• Chapter 310
• Chapter 311
• Chapter 312
• Chapter 313

 

 

Chapter 310:

//  this chapter starts with what i like to call the literature aspects of your writings.  we get to see a glimpse of laura and makeeda's life that has nothing to do with sex.  something that doesn't advance the plot of getting them in bed.  others may find this boring but this is

what makes your stories so special.  we get to see them sharing a special moment that only shows love.  you get this in the slash world.  this is the focus of most of those stories.  that is where i started reading on the internet.  i liked the story but i got so tired of reading long stories with little or no sex (off camera stuff).  i wanted sex!!!!  some had great sex scenes but i wanted the goods so to speak.  then i discovered repositories of sex stories and went nuts.  i loved them but soon saw how limited they could be.  the basic story without anyone making them unique and then sex without the details and so linear

and boring really.  sex gets me hot but to get me boiling i need something more.  therefore, i love seeing these "literature" elements in your story.  i love reading how supportive laura is of makeeda's drive to become a famous jazz singer.  it makes my heart proud that she is so willing to help makeeda achieve her dreams.  it is always nice when you do something nice to make your woman(s) get all doe eyed.  i have to smile at them scrimping to get a hotel room so makeeda can do new york .  i like you showing makeeda going through the struggles to be famous. kind of like the overnight ten year success story.  it almost always takes lots of hard work.  making a living in the arts most be tough.  like the little comment about lesbians and their cats.  we have two and a little yap-yap dog for me.  i have always loved your little humorous touches.  it is the little things that make love deepen.  it so heart warming to see makeeda touched and not wanting to take advantage of her lover's generosity and seeing laura calming and soothing makeeda.

helping her to reach her dreams.  i can so read my archangels and know when they truly want something and i try to make it happen.  like the mental picture of laura covering her face in little kisses and then going to bed for womb rending sex and mind searing orgasms and basking in sweaty afterglow as souls twine deeper.

 

//  i can really understand this part if only intellectually.  i think I have said before that my singing has been compared to a dying amphibian.  it sounds okay to me but first my parents and now my archangels and plenty in between just cringe or laugh when i sing.  it

is really horrible.  i am completely tone deaf i guess.  i sure wish I could.  i know people who have a talent feel the very deep need to express and give it life.  but i have also noticed that almost all of them need and seek adulation for there skill.  i guess they go

together.  thus, i can fully understand when makeeda is totally glum with their being less than ten people at the club she is singing at.  I am not surprised.  if they don't do a lot of advertising and beating the bushes then people will not even know who is there.  also, she is kind of coming up through the minor leagues like in baseball.  she is working to build her fan base and it will take time.  she obviously has the talent it will just take time.  unless she lucks out like mariah carrey and getting a record producer to listen to her tape on a lark, it will take time to make it.  i have seen so many ten year overnight success

stories in rock n' roll.  it is touching to see her gloom at the lack of crowds.  singers get energy from their audience and not having one must be draining.  i have been in clubs with small audiences.  the singers give their all but i would not be surprised if behind the curtains they felt the same drain as makeeda.

 

//  it is touching seeing laura being so attentive and caring with makeeda when she is so drain.  that is what spouses do for their archangels.  be there when they are down.  trying to comfort and do little things like making her a drink to soothe her nerves and holding

your tongue when this happens [But Makeeda did not allow herself to be embraced.  Laura had seen a few of these moods before and decided to let well enough alone.  "How do you feel, paying for all this, for ten or twelve people?" Makeeda suddenly snarled.  "In a city of eight million people, I can draw a dozen?  Wow, some singer!  Twelve people."]  joann and dodie can really get like this when things are not going right in their life.  i used to have to almost bite my tongue in two to keep my mouth shut but i have mellowed over the years like laura and just know that they are hurting and if you love someone then sometimes you swallow your bile and give them a sweet smile.  i can tolerate because they only do it like makeeda when they are hurting on the inside and they are not maudlin with it.  i so love reading laura trying to buck makeeda up and using her wit.  it is not working but i do believe that it helps deep down and makes the depression less than it could be.  i like you showing laura loving and supporting her woman.  this is something that you can show because you have a flow of time.  they have been together for a year now and this allows you to show them living and sharing together and thus we can see the down times and how they react to it.  relationships are nothing but ups and downs.  we work to make the former more than the later.  i have to smile at laura feeling her libido rising with makeeda acting so glum.  i agree that strong emotions can fire up one's desires.  i so know how this affects me.  i just want to love you and make you feel so much better.  again i love how you show the ability of lovers to read each other.  makeeda can see laura's desire and says to "forget it".  as horny as we are, sometimes one of us is not feeling frisky and opt out and sometimes none of us feel up to it.  rare but negative emotions can really sap one.  i will go off and masturbate and make myself feel good and then come back and snuggle.  even i get like makeeda.  when work gets really sucky it can totally suck the life out of me.  it is so cute that laura has to avert her eyes so as to not let makeeda's beauty arouse her.  i feel this way when joann or maria are feeling low or sullen.  just seeing their naked flesh can set my pussy to quivering but i have learned when it is futile to try and seduce and when i might get hurt.  often the two who are not down will pair off but sometimes we want to cuddle when we are down and we know when to give to our babies.  i so love it when you show the tender like here [Then, she

switched off the light, slipped into her own half-nightie, and climbed into bed next to Makeeda.  She leaned over and kissed her shoulder, which was bare since Makeeda's nightgown had spaghetti straps.        "I love you," she murmured, but Makeeda was already asleep.]

 

//  a little while back frankie called me with a little quiver in her voice.  dodie had had a financial set back and had words with her other investors whom she was friends with one of them.  she is good with her investments but they can't all be winners.  i went over and we both waited on and cuddled dodie as she looked glum and sighed all over the place and refused our romantic overtures.  i know a trick she likes and turned her arm over and started to stroke her arm with my fingernails. she really relaxed and purred.  i started to reason and cajole and after about an hour i she just kind of sighed and turned toward me with big doe eyes and a pouting lower lip.  frankie was watching us and i just knew the storm had passed.  i unbuttoned her top and unsnapped her bra as she watched softly.  frankie tilted dodie's head back and slide her tongue deep into her mouth as she stroked dodie's face.  i started to suck her nipples lovingly as i began to massage her tits.  i so loved seeing her body melt as i started to milk her tits hard and sucked her nipples out and rubbed my teeth over her aureoles making her whimper and hitch.  soon frankie was on the floor between dodie's now nude body and pulled her pelvis roughly to the edge of the sofa and dived her famished face into dodie's meaty cunt.  i am smiling hearing her snuffling sounds in my mind as i watched her cheeks move as her tongue worked dodie's

fuck hole and seeing them hollow out when she sucked and polished dodie's love berry.  i worked dodie's tits and kissed her deeply and pulled her lips out like she likes.  i kept glancing down as Frankie gobbled dodie's soaked cunt and i saw her worm two fingers into dodie's asshole and pumped her hard as she sucked and tongue fucked with abandon.  i so loved watching up close as dodie's eyes bulged and her face slashed horribly and demented groans of rising ecstasy flooded from her throat.  i could see the end coming and moved down and gripped her tits hard and pulped as i took turns sucking her nipples hard and tongue drilled.  i felt dodie's body tensing and then shaking violently as a

scream was ripped from her throat as i kept glancing up to see her face destroyed by piercing bliss and then down as frankie had her mouth opened wide and clamped on her fuck hole knowing her tongue was fluttering in dodie's fuck petals.  dodie is so strong and her body rose up shaking violently as it convulsed and i knew hot steaming cum was

pouring down frankie's gulping throat as i saw her arm pistoning hard as she slammed her fingers up dodie's spasming asshole prolonging her bliss.  i grimaced in pained pleasure when dodie's arms suddenly thudded on my head so she could clamp her hands on the back of frankie's head as she jammed her cunt repeatedly into her woman's face as she had a second devastating orgasm.  i loved the pressure of my mouth full of tit meat and her arms wallowing on my head as she rode out her orgasm.  i made sure to suck her tit hard and dig my fingers deep into her tit meat to give her maximum pleasure.  she was much more herself after that orgasm let me tell you.

 

//  like the factoid about new york never being truly quiet but i really like how your phrase it [ New York continued to roar and rumble, honk and screech.  It was a constant, never-ending rush, this town.  It got into your blood.  You wanted to rumble and froth too, just like it was doing outside the window.]  pretty.  i have to smirk at the next part of the chapter.  when i go to sleep i almost always sleep.  i want to fuck before sleep and when i wake up in the morning but for me with some exceptions sleep is for sleep.  not for makeeda.  i loved to be woken up but if you are asleep i will normally let you sleep if i am horny.  I just jerk myself off to an orgasm in another room or work my cunt and tits beside and clench my teeth and try and control my bodies jackknifes and rolling around.  hum, now that i think about it i often wake you up during my masturbating since i have such a hard time staying quiet or still.  hehehe, i get a good self induced orgasm and then often some heated fucking.  yeah!  i love reading makeeda swarming laura and seeing

laura's love flaring and matching makeeda's.  i love to be awaken to a horny slut pawing me.  joann, the sisters and cindy are demanding like this.  sigh, the sacrifices we make.  i mean how wonderful is it to be woken up my this ["Oh god . . . yes!" she gasped into Makeeda's shoulder, then almost gagged on her own breath as she felt Makeeda's

lips tearing at one of her nipples, then felt it apparently going down Makeeda's throat.  "Unhh!  Owwnncchh!  Oh!"]  i love feeling my neck cord up and my head shake on the pillow as joann devours my tits and then milking them hard as she then swarms maria and works her into a fit as i lift my nipples to my mouth and suck and teeth rake.  hearing joann growl as she flops back on me and slaps my hands aside or pulls my tit from my mouth to claim as hers as she pulps and deep throat sucks.  Like i say, you can show such emotion and passion at the same time ["I love you . . . you are everything to me!" she half-growled—her voice low and muffled and nearly incoherent, but somehow also plaintive and sad—into Laura's body, into her breasts, as her lips sought Laura's other nipple and this time sucked and mauled it a little less viciously.]  i know that wanting to make amends and fucking you blind in my love and act of restitution.  of course i would be clamping my hand behind makeeda's head and ramming her mouth down onto my tit and groaning harshly to work my nipples harder and pulp my tits in hard love.

 

//  i love how you show passion.  we see makeeda forcing aside laura's desires to make love back.  i so know that wanting to be in total control as you devour your love slut.  i am smiling great big as makeeda pulls the tattered remains of laura's nightgown off.  i love it when I am treated like this. makes me feel like a total whore and totally desired.  dodie had invited me and camille over last month for some het fun.  she and frankie had some of their male friends over.  she gave me and camille some lingerie to wear.  we were parading around and moving to the jazz music.  we were humping our mounds in the men's faces and shaking our tits and making our asses quiver in their faces.  camille

brought along steven and aaron who were so excited to be fucking some more lesbian and bi chicks.  i had noticed that dodie had talked to the men while were leaving to get into our frilly things.  as camille was lewdly shaking her ass cheeks in frank's face i watched steven get up and fist her hair and called her a fucking nigger for slinking up to a white guy and smacked her hard.  i shrived knowing what was coming.  I was dancing in front of aaron and i felt someone grab my arm and jerk it and felt my nightie ripped apart on my back.  walt hissed i was a nigger lover and shoved me down on my knees as i was ordered to suck aaron off.  my fingers were shaking as i undid his belt buckle and jerked his pants and boxers down.  i gazed with hot lust at his jerking black cock and groaned as my hair was fisted and aarron beat my face with his cock roughly before he let me suck and slurp it.  i gave it my all as he groaned and moaned and i tongue batted his cock head and slipped his cock down my throat until my lips were mashed in his crotch hairs.  i

sucked him off with my head pumping hard and jerking his shaft.  i so loved it when he growled out he was coming and grabbed the back of my head and he "forced" my head down as i took his member fully down my gullet and he spasmed his hips up off the sofa each time time his cock spurted and jetted hot semen down my throat straight to my happy stomach.  i smiled as i got up and my ripped nightgown was grabbed and ripped off my body.  now naked i soon had my fuck holes filled with hard cocks pumping me hard as i watched the same being done to camille.  dodie and frankie masturbated each other as we were raped repeatedly with white, brown and black cocks fucking us deep as the guys kept changing partners and we groaned as dicks were ripped from each other's

assholes and stuffed down our throats and screaming and clawing the floor as we felt hot semen spewing out twitching cocks deep up our exploding cunts and assholes and having guys blast their semen down our throats and all over our faces and tits.  i felt like a porn queen!  I loved the power of their slaps as they made my ass glow red and my face covered in red marks.  i loved seeing camille's head rocking from hard smacks and her hair being pulled viciously and they way they grabbed her arms and pulled back making her back bow out and her tits strain. especially when aaron was slapping her face with his heavy cock as she cried out and panted like a fucking black whore.  then dodie and Frankie joined for more wild swing fun.

 

//  i love how you show the multiple positions of tribbing.  makeeda is in control like i want my women to do me when i am feeling submissive which is most of the time.  i like how makeeda takes control and makes it clear to laura without words that she is controlling the fuck.  i so love strength in my women.  you now show this in their tribbing.  I guess trib is the least shown thing in other's fiction.  it is even less than strap-ons.  thankfully you are writing.  when i do get trib in other stories it is always the classic scissor fuck with both women on their backs or sides.  no details really other than that just that they are tribbing.  i love trib but thank the gods so much is possible.  I have smiled in the past when you show face-to-face trib, cowgirl, sitting up and bending down and when you show your women doing a whirling dervish.  i really like those.  :-))  i love seeing makeeda mounting laura and jamming and sweeping her heavenly cunt into laura's.  you capture that well here [Makeeda was already scissoring Laura's pelvis with her legs and pushing her own pussy into Laura's, pumping and fucking her almost violently, grinding and pumping in a fierce, rocking rhythm, looming over her in a cowgirl position, looking down, grasping Laura's swirling naked breasts in both hands and twisting and squeezing them roughly.  This was not to be a gentle, sensual bit of love-making.  It was rough and demanding and sharp and searing.  Makeeda leaned down

and sucked Laura's neck, and bit her shoulder, and her mouth again tore at Laura's nipples.  For a long time there was no sound in the hotel room but their hot, feverish panting.]  i love how you use words like fierce, jamming, violently, etc.  this tells the reader so clearly how makeeda is using her strength and position to really power fuck

laura.  others tell of sex while you actually describe the hot fucking and thus make it perfect.  a couple nights ago dodie was fucking me like this.  i was in heaven, moaning as she jammed and sweeped my open cunt. she had gripped a thigh near her hip and was riding me roughly.  i was in heat watching her tits roll and whiplash with her motions.  i swooned as she cursed me and screamed at me to fuck up harder as i suddenly was

fucking up as hard as i could.  she just gritted her teeth and squeezed her eyes shut and worked her sweaty body to pleasure me.  sigh, i could feel my womb beginning to melt as i started to pulp my tits and pull nipples up stretching my tits out and then mashing cruelly again.  Oh gods, out of no where my womb shattered and i was screaming and

jackknifing up into dodie's jamming cunt.  i felt like five or six massive killing spasms throttling me as i clawed my tits and then slapping the bed as i screamed and my head thrashed and rocked up to slam the mattress repeatedly as my cunt tore itself inside out and I died from fucking bliss.  dodie repaid me by settling her meaty cunt onto my face when i got my bearings and rode my face as i gobbled her cunt and sucked her clit so fucking good.  she rode me for a long time as i dined on her sodden cunt and reached up to squeeze her tits and slapped her ass red.  i got to finish her with two fingers corkscrewing her asshole while used my other to grab her ass to help her jam my mouth

as she came so fucking hard filling my mouth to overflowing with hot steamy cum as i gulped greedily her so fucking tasty nectars.

 

//  i like how you give us a story arc with history that lets us see that makeeda and laura rarely fuck in trib and almost never with makeeda in the dominate position.  i just love that we have a story that allows us to see that.  this shows life and i love it.  you show the inner emotions as we see that laura is "flummoxed" and still wildly aroused.  when a lover is taken in a new or rare way it is always so exciting.  I like how you show the ramping up of sex.  makeeda is going strong and yet she is still ramping it up.  other authors always make the sex seem so linear and boring.  they just have the sex happen at a same boring pace.  you show how excitement and lust makes us take it higher and

higher.  i so love seeing makeeda's tits rolling and her breath getting more harsh as she works laura.  i like the reciprocity as laura reaches up to stroke makeeda's body and squeeze her gourds.  like great lovers,  makeeda can see that laura is starting to approach the finish line and steps it up like the slut she is.  my kind of woman!  you now show how a fuck just subtly changes to make it more divine [She encircled Makeeda's back with her arms, pulling her down, crushing Makeeda's firm breasts into hers, devouring her slackened mouth, forcing her to stop the fucking for a moment since it was impossible to thrust when they were this tightly embracing.  Their tongues stabbed in a delirious frenzy of sharp desire.]  again you show how things are not static but dynamic. we move and morph in our fucking.  i love to pull tight as our tits mash and nipples dig as our mouth clamp tight and we sloppily twirl our tongues deep in each other's mouths.  moaning and nostrils flaring as our tongues twine and stab down cawing throats.  feeling our sweaty

bodies slip and slide against each other as our cunts hump and surge against each other or against pelvis or thigh.  love the little details of life.  like laura chanting "cynthia" even though makeeda doesn't really like but allows it.  it makes her jam laura harder which laura knew she would.  i love the little relationship details that you sprinkle in your story.

 

//  you always clearly show why we fuck ["Oh god, yes honey!" Laura cried out, feeling her climax arrive.        "Mmmnnnggeeee!" Makeeda cried out a split second after Laura, actually beating her to the finish by a hair since it was clear she had begun to come even before crying out.  Her body clenched and shuddered, and her spasming fingers almost

clawed Laura's flesh.        "Auunngghhhh!" Laura groaned, coming in sharp jolts, her own body arching and bowing up from the mattress as she felt the full weight of Makeeda's delicious flesh slump onto her.  "Auunnngghhhh!"]  i so live to feel my throat ripped with fevered screams of bliss and my body hitching, jolting and jackknifing with

fucking bliss.  i can just feel my cunt convulse violently as my clit quivers and jumps.  i just feel fiery scalding ecstasy bursting from my womb and my tits throbbing and pulsing.  if i can get a hold of you I will clench and drag my fingers up and down your body and clamp my teeth onto your body and gnaw or bite if you like.  or feeling my arms and legs scissoring and kicking or stiffening and slamming the mattress or

floor.  sometimes my head rings when i am on the floor on my back and I come so fucking hard as my head jams the floor in repeatedly blows of killing ecstasy.  i like how laura's body bows up and mashes and slips against makeeda's sweaty flesh.  i so love feeling our sweaty flesh grinding and jolting in deep love.  feeling my body start to come down as heavenly aftershocks make me mewl and drool as i stroke your body and tell you how much i love you as i kiss your body or our mouths mate tight in deep love and tongues flow back and forth.  now this is sweet afterglow of great sex [the sweet hot spasms that kept her body twitching and jerking and quivering on top of Laura's for, it seemed, several minutes, with soft, helpless mewls escaping from her mouth. They were completely locked together and did not move, except to breathe, during the whole time.  They did not speak.  They were deeply in love, Laura knew, but never more so than at this moment.]  i so love this moment of bonding and sweaty bodies warming each other as we pull tight and stroke and kiss intimately.  have to love the little extras you give in your story.  you tell us of makeeda gloomy mood talking about a fellow jazz singer who leapt to her death from the very hotel.  then discovering the next day that a critic heard her sing the night before and wrote a glowing review and now makeeda is glowing.  it is

these little moments of sharing your life with an archangel that makes life special.  sex is so fucking divine but archangels share these moments that truly bind souls in deeper love.

 

//  geez, i am cringing with laura letting poor bonnie hanging like this.  i guess i would have found a way to communicate with her.  i know from first hand experience that hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. i know bonnie must have been first hurt and then pissed when laura didn't show after iniating contact.  i do goof sometimes in this area

and will be like a submissive dog with my tail between my legs until I make it up.  i guess we are approaching a week with laura first ogling bonnie and now she makes contact and then disappears.  i would be cringing next time i see bonnie.  i tend to run away like the sick people in monty pathon's holy grail when they are gonging for the sick

"give us your dead".  i like to act fast when love is in the air.  I love seeing it when i or one of my sweeties act so.  i was with Camille and we were walking in front of a strip mall beside her university going to the old navy store.  suddenly she pulled me into a sub shop.  She made a bee line to girl sitting by the window and squealed kapri.  She got up and hugged camille.  i was drooling (in a surreptitious way).she was tall and slender with a delicious dark brown color.  she had long hair a stunning face.  she was nice and slim with little hips and titties.  the kind of slender build i like to fuck hard and harder if

they are kinky and i could tell she was.  she told kapri that i was barbara and i saw her eyes flare.  she told me she had heard all about me as she hugged me close and smelled her body scent and felt her body against mine before we had to break our hug to not rouse the conservatives dammit.  we made small talk and let it be known we were all hot for it.  we hurried back to camille's and once inside we got kapri between us and devoured her.  we sandwiched her between us as we kissed and groped her and quickly pulled her sweater off.  i loved how she had no bra for her small titties.  i roughly ground them on her chest as i kissed her neck and humped her ass.  camille was kissing her deeply and dropped to her knees, jerked her pants and panties down and mashed her face into her aroused pussy that quickly filled the room with fuck scent.  i loved holding kapri up as camille snuffled eating her out and making her cry out and her had lull back against me as i pulled her nipples and mashed her little swellings.  i kissed her neck and used one

hand to turn her head over hard and i slammed my tongue down her throat making her caw.  she came so fucking hard as she shrieked and wallowed against me as i supported her sagging weight.  i could feel camille's hands on her ass cheeks working as she milked her ass and jammed her cunt into her starving mouth.  we quickly stripped and sat on the sofa as she sucked us off to expert devastating orgasms.  camille gave me a strap-on i had given her and one she had just bought, nice and deep blue.  we went into the bedroom and kapri got on the bed on her knees and we stood on the bed as she gave great head and deep throated our cocks and got spit all over her face and chest.  we got her down on the

bed and she mounted camille and i got behind and spit into her asshole and worked my cock into her asshole as camille started to work her wet cunt.  soon my cock was buried in her asshole as i fucked her with powerful strokes of my dick into her colon.  we slammed our cocks into her grunting body.  she growled, cursed and cried out.  her body was jolting with our powerful strokes.  i watched as camille's hand appeared and fisted her hair and pulled it back with hard jerks and i started slapping her ass hard and she started crying out and cursing as her body started jackknifing and lurching as i saw spittle fly and her hands tearing at the mattress.  we stroked her through her orgasm and let her

rest.  i then got on my back and she settled her butt on my belly and she slide my cock back into her asshole and i pulled her legs back and camille in moved and i swooned when kapri gurgled out when i felt camille work her cock into her tight asshole.  i could feel Camille having to worm her cock into kapri's stretched sphincter and we started

to pump as she cried and shrieked.  we fucked hard and camille's cock kept slipping out and kapri crying her asshole was too tight.  Camille would fuck her pussy a while before forcing her cock back into her spasming asshole i was fucking hard.  i choked kapri while Camille slapped her hard telling the little nigger to shut up and take it as kapri cried out "yessssss" and "oh god".  I loved how we pulled back and forced her head to our cocks and she wolfed them down and then settled on me face to face and stuffed my cock into her cunt as and Camille mounted her asshole.  we fucked her hard as we kept dp her asshole as she cried out.  i went between her cunt and asshole with her cleaning us

off often with loud slurps and deep throating.  i loved how i had my cock back in her asshole and camille squated behind her and again forced her cock into her asshole and gripped her hair with both hands and began to ram fuck her asshole as she cried and screamed in pain.  i slammed up hard and when i saw her body begin to twitch and shake i gripped her throat hard with one hand and throttled her cruelly as she drooled and

ripped weakly at my hand as i watched camille's fingers rip her hair cruelly making her head jerk and judder.  she simply died as her fingers clawed my shoulders and chest and her body was jackknifing wildly and lurching forward.  her eyes bulged and her face slashed horribly as I now smacked her hard as camille now choked her and called her vile

names.  the poor girl went multiple and died on our cocks as we slammed her now listless body as she moaned dementedly and shook above me as we gripped and shook her slender body and she continued to cum so fucking hard.  when her orgasms finally passed she just collapsed on me a sweaty satiated woman.  we pulled her off our cocks and rolled on our backs and pushed her head down and watched as she spent ten minutes cleaning our cocks will looking at us with steamy dreamy eyes as her tongue licked and curled around our ass covered cocks.  camille and i fucked heatedly while kapri recovered.  deep in the night it was i between them as kapri was slapping my ass hard and yanking my hair like a fucking animal as she was slipping her cock on top of camille's in my straining asshole and fucking the "lilly white bitch" for all she was worth.  i loved how she snarled racial epitaphs and raked my back with her hands and slapped my ass with resounding smacks making them cherry red i know.  she made me scream when she reached underneath me and pulled and pinched my nipples hard when i stood up on my hands to ram back into the cocks spearing my shredded asshole.  i loved the shock of her slamming hips slapping my pumping back hips.  each jolt made my clit jolt and tits

throb.  i so love pay backs!  my choked screams filled the room as i cam violently as i felt fingers choking me and my head being viciously ripped and yanked as pure fucking ecstasy filled my entire being and feeling it leap as i felt hard smacks on my ass and face and fingers raking my tired, happy body.

 

//  now we get to have another divine fuck angel, the hot shelley.  I really like this next part of the story.  i am smiling seeing their banter and how this shows shelley as being shelley.  i guess what i am trying to say is that you are showing what makes shelley unique.  With other stories we just have cut and dried dialog without any nuances like

here ["Oh god, Laura, Margaret's coming home from Paris ," Shelley said, in an ambiguous panic, either very upset or very excited by this news, or perhaps both.]  what i love is you show emotion with words like "ambiguous panic" and then making a little mysterious with the tone conveying being excited or upset.  we know her need but the tone is maybe a little high pitched and a little querulous in her need.  This gives color to the conversation and to shelley.  i love seeing her need begging laura to see her quick before her archangel returns.  Then having shelley pout over the phone showing her petulance.  that is just so special.  i love spoiled bitches that want to be spoiled and fucked to oblivion and totally expect slavish devotion to their needs.  i am their girl!  chuckling with shelley whining for it and offering to pick laura up and she is only four blocks away.  and i so love your compliments and gentle humor ["You don't have to compete with Margaret," Shelley said in a low, smoky, sensual voice.  "She's number one, and you're off the charts."]  now what woman wouldn't go goo-goo eyed over

that.  only you give dialog that is so delicious, subtle and witty.  I have been greeted many ways at the door and thus i love seeing shelley showing her lovely charms in a pretty orange bikini.  love the smirk on her face as she parades before her soon to be lover.  like i say, i like sass.  i like it that you have the time for them to get comfortable with each other that shelley feels confident enough to greet laura in this way.  i just don't get this in other stories.  other stories are so short that they can't even come close to showing this mirth and sass in their stories.  like how you show more of shelley's personality [Furthermore, Shelley, a professional model, knew just how to turn and

pivot and walk and pose to make it even more wildly desirable.  She displayed a little of this skilled repertoire for Laura as Laura followed her into the apartment.]  you have given her a past and personality that lets her strut herself with the skill of her

profession.  for some reason that fact that her bikini is orange really turns me on.  i can just see that color highlighting her brown body.  I have always loved how you give us the little extra details that make your women so vivid to me [Laura was hypnotized.  Shelley was not very dark, though not really light-skinned either, not like Shontay, for example; instead a wonderful warm brown, even light enough to develop tan lines, which she got from sun-bathing on the small deck of the apartment.  Laura found them wildly sexy.  The bikini was actually four triangular patches of orange cloth, two for her full breasts, two more  for her pubis and her bottom, attached by a thong that ran through her crotch.  Lucky thong, Laura thought.]  only you describe the actual color of your black angels and their specific features.  then actually telling about the bikini and the fact she is light skinned enough to tan.  wow! what details!

 

//  i always like it when we get to discover more about an angel in these stories.  i like that you take the time and kilobytes to flesh out these women.  i have to smile at her silly explanation about a killer spying a naked woman from afar and trying to kill her.  i think she has seen "dirty harry" one to many times.  any ways, one can't live in fear.  she just likes the tan lines i'm sure.  but it shows her sense of humor and wit which are always winners.  i then like the banter and flirting about cheating and margaret being jealous.  i know to process any statements like these when they come along.  i always work to

reassure women it is all right to get some nookie on the side.  One needs spice in your life and for the hets, heck you are not even really cheating are you?  i am a woman right.  most really latch onto that.  soothes their conscious to know that it is not another man.  heck, i'm sure most of their doggies are cheating anyways on them.  also, have to

work to let the poor brainwashed women know that the religious right is full of shit and we are meant to explore and meet our deep inner and natural needs.  why else do they feel them?  i really like how you explore little facets of the female persona that others don't even think of like ["How can she possess a wild creature like you?"        This,

instead of cheering Shelley up, actually caused her dismay.  "Wild?  Do you think I'm wild?  Oh god!  I'm not wild.  Really.  Maybe you got that impression because I just . . . sort of came on to you at Macy's.  I'm just a scared little mouse.  I stay home alone all the time, except when you come over and we . . . do this.  I'm really not wild.  Please,

Laura, say I'm not wild.  I only try to look wild.  I'm not really wild."]  one never knows when one will say something to set a woman off.  heck, i surprise myself sometimes when i react to something said or done immediately.  a trigger is tripped and you must react to it.  I will reflect on later and try to figure out why it got under my skin but

it does sometimes.  almost always tied to some insecurity but they are awful strong aren't they.  i just give you credit for writing these type of things into your stories.  i like you showing laura going over and comforting shelley down.  i think a woman should always immediately soothe her angel.  i like how you show laura always being so positive

and reinforcing for her women.  it shows her deep love for her women.  I like your positiviness in your stories.

 

//  i think braids are sexy too.  i don't have any angels currently who do it but i have loved it in the past.  cindy has locks but she never puts beads in her hair.  now extensions are another matter.  i love how their hair can grow six inches overnight or a long pony tail is suddenly proudly worn.  i have always admired the way black women can change their hair styles so easily.  from one week to the next i don't know what kia or stacey will be wearing.  length changes, color changes and the complete style is so different sometimes.  my hair would fall out if i stressed it that much.  i have never a story from another author with black women in it that told me how their hair was worn.  again, another reason i love your stories.  i have to smile at shelley loving laura using the word "fuck".  i smile at how many are "shocked" with such language.  it should be a natural for all of us.  it makes me feel so sexy and ready to fuck when i use my nasty tongue and hear it in others.  all women should feel free to use such language.  it is rad and hot.  i have found only a very few women whom didn't quickly warm up to slutty talk.  they still might be scandalized but it is obvious they love hearing it and i give it to them.  i smirk and mental fist pump as over time they start to use the potty mouth and it gets more and more. i love liberating women to their true inner slut.  we deserve the freedom to be whorish in our actions if we so choose and i do.  you are the only author that has shown this sweet dynamic of a liberated woman showing more repressed women to loosen up and enjoy expressing

themselves fully.  i also love reading confidence in your women and am happy that shelley knew at thirteen that everyone wanted to fuck her and was happy about it.  it is so wonderful to feel sexy and wanted.  It makes me feel so complete and pretty knowing that so many want to fuck me.

 

//  i have always liked how you show the small details of your women [Laura was already busy trying to devour Shelley's marvelous body and smooth skin, so much of which was available.  Her mouth was already descending to the valley between Shelley's wonderful breasts, her tongue pausing to lick sensually the raised, shiny keloid scar, the size of a

quarter, below Shelley's left collar bone.]  i like you showing laura focusing on other areas of a woman's body other than the big three and showing the birthmark of shelley's.  such areas are unique and i love kissing and licking them.  i have always liked laura comparing her lovers to each other and now she is doing it with her own body.  we all

do it to one degree or another.  shelley must be beautiful if she is a more curvaceous version of laura.  i too smirk when i hear a lover talk about their significant other.  if it is a woman i plan on sucking their cunt inside out and if they are yelping about a guy i am going to use my strap-on so good that they will think they have died and gone to heaven.  i love it that you have the time in this long story arc to show these kind of dynamics and explore them.  i love the little details.  you then give us the dialog that i so love about your stories [Already her lips were touching the swelling inner bulges of Shelley's fine

breasts where they pushed out beyond the cloth patches of her bikini.  "I think I want these," Laura murmured.  "I want them in my mouth."        Shelley shivered and laughed softly.  "God, you make me so wet, the way you talk to me.  I don't know whether I can live without you, Laura, when Margaret comes back."]  like i say you are the only

author that has the little conversations during the lovemaking.  Others only have the dialog to start the fuck and then maybe some after but let their women actually make love in silence which is so sad.  the spoken adds that little spice that makes your clit jump and nipples throb.

 

//  i am smiling great big when shelley finds herself using the word "fuck".  laura is helping her to loosen up and enjoy the spice that dirty talk brings to a relationship.  hopefully, she can start sharing with her regular lover and both can grow.  to bad margaret seems so jealous.  she could share such great fucks with her main squeeze and

laura.  sigh.  love the teasing of shelley begging for laura to devour her beautiful tits.  i so swoon when my sluts are begging for me to devour their body and they lewdly display their wares to me, making my blood boil and my desire spike up to consume and devour them.  again you you use your time flow to show how laura at first didn't see tan lines

during the cool weather but now shelley is sunning herself.  Then showing how her light brown skin is able to tan where someone like dawn can't.  you are the only author who even comes close to given the reader this kind of detail.  usually i can just see a mannequin in mind's eye and here you are giving me subtle colors hues of shelley and details of her body and build.  this makes her so much real and able to get into the fuck when it comes.  you now do that change of pace that i so love reading and experiencing in life because it fire me up [Laura cradled one perfect breast in both of her hands, like a precious object, which it certainly was, and began to lower her lips to Shelley's big nipple, a jutting, thick center stub surrounded by a wide circle of caramel areola, already showing little bumps from her sexual arousal.  But Shelley stopped her.  With a cute, self-satisfied smirk, she lifted Laura's face back up with two fingers under Laura's chin.        "Not so fast," she panted, her dark eyes pulsing.        "Why not?" "Because I said so," Shelley smiled, beckoning with her finger.  "Come with me."]  other authors are just linear in their writings.  it is unexpected to see it in writing and i feel myself feeling my blood boil and i can't wait to see where my angel is talking me.  i don't mind detours as long as they don't delay to long me devouring your body or vice versa.  sweet build up leads to such womb rending orgasms.  i love it that you show this and make it just so natural to the story.  i love sex but i like the imagination you use in developing each chapter.

 

//  wow, you now setup a very hot romantic scene.  shelley has put fat candles around her bedroom giving off that warm, "maddie hayes" glow. then you have the magical payoff [On the pillow was a black strap-on dildo and a red buckling harness, lying there like . . . what?  A bomb waiting to go off?  An invitation?  There was no way one's eye would not

be drawn immediately to them.  The black dildo, Laura saw with a quick glance, was not a long, ridged one like her own, but shorter and thick, shaped more like an actual penis, an average sized one, though maybe a little fatter than a real one.        "Oh goodness, what have we here?" she exclaimed softly, walking over to it and touching it gingerly with one long forefinger.]  i hate to say it but these things are not my strong suit.  when i try to think up things like this and make it happen i can feel my head throb and steam pouring out my ears.  i am doer and this kind of planning and imagination is not my strong suite.  i feel my pulse leap and my heart flutter when i come onto this and from time to time i do it successfully.  this is just so romantic and again other authors just don't show these little moments.  i guess because they are always focusing on seduction and first fucks and don't have the time or kilobytes to bring this into their stories.  again, because you have created a multi chapter universe and then explore interpersonal dynamics you get to show these little moments that make this more like literature than just erotica with rutting women.  nothing wrong with that! but it is nice to get more.  like how you show that flow of time by showing us that they have been fucking for a couple months and penetrating sex simply hasn't come up between them.  we see that shelley is about to change that.  yeah!!!!!  it is cool you showing their relationship moving to a new level.  shelley is sharing more of herself and thus bringing her closer to her fuck angel.  i love feeling that growing closer to my woman and feeling our souls binding in deeper love.

 

//  i have to smile at your gentle humor.  you show shelley being embarrassed by her request that the strap-on so clearly shows [Shelley gave her an alluring half-smile.  She moved her shoulders so that her delicious naked breasts, which she knew Laura to adore and hunger for endlessly, shimmied and quivered.  "I was too embarrassed to tell you

before.  It seemed so . . . selfish."]  i have always been amazed at what women find embarrassing.  we should never feel embarrassed to request good hard natural fucking.  our bodies were made to be fucked and we should relish all the ways that we can fuck.  i am smiling as shelley is making her divine tits jiggle for laura.  she is using her charms to make sure she gets her way.  i love to use my charms to seduce a woman and then get her to do my will.  i love how you show your women being strong and confident to use their bodies to get their way.  i have always loved laura's vocabulary and i run into this sometimes myself [Shelley looked down at Laura's hands holding her breasts.  "What's a

paragon?"        "Ummmm, something nothing else can equal," Laura murmured, nuzzling her long smooth brown neck, then raising her lips to Shelley's earlobe, licking it, sucking it, then nipping it gently.  "How about it?  Deal?"]  i just assume that everyone's vocabulary is as good if not better than mine.  now i see laura setting the stage and getting things moving forward like nature intended.  i love kissing my slut's neck and working her ears and making her my whore.  i find working a woman's ears usually reduces them to quivering mess.  recently, belissa was not in the mood when i got to her place and we talked while she got her day out of her system.  i smiled as she kept pushing me away but I noticed a slow weakening and moved in and blew hot air in her ear and

saw her shiver and took her my arms quickly and worked her lithe body hotly and drilled her ear with my strong tongue and tongue fucked her ear and swallowed her ear lobes and gnawed and ran my lips along her earlobe and around the edge of her ear to where it met her skull.   I had her mewling and pawing at me to get naked and i quickly stripped her

and she me and fucked ourselves to glorious ruin.

 

//  i love the communication that continues as they banter how the loving will commence.  i like women discussing and plotting their hot fuck.  i have to smile as shelley is making very sure that laura gives her, her first orgasm for this tryst with the strap-on.  i always have to smirk when i hear my angel being so incessant on their needs.  They should always know i will try my best to deliver the perfect fuck for them.  i love seeing the haste in laura removing her clothes as shelley slowly removes her bikini to tease and inflame her woman.  i like how you use the removing of clothes to show the dynamics of women getting ready to make heated love.  no other author ever really lets us see this

part of loving making and it i miss it in other stories.  i love that moment of coming together that you capture here ["Fat chance of that happening," Shelley said, sidling up to Laura just as Laura discarded her last piece of clothing and pushing her naked body into her.  "I could never forget you."]  i so quiver when i feel our flesh coming together like this.  feeling our warm skin starting to mate and heat each other in rising need and love.  i like you showing that coming together i so love.  I can just feel shelley's body against mine as they twine and coil on shelley's bed.  i so love to feel our bodies writhing as arms draw bodies tight and skin is squirming against each other.  I so love feeling our heating flesh sliding against each other as breast mash and nipples dig.  i love it when our arms are pulling hard and our legs are rubbing and twining.  only you ever capture this dynamic.  I almost get the feeling with other authors that their women make love with an invisible barrier between their women's bodies.  they never allow them to really get close in their loving.  you now show us laura working to get into her strap-on.  i like seeing that.  i know that hurried huffing as your are trying to get strapped in with your slut

pawing at you or she is crawling all over you dying for it.  it is the little moments that you capture that make your stories so special.  This is really so me ["I get to suck a little first," she murmured against Shelley's smooth brown cheek.  "It really gets my engine charged up.  Then I can really ram you like you want."]  i love your whole body but i

really love to suck and work your tit flesh.  i will suck and stroke your tits with long foreplay and constantly back during the lovemaking to get a sweet refill of your sweet breast.

 

//  i want to love your whole body and i have been called a mouth worshipper and ass lover but i go crazy for tits.  i so love to make love to your breast and do it with total focus and love.  i so love to suck and pulp your tits as you gurgle and swoon.  i so love to half lay on you and work your tits as i suck and swallow your nipples and pull taunt and feel them slipping through my lips and at times raking teeth.  i so love looking at your face and gauging how much pressure i need to give to give maximum pleasure.  i too love to go back and forth between your heaving tits and making them throb and burn with pleasure.  i love getting them rock hard and working with my fingers as i twirl your

nipples between my fingers and pull them and jerk around if your tits are full enough for such divine play.  [For the next several minutes she made love to them as they truly deserved.  She had spent, it seemed, hours in the past worshipping and adoring these marvelous upswept brown globes, and yet her hunger for them apparently never ceased.  She cradled each breast in her palms and moved her lips back and forth between them, tonguing and sucking Shelley's delectable brown nipples until they were wet and hard and jutting, the wide aureoles shiny with warm spittle and covered with tiny bumps, and Shelley was whimpering and squirming.]  i so love making your aureoles steeple up and then feeling them under my tongue and beneath my fingertips.  i make my women swoon

with my nipple play.  i like how you show progression of lovemaking.  I love to dine on a body part forever but often you make your love slut whining for it like here with shelley begging laura to proceed and ram fuck her with the strap-on.  i so love hearing my lover telling me like laura that i have filled her body with fire and need and only i can put

it out.  you so show this in your writings.  i have to smirk when laura gets a little peevish hearing about margaret yet again.  i never (well almost) get jealous but i do get tired sometimes of hearing a woman go on and on about someone.  i understand it is usually guilt driven and this soothes them but still.  especially when it is a newbie het going

about their hubbie or boyfriend.  she uses it positively like i do ["Mmmm, then turn over and let me fuck you," Laura purred to her, sucking the stiff wet nipple that was closest to her lips harder than ever now, making little strangled yelps surface from deep in Shelley's

throat.  "Let me fuck you doggy style and rip and ram you and make you scream and die with coming, my darling."        Laura knew that nasty words at this juncture would be like gasoline on Shelley's fire. Especially for someone who was curiously observant about who used the 'F' word, these inflammatory little arrows would surely fan her flames.]  i let such words fill me with energy and desire and then i use it to fuck them to hell and back.  i just too want to ram fuck you so hard your body is jolting and jarring and your words sound kind of staccato as you moan and speak.  and i am really smiling as laura uses potty mouth language to fire up her lover.  it sets my soul on fire and most of my love sluts are the same.  even the shy and timid ones over time almost always come over to the light.  i like seeing laura using every tool in her arsenal to make her women die for it.

 

//  sigh, your pacing and observations are so keen.  i love how you have shelley getting so hot.  other authors just have the sex move along with so few details that it seems boring and trite.  you show the steps in wonderful sex.  we see shelley now begging to get fucked now [Getting into the spirit of things, Shelley stopped Laura from sucking and nearly inhaling her breast by pulling Laura's face up to hers.  "Yes!  Yes . . . I want you to fuck me!  Now!  Fuck me now, Laura!"]  how can this not fire up your soul and yet i never get such hot, honest passion in other stories.  i love how they continue to spur each other on with hot declarations.  i am there as laura contemplates fucking shelley's sweet

asshole.  i am always anxious to fuck you in the asshole.  i so love sinking my cock deep into your colon and watching that heavenly pained / pleasured look that fills a woman's face when a dick slides up her shit pipe.  gods know i love that pained entry into my rear orifice.  i am always testing and seducing.  where i bank there is a cutie working

named meggan.  love the double g's.  i always make sure to go to her and over the year i got to know her and charmed her.  i asked her to go out and do the girl thing.  she is a sweet light skinned black woman, nice and short and with nice c-cup tits and hair cut short around her eyes with midnight eyes.  i took my time and took her out several times as "pals".  a few months ago i was at her apartment when i sensed the time was right.  she had such doe eyes as i took her in my arms and slide my tongue down her swooning throat.  i felt that mental rush as this newbie mewled and shook in my arms as lesbian love overloaded her world and soul.  i soon had her in her bed naked and swarming her body with my naked body.  i had our limbs twined as i kissed her deeply and worked

down her body to her heaving tits and sucked her nipples hard and deep and slowly worked her tits harder and harder until i was pulping them with hard squeezes of loving force and slurping and tongue bating her nipples making her gurgle and cry out.  i worked her stomach and ribs making her legs kick and scissor before i devoured her cunt to two

devastating, jackknifing and screaming orgasms.  sigh, so much love nectars to gulp down.  when she recovered she dove on my hot, wet cunt and ate like she was starving.  i loved gripping her head with two hand fulls of hair and humping her face hard making it ride back until my cunt exploded in her mouth and ground my rupturing cunt all over her

face.  i then got my eight inch strap-on out of my sleep over bag and watched her eyes bulge with lust and want.  i did her missionary and slammed my cock deep into her cunt making her body jolt and writhe as I ground my body down into her hers feeling her sweaty body gyrate underneath me until she had a screaming, wild undulating orgasm.  i let her recover and then got her doggy style and started to fuck her wet, dripping pussy again.  i was pounding her hard and good and i slipped my dripping cock from her pussy and started to rub her puckering rosebud. i have to smile as her head ripped around and told me no one fucked her in the ass.  i just smiled and dropped down and started to tongue her sphincter and slowly worked my magic and oh so slowly started to tongue

fuck her asshole with my tongue.  she just kind of sighed and got all limp as her head settled on the mattress.  i worked her asshole for fifteen minutes with my tongue and slowly worked a finger into her asshole making her quiver and groan.  i kept whispering to her how I wanted her asshole and was i making her feel good.  she just kept moaning and sighing and finally she moaned for me to fuck her in her "fucking asshole".  i got in position and slowly pressed my dick into her tight sphincter and had to force it into her virgin asshole.  i was watching her face closely and nearly swooned when i heard her cry out and her screech of pain as my cock suddenly lurched three inches into her shit hole.  i pressed her down and whispered to her relax and stay down.  i let her asshole stretch and then worked her slowly as her o ring clutched my cock tight.  i worked her slowly as her face grimaced, teeth clenched and pained whimpers escaped her throat.  i kept working

her so slow and well and soon her asshole loosened up and her moans were so filled with pleasure.  i started to ramp up and work her body harder as her body jolted with my hips ramming her.  i raked her back and leaned down to pulp her tits some more as she started to slam back into me.  she was now my total anal fucking whore.  i gripped her shoulders

and slammed her hard and balls deep into my pile driving cock.  i ripped it out and fisted her hair and drug her around to my glistening cock.  I made hard eye contact and barked at her suck her asshole off my cock.  I watched her eyes slit and she took my cock into her mouth and moaned as she crossed another mental barrier.  soon she was wolfing my dick down and corkscrewing her head on my dick.  i did atm repeatedly as she cleaned her ass of my dick.  i so loved finishing her off as i did her spoon in her sweet asshole and just pounded her so hard as rubbed her clit hard and fast and i whispered to her to pull and pinch her nipples.  she came so fucking hard as her body kicked, shuddered and

spasmed out of control as pure screams of pure ecstasy filled her room i just ripped my cock into her exploding shit hole as i then gripped her hair and viciously jerked back and made her go multiple and yet more screams filled our love nest as i slapped her face hard making her light skin darken as i watched her eyes roll back and spasm long and hard in

pure love.  she was totally limp as i finished her off.  i rolled over on my back and gently guided her head down to my cock on my heaving belly and moaned in pure happiness as she used her tongue to lap it into her sweet mouth listening to her sweet moans of pure happiness as I gently humped my ever hard dick into her cleaning lips and tongue.  of

course i surrounded my asshole to her and boy did she rape my poor shit hole good and long.  i loved how she gripped my hair and shoved her dick down my throat straight from my asshole.

 

//  laura decides to hold off on taking shelley's asshole for another day.  one must delay one's appetites sometimes.  i love how laura knows how to take her time.  you are the only author to show this slow pacing in her stories.  i believe in ramping it up and pound fucking you to heaven but that so much works better when you go slow in the beginning

to make her your total love slut.  i so know what laura is experiencing here.  her woman is pleading for the end fuck and yet you still pour on the foreplay.  you make your lovemaking soar by showing this dynamic in your writings.  other authors just woodenly move from phase to phase of their sex that makes it so depressing bland.  i like how laura knows how to work her slut to make her a quiver mess like [She bent to kiss it, knowing that this exquisite delay was ramping up Shelley's need considerably.  She kissed Shelley's long, smooth back everywhere, pausing especially long at her shoulder blades, then her delicious dimpled sacrum.  The girl moaned and twisted under her lips, and Laura's fingers slid down into the crease between her round buns and into the soupy crevice of her aroused pussy.  "Oh, darling, you're so wet for Laura," she whispered.        "Oh yes!  Oh god . . . yes!" Shelley gasped, scrunching her knees forward in the sheets to raise her ass a little higher and show her pussy even better to Laura.  "Wet wet wet. Fuck me fuck me," she giggled.  "I'm all ready."]  i so love to kiss your warm skin and suck on it and give it love bites as you hitch and moan deep in your throat.  running my hands all over your body tracing all the planes, slopes and cambers.  Working your muscles and ribs as I stroke pure love into your body.  love the detail of laura running her fingers up and down shelley's soupy slit.  i love to use the edge of my hand to saw your weeping cunt getting it all slimy.  working your deep ass creak with my fingers and then my tongue and slowly pulling ass cheeks apart if nice and meaty and licking and slurping down those slopes until i am working your ass crease.  working up and down until my

tongue is massaging your rosebud and my tongue and fingers are soon exploring your shit hole as i suck my fingers clean and stuff in your mouth hearing your slurp and moan as you clean off.  making your body tremble with love and need.

 

//  i so love that moment of penetration that only you capture ["Ummmmmmm!" Shelley let out a low, semi-guttural hum as the thick shaft slid between her well-lubricated pussy lips and into the heaven they enclosed.  "Oh Jesus!"]  other authors just have them start het fucking.  only you capture that divine moment of feeling a nice hard cock sliding up your pussy or shit hole.  i just gag and sag when i feel that loving invasion into my body.  i so love feeling something sliding deep into my cunt, asshole or mouth.  i am not a pc correct lesbian let me tell you.  i love feeling my cunt or asshole clenching that invading

appendage and then clinging to it as it starts to saw and punch into my willing hot hole.  i sure wish i could feel the sensations a man feels when his dick slides into his lover.  still, the sounds of my lover groaning or sighing as i start to fuck her fuck hole is so enough for me.  feeling that resistance as my cock slides in makes me swoon with love.  i have always been so captivated by the way you capture all the sounds we make and the exclamations of lust and pleasure we vocalize all kinds of ways from the softest sigh, harshest guttural groan to shrieked exclamation.   you show this where other authors just make that special moment so boring and trite seeming.  now you show yet again that

starting slow that makes the end fuck so rad.  again i say other authors just say they fuck while you show us all the stages of a heavenly fuck like [And Shelley seemed to be enjoying it even more than Laura had expected.  She lay her cheek on the sheet and closed her eyes and moaned very softly each time the dildo penetrated her, then sighed and exhaled each time Laura pulled it back.          "Oh god, it's heaven!" she finally gasped, her eyes fluttering open long enough for her to glance back over her shoulder again at Laura.]   dodie and shari are doggy style whores.  they just go into raptures like shelley here.  they just love to fuck in that position so much.  Dodie growls and hurls herself back while shari just whimpers and gurgles as you grab her hips or her shoulders to slam her back on your dick as our sweaty flesh slaps in sweaty love.  i so love looking down and seeing my cock sliding in and out of your wet, tight cunt all glistening in your juices covering it from the head to the base of my plunging shaft.  pulling it out and

sawing your slit, rubbing your clit and slapping your ass before slamming it hard and deep back into your steamy pussy.

 

//  i have always loved your small details.  little details that only you give.  other authors just basically say they fuck and nothing more like what you give.  like when shelley looks over her shoulder and you get that smoky eye contact as you slam her cunt or asshole and you see the love and lust in her eyes as they burn with pleasure and lust.  I love feeling that heated contact and ram fucking her harder and making her swoon and drool in helpless love.  or the detail of how fucking your woman with your cock gives you that feel of power that men must feel.  I love seeing your body jolting and shaking with my hammering thrusts. when receiving i love feeling your body slamming mine and feeling your cock sliding so hard and deep into my cunt or shit hole.  i just groan and quiver as i feel that wonderful cock(s) sliding deep into my body. it does give you a sense of power when you see your slut impaled on your dick as you punch and slam into her sweaty willing body.  thanks for showing this dynamic in strap-on fucking.  i love your little

observations.  i love how you show them ramping up as laura plows her six inch fat cock into her slut.  i love how you have shown different sizes and shapes in our strap-ons.  i so love to keep working your harder and harder.  i usually start slow and easy and keep ramping and getting to this stage [And Shelley did so more and more often, keening,

even whinnying softly now and then as the sensations got too intense, or too piercingly acute.          "Unnggghh . . . ommngggg . . . nngggeeeehhh!" she cried out softly, her cries sometimes swooping up suddenly from her throat, as if pushed forcibly out of her lungs by a sharp stab of nearly unbearable pleasure.]  i love getting in our rhythm of love fucking and seeing your body jolting and shaking as i work you harder and hearing those sounds of divine pleasure as i fuck you closer and closer to heaven.  i so adore the sounds of great fucking.  i live to hear your pleasure and always encourage my quieter whores to open and fully express your pleasure.  it makes your orgasms so much more rad and

mind blowing.

 

//  i like it that shelley knows what she likes and goes for it.  She wants to get fucked doggy style and asks for it.  i want all my women to do that and help newbies to learn this. that they have been repressed by man's world.  i have always been attracted to your women because they mostly know what they want and go for it in the bedroom.  some might need a little liberating but once laura does they fuck with such sensual abandon.  the gods gave us these fabulous bodies to fuck completely and we should.  so i am smiling as shelley is getting wild with her favorite fuck being administrated.  you are still ramping [By now the bed was even rocking a little as Laura lunged forward and Shelley shuddered and moaned.  It was a kind of rule of thumb for Laura that when the bed began to rock, the orgasm was near.  Shelley was whooping and gurgling and gyrating her ass back into Laura's fierce forward thrusts, her face torn by sublime intimations of sexual obliteration.        "Oh god yes! Oh god yes!" she chanted over and over again, her words interrupted only by her frantic panting and soft yelps when Laura pushed the strap-on

dildo into her pussy as far as it would go.  "Ungghhh!  Ohmmnnggg . . . yes!"]  i so love to fuck you good as i grip your ass or hips and really slam my cock into your body.  i especially love get up on my feet if am pounding your asshole and pounding it balls deep with harsh thrusts straight down your shit hole as your body starts to shake and you groan

gutturally or howl in ecstasy.  i am smiling as laura leans down and presses her body down as she starts rabbit fucking shelley.  i too love to sometimes bend down and press my body down into your sweaty back and mash my tits into your back and mash and move them around.  working your ears and kissing your neck and pulling head around and slamming my tongue down your keening throat and reaching around and pulping your tits and pulling your nipples making your moan like a complete whore. you so know how to capture a great fuck and how it just builds to such a cataclysmic heights of ecstasy.

 

//  i love how you show laura sensing that shelley is getting close to heaven on earth.  we women can just feel our women getting closer and then working her body harder and more focused to make it cum violently. i have to smile at laura almost pulling her hair but the extensions make her pull back.  i know that problem.  shari uses extensions alot.  over

the years i have learned to spread my fingers and grip the hair with a broad grip close to the scalp and give nice short hard vicious pulls or slowly pull back as you see her throat go taunt and her eyes bulge and her body start detonating with violent convulsions of dire bliss.  Laura uses nice hard fucking to finish her fuck.  i so love to fuck just for this reason [Auunngghhhh!" she suddenly groaned, and her long, svelte body tried to jackknife in a sharp spasm under Laura, but Laura's weight on top of her made it impossible.  "Owwnnnggghhhhnnggiieeee!" she cried out again, now twisting and squirming under Laura as the jolts of a powerful orgasm wrenched her.        Laura belatedly realized that she was somewhat selfishly smothering the full power of this climax by restraining Shelley's natural movements, and she quickly raised herself

up to give the girl more freedom.  At the same time, she renewed her vigorous thrusting, punching the fat little dildo into Shelley's spasming pussy again and again, until, miracle of miracles, another sharp orgasm welled up out of nowhere and briefly throttled Shelley just as the first one was dying away.        "Ohhnnmmggghhh!  Oh shit!  Oh . . . god, Laura . . . unngggnnmmiieeee!  Oh!  Aunngghiiieee!"]  like I keep saying, only you show the sounds of a woman having a devastating orgasm.  i shudder when i hear the silence of other authors or how they use all caps and the same sound over and over or the all shouted words and words only with no sounds.   pleeeassseeee.  you capture the true

vocal patterns of women fucking.  i like the detail of laura giving shelley space to fully let her body explode and thrash.  sometimes it nice to be penned down or tied up but having your body jackknifing and lurching around the bed or floor is just so rad to quote dee dee.

 

//  i can easily see why shelley came twice.  a good lover knows how to make your body sing.  not all woman are capable but most are and i love making your body sign a complete opera of divine pleasure.  i can't blame shelley for being ga-ga over laura making her go multiple.  i sure hope her lover learns how to do her right.  i am always ready to teach and encourage others on how to fuck well.  they now share that sweet

post coital time that only you show women sharing.  i have to smile at shelley feeling almost guilty at having so many orgasms with laura and not her lover.  i sure wish laura could do some teaching.  Hopefully shelley will use her knowledge of how laura fucks to teach her woman.  one should always progress in their ability to deliver pleasure.  i am

always improving and readily learn new things when they come my way.  I am smiling as renewed love and lust has our angels twining limbs in renewed love as sweet fucking is once more in the air.

 

 

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Chapter 311:

//  i am smiling as laura is fretting at the beginning of this chapter.  she has been very bad with bonnie.  i cringe with the thought of laura missing their "date".  this is something that i try to never do.  once you make a date for new love one should always make it.  of course it can't always happen but i try to to contact and apologize profusely and immediately setup a new date.  one must not let the possibilities dim at all i feel.  when i do miss it totally like laura did here i get totally flustered.  i want to run and hide though i don't because one can never refuse the possibility of new sweet pussy.  i so know that feeling of quiet desperation that laura is feeling.  have i screwed it up royally?  i know i hate to be stood up.  i just fall apart.  i feel both so mad, flustered and i question my charms and beauty.  i hate that!  i know that feeling embarrassed when it is my fault.  i have had new potential angels slip from my fingers from such things and i hate it.  i never want to deny new love.  i want to always connect with a potential new lover.  i am smiling at learning a new word "neurasthenic".  Can't wait to use it.   i'm so pediatric.  i have to chuckle at laura sensing that the new waitress knows she is a lesbian on the prowl and shows it.  i have experienced that and i just smile at them or maybe sneer if in the mood.  i may be vain but i share the same thoughts with laura [Without ever knowing the happiness I could bring her, she thought.  Without ever feeling my lips against her smooth, dark flesh.]   i so know i will rock a newbie's world and leave her totally satiated in our bed of new love.  i live to make newbies scream and writhe in pure fucking ecstasy.  i know that gloomy feeling of a failed rendezvous that should have been.  unlike laura i have no problem thinking that she is missing something so special.  her cunt should have been totally devoured by my ravenous mouth.

 

//  i will always try to reconnect, at least at first.  if i sense rejection then i start to wilt and try to press forward but will desist if they are being cruel to me.  i do so know this feeling [she glimpsed her in the back, behind a swinging door that separated the front of the shop from the rear.  Laura wanted to cry out.  Bonnie!  Oh god, sweet mystery of life I've finally found you!   Oh frabjous day!]   when i know i have a second chance then i just feel my pulse leap.  i so quickly move in and make sure that love moves forward.  i am always responsive to your overtures and find that most women are anxious for my attention but some were damn tough and then turned on me and hurt me.  i try to balance my fear of more pain and my desire to bring joy to women's lives.  i try to stay positive like laura and mostly succeed like laura.  i have always admired her ability to keep working on establishing new love with even the frosty types like deshona.  i leave those women for dodie and joann.  i prefer the forgiving easy going types like bonnie.  like here ["Appointment?" Bonnie supplied, without guile or apparent concern.  "I just thought you got tied up in something.  No big deal."]  i know she sees the excitement in laura and yet she is still friendly and nice.  i so know they want me when i sense this.  even if they don't realize it yet.  unlike laura, i feel no awkwardness in pursuing new lovers even though i have archangels at home.  i am secure in the knowledge that they are pursuing new pussy also!  we so know that only new pussy keeps the fires burning brightly.  i am smiling at laura feeling like a school girl wanting to get bonnie's attention when she appears.  i feel so giddy at times like this.  camille has been seducing women right and left at her university now that she has seen the light.  she can be a little bitchy i fear.  she had been seducing emily and had her swooning when emily pissed her off and camille told the bitch go "fuck herself".  geez , so stupid.  i had seen her a couple times as camille wore her defenses down and she had my cell.  i got a text that made it clear she was hurting and confused.  i made a "date" to go to a local club to the university.  i brought kia along since she had graduated from that university.  we met and we consoled her about camille acting like an ass.  i had blessed out camille but she was unrepentant.  i have noticed some black women can really get pissy.  we went back to kia's place which is on that side of the water.  emily was feeling better with our attention.  i had originally just thought we would console emily and let camille come to her senses but looking at kia i could see that was total bullshit.  emily is so dark like kia and so fucking hot.  she is like five, eight and long hair in big ringlets with red highlights, full tits and flaring hips.  we sat on each side of her and starting

stroking her body and she just melted as kia brought their mouths together and slide her tongue down her throat as she moaned gutturally.  i quickly had her blouse undone and bra unhooked and sucked her thick nipples deep and hard and smiled feeling them harden instantly and her aureoles steeple.  we took turns devouring her mouth, ears and neck while the other one sucked her tits and pumped them hard.  soon we were all naked with kia on the floor gobbling her cunt like a mad woman and i was kissing her deeply and got on my knees and feed her my tits and guided her mouth to my nipple and groaned deeply as she latched on and quickly started nursing roughly.  soon she was ramming her tongue deep into my mouth as we kissed and sucking my nipples hard and roughly squeezing my tits with a little encouragement from me.  i loved how her head rocked back from my tits and her eyes bulged and her faced slashed horribly and her fingers dug into my flesh as a scream of pure fucking bliss tore from throat and she began to jackknife and buck wildly on the sofa as kia sucked her clit deep into her mouth and finger fucked her hard with three fingers as she came violently.  i watched up close as pure heaven itself was so clearly on her face as massive killing jolts ripped her soul apart in bliss.  sigh, later i can so see her face buried in my cunt as she ate me wildly with her ass in the air and kia eating her from behind.  i so loved clinching my hands in her hair and humping her face really hard as kia made her cry out and jam her face deep into my cunt in ecstasy.  i came so fucking hard as i rode my exploding cunt up and down her face as i cursed and bucked.  then weakly watching kia roll them into a scissor fuck and watching them buck and grind and have a mutual orgasm of wallowing and grunting bliss.  emily dripping in sweat as she gritted her teeth and her eyes squinched shut to pump every once of pleasure from her exploding cunt.  later camille came to her senses and had to beg emily to forgive her.  i am smiling hearing that emily really worked her over good with a good ass blistering and some nice hard ass fucking.  me, kia and hillary told her exactly how to fuck camille like the fucking whore she is.

 

//  i always believe in the telling the truth.  of course i realize that the truth has many shades of gray.  one always gets in so much trouble when you try to invent fanciful stories and then trying to keep track of everything.  ["It's a big deal to me," Laura confessed.  "I feel so bad.  I got sent to North Carolina , of all places.  I forgot all about telling you until I was actually on the plane."] i always gauge my newbie very carefully and see how she is taking my words and if i see her smiling or she goes off on something i say then i go that way.  i love seeing laura doing that and soothing bonnie even more than her normal seeming easy going way.  i am smiling as laura presses forward for a "date" after bonnie gets off.  one must always press forward when one is one the hunt for love.  i will do anything you want (well almost) to get you comfortable and wanting to be around me.  i know that not being sure you will get your woman.  often my gaydar is just

kind of buzzing in the background.  one must always press forward when you sense any possibility of new love.  one thing i have always liked about your stories is you show the whole process of a seduction.  most other stories being so short can't devote time to how you must morph and change to make sure you get your woman like here [Bonnie smiled and shook her head.  "I should be getting home.  I never feel too comfortable in a bar."        "Even with me?"        "I should be getting home."        "Let me give you a ride, at least."        Bonnie consented.  She lived in an apartment by Lake Merritt , in Oakland .  Laura parked in front, in the white zone, and waited patiently for Bonnie to invite her up, but Bonnie did not.  Oh god, I'm losing this little game, Laura thought, almost desperately.  When next would she have an opportunity to press things forward?  When Bonnie started to get out of the car, Laura risked all.        "Do you suppose I could come in for a second?  I have to go to the bathroom."        Bonnie smiled.  "Sure.  There's a few visitor's parking spaces around to the left.  I'll show you."]  i have found that once you get your woman starting to fall under your spell you can usually start to guide her towards her destiny of dining on sweet cunt meat.  they can pick up on the vibes and still let you lead them on tells me all i need to know.  i just pour on the charm and stroke their egos and try to get them so comfortable and swooning in my presence.  i am just thankful that i have found an author that shows this sweet dynamic of actually having to work to seduce your woman.  other authors just make it seem so predestined.  sometimes it is but often you must work to get your woman.  it makes her cunt so much sweeter when you are sucking it inside out and your are plundering her cunt and hopefully asshole with your love cock.

 

//  i always love to get my future slut working towards her own seduction so i love moments like this [Bonnie was clattering around in her small kitchen.  "Want something to eat?  I'm going to cook."        Was this an invitation to dinner? Laura wondered.  "I don't want to impose."        "You ain't imposing.  I invited you, didn't I?"]  i work as quickly as possibly to move our interactions to more intimate settings and closeness.  i am always working t o lower your defenses and get closer to you.  i want you to feel my presence and lust up close and let it overwhelm your senses with desire.  i work hard to keep myself in shape and looking beautiful i hope.  bonnie is slowly falling for laura and doesn't even know it yet.  again only you take the time to show with this multi chapter universe to show the real life dynamic of how you actually seduce women.  i love it!  you now besot the reader with those loving descriptions of your women that only you give.  as i constantly moan other authors never describing their women at all.  you have already told us about bonnie's basic beauty and now you lovingly add more layers [Moving around calmly in her own kitchen, preparing to cook, Bonnie had the sweet, thrilling naturalness of the girl next door Laura had at first seen her to be.  She was darkly lovely in her blue golf shirt, her work 'uniform' which she had not changed, her short, shiny black hair curled in scallops around her beautifully-shaped black ears.  She had what some people, Laura supposed, would consider big lips, but they were sensual miracles to Laura, who wanted to kiss them forever.  And now and then, when Bonnie turned

her back, Laura's gaze would drift down speedily to her amazing, swelling bottom, so perfectly encased in her tight blue jeans.  But then she would look up quickly again, before Bonnie caught her.]  it is this constant adding of details that makes me lust for these women so.  i just want them so bad my pussy gets wet, my clit throbs and my nipples harden and arch with desire for them.  it allows me to masturbate to their orgasms and allows me to scream and jackknife in shared ecstasy and bliss as my heels pound the floor or bed and my body writhes with sweet excess of pure pleasure as my eyes spasm and bulge and spittle flies.

 

//  i have to smirk at laura getting bonnie to drink a little bit of alcohol to loosen her up.  i have no problem using alcohol to get a woman to loosen up.  bonnie wants to be seduced and a little alcohol will only help love bloom.  i like how you show laura using gentle persuasion to move things along.  i so love how laura is gentle and loving in her interactions with her lovers and soon to be lovers.  a while back i was looking through the local free paper that highlights the area.  they have a meet section and i always scan it looking for bi-curious women.  i saw a nicely worded add with the code of "h" for hispanic.  naturally i called and loved the accent and the sweet name of angelica.  i made a date at a nice club for friday night.  i nearly swooned when a stunning beauty walked up to me table and introduced herself.  she is a columbian with perfect european features and midnight eyes and black hair.  i quickly saw she was so nervous she could hardly hold her fork.  i ordered some wine and smirked as i watched it quickly calm her as she gulped down a few glasses.  i charmed her with my spanish.  i learned she was twenty-seven and always bi-curious and coming to america had given her the freedom to act on her lusts.  her husband was back home taking care of business and she was ready to explore her true side.  she was nice and loose after another couple of glasses of wine.  i asked her if she

wanted me to drive her home.  she just silently nodded yes.  as soon as we got into her nice home i pulled her tight to me and snaked my tongue down her throat.  i so felt my cunt convulse as she groaned deep in her chest.  i took her into the main room and got her on the sofa and quickly stripped her swooning body and got myself naked and i got on the sofa beside her and pulled her down ot top of me and we were soon devouring each other's mouths.  she is a great kisser.  we kissed and groped and turned her on her back and swarmed her body and sucked her c cup tits so hard and deep and wormed two fingers into her soaking wet cunt.  i soon was finger fucking her so hard and deep with three and then four fingers as i inhaled her nipples and rammed my tongue down her throat.  she suddenly exploded into a crippling orgasm that had cunt juices gushing from her cunt as her body twisted and writhed as demented groans filled the room.  i got on the floor and threw her legs over my shoulders and devoured her cunt to another devastating orgasm as she bucked and wailed in ecstasy.  i then got her on the floor and mounted her face and rode her face and ground my mound into her hard sucking mouth and flailing tongue.   she was damn good off the bat and with a few instructions really had my cunt aching with love.  i just gripped her hair hard and ground down as i cried out and cursed her in spanish as my cunt pulsed hot cum all over her face and down her gulping throat.   we got in the tub and i got her to get one foot up on the side of the tube as the shower sprayed down and tongue fucked her cunt.  i then moved up to her clit while i took a dildo i had removed from my overnight bag i always take with me and started to fuck her cunt hard and deep as she came again so fucking hard.  we then got in bed still wet and i got strapped in and simply raped her.  i plunged my nine and half inch cock into her willing body as i fucked her cunt hard making her jolt and moan and finished her off missionary with her legs pulled back and high in the air as they kicked and jerked as she screamed in bliss.  i got her strapped in and let her do me doggy style and then reached back and pushed the cock head into my bung hole and groaned as she excitedly pushed into my asshole.  i begged her slap my ass and pull my hair as she pounded my asshole.  she was so into it and slapping me so good as sweat poured off our heated bodies.  i loved pulling forward and turning around and looking her in the eye as i looked up and slurped her dick straight from my asshole.  i corkscrewed my head and took it down my throat and jammed my head on it.  her eyes were glazed over with lust as got her on her back and rode my cunt and asshole on it cowgirl and repeatedly dismounted to lick my ass off her cock.  i just screamed and cursed in spanish as i pounded my asshole down onto her upthrusting cock as my mind exploded in fucking bliss as my shit hole shredded itself in fucking bliss as i slapped and rubbed my clit hard and fast.  she got the message as i then slipped my cock deep into her asshole and fucked her balls deep.  i ripped her head back by her long hair and pulled her around by her hair roughly and brought her face to my cock dripping in her ass juice.  i groaned as her lips surrounded my cock head and twisted as she sucked it clean and took it slowly down her throat as far as she could and cleaned it thoroughly.  i took her asshole over and over again, holding my dick with one hand and slamming it in and out her gapping asshole ass she screamed in pained pleasure.  i loved standing on the bed and watching her get on her knees to give hot atm head to my cock.  i got her on the floor and pushed her head down on the carpet and mounted her asshole.  i slammed it so hard and deep into her quivering shit hole.   i smiled as her cheek pressed into the carpet and her body jolted with my ramming thrusts.  i ordered her to pull her nipples and loved seeing her face slash even harder.  i started slapping her ass cruelly

and raking her buns and back as she hissed and moaned.  i could sense her orgasm beginning to erupt so i gripped her ass cheeks and pounded my cock fully into her spasming asshole.  i so loved how her body started jolting and shaking as she came violently as i pounded two searing orgasms out her exploding asshole.  her screams were torn from her blasted throat.  i grinned through the dripping sweat as i saw her cheek wallowing into the carpet as i pounded her shit.  i kept pile driving her exploding shit hole as she howled some more and her legs and arms hitched and spasmed.  i worked her through her harrowing orgasms and i slowly pulled out and looked at the ass juice flow out her ruined asshole.  i laid down on the floor with my groin beside her head and guided her head over to my cock soaked in her ass juice.  i moaned and felt my eyes roll back watching angelica slowly suck my dick into her mouth and suck and clean it from her asshole and then resting her head on my belly as she suckled and licked my thick black cock with happy tired sighs of pure contentment.  i so love getting a newbie to do atm and licking my cock on my belly.  i feel so bad and slutty.  we fucked repeatedly through the night.  i have discovered she hungers for black pussy and boy do i have the girls for her.

 

//  i like how you show a master a work.  laura knows to keep mentioning things that she has shared with bonnie that have enjoyed ["To our little stroll through Bloomies," Laura said.  "We finally made it."]  one must constantly reinforce things to keep things moving forward.  this makes your woman know you care for her and want to share with her.  i have always loved your intimate and right on observations [She knew that cooking together was another kind of intimacy, one that was even potentially very deep.  When you cooked together, it could be a symbolic fucking together, food being as basic as sex.  Bonnie looked up at her and smiled in the most thrilling way, a smile Laura could feel down to her toes, though it had not the slightest intimation of sex in it at all.]  i so know these little things are what draws our woman to you and makes her melt in your arms when it is time.  i know that if you lay a good foundation everything you build afterwards will be so much better.  i love how you show that the more you are with a woman the more you start to pickup on what makes her unique and totally beautiful [Bonnie turned the heat way down and covered the skillet with a large lid.  Then she picked up her tall, vodka-laced Coke.  Laura was startled to notice, as if for the first time, that one thing that made Bonnie's face so enchanting was her high cheekbones.  Because her face was not gaunt or especially long, you did not notice it at first, but the more you scrutinized it, the more you realized that she had prominent high cheekbones that somehow made her face very striking.]  i have always tried to immediately find one thing stunning about you and then as i get to know you soon i think all of you is stunning.  i have always admired how laura sees the beauty in all her women.  i find almost all races and body types ravishing and want to fuck them all but especially women of color.  we discover she has american indian in her and she doesn't like her hair ["One of my great grandmothers was a full-blooded Choctaw Indian," Bonnie said.  "Guess that's where I get it.  Hair, too."   She fluffed her short, jet black hair with her fingers.  "This dense, clumpy mix of Indian and nigger hair."         "I think your hair is beautiful," Laura said, sounding almost prim to herself.  Tea party conversation.   "It frames those cheekbones.  Makes you exotic."]   i

always let my women know how beautiful they are.  i find such hair almost intoxicating.  cindy has this kind of hair and i love running my fingers over and through her hair when it is not in her usual loose braids.

 

//  i really like this next part where you actually allow your women to have dialog and repartee.  with all the compliments bonnie makes the almost obligatory comment that one might think she is gay.  i have heard variations of that so many times over the years.  i know that we are about to move to the next stage and i put on all my charms.  i am smiling as laura debates over coming out so to speak or playing it coy for a while longer.  i think i tend to move quicker than laura in such things.  once love is in the air it is time to move things forward but laura is more stylish than i am.  i wear a ring too so i too get are you gay comment since we can't legally marry.  i use to my advantage to allow me to get closer initially sometimes thinking i must be a het.  i just love all this dialog as bonnie and laura slowly get closer to the moment of truth as bonnie is now consciously realizing that laura is a beautiful lesbian who desires her.  delicious dialog like this ["Anyway," Bonnie continued nervously, "even if you were . . . like, married to a girl, you'd be cheating on her if you . . . you know, made a pass at me."        "Am I making a pass at you?"        Bonnie squirmed and looked away.  "I . . . don't think so."]  other authors simply have no dialog even remotely real life like this.  heck, they don't even have dialog.  we can so clearly see that bonnie is falling under the spell of lesbian love and is still at that flustered stage.  it only takes more loving coaxing to make those last silly barriers come crumbling down.  i am smiling as laura ups the heat by telling bonnie she finds her cheekbones so alluring.  i can just feel bonnie shaking with suppressed need.  when a

woman still wants to associate with me at this stage i so know she is mine and soon be will filling my mouth with gushing hot cum as her cunt ruptures in my devouring mouth.  i so know those little delays as bonnie runs back into the kitchen to finish cooking dinner.  i know to be patient.  she is falling for me.  laura knows how to play her cards asking if bonnie wants her to leave when she knows bonnie will ask her to stay.  for me that is just another step i am getting them to make in coming to me.  i so love getting them to seduce themselves.  it makes that first kiss so much more intense.  they share a nice meal and they talk easily now that bonnie knows the truth.  laura doesn't make a move like i would

probably.  if i sense success then i move in for the love kill.  but maybe laura senses that more time is needed and backs off.  i know that letting lesbian thoughts swirl in many women's minds is all one needs to have a love kill on the next date.  i so know that confused, wistful and longing look that laura is seeing now.  [Bonnie agreed and they exchanged numbers.  She looked wistfully at Laura.  "I like you, Laura.  I kind of even wish I was that way . . . so we could spend a little more time together."       Laura leaned forward and kissed her smooth black forehead.  She then tenderly caressed one enchanting high cheek bone with her fingertip.  "You just keep thinking that way and call me now and then," she murmured.]  sometimes i never get another chance but way more often i do so i can be magnanimous.  i find being gentle and caring so makes women fall for you.  i naturally care and like you and it so shows in my actions and body language.  i just love reading your stories full of natural dialog and beautiful and alluring women.  i just have to give you credit for taking almost half a chapter to develop bonnie and not have the payoff.  again this is only possible because of this wonderful universe that has flowed on for so long and allows you develop things slowly when necessary to make it like real life and then making the actual seduction so devastating.

 

//  i like seeing "horny as a tick".  that is a saying a grew up hearing.  cute to see it in a story.  it is nice that laura calls makeeda while she is away.  it is always nice to chat with your sweeties.  i so agree with that.  a woman always needs her other archangels to constantly let her know that she is wanted and still so special and desirable.  i have always admired laura and her basic goodness.  she genuinely likes and adores her angels and makes sure they are constantly feeling that adoration.  but we all agree that when your main sweeties are away the cat should play.  thus i am mental fist pumping with laura calling allisha seeing if she can get some sweet pussy.  i simply must get my quota of orgasms all the time or i feel like i am going to explode.  i love to masturbate so i get a lot of fun that way but i need my angels to keep me happy and purring.  i will not hesitate to call angels when my archangels are away.  i know they are fucking each other if together and fucking any other women they can also.  i love how laura tells us just how pretty allisha is, bordering on the absolute beautiful.  i am absolutely aghast when we discover that allisha has not had an orgasm in over two weeks.  that is henioussssss!  that is totally so wrong.  i have never understood how some women can go so long between orgasms.  i guess they want to make each one super special or something but all orgasms are special.  to not wring every possible orgasm out of our body as much as possible simply seems so weird to me.  i guess i can understand to some degree about not wanting men bothering her all the time but women?  come on!!!  oh well.  i would shrivel up and die.  but again i like how you make all your women individuals who are unique and have their own perspectives on the world and life.  i just hope she doesn't become frigid in the coming years.  what a waste.  as i have always said i love sass in my women and especially when they are talk dirty to me ["No.  Mine," Allisha admitted.  "More fun with you.  Can you come over?  My parents went to Cancun for a second honeymoon.  Just me here.   My divorce was final yesterday.  You could come over and help me celebrate and fuck my ears off."        "So that's all I am.  Your little sex toy?"        "Of course not.   We can have five minutes of conversation first, if you need it."  Allisha was bright, droll, nasty, and always quick on the draw.]  i am a sucker for a woman who can turn a phrase or come up with the witty response.  other authors just have basic, drool conversation if any and it just makes their women seem almost boorish which they are not and that is such a shame.  i am happy i discovered one author in erotica that makes her women alive and vital.

 

//  of course i am so happy when allisha asks laura to bring her strap-on.  oh yes, good hard het fucking is around the corner.  i can just feel the lust coursing through laura's body as she hurries to the place allisha is staying at.  i so know that feeling of giddy lust as you drive your woman's place for some heated fucking.  i just drool thinking of how i am going to fuck you and how you are going to fuck me.  i keep it kind of ambiguous but i know that devastating orgasms will be occurring and quickly.  this is how i love to greet my slut when i arrive at her place [They were still loosely embracing by the door.  Laura would not let her go.  "If I stayed the night, I wouldn't be able to go to work in the morning.  God, you smell good!" she said, nuzzling Allisha's smooth, long neck.]  i have always liked how you show this dynamic.  you are the only author that shows lovers truly greeting each other.  others keep it kind of sterile for my tastes.  i want us to inhale and devour each other.  this is how dodie greets me.  she wraps me in her strong arms and crushes me to her and slams her tongue down my already swooning throat.  her fingers dig into my flesh as she jams her thigh between my legs and humps my mound on it as i mewl and hitch.  she just kind of grinds you into her hard / soft body as you melt and your womb flips.  especially when she turns your neck and sucks it and then digs her teeth into your flesh and pumps it hard making you scream in pleasure before her long tongue is again sliding down the top of your tongue and gagging you in deep love.  of course i do the same thing to maria.  i so love crushing her to myself when she comes home and raping her mouth when i am horny.  i like to grab my woman and constantly jerk her hard into my body and feel her body jolting and her tits mashing and wallowing with each jerk as i worm my thigh between your legs and grind down as your cunt gets all sodden and swollen with need.  joann loves to greet you aggressively but with me and dodie she has to stand on her tippy toes and we have to bend our necks and knees.  she is so cute when she jumps up on us and wraps her legs around our waist and attacks our mouth like a leech with her tongue wiggling so aggressively in our mouths and down our throats.  i love feeling her pressed to me as i walk over to the sofa and sit down and she settles on my lap and attacks my mouth, neck, shoulders and quickly exposes my tits and devours with total wanton lust.

 

//  again you give us the dialog that i so love and desire [Allisha threw and secured the deadbolt lock.  She turned back to Laura, smirking sexily.  "I taste good too," she flirted.  "At least so I've been told by a very experienced taster named Laura."        "Mmmm, this Laura," Laura fell easily into the game.  "Should I be jealous?"]   i just love your interplay of your women.  i simply don't know why other authors seem to avoid this like the plague.  it makes each woman in your story a unique person to be desired and fucked.  laura is such a positive person.  she stops allisha and just showers her with compliments of her beauty.  i always compliment you on your beauty but i will not slow things down when it is time to fuck.  i need to have your cunt in my mouth and on my dick.  but this is one thing that initially attracted me to your stories [She reached out to touch Allisha's hair, that long, unusual, honey-gold hair that had so captivated her in the beginning, so rare on a black woman.  "I think you are more beautiful than you realize."]  others stories tell how beautiful and cute the women are but only you really have the characters actually tell each other this in dialog.  others may say in the heat of lust how they love their woman's mouth, tits, cunt or ass but only you have lines like this [She reached out to touch Allisha's hair, that long, unusual, honey-gold hair that had so captivated her in the beginning, so rare on a black woman.  "I think you are more beautiful than you realize."]  this is women looking and seeing the beauty of their partner and i am happy that one author shows this.  i am smirking as allisha remarks that a tough dyke came on to her. 

she wants her femm to love and dominate but that is the price she pays when a lipstick is not looking for her butch.  a lot are, so go for it butch.  of course i am so happy to see that allisha has corrected her stupid mistake of marrying a male asshole.  i know there are some good ones out there but they are just so rare, almost extinct i would say.  i love it when a woman divorces a bastard and discovers the true love that only women can give.  now laura gets in the mode that i so love [Now Laura could not keep from kissing her, and passionately too.  She pushed her back against the wall of the hallway and kissed her hard, and ran her hands up and down Allisha's slim but curvaceous body, feeling her firm flesh through her clothes.  She bit her earlobe and slithered her tongue into her ear.  "Better tell the neighbors to put in their earplugs.  I'm going to make you scream."]  women just melt when you go for her ears i have found.  i so love to slither my tongue deep into her ear and suck her earlobe into my mouth and suck and naw as i breath hot air into her ear making her shake, mewl and whimper for it.  i have made women melt with just this.

 

//  i have always loved how you use clothing in your stories.  other authors just don't every involve clothing it their stories.  they are clothed and then instantaneously they are gone.  i love moments like this ["I know I can," she murmured into the smooth dark skin.  She got her hands under Allisha's thin sweater and ran them all over the girl's long, smooth, warm back.  Allisha was not wearing a bra under her sweater, which Laura had noted from the start, having watched her plump, mouthwatering nipples swelling and sliding under the fabric.  Now she slid her hands around to the front and cupped Allisha's marvelous young breasts, good-sized, firm globes for such a slender and petite girl.  "I know I can make you yelp and squeal."]  this is one thing that makes my blood boil and my cunt cream.  watching your braless tits moving underneath clothing makes me so fucking horny.  i so love to get my hands underneath your hiding fabric and stroking and squeezing your tits and plucking your nipples.  kissing you deeply as my hands work their magic on your breast.  i know how to make women swoon from just my breast worship and then adding my mouth just makes them die for it.  i love reading an author that shows this.  i love seeing big heavy hooters rolling and shaking and small titties poking through and showing your nipples.  geez , this thinking about it is making me wet.  you now give us that delicious dialog i so love as allisha softly breaths to laura about how she wants her to fuck her.  do her hard like she knows laura wanted to do the first time she saw her.  i so love hearing my slut talking like this to me.  i take what they tell me and i so totally deliver.  again you are using dialog in the story to advance the story unlike any other author.  i mean we do this in real life and should be written about in stories.  if we just fucked silently like other authors have it the sex would be so much less exciting and rad.  hot dialog and a little taunting to fire up the blood [Again Allisha let forth her throaty laugh.  "Just the words I wanted to hear."  She lifted the sweater with both hands over her head, shaking her thick, honey-gold hair clear, looking down at Laura's pale hands on her dark body, her naked breasts.  "You're going to do more than squeeze those, I hope."]

 

//  this is how i make my women my love sluts [Finally naked, she rolled onto the huge bed with Allisha, grabbing for her.  They embraced and kissed ravenously, rubbing their hot bodies together, digging their fingers into each other's firm flesh.  Laura made good on her promise by sliding her mouth down immediately to Allisha's wonderful breasts, mouth-mauling them, holding them with her hands and sucking Allisha's big dark caramel nipples hungrily.        "Mmmm . . . oh!   Mmmmm . . . nnnngggg . . . ohhnngggg!" Allisha whimpered, twisting and panting as she looked down at Laura's mouth on her wet breasts and stiff nipples.  "God, nobody ever sucked them like you do, Laura.  Ohhnngggg!  Oh!  You do it so hard!"] recently, i was over cindy and shari's and finally got to meet tameka.   she has a nice medium build with medium size tits.  she has the cutest glasses that make her look so studious and serious.  of course that didn't last long.  she was sitting between cindy and shari and they just started devouring her as they quickly got her stripped as i got naked.  i feel to my knees and buried my face in her cunt.  i was tongue lapping and sucking cunt meat with total love and focus.  i was gulping down cunt juice and sucking her cunt lips and tongue lashing her clit.  i loved how her pelvis shook and jumped.  i felt cindy beside me shouldering me out of the way.  i am easy and got up on the sofa and looked at shari raping tameka's mouth and working her ears, neck and shoulders.  i took her b cup titties in my strong hands and started to pulp making her nipples flare out the tops of my squeezing hands and started tongue lashing her rock hard nipples and tongue rasping her steepled aurolas as she shook and cried out "harder" and "yesssssssss".  i just squeezed and pulped and then sucked her tit deep into my mouth and super sucked and tongue lathed before rhythmically squeezing again and then mouth devouring as cindy worked her cunt wildly and shari hardly let her breath with her tongue down her throat.  i am smiling as tameka's legs suddenly shot out straight and then her heels slammed into the floor and spasmatically ground into the floor as she shari backed off and loud screams filled the room as tameka convulsed and jackknifed as cindy sucked her cunt inside out while i rapidly rubbed her clit and i sucked a nipple hard and fast.  then later i got to work shari's heavy full tits and cindy's little swellings.  three perfect tits to devour with each their unique charms.  full tits i can fully pulp and dig my fingers deep into their flesh and pulling her tit meat out and pulling her tits taunt and

shaking and jerking as shari cries out in pleasure.  sucking cindy's little tits fully into my mouth and super sucking as my tongue has plenty of room to tongue drill and slap and squeezing in with my hands on the sides of her little tits and stuffing all i can into my mouth as i pull back and making her flesh pull out as i rasp her nipple as she hisses and feel her whole body jumping up off the bed as her hands pull my head down hard into her tits as i work my magic.

 

//  i am having to smile as usual as laura again needlessly asks if she is doing it to hard.  she is a great lover so she knows how to ramp it up slowly and gauge her lover.  when i take a new lover i so very closely watch their face when i am first making love to them to gauge just how much they like.  it is all their in their face and the quality of their moans and gasps.  you can so easily hear real pain.  then you need to gauge how it is affecting them.  do they like it or not.  if i need verbal questions i whisper to them if i was a little to hard or just right.  i find must sluts love a little pain and quickly get addicted to it if you guide them along with love.  when i made love to meggan the first time i was sucking her

nipples so hard and squeezing her tits with moderate force.  watching closely i started to knead her tits harder and harder and deep throat sucking her nipples and tongue slapping rapidly.  i had her hooked.  i just started to maul her tits with hard squeezes and digging my fingers and turning her tit meat over in my grip while tongue lashing her nipples.  i whispered to her what a fucking slut she was and she just moaned long and deep.  i then started teeth raking her nipples and pinching them making her cry and writhe.  i asked her if she wanted more and she whimpered yes.  i asked her if she was worthless shit and if she was my complete whore.  she whimpered yes.  i whispered in her ear that i should slap her and spank her ass with hard smacks.  she just trembled and shook.  i waited and whispered my threat again and she whimpered more.  i then turned her face to the right position and gave her a hard slap and loved the loud sound it made as she whimpered and i fisted her hair and called her a worthless nigger and who was her master.  she moaned "yoooouuuuuu" and i asked what should i do to her her and she croaked out "punish me".  i can read such sluts so well.  i have made her my total whore.  of course i have totally submitted to her and she gets so into it as she smacks my face with hard stinging slaps making my eyes tear and roll down my cheeks.  turning my face turn beet red as she wedge fucks my mouth and pulls my hair and chokes me so fucking good.  women should go for it and ramp up and not down is my motto.  where laura uses allisha's pleas to don't bite her as a back off point i start to explore and lovingly push to see if i can take her new heights.  i find letting them do it to me usually hooks them when they see the affect it has on me.  some learn fast and some slow and some are foolish enough to not travel down the road.  their lose.

 

//  i like how you now show the fuck morphing again like only you do.  laura has her mind set on gobbling some gash and finger fucking allisha to a g-spot orgasm.  i read so many stories where the sex is so predictable it makes me want to weep.  yours never is and we have the added bonus of you showing how women communicate and change their love plan to give their woman the fuck they have been craving.  what woman won't melt when she sees that her woman is willing to give her exactly what she is needing and wants.  allisha is pressing for some strap-on action and makes it clear that she wants to ride laura cowgirl style.  have to smile too when laura hears allisha using "fuck".  i like reading [Just these words made Laura's blood leap and sizzle through her veins.  They always did, though she heard them rarely.  They were always enough to make her shiver and palpitate almost visibly.  And I'm just the one who can do it, my pet.]  this is exactly how it always affects me.  my whole body burns for you and i too know that i can totally deliver the great fuck you are craving.  love the detail of allisha watching with open lust as laura synchs into her strap-on and allisha gazing with lust at the thick, long cock that juts from laura's groin as she lies back on the bed.  i love seeing my woman all filled with lust and love for the fucking i am about to give her.  i will wave my cock around and put spit on it or lubricant and get it all shiny and watching her eyes go ga-ga looking at my love cock's movements.  i am smiling as allisha says she doesn't need lubricant because she is so wet.  that is how i almost always have my women.  i use foreplay and intense focus to get them so worked up and wet for me.  their cunts are just so fucking swollen and weeping cunt juice.  often it is all slavered over their mound and trickling down their thighs like the in heat bitches they are.  now you give me that penetration that i so love ["God, yes, I do," Allisha confessed, climbing on, straddling Laura's thighs and grasping the strap-on dildo in her own fingers, guiding it toward the gaping, glistening pink trench of her inflamed pussy, which Laura could see was swollen and open and craving to be filled.        Watching the long pole disappear into Allisha's descending body was a sublimely erotic experience for Laura, enhanced by Allisha's low, guttural moan as it penetrated her.        "Unnhhhhaannggghhhh!" Allisha groaned, her head tilting back, her eyes closing, her face grimacing as she felt the complete length of the stalk probing deep into her pussy.  "Oh Jesus, that feels so good!"]  i have always worship how you capture this so well.  other authors just have the cock, fingers or fist just go into its fuck hole so blandly.  i so love watching my dick slide into my slut's cunt, asshole or mouth.  i can just feel my body shake with love as it slowly slides deep into her body.  watching it saw or punch in and out and seeing the cunt cream, ass juice or spit glistening and building up on my cock with that divine milky white color or seeing spittle roping and drooling off.  i so groan like allisha when i feel a nice hard dick sliding deep into my cunt or asshole.  i so love to squat over you as i grip that cock with my hand and rub that cock head up and down my slit making me shudder and then sliding down that cock as i moan and caw.  pressing down until my mound or ass is pressed into your groin to fully bury that dick into my clutching love hole.

 

//  sigh, you so know how to show great fucks.  other authors always focus on only one thing while their women fuck while you constantly show again and again how we do multiple things while we fuck like ["Let me suck you," she murmured, falling into the easy fuck-rhythm with Allisha too, gyrating her hips gently, holding the dildo in place with her fingers since Allisha had put her hands on either side of Laura's head on the mattress in order to lower her body within range of Laura's mouth.  "I love to suck you," Laura breathed, guiding one beautiful, dangling breast to her open lips, sucking the thick, large, caramel-colored nipple inside.]  i so love sucking and pulping your tits as i love you.  often when simonette and i fuck hillary and camille they like to fuck us in tandem and sync.  i kind of think of it like a porn ballet.  simonette will lie back like laura.  i like to put a couple of pillows under my head to give me a great view.  they will settle over our hips and grip our cocks and i so love watching their faces as they slash and clench feeling our thick, long dicks sliding slow, deep and fully into their cunts.  i love watching them slowly ramping up their fucking.  they start slow but soon they are gripping the sheets or our bodies and slamming their cunts hard into our cocks as we up thrust and you hear that sound of sweaty flesh slapping.  watching their tits roll, shake and whiplash.  camille has firmer tits and i love the sound of them slapping her body as they flail and roll while hillary's pillowy tits shake and whiplash and jiggle like electricity is shooting through them.  they sweat like pigs and i love watching it roll down their bodies and splattering as their heads whip around.  they will ride us straight up, lean back with their hands near our feet and pound down and then lean forward with their hands beside our heads.  of course we use that as an opportunity to suck and maul their tits as they groan and whimper.  especially hillary's hooters smothering my face as i suck and bite them and dig my fingers deep into their flesh.  simonette is always kinky and i love watching and hearing her slapping them cruelly and choking them as spit drools out their mouths as she shakes their heads around with her hand(s) around their necks.  you can just see the pure pleasure on their faces as she abuses them.  they switch mounts and make sure to

clean off the cocks fresh from their sister's hot fuck hole.  we are all anal whores and eventually our dicks are being pounded deep up tight assholes.  i always moan and feel a endorphin hit when they pull off our cocks pounding their assholes and hungrily clean them off with hot atm action and doing it again and again and changing mounts often.  you never how it will morph.  last time we wound up dp'ing hillary with me on the bottom.  simonette was behind pounding her asshole so hard and good as hillary cried out and swooned.  i then saw camille's feet appear beside my shoulders and i watched her grip hillary's hair and tilt her head back at a sever angel and jammed her sister's face deep into her swollen cunt and rode her hard.  i loved watching camille swirl and hump her hips forward as her hands clenched in her sister's hair to jam her face deep into her cunt as i heard hillary sniffle and moan as she ate out her sister.  i reached over and got an anal dildo and got it wet again with my spit as i gave it head.  i reached up with one hand to spread an ass cheek and roughly shoved it up camille's asshole.  she stiffened and groaned gutturally and her head lulled to the side as she continued to hump her sister's face.  i had to slow my humping of hillary with slow humps as i concentrated on fucking camille's asshole.  it was five minutes of pure connected love.  all giving pure pleasure.  hillary started her famous shaking and juddering and suddenly her body erupted in wild spasms and jackknifes as her screams were muffled in her sister's cunt.  her hands gripped her sister's sweaty ass hard and i saw her fingers spasm and clench deep into

camille's firm ass.  i started to pump as fast as i could the dildo in camille's asshole and suddenly she was coming with loud pure screams of pure fucking bliss.  it was a picture of perfect perfection.  both sisters coming so hard as their bodies flipped and surged against us and each other and with hillary's face now resting on her sister's thigh her screams filled the bedroom as they both when multiple as we continued to work their fuck holes.  camille lost it and crashed to the bed and flipped through several more horrible full body spasms as hillary collapsed on me and we raped her fuck holes hard as i now choked her hard and simontte slapped her ass and back and raked her back with her nails and hillary had yet another monstrous orgasm that had her weakly crying out and wallowing all over me as her strength fled her and her full weight comforted me in our love as i felt her sweaty flesh jolting and squirming all over me.  as she finally came down i brought her mouth to mine as we kissed in deep love.  suddenly i felt a hard cock worming between our lips and we moaned as we cleaned hillary's asshole off simonette's dick as our tongues twined together over that divine tasty cock.  we so love tasting our assholes.

 

//  like i say you so know how to show a great fuck [And Laura was helping.  She actually wanted to have her hands and her mouth on every part of Allisha's delicious naked dark body at every instant but had to settle for running her fingers over the girl's smooth, clenching flesh, along her tightening thighs and up her flexing back, then around again to her bobbing breasts, pinching and twisting her large nipples and watching the increments of gathering passion further tearing her beautiful face as her climax approached ever faster.        "Oh!  Ohnnnnnn !" Allisha moaned, gnawing her full lower lip unconsciously, swirling her pelvis to make the dildo run in and out of her pussy.]  i so appreciate your writing.  you are the only author to show a woman loving the whole body.  you show laura working allisha totally and this is what makes the resulting orgasms so devastating.  you have gotten all the erogenous zones firing on all cyclinders.  i will work your whole body to make you come so fucking hard.  i love to work your back, then your sides and your front.  working your tits and then moving on and coming back over and over again as i work you harder and harder as i watch your body ramp up like allisha here.  you can so see her body tensing and moving towards nirvana.  i will see you tense a little and then pour on the heat and smirk as i hear you groan deeply and feel your body tighten even more.  you keep making her body tense more and more so you can finally snap the string like this [This time she squeaked and twitched and rumbled through a series of debilitating spasms before even emitting a true sound of ecstasy.  Laura held her and

fucked her, jabbing upward with her hips, burying the dildo deep into the girl's body each time, feeling Allisha's body clench and leap with fire with every thrust, and finally hearing the birth of a throttled cry of rapture deep in Allisha's lungs as it fought its way out.        "Annngghhrrrgggmmmnngghiieeee!   Ohnngg!  Oh!  Oh!"        Laura gripped her hard, mashing Allisha's writhing body into hers and up-thrusting wildly, stabbing the dildo deep into her and feeling her come again, rumbling bodyquakes going on deep inside her womb, and agonized cries of excruciating pleasure ripping their way out of her lungs.        "Ahhnggggmmnngggiiieeee!   Oh!  Oh . . . Laura!   Ummnngghphhh!  Auungghhh !"]   i always try to vary my end fuck.  sometimes i rabbit fuck you or give you slow hard pile driving thrusts to take you to heaven.  what is so cool is that you do the same thing.  i never know how you will have laura fucking her women.  what's more you

are the only author to give the detail of how we use our hips with strap-on sex.  others just have them fuck with no details.  plus, sigh, the divine vocalizations.  this was the first thing i noticed in your stories and i keep waiting for each new divine offering to see what we will this chapter.  i so love it!

 

//  another thing that you have always captured so well is how orgasms have length.  especially for women.  other authors tend to just basically say that they came and maybe give a thrust or two and a moan or scream or two.  the above just shows how you show the length of orgasms by giving us all the vocalizations of allisha's intense pleasure.  this shows duration.  but then you outright tell the reader that her orgasm is long and crushing.  you use words like "writhing, jerking, churning, undulating, wild spasms, slackening wavelets, softer pulsing and quivering."  these are words that most authors don't use and thus they are not able to convey the orgasms that are wracking their women's sweet flesh.  you must use words like these to give the reader the sense of the wonder and shocking, piercing pleasure that a female orgasm gives a woman.  i swear, i feel like my womb is shredding itself deep in my belly and mind sometimes feels like it

is being flayed in searing ecstasy and only you capture that divine rapture.  one thing i have always liked is to have my women pressing down onto me when she is coming like this [Allisha was lying directly on top of Laura, and yet she was petite and slender, weighing very little, and it was not uncomfortable.  At this point, Laura, not having come herself yet, was hyper-sensitive to the feel of Allisha's long, naked body pressing everywhere against hers, the delicious curves and smoothness and warm, sleek muscles.  She could feel Allisha's moist, slowing breath against her cheek and her ear, and feel Allisha's softening nipples pushing into her own breasts.]  true, with petite lovers you can have them writhing all over you and not be crushed.  i so love to feel small lovers like joann, cindy, shari, and kia coming on top of me as i feel their bodies slamming into me and their limbs spasming along my limbs and titties mashing and digging into mine as they writhe and buck in ecstasy.  grabbing their ass cheeks or looping my arms around over their back and pulling them tight to feel their divine sweaty flesh wiggling and writhing on top of mine as i make sure if at all possible to see their faces up close as i see it slashed with pleasure.  i'm an amazon so i can take heavy weight and love it.  when dodie or maria are coming on top of me i really feel their weight and i love it.  maria just comes like she is dying but someone like dodie makes sure to ram you deep into the mattress or hard into the floor when she is on top and knows you can take.  i just feel like we are becoming one flesh when she is mashing me down like this.

 

//  i like reading laura continuing to hold allisha close to her like i want to do.  i love to lie spent between lovers when i have their dicks deep in my fuck holes.  makes me feel so connected to them.  i am smiling as you show the little got yas that can creep on you like here with allisha getting a cramp.  of well it does happen and it is cute when you show it.  sigh, i see laura getting out of the harness and pushing it down to the bed.  i would be licking and sucking it clean and sharing it with my lovers.  i never tire of tasting sweet pussy and ass.  you can say the nicest things sometimes [Laura nuzzled her neck and fondled her breasts.  "I can wait for a while.  Just kissing you almost makes me come."        "You're so sweet, Laura.  No guy ever said a thing to me like that.  You know," Allisha said, between long, increasingly steamy sexual kisses, "I think I'm going to have to start shopping around now for some girlfriends, now that my divorce is final.  And you're already taken."]  what woman doesn't melt with such compliments.  of course, i am fist pumping reading that allisha is now going to find herself angels to love and fuck.  i so preen and feel so good deep inside when i hear those words from a newbie.  seeing her love, desire and need for pussy growing and growing.  i so want to know they are devouring tangy cunt meat outside of my presence.  knowing they are growing and becoming more.  i love the ending as they give each other heart felt compliments as we see their bodies reviving and knowing that heated fucking is just around the corner.  so often other authors just have them snuggle and sleep after the fuck.  our bodies were made and are capable of so much more and you show it!

 

 

 

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Chapter 312:

//  I have to love how this chapter starts.  Makeeda is basking in her continuing rising star.  I love seeing her basking and glowing with the thrill and satisfaction that this is bringing her.  Being a positive person she is heaping praise on her lover for helping her get there.  Laura being an equally good person demurs because she knows that Makeeda is doing all the work and it is her own talent she is developing.  I love seeing such positive women in print.  This is two women loving and caring for each other and wanting to share the good times.  I am thankful to find an author that shows this dynamic in healthy relationships.  At times, I find my archangels or angels trying to heap praise on me for such encouragement and support and I have to tell them that they are the key not me.  you are the only author to take the time to show and develop this.  Only a story that has multiple chapters like this can even attempt it and the few other multi chapter stories never even tried.  Your story is truly unique.  You give hot sex and great story lines and interactive characters that grow and change over time.  I am so fortunate to have discovered your writings.

 

//  I also have to love how we see that Makeeda has been a naughty girl.  ["I was unfaithful to you again.  You know, there's so much energy there, in that city.  And everybody wants to fuck you.  Literally everybody.   Male and female.   Sometimes just fighting them off makes you so weary."]  I am so happy to see that Makeeda is loosening up and partaking of the joys that are in the world.  Life is too short to not grab all the pleasure that you can in this life.  I have to smile as Laura gives a tart reply.  I am even more happy to see them immediately joking about it and not having any rancor.  This is some of that character development that I so love.  I have read over the years how Laura's stomach used to "curdle" and she would lose her mind on jealousy.  I am happy that she accepts Makeeda partaking of other sweet pussy.  I am amused when she is not asking for details when Makeeda offers them.  with other lovers Laura is all ears but with Makeeda she is deferential.  I guess it is to close to home for her.  Again I like the nuances you give all your women.  I am so the opposite and so are my main loves.  Maria recently went to Houston and when she came home Joann and I were like puppies with our baby being home.  We were relaxing on the sofa and she started telling us of Jillian a dark skinned black woman she meet at the company she was auditing.  Jillian made sure Maria knew her intentions and they were soon back at Jillian's apartment and fucking heatedly.  We swooned over details of mouths devoured, tits sucked hard and cunts sucked inside out and assholes tongue fucked with hard abandon.  Several details so stand out.  Maria took some of Jillian's one inch blue anal beads and stuffed them up her asshole and spent long delicious minutes sucking her cunt to ruin and then getting behind her and rubbing her cunt hard and fast and then pulling the beads out her asshole with hard jerks as a totally devastating orgasm had Jillian flipping, jackknifing, cawing and groaning gutturally as her body was ripped apart with fucking bliss.  Maria said that her whole body would freeze and then jerk hard as the blue beads wormed out her spasming shit hole.  Maria feed herself the beads covered in Jillian's ass cream and smiled as Jillian looked at her stunned as she offered her the last one and smiled as Jillian took it in her mouth and moaned at her first direct taste of sweet ass juice.  Later Maria watched herself in a big mirror on the dresser as she coached Jillian to fuck her asshole with her fist.  Maria said she nearly came just seeing her black fingers and then knuckles working her asshole in the mirror.  She gave such vivid details as she described watching the fist work into her tight bung hole and how the black fist and arm looked so sexy and hot jutting out her asshole.  how Jillian worked and grunted as she worked Maria as Maria coached her on the proper techniques.  Soon Jillian had her forearm sinking deep into maria's cruelly stretched o ring as Maria rammed back into the invading fist.  Maria told us how she could feel her knuckles so deep in her belly as they rotated in and out her colon and how she could feel the orgasm approaching as her strength waned and she sank slowly down on the bed and she pleaded with Jillian to keep ramming her shit hole and fuck her good.  Maria showed how she felt her face slash and contort and her eyes rolled back and told how she screamed bloody murder as her anal orgasm ripped her soul and mind apart with the purest bliss possible on earth.  Maria told us how divine it felt to feel that forearm jutting out her asshole as her body jolted and jackknifed around that fist anchored deep in her shit track.  Jillian kept it in her nice and long and when Maria was totally spent slowly pulled it out and Maria watched with half lidded eyes as Jillian looked at her hand and forearm soaked in ass juice and started to lick it off with purrs of contentment and Maria croaked for to lie down and let them clean it off in contented new love.  Needless to say, soon we were raping Maria into a blissful coma.

//  Sigh, I see that Laura is still not willing to give Makeeda what she wants.  She is asking Laura yet again to be whipped and Laura demurs.  I love Laura for being so noble and upstanding but blast it, she is missing much great sex.  I so love to whip, nipple clamps, slap, hair pull and choke my sweet angles and have them do the same to me.  she is missing so much.  They make heated love and their love deepens but I feel it would deepen even more if Laura would give her lover what she wants.  Oh well, maybe some day Laura will give in.  I have been having to service Meggan's new love and famished need for pussy.  she has discovered she really likes it rough.  I am smiling thinking how I went over to her place and she had men's ties out.  She instructed me to her needs and soon I had her tied up to the bed head board and her ankles tied together with the ties.  It really made her hot and wet.  She then told me to go in the closet and get out the long black belt.  It was an old leather belt about three inches wide, supple and pliable.  I folded it in two and bowed it out and snapped it and jumped at the loud sound.  It made Meggan the little whore moan.  I was soon wailing away all along her back, ass and legs as she screamed and pleaded and rolled around as I continued to whip her cruelly.  Rolling her over on her back and whipping her torso and tits and making sure her cunt got a few good strikes as I worked her upper legs also.  After she was properly chastised I devoured her mouth, tits, cunt and asshole.  I so loved hearing her false pleadings as she writhed and cried out and then the sounds of ecstasy as my mouthed sucked her cunt to sweet orgasms.  I so love pay back and later that night it was me on the bed rolling around with my wrists and ankles tied up tight in ties as I felt the belt striking my flesh all over as I shrieked and pleaded and felt pure fire fill my being when a particular good strike of the belt made my ass, thighs, back, belly, tits or cunt sear out in delirious pained ecstasy.  She ate me out so fucking good to devastating orgasms and soon I felt her tongue slither into my sphincter and then tongue fucking me so long and deep before I felt her taking a ten inch dildo and fucking my cunt and asshole back and forth as she sucked my juices off her dildo and fucked me into a multiple searing fucking orgasm as my face mashed into the mattress and screamed pure sweet ecstasy into the sheets as I drooled and my eyes spasmed in the back of my head as waves of searing bliss exploded out my asshole and cunt.

//  I see that Jane is going to be the angel of this chapter.  Sigh, I see will have to wait at least another chapter for the "deflowering" of bonnie.  I so fucking love it.  I love the hunt (as long I don't have to wait to long!) and so savor new pussy if I had to work for it.  I love that you have created a universe that has flow and you actually use it.  the harem author has flow but the seductions are always so quick and predictable.  Hey I love the sex but I would love an actual chase and love kill.  I plan to be right there with her.  I will be lying on my bed with my laptop beside me on the bed and I will stroke my body all over like I like it and work my tits hard and deep and suck on my nipples feeling them throb and ache as my cunt gets so fucking wet.  Then as the foreplay starts I will start to swirl my throbbing clit and making it buzz and jangle and get rock hard as I moan and struggle to read and then watching the foreplay to turn to sex as I start to finger my flowing cunt.  Then as it gets hotter I will take a silver bullet and groan as it slips up my tight asshole and I start to pound my shit hole and stroking my cunt hard.  I will take my rocket out and moan as I lick my ass juice off over and over.  As bonnie cums I will be pounding my cunt so hard making sure my thumb is slamming my clit as I ram fuck my asshole with hard deep thrusts.  I will cum so fucking hard with bonnie as she loses her lesbian cherry.  I can't wait to see how the orgasm will be.  Will I jackknife and flop across the bed or feel my limbs tighten and stiffen as my belly palpitates or will my heels be kicking the bed in wild abandon as my fingers claw the sheets or will I spasm all over as I drool all over myself and my eyes are spasming so fucking hard in the back of my head or maybe liquid magma is scorching my womb and brain with white hot ecstasy as I scream in fucking bliss.  Working my fucks holes to draw every ounce of nirvana from my body.

//  I have always loved Jane's sass.  I think she is by far the most sassy woman in the story.  I love fire and back talk in my women.  The fire sets my womb on fire.  I like her attacking Laura for not calling.  I have received such phone calls, texts or emails when a new angel has distracted me.  I need to be reminded sometimes and work a love rendezvous in so we can renew our love, hopefully with other angels involved.  I like it when you have Jane use Ebonics.  Most of my black angels at one time or another use such language though they all can and do use the king's English most of the time.  I too remember their fuck in the great outdoors and especially when Laura wormed two shampoo covered hard and deep up Jane's divine asshole in Laura's shower.  sigh.  I too like how you are so positive with your women.  Jane may talk shit and act like ghetto trash but if she is going to Stanford then she is one sharp cookie.  That is the Duke of the west.  All your women have so many things going for them no matter their station in life.  You find the positives and accentuate them.  I have always loved that in your stories.  Making these women likable and sweet.   Even the Jane's and Deshona's of the world you make the reader care and want them.  Other stories have no depth that make me want to love them on that deeper level than just a story.  These women I would so love to meet, get to know and then fuck blind repeatedly solo and with Laura and various pairings.

//  I like how you have your younger and "hipper" women and girls use the word "nigger".  It always has amazed me how freely black women use that word among themselves and how positive they have made it.  I am used to being called "nigger" and "niggaaaa" now and smiling at it.  I tend not to use outside the bedroom since it is easy sometimes to mess up the inflections and tonal qualities to get the precise meaning across.  I am happy you don't shy away from this use of the "n" word.  I do like seeing Laura calling Jane on it because it makes her temporarily quiet and chaste though I know she is immediately planning her mock revenge which will only lead to womb scalding sex.  There have been a few times where I really wanted to say could we please not use this word in every sentence please when someone gets on a roll.  I do love using it in the bedroom with my black whores who love hearing it.  I so love it when they call me a Lilly white bitch, cracker, doe girl, spook and such.  I will call them a nigger, jungle bunny and boot lip bitch back at them.  Last time with Shari and Cindy I called Shari a worthless nigger as I raped her asshole and choked her cruelly.  Later we were dp'ing Cindy with me on the bottom as I slapped her and kept asking her if she was worthless nigger and nappy haired ho and she just moaned as Shari straddled her hips and slammed her dick straight down her shit hole and grabbed her hair with both hands and screamed at her to answer me as I felt Cindy's body lurch with Shari's powerful thrusts and Shari barked at me to choke her hard and I used both hands to choke her as my fingers sank in and Cindy's weakly chocked out gasps of "yessssss" and suddenly came wildly as I shook her head while calling her a fucking nigger and Shari gave hard vicious jerks of her head and rammed her cock balls deep as Cindy just pulled weakly at my choking fingers and her body jolted and jackknifed in place as her eyes bulged and face slashed horribly.  Sigh, her whimpers and barely whispered moans made me and Shari ram fuck her so good and hard.  As her orgasm waned, Shari and I ripped our cocks harshly from her spent, quivering fuck holes and threw her down on the bed so hard she bounced limply. We laid out as Shari reached over and dragged Cindy over by her hair with hard mean jerks down to our cocks and watched as she licked our cocks all over before using her tongue to fish them into her greedy mouth.  I felt my womb lurch as Cindy moaned in raspy groans as she cleaned her ass and cunt off our cocks. 

//  I have said how I love you giving these women character.  You are the only author, really the only one, that gives this kind of dialog ["I did," Laura said, a little sharply.   "I just never told you.  It seems to come so naturally to you."        Silence.   Then Jane half-burped into the phone.  "Okay.  If you insist.   Got to watch out for your precious sensibilities."       "I'm sorry I missed your graduation.  I didn't know.  I would've sent a card."  Laura paused, thinking it over.  "On the other hand, your mother may not have liked it if I sent you a card.  She wants to keep you and me as far apart as possible."        "It's okay," Jane pouted.  "I got another girl friend.  I don't need you."]  this is dialog that shows the way Laura can get pissed with an angel when they are being cross.  But what is really cool is we get to see so many facets of Jane's personality.  We can see her hurt and then genuine contrition to begin with and then we see her moxie coming back to the fore by the end here.  I love how Jane may feel a moment of docility but her fire is soon leaping to the fore again and the spitfire is once more front and center.  Other authors have just enough dialog to have a basic, boring seduction (hey if it leads to hot sex that is enough) but I so love this interaction of two different temperament of women and seeing the sparks and magic fly.  With a spitfire like Jane I would have her on the floor with her belly pressed into the floor with my straddling her hips and using one hand to hold by strap-on steady as I torpedoed her asshole with my thick, long cock.  making her squeal and whine with dying pleasure and gripping her by her hair and ripping her over and around as I pull my cock roughly out her spasming asshole and making her clean it thoroughly before I plunge it back deep into her shit hole making her groan gutturally.  Then looping an arm under her hips and jerking her up roughly onto her knees and using a foot to wallow her face into the carpet harshly as I plunge my dick straight down her asshole before I make her clean it again and again as I rape her sweet asshole just like she would love it.  gods knows I love it when this is done to me.

//  I just love seeing all of Jane's facets as the now turns "waspish".  I love how you make these women so alive.  I then have to smile as Laura sort of blanches when Jane teases her about all the times Laura fucked her when she was underage.  I usually sigh at Laura when she gets so prudish but I used to share this hang up.  But a few years ago I realized I have become the woman I loved to fuck as a young girl and I realized I was denying these sweet new fuck angels so much.  Plus, looking in the mirror I see that I am getting older and I decided I needed to get rid of some hang-ups.  Girls today are so much more open and mature in some ways.  Taking Simonette and Hillary opened my eyes and plus all the young pussy they have brought me has made my heart sing.  I so love wallowing my face in a sweet young pussy and raping their fuck holes as they cry out and scream how much they love me.  Seeing Jane giggle is making me smile.  This is something I have realized.  This giggling is something we lose as we become adults.  You have always shown this in the teenagers Laura has fucked.  This youthful exuberance and innocence that I guess we all lose with time.  I simply can't remember me doing that but I know I must have. 

//  that giggling reminds of how I partook of Emily recently.  I went over to dodie and frankie's on a Saturday for a workout.  I heard the sounds of sex from the bar area in her main room.  I went around the corner and froze.  A neighborhood girl was on a bar stool naked masturbating looking in the door way with dodie and Frankie naked masturbating on the small sofa.  The bar was covered in sex toys.  Emily is in the eighth grade and cute as a button with auburn hair in a loose spiky haircut and nice narrow hips and small titties.  She was moaning and giggling as she watched me drooling.  She has been doing small jobs around the house and I saw her lust for them.  my eyes zeroed in on her wet flowing cunt and I just knew I had to have her.  I pulled off my gym clothes and shoes and dropped to me knees in front of Emily and devoured her cunt with all my skill.  I soon had her crying out as I pistoned her clit through my lips and rammed first one and then two fingers up her young, tight cunt.  She came so fucking hard as her narrow hips jumped and jammed my mouth.  dodie told me she comes a lot and I quickly sucked her off again to a screaming orgasm.  They then told me she is a fucking anal whore and loves it rough.  She was relaxing with her back against the bar looking at me with cat eyes as she started to rub her pussy.  I grabbed her by the hair and got her on her knees as I stood and jammed her face into my cunt and started to hump.  Gods she was excellent as her hands latched onto my ass and her tongue drilled my cunt and her lips sucked my clit.  I came so fucking hard as I groaned and cursed as my cunt ruptured and she swallowed my hot steamy cum.  I felt my thighs quiver but I am strong and continued to hump her face with forceful, swirling pelvis thrusts as she sucked my clit so fucking hard I screamed bloody murder.  I so loved looking down at her looking up with a pure sluttish look on her fourteen year old face.  I made sure to grind my cunt all over her sweet young face as she giggled some more.

///  this fires me up.  I got her back on the stool with her back to me as I strapped in a eight inch cock and slide it deep into her hot cunt.  I was soon pounding her love box as she groaned her body jolted from powerful thrusts.  She was lurching back and her body sagged down below the stool cushion as she gripped the bottom rung.  I fucked her hard and went around a few times to let her lick herself off my dick.  I went back around and she was pulling her ass cheeks apart and I forced my dick into her spasming sphincter and I loved her pained moans as my dick jerked into her asshole.  soon I was pounding her shit hole so good as she jibbered and moaned.  I loved pulling out and moving around and her diving on my ass dipped cock and slurping it clean before plunging it in her cunt and back in her asshole and back to her mouth.  I started smacking her ass and raking her back and suddenly she started screaming and jackknifing as an anal 'gasm blasted her soul with the purest bliss possible on earth.  I had to catch the stool with one hand to keep her from toppling over.  I kept my dick in her shit hole as she came down and then took her petite body onto the floor and started pumping her asshole spoon style.  I watched dodie get strapped in.  she got on the floor and let Emily suck her dick then when Emily pulled off my cock and turned over to do atm dodie slammed her ten inch cock hard and completely up her shit hole making her cry out as my dick was deep in her throat.  We fucked her so back and forth as she rolled right and left to offer us her asshole as she cleaned her ass off our dicks straight from her colon.  I was suddenly rolled on my back and Frankie sat her divine cunt on my mouth and I was in heaven sucking her off.  I love how fucks can morph.  I sucked her off while dodie fucked Emily to a screaming elbow and feet slamming floor orgasm.  Soon it was me on the floor with dodie slamming her ten inches up my cunt and Frankie and Emily now strapped in raping my asshole with hard powerful strokes.  Pile driving my asshole and giving me hard powerful rabbit strokes.  They fucked me so long as I was "forced" to take their cocks down my throat covered in my ass juice as they gripped my hair or clenched my face in their hands and skull fucked me as I drooled and roped spit all over my face, throat and tits and all over dodie as she smiled up at me loving the spit all over both of us.  Emily was excellent as she grabbed two fist fulls of hair and jerked my head back as she speared my bung hole and just hissed in my ear as my head was pulled back so tight and then as I started to caw and my eyes rolled back and I felt myself falling over the edge she started to choke me and with one hand while jerking my head by the hair hard with her other as she rabbit fucked my asshole.  I whimpered and drooled as I struggled to breath and my body exploded into a mutlitple orgasm of jackknifes and full body spasms with dodie pulping my tits and Emily kissing my ear as she chocked me to heaven.  I just collapsed on dodie in spent love as my strength fled me after those devastating orgasms.  Of course with four of us the fucking was just starting!

//  again I love your dialog.  You have your women talking with nothing really having to do with them getting in the sack.  In a way, yes, but it is still them just being themselves and this again is something that I just don't get with other authors.  ["I've been known to understand a few things," Jane snapped, insulted.  "They might've let me into Stanford because I'm black, but that don't mean I can't understand things."        "Oh Jane, don't be so silly!  My life has changed a little.  It's not as easy as it used to be."        "You mean you don't want to screw me any more?"        "That day will never come," Laura said.  "But I can't bring you home any more."        "Shit, that don't matter," Jane said blithely.  "Mama's in Las Vegas with Marshall .   I think she trying to get him to marry her there.  Anyway, you can come over here.  How fast can you get here?"]   I love seeing Jane's fiery demeanor again and maybe just a little fear when maybe she thinks Laura doesn't want to see her anymore.  These moments add so much to our understanding of these women and I truly appreciate you giving us these little moments.  I can so remember my youth and having to work sometimes to find a place to fuck.  It added some excitement yes, but I love being an adult now and not having to worry about that.  I can always rent a motel room if nothing else.  Jane is so my kind of girl.  So like me at her age.  I just wanted to fuck all the time.  Wait a minute, I still do!!  I love each new chapter and seeing what new facet to your women you will give us.  Like how you have slowly shown Makeeda's softer side and her more kinky side.  It takes time to learn all the facets of your women and again this is something only you show.  Their was a multiple part "sandy" story and the women were never developed beyond fuck bunnies.  Loved the fucking but more personality would have been nice.

//  I always admire sass and verve and love Jane getting in some shots.  She is a spitfire who simply must sass and cajole.  It so fires me up to fuck you hard and deep. ["If you come without bringing all those fun little toys of yours, I won't let you in," Jane said.  "This little black pussy is special.  You got to work to earn it."]  I smile when she tells Laura she may have to masturbate while she waits.  I would so love to see her stroking her beautiful body to crippling orgasms induced by her own fingers and toys.  I so love to watch you masturbate and will encourage all my angels to do so and gladly do for them.  I love watching the lidded lust as the see me working my body so expertly to devastating orgasms that leave me sweaty, limp and so fucking satisfied.  Laura picks up her toys from home and gets to Jane's mother's and is greeted by this lovely sight [She was no less so now, fetching in the extreme with her sassy smile and hard, curvy teenage body and fantastic ass.  Recently Laura had been under severe pressure not to gape lustfully at Bonnie's incredible posterior at every chance she got, and she was reminded of it as she stared at Jane's, encased in tight jeans, a bubble bottom of sublime shape and contour, one that made you yearn and quiver.]  sigh, I so love nice big hard butts.  I just want to drop to me knees and kiss and rub them through your jeans or blouse and slowly remove that clothing and just kiss, nibble, nip and suck your whole backside and hips and down the sides of your legs.  And then get you on your knees and slowly work your ass good and proper and slowly work my way down the slopes of your ass cheeks and reaching nirvana and working my fingers and tongue deep and long into your quivering rosebud and stroking your rectum with my long tongue as you gurgle and push back burying my face in your ass crack.

//  as usual you use verbal dialog and loving descriptions to further our love of Jane and her innate beauty.  [Jane sidled up to her, smiling in her most fetching, kittenish manner.  "How about you?" she asked softly.  "Do you dream of it?  Do you dream of kissing it?  And sucking it?  And you know what else?"        She smelled so good, this close, that Laura could hardly bear it.  Like soap and sex, as if she had just taken a shower but masturbated and came gloriously at the same time so that she emerged radiating cleanliness and ripe fuck-odor.  Also, her hair was corn-rowed from the very brow-line running into braids at the back, which were tied up by a white cloth behind her head, so that her long black neck was completely visible.  Laura had never seen this hair style on her, or braids of any type, and the thrill of seeing her exposed neck made a hot little pulse flare up deep in Laura's pussy, since she could get frightfully aroused over a beautiful neck.]  Sigh, Jane is so beautiful.  You are the only author who takes the time to show the reader why the women in their stories are beautiful.  Others say it but only tell us they have a great ass, tits and face and maybe their hair length and color and that is it.  how am I supposed to see them as true women with so little.  I still get hot but it seems a little remote without truly being able to bond to their creations.  Where with your women I openly lust and desire them greatly.  I want their bodies of course but I also want to make love to these angel's souls and their unique personalities.  Thank you for making me love these women so.  I love how Jane has her hair.  I love to gaze at your neck with lust and love and how I can fuck you so good.  Cindy wears her hair like that a lot and I love to grab it behind her cloth or band and using it to jerk her head back when I am fucking her hard.  She will be riding me and I will reach up and grab that tail and pull her head back viciously as her eyes bulge with fear and her fingers claw my chest and tits as I jerk back harder and harder as her body starts to convulse and shake as she gurgles and spittle drools out her mouth.  Jerking her head down and the smacking so hard her head just explodes to the side with the sound echoing in the room and Shari is telling me to work the whore over.  I work her good until I see the orgasm approaching and I will pull her head back until my fist is punching her back I am pulling her head back so hard as she claws me and the air as she barely gasps.  I loved doing her like this and seeing Shari duck waddle over and choke her with both hands as Cindy had a horrendous orgasm that had her body jolting with massive quakes and hard jackknifes as she barely gasped out her pleasure as her eyes bulge and spasmed and her head limply flopped around as Shari chocked her nice and hard while jerking her head to and fro and viciously to the sides just like Cindy loves it.  she was one happy slut let me tell you.

//  I love hearing Laura croaking out how beautiful Jane's neck is.  I never tire of you having your characters love and worship their angels.  I wish everyone one in the world would follow this advice.  This makes your angel just preen and feel so perfect and loved and ready to fuck.  I so believe in telling my lovers just how wonderful and beautiful they are and how this stokes their fires of love and soon we are fucking gloriously.  Laura starts the foreplay off nicely with neck nibbling and kissing and moves too [Laura dropped her lips lower, to the point where Jane's neck met her shoulder, where the smooth black skin disappeared under the yoke of her sweatshirt.        " Oooohhhh, and that feels good!  Unngghhhh!  Oh . . . that feels good, Laura!  I think you're going to have to fuck me.  Did you bring those things I told you to bring?"]  I love reading your stories because you show actual true foreplay.  Foreplay that covers the whole body.   I live to make my sluts beg for it when I sucking, nibbling and kissing their necks.  I love taking a slut and making her swoon before I even leave her face and neck.  I just leave them whimpering and putty in my hands.  I live to make them moan and exclaim like Jane here.  I love you showing the actual passion and pleasure and not the silence that other authors enforce on the poor readers.  I love bi and straight newbies since they love toys that I get to plunder their fuck holes with.  That is a given with not all lesbians being into penetration.

//  I love the observation that Jane is so much older than her years.  I love instructing young girls now like I was at their age.  I love seeing that knowing sexual look in a teenage slut's eyes and know I help put it there.  I still rarely seduce young angels but gladly partake of what is offered to me by my other angels.  I do have the eye on a young cute Pakistani girl that is training at the females only gym I sometimes work at.  She is about fifteen and working to keep her body toned for cheerleading.  She is cute and sweet.  I like her name, Sajida.  She has that deep brown skin color and jet black hair and eyes that drives me crazy.  She quickly took to me when she first saw me and I am stroking her and helping with a fitness regimen.  I can tell she is openly interested and her questions tell me she is bi or straight gay.  Her mother is raising her alone and I see opportunities.  I hope to have her face soon buried deep in my cunt and my fingers, cock and fist deep in her body as she writhes and screams in sweet lesbian ecstasy.  I will train her so good.  I want to put that knowing look in her eyes that only good hard fucking puts there.  A woman ready to fuck all the time and with as many partners as possible.   I love how you have shown Laura's teenagers as so hungry and ready to learn.  Some girls are so fucking repressed but so many are ready and eager to learn and fuck with abandon and revel in seeing this new freedom that so many girls are embracing so early.  I smile just thinking about it.

//  I love how you show us the dialog between your women.  it is the spoken word that really advances a seduction or makes an old lover swoon with renewed lust and love.  ["I got news for you, Laura," Jane giggled softly, still squirming a little.  "You have never ignored any inch of this body.  Nobody ever sucked every inch of me like you do."        "It's because I'm so oral, my darling," Laura laughed, now sliding her hands up under Jane's sweatshirt.  "I just want to put my mouth on every part of you, take you inside of it, swallow you."        Jane smiled and pulled the sweatshirt over her head.  The stark white bra against her gleaming black skin made Laura's blood rage.  "I guess you can do it," Jane murmured.  "I like it."]   my sluts know I am going to devour them from top to bottom.  I will simply suck and inhale your body.  I so love working your whole body so when I finally dine on your tender cunt and sweet asshole you are wet like a river and ready to explode.  I just moan as my mouth contacts a cunt sodden with cunt nectars or an asshole all slavered with leaked cunt juice and quivering for my tongue to snake into your sphincter and devour your sweet rosebud.  Love seeing how you use clothes again to accentuate the beauty of your women.  no other author uses clothes at all.  They just come off and so much is missed in the process.  Clothes are so alluring as your remove them and devour your whore's body as the articles are removed and you hear her whimpering and feel her juddering in your arms.  Your dialog always fits the character of the women involved in the story.  I love reading Jane's fire and seeing more of her complicated character.  Only you give me such women and I treasure them.

//  I like how you continue to use Jane's bra.  Laura runs her fingers over Jane's bra and strokes the tender tit meat making Jane's fiery nature flare.  I am thankful to find one author that shows this.  Others simply have the clothes disappear.  Even the finale barriers are ignored of their possibilities.  I love reading Jane telling Laura how she loves how Laura simply inhales and devours her little doves.  Again I must bemoan other authors.  They simply have their women suck and lick their women's breast with no passion or verve.  It is simply boring really.  There is so much more.  I love slowly licking and muzzling the tops of your tits and kissing them as I murmur to you how much I love and need you.  Slowly unclasping and cupping your tits and inhaling your nipples and sucking gently and running my tongue all over.  sucking slowly harder and more fully.  A small breasted woman like Joann or Kia, working her whole tit into my mouth and love sucking and pulling my head back as I supper suck and roughly tongue lathe as they whimper and gutturally moan and their faces slash.   Sucking hard until their whole tit is pulled taunt in my mouth as I rhythmically pull my head back and supper suck in time.  Or a big tittied whore like dodie, Maria, Camille or Hillary.  I will stuff my face into their ample tit and suck as much as I can stuff my cheeks with and supper suck and maul as I  use my hands to love pulp and clamp into the middle of their tit and pull my head back on just the end of their tit pulling it taunt as I suck and tongue rasp their rock hard nipples and steepled aureoles.  I love to shake like a dog with a bone and squeezing my hands so hard as I sink my teeth into their tits and love gnaw as they cry out and pull my face so hard into their tit meat sometimes I have to shake my head to get air into my nostrils covered over with divine tit meat.

//  you show Laura working her slow magic that I so believe in.  this is what makes your women melt and explode for you.  Taking your time to work her whole body and priming it for the end suck off or penetration.  ["I believe I am," Laura panted, kissing her beautiful shoulder blades, sliding her lips down into the space between Jane's two bra cups, where her forefinger had been.  "I believe I am ready to fuck you until you beg me to stop."]  you are always telling us the little things that add so much to the story like [Jane shook her head.  She pointed to her nose, an adorable, flattish little thing with almost no bridge, but enchanting to Laura, who wanted to kiss it right then, before Jane had a chance to go on.  But she restrained herself.  "She got a nose like a bloodhound.  She always saying 'What's that smell?  Smell like burning tires in here.'  Shit like that.  She smelled sex.  She came in my room, right here, and sniffed, and said 'Somebody's been fucking in here.  My nose don't lie.  Tell me about it, girl.'"]  I constantly moan and lament that I can't see the faces of the women in other stories.  They are just plain mannequins.  Jane's little pug nose is just so cute that we deserver to see it.  makes me want to kiss and nip it.  have to smile at the bloodhound reference.  I have had women freak about masking the scent of our lovemaking from their woman.  I have had a few guys almost catch us and it is amazing how they just can't see or even more smell the truth of our lust.  They see me and they just relax.  They simply can't even conceive that their woman is cheating with another woman.  Of course I have had to hide in a closet once while the wife convinced him the bed was a mess because she was masturbating waiting for her "man".  Loved the noise of their rutting.   Now women on the other hand know exactly what it means.  Getting caught with your knickers down is quite an experience let me tell you.  But a few times I got even more pussy!!   (discovered that one was a game they played, catching the other in bed with another slut and then punishing her before my eyes – I told her I needed punishment too and her eyes flared so big when she started whipping my ass and back with her whip as I moaned and put a huge wet spot on the bed.  Gods, that was a night of great heated fucking let me tell you.

//  by showing each stage of the lovemaking you add so much to the story.  As I just said other authors just have the clothes disappear and the lovemaking mechanically occur.  I am swooning thinking of removing Jane's bra so and gripping her tits and giving her the hard loving I know she craves.  Joann just looks down when I get to this stage and she moans as I grip her little doves and start to hard squeeze and massage while I bend down and suck her nipples hard and deep as I squeeze in on her little titties making her nipples flare and bulge as I gulp them down and then releasing her tits and sucking all I can into my mouth and deep throat sucking and tongue lathing as her face slashes and grimaces in intense pleasure.  running my arms around her back and pulling her roughly into my mouth as I move form tit to tit and devour madly.  Seeing her nipples rock hard and her aureoles all steepled and crinkly with love and need.   Rolling around like Laura with a lover embraced close as I roll back and forth as I work my tit magic and feel her melting and crying out in my arms as I love her totally.  [Laura was hardly as interested in this as she was in Jane's body, which was now almost completely hers.  She peeled Jane's bra away and filled her hands with the girl's marvelous, springy young breasts, running her fingers over Jane's swelling, shiny black nipples.        Laura kissed Jane's naked body and ran her hands all over it, exulting in the girl's silky black flesh.  She pulled her down on the small bed and scooped up Jane's marvelous, perfect little breasts in both hands and devoured them hungrily.          "Shit . . . Laura!" Jane panted.  "You're getting me so hot.  Look, we have to pull down the covers first.  I don't want them to get all dirty and messed.  Hard enough hiding things from Mama."        "I know," Laura panted too, unable to keep her hands from racing over Jane's smooth warm flesh.  "Quick."]   you are the only author to let her character's hands roam her woman's body.  I love to run my hands all over your body and maybe trace your ribs, grip your ass and jerk hard and slap harshly if you're a kinky slut.  Stroking your back and thighs with my clipped nails.   I am surprised at how many women this makes them mewl and hitch.  Especially after orgasm it can make some just aftershocks forever.  I love overloading their senses with afterglow shocks.  Making their clit throb and shake with that gentle ecstasy that makes a woman swoon and cry out for you stop to let her kitty rest for a few minutes.  Last night I was in bed with Shari and Cindy and Shari is really hot for this.  Cindy sucked her off with me sucking her nipples and pulping her tits hard.  I so loved feeling her body jackknifing in my arms I incased her in my loving cocoon as she gurgled and groaned gutturally.  I could hear Cindy snuffling as she sucked her cunt inside out and I felt her hand rubbing fast to polish her clit making Shari just cum and cum.  As Shari started to come down Cindy backed off and started to kiss and stroke her thighs and legs.  I rolled Shari half on top of me and started to run my nails up and down her back and over her as Shari just jolted continuously and whimpered and drooled.  I would do it soft and then do it hard starting at the bottom of her ass cheeks and then pull up with hard pressure to her neck as she shook over and whimpered her clit was throbbing and her body was on fire.  Cindy started raking her thighs and belly and Shari just cried out in ecstasy as we keep her on the post orgasmic / small orgasms high for several minutes as we would back off and then rake her body hard as her cunt wept cunt nectars that Cindy licked up greedily and I occasionally sucked her nipples hard for a sudden jolt of pure paradise.  We love stroking every once of pleasure out her body like this.  She was soon asleep snoring as Cindy and I moved to the floor to continue our fucking in a awesome sixty-nine with her on top.  I so love having a petite lover on top in sixty-nine as I pull her sodden cunt into my mouth and feel her weight fully on me as she sucks me off and I wormed three fingers into Cindy's tight asshole and pounded hard  as I used my other hand to jam her mouth into my now wildly humping cunt.  We timed it perfectly and had a devastating mutual orgasm as we cried out in each other's exploding cunts as our mouths were filled to overflowing with sweet cunt juice.  Sigh.  After a nice nap we were all ready for more heated fucking.

//  I so love this time in lovemaking.  I have gotten my slut naked and we are on the bed, sofa or floor and I have in her my arms and I am devouring her flesh and she is mine.  Only you have your women actually embrace and have close skin contact in your lovemaking.  I miss it in other works.  It just seems so mechanical.  You show the heat and passion of women in love.  I love the rolling clench as we roll right and left as we devour mouth, throat, ears, tits and sweet skin.  I love how you saw "bulging, kneading, shiny" and such words.  This gives us the details that ignite the fires of love in one's womb.  I just hiss and moan when my angel devours my mouth and rapes it with her tongue and devours my tits with complete abandon.  I love my rough lovers who know how to pulp my tits and take my mouth and face with complete control.  Making me mewl and whimper with need.  A need you show so clearly in your stories.  One can see your women dying for it.  I sigh again at Laura giving it fully to Jane.  She is my kind of whore.  I know she would be dying from pleasure as I pulped her little doves in my hands and super sucked her nipples and sank my teeth into her tits as I sucked and drug my teeth up her tits, aureoles and nipples.  With her fire she would feel my slaps and hair pulling and sweet chocking as her eyes rolled back and droll flows out her mouth as she caws and chocks for breath.  Gods, I know she would do me so right as I clench my fingers around hers as she throttles me as my face turns red and I barely, barely can breath and she is slapping me cruelly and dragging me around by my hair and jerking my head viciously.  Slapping my face and making it rock hard to the side and if on a sofa making me fall onto the floor in heap of moaning flesh as she jumps me and continues to slap, choke, grind my face in the carpet with her foot or palm and fist her hand in my hair to drag me around and scream racial epitaphs at me.    Sigh, I am so wet just thinking about it.  [Both of them slid off the bed and together pulled down the bedspread, blanket, and top sheet.  Then Laura wrestled her back onto the mattress, again filling her mouth with one of Jane's bulging, shiny black nipples.  She sucked it passionately, but not too sharply, kneading the firm ball of Jane's lovely breast with her fingers at the same time.]

//  you now show two things I love and don't see in other's works.  You again show how to love the whole woman.  Other authors just love one body part at a time and that is so fucking boring.  Kiss only, suck nipples only dine on pussy only.  Hey we can multitask and you show it!  I am so their as Laura works Jane's tits and has her moaning and swooning and now starts to probe Jane's sodden cunt.  I so love working my fingers through your soaked slit and then penetrating your love whole and stroking your inner petals and soon pounding your fuck hole with hard strokes.  I so love to pull your cunt lips and wiggle my fingers through your inner folds.  Feeling my fingers getting all soaked and slavered in greasy fuck juice.   Taking my fingers from your cunt and pushing my fingers in your mouth if I don't feel like cleaning them.  I so love working your whole body and getting it boiling and then pushing you over the edge into a screaming, jackknifing orgasm.  I love that one author shows this.  [ Laura was busily kissing every other part of her luscious body that she could reach, and probing Jane's wet crotch with her hand, parting her greasy cunt lips, slipping two fingers into her delightful honey pot.        "Unh!" Jane gasped slightly, feeling the penetration.  "Oh shit!  That feels good!"        "Does that mean you're close?" Laura teased her, kissing Jane's hard flat stomach, then the warm firm flesh of her inner thighs.        "Oh god, yes!   Fuck me with your pussy, Laura.  Please.  We can do the other thing after.  I want to feel your pussy.  Been so long!"]   you now show the readers that loving can so flow and change.  I have never seen another author morph a fuck like you do.  One would think that all would show this if they write multiple chapters.  I guess one shots don't have enough time to show this and others just don't have the imagination to think to show it.  I grin and feel my body pulse when a lover whimpers for me to change my plans and fuck her in the way that she needs and craves.  I will deliver!  You show Laura pleasing her woman and that is so positive.  I like seeing the positive vibes in your stories.  You just show so much love and giving.  What woman won't give you her body and soul to you when you so clearly give her wish and show your desire to give your all to her.

//  I love having multi partners and angles and how this allows things to morph.  Last Tuesday Joann, Maria and I were in a daisy change on our bed feasting on heavenly gash when I felt the bed sag unexpectedly.  We all looked up and saw Shari and Cindy naked crawling up on the bed and inserting themselves into our chain.  Our bed is a king sized bed and we made room.  Cindy took my place eating out Maria and jammed my face into her already wet shaved cunt.  Soon five women were grunting and squealing in paradise.  I loved feeling her thighs clamping my head as she came so fucking hard and I heard her moans and long groans muffled in Marie's cunt.  I loved feeling those jolts and seizures in her legs clamping my hears and cheeks.  We just suck and suck through many orgasms when we daisy chain.  We rested and then the anal fun began.  Shari and Cindy are such anal whores.  They got near the sides of the bed on their sides and rested the foot of their top leg on the knee of the leg on the bed.  Maria and I took warming oil and slavered our hands and started to fist their sweet tight assholes.  Cindy just juddered and felt her breath hitch and quicken as I wormed my fingers into my knuckles.  I wormed my hand right and left as my knuckles loosened her tight shit hole.  Joann was between them waiting to fist their cunts once we got our fists in their assholes.  I could feel Cindy's asshole loosening as I pressed in as she whined and cried out it was too big (though I have raped her asshole so many times with it).  I leaned down to her ear and whispered "you are going to take my fist you fucking black jungle bunny fucking nigger".  I loved her love judders and I punched my fist through her sphincter as she shrieked out in pain and juddered as I felt my wrist being pulsed by her pained sphincter.  I kissed her ear as I watched as Maria punched her fist into Shari 's big, firm ass and watched her claw the sheets as she kept moaning "shit, hell and fuck".  A woman just gets such a beautiful pained looked when her asshole is invaded and Shari sure had it.  Pain and ecstasy mixed together in that sweet concoction of pure love.  We waited while Joann wormed her petite fist into their flowing cunts and soon we were fucking them so fucking good.  I swooned as soon my fist was stroking deep into Cindy's belly and pulling back and jamming my fist against her inner O ring and then sliding deep again as I twisted my fist.  I could feel Joann's fist against mine as it slide in and out and loved feeling them scarp against each other in Cindy's belly.  The next ten minutes or so was pure heaven as I kissed Cindy's face and ears and whispering to her as we worked her harder and seeing Maria doing the same to Shari.  We just communicated with our eyes and nodes and started to really punish them hard with pounding fists as I felt Cindy's body beginning to shake and tighten and I could see Shari 's eyes bulging as her legs started to scissor and hands clawed the bed.  then the screams of pure bliss started as they screamed and I felt Cindy's asshole shredding itself on my wrist and forearm as I rammed my fist in and out her exploding asshole as I felt Joann's fist slamming in and out her cunt.  They came so fucking long as Shari kept screaming "goooodddammmmmmmmmm" and "fuuuckkkkkkkkkkk" and Cindy could only scream mindlessly as her body now jackknifed and impaled itself on fists sunk deep in her body riding out her ecstasy.  They were totally wrung out let me tell you.  Late that night I was reveling as they worked me in fisted heaven and then I groggily watched as next Joann and then Maria were fisted by them.  gods, they really fucked us hard and deep.  Of gods, my cunt is pulsing and getting wet feeling Shari twisting her fist sunk so deep up my asshole I could feel it snaking so fucking deep in my belly while Cindy jammed and shoved her fist into my cervix as I screamed so fucking hard and died on impaled fists.  Then seeing it twice more on my archangels made my life so perfect that night!  It is so rad watching a forearm sink up your archangels asshole so fucking high and sliding out covered thick in ass juice and watching Cindy and Shari bending down to lick and slurp it up before ramming their fists so fucking deep again and again.

//  I am reflecting on the fact that I can't really remember trib in other stories.  I know a few had them but they were bland and boring.  They just got in a foggy position (no details) and basically just told they trib to orgasm.  Still it is so rare in erotica.  So strange.   We are oral by nature of course and our fingers are a natural part of our loving.  But after that I mean trib is like the next thing we like to do especially if you're a pc lesbian.  I guess I and most of my main angels love or our strap-ons and dildos but trib is still right up their with us.  It should be prevalent in lesbian erotica and it isn't dammit except for you thankfully.  When I look at your "finding aid" it is so clear that you show this.  All I can say is a big thank you!!!  [Jane's black eyes were now shiny and hot and pulsing.  "Want you to fuck me hard and fast.  I can come.  I'm so close."]  I like seeing Jane letting us know that she is hot for it and wants to come fast and hard.  You show how the spoken word just fires up both the speaker and listener.  I just fuck you senseless when you encourage me so.  I am smiling great big as Laura waxes rhapsodic about the beauty of Jane's pussy.  I love how Laura details the shape, length and fiery red cunt meat that is visible.  Sigh, I so love everything about a woman's vulva.   Like Laura I want to consume it totally.  I just want to push my face into your cunt until it is flaring around my mouth and I feel the pressure of your mound against my face as my tongue flails and stabs into your sodden cunt folds.  Just worming my hands under your buns and squeezing and humping up to drive our mound into my mouth as I suck your pussy inside out until you are screaming and bucking in fucking world shaking bliss.  Like Laura mentioning how lesbians are so oral and that everything must be consumed by our mouths.  I need your mouth filled by my stabbing tongue down your cawing throat.  Your neck consumed and your tits worked with my special magic making your legs scissor and your face slash.  Sucking your cunt inside out and driving my tongue deep into your shit hole and probing and worming in through that tight spasming sphincter.

//  as I just said, most authors are so bland in their descriptions, especially when it comes to something like tribbing while you give us sweet details like [Laura remembered that she had said only moments ago that she knew she was going to come this way, that she was very close, that it wouldn't take much.  They were both sitting half-up, leaning toward each other, digging the heels of their hands into the mattress to gain more leverage as they pushed their cunts together.  But Laura quickly pushed Jane down onto her back and rose up over her, determined to be the one in charge here, dropping her hand into their mated crotches for some minor adjustments, confident that she could make this even better.]  sigh, I love the details.  I like seeing them digging their palms into the mattress to get purchase to lovingly ram and sweep their soaked cunts into each other.  No other author has ever come close to such details in their sex let alone trib.  I so love digging my heels and palms into the mattress or floor and working our cunts into each other and feeling myself gag with sweet sensations.  Gritting my teeth and sweeping into and up and down my whore's slit making her gag also and sag before she recovers and jams her cunt into my mine with love.  Feeling our cunt slim mingling and the sounds of sodden cunts humping in focused pleasure.   I so love how you show the changing positions of sex.  I love to be humping like this or lying on our backs or sides and do that sweeping, wallowing tribbing where you feel like your in heaven as your cunt burns and buzzes with ecstasy as you and your woman jam your cunts in your mutual v of love and just lazily and or energetically hump magic into each other's pussies.  Then having my lover mounting me, straddling my thighs and jamming her cunt down into my and humping me down into bed.  working her cunt so hard and good.  Hearing heavy tits thump and whiplash when lovers like dodie, Shari , Maria or the sisters are humping me and see their tits whip lashing and lifting and slapping their chests in wet slippery waves or circles.  Reaching up and pulping their tits or pulling and twisting their nipples hard as they grit their teeth and jam me even harder making me caw and my eyes roll back.  Or smaller titties like Joann's that roll and shake but not heavy enough to smack around.  I can still pulp and pull nipples though J .  I really love the changing of positions when strap-ons and dildos are in play.  Never knowing how my fuck holes will be invaded and in what order.  Feeling a long hard cock plowing my cunt and suddenly a big dick is worming up my tight asshole making me cry out and dig my fingers into the carpet as I bit your shoulder and grimace feeling that thick shaft sliding hard and deep up my shit hole and soon pounding my ass balls deep making me drool and buck back into those dicks pounding the hell out my fuck holes making me fuck like an animal.

//  I have always loved how you show ramping.  Laura is jamming harder and Jane is humping up more fiercely and Laura is reaching down to pulp her little titties and jamming for all her worth.  You show this rising desperation so well.  That rising tide of need and want that must be satisfied.  You show you must give your slut your all to make her reach nirvana.  I love how they kiss savagely as the finish line approaches.  I love to kiss you hard and deep at orgasm so I can swallow your kiss in my mouth as you scream in ecstasy.  Working toward this [Oh . . . shit . . . Laura . . . I think—"        Laura knew what she was trying to say.  She could feel the quaking deep in Jane's lovely, flexing young body.  Sitting up perpendicular to her, she grasped Jane's silky black thigh in both arms and held on for the ride, feeling her own womb erupt and begin to throb in hot, almost painful jerks as she watched the grimace of wrenching bliss pass over Jane's face as she began to come.        "Auunngghhh!   Onhhhmmnnggg . . . Laura!  Ohhmmnnggg!  Auunngghiieee!"        "Oh yes, honey . . . oh yes honey!" Laura gasped, already coming herself, feeling the roiling waves rise in her body until they were inundating her and lashing great spasms of rapture out of her flesh.  "Unngghhhhmmnniieeee!" ]   I work to make you gag like this when I can.  I have so many times made women simply lose their minds while trying to speak.  That sudden stopping of words as you see their face just crumble with that pained ecstasy and so often screams of purest bliss as I push them over the edge.  Of course you capture this perfectly.  I so love gazing at my angel and seeing what you just wrote.  I love feeling your body wracking and exploding against mine.  I so know that wrapping my arms around your thigh jacked over my shoulder and just jamming with all my strength as I slam you down into the floor as your just scream and scream in fucking ecstasy as I feel my own womb exploding and shredding itself deep in my belly as my eyes spasm and my body herks and jerks down or up into yours.  When on the bottom in such a position I can just feel my head rising a few inches up on a neck that is vibrating wildly and I just scream loud and long as my belly shreds itself apart and I drool and spray spittle through my screams as I buck up and down and claw at your thighs and dig into your flesh maybe to feel connected as cunt explodes and our fuck holes spew waves of hot steamy cum making our pelvises all wet and slicked and leaving a huge wet spot on the bed or floor.

//  Laura is considerate of Jane (that goodness you show) where she supports her weight when she sags down on Jane.  I let heavier lovers lay on me fully since I'm a Amazon.  I love it.  Feeling someone like Hillary with her stout body smothering mine as our mouths kiss in deep renewed love as our tits mash and merge and her sodden wet cunt is against mine as sweaty bellies heave together.  With my smaller lovers I always get them on top and let them settle down so I can experience this [She heard herself moaning and whimpering loudly as Jane's ecstatic cries died away, and for long seconds she lay there feeling her body twitch and pulse with sweet orgasmic fires, feeling Jane's panting against her cheek, feeling Jane's wet, coarse crotch hairs against her bare thigh.]  I sure wish other authors would show this intimate contact after sex.  They may talk of cuddling but they never show me and I need that in sex and miss reading it in other's stories.  I like reading them actually conversing and talking after sex during sweet afterglow.  Laura have a real conversation with Jane and telling her about her new wife and Jane's of course shocked response and digs at inky.  Of course she can't resist being a bitch.  Have to love Jane tweaking Laura's nose about maybe Makeeda fucking her instead of Laura.  Sigh, Laura is still jealous.  I would leap to make that happen.  I am smiling at Jane letting Laura know in no uncertain terms that other women and even a few guys are fucking her.  I would be pawing for the details.  Camille has been going on about two white brothers who have been fucking her so good.  I find it so cool when siblings or close relatives are involved since you can clearly see their family resemblance.  The taboo thing makes me so hot.  I got so wet and hot at the details.  She knew she had me hooked and I went over to her place when I knew her male pals would be there and saw Kia's car there.  I went in and saw the brothers plowing the hell out of Camille while two black bucks were fucking the hell out of Kia.  I just stripped and feel to my knees beside Camille and pulled the dick out of her asshole and sucked it deep into my mouth as the guy (jack I later found out) moaned deep in his throat.  I went back and forth sucking cocks straight out of assholes and pussies.  Soon I was being invaded with hard, hot male cock as we kept changing positions.  I so love feeling a man's strength gripping me as  they pound their dicks deep into my willing body.  Jamming back to get every inch deep into my cunt and asshole.   Watching Kia and Camille getting raped as they chocked us and pulled our hair and slapped us hard as we begged for more.   I loved seeing Kia straddling the brothers as they ripped their dicks into her flesh and jack reached up to chock her as she started coming and she cawed and drooled spit in thick strands as her body jolted and jackknifed and her eyes bugled so big as her chocked screams whispered out and then the brothers were roaring and cursing as they savagely pounded their dicks into her spasming fuck holes and I could see them straining their hips into her as their semen jetted deep up her bucking body.  I crawled over and watched up close as they emptied their nut sacks into her and pulled out Steve's dick out and licked the ass juice and semen off as he hissed and moaned so deep as his sensitive cock made him grimace with my loving sucks.  It is amazing how quickly one can recover.  Not so much later Kia was tp by our black bucks and Camille with a strap-on as the brothers now raped me and I got pounded deep and hard as I sucked their cocks straight out my asshole time after time and got on my knees and sucked them off as they blasted their cocks off into my face and sat so happy while Camille came over to lick and kiss it off before helping to finish Kia off.  That is the beauty of multiple partners.  So much love to share.

//  I like you showing that no matter what we lesbians need our gash.  I may love my toys and using my fingers and fist but I first and foremost must dine on sopping wet, swollen, red cunt meat.  I so must bury my face in your cunt and suck and tongue flail with my all.  Sucking your cunt petals into my lips and worrying and swallowing your clit while tongue polishing as you scream and writhe in pure pleasure.  I so love worming my hands underneath your ass and squeezing and massaging as I work your swollen cunt and working your ass to add to your pleasure as I make your cunt explode in my greedy swallowing mouth.  [At first Jane took a moment to realize what Laura meant.  Then it dawned on her.  She grinned.  "You know, I was thinking you could do me with that fun double thingee next . . . but if you want to eat a little, I won't stop you.  I think I could come about forty times tonight."]   I love to hear such words.  They always inspire me to eat your pussy inside out and make you die from my mouth.  I love the communication that you show.  How words inspire us to new heights of loving.  I detest the silence of other stories.  I have always bemoaned how other authors simply never describe a woman's vulva.  Never.   It is that simple.  You on the other hand give us this [Laura knew it was a shame to compare.  All vaginas were beautiful in their own way, swollen love blossoms offering their sweet, sometimes tart nectars and heady odors.  But a few were so perfect that they needed to be celebrated even more rhapsodically, and Laura knew she was up to the challenge.  Jane's was one of the latter, a shell-like slit edged by curvy, sinuous black lips, now only glimmering pink inside, barely open after its hard spasming only minutes ago when it been jammed against Laura's own pussy.          The tip of Laura's tongue slowly found its way inside.  She inserted it part way, until she could feel the warm wet flesh against it, and taste the tangy fluids, then ran it slowly from the bottom of Jane's barely parted slit all the way to the top, even wriggling it suggestively against Jane's little clit, which was still hiding under it's beautifully shaped little black tent.         "Ahhhhhhh" Jane exhaled with pure pleasure, her eyes rolling up.  "You're going to make me come, Laura."]  you describe every single one of your woman's pussies.  You make me love and worship each flower in these glorious stories.  I can just see Jane's cunt in my mind's eye and so feel my tongue sliding deep into her cunt and probing her inner folds before sucking those wavy outer lips into my mouth and sucking hard and pulling taunt as I maybe finger fuck her hard to make her lurch and moan gutturally.  You have always captured the moment of penetration so well.  My pussy is spasming reading this.  I can just feel my tongue sliding into her pussy and feeling its wet heat and ingesting her tangy cunt juices.  Running my tongue up and down her slit and wiggling all along and sucking cunt meat and petals into my mouth to worry and working underneath her clit sheath and then reveling it to savage it with my tongue and mouth as I feel your berry in my mouth as I super suck and tongue slap as I hear your start to wail and cry out in pure fucking bliss as I start you towards nirvana.  I so love to move up that little amount and suck your entire upper cunt into my mouth and supper suck hard and fast as my tongue is moving a warp speed lathing and slapping your rock hard clit and having it explode in my mouth as you jackknife and scream in pure bliss I look up to watch your face simply crumple and slash in ecstasy as I suck even harder and finger fuck with slamming knuckles into your mound to make you just cum and cum.

//  I like hearing the communication between them.  I too have had lovers who were surprised that I so love to talk to them while fucking them.  Telling them how I am going to devour them and how much I love them.  moaning in pleasure at me giving them pleasure.  I love seeing these women preen and puff up when I moan, gurgle and cry out how much I love them and how they are fucking me so good.  I often feel their tonguing get suddenly stronger and more sure and when plowing me with a strap-on or dildo it is suddenly invading me harder and deeper making me caw and swoon even more.  You show this always and see it now with Jane basking in the loving words of Laura.  I have to bask in how you show the end game so fucking perfectly ["Oh shit . . . oh shit . . . I'm almost . . ." Jane gasped, now writhing, whimpering, her lovely naked young body squirming and gleaming in a way that fiercely enhanced Laura's own lust until she was devouring Jane's wet, shiny pussy almost voraciously, unable to get enough of it into her mouth.         With two fingers she now fucked Jane too, sucking and fucking her, as Jane's pelvis began to leap up off the mattress in wild, swirling jerks and gyrations.           "Oh god, Laura . . . oh god, you doin' it . . . ungghhhh!   Oh!  Mnnnggggg!"           And still she was not coming yet but only hurtling toward it, keening and pumping and gurgling, her hands racing up to her swirling breasts and pulling her shiny black nipples hard, her eyes, when they fluttered open, streaked with red and fiery with need.  Laura was doing everything possible to bring her to the peak, and yet half of her wanted Jane to remain in this horrible seizure of unsatisfied physical need forever, for much longer anyway, so that she too could enjoy this wild and beautiful moment of sexual tension, just before the damn broke.            But it broke anyway, only seconds after this, with a loud, riveting shriek from Jane, so piercing and unexpected that it electrified both of them.          "ANNGGHMMNNIIEEE!" she suddenly cried out, her body freezing almost in mid-air for a brief instant, then flipping and jerking awkwardly to the side as a crushing spasm of coming ripped through her.]  only you show the woman receiving ramping up.  Again other authors just keep it so plain you don't see the woman ramping only read the author saying she is having an non-described orgasm.  You show us Jane's rising desperation and need.  You show Laura sucking her harder and now using her fingers to pound her sodden cunt with those divine wet noises I can just hear.  Feeling her cunt juicing more and more as it gets all wet and steamy for the eruption.   How your sluts body just starts to quake and jerk.  I help all my angels to express their needs if it doesn't come natural and soon they are groaning loudly and whimpering how much I am pleasuring them and how much they love me.  just like I do for them.  Love how you say Laura is "doing everything possible" to bring Jane off.  This is the essence of lesbian loving.  Women giving their all for their woman.   Sigh, so perfect.  I love how you judiciously use the all caps scream of pure fucking bliss.  Two other authors are pretty good but one use all caps spoken words all the time and the other a few all cap moans and groans (the same freaking ones over and over).  The problem is it is always with the former and the same ones with the second.  I mean my women cut loose but the pure rapturous screams it don't happen all the time and I like how you show this and show that it is not always the same sound that gets shrieked out.  Two nights ago I was sucking Joann off and had worked her into a frenzy.  I had her petite hard buns in my hands and was randomly jamming her cunt up into my mouth as I sucked her wildly.  Sigh, she came so hard with much jackknifing and gutturally moaning as about ever five seconds I jammed her cunt up into my mouth as I super sucked in time just prolonging her pleasure and then backed off as it waned.  I so timed it right as she waned I jammed her cunt up into my mouth as I closed my teeth and started to rub the front of them back and forth rapidly across her rock hard clit as my lips wormed and slobbered on the sides of her nubbin and surrounding cunt flesh.  I smiled into her cunt as it exploded yet again shedding her womb so deep in her belly.  I could feel her heels dig in as I saw her elbows dig in and she lifted her quaking hips and buns off the bed and I squeezed so fucking hard and she just started screaming "AAAAAIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE" long and loud as her head came up to look down at me with pure love.  So much delicious tension in her ass cheeks in my pumping hands and feeling her cunt vibrate in my mouth as her torso just micro jolted and tremored and now "FUCK" and "GODDDAMMMM" filled our love nest as my head continued to rapidly shake polishing her exploding clit.  That was pure love let me tell you as cunt juice poured all over my face and down my starving throat. 

//  I so love seeing Jane coming down from her crippling orgasm.  I so love to work your body through a harrowing orgasm.  If a current lover I already know how much more pleasure I can pump out your sweating, straining flesh and if a new lover I pump and push trying to get every last ounce of pleasure from your body.  I so love to suck a rock hard clit still throbbing from a super orgasm and making my woman writhe and cry out and suddenly pumping her cunt hard with my raking fingers to produce another mini orgasm making her eyes bulge and her breathing hitch and labor with that sudden infusion of more fucking bliss.  Maybe if fingerfucking you I will suddenly inhale a nipple deep in my mouth and pound your squishy sodden cunt and make it ramp up with more killing aftershocks of pleasure.  I live to give pleasure.  I like how you show Laura moving up Jane's supine body and kissing her tenderly on the cheek.  Such gentleness and love.   I so love kissing up from your spent cunt or asshole and kissing and nipping your sweaty body and sucking up your skin and love gnawing as I feel your belly hitch and your breath catch.  Kissing up to your face, after sucking some tasty nipples and love biting your tits.    Then driving my tongue down your still swooning throat as love is renewed once more.  You now show those loving words that women in love share.  Telling your woman just how much you care and worship her.  I love telling my sluts such tender words and seeing them go goofy eyed and maybe a tear to the eye as I support my weight over you and stare deep into your eyes as I bring my face slowly down to kiss your face before spearing down your throat and raping your tongue as you groan and gurgle in love.  ["I adore you, Jane," she whispered softly against Jane's ear, brushing the hair away from it and letting her tongue slip inside, not to arouse her again but merely to lick it tenderly.  "I adore you completely."]  I get so tired over others sex without the loving tenderness you always show.  This is what truly binds women together.

//  of course I am basking in the sweet afterglow and the delicious dialog as Jane's is reveling in how she was just fucked so good and Laura makes it clear that she adores and worships Jane's hard, perfect body.  I am always telling my lovers just how wonderful they are and how much I love them.  others usually have silence after sex or maybe a drowsy word or two.  Only you have actual conversation that shows tenderness and caring.  I smile great big after such words.  Words that spark this [Jane watched her mouth-mauling them, then gasped softly as Laura's lips siphoned up one of her bulging, shiny black nipples.  "Oh!  Unhhh!  You do it hard!"        "Mmmm, you know I do it hard.  Want me to stop?"       Jane shook her head.  "I like it hard.  Makes me want to get fucked hard too." ]   I am always gauging your body and ramping up the heat again to get you all hot and bothered and needing it.  I so love sucking your tits hard and rubbing and fingerfucking your hot swollen cunt to get your love juices and need flowing once more.  I live to make you mine or vice versa.  I was over jill and Vanessa for a visit since I hadn't seen them in awhile.  They were kissing me and kneading my nude body on the sofa with my legs spread wide and Vanessa sucking me off expertly as jill rammed her tongue down my throat.  She asked me how I wanted it and I croaked hard and rough.  I saw her eyes flare and my face was rocked by a vicious slap.  Oh gods, my face was soon all red and splotchy with my tears as she slapped me so good and hard and started slapping my heaving tits and pinching and twisting my nipples cruelly as I cried out in pain and pleasure.  when she saw that Vanessa had me racing to the finish line, I felt her twist a fist in my hear and just as I started to cum she ripped my head back so hard my ass rose off the cushions as my hands tore at the sofa and spittle sprayed and I cawed out for breath.  Suddenly she slammed me down into the sofa and stated to choke so good and hard as I felt her fingers dig into my throat.  She is an expert and I cawed and choked for breath as my womb exploded into a multiple orgasms and I flopped and twisted and choked out whispered screams of purest bliss.  As she griped my throat and slammed me into the sofa back repeatedly while slapping me so fucking hard.  I was totally spent and watched weakly as she pulled out a whip and whipped Vanessa all over her black body for not sucking me off well enough.  I smiled as she screamed and balled up in the fetal position only to whipped harder as she begged for mercy with jill cursing her in Spanish and English.  She used a man's tie to tie her wrists together and threw her down on the sofa with her knees on the floor and her fuck holes ready for her ten inch dildo.  She just pounded her cunt and then asshole as Vanessa cried and screamed in love pain.  Back and forth between her fuck holes and then grabbing her by the hair and twisting her body around and stuffing the cock down her throat covered in ass juice and twisting it right and left.  Feeling my strength return I got on my knees beside Vanessa and soon I felt that dildo deep up my cunt and asshole.  back and forth jill went between us making sure we sucked each others shit hole off her dildo.  Sigh when Vanessa came she screamed at Vanessa to pull her asshole wide open as it quivered and spasmed and jill roughly slammed her dildo in and out fully.  Ripping out to slam back in deep and pull out to suck off herself and then letting me clean it off when she ripped it out her exploding asshole with her next stroke.  Gods, she pounded her asshole so long like this.  Vanessa held her spent asshole open as I buried my face deep into her ass crack and let my tongue flail deep in her asshole as she moaned and sighed in perfect bliss.  We then sucked jill off to several orgasms and jill then raped my asshole with her strap-on as Vanessa kissed and stroked our bodies.  Soon I felt Vanessa beautiful black face resting on my ass cheek and hearing her slurp and moan when jill pulled her black cock from by aching asshole and letting Vanessa clean it before she was slapping her thighs once more into my ass to drive her cock fully into my wanting asshole until I was cuming so fucking hard as she pushed me into the floor and drove her cock into my asshole nailing me to the floor as I clawed the carpet and loved drooled as my eyes rolled back and Vanessa kissed and licked my sweat covered face straining and spasming on my rigid, jerking neck.

//  you give us that sweet time after great sex where Jane and Laura softly banter and jest over their lovemaking and basically softly coo to each other.  I cherish these times you give us.  No other author has had the sweet times like this.  I love reading Laura showing her hunger for more of Jane now.  I am like this.  I want as much of you as soon as possible and I love reading such slutty desires in my alter ego.  I live to fuck!  Then I have to love Jane telling Laura that she wants some more tongue action on her cunt.  I love sluts who want lots of pussy gobbling.  I swoon when I hear such words and once more nestle in and lower my mouth to your swollen, red cunt and once begin to devour again.  I love how you show the phases of lovemaking so well.  You just show the flow so well.  I love for my women to get aggressive like this [And yet at the same time she was gripping Laura's head in both hands, frantically pulling Laura's mouth into her body, as if she wanted to be devoured as much as Laura wanted to devour her.  Laura managed gently to maneuver Jane onto her stomach so that she could get at the delicious parts of her writhing body that she had not yet kissed.  She knew from experience that the girl had an absolutely breathtaking back, not even to mention her spectacular ass, and Laura intended to feast on them both.          "Oh Laura . . ." Jane gasped, looking back over her shoulder, her lovely face torn by the intense sexual pleasures Laura was arousing in her body.  "You really know how to fuck.  Nobody know how to fuck like my Laura."]  I love feeling my lover helping pull me into her body.  I love to do this to my angels.  Grinding their face deep into my cunt or asshole and whimpering for them to stroke, lick, suck and bite my body as they love it.  I so know that wanting to ride a firm stomach.  Frankie recently brought in a new slut, Giovanna into our love circle.  She is a new fitness / dance instructor at her studio.  Beautiful east European looks and long curly black hair.   I was sucking down her body to devour her cunt and those abs just made me soon as I kissed and licked them and her ribs.  I couldn't stop myself and soon mounted her and started to grind down and sweep my aching swollen cunt up and down her abdomen and cried out as my cunt lips drug and stretched and my clit was polished on her soon slicked stomach.  She started to hump up and grip my hips and push down with hard jerks and then reach up and pulp my tits.  She started to tell me to fuck her and "ride me bitch".  Dodie came over and started to suck my nipples so fucking hard as Giovanna squeezed my tits making my nipples and aureoles flair and swell even more.  I just screamed my throat almost raw as my cunt exploded and spasmed and jackknifed as I desperately swept my exploding cunt up and down and jammed down as she thrusted up hard.  dodie had to help support me as I just came and came as my cunt poured juices all over her stomach and made a huge wet spot underneath her back.  I swooned and toppled over and reveled in her and dodie laying out beside me kissing long and deep and kneading my tits and pussy making delightful aftershocks ripple my spent body.  Sigh, I am there as Laura turns Jane over and starts to love her back and ass.  I have to admit before you I focused on your ass but I have learned to love your back like I do your front and I make my women simply limp and whimpering with need by the time they feel my fingers sliding into your asshole or my thumbs pulling your rosebud open and you feel my tongue sliding deep into your rectum as it licks and probes and I slurp your tasty shit hole.  I am just thankful that I found a writer that shows her women actually loving the whole body.  It is this totally loving that makes wombs and assholes shreds themselves to pieces giving one the purest bliss possible on this planet.  I so need to feel my body destroying itself as my fuck holes immolate themselves once more to give me the ecstasy I so crave and need.

//  I have always thought you capture so well the pure fuck hunger a love slut inspires in you.  I just crawl all over you and consume you totally like here.  I need to rub all over you and use my mouth all over your body as I memorize yet again your sweet taste of skin and soon sweet mouth, tit, mouth, cunt and asshole.  I so love to encircle my lovers in my strong arms and crush to me as I spear my tongue down your throat or siphon your nipples deep and tongue flail as I super suck making your squirm and cry out in pure fucking pleasure.  I so love you detailing feeling Jane's body all over Laura's.  I want to feel our tits mashing out and our flesh heating and slipping and sliding as legs twine and arms grope and clench as tongues spear deep into moaning mouths and nipples are sucked and stretched out making our faces slash in dire ecstasy that makes your body jolt and face grimace.  [Laura was overcome by the impulse to kiss her, and to mash her own body into Jane's.  She surprised even herself by the sexual hunger she felt for the girl, flinging herself onto Jane's naked back and pressing her breasts into it, encircling Jane's prone body with both arms, filling her hands again with Jane's small, firm breasts, and driving her tongue deep into one of Jane's ears, filling it at the same time with her hot breath.  "I love you and want to fuck you so bad," she panted.]   I love how you show the flow of lovemaking.  Other authors just go so boringly linear in their stories.  You show the changing pace and viewpoint so to speak.  Laura is desperate for a cum and works her cunt on the back of Jane's supine thigh.  I am smiling thinking of all the many times I have rubbed my cunt to mind rending orgasms like this.  Gripping your hips if facing me or your ass cheeks if your back to me and gripping tight as I grit my teeth and sweep my cunt up and down your thigh as I feel it pulsing and throbbing as ecstasy builds.  I just ride so hard and long as I grind down feeling your muscles grinding my clit and stretching and mashing my cunt lips as I slime your leg and just pump and pump.  Feeling my eyes bulge as my cunt starts to throb wildly and then exploding as it shreds itself completely as I jam and mash with all my strength to feel my clit being drug up and down your slippery thigh as I just scream and caw as my body is jackknifing and rocking as is I clamp on hard and still mash and hump to drive my body further into dire bliss.  I so often topple over with your thigh still clamped as I lie on my side still humping and gripping your leg with my hands to anchor and hump as I feel my eyes spasming and rolling back as spittle sprays and drool flows out my mouth as I groan gutturally and feel my womb shredding itself deep in my belly.  Humping as I weaken and just fall into that blissful afterglow as my ruined cunt pulses and throbs with sweet aftershocks.   Only you show this changing of a fuck.  You capture how life is dynamic while other authors just go forward as a fuck starts.  That is so boring.  You show another dynamic by showing Jane sensing Laura's need and going on the attack and now loving Laura instead of Laura her.  I have never once seen another author show this.  How love and desire fires you up and you must become the aggressor and take her to heaven before yourself.  Something that comes natural to women and not men.   That is why we are superior lovers.  You show this again and again in your stories.  When we sense need in our lovers our whole makeup is to give them what they need before meeting our needs.  That is why most men will never touch what we can bring into our beds.  This is how I love to be love attacked [She didn't waste time with gentle licking and kissing.  Instead, she assaulted Laura's aching, throbbing pussy like a demon, sliding two fingers in deep while lashing Laura's swollen clit with her tongue, then sucking it passionately with her wildly sensual lips.  This tactic had the desired effect.  Laura was already so close to an orgasm that it took very little to tip her over the edge.  In literally seconds, she was coming convulsively, her body straining, rising off the bed, shuddering, and guttural cries escaping from her lungs.        "Anngghhmmnnngghiieeee!" she cried out.  "Oh!  Ungghmmnniiieee!  Oh . . . Jane!  Oh god!" ]  I love inspiring such fuck hunger in my regular loves and newbies.  I love seeing a woman new to lesbian loving going wild on my pussy and just attacking it.  I often have to push back a little and instruct on how to better suck and lick and soon have them making me crazy with their wild, slobbering all out passion attack.  Only you give the details of such a love attack.  You detail how the clit is sucked and how one's pussy is hammer fucked by one's pistoning fingers.  how this makes one's body explode and rend itself as your body quakes and flips.  I so adore feeling my body lifting itself off the bed as my muscles are tearing themselves off the body it feels like as I thrum and shake in bliss as my twat humps up in spastic jerks on my bowed body as each pulse makes me feel like my mind is going to sear itself in the sweet juice of orgasmic rapture.  My neck so stiff and shaking and my heels digging into the mattress until the convulsion passes and I crash back down until I rise up again shrieking again until my body can't rend itself anymore and I am shuddering and rolling right and left as aftershocks make me drool and do full body jerks.  Sigh, only your stories make me feel this in words.

//  I love how Jane is basking in delivering such a great fuck.  The gods know I have a great big smile on my face when I make my angles come like this.  You show how loving and positive women are in their lovemaking.  You show how it is all about the other with women.  you take the time to craft and show this and I thank you for it.  of course you show the pride we feel too.  One can't help but preen when we give a great fuck and our lover is destroyed by pleasure we just delivered or helped deliver.  ["I know," Laura laughed softly, finally beginning to breathe more evenly.  "But it's all because of you and this fantastic body."  She grabbed Jane again and again mashed her own body against the girl's marvelous silky black flesh.  She kissed her and murmured in her ear.  "Are you ready to double your pleasure?"]  I love how you show Laura whispering to her lover what she is going to do next.  I am always doing that.  I so love need and crave feeling my lover quake and shudder when I tell her my large love cock will soon be pounding her pussy and or her asshole.  just seeing the lust in their lidded eyes.  The way some of my angels cringe knowing my cock will be pounding their asshole so good and deep.  They know their sphincters will be knowing some pain but soon it will be replaced with ecstasy.  All assholes need internal loving as far as I am concerned.  I think there is nothing more beautiful than watching a woman's face as she feels that dick sliding deep into her shit hole and giving her so much pained pleasure that turns to pure fucking ecstasy as you pump and stroke her colon with your love dick.  I love the dialog that you always allow your women.  Jane is being her sarcastic and fiery self ogling the double penetrator and telling Laura she can't wait to feel it in her fuck holes again.  I so love women to express their needs and desires to me.  it just fires me up to fuck them so good and hard.  expressing themselves like this that, that sends me into a frenzy of lust and passion ["Okay . . . enough," she said, cutting it short.  "Now . . . two men.   Remember?  Two horny men, two fucking horny dudes, who can't get enough." ]   I so love communication and you sure do give it to me thankfully.  It makes your story so fucking rad!!

//  I am smiling seeing Jane's lustful look as the watches Laura strapping in her two-headed monster.  I so love seeing that in my whore's eyes.  It is the basic look with infinite variety.  That look of a woman who is about to have the hell fucked out of her.  I so adore that lidded, cat-eyed look of a slut in heat.  I know I have that look.  I can just feel my eyelids getting heavy with need and that relaxed/tensed feeling in my belly that knows my cunt and or asshole are about to penetrated hard and deep.  Again that delightful goading to spur your lover on like this.   [Jane merely nodded, swallowing, tensing as Laura's finger entered her tight little anus, gnawing her lower lip, poised to receive the rough fucking she had requested from Laura.  "Two . . . men . . ." she said, in a gruff, half-audible voice, now panting a little, her glazed black eyes catching Laura's.]  that would just inspire me so.  I love the double penetrator because it gives you that perfect sync but I love more working with other women or maybe men as we fuck your fuck holes so good.  Ripping my cock deep into your asshole as I feel my partner thrusting up and driving their cock deep into her cunt as maybe others are thrusting their cocks down her throat and she is jerking off others with her fists.  Sigh, orgies and swing parties are just so rad!  For me it doesn't get much better than feeling cocks in all my fuck holes as I feel your bodies slapping into mine to drive your cocks deep into my bucking body and I feel cocks sliding down my throat and you thrusting your hips to drive it up and down my throat.  gripping my hair and underneath my chin to skull fuck me so hard as I gag and drool long strands off spit off your cock, spittle roping  off onto my heaving tits and the sheets.  Fuck me like Jane is panting for.

//  I like how you detail the flow of a fuck.  Other authors keep everything so bland.  I love you telling us how Jane hitches when she feels Laura opening her sphincter for larger invasion.  I so know that feeling of your asshole being drilled open and how it makes me clench and gurgle.  I so adore that initial discomfort and pain that turns to pure fucking ecstasy that rips my mind to shreds.  Only you really detail initial penetration that just makes your work so smoking.  Sigh, I sure wish Laura would let fully go of her inner kink slut.  I swoon when my whores tell me to fuck them hard and mean like Jane here.  I am the opposite of Laura here [In truth, she was a little disturbed by this request.  Jane had always loved hot, even torrid, sex, and lots of it, but she had never until now showed a desire for the rougher side of it.  Laura wondered if Maisie, or even this new Taren, had led her in this direction, or if indeed several years now of fucking experience had simply impelled her to seek more intense sensations, particularly with someone like Laura, whom she knew she could trust.        At any rate, she couldn't reflect further on it at the moment since she was focusing entirely on getting the two stiff appendages that protruded from her own crotch into Jane's body successfully, in order to begin their happy little conflagration.          "Unhhh!" Jane grunted softly, as the two shafts penetrated her, the top one sliding in easily but the bottom one, going into her ass, sliding in with a little more difficulty due to the tightness of the aperture.  "Oh . . . shit!" she swore, but again softly.]  my angels know that I will fuck them to the limits that they set.  I love aggressive lovers and teaching more timid ones to open up and go for higher and higher pleasure by letting go of their inhibitions and fucking with their all.  Some pain can add so much to sexual pleasure.  gods, I so love feeling two cocks sliding into my body.  I prefer two independent cocks but the double penetrator type of dildo has the so rad advantage of working in perfect tandem.  It is a fucking nice change of pace.  I just feel my belly melt and my asshole quiver with delight as those cocks sink into my willing and pushing flesh.  Feeling them rub against each other as they slide up my fuck channels.  I so love feeling my asshole resisting and then giving way as the lower appendage slides into my rectum and down my shit hole.  I just grip your arms and keen as I feel my neck tense up and head rocks and my eyes flutter wildly as I feel nirvana flowing from my squired fuck holes.  Sinking back down as my asshole accommodates your cock in my ass and I open my thighs wider or grip your hips and urge you to start fucking me so good and deep.  I will always give you plenty of "shit", "oh fuck" or "gooddddammmmm" as you invade my asshole with your love cock.  I love how you give us these little details of penetration and vocalizations.  One's asshole usually inspires some kind of vocalization of invasion that I so need to hear when I am taking your rear door.

//  I love how you detail a wonderful fuck.  I so love to stroke my cock into your willing body slowly at first to lay the groundwork for an earth shattering orgasm latter.  You have always shown the ramping up of great sex so well.  I so love to look down and see your cunt and asshole clinging to my cock as it slowly strokes your body.  When you are slam fucking you just don't get that dynamic.  You show these things that make your stories so good.  You also do something that other authors never do and that is show doing multiple things at once.  Why not add pleasure to your lover.  I so love to suck your nipples, drive my tongue down your throat and stroke and massage your body as I fuck you.  I simply make die from cuming as I work your whole body.  I make my women lose their minds with my total love fucking.  [ "Ohhhhh!   Ohhhhh!" Jane moaned, her eyelids fluttering, her head twisting, her eyes flashing.        Laura filled her hands with Jane's small, lovely breasts, squeezing them, pinching the swollen black nipples, then bending down to kiss her, kissing her cheek, her jaw, her forehead, her shoulder, sliding her mouth down to one perfect breast and sucking Jane's shiny black nipple hungrily.]  I make my sluts cry out with my tit sucking as I am ram fucking their cunts.  Sucking and stretching out their nipples as I slow my stroking to work my oral magic.  I tend to use the double penetrator in kind of a cyclic way.  I went over Belissa's last week with angelica to start granting her wish to make it with black women.  we were soon all nude in her living room groping, licking and sucking each other to awesome orgasms.  I so loved seeing Belissa's deep black face buried in angelica's cunt lapping away and seeing angelica's body first tensing and straining and then exploding up off the sofa and thrashing and jackknifing as pure guttural groans of extreme pleasure filling the room.  I watched Belissa walk out the room and she soon came back with your model of double your pleasure strapped-on.  I had to laugh at the look on angelica's face when she saw Belissa walking up to her.  It was so obvious she had never seen such a vision before.  It was wonder, fear and lust all rolled up into one.  Belissa got her up off the carpet and on the sofa and positioned her on the edge of the cushions and slowly sank her cocks into her fuck holes as angelica tensed up and cried out as her asshole was invaded so slowly and lovingly.  I got on the floor beside the them and watched up close and Belissa first slowly worked her cocks into angelica's shaking and mewling body.  She went slow at first and pulled out after a while and got a foot up on the sofa and leaned forward and had her cocks whispering over angelica's sweet lips.  Belissa pushed forward and angelica hungrily licked and sucked the cocks as best she could.  I don't like this about double penetrators.  You can't really give them head.  You have to lick and slurp all over but no deep throat action L .  Soon Belissa had her one foot on the sofa and the other the floor as she ripped her cocks down and into angelica's moaning body.  She just started jamming her cocks hard and deep as Angelica's face slashed and thrashed and her body jolted and her pelvis got in synch to take those cocks fully into her body.  I got up on the sofa and started to pulp and twist her nipples as I kissed her deeply.  Soon she was screaming and cuming so fucking hard as Belissa ripped her cocks down into her squealing, squirming body as I sucked her nipples down my throat as her fingers dug into my scalp and pulled my face into her bosom.  After angelica was exhausted, I got Belissa down on sofa and she leaned back and I got up on the sofa with my back to her and lowered my pelvis and guided the big cock into my quivering asshole.  I soon had my ass slamming into her upthrusting thighs as those cocks just punched so deep into my fuck holes.  I curled my toes into the cushion and gripped the back of sofa for leverage to slam my body down into her upthrusting cocks.  Angelica quickly recovered and lifted me up and pulled the cocks out my dripping fuck holes to slurp clean as Belissa hissed.  I looked back to see her eyes squinched shut and her face grimacing with the mental pleasure of atm.  I gripped the back of the sofa harder to impale my cunt and asshole even more fiercely on Belissa's cocks.  Soon angelica begged to mount her likewise and I was on the floor stroking her body as it bucked and surged and tonguing and kissing Belissa's cocks clean when angelica pulled off and joined me to help slurp clean.  We took turns impaling ourselves cowgirl and reverse cowgirl as Belissa reached up to pulp our tits and towards the end she started slapping us hard and pulling our nipples, stretching our tits out and then twisting cruelly as we screamed in pain and pleasure.  I lost it completely and nearly blacked out I came so fucking hard as I wildly pumped and jackknifed until I slipped and jerked off her cocks and fell to the floor as angelica latched onto my clit and sucked viciously as I went multiple and kicked the coffee table so hard I knocked knick knacks off as I thrashed and ground angelica's face deep into my convulsing cunt.  I weakly watched her get up and get on the sofa and Belissa took her spoon and soon was thrusting her hips with all her might as angelica swirled back and soon angelica's legs were kicking the air and her body jamming back into Belissa's as her body was jolted with killing spasms of pleasure that had her moaning and gagging as wave after wave of pure fucking orgasmic bliss pummeled her beautiful body as it spasmed and then stiffened over and over again as she just came and came until she slumped on the sofa completely satiated and content.  The next morning I showered and got in my change of clothes I always keep in the car and went to work.  I smiled as Belissa called in sick so she could stay home and fuck angelica throughout the day.  Angelica is so lucky having a rich husband who is never home. 

//  as I have said only you capture the way sex moves and flows.  I simply can't get over how all other authors keep everything at that one pace.  Slow or frenetic it stays at that pace from the beginning of the fuck to the end.  Slow would be boring and frenetic would wear your ass out after a while.  I do wonder why only you show that.  Is it your imagination, greater life experiences, writing skill?  Who knows, I am just happy to have discovered your talents.  You capture this here by showing how so often we do find ourselves going a hell of a lot faster than we meant too.  Your stories and story arc are long enough to show this.  Your kilobytes give you the opportunity to explore such dynamics and thankfully do.  I often start slow and I almost shake myself and suddenly realize that I am slam fucking my whore and spearing my cock deep into her cunt or asshole as she groans and squeals.  I just grit my teeth and ram fuck her even harder as she starts to swoon and I feel her totally surrender herself to me as I plunder her fuck holes.  Like Laura is starting to do here [Without really intending to, Laura began to pick up the rhythm too, since Jane was clearly getting more excited, and in seconds they were going at nearly double their initial speed, gyrating and undulating, panting and murmuring to each other.        "Yes . . . yes, Laura . . . like that . . ." Jane gasped, biting her lower lip now and almost glowering up at Laura, as if to dare her to fuck her the way she wanted to be fucked.]  I so know that glaring myself.  I am always glaring, barking, pleading or such for a harder plundering fuck.  A couple nights back I was over Maria's body as she speared up into my sloppy wet cunt and Joann was raping my asshole so fucking good with her ten inch, thick strap-on.  I looked back over my shoulder and growled out at her to fuck me dammit and quit being a pussy.  I smirked at her and her eyes just flared and suddenly her hand was fisted in my hair and I was cruelly stretched back as my fingers clawed the air and my eyes bulged as her other hand closed around my throat and chocked me severely as she jerked my head back viciously and felt my Adam's apple quivering underneath her squeezing hand on my throat.  she just slammed her hips into my ass spearing my asshole as I just suddenly exploded into a multiple orgasm that I chocked and sprayed spit as she continued to choke my breath off and jerk my head back so hard I thought my head was going to touch my back with each vicious jerk.  I felt so much fucking pleasure exploding out my squired asshole and pounded cunt as I gasped for breath and felt my throat so stretched out and compressed as my body was ripped to shreds with violent detonations in my womb and shit hole as I shook all over and jerked violently.  I just collapsed in a sweaty, contented heap on top of Maria as they continued to pump my ruined fuck holes softly.  They rolled me over and I just basked in sweet afterglow as I watched them un-strap their cocks and fall on each other in a snuffling, grunting sixty-nine.  I just had a crushing orgasm and now I had a sex show right in front of me.  can life get any better than this. 

//  love the sweet whisperings of love as Laura and Jane urge other on with sweet words of love and need.  I so love reading this and love more when my angels tell me their love and I express it to them.  only you show this loving dynamic that women share with each other.  Men just don't seem capable for some reason.  I so hate the silence of most stories and those that do have true dialog it is kind of superficial.  That is okay since it moves the sex along but I miss the character depth that you always give.  This is what makes your women so alive, real and alluring to me.  you show how the fuck progresses with willing sluts [Jane suddenly threw her arms around Laura's neck and lunged up off the bed, jamming her pussy and her ass down on the plunging stalks, forcing her groin sharply into Laura's, then yelping and gagging as the shafts sank deep into her body.        "Anngghmmnnieee!   Oh shit!  Unh! Ungghh!"        "Oh honey!"        "Fuck me hard, Laura!  Hard!  Oh shit!  Do it hard.  Unh unh unh!" ]   I so love to make my women squeal and love being fucked hard in return.  I love how you show all the levels of lovemaking.  So often writers just basically have their women lay there and basically take it from their lover.  I love how you show the woman receiving looping her arms around her lover and throwing her pelvis up into the plunging stalks of hard dick love.  I so feel my belly melt and churn when I am slamming my fuck holes back or down onto slamming cocks or snaking fists.  You show the gentle soul fucking to the hard pile driving fucking of whores in heat.  The former is nice but I so crave the later.  I was with dodie with Frankie off doing her new instructor.  We so now how to do it rough like Jane likes.  We were soaked in sweat from previous fucking but still going strong.  She was riding me with her palms by my head and slamming her asshole back into my lunging nine inch cock.  I was gripping her hips to help drive my cock deep.  She let me know she wanted it real rough when she told me to "put this goddamn Jewish bitch in her fucking place".  I snaked my hands up to her tits and started to slap them real hard.  I loved how my palm just made hard contact and watching her tits whiplash to the side as she moaned and gritted her teeth.  I kept smacking them and sinking my fingers into her firm tit meat and rolling and gripping harshly as she grimaced and cried out a few times.  I so love variety.  Small titties like Joann's you just make them whip over and even flat chested women you can slap and pinch their nipples and stretch out making them scream and writhe.  But big tits are the best because you can feel their weight as your palm strikes them and your fingers have so much tit meat to sink into and pulp.  Plus, you don't have to scoot up and crunch your torso and lift your knees to keep piledriving your cock into her cunt or asshole if you decide to do oral magic.  With Hillary you have nice big hooters that are nice and pillowy.  I so love to pulp and shake violently and then pull out stretching out their tits until they are stretched and taunt.  Maria and Candice's are more firm but you can still stretch and pull out and cruelly make taunt.  I just shake and throttle and squeeze in underneath their aerola's making them flare so I can supper suck and teeth rake making them scream and writhe in ecstasy.  Then mashing hard and slapping before stretching out again and sucking so good and hard.  I make my whores just collapse on me as I get smothered in tit meat as I continue to supper suck, bite and pulp as I move my face to get a snatch of breath when heavy tits are trying to suffocate me.  sometimes I do have to break contact to get a much needed breath of fresh air before I gobble and devour again.  My tit worship / mauling was just the start of my abuse of poor dodie, not that I remember her complaining.  Of course in the middle night I was suddenly woken up with her jerking me viciously by my hair as I groogyly woke up.  She then ripped me down to the floor and started dragging me over to her wall of pain.  I started yelling at her calling her a "crazy bitch".  All I got for my effort was some vicious slaps that had me sprawled on the floor and her grinding my cheek into the carpet with her foot as she spanked my raised ass with cruel, loud slaps making me scream and squeal.  She drug me over and ripped her art off the wall and soon I was strung up with my arms high above me.  oh gods, she whipped me so long and good as I cried and begged.  She whipped my thighs and calves until I couldn't support my weight much and I was hanging at her mercy.  She turned me around and let out the length some on her Velcro chain.  I just moaned dementedly as I felt her spit in my ass crack and I felt her pulling an ass cheek back and I just sagged and gagged as I felt her ram her large, thick strap-on up my asshole.  she raped me so fucking good.  I cummed so good as she pressed me up against the wall and pounded her cock so hard and deep into my colon as it spasmed and my clit wormed and smashed against the wall at random intervals and I felt my cunt cream gushing out and smearing the wall when my exploding mound was rammed into it and flowing down my shaking thighs.  Gods, I came so fucking hard.  she finally released me and I collapsed on the floor and she settled down beside me and pulled my head over to her cock covered in my ass juice and I moaned so happily as I slurped and cleaned off its sweet nectars and went to sleep with my face on her sweaty, perfect belly.

//  you show well a good hard fuck.  I so love reading your vocalizations of rutting and lust.  Silence is so boring in real life and even more so in print.  I love seeing your women being so fucking passionate and communicative.  I can so see it in my angels eyes when I urge them on and growl up at them.  I see their eyes flare, their nostrils flare and their teeth grit as the fuck me even harder.  Gods, know it sure inspires me to really pound fuck until your ass is bouncing up off the mattress or slamming hard into the floor or ground.  You of course show that ramping up of a divine fuck so well yet again [Laura grabbed her back.   Until now she had not been pressing the front of her own body against Jane's, but Jane's upward lunge brought them together so forcefully that Laura could encircle her with her own arms and mash her breasts into Jane's, now fucking her more wildly, spearing Jane's pussy and asshole with each forward thrust, hearing tiny yelps of frantic pleasure escape from Jane's lungs.        "Oh yes!  Nnnggeee!  Oh shit, yes!"]  I so love to crush you to my body as I plunge my cock so deep into your cunt and or asshole.  I so love to crush our tits together as I feel your legs clamping my hips as I pound your fuck holes and our sweaty flesh is slipping and mashing as I kiss you deeply or all over your face or maybe a cruel hickey form time to time to make you scream.  I so love you use words like "forcefully and wildly" to tell the reader of Laura's loving thrusts.  I love all the sounds of sex but I have to admit that het sex does produce a unique kind of sounds of bliss and pleasure.  the sounds of a body being pounding and the way a woman chuffs and grunts as your cocks plunge deep and hard into her fuck holes is simply divine.  I so love face to face up and close and seeing her face as I pivot back and lunge my cock deep into her body.   Squiring a sweet asshole adds so much since you get those lovely facial pained expressions of bliss and need.  I think it so rad and soul binding to grip my woman close as I use one hand to force my love cock into her asshole and you see up close her cries of pained bliss or how so often her eyes bulge and her face just contorts with only grunts and chuffing to show her building ecstasy as my cock pushes through her sphincter and I slowly take her colon and make it my own.  Working it until her body is rent and torn asunder with a devastating anal 'gasm and quickly addicting them to deep, hard, plunging anal fucking.  I am smiling gently as I read Jane's pleasure and her loving words of encouraging and helpless vocalizing her divine pleasure.  I always give my women their vocal ques to work me hard and harder.  Men just do it naturally but I can tell it turns them on also to her me dying on their cocks plunging deep into my willing body.

//  I like how you show loving flowing from lover to lover.  Laura is wanting to go slow on her fuck but Jane's enthusiasm and love of fucking is simply to much and urges her on.  I too love to start slow so I can ramp up to deliver a punishing end fuck that simply blows your mind apart with fucking bliss.  I want my lovers to take me slow at first and then punish me across the finish line as my womb and or asshole rent themselves to shreds giving me the bliss I so fucking need.  Love the detail of Laura snaking her hands down their sweaty bodies to grip Jane's hard ass and plunging her cocks manically now into her willing fuck orifices.  Reaching the finish line like this [She pumped, she pumped, she pumped and ripped them into Jane, as Jane had craved, and Jane was quickly shattered by an enormous orgasm.         "Unh!   Unh!  Laur—" she gasped, then lapsed into helpless, choked off little squeaks as her body began to clench and quake uncontrollably.  This was followed by an earsplitting shriek that alarmed Laura, who was still hovering on the brink of her own orgasm, with the thought that the neighbors would hear this tumult.  "Mnnggiieeee!" Jane shrieked, her body flipping and writhing in the grip of a crushing climax.  "Mnnggiieeee!   Shit!  Awwonnggg!  Mnnggiieeee!" ]   again you capture that wonderful sounds a woman makes when a hard cock(s) are plunging deep into her fuck holes.  How she just judders and gasps as you love rape her to heaven.  I am setting here stroking my mound through my slacks and I am getting wet hearing Jane's grunts of rapture as loving cocks are punching so hard into her fuck holes.  I just gag and sag as I feel my belly beginning that delicious tightening and I feel my womb beginning to rumble and quake deep in my body.  I want my angels to grip and throttle me and make me feel their power.  I spent the beginning of memorial day at a swing party with Camille and Kapri and I am still shuddering feeling those men ramming their cocks so hard and viciously into my fuck holes and ramming down my throat and gripping that guys thighs as I jackknifed around his cock down my throat as I came so explosively with two bucks ramming my cunt and asshole so balls deep and the way my orgasm went multiple as I felt their semen exploding deep into my spasming cunt and asshole and I felt the guy fucking my throat gripping the back of my head and skull fucking me as he screamed and rammed his hips into my face as he lunged with each spasm of his cock as it filled my throat and mouth to overflowing with hot steamy semen that ran down my chin and throat.  gods he had a tone of dick seed in his balls.  I so hummed and purred as I cleaned all three cocks from my fuck holes.  Soon I had more cocks stuffed in my willing body and some woman I never got her name grinding her cunt into my hot devouring mouth.  hehehe.  Didn't take me long to suck her off!!!  I so love the screams of rapture issuing from Jane's throat.  only you capture this so perfectly.  I recently perused the latest harem chapter and he said they grunted and groaned some but still not one vocalization and during the orgasm and still all caps spoken word.  Sentence after sentence of spoken word.   I mean yeah, sometimes I can string together some coherent thought but not every freaking time.  He has great sex but ruins it by this sameness.  Two or three chapters were great but now I cringe waiting for the same old orgasm vocalizations.  Plus, you capture the variance in vocal levels.  We sometimes whisper it out all the way to shrieking at the tops of our lungs.  We tend to trend one way or the other but still we vary it and you again capture this perfectly.  This is something else that you are truly unique with again.  Thank the gods.  You capture the flow when you have your dynamic, divine grunts and moans with a shrieked curse word or declaration of love thrown in.  The gods know I curse like a drunken sailor on leave and freely tell you of my deep love for you as my womb is tearing itself to shreds blasting pure bliss to my rocking brain. 

//  I always like the interesting dynamics you show in your stories.  Laura is close to orgasm herself but just the show that Jane is putting on is enough to keep it a bay for a few precious seconds.  I know that dynamic.  Your body is thrumming and straining but you are just hypnotized watching your angel's body rending itself with blistering bliss and you are just reveling in her pure joy and love.  Pounding your slut with your love cock really works your clit and cunt with lots of wonderful friction, mashing and probing if your strap-on has appendages for clit and vaginal penetration.  Sometimes I am so wound up I am the one cuming quickly while my poor angel has to wait for me to get my bearings before I can once more pound you good and deep.  I so love you showing both of your women giving and receiving so much love and pleasure.  Really like how you show Laura's expert loving prolonging Jane's pleasure.   that is always my goal.  Make my woman's orgasm last absolutely as long as possible.  I want to overload her sense and rock her world. 

//  like the post coital time.  I know to turn over with most of my lovers if I am on top.  Only someone like dodie is strong enough to take my weight.  I love being an Amazon because I can take your weight and I love feeling your spent usually sweat soaked body prostate on mine.  Feeling your heavy breathing and your body still trembling with aftershocks. Seeing your face still kind of star struck and slack with the afterimages of dire fucking bliss.   I just love my sluts much during these special times.  I too love feel your cocks in my body after fucking.  the beauty of strap-ons and dildos is they always stay hard.  once a guy starts to go soft I want him to pull out.  I love how Jane wants to keep those dicks deep in her spent fuck holes feeling those stalks anchoring her to Laura as their love flows through those divine fuck rods.  I am sad to see that Jane can see her momma loves to fuck women but is denying herself.  How fucking stupid.  I am so into helping women to see the truth and so are my archangels.  That is why we fuck them often and hard and pass them off to each other.  We get them addicted to cunt meat as soon as possible so they can never again deny their true inner selves.  Sure, get some dick if you need too from time to time but never ever!! Deny yourself sweet pussy.  I think slowly with time we are getting their but we still have a long way to go.  Oh well.  I find younger women and teenagers are so much more liberated than my peers.  We just need to get the fucking republicans out of the white house and congress.  Geez, enough preaching for now.

//  you end the chapter sweetly with Jane and Laura fucking to midnight and sweet exhaustion has rent their divine flesh.  I so love and need to fuck until my body is love aching and spent.  I want to feel my muscles worn out and cunt and hopefully asshole all love aching from divine, hard sex.  This is the way to leave a lover [At the front door they had another dreamy kiss, their bodies too exhausted to rise even to a farewell caress.  But it was a sweet fatigue.  Holding the Double Penetrator wrapped in the beach towel under one arm, Laura traipsed in the dark down the block and back to her car, but she was unable to keep from smiling the whole time when thinking back on the evening they had shared.]  these are the memories to cherish and bask in later when you are masturbating and working your cunt and asshole like only one's self knows how to do.  Sweet love is so divine.

 

 

 

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Chapter 313:

//  I like how this chapter starts.  Laura is panicking because she hasn't learned Bonnie's last name.  that is not a big thing I would think but one should learn all one can of one's next love angels.  I want to learn everything about you that I can.  The more I learn about you the quicker I can seduce you into my loving bed.  I like that your story allows this.  Other stories are simply to short to have the flow of time that you have.  Laura has been conversing with this woman a month at least in real time.  They have interacted and flirted and we have been along for the ride.  Some stories have had this basic premise but only with your flow of time and kilobytes can you develop the nuances.  This makes your stories so real seeming to me.  I know that panic when a seduction is not going well and I keep thinking what the hell did I do wrong.  It makes your women so real seeing these doubts and insecurities.  Most stories are just fuck stories and some have it but really only  you talk about it where you make it part of real life.  I have lost track of how long the seduction of bonnie has been going on.  My pussy is aching for her to become a lesbian slut whore in Laura's loving arms.  I know her cunt will taste so divine in Laura's devouring mouth.  with names I put them in my cell phone (complete name which I make sure to get).  If I can, I take photo also.  I find women love to be flattered when I ask to take a picture of them.  it makes them feel special.  I tell the shier ones I always want to have a face for the name and by the way they are so photogenic that I simply have to take their photo.  I have seen women just melt with that.  I smile to myself knowing that I am that much closer to inhaling their sodden cunt and fingerfucking so good and hard as their cunt explodes in my gulping mouth and they are flopping and moaning gutturally in sweet ecstasy.

 

//  thinking of getting names Joann recently brought a beautiful black women into our circle.  She has the rad name of Infinity.  She is sort of a Beyonce look alike with lots of red highlights in hair in her shoulder blade length hair (natural she tells us).  She has that slender frame and nice small titties just made for pulping.  Joann's company of course states in all their regs that sex will never be used to competitive advantage and of course it is.  Infinity made it clear she would only work with a woman with the clear understanding of that that meant.  She was offered Joann's services and she jumped at the offer.  Needless to say, the first night they were in Infinity's bed having scorching sex.  The account was immediately Joann's.  she is great in the sack of course and the best at what she does in her professional life.  Infinity wanted to meet us as soon as possible.  Joann I am sure made it clear that we could triple her pleasure.  we had dinner and went into the living room.  We relaxed and infinity looked at me and Maria expectedly after some small talk.  Joann was watching us from the other sofa.  Joann had told us she likes it hard and rough just like us.  I tilted her head over and took her mouth and quickly took it for mine as she moaned and went limp in my arms crushing her to me as I slammed my tongue down her throat.  Maria and I quickly stripped her and Maria got on the floor and simply sucked her cunt like a famished whore.  I had gripped her tits and was squeezing and pulping them making her aureoles bulge out the tops of my hands and her thick nipples so fucking hard as I supper sucked and teeth raked.  Gods she came so fucking hard as her pelvis bucked up wildly and her head thrashed.  I got on the floor and sucked her off next as Maria kissed and sucked her nipples hard and helped me finish her off as I tongue fucked her and Maria buzzed her clit fast and hard.  her pussy tasted so sweet and intoxicating.  Joann just watched and masturbated to mind blowing orgasms as we got her on the floor and rode her face and let our cunts explode in her sucking mouth as we buck and ground her hard.  later that night, we had her on the sofa again and Maria and I pulled her legs back and spread them totally opening her up for our mistress.  She simply dined on her cunt until it ruptured with her screaming and jackknifing wildly.  Joann ordered us to hold her open and she got a thick glass anal dildo and spilled warming oil all over and soon was pounding it hard and deep into her asshole as she wailed and cried out in pleasure.  she humped lewdly into the invading dildo as we sucked her tits out and gnawed on her nipples as Joann was now slam fucking her sphincter and pulling it out to suck clean and at other times letting us clean it off.  She had tried to get Infinity to do atm but she had balked.  It worked.  After like fifth teen minutes and one anal 'gasm she croaked "pleassseeeeee" when Joann lifted the dildo for Maria to suck and Joann brought it to her mouth and she sucked it in and moaned as her eyes rolled back and suddenly she was cuming yet again as her whole body convulsed and bucked as Joann slammed three fingers of her left hand into her exploding shit hole and pounded her hard as we heard Infinity teeth clacking on the glass as she came convulsively.  Maria and I sucked her nipples hard we stretched her tits out as we pulled our head back and I smirked as a scream was muffled as her mouth gagged on the dildo in her mouth.  she must have had seven or eight mind blowing full body convulsions as her womb and sphincter shredded themselves in pure fucking bliss.  I told Infinity that Maria and I deserved a bonus.  She just smiled weakly.  Later were rewarded when she sucked us off so fucking good and I felt her virgin tongue snaking in our assholes as she ate our assholes out and went wild when Joann pulled our ass cheeks apart helping Infinity in raping us with the anal dildo and our red, wet gapes simply filled her with need and we felt her long tongue raping our shit holes.  Gods, she went crazy as I felt her face buried in my ass crack as her nose dug in my ass and her tongue flowed and snaked all around my rectum as she licked and tongue fucked my asshole lapping and French kissing my asshole making me squeal as she sucked and lapped up sweet flowing ass juice and feeling my eyes roll back and watching her do the same to Maria and Joann as she became addicted to ass juice. 

 

//  I see that again the fates will not let Laura finish off the love kill.  All I can say to that is "arrrrgghhhhhhh".  Again I have to give you credit.  I have taken a year to seduce a woman but I would never take the time and effort to write such a slow seduction.  I want to get to the sex!  I like how I never know your seductions will go.  Some women just seem to fall into your lap and some you have to work on.  I am willing to take my time.  Most of my angels are aggressive and will either achieve their love kill or move on quickly.  I guess I would too if I was only trying for one newbie.  I will seduce other women or make sure to go to clubs or parties to get my new pussy.  I love how you have Laura fretting and worrying.  I will get like this when something seems to go wrong or I was absolutely sure of a love kill and I come away frustrated, horny and maybe even angry.  You are the only author to take your time so to speak when the story requires it.  I have seen three other multipart stories of any length.  They all three had women met and seduced so quickly and predictably.  With you I never know how each new woman will be seduced.  Some are quick and some are slow.  Just like real life!!  Thus I get to get frustrated with Bonnie not yet seduced and I love it!  you make it so natural with your pacing.  Bonnie is simply not ready yet for her to fall in Laura's loving arms.  Your stories ring so true.  You do this by making each woman unique and vibrant.  Bonnie is not in Laura's bed simply because bonnie as a woman is not ready yet.  I give you credit.  My pussy is so ready for Bonnie's hot seduction and awesome mind blowing orgasms.

 

//  oh yeah, I like how this chapter is proceeding.  Laura sees a woman in need and goes to help.  You show the positive nature of Laura.  She wants to help a fellow woman in need.  She knows nothing about the woman only that she is tall and black.  Still I feel she would have helped her no matter what.  I have always like how you portray your women so positively.  Even the ones with seeming faults we find out they are truly gems underneath.  Sometimes you have to dig like hell but usually you can find the diamond.  Of course some women are just mean or trifling and those you need to avoid but most are simply worth associating with and loving.  I like how you show that you must always be open for new love.  I too believe in just being nice and helpful if at all possible.  If sometimes comes from it all the better.  Women just melt with niceness I find.  I too know that feeling your heart flutter, pulse beat in your neck and your pussy quaking when you see new beauty like [But even through her grimace, she was so beautiful Laura's heart almost stopped.  She had had, she swore to herself, not even the slightest predatory impulse behind this offer, but the instant she saw this woman's face, she felt a physical craving impossible to deny.]  I have loved how you show these special moments of new love and that giddy feeling you feel when a beautiful new potential angel is in your presence.  I have to smile at Laura's surprise of this woman's eye color.  I love a black woman's dark brown or midnight black eyes but also love this difference.  I have noticed green is the usual color but have seen light brown, grey and several blues.  Of course today, with contact lenses who knows.  Have to love the ex-husband comment.  I have taken many angels when they have soured from a cad former husband or boyfriend.  They kind of prime  the pump for me so to speak.

//  I love how you show that everyday events can lead to love.  They learn each other's name and talk about Nyomi's purchase.  I am always throwing out fishing lines and hoping that I get a nibble like here [ "Really?"   Nyomi brightened.  Her smile was as breathtaking as the rest of her.  She had even white teeth and wore a kind of muted light bluish eye shadow, very tasteful, that emphasized her startling grey eyes.  "Want to give it a try?  I'll even buy you dinner."  She head-gestured toward the little girl inside the SUV.   "Alana and I were going to have Kentucky Fried Chicken.  Excuse me, my daughter."  She went over to the back window and rapped on it.  "Wave at Laura," she told Alana, who promptly broke into a glorious smile and waved.]  sigh, I have to love how you show all facets of new love.  We have just witnessed Laura still working on bonnie and going away frustrated and yet we see how the fates can intervene.  I know my pussy would have convulsed right then.  To be so friendly and open usually opens things for love I have found.  I just love nyomi's friendly easy going nature.  She is a slut after my own heart.  Back in early May I was out running at the near by park.  I noticed a woman on the side of the path sitting nursing her ankle.  I swung over and offered assistance.  She had a minor sprain she said but it was obvious she was not handling the pain to well.  We talked and I could feel our bodies responding to each other.  My gaydar was pinging like hell.  Lucy had a wedding band but who the hell cared.  I offered to take her back to my place to give her more first aid.  She accepted joking that I wouldn't advantage of her would I.  I just laughed saying only if she was lucky with a wink.  I smirked to myself when I saw her love shake trying not to show it.  I got her onto our bed and checked her ankle some more and offered her a massage to relax.  Joann and Maria were out.  I got her to lie on her stomach and I climbed up on the bed and started to massage her legs and her back between her sports bra and shorts.  I bent down and whispered to her that I could give her a much better message if she had no clothes on.  She just moaned as I quickly got her stripped down and gazed with open lust at her toned / large ass and her lithe completely tanned body.  Found out she has tanning bed at home.  I got off the bed and stripped my clothes off and straddled her ass and let my soaked cunt settle on her ass as I started to massage her shoulders and back.  I felt my cunt spasm hard when she groaned and wiggled her ass up into my running cunt.  I couldn't wait any longer.  I turned her over roughly and looked deep into her eyes.  She whispered she shouldn't, that she was married and I whispered "yes, you should".  I slammed my tongue down her throat to overwhelm her resistant.  I kissed her deeply and raped her throat with my tongue as I felt her arms wrap around me and we rolled around kissing and groping.  I moved down to her gourd shaped tits and siphoned her nipples down my throat and sucked tit meat deep into my mouth making her thrash and groan gutturally.  I loved my way down her belly and soon was devouring her cunt as she wailed and humped lewdly with her rotating pelvis.  Gods, her cunt simply exploded in my mouth as I super sucked her clit and pounded three fingers hard and deep into her cunt.  I moved down and swallowed greedily her gushing cunt.  I moved up and mounted her face.  I smirked down at her as she looped her arms over my thighs and lunged her head to bury her face in my cunt as I settled down and pushed her head deep into the mattress as I ground and rode her face to two screaming back to back orgasms that had my cunt tearing itself inside out as I jackknifed and lurched as I pulped and pulled my nipples hard.  we cuddled for awhile and discovered she was here on a business trip and she explores her bi side while on business trips.  I got out my nine and half thick strap-on and mounted her missionary style and slammed fucked into the bed.  I love how she threw herself up into my plunging thrusts and wrapped her legs around my hips.  Our mouths slobbered together as we kissed deeply and I bent down and sucked her nipples hard and teeth raked them making Lucy cry out and then come explosively as she writhed and flipped underneath me.  she soon recovered and got strapped in and took me spoon style and fucked me hard as I gripped her hip to let her know to fuck me hard.  I loved her grunts and her looking over my shoulder and I could see the sweat beading off her gritting face.  I came hard with much gagging and flipping and then took that cock and shoved into my sphincter.  Lucy looked at me with open fire in her eyes and shoved it deep into my clenching asshole making me scream out in pain.  She soon had my sphincter loosened up and was ramming her dick hard and fast in and out my pained asshole making me drool in pleasure and heaven.   I rolled over and scooted down and she gasped when I took her cock and licked and sucked her cock with gusto and grunts.  When I scooted back she torpedoed my asshole and fucked me so fucking hard and then ripped it out and "forced" my head down and I wolfed down her dick as she moaned "oh fucckkkkkk" and I watched her eyes roll back.  she fucked me to another roaring orgasm.  I whispered, croaked to Lucy I wanted her asshole.  she moaned as she unstrapped and I got synched in.  I rolled her on her belly and pulled her ass cheeks apart and wormed my tongue into her asshole and tongue fucked her good.  I moaned as her sphincter gave way and my tongue fucked her asshole deep.  I licked up and down her ass crack and sucked and kissed her perineum passionately before moving and invading her asshole with my loving tongue and then kissing and kneading her whole ass and that delicious ass crease.  She pushed me on my back and got over me reverse cowgirl and pushed my hard plastic cock into her asshole and keened as she settled slowly down until her ass was on my pelvis.  Soon we started a rhythm of love as my cock when and out her shit pipe.  Stroking the whole length in and out.  When it slipped out she rammed it in her cunt and fucked wildly before taking it back in her asshole as I lunged up making loud slapping sounds as our flesh struck each other.  I lifted her up and settled her down on the bed and pushed Lucy's head down to my cock slavered in her ass juice.  She definitely was resisting as I pushed down and moaned / begged her suck her ass off my dick.  I whined I sucked her cock from my ass as she looked back at me.  she bent down and licked at it tentatively without really touching it and scrunched her face up and shook her head no.  I moaned and whined.  I whispered to her that it was the sweetest candy and to not let man's brainwashing stop her from enjoying all that she could.  She just looked at me and bent her back down and sucked my cock deep into her mouth.  I looked at her head slowly begin to corkscrew and watch her tongue work in her cheeks.  I smiled so big as I could see the kink slut coming free.  The way her head started to pump in ernest and her whimpers of new found pleasure.  she way she gripped the base of my cock to be able to suck her ass off my cock with hard sucks and head bobs.  Soon she was moaning and taking my dick down her throat as I gripped her head and stroked my dick in and out her mouth.  oh gods, she was soon mounted on my dick cowgirl, leaning forward and then back pumping her pelvis up and down stroking that dick hard and deep up her asshole.  Then Lucy pulled herself off and settled by my pelvis and bent down lifting my dick and wolfed it down letting spit flow all over my dick as she atm my dick so long slurping and groaning.  She did atm over and over until she had a shrieking, kicking orgasm as I did her spoon style.  I so loved lunging with all my strength burying my cock into her bung hole as she groaned and spasmed full body spasms.  I fucked her until she was completely spent and then rolled her off my cock and slid her head down my sweaty stomach and felt my eyes roll back as she sucked my cock up off my belly and sucked it clean with loving sucks and moans.  Discovered she always does this when off consulting.  Picks up women and acts like she can't defile her marriage vows and then fucks with total wild abandon the lucky slut she picks up.  She was faking her injury hoping I would stop after watching me run a few laps.  Lucky me!!

//  I like this next part a lot.  You now show them bonding in a natural flowing way.  Two women coming to know each other and Laura is stoking the fires of love in nyomi's sweet soon to be soaking wet cunt (lets hope!).  I love how you show Laura using an opening and running with it.  She may not be a pro at putting office furniture together but she knows that this might be the key to nyomi's heart and runs with it.  what is really cool is the naturalness of it all.  I have mentioned that I have come across three multipart stories of lesbian erotica.  All simply never have anything like this.  One was set at a country club, one about two families and their incestuous ways and the harem stories.  In all of them the women simply met and fucked.  Of course some resistance and confusion but the same ole, same ole.  Nothing that shows or feels like real life.  I have to admit if I wrote porn I wouldn't do it either.  I would want to get to the sex as quick as possible.  Trying to make real characters would frustrate me and probably bore me.  thus, I am thankful that you take the time and care enough about your characters to make them real.  These women are real!  They are soon in Nyomi's house eating Kentucky Fried chicken and working on the office chair.  I just love it.  using the opportunities that life gives you to seduce newbies into your loving arms.  I am hyper aware of such situations always scheming to use them to get me newbies into my loving arms.  I always go the bars and lifestyle clubs and peruse the local liberal rags and swing club magazines for women looking for women.  especially women looking to explore and now married couples looking for a bi whore to fuck into oblivion and fuck them back into oblivion.

//  I have to love this quote [She had tried not to focus too sharply on this woman's physical beauty, though that was nearly impossible.  Nyomi had a luscious figure.  36-24-38, Laura guessed.  And she was as tall as Laura, probably five eight or nine.  Truly, genuinely, statuesque.   A classical body married to a movie star face.  Why wasn't there a line of men (and women) lining up in the street to her door?  I would be first in line, Laura thought.  And second, and third. ]  I love how you describe Laura gazing upon the beauty that is Nyomi.  You make it so clear.  Other stories may give the height but that is it.  the harem story if I don't know the actress I have no idea what she looks like from his stories.  You give it all.  I love the words like "luscious, statuesque, classical body".  These words tell so much.  Other are clinical in their descriptions while you are loving.  I have to really love her ass.  Yumm!!!!  I love all heights but it is so nice to meet women who are tall.  You now start to give us that delicious just talking and getting to know a person.  Other authors never have this.  They may say over time they come closer but never the actual process of getting to know a person.  Your conversations always seem so real to the characters.  Have to smile at Alana being a typical child.  She is all interested when the conversation is about something she is interested in but drifts away when it not focused on her or her interests.  I know this next part well.  Nyomi is your typical curious woman (maybe a little nosy).  Hey I can be.  She wants to know about the person behind the ring on Laura's finger.  I get it all the time.  I may not be married officially but it is for us.  I get the reaction all the time too [ "A woman!" Nyomi interjected, her beautiful face breaking into a wide, spontaneous smile of realization.  "Oh god, it's a new world!  I have to get used to it!"        Laura smiled back calmly.  "I guess it is."        "I just never took you for a lesbian," Nyomi said, leaning forward in her chair, suddenly very animated.  "You don't . . ."        "I don't look like one."  Laura had heard it before.        "Now you're making me feel like a bigot."        "I don't mean to," Laura smiled.  "I've heard that before.  I'm not butch enough to be a lesbian."]  I just smile when it gets to this stage.  I am always calculating how to impart this information.  With some I just sort of shrug and smile gently.  I am not going to get anywhere with the information and simply give and let them deal with it.  Some may think I am dammed but if you are nice and just smile at them I find it kind of deflates them.  With a lot of women I though I try to be coy, funny and slightly flirtation.  I test the waters so to speak and see if I can move them quicker down the road to seduction and love.  It is amazing how many men and women simply think a woman must be butch.  They are stunned that women who are feminine and glam are lesbian or bi.  I tell people that if they only knew all the gay and bi females and males they would shit their pants.  They only spot the flamers because they are flamers.  I take and like Laura's tact.  I just use gentle humor and I am totally at peace with myself.  If I can then use the fact to get in your knickers all the better!

//  over the years I have gotten a few really nasty responses with my "confession" and those really hurt.  I usually just part ways and a few a gave a piece of my mind.  I can really give you the shit if I want and I left them stunned or crying.  Good riddance is all I have to say to those fucking bitches.  Sometimes you get the polite and gentle "oh" and you never really have anything to do with them again.  A lot is polite and accepting.  Hey, I am nice person and they still want to be my friend.  I am still able to seduce a nice percentage of these sweet angels.  Sometimes I just need to take a lot of time.  This is how Belissa was.  She accepted the fact of my lesbianism but made it clear we were to only be friends.  I slowly charmed and wore her defenses down until she is now a complete lesbian whore.  Of course, a lot of times I don't get in these women's pants.  Sigh.  Their loss.  But I am always surprised at how often I get this response [As if she were unable to stop herself, Nyomi slid down off her armchair and sat on the floor amid the office chair parts, next to Laura.  Her expression was fresh and lovely and full of life and curiosity.  This news had somehow transformed her from a weary working mother and single parent into a vibrant, engaged, interested friend.  "Tell me about it," she said.  "Tell me about what it's like."       "What what's like?"        "To be you."  Then Nyomi looked away, embarrassed.  "I'm sorry.  That's like you asking me what it's like to be black, isn't it."]  nice comment about not knowing what it is to be black.  Since I love women of color so much I see this a lot.  I can understand conceptually and be very empathetic about the racism they must endure but I can never fully feel and understand the pain they endure.  I find so many women are just so curious as to the "how" and my willingness to follow my heart and not care what man's world has to say.  I smile knowing that most of my battle is already done and soon they will be in my bed have mind blowing orgasms and eating my pussy with wild abandon and they are already in love with cock and soon my strap-on is showing them true hard core fucking.

//  I have always enjoyed the way you describe your women [She found herself marveling at Nyomi's beautiful skin, so smooth and dark and kissable.  She desperately wanted to lean forward and brush her lips against Nyomi's cheek, or even the smooth back of her graceful black hand.]   As I bemoan, other authors either don't describe their women at any length or if they do it is so bland and mannequin like that I just cringe sometimes.  Here we see that Laura is simply besotted with Nyomi.  She finds her sheer perfection.  I love seeing that.  You make it clear that this woman is a vision of loveliness.  I get the impression that Nyomi is a ten to Laura.  I have a ton of high number women in my life.  But I have always reserved a ten for an Aphrodite walking out of the surf to grace womankind.  A woman must have the perfect body, face and skin.  It must all come together perfectly.  I knew a woman from India in college, Seti, and she was a ten.  Right after college, Suzanne, was a perfect blond goddess (maybe a real Aphrodite).  Then a long pause until I met Dodie.  My mother actually gasped the first time she saw her she is so beautiful.  Now there is La'Tonya.  Belissa from the beginning told me of her first cousin she missed and now realized she always loved who married and went to Houston .  Of course you should think your archangel (or wannnabe archangel) is perfection.  When she showed me her photo my eyes definitely widened.  The photo showed a tall women (5'9") and a seeming perfect hour glass shape about nyomi's measurements.  Belissa is deep black while La'Tonya is a golden hue with long hair.  Her face was definitely perfect.  Just the right angles and cambers.  Still, one must see a woman naked to truly know.  Belissa talked, texted and emailed her all the time and went to visit her once since I knew her.  She was definitely pinning for her but considered her out of reach.  Then about two months ago she discovered that the marriage was dissolving and she was moving home in about a month.  I of course encouraged her to go for the brass ring.  She offered to let La'Tonya stay with her and I smile remembering how excited she was to go pick her up from the airport a month ago.  That early evening I started getting texts almost shouting that La'Tonya had always been in love with her older cousin and they had been making animalistic love.  Fucking each other blind.  (Belissa found out La'Tonya has always been a swinger and very bi).  It is amazing what thinking you don't have a chance will do to a girl.

//  For about three weeks I didn't see Belissa at all.  She was totally consumed with La'Tonya.  Then on Thursday I got a phone call from Belissa saying that La'Tonya wanted to meet and thank me for introducing her to the L word lifestyle.  The next day after work I headed to Belissa's house.  She had left the door unlocked so I went in.  I found no one and drifted upstairs where I could here the sounds of rutting happening.  My cunt spasmed and I got instantly wet.  I looked in the door and nearly swooned.  Belissa's head was on a pillow and her legs were pushed back by La'Tonya hands behind her knees with Belissa's ankles by her head.  La'Tonya was on her knees, folded down with her face buried in Belissa's hot cunt and the sounds of snuffling and hard sucking filled the room along with Belissa's moans and groans.  I quickly stripped and rub my muff and squeezed my tits until my mound was slavered and my nipples all long and rock hard.  I walked over to the bed and sat down beside Belissa's head and gripped her legs by her ankles and pulled back more opening up her cunt more for La'Tonya.  She was so busy she only now noticed me and she smiled at me with a mouth full of sloppy wet cunt meat as she redoubled her efforts on Belissa's juicing pussy.  she now used three fingers to pound Belissa's cunt and watched as she sucked her clit hard and then tongue fuck her fuck hole and then move up with her tongue butterflying rapidly and then sucking her whole upper cunt into her mouth and munching on it as Belissa now began to jolt with love shocks and her face began to slash horribly and suddenly her eyes bulged wide open and a soundless scream filled her throat as her cunt exploded in La'Tonya's mouth and her body was filled with detonations of pure ecstasy as her legs kicked wildly in my grip and her body thrashed and wallowed and pure guttural groans flowed from her throat as her head thrashed and then a scream of pure fucking bliss filled the room.  Spent I released her ankles but La'Tonya was still gently sucking her pussy and licking her mound and perineum and I knew soon she would be ramping up and after a few minutes she started another assault on Belissa's still quivering cunt.  Soon Belissa's feet were resting on La'Tonya's lower back and she was humping up urgently as she used La'Tonya's back for leverage.  I had leaned down and was pulping her tits and sucking her nipples out and teeth raking as La'Tonya simply did unimaginable things to her cunt.  I kissed Belissa deeply as our tongues twined in deep love and La'Tonya started to wedge fuck Belissa's open cunt will tongue lashing her painfully erect clit and suddenly Belissa was surging her pelvis up off the mattress and her hand slapped onto La'Tonya's head and she humped while growing and groaning deeply.  I loved watching Belissa's feet wallow, dig and kick into La'Tonya's back and her grimaces of pain and loving it as she continued to suck her first cousin off to a monstrous orgasm.  She kept working Belissa's spent cunt with lessening force drawing out every possible ounce of pleasure while I worked her nipples with hard and gentle sucks in time to her mouth work and hard squeezing her tits to make her tit meat burn pure pleasure down to her trembling cunt.  Then I truly knew La'Tonya was a ten when she sat up and her perfect full tits were visible and her long, erect nipples on large slightly puffy steepled aureoles came into view.  She crawled over and pushed me over and dived on my cunt and my eyes bulged as her long tongue punched into my cunt and the her mouth savaged my clit as her tongue seemed to be everywhere at once.  I clamped my hands behind her head and humped up hard as she fucked my cunt expertly with her mouth and tongue.  I wailed as I came so fucking hard my heels kicking the bed and my fingers spasming into the back of her head as I jammed her mouth into my exploding cunt.  She kept sucking and soon I felt another orgasm beginning and a revived Belissa moved in and started to kneed and pulp my tits as she clamped her teeth onto my nipples and pulled them taunt and teeth raking as I exploded up off the mattress and screamed my throat raw as another devastating orgasm ripped my poor flesh to shreds as my womb few apart.  I watched weakly as the started tribbing in scissor and humped and wallowed as they grunted and gritted their teeth.  Soon they had fished a flexible double headed dildo into their assholes and were ramming their ass cheeks into each other as their tits swayed and whiplashed.  They were rubbing their clits one handed but I moved in and rubbed their pussies and forked / jerked their clits as they came violently and I saw such beautiful jackknifes and full body spasms grip and throttle their flesh.

//  we rested and we had dinner they prepared as we all relaxed in the nude.  While eating I discovered that La'Tonya was as sweet and guileless as Belissa.  I told her she was beautiful as dodie and hopefully they could meet soon.  She smiled great big and said to make it sooner than later as Belissa beamed.  They told me that they planned to have a commitment ceremony next month and all us are invited to the wedding and after wedding party.  That will be smoking.  We went into the living room and Belissa came back from the bedroom with two strap-ons.  She handed me one I hadn't seen before.  Long with big bulbous head and a shaft that thickened at the base.  La'Tonya told me it was her favorite.  I then discovered she is a total kink whore after my heart.  Belissa raised her hand suddenly and smacked down across her cheek sending her reeling into the sofa back.  I swooned as her cheek reddened and Belissa snarled at her that "You fucking black bitch.  What kind of whore are you?"  she then smacked her again and fisted her hair and jerked her head back cruelly as La'Tonya cried and moaned.  Belissa slapped her cruelly again a few times and threw her down to the floor with a thud.  She then abused her some with some gentle kicks to the stomach and thighs and again asked what kind of whore she was.  La'Tonya cried that she was a "fucking nigga ho'".  Belissa asked what she wanted and La'Tonya moaned she wanted to be raped over and over.  that she was a worthless whore that deserved to raped.  We stood beside her prone body and I jerked her up to her knees by her hair and stuffed my cock deep into her mouth as she started giving head and slowly worked my cock down her throat and punched the back of her head driving my cock completely down her throat.  she took Belissa's ten inches down her throat as Belissa skull fucked her and spit poured out her mouth when Belissa pulled it out suddenly.  We proceeded to fuck her real good.  We plundered her fuck holes as we pounded our cocks hard and deep into her moaning and squealing body.  I loved sinking my cock into her tight asshole and seeing her head judder and her eyes squeeze shut in pain and then her swooning as I slid my cock fully into her asshole and pounded her hard and fast.  I pushed her forward off my dick and fisted her hair and pulled her around and she dived on my dick and cleaned it with famished glee.  We dp her in all different positions as our bodies slapped and slide together.  How she groaned as we slapped and chocked her.  How her body bowed as we pulled her hair so fucking hard as her head tilted up to the ceiling and we choked her as she gasped and gurgled and we then drove our ass covered cocks in and out her mouth.  I think she came four times before we were finished with her.  Sadly, the next morning it was me being raped as La'Tonya hissed at me for being such a fucking bitch as she now raped my asshole over and over and drove her atm cock down my throat and choking, slapping and raping my worthless and oh so willing body to devastating after devastating orgasm as they simply raped me to hell and back and left me totally exhausted and so fucking happy.

//  I have always loved how you show seductions being a living thing.  Other authors just make it happen with the usual mild resistance and then quick capitulation.  With the always vague always wanting to do it.  I find this true with so many women but so many authors just don't explore the dynamics and don't make it magical as all seductions are. You show that here [Again she didn't answer Nyomi but only smiled.  But her smile, though calm and mysterious, clearly had a magnetic power, because Nyomi could not drop the subject.  She was like a little girl trying to ferret out a secret.  She scooted even closer to Laura on the carpet, crooking her knees and wrapping her long dark arms around them, as if eager to hear all Laura's most intimate revelations, though Laura had resolutely refused so far to divulge a single one.]  I love how you make it magical.  I too see this.  When she is this attracted I know soon I will be devouring her sweet pussy and plunging my ever hard cock deep and forcefully into her pussy and soon asshole if I have my way.  I read them so close.  Some I tell like college girls in on a secrete, some in a loose, easy going way and others like I'm reluctantly telling them the secrete to the universe.  Whatever it takes to get her in my bed.  If I see her clearly swooning and falling under my spell quickly I will often brooch the fact that I like it rough and love to be abused.  I rarely see out right balking.  If I do I just smile and tell them not worry, I love it soft too.  But usually I see at least interest and often open interest and then I start laying the groundwork for future kink.  You have always been able to make me smile.  I am beaming just hearing Nyomi gushing over the fact that Laura is gay and goes down on women.  I have heard that so many, many times over the years from women and men.  I love shocking them.  then you give us sweet twists with Laura trying to be discreet and getting Alana out of the room and Nyomi plunging straight ahead.  I would already know by now that this woman is my as soon as the kid is out of the picture.  I have been in this situation where a woman is almost desperately trying to get her young child down for the night or off to a relative or friend.  Me preening knowing I have put this lust in her.  I try to control my ego but what woman doesn't preen in this situation.  I love to be worshiped and then devoured my new newbie sluts.  I am really digging how your are showing how love flows in so many channels.  We have just had Laura trying to seduce bonnie and being rebuffed and now we see this ["What kind of thing?" Laura grinned, unable to conceal her amusement at Nyomi's guileless enthusiasm.        Nyomi's beautiful face brightened with her vivacity and excitement over the subject.  Her grey eyes widened and glowed—they really were quite big, as well as a startling color—and she rattled on with almost relentless curiosity.  This, to Laura, was close to being a good sign.  She's very curious, she thought, reserving judgment.          "Like . . . if Alana weren't here . . . and you were trying to . . . what would you call it, make a pass at me?  What would we be doing next?" ]  I am always surprised at how often this happens to me or how quickly a woman folds that seem to be resisting me so hard.  I love working her defenses and then seeing them suddenly weaken and then fall as I press in for the love kill.  I just feel my nipples stiffen and lengthen and my cunt start to quivering and getting so fucking wet when I see this anxiousness in a newbie.  I see it more and more with younger women and teenagers.  The fucking "right" is slowly losing their fucking war of mind control and oppression of women.  I like how you show the excitement in Nyomi.  Other authors just say it without giving it life while you make it clear that Nyomi is so fucking eager for it.  nor do you make it crass.  She is experiencing extreme curiosity that even she may not realize yet means she fucking wants it so badly that she is leading things along head long into the arms of love and sweet ecstasy.

//  again I have to smile at Laura being so prim and proper.  She demurs with Alana being in the next room.  I so love how she makes sure that events move forward just like me.  she gets Nyomi to put her to bed so Nyomi can proceed with the seduction.  I have smirked with seeing women almost tripping over themselves being so anxious at moments like this.  I always try to move love forward as fast as possible.  Cute detail of Laura putting the chair together while Nyomi is putting her daughter to bed.  I kind of like putting things together myself and I could see me easily doing that.  In fact I may even delay love a little if it gets involving and challenging.  But only for so long.  ;-)  I love reading Laura thoughts for they so often mirror my own [She seems so . . . interested.  Curious.  She doesn't seem bashful at all about asking the most impertinent questions.  Yea!  Ask some more, Nyomi!  I just want to tear your clothes off and bury my face between your black goddess thighs!]   I am just beaming here.  Laura knows that simple human kindness has landed her a divine slut to fuck and savor.  I always thank the fates when they intervene so.  About a month ago, Emily called me and asked me to fix a friends laptop.  I told them to come over and they rode their bikes over.  they live in Dodie's neighborhood which is one over from ours.  She came over with the cutest almost white blond girl.  Her name is also Joann.  She has deep blue eyes and young high firm tits and slender hips.  I asked her how old she was and she told me she had just turned fourteen.  I shivered feeling my lust simmer.  Joann and Marie moved in and started talking to the teenagers while I worked on the laptop and got the drivers right and got registry errors fixed.  She was nervous and I could see that Emily was slinking up against her and constantly touching her.  Emily then just boldly told us that Joann wanted to fuck us.  Emily told her how great it is fucking adults and how much we had taught her.  Emily's Joann is about five five and our Joann pulled her head down and mashed their mouths tight as she reached in her blouse and started massaging her tits in her bra.  My Joann turned almost animalistic and wrapped her arms around Joann and rammed her tongue down her throat.  soon we are all naked and the girls were eating our cunts to ruin as we humped lewdly in their teenage faces and cried out as they forced gut wrenching orgasms from our splayed cunts as we adults kissed and fondled each others tits as we relaxed back on the sofa as they just gobbled out cunts for the next hour or so.  I loved how enthusiastic they were devouring cunts.  They just buried their faces so deep and tagged team a cunt with one girl sucking the clit and the other bending low to suck and tongue fuck our fuck hole and worm over perineums and licking assholes.  We were some happy sluts let me tell you.  We took them to our bedroom and I had Joann's slender pale thighs over my shoulders as I had her in our recliner and I ate her cunt so good and my Latina angels were busy fucking the hell out of Emily with strap-ons.  I could see Joann looking over as Emily cried out and moaned gutturally.  I heard her groan "oh god she is sucking their cocks straight out her asshole".  I sucked her off and she begged me to fuck her.  I got strapped in with a nice seven inch cock and sat down on the recliner and leaned back a little and she got up and rode me reverse cowgirl and soon was slamming up and down with her feet on my thighs as she fucked hard and steady.  I love how she got off herself and sucked her cunt of my dick.  she rode me all kinds of ways and then I got her on her knees and leaned down on the recliner and took her from behind and fucked to a thrashing, spasming orgasm.  I then spit into her asshole and fingerfucked her asshole with one and then two fingers.  she whimpered and moaned "no" in a little girl voice but I wormed my cock head into her sphincter and she pushed back telling me all I needed to know.  Soon my cock slipped into her asshole as she cried out softly and I looked to see that delicious pained look I so crave on a woman's face I love seeing.  Slowly I pushed my cock in out her tight asshole.  gods, I swooned seeing her perineum bow out as her tight asshole clutched my cock and seeing her asshole oh so slowly loosen as I was finally able to start stroking my dick deep into her fourteen year old asshole.  just like me at that age.  I asked her if she was an anal virgin and she breathed out no.  that she loves anal.  That really fired me up and started to pump harder as I watched her perineum still bowing out as her tight O ring clenched my cock as her sphincter still clenched my plunging dick up her shit hole.  Only loosening so slowly.  Slowly I pumped her harder and harder.  I swooned seeing her fingers rake the leather of the recliner.  I started to pump her hard and deep as she gagged and moaned.  I pulled my cock out and twisted my fist in her hair and jerked her around with cruel hard jerks dragging her knees on the carpet as I turned her around and clenched her hair with both fists and nearly swooned again when she opened her mouth wide and swallowed my cock into her mouth and twisted right and left moaning all the while.  I took her asshole over and over and gripped her head and skull fucked her so hard as she choked and drooled spit.  Sliding my cock down her throat and then using my palm to slap the back of her head spiking my dick fully down her throat.  listening to her gasp and moan as I flopped her back down on the recliner and I raped her asshole holding my cock with one hand torpedoing in and out her asshole with hard vicious strokes watching her asshole gape before plunging in again only to make her atm my cock clean again.  I could sense her reaching her peak and straddled her hips and piledrove my cock into her asshole as an anal 'gasm had her jackknifing and wallowing her sweaty body into the recliner.  I took her to the floor and softly stroked her asshole spoon as she came down and pulled her off and around and watched as she licked and gave head to my cock on my sweaty belly.  I so love new young lovers.  Before the night was through we had our teenagers so many ways and they us.  We have since had them four more times and dodie and Frankie five times.  I have to smile thinking back.  I remember my adult lovers at that age remarking how I was insatiable and a nympho.  Now I see it from the other side.  When you are so young and experiencing this new thing called mind blowing sex you simply can't get enough.

//  I have always admired how you are willing to take your time in developing things.  I love reading it but I would not do it myself let me tell you.  Straight for the sex!  By doing this taking your time they move from sex objects to real women and in the end that is what really attracts me to your stories.  Otherwise you are only fucking mannequins.  It makes the sex so womb blistering and earth shaking.  I only masturbate to your stories.  Others may make me wet once in a while but only yours truly inspires me.  we see that Nyomi is a good mommie and wants Laura to read her daughter a good night story.  I have been involved in such situations of over the years.  I like kids and infants.  I just don't want any of my own.  They are so trusting at that age and you do want to protect and nurture them.  teenagers are another question all together.  You just never know how they are going to act.  I just love the little touches you give in your stories.  Alana wants another story read to her.  She wants the new attention.  Have to love this line ["I have another frog and toad book," Alana said when Laura had finished reading.]  Children can be so beguiling.  Have to smile at Alana hoping her mother invites Laura back tomorrow.  It can be amazing how quickly children will bond with you.  I like how Alana lets the cat of the bag by letting Laura know that her mother "likes" her.  I know exactly what that means.

//  Nyomi goes to change into something "more comfortable".  For me this is always raise or call time.  You show that here [Well . . . what now? Laura wondered, feeling curiously uneasy as she waited for Nyomi to return.  She likes me.  I like her.  She's curious about what it's like to sleep with other women.  I'm very nervous.  I don't know how to proceed.  She probably doesn't either.]  you know your slut to be wants it.  it is just figuring out how to make love happen as quickly as possible.  I always feel that delicious tension in my belly and my pussy quivering and juicing thinking of what will hopefully happen soon.  I guess I am more of a predator than Laura's sweet nature allows.  I am thinking intensely on my future angels personality and anything she has told me that will help me seduce her into my loving arms so I commence in devouring her body and soul.  To make her my and soon my angels complete slut and whore.  I am always so happy and thankful that is what I usually see when a woman gets more comfortable with me [Nyomi reappeared, having changed into a fluffy pink bathrobe.  "Hope you don't mind, but I have to wear that uniform, as I call it, all day, every day.  Just like you.  Too bad you can't change, but at least I can.  I yearn all day for this moment."]  when I see this or braless tits with rock hard nipples staring at me or even lingerie and a few times out right nude.  If I have taken her to my place then I quickly get "comfortable" and make sure my braless tits with my rock hard nipples are on display and my legs are on display in my comfy shorts I like to wear around the house.  I think my legs are a big asset and I like to show them off.  My shorts are nice, short and tight and I always smirk when I usually see the open curiosity and often rising lust to get at my gash so clearly on their face.  Soon I think to myself, soon.  I am smiling great big as Laura ups the heat on  Nyomi and thanks her for a glass of wine from a "beautiful woman".  I so love how you make your seductions so sweet and alluring.  Many times when answering an add or picking up a slut in a bar there is no need for sweet and slow.  We both know what we want but seducing a newbie requires love and patience and I love reading it in your stories.  I so know that freezing you get from your sweetie and then how she love shakes and moves forward so you can seduce her quickly.  I love how you take the time to show this so lovingly.  This is how loves blooms and quickly leads to hard core fucking.  I so know those questions of what it is like with girls and have or do I do guys.  Doing both has it advantages.  I always make sure to let my emotions show so clearly as I tell them of loving a woman's softness and how I devour her tits, pussy and asshole (if I think she is ready).  I make sure to let them know I like to sport fuck guys and how it feels so good taking their hard cocks into my willing mouth, cunt and asshole.  how I love feeling their power and their semen blasting deep into my body or filling my mouth and throat.  I want them to know I am a complete whore that will fuck them to heaven and back.  it is easy for me to show the pleasure I feel when I am loving a woman or fucking a guy.  I let it show on my face and if braless my nipples are so rock hard and poking out and sometimes I may even show my wetness.  I love showing my willing slutty nature.  I love how you show Nyomi getting antsy as she keeps asking Laura if she finds her attractive and if she shouldn't she being trying to seduce (reading between the words).  I sometimes make them twist for a minute or two when I see they want it bad.  It makes them even more horny.  I love how you go from showing how bonnie is hesitant while we see the other side where Nyomi has obviously been thinking about and is ready to move to the next stage.  I love it and feel my cunt pulse and jump when I hear something like this ["You certainly are very patient," Nyomi said, almost irritably, as if Laura were too patient.  "Wouldn't you try to sit next to me, at least?"]  I just smile when I hear these kind of words.  It is now time for the love kill.

//  sigh, you make things so magical.  Letting your woman's scent fill your soul with her essence igniting the fires of love.  [No wonder, Laura thought.  I certainly am.  The closer she got to Nyomi, the more she could smell that marvelous mixture of her body's natural scent mingled with the residue of whatever perfume she had put on that morning, which seemed to flow into Laura's own body through her nostrils and awaken every sleeping sexual nerve and fan it into a slow, simmering flame.  Giving in completely to this aura and to Nyomi's soft, almost quivering receptiveness, she leaned forward even more, until her lips brushed Nyomi's, then curved slowly into them.        Nyomi's lovely, sensual mouth yielded easily to Laura's, and her lips parted after a moment without the slightest resistance.  It was the most natural and unhurried of kisses, and even when their tongues began twisting and curling together there was still no urgency, no haste, no clumsy passion or graceless, fevered need, only a calm, exploratory pressure, and an increasingly emotional flavor, as if they were long-lost lovers only now realizing who they were and what they had missed.]  this is how new love blooms.  Seducing your slut and then making her your own.  Other authors just have them kiss where you show that initial coming together that usually heats immediately into hot, burning need and love.  I so love shake when I feel our tongues twining and dueling before they plunge down cawing throats.  I so love feeling the heat rise and then pulling you close as I slam tongue deep down your throat and raping your mouth while I start to squeeze your tits and running my hands underneath your clothes.  A while back I was working with a saleswoman.  Julie took me out to lunch each site visit and we got to know each other.  She is married and I flirted with her.  She is hot but I was not exactly looking for love.  She is kind of pushy and a little bitchy.  We went to a restraunt and while in there a cold front came through and it was raining its ass off.  When we were finished we waited a while but I wanted to get back to work and we got soaked running back to the car.  I was swiping the rain off my face in her SUV and looking at my soaking wet hair when I noticed she was staring hard at me.  My nipples were poking out my top and sheer bra.  I joked she was safe, I was only wet and cold.  She croaked back, "Maybe I want you to be hot for me."  I looked at her and saw her hot for me.  I snaked my hand behind her head and drew our mouths together.  I moaned as I felt her melt and groan deep in her throat.  as the rain poured down I pulled her roughly to me and slammed my tongue down her throat as I pulled her blouse loose and scooped her tits out of her bra and massaged roughly and pulled her nipples as she hissed and cawed.  I gnawed on her neck and kissed her deeply as I unbuttoned her slacks and started to fingerfuck her with powerful strokes as my mouth kissed her deeply and now tore at her nipples with savage sucks and teeth rakes.  I jerked her off to a bucking and jolting orgasm as the windows fogged up.  We crawled in the back and I jerked her slacks down and got on the floor and sucked her succulent cunt.  She has thick, wavy lips and I stretched them out before plunging my tongue deep into her cunt and fluttered it.  I sucked her off to a devastating orgasm and then got her on her knees and bent over the seat and started to tongue fuck her asshole and soon had two fingers pumping her asshole as I rubbed her muff and kissed her back and ass as she came again screaming and making the SUV shake.  She looked so slutty and hot as her head finally rose off the seat to stare at me.  It was still raining hard so I got naked and spread my legs out and she got in front of me on the floor and buried her face in my cunt and sucked and tongued me wildly as I encouraged her and used my hands to guide her mouth.  she was so hungry and forceful.  I quickly reached my peak and cursed her as I came and rubbed my shaved cunt up and down her face marking her as my slut.  I then grabbed her head with both hands and snarled at her eat me again as I humped her face hard making her head rock back.  I pulled her head by her hair and slapped her hard and asked her if she was my bitch.  She just whimpered yes and I told her suck me and I smirked as she jammed her face into my cunt and sucked me so hard and tongue lashed my clit.  I watched her play with herself as she ate me out.  I smiled as her breathing accelerated and her face slashed as I came again with full body jackknifes and flips.  She was still jerking herself so I got her on her back on the floor and sat in the seat and pulled her up by her legs and got her back on the edge of the seat getting her body resting on her shoulders and her body ninety degrees to the floor with her feet in the air as I bent down and inhaled her cunt and pulled her ass cheeks apart and tongue fucked her sweet shit hole before worming two fingers and pounding her asshole hard as I savagely sucked her cunt.  I looked straight down at her as I sucked her clit into my mouth and tongue polished.  She was pulling her nipples and mashing and squeezing her tits with maniacal groping as her face slashed and jerked all around.  I started to super suck her clit in my mouth and she came so fucking hard as her feet kicked in the air and her body squirmed around against the car seat as she screamed all caps and then groaned out "ohhhhh fuuucckkkkkkkkkkk  … ssssshhhitt  … oh god--fuuuuuuuuuucckk".  Gods, I could feel a mini orgasm rocking my cunt with such sweet words of raw, new love.  I found out she fucks a lot of her clients.  She already has our account so it is no big deal.  I am out so much no one even cares if I show up later than normal.  I haven't fucked her since but sooner or later we will.  She got transferred dammit but has emailed me that she plans to breeze through next month.  I can't wait.

//  of course you know how to take it nice and slow.  Showing the reader a sweet seduction where a beautiful woman just seems to fall into your loving arms.  I think most other authors just kind of rush this moment.  You show our new lovers taking their time in each others arms  as tongues are now dueling in hot love and plunging down moaning throats.  I so love this time of new love when I feel my new angel melting and quivering in my arms.  For the reader to see this you must show it and sadly only you do it.  others just don't make it magical.  Maybe a few small stories here and there but none from the prolific authors on the web except for you.  I love seeing the rising need Laura puts in Nyomi.  She can't wait for her daughter to go to sleep so they can fuck heatedly.  How Nyomi is dying to get to her bedroom so they can fuck.  Sigh I so love new love.  I love how you show the loving progressing as you seduce your seduce into your arms ["Better than what?" Laura teased, kissing her again and now slipping one hand under the lapel of Nyomi's fluffy pink bathrobe, finding one full round breast with it and cupping the firm, warm globe happily, feeling the center stub of Nyomi's thick nipple jut against her palm.]   with other authors things just seem to happen without all the magical and loving moments that get you from point "A" to point "B".  I so love worming my hands onto my woman's bosom, ass or under her underwear, robe or such and finding a wet pussy waiting that I start to make her moan and purr with awakening need.  Feeling my fingers getting all slimmed and coated with hot, steamy fuck juice as I start to rub up and down her slit and around her hardening, quivering clit as she hitches and her eyes slit or quiver just for me.   or like you show here finding a woman's stiff nipple and tweaking and pulling with your fingers or rubbing with your palm feeling her nubbin rasping your palm.  I so love you showing this ramping up of love.  I so love to start massaging your tits and feeling it in my hand.  Are your tits soft or firm; small or large and what shape are your hooters.  So much to learn if a newbie and milk pleasure if I know your body. 

//  I am smiling as Laura asks Nyomi if she is a screamer.  The gods know I love to scream and moan loudly but sometimes one cannot do that.  I try to take my angels to a place where we can truly express our love but sometimes you have to do it with the kids or significant other nearby.  I so hate to have to keep things quite.  I do have the will power to control it though or make sure to use a pillow or my arm if necessary to scream into.  It is a nice change of pace holding it in as I feel my eyes bulging and my jaws are spasming so hard as spittle sprays out as I keep it in.  I just slam myself up and down onto the bed or floor and wallow as my cunt humps spastically.  I will just grab your head and grind so hard into my cunt as my head rocks up off the bed and I just glare at you as my womb is shredding itself in my belly and my swallowed screams are making my brain explode with pure fucking ecstasy.  Or if I can't hold it I stuff a handy pillow, article of clothing or my arm into my mouth and wail into it with fucking bliss racking every nerve fiber in my body.  I like the comment that Nyomi only screams when she is being rammed fucked with a nice hard dick.  I so love spearing my lovers and hearing them whining and screaming with pure pleasure as my cock pounds their cunts and or asshole.  gripping your hips or ribs and just slamming my dick again and again deep into your fuck hole making your shrill out your pleasure.  I make sure to keep a pillow or clothing near my slut's mouth when I am going to fuck her so good and hard if quiet is needed.  sometimes I forego the harder fucking just to avoid the noise possibilities.  I am usually better able to stuff something in their mouth if necessary.  Other authors just have the woman fall completely when the seduction commences.  That often happens but you get a lot of times the "I don't usually come that way" or "I don't think I can cum with a woman".  I usually just smile and tell them basically let me take you to heaven.  Over and over and over again.  But sometimes I do tease them like Laura her when she tells Nyomi that they should stop then.  I have to smile as like Laura, I only do this when I completely know the love kill is about to happen.  I love you showing this mischievous side of Laura.  I so love how they often kind of panic a little and rush forward to make sure "I" continue seducing them.  I find it endearing and hunger inspiring.  Like here ["I don't want to forget it," Nyomi said, moving closer again.  "Put your hand back.  In fact—"  She pulled loose the belt and opened the robe, exposing both magnificent breasts to Laura, who was already again clutching one of them.         "Oh, honey, they're beautiful," Laura said, quickly filling both hands with these marvelous globes.]   I always feel my body thrumming and my signing with happiness when I really get my hands on your tits or pussy and my mouth is claiming your mouth and making you my whore or I am having it done to me.  I so love feeling my tits pulped and rolled like dough and my nipples twisted and pulled hard and feeling your tongue slamming down my throat or wrestling and subduing my tongue and raping my mouth while your fingers invade my pussy rubbing and probing and hopefully soon up my clenching asshole.  I have so many times over the years had this happen to me.  I just smile and devour my new slut in total love.  I so love feeling the warmth of your tits in my hands as I start to caress or pulp if you're a good kinky slut.  Running my fingers up and down your slit and forking your clit and rubbing fast making you squirm and moan before invading your love box and pumping hard and probing deep.  You are the only author to really show this.  Others just gloss this over for some reason.  When an author doesn't show this they are denying their story the heat of real love and not letting the reader get steamed up with the characters.  Sigh, their lose.

//  it is cute reading them quickly moving to the bedroom from the living room to make sure Alana doesn't come in on them.  I have nothing against incest but this is way to young.  I like the little details that you give the reader like ["Come here, my darling," she murmured to Nyomi as they sat their half-full wine glasses down next to each other on the bedstand, and Laura took her hand.  She drew her close and with one hand again unfastened the belt of Nyomi's bathrobe.  She kissed her very romantically, stroking her naked breasts with one hand.]   I just love the idea of them sharing a romantic glass of wine to loosen any inhibitions that Nyomi may have.  It is the little moments of life that add spice.  Like I say, other authors just seem to fly at fifty thousand feet when giving details.  They miss this removing that last article of clothing and pulling your slut to your body and bringing your mouths together as tongues twine in new love.  I so love shake as I feel our bodies coming together.  Even if I am clothed like Laura here I still shiver feeling your warmth against mine.  Often with newbies or one night stands I get you naked first because I just have to see and feel you.  Feeling my hunger flare and fire.  I just feel my passion flare as I clench your arms and pull tight and slam my tongue down your throat as I stroke and massage your body with rough need and hump your ass and grind your mound onto mine or my thigh between your legs making you swoon and mewl.  I am so there as Laura quickly gets naked herself.  Once I have my newbie naked and half drunk on love I so quickly get naked if not already and really pull her to my naked flesh as I use my leg to pull her uptight to myself as my arms clench her to myself and I devour her mouth and face.  At times I simply can't stop myself as I turn her neck to the side and I give her a vicious hickey. I so often hear them scream in raw pleasure and their bodies vibrate and melt into mine or sometimes I feel them clench my head and feel them wallowing my mouth into their neck as I make them my total love whore.  I am always seducing and coaxing out the inner kink whore and I love how so often I discover it right underneath the surface.  Sigh, you know how to make my pussy melt with love ["Please."  Laura raised a cautionary finger to Nyomi's wildly desirable mouth.  "Let's leave it at that.  I want you."  She began kissing Nyomi's smooth neck and shoulders, which she had not touched with her lips until now, and was dying to kiss.  "I want your body.  I want to taste your beauty . . . everywhere."]  I have always loved and admired how you show the spoken word in your stories.  Too often the women may converse to get to the seduction stage but after that they basically become silent.  We are constantly telling our angels just how much we love and need them.  making them swoon even more for us and I for them.  I really love the comment of tasting Nyomi everywhere.  I too love to kiss, suck and nip your whole body and taste your skin.  Especially when sweat is forming and I can taste your personal flavor and the salt of sweat.  Licking your like a bitch whore in heat and making that smoky eye contact that so often makes their eyes roll back and body spasm ripple in her limbs and belly. 

//  this is what I live to hear from my love sluts ["Oh god, I love your breasts, and your big beautiful nipples," she panted to Nyomi, devouring them hungrily, squeezing the full, firm globes with her fingers.        At first Nyomi simply gnawed her lower lip, watching Laura's mouth and hands on her breasts, but soon she began panting and mewling softly.  "You can suck them harder, if you like," she whimpered to Laura.  "I like to be sucked hard.  Nobody usually does it.  Afraid they'll hurt me, I guess."]  other authors just say over and over again that a woman sucks her woman's tits and that is all.  It gets me hot because I am so sexual but I really, really miss the details that you provide.  Showing how Nyomi is being overcome by the pleasure Laura is giving her.  You show Laura using her fingers and the result and telling the reader that she is "devouring" her tits and then show us.  Plus, you show Laura talking to her woman and not that silence that other authors distract me with.  I so swoon when I make my newbie's beg for harder.  I find must women just melt for me as I ramp up the heat.  I remember Meggan and how I started immediately ramping up and how she took to it and beg for more.  I was soon grabbing her full c-cup tits and squeezing and throttling and making her aureoles and nipples flare and then sucking wildly while I sank my teeth into them and gnawed and teeth raked cruelly making her scream and writhe with love and need.  Smacking her tits so hard and making them whiplash to the side and pulling her nipples up and stretching her tits so fucking taunt before mashing into her chest and rolling and pulping as she whimpered and then smacking her beautiful black face and making her face rock from side to side and the grabbing her throat and throttling as I lifted her head up and shaking like a rag doll with my fingers clenching hard into her throat as her eyes rolled and mouth drooled and then throwing her lifted head back down on the mattress and slapping cruelly again before inhaling her nipples and pulping her tits and then reaching down and rubbing her slit rapidly and watching up close as she comes so quickly for me.  sigh, the screams and full body flops and jackknifes as she comes violently as I grab a tit hard and super suck as I fork her clit and rasp or fingerfuck hard.  just making her pleasure last and last.  Of course I love pay backs and love it when she is chocking me so violently and slapping and whipping my pale white skin while cursing me.  she so knows how to pull my hair so good and pound my cunt or asshole as I cum so fucking hard as she keeps jerking my head back so cruelly over and over and sometimes choking me so good.  Barely able to breath or chocking me completely and then relaxing after a short while to let me barely gasp some breaths before throttling totally again as my mind white's out with pure fucking bliss feeling her fingers digging into my throat gasping me.  as I weakly paw at her choking hands as my womb is exploding in my belly making my pelvis writhe and hump wildly as pure fucking ecstasy is choked and slapped from my body.  I so revel in feeling fingers clenched hard into my throat or my face being slapped viciously as you pull my hair so hard and maybe bowing my back so taunt I can't breath and I cuming and cuming so violently as I jackknife and flop helplessly in your power.  You now give me that communication I so love.  We see Nyomi telling Laura she knows she is going to cum so fucking hard and will not be able to be quiet.  I so love making my whore scream but sometimes I have to stuff something in their mouth or if a kink slut like me I will choke them as the cum so they can't scream.  I wish one could see their faces as they cum so violently and their face slashes and crumples as I choke them as they flop and jackknife all over the bed or floor.  I am just happy that you show this communication that women share with each other.  Men tend to just fuck and maybe curse and order you but women so know how to communicate to each other's souls like you show.  I so love the lines of them communicating their rising want and need.  Again, you are the only author to allow their women this divine right.  You then do that trick that I like so much.  You tell us what is to happen and then give us the verbal verification [ "Oh god!   Yes!  Like that!"        "Like this?"        "Ummnngggg!  Aiyyee!  Oh!"]  it is such a cute device.  You know how to use only rarely and thus I never loses its affect.  You don't wear it out; again showing how you know to use your skills so on target.

//  now you explore real life again.  Children are a natural extension of many women's lives and you have to deal with like you deal with from time to time.  You are the only author that really has children in the story that are not seduced now that I think about it.  I am all for seducing girls once they are old enough to choose yes and no but it is refreshing to read a story where the girl is not the object of the story.  They are merely a real life complication.  I have to give you credit for doing this.  If I was writing erotica I would simply avoid this I think.  It would simply take time away form the sex I would want to explore as quickly as possible.  I am smiling as Alana is giving her mother the act with her observing and knowing they are having sex and calling her on it.  I have been in that situation before and sometimes some finesse will allow things to continue but usually I have to put it off and go home.  I have lost some newbies after getting the hell scared out of them like this.  They feel guilty I know and feel like maybe the fates have intervened to show them that this was wrong.  I so hate man's brainwashing.  Of course a lot of times I am soon getting almost desperate text and phone messages begging for a another date and this time she will make sure the little pixie in question is taken care of.  I have noticed that girls tend to be more knowing than boys at that age.  I have wondered why.  Boys seem to be either more innocent or liking that mom is getting some.  Strange really.  Like how you show the give and take between mother and daughter.  You don't setup a situation and then not let it play out.  I think other authors would have the situation and then just solve it off camera.  Here you show Nyomi having to deal and communicate with her daughter to placate her and get her settled back in bed.  I have taken this attitude myself when the fates are against me [Laura shrugged.  C'est la vie.  We'll just have to try it again when she isn't here.  She was about to start putting on her clothes again when Nyomi reappeared.  She shut the bedroom door behind her.]   sometimes you get the deer in the headlight look and are told you must go.  I just smile sadly and let them know that I so want them and want to give them so much pleasure and get ready to leave.  Sometimes they just melt and soon we are fucking like rabid animals but sometimes alas I must leave.  Dammit.  I just try to plant the seeds of future love.  Wow, I love how this is turning out.  I love her wanting to make love now but it is the little things again that make your writings so special like here ["We're going to do it now.  I'm not going to be deprived of this.  I deprive myself of everything.  I'm the perfect mother.  I'm the perfect Mayor's aide. I'm the perfect daughter, the perfect friend.  I want to do this with you, Laura!  This got me . . . I don't know, so excited!  I haven't been this excited about anything in years.  Especially sex.  Maybe it's even wrong, I don't know.  I've never wanted to do it with another woman.  Until now.  But I sure want to do it with you.  Tell me you won't leave.  We only have to wait a little while.  She'll go to sleep.  I know she will."]  I have never heard this exact feeling before.  I mean that makes Nyomi such an individual.  I see that she has sacrificed for her family and her career and she is damn sure going to go for the brass ring now that she sees it is right before her.  This makes her so endearing and makes me love her even more.  It is these moments exactly that make your stories so great.  This makes her so individualistic from Laura's other angels.  It simply draws the reader into your story.  It sets up the coming sex so hotly and expertly.  My pussy is getting so wet for the loving to start.  Frustration can make the sex so fucking rad as dee dee would say.

//  you make the story so cute as they wait glumly on the sofa for Alana to go to sleep and we discover that it will be an hour of pure hell waiting for the love and heated fucking to start.  Waiting that long would have me tearing you up let me tell you.  It is again an endearing touch that as one gets skittish the other soothes the other.  I have had this happen while waiting for the situation to resolve itself.  I am patient but sometimes I think that a strategic delay is the right thing to do and I have my angel soothe an cajole me to wait and if she gets nervous about it I sooth her with how I am going to love her so fucking good.  As long as my confidence is up I am the bomb but if not I need some good ole cuddling and soothing words to buck me up.  I so love your little moments like this [The trouble was, they realized as they sat together glumly on the sofa, waiting for proof of Alana's speedy return to slumberland, that they couldn't keep their hands off each other.  "At least we could kiss a little, while we're waiting," Nyomi said, scooting closer.        "What if she comes in a sees us?"        Nyomi pouted.  "You don't want to kiss me?"        "Oh god, yes!   I do!"  Laura kissed her, a long, sensual, simmering kiss.]  I so know this.  I so preen when I have made my newbie or sleeping bi slut awaken to her true inner self.  So often it's them crawling all over me.  I so fucking love it!  I so love seeing and feeling her need and knowing I put it there and then satisfying that need.  I just feel my belly clench so hard deep inside me as our mouths come together in hot love and my hands begin to explore your whole body.  Memorizing everything I can about you.  Geez, I have to love this!!  They start to grope and let the foreplay begin but you have Laura being practical like she should.  Sometimes I am because I don't want to upset the kids if I don't have too.  I so love seeing nyomi's frustration as she goes and checks on her daughter and comes back a little later when she finds her asleep.  I can just see her beaming smile as they head to the bedroom to fuck.  All this setup is making the sex so fucking perfect.  By taking this time you have made Nyomi a woman to be desired and you have shown how life must be dealt with.  You have done this with each woman you have brought into the story and I love it.  they are not mannequins but real, breathing women that a reader can bond and love with if they desire too and I do.

//  I so know this moment where we have finally got naked after so much need and want I can finally devour like I have been dying to do.  I just feel a lurch in my cunt and asshole when we finally get fully naked and I can bring our heating flesh together like this.  [Laura, with Nyomi's eager help, slipped out of the chenille robe quickly.  They fell together onto the pale yellow sheet and began kissing like life would be over in thirty seconds and they had to hurry.  Laura raped Nyomi's mouth with her tongue.  She dropped her mouth again to the woman's incredible breasts.]  I so love pulling you to me roughly and clenching tight as I rape your mouth and drive my long tongue down your throat.  with my regular strong lovers I so swoon as their tongues take my mouth and Dodie's or Shari's long tongues are making me gag as they spear down my throat and try to rape my uvula it feels like.  Knowing what those tongues will soon be doing to my tits, asshole and cunt.  I am smiling as Nyomi brings their flesh together in a full body clench and they grope and kiss deeply and how Nyomi wants to fuck forever.  I have to smile at Laura thinking of Alana and deciding to go for a quick love kill.  Me I would let the fates ride and make her writhe and moan (softly hopefully) as I take my time making sure she knows what real kissing and tit worship is.  Loving her whole upper body to make her my total love slut.  Of course when this is waiting I can see why Laura is thinking like this [This time she slid below Nyomi's magnificent breasts, though she wanted to stop and feast on them for another hour or so, and kissed her smooth, flat belly—which remarkably betrayed no sign or scar of childbirth—sliding between her thighs and pushing them open.  "I want your beautiful pussy," she purred to Nyomi.  "Is your pussy as beautiful as the rest of you?  I'll bet it is."]I so love to settle between your thighs and just gaze with love and wonder at your pussy and smelling the divine fuck odors wafting up to my deeply breathing nostrils.  Looking at your slit and lips and your clit hood and hopefully peaking clit.  seeing what I am about to make mine totally and fully and over and over.  Nyomi has a perfect pussy.  I guess I think all pussies are perfect but I so love ones that look like this ["I take it back," Nyomi said, suddenly half-sitting, propped on her elbows, her delicious firm breasts swirling a little.  "I have seen it.  In a mirror.  My pussy lips are big and ugly.  I'm thinking of labia reduction surgery.  Did you know they do that kind of thing?"        This was such a bizarre interruption that Laura couldn't help laughing too.  We are making love, my darling.  Fucking.  I adore you and want to fuck you to heaven.  Whoever cares how big your pussy lips are?        "If you let anybody touch this pussy with a knife, I'll kill you myself," Laura growled affectionately, parting Nyomi's floppy black cunt lips with her fingers and slipping her tongue right into the warm, glistening slit.]  I love all pussies but I just swoon when I find a pussy with long wavy lips.  the kind you can stretch out so long and hard.  dodie, Hillary and Camille have nice long lips that I just stretch and pull hard and gnaw on making them whine and whimper.  I so feeling the time lengthen and becoming taunt in my mouth and then pulling even harder making them hitch and lurch.  I do this to all women but it is so rad with the extra length.  Some women simply don't have lips and I so miss my play.  I sort of feel like a dog with a bone then.  I so love reading Laura bucking Nyomi up.  Nyomi should be preening with her perfect cunt.  It is amazing how so many women simply find fault with themselves when there is none really to find.  I love my body, I just don't try to be vain about it.

//  I am smiling as Laura goes right for the love kill to take the edge off of nyomi's need.  I so know that.  Get the first orgasm out of the way to let off the steam so to speak.  Slurping her clit like a mad woman as your super suck and tongue lash from all angels and then suck fully into your mouth and love assault and as your drool flows over her love bead as your tongue comes in from all angels and then rasps as you super suck and maybe jerk your head to add that delicious tension.  You of course give us the beautiful sounds of Nyomi rutting and fucking hard.  I so love how you show the sounds of sex as it is progressing.  Other authors only show the sounds of fucking at the end when the orgasm is hitting their women.  I hate the silence before.  You never foist this upon the reader thankfully.  You also show that love talking that always takes your woman higher like here ["Ohhh my darling Nyomi, I love your pussy," Laura murmured to her, slipping two fingers into the warm, tight, greasy channel and fucking her rhythmically with them while her tongue and lips tormented Nyomi's swollen little clit.  Though a tall, statuesque woman, she did not have a super-sized clit but only a normal, pretty little bead, which however was plenty thick and hard under Laura's tongue.  "Are you going to come for Mama?  I think you are.  I think you are going to come so hard.  Remember the pillow.  You are going to come.  I think you are going to come pretty quick."]   I am always love talking to my sluts.  I so know this takes them higher and higher and helps makes the actual orgasm so crippling as I curse them and urge them on urgently.  Love your little details about nyomi's clit.  one's clit is definitely not tied to your body type I have discovered.  I so love feeling your clit underneath my tongue as I lathe and rasp it or it is butterflying all over it and feel the tip of my tongue fluttering over the polished, slimy surface before curling around and supper sucking to make you die form pleasure.  I will just flatten my tongue out and lick like a cat with long strokes as I feel your clit rasping up and down my long tongue and glance up to see your face simply destroyed with pure fucking pleasure.  this is what I live for ["Aauuoommngggmmmphhh!" she groaned into the pillow, a little more loudly than Laura had hoped would be the case, but still muffling her cries adequately, her lovely long voluptuous body convulsing magnificently as her orgasm wrenched her.  Her breasts shook, her sleek, long stomach heaved, her thighs clenched, and her delectable ass wiggled all over the sheet as the rapture engulfed her.        Laura held on tight, her two fingers still embedded in Nyomi's slippery, snug pussy, her lips clinging to her clit, as the initial shock of Nyomi's orgasm, which had a brief paralytic effect, quickly flowed into wild bucking and thrashing, accompanied by thin, high-pitched whinnying noises also made into the pillow.  "Mmnneee . . . mnneeee!  Oh!  Oh . . . god!  Mnneeee!"        These finally trailed off as the intensity quickly waned, until all that was left of them was first a desperate panting, then a slower gasping, then a long sigh.  Laura stroked her tenderly, letting her fingertips trail up one of Nyomi's hard, sleek thighs to her breasts, then her face, following her hand by scooting slowly upwards. ]  a woman having an orgasm simply fills me with such deep love and pleasure that I can't get enough.  I just swoon with her cries of pleasure and feeling her juices gush over my fingers or tongue.  How I can see her juices flowing and slicking my cock as I pound her cunt through her orgasm.  I so love to pound my fingers so hard and deep into your cunt as I feel it spasming and convulsing wildly.  I so love to press in on your body if I have a free hand and feel your muscles convulsing and the power of your body as it bucks.  If I am using a strap-on I love to use my free hands if possible to clench your body and just feel your sweaty flesh wallowing and jackknifing as I feel the power of heaven surging through your straining flesh.  Working every ounce of pleasure possible from your jolting and then quivering body and knowing I have helped another slut reach nirvana and that soon I will be taking her their again and again all the while making her my love slut and soon my other angels slut as well.

//  sigh, you now give me that post coital time that I so love.  They are basking in nyomi's orgasm like women do.  The giver derives so much mental pleasure in making her woman cum that we feel almost as great as our lover.  I love reading all the love banter and how Laura is so bucking Nyomi up and letting her know how wonderful she is and how her body inspires great loving.  I am smiling as Nyomi so quickly expresses her hunger for cunt meat.  I always so happily surprised at how must women can't wait to devour my pussy and often I can quickly move them on to anal play.  Having a mind blowing orgasm I have found opens so many doors in a woman's mind.  I love how you show the fires of love igniting once more ["It's so cute, the way you call me those things.  Like, it's hard to believe we only met a few hours ago in the Office Max parking lot.  Here I am in bed with you, squealing through a climax.  I never in my wildest dreams . . ."        Laura was hypnotized, looking into those hypnotic grey eyes, that beautiful face, filling her hands again with Nyomi's spectacular breasts.  "If you rub my pussy while I suck one of these beautiful big nipples," Laura told her solemnly, "I will come.  I guarantee it.  I am very oral, and sucking makes me come."]  Most times I have to work for my new pussy but when love quickly blooms like here I move at warp speed to consummate our new love.  Oh geez, I know that Laura is going to cum hard.  this is something I love to do myself.  I so love to suck a woman's tit as she is rubbing and fingerfucking my cunt.  I cum so fucking hard.  now I am grinning.  You show how fucks can morph so quickly.  As I find, Nyomi is ready to move in for some hard core pussy sucking and gets right to it and makes Laura cum so fucking quickly.  I usually find this with newbies.  What they may lack in skill their sheer enthusiasm makes me cum so fucking quickly and explosively.  I do find that letting a real skittish colt do me digitally is a way to ease her into lesbian loving like Tamara way back when.  The last one like this for me was Julia.  She had a add in the local free press in the women meet women section.  The standard bi-curious and wanting to explore and desiring discreetness.  We arranged a hotel rendezvous during the day when we both took off.  Needless to say I fucked her brains out and made her cum many times as I devoured her cunt and fucked her with my strap-on.  I was patient when she made no mention of going down on me.  we had kissed and she had sucked my breast but made no move further south.  So I did what Laura suggested and coaxed her into rubbing my slit as I sucked on her full b-cup tits.  I coached her and I let my pleasure vocalize as she worked my slit better and better and got her to fork my clit and press in making it feel the pressure and then on her own her fingers went into my cunt and started to fingerfuck me with more and more powerful strokes.  I moaned to her jerk me off like she masturbates.  Her eyes were now full of heat as she raked my cunt walls and twisted her fingers and pulled out and rubbed my clit fast and furious and twisted her slimy fingers on my clit and pressed in making me gag and groan gutturally.  I was sucking her tits deeply and pulping in my heat and moaned looking up as her face slashed with obvious pleasure and she croaked harder as her free hand rammed my face into her bosom and I sucked and now sank my teeth into her tit and feeling her body jolt and her hand fist my hair and jam my mouth into her tits as I worked them both so fucking good.  Gods, it hit me out of nowhere as I was now screaming into her tit that was stuffing my mouth and sucking wildly as I jackknifed and rolled right and left as my womb exploded so deep in my belly taking me to heaven as I screamed and screamed into her tit filling my mouth to overflowing and drool flowing out lips as they slacked between screams.  I was devastated for a few minutes but revived quickly when I felt my thighs being pushed roughly open and I lifted my head just in time to see her face mashing into my cunt as she sucked, lipped and tongued wildly.  She was like a wild woman as she devoured her first gash and soon had me coming explosively again.  Needless to say she got a full education by the time we parted that afternoon.  she has been able to get away once more to see me and boy she was all over me the second we got into my house.  Bad me, I failed to tell her about Joann and Maria and she nearly died when they came home but all was soon forgotten as we pleasured her like only multiple women can.

//  have to love how this fuck ends with Laura bringing their mouths together hungrily so they can share her taste in nyomi's mouth.  I so love that taste of myself in another slut's mouth.  when I am getting fucked by a strap-on or dildo I so need to taste my pussy or asshole over and over again as they fuck me.  have to love your dialog and how you show the reality of things ["Oh god, I hope Alana doesn't wake up," Nyomi confessed in a hushed voice as they cuddled.  "I want this to go on forever."        "Forever . . . maybe not," Laura grinned.  "But a few more hours, I don't see why not.  I certainly haven't had enough yet."        "I could never get enough of this.  I had no idea fucking with a woman would be so . . . wonderful."        Laura shrugged playfully.  "Sometimes it can be nearly as . . . shall I say, mediocre?  as the other way.  Depends a lot on your partner, as always."  She kissed Nyomi's sensual mouth creatively.]  I just have to give you credit with Laura being wise and letting Nyomi know that all good things must have and ending.  I am smiling as we see the wonder and shock of how great lesbian sex is.  I so love teaching or helping to teach a woman this.  You even show that some women are not so great in bed.  those women I quickly avoid after I have seen horrible truth.  I find they are usually bitchy and frosty.  Some are just slow but you can see the need and desire and those I don't mind helping along but some are just not good lovers.  To frigid, bitchy or sometimes so stuck on themselves it is almost like fucking a cad male.  Nyomi goes to check on Alana and I love how you show her using her bath robe upon her return [But Nyomi played coy.  She knew the allure of her spectacular naked body, and also knew Laura's hunger for it, which she could clearly see in Laura's burning eyes.  No mere single orgasm would slake Laura's thirst for this sleek, marvelous flesh, and this gorgeous face.  Nyomi did a little strip, tantalizing Laura by toying with the sash of her bathrobe, loosening it, letting the lapels gape open a little so that most but not all of her magnificent breasts became visible.        She did a little dance, exposing her long legs, dipping low so that her splendid breasts swayed forward, threatening to spill out of the loose lapels, her deep cleavage dark and inviting.  Laura playfully grabbed for her, and she darted backward, then forward again, closer, watching Laura's eyes on her partially revealed body.  Again, as she had many times, Laura marveled over how you could hunger so for a body you had just fucked beautifully only minutes ago, as if it were again entirely new and its enchanting spell was something never before experienced.]  I love how you show that your desire for your woman takes many orgasms to satisfy.  I have always liked how you show the desire in your women.  most stories are about seduction but they don't take the time to write of the actual thoughts of the seducer.  How she wants and desires her soon to be lover.  I like how you use words like "sleek, marvelous and gorgeous".  It really shows the affect Nyomi has on Laura.  I think maybe the "harem" author has done a striptease or two but you are the only author to use clothing front and center in her stories.  I am drooling seeing Nyomi in my mind's eye sashaying as she strips for her new lover.  Plus, as usual you give the details of her movements where others have kind of left it bland as per usual.  I so love the eye contact you show.  You show their love flowing to each other and the resulting fire it is igniting in their wombs and cunts.  How such foreplay re-fires the soul with need and fire.  I so know how the use of clothing and dancing can make a room into a sexual inferno.  Camille is part of group of swingers that caters to the local black higher education institutions.  She wanted us Amazon types to put on a show to start their most recent party.  Dodie, Camille, myself and three women from the group with the right athletic build agreed to do a opening act.  We all bought camo bikinis and spruced them to look more Xena like.  They had rented a high end condo for the weekend and had a large room with the center surrounded by sofa and cushioned chairs.  We were surrounded by black bucks and black horny bi-sluts.  They turned the lights low and the music up.  We were dancing and humping lewdly and slinking all over each other.  The rule is you have to start with only boxers or briefs for the men and panties and bras for the women.  needless to say, soon we were surrounded by guys pumping their rock hard black cocks and women masturbating.  The women knew this was a men only time and either watched or moved off to fuck each other or men not in on the gangbang.  Sigh, soon we all had cocks slamming up all our fuck holes.  I so love being fucked like this as men took turns fucking me hard and deep as cocks were slammed so hard into my body and ripped out and forced down my throat.  Camille quickly croaked out that we wanted to be fucked rough.  I could see the guys smiling as they looked around and Dodie and I shook our heads silently yes.  I looked over at the other three girls and I saw Tia shaking her head an enthusiastic yes.  LaVonda looked hesitant and confused and Sawana was shaking her head definitely no.  I thought to myself we will see.  Needless to say soon the loud sounds of slaps filled the room as our faces were rocking from side to side as our hair was yanked so fucking hard and good.  There is just something about being drug around a room by your hair, on your knees as you stumble or dragged along.  I watched Tia getting fucked in a full nelson as her fucker pushed her head forward with his interlocked fingers until you could see the pained strain in her eyes and he barked at her to tell her to tell him what she saw and she moaned out "your big black cock is fucking my asshole so deep".  He just fucked her harder making her head jolt underneath his locked fingers.  gods it looked so good.  He barked at her if she loved it and she moaned "ohhhhh fuck yeahhh" softly.  I felt my belly convulse at such fucking heat.  I love watching sex even as I am getting hammer fucked.  I soon had a tp going as some black bucks started doing fuck the white bitch in the asshole and make her atm it as the guy I was just sucking off now did my asshole making me cry out as that cock was now rammed balls deep into my quivering asshole.  I looked around the cock fucking my mouth as Tia was dumped onto the floor and her head guided down to the cock just plundering her asshole as she grabbed the base and dove on it and immediately corkscrewed her head her cheeks hollowing out as she supper sucked and I watched the guy grab his head with one hand exerting control as he groaned deep in his chest with long moans.  I had two devastating orgasms as I was pummeled and roughed up as the guys switched off and fucked us between them.  I smiled a few times as first LaVonda and then finally Sawana were being slapped, haired pulled, drug around by the hair and chocked so fucking hard as they came violently as cocks were slammed so hard into them.  I especially loved seeing Sawana getting her first double anal I am sure as she screamed in pain but was soon slamming her hips back into the cocks raping her shit hole so good.  She came like a tornado of shrieks and full body spasms and slamming hands on the floor and then watching both bucks roar and slam their cocks so deep into her sphincter as their cocks were spewing hot semen down her asshole as she went multiple.  I felt my cunt convulse and have a small orgasm when they pushed her off their cocks and they laid down on each side of her and pushed her head down to their cocks covered in sperm and ass juice and now she lifted up their pricks and just moaned so lewdly deep in her throat as cleaned off their cocks with hard sucks and long swipes of her tongue up and down their glistening deep black cocks until they finally started to wilt.  All these other orgasms just fuelled my and gave me so much pleasure just sharing their pleasure.  Then later that night Camille, Tia, LaVonda I seduced Sawana into the world of lesbianism and now she addicted to both cock and pussy.  She couldn't get enough of our pussies and assholes.  Yeah!!! 

//  I love the smoky eye contact you show between Nyomi and Laura.  Even though Nyomi is doing the dancing we see that she is clearly hungering for Laura again.  The eyes are the portals to the soul.  I so love seeing that need for me in another slut's eyes.  When another whore is putting on a show for me I always make sure to masturbate for them and if I have toys I will let them lewdly see me fucking my pussy and maybe asshole letting them know I am waiting for them.  I as smiling as Nyomi is dancing closer and closer to Laura until Laura can pull her down onto the bed.  that is so romantic seeing Nyomi doing her dance and moving into Laura's loving embrace.  I love these little moments of true love that you so often give us.  Have to smile with Nyomi asking for Laura to go first so she can learn and then fuck her back.  I get that so often.  I so love to teach.  Again another little moment of sharing that only you give.  Now you move to the loving ["Oh . . . you think so, do you?" Laura said, dropping her mouth again to Nyomi's amazingly desirable breasts, sucking one of her big dark brown nipples deeply into her mouth, sucking it hard.        " Annhhggg . . . anngghhh!" Nyomi grunted softly.  "Oh shit!  Oh shit, that feels good!"]  oh yeah, I so love breast worship and doing it hard.  I so love super sucking and pulping tits and having my woman just swoon and beg for it harder.  I can just feel a nice hard, thick nipple in my mouth as I suck hard and tongue lathe and the moans as squeeze your tits hard milking pure pleasure form them.  backing off and then slapping hard filling them with love fire as I watch them whiplash and roll or if small just judder as I watch you writhe and squeal.  Often I will order my slut to cup or lift her tit so I can make hard eye contact and then slap hard making her face slash and head jolt with pure fucking pleasure.  I will just lie their taking my master orders as she whips and slaps my tits and orders me to heft my tits up and then I scream as hard slap or bridle crop or some such lashes my tit making me lurch and roll over if I am pained enough and yet my cunt is so fucking throbbing and pulsing and my tits filled with such burning pleasure that I am so swooning as I am roughly rolled back over and harshly ordered to lift them again for another lashing.  A couple nights ago Meggan was so torturing me so until I was reduced to tears and sobbing pleadings.  She really used a pair of nipple clamps chained together to torture and pull my nipples so fucking taunt and long making me writhe and clawing the bed in pained pleasure and burning love for her.  She so rewarded me lots of tit suckling while pulp squeezing while jerking me off till I had such a powerful orgasm I thought I was going to black out it lasted so long and tore my womb to such shreds.   [Now that Nyomi had given in completely to her desires, she became a demon for love under Laura's caresses, twisting and moaning and mewling and sucking Laura's shoulder, squeezing Laura's breasts while Laura tried to swallow hers.  And Laura's desire for her body seemed sharper than ever.  She had wanted her the first time, but this time her hunger seemed redoubled and incredibly more intense than before, and she swarmed all over Nyomi's firm, silky, dark flesh as if she were a hot whirlwind of unquenchable passion. ]   I have always been thankful you show the divine nature of the full body clench.  Again I think only you show this.  Other authors, I am sure unknowingly keep a certain distance with their characters.  I guess because they focus so much on the standard pussy sucking position.  They miss everything else because of it.  I mean that is the "A number One" position but come on, there is everything else I want to tell them.  I so love the heat and if already worked up how our sweaty bodies slip and slide against each other in wet heat.  Worming a hand between slippery bodies and jerking my slut off as I devour her upper body and make her cum so strong in my loving embrace as I jam fuck her exploding cunt as I inhale her tit meat or slamming my tongue down her screaming throat swallowing all those divine noises.  I love how you show the passion.  For some reason, others seem almost tawdry and yours seems romantic and I am not all that sure why.  I am thinking it is because of your superior skills that just draws the reader into each divine fuck that makes your stories so magical.

//  as per usual you show the readers the divine vocalizations of nyomi's pleasure as she works her tits so good and you show the ramping up of pleasure that I so love reading [Laura had not relented.  She was drinking Nyomi's marvelous undulating body, sucking her large nipples, rubbing her wet pussy.  Before she knew it she had two fingers inside the tight, well-lubricated sleeve and she was rubbing the front wall, looking for a tiny leap or jerk in Nyomi's body that would tell her she had touched the secret wellspring of unbelievably intense orgasms.  She didn't know if Nyomi had a g-spot, or even if she should be trying to find it under such delicate circumstances, with Nyomi's young daughter asleep in the next room (we hope!), but there seemed to be nothing in the world at this moment that could keep her from trying to unleash a sweet g-spot rape on this lovely woman she had been so lucky to meet.]  I so love how you show the start of seduction and how foreplay sets the stage for such love later.  You show how a master works her woman's body until she is simply dying for the next stage.  You make her want it and having her give you her body.  I live to fill a newbie's slut with need and then delivering love kill after love until she is simply addicted to pussy and simply can't live without it ever again or be in pure torture if she does.  I love how you show first breast worship, then rubbing nyomi's slit and then the penetration that I so love feeling being done to me and feeling my fingers sink into your wet tight heat.  Starting to fuck you hard and worming my fingers around and fluttering around in your fuck petals.  Not everyone has a g-spot but I find raking her front cunt wall does give every woman a boost.  I just make sure to explore all her fuck channel.  I will get up on my knees and bend down close so I can explore your fuck hole as deep as I can as I strain to jam my fingers in so fully as I pump and explore your fuck hole.  I so love feeling your juices pouring out slavering my hand and making a nice wet spot on the bed or floor.  Working hard before moving back up to suck some nipples or devour your mouth while still fucking with my fingers.  I have to smile at Laura going for it daughter or no daughter.  When I have decided to go for a g-spot orgasm I will deliver.  It is a matter of pride for me.  plus, making you die from it too is so nice too.  I love keeping a woman cuming until she is absolutely losing her mind in front of you.  I just love how you show this ramping up again.  Without this ramping a g-spot orgasm would lose its affect in a story.  It is the pacing that matters and you have it.

//  I have always loved how you show so clearly the pleasure being given and received.  When a woman is being pleasured so good she can't help but plead for me and you show it so clearly.  You then show us the little details that other authors don't.  they just basically tell you that one woman is sucking the other woman's nipples.  Never a nice detail like the slut moving your head herself to her other tit to make it feel so wonderful.  It is these details that we live for when we fuck.  ["Oh yes oh yes!" Nyomi panted softly to Laura.  "Do the other one!"        She pushed Laura's head over to her other breast, groaning softly as Laura initiated the same sort of love attack on her other nipple, drawing it deep into her mouth.        "Oh yes!  Oh shit yes!  Unnhhhhh!  Mmmnngggghh!" ]  you then show that wonderful communication of lovers gently urging each other on.  One to help her woman reach nirvana and the other begging for it and those soft guttural sounds we make.  Things that you capture story after story.  You do this and yet after three hundred stories they are still fresh seeming.  You are able to make each fuck so individualistic and wonderful.  I guess it is your ability to give such real life imagery that seems to on target to each woman and each event that they don't lose their specialness.  Like here as Nyomi goes over the edge into searing g-spot heaven [Nyomi began to climax before she even knew it was coming.  Laura could feel the internal rumblings of Nyomi's body being telegraphed from her fingers, still deeply sunk in Nyomi's wet pussy, traveling up her wrist and arm to her shoulder.  Fierce quaking was ripping the lovely woman's womb apart deep inside.        "Agghacckgghh!  Agghacckgghh!" Nyomi let forth an awkward, hacking sound, finding it difficult to breathe as the sharp ecstasy began to wrench her body.          Determined to make it the best ever, and momentarily losing awareness of their precarious situation and the need to keep quiet, Laura poured on the heat, rubbing Nyomi's sweet pussy frantically and sucking her large nipple sharply, feeling Nyomi's whole beautiful body erupt into violent convulsions.          "AAUUNNGGHMMNNGGHIIEEE!" Nyomi cried out in an earsplitting shriek, her body jackknifing wildly under Laura, her legs flexing, pushing her pelvis up into Laura's hand, her torso twisting so violently that her breast escaped from Laura's mouth.        She was still coming.  She showed no sign of stopping,  She shuddered and clenched and writhed under Laura.  Her long body undulated and twitched, and she groaned through another wrenching jolt.        "Auungghhhh!  Oh!  Ungghhh!  Mnnggeeeee!" ]  wow, I mean this is why we fuck.  One to receive this kind of pleasure and two to be the person knowing you gave it or help give it.  I can't get over the details that you give and I don't see elsewhere and I keep thinking that though I know these things I would forget to put in a story myself.  Your fingers sunk deep in your slut's cunt and your probing and raking that bundle of nerves with almost maniacal force and you can feel it in her body.  That sudden flooding of cunt nectars flowing or maybe gushing and the quivering and clutching of cunt petals on your fingers.  you can just feel it.  I so know that feeling of a monstrous orgasm blooming so deep in my belly.  I so adore that feeling of approaching, approaching and approaching.  Sometimes it just hits but usually I get that second of "of my fucking gods" in my mind as some line is crossed chemically I guess and I am no longer approaching and it is here.  I have that split second of feeling it start and then my mind is simply being shredded by pure fucking bliss as my body is convulsing and searing itself in pure ecstasy.  I love how you show your women pouring on the heat to make the orgasm the best possible.  To make it so fucking pure and memorable.  I so love you showing that pouring on the heat.  You just capture the moments of fucking.  others are just so bland while you make the sex exciting and pussy quivering.  Even during a small portion of the fuck you show how you still can ramp up to nirvana.  I so love making my slut cum like this.  Making her shriek at the top of her lungs and simple flop and flip on the bed as I fuck her to heaven.  Last week I was over at Belissa and La'Tonya's and we had been fucking for a while with some orgasms to take the edge off.  I was going down on Belissa while La'Tonya was working her tits and face.  I started to fingerfuck her hard and deep and decided to work on her g-spot and go for the  pot of gold.  I fucked her until my fingers started to tire and my tendons were aching so I jumped up off the bed and ran to her chest of drawers and opened her goodie drawer and came back with a glass dildo with a hooked tip.  I used that cool cylinder to start working her g-spot hard and fast and got up on my knees and pumped her hard as La'Tonya sucked her nipples off her tits and kissed her deeply.  I could feel Belissa now racing to the finish line.  La'Tonya got on her knees and was now twisting and pulling her nipples harshly and stretching her tits out and relaxing making Belissa's eyes bulge and face slash along with my pumping.  Sweat was pouring off her face and her body soaked as her whole body tensed and she looked back forth between us as she gritted her teeth and jerked her head on her stiff neck.  Then I saw it, that magical moment of striving moving to heavenly orgasm.  She just started giving these loud guttural moans that racked her body as it convulsed wildly, twisting and her hips rising up and slamming down into the bed several times as La'Tonya lost her grip on her nipples and just watched as I raked and raked her g-spot as she flopped and now shrieked bloody murder as La'Tonya now gripped her tits and mashed and pulped them to her chest as she writhed.  I know Belissa went multiple as her orgasms just wrung her out and her body strained and massive jackknifes tortured her deep black flesh.  Finally she started to come down and we relaxed our efforts when she clamed her legs shut and pushed us away.  We relaxed beside her and cuddle as we stroked and kissed her exhausted flesh.  I so smiled as I watched La'Tonya slide her tongue deep into her mouth and wrestle her tongue into submission before mashing her mouth harder and I could tell she was spearing her tongue down Belissa's swooning throat.  gods the spittle roping between their mouths as La'Tonya moved back.  I then gripped Belissa's face and moved it over to my face and I raped her mouth as I pulled her tight to me feeling her soaked body mashed into mine as I slammed my long tongue down her throat as she gagged and moaned.  I could feel La'Tonya stroking her back and kissing her all over her back and neck as I pulled Belissa on top of me and raped her mouth and throat as she whimpered and wallowed down on me.  soon she was on top of La'Tonya as LaTonya took her slut in her heavenly embrace.  Kissing her deeply and giving her a hickie to make sure Belissa knows she is her slut.  I just smiled as I continued to stroke and kiss Belissa's back.  such perfect sharing love.

//  like the observation that Laura is now so close herself to an orgasm.  Just making a woman have a stupendous orgasm makes you happy and taunt that only a little can send you over the edge.  I will happyly frig my pussy or use a toy to help send me over the edge if I feel the pressure building too much.  I so love screaming in a pussy or asshole as she is cuming and I am making myself cum along with her.  So much love and pleasure to share.  I see the noise has gotten Alana awake again.  Sigh, kids are sweet but they can be a real pain.  With this situation I will usually leave too.  Even before the fucking if you can believe it.  teenagers can be especially troublesome.  Just have to work harder on the next rendezvous of love.  I am smiling because I usually have the same reaction as Nyomi here.  Please don't leave!  I guess I will try again but sometimes the fates I have simply decreed otherwise.  Love seeing the desperation in Nyomi asking for them to meet tomorrow.  I so love planting that need in my newbies and love seeing it in Laura's stories.  When a woman has tasted the real thing she simple must have it.  I just thank you for making it magical and the mechanical that other authors give us.

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