouth with divine nectars.

//  one of the things that really captured me from the beginning was how you are able to so describe a woman's passion flower.  You have done this for every woman in this story arc.  I keep saying that other authors don't do this and that.  This is one that really stands out for me.  I am simply agog how other authors almost never describe a woman's pussy.  a few have just a little and those are few and far between.  You are literally the lone voice crying in the wilderness.  I find this strange.  I would think all women writers especially would want to wax poetic about their characters pussies.  I mean it is sort of the center of our being in so many ways.  I just think all writers would want to describe fully their women's pussies and titties.  But they don't.  I have found that to be so strange over the years.  of course, I have tried writing a few stories and dang if I don't have the same problem.  Either I find myself sort of glossing over what I rant about or it becomes a clinical dissertation on women's anatomy.  It makes me marvel how you strike the balance over and over again.  First you have the desire, then you have the writing skills and finally you have the sense of balance between too much and not enough.  My hat is off to you.  You show it yet again here [It was a beautiful small tight pussy, not at all like Nyomi's almost extravagantly opulent, floppy-lipped black orchid of a pussy that Laura had lately been hungrily slurping but instead a neat little slot of tight black cunt lips enclosing a fragrant pink trench of glistening wet cunt meat.  Even though it was already puckering, Laura pulled it fully open gently with her thumbs and began tonguing and sucking it with concentrated skill, searching out Bonnie's little clit under its hood at the top and stabbing it repeatedly with the tip of her tongue.  Bonnie shuddered and moaned.       "Ohhh!   Ohnnnnnnn!" ]   this so gives me a nice mental picture of Bonnie's passion flower.  With this I can so see it in my mind's eye and how I will attack it.  the shape and character of a woman's vulva determines how one can make love to it.  the more pussy lips you have the more I can play and torment them.  I love big lips but smaller lips like bonnie make you focus on them and grip with your teeth and gnaw and graze making her buck and keen.  Getting a tight lip lock and jerking hard to make them taunt out.  I find a lot of women don't work smaller lips like they should and women so love it when I do.  When I come across women with no lips I sort of grrrrrr to myself but adjust.  I do a lot of flat tongue licking, French kissing and tongue slapping all over while drooling copiously and teeth dragging up and down her slit and over her clit hood making her hump desperately and cry out.  The way you describe your women allows me to plan my attack on each woman and I so love it.  I so love the detail of pulling Bonnie's flower open and starting her love attack.  I so adore that moment of bringing my mouth down to your wet, red, swollen cunt and beginning my magic.  I just smile as my slut sucks in her breath and I feel that body clench as I begin to pleasure her soul like only a woman's mouth can.

//  Laura now does what I so love to do:  dine on sodden cunt meat.  This is where I live to be [Laura tongued and sucked her more passionately, now introducing two fingers into the soupy furrow of her pussy, fucking her gently and rhythmically with them, bringing her slowly up to the bursting point.  Bonnie's sleek, undulating black body was enchanting to her, and when she began to clutch at her own breasts, pulling and squeezing them, Laura knew she was getting closer.  Surprisingly, she noticed that she now had three fingers in Bonnie's tight little pussy, and they were sliding in and out with ease.]   I love seeing words like "soupy" in your descriptions.  It just adds so much to the narrative description.  I so know this wonderful dining.  My mouth pressed hard into your wet cunt as I tongue stab, probe and flail your cunt petals and work your cunt lips in turn as I work your entire cunt.  Licking forcefully up and down your slit, cunt folds and working your lips individually if long and floppy enough.   Love to lick flat along your pelvis and lick like a cat and seeing my women love drool over the attention.  Then siphoning into my mouth to stretch and gnaw making my slut quiver and moan.  I so know that pumping fingers into your wet, humping cunt.  I usually like to use two or three fingers.  that way I can rake your cunt walls, explore your cunt folds.  Use my fingers to tease and get between and squeeze any prominent folds.  Worm fingers in a rotation pattern to work your whole cunt and then flutter my fingers individually to make them flutter strongly in your flowing cunt.  I make women cum so fucking hard with just this sometimes.  I love just sucking a nipples deep and long while I love pulp, squeeze a tit with one hand while my fingers are pounding and flailing a cunt like this.  The screams and wild body jackknifes just make my soul sing when they fall into the arms of sweet nirvana.  I so love to fingerfuck a cunt to explosively orgasms I work your tits or mouth to make it stronger and longer.  I swear other authors just have their women lie there like mannequins.  Some women are not motile but still they react and vocalize even if somewhat subdued.  I hate reading stories were you don't see any reaction out of the woman until she comes explosively.  If she cums that hard then she was reacting to your loving ministrations while you were taking her to the peak.   Writers need to show this.  You show this with Bonnie's body humping in its lewd dance of love.  I so love to see my whore's body starting to hump instinctively and jolting randomly as I do something right.  I have always been surprised how other authors don't show women self loving their own tits.  I am always doing this to increase my pleasure and see almost all my sluts doing this.  I so love to pulp my tits.  Feeling my fingers digging in and rolling my tits and then squeezing and twisting my aureoles and then working my nipples as I squeeze cruelly and twist harshly making my heels kick and my mouth drool.   Squeezing my nipples  with two fingers and thumb and jerking violently and then pulling up until my tits are stretched up and taunt as I jerk my nipples hard making me cry out and feel pure fire burning my nips and my tits boiling with pained pleasure.  I am smiling remembering as I was doing this a couple nights ago.  I was playing with myself after watching Joann, Maria and Camille suck each other off in a daisy chain.   I was flowing like a river masturbating through their wonderful fuck, and wanted to up the amps some so I could now cum explosively.  Some nipple clamps where on the bed so I clamped them onto my rock hard nipples.  I started to buzz and fork my clit with one hand.  I was watching with slitted eyes as my tits jiggled and shook as I watched the clamps biting into my burning nipples.   I used the chain to pull my tits up until they were taunt and giggling with my short hand jerks.  I was jerking hard when Joann the fucking bitch slapped my tits hard making the clamps sink into my nipples so fucking hard as they whiplashed I shrieked in pain and pleasure.  I lost my grip and my tits flopped down and I quivered as she ordered me to get the chain and pull my nipples taunt again.  I quiver remember feeling the tears running down my face in that delicious painful pleasure.   I pulled them taunt and jerked up and down and all around.  I was hissing and moaning.  I felt my cunt spasm so good when she started slapping my tits again with one hand and gripping my cunt and mashing and grinding with her other hand.  Needlessly to say, after only a minute or so of this I came like a fucking volcano.  My head kept slamming into the mattress as my neck coiled and jerked and I could feel my belly jerk and hump up as my womb shredded so deep in my belly as I cried out and groaned deep in my chest as waves of searing bliss destroyed my soul yet again with perfect ecstasy and bliss.  My hands had gripped the sheets and I can so remember how they jerked and tired to tear the sheets as my upper torso rose up a foot and just spasmed so fucking hard.  gods, my eyes bulged almost out of my head as Joann just mashed and ground my clit into my cunt and her other hand now slapped my tits with whiplashing blows as I watched the chain between the clamps sparkling as it whiplashed along with my tits as Joann smacked with loud stinging slaps.  I couldn't help it, another orgasm just exploded out my ruined womb as I now jackknifed wildly and felt my ass rising and slamming the bed now as my head just thrashed right and left as I sprayed spit through my clenched teeth.  I just came and came until I was wrung out and I just loved cooed as Joann removed the clamps and gently suckled my love aching nipples through so many heavenly aftershocks as she also swirled my spent cunt with leasurily love. 

//  wow, I am totally impressed.  We get to see Laura's love fist in action.  This is something I have never done.  I save fisting and anal penetration with virgins to the art till after the first love kill.  I first want to blast their minds and soul with overwhelming pleasure.  it makes it so much easier to take the loving deeper and rougher.  I can see why Laura goes to the next step so easily though.  I have fucked women for the first time and been surprised when I find myself wedge fucking them hard, fast and deep.  I just have always held back the final step even though they have been soaking wet and leaving a huge wet spot on the bed or floor.  I remember fucking Angelica with her having one foot on the bed and me sitting on the floor just wedge fucking her with hard punishing thrusts that had her rising up on her toes some and groaning gutturally.  Her juices were just splattering all over me and spotting the carpet and bed and running down my arm.  I just smiled as I worked my thumb down my fingers and started to push and hold deeper as her cunt quickly accepted my knuckles and then my hand was in her love glove and I reveled in the wet heat clenching my hand.  I just kissed her thigh all over and started to squeeze her ass with my other hand hard as I made my fist.  Soon I was ramming hard into her cervix as she gagged and moaned so gutturally like a street whore in heat.  I am smiling seeing in my mind how she started to milk her tits with hard squeezes and lifted up a tit from time to time to lick and suck the tip of a nipple she could just reach.  I started to jam her cunt down and forward with my grip on her ass and really ramming her hard with my plunging fist.  Gods, the way she looked down at me as she started to peak and how her head snapped back and a full caps scream blasted from her throat as her body now had horrible body quakes and I had to push her over onto the bed as she flipped and jackknifed.  I crawled up as she toppled keeping my fist in her spazing cunt as her groin herked and jerked all the time still pumping and twisting my fist as she sobbed and gibbered in Spanish how she was cuming so hard along with hissed "fuck's" and "shit's" thrown in.  I think this is the second time she had done a newbie with her love fist.  I am smiling at how she herself is shocked how it happens.  I love it when I see Laura taking a lover to heights the woman never knew existed.  It so makes them your total love whore.

//  I so love reading your stories and seeing the great details that you give us [ "Unnnngghhhhh!"   Her hands rose up over her head to clutch the pillow behind her, and her eyes rolled up.  Her back arched and her lovely breasts swirled.  Her crooked elbows danced in the air above her forehead as she clawed the pillow.  "Unnggghhhh!   Oh!"        Part of Laura wondered if this was going too far.  Fist-fucking a girl, a sweet, natural girl like Bonnie, during their very first moments together in bed, even if they had not planned it, seemed like pushing the envelope.  I shouldn't be doing this.  I should take my hand out and just suck her and make her come quickly.  Then apologize.]  sigh, the sounds of your stories.  The intense fucking along with the sounds were the first two things I loved about your stories when I discovered them.  I know I keep going on but I can't help it.  only you have given me the sounds of fucking.  I get so freaking tired of the silence of most stories.  One author does use sounds but it is always at the end and it is the same two or three and he ALWAYS draws out the sound.  Of course I moan long and hard but not every single freaking time.  The other, the harem author, ALWAYS has his women scream out full caps words.  He says they moan and groan but never the sound.   Let me give one "AAARRRGGGHHH" in frustration.  You give such sweet details.  It is so natural and endearing seeing bonnie reaching over her head helplessly to grip that pillow and especially the elbows whirling.  I have seen this so many times and yet seeing it in print just makes it leap off the page as the adage goes.  I can just see the helpless pleasure coursing threw her veins.  It just inspires me to love attack your body even harder to see it more and more.  Of course I don't feel like Laura here.  I would be ram fucking her sweet cunt so hard to take her to the highest heights of heaven delight.  I am so proud of Laura.  If the woman wants it then give it to her with your all and plan on taking it harder, deeper and rougher.  Laura finds what I usually find.  women love being taking hard and deep.  They love seeing what their bodies are truly capable of like here [She kept up a steady, relentless, slow sliding with her hand, sliding it in and out of the tight, slippery crevice, and Bonnie accordingly fell into the slow, demonic, rhythmical gyration of it, now moaning almost constantly, her eyes locked with Laura's.  Both of them, Laura knew, were beginning to fall into that deep, intimate shared trance that mysteriously often accompanied fist-fucking, as if no more stirring connection were possible between two women, and a life-altering orgasm was about to occur.        And Laura realized that it might.  At first Bonnie settled into the slow rhythm set by Laura's deliberate thrusting, but before thirty seconds or so she was churning and flexing more urgently, grimacing with need, her moans descending into low, guttural grunts and growls, punctuated by high-pitched whimpering.  It was all so desperately erotic that Laura too found herself yearning and pulsing with the need to come, to finish it, to explode, to merge with Bonnie in a conflagration of shrieking orgasms.        "Unnmmgghhh!   Mmmmnnuuungggg!  Oh!  Auummnngghh!" Bonnie moaned, her lovely black body now glistening with a thin film of sweat as she and Laura both labored toward her fierce final moment. ]  this is so true.  Once a woman is experiencing such pleasure you have them hooked.  And you are so right about fisting.  It just brings you so close to your slut.  I can just feel my soul melting for you as I feel your fist filling my cunt and jamming my cervix making my eyes roll back and I feel that demented harsh guttural groan in my throat as I moan and moan.  I live to see my woman's face getting that slutty look of a woman fucking completely.  I so smile when I start fucking my angel like this for the first time and they are the ones ramping up.  Time after time I see this when I plowing their cunt with a nice, thick, long dildo or I am spearing their asshole for the first time and they are squealing and throwing themselves up or back into my plunging thrusts.  Seeing them melt and gag as my fist sinks into their sopping wet cunt or I watch my fist disappear through your O-ring and I feel your rectum enveloping my clasped hand with wet burning heat.  I just feel so connected to you mystically as I feel your body clenching my fist and see my wrist or more sinking so fucking deep into your body.  I sweat like a whore anyway and we keep our house warm.  We like it warm but also love how it makes the fucking so sweaty and hot.  We love getting all covered in sweat and looking like total fucking whores as sweat drips off her bodies and our hair is matted with sweat and cum.  Oh geez I again love the sounds of bonnie rutting.  This just adds so much to the reading of your stories.  To see such accurate renderings of hot fucking is totally mind blowing.

//  I love the details that you keep giving the reader.  Details that just draw the reader in.   I love how you show Laura wanting to kiss throughout a fuck.  I surprise women with my love of kissing.  I will spend long times just kissing as I knead and stroke your body.  I hate other stories where they kiss at the beginning of foreplay and then not until post coital time.  I find women who are not prone to initiating kissing will gladly kiss when a woman who wants to kiss offers her lips for some sugar.  Women love to kiss.  I so love feeling our tongues wrestling, twining and flowing from mouth to mouth.  I so know that need that bonnie shows when she grips Laura's head and pulls it down roughly for some deep French kissing.  I can so feel our souls twining in deepening love when kiss at such moments.  I especially love it when it is my mouth roughly mated to a devouring mouth.  I so swoon when dodie, Joann, jill, etc. take my mouth roughly during heated sex and show me their hot love for me with their strong tongues raping mouth and snaking down my throat making me judder and gag.  I hope bonnie used some power when she gripped Laura's neck and jerked her down hard as their mouths mated hungrily and kissed hotly.  Then have to like the detail of bonnie gripping Laura's hand to jam it harder into her cunt.  I have grimaced in pain when a woman grips my wrist or forearm to jam my fist into their cunt or asshole.  I love feeling that strength and seeing that crazed fuck hunger in their face as they help me to rape their fuck hole(s).  The way their face just freezes and slashes as they jam my fist so hard and deep into their body.   I just fuck harder as I see the sweat dripping and splattering off your face and tits and your matted hair hanging limply or stiffish if kinky hair.  Sweaty hair is just so beautiful and whorish.  It just makes my soul sing as I gaze at your sweaty, disheveled hair.  Now this is the reason why we fuck hard with our fists of love [ "Nnnngggggg!   Ohhhmmnnggg!  Nuunngggg!"         From here, of course, the end was not far off.  Bonnie groaned, grabbed one delectable swirling breast with her free hand, arched her back, and came in a delirious frenzy.        "AUUNNMMMGGGNNHIIIEEEEEE!   UMMNNGGG!  ANNGGHHH!" ]   sigh, this is just so perfect.  You alone describe orgasms that are so fucking hot and yet realistic.  This is how a woman cums that is having a devastating orgasm that simply overwhelms the soul.  Women who know how to express and show their pleasure.   I feel my soul soar and float when I make a woman cum like this.  Especially love the detail of bonnie pleasuring herself with her tit milking and seeing that body arch and jolt with fucking bliss.  When a woman really, really screams with fucking bliss I am so fucking ecstatic that I just become one with them I feel.

//  fisting is just so intense.  This is the fourth year that Simonette, Hillary and this year Camille get together the weekend before high school and now college.  It is a time of intense fucking since we won't be able to see each other as often.  They are sort of my younger generation archangels.  We were in Hillary and Camille's parent's bed after fucking heatedly in the living and entertainment rooms resting and cuddling.  I was with Camille and Simonette was with her  baby.  Their parents of course are off saving the world or vacationing.  Can't blame them really.   Their girls are grown and now they get to do what the sacrificed earlier in their lives.  Soon the sisters couldn't keep their hands off each other.  Sigh, I so being in the presence of incest.  Seeing close relatives fuck each other.  Seeing familial love and how their similar features seem to blend as they fuck and consume each other.  After some deep throat kissing and groping they got into a sixty-nine with Camille on the bottom.  I was soon sitting up watching them eat each other out with fervor.  I think it is so beautiful seeing Camille gobbling her sister's cunt as Hillary swirled and humped down and seeing her ample mound flaring around Camille's mouth as I saw her cheeks working as her tongue stabbed and flailed and her mouth clenching tight like a lamprey and super sucking in Hillary's cunt meat and munching on it making her sister groan into her pussy and hump wilder.  Seeing Camille's hands clenching and pushing down Hillary's ass checks and running up and down her back and back to her ass to maul and jam down.  I couldn't help but be drawn to Hillary's ass.  I was soon bent over kissing and licking it all over along with some love bites on her firm / soft voluptuous ass.  Sometimes giving her a resounding smack to make them jiggle and make her cry out in her sister's cunt which in turn made Camille groan into her sister's cunt as her face would lurch up and make her gobble her sister even harder.  Camille knows my heart so well.  She started to grip her sister's ass cheeks and pulled them apart exposing her ass crack and beautiful rosebud with its cute folds around its puckered center.  I just buried my face deep into her ample cheeks and started to lick up and down the valley of her ass cleft.  Using the flat of my tongue to run up and down her deepest cleft and then turning my head and licking both slopes of her ass crack and drooling spit and watching it flow to her shit hole.  I smiled as I heard Hillary whining into her sister's cunt with added loving.  I could feel that Camille was approaching an orgasm with her body beginning to jolt and her hands no longer able to hold Hillary's ass open for me and I was engulfed in their hot heat as my face was buried in her ass as I used my cheeks to plow up and down and then over her asshole and I French kissed and drove my tongue into her rectum making Hillary suck harder on Camille's rigid, distended, candy cane clit I know.  I rose up for breath and saw Camille's face jolt back, her chin plowing through Hillary's cunt as her neck arched and the most beautiful sight in the world as her eyes would bulge and then squeeze shut as animalistic groans flowed from her throat as I watched her pelvis leap off the mattress as her sister's head bobbed up and down her big clit.  I scooted down to look and sure enough cunt juice was everywhere and a huge wet spot was under her pelvis.  Simonette was masturbating lazily with a soft smile on her face.  Slowly Camille recovered and went back to gobbling her sister's cunt as Hillary now kissed Simonette.  I got back to work on her asshole.  I slipped first one, two and then three fingers into her asshole and slowly stroked and rotated them as I kissed her ass cheeks and lower back.

//  soon Hillary went back to sucking her sister's cunt and working her rigid, swollen cunt for more cunt ambrosia.  I was contended with just rotating my three fingers into Hillary's asshole to give her the anal pleasure she so loves.  Then it morphed like you show.  She rose her head and looked back and croaked "Give me your white fist baby" and went back to sucking her sister's cunt.  I smiled when Camille gripped her ass cheeks again and pulled hard to open her shit hole for me.  I then started letting spit drool into her asshole and all over my fingers and worked them until I had my fingers and thumb in past my second knuckle and just keep rotating and thrusting and not taking deeper as they gobbled each other's cunt.  Sure enough I got the response I wanted.  Camille was still gripping and pulling back on her ass cheeks and now massaging sensing I was playing with her sister.  Soon the fucking slut started making demands.  Hillary raised her head and looked back and hissed at me to fist her "goddamit" and went back to sucking.  Still I teased her with no deeper penetration and letting her feel my spit lubricating her asshole with fresh gobs of drooling spit.  Then a minute later her head whipped up and back and growled in a loud voice with murder in her eyes "GODDAMMIT, ram that fucking fist up my black asshole BITCH!".   Camille pulled her ass cheeks hard, to open her up so I could see her rosebud nice and clear.  Looking hard into Hillary's eyes I jammed my hand forward and forced my fist into her fucking asshole and watched Hillary's eyes bulge and then slit as her body quaked and shuddered as I moaned feeling my fist slide forcefully into her rectum and moaned again feeling her wet, hot bowels envelope my hand as I fully formed my fast.  Sigh, such beauty as her head went limp and she lowered it to her sister's cunt and started devouring her clit and fuck hole with her sucking mouth and lashing tongue.  I stated to stroke her ass with my fist with small pumps and pounding her inner O ring making her gag into Camille's cunt.  Then I started to sink my fist deeper and deeper into her ass as I twisted it making her feel my knuckles sliding deeper into her belly.  Gods, I looked in the mirror on the dresser and groaned seeing my white forearm sinking into her black ass and the sight of Simonette masturbating and getting close and the sisters gripping each other and pumping their faces into each others cunts.  For several minutes we shared this perfect love.   now I was ramming my fist down her shit channel and pounding her O ring before plunging her asshole up my forearm again.  Poor Camille came first with her head lulling to the side as demented groans and cries of ecstasy flowed from her mouth and then Simonette was thrashing, spasming out chocked off cries of ecstasy escaped her spasming throat.  I was kissing Hillary's ass now while forcefully fucking her asshole deep and Camille recovered and I could see her supper sucking Hillary's grape sized clit when I glanced down. suddenly her hands were smacking Hillary's ass with all her strength making shockingly loud smacks and making them jiggle and lurch.  The shot of sudden pain did it.  Hillary's body started to do it's full jello quaking with sudden sharp and quick shockwaves gripping her flesh and then disappear while still quaking and I watched in the mirror as she rose up on her hands and her face got that look I can't quite describe.  Her eyelids gently close and her neck arches so slightly and her face has a mixed angelic and pure slut look as it slashes and jolts while her eyelids flutter.  It is one of the most beautiful sights I have ever seen and strive to make it happen over and over.  Gods she used her raised up upper body to grind her cunt down and back into her sister's suction on her clit and me up on my knees now ramming my fist up and down her shit track.  the loud guttural groans with high pitched keens thrown in.  The way her face looked with sweat running and dripping off and mingling with the milky cum all over her face and webbing in her hair.  Suddenly she was screaming all caps as her right fist punched the mattress and her body was gripped with pal mal seizures with a couple of rough body shaking spasms as her face dripped sweat and her swinging tits spattered sweat down also.  Oh my gods she is so beautiful as more body quakes made her baby fat judder and these harsh moans flowed as she went multiple and her orgasms just slammed after one another.  I felt sort of sorry for Camille as I glanced down at Hillary's cunt jamming and slamming her mouth and jamming her head down into the mattress but she took the pain to keep sucking her sister's clit with cheek hollowing sucks as more screams filled the room as Simonette jerked herself to orgasm again.  It was pure heaven let me tell you as ecstasy filled the room.  I so loved seeing Hillary weaken as she now clenched the sheets with both hands and arched her back to continue pressing and wallowing her cunt down to get more force grinding Camille's mouth and pressing into my ramming, twisting fist.  I loved how her body was making spastic lurches back and down to keep her pleasure at super nova levels.  The slashes and spasms racking her face and the way her body was shaking all over with massive killing spasms moving from pelvis to head was so divine.  We fucked her hard as she weakened and her arms buckled finally and her face thudded face down into the mattress between her sister's thighs into the massive wet spot Camille had made and her orgasm faded with her moans and drool soaking into the mattress adding to the beautiful wet spot.  So much pure love being shared.  

//  as I have said you are the master of showing the seduction, foreplay, ramping up and then the devastating love kill itself.  This you handle masterfully and always make it each seem so unique and true like great fucks in real life.  Great lovers know how to make each fuck so special.  Always striving to give and receive maximum pleasure and the immolation of wombs and assholes in fucking bliss.  Like I have said you do this while most don't and the few that do a good job use the same EXACT formula over and over.  one area that you do really, really good is showing how a great orgasm lasts and how one works to give it all to your lover.  The harem author really blew me away at first because he shows this too.  Then I noticed after a few chapters that he has a formula but, gods, he uses it exactly the same over and over.  now it is just boring.  You keep the whole fuck flowing to the sweet divine ending.  Way close to hundred percent of authors will simply say that the woman has her orgasm maybe give a body flip and if lucky two and maybe say she moaned or screamed.  Ho-hum.   They just let the orgasm end without any glorious length given, or if they say it does, nothing to really make the reader feel it.  again they take away so much from the fuck.  You show the length and power of sweet Bonnie's orgasm with [Laura ran her own free hand up to Bonnie's other breast, cupping and squeezing it while Bonnie's shuddering body went into sharp convulsions of killing pleasure.  She had known the girl would come hard, indeed had hoped Bonnie would come very hard, and yet the full force of this shocking orgasm overwhelmed her.  And that could not even describe the effect it had on Bonnie, who seemed briefly destroyed by the whole thing, crushed, before stretching and flexing and rolling half onto her side, her arm over her face, which was obscured from Laura's view, her body still undulating and twitching helplessly through the last devastating spasms of a horrific climax.        Laura's hand was still inside of Bonnie's squeezing pussy.  She could still feel the contractions of Bonnie's waning orgasm.  Bonnie was silently swooning, and Laura did not want to disturb her pleasure, her bliss, which was she reasoned still pretty intense.  But after a few moments she did slowly slide her hand out.  Bonnie was still very well lubricated, and it slid out easily.  Laura wiped it on the edge of the sheet and scooted up to embrace her.]  I have always loved how you show your woman loving with all her body.  I am pretty sure I have never seen another author show this.  Maybe fingerfucking a pussy while sucking it but never anything else.  I am so happy when I see you showing the total loving of your women.  I so love to love and abuse if she wants a woman's tits when I am loving them.  suckling lovingly or giving harsh slaps and love bites if that is what she craves.  Making her whole body sing with pleasure.   I am smiling here reading over Laura basking and being mildly shocked by the power of Bonnie's orgasm.  I am simply awed when I see a woman's body being destroyed with pleasure like this.  It is the most beautiful sight on this planet and you do give it the justice it deserves.  Seeing her face simply being destroyed with pleasure and how her body is racked with spasms and flips that are almost painful to watch and, gods, the sounds of a woman having a truly harrowing orgasm.  I love how you show the motions of a woman's body.  How it can move in any motion according to the gods' wills.  Cute detail of the arm flopped over her eyes as she swoons in bliss.  Geez, my womb contracted with Laura feeling Bonnie's cunt still rippling with sweet aftershocks and feeling that divine sensation on your fist as it basks in sweet warm cunt nectars.  Making my hand pulse and fluttering my fingers a little to make more aftershocks spawn in her belly making her mewl and hitch.  Have to smile at Laura wiping her hand after gently slipping from Bonnie's ruined pussy.  I would be running it through her hair marking her as my slut and then gently licking clean as I offer my hand to her also so we can lick clean like contented love kittens lapping warm cunt nectars instead of milk.

//  I am so there as Laura now takes care of her own needs by mounting Bonnie's thigh and humping to a sweet, devastating orgasm.  You are the only author, again, that shows forms of tribbing other than the classic scissor position.  Again, I get so tired of seeing the same ole, same ole from other authors.  You have shown just about every position I think.  I so love seeing Laura's body striving for nirvana and bonnie acting instinctively in giving pleasure like women do [ "Oh Laura."   Bonnie's arms encircled her, pulling her even closer, Bonnie's fingers biting into her flesh.  "Oh Laura . . . yes!"        "Auunngghhmmnniieee!" Laura squealed into her neck, coming quickly and sharply, feeling the honeyfire boil up inside her belly and force her body to clench and judder.        "Oh yes . . . oh yes!" Bonnie panted in sympathy with Laura's orgasm, clutching her, holding her, until Laura's sharp quivering began to die away.]   I so love how you show women drawing their lover so close to their sweaty body as they strive for paradise.  I so know that humping and striving.   I have humped every part of a woman's body so many times over the years that I am so thankful to see an author that gives more than the standard scissor trib fuck.  I will hump anything available.  Night before last I had gotten done fucking Belissa and La'Tonya with my strap-on, fucking them hard and deep in willing cunts and assholes.  I had one orgasm but my body was simply wound so fucking tight after pounding both of their divine bodies for close to an hour.  I had finished La'Tonya with a punishing anal / cunt fuck that had her jackknifing up into my pounding my cock slamming her asshole as I pounded her down into the mattress.  We had started doggy style but as she weakened she ended pressed down into the mattress as I got up on my hands and just raped her asshole through a devastating anal 'gasm as I watched the slut's arm working underneath her body as her hand frigged her clit.  I just ripped the strap-on off and gripped her ass with one hand and her calf with the other and mounted her hammie and humped like a whore in heat.  I couldn't help but gag and moan gutturally as my cunt slime poured out to join her beaded sweat and I was just sweeping my aching cunt down and swishing up and down the back of her leg.  I gripped her ass hard and clenched my fingers around her knee and just wallowed and swept my cunt so fucking hard.  quickly, I felt those delicious spasms starting in the middle of my belly as I now desperately cawed and gritted my teeth to jam and sweep my cunt desperately now.  Gods, I felt my whole torso twitching and tensing up as I felt my tits whiplashing and slapping around on my chest.  I suddenly felt Belissa behind me mashing her sweaty, cum covered body to mine and her arms came around me and her fingers clenched on my nipples and started to twist and pinch as her finger tips mashed hard into my aureoles and sank into my tit meat.  I felt her warm breath in my ear as she whispered for me "Hump La'Tonya like the fucking whore you are."  That was all it took.  My eyes bulged and I let loose an ear shrieking scream as I now pounded and ground my cunt all up and down La'Tonya's strong hammie as my cunt simply tore itself inside out.  Belissa the fucking slut, twisted my neck over and sank her teeth into my neck and gave me a flesh sucking, bruising hickey that made my eyes just slam into the back of my head as her hand now clenched around my throat and totally throttled my breath off as I just cum and cummed so gloriously while she still twisted one nipple cruelly.  I felt my mind explode as her fingers dug so hard and deep into my throat and she used her grip to shake my head with hard jerks that had me drooling in lost love.  I sounded so harsh when she let me get a quick breath before choking cruelly again and how I instinctively kept my cunt humping up and down La'Tonya's leg.  Belissa gripped me to herself as I went limp in spent bliss and gently lowered me to the bed as La'Tonya rolled over and Belissa laid down on my other side and we murmured and muzzled until we went to sleep all snuggled together in renewed love.

//  I like the post coital time that you show in your stories.  The time when you just bask in your lover's love.  I have to smile at Laura's gentle laughing at the release of her sexual tension.  I see this often with some of my other lovers and from time to time with others.  Just difference in our makeup but I almost never chuckle with my sexual highs.  Again the differences that make us all unique as women.   I am smirking as Laura rushes to tell bonnie she is sorry she got carried away and gave her, her love fist.  That is one thing I have noticed over the years is Laura's shocking of herself.  I so love seeing her inner kink coming out and then smirking when she is the most shocked person in the room.  It makes her cute and endearing.  Me I always find my love sluts so thankful when I have taken them to new highs that have never imagined before.  Of course bonnie is thankful that she is now a fisting aficionado.  When a woman experiences such highs that they are addicted for life.   They may deny it, but the hunger will always be there.  Bonnie sums it up for me ["Then I'm glad it did," Bonnie beamed.  "I thought I was gonna come forever."]   sigh, as I say you so show post coital time so well [They indulged themselves in a long, leisurely, sensual kiss.  Laura's fingers again could not stay away from Bonnie's delectable round ass, and she stroked it lovingly but not in any sexually aggressive way, realizing that there would be plenty of time for that.]  a time of truly bonding with your woman.  A time of sharing that draws souls so close and makes the fucking so much more intense.  Love seeing them going to eat to get the energy for more intense fucking and what a way to end the chapter! [Bonnie grew kittenish in her arms, still shy and flirtatious.  "You gonna fist-fuck me again?"        "Only if you want."         Without answering, Bonnie smiled in a deep, mysterious, and ultimately devastating way.  "Let's eat."]  oh gods, my belly is flipping thinking of Bonnie's sweet cunt once more taking Laura's love fist as bonnie now begs for it and humps her cunt forcefully into Laura's jamming, rotating fist as it pounds her cervix taking her to heaven for a long, gut wrenching orgasm of pure love.

 

 

 

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Chapter 315:

//  I like how this chapter starts out.  We see that Nyomi and Laura have been fucking heatedly and they are now taking a break to recharge the batteries.  I so love fucking until my body and my lovers are temporarily satiated.  The beauty of the female body is our ability to recharge and be ready for more heated fucking so quickly.  I am smiling as Nyomi is groggily trying to count her orgasms and is surprised when she had one more than she thought.  I love how you show the ability of women to cum and cum.  I see this in het stories but often in lesbian stories we also get one or two orgasms and then they are satiated and off to sleep.  I need to fuck and fuck until my body is simply exhausted.  I know not all women and men have my stamina.  That is the advantage of having many angels to make love to and men to sport fuck.  I have liked over the years you commenting on the beauty of white women (and men) sleeping with women of color.  There is something just so perfect and beautiful with this pairing.  I want to go to Haiti or Brazil because you see that beautiful blending of races everywhere.  This country still has a long way to go but things are simply so much better than before.  I see so many more interracial couples today.  Especially among hets and I think more and more people don't care.  I love it.  I think you really capture it with this ["I think we are a masterpiece," Nyomi said, decisively, holding up one arm against Laura's shoulder to emphasize the contrast in their skins, hers so dark, Laura's so creamy pale.  "They should hang a painting of us all entwined together like this in the National Gallery.  Racial harmony, they could call it.  Fuck your way to racial harmony."        "I think that's exactly what the racists are afraid of," Laura smiled.  She kissed her, but not a deeply sexual kiss since they had exhausted fucking for the moment; instead, it was a sweet, emotional kiss, not soulful and searching but warmly affectionate and meaningful.  If I weren't already in love with Makeeda, I would be falling, Laura realized.]  I think sex and love can do so much to bring the races to together in harmony.  I am glad you tackle this in your subtle way.  There is no need to beat anyone over the head with it but still we need to show the way.  You show this by Laura loving all these black women and them loving her.  The skin color may attract them to each other at first but they see each other as the truly wonderful persons they are.  You show love bridging the sad barriers we erected in the past.  I am just thankful I live in an age where society has evolved enough to reject the past.  I know racists that still exist that hate women like me but fuck them.  they are slowly atrophying and wasting away and the races are seeking love for loves sake.  Thanks for showing this.

//  I so love the way white skin contrasts with women of color, especially black women.  it is simply beautiful.  Two weeks back Simonette called me and told me she wanted to have an abuse fuck the "Snow Flakes" night.  She and her sisters had Kia and Emily on board and had called Shari and they were coming over and she asked me to call Belissa.  I did and she and La'Tonya almost jumped through the phone saying yes.  we were all to go to the sister's house for the weekend.  I drove over Friday night and love shook seeing everyone was already there.  I have a key so I went and followed the sounds of rutting into the living room.  Simonette had her face buried in Emily's cunt, who was setting on the sofa and Tameka was behind Simonette eating her out.  I smiled seeing La'Tonya underneath sucking on her nipples and twisting them hard making her cry out into Emily's soaking wet cunt.  When they saw me the free girls simply rushed me knocking me to the floor in the rush as Hillary clamped her mouth to mine and speared her flailing tongue down my throat as I felt my body love clench and my eyes rolled back hard.  oh gods, they ripped my clothes to shreds and ruined my panties and frilly bra.  I felt a mouth clamp onto my cunt and sucking hard as my tits were pulped and sucked.  I lost track of the mouths and hands fucking and devouring me as I had two simply crushing orgasms that had me crying and jackknifing in mind shocking ecstasy.  I moaned deep in my chest as the strap-ons were strapped in now and Simonette and myself knew soon our bodies would be invaded by multiple cocks.  We started by giving blow bangs as our black studs skull fucked us and drove cocks down our throats.  I swooned as I saw Simonette going back and forth between Hillary, Camille, Tameka and Shari as thick strands of spit roped from their dicks and all over her face and chest.  She was pumping shafts that she wasn't sucking with the girls guiding her hands to their ever hard ready shafts.  They would turn her mouth to the side and bulging her cheeks with their cocks and holding her face with a hand and using the other to bulge her cheek and then roughly pop out the side of her mouth and then pushing her head roughly over to the other sister and raping her mouth.  I was gagging and moaning as I had the same done to me and feeling hands gripping my hair and rabbit stroke pounding their cocks into the back of my throat and then tilting my head back forcefully and sliding their dick's down my willing throat.  soon we were fucked into oblivion by cocks plunging deep into our fuck holes so fucking hard.  rabbit fucked and torpedo fucked.  Oh gods we came so often and so fucking hard as were passed around and fucked in every position conceivable.  We were simply destroyed with raw pleasure.  I was fucked out as the sistas then started to play with each other as Simonette and I embraced in a satiated embrace our sweat and cum covered bodies warming each other in deep love for each other and our black lovers.

//  I have to love Laura serenading Nyomi.  I have seen dodie use her beautiful voice to seduce several women over the years.  Maria has a beautiful voice and some of my other main angels but they never use as a love weapon I think.  It is something that makes Laura again a unique woman.  She has a talent and uses to bring her angels anxiously back into her loving arms.  I believe in using all of one's talents and charms.  I sure wish I could sing women into my bed.  when your own parents tell you, you sound like a dying amphibian then you really suck as a singer.  I have to swoon a little at the loving dialog of them realizing that they have a special sexual love for each other.  This is something I make clear from the start.  I have my main archangels.  We can make beautiful love and give each other such intense loving pleasure but just know what it is.  Some women want to get all possessive and jealous.  I educate them quickly or we have to part ways.  I find most women learn quick when they see what they may lose if they don't wise up.  I do like you showing us these dynamics.  Other authors with one shots have the eternal love type of stories they are sweet but such a relationship would quickly become so fucking boring and trite.  One needs spice to truly live.  All women should seek out and revel in as many partners they can find.  life is too fucking short to waste in silly one on one relationships that deny oneself all the pleasure this world has to give.  All the other multipart stories are all just about the pure fucking.  this is okay and they do capture the raw physical side of great animalistic sex but they miss the emotional side.  This is what you capture so well and I so love reading it.  with one night stands and parties that is all you want but with women you fuck over and over you need the emotional connection to truly make it so fucking awesome.  You show this so well.  This emotional talk between Laura and Nyomi is what is really drawing there souls even closer, and it is this deepening emotional ties that will simply make their wombs explode so deep in their bodies making them cum so fucking hard and over and over again.  Have to smile at the "'luff" moniker.  You are always sprinkling your stories with your gentle, sweet humor.  I am happy to see that Nyomi happily accepts Makeeda in Laura's life and is happy to share their special sweet love.  I just wish Makeeda would wise and share Laura with women like Nyomi.  She would simply die from the womb scalding sex and would give the same to her archangel and other bed angels.  So much to give and not doing it.   how sad. 

//  I am thinking of how again how you show positively the specialness of interracial love.  I heard years ago at a gas station a white attendant flirting, saying something along the lines of being spoiled and the male black patron saying, mostly seriously "the only way to really spoil a white woman is by sleeping with a black man".  The world has come so far since then.  True we have a long way to go but it is better.  I see interracial couples so much now and no seems to care (the people who matter).  I do my part.  I recently went to a party that some friends of Camille had going off campus of their university.  Love all the black women and men to fuck us hard and long.  Dodie, Frankie and I drove over and met Camille and we walked to her friends house he was renting for the weekend.  We went inside and relaxed looking around.  There were about five other white women and two good looking white guys.  The thing is, we are exception and thus we get so much attention.  Dodie and I were looking for some good hard dick and Frankie was soon absconded by two tall, athletic black women (found out one is volleyball and the other basketball).  Soon Aaron showed up and a good looking black male came along.  Soon they were flirting with us but mainly dodie.  They loved her Jewish hue and jet black hair.  They kept playing with it as they slunk closer to her.  Camille suggested we head up and grab a bedroom for some playtime.  She whispered to me that Anthony has eleven inch, thick cock and that he is uncircumcised but keeps himself clean.  I shivered all over thinking of that cock and Aaron's sliding deep into my fuck holes and down my throat.  we got in the room and closed the door (don't lock so others can come and watch if they want).  Needless to say, all these black bodies needed some hard, serious fucking.  Camille grabbed the back of my head and brought my mouth down to hers and our tongues started stabbing deep into each other's mouths as we quickly undressed each other.  As we pulled our clothes off in a great hurry I watched as dodie had gotten on her knees and the guys jeans and shorts were around their knees as their cocks were rapidly hardening.  Dodie swallowed Aaron's cock into her mouth and worked up and down his hooked cock as I watched Anthony's eleven inches rise to full, thick glory.  (As an aside there is a black guy with a thirteen inch cock in the area.  At parties he has a room for himself that is called things that always has Godzilla in it like "Godzilla's Lair, Room, Island and such.)  His foreskin was around the base of his cockhead and his cock was throbbing with power that had me groaning into Camille's mouth as we kissed again now totally naked.  We got up on the bed and kissed and groped for a while before we agreed to watch to the show for a while.  They were all naked too now.  I felt me my body burn as dodie sucked the guys off in turn.  How her head rode up and down their upper cocks and she jerked their thick cocks with each hand.  They way spit drooled and roped off their dicks as she went right and left sucking and corkscrewing her head hard.  I loved seeing the bucks grimace in pleasure.  sigh, can't get that when my strap-on is sucked.  All mental pleasure.   Anthony must have know our taste because he grabbed Dodie's hair with both hands and started to gag fuck her hard making her head jolt and those divine gagging sounds.  I love seeing a woman's face as it jolts and slashes as a hard cock is pounded into the back of their throat.  Aaron grabbed her hair and jerked her over and he now beat her face hard with his cock and then rabbit fucked her as Anthony beat her with his heavy dick meat.  Sigh, then Aaron grabbed the back of her head and slide his hooked dick down her throat making it bulge as I watched it slide fully down her gullet and then slide slowly in and out.  How she gasped and gagged as he finally removed his spit covered dick and Anthony gripped her under her chin and the top of her head and slide his eleven inches slowly down her throat as she cawed and gripped his ass to help slide it down.  She is such a fucking whore as I watched her tongue appear at the base of his cock as she licked his dick and the scrotum sack she could reach.  He just jammed fucked her throat and I loved seeing the spit just pour off his cock when he pulled it out and then slide back down making her retch and gag but she was grabbing his thighs and short punching her throat on his cock.

 

//  I had to have some gash and got Camille on the bottom on the bed, crossways and got her legs over my shoulders and started sucking her long clit and tongue fucking her steamy fuck hole.  I was working her clit like a miniature cock and making her lurch and groan as she twisted her head to watch dodie suck her studs.  Soon the guys had dodie on the bed and quickly started to dp the whore.  Aaron was on the bottom pounding his dick into her tight cunt and Anthony slowly slide his dick into her colon.  I had to smile seeing Dodie's head turn and she bit Aaron's shoulder as her eyes squeezed shut and tears leaked out as she groaned so hard and deep.  He slowly worked her sphincter loose and began to slide his cock deeper and deeper into her shit hole until it was buried fully up her tight asshole.  Soon Anthony was slamming his eleven inches balls deep into her asshole making her grunt and groan.  He was soon dripping sweat as his ass cheeks clenched and worked driving his dick into her sweet rectum.  Camille croaked to Anthony to let her lick Dodie's ass off his cock and I loved his groan of happiness at the words and watched him pull back and lean over to feed Camille his ass covered dick as I sucked her clit hard making her huff and spastically suck his cock head and upper shaft clean.  he mounted dodie again and pounded her hard as they worked her body.  She had a powerful jackknifing orgasm as the guys slowed some to let her ride it out before they ramped up again.  I so love seeing hard fucking as I am fucking.  I could feel Camille beginning to jerk and tighten up and I swallowed her clit and tongue buzzed and slapped as I supper sucked and pumped my head hard.  I smiled around her clit as her pelvis exploded up and down as she twisted her nipples and cried out in helpless pleasure.  now I worked slowly letting her recover and ramping up again for another suck.  as I worked Camille cleaned off Anthony's cock time after time.  I guess Aaron wanted some bootie action and moved his cock up into Dodie's asshole and was now punching in it hard and deep into her quaking ass.  Anthony was waiting to let Aaron take her pussy again when Camille told him she likes double anal and fisting and take her asshole with Aaron.  Aaron stilled his fucking and dodie was keening and shivering as I had the perfect angle to watch Anthony's slicked cock ride on top of Aaron's dick and press into her sphincter.  I watched him try to penetrate her sphincter and seeing his dick slide right and left and he now used his thumb to get that extra push and groaned into Camille's cunt as it finally started to worm into Dodie's shit hole.  Watching him slowly moving his hips forward and that big, black cockhead disappearing into Dodie's O-ring as she whimpered and keened and bit Aaron's shoulder again as her hands clenched into the sheets.   I swoon remembering her "oh yeessssssssss  ….. god it feels so fucking gooooooood" as her face was so full of pained, ecstatic grimaces / slashes.  I watched while sucking Camille's cunt as they slowly sawed their black, hard dicks in and out her asshole.  I so loved how she grunted and groaned like a fucking demented slut animal.  I loved the way the guys grunted and talked trash to dodie as they worked her asshole.  I think guys are so lucky, being able to feel that tight fit and the pleasure they feel as their cock heads slide along their dicks and over each other.  They tell me it so fucking pleasurable.  Wish they could make strap-ons that let us feel that pleasure dammit.  Camille croaked out her need for more of Dodie's asshole and I smiled sucking her cunt as dodie hissed feeling Anthony's cock head sliding out and then I moaned as Camille tilted her head and Anthony leaned down and she cleaned toughly as I made her grimace and huff sucking her clit hard around his cock.  I loved seeing dodie judder and caw as his cock was forced into her asshole several more times after hot atm action.  They then started to jam their cocks hard with short rabbit strokes and dodie lost it as she screamed and thrashed between them as an anal 'gasm of epic proportions and I watched Anthony's hips start lunching off the bed as his cock spewed hot semen down her shit hole as he grunted and gurgled so fucking loud.  I reached up and twisted Camille's nipples hard and raked her clit hard and fast and made her cum while dodie was in the middle of her harrowing orgasm and greedily swallowed her waves of hot steamy cum.  Anthony pulled out still hard and ready to go.  He walked over to me as I removed Camille's spent legs off my shoulders and I turned and took his cock all dripping in ass juice and semen down my throat and rode it up and down my throat as he groaned in deep pleasure.  He pushed me down into the bed and ordered me to hold my asshole open and I gagged and whimpered as he forced his black eleven inches into my asshole and slowly opened my ass open with slow gentle strokes.  I watched through hazy eyes as Aaron and Camille left for more fun as dodie slept the sleep of fucking exhaustion.  I pulled my legs back opening my asshole for him.  I loved feeling his strong hands gripping my ass cheeks to help him now pound his cock fully down my asshole as I groaned and squealed in pleasure.  the sounds of sweaty flesh slapping as he speared me balls deep.  He pulled out and gripped my hair and pulled me around and off the bed and facing him on my knees he told me to suck his cock with my hands behind my back.  I did one better and used my flexible shoulders to place my arms back on the bed behind me as I moved my head forward to tongue his cockhead and foreskin.   I loved feeling that skin moving up and down his cock as I lipped it and pumped my head.  Soon his hands gripped my head and he was pounding his hard dick into the back of my mouth making me gag and drool thick ropes of spit all over myself and then used a hand behind my head to slide his dick covered in my ass juice down my throat and held it deep gasping me as I moaned in pleasure and then slowly stroked it up and down my gullet making me gasp and die from pleasure.  he roughly slammed my back into the bed barking at me to spread my ass cheeks and he slammed his dick hard and fully into my asshole making me groan so deep in my chest as tears flowed from eyes and he pounded my asshole so good as he fucked my long and hard and let me clean his cock fresh my asshole with just my mouth with my arms back on the bed as he deep throated his thick cock down my throat making my throat bulge I know as it rubbed over my tonsils and ridges of my windpipe making my eyes roll back as I felt that fucking black log filling my throat as he stroked it in and out my throat and feeling my spit all over my chin and running down my throat, tits and down my belly and over my cunt.  He was pounding my shit so good when he moaned he was about to cum and I begged to let him cum in my mouth.  he pulled out and now I latched onto his shaft and pumped hard with both hands making his foreskin ride up and down his shaft and then latched onto his cock head and corkscrewed my head while giving deep throat sucks and worming my tongue along the bottom of his cock head.  I glanced up and saw him grimacing and concentrating to prolong his pleasure as I worked my oral magic.  I then gripped his cock harder and gave his cock head hard twisting sucks and then licked up and down his cock crown and around his foreskin like a cat with the flat of my tongue all up and down and around his cock before hard sucking four or five times and back to cat licking.  Gods, the way he groaned so gutturally.   Until he finally took complete control and gripped my head in a vice grip and started to piston three inches of his cock in and out my mouth as I supper sucked and my tongue ran back and forth on the bottom of his dick head and he screamed growl and his cock was blasting semen into the back of my throat as he now rabbit fucked his cock into my clenched lips.  soon I couldn't keep up with the hot bolts of semen and  I felt semen running out my mouth and down the front of my body.  It tasted so good what I could swallow.  I sucked his cock until it semi wilted.  I know he was taking one of the supplements on the market to keep his virility going.  What a great fuck!

//  I like how you show progression in your stories.  Their talk of love and its permutations is now leading them to more sweet fucking like all such talk does ["Some day she'll have somebody she luffs and wants to fuck, and she'll be trying to get rid of Mama.  You watch."        All this talk, for some reason, was warming Laura up.  She found herself embracing Nyomi and kissing her more sexually now, as opposed to before.  Now she felt it returning, this physical hunger she could not slake for this enchanting woman.  And she knew Nyomi felt it too.        "I luff you and I want to fuck you," she whispered into Nyomi's ear.]  I love how show love blooming once more.  So many stories just have one sex act, maybe a long one.  only you show how a body fucks out and with rest and sustenance if necessary and it revives and is once more ready for hard fucking.  I so love reading of the gentle hunger starting.  Hunger that soon starts ramping but starts slow.  I so soar inside as a lover takes me in her arms again and begins to consume my body once more.  Pulling me tight and slithering a tongue deep into my mouth and devouring it as her hands trace and stroke my body and pull me tight.  How our limbs twine and we roll around on the bed as we plunge tongues down cawing throat and hands begin to grope and roughly massage love wanting flesh.  You have always shown how the spoken word adds so much to the fuck.  When a woman breaths into my ear how much she wants me, loves me and what she is going to do to me makes me writhe in need.  I smile at Nyomi making funny faces as the loving proceeds.  Only you show the mirth of lovemaking and I so love reading it.  it is these things that make a woman so stand out in your mind.  The personality and unique character marrying with her divine physical attributes to make her an absolute fucking fox.   I have always loved how you show kissing.  Other authors are usually very skimpy on this and then only on the mouth, tits and pussy.  you show Laura kissing and loving nyomi's shoulders and face.  I so love kissing your all over your face, neck and shoulders and then slamming my tongue back down your throat and then kissing around again before consuming your mouth.  this always makes newbies swoon and die for me and with old lovers we feel our loving just binding so much tighter.  I just love to lie back and have an aggressive slut loving me like this.  Receiving and basking in her unadulterated love for me.  gods, I love feeling your lips and tongue all over my face and then feeling that same tongue raping my mouth and sliding down my groaning throat. 

//  like I say, you so know how to show the ramping of sex and the bonus of something you just don't read in erotica beside you [Almost imperceptibly they had begun undulating together, and Nyomi's thighs had parted so that Laura slipped between them.  Amazingly, they had been so busy groping and grasping and licking, biting, fingering, and sucking each other that they had never yet touched their pussies together, but Laura realized, if Nyomi did not, that that omission was about to end.         

They were face to face, kissing romantically, deeply in 'luff,' as Nyomi had put it, and their bodies just naturally had fallen into a missionary trib position without conscious effort.  It reminded Laura so acutely of the last time she had fucked with Sara that Laura had to restrain herself from changing it forcibly, just to push away those intense bittersweet memories.  And yet this was not bittersweet at all, and thoughts of Sara soon left her as Nyomi became such a piquant and real presence for her.]  I have always admired how you so capture the flow of sex.  Yours just seems so natural.  Other authors do have good sex it is just kind of choppy for me.  the harem author to his credit does have nice flow but it is so scripted and the same over and over.  you keep it fresh and different plus you show the little things where most authors always do the standard kiss a little and then straight to some heated gash gobbling and then orgasm.  Now the harem author does do some awesome strap-on action but it starts at white hot pace and stays there.  You show how you flow up to the pounding dildo action that makes it supper hot.  But what you really, really show is all the other things that we do but others don't show.  I think I would forget too.  You show this above.  I can see why men miss this but I am surprised I don't see it with women authors.  I am always tribbing like this.  It is just such a natural.  You don't always fuck to orgasm like this but it is simply such a divine way to hump and bring your woman closer to you.  I swoon reading this.  It is just so fucking on target.  I know that just slithering between my woman's legs as we are kissing face to face in the horizontal.  The woman on top so often just flows into this position.  I love to have a lover lying on me as she is kissing, stroking, groping me.  feeling her body and weight as she presses down on me.  feeling our tits mashing and flattening and our nipples dragging into each other's bodies.  Our hands stroking and griping.   I just moan so deep as I feel hands tracing and squeezing my ribs and over my belly.  Then as she settles between my thighs and our cunts start to mash and undulate as I feel her cunt juices dripping and flowing down into my mound and pelvis.  How an aggressive lover will clench her fingers into my hair on each side of my face and just grind into my mound as her mouth devours my mouth and rains kisses and love bites all over my face and throat.  can heaven be any better than this.  Feeling you swirling and humping down into my mound as I just relax and feel my belly melt so deep in my womb as just become sexual butter as I become so totally relaxed and submissive for you.  Feeling you starting to hump down and into my mound as our mouths are so clamped tight and your tongue is spearing and wrestling my tongue and then jamming down my throat as I love gag and hump up into your mound.  I am so happy that Laura revels in this trib fucking as Nyomi chases away sad memories.  I so find that great sex is such a soul healer.  I will be blue and then I am having great sex and the world is so much brighter as I bask in new love.  I love how you so know to show that gentle starting that this kind of humping brings.  You just want to get so close to your lover as your mounds swirl and hump in languid love.  feeling your cunts melt and wetly mating in divine pleasure.

//  you have always given the sweetest details of your fucking [Laura had a slightly prominent pubic bone, which she had only belatedly realized made it possible, especially with a woman who had a blossoming flower of a pussy like Nyomi's, with such large and malleable cunt lips, to actually insinuate her own labia into her lover's receptive groove, a penetration that brought both of them the most heavenly sensual thrill.  She felt Nyomi opening to her, opening . . . her lips parting, her cavity efflorescing to receive Laura, and Laura's careful movements soon accomplished the penetration.  She slid herself up and down slowly inside Nyomi's pussy, feeling Nyomi's flesh tense and quiver, and her own flesh respond in kind, as they both absorbed the sublime sensations of this union.]  it is so true that a prominent pussy allows you to use your pussy more effectively but I find any two pussies can hump.  Plus, just move over and use your thighs.  I do love that mashing and parting that you describe.  I have a big prominent cunt and  use it to my advantage.  I so know that rubbing and humping forward of my pussy and worming my pussy into yours and if you are large and meaty then you have that divine merging that you are describing.  I just melt when I feel it happening.  Our cunts mashing and clits dragging into our cunt meat as we gag in deepening love.  I love being on the bottom and feeling your mound mashing, slicing over and through my cunt petals.  I just love feeling your juices flowing and pulsing into my cunt in warmth and love.  how my legs will twine over your ankles for leverage to hump up and open my cunt for you.  I just feel my belly melt at such moments.  I am smiling at the detail of Nyomi tensing and quivering.  Only you show these little details that is what makes sex so rad.  Seeing your woman falling totally under your spell.   Concentrating to get your pussy working inside her groove.   You are like a master painter from the Renaissance using deft brush strokes to make your masterpiece seemingly glow with life.  I swear I have never seen another trib description even come close to this detail.  They just rub basically to orgasm.  Other authors forget to tell the reader why a certain style of fucking is so hot and special.  You give us the sweet whispered dialog of two lovers falling in love.  how Laura whispers to Nyomi to open up to her and Nyomi breathing softly her shock of the pleasure only a woman can give.  I so adore your dialog of lovers at love.  again, I can't think of any sweet dialog during sex in other stories.  A lot of my dialog in sex is guttural and rough but a lot is sweet and soft too.  You show both and that is real life.  The "harem" author never shows the later.  Hard core sex which is great but again not all the TIME!  It is variety that makes sex so special.  When Shari and crew found out that I had been fucking Emily and her middle school and freshman mates she got a little pissy and demanded to know why I had been holding out on them.  I explained I can't do everything but immediately made amends.  Two days later I was driving Emily and two new girls to me, Veronica and Amber.  Funny how nature is.   Veronica is only few months into fourteen and she has flaring hips, filling out ass and c-cup tits while amber is still girlish in her figure with small budding titties and narrow hips.  Both are so beautiful in the face and love their brown hair and eyes. 

//  with such beauty you can guess what happened next.  Everyone knew that hot, hard sex was on the immediate agenda.  I sort of stood back as each of my black angels picked a girl and soon that beautiful black / white merging was occurring all around me as the adults quickly stripped their new angels and proceeded to love rape them.  I loved how no barriers were present and love simply flowed between the "races".  Shari and veronica were on the floor rolling around kissing and groping while the other pairs where on the sofa kissing and groping.  Cindy is submissive by nature and Emily quickly took control and had her legs pushed back as Cindy reclined on the sofa and had her cunt gobbled inside out as Tameka was sucking amber off hard.  so much love.  I watched from a chair and masturbated as pleasure was freely given and taken.  Shari was now on top of veronica and they were kissing deeply as she settled between veronica's thighs like Laura.  They both have puffy mounds and I loved how Shari swirled and humped Veronica's cunt.  They are about the same height and their full tits were mashing and huffing sounds were coming from them as kissed deeply and Shari 's fingers where stroking her upper body and through veronica's hair so lovingly.  From time to time Shari would rise up on her hands and use the height to leverage her mound down and up and down Veronica's making her moan so whorishly and face slash.  I watched as they fucked so long and romantically and finally I could see them ramping up for a mutual orgasm as Shari concentrated on her new lover and will her body in time.  Shari was up her hands again and was grunting at Veronica to cum and mashing and jamming her cunt hard into her teenage lover.  I smile seeing in my mind how veronica gripped Shari 's elbows in vice grip and her body started to detonate with shocking undulations and hard jerks and harsh groans flowed from her throat as her head thrashed and slashed.  Shari was now spastically jamming her cunt into Veronica's as her fingers dug into the carpet and she kept crying / moaning "fuuucckkkkk" through gritted teeth as her tits rolled and whiplashed as she fucked Veronica through her orgasm.  I can see so vividly the sweat rolling of Shari 's face and tits and splattering over veronica's sheen of sweat.  So nasty and hot.   I watched as their orgasms finally waned and Shari sank back down as arms twined around each other and mouths mated tight as I could see cheeks working as tongues flowed from mouth to mouth in deepening interracial love.  so fucking perfect.  I made sure to get some trib sex myself throughout the night.

//  you of course show that total loving that I so love reading.  Laura is kissing Nyomi deeply and sucking and inhaling her nipples driving her wild inside I know.  I so love to bend and inhale a tit as I use one hand to pulp and roll over if large or mash and grind if a nice small a-cup titty.  Makes my angels grunt and hump harder.   You are right that if you want that intimate mating of worming your pussy into your lover's you need a certain amount of restraint.  I so love gag and feel my eyes roll back when dodie or Joann with their big meaty cunts just slide and slither into mine opening up my fuck flower and our clits are rubbing and mashing and our slimy cunt lips are flowing and worming in wet love.  how our sodden cunts make those divine wet noises of cunts in love.  again I love how you show the gentle fuck with hard core fuck.  I tend to be the latter but you need the former from time to time to make the later so fucking rad.  I have made newbies melt with such trib fucking.  nothing like sucking her off to mind blowing orgasm and then tribbing her into another gut wrenching orgasm showing her all the possibilities of lesbian lovemaking.  Most of us are aggressive and usually wind up slamming and humping with wild abandon as fingers grip ass cheeks and shoulders to jam and thrust as twats wildly slide, grind and pound their mates groin, pelvis and spasming cunt.  Feeling those shockwaves of bliss radiating out from your cunt and clit with each jolting hump.   This is why you fuck slow and sensually ["Don't move!" Nyomi gasped softly.   "God, I love to feel it just like that."        "Yes."        "Kiss me, Laura.  I never felt like this."        Laura smiled and kissed her long and sensually, moving her groin ever so slightly as they kissed, up and down, up and down, sliding her swollen vulva up and down in the warm, slippery groove of Nyomi's pussy and feeling her whole body fill with throbbing bliss and deep affection for this marvelous woman.]  when I am fucked like this I just melt.  I always feel like my belly has butter deep inside and it is just melting and flowing raw sexual pleasure throughout my body and soul.  I just feel my thighs opening and relaxing and your cunt is sweeping up and down my splayed out uvula as I feel your mound pressing deep into my channel and hopefully your erect clit rubbing and digging and over mine making me seize up and gurgle.  I love to move my knees out some and hook me feet over the back of your knees and anchor myself as I swoon and gag on such fucking divine pleasure.  surprisingly, dodie and Joann for being so aggressive love to fuck like this at times.  I think they love it because it makes sluts like me, Maria and Frankie just fall so under their spells.  I feel such deep love as we hump and their mouths are devouring mine as tongue explore every hidden corner of my mouth before spearing down my moaning throat and they are kissing my face and shoulders all over and looking deep into my eyes and asking me if I love them and I moan so softly "oh yeeesssss."  The way they will siphon nipples deep into their mouth and supper suck and tongue lathe and bat making you hitch and jerk in deep pleasure.   this is what you are showing in the above.  A romantic fuck that truly binds souls in deep love.

//  you now give the reader the sweet dialog that makes you famous.  I am hesitating here thinking about what I have read in erotica and I just don't see sweet dialog during fucking.  there may be some nice sweet words in the getting to know you and the beginning of the seduction but never during the lovemaking.  Usually silence which kind of become deafening at times.  I would think that the few other multi part stories would eventually have it but they never do.  I like your soft murmurings.  I love talking and whispering to my woman as we are making love.  leading and encouraging the fucking or swooning if am the sub.  Words of love just adds so much to sex.  Only you show this.  You show it with Nyomi crying out softly how much she is loving the sex and falling in love with Laura and Laura expressing her new love for Nyomi and guiding her along the fuck to make it the best possible.  Again you show women just melding and striving to give their angel the most pleasure possible.  You give us so much sweet dialog like ["I can feel your clit against mine when you move up like that.  Unhhh!  Oh . . . oh shit!  Oh god . . . Laura . . . yes . . . do that again!"        "Careful . . ." Laura softly teased her, complying with her request, feeling both of their bodies clench involuntarily when their clits brushed.  "Oh yes . . . oh yes . . ."        Again they lapsed into silence, fucking by barely moving, gently, slowly, the only sound in the room their harsh, ragged breathing as they coaxed one another up toward the pinnacle.        "I think . . . we're going to . . . come . . ." Nyomi whispered after a few moments.  ]  I so swoon when a lover moans / gasps such to me.  it lets me know that I am doing my job and inspires me to fuck you even better.  I like how you show the flow of lovemaking.  Speaking and then not speaking.  Letting the fuck guide you to nirvana.   I love communication and loud sounds of pleasure but the soft murmurings and gurgling of fucking are so fucking rad and make my womb contract and seize up in intense pulses of pleasure.  have to love nyomi's soft words of cuming.  I so love this when a newbie is about to fall over and you can hear the wonder in her voice and see it in her face.  Another new lesbian love slut for me and my angels to fuck into comas of fucking bliss.   You also show here the pacing of great lovemaking.  You show them communicating to each other to slow down and let the pleasure of their mated groins to continue.  Only you show this communication during sex between lovers.  How women give verbal and non verbal ques to show their desires and pleasures.  Other authors just have them fuck in silence by some memorized script that just has everything happen.  It all seems so bland after a while sometimes.  Sex is sex and I love reading it but I prefer seeing the ebb and flow that I experience in life and only you really show that.  I have always appreciated your eye for this and the skill to put it down in words.  You have truly mastered the balance of showing this enough and not overdoing it and making it seem scripted or forced.  It is truly a great skill you have.

 //  sigh, now we get to the divine payoff.  I was just looking at asstr and looking at some stories and sure enough the magical moment was once again so dull in both lesbian and het stories.  It just seems so wooden so much of the time.  The sex excites me because I love and need sex so but still it is bland.  I want to read ramping and magical falling off the precipice and only you give it to me.  like[ "Unh!   Unh!" Nyomi grunted softly, whimpering too.  "Oh!"        "Mnnngggggg!" Laura growled incoherently, feeling suddenly consumed by a frantic, burning lust for this marvelous woman's marvelous body.        And then suddenly a coruscating river of spurting sexual release inundated them both in the same instant.  Their warm, shuddering flesh merged.  Even crying out was impossible for seconds as their lungs were voided by the paralyzing shock of an orgasm that seemed to flow between their bodies, through their joined pussies into their bloodstream, where it poured molten rivers of honey lava through their flesh.       They were enfolded and enwrapped by it, their throbbing bodies linked in a shared rhythm of spasms, and through their clutching and moaning, after a few moments, Laura could hear her own moans intermingled with Nyomi's, growing louder, as the first blinding intensity of their orgasms bled off into a more endurable twitching and quivering.  She could feel Nyomi's body still shuddering and quaking internally under hers, but their pussies were still locked together in the tight kiss that had brought them here in the first place.  Neither would move enough to disengage them, knowing that this very deep magic was caused by this intimate linkage.]  this is why this kind of fuck is so magical.  I may be more forceful normally than Laura in this type of fuck but that face to face merging is so damn romantic.  When on the bottom I so need to enfold you in my loving arms and legs as I pull you tight and as our tits mash and twats are spastically jerking and jamming each other as I kiss your face all over and try to mate our mouths as I use both hands if necessary and jam our mouths tight as my tongue slams into your mouth and down your throat if your not doing it to me.  all those choked and whimpered moans swallowed in devouring mouths as tongues wrestle wetly and snake from cawing mouth to cawing mouth.  feeling our sweaty bodies grinding as sliding in humping love as I grip your ass cheeks and jam you down and grind your twat into mine as nirvana is exploding out rupturing wombs.  Sometimes I will pull my head back and watch up close as your face is slashing horrible as moans are hissed and gurgled out.  Licking your face in deep love or biting your shoulder and kissing and licking it and your neck making you mewl.  Finally collapsing together in spent love as sweat and cunt nectars are soaking our bellies, pelvises and thighs in wet, nasty love.   only you capture this sweet, nasty dynamic.  You show the nasty sex and the endearing love like no other.

//  I love it when you show the sweet lassitude that enfolds one after a great fuck.  I love pulling my lover tight as bodies recover for more intense fucking.  I too want to hold you close to me forever as our souls bind in tighter love.  I love being on the bottom so I can pull my spent lover down on top of me.  I love the weight of a sweaty woman lying on me as she exhales in spent love and wallows to get our sweaty flesh even closer.  If she is a bigger lover I just slide a little to the side and get enough weight off of me and keep the rest.  I want to feel you.  I love seeing Nyomi begging Laura to stay on her.  She too knows that feeling of love from the closeness.  I am smirking as they talk of multiple orgasms.  I so love to feel my cunt exploding time after time.  I so love it when it gets to the point that I feel like my clit is tearing itself inside out as I coax yet one more orgasm out of my kitty during a fuck marathon.  I feel myself tightening up just thinking of my clit starting to burn and quiver uncontrollably as it feels another wave of fucking bliss is about to boil and then explode out as searing waves of fucking bliss nearly drives me insane with pleasure so intense I feel like I'm dying in paradise of fuck heaven.  I hate reading of nyomi's mother complaining about her daughter having great sex.  I so hate man's world always trying to keep us down.  They can fuck every night and they are only being men and when we do it were are cheap worthless tramps.  I hate man's world for that.  True, many don't think that way anymore but those in the religious right sure do even though they are fucking like rabbits themselves the damn hypocrites.  Just look at the Senate.  I love reading the next part though with Nyomi begging Laura to come over the next night even with her having her child at home.  I so love putting that fuck hunger in my newbie.  She simply must have me.  children can be a pain but it is a sweet pain.  I love children.  I just won't want any of my own or have to raise any.  I find most to be sweet and cute though they sure do complicate things.

//  I have to give you credit with having nyomi's kid in the story.  That would be a complication that I would not have.  It would get in the way of sex.  But, you like to keep things real life.  It is cute the interaction between Alana and Laura.  I have found children to be so pernicious.  That is the reason I really, really try to arrange our rendezvous at my place or an angel's and away from her home if kids or jealous partner is involved.  Of course that is not always possible and one makes the best of the situation.  I have observed that girls are usually more intuitive than boys for some reason.  Boys are usually more innocent at that age.  With teenagers you never know what you will get but again I find girls more knowledgeable and manipulative.  Boys tend to be my mom is getting some while girls are much more threatened I think.  Boys can be but girls are much worse.  I have always wondered if it is nature or nurture or what combination.  I too have squirmed at such questions ["Are you supposed to have sex with another girl when you already have a wife?"        "I guess . . . usually not," Laura admitted.  "But my wife is far away right now.  And she said it's okay for me to have sex with someone as sweet and nice as your mother."        Alana beamed.  "I'm glad.  I'd hate for you two to stop.  I like thinking about it."        "You do?"        "Yes.  I think of you and Mommy having sex.  I think of you being naked and kissing.  Is that what you do?"]  twice I have had this happen and I just got flustered.  I was thinking I see incest coming and should I do something but I believe that should happen on its own.  Sometimes I have had the daughters come onto me and I have done a few Kendra and Jane pairs.  Had one blow up really bad too.   It gets scary when she threatens to bring the authorities.  Of course when I made it clear I was going to expose her "slutty" ways with her male and female lovers she couldn't really do anything about it.  her husband would have dropped her in a New York minute.  I smile remembering thirteen years ago (gasp) when I was banging Lisa with my strap-on and her sixteen year old daughter walked in on us.  I was stunned and then totally flummoxed when she joined right in kissing her mother deeply as she stripped.  Soon I was pounding her hard as her mother rode her face.  Like I say, I have no problem with incest when both are willing and old enough to choose.  I am the master of deflection and I like seeing Laura distracting Alana with hints of food.  I am smiling at the guile of your characters.  I am smiling even more as Nyomi takes in the fact that her daughter knows she is fucking a woman and all she wants to know is if Laura has brought her strap-on.  That is my kind of slut.  I so love planting that fuck hunger in a newbie and then fulfilling it over and over again.  Making her hunger grow and then feeding it with other lovers as we teach her how to fully enjoy her body like only women can fulfill it.

//  I so love the little moments and communications in your stories.  Laura teasing her lover about making to much noise and seeing Nyomi being sort of surprised how Laura has awakened a love and need for kissing.  I find so many hets have gotten used to not kissing much.  Men just go for the fucking it seems.  I make them swoon with all my kissing.  You so know how to capture the heat of raw, intense fucking but you also show the gentle parts of lovemaking and the small moments they engender.  This just makes the whole so much more intense and satisfying.  I always love any reference to one's smell [During the quick errand, her whole body seemed to be absorbing the traces of Nyomi's enchanting scent that lingered in her nostrils, a mixture of perfume and the day's residue of muted perspiration and the odor of sex she herself, Laura, had apparently inspired during the past few hours.]  I so love the scent of a woman.  Smelling her unique scent and the body lotions, wash and perfumes she uses.  I feel my cunt getting wet just smelling my woman's essence.  Again, I think only you capture this inhaling your woman's scent.  A few may comment about the smell of raw sex but never this body scent.  I can just be beside you and happily and breathing in your body scent feeling it fill me with love and need as my body reacts and gets wet and love shaking with need for you.  Have to smile at Laura reflecting on how they will have to be quieter because nyomi's child is home.  I so love letting my joy express itself but sometimes keeping it in is rad.  Makes my eyes bulge out of my sockets and my jaws nearly tear themselves apart as I swallow screams of searing bliss.  Nice change of pace.  I don't read this dynamic in other lesbian stories and sometimes in het stories but never with the nice details that you provide.  I feel I am there with them and this never happens with other stories.  They give the info like stage directions to a play.  They make it boring while you so integrate it into the story itself.  I like reading Laura tip toeing by Alana's door.  How cute.

//  it is obvious that Laura is totally smitten with her new slut[Nyomi's large round umber nipples were visible through the gauzy fabric, the firm globes of her breasts swaying as she walked slowly toward Laura.  "Oh god, you are so gorgeous," Laura said in amazement.  I am actually sleeping with this gorgeous woman.  I can't believe it.]  I love how you show your women using nighties to help seduce their women into love.  again this is strange how other authors just don't show this.  We support a whole industry so it should be obvious that we like wearing and seeing our sluts in such along with men of course.  I can see that Laura sees this woman as another ten after Makeeda.  Funny how things work.   I have not met tens since dodie then I met La'Tonya and now I have met Elin.   I was feeling randy and looking for a new slut to fuck and decided to go to the life style club a few miles from our house.  They were having a "girl scout" night with sluts dressing and acting like young scout whore.  I love going to clubs like these to find bi women who are more into males and want a strange fuck with a woman and finding hot men and couples to fuck.  I was looking for a bi or lesbian slut to fuck hard all weekend with my babies off again.  I dressed all in tight black jeans, tank top and vest left open and my bad ass black calf length boots.  Needless to say I got lots of attention when I arrived.  I was surrounded my girl scouts and men and women looking to score with me.  I acted aloof and told them tonight I was looking for a cute girl scout to fuck hard and long.  I smiled seeing the open lust on so many faces.  I relaxed and flirted with potential paramours.  The scouts were then called to the floor and started dancing lewdly.  Then I got a shock.  The dj told the girls to strip down and my mouth nearly fell off when they stripped down to nothing.  A few girls stopped at bras and panties but they were few.  The club recently got new owners and I can only think they must have contacts with the police.  This is not DC or Atlanta .  Damn I love this club!  I had flirted with a hot brown eyed blond with a Scandinavia accent.  Her name being Elin.   I thought she was simply gorgeous but now with her clothes off I was staring at another fucking ten.  All she had on was her pretty bitch collar.  I had gone years since meeting Dodie and now in several months I had meet two more.  Her tits were perfect and long hard nipples and perfect cunt with long lips waiting to get engorged in excitment.  Perfect skin highlighting perfect smooth cambers and planes.   After the music she came over to me again and sat down in my booth.  I told her I wanted a slut to fuck all weekend and that I was feeling rough and mean.  I smirked seeing her love shake all over and her eyes getting dilated and lidded.  I ordered her to set in my lap and she hurried over and I fisted her hair and jerked her head back and clamped my mouth to hers and slammed my tongue down her throat as she melted into me and moaned like the whore she is.  I ordered her to get her clothes on and follow behind me.  I had to resist as a beautiful black woman and a divine red head begged to come with us but I told them I wanted only Elin.  I felt a tinge of remorse as their faces fell but I got from them their contact info and kissed each woman deeply flailing my tongue down their throats to let them know I would eventually have them. 

 

//  Elin followed me back to our home and wrapped her arm around my waist as we walked to the door.  I got her inside and led her to the living room and put on some soft jazz and barked at her to dance and strip for me as I quickly got naked and started to stroke my cunt and tits as I sat on the sofa and watched her dance lewdly and slowly pull off her girl scout outfit.  Gods, her nipples were so fucking hard as she got naked and her shaved mound was wet and swollen.  I got up and walked over to her and asked her if she was slut and I loved her sweet Swedish accent as she said yes. I then smacked her down to the floor and kicked her in the stomach a few times with a little force to make her gasp and dragged her up to her knees with hard jerks of her perfect long blond hair.  I then bent my knees slightly and mashed her face into my cunt and rode her fucking face hard with grunting sweeps of my cunt.  I loved looking down as she looked up at me with lust burning eyes as she ate me wonderfully.  I ground and jammed my cunt into her mouth and spit in her face and wallowed it in with my palm as she moaned.  Soon I felt those divine ripples in my belly and cursed her to suck me harder which she did as I felt two fingers now slamming up my cunt hard and fast.  Gods, I came so fucking hard as I screamed "FUUUCCCKKKK" all drawn out as I humped desperately and felt my whole body convulse in such strong spasms of fucking bliss.  I threw her down on the floor and sucked her off twice to return the favor and loved her screams of ecstasy.  I then dragged her up to her feet and jerked her hard to make her walk behind me all bent over as I pulled her forward by her hair to our bedroom.  I shoved her down on the floor on her knees and went and got strapped in with my favorite black nine and half in cock.  I walked back and loved how she looked at me with her eyes all doe eyed.  I hooked two fingers underneath her bitch collar and jerked her head up and chocked her some and then started smacking her so fucking hard and jerking her head back with mean vicious jerks as she cried and blubbered like the bitch she is.  I loved how her head just jerked so hard to the side with my cruel slaps and the way her hair would flop and jump with my smacks.  I then shouted at her to open her beautiful mouth and I wedged fucked her mouth fucking hard making her feel my fingers jamming the back of her mouth and batting her uvula.  I then shoved my dick into her mouth and stroked it and out and loved how she gripped my thighs and corkscrewed her head and super sucked making her cheeks hollow and the thick strands of spit that roped off my dick when I pulled it out and smacked her face with my dick.  cupping her chin and twisting my right hand in her hair and sliding my dick fully down her throat as I tilted her head back slightly and rode my cock up and down her throat as she gagged and choked.  Her areolas and nipples were so swollen and rock hard, the slut.  I threw her down on the bed and mounted her and rammed fucked her soaking wet cunt as she squealed and humped up as I savagely kissed her deeply and pulped her full firm tits as the rolled and swayed.  I loved feeling her thighs around my hips as I slammed fucked and how her voice got all school girlie and childish begging for me to fuck her with my "long black dick", "fuck me harder", "I'm suck a fucking slut!" and such.  Soon she came so fuck hard with hard jackknifes and jolts.

 

//  I then took her spoon and slide my dick deep and hard up her shit hole as she squealed and cawed at me to fuck her asshole good and what an anal whore she was.  I was soon pounding my dick into her asshole balls deep as she just slammed back and moaned and squealed.  I hooked a leg back and got my hand behind her head with my other hand and punished her asshole.  I rolled her up on top of me and I got her in a full nelson and slammed my dick up into her asshole and pushed her head forward as hard as I could and then gave short hard jerks forward to make her grunt and whimper.  I smiled when she gibbered out "fuck my asshole" "rip my fucking ass wide open" and such.  I pulled her back making my dick slip out her asshole and ordered her to shove it up her cunt and I swooned as she groaned so gutturally as it slide up her tight cunt and I slammed it hard and then back to her asshole before I pulled her off and threw onto the bed and twisted her hair and ripped her head down to my dick and she pumped my cock with both hands while sucking it hard up and down.  I jerked her back down and got in spoon and torpedoed her asshole with my cock and gripped her behind her head again and just slammed fucked her so fucking hard and jerking out and roughly jamming her head down to my dick and swooning as she cleaned her ass off my cock so hungrily.  I could feel her ramping up and used my index and ring finger to spread her cunt lips and flicked her clit with my middle finger fast and furious and I watched her face slash and her head judder as she started screaming so fucking loud as one heel jerked in the air spastically, her other leg spasming on the bed and her fingers dug into her thigh as she herked and jerked and her eyes spasmed and squeezed shut so fucking hard as she squealed and yelled for me fuck her harder and she was cuming so fucking hard.  I so loved fucking her through her long and torturous orgasm.  I fucked her good and long.  The next afternoon I came to her with my bitch collar on and asked her to do me now.  She just broke out crying and whined she was a sub only.  I begged but she is simply not a dom at all dammit.  I thought furiously and then called Kapri and found she could drive over and she asked to bring a friend who was a mean ass nigga.  I moaned for her to hurry.  She showed up with a beautiful so black whore with rows in her hair dyed on the ends bright red.  She had a so fucking hot high forehead, thick lips and broad nose.  She has a wondrous bubble butt and full gourd tits and flaring hips.  Elin and I were in love immediately.  I love fucking so much when I get a new twist shown to me.  Soon they had us handcuffed with our hands in front of us and then used a third pair with short links and handcuffed them together.  We both had on our bitch collars and Akai then produced a short chain with clasps and hooked it on both of our leash rings.  Elin and could move some right and left but had to basically stay facing each other.  I was love shaking inside at this new way of being bound and about to be whipped mercilessly.  Elin started crying as Kapri got the swivel hundred tailed whip and Akia got a long, three inch wide belt.  They circled with Kapri telling me it was pay back for the beating the kids gave her (the slut forgets she has twice brought Emily's and friends to her pad to they could whip and torture her throughout the afternoon and evening).  I started stoic and was just waiting for it.  Suddenly I was screaming "fuck" as tears sprung to my eyes when that bitch Akia lashed me from my right shoulder down to my left ass cheek.  Elin immediately joined me as Kapri lashed her with hard strokes of her whip.  They circled us as they lashed us cruelly while hurling mean racial epitaphs.  The cursed us and laughed as they continued to whip us down.  I do remembering hearing Akia going on about fucking two such beautiful blondes; she couldn't believe it.  I loved how Elin  mashed, wallowed all over me as we jumped, herked into each other.  We would sag a head against the other's neck and cry copiously and whimper as the loud sounds of flesh being cruelly whipped filled the room.  They would suddenly fist a handful of hair and pull our heads back and make our heads tilt back until we were sputtering and cawing for breath and then black hands were slapping us so fucking hard as I felt my cunt pulsing cunt juice down my thighs and I felt the same all over Elin's thighs as they jerked and rubbed against each other.  We are both simply fuck sluts who crave and need cruel loving.  I supported Elin at first when she weakened but they whipped my legs so fucking hard that I just collapsed.  The fucking whores just continued to whip us all over as I would roll over to protect Elin as much as I could then they use my hair making me scream as they viciously jerked my head back and over rolling us on our sides again to continue whipping us like fucking white slavery whores.  I felt my womb spasm so hard seeing Elin and my body all covered with red whip marks and our faces all red from slaps and constant crying.  They finally finished and fucked us both spoon as we wallowed against each other our passion throbbing tits mashing and flattening as rigid nipples dug in hard to our cum hungry flesh.  They just raped our cunts and assholes over and over as we both came at least three times.  They let us rest till the middle of the night and then made gentle love as they sucked us off to crippling orgasms and then we dined on sodden cunt meat and swollen, thick black nipples and buried our faces in divine assholes.  I smile remembering seeing Akia's feet kicking high in the air as Elin sucked her off yet again as her legs spasmed ram rod straight up in the air as her toes curled and heels jerked all over.  so fucking beautiful.  I really loved watching Akia mashing her tits together and sucking her own nipples as she groaned so gutturally as her pelvis leaped up and jammed into Elin wildly sucking mouth sucking down the heavy thick gushes that I now know Akia flows out in hot steamy waves.  Yumm!!  I have told Kapri that I will get my revenge on Akia and smiled when she told me that Akia sort of got glassy eyed when she told her that.  She vowed it would never happen but Kapri and I know the truth.  My dominatrix friends tell my that most of their clients are men and women of power and find that must dominatrix and doms themselves crave being fucked abused.  Gods know I do.

//   I love it when I hear my woman tell me that she is wearing her special frilly stuff that she had been using or saving for her man.  Makes me preen and smile great big.   Like I say, it is the small moments that truly make life so grand.  I like reading that Laura still finds her other lovers to be perfection.  Though I know and love dearly three tens now, my other lovers are just high on my love meter but I no have to recognize true perfection when I see it.  It just makes us fuck them all the harder and deeper and each other and they us.  I find all women so fucking special and want to fuck them all if I could.  Time is so fleeting sometimes.  I like how you show nyomi's lingerie is igniting the fires of true love [Laura tossed the valise onto the bed.  She opened her arms to Nyomi and slid her hands under the peignoir as Nyomi came into her embrace.  Her fingers dug into the magnificent mounds of Nyomi's superlative ass, a masterpiece of high hard physical splendor that she hungered to kiss and plunder, all in the future.  They kissed with patient and elaborate sensuality.  Finally, Nyomi disengaged long enough to whisper, her whispers broken by her soft panting, her amazing grey eyes swirling and pulsing with sex.        "Are you going to fuck me or just squeeze my ass?"]  I so know that taking my slut in my loving arms and starting to devour her body.  I so love having a new woman, especially a newbie, and enfolding her in embrace and totally rocking her world.  I feel myself swoon as I remove your nightie and my fingers are clutching and dragging hard across your flesh making you groan and gag.  Men don't know and a lot of women need to be shown just how running your fingers over your woman's body makes her so hot for it.  I so love how you tell us they are kissing dreamily.  I so know that time of tongues flowing from mouth to mouth and down cawing throats as they wrestle wetly and stroke burning love to each other.  When the dom I want my slut on top of me and pulling her down hard into my body, our tits mashing and flattening as our bellies wallow and legs twine as my tongue flows deep into your mouth and takes for mine and then spearing down your throat to make you my total whore.  When I am the sub I love being on the bottom but some of my lovers love to pull me down so up top I go.  I am so much more nasty than Laura sometimes.  I would be squeezing and digging into nyomi's ass.  I would be rushing for new anal love.  I will massage your ass cheeks and slowly work down to your crease as I kiss you deeply.  I will start to move my index finger and middle finger up and down your deepest ass crease and over your rosebud.  I smile when I feel my newbie hitch and jolt into me.  I can so tell anal whores because they hump up aggressively and kiss with increased heat.  My anal virgins I can feel them hitch and love freeze.  I will kiss you harder and move a hand up and work your back, ass cheeks and squeeze your tit to make it throb with pleasure weakening your silly resistance.  Then running my hands back to your rosebud and stroke and press in lightly as you hitch and mewl into my devouring mouth.   often I have to back off and work on her again but I smile at how often I feel her melting into me as I feel my middle finger sinking into your asshole and start to stroke pure love and pleasure to your virgin asshole.  all assholes are sweet but especially virgin assholes to hardcore fucking.  I read my slut and often I can pump two fingers into her ass and drag the fingers up her back and let her watch me suck them clean in my hungry mouth before running down her body and plunging back up her asshole more forcefully as she gags and melts into my kisses and I feel our sweaty bodies beginning to slip and slide as we heat up and I slip my fingers out her spasming asshole and drag up her body and offer her sweet ass nectars and usually she accepts with a moan as I give her one finger and myself the other and then mate our mouths with our fingers still being sucked as I make her a true anal whore.  Knowing soon my cock and love fist will be teaching her the true depths of anal 'gasm heaven.  I just close my eyes as we kiss seeing my cock deep in her asshole and feeling her fist sinking deep up my shit hole as I rub my clit furiously or hopefully she is doing it so I can maul my tits and lifting my tits up so I can suck and teeth saw my rock hard nipples.  Cuming so fucking violently as pure bliss is once more tearing my asshole, cunt and mind apart in pure fucking pleasure.

//  I felt my belly lurch as Nyomi goading Laura to fuck her.  When I hear such words my sluts know I am going to fuck them so hard and deep.  Newbies I ramp up as quickly as they will let me which is almost always hard.  I may have to teach them the full extent of good hard loving over several fucks but I so know how to teach women the true meaning of deep, soul blistering pleasure that good hard fucking gives one.  of course good hard fucking can just be me sucking your clit and nipples off and spearing your throat with my tongue but good hard het sex just makes a fuck so perfect when it follows womb shattering oral and digital orgasms.  Smiling at the "kid" issue being taken care of.   I always try to get her a love nest away from such concerns but sometimes one must risk such potential detours when love is in the air.  Geez, you so know how to show how the verbal adds so much to sex [Nyomi teased her, stepping back.  "Is your blood boiling?  Do you want this?"  She pirouetted.  She posed.  She arched her back so that her splendid breasts thrust out even further, and the thin, nearly transparent fabric of the peignoir slithered and slid over her alluring dark body.  She ran her fingers down her glossy, beautifully shaped thighs.  "You want this?  You want this body?"]  I don't remember reading this in another's story.  Maybe they a wore negligee but it comes off quickly and without such loving taunts to fire up one's lover.  Again, I marvel at how only you capture these little, but oh so important, details.  I can just see Nyomi dancing for me as her tits swish and roll and her mound is lewdly rotated and thrusted into my overheated face.  Other authors never dance their women provocatively to excite their women.  they set things up but then don't deliver.  You deliver this heat but you also, by showing such moments, show the flow of life.  You are able to make three hundred plus stories sexy and hot because you take the time to make each fuck an individual event.  Something unique and to be treasured.   Others are just stories.  They may make me hot but they don't touch my soul like your stories like yours do.  I still crave each new chapter and masturbate to womb shattering climaxes reading them and old favorites over and over.  three nights ago I masturbated to Ada's initial seduction and moaned so long and deep in my throat as I ran my hands up and down my spent cunt and licked them clean and weakly brought the anal beads I had jerked out my exploding asshole as I came so fucking hard and put each bead into my moaning mouth and ran my tongue all over them savoring my ass candy.  I can so see that fabric riding over nyomi's sweet flesh.  A while back Maria had on new expensive negligee and was running her fingers all over her thighs, pelvis and belly before squeezing in on her vulva and making it flare and smear the fabric wetly.  Needless to say, Joann and I ripped it from her moaning body as we fucked her within an inch of her life as multiple orgasms ripped her soul apart with bliss. 

//  I am so there as Laura strips down.  Me I love to get naked as quick as possible.  Maybe I will be teasing with my clothes and I love to put on a show but I so love the freedom of being totally nude and getting my lover so.  More of that sweet dialog I so adore from you [Nyomi, still flirting and posing, went to the bed and unzipped the valise.  "Are you going to fuck me with your dick?  Are you going to be like a man and ram me?  And make me scream?"        "No . . . my pet," Laura purred to her, now naked herself, approaching Nyomi, slipping her hands again under the filmy peignoir, lifting it, pressing her own naked flesh against Nyomi's body.  "I am going to plough you and plough you, slow and hot, until you beg me to make you come."]  like I say other authors have some dialog to get the story going but nothing really once love is flowing.  Nothing to excite your lover further while your seducing each other.  When a slut asks / purrs if I am going to ram fuck her with my cock I simply feel pure sexual fire burning in my pussy and whiting out my mind.  I just feel power surging through me.  I know I am going to "plough" them so fucking good.  I just feel my cunt quiver and pulse and my pelvis rotating thinking of burying my dick hard and deep into her pussy and hopefully asshole.  pounding my cock into her open mouth and sliding down her moaning throat.  your words alone reading them are making me wet and starving for some good ole het fucking.  I can feel a lover running her hands over my body reading your story and feeling her hard dick or a man's cock pressing into my thigh or belly and knowing soon that rock hard rod will be pleasuring my cunt and asshole so fucking good.  I so love that moment of you showing Laura lifting up Nyomi's peignoir and pressing their heating flesh together.  I just love shake as our bodies come together in rising love and need.  Feeling our smooth skin pressing and rubbing and our tits mashing and our pussies mating or finding a nice thigh, pelvis or belly to press and rub into making us mewl and gag in love.  love has been done right.  Nyomi cunt is soaking wet and she is shaking with need.  I know I have done my foreplay right when I always find my woman's cunt so soaking wet and her nipples rock hard begging for more love.  you so show the ramping up that makes hard fucking so fucking rad.  I love reading how you show Laura's different cocks.  We have a plethora of shapes and sizes.  I generally go for the large, traditional shape but love variety and feeling those ribs sliding in and out your pussy and especially your clenching bung hole is so fucking divine.  I just feel my belly melt and churn as those ribs pound my cunt and ripple my tight O-ring.  You show your lovers rising to a fever pitch and bring the reader along with them.  you build everything up so the sex is simply to die for.  Nyomi's words of loving hard dick make my blood burn with the desire to pound fuck her into screaming, body jackknifing orgasms.

//  so many things to like in your prose.  ["Now, that's mean," Laura purred, kissing her smooth cheek, her forehead, nuzzling her ear with her nose, brushing her own small naked breasts against Nyomi's masterpieces, feeling their nipples meet.  "Mean.  Take it back or I won't give you what you want.  You know you adore that little girl."        Nyomi crinkled her nose, her grey eyes sparkling merrily, as well as pulsing with hot sex.  "She gets in the way of Mommy's nasty dirty side."        "Oh?  You have a nasty dirty side?" Laura teased her again, now sliding her mouth down to Nyomi's magnificent jutting breasts, which she could certainly never get enough of.]  you show that total loving that I love.  she is kissing and nuzzling nyomi's whole face.  You are the only author to show this and again I find that weird from other female authors.  We love the whole body and I would expect them to show this at least some.  Of course I love the dialog that only you give.  This is women bindings their souls deeper in love.  talking nasty in that gentle way you so do with lovers that are more than a one night stand or at a party.  There it is just great primal sex without that connection you have with lovers you take as regular lovers.  You make Nyomi so special by telling us she crinkles her nose and her sparkling eyes.  It is the little things that truly draw you to a woman.  Sure, her assets draw you in but the little things are the true binder of souls.  You are the only author to really show their women getting close physically.  I so love lying on my woman or her me and feeling our tits mashing and nipples digging as bellies flow together and legs and arms twine as you pull each other tight and look deep into each other's eyes before tongues flow deep into moaning mouths as love is stroked with flailing and plunging tongues.  Sigh, now we see Laura moving south a little to get some tasty tit meat.  I so love to devour my slut's tits and making them caw and judder in my grip and loving mouth as I make them swoon and flow like a river for me and any sluts loving her body.  Ok, whoa, you do that other thing that I like and don't see in other stories.  Lovers communicating and letting the fuck morph.  Nyomi pulls Laura up from her tit worship and lets it be know she needs to be boned hard.  I love how you show that women communicate with each other.  They know that a woman will listen to their needs and wants.  Sure, you may try to bend the lovemaking how you want it to go but still there is the communication of two persons trying to reach nirvana.  Men just lead unless subs and most aren't.  it is nice to be led and fucked like a street whore but women just take it to the next level and you show this thankfully.

// I have always loved how you so capture the moment of penetration [Laura didn't reply this time.  She smiled and kissed Nyomi sensually, at the same time guiding the head of the dildo into the gaping wet groove of Nyomi's black orchid, making sure it was on target with her fingertips before pushing with her hips and sliding it in deep.  In the middle of their kiss Nyomi froze up for a brief instant, clenching as she felt it penetrate her, groaning softly.        "Unnnhhhhh!"         When it was sunk into her as far as it would go, Laura stopped and held her, letting them both feel the exquisite sensations of being this close and on the verge of a torrid seizure of pleasure, their breasts mashed together and their fingers digging into each other's flesh.  Finally, she whispered, "Is it hard enough?"        "Oh . . . god . . ." Nyomi gasped.  "Yes."]  I feel my belly clench with this sweet beginning het fuck.  The detail of guiding with your fingers and then sliding deep into a furrow wet with love and need.  I can just feel that ridged cock sliding deep into my cunt and my asshole.  I so love to see my love freezing and hitching up like you show so well.  The way her face freezes and that distant look she gets in her eyes before guttural moans and cries of pleasure flow forth.   Only you show that merging that I so need when I fuck.  Pulling your woman close and feeling your bellies mating as titties mash and flatten and mouths hungrily explore each other as you start to rotate your hips or your opening your flower for your lover.  I love to feel my lover pulling me tight and digging her fingers into my flesh as she anchors self into me to fuck me so fucking good.  One big difference I can see between me and Laura is I really love to give head.  I don't care if it is a dildo or real cock.  I love to work a shaft and give it my all.  Women dig the mental sight of it and men die from my oral expertise.  I want to suck your cock head like a vacuum cleaner and corkscrew my head while pumping my head and if a bigger cock pump with my hands.  I love Anthony, Aaron and Mike's big dicks because I can interlock my fingers of my hands and pump their shafts hard and still bob on their bulbous cock heads sucking hard and slapping with my tongue making them groan and curse me.  feeling them skull fucking me hard and sliding their thick cocks down my moaning throat.  just as much I so love to watch good head.  Seeing a woman's head pumping a shaft hard as her cheeks work and hollow with her sucks and watching her head twist and lips clench and running her tongue underneath the dick sliding in and out her mouth.  seeing her head rock back as she is skull fucked and the hands clenching in her hair driving her head roughly onto the cock battering her throat and the sounds she makes as she caws and gurgles and the spit flowing out her mouth.  sitting on the floor and watching as her head is leaned over the bed or sofa and a dick is pounded down her gullet and seeing her throat bulge on bigger dicks and how the spit flows down her face and into her hair as the cock is out stroked and when a cock or dildo is pulled out an inch and the speared back down her throat as she huffs and moans as her hands clench the back of her lovers thighs helping to drive that dick fully down her throat.  pumping a shaft hard with my fist or taking my thumb and first two fingers and pumping right under his cock head stroking that sensitive area as I super suck and tongue worm.  Watching a woman do this and see a woman have a mental 'gasm on just the sight and sounds and friction of her strap-on and watching a man roar as he grips a slut's head right in front of me and slams his cock into her mouth or down her throat as you see his ass cheeks clench and dimple as his hips lurch forward with each spasm of his dick jetting semen into her mouth or down her throat.  or watching him pull out and blast her face with hot, steamy semen.  I want your sperm in me but it is nice change of pace getting a face / hair full of semen or all over my tits or belly.  Just have to try and not get a direct shot in my open eyes.  That stings but I guess I love that too when I think about.  I so love being a slut and whore.  Having a woman lick it off my face or me doing it to her.   Yumm!!!!

//  I am know smiling at sweet dialog you besot the reader with.  I am just feeling warm in my pussy and happy in my mind as Laura is telling Nyomi she is "luffing" her and Nyomi is saying basically shut up and fuck me.  this shows women so comfortable with each other and loving each other.  It shows humor and love.  without these moments other stories are just run of the mill sex stories.  No problem but they can't get to the next level unless they add the little things like you do.  Geez, you are almost overloading me with the little details here [Laura sucked Nyomi's full lower lip into her mouth, playfully but also with definite sexual intent, and began to thrust slowly.  In keeping with her plan, she did not let their physical need overpower their determination to be discreet, but instead fucked Nyomi in a slow, relentless, simmering rhythm, sliding her arms under Nyomi's shoulders and embracing her very closely, pushing the dildo in and out of her tight, slippery pussy only two or three inches per thrust.  Nyomi's thighs yawned open wider and her calves locked around Laura's hips.  She rocked easily in rhythm with Laura's gentle thrusting.]  I know people must wonder why I go on like this but it is simple really.  I have read so many stories only you truly deliver the small details.  Others are just so mundane in their sex.  I guess they stick to the tried and true.  I groaned reading Laura sucking in nyomi's lower lip.  That always makes my belly melt when it is done to me and I love seeing my sluts swoon when I do it to them.  other authors never show us their character's thinking on how they will actually fuck.  They show us their thoughts while doing the seducing but once the fuck starts we are deprived of their inner thoughts which is a bummer.  When I read other's het fucks I just get the cock penetrates the pussy and that is about it.  of course they talk about the pumping in some bland way but no details.  I guess the Harem author does a good job but he does miss the small details again.  He does show the power and sinking of cocks hard and deep.  But nothing like Laura clutching Nyomi to her or feeling their bodies close as they grunt and rut.  Only you give me the sweet little things that make the sum so much more than the parts.  I am feeling my belly tightening and clenching as Nyomi clutches Laura's hips with her calves.  I can just feel myself swirling and jamming my cock so deep and hard into her wet, open cunt as I spear her down into the bed as we kiss in deep love.  my tongue wetly wrestling hers into submission and then riding down the top of her tongue and down her cawing throat making her melt for me.  maybe turning her head to the side and sucking her neck flesh cruelly into my mouth and super sucking and gnawing making her scream and lurch up into my thrusting body.  I so love coming up for air and looking down and seeing her eyes all lost and spacey as I make her my total love slut as my mouth comes down to her again and I plunge my tongue deep into her mouth again and rape it savagely as our tits mash flat and our bellies lurch up into each other as love flows so freely.

//  wow, I have this happen to me but I would never think to write it.  my woman moaning and gibbering to me as I suck her lip out and wag my head like a dog.  I do this and to see it in print blows my mind.  I release their lip and kiss them deeply and then suck in again, maybe going to the other and lip it into my teeth and again stretch out and suck and tongue wetly as I watch her eyes bulge or often roll back and spasm as I smirk knowing I am once more making a woman loose her mind for me.  you now give me that ramping up that I so adore.  You have shown us yet again the sweet details of seduction and penetration.  Things that most others miss.   What others also miss is showing the ramping up of sex.  Of course sometimes you start at one hundred miles per hour and crash and burn but mostly you start out slow and ramp up to the conflagrations that rupture wombs and white out minds with pure fucking bliss.  You have shown us Nyomi being passive and opening her fuck hole for Laura's loving cock.  you now show her getting ramped up and now thrusting up into Laura's swirling strokes.  This is so fucking rad! [Nyomi was twisting and writhing now, pumping back more vigorously, as if trying to get Laura to pick up the pace, to thrust more energetically.  She was also whimpering much more loudly than in the beginning.  At first Laura was equally swept up in the excitement and didn't notice it, but a momentary lapse into stillness by both of them only accentuated the snuffling, gasping, moaning noises they had both been making before it.]  you this so clearly with the above.  I so know that rising need of impaling myself on my lover's dildo or cock.  I just gag and moan as I feel that dick spearing into my clutching cunt hole.  I can just hear my keening and groaning rising and becoming more guttural.  Making my sluts cry out for it and gurgle as my cock is slam fucking them down into the bed or floor.  Pulling those legs forward and just pile driving cock so hard and deep into their grunting body.   Feeling our tits mashing and grinding as I swirl and thrust and I feel them clutching me and thrusting to spear my cock as deep as possible into their tight fuck sleeve.  I love how you show Laura mentally getting into the fuck and how it is driving her lust higher and higher.  Such a sweet detail showing that pause you get as positions are slightly adjusted or a needed breath is drawn to allow you to fuck heatedly once more.  Geez, I can just feel my thighs clenching your hips or my ankles twisted around yours as I jam my soaked cunt up into your thrusts reveling as your ramp up and are slamming my body back down into the bed making me feel your power.  Or you are swirling fucking my cunt as I feel your cock corkscrewing in my cunt as it pushes and probes deep into my belly making me gag and seek your mouth so I can kiss you deep to show my love and adoration.  You show that mirthful conversing as Nyomi is squealing for it and Laura is teasing her and slowing to prolong the pleasure and frustration.  I think, can't recall others, that this shows the mirth, humor and love that only you do.  I think it is lacking in other's stories and if you do see a woman ramping up you still don't see the love and mirth that you show.  I guess because other authors just say the woman is slowing down to prolong the fuck but you are not allowed inside in her head to see her humor and you never, ever see woman teasing and jesting during the fuck.  It is always just plain ahead with no added decorum to make it special and rad.  Again I say that it is the little things that truly make a fuck so fucking awesome. 

//  You continue to show this ramping up that is so true to life.  You start slow and gentle to get to the conflagration stage that scalds wombs with pure ecstasy [Inevitably, Laura was drawn into the wild, desperate flexing.  Oh well, I can't deny her.  She's got to have it.  God, she is a beautiful creature.  I do want this to go on forever.  No love lie .  Or 'luff' lie.        But by now there was no prolonging it.  Nyomi was determined to conclude it, and was pumping and flexing in a mild frenzy.  Laura even had to run one hand down to their groins to clasp the wet dildo and make sure it didn't slip out.           "Oh yes!  Oh yes!" Nyomi panted, churning madly in the rumpled, twisted sheets.]  that is so true how one lover can spur the other one on.  You capture this where others do not except for the "Harem" author.  He uses many kilobytes to describe his scenes and thus he does get this essence but still it seems like he is a novice that uses sheer volume where you are able to use much less prose and get a better affect.  I guess you make each fuck and the flow of it special where the "Harem" author uses the same formula over and over.  also, he never gives any of the sweet moments that you do.  The things that truly make a fuck memorable.   Plus, you are showing how women lead each other.  Laura is comfortable with a slower pace and yet Nyomi wants nothing to do with it.  she wants her orgasm and wants it NOW!  I so love seeing that in my love angels.  That need I know I put there.  Two nights ago I was sort of in this position while going down on Joann and then Maria.  True, I usually ramp up quickly but I can't help it when my babies are urging me on.  I was sucking Joann off and she was so beautiful up on her elbows looking down on me gobbling her cunt inside out and her hands clenching the sheets as her b-cup titties swirled and lashed from side to side as she was now humping desperately up and forward into my face.  I loved feeling my neck rock back in her desperation.  The more she humped wildly the harder I sucked and tongue lashed her shiny clit.  I wanted to slow down but her passion simply filled my tongue with a mind of its own as it tongue stabbed her swollen clit and lashed her clit when I sucked deep into my mouth and munched on it while tongue spearing.  I am smiling remembering her guttural groans and squeals as she started cuming so fucking hard.  she started jackknifing and wallowing right and left.  I tried to control but soon I was on my side and I found myself on my back as she now jammed and humped hard down onto my hard sucking mouth on her exploding clit.  finally she started to come down and collapsed fully on the bed above my head her cunt still mashed into my face as felt it tremble with aftershocks and juice dribbling down my cheeks and throat.  I needed more after a minute and reached up behind my head and fisted her hair and roughly dragged her back and up into a slumped sitting position on my face and began to assault her reviving cunt again.  Sigh, soon she was wildly humping and I looked straight up at her hard belly, and flopping tits as she rode me hard as my mouth and nose were rode wildly.  I clamped my hands over her legs and pulled tight and worked my magic on her cunt and clit.  I reached back and stuffed a pillow under my head and just sucked her entire upper cunt into my mouth and tried to swallow down my throat as my tongue lashed and polished her throbbing clit.  now she screamed bloody murder as she bucked and jammed down as her cunt grinded up and down my face as wails of pure ecstasy flowed from her throat as it twisted back and her screams lashed the ceiling in her helpless screams of fucking bliss.  Spent I guided her off me and she flopped on the bed and I zeroed in on Maria and her swollen cunt she had been masturbating.  Again, her wild undulations and bucking had me sucking and tongue drilling for all I was worth in a minute.  I can't refuse passion.  I can still feel her hands behind my head as her torso hunched so she could really hump up into my mouth as I jammed my face as deep into her juicing cunt as I could.  The divine nectars pouring out her spasming fuck hole as her upper body rose like four inches and her head tilted back as an ear splitting scream erupted suddenly from her mouth and she wailed out "I'm cummmmminnnggggggg" and desperately pulled her nipples hard and then pulping her tits with hard slams of her hands into her tit meat and the twisting her nipples again as she groaned and jackknifed as I held on tight to keep my mouth clamped to her exploding cunt as waves of searing sweet nectars flooded my mouth and smeared my face and throat and splotched the bed. 

//  what you have mastered is the "lead in".  You use pacing and loving prose to set up the love kill like no other author.  You ramp and ramp and then have the woman fall over into womb shredding orgasms that tear the soul apart with pure ecstasy.  This is how wonderful lovers take their women to paradise over and over again.  ["Oh yes, honey!  Oh yes, honey!  Come for Mama."  Laura kissed her damp neck, her gleaming shoulder, holding the dildo steady with the fingers of one hand, now jamming it more violently into Nyomi's pussy, feeling Nyomi's body tense and strain on the verge of a horrific climax.  "Come for Mama now.  Yes.  Yes."        "Unnmmgggnhhh!  Oh!"        Nyomi's long, very strong body seized up in a sharp, paralytic spasm for a brief second, the breath completely leaving her lungs, her face frozen in a grimace of acute ecstasy.  Laura clung hard to her, knowing that the dam would burst in a millisecond.        "Anngghmmnngiiieeee!"          This sharp cry escaped her mouth even before Laura could reach out to the side and yank the pillow closer.  Nyomi was in another universe, her body wrenched and wracked by fierce spasms of almost unbearable rapture.  It's up to me, Laura realized, pushing Nyomi's face sideways into the pillow just as the second shriek poured out of her lungs.        "Mmnnpphhffffnnmmeeeee!" she screamed into the pillow, arching her back, flipping, nearly flinging Laura to the side, her orgasm was so violent.        But the violence quickly spent itself.  The following spasms were less vigorous, and her moans quickly subsided also into muted lowing and gasping.  The shuddering and twitching of her marvelous body continued, however ,  for a full minute, Laura was sure, and perhaps even longer.  She clung to Nyomi, enjoying every twitch and aftershock.]  love seeing the sweat on nyomi's divine body.  We like it warm in our house which leads to sweat and lust.  Love you showing the love kissing one does to one lover as you take her paradise.  Sure I want lots of mouth sugar but I need to kiss and taste the rest of your divine flesh and suck and lick up your sweat if it is sheening or beading.  Then you show that communication again that is so unique.  A woman urging and striving on her love slut to have earth shattering orgasms to rend the soul with bliss.   I so know this stage as I am ram fucking your cunt / asshole or both if I'm using a double penetrator!  Lunging into your squealing body as I grunt or scream at you to cum for me.   kissing you deeply if I can and clutching and gripping your body to let you feel my power and if kinky giving you what you want and need.  Then you give us the divine orgasm.  what is so great about your conflagrations is that each is unique.  How the body orgasms and the vocalizations your women make.  The harem author blew me away the first couple chapters I read until I quickly noticed that each one followed the same pattern.  If that was real life I would scream.  The sounds you capture.  Only you do this at all.  I can't wait to see what sounds you will have next.  The way you vary them and the length and volume.   You keep it so fucking fresh.  Another thing that really is so clear with this fuck is that the orgasm is a golly whopper.  A few authors do make it clear also how a truly wonderful orgasm throttles the flesh but they just don't have the magic of your orgasms.  You do it with the vocalizations and the variations of them.  the adjectives and adverbs that you use to describe how the woman having the orgasm is having it.  other authors, except for one or two, just basically same they came.  So fucking boring.   You just make them supreme and that is all I can say.  Thankfully!!!!

//  love how they embrace lovingly after their heated fuck.  I have to smile at Laura getting out of her harness quickly.  I love to feel that cock and leather pressed into my thigh, belly or pelvis as we twine and kiss deeply in love.  have to smile as the story ends.  Laura has awakened the true inner lesbian slut in another woman.  [Laura leaned forward and clutched Nyomi's magnificent naked breasts in both hands while playfully nipping her earlobe.  "I can take it if you can dish it out."        Again Nyomi laughed.  She was so full of infectious happiness that Laura felt the contagion spreading through her too.  "You better get ready to cry for mercy,"         Nyomi growled at her, pulling her down on her back, "because I am one tireless demon in the sack."        Amen to that, Laura thought, surrendering eagerly.]  I find most women when they discover that such pleasure is possible are ready for it and want it as much as they can get over and over.  I so love how you show this conversion of the soul of women when they discover their true inner lesbian slut.  Awakening the slut and then satisfying it.  My kind of job!

 

 

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Chapter 316:

//  I have to feel the nostalgia that Laura is feeling as this story is beginning.  Tonya is leaving her life.  I so hate having women leaving my life but realize that is part of life.  Women move out of the area or with time they form new angels and new paths in their lives or me in mine and we slowly or quickly part.  I do miss them but always try to make sure that new angels are entering our lives to keep the spice so alive and enticing.  Me and my arch angels are always looking for new love.  I do agree with Laura though that you do have to be careful with women at work.  I fuck as many as I can but never at work.  I know of three men and two women who have been fired for getting caught boffing each other at work.  Came across a pair myself on day.  Didn't know I had master keys and electronic access to the area.  I had to smile as I opened the door and caught Nancy with Randy's cock sinking deep up her asshole as she was squealing and moaning like the whore she is.  Sigh, I didn't join in.  I know I just said you have to be careful with getting your pants down but this area only a few people like randy and me have all the access necessary to get into these mechanical / electrical areas.  Now I would have joined in and partook of at least some dick and I am sure I could have gotten Nancy 's pussy with blackmail if nothing else.  How silly not seeking dick back then.  I do like how you show the march of time though.  Other stories are one shots or just don't show how things change.  Tonya moves on.  This is real life.  Again you are the only author who ever shows this.  I have to give you credit how you have had women come in and out of Laura's life.  I guess this is fortunate in a way.  Only if angels leave your life will you have the time and space so to speak to bring new angels in.  I just wish I was queen in days of old where I could fuck all day and night and take all the lovers I wanted.  Yeah!!

 

//  I am smirking again at Laura remembering Tonya let six men fuck and not letting them fuck in her asshole!  hein-ousssss!  What a waste.  I want all my fuck holes plundered hard and deep.  I got a phone call about three weeks back from Camille asking me if I was ready for another "seven the hard way" party.  I felt my cunt spasm and juice.  Several times she has arranged for her and I to be gangbanged by multiple studs.  I croaked back I was hot for it.  she laughed calling me a "fucking slut".  She then whispered would I love feeling big, black dicks sliding deep into my asshole, cunt and mouth at the same time and gave such vivid details.  I was at my desk with my body love shaking and starting to sweat a little.  I then did the same back to her and put her on hold and made sure I was basically alone.  Then softly I told her to strip down and masturbate as I spent ten minutes working her up as I detailed a gangbang fuck of hard, mean proportions.  I had her squealing and huffing as I told her to smack her tits and cunt and put the phone down there to let me hear and felt my cunt contract as I heard the smacks.  After a while she brought the phone up to her ear and I finished my story with hot steamy semen blasting into her three fuck holes and all over her face and back and barked at her softly (have to be careful) to cum, cum, cum, cum.  I ordered her forcefully to cum hard.  I smiled as an all cap screams nearly made me deaf as she came violently and so fucking long.  I kept barking (softly) to keep cuming and "work your cunt bitch" as she squealed and had several more hard contractions I could gleefully hear.  I smiled as she eventually called me "a fucking whore" with a tired satiated voice.

 

//  two nights later I drove over to her campus and she took me to Edward's pad.  I smiled as we entered the house and were lead to a large room and saw that some inflatable mattresses had been put out and all the furniture had been moved to the edges.  Great thing about universaties is you can always find lots of horny, hot women and men to fuck.  I was impressed.  I counted thirteen good, looking, horny studs.  Black with one Puerto Rican.   Close to the true seven the hard way.  Everyone knew why Camille and I were there.  I smiled as Anthony walked up to me and mated our mouths tight as he slide his hard tongue deep into my mouth and swirled around my tongue making me groan deep.  I felt hands roughly unbuttoning and unzipping me as my clothes were quickly shed and felt hard thighs, bellies and cocks now pressing into my body as hands stroked and massaged my body.  Anthony moved away and another mouth claimed mine as hands reached from behind and started to pulp my tits and squeeze my nipples hard making me jerk and cry out into the mouth devouring mine.  I was forced to my knees as an average sized cock was stuffed into my mouth and I began to suck and pump my head.  I gripped two cocks and jerked them as I felt other cocks rubbing my face and head.  I kept working the cocks stuffed into my mouth and made sure to jerk off other cocks I wasn't sucking using my hands to pump the shaft I was giving head to too or cocks waving around me.  I maneuvered around so I could check at Camille and smiled as I could see her on her knees servicing her studs as one a black stud slide his eight inches down her throat and gripped her hair to pump it down her gullet and over her tonsils.  Her face and whole front of her body was covered in spit and was dripping off her thighs and twat just like I could feel it dripping off me as sucked and pumped shafts fully down my throat and licked the bottom of their shafts and scrotum sacks with their cock buried fully down my throat.  loved the groans of pleasure this seems to draw.  I was always varying my technique just like Camille to impress and pleasure.  I had to copy Camille when she lifted a shaft and swallowed their nut sacks and pulled taunt and swished their testicles around in her mouth.  some we even able to stuff both nuts and sack into our mouths and devour with spit and tongue lathing and pulling our heads back to make them feel their dick jewels pulled taunt.

 

//  needless to say, after a good blow bang we were on the blow up mattresses and mounted so fucking good.  I watched as Camille got her studs lined up on the floor and mounted each one in turn and rode for a minute with her hot tight cunt before pulling off and mounting the next stud in line.  Me, I was settled over, Herald, as he slide his hard dick into my clenching cunt.  I loved how he roughly sucked my nipples and gripped my shoulder to ram me back onto his plunging dick.  he stilled and I whimpered as I felt a big dick pressing into my shit hole.  I felt my hands curl into fists and judder as that shaft forced its way past my sphincter and his bulbous cock slide half way up my trebling ass.  Soon they were stroking me hard and deep as I moaned and jammed back.  my head was lifted and another black dick now filled my mouth as I pumped and corkscrewed my head.  I was in heaven as I felt my body filled with hard dick as I was pumped for long minutes.  Then the cock plundering my asshole slipped out and immediately another cock was jamming into my shit hole and sliding deep and now he pounded me so fucking hard as herald lunged his shaft so hard into my impaled cunt.  The dick fucking my mouth moved away and I watched him walk behind me as a sweaty stud got on his knees and he ordered me "lick your asshole off my dick you fucking white bitch".  I moaned as I lunged onto his dick head and sucked it hard and deep and pumped my head as I took his shaft deeper and deeper into my mouth.  as the guys took turns raping my asshole and atm'ing me I watched as Camille was fucked hard and deep.  They started out in the classical position but was now on a guy on his back with her ass sitting on his pelvis as he speared her asshole hard and deep as she supported her weight some with her hands beside his head.  I groaned as the guy pulled her back by her legs and his dick slipped out and other guys moved in and speared her upturned asshole.  getting up and fucking down into her asshole and then spearing her cunt and back and forth and then moving up to her mouth and letting her suck her juices off.  Later I saw them in this same position as the guy on the bottom used his dick in her asshole as an anchor as the other studs rode their dicks into her asshole on top of his as she cried out and groaned in deep fucking pleasure.  there is just something about feeling a hard, bulbous cockhead pushing into your sphincter and feeling it strain and then give way and that cockhead pushes into your asshole.  then feeling that hard shaft sliding down your shit hole as the dickhead slides deep making you groan with fucking deep pleasure.  feeling a man's nut sack slapping your ass as he punches it hard from behind or into your perineum if banging from the right angel.  I so love feeling cocks and dildos slamming hard into my body and feeling it jolt and jiggle.  When dp or tp I just feel so alive as all my fuck holes are stuffed full of hard live or plastic cock and feeling them sawing in and out making me gag and cry out in pleasure.  Camille and I both love to be fucked so hard.  I reveled in feeling hands gripping my shoulders or hands clenched in my hair.  Their grip anchoring our strong studs so they could coil their hips and slam their cocks hard into our willing flesh.   I love grunting and gurgling as I feel their thighs slamming into my body sinking their cock balls deep into my cunt, asshole or mouth.  I love feeling my tits jolt and whiplash and groin rocking to their power.  This was not a grudge fuck so they were not choking or gasping us but I definitely had my head jerked and hair pulled / clenched tight as they ram fucked me making me groan deep in my throat and my eyes constantly spasming and rolling back.  I am visual so I could feel my womb flip when I would look over and see Camille's lovely Serena William esque body jolt and lurching and her full tits rolling and slapping as three dicks were constantly slamming her fuck holes.  As I came once I know I had several extra crushing spasms of fucking bliss as I watched her head pulled back and jerked forward as the guy torpedo fucking her asshole slammed her ass with loud smacks pulling her into his power thrusts by her hair as she moaned and grunted like the whore she is.  Watching as he released her head and the Latino gripped her head and shoved his dick down her throat and watching her corkscrew her head up and down his shaft as another mini orgasm rocked my womb at the sight.

 

//  they just kept fucking us so fucking good and long.  Several times I was up in the air as two of the stronger studs held me up and I felt dicks spearing up my asshole and cunt.  I remember Anthony holding onto me as his cock sank fully up my cunt as I pumped up and down in the air as another dick was slammed up into my asshole making loud smacking sounds as I felt my asshole begin to spasm uncontrollably and my clit was bursting itself apart as searing ecstasy flooded my brain as I screamed and screamed in Anthony's ear as my third orgasm ripped me apart.  I felt another pair of hands grip my body to steady us as my feet kicked wildly in the air and I screamed "ram my fucking body down on those black dicks" and had another immediate orgasm as I felt them bending the knees and then upthrusting violently slamming their dicks fully into me as I felt devastating jackknifes and shudders grip my body for three or four killing spasming contractions.  I smile seeing Camille's full tits flopping and smacking as she was powered fuck in the air while two bucks speared her body as she clenched her arms and legs around the neck and waist of the guy holding her as a black stud speared her asshole.  she just howled like a wolf as she pumped up and down in time to her studs to power drive their dicks into her willing flesh.  She came so fucking hard as her legs thrashed and kicked and her head leaned back onto the shoulder of the guy behind her and I watched her sweaty throat work as it cawed, groaned and cried out in helpless pleasure.  then later as we were fucked out and we gladly felt our already satiated bodies being buffeted as our strong studs pounded their dicks into our cunts, assholes and mouths as their nut sacks filled our fuck holes to overflowing.  I so love feeling semen seeping and running out my spent and ruined cunt and asshole and down my face, throat and chest.  I feel so loved and perfected when I am totally fucked out.  Especially when I get to share it with another sweet angel.

 

//  one thing I have always liked about your stories is you show growth.  We see that Makeeda is becoming more famous.  You show that her going off to these distant port of calls is paying off.  You show something beyond the erotica part of the story.  You show how life moves on.  We have Deshona grow and become more.  Ada and Randi moved on and in their new environs they have thrived and grown as persons.  Makeeda seems to have thawed some under Laura's loving influence.  We have seen Laura's teenage lovers grown and become more adult.  I mean if Jane can become more adult anyone one can!!  Just teasing Jane!!  I have even seen major growth on Laura's part.  She is so much more open about herself and willing to let her angels have other loves.  I am smiling remembering her stomach "curdling" in the past.  I have mentioned several other multi-part stories.  I have read a few more in the het world and I still see the same thing.  No growth by any of the characters.  The harem author tries to work in the real life happenings in his story but his women are so superficial.  Nothing wrong with keeping it to sex but it loses something when you do this.  As I guess is clear, sex is so, so, so very important to me.  but that is not enough in and of itself.  One needs more in life to be satisfied with life.  One needs goals and achieving those goals.  One needs archangels in one's life to share with.  You show this and we are truly drawn into the story because of it.  it is their lives that make everything so endearing.  We have invested ourselves into the story and thus have been bought into Laura's life stories.  Thus, once the seduction / tryst starts it is so riveting and rewarding.  I am so there as they are having sex and have womb rending orgasms.  I buy into their lovemaking totally.  I have nearly knocked myself out with some of the orgasms I have had while masturbating to these stories.  I so love screaming and jackknifing on the bed or off a sofa or chair and feeling my body being pummeled with crushing bliss as I am sharing sweet ecstasy with these dynamic, hot, loving women. 

 

//  I am smiling as Laura reflects on new love when Ty calls flirting and boldly letting Laura know that she needs to see her now so that they can devour each others sweet flesh.  I know that situation of trying to deflect and soothe a lover that is longing for me and sometimes I can hear them on the other end soothing me when I am begging for them.  that is the beauty of this story.  It has length and breadth.  Only by having a multi chapter story that actually flows over time can we have these dynamics happening.  The vast majority of stories are one shots and thus simply can't even attempt this.  The other multi part stories that I have found on lesbianism are short term focused and while they lasted was simply about multiple fucks as quick as possible.  The ones in the het world are longer in their time span but are superficial with little dynamic interaction between the characters.  I love seeing Laura moving between her lovers and the dynamics this causes.  I too know that fuck hunger you have when you have devoured a love slut with another and you can't wait to devour her alone where you two can simply inhale each other.  The first two times I had Sari was with Emily and different other of their inner circle of love bunnies.  While we were dosing and resting between fucks she whispered in my ear that she wanted me to come to her house tomorrow night so that we could fuck alone.  I love jolted and called dodie and told I would have to bow out of a orgy they were having at Frankie's dance studio.  She was totally understanding when I told her that Sari and I were going to love fuck tomorrow night.  Sigh, she greeted me at the door with only a silk robe on.  Her single mother was spending a few nights with her new boyfriend.  I crushed her to my body and grabbed her hair and pulled her head back roughly and slammed my tongue down her moaning throat.  I pulled her rob off roughly and bent down and inhaled her rigid nipples and started to jerk her off.  I feel to my knees and pulled her cunt onto my face and devoured her cunt as she started to hump hard and gripped my hair and jerked my face deep into her cunt making her mound engulf my mouth as my tongue flailed her cunt meat and I sucked her clit and jerked while tongue fucking her steamy love hole.  gods, she came so fucking hard as she cried out and rammed her cunt into my mouth as I devoured it.  her cunt just convulsed waves of sweet cunt nectars into my starving mouth so much that it overflowed and ran down my throat and tits.

 

//  it was so beautiful to be able to take my time and focus as I massaged her ass and slide my tongue down her shit hole and sucked her ass as I tongued fuck it hard.  soon I had her ribbed strap-on stroking in and out her spasming asshole as I did her doggy.  She begged for her sweet asshole and I loved pulling out and stepping forward over her shoulder.  I showed her my creamed dick as turned her head over her shoulder and I bent down and feed my dick as she slurped and bobbed on my cock.  Then I was back ramming balls deep into her asshole as I watched her sphincter ripple over the ridges of her strap-on.  She came so hard for me.  I let her ride it out and then got her down on the bed and did her spoon as I ram fucked and she threw her hips back to impale her on my dick.  how she would roll off and lick my dick into her mouth and clean thoroughly while moaning.  She came with another screaming, jackknifing orgasm as she slammed back into me as I buzzed her clit and she pulled her painfully erect nipples hard and fast.  I then rode her cowgirl and slammed that pole up into my clenching cunt and asshole.  I purred when she ordered me to dismount her cock pounding my asshole and atm it.  she moaned what did my asshole taste like and I told her "like the sweetest chocolate that melts in your mouth" and I smiled as her eyes rolled back and a mini orgasm rocked her.  I nearly died as she finished me off piledriver and reached down and used one hand to rip my head forward by my hair with hard jerks and slapped me with stinging slaps.  I couldn't take anymore and I screamed "goooddddammmmmmmm" as my womb exploded in my belly and my heels spasmed as they wallowed into the mattress and my pelvis rose a few inches off the mattress with her cock still sliding in and out my shit hole.  My fingers sank into my thighs and clawed mercilessly as pure fucking ecstasy pummeled my brain.  We slept for a few hours and awoke to suck each other off multiple times and slept again.  I awoke early and as I got out of bed she pulled me back down and devoured my cunt again as I used her hair to jam and rotate her mouth on my fuck hole and clit.  what a way to start the work day with my cunt gushing fuck juice into my teenage lover's mouth.  she then rode me to two hard orgasms.  I loved how she rode me hard as her cunt rode up down my face from my chin and over my nose.  I am smiling remember as she went multiple and just creamed my whole face with her cum.  We then got in her shower and got on our knees in the spray and jerked each other off as we kissed deeply.  Needlessly to say I had a big smile on my face that day at work and a worn out pussy!!

 

//  I have to like how Ty is upping the heat on Laura.  She wants her now and lets Laura know that she is in the Jacuzzi all naked awaiting her.  I get excited when lovers try to tempt me away from work like this.  Know that I have a lot of seniority and have proven myself.   sometimes I can take off with little notice but usually you can't.  I need my job to much.  Wish I had the money that amber has and thus I could live the life of a bohemian.  I have to love how Ty minds works as she is asking for the strap-on.  I love it when a newbie begs for my love cock.  most experienced women have their implements of love already but will often request you bring some of yours for new variety and spice.  I have heard that whinnying many times and done it myself plenty when I don't get my way as soon as I want.  I like how you show that not all love happens immediately and often it has to simmer sometimes before one can consummate one's love.  I think you are the only author to show this.  Working through the day knowing that hot loving is waiting for you and you can just feel yourself simmering for it.  I have read a lot of stories and don't really remember seeing this.  I like the observation that Laura would be a rich girl if she could cash in every time she had to simmer and stew waiting to fuck a beautiful black girl after work.  I just like reading her thoughts and that waiting that makes the sex so fucking hot when you and her can finally get together and fuck heatedly.  But you show something else that is also cool.  Even though Laura can't wait to fuck Ty she is so tired at the end of the day that at first she has no enthusiasm for the coming tryst.  I too sometimes leave work just mentally whipped.  You give yourself one hundred and ten percent at work and sometimes you are just drained.  Some days that is what keeps me smiling and going, knowing that sweet loving is waiting for me after work.  With me, sometimes I am delayed and I can just feel my self getting edgy with the person delaying me.  trying to politely and neatly leave and sometimes just saying that I really have something urgent at home that needs to be done.  If they only knew.   I like seeing this though in your stories.  Other authors just make things happen so "now" and I love seeing the life time flow being shown.  We do have to work the normal work hours and I like seeing it in print.

 

//  I am smiling as Laura is instantly revived by [But that fatigue vanished swiftly at the door, where Ty greeted her wearing a shockingly tiny red bikini that covered nearly nothing of her acutely desirable lean black body.  She saw Laura gaping. "Eyes back in your head, girl," she whispered, letting Laura in, then carefully locking the door behind her.  "You've seen this skinny bod before."        "But I guess I've forgotten how gorgeous it is," Laura breathed.  Should I kiss her now? she wondered.  God, I want to just drag her to the floor and ravish her like a platoon of the Roman army.]  you are the only author to really show this way between women.  it is either about the seduction or the heated fucking.  only you show this gentle way of women with each other.  You show the desire and want of greeting your lover like this.  Plus, you show that fishing for compliments that we all seek and desire.  What woman doesn't want to be told she is beautiful and wanted.   I will wax poetic or hot and nasty when a woman prods me for such words.  I think you can show this and give it the justice you do because again have created a world of liner time.  Only with time and getting to know a woman can you experience moments like this.  I have been greeted like this a few times by a woman I didn't know but that led to raw sex and not the sweetness here.  Only familiarity and love can cause such exchanges and I love reading it.  I just love banter and yours is so natural.  I have always reveled in the humor of your stories [Ty shook her head.  "I've been shaving my pussy . . . to make it suitable for dining," she said with a straight face.  Then she broke up, seeing Laura's smile.]  I guess humor is a gift and you must have it.  other stories don't have it so I guess they either are not to humorous in life or just have the skill to use in their stories.  I love humor and combining it with sass like here would have my blood boiling for Ty. 

//  I am smirking at Ty going on about her skinny body.  It is obvious she is confident of her body though she may wish for a more voluptuous body sometimes.  I know Joann wishes she had bigger hooters like me and Maria and we wish we had smaller tits.  I guess one is never totally happy with one's body.  I am only too happy to gush over my baby's body and letting her know who wonderful she is.  Too often with newbie hets I can tell that men have beat them down and I just gush over them and devour them totally while I constantly tell them how hot they are and what is lovely about them.  I always feel that you find that one thing that you like best and focus on it and soon the rest of her is totally hot too.  Confident women need to constantly buck up and empower women beaten down by man's world and there are, unfortunately some cruel women also.  I love seeing a woman becoming confident and seeing her will come back with my loving influence and those of my other angels I introduce her too.  I make sure if she is beat down to let them know ahead of time so we can all help pump her up and support her as we try to help her heal and find herself.  I love how you use different wording to describe Laura's lust for her angels.  One gets tired of the everyday language of other writers [She still felt her Roman army lust for Ty's lissome, near-naked, dark body, but she was also in the habit of often swimming after work with Makeeda, and the water beckoned.  The corners of Ty's voluptuous mouth moved upward in a slightly amused grin.  She crooked one long, black finger at Laura.  ]  love your description of Laura's lust and then using words like "lissome" and "voluptuous".  Those are not words I see normally in erotica.

//   I am so happy to find an author that lets her women have one liners.  Other stories are so bland in that regard.  When I hear such banter from my angels I know they are witty and confident.  That is the thing that attracted me to Laura and Karen from the first stories.  Here were two confident business women who were clearly defined and given wit and sass.   Continuously over the years you have given me woman after woman like this.  With others it is bland characters while these are living and breathing.  I smile remembering so many wonderful women in your stories.  I know I have forgotten some but someday I want to reread this epic from the first chapter and smile and masturbate to all the wonderful women you have created for us the reader.  You show more of this character uniqueness here [ Ty grinned back over her shoulder as Laura followed her.  "What does it matter?  They're not going to be on long anyway."        Laura could not keep her eyes off Ty's swelling black bottom.  Ty might not think it was a good one, and it certainly wasn't in the Jane or Dee Dee category (few were), but it was still beautifully shaped, high and up-curved, and Laura was about ready to skip the swim and beg to dig her fingers into it, and suck and bite and kiss it ravenously. ]  you show us Ty's sass and confidence.  Then you show how Laura is able to compare her lovers to one another.  You are the only author to create an universe that has a true flow of time.  The harem is to busy having sex and trying to work in real life events.  The other multiple chapter stories had only characters fucking.  I never once saw such loving comparisons.  I love it when I see Laura comparing asses or breast like this.  I do this with my lovers.  I will think a newbie reminds me of one of my arch or regular angels.  This is real life and you show it so well.  I am happy to see Laura eyeing herself in the mirror after she gets in the bikini.  I try not to think to much of myself but I do love to gaze at myself in the mirror when I am wearing something smoking hot.  Knowing that I will be igniting the fires of love in my angels hearts and cunts.  Nothing wrong with a little preening now and then.

//  love how you show them just sitting around the pool enjoying some wine.  It is the little moments in life that help to bind one to a newbie and to old lovers.  Just sharing some quiet time as you get to know a new person and reaffirming your ties to old lovers.   One shot stories don't have the time and authors of multi part stories are too interested in sex to have the quiet moments.  I give you credit for taking the time to show us these moments.  Of course with me it simply sets my loins to simmering waiting to immolate itself in fucking bliss later.  I am smiling at the "buppie" comment.  I am always hearing from by black and Puerto Rican lovers words like "wigga" and "wigger" as they are fucking me hard.  snarling at me that I am nigger wanabe as they are slamming a hard dick deep up my ass or cunt or gripping my head / hair as they slide their black dick down my throat as I caw and pump my head up and down their invading dick as they racially insult me.  looking up as I have a dick stuffed down my throat as they slap me and spit in my face and palm it into my face and hair as I groan and bore my eyes into theirs begging for more rough treatment.  I like your little cultural references and humor ["I know," Ty drawled again in her best Lauren Bacall manner.  "You look better."        "Oh god, I think I'm being seduced."]  I never see such witty remarks from others.

//  sigh , you so now how to make a woman hot [Ty's black eyes twinkled.  She stood and walked over the edge of the pool.  Then she quickly loosened the two strings that held the top of her bikini in place.  The whole thing fell away revealing the small swellings of her delectable mini-breasts and her large, jutting, coal-black nipples, springing up from their puffy little areolas.]  I so love these boyish figure girls myself.  Kind of like fucking a teenage girl that has only begun to fill out.   I just go nuts for little titties like these.  A while back Shavondra called me and told me she wanted me to come over the next afternoon.  I was free and quickly agreed.  I drove down to the beach and arrived at her apartment.  When I rang the bell a hot looking black woman answered the door that was obviously her sister.  The "roommate" Shavondra kept talking about.  She was about the same height as her sister but had smaller titties showing through her t-shirt as she was braless and I could tell that she had conical nipples with thick stems ready for sucking poking through.  I noticed her striking green eyes.  She smirked and told me Shavondra would be home a little late and that her name was Lakita.  I admired her huge firm ass and long hair with its loose curls.  I followed her into the kitchen.  She was making dinner and told me to sit at the table.  I did and we made small talk as she cut up vegetables.  It is so cool getting to know a new lover.  She turned around and asked me if I liked fucking her sister.  I told her yes and she told me she was better.  She walked over and got on her knees in front of me and she cupped my head and brought our mouths together and I groaned as her tongue roughly invaded my mouth.  the next few minutes are sort of blur as she raped my mouth and quickly undressed us.  I was soon on the edge of the chair and her mouth was buried in my cunt as she sucked my off with expert skill.  My legs were spread wide and my hands were pulping my tits and pulling my nipples as she pumped my cunt with three fingers and lashed my clit.  I came so fucking hard as I cried out and the chair barked as the legs skidded across the floor as I jackknifed and humped wildly as she sucked my clit down her throat with vicious sucks.  When I recovered I sat her up on the countertop and sucked her nipples hard and deep as I felt her pulpy areolas  fully engorge and her nipples swell even more and become rock hard.  I teeth raked and gnawed as I jerked her cunt off and raked her spongy front cunt walls.   I pounded her nerve bundle and twisted my fingers to work her whole fuck hole.  I kissed her deeply and sucked her lips out and mashed our mouths tight and slammed my tongue down her throat before sucking her nipples down my throat as I pounded her squishing cunt as I felt her juices splattering everywhere.  I felt my heart pound as she screamed in all caps as her ass lifted and slammed the counter four or five times as I know hooked my fingers and worked her g-spot as she gushed cunt juice everywhere and her head slammed the cabinets as her legs spasmed and kicked air and her heels pounded the cabinets below.  I used my free hand to work her free nipple with hard squeezes and twisting pulls as I sucked her other nipple savagely and pounded her gushing cunt until she was spent and limply drooping against the cabinets over the countertop. 

//  I heard smirking applause and turned and saw Shavondra naked and her groin all wet as she sucked her fingers that had been pumping her cunt.  I walked over to her and pulled her tight to me as I rammed my tongue down her throat.  I carried her to the living room as she told me to get my strap-on.  I hurried over and got my favorite strap-on out of my carry on bag and got fastened and laid her over the sofa arm and parted her thighs and shoved my dick deep into her already soaking wet cunt.  I stroked her hard and deep and got a foot up on the sofa arm and leaned forward and rammed fucked her cunt.  I fucked her for a long time before I got on the sofa and she mounted me and rode me reverse missionary.  I saw Lakita come into view with a black, eight inch dick bobbing in front of her and she got one knee between us and the sofa back and pulled Shavondra ass cheeks open and slowly pressed her dick into her asshole and pushed it in with firm forward pressure.  I so loved seeing Shavondra's face slashing up close as her eyes squeezed shut and she whimpered as her asshole was invaded.  Soon we were sawing our dicks hard and fast into her willing body.  I wrapped my arms around her body and grinded her firm tennis ball tits into mine making our nipples dig and poke as we kissed heatedly as our tongues stabbed from mouth to mouth.  I felt her mouth pulled from mine as I looked up and saw Shavondra licking her asshole off her sister's dick as it was pumped in and out her mouth.  she then tilted it down and I moaned tasting Shavondra's asshole on her sister's cock.  we fucked her hard with Lakita mounting her asshole repeatedly as she pressed Shavondra back down with her hands as she now pumped her dick straight down making its cock head ride into my shaft sliding fully up her clenching cunt.  Shavondra came with loud groans of gutturally bliss as her body jolted and gave short spasming jolts.  I rolled off the sofa and sat up by the other arm of the sofa as Lakita now did her spoon.  I smiled when Shavondra rolled off and pivoted around and got spoon in front of me as I laid down on the sofa towards her sister and slipped my dick into her asshole and pounded her shit hole hard deep making her body jolt and heave as her mouth now sucked her sister's cock clean as she sat up.  I moaned seeing her head bob up and down and then slowed down as I slammed my cock into her asshole making her squeal and she slowly sank her head down her sister's dick until it was fully buried in her throat making it bulge out as rode her head up about two inches and back down until her nose was in her sister's groin and did this four or five times.  Soon she was doing it for me as I sat up and Lakita leaned down and spooned her asshole hard and deep with savage thrusts up her clenching shit hole.  I felt my eyes roll back as she sucked her ass juice off my dick and then her lips were kissing my harness as she took my nine and half inches fully down her throat and came off it with spit flowing heavily from her mouth before clenching her lips on the cockhead and keeping them clenched as her head rode back down my shaft until she was licking my harness the fucking slut.  I had a mini orgasm with that one making me gag fuck her throat as she gripped my thighs to keep her head anchored as I pounded her throat as I cursed and gripped her hair tight to ride my dick up and down her lower wind pipe.  I loved how she came so fucking hard as she sucked her ass of my cock yet again as Lakita gripped her ass hard to pound a truly harrowing anal gasm' out of her exploding shit hole.  The way she let my dick slip from her mouth as her body was throttled and jolted hard and her cheek wallowed on top my dick as it laid on my sweaty belly.

//  sigh the beauty of multiple partners is how the sex just gets so intense and prolonged.  Soon I was pounded by two dick and then we did Lakita.  We took a shower and gave ourselves nice warm enemas.  We slept for a few hours and then we got our strap-ons on again and we did Shavondra again except now we were rough and mean as we pulled her hair and chocked her as she gasped and eyes rolled back as she came violently.  The way they fucked me like this.   I felt my womb simply explode as they spanked me and pulled my hair viciously and then did me spoon on the bed as they took turns taking my asshole and pussy and choking me so fucking hard and jerking my head viciously by the hair with short jerks and then twisting my head back until my neck couldn't go back anymore.  Feeling Lakita's hands around my throat and squeezing so fucking hard as I choked and gasped harshly as they let me breath before throttling me again and again until I came with horrible jackknifes and gasped and guttural groans when they were not choking off.  Then doing Lakita and being on the bottom as Shavondra pounded her dick straight down her asshole and pulled out repeatedly to make her do atm as Lakita licked and sucked with hard corkscrews of her head.  Then as she came so violently as I felt her throat in my fingers as I gasped her cruelly as her eyes bulged and rolled back as she thrashed and jackknifed as a multiple orgasm kept her thrashing for almost a minute of purest fucking bliss possible on earth.  Letting her get some harsh gulps as they rattled deep in her gullet before choking off again for ten seconds or so again as I felt her puffy nipples digging and slamming into my mashed tits.  She was one spent whore let me tell you. 

//  clothing is another thing you take advantage of.  I can't think of another author that actually uses clothing as part of the seduction.  They simply come off almost always off camera.  Maybe a few have them take off in camera but they just come of quickly without ever anything to make it memorable.  Like this [Ty smiled lazily.  "Nobody gets a crack at me but present company."  Her fingers began toying with the strings that held the bottom half of the bikini in place.  "Speaking of which . . . I wish she would get on with it."        Laura rose from her chair and approached Ty on the apron of the pool, her eyes still riveted to the girl's fingers, which were still toying with the strings of her bikini bottom.  She reached Ty before the knots came loose.  Her hand rose, skimming up Ty's near-naked body over her long, hard stomach to one of her small breasts, cupping it, though there wasn't much to cup.  Still, she could feel Ty's hard nipple jutting against her palm.        "Why don't you let me do that?" she whispered against Ty's cheek.        "Only if I can do yours," Ty breathed.  "Or rather, undo it."        "Deal.   Me first." ]   a scene like this is something that Laura and Ty will remember between them.  like I say, these are the little things that make life special.  Little moments that you both can look back on and reflect.   Only you give us these moments.  You have women with actual dialog and set up a situation and then deliver the payoff.  Women use all their wiles and tools to make their lover hot for them and I am thankful to find an author who recognizes and has the skills to write it.  really like all the tactile touching you show here.  I so love to run my fingers all over your body and like reading it.  it just sets ones pussy on fire when you run your fingers over her body and grip and squeeze it.  plus, again you are the only author that consistently lets her women have dialog that is actually witty and loving and really moves the story forward.

//  this is a scene par excellence.  You detail them getting into the pool after stripping nude and how they compete and Laura really whips her ass in the contest.  What is cool is the fact they are having a contest.  Nothing like this is in other stories.  Plus, there is a history here.  Because this is a multiple part story a long term reader knows that Laura swims with Makeeda and thus is ready for any contest of swimming.  You mention the fact that Ty may be a swimmer but the odds have to be long.  Of course she isn't and Laura wins like she thought she would.  it is just so cool that you have the situation to be begin with and then having the history to see the outcome before it even starts.  That is just so awesome to see and getting to participate since I know the back history and Ty doesn't.  that really draws the reader in.  The ending is precious and so endearing and so clearly is leading to intense lovemaking in the near future [Clearly beaten, Ty ceased her frantic effort and seconds later stood up in shallow end, walking toward Laura, laughing and streaming water and impossibly ravishing like a black Venus rising from the waves, except that her body was not opulent like Venus' body but instead lean and hard and shiny and fiercely desirable to Laura at that instant.        "No fair!" she was laughing.  The pool water streamed from her lithe black body, beading up on her shoulders, bejeweling her naked breasts and swelling black nipples, glimmering like diamonds in the triangular patch of hair she had left, when she shaved, above her pussy.  "No fair, Laura!  You cheated!"        "Did not," Laura laughed, moving toward.           "Did too!   You didn't tell me you were good!  How was I to know you could swim like that?"]  this is so beyond cute and such a great scene.  This is something that I so wish I could see in a film.  I can just see the water running down Ty's hot body and feeling my cunt nectars starting to pulse and slavering my pelvis and running down my thighs or here milking off into the water.  You words are so like fucking poetry sometimes as I you describe the water on Ty's body.  I must humbly bow down to your skills.

//  I am so there as they clench in the shallow water and wrap  their arms around each other and pull themselves tight as Laura quickly inhales a nipple down her throat.  I so love this moment when bodies come together and love is burning brighter.  You use so many kilobytes to set this up.  Thus, when the moment of first clench occurs the reader is already primed and ready to ignite along with these women.  I can just feel your arms snaking around my body as our mouths clamp tight or I feel your lips on my face, throat or upper body or latching onto a nipple like Laura here and feeling heat and electricity filling my tit and flowing south.  I so love feeling our tits mashing and grinding each other as our stomachs wallow and we part legs to let twats hump thighs as we kiss in deepening love.  I can just feel my nostrils flaring in rising lust.  I have to smirk as they have to go inside and turn down Ty's parent's bedspread.  I love to fuck and be watched but not by strangers if can't control it.  I only want the invited parties so to speak gazing upon me and my fuck mates.  I so love having newbies tell me such words [Laura pulled her close.  She purred into her neck.  "And I'm so glad.  I've looked forward to this."        "Me too," Ty said, panting again.  "Oh god, that feels good.  It feels so good to push against you like this and kiss you.  I can't believe I lived most of my life without knowing how good it feels."        "You're all wet, still.  We're going to get Mama's sheets wet."        "They'll dry out," Ty said, pulling Laura down on the huge bed, her eyelids now heavy with sex.]  I love hearing such words and seeing my love slut all doe eyed and then devouring her sweet flesh as she quivers in my arms and her eyes spasm and her body jolts as I ride her hard into my thigh or I make sure our mounds are rubbing and grinding as we clench and roll around.  I love the line about licking the water droplets off Ty's flesh.  I so love to lick up your sweat and taste your essence when we are fucking heatedly.  To wallow my check in your pooled sweat and get it all over my face and wallow our sweaty tits and mounds together to get our sweat all mingled and merged as we squirm and pull each other tight as mouths explore each other wetly and or devour tits and other tasty upper body treats.

//  I like this next part a lot [And she proceeded to try to do just that, starting at the bottom with Ty's long, thin legs, running her lips up the inside of her shapely though slender calves, licking the droplets behind her knees, making Ty's legs hop and twitch helplessly as she tried to bear the sweet sensations caused by Laura's skillful mouth on her body.  When Laura's tongue reached her inner thighs, she could bear it no longer.  She reached down with her long arms and grasped Laura's wet hair, dragging her gently upward.        "No . . ." she breathed, panting more heavily now.  "Do that later.  I want to kiss you and fuck like crazy.  I can't wait.  I've been dying for this moment."        "But I want to lick your whole body," Laura protested, making a faux pout.        "Later."]  I like never being sure where Laura is going to lover her woman.  With other authors it is always standard eating pussy and always in the classical position.  Maybe some dildo play but again the classical positioning always.  Boring.   I can't remember seeing others having her woman kiss the lower legs of her woman.  I know I must have every once in awhile but you show this continually.  Not over much but it shows it up randomly like it would in real life.  I have always like how you show the woman receiving reacts to the loving ministrations being performed on her body.  The way Ty "hop and twitch".  Other authors may say something is being done but they never detail how the woman receiving reacts or how she feels.  They never describe the pleasure of the woman doing the licking and kissing.  They again leave it so bland.  I so love to work your whole body.  I love to kiss feet and will suck on your toes if nice and clean.  I just don't have a fetish on it.  but it is nice to suck each toe in turn and let my long tongue lick and lathe as I suck on gently and worm my tongue all between her toes and over them to the next toe.  Makes them gasp and squirm.  Kissing the bottom of her feet and up the top and then her lower legs.   I have reduced women to jello with just this worship.  For me just kissing and rubbing all over you provides such great pleasure.  you show here again that ebb and flow of lovemaking that I like seeing.  Other authors continually insist on being so linear.  It just happens along a predetermined path and that is that.  One reason for that single mindedness I just realized is because of the lack of communication that I talk about.  This can be both verbal and nonverbal.  Since other authors don't have any between lovers during sex then it can't change paths can it?  unless one just dominates totally and that is not how women fuck except as a change up and extreme sub and dom but even there their is  communication.  I think most authors are to focused on the "story" and not the life so to speak.  We humans communicate.

//  I am smiling as Ty and Laura's mouths come together with ravening fuck hunger and their teeth clank together rather violently.  I like how you show these little mishaps.  Other authors don't show the little hiccups that occur sometimes.  I guess only you with the time you take can show this.  The others mostly have one shots to get to the action and others keep it just to the seduction and sex.  I personally like these little moments.  I know that huffing and backing off and rubbing my tongue over my teeth front and back to make sure everything is still in place.  Then back to mouth raping!  I love how you detail the fuck hunger in their eyes.  How the raw open passion for each other is burning their souls and cunts for intense loving.  I so need to see that cat-eyed look as my slut melts for me and the way she just melts for me.  with your words you convey this so well.  With words like this [She knew what they both wanted.  They wanted to come, they didn't want to wait.  They wanted to come while holding onto each other, looking into each other's eyes, screaming uncontrollably into each other's face, wrenched by the ecstasy that was now beckoning them.  Slow, deliberate fucking could wait.  This had to be accomplished immediately.]  this is so on target; the heat and hunger.  This is how I usually get.  Wanting to consume you completely and repeatedly.   Love how Laura rains kisses all over Ty's face to make her swoon and then moves south to devour her little titties.  I so love sucking all tits.  Kapri has even smaller titties than Ty and I just love sucking all her tit meat into my mouth and tongue lashing her long stiff nipples.  Supper sucking and teeth clenching as I pull back and rasp with my teeth and lips as I squeeze in on her little swellings and trying to swallow as she cries out and writhes in pleasure.  love it especially when she starts clawing the bed or carpet or latches onto my hair and pulls and jerks my face into her rib cage and is gurgling and cursing her pleasure out.  Sigh, more of that communication I so adore.  Ty is one of those women that can come by titty sucking only.  That is a rare woman.  Sometimes Shari and dodie can but I am a tactile kind of girl and usually add fingerfucking almost immediately.  I want to totally love assault you but sometimes they request a titty sucking only orgasm and we try to deliver.  But like you show sometimes it just doesn't happen for some reason.  It is just so rad that you show how sometimes you simply can't come a certain way and you let your lover know that you want to do something different that you are not reaching it like you are doing it.  this I can say with one hundred percent certainty I have never seen anywhere else.  Everything else is Hollywood .  Perfect.  I like you showing fucks morphing and especially the communication of lovers letting each other know what they want and need.  This is how women are so superior to men.  This communicating and actually listening.   I love how you show Laura immediately abandoning trying to make Ty come again with just titty sucking.  Maybe other authors find this hard to do or mundane but it is so true on.  I love hearing (listening) to my woman and doing want she wants and how she wants it.  I may try to lead and cajole but I strive first and foremost to meet her needs.

//  I like how you show the use of fingers.  again this is something I don't really see with other writers.  It is always mouth or strap-on.  Once in a blue moon some trib.   I so love fucking a sodden, swollen cunt like this ["Oh honey . . . of course . . . of course," Laura purred to her, ravishing her beautiful face and neck again with hot kisses and now slipping two fingers into Ty's tight, greasy cunt and fucking her with them rapidly, lovingly, passionately, while she kissed her.  "But you are going to come.  You are going to come for Mama.  Mama wants you to come fast."        "Unh!   Unh!  Oh god, yes!" Ty exclaimed, her body suddenly responding wildly to Laura's probing and rubbing.  "Yes!  Unh!  Unghhhh!" ]   have to love the kissing of the face and neck.  I so love to give feather kisses and sucking lip kisses where I suck in a little skin and wetly lip and tongue.   Love how Laura is urging her on with sweet love words.  This is so fucking potent.  A couple nights ago Joann was out with another junior partner fucking a client blind.  I was on my knees beside maria's hip and ramming two hooked fingers up her tight cunt raking her nerve bundle.  I was using my left hand to buzz her rock hard clit.  I just love feeling her juices pouring over my right hand and the squishy sounds her cunt was making.  The feel of her nubbin underneath my fingers.   watching her face slash and freeze and the way her hair jerked and flopped.  Bending down from time to time to suck a nipple hard and deep.   I fucked her long and hard as she thrashed and moaned.  She began to rhythmically (with some spastic jolts) swirl her hips making her tits swirl and jolt.  She would squeeze her tits hard and twist and pull her nipples making her spasm and her pelvis jump.  The way she used two hands to pull her tit back and suck on her long, thick nipples making her groan gutturally.  Finally, she started to cum as she whinnied and cawed and her pelvis just lurched up off the bed as four fingers know wedged fucked her exploding cunt as I slapped and forked her clit with two fingers alternating between the two.  Gods I loved her jackknifes and how one hand clenched my forearm while the other pounded the bed as she moaned and spasmed as eyes juddered in her eye sockets so fucking hot.  Gods I love making her cum so fucking hard.

//  Laura again morphs the fuck.  I especially like seeing her thoughts as she simply decides she wants some trib action.  Sigh, I love reading a characters thoughts.  Like I say other authors keep everything so Hollywood and script flowing.  No reading of thoughts just linear action and fucking.  nice but yours is so much nicer.  Sigh, I so love fucking newbies to lesbian fucking so I can see this [In a second or two Laura had twisted the lower half of her body between Ty's yawning thighs to scissor her, and now pushed her own oozing, gooey slit directly down into Ty's open furrow, looking at Ty's face to gauge her reaction as she began pumping and gyrating deliberately.  The raw, wet, exposed meat of their two cunts met and slid together, and the expression of shock and delight that passed through Ty's glazed eyes was priceless.]  I so love mating our sodden cunts and grinding in such sweet friction.  Feeling our cunts grind and lips mash and stretch.   Most of us shave or keep closely cropped but cunt hair is nice too.  Love the prickly mashing and friction.  The way our cunts just mash and sweep and you can feel her lips on yours and the way your clits will bump and grind and poke sodden flesh.  I so love setting up that rhythm of love and keeping it deliberate but usually losing it and going for the wild finish.   I so love seeing what Laura sees.  A newbies wonder and a pros steamy, focused look as you both hump for all your worth.  You again show that morphing I so love.  I do come across a trib fuck every once in a while but it stays in the position it starts with and that is always the classical scissor position.  Here Laura starts in it but quickly changes her mind and rises up to the vertical and begins to grind and sweep.  I so love this position because of the power it gives me when on top and feeling it while on the bottom.  Where other authors just say the position is assumed and a very slight description of the style.  You tell us with sweet words their striving, beautiful sounds of lovemaking and the cute detail of Ty's whoops.  Sometimes Cindy, dodie, sari and La'Tonya will make there unique, distinctive sound as they ramp up to orgasm.  a vocalization that you will hear if you fuck them regularly.  it is just so cute to hear a vocalization that is a certain woman's alone.  Then you show the sweet orgasm throttling her beautiful black flesh [Then her eyes closed and her back arched, bowing her beautiful, lean body, all gleaming and black like polished ebony, in the air, the tiny swellings of her breasts shaking and quivering back and forth as her flesh began to shudder, followed by a loud cry of release.        "Annnmmnngghiiieeeeee!" she wailed, suddenly wrenched by a fierce shock of coming.  "Mmmnnggghhnnniieeeee!"         "Oh yes, honey . . ." Laura gasped to her, falling and twisting forward to embrace her as she continued coming, though not so violently after the first shocks.        "Aaannnuunnnn . . . aaannnuunnnnn . . ." Ty half-moaned, half-grunted, her long thin body twitching, gleaming with a fine film of sweat that had sprung up where the pool water had been earlier.  ]  I get so tired of other authors just saying "came hard" basically.  You show the sweet details of her body being pummeled and torn apart with fucking bliss.  It takes nouns, verbs, adjectives and adverbs to get this across and only you truly use the whole gamut to let the reader experience it with the women.  so love seeing her body all sweaty with love sweat.  I so love reading words like "fierce shock; violently; half-grunted".  It just tells the reader so well how well Ty came for Laura.  I so love making my sluts cum like this over and over.

//  I love how Laura has left Ty.  All sweaty and quivering.   I so love to leave a slut like this.  We like our house nice and toasty and it so lends to hot, sweaty sex.  Joann and I sweat like pigs and Maria gets all glistening and beading.  I so love fucking them energetically and spent lying all over each other as our sweaty flesh glides and slips in spent, languid love.  our hair all lank and hanging in ropes as our mouths clamp tight and tongues flow down throats still moaning and hitching from quivering aftershocks.  Like the little detail of Laura letting Ty stretch out after their fuck.  You just know when to uncouple to let your woman stretch and purr.  I have to chuckle at the male bashing.  Unfortunately, it is pretty much on target.  Back in high school I was so disappointed by guys who couldn't keep from ejaculating almost immediately.  When you found a real pro it was like wow!  That was one the things that made me quit sport fucking men back then.  Now that I do now I always let a bi angel bring me to them.  I don't give out my phone number to guys and was surprised when I got a call from Anthony.  I asked him point blank how he got my number.  He told me Camille said I would get pissy but he had a proposition for me.  I told him to shoot and he told me he and his twin, Eric, and a first cousin born on the same day wanted to celebrate with a birthday fuck with me as the present.  I felt my cunt getting wet with thoughts of black dick pounding my fuck holes and nearly lost it when I was told the cousin was Tisa who was three years older than the brothers.  I felt my eyes spasm when they told me that the only thing that Tisa loves more than hard dick is sopping wet pussy and especially white pussy.  Anthony whispered to me "I hear you looovvveeee incest".  What could I say.   He also told me to bring my strap-on.  I had been to his apartment a few times so I had no problem three nights later finding it and knocking on the door.  I nearly swooned when a tall black female answered the door in only brief panties and translucent bra.  She had her hair in a big afro and her full c-cup tits and flaring hips and shaved mound poking through her briefs had me almost mesmerized.  I just gazed into her face seeing the brothers lineage in her bloodline.  I was already getting wet.  I saw Anthony and his obvious brother sitting on the sofa.  They introduced me to Tisa who smiled and began to undress me in the middle of the room.  I am such a slut.  I felt my cunt juicing big time and by the time I was stripped nude and she removed her underwear my cunt was running fuck juice down both legs and soaking my perineum.  Anthony told me to "take her hard" and I looked her in the eyes and shivered when she whispered "fuck me like nigger whore baby"  I was love shaking as I reached out and sank my hand into her soft afro and clenched a fist and pulled her hard into my body.  I loved seeing her rebound off me and look up with soft wanting eyes.  I joined our mouths hard and slammed my tongue down her throat as she groaned and slide her cunt up and down my hip.  Soon I had her on the floor and was mouth mauling her tits and deep throat kissing her.  I so loved running my hands all over her body and hard squeezing her tits as I deep throat sucked her thick nipples making her cry out and writhe.  I slide between her thighs and quickly sucked her off while fingerfucking her hard and deep with three plunging, twisting fingers.  I then mounted her face and ground her hard as my cunt swept up and down her mouth as her mouth sucked my cunt petals into her mouth and gnawed and grazed and sucked my cunt inside out while moving up to suck my clit viciously before tongue fucking me hard again.  Gods, I sank both fists into her hair and jammed her face deep into my cunt as it exploded and poured hot, steamy cum into her mouth to overflowing as I jackknifed feeling my tits flop and whiplash as I groaned so harshly and told her "suck my cunt goddamit you fucking nigger!   Suck it good you black bitch!!" as I watched her eyes slit and she sucked my clit even harder. 

//  oh gods, then the brothers walked over all naked and Anthony's eleven inches rock hard and I saw that his brother had nine inches of black steel.  His cock is thick too and with a dangerous looking ballooned cockhead.  I shivered thinking of that invader sinking deep into my asshole and down my throat.  I think he read my thoughts because I was now on my knees bobbing on his dick sucking for all I was worth as Tisa sucked off her cousin with strong sucks and twisting of her head.  I copied her when she bent down and sucked in Anthony's nuts and swished around in her mouth and pulled taunt and smiled making Eric groan hard and deep as I tried to swallow first one nut and then the ohter.  I followed her lead and licked up Eric's shaft with broad tongue strokes before swallowing his cock into my mouth again and hard sucking as I bobbed.  I groaned seeing Tisa rise up and then slowly take Anthony's dick down her throat.  the way he sank his fingers into her hair and jammed her mouth into his groan and gasped her and jerking her head back making her drool spit.  I slowly went down on Eric feeling his large cock head completely filling my throat.  width has always been hard for me.  I clenched the back of his legs and groaned deep in my chest as I forced his dickhead over my tonsils and down my throat and tongued his scrotum as I fully buried my face into his belly.  I choked down some gags as Eric rode my throat and then Tisa and switched and we took the other brother's dick into our mouths and throats.  I especially loved seeing Tisa's head rocked back when Eric rabbit fucked his cock into the back of her throat and then hunched over and slide his bulbous cock head down her throat as she grabbed his legs and short stroked her engorged throat on his cock making it bulge obscenely giving me a mini orgasm that had me squealing on the dick slow fucking my throat.  the brothers were ready for some fucking and soon Tisa and I were straddling the brothers as their cocks sank slowly and completely up our dripping wet cunts.  I adored looking over and seeing Tisa wildly riding up and down Anthony's black dick as her tits flopped and slapped making such beautiful noisy.  Hearing my own tits flop as I gripped the back of the sofa to slam my cunt down into Eric's wild upthrusts.   Hearing myself squeal and whimper as his cockhead pounded deep into my belly.  I had a monstrous orgasm as I ground and wallowed all over Eric's chest and face as he sucked my nipples harshly as I wrapped my arms around his head and pulled him hard to me.  I rose up and moved his dick to my asshole and clenched my teeth as I felt his bulbous cockhead slowly rip my asshole open and sink inside.  He held his cock steady letting my sphincter stretch when Tisa screamed like she dying and jackknifed and thrashed wildly on the dick pounding her cunt.  Gods, soon Eric was stroking his dick deep into my spasming shit hole and I watched as Anthony got Tisa on her hands and knees on the floor and slowly worked his dick into her asshole as she hissed and hands clenched into the carpet but the good anal whore made sure to press back helping Anthony to invade her asshole.  Soon he was stroking his dick ever deeper into her anal passage as he sweated profusely.  I was happy slamming my asshole down onto Eric's plunging dick when he pulled me off and set me down on the sofa and gripped my head and pulled down and I groaned as I slipped his dick covered in my ass juice into my mouth and purred as I sucked clean.  I felt my body contract and lunge when Anthony pulled out Tisa's asshole I could clearly see ass cream dribble down her thighs and he gripped her hair and roughly pulled her around by her afro and she dove on his dick and licked her creamy ass juice off his dick that was easy to see on his black, veined shaft.  I felt my womb flip seeing that milky ass juice licked and sucked up so ravenously as she bobbed and sucked before he threw her head down and mounted her again.  Eric did me spoon on the sofa and I would dismount and get on my knees and atm his cock clean as Tisa would pull forward and sit on her ass and twist her head over her shoulder to accept Anthony's dick dripping in her ass juice and suck it in deep if Anthony didn't rip her off his dick pounding her shit hole and roughly jerk her around by her hair to atm his dick.  these brothers are true cocksmen and soon traded off and pounded us good and hard.  sigh, about a hour later it felt like Eric was lying on the floor as I rode his cock cowgirl taking turns riding his dick into my cunt and asshole.  he growled he was about to cum and I pulled his cock from my asshole and knelt by his hips and sucked his cockhead for all I was worth and was rewarded by his strangled cry as his hips lunged off the floor and he spewed about four heavy bolts down my throat and I sucked his lesser pulses savagely making him whimper.  As I sucked his wilting cock I watched Anthony bending Tisa over the arm of the sofa pounding the hell out of her asshole.  he had one foot on the sofa for leverage and screamed out "goddamn" as he just coiled his hips and slammed them down each time his cock convulsed jism deep into Tisa's ruined asshole as she frigged herself off and began to cum too and was convulsing on the shaft of iron slamming her down into the sofa arm.  Gods that was a good fuck and we fucked the guys twice more that night with our strap-ons making it a tp.  I live for the small things.  The last het fuck was tp with me done first and then we were grudge fucking Tisa hard.  it ended with Eric straddling her hips, him hunched on the balls of his feet slamming his dick balls deep into her shit hole while Anthony was slamming his eleven inches up into her cunt as she was on knees and hands over him.  I was pumping my cock into her mouth that had recently been plundering her asshole.  I could sense the end was coming and pulled my dick from her groaning mouth.   I watched as her body was pounded forward with their slamming thrusts as she jammed back with all her might.  The way her afro whiplashed forward and back.  Eric gripped her shoulder with one hand and fisted her hair with the other and pulled back to help slam his dick into her rectum savagely.  Gods she was so beautiful her head pulled back and her tits whiplashing and Anthony now had a grip of iron on her hips to jam her down and back harder.  I could tell she was about to come when Eric screamed "FUUUCCKKKK" and I saw his ass quiver as he coiled and slammed forward each time his dick spasmed semen down her shit hole.  Anthony followed immediately and his ass almost leaped off the bed each time his cock convulsed jism into Tisa's womb.  Of course she had to cum violently with such a loving end fuck.  I am smiling remembering her feet jerking and wallowing on the bed as her hands pivoted up on her wrists and flopped and jerked as her fingers splayed and convulsed.  That made me have a mini orgasm seeing such fucking beauty.  Gods I love to fuck and watch fucking.  Plus, me and Tisa got in some good pussy sucking and tribbing when the brothers needed to recover.  Gods I love multiple partners.

//  I have to smile as Laura cries out she is so hot from Ty talking about getting fucked and then Ty swarms all over and makes her cum so gloriously.  I so love to hear of women fucking.  doesn't matter if males are involved.  If you give me details of penetration and giving head I am going to get hot.  I have seen stories with voyeurism but you are the only author to show this communication.  Again it is the talking of women that only you show.  I guess monogamous relationships can't do this but I know some do actively play role games and kind of get the same affect.  I just like the fact that you show again women actually talking and reveling in what their partner has to say.  I am beaming even more as Ty is all proud of herself because she made Laura have a gut wrenching orgasm.  again only you show this pride women feel when they make their partner cum hard.  this is especially evident with newbies.  I can just see their sense of worth swell as they make me and others cum so fucking hard and repeatedly.  Especially if they have been beat down by man's world.  You show this and that is so positive and rad.  Thanks.  You now show Laura handling the newbie all smitten and hinting at monogamy.  I have learned how to work with that over the years.  I make it clear up front that I need many angels to keep me happy and my archangels feel the same and they would love to show you themselves.  Tomorrow if you want.  Feeding them new pussy so opens their eyes and hearts.   Most one shots are all about that, what was that Xena quote ….. soul-mate!.... or the great one night stand fuck.  Both are great but that one special woman(s) is unusual and one night stands are not usually the main course for women.  we find women we want to love repeatedly and have our main baby at home.  Like Laura.  I like seeing this.  I just wish that her and Makeeda "saw the light".  They should be sharing Ty and consuming her body till she is totally spent and exhausted.  Eating her cunt, sucking her tits and asshole to ruin and then taking their strap-ons and fucking her to hell and back.   alas, they are not me.  that is what makes life so grand is the difference.  I do see Makeeda showing her warmer side and Laura is not so insanely jealous and maybe they will some day partake of sharing while in the same bed.  I love the fact that Makeeda is getting pussy  while away just like Laura.  It makes me smile.  I love having a universe where we can see the dynamics of life playing out over the years just like I see in my own life.

//  geez, I just felt my womb lurch.  I had forgotten that Ty is an aficionado of anal sex.  I have to smile at Laura acting all shocked.  I think she is still taken aback a little by women who are blunt about their sexual desires.  I want to do it all almost and rarely get nonplussed.  I would be love shaking thinking of hopefully tonguing and fingerfucking her asshole to loosen it up and then sinking my big strap-on completely down her asshole and then making her atm my cock with her hungry mouth.  I am smiling as Laura recalls how shocked Tonya was when she found how hungry Laura and Ty were for anal sex and how they dp fucked Laura.  Poor Tonya did not let them seduce her to backdoor loving.  what a waste.  I do like reading that not all women want to do what Laura wants or plans or other women in the story.  You don't always have success the first time.  Plus, Laura is simply not aggressive in pushing her desires.  We won't actively force any woman against her will but we definitely believe in showing women the truth.  A little way back Maria brought home a client for some fun.  She is a cute auburn haired lass with nice firm small titties and long wavy cunt lips.  Sherry is single bi slut and wanting to play the field and was looking for some hot multiple partner sex.  We spent long hours just eating each other out, fingerfucking and tribbing.  We all kind of snuggled and slept for a few hours.  Maria woke us up and we got strapped in.  we then woke sherry up and she was soon on her knees sucking us off.  we started to fuck her hard and deep in her pussy in various positions and Joann went to invade her asshole while she was riding Maria reverse missionary.  She just freaked out and said her asshole was not made for fucking basically.  We proceeded to fuck her to several orgasms and went to plan B.  Joann let us know with her eyes she was to be the fuckee.  Sherry got strapped in and soon we were pounding Joann's tight box.  Joann was riding sherry cowgirl with her titties bouncing as bucked like a bronco and jammed her pussy down as sherry upthrusted.  Then Joann reversed and started sliding her cunt up and down sherry's dick as got her elbows down between Sherry's feet and slide her cunt up and down lewdly in front of sherry.  Then Maria and I took turns invading her asshole with your dicks straddling their bodies.  We made sure to stay on the balls of our feet so we were up nice and high fucking down so sherry could so clearly see our dicks pounding Joann's asshole hard and deep.  pulling out and gaping her asshole, all red, raw and jagged.  We bent down and tongued her asshole before spearing deep and then pulling out and walking around and letting Joann wolf down as she moaned swallowing her ass juice hungrily.  As one atm Joann the other invaded her asshole in front of sherry's eyes and raped Joann's asshole and gaped her to seduce sherry.  I could see that sherry was stunned and overwhelmed by our lewd behavior and forwardness.  I was grabbing my dick with one hand and ramming in and out Joann's asshole as Maria stuffed her dick down Joann's groaning throat when Joann went into seizures of cuming as her body jolted and jackknifed as I still torpedoed her asshole with hard vicious thrusts.  Maria pulled her dick out of Joann's throat and she whinnied and cawed as her body shook and convulsed.  We then got her off of Sherry and on her side and spooned her as we slammed our dicks into her cunt and then pull out and shove deep up her asshole.  Joann grunted and jammed back and Maria pulled her dick out and turned on her back as Joann rolled on her other side and slipped Maria's cock into her mouth and sucked it clean as I invaded her asshole spoon and pounded her.  Back and forth Joann rolled as she atm'ed our cocks and we fucked her into another orgasm that had her jackknife wildly and screaming in fucking bliss.  As Joann recovered she cleaned our dicks and then I slowly unstrapped sherry from her cock and pushed it to Joann.  I pulled sherry onto top of me reverse missionary and slipped my dick into her tight cunt and began to fuck her sensually as she swooned.  She just whimpered and moaned "nnnooooo" weakly as Maria slowly wormed her dick into her asshole.  we whispered love words to her as she sagged and moaned in pleasure and pain.  We went slow at first letting Maria's dick slowly loosen Sherry's sphincter loose.  I kissed her face gently as I whispered to her how good her asshole felt feeling a dick sliding up and down her colon.  She was swooning by now and moaned things like "oh gooooooddddd, yessssssss, deeper," and back to "oh goooodddddddd".  We gradually ramped up till her body was jolting and jamming as we worked her fuck holes.  She had collapsed limply on top of me when I felt Maria pull out and then Joann moving into position and sliding her dick deep into Sherry's rear orifice and began to stroke it deep up her shit hole.  Sherry groaned like a total whore deep in her throat.  I smiled as I looked when Sherry's head was lifted by Maria fisting her head and lifting it from my shoulder and pushing her cockhead all creamy in milky ass juice between sherry's lips.  I felt my eyes spasm and judder as sherry opened her mouth weakly and Maria began to pump her cock in and out her mouth.  sigh, soon sherry was up on her palms and corkscrewing her head hard right and left on the cock pistoning between her lips.  Using her tongue to lick all around the cockhead as a Maria, then Joann and back and forth kept feeding her cocks from her spasming asshole.  Moaning as my babies pumped their hips and Sherry gave hot head to their ass covered dicks.  She came violently several times as we tp'ed her fuck holes so completely.  We so love seducing women to the truth. 

//  I am smiling as Ty tells Laura that she is all fluttery thinking of Laura fucking her asshole.  Ty I think gets a little buffeted by men when they ram fuck her asshole.  I think she just needs to be coached on how to let go and fully love such fucking, plus, you need to start slow and ramp up.  We didn't take sherry violently until she was totally hooked on anal sex.  Which didn't take long.   She came back over the next week and she was torpedo fucking our assholes and grunting and moaning for it return.  I so loved grabbing her hips and just slamming with all my strength driving my cock fully into her asshole as her body jolted and spasmed in deep anal pleasure.  I so love your word pictures of a woman's body [Laura, watching her, and knowing that she was now committed to some sweet, slow anal fucking which would no doubt leave them both in smoldering cinders, nevertheless wanted to fling herself at Ty's lovely long naked body again and overwhelm her with frantic, unquenchable lust, leaving the rest for later but right now consuming her in a fit of delirious sexual frenzy.  Funny that such a slender, boyish, unspectacular body (so unlike Nyomi's, for example) could have this effect on you, and breathe a mad spark into your slowly simmering lust, fanning it into a raging flare-up.]  I have always worshiped how you describe each woman's body so lovingly and showing how each body type is so fucking divine.  I love em all except the truly overweight women.  I mean some baby fat and padding just gives more flesh to jackknife violently for me and more cushion for the pushing.  You have an eye for all beautiful black women.  just like me except I want to fuck all the races and types.  I loved the voluptuous body of Karen, rina, Ada and these women.  Randi, Joy, Yvette and their willowy builds.  The little shit brickhouses like Carmella, Jane and Dee Dee and other body types.  Each type you describe with such love and focus.  I can so see you worship each of these women and their bodies.  It is so nice to see that worship in stories.  Like I sigh, other authors almost don't describe their women beside general height and size of tits.  That is it.  I know I don't really show the women I talk of.  It is a skill to be able to visualize these women and then bring them to the page.  It is a gift.  I can close my eyes and see their body types in my eyes and fill in the details you give and I see a woman I want to devour and fuck totally.  You inspire the reader to want these women with you wonderful word pictures and overlay it all with sweet character development that leaves the reader swooning with desire and need.

//  now because you allow your women to communicate we see some sweet details.  Like Ty telling Laura she is already feeling her clit and womb jangling as think about the anal invasion to come.  Other authors never tell the reader this because they keep things so superficial and they never have intimate dialog between lovers.  You just don't blurt out such things.  You are confessing your want to your lover or maybe your need to a hot one night stand but this happens through communication.  Since other stories silence dialog once the sex commences you never get these sweet details that you show.  When a lover is telling me with lewdness in her voice and heat in her eyes how she is going to pound my shit hole and make me lick my ass off her dick I can just feel my womb flipping and clit jumping making me clench and my belly contract.  Now a story with out dialog can still be hot with the right details (which I almost never get) but when you have sweet dialog it does add so much to the story ["Let me make love to your beautiful body and your beautiful little ass."        Ty pouted, but this time playfully.  "It is little, isn't it.   Do you like it, even though it's little?"        "I love every firm little inch of it," Laura reassured her, caressing Ty's taut little round buns, wondering how anyone could feel bad about having a lovely ass like this one, just because it wasn't a magnificent bubble beauty, like, say, Bonnie's.  Not everyone can have an ass like that one, Laura thought.  And Bonnie doesn't seem eager for any probing of it, either; like you.  "I love your ass."  She breathed into Ty's shiny black ear and tongued it excitedly.  "I want to fuck your pretty little ass."]  when you have such dialog we get to see one lover stroking another making her preen and peacock for you.  It is so positive and life affirming and I love reading it.  this is what makes a woman a lover and not just a sex partner.  There is nothing wrong with one night stands and women you only fuck with others and never really connect but when you spend time with a woman you want to get to know her and worship her and it takes this kind of dialog for this to happen.  It is caressing your lover with words and your body that truly brings souls together.  When you truly like and care for a person is when sex is truly womb shattering.  I so love doing what Laura is doing to Ty whispering in her ear what she plans to do to her.  I love taking my slut in my arms and kissing her deeply and then all over her face and driving my tongue deep into her ear and wiggling it around making her jolt and whimper and then whisper such words.  After all these years I still make dodie swoon when I am whispering in her ear how I am going to pound her Jewish cunt and asshole so hard and deep.  how I am going to rape her asshole as I choke her and make her go multiple as I grudge fuck her.  I can just feel her lurching into my body as her arms clench me harder and she moans deep in her throat.  I am one of the few woman with the raw strength to take her like total fuck slave and rape her like she needs from time to time.  You show this when Ty is shivering and telling Laura just how hot she is.  This is what I live to hear and adore reading it.  I guess other authors might have this said right before things get going but again silence ensues afterwards.  Have to love reading Ty sliding her long tongue down Laura's throat.  I love using my long tongue.  Use what you got so to speak.  I really love tongue wrestling and fucking with dodie, jill or Shari as our really long tongues are spearing and trying to subdue each other and worming all around our mouths making cheeks bulge and your mouth feel so stuffed as tongues get all wrapped and bulging around each other as they roughly push in and out of mouths as you fight for dominance.  Makes me swoon and I almost always eventually lose to a woman who combat me on a even playing field when tongue dueling. 

//  wow, really love the asking by Laura how Ty wants it.  Ty is all happy to do it missionary so they can kiss and grope easily.  I have to say agree with that totally!!  ["Sure."  She held up her arms.  "Fuck me.  Make it the best ever."        Laura smiled at her, swabbing the dildo with baby oil  " Pressure, eh?  The best ever?" ]   I love to hear my love slut goading me on.  They know that I will bound fuck them so good with such hot words of need and love.  they know I can deliver and will.  I will take you completely and make you cum so many times and hopefully you will do it to me.  I just love again the fact that you show communication between your women throughout the story and not just the beginning like most other authors do.  I have always loved your moment of first penetration.  Again other authors usually just have them shove the cock in.  you show that you need to start slowly with anal invasion [Finished, she capped the small bottle and placed it again down at the end of the bed, then settled back into position, guiding the shiny, greased dildo toward Ty's open groin.  Her forefinger was still oiled, and she slid it easily between Ty's tight little buns, finding the secret aperture with no trouble, sliding her finger into it.          "Unhhhh!" Ty gasped, her eyes watering.  But she pulled Laura down close.  "I've got a secret for you," she whispered.  "This is already the best ever."  She panted as Laura corkscrewed her finger inside her rectum to loosen it.  "The best!" ]   even seasoned pros need that initial penetration to be reasonable to let the sphincter start stretching.  I love how you show Laura using her forefinger to start the anal loving.  I love using lubricating oil, cunt juice or spit to get my dick wet.  I will often just bend my head down and let my spit fall into her asshole and use my cockhead to lubricate your asshole and then push my dick into your shit hole with steady love.  Or making a show and drooling spit on my shaft and pumping it with my hand or getting her to pump it and getting it all slicked and ready.  I so love feeling your sphincter clenching my finger(s) as they invade your rectum.  Pumping slowly with a twisting motion to loosen you rosebud an feeling it give way and working a second finger in to make you truly ready.  Maybe fingerfucking for a while and then pulling out and gripping your ass and pulling apart to tongue your loosened sphincter and stroke your rectum my tongue can reach making your gurgle and push back for it.  moaning as I taste your shit pipe and feel your bowel meat along my tongue and tongue fucking making rutting and lewd noises.  Of course you show your women telling each other how good they are feeling.  Don't such sweet words always make your preen and fuck her even better.  Love the detail of some lip nibbling.  I make my sluts and especially newbies who haven't experienced before moan so hard with this.  Sigh, you do make penetration so fucking rad! ["Get ready . . . here it comes, my darling.  Slowly now . . . slowly . . ."        Ty held her breath and clenched her teeth.  With a little difficulty, Laura got the bulb on the head of the dildo inside, but Ty's rectum was very tight.         "Unh!   Unh!" Ty panted wildly.  "Please . . . don't hurt me!"        " Never . . . never, my darling," Laura purred softly to her, not moving.  "Never.   I would never hurt you."]  I know to go slow especially with anal virgins.  I find a lot of women want it rougher once I show how this brings so much pleasure but you start easy.  You need to get her O ring ready.  I whisper to relax and stay down.  I find a lot of women want to press up when taking them doggy or spoon and I press them down and keep whispering "slow baby, relax baby".  To keep the pain down you need to start slow.  Like I say a lot of women (like me) want the pain but I give my babies what they want.  I am smiling as Ty is crying out to be "easy".  I will deliver as I slowly push my cockhead deeper into your asshole.  last night I was with Belissa and La'Tonya and I can feel my womb clenching as I remember sitting on the bed and watching up close as they took each other's assholes with their strap-on.  Sigh, the looks on their faces!!!  How Belissa growls and pants as La'Tonya slide her dick into her asshole roughly.  The way her head juddered on her stiff neck and her eyes half rolled back.  then how she relaxed and began to thrust back as La'Tonya gripped her ass cheeks and began to pound her anal hole.  Then watching La'Tonya straddling Belissa cowgirl and positioning Belissa's dick to her asshole and stabbing it down (Belissa had tongue fucked and used a glass butt plug to loosen her asshole) and crying out as her head rocked back as half of Belissa's dick sank into her shit hole and they fell into a hot fuck.  soon La'Tonya's ass cheeks were slamming into Belissa's upthrusting hips.  Gods, La'Tonya clenched her teeth so hard and squeezed her eyes so tight as that dick plunged up her asshole and began stroking her.  Then getting into the fuck and getting that spaced out look and face slashing harshly as she gripped Belissa's shoulders to slam her asshole down so their sweaty flesh was slapping and jolting as their groins collided.  I felt my womb lurch seeing a "ten" lifting up and sitting by Belissa's hips and lowering her perfect face to wolf down Belissa's dick all creamy in ass juice and then getting at the right angle to see ass jism all smeared around her rosebud and down her perineum and seeing it pulse out and drip when she lifted her asshole off the pole time after time to suck clean and letting me get in some good atm cleaning too.

//  I so need the details that you give in your fucks that others don't [The shaft was about six inches in when Laura stopped.  She leaned down and kissed Ty, at first slowly and tenderly, but then with increasing passion.  All through the kiss she did not move her hips, simply letting Ty feel the thick stalk embedded deep in her ass, letting her imagine the thrills that lay in store.        "You like?" she murmured against Ty's smooth black cheek.        "God, yes!" ]   I love seeing that picture.  seeing most of your pole jutting out her asshole but several inches still left to plunder anal treasure.  One thing that I don't see in other stories is women doing more than the main act.  First off I think most strap-on is almost always doggy or maybe cowgirl.  I like how you show all the positions.  How the missionary positions allow you kiss and talk softly and sweetly to each other.  I see Laura is letting Ty get used to the invader in her asshole.  I find just feeling that pole is hot.  Feeling your sphincter gripping in and feeling it pulsing pleasure and pain to your ready clit and brain.   Love you showing using words to stroke your woman onwards and upwards.  I find words are so powerful and hate the silence other authors make their women fuck in.  they may have the end squeals of nirvana but not any true communication.  The "harem" author has guttural and slut talk which is great but we do the romantic talking too.  Like I say you show the ramping up of sex.  Most stories are so bland and no details while the "harem" author uses details but somehow he uses to much if that is possible.  You seem to know how to use just the right balance like [Now Ty herself began to move her own hips first, slowly undulating them so that the dildo slid in and out of her ass, a few inches out, then a few back in, fucking herself on it without Laura's help.  Laura had been holding the base of the dildo in her fingers, guiding it in, but as soon as she realized that even with Ty's slow grinding it was not in danger of slipping out, she moved her fingers up to the soupy, slippery open furrow of Ty's inflamed pussy and began gently swirling her fingertips against Ty's nubby little clit.        Instantly Ty became even more excited.  "Oh!  Unnhhhhh . . . nnnnnn . . . oh!"        "Oh, I love doing it this way so I can kiss you!" Laura panted to her, kissing her neck, her throat, her shoulders, her collarbones, even letting her mouth dart down briefly to one small, lovely breast, sucking Ty's erect black nipple hungrily.  Still, she swirled her fingers against Ty's clit, not thrusting, letting Ty herself do the fucking part.  And Ty was eager to keep it up, now gyrating her pelvis a little more rapidly and earnestly, her breath coming quicker, her little whoops now starting up.]  geez, you do it so fucking well.  You have show the initial foreplay, great gash gobbling, initial penetration and now divine progressing anal fucking.  I so love feeling an anal slut beginning to ram back on the stalk invading her asshole.  I am shocked how quickly anal newbies get into it.  well over half I have found are going crazy the first night.  I like to think it is all my foreplay and often letting them do me first that gets them so into it so quickly.  Like I said earlier only you (and that should be all caps) show that multiple assault while loving.  I have never seen one story where the fucker or fuckee strokes the woman receiving clit.  I don't always do it and my sluts don't do it all the time but we do it a lot and it needs to be shown.  Just like you do.   I so love playing with my clit as I am getting drilled.  I just feel the fires leaping and consuming me so much higher and hotter.  I love reaching between my body and my lovers body.  Feeling my hand slip between our sweaty bodies and feeling my soaked clit beneath my swirling and mashing fingers.   or suddenly seizing up when a lover shoves her hand between us and works my clit with her magic making me cry out and mash into those fingers while still trying to shove my body back on the pole(s) invading my body.  For some reason I really find forking and swirling my clit to be so rad when getting dp or tp fuck.  Supporting myself with one hand or elbow when in the classic straddling position and feeling my body lurching and jolting as two dicks are sawing in and out my asshole and cunt.  Or like four nights ago when Maria and Joann were dp'ing my cunt stretching it taunt and feeling both of those dicks as I wormed my hand between mine and maria's body and mashed and squirted my clit around feeling those cocks sawing my cunt underneath my clit as I mashed and swirled.  Gods, I came so fucking hard about a minute later and went multiple as Joann reached down and fisted my hair with both hands and pulled my head back so severally as my shocked wide eyes stared at the ceiling as she kept jerking my head back as I jackknifed and coughed out cries of ecstasies.  I loved how my body was lifted up and felt my hands clenching the sheets as my arms straightened as she pulled my torso so taunt.  I felt my drool flowing out my mouth as my eyes juddered and womb shattered so hard and she threw my head down hard as I collapsed on Maria and groaned so gutturally as I gasped and continued to cum as Joann now wormed her dick into my asshole and they stroked me up to another shattering orgasm.  I so love my babies. 

//  I have always smiled at Laura asking her women does it hurt when it is so obvious that they love how hard she is doing them and I know she could do it so much harder.  Of course Ty is loving it as Laura is beginning to stroke her dick in and out her rectum.  I mean that is heaven on earth isn't it.  the way your asshole just pluses and gushes pure pleasure to your clit and brain.  Geez, all the unique sounds you show.  A few other authors have sounds in their fucking but it after you read a few of their stories you will discover that they use the same sounds or shouted words over and over.  only you keep it fresh.  I mean certain angels do have their tendencies when it comes to vocalizing like Ty's whoops but that is tendency and they make plenty of other rutting noises and you show this.  You show and never fall into a rut.  I find that amazing as writer.  You have written close to 320 stories with most having more than one sex scene and you still keep it fresh and each fuck unique.  I simply find it amazing how you keep doing it again and again after so many years.  like I say you show that ramping to the killer climax we are love and strive for [Then Ty fell momentarily silent, but she was snuffling and pumping more frantically now than ever, her body jerking and stiffening and surging up into Laura's even thrusts.  Laura's fingertips on Ty's smooth flesh were sensitive to the changes in the girl's muscle tone as her orgasm drew nearer, and she realized that a killer climax was approaching even before Ty seemed to know it.        "Oh Laura . . . I'm . . ." ]  we the reader have got to ride this fuck to the coming glorious end.  You keep the magic going by showing us that Ty is approaching the endgame and not just having it happen as so many stories do.  Like I say the "harem" author does show the ramping but it is so sameness now.  Only you keep the magic.  I really love the detail that you show of Laura being in tune with Ty and sensing her climax approaching.  Great lovers (and I like to think of myself as such) tries to always keep in tune with my lovers.  Of course sometimes the orgasm just explodes out of nowhere but usually you can sense it coming and work to make it spectacular by reading her body closely if a newbie and simply knowing it if a regular lover.  Though you may know her body of course you still focus on her deep pleasure of course.  I do think you can sense it before your lover a lot of the time because they are lost in fuck dementia and simply surging and jamming their way to nirvana with a sense of desperation and can't really feel that it is almost upon them sometimes.  That moment of falling over into paradise.  

//  I think this chapter has captured so well the flow of a great fuck from the simmering beginning, the ramping and now the final confligeration [ Oh god!   Oh god!"   The fingernails of her other hand dug into the backs of Laura's shoulders.  She strained and arched her back.  "Oh god!   OH GOD!"        Laura clasped her tightly, and Ty impaled herself on the dildo that was embedded deep in her ass, her whole pelvis shaking and quaking violently as the full force of her climax began to wrench her.  She squeaked and whinnied helplessly in Laura's arms, completely surrendering to the involuntary twitching and sharp convulsions of her body as a shocking orgasm pierced and shook her.        "Auunnggghhh!   OH!  OH!  Auunnngghmmnniieeeee!" she wailed into Laura's ear, at first truly shattered by the blows, but then subsiding into a slow, undulating rhythm as they softened and lengthened out and then faded into lesser wavelets.  Still, this violent portion continued for a long time, Ty groaning and shuddering through successive jolts.  But then the stiffening of her muscles faded.  "Ohhnnnnn!" she now sighed, stretching, flexing her arms and legs, then relaxing as the last feathery sensations of her stirring climax waned.  "Ohhhhhnnnnn!" ]   I like how you show Ty saying her pet sounds and phrases over and over.  I tend to say "fuck, oh shit, slam my fucking ass / cunt, fuck you fucking whore" and such a lot.  Other angels have their whoops and kennings that go up the scale and such and some have their pet phrases.  Joann tends to keen up, Maria whimpers and pleads and dodie gives out guttural growls and grunts.  One thing I have noticed is your judicious use of all caps.  Several authors simply flog this to death.  It takes away the specialness of when a woman really lets it out.  I am loud but I sure don't let it out all caps all the time.  It gets so boring see the same technique used over and over.  when I see all caps with you I know that the woman is experiencing something truly harrowing and exhilarating.  Like I have bemoaned other authors just don't show that final desperation like you are showing here with Ty's self impaling and her quaking pelvis.  Most just say they cum and some like the harem do cover the climax but with such broad brush strokes that you feel like are looking at some five dollar painting and not a masterpiece like your orgasms.  I love how you say "completely surrendering"  that just conveys so much to me.  I too love seeing my woman simply dying from pure fucking bliss as her body is detonating with horrific jackknifes and body convulsions and her eyes are either rolling back or getting that lost I am overwhelmed look.  Watching her face slash and crumple and her limbs thrashing and tearing at what they can grip.  Love the detail (always) of Ty gripping Laura's shoulder with helpless pulses as pure fucking nirvana is consuming her.  It is these details that only you give.  Like how you show the initial "blows" of her orgasm pummeling her body and how it is still consumed with fucking bliss as more waves of orgasmic throes still consume her to a lesser level.  I want to experience every last iota of pleasure possible and I think you show this.  Feeling every divine pulse and convulsion of your womb giving you that pleasure that is so precious and divine.   I know that slow relaxing of muscles and tendons as your body is spent and satiated with orgasmic bliss.  I can just feel my belly unbinding as I come down and my toes and fingers unstiffening and neck uncording.  I am just thankful that one author is so in tune with herself that she can capture the joys of a woman's orgasm.  I have mentioned and it gets reinforced each time a read a batch of new stories just how other authors don't do orgasms justice.  They make them so bland and unimaginative.  I have never found one of your fucks to be boring or formulaic. 

//  I have to smile as Ty is so stunned she can't really kiss back.  I get that a lot.  I know I have done my job when she is still swooning after coming down and I take her mouth and slide my tongue down her throat making her hitch and moan even more with aftershocks.  Pulling her to me and feeling our sweaty bodies grinding and slipping as I pull you close and twine legs.  Maybe I will leave my ever hard dick deep in your body or pressing into our bellies as we writhe and feel that hardness and knowing soon it will be snaking back up hot cunt or tight asshole.  slipping my dick from your spent asshole and lying back and pushing your head down to my pelvis and groaning as I watch you happily like and suck your asshole off my dick as your cheek rests on my belly and you suck on your ass on my dick like a sweet pacifier.  So many ways to end an anal het fuck.  I know Laura must be in heaven hearing Ty going on about wonderful she feels and how it was the best ever.  We all strive to make each fuck the best seeming.  It feels like it a the time and it is so inspires your lover to fuck you with her all the next time.  Sigh, Ty is such a romantic as she kisses Laura finally deeply with her ass still impaled with Laura's dick still buried up her asshole.  I can just feel our love flowing in a circle of love as our tongues merge and swirl while I feel your dick buried up my asshole and or cunt.  I feel like a completed electrical circuit.  I just feel so special and perfected when I am swirling tongues with a lover as her dick is still buried in me.  and for me it is so amplified when I have a dick in my cunt or asshole or possibly fists.  For me it is just perfection.  I am smiling as the story ends with them going out for anther swim and sexily planning further debauchery.  More of that special sharing and loving that only you share.   Another triumph I must say!!

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Chapter 317:

//  I like how this chapter starts with you showing how Makeeda and Laura interact with each other.  This is just so cool how you show women in love communicating and showing how women show their love for each other.  I am smiling so big as Makeeda and Laura are telling each other of each other's loves and dalliances.  I am so happy to see this.  Other stories never show this.  It is always women meeting for the first time and having scorching sex but we never get to see after this moment in time.  The time when you grow together and grow to be more.   That is one thing I so love about this story.  We have gotten to ride along with Laura in her life story.  We have seen her life with and eventually fall away from women when they discover they are not true archangels.  Then meeting the true one and mating together and truly sharing.  Of course I am so happy that Laura and Makeeda understand that only by having multiple partners can you have find true happiness.  Everything becomes old and stale unless you keep new love entering your life.  I am smiling so much as they tell each other of their other loves.  I do wish they would share their stories of love for us on camera so we can get hot with them.  Another thing that is cool about Laura's story is the fact that we have been able to see some growth with both women.  If one has read Laura's saga from the beginning we see that she has learned to overcome her insane jealousy and the inverse of beating herself up over and over when she satisfies her natural desires for pussy.  One should never ever! deny oneself new love.  with this pairing we get to see growth with both partners.  Makeeda at first was so hard on Laura because she was afraid to do anything that might jeopardize her possible career plus she was still getting over a long term relationship.  To be truthful I was kind of anti Makeeda because of her hard ass nature because of the above mentioned.  But Makeeda won me over with time.  She won me over because she grew and became more than she was.  What is so cool is that this story allowed this to happen.  You are the only author to create a universe that has a timeline and then has the women to grow within this universe.  You are the only author to create something more than one shot stories and then actually allow their characters to be more than just characters that fuck.  What is really nice is to show love so clearly like [Makeeda shrugged.  "Maybe it would.  Maybe not.   You're always here for me.  You love me.  I know it.  That's what counts."] in a lot of the one shots you get the soul mate kind of statements.  It is always so nice to see this, I just wish they could fill their stories with the scorching sex that you do.  Like I say, the longer multipart stories never have anything close to this kind of emotion and bonding.  It is showing this true emotion and caring that truly makes this story above just erotica.  It makes it real life.  Of course it is nice to have a story that gives both plot, character development and still great fucking sex!!

//  I have to smirk at Laura's observation that listening to each other talk about their other loves made for heated fucking between her and Makeeda.  I find this to be so true.  I was at frankie's dance studio for a little fuck time last Sunday.  Often it is just me, dodie and the crew from the studio.  We were all relaxing and dodie prompted Stacy to tell me about her new love.  They hired Stacy about a year ago.  She is cute auburn haired lass with light freckles and vibrant green eyes.  She is titty challenged as she likes to say.  I know she wishes she wasn't so flat chested but we love sucking her long nipples and slapping or flogging her flat chest as she moans and groans.  She handed me her cell phone and I went to her photo folders as she started telling me about Julia.  Stacy told me and I soon saw that she is a blond fox with large gourd shaped tits with puffy nipples.  I felt my cunt getting wet.  She had come into the studio for the jazzercise and aerobics classes to get her figure toned up after having a child.  Her child is about two.  She was wanting to get her figure back fully after her child.  Her husband is a big success in business and is an elected official.  She has green eyes I saw as I started accessing the folders.  I had to smile.  Had folders of her clothed, naked, them together, them fucking with a folder of pov pictures.  Dodie then took the phone and started a video and I had to moan as I saw Julia straddling dodie as she fucked her cunt and Frankie was sliding her cock down Julia's throat and Stacy was pounding Julia's asshole so fucking hard making her head jolt on frankie's dick and her long hair herk and jerk.  Then I really moaned as Stacy pulled her dick out and Frankie got up and walked around to Julia's ass.  Almost in perfect sync Frankie sank her cock deep into Julia's ass as she cried out and Stacy slipped her dick into Julia's mouth who started to suck and bob on it with moans of deep pleasure.  Dacie asked me if she took good movies and I had to smile at her and shake my head yes.

 

//  Stacy told how she felt connected to Julia and thought she was responding but she could never really seem to get as close as she wanted to.  But after several cycles of classes she saw she was not getting anywhere so she stopped trying and decided to just be friends.  I had to smirk at this part.  It seems that Julia then seemed to suddenly get more open and seemingly amorous but now Stacy was hesitant and didn't want to be hurt anymore.  This went on for months with now Julia pressing and Stacy the fool was now resisting.  I have heard this story a few times over the years.  straight girl resists lesbian until she no longer presses and then all of the sudden she seems to see the light.  Now I will immediately devour you but a lot of girls are like Stacy.  It is crazy when the script gets flipped and the lesbian is acting like the straight girl.  About a month ago Julia hung out after aerobics class and asked Stacy if she could giver her a massage.  Stacy had told her earlier that she is certified.  Stacy said yes of course and went to get the massage room ready but Julia looked her in the eye and told her that she wanted to do it at her home.  She didn't feel comfortable at the studio.  Stacy didn't have another class that day and she was feeling stirrings of hope though she kept telling herself that nothing was going to happen.  Just like a Hollywood movie.  Needless to say they went to Julia's home and went to Julia's bedroom and Julia went into her bathroom to get ready.  Stacy got her massage oil and pulled the bed spread back.  she heard the door open and when she looked up she said her eyes nearly bugged out and her cunt convulsed when Julia came out stark naked and looked at her sultry and walked sexily over to her and ask her if she had never seen a naked woman before.  She got on the bed and Stacy went to put a towel over her ass and Julia looked back and told her drop the towel on the floor and to please strip off her leotard.  Her skin was sensitive.  Like I say sometimes the script gets flipped with more timid dykes.  Stacy stripped and was shaking as she got her hands oiled up and started to work Julia's neck and shoulders.  Stacy was all far away eyed as she told me how Julia was moaning and she couldn't help but let her hands roam down Julia's ribs and start to massage the sides of her tits and how her breath caught as Julia rose up and Stacy ran her hands underneath and cupped her tits and began to massage them fully as Julia now moaned deeply.  Julia rolled over and pulled her down and their mouths came together hungrily.  Their tongues coiled wetly and Stacy said she groaned deep in her belly when Julia began to suck on her tongue and bob on it like a cock.  Stacy told of how their limbs twined and tongues flowed down throats and they instinctively moved into a sixty-nine and Stacy was shocked at how good Julia sucked her off to a bucking orgasm and then how she came so hard and fully when Stacy recovered and then sucked her off.  I was regaled with such hot details of how Stacy sucked her cunt inside out and worked her berry sized clit with hard sucks and tongue lashing and how Julia wailed and cursed and came so fucking hard.  how Stacy discovered that Julia had been suppressing her lesbian urges since college and meeting her husband but she couldn't anymore.  She needed to explore her bi side again and Stacy was the woman who made her cunt burn and boil.  She told Stacy how she masturbated to  thoughts of her and how when her husband fucked her it was Stacy she was thinking of wishing it was her with a strap-on.  Stacy was so in heaven when Julia went into the closet and brought a two headed dildo and soon they had it stuffed into both of their cunts and they jammed and surged into crippling orgasms.  They rested and then Julia begged Stacy to ride her face and she did hard as her cunt exploded all over her face getting cum all over her face and into her hair.  How well Julia sucked her cunt to orgasm after orgasm.  how they got in the shower to clean up so she could go to pick up her little girl and Stacy sat on the floor of the shower and ate her out as Julia massaged her tits and pulled her nipples and then Julia was on the floor and got Stacy to face the wall and sucked her off from behind and kept pulling her ass cheeks open and tonguing her asshole and finally getting her tongue into her bung hole and fucking it and rubbing her cunt off as Stacy had an earth shattering orgasm as she screamed so loud in the enclosure making the tiles echo her cries of pleasure.  how she swooned when Julia asked if she had a strap-on when she got up and whispered in her ear and Stacy moaned yes.  how she had strong aftershock when Julia whispered she wanted her strap-on deep in her cunt and paused and then kissed Stacy's ear softly and then whispered "and deep up my tight fucking asshole."  needlessly to say, their next session of love fucking involved a lot of ass raping strap-on sex.  I was glassy eyed by now and I looked around and I saw everyone else was also even they knew the story.  My gods we feel on each other like rabid dogs and fucked hard for hours.

 

//  we now see that this chapter is going to be with amber grant.  I have to like this character a lot and sure wish I had such a woman in my life to pamper and spoil me from time to time with the lifestyle only the very rich can provide.  I have read other stories of rich woman taking lovers who are not rich.  But again like so many things in other stories the women are kind of bland.  You just know they are rich and want a certain woman who is not rich.  What I like about amber is we see that she has that certain air that people have when they are super rich.  They know they are special and expect to pampered.  In fact they think it is their birth right.  They don't know of a different way to live.  I have never been with such a person but I see the haughty air with those who have come from some money and gone to private and boarding schools.  They just have an air of superiority.  I sense this same air with amber but you have put nuances in her character.  She is spoiled and yet she has not been corrupted by it.  she has good character at her heart.  She may be spoiled but she is not superior acting around those who are not in her social strata.  This makes her so much more desirable to me.  I like that you have created more than a cardboard character.  She is rich and you show that but you have given her a special quality that makes her unique.  She has a charm about her.  I can't get over how so many stories just say she is rich.  There are some on nifty that make it clear the woman is very rich and is seducing some neophyte.  Laura is no neophyte and amber treats her like an adult woman and seduces her as an equal.  I like that.  If amber had tried to overwhelm or bully Laura with her wealth and status she would never have gotten her into her bed.  I like that.  You have always show the character interaction of women as equals.  No taking advantage or black mail in your stories.  I have always found your stories to be positive and life affirming.

 

//  they make arrangements for to meet in aspen [actually Tahoe. Ed.].  So nice.   Laura takes off a few days.  I know that taking off so I can go fuck gloriously with a sweet angel.  Like amber wanting Laura to wear the bracelet that she have Laura.  I know she wants her women to wear the gifts that she gives them.  It must make her heart pitter patter when she sees that gift adorning her lovers.  I don't think she looks at it as a trophy on her conquest at all.  I am very sure that it makes amber's cunt run with warm fuck juice when she sees Laura's bracelet on her wrist.  Seeing it as Laura sashays into their bed.  have to love the george bush joke.  I am usually pretty neutral on politicians but that guy has totally plucked my last nerve.  Have to love the stretch limousine and private jet.  I have ridden in a stretch a few times but that is about it for the opulent life style and never with a rich woman taking me to her liar for debauchery.  Sigh, sure would be nice though.  Like the Isadora Duncan reference.  I wonder how many younger readers even know who she is.  I can see the scarves fluttering in the breeze.  How sad that they do not feel the freedom to kiss like true lovers out in public.  We have come a long way but still have a ways to go.  Amber may be rich but I am guessing she still wants to be discreet and Laura is in corporate America and still has to be careful.  Of course, when you think about it, flaunting sex in the public only brings one problems no matter your orientation.  For the super rich who needs to not give the tabloids any more fodder for their cannons and usually the more rich you are the more enemies they seem to have.  Discretion is the better part of valor.  I am happy that Laura is being spoiled with the private plan ride.  I am smiling as amber show that wit that I so like reading in women ["You are in a movie, my darling," Amber snapped back.  "My own private glamour epic.   The Further Seduction of Laura.   Now get your butt up those stairs into that plane so we can hide and I can really kiss you."]  when you see wit like this I know a woman is confident and proud of herself.  I love seeing this in all women.  so many are beat down by man's world and I so want to uplift and elevate.  Sass and fire shows that a woman is in love with herself like we all should be.  Of course, one shouldn't go overboard with it either.  I kind of like the air of command here.  I love to be subordinate around strong women.

//  I love how you start the initial loving [Amber grabbed her and kissed Laura's mouth with a feral intensity.  Their tongues immediately began a searching, searing dance together.        "Oh god, I've really missed you!" Laura gasped, feeling a sudden pang.]  I so love that time of coming together in renewed or new love.  feeling our lips merging and caressing each other.  I usually like to move fast but if a new lover or a woman (Maria) who loves the lip play I will give you that time of only loving with my lips and lipping your lips between mine and insinuating my tongue along your outer gums and along the inside of your lips making you moan and shake.  I often croak something like what Laura says after we have truly kissed and I have love shook feeling our tongues coiling and winding around each other.  I so love to feel my tongue spearing down your throat and our tongues flailing and slithering against each other and twining hard in deep love.   sliding tongues back and forth between our mouths as we swap spit.  Latching onto a tongue and sucking hard and either hard or easy riding my pursed lips up and down your tongue as I suck with differing force.  I have made women scream into my mouth with such loving tactics.  Getting two hand fulls of hair and pulling your mouth hard into mine as our lips mash and bruise and tongues slide deep.  I do have to wonder about them not screwing on the plane.  I always want more than a measly half hour to fuck you but hey, a quickie is always nice.  I would hope that the even richer person (I guess) would love to think that a beautiful black woman is boffing a beautiful white woman on his plan.  Heck, if he was smart he should have cameras in the plane to capture such beauty and later masturbate to it.  I would hope that super rich people would be true hedonists.  I know the world has a long ways to go but we have come a long way too.  Just still have to be careful is all.

//  how can anyone be against interracial sex.  We always peruse the local and internet ads looking for women and couples.  Now I look for ads involving het couples.  I saw an ad for an interracial couple with the woman looking to have sex with a woman for the first time.  I emailed and got her husband and we called each other and agreed to meet at a restaraunt.  I met a good looking black man about thirty.  Mike to told me about Nirita.  How they have sex with other men and they she wanted to explore her bi-sexual side.  When he showed me pictures of Nirita my cunt spasmed so fucking hard.   she is a beautiful Greek woman with that husky skin color like dodie.  She has those dark eyes and jet black hair that comes down to her shoulder blades.  She has a full rack with long hard nipples made for devouring.  I was totally in love.  He told me she craves hard anal fucking and loves it hard.  I told him with my now slitted eyes that that was my kind of het fucking.  mike crowed about his nine inch dick and I shot back I fuck a guy regularly that is eleven inches and my regular strap-on is bigger.  That kind of put him in his place after I smiled and patted his thigh and smiled at him.  two nights later I was at their place.  We had a nice light meal.  I could see that Nirita was really nervous and she was shaking a little when we sat on the sofa with her husband setting on one end.  I was sure of a quick love kill.  I was pouring on the charm making small talk as I started to stroke her trembling arms and face.  Whispering sweet love words I moved in and started to kiss her lightly on the face and neck.  I spent the next fifteen minutes trying to seduce Nirita.  I kissed and nibbled her face, neck and shoulders.  I unbuttoned her blouse and unclipped her bra and lovingly loved her breast and stroked her belly and ribs and wormed my hands underneath her pants.  Honestly, I am used to complete success but she kept freezing up hard when I really started to apply the love moves.  I finally sat up from trying again to kiss her deeply and having her freeze up just when I know her tits were burning with pleasure from my ministrations.  I looked over at mike and told him this must be his fantasy and not his wife and started getting my loosened clothes in order and preparing to leave.

//  she started getting weepy and I kept telling her it was alright and maybe we would try again sometime.  Poor mike was looking very uncomfortable.  Geez, Nirita started crying and clutching at my arm.  She cried out that her Greek upbringing had been so strict but she did want to explore her bi side.  She longed to be with women.  I was exasperated by now but thought about it for a few moments and decided to try again with a different tact.  I had noticed that mike had been stroking his dick inside his loosened jeans.  I shooed him to the middle of the sofa and softly urged Nirita to strip as I stripped down and softly asked her to suck her husband off as I watched and masturbated.  I felt her immediately relax as she got back into comfortable territory and I bid my time.  Mike of course had immediately stripped, guys are guys of course.  Gods she was so beautiful as got on her knees and fisted his rock hard nine inch dick and began to lick up and down his veined shaft while pumping it and then lovingly sucking his cockhead and giving it butterfly licks and long tongue licks up and down that thick black shaft making my mouth water.  I was stroking my pussy and squeezing my tits to get me nice and hot.  She started to hard suck his cock head and pumped her head hard as she cheek hollowed sucked.  She took his cock to the back of her throat and sucked and rode her head up and down his shaft and wrapped her tongue around his cock head and back to sucking.  After ten minutes or so I got up and settled on the other side of mike's legs and murmured if could have a suck of his "beautiful black cock".  I had to smile as she smiled and tilted his hard shaft towards me and I started to lick up and down his shaft before latching onto his bulbous cock head and hard sucking and corkscrewing my head.  We took turns sucking and licking and I then started to work one side of his hot, throbbing dick as she did the other side and took turns sucking his cock and licking his balls and kissing his belly and hips.  I saw her cat eyes as we licked up his shaft now and we arrived at the top of his cockhead in perfect sync and we started to lick his piss hole and crown together and our mouths just came together and our lips almost instantly formed a tight, mashed seal as my tongue slammed deep down her throat and she groaned as I felt her love shake and grip me with one hand and the other clenching mike's thigh as she shook and swooned.  I kissed her deeply and went back to sucking mike's cock as she joined me and now she was worming her mouth into mine as our tongues stabbed and wrestled wildly form mouth to mouth.  I felt mike slide from between us and back to the sofa edge as I gripped Nirita tight and raped her mouth and then tilted her head and gave her a vicious hickey as she juddered in my arms and melted into me with guttural groans.  I got her seated on the couch and proceeded to suck her off with all my skills.  Tongue stabbing her cunt and sucking her lips hard and polishing her clit.   it only took me two minutes before she came so fucking hard with hard flips and jackknifes and deep chested caws, grunts and groins.  I sucked her off again as she cried out. 

//  I pulled back to see how Nirita would take things and moaned when she rose up and enfolded me her arms and kissed me with her flailing tongue and she bent down to suck my nipples so good and hard.  soon I was leaned back into the sofa as she wildly sucked my cunt and pushed my legs back to lick and suck my bung hole as I groaned.  She got my legs on her shoulders and just devoured my running cunt and I grunted out soft instructions and soon I was shrieking as I jackknifed and I felt my womb shredding my belly as waves of searing ecstasy exploded from my cunt as it pulsed hot steamy cum into Nirita's gulping mouth and all over her face.  I felt a strong aftershock seeing her use an index finger to scoop my cum up off her face and lick off.  I was still reeling as mike guided Nirita over to him and she settled on his cock and started to ride it.  soon it was sinking hard and deep up her tight cunt.  I recovered and started kissing and stroking her back as her tits flopped and swirled and I reached around to squeeze and pull her nipples making her squeal and groan.  She pulled off and fell to the floor and licked her juices off his dick with my hungry assistance.  She whispered she wanted to watch me fuck her "man" and I gladly mounted his cock facing her.  Mike gripped my ass cheeks and  helped me drive my cunt hard and deep onto his hard spiking cock.  I so loved the sounds of slapping flesh and how my tits flopped and whiplashed as Nirita kissed and stroked my heaving belly and squeezed my tits hard and pulped them as best she could with my wild riding.  I so love swirling my pelvis feeling that hard black dick slicing through my tight pussy.  we took turns riding him and licking ourselves off his dick.  I felt my eyes flutter and spasm when Nirita mounted him facing me and guided his thick, long cock into her sphincter and slowly settled down in his prick as her face froze and slashed.  I moaned along with her as his cockhead slide into her shit hole.  I so love being fucked in the ass and watching up close.  I loved seeing her face slash and seeing that pain and pleasure and how pleasure so quickly takes over.  I groaned seeing mike's dick sliding deeper and deeper into Nirita's asshole as her o-ring loosened.  Sigh, soon her husband was showing his skill as he would first pound her ass hard with deep pile driving thrusts making her whole body jolt and tits flop and then slow deep strokes, stopping and letting her ride his cock, and then rabbit fucking that makes your asshole sizzle with fucking pleasure.  I love seeing a hard dick fucking an asshole so fast your eyes just see a blur of cock driving in and out and balls flopping and making those obscene noises I so love.  I was drooling watching his dick getting its ring of ass juice on it.  from this position you can't go full balls deep and I love seeing that glistening, milky or yellowish ring forming at the point of deepest penetration.  Nirita ass juice was whitish and smearing his cock down about six inches as I licked my lips.  I had forgotten to ask mike if she did atm.  I got my answer after about five minutes of great ass fucking watching.  I watched with avid eyes as she rose up and sat on the floor and fisted his cock at the base.  Gods, she looked me in the eyes with smoky heat and started to lick up his shaft with broad tongue strokes and murmured for me to join her and I moaned as I started licking my side of his cock.  it tasted so fucking good.  I smile hearing mike's moans in my mind.  We licked up her ass juice ring and she motioned for me to suck his cockhead first and I made a show of slowly bending and sticking out my tongue and butterflying his cockhead making his hips lurch and then moving down and enveloping his cockhead with my lips and lovingly sucked and licked his cock so good making him groan hard.  we worked his cock good.  She mounted him again and rode him hard and then did more atm and croaked for me to give mike my asshole which I was only too happy to do.  Soon I was riding his dick as it slide so fucking deep up my shit hole.  The greedy whore dove on his cock when he pulled me off and slurped up my ass juice like the whore she is.  Of course she gladly shared his black dick with me.  we fucked for long delicious minutes in different positions getting our assholes and pussies pounded hard.  finally mike groaned he needed to cum and wanted to cum on our faces.  We got on our knees and our faces cheek to cheek and were rewarded with hot semen blasted all over our faces which we kissed and licked off making mike groan with happiness at the show.

//  the beauty of such pairings is that Nirita and I then tribbed to a bucking, thrusting orgasm.  we kissed and cuddled for a while and mike had recovered by then and we went into the bedroom where he really hammered fucked us.  I so love how he gripped our asses so hard as he pounded our cunts / assholes doggy style.  Gripping our shoulders and fisting hair to slam us back into his plunging hips.  I so love the sound of sweaty flesh slapping and how our whole bodies jolted with his force and our hanging tits whiplashed and flopped.  Our sweat dripping off straining flesh.   I got on the bed in front of Nirita and let mike drive her face into my cunt as she gobbled my cunt and sucked my clit as her lips and face mashed into my mound with wet squishy sounds.  I came so fucking hard as I wailed gripping the back of her head as it was jammed forward by mike.  I screamed as she latched onto my clit and super sucked.  That was an awesome orgasm!  as I was coming down Nirta came so fucking hard as her head wallowed and mashed into my sweaty belly as mike pounded her cunt to make her orgasm spasm out fully.  mike then got me on my belly and snaked his cock into my clenching asshole making me moan so fucking hard.  he pounded my shit so fucking good driving my belly into the mattress with nice hard strokes.  After a while he got in pushup position and simply punished my asshole so fucking good.  I felt that delicious coiling and then my sphincter simply shredded itself on mike's dick as he  drove it in and out my asshole so fucking hard.  I convulsed and jackknifed up into his piledriving cock as my head lifted and juddered as I felt my eye rolls back and a scream tore from love struck throat.  Mike loosened his control and  came in my hot asshole coiling his hips to crash his hips into my ass cheeks driving me down making me groan so gutturally as his dick jetted hot semen up my colon making another anal 'gasm erupt and now I spasmed and jolted as his cock rammed into my asshole each time it spewed semen into my colon.  I swooned as he pulled out and I melted into the bed and I felt Nirita licking my ass crack and pulling my cheeks open and tonguing my ruined asshole soothing my asshole with her tongue licking my rosebud and slithering into my shit hole stroking love to my tired rectum.  I heard her slurping and her tongue worming as she sucked out semen and ass juice as I swooned.  We slept together until about four and I was awoken by a frisky Nirita who sucked me off again.  We then woke up mike and got my strap-on on and we fucked the hell out of Nirita and then I helped her get strapped in and I was pounded to heaven and back.  took her a while to kind of get the hang of it.  lots of slipping out but she was definitely improving by the end.  I got them to get me doggy over mike so she could pound my asshole from behind and she used one hand to hold steady and the other slapping and gripping my ass as they pounded a searing multiple orgasm erupted out of my cunt and asshole.  I begged her to keep pounding my asshole throughout my orgasmic ordeal and gods did she making me lurch and wallow all over mike.  I think that helped send him over the edge, feeling my nipples rubbing up and down his pecs as he roared and I felt his iron grip bruising my hips as he screamed out goddamn and his ass surged up driving his cock deep into my cunt as it spasmed out dick seed into my convulsing cunt making my cum last even longer.  sigh, I so love great fucks.

//  one thing I have liked about your stories is how you show excitement and love.  I am not sure how to describe how well you do it.  I get so tired of other authors just saying their women are excited at the situation and how new it is to the newbie.  I guess this is always because I am reading first time seductions which of course involves the situation being so new.  Also, focusing only on the moment one can't get the excitement over having a long term rich lover taking you off to an exotica local and you can't even begin to talk about other lovers setting one's soul on fire.  Plus they never ever use words like "piercingly sweet" or "sensual evening".  They just describe it and forget to make it magical.  [The heady whirl of this exciting afternoon had Laura in a daze.  Just being next to Amber like this made her impossibly horny.  She had been fucking her brains out with Nyomi and Ty, and once—a piercingly sweet and sensual evening with the unassuming and effortlessly desirable Bonnie—but nothing could be more intense than this quick need she felt to embrace the delicious Amber Grant and consume her with sharp passion.  It had been a few months since she had seen her, and all their good times together began flowing back into her consciousness.]  I so love reading something that has the flow of time to it.  something were I feel the essence of life in it.  I so love seeing Laura reflecting on fucking Ty and nyomi's "brains out" and now feeling her soul igniting with renewed love for amber.  I never get tired of basking in great recent fucks and feeling my cunt burning for new fucks as soon as possible.  It is always great to renew love with a woman you haven't fucked and loved in a while.  Plus, it indeed must be a "heady" experience being whisked away to Aspen to fuck gloriously and not have to worry about cost at all.  Awesome!  I so love how you show simmering lust [In addition, Amber's smooth black skin and slender but curvaceous body were a magnet to Laura's lips.  And her scent was absolutely amazing, unlike anything Laura had ever experienced.  Amber was rich, of course, and bought perfumes that the rest of humanity could barely imagine, let alone afford.  Laura's nose was enchanted along with her eager mouth, and she was kissing Amber's neck and ears and cheeks and collar bones so fervidly that Amber had to push her gently away.]  I am so drawn to my lovers bodies as I bask in their unique charms.  Each woman is such a work of beauty.  I too am drawn to kiss and stroke your body as I lovingly map your planes and cambers.  I so love kissing and stroking your whole torso making you moan and mewl for me.  I so love to kiss and nip you face down to lower belly.  I so love kissing and rubbing my lips and cheeks on a heaving belly and along your ribs.   I so love the scent of my sluts and I am so happy that Laura gets to inhale rarified scents that only the super rich can afford.  I then like the dialog that you have between them.  they so want to fuck but they can't.  then Laura fills amber in on her recent love life.  It is just so cool that you have setup a world where this can even happen.  One or small multiple parts simply can't and the few longer ones are so centered on sex.  Of course I want sex, and lots of it, but is so nice to get the who enclida so to speak.  When we have close lovers who know and understand us we just want to communicate with them.  communication so draws women closer and you show it so well.  Amber wants to know and Laura knows amber only has Laura's best intentions at heart and will not use this knowledge against her.  One knows who one can share such intimate details with.  I am just happy to see that Laura has grown and shed a lot of her jealousy and guarded nature.  She has so grown.  Again something that only you show.   The harem author has quite a massive tome by now but his characters are exactly the same as when he started years ago.  Laura has grown and changed along with women like Deshona, Dee Dee and Jane.  Such a bonus to a story that still delivers blistering sex and womb shredding orgasms.   Lucky me!

//  I like how amber is not attacking Laura but I do have to agree with [When Laura was finished, she raised one eyebrow.  "I usually don't approve of dumping any of your sweetie pies," she said with a schoolmarmish nod, "but in this case I'll forgive you.  It seems this singer cast a spell over you.  I can understand that.  Look at the spell you've cast over me."  She gave Laura a big, ironic grin.]  one should always forgive but I think that Laura has wasted so much potential.  She could have been so much kinder and easier on Sara I think.  If I had to choose, Sara would win hands down but I understand that one must follow where the heart leads.  Still, I would have worked so hard to still keep my love for Sara strong and vibrant.  I would have gladly joined Sheena in repeatedly raping Sara into commas of fucking spent bliss and helping their love to grow.  I would have taken that trip to the exotic local and fucked simply gloriously over, over and over helping all of our love to grow and strengthen.  I think amber sees this also.  Life is so short.  I have known since I was a little girl that life is finite and ends.  Still I wonder just where in the hell the time has gone.  I still feel like a teenager really deep down I guess.  I still see the wonder and possibilities but I keep thinking how am I this old.  We need to keep all the love we can around us.  I just would so love to see Laura, Sara and Makeeda fucking gloriously and making a trifekta.  A girl can dream can't she.   I love how amber keeps the love moving forward ["We can remedy that.  Of course right now it's September, so we have to shoot for January."  She abruptly left off her unpacking and walked across the large bedroom to Laura, embracing her in a relaxed, friendly sort of way, kissing her cheek, then her neck.  "I think I've missed you, my darling.  I think I want to rub my naked body against yours."]  I so find that when pain is present that delicious fucking so soon makes it melt and fade away.  Sweet orgasms once more making my life alright and blissful.   I so love taking my slut into my arms and pulling her to my body as we feel our bodies merging and muzzling her face and neck and get her sweet scent and essence into my nose and feeling her soft skin under my lips and beneath my rubbing cheeks.  I love how you now give us some of that talking and communicating that I so love and get so little of in other stories [I want you," she murmured into Amber's long black swan's neck, sucking it.  "I want you bad.  I want to fuck you."        She remembered quickly how Amber loved to hear dirty talk.  She exulted in a long, continuous stream of obscenity, often begging Laura to do it, to describe what she was doing, what she was going to do, what she wanted to do.  It never got into the realm of the truly unspeakable, as in the case, for example, of Marie, who had craved to be called 'nigger,' which Laura had never been able to bring herself to do.  There was no 'You black cunt!' kind of thing with Amber; but she died to hear: 'I'm dying to fuck your beautiful black cunt,' from Laura, and Laura was quick to oblige.]  I so love to talk to dirty and I find most women love it too.  They may be shocked at first and hesitant to start but once they free themselves of man's silly limiting strictures then they really get into it.  I so love to be called a slut, whore, bitch and adding fucking, damn worthless in front of what you are calling me.  makes my womb lurch and contract.  I can see amber liking the cussing and maybe not wanting the "n" word used.  She is high society but I find that younger black people simply love using the word nigger.  They love calling each other that word and simply fuck like wild animals when I or some other bitch is calling the them a nigger and being told how their black cunt and asshole are going to be raped so hard and deep.  they love it when I call them fucking niggers and how this white ass bitch is going to pound their fucking black cunt or asshole so hard.  they get so off calling me a lily white bitch and a nigger or wigga want to be and how they are going to fuck the living shit out of me for even daring to think I am good enough to suck and fuck their black goddess bodies.  No matter your political correctness views it is the communication I so love reading in your stories.  Other authors just have the sex start and nothing else is really said until you get some final moans and maybe a scream during the orgasm.  no egging on and fanning of the flames of love and lust.  I sure hope they don't fuck like that in real life.

//  I am smiling as Laura melts amber's cunt with repeated use of the word "fuck and cunt".  I so love reducing my love sluts to jelly when I tell them what I am going to do to them and then doing it.  I am just happy to see an author showing how the spoken word alone can reduce your women to putty in your arms before you have even really started your physical seduction.  By showing this you simply outclass other authors.  Why not prime the pump and use the spoken word to simply have your woman panting and beginning to sweat for you and you haven't really used your physical talents yet.  I so love how you show them now panting and removing some of their clothing and marveling and beginning to paw and stroke each other lovely smallish doves.  I so love to hold, stroke and squeeze your tits as I feel their weight and shape in my caressing fingers.  thinking to myself how I am going to love and maul them making you pant, groan and maybe scream for me.  of course they tell each other how wonderful each other tits are to each other.  I know just hearing that made their tits heat up and get zings of pleasure in their nipples.  This all leads to where it is supposed to lead [In a few more seconds they were both naked and intertwined, kissing hungrily, their naked breasts mashing together, their fingers digging into each other's bare flesh. ]  I really love this time in coming together with my woman.  I so love feeling our flesh merging and rubbing against each other.  I so love to feel a tongue going down my throat as our tits mash and twats are rubbing against whatever and arms and legs are twined and pulling tight.  I so feel my womb lurch when I feel our bellies mating and wallowing.  Feeling our body heat rising sweat up on our bodies.   Especially love the fingers digging in reference.  I always feel that most authors seem to keep an invisible barrier between their women.  they kiss but it almost chaste seeming sometimes because they don't show the rest of the body pulling close.  And never any clenching and twining of arms.  Even the payoff oral sex, trib or strap-on sex is distant seeming.  By only saying the main sex act is happening without this closeness being describe makes the actual fuck seem tame and docile.  I want the heat that you always show so expertly.  I am a slut in heat when I fuck and want that passion and wanton lust to be shown in stories and you by far capture that the best of any author I have discovered.

//  what is really cool about this part is the fact that I actually know what amber's nipples look like.  I have kept track over the years and I truly think that I have never seen another author fully or even partially describe a woman's breast or vagina / vulva.  At first I didn't really notice until I came upon your writings and over the years I have come to find it weird.  I am sure that all authors have some model in mind when they are writing a story.  Some object of beauty or lust.  Some woman from the past.   Yet, time after time it is just nothing really.  Maybe a cup size and the fact that she has really nice tits.   Never any words actually describing them like here ["God, I have dreams of fucking with Laura," Amber panted into Laura's shoulder as Laura dropped her mouth to the girl's scrumptious swollen black nipples, unwilling to be deprived any longer.  "Ungghhhh!   Oh . . . shit that feels good!  Ummnngg!  Suck them hard.  Give them that hot Laura sucking."        Laura was happy to oblige.  She was a hungry fool for puffy nipples, and Amber's were among the best, not huge like some, like Trina's and poor dead Rina's, or like April's, or Dawn's, but instead perfect round black soft plums that she loved to hold gently in her mouth, softly laving one with her tongue, until Amber's reaction led her to begin sucking, at first gently too, then harder, harder, passionately.]  I so love dining on women's nipples and areolas.  I love how each woman's breast are different.  Women with small nipples and or areolas that you just have to concentrate on and can totally consume and devour in one mouth gulp and simply siphon off with deep throat sucking.  Women with long nipples to torment and love.   Then their women with the nipples that you describe above.   I so love to dine on such nipples.  La'Tonya and Shari have nipples that are slightly puffy.  You just want to suck and work so fucking hard.  gnawing on and sinking your teeth into them making them quiver and moan.  Then you have tits like Lakita whose little titties are half nipple and just swell like balloons that make you want to suck and pull your head back with your tit treat.  Veronica has nice c-sized tits with puffy nipples on her upswept breast.  So fucking divine and I have sucked and gnawed on like a starving babe listening to my teenage lover squeal and feel her whole body jolting and thrashing as I try to suck her nipples off.  Shari is really smitten with her.  I had the girls over at Shari's house and I had been in a bedroom sucking and tribbing with Emily and sari.  Cindy and Tameka had their teenage lovers in their bedroom fucking their brains out judging by the screams and loud orgasmic groans I kept hearing while fucking.  I mozied out to the living room and had to stop, look and smile.  Veronica and Shari were on their hand and knees squabbling around on the floor.  Shari was chasing veronica making big cat sounds I guess and swiping at her with her hand like a lion paw trying to catch up to her and bring her down like a lioness.  She kept growling and telling how she was going to devour veronica and I smiled hearing veronica squeal in mock fright.  She finally caught up and rake veronica's ass and thigh and she went down like she had been hamstringed.  I was getting hot when Shari then love bite and licked her all over ass and thighs and then used a paw to turn her over and love "bite" veronica's wet cunt and bite and licked her belly and ribs like she was feasting, snuffling and moaning all the while.  Veronica went limp and looked up with limpid eyes as Shari straddled her prostrate from and bent her head down and latched onto her swollen, puffy nipples and clenched into the them and gnaw.  She pulled her back and sank her teeth in and jerked her head like she was tearing meat off a caress and then jamming her face into Veronica's breast and sucking hard and working her cheeks as she deep throat sucked.  Gods, she ran a hand down to veronica's humping cunt and started to fingerfuck her with hard pounding thrusts and wet squishy sounds.  Soon veronica was thrashing and her limbs jerking in her "death throes" as then an orgasm exploded out her womb and had her whole body tightening up as her heels and head rose up an inch or two from the floor and spastically jerked to and fro as the sounds of guttural ecstasy flowed from her throat as her eyes had that far away look of pure orgasmic bliss as four killing spasms rippled through her just turned fifthteen year flesh.  Shari fucked her through her orgasm and I smiled as they just kind of flowed together as dark black and pale white flesh twined and pulled tight as tongues stabbed and wrestled wetly I could see in their working cheeks and huffing breaths.  I did what nature wanted and went and joined them on the floor and started kissing and stroking Shari's back and shoulders.  Needless to say, soon veronica and I were simply devouring her like starving lions ourselves. 

//  we now get some delicious breast worship.  I know this because you give me the details.  Most authors just don't do it.  they basically say some sucking was done and the woman receiving it loved it of course.  I just got done reading a story that did have detail but it read like some "war and peace".  No heat.  No excitement.  To busy describing the emotion but you need the heat too baby!  You show us amber dying from it and telling Laura she is.  This recent story did have this I have to say.  She did show the heat of the moment in the women's reactions.  The only thing is you have done it for almost 320 stories!!!  Still getting exasperated with Laura asking if she is sucking amber's nipples to hard.   I so believe in hard loving.  I try to read my new conquests and see how far and fast I can take them.  When I think the time is right and I have them totally swooning I start upping the amps.  If I get resistance I find a good tactic is to let them see the pleasure of kink first hand.  Sometimes I can combine that with a little voyeurism too.  Recently Emily brought over a new slut of hers, Tonya.  She is a cute brunette in Emily's English class.  She has green eyes and nice really firm b-cup tits.  Emily had been trying to rough her up but she was all resistant and scared.  I told her bring her over and do me in front of her.  Sigh, soon I was naked in the living room and Emily was slapping me and pulling my hair and dragging me around.  She got me on my knees and cursed and slapped me and choked me making my head and hair shake.  Emily was slapping my tits hard making them red and whiplashing and rolling from her strikes.  Grabbing my nipples and twisting and jerking out making cry out in pain.  I could see that Tonya was shocked and getting aroused.  Emily humped my face into her cunt as I kneeled on the floor.  I gobbled wildly gripping her ass to feast on succulent teenage cunt meat.  I sucked her off good as she cried out and cursed me as a strong orgasm had her jolting and semi folding as she gripped my head as anchor as guttural groans flowed from her cawing throat.  as my reward she jerked me up and threw me down onto the sofa and proceed to abuse my tits again making them feel so fucking good.  She was slapping them hard with both hands making them swirl back and forth and leaving red finger marks.  She pulled my nipples out and twisted cruelly as she now held on and pulled my tits so fucking taunt as I cried and twisted.  She would pull my nipples out and then press her hand into my tit below my areolas and twist them down or up and pull hard.  sinking her grip into my tit meat and pulping and rolling my tits.  I heard Emily whisper to Tonya to join her and she shyly slide over.  I smiled as she gripped my right tit with both hands and started to squeeze it with mild squeezes looking up at me and then halting looking at me.  I whispered moaned to "pulp it baby" and she started to pulp my tits with my groaned encouragement.  Sigh, soon she was crushing my tits and slapping wildly.  Watching her hands pulse as her fingers sunk deep into my tits and her mouth tried to suck my nipples off.   Another slut seduced.  Later I was pulping and mashing her tits into her chest as  we totally fucked abused her.  We even took her anal cherry and gave her first anal 'gasm and made her an ass-to-mouth queen.  Since then they have come over and we have flogged each other tits so fucking hard.  we so love the sounds of those tassels slapping and pounding our tits, chest and bellies.  I am smiling see those tassels striking Tonya's flesh as she writhed and cried.  Seeing her flesh turning read and how her body would jerk and legs spasm out when a good strike would land across her tits or belly.  The sound of flesh being struck hard is so intoxicating.  Sigh, I so love how you show contact in your sex.   Other authors just say they suck each other's tits.  I almost think of a robot mechanically bending down with no contact and sucking a nipple.  You show how Laura is lying on top of amber in missionary and they are squirming together.  They are moving around and heating each other up and you show Laura moving up and kissing amber and then moving down and around.  Again, other authors don't even really show movement in their stories.  The characters are in one position and then the author says and now they did trib.  No showing it.  you show us how Laura and amber are in a near classical trib position and then Laura actually moves to get in it.  you show it.  I can just see their sensual bodies beginning to bead with sweat getting in this divine position and then starting to love each other  [ "I want to fuck it and fuck it and make you scream," Laura panted, maneuvering Amber's thighs open so that she could slide between them, then sliding one thigh underneath and rising up herself to a near-sitting position, pushing her open wet cunt now into Amber's exposed, inflamed pussy.        "Ah!" Amber gasped softly, her eyes rolling up again.  "Do it . . . do it . . ." she prompted Laura.  "Please."]  just the eyes rolling up is so fucking hot to read.  It is amazing how often we do that and you are the only author to really capture that.  I so know I am doing that job when all I see is the white of your eyes or that half roll back and the eyes simply juddering as your eyelids flutter and spasm as you are slacked jawed and I can so see fucking ecstasy slashing your face.  Plus that divine dialog that I can never get enough of.  Prompting and urging your lover on and that pleading one does when you are trying to bind with the woman you love.  you just know how to make that act of mashing cunts so fucking perfect.  Feeling our sodden cunt meat pressing and grinding in deepening love.

//  one thing I so adore about your writings is the pacing you put in them.  you show the beginning of them coming together, then the seduction or initiation of loving and now the rising heat that one puts into their lover and yourself.  Only you capture this.  Most can't even com close because they don't devote the kilobytes necessary.  And even those who do somehow miss out in showing the rising need we instill in ourselves and our love sluts.  I am amazed when I read stories and don't see this.  I just got done reading a story that had some length to it and again there was no true heat to the fucking.  somehow they just don't get it across.  Here you show it by amber's helpless gasps and murmurings of rising need and love.  I so love to hear my women moaning how good I am making them feel.  I get so tired of reading stories where their women never tell each other how good they other woman is making them feel.  Hearing Laura respond to amber's pleadings with promises of delivering pleasure.   I so bask when my angels beg for it and I give it to them.  I live to see them becoming nerveless for me all limp and jolting with the pleasure I am giving them.  the rising heat that you show in your stories.  I am so there as amber pleads for Laura to grind harder and Laura love promises that she will deliver the love kill.  Sigh, I am swooning reading that Laura love curses amber to drive her higher.  I find most women love to be talked dirty too right off or quickly become addicted to it.  again you have to show the communication for this to be seen.  Have I said how much I hate the silence of other stories.   I so love to call my women bitches, whores, sluts and such.  If ethnic insulting them with that and them insulting my whiteness.  I so love being called a white trash whore and lily white bitch as I being fucked hard.  especially when a black lover is spearing my cunt and or asshole with their hard fake or real dick.  feeling my hips gripped hard or shoulders and hair pulled to slam be back into their lunging cocks as the call me a worthless white piece of shit as they make my jolt and judder with their love.  I love hearing Laura asking if amber can cum from tribbing and she croaks "yes!".   you showing us how her puffy nipples are now enlarged and rock hard with blood as her tits are swelled with rising passion.  One can so see the finish line coming into view with your writings.  You have shown ramping up and now you show it rising even higher as true love is coming oh so much closer [Immediately, she cranked up the pace even further.  If Amber was going to come, she knew she wouldn't be far behind herself, and she grew determined to shoot for the money.  Hold on, honey.  Here we go.        Laura was sitting nearly perpendicular to Amber, her groin pressed hard into Amber's, her upper body looming over her, her hands running all over Amber's enchanting lean black flesh.  She still gyrated her hips slowly, moving their wet pussies together, but not yet with the fierce, naked urgency both knew was coming.  Instead, she was deeply enjoying the moment, this movie moment, this still paradise in the woods above the crystalline lake, this gorgeous young rich girl who so loved to be fucked by Laura, this intense happiness.]  you so show the ramping up of heat.  We can see Laura now trying harder to give her woman the orgasm she now so desperately needs.  I love seeing that need and then fulfilling it.  what is really cool is reading how Laura is delivering the love kill.  I really pump myself to deliver my love kills.  I just totally focus to do even better what I am doing to you to make you simply die from it.  I so love reading the grinding of their sodden cunts with slow hungry sweeps by Laura.  The few trib stories I have found all they said was that they tribbed.  They denied me these sweet details that I need to really get off on.  I so gag as our cunts mash and grind as I feel our soupy cunts riding and grinding as our clits slide and plow through soaking wet cunt folds and our juices are slavered all over our groins as we start to caw and squeal in rising love.  I so love this starting slow and ramping up as we get out of control and our groins are lurching and grinding so fucking hard as ecstasy is so sweetly approaching.  I so love this upright tribbing position.  Throwing your leg over my shoulder and using it as an anchor as I ride you hard grinding you down into the mattress or hard floor making your body jolt and lurch as your eyes lock with mine and I so often see them judder in their sockets or roll back.  love the sweet details of Laura bending down to kiss amber's face, breast and torso.  You so know how to love the whole body.  I so love inhaling a nipple or spearing my tongue down your throat as I fuck or trib you and to run my hands all over our sweaty flesh as I take you to heaven.

//  I am smiling at the next detail.  Laura in playing with amber's belly tattoo starts to message and press in on her belly.  This causes amber to suddenly ramp up in her fucking and pant for it harder.  What makes me smile is Laura not being sure if she means harder tribbing or harder stroking her belly.  She does both!!  I love her thinking!  I too love to work your belly while fucking you.  I just never thought that much about why we love it so.  Nice to know.   I so love to press in on your whole belly and work my fingertips into your belly and along your ribs.  It makes my women pant and beg.  I find some like it higher but most like it right above their mound.  Makes sense if you are hitting her g-spot nerve bundle.  This is something that I do as a change of pace.  I don't want to get my babies hooked on it.  one must always vary one's technique to keep love fresh and new.  I so love to look up as I am gobbling her gash and see my fingers stroking and pressing into her belly.  Even doing this I can vary.  Sometimes I stroke up and down, circular and sometimes I pulse my fingers like a jackhammer I guess.  Working her from the inside and outside!  I so love how I can introduce this finger pressing and nearly make them leap off the bed and start to writhe as I suck their clit down my throat in gluttonous glee.  Like I say, you show ramping and then the divine love kill.  I am so smiling as you show Laura feeling that moment when sweet love is erupting from a shattering womb as ecstasy starts to throb through amber's body.  I so live for driving my sweet slut over the edge and seeing how her orgasm will throttle and shake her body.  What sounds will she make for me.   how long will it last and can I give her more orgasms if I sense I can take her multiple.  All these things make it fuck so sweet and perfect.  You are the only author to show this.  Only you actually make each orgasm a work of art.  No one is even CLOSE.  It is really amazing how you do it chapter after chapter.  No two of your orgasms are the same.  That is one reason I can't wait to read each new chapter.  I simply don't know what I will find.  plus, you give me such sweet character development and growth.  I can so see real life in your works.  I get so tired of the silence and the mere stating that the woman is cuming.  I love how we make different sounds we cum and how each orgasm throttles us differently.  Strength and duration are so variable.  You show the earth shattering to the sweet thrumming orgasms.  Like I say.   No two are alike.  It is so fucking sweet reading a master who instinctively understands and then show us.  Yeah for me!  [Suddenly her fingers probing in Amber's taut belly felt an indescribable twitch in her hard stomach muscles.  It was followed by an intense, leaping shudder in Amber's whole body, accompanied by a tight, incoherent little squeaking sound emanating from her tightly constricted throat.         "Mmnneeet!   Mnneeet!  Ohnngg!"         And then she convulsed violently.  Her spasm was so severe that it nearly pitched Laura to the side, but she held on fiercely, jamming her wet cunt into Amber's as she felt herself beginning to come too.  But Amber's orgasm arrived first, and she groaned and fell into a twitching, straining paroxysm, writhing under Laura and coming in violent, body-wrenching jerks and spasms.        "Owwnnggg . . . ooowwnnngg . . . oowwwonnnggggg!" she groaned, stretching, writhing, bucking into Laura, arching her back from her head to her ass and quivering sharply.]  

//  one thing I have always felt with your stories is I am right their with these women as they live their lives and fuck glorious.  You so draw me in.  I have always been a voyeur in real life and reading.  Not to long ago I was at dodie with my babies and a bevy of our various angels and new conquests.  Dodie, Susie, Giovanna, Hillary and myself had absconded to Dodie's bedroom.  After much heated fucking Susie and Giovanna moved on to other rooms for more fun.  I was temporarily fucked out and had put a pillow behind myself and was leaning against the brass rails of Dodie's headboard.  I was lazily stroking myself as dodie and Hillary were writhing all over each other inhaling nipples and spearing tongues down throats as I watched their cheeks work as tongues flailed and twined.  Watching as legs twined and arms pulled sweaty bodies hard into their squirming bodies.  As I watched, Hillary mounted Dodie's stomach and began to grind in a sweet stomach trib fuck.  It was so beautiful to watch.  Hillary was sitting straight up grinding her swollen cunt up and Dodie's hard stomach groaning and grunting.  Hillary was running her hands up and down her body stroking her thighs, belly, ribs.  I loved how Hillary moaned as she squeezed in on her thighs and lovingly stroked herself, her belly and ribs, clearly showing her love of herself.  I so love loving myself when I am masturbating.  Squeezing her tits and running her palms all over her sweaty face and through her hair.  I just relaxed watching the show squeezing my tits softly.  They slowly ramped up the fuck as dodie grabbed her thighs to help her grind and slowly undulating her stomach to work Hillary's cunt.  From time to time Hillary would fall forward and support herself on her palms and dodie would start to pulp her tits and suck her swollen nipples voraciously.  I so love to see Hillary's heavy hooters swaying and jiggling.  Dodie would suck her nipples for a while, while pulping her tits and squeezing her tits just behind her areolas making them and her nipples swell and sucking like she was starving.  Then Hillary would rise up again and stroke her body like the narcissistic hedonist she is.  I could see the end coming as Hillary started to gibber and moan softly.  She fell forward again and was gripping the sheets so fucking hard as she ground down and dodie was once more sucking her nipples so fucking hard.  the way she groaned so deep in her throat as you saw her straining face as she ground down with all her might to make her cunt simply explode as it left wet slimy marks up and down Dodie's belly.  gods, Hillary had her patented body quivering, eyelid fluttering, soft contractions as her face looks almost angelic with those slutty slashes crossing it.   she did this sexy moan, cry that just makes one want to fuck her forever.  she just came and came as pure love field the room.  She cums so wet and I could clearly see cum spilling down Dodie's ribs and soaking the bed in a huge wet spot.  I was so filled with love as she collapsed and they kissed so deeply as arms and legs twined and pulled each other tight again.  One reason we love Hillary so is because she is a complete slut.  Soon she was back up on her hands and knees again riding her cunt up and down Dodie's cum soaked abs.  dodie tilted her head back and with a great big, goofy smile said "God, she is such a fucking slut!"  I was feeling frisky and I crawled behind them and gripped Hillary's ass cheeks and just pressed down hard as she swept her cunt and she just groaned so gutturally as I helped to really mash her cunt hard.  we got into a rhythm which I broke after a minute to run to Dodie's dresser and pull out a six inch silver rocket and turned it on to medium and got all lubricated with my spit as I  sucked it and then wormed into Hillary's clenching asshole as she moaned in deep pleasure.  we fucked her for like ten minutes when we could feel her approaching the big O again.  I jammed down as Hillary leaned forward now and had her tits sucked and mauled by dodie.  I turned the vibrator to high and pumped it with one hand while I used my forearm of my other arm to press down as I screamed at her "keep grinding you fucking nigger.   jam that cunt down you black bitch!"  I felt her pelvis leap down as she ground even harder and suddenly her body erupted in wild jackknifes and attempted flips as I used my forearm and dodie gripped her ribs hard to keep in her place.  I could her Dodie grunting as she continued to chew on Hillary's throbbing nipple.  Hillary groaned so fucking loud and then fell into long drawn out moans of pure ecstasy as I saw her cunt juice squirting and spraying out from Dodie's stomach as she still ground down as she slowly swept up and down Dodie's stomach as her cunt squirted heavy jets of pure divine cunt juice.  It really is amazing sometimes just how hard squirters squirt.  I pounded her shit hole with the vibrator and screamed at her "keep fucking you goddamn nigger!" as her orgasm went on and on.  As spasms of cunt juice splattered and soaked Hillary and dodie.  Sigh, Hillary continued to sweep her cunt as it spent itself fully and she once more collapsed on dodie and they kissed in even deeper love.  I heard dodie whisper to Hillary that she loved her and I smiled as Hillary whispered back "I love you too baby" as they then once more snaked tongues deep into each other's mouths in slithering, twining love.

//  I am so happy for Laura as her cunt ruptures in a simultaneous orgasm along with amber.  This is something to cherish but if one doesn't cum at the same time one simply finishes off their lover partner by recovering and continuing the fuck or going to some other position.  I like how you show this only happens sometimes.  I do have a lot of control over my body and if I can read your body well I can usually time my body to cum with yours if I want.  I do have to admit that tribbing is sweet cuming together.  I so love feeling our bodies rocking and grinding as detonations of pure fucking bliss is making us caw and jackknife hard into each other as the extra pressure and slamming simply makes one womb have an extra contraction of fucking ecstasy.  What is nice is the fact that Laura's orgasm is different than amber's.  I think amber's was more throttling while Laura's is more vibrating and stretching.  Your vocalizations are totally different for them.  I recently read a story with het and lesbian fucking.  I think in the chapter I read five women had orgasms and I swear each woman came in the same exact way.  No real description of the physical but the vocal was almost identical between five women.  come on!  Even the guys were the same.  They vocalized a lot less but what they did say was done in the same exact manner.  It just takes away so much from the story when I see this.  Why can't they make things dynamic and vibrant and ever changing and evolving like your works?  Of course I primarily read your stories for the sex but it is the down times between fucks and just interacting with your lovers that truly bonds you on the emotional level.  It just adds that extra level.  You show that with the sweet post coital time of them lying on each other luxuriating in each other's weight and heat.  That time of twining limbs and languid kissing and lathing of spent, throbbing nipples and cunts.  Making your lover mewl and swoon with deeper love as your gently flat tongue her spent clit or gently suckle a throbbing nipple or sliding your tongue down her throat.  you show this sweet time that binds lovers.  Others simply don't.  plus, you show the now sexual sharing.  Here we see amber love carping for Laura to put on her bracelet.  This is something special to amber and her lover and it simply excites her to see Laura wear it.  this little moment is something yet again that only you do.  The one shots is understandable since they don't have the time to show these moments.  But the few other multiple part stories have no excuse.  They simply setup sex scenes without any sweet sharing and bonding moments.  What a moment like this does is make amber unique and makes their relationship unique and vibrant.  It makes it real life.  Other stories seem so scripted and storyboard like.  Like an incomplete script for a TV episode.  A story without any heart.   With sex that is okay really, but when you add it into the story it moves it from simple sex stories to literature as far as I am concerned.  You show them teasing each other and causing humor to rise and laughter.  That alone makes me smile.  The whole "bear" sinfield moment is just so cute.  I don't think I have ever seen this in a sex story except yours.  These little nuggets make the whole so much greater.  I am glad to find one author whom understands this.  And it is the moments that really heat up one's soul as amber pulls Laura close and kisses her ardently and squeezes a breast.  I so love this rising of renewed love and how these moments just make us closer to our angels.  You do make it seem so real life.

//  all this sweet sharing and caring now leads to [Laura slid off the bed and found her suitcase where Amber had pitched it, on the floor, next to Amber's own.  Amber's eyes were glued to her body.  Laura enjoyed being the object of such pure, undisguised lust.        "I brought the Purple Pussy Pumper," Amber said coyly, referring to the purple strap-on dildo she had introduced to Laura early in their relationship.        "Somehow I thought you wouldn't forget it," Laura grinned over her shoulder at her.        "We can draw straws to see whose pussy gets pumped first.  Or maybe flip a coin.  Frankly, I don't care.  I love being on either end."]  sigh, such love.  who doesn't love having their body stared at with open lust.  I think you show better than any other author that being desired.  Other authors tell the reader that the women lust after each other but only you really show them actually doing it.  the heated stares or hungry eye caresses of flesh you hunger to consume fully.  I so love to feel my slut's eyes hungrily looking at me and swishing my hips and making my tits jiggle and roll for her or them.  or maybe do a dance to whatever is on caressing myself and lewdly showing my charms to hungering eyes.  and the dialog I love.  them talking about amber's favorite strap-on.  Of course other stories have strap-ons but they are just produced and used.  Only you have the women talk about using their toys and bantering about it.  most of us have pet names for our favorite toys and love to use it and tell our women what we will get thumper or Marcus or whatever you name for your toys are.  Plus, other authors just have them talk or more accurately say their lines.  You tell us that amber is being coy and we see Laura grinning.  It is these little things that change women in a story from characters to real living, breathing beings.  You know how to humanize your characters.  It really does draw one into the story and thus makes the sex so much more searing once the story commences to the loving and fucking.  I really like the next part of the story.  We see that amber and Laura fuck repeatedly throughout the afternoon and night.  I never see this except in the sandy stories to sum degree.  I so love the idea of them fucking heatedly throughout their time together and resting their spent flesh so they can once more fuck with their all.  I so love to fuck myself and my angels to complete exhaustion and then resting so we can fuck once more.  I love rending my cunt, tits and asshole to complete ruin as they pump pure fucking ecstasy to my starving brain.  One thing about multiple lovers is one can really push the flesh until it is so fucking spent, satiated and satisfied.  I love just lying their with my body all limp and limbs just flopped out as I luxuriate in yet another great fuck.  Like I say, it is the little things that add so much to life and in story telling [When she scooted up and peeped over the edge of the comforter, she saw Amber approaching the bed, totally, ravishingly naked, carrying in one hand the Purple Pussy Pumper and its black harness belt.  Amber's small, perfect breasts swayed only a little when she walked, and her puffy black nipples gleamed in the still weak morning light that seeped into the bedroom.        When she drew nearer, Laura could see that she was smiling her little rich girl's mysterious, supercilious smile.  Amber slipped under the comforter and leaned close to whisper, though there was no one in the entire chalet but the two of them.    She brushed her thick, sensual lips against Laura's cheek.        "If you have to pee, better go do it.  I have a little need that has to be filled right away."        Laura grinned and purred softly and kissed her.  "And what would that be?"]  this is like catching a little hidden moment in their lives.  It is just so cute reading of Laura peeking, looking for amber and the remark about peeing.  I really don't think I have ever read anything like this in erotica except in your stories.  Some of the one shots has tenderness in the beginning to show that "soul mate" quality but never this richness after they have become lovers.  This being totally comfortable with your lover and just reveling in the small moments of life.   I am just so happy that I found an author that seems to revel in writing it.  the few multiple part stories I read in gay and het literature never, ever show these moments.  Funny, they just concentrate on setting up the sex and forget the little life points.

//  we now see the one area that Laura and I so differ.  I find it so frustrating that Laura keeps denying her inner kink slut and blanches when her angels want to partake of some hard loving.  I just have smile.  I so believe that lovers should explore good hard fucking so deeply.  It just adds so much to the fucking.  I so love to feel the power of my lovers and to be humiliated by them.  it is cool that you show again that lovers don't always want the same thing.  You actually have lovers not want to do something and they don't.  in other stories the lovers always have the same idea and want to go about it in the same way.  I am always loving for Laura to take it higher and here we see that she will ["Did I say something to upset you?" Amber asked, softly but bluntly.        Laura shook her head.  "No.  Nothing."   She kissed her again.  "I would be delighted to make your dreams a reality."        "Oh goodie."   She thrust the dildo and harness into Laura's hands.  "I think I've come about a dozen times since then just remembering it.  Well . . ."  She paused, growing confessional.  "Maybe with a little finger help.  But you were the catalyst."]  I am sure she will brake at least some but I love how she is going to give all she can to her lover.  You show that willingness of women to try and meet her woman's needs.  I love the communication you show between your lovers.  They are communicating and negotiating.  We all do that in our lives and in the bedroom.  I just wish Laura would let go.  With me and my main babies we are reaching for the limits and pushing those limits.  It just makes you cum so fucking hard feeling hard dicks slamming into you fuck holes and sliding down your throat roughly.  It just ignites the body and soul when you are being whipped and flogged.  Having your face slapped and hair pulled.  Being bound and whipped and fucked hard.  it is so cool learning the limits.  I now know Akia loves to really put up a fight and be subdued roughly.  Discovering that La'Tonya is a mistress in her home and is making a special room in the room over the garage of the house they have just bought.  She is a true master.  I really love the active parts of rough sex but I love bdsm too.  They were showing me their new home before they had really moved in and I got an extreme education in their special room.  La'Tonya so knows that Belissa and I are both pain sluts and she so knows how to make us cum so explosively.  Of course, she is too.  They have already installed hooks into the ceiling beams and we had La'Tonya hooked up with her hands bound together and her arms outstretched.  It is so rad for both of us to have our floggers and we are just flogging the hell out of her.  The last time I was in the front flogging her tits, ribs and belly while Belissa was flogging her ass and back with full arm strokes that just filled the room with the sounds of tassels striking bronzed flesh.  Then I moved to her back and whipped her so fucking hard as Belissa slapped her face cruelly and then flogged her from her toes to her upper chest.  I so loved how La'Tonya cried and wailed as we worked her so fucking good and her cunt ran cunt juice down her thighs and her nipples were so rock hard and swollen.  We took turns getting on our knees and sucking her off to shattering orgasms.  Ordering her to hump our faces lewdly with her cunt all forward tilted and thrusting.   Loved how she wailed and her body kept lurching and trying to spin as we held in place to continue sucking her shattering cunt as it convulsed out steamy love juices to our hungry gulping mouths.  Have to love the mention of masturbating to thoughts of Laura.  I so love to masturbate and love seeing it mentioned in print.  I so love my own body so much.

//  I have so loved your pacing in your stories.  Love is once more beginning to throb in their veins and they are feeling frisky again.  Most authors would just have them go straight to sex but you show us them telling each other how they would love to do some nice kissing first.  I always want your pussy or asshole on my tongue or being pierced by my love cock.  but you show that we women love to start to slow and then ramp up.  I so love taking your mouth repeatedly over the night as we continue to fuck.  Feeling our lust raging again as our tongues twine and wrestle wetly as they flow from mouth to mouth.   I can just feel my belly lurch and my whole body buck as my lover's tongue worms all around in my mouth and sliding down my throat making me caw and moan into your devouring mouth.  just makes my legs fall open and my I can feel my thigh, belly and pelvis getting all wet and slippery awaiting loving invasion.  Wow, you really show that here.  You sum it up so well.  [They stretched out on the bed, kissing and embracing for a long time.  Laura knew they needed their bodies to get in tune with each other again, to shake off the drowsiness of sleep and fully inhabit the sensuality that remained, and to get emotionally in complete harmony again too.  It was possible to fuck without all this, but it would be so much better with it.]  kissing just gets everything flowing and raging.  Why do without this magic to get your womb so fucking on fire before you even really get going.  I so love to tilt and angle my mouth to yours so I can mash them so fucking tight as I simply spear my tongue down your throat and roughly slither my long tongue around your tongue and squeeze and pulse my tongue in and out as it slithers over our tongue.  I have made women scream into my mouth with tongue magic.  I so love seeing that full body shudder and melting as eyes roll back.  I so know that a newbie is totally mine when I see this.  I like how you show them moving slowly.  No need to hurry as Laura moves down and once more loves amber's breast.  I so love to work your face and then move down and devour tits.  I smile as you always show this.  Other authors simply move things along too quickly for my taste.  You tell how Laura is taking her time devouring amber's little puffy nipples.  Making them engorge with blood and then sucking hard.  I love making such nipples all swollen and then working so hard and focused.  I like Laura making sure she is not working her tits to hard since that is so in character.  I find most women take hard loving when loving introduced to and then seek it over and over.  you just have to know how to work without really bruising or pinching to hard.  I murmur my questions and watch real close as I get to know you and what you can take and how much you like.  I find most women get addicted to it when I show them what hard fucking gives one.  I know they love working and fuck abusing me and seeing how I almost die from it.  I just wish other authors would show this pacing and multiple love sessions.  They are basically one and done.  It is amazing how you can accomplish so much more with the feel of the story and making sex hot than the harem author does who uses kilobyte after kilobyte in his sex scenes and they yet don't ring true and seem genuine where yours are so hot and real.

//  with your breast loving here I love the communication that you also show ["I really do," Laura panted back, opening her lips and sucking one bulbous beauty inside, but gently.        Amber sighed a little and watched.  Laura sucked her thick nipple gently, laving it with warm spittle and curling her tongue around it, raising her eyes to catch and hold Amber's as she sucked.  She was not sucking hard, but Amber's eyes rolled up.        She panted more rapidly.  "You . . . can do it a little harder."        "I don't want to hurt you," Laura whispered.        Amber laughed softly.  "I want you to hurt me a little.  Remember?"]  I like your communication.  I am always wanting my women to communicate to me their needs and I watch them so closely.  I live for every grimace and slash and reading them like a book to produce womb rending orgasms.  I advance and retreat according to what your body so loving tells me along with your audio cues.  Geez, you give so much.  I swear no other author has told me such things as "laving with warm spittle; curling her tongue around it; sucking one bulbous beauty inside".  I mean this so much better than {Laura sucked her nipple}.  That is what other authors give me.  love amber urging her on.  I wish Laura would listen to her.  Good hard loving just makes you cum so fucking hard.  I really, really like the communication.  Again, I am really thinking here, I can't recall one other story with this kind of back and forth between lovers.  Communicating need and want and the other lover listening and trying to comply or subtly change to her bidding as you sometimes show.  It is just so cool to read.  Have to love amber knowing her kink side.  Sigh, you so know how to show breast worship [Laura released Amber's wet breast and moved her lips across to the other one, holding it in both hands.  "I am going to fuck you so hard," she murmured as she began to tongue-stroke and then suck it gently.  She knew how Amber loved dirty talk.  "I'm going to push your face down into the sheet and ram you and hammer your pretty black pussy until you scream."        "Unnggghhh!   Yes!"        Laura sucked her nipple hard now, and pulled the flesh of this breast into her mouth too.  She knew Amber was becoming frightfully aroused.  Her sleek black body was twisting and writhing under Laura's mouth and hands.  She was whimpering.        "Please . . . Laura!"]  I mean most authors don't even tell us that their women are loving both tits.  I did this last night as I was sucking maria's tits so good.  I was growling to her how I was going to rape her asshole so fucking hard with my big dick.  I was tongue lashing and gripping a tit with both hands and sucking her nipple, areola and tit meat into my mouth and sucking in deep and then pulling my head up until it was all taunt and slowly letting it slip out over my tight sucking lips and through my teeth as she whimpered and her head thrashed with herky jerks.  Gods her moans were so divine.  As I got ready to get her other tit mashed into my mouth I would breath to her how I was going to plunder her asshole and rape her cunt with my cock straight out her asshole and how I was going to make her lick her ass off my cock before slamming it back deep into her spasming asshole.  she was just whimpering and cawing as I once more sucked tit meat in deep and worked my magic.  I love making her wet and whimpering for me.  you are so right on, when you love the upper body with total love and focus you just make your slut writhe and twist like you say.  You just make her so fucking ready to have her cunt totally taken and sucked or fucked to ruin.

//  I am smiling great big as amber is by now begging for Laura to get on with it and fuck her with her love dick.  you capture so well how foreplay simply makes your woman so fucking hot and wet for it.  you have her simply dying for it before you have even started to work her passion flower.  It just makes the taking of her sweet, swollen cunt even sweeter.  Seeing it all swollen and wet before you have even started focusing on it.   I know I have done my job when I see this.  I too need my gash but I will forgo when the heat of the moment demands it.  when it is time to use your love cock it is time to use it.  but what really makes the upcoming penetration so special is how you show amber so wrought up.  We can literally feel her desperation for the upcoming fuck.  I can feel it because you have set everything up so swell.  Other stories almost never show this ramped up need and the few that don't just say it.  only you set it up that I can just here it in her voice.  I can just hear the tone and the need.  Only your setup gives me this.  Now we get to the special moment.  [As often happened, Laura, so inevitably oral, was very tempted first to bend down and lick and suck this festering wet nether mouth she was about to invade, but she got the better of the impulse, knowing what Amber expected and craved, and bent happily to her task.  She ran her hands all over the girl's sweet, compact black ass, even sliding her thumb down into the crease between her hard, shapely moons to press and caress her pinched-tight anus, which always alarmed and yet sent thrilled shivers through Amber, who did not permit entry there.        "Oh!  Oh!"  She looked back over her shoulder at Laura but said nothing.  She knew Laura would not overstep the boundaries they had tacitly agreed upon.         Meanwhile Laura was guiding the head of the shiny purple shaft into the wet, gaping, dark pink cauldron of Amber's open pussy, then slowly pushing it all the way in.        "Ummmnnrrrgghhh!" Amber growled in a soft, guttural groan as it slid into her body.  "Ohnnggg shit!" she gasped., her eyelids fluttering, her cheek pressed to the sheet.]  this is just such a magical moment when I watch my cock sliding into your tight cunt or asshole.  I so love watching it disappear as I slowly sink it into your fuck hole.  I love watching those looks on your face if I can see and the way a body shakes and judders as they feel my dick sliding in.  only you really capture this moment of penetration.  I mean other authors have it but it just happens.  I guess the harem does better with all his kilobytes but he just loses the magic somehow.  Only you give the reader the sounds and how the woman receives is reacting.  How her body shakes and rattles so to speak.  And most women make some kind of noise as they are penetrated.  Some more and some less but some reaction.   Other authors just miss this.  Have to love the moment of Laura teasing amber's asshole with her thumb.  This is something I do often when I know I will be invading your rear orifice.  I will push my thumb into the first knuckle and loosen up as I am fucking you or eating you out.  Getting your O ring ready for future loving.   I so know how to seduce and read my slut newbies.  I do have to back off but so often I am able to get my finger into their asshole and start stroking and I just love seeing them swoon with a growing love of anal invasion.  Knowing that soon my love dick will be plundering their asshole so fucking deep.   feeling her sphincter clutching my finger and if virgin bowing out as it grips my finger so hard.  I so love to start that rhythm as I fuck their cunt or I'm eating them out or fingerfucking both holes.  I so love taking assholes as mine.  Taking a virgin or long unused asshole and taking it to heaven and back.  I just love you being so tactile that Laura's loving hands get the opportunity to tease and caress amber's rosebud.  I so love to stroke your whole body and move in and see how far I can seduce you and how quickly I can take your anal cherry.  Especially love the detail of amber's eyelids fluttering and her cheek pressed into the mattress.  It is the small things that make something so fucking rad!

//  I like how you tell the reader that Laura's thighs are striking amber's ass cheeks as she starts to stroke her dick in and out amber's steamy cunt.  I love to work my dick in deep and feel our bodies smacking and grinding.  I love to get the angle the right and just slam my dick so hard and deep into your willing, yearning flesh.  I so love to be mashed down into the mattress or floor or buffeted between multiple lovers as the pound my jolting body.  It is so refreshing to see lovers communicating.  We hear amber's pleasure and Laura seeking guidance.  A lover asking her lover how to better her pleasure.   I so love this in my life and am happy to find one author who understands this.  I can just hear amber's moans and the sound of Laura's thighs striking amber's ass as they stroke and surge.  I so love to feel our bodies jolt as I spear my cock into your fuck hole and feel our bodies starting to sweat and feel that sweat as we grind and strike our flesh.  I keep sighing when I see you showing how to love the whole body and communication [Laura leaned down even closer, rubbing her naked breasts against Amber's bare back, sucking the muscle of one gleaming black shoulder, ripping the dildo into her pussy again, harder this time.        "Auunngghh!"         "You like that?"        "Auunngghh!"         "You love that?"        "Auunngghh!   Oh . . . god . . . yessssss!  Auunngghh!" ]   I never see this in other stories.  By loving the whole  body you simply make your woman die from it.  you have done this from the beginning and helped me fall in love with your stories so quickly.  I love to mash my heavy tits all over your body while I am fucking you.  Feeling them mash and my nipples poking and digging across your flesh.   Being the meat between the bread as my body is buffeted and mashed by my lovers as I feel my tits mashing down or flopping around if reverse cowgirl or such.  I think the first thing that did grab me was the sounds of your stories.  Over the years I have really become attuned to this or lack thereof.  I can still remember going nuts during Laura and Karen's first fuck with all the divine articulations of lust, passion and love.  this is what made me go wow!! that first day I discovered your stories.  Real fucking orgasms and on top of that the actual sounds of good hard fucking and mind blowing orgasms.  I have been addicted ever since.  I know some women are quieter by nature but even they whimper and moan softly and can be encouraged and taught to really vocalize.  A few authors use sounds but they have no fucking variation.  It is the same!!!! thing over and over.  I never ever!! know what you are going to vocalize.  Just like real life.  We may have tendencies but that still varies to strength, duration and variations of that sound that is our favorite.  Other stories almost ring with the quietness of their story.  I guess I love it so because I am so vocal, slutty and nasty.  Last week I was over Shavondra and Lakita's.  Lakita was simply devouring my swollen cunt and her sister road my face with hard sweeps of her running, spasming cunt.  We had been going for a while and I was happily bucking into Lakita's face as I slurped, tongue stabbed and tried to suck Shavondra's clit off.  I had looped my arms over her thighs as she rode me to help her grind down as my mouth moaned and gibbered into her cunt mashed all over my mouth and lips.  I loved the snuffling sounds I was making.  I started to vibrate her clit fast and furious with my fingers as I mashed my  mouth deep into her fuck hole and sucked in deep throat love sucks as my tongue speared and flailed.  Sigh, I was slurping down her hot steamy cunt juice when her orgasm hit out of nowhere.  Shavondra screamed a cry of piercing ecstasy as she folded over and shuddered massively for about five seconds or so .   I so loved glancing up and seeing her face near mine as it slashed horribly and sweat spattered off her juddering, moaning face.  Suddenly she screamed again another gurgled cry of shocking ecstasy and her body just spasmed ramrod straight and up and since I wasn't expecting such a sudden movement she lurched out of my grip and flopped onto their king sized bed and juddered and moaned piteously as waves of searing ecstasy flowed out her exploding womb.  I quickly forgot her except for her lower leg spasming across my belly and gripped Lakita's hair with both hands with my arms mashing Shavondra's twitching leg into my belly to help grip Lakita's hair to grind her face into my juicing cunt.  I rode her face hard pushing and sweeping forward my spasming cunt.  I was gurgling out all sort of nasty words and moans as I swept more and more desperately.  I so love to say fuck, shit, goddamn, oh my fucking gods and such which I was.  Between moans and curses I lifted my juddering neck and looked Lakita in her smoky green eyes and moaned growled at her "suck my cunt you goddamn fucking nigger!"  I felt my soul sing and my cunt convulse as her eyes flared and she sucked my entire clit, hood and upper cunt meat into her mouth and began to supper suck hard while tongue lashing my suddenly on fire clit.  I felt my whole body building with fucking orgasmic lightening.  My head crashed to the mattress and then it hit my like an earthquake of exploding ecstasy.  I just clenched up as my upper torso rose like six inches and I looked down my spasming stomach and my arms shot out rigid and slammed down my fingers clawing into the mattress as my heels dug and spasmed into the mattress.  I just had this long tortured groan as my cunt spasmed and my eyelids fluttered and eyes half rolled back.  usually when I run out of breath my spasm passes but this time I was still spasming as my breath ran out and I swooned gasping for breath as my body pummeled me with pure fucking bliss.  I finally crumpled back to the mattress and cried out fuck and goddamn weakly and that cunt Lakita suddenly started supper sucking again and tongue batted my clit with the underside of her tongue making another killer orgasm explode out my shredding womb as my head rocked back and I groaned gutturally to the ceiling as I clawed her scalp and raggedly jammed my cunt into her mouth with heaving spasms jamming her mouth back as I sobbed out my bliss through clenched teeth.  I so loved her snuffling moans as she sucked down my cunt nectars and now gently laved my spent cunt as Shavondra crawled on top of me and kissed me deeply as our love flowed with slithering tongues coiling and wrestling wetly.

//  I am smiling as we hear Laura egging amber on.  I so love to whisper like Laura here or often bark out with meanness in my voice to egg my lover on.  I love ordering my slut to cum and cum fucking hard!  you so, so know how to egg on and to show that ramping I so love.  I took the time to read the last installment of the Sandy and Harem stories to make sure about my rants.  I find that the Sandy stories do have some nice dialog at the beginning of the sex scenes but they are the seducing the reluctant woman.  Once the sex scene starts little back and forth communication occurs.  the harem author has dialog but it is strictly movie porn dialog.  Your dialog seems like two real life women communicating.  You make sure your dialog fits the woman.  You personalize your dialog.  You make it intimate and that just makes your dialog that step or two or more above other authors.  in reading the harem author I again became so tired of them giving almost a soliloquy during the sex.  Yes I talk and maybe give a sentence here and there while I am busy fucking but not the equivalent of the porn version of the Gettysburg address.  You hit perfectly with ["And I'm just the one who can do it, right?  I can fuck you harder than anybody.  I can make you scream.  There's nobody to hear you scream.  Go ahead."        "Awwwoonngggg!" Amber howled as Laura speared her pussy even harder with the dildo, holding it in one hand now that her thrusting was growing increasingly violent.]  beautiful dialog and that ramping up that is so the secret to great fucking.  the Sandy author really has no ramping at all and the Harem author loses his pacing with extra kilobyte fluff.  I have come to be amazed at your talent for producing so much heat so economically.  Your stories are hot while still keeping them fairly small and still provide character interaction and growth.  Really quite a feat I think.  Have to love the ramping up of the thrusting.  I so love ramping up my thrusting as I plow your fuck hole.  I am very skilled but sometimes one does need to use that hand to spear your cock hard and deep into your lover's fuck hole.  I especially love to do this when spearing a nice tight asshole making my woman jibber and cry out in pained pleasure.  in reading those stories I mentioned I don't get this [Amber's muscles clenched, and her movements became more tense and jerky and urgent.  Her breathing accelerated, and her moans turned into more and more panicky whimpering as the pressure of her gathering orgasm increased.        "Oh god . . . oh yes . . .  do it harder!" she gasped to Laura, trying to look back over her shoulder but unable to do it as her body writhed and quivered and would not obey her commands.  Then she winced and fell forward as Laura again stabbed the thick purple dildo deep into her tight pussy.  "Ummmgggpphhh!"   She fell forward onto the sheet.  "Owwwnnngggg!   Shit!"]  The Sandy stories are so light on details and the Harem author is just I don't know what but he doesn't have this sense of ramping in his stories.  I mean it just oozes from your prose.  You can see the tension building in amber's body and her desperation to cum rising.  I love all the words you use to show how she is being pleasured.  Other authors always forget to actually tell the reader what the woman receiving is feeling.  They kind of do it in the third person mode I find.  the author tells the reader they are basically being sucked, fingerfucked or fucked.  They just seem to tell you without drawing you in like you do with the first person telling of the story.  This draws the reader in and makes you just feel the fuck so intimately.  Sigh, love the stabbing part.  I so love driving my cock so hard and deep into your willing, jolting, writhing body.  Driving or slamming her down into the bed or floor.  Making her feel my power as I drive her closer and closer to heaven.   Stroking and gripping her body as I work her.  Love the detail of gripping amber's shoulder to help spike her dick into her clenching cunt.  I so swoon when I feel fingers gripping my shoulder, ribs or hips to help my fucker drive their dick hard into my cunt and or asshole.  I love feeling a man's strength as they grip me so hard to simply slam their cocks so fucking hard into my love aching body.  Jolting and feeling my tits whiplash and roll if free to do so.   Feeling my whole body rattle and shake with their power.  I wish more women could fuck me so hard.  just as exciting is having my hair used as anchor points.  I love feeling two fists clenched deep in my hair, feeling your clenched fingers scraping my skull as I feel your power pulling me back by my hair / head and slamming me back or down into your slamming cock or strap-on making me cry out in ecstasy. 

//  I know Laura is in character but all I can say is "geezzzzzzz" when she asks if she is fucking amber to hard and amber croaks back "no" and wants it harder.  I can so read my slut's groans and huffing to know to keep ramping up.  I try to be careful because so many women want you take them even when they say no.  I look for that freezing up or that quality of "no" to know when to back off.  A great lover knows the difference.  I do have to smile at how this continually shows Laura's gentle, nice nature.  She is so concerned and caring.  I like the comment that they are fucking so "violently" like Laura and Dawn.  Het fucking does kind of engender this kind of hard fucking.  I so love to wrap my arms around your upper body and grip your thighs or ass with my legs and simply slam myself up into your thrusts as you spear me and mash me down.  I want to feel your body mashing me and your hips slamming my pelvis driving your dick deep into my clenching fuck hole.  I so love how you tell the reader the quality of the fuck.  I get so tired of the generic fuck that is the same for a given author over and over.  you show the differences.  Oh geez,  I felt my womb do a flip in my belly.  I talk of my love of hair pulling and you show Laura doing this [Laura was acutely tuned to the tension in Amber's body so that she would choose the right moment to deliver the coup de grâce.  And this was it.  Amber was wound tight, gasping and writhing and whimpering almost hysterically, her body clenching and surging and shuddering.  Reaching forward with both hands—she had to release her grip on the dildo and hope that firm, steady thrusting with her hips would keep it in place—she filled them with thick clumps of Amber's short black hair.        At this moment Amber was already beginning to come.  Her body flexed and spasmed violently, and a gargled cry of raw ecstasy came ripping up out of her lungs. Laura chose exactly this moment to yank fiercely back with both hands, jerking Amber's head back as she did, pulling Amber's hair so sharply that she knew the fiery daggers of pain were shooting through Amber's scalp and sending jagged electrical shocks through her entire body.         "ANNNGGGHMMNNGGIIEEEEE!" Amber screamed, a piercing, horrific cry but not of pain.  It was a cry instead of sexual transcendence, a shriek of sensual distress mingled inextricably with a seizure of paralyzing ecstasy.  "ANNNGGGHMMNNGGIIEEEEE!" she shrieked again.         Laura held on for dear life.  Amber's svelte, limber body was flipping and straining under her as if to throw her off, and yet she knew there was no such intent.  The girl was merely careening through several orgasms, one following the next, 'going multiple,' as it were, in a prolonged paroxysm of wrenching, shattering physical rapture.  It seemed to go on for a long time.  Laura was certainly finished thrusting and hair-pulling and fulfilling every other part of her obligation long before Amber began to slow down and recover her senses.]  I never really see in other works the fucker trying and striving to read their lover's bodies.  Showing that one is trying to give them the best fuck possible.   I always strive to deliver the love kill supreme and love seeing Laura striving for that.  Only the harem author shows the ramping that you do but his sameness and not sure what else (length and loss of focus – I think) keeps from scoring like you do.  You show the tension and potential for explosive release by showing the reader how amber is ramping up and her filling with that priceless sexual tension that only a harrowing orgasm can release.  Then using the hair pulling.   Sigh, I so fucking love it.  you only use this sometimes like a great lover does and, thus, when it is used it has the affect you show.  Then the use of all caps.   The beauty is that you haven't used this in chapters and when I see it is like whoa, this is simply a killing orgasm.  reading the last Harem chapter really hammered this home as again ALL the orgasms had the women shouting out whole sentences of all caps words.  I have gotten to the point it is almost painful to read them.  so fucking the same.  I just love words like "careening and prolonged paroxysm" and such.  It just adds so much to the story.  It gives each orgasm nuance and spice.  I love how you show the duration of this series of orgasm.  again so much of erotica is they basically cum and that is about it.  nothing special like you make your orgasms.  You setup each fuck so well and then deliver the love kill.  Simply divine I must say.

//  I have to love how you know to use all caps screams of fucking bliss for those special occasions.  Most of my angels and I are vocal but those truly harrowing screams of womb searing pleasure are not an every day occurrence.  Not every orgasm simply makes one lose their mind and one can't help but roar out their pleasure.  three nights ago I actually got to hear a twofer.  I had taken Tisa over to Belissa and La'Tonya's home.  We had been fucking for a while and we were now finishing off Tisa in a hard fuck.  Belissa was on her back with Tisa straddling her and she was jamming up slamming her hard dick deep up Tisa 's tight cunt.  La'Tonya was behind them slamming her thick, long strap-on deep up Tisa 's clenching asshole.  I was kind of fucked out and I had been lazing back stroking my kitty as I watched them pound a hard orgasm out of her as they took turns doing her spoon and cowgirl in turn with so much atm and a2p play.  They had then mounted her dp style again and now she was again clearly approaching another womb shredding orgasm.  Tisa had been grunting and snuffling and jamming back vigorously but as her orgasms approach I have noticed she tends to get kind of weak kneed so speak.  Her head was now on Belissa's shoulder as she groan and moaned, her body collapsed on Belissa's body their tits all mashed and nipples digging.  She was mumbling "fuck me harder, rape my fucking black asshole, pound my shit" and such.  I so love watching as their faces and bodies dripped sweat as Belissa gripped Tisa 's hips to help drive her dick so hard into Tisa 's cunt.  Now La'Tonya was up on the balls of her feet and Tisa 's ass and simply ramming her dick so fucking deep into Tisa 's jolting body with hard punishing pounding thrusts.  Now La'Tonya reached forward with one hand to grip a shoulder and her right hand clenched a hand full of afro and pulled Tisa up to her palms arms fully extended and now they were hammer fucking her as Tisa 's face slashed and her throat gibbered out demented moans of fucking ecstasy.  I was getting revived and moved in and pushed her up some more tilting her torso up and back to allows me to grip her full tits and I began to pulp with hard squeezes  making her areolas and nipples bulge and know began to supper suck, tongue drill and gnaw on them.  sigh, one hand clenched the sheets and the other gripped my hip as just above my head a loud fucking scream was ripped from her tilted back head, "UUUUNNNNGGGGHHHHHHH" that filled us with vigor to pound her harder and for me to suck and pulp her tits harder.  Anther scream filled the room as her body jackknifed with horrific spasms and body jolts.  She was shaking and moaning deeply now and I pulled her tit over a little as I sucked and saw that Belissa hand wormed her hand to Tisa's clit and was rubbing it hard and fast and was slamming up hard and fast as La'Tonya now rabbit fucked her shit hole too and we were rewarded as I pulled her tit meat taunt with my patented hard sucking and teeth sawing her steepled areola and engorged nipple as she now screamed "GOOOODDDDDAMMMMNNNN!!! …  aaugghhhhh …. FUUUUUUUUUUCCCCKKKKKKKK!!!" with another killing orgasm ripping her soul as her body surged with her screamed cursing as her fingers spasmed and bruised my  hip and her other hand clawed the sheets and pulled wildly as her body flipped and surged as we roughly held her place to prolong her pleasure with our hammer fucks in her fuck holes and my loving ministrations to her tits. 

//  we continued to strap-on fuck till exhaustion.  We then slept to till about one o'clock and we then began to suck each other in various groups and turns.  I was between La'Tonya's bronze thighs and dining on her swollen, running cunt.  Tisa had sucked her off to a jackknifing, groaning orgasm and I had moved in for some sodden cunt meat and divine cunt juices.  I was giving her my expert skill and loved looking up her sweaty heaving belly and watching Belissa and Tisa working her tits.  Tisa was jamming her face into her tit and was snuffling as she sucked and squeezed her perfect gourd and sawed and tongue flicked her long rock hard nipples.  Belissa was using my technique of gripping her tit and hard loving squeezing and latched onto her nipple and was cheek hollowing sucking as her head pulled up stretching her tit taunt as she pumped her head back and up.  La'Tonya was humping desperately with her hips lurching up off the mattress which had made it easy for me to get my hands on her buns to help her hump.  I loved hearing her moans and whinnying getting more labored and guttural.  I groaned tasting her divine cunt juice and feeling her heels digging into my ass cheeks as she used them to help her pump.  I could sense the orgasm approaching and I moved one hand to pump her cunt with three fingers plunging, rotating and raking her never bundle and the other to press down on her belly just above her mound.  Neat how I recently learned I am hitting her g-spot from the outside.  I just knew my sluts love it.  she was doing long slow sensuous humps now of her pelvis up into my pressing face and I watched up her belly as her head came up and made hot eye contact with us as her face was slashing horribly and her teeth gritted as her tortured breathing hissed out her teeth.  I now pulsed my fingers pressing into her belly hitting her g-spot from her belly.  Suddenly, her head snapped back on her upraised, corded neck (I swoon remembering her bulging tendons and carotid arteries so taunt and visible in her throat) and the ceiling received a pure unadulterated scream of fucking bliss.  She screamed out "AAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE" as her body started shaking and jolting horribly.  I smiled into her cunt feeling her heels spastically jamming my ass as her body rose up and jackknifed into my devouring mouth.    Her body was so intoxicating to watch as it jolted and twisted as she screamed and screamed the same scream and her body shook its whole length while convulsing like a million volts of sexual current were ripping her flesh from her bones.  Her head had jerked back down to the mattress and her scream faded out to harsh moans filled with deep crushing sounds of pure ecstasy.  I loved seeing what I could of her face and hair spastically tilting right and left as she gulped wildly.  her body still jolted with sudden jerks and her mound just poured searing cunt juices all over my face and over my plunging fingers and soaking the mattress under her humping pelvis.  We sensed the pinnacle passing and backed off.  A few more spasm violently rocked through her.  I lathed her spent cunt as Belissa and Tisa took turns snaking their tongues down her moaning throat as love was deepened between archangels and new love flowed between twining tongues as Tisa got up and pressed her mouth down into La'Tonya's to drive her tongue as deep as possible into La'Tonya's open accepting mouth.  twining tongues tight and slithering down her throat I am so sure.  I so love seeing new love blossom.

//  I think it is cute how you end this loving fuck.  I so love the details of Laura releasing her grip of amber's hair and amber remarking that Laura would love to shove her strap-on deep up amber's asshole.  more of that cute sharing that I so love in your stories.  It is just so cool that you show hair pulling and have dialog.  I love feeling your sweaty hair in my fists after I have fucked you well and jerking your head around with short vicious jerks as it flops and jerks on your spent neck.  I love the moans and groans this illicit.  Then releasing my grip and watching your head thud onto the mattress or floor all spent or if feeling a little mean pushing your head down and watching it bounce on the mattress as you love moan and bask in my grudge fuck.  I always think when a woman talks about something deep down she wants it.  I would be plotting and scheming to soon have my dick sliding deep and hard up her shit hole and making it explode in a brain searing anal 'gasm and addicting her to anal sex.  It is so cute and endearing that amber is thinking of getting Laura another bracelet.  We know it is love and not any thing like possessing Laura that makes amber want to give Laura another gift.  It is simple love.  I love your gentle touches.  I am smiling as amber makes it so clear she loved the rough sex.  I hope that laura gives amber what she needs in the future and fucks her so hard and deep just like amber wants it.  how romantic amber wanting to catch the dawn with Laura and murmurs that more sweet fucking is soon to commence.  Sigh, sweet down time to be followed by more heated fucking.  I am smiling great big as the story ends with them once more fucking and laura reflecting on the perfect setting and environment and how fortunate she is to have amber in her life.  Love it.

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