Fan's Notes

//  i have to smile how this chapter starts out.  i love the relaxed

manner that makeeda has been showing in her last few chapters.  so warm

and sexy.  i love how she teasingly lets laura know she has found her

box of sex toys and implements of sexual pain and pleasure.  i am just

smiling great big as laura does her usual blush and stammer routine when

she is caught and discovered by the angels and now archangel in her

life.  i have always thought it so cute and funny that she reacts so.

laura is so in tune with herself so much sexually that i smirk when she

keeps getting flustered over her love of kink.  and the denying of a

part of self that all women should embrace if they like that kind of

sex.  i would never shy away from my love of rough sex.  i so love

having my woman slapping me around and whipping me like a common slave

and making me do her bidding.  last tuesday night joann really put maria

and me in our place.  we were both crying and begging with her slapping

us cruelly and dragging us around by our hair and then whipping us with

a belt and several paddles and whip.  we were shrieking and pleading

while loving our flesh being so cruelly worked over.  i just remember

lying on the bed crying and rubbing my ass, back, belly and thighs from

their whipping and seeing joann pounding her ten cock down maria's

asshole which was high in the air and maria crying out and cheek pressed

deep into the mattress.  joann was slapping her ass hard while fucking

her and then slipped her cock out and ordered maria to turn over and

maria turned around and propped up on her hands and joann stepped

forward and maria moaned as joann's ass covered cock slipped deep into

her mouth.  joann cupped the back of her head and pounded her cock into

her mouth and then slipped it down her throat as maria gagged and choked

but i noticed maria gripped joann's ass cheeks to pull her head down the

cock now burred fully down her throat.  gods it was so beautiful when

joann slipped it out and thick strands of spittle roped and fell off.

then back around and down maria went with joann ripping her cock in and

out her asshole and deep into her cunt and then down her throat for the

next ten minutes or so.  it was so beautiful the way maria came so hard

with joann pounding her dick balls deep into maria's asshole as maria

gutturally groaned and drool poured out her slack mouth and eyes rolled

back and spamed while detonations made her body jerk and jolt with

killing pleasure as her ass shook like jello while i watched joann grip

her hips and sink her ten inches deep into her colon and held it their

while maria simply died on the stalk inpaling her rectum.  sigh, maria

collapsed onto the mattress and joann slowly pulled her cock from her

spent sphincter and i moaned in happiness as that sweet ass dipped cock

now was pounded down my cawing throat and then so hard and deep into my

cunt, asshole and so much sweet atm action until i came so fucking

gloriously.

//  i like how makeeda sets the table so to speak ["You have a deep,

dark, secret past," Makeeda whispered, with mock solemnity, into Laura's

ear.  "Come tell me all about it."]  i am just falling harder for

laura's main baby.  i have found that humor works with most women when

you want to get them to calm down or talk about something they are

nervous about.  it works and laura tells her about karen.  i like how

laura explains their relationship ["Not like she was," Laura said

calmly.  "I didn't crave it.  But I could get off on it."        Makeeda

leaned across the kitchen table intently.  "You mean you could come when

she handcuffed and whipped you.  You came hard."]  i don't like it quite

like karen either but makeeda is right about coming so fucking hard when

your being whipped and tied up.  i only do that with my main angels that

i absolutely know i can trust.  when i get handcuffed or tied up i need

to know i can totally trust you.  when dodie or joann tie me up like a

trussed pig i know i am totally safe and that they will give me the pain

and humiliation i crave but not hurt me.  they are very, very good at

giving it to me just like i am giving it to others.  we all now how to

read our lovers and give exactly what they crave and need.  sigh, my

pussy is jumping seeing this new side to makeeda ["I know . . . I know,"

Makeeda smiled, nodding.  "Sick.  Wow, it makes me hot.  You know, I had

a girlfriend once who tried to get me into that.  I wouldn't do it.  I'm

kind of a prude.  I was raised by prudes.  You're kind of prudish too.

I think that's part of what draws us together, makes it so exciting.

Something we're not supposed to do.  I think doing it with you would

just—"]  she is right, i have thought of her as a prude that shocks me

seeing this side.  of course a lot of women are so shocked when they

discover just how depraved i am.  they see me all prime and proper in

situations or out in general public and are shocked when show my true

colors.  when i hear such words from an angel i immediately start

stoking her kinky fires and seduce her quickly into exploring her inner

kink slut.  one way to help them along is to let them do the kinky stuff

on me first and they see how devastating the kink is and they are almost

begging for it.  and of course i give it to them.

//  one thing i like about laura is learning all about her desires and

the way she looks at the world but sometimes she just makes me want to

sigh like here [Makeeda smiled glumly.  "Not even if I want it?  Just to

see what it feels like?"        "Not even," Laura shook her head

firmly.]  i mean her baby is only asking for some good healthy kinky

sex.  she should be giving her woman what she needs.  i always strive to

give my babies what they need in bed.  though, from time to time i have

my limits reached but i can usually sniff out the truly crazy bitches

out there.  some women are just out of control with their willingness to

really hurt and be hurt.  run don't walk away from women like that.  it

took time for me come around on some of the rope and whip play that

joann and dodie crave but now i am so happy that i have.  it just adds

so much to sex when you throw in some kinky spice when it is needed.

geez, i am just cheesin so much as i am watching makeeda slowly working

her will.  laura refuses to do it and thus makeeda takes it upon herself

to do it and you capture it so dead on [Makeeda continued smiling

brightly, ignoring Laura's implacable glare.  "Why don't you go get the

box and bring it in here, since we're talking about it?"

"No."        Makeeda looked wounded, then querulous.  "I'll get it."

She rose from the table.]  other stories always have their women in

perfect sync which of course is not the case.  i love how you show your

angels talking, complaining, scheming and working to get their way.

isn't that what we do as humans.  by showing this you show the humanness

of your women.  i just love how you show the sass of makeeda with your

word choices like "wounded & querulous".  i can just see her face with

these words.

//  i am just chuckling at how this is all playing out.  i am fist

pumping when makeeda wonders where the strap-on is when she gets the box

and laura's sullenly tells her its in the car.  i love the humor but

what i really love is how makeeda is not upset with the news and wants

laura to go get it.  this so clearly tells me that makeeda is totally

comfortable with laura using her strap-on on other women.  that is the

only reason it is in the car and she doesn't care.  sigh, makeeda is my

kind of woman.  i love how she compels laura to get the strap-on ["Oh,

you're so damned stubborn!" Makeeda groaned.  "Go out to your car and

get the strap-on and bring it in here.  As long as we're discussing

this, we should put all our cards on the table."  She smiled sweetly to

coax Laura.]  i am just chuckling at your humor and coyness.  i have to

say again i like you showing the nature of women.  other stories always

have the women in perfect sync in their thoughts on how lovemaking

should go and then it happens.  here you show to people discussing and

bickering about how their lovemaking should be.  this is real life and i

so love reading it.  i mean sometimes we all want to fuck a certain way

and your angel wants something else.  i feel for makeeda when i discover

why she has not brought up the use of toys yet.  she was with a

politically correct lesbian who didn't believe in penetration.  i

shudder to think.  i can also understand laura to some degree.  i love

my toys but we lesbians have such special sex because so much of it is

up close and personal.  using your mouth and fingers i feel gets us so

close to our women that hets and gays just can't match our intimacy but

why deny yourselves penetration when it feels so fucking good.  of

course i feel fingers and fists give one plenty of that magic.  hehehe.

//  i am just cheesing reading the delicious conflict here.  i am seeing

a whole new side to makeeda and so fucking loving it.  laura is acting

all petulant not wanting makeeda to see her kinky past and all makeeda

can do is gleefully react to the toys and rope.  i love seeing her

pleading and laura's consternation.  laura is a softy and i know she

will give in at least some.  not like i would but still enough to let us

all know she is a kinky slut deep in her soul.  i just wish she would go

for broke.  oh well.  i am just melting for makeeda as she works her

will and wiles on laura ["It's very dangerous.  I'm only going to say

this one more time.  You can get to like it too much."        Makeeda

pouted.  She was glum.  She reached down into the box and picked up the

fur-lined handcuffs.  The key was taped to one of them.  "I'll bring

them along, just in case you change your mind."        She was so

pixie-cute and forthright about it that Laura could not help smiling.

This was a side of Makeeda she had never seen.]  geez, i am having

visions of her handcuffed and or tied up with laura pounding her cock

deep into her tight cunt and hopefully spasming asshole.  i know she

would be so beautiful coming so fucking hard.  her hard body bucking and

thrashing in searing ecstasy.  all i can say is no one and i do mean no

one allows their women to have such mirth and dialog in their stories

["Maybe I should sing 'Prisoner of Love' or 'Beat me Daddy, Eight to the

Bar' to you first, and get you in the mood," Makeeda cracked.

Laura frowned, and Makeeda's face instantly fell.  "I'm sorry.  That's

wasn't funny, was it."        Laura giggled.  "Actually, it was pretty

funny.  How about 'Guilty'?  Or 'Anything Goes'?"]  it is this

interaction and communicating that makes one fall in love with an angel.

//  i so love the little details in your stories.  i am swooning as you

show laura's whole body quivering in lust as makeeda takes off her shirt

and her bra less tits simply reduce her to hot lustful jelly.  that is

how i feel every time i see one of my archangels revel herself to me.  i

will always love them so deeply.  i like how makeeda makes sure laura is

totally under spell [Makeeda's striking hazel eyes took on a mysterious

cast.  She was now naked from the waist up, having worn no bra under her

shirt, and she shimmied her breasts playfully at Laura, knowing how it

reduced Laura instantaneously to helpless adoration and quivering

desire.  Her thick, protruding black nipples seemed to Laura to shimmer

in the evening dimness of their bedroom.]  oh geez, i am giddy as we

discover that makeeda has had another dalliance while away.  i am so

happy to see that makeeda is not the stuffy prude i thought she was.

she is allowing herself to partake in pleasure instead of denying

herself while away from laura.  i am so happy for both of them since

laura's stomach is not "curdling" liked it did in the past.  laura has

grown so much.  i love how you shown growth and change with laura,

deshona, and now makeeda.  i love seeing the sophistication in your

stories.  i am smiling as makeeda leads the loving into the kinky area.

i love rough sex and like this but i like to let others lead in this.  i

guess i like the active side of sex.  the more passive i simply like to

be led though i will do your bidding if you are whining and compelling

me.  sigh, the sacrifices i make.  heheheh.   i am smiling as makeeda

ties up her own breast suggestively and she sees laura weakening.  laura

knows she will give in enough to makeeda to give her what she needs.  i

wish she would give more.  i am chuckling as laura tells makeeda she

loves her and is doing this under duress.  this shows laura's gentle

giving soul but i do have to smile when it is so clear her angels would

so gladly and lovingly take so much more.  geez, louise, i wish they

would come to me!!!

//  i have always loved sass in my women and i so love reading it ["I

love you too, Laura," Makeeda breathed, then grinned.  "Now cut the shit

and get on with it.  I feel like a river's flowing down there."]  a

sassy woman just sets one's pussy on fire.  just the look in their eyes

and that tone of voice makes me so fucking hot for them.  i just want to

suck their nipple and clits off and pound my cock deep into their

clenching cunts or assholes.  i am so happy to see laura finally giving

in to her woman's desires ["First, we fasten this in place," she said

softly, knotting the first loop, making sure it was just tight enough to

make Makeeda's firm globe swell, and her shiny black nipple balloon up

slightly, but not so tight that the blood was shut off, or the nerves

deadened.]  one should always try to deliver unless she is totally over

the line.  i can just see makeeda's tit swelling and her aerola and

nipple turgid and waiting for hard sucks and tongue stabs.  i so love to

have my tits tied up or dodie has her special coressette type outfit

that i call the mangler.  has cutouts for your tits and draw strings to

cinch up and strangle your tit nice and hard.  i so love the pain and

fire it fills my tits with.  just squirming around and whimpering as

ropes or nipple clamps are added to make me cry out and cry in pain.  a

while back me and maria were all tied up at dodie's house with her and

frankie cursing us and slapping us then whipping our tits, bellies,

thighs, and cunts as we shrieked and begged for mercy.  of course they

whipped us harder and slapped our bulging tits and pulling on the ropes

making them dig into our ample mounds and bending down to suck and teeth

rake as we screamed and tried to turn over only to be whipped on our

backs again and whipped and slapped more as they cursed us like whores.

sigh, by now our faces were blotchy and swollen with tears and they

finally gave us relief.  dodie sucked my cunt off to a devastating

orgasm while pounding a glass anal dildo up my asshole so hard and

deep.  i watched frankie pound maria's cunt with a thick hard dildo and

slapped / buzzed her clit as her tied up arms spasmed wildly and her

heels kicked the mattress continuously as she screamed like she was

dying from fucking bliss.  seeing her body strain and jolt as her face

slashed with the purest bliss possible on earth is just so beautiful and

special.

//  i like how laura waxes poetic over her lover's body.  i have always

dug the loving descriptions you give of your women.  you make them all

so special like we should with our angels of love.  with makeeda, laura

goes on about her almost perfect proportions and shape.  i love how you

so lovingly describe makeeda's divine tits.  i love all size and kind of

tits but when you meet the woman with the large bosom that is

classically shaped one can't help fall in love with them as societies

have since the dawn of civilization.  i fell that way with dodie and

maria.  full perfect shaped breast any hollywood actress would die for.

i just suck, lick, nip, and muzzle for hours.  i just want to nurse from

them sometimes when i drift off to sleep.  laura ties up her perfect

globes without giving her the full treatment like she should but i know

my laura and her gentle ways are just not as kinky as me or makeeda it

seems.  they are trussed up but should be synched up harder and more

cruelly but makeeda is getting enough to make her happy and that is good

enough.  one must satisfy your lover's needs if healthy and kinky.

sigh, i sure love how makeeda thinks [Makeeda knew how Laura felt about

her breasts, indeed about her whole body, and was not above using her

physical allure to get her way.  Now she teased Laura.  She drew back

her shoulders a little, which made her swollen, entrapped breasts push

forward.  Her large, flaring black nipples gleamed, the thick centers

protruding excitedly.        "Did you whip her nipples . . . with that

little whip in the box . . . when they were trapped like this?" she

asked Laura in a soft, almost distant voice.]  we went over to jill and

vanessa's place last weekend.  jill had vanessa all bound up and her

body spread eagled on the bed, tied up to the brass headboard and

posts.  jill had her tits jutting and swollen and rope around her neck

and body and pulled tight making her neck all rigid and uptilting.  we

took turns whipping her all over and slapping her face, jutting nipples

and cunt and pulling her hair and jerking her head around.  i felt my

pulse leap as i used a riding crop on her clit and cunt and smiled as

she shrieked and her cunt made wet squishy sounds.  jill finally let her

neck loose and settled between her thighs and devoured her cunt as we

rode her face to gut wrenching orgasms as jill sucked vanessa over and

over again.  sigh, how perfect can it get.  vanessa was receiving and

giving pleasure in an almost perfect circle of life.  i so loved looking

down as i ground my cunt into her mouth and seeing it all covered in cum

and her mascara smeared and running down her cheeks.  her eyes boring

into me as she sucked my clit so fucking good and just burning into my

soul as i screamed and let my cunt juices gush into her gulping mouth

and smeared my cunt all over her face adding more jizz all over her face

before i collapsed in exhaustion of a crippling orgasm and watched maria

mount her face again for another suck off.

//  hopefully, sooner or later laura will revisit her true inner slut

kink.  wow, i am really impressed with makeeda.  she is now begging

laura for a nice hard whipping and laura biting her.  of course laura

demurs but i am just so happy to see this in makeeda.  i like how you

tell the reader the reason makeeda is seemingly suddenly making these

kinky requests is because of the safe feeling laura provides makeeda.  i

like how you show that you should only do this kind of loving with women

you are sure of and know well.  you need to know your women to make sure

they don't have a mean streak or a little crazy.  when i was younger i

didn't follow this adage and got in some situations that were crazy and

a little dangerous.  a couple of the women went to far and i learned my

lesson.  this is something you should share only with true angels or

swing clubs where everyone is vetted and your peers keep everyone in

check.  oh yeah, i like how you start the loving [Laura was trying to

ignore all this and brought her mouth closer to Makeeda's.  She slipped

her tongue out and slithered it between Makeeda's thick, impossibly

desirable lips.  At the same time the thumb and forefinger of each hand

closed on Makeeda's protruding nipples, twisting them gently, almost

tenderly, as they kissed.  Slowly, almost imperceptibly, she increased

the pressure, until she was pinching both thick nipples fairly hard, so

hard that their mouths came apart.  Makeeda was panting softly, and her

eyes watering.        "Oh god," she gasped, "yes . . . like that!"]  i

so love to have my nipples squeezed like this and feel the pain and fire

filling my tits and make my clit throb and pulse with wicked pleasure.

i love it when my angel makes me hiss and thrash in pain and pleasure.

when all trussed up i love the helpless feeling and being degraded as i

whine and curse.  i love to curse joann, dodie or hillary and have my

face smacked hard or my cunt slapped and then my nipples are pinched

again making me scream in raw pained pleasure.  i revel in rocking right

and left all the while i'm being whipped, pinched and bit.  trying to

turn over and then having that side whipped cruelly as i shriek and moan

and if free try to skitter away and having my kink angel continue

abusing me and working my body so hard and well.  sigh, true kinky

pleasure.

//  i so love good hard sex when some pain is thrown in.  i so love to

get and give it.  before the school year simonette went west to visit

her grandparents.  i got a call from hillary that made my pulse pound.

i was over at dodie's with our babies out of town.  hillary told me that

she and camille had been very, very, very bad.  i felt my body love

shake as i asked her if camille knew what that meant.  she purred to me

that of course she did and told me she had instructed her with our safe

word.  i told her i was over dodie's and that we would put them back in

line.  dodie's eyes flared when i told her about our visitors and their

evil ways.  her nipples immediately poked through her tank top she had

on and i could see the fire in her eyes.  when they arrived we greeted

them at the door.  they were dressed like black whores with their tits

hanging out their tops and their shorts up their ass cracks.  i gripped

the back of hillary's head and mashed our mouths tight as i speared my

tongue down her throat.  i wrapped my arms around her and pulled her

body to me as it melted in love.  as hillary swooned i looked over and

dodie was devouring camille's mouth as her body shook and hitched in

dodie's arms as dodie rode her thigh into her cunt.  we got them all hot

and needy when dodie grabbed camille by her hair and started dragging

her to her master bedroom.  i did the same to hillary jerking her head

hard to make her whimper and cry out in pain.  dodie has a huge bedroom

and on one wall, high up,  she has some costica rica carved art hanging

from pegs with no furniture around them.  she ordered our black cunts to

take the art down and strip.  gods, i loved seeing their hurried motions

as they stripped and removed the art from the wall.  dodie and i

stripped also, and i loved seeing the sisters ogling us with open lust

as their shaved mounds glistened with moisture and their nipples rock

hard.  dodie walked over with her velcro wraps and soon had their wrists

handcuffed in them and put up on the hooks some chained hooks that she

looped the velcro into that allows you to pivot around and have some

motion where you can move up and down and right and left some.  i love

to be tied up like this.  humping my twat in open need and quaking.

knowing what is coming just like hillary and camille did.  they were

shaking and mewling as they watched dodie go into her closet and come

out with her new whips.  they have a swivel head with like fifty foot

long soft plastic tassels.  the beauty is you can whip with them and let

the tassels spread out or swivel your wrist and let centrifuge force

bunch them together and then whip your angel.  dodie handed me mine as

we walked over to our love slaves and i smiled great big as they

shuddered and shook with fright and lust.

//  we turned them around so their backs were facing us.  dodie wasted

no time and lashed camille's dark flesh with hard lashes of her whip.  i

started in on hillary and whipped her back, ass and thighs as she cried

out and screamed in pain.  we worked their backs up and down as they

cried out for mercy and cried large tears of pain.  i felt my blood boil

as camille would sag and then stand on her toes as she shrieked and

cursed dodie.  dodie whipped her around and we easily saw her cunt was

running fuck juice down her thighs in streams and her tits and nipples

were swollen.  she worked her front with half hard swipes and i worked

hillary some more and then forced her squirming body around as she

begged for mercy and then i whipped her tits, belly, thighs and cunt as

she cried out and screamed in pain as i watched her cunt hump up into my

whips as she whimpered and sagged.  they were ready.  we threw our whips

down and dropped to our knees and mashed our faces hard into their cunts

and devoured our black angels swollen, bruised cunts.  i swallowed

deeply as my tongue flailed her cunt meat and i sucked her rigid clit.

i looked over at dodie sucking camille's stalk clit like a little candy

cane.  i guess big clits run in the family.  we had them pressed against

the wall to help support their weight as we sucked their cunts for all

our worth.  i saw dodie fork camille's clit and made it flare up as she

latched onto it and super sucked.  i was tongue fucking hillary hard as

i rubbed her clit with rapid motions as her soaked cunt made divine

squishy noises.  sigh, the screams of pure love and lust as the sisters

came together.  their bodies bucked and thrashed as their arms yanked

and jerked on their tethers.  their cunts jammed and mashed our mouths

as they came joyously and were now crying tears of pure love.  they

slowly came down.  hillary croaked to me and i rose up and she whispered

in my ear.  i smiled goofily as i bent over and whispered in dodie's

ear.  she smiled as she looked over at hillary and she nodded yes.  she

started to suck camille's cunt again as i unhooked hillary and we sat on

the floor and cuddled as dodie started to work camille's cunt like the

pro she is and soon had two fingers up her asshole.  she pumped her

fingers as she sucked and spread camille's legs with her shoulders as

she worked a third finger into her asshole and pounded camille's asshole

good as camille moaned and mewled humping her cunt forward and ass into

the fingers pounding her shit hole as dodie slipped her small finger and

then her thumb into her stretched asshole and pressed forward.  it was

cute as camille's eyes bulged and she screamed at dodie to immediately

stop and squirmed around.  she was shrieking at the top of her lungs.  i

noticed her hips weren't moving that much and she her eyes were hot with

need.  i smirked as dodie stopped and looked confused.  hillary had to

softly tell her that camille had not used the safe word had she.  dodie

looked up at camille who was staring down at her with love and need.

she settled down on dodie's wedge and she gasped and her eyes rolled

back as dodie sank her fist into her asshole.  camille just juddered and

her head lulled to the side.  slowly dodie worked her fist into her

rectum and began to stroke her fist deep up her shit hole as we watched

her twist her fist deep up her colon.  she worked her until her fist was

pounding deep up camille's asshole.  she would sink half her forearm up

camille's ass and then stroke it back and thrust it hard up her body as

camille sagged and pushed down on the fist invading her belly.  dodie

used her free hand to press in on her belly and ribs to make camille

feel her fist sinking so fucking deep up her belly.  dodie worked her as

camille began to shake and thrash and her eyes bulged.  dodie moved

forward and swallowed her upper cunt into her mouth and tongue flailed

her huge clit as spittle and cum dribbled out her mouth.  it was so

beautiful to watch camille cum so fucking hard as dodie super sucked her

clit and rammed her fist so hard and deep up her shit hole with harsh

thrusts.  camille went multiple as her body bucked and jackknifed wildly

as she screamed and screamed out in love.  we had gotten up and helped

dodie support camille's weight as her body jackknifed and thrashed and

slowly weakened and sagged.  we slowly unhooked her and lowered her

spent body to the floor as we all kissed and muzzled her sweaty satiated

body.

//  i have to smirk as you show the communication i so love as laura and

makeeda joust on the kink level.  i like seeing makeeda getting her way

basically but laura still setting limits.  this is real life.  i mean i

give in almost all the time but i can often twist things to still get my

way to at least a large degree.  i like how makeeda keeps pressing for

more.  i like seeing confident, strong willed women trying to get as

much as they can.  i have always liked how you show the strength in your

women.  even the shier and more timid ones you still show hidden

strength and cherished qualities.  you are so positive in your

depictions of your women and i love it.  you show the communication here

["Why should I make it easy?" Makeeda drawled sexily.  "I want you to do

me rough.  I want to get you so excited that you do me rough.  Nobody

ever did me rough before.  It'll be a first.  I want you to be the one.

I'm yours.  I'm all yours."  She shimmied her shoulders again so that

her entrapped, swollen breasts moved against Laura's breasts, making

sure that Laura's sexual excitement was almost too intense to bear.

"These are all yours."]  i love the declaration of true love and her

pressing for hard loving.  yippee, makeeda wants the double penetrator.

sweet ass fucking is coming.  i have to smirk as she says later but

first use the handcuffs and rough her up.  my blood would be boiling

with lust at this stage as i handcuff her up and then punish her like

the true whore she is.  receiving i love being all handcuffed like a

perp or hanging from dodie's pegs or other such.  i feel like a woman in

a catholic inquisition and sweet debauchery is about to be committed on

my yearning flesh.

//  i have always loved how you show the ramping up of sweet love like

here ["Put your hands behind you, you naughty thing," she smiled at

Makeeda, knowing that a mere spark now would send them both into

flames.]  i so love it when the kink factor is soaring and soon sweet

pain and humiliation is flaring and wombs melting.  i am love shaking

seeing makeeda with her hands handcuffed behind her back along her ass.

i love it when i am bound like this and i know i am at my woman's

mercy.  i really like reading how laura is focusing on makeeda and

making her happy.  deep down i know laura loves it but you show how her

true focus is on her current love mate.  i have always loved how you

show your women focusing on their angels and how this brings such sweet

love to their beds.  i have seen that look so many times as makeeda

looks over her shoulder and her eyes are smoldering with hot sex and

lust.  you know your woman is dying for it.  recently, dodie was in need

of punishment and i handcuffed her like this and she looked at me with

cat eyes and licked her lips.  i gave her what she wanted.  i slapped

her face with resounding smacks and pulled her head with vicious jerks

and threw her down on the floor and proceeded to spank and smack her big

ass and tits as she cried out and cursed me.  she just wouldn't shut up

and i had to get her on her knees and pushed her head down in the carpet

and then used a belt on her ass and back as she shrieked and broke down

sobbing.  i finally had mercy on her and settled her down on her side

and i devoured her cunt to several monstrous orgasms.  i took off the

handcuffs and i fucked her asshole so fucking hard as she moaned and

gibbered and then started keening as her body then erupted violently as

devastating spasms and jackknifes ripped her body apart as she bucked

and thrashed.  she was kind of punch drunk as i took her in my arms and

we cuddled and cooed before she took  a sweep slumber in my arms.

//  oh yeah, i love how this tryst is going [Laura's hands were all over

her, followed by her hungry mouth.  At the same time, in their urgent

struggle, knowing that Makeeda wanted it, wanted to be dominated and

treated roughly, Laura grabbed a handful of her hair and yanked her head

back, at the same time mauling Makeeda's taut, bulging breasts with her

free hand and her mouth, sucking her swollen, black, protruding nipples,

letting the sensitive aureoles feel the hint of her teeth.

"Unhhhh . . . hhhhhhh!" Makeeda gasped, panting and squirming, twisting

under Laura's mouth, mewling at little as Laura continued to pull her

hair, yanking her head back again.  "Oh!  Owwchhhhh!  Ungghhh!"]  i so

love the rough treatment.  i was at camille's apartment a couple of

weeks ago for a little party with hillary, bellisa, cindy, shari and

simonette.  it was abuse cracker girl night.  i so love being racially

insulted when i am fucked hard.  simonette and i were cursed and slapped

and stripped by our black tormentors and thrown down on the sofa and

floor.  geez, belissa got behind me and twisted her fist in my hair and

ripped my head all around and then back as shari and then cindy slapped

my face and tits then smacking my cunt and rubbing my mound hard.  i was

moaning and drooling as i watched hillary push simonette down on her

knees and face buried in the sofa as she whipped her ass with a riding

crop and raked her back with her clipped nails and used a foot to push

and wallow simonette's face in the cushions.    they really worked us

over and we were broken and dispirited as we whimpered watching them

strap on their thick, long cocks.  oh gods, they raped us so fucking

good as they took all our fuck holes so long and hard.  sigh, they

forced me over to get my face on simonette's back as belissa pounded her

eight inch black cock deep into her asshole and then ripped it out and

shoved into my mouth as i moaned cleaning off the sweet ass juice as my

asshole was raped so hard by our other black whores.  the pairings kept

changing as cocks pounded our holes.  i so loved having them play ring

around the cocks as they dp'ed me as the third slut skull fucked my

mouth with  her cock straight out my ass.  i so love being fucked so

good and seeing cocks plowing simonette so good as she juddered and

gibbered and watching them change positions and holes and seeing

simontte deep throating cocks from her ass and cunt before they were

plunged deep into her fuck holes again.  you just cum so fucking hard

when fucked so good and your women just keep fucking your flesh until

every ounce of ecstasy is wrung from your body and your just spent and

totally fucked out.

//   by starting slow you show how their fucking is really heating up

and heading towards a conflagration of burning womb scalding love.  i do

so believe in giving my woman what she wants.  i have to admit feeling

some frustration with laura here.  it is so clear that makeeda wants

their lovemaking to be much rougher and yet laura holds back.  and while

i find this frustrating i still love it because you show how no two

people are in perfect synch with each other.  other authors always have

their women in perfect harmony in their lovemaking.  you show that this

is not always so.  i know for a fact (though they don't tell me

outright) that simonette and hillary are really rough lovers at times

with each other and go to swing parties for hard bdsm.  they want me to

go but for now i am not going to their leather and stiletto parties.

seems like a lot of dress and work for a payoff that should be gotten to

quickly.  looks kind of silly to me.  i give you credit for showing

these conflicts and not perfect harmony.  i do love seeing laura

smacking makeeda's face hard but then wish so dearly she would whip her

like makeeda wants.  you do know how to frustrate me!  wow, i like

reading the internal conflict in laura.  makeeda tempts her by pulling

her shoulders back and making her tits flare and demands some nice tit

smacking.  we see that laura knows she has done it in the past but can't

do it now with her archangel.  i love how you get in laura's head and we

see her thoughts and conflicts.  this makes her so real and alive to me

and makes me crave each new chapter to see what i will learn next about

laura and what you show about her angels.  you make these women alive

and breathing to me.  i have to smirk as you show laura getting her

way.  she swarms makeeda's body with her mouth and hands to distract and

drives her wild with need and yet makeeda is still demanding slapping

and whipping.  i love this new side of makeeda!!  i like how you show

the conflict continuing.  no sudden stopping or dropping the thread like

other authors.  it is cool seeing laura heading makeeda off at the pass

so to speak and gets in the harness and puts the double penetrator in

place.  i am smiling at how you show makeeda doing an end run around

makeeda's machinations and devious ways.  neither are playing fair and

it is so delicious watching them vying and seeing who will win.  it

looks like laura is playing unfair by tempting poor sweet makeeda with

two cocks to fuck her hot waiting holes.

//  love the detail of laura rolling makeeda on her side and swabbing

the anal prong while makeeda shakes with need and then makeeda spitting

one last curse for laura not abusing her.  love that fire and sass that

makes me fuck you so hard.  oh yeah, i love the sweet details [She

snapped the lid back on the baby oil bottle and flung it aside,

crouching between Makeeda's spread thighs before Makeeda could object,

or close them.  But by now Makeeda was not resisting, or apparently

angry any more.  She was instead pliant and yielding, wincing slightly

and then smiling almost beatifically as Laura's oiled forefinger slid up

into her rectum to prepare it for the next invader.        "Unhhhhhh!"]

sigh, i love how you get us all primed and ready for the penetration.  i

so love feeling your finger(s) slipping up my asshole and making my

sphincter yelp and burn with pained pleasure.  feeling your fingers

invade my rectum and then twisting and rubbing my rectum all around

making me jolt and hiss in pleasure.  i like how you keep showing the

total loving.  i know that other authors would move to only het fucking

but you show laura kissing makeeda hard and sucking and bruising her

lips in her passion.  passion that makes your woman so hot for it.  you

show true love in your lovemaking and not just scripted moves in a bed.

I love how they now get down to some serious loving ["And I love you

back.  Now fuck me hard . . . don't be gentle.  You promised."        In

fact, Laura realized that she had promised no such thing.  But she also

knew that they had got to this little point of no return while avoiding

the worst hazards that Laura had taken great pains to veer around, and

now there was not much need to hold back.  A little rough fucking was

everybody's wish now and then, and there was no harm in it when you

loved each other as deeply as she and Makeeda did.  You could do it

especially well, also, with the Double Penetrator, though you did have

to be careful that the dual pronged monster did not slip out in the

middle of wild, vigorous thrusting.]  i am glad that laura finally is

allowing her kink to come out.  i know makeeda is going to be coming so

fucking hard.  lucky bitch.

//  love the detail of makeeda's wet pussy and greased asshole greedily

swallowing the dual invaders.  laura has done her foreplay perfectly.

now you give us some of that sweet dialog that i so love in your stories

["Do it hard," Makeeda said, ignoring her question, her hazel eyes

glinting with sex sparks.  "I'm going to come fast.  I can feel

it."        Now Laura teased her, slowly beginning her inward and

outward thrusting.  "What if I don't want you to come fast?"

Makeeda's eyes beseeched her, and she could never refuse them.  "Please,

Laura.  Just do it.  I want it."]  i so love reading your dialog between

women in love.  i like how you show total lovemaking [Laura had already

accelerated the rhythm.  Both of them were panting more rapidly now, and

they had trouble speaking.  Laura leaned down to press the entire length

of her body against Makeeda's, giving her a heavenly sensation she

always sought when they were fucking, a completeness, a feeling that

every possible inch of her own skin was glued to every inch of

Makeeda's, so that she could feel every little ripple of muscle and

flesh, which sent waves of happy sexual fire through her already

throbbing blood.]  so many authors never have that skin contact i so

love.  you have always shown your lovers getting up against each other

and slinking their sweaty flesh all over.  i so love to get close to you

and press my body into yours as i plunge my cock deep into your love

hole(s).  i so love to start in the ole pushup position as i plunge my

hips down hard and spear your cunt or asshole and making your body lurch

and tits whiplash as i spear you so fucking hard.  then slowly lowering

my body until i am pressing you down into the mattress and i'm rotating

and snapping my hips to snap my cock deep into your wet cunt or tight

sphincter.  kissing you deeply as our tits mash and my hands snake all

over your body.  grabbing your ass or pressing down on your shoulders to

drive your body into my lunging cock.  slowing down and wallowing our

sweaty flesh all over each other and kissing you deeply or sucking your

neck like a vampire and then without warning pulling my cock back almost

out your fuck hole and then lunging forward with all my strength.  i so

love the harsh guttural groans of or wild scream of pleasure as i

quickly ramp up and slam fuck your wanting fuck hole.  always varying

the rhythm and angles to fuck her so good.

//  sigh, i love how you show so clearly the great sex occurring.  laura

assaulting makeeda's breast with savage glee and jerking her head around

with a handful of hair.  seeing makeeda almost in a frenzied trance of

lust and need.  i think the first thing that captured me about you

stories lo those many years ago was the sounds that you capture like

here ["Awwonnggg!  Unnngghh!  Ohnngggg!  Oh yes . . . Laura . . . yes!

Awwonngg!"        With her wrists handcuffed together behind her back,

her entire upper body was distorted and cramped, and even writhing and

squirming were difficult.]  sweet sounds of love.  you show all the

various sounds we make and then you give us the vivid details of

makeeda's twisted body.  i so love to feel my body contorted and fucked

hard like makeeda here.  geez, i love the little details that i don't

get anywhere else.  like laura having a hard time getting breath to talk

to makeeda with her exuberant fucking.  like i say i love your perfect

capture of rutting vocalization ["Unnnggghhmmmphhh!" Makeeda grunted as

an especially hard thrust impaled her tense, flexing body.

"Ohhnnnnnngggg god!  Yes!  Do it like that again!"]  i so love fucking a

woman hard and hearing such divine utterances from her throat.  coiling

my hips and lunching my cock so hard and deep into her cunt or rectum.

like the humor of makeeda asking for a gag because she is going to

scream and laura telling her the boom boxes will mask her ecstasy.  love

your humor.

//  we are reaching the end line and you as usual you make it so

special.  you make each fuck a divine journey to nirvana.  you know how

to start slow and show all the sweet details so when the pricipice is

reached the reader can feel her own body reacting to the sex and feel

sympathetic contractions in her womb or if masturbating to the story can

time her own orgasm to have soul crushing soul blistering orgasms along

with these sweet angels.  you show the ramping to the finish line so

well [Laura jabbed her hips forward, spearing Makeeda mercilessly, as

she knew Makeeda wanted her to do.  Even though she was already pumping

rapidly, she began fucking her even faster, and yanking her hair too,

and again savaging her beautiful, saliva-wet, swollen black nipples with

her mouth, knowing that Makeeda was only seconds from the ripping

explosion she sought.        "Unghhh!  Ungghhh!"  Makeeda twisted and

whimpered, her eyes glazed, not even seeing Laura now, fiery with need,

pulsing with frantic sexual craving.]  this is how to finish off your

woman.  slamming your cock hard while pulling her hair with vicious

jerks and mauling her nipples with your teeth rakes and hard super

sucks.  working her hard with focused love to make her womb tear itself

apart in searing love.  i so love seeing that look in my woman's eyes.

totally spaced out and drool flowing from her mouth.  jerking her head

and making eyes contact and seeing her trying to focus as i slam my cock

up her asshole and seeing her unable to focus or think and pile driving

my cock as i kiss her or maul her tits as i drive her to the finish

line.

//  i so love how you capture the end game so perfectly [Laura knew it

was going to happen, knew it well enough to yank Makeeda's hair roughly,

pulling her head back, arching her torso a little so that her

cloth-bound breasts surged into Laura's face just before a strangled cry

of ecstasy was throttled on its way out of her throat.        And then,

as if to contradict everything Laura knew about her, she unleashed a low

moaning orgasm unlike anything she had ever experienced before, at least

in Laura's presence.          "Ohhhnnnnnnnn!  Ohhnnnnnnnn!

Ohhnnnnnnnnn!" Makeeda moaned in a low, guttural tone, as her utterly

gorgeous but contorted body strained and arched and shuddered violently,

wracked by cataclysmic shocks of killing pleasure.]  timing your hair

pulls and other tactics to make our angels simply die from ecstasy.  i

so revel when i see, hear and feel her body jackknifing, jolting and

whip lashing.  i will pull close to my sweaty body and revel in each

undulation of your body against mine as i feel the screams ripping from

your throat and feel you butt or stomach smacking into mine and often

feel your arms or legs spasming against mine as your thrash in fucking

bliss.  i so love to pull joann, maria or dodie's body so close to mine

and feel them thrashing and screaming against mine as i watch pure love

throbbing in their eyes as their faces are slashed horribly with killing

ecstasy.  i love them basking in the great fuck and cooing and softly

speaking to each other as lovers do after a great fuck.  especially love

how makeeda murmurs for laura to keep her love cocks deep in her body as

they come down together from the heights of olympus.

//  i like how you again show the interaction between your women.  laura

tries to lead things one way and makeeda is taking it another way.  this

is real life.  we all try to get our way in one way or another.  other

authors never show this.  their stories are so limited and the few that

do have multiple chapters never focus on the women as women.  it is sad

in a way.  of course i love the sex but without the character

development you give it is some how lacking.  you never do this because

you give us this kind of interaction ["That was more exciting than I

thought it was going to be," Makeeda said, rubbing one wrist with her

finger, examining the temporary marks the cloth had left under her

breasts.  "You were a witch, pulling my hair like that.  I think that

made me have about two or three orgasms rolled into one."        Oh no,

Laura thought.  She could feel it building.  She could feel Makeeda

giving in to the very things she had feared.  It's so intense that way.

I never came that way before.  So hard.  So long.  We have to do it

again.  We have to go further.  Those were the very things Laura had

wanted to avoid.]  i see that makeeda is giving laura a break and not

going to push anything now.  i am hoping that now that she has broken

the ice with the kink love she can slowly increase the heat with laura

and only increase the womb scalding sex.  rough sex just adds so much to

the mix when added from time to time.  i have to smile when laura is so

relieved when makeeda doesn't ask for more but she knows she loves it

and senses that in the future she may have to fend with more demands for

kinky sex.  i so love it.

//  love the declarations of love as makeeda presses her body into

laura's and they kiss and grope each other.  i have always loved your

post coital time and how you show lovers clenching and kissing after a

great fuck and once more feel the fires of love rekindling.  i always

smile when you only use words to say that one of the women is doing

something and all we see is the other woman's reactions ["And . . . what

else?" Laura teased, already feeling her blood race and her cunt moisten

and her nipples throb.  "What else?"        "Oh . . . this.  And . . .

this . . ."        "Unhhhhh!"        "And maybe this . . ."

"Unhhh!  Oh!"]  it is such a cute device when you use it.  it is

charming when you bring it out and use it from time to time.  i can

guarantee you no other author in erotica uses this cool effect in their

writings.  i am so like laura in that me giving a great orgasm just gets

my body so fucking ramped up that it takes almost nothing to make me

come explosively.  i like how makeeda knowing her archangel so well

knows this and wants to make laura wait and enjoy herself like only

lesbian lovers can [Now she heard herself begging, pleading.  She saw

Makeeda gently, affectionately laughing, she felt Makeeda's expert

tongue on her pussy, inside her pussy, curling around her distended,

throbbing clit.  She felt Makeeda's fingers on her nipples, or caressing

the tight little ring of her anus.  She felt Makeeda's phenomenal lips

on the hollow behind her knee, or brushing her sacrum.]  i love how you

show both the raw heat of intense fucking and then the romantic fuck of

archangels in deep love.  you are a master a being able to catch both so

well.  i get to bask in all the elements of love with your great story

telling.

//  i like how you are always putting little witty remarks in your

writing ["Mmmm, I think I should tie you up," Makeeda murmured.  "You

wiggle too much."]  one other author has some humor in his stories but

he doesn't have the ability to give his characters these little subtle

asides from his characters.  who doesn't like humor in her lover.

makeeda continues to coax her woman higher and higher until the goal of

heaven on earth is achieved ["ANNGGHMMNNGGHHIIEEEE!" Laura cried out,

much louder than Makeeda had moaned while she was coming.        A

horrifically strong orgasm suddenly rose up inside her body and seized

her, squeezing a kind of sweet though nearly unbearable pleasure out of

each throbbing nerve as she arched and shuddered helplessly on the

mattress in Makeeda's tight embrace.  A minute later she was still

panting and gurgling, gasping and nearly sobbing from the excruciating

release of tension.  Makeeda knew it and coaxed her down gently, again

brushing Laura's cheek with her lips, and tenderly massaging her nipples

with her fingertips.]  that is how i so love to come.  your writings so

capture the trill of a truly harrowing orgasm.  i am there with laura as

she comes in an exhalting orgasm.  i love to feel my limbs getting all

rigid and thrashing spastically, by belly tensing and contracting wildly

as my womb explodes, my back arching deeply as my legs make me jackknife

and roll around violently.  screaming or groaning harshly, i often rise

my torso up and judder wildly as my eyes roll back and spittle sprays

and i shake violently as i scream wildly and then crash back to the bed

and thrash around as my body immolates itself in ecstasy.  joann calls

it my death throes as i lurch around the bed and jackknife in fucking

bliss.  i so love it when my body goes ramrod straight and feel shocks

rock through my body making my toes curl and fingers claw and dig into

the mattress as my body goes pal mal seizures and i rise my head on

juddering neck and look down my body as see my tits shaking wildly and

my belly rippling and twat lurching up into my woman's devouring mouth

as i feel new shocks tearing my soul apart and my eyes roll back and

spasm so fucking hard and my head crashes to the bed and i groan

piteously and drool all over my cheek and soaking the mattress as i just

revel in pure heaven.

//  have to love how you end this chapter.  laura is thinking of another

round of intense fucking and she suddenly remembers she has a reception

to go to.  i am organized enough mentally to not have this happen to me

but others have suddenly been scrambling around me getting dressed

rushing to meet some meeting, deadline or spouse returning to their

house.  sometimes i am hurt but often i can find and see the humor in

the situation.  especially, if they are freaking out wildly.  have to

love makeeda's calm demeanor [Makeeda calmly watched her.  "You didn't

tell me about it," she teased Laura gently, knowing Laura was in purple

frenzy.  "How do I know you aren't dashing off to meet one of your

lovers for a quickee repeat."]  this is how i react generally.  i too

use humor to defuse such moments.  i find humor is such a balm and i am

happy to see an author use it.  you are able to show the white heat of

great fucking and yet capture those moments of true archangels [She

walked over to Makeeda and bent down to kiss her, stroking her

unbelievably beautiful naked breasts in the process.  "Did anyone ever

tell you that you have the most beautiful body ever made?" she

whispered.        Makeeda smiled a devilish smile.  "In fact, a few

people have.  I only want to hear it from you, though."]  we all say

those nice things to our regular lovers but when spoken to our

archangels they mean so much more and touch the heart.  only this

universe you have created allows you to explore these emotions.  a

couple of other authors have created their little worlds but have never

truly developed the women in them and made them so alive as you have.

//  the story ends with a sweet sung by makeeda and discovering makeeda

didn't fuck anyone in 
seattle
 (blast it!) but only said it to goad laura

into fucking her hard.  blast, never say that coming.  you are good!

have to be a little misty eyed at the sweet emotion at their parting

["Go," Makeeda pushed her away.  "Go.  Go to your reception.  One of us

has to make a normal living.  Go.  Drive carefully.  I'm going to sit

here and dream about kissing you."        God, maybe she is a little

sentimental after all, Laura thought, smiling back.  "I'll wake you up

when I get home."        "I hope you do," Makeeda grinned.]  love good

sex but sweet emotion is a aphrodisiac all its own.

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Chapter 307:

//  i have to chuckle how this chapter starts.  i too know that

receiving a phone or text message from a lover who is hungry for my cunt

and asshole.  i have to smile so great big at the mirth and vitality of

dawn.  she has been trying to get in touch with laura and not been able

too.  i can feel myself stomping my foot and blowing up my bangs when i

am trying to reach an angel and not getting through to her.  when i want

my baby i want her now!  i have to smile at the fake querulous tone in

Dawn's voice.  i am smiling thinking back on recently having this happen

with simonette and her sweeties or belissa when they are hungering with

me.  the only thing is they are not so easy going as dawn or myself.

they are often catty and a little evil when they finally get up with

me.  i remember a while back belissa gave me some shit over the phone

and got me so fucking hopping mad.  i had to remind her i had other

angels and she started whining and crying great big.  i felt my heart

melt but i was still a little pissed when i arrived at her place.  when

she opened the door i grabbed the back of her head and and brought our

mouths hungrily together and slide my tongue down her throat as i

slammed her up against the wall and rode her cunt up and down my thigh

roughly,  i sucked her neck cruelly as i humped her cunt roughly on my

leg.  i tilted back and slapped her face harshly back and forth and

ripped her shirt off and ruined her frilly bra and devoured her tits

with guttural sucks and love bits as she moaned demented and i slapped

her some more and called her a fucking nigger and worthless black

whore.  she started juddering and jolting and then screamed wildly as

she came gloriously and violently against me as i crushed her body to

the wall.  i so smirked as i removed her pants and soaked panties and

smelled her sweet thick musk from her soaked cunt.  i rode her face so

fucking hard and came so good before i sucked her off a few more times.

i so loved her deeply as we cuddled and cooed and felt the fires

re-iginitng later that night and my fists slide so deep into her strong

body and felt her come so hard as my fists pistoned in and out her fuck

holes and i felt my body being jerked and pulled as her body flipped and

jackknifed with my arms jutting out her fuck holes as she screamed and

cursed in bliss.  i can't really describe the intense pleasure i felt

when i felt both her fists fucking me so well.  her fist sliding so deep

and hard up my shit hole while her other fist was twisting and pounding

my cunt so hard.  i could just feel my body juddering as i rose my body

up on the balls of my feet and up onto the back of my shoulders.  i can

still see so clearly her rising up with me and bending down to suck my

clit as her right fist twisted in my cunt and her left slide deep up my

colon and slide back down to pound my inner sphincter and then rammed

deep again and again.  oh gods i just died as spittle sprayed and i

cursed and gutturally groaned as my twat made spastic jerks and i humped

my cunt as high as i could as i simply died from fucking ecstasy as my

fuck holes immolated themselves on driving fists.  i kinda of blacked

out and when i came around her slicked hands were running through my

hair and we were kissing in deep love and lassitude.  can sex get any

better than this.

//  i have always loved the humor of dawn.  she is not angry in the

least at laura not answering her calls.  she just wants to meet her and

renew their love.  i wish all women were like dawn.  i have to smile

great big at this ["I . . . got married," Laura said, impulsively,

wondering why she had bothered to say it even as the words were coming

out of her mouth.        There was a stunned silence on the other end of

the line, as if Dawn were so flabbergasted she could not reply.  "You're

kidding.  You?  Who loves pussy like some people love air?"        "Not

to a guy," Laura said patiently.]  you are the only author that allows

the humor to just happen within the story and the interaction of her

characters.  with some of my angels i know i would react the same

hearing that line.  i just love these little moments in your stories.

you are capturing the little moments in life that really make life so

fun and worth living.  i mean great sex is wonderful but these little

moments add so much in and of themselves.  i sure love how uncomplicated

dawn is.  she wisely tells laura that though she is married she needs

the "breath of life" to keep everything fresh and alive.  i am just like

dawn as she easily adapts and is not catty when laura tells her that

they can't meet at her place and dawn says they can meet at her place

since her lover is back in vietnam.  i am easy going and will do what my

angel needs for us to meet and love and fuck.  i have to smile as i see

where this delicious fuck is going [Dawn complied, then teased Laura one

last time.  "Are you going to bring all that nasty stuff?"        "Why

don't we shoot for a purely normal evening, for a change?" Laura said

evenly.        "Shit, what fun is that?" Dawn cracked.  "Bring all of

it.  I can't wait."]  i am not the girl to be bringing the kink stuff

unless asked to bring it.  but once the kink items are out i will always

gladly let it be used on me or use it on you if you desire.

//  i am feeling for laura as she is stewing in her juices at work

thinking about her upcoming fuck with dawn.  being a techie i have

access to all the remote and hidden alcoves where our equipment is

housed.  sometimes i go to one of my hidden nests and pull my slacks

down or pull my blouse up and soon my fingers are stroking my pussy so

good as i let my tits out and massage and knead them and pull / twist my

nipples hard.  most have an area i can sit down in and stretch out and i

so love to work my cunt and tits expertly.  i take off my shoes so not

to scuff them and when push myself over the edge i just feel my heels

scarping and kicking the floor as my body jolts and jackknifes and often

fall to the floor as i thrash and clamp down so i won't scream out loud

too much.  i love leaving the room smelling essence before the ac sucks

it out.  i have to love the recollections of dawn's early encounters of

rough sex.  i was exposed very early to rough sex and i am so thankful.

i can remember the first time i felt a good, hard dildo sliding up my

cunt and i almost swooned and i came so fucking hard.  soon i had shafts

pumping my cunt and asshole so good and deep. i so reveled in feeling my

body being fucked so completely by my older lovers and teachers and then

teaching my other fellow young angels.  i can remember baby sitting and

when she came home with a friend they quickly seduced me and took my

willing flesh.  they sucked and finger fucked me to screaming, kicking

orgasms.  then they strapped themselves in and i almost gagged when they

sank their hard plastic cocks into my willing young flesh.  they fucked

me silly with their hips punching their dicks into my cunt and asshole

and just fucked me into groaning and eye rolling orgasms.  i so loved it

when the raked my back with their nails and pulled my hair as i cawed

and thrashed in ecstasy.

//  i so love dawn's body [She was a big, strapping girl, strong and

athletic, not at all large or ungainly or fat, but merely a gorgeous

physical specimen, rippling with natural muscle that her deeply

blue-black skin enhanced and glorified.]  i love sluts like this.

belissa and shari have this kind of healthy strong body made for hard

fucking.  strong builds with lean muscle and great tits and ass to rape

and pound.  i know that throbbing clit and aching nipples while i am day

dreaming about my angel i am going to fuck later that day.  one thing i

have always liked about your story arc is that it allows this aching and

longing to occur.  other stories are so short and short sighted that no

true emotion is allowed to develop in them.  here you take your time and

show your women burning for them women and the wait only makes the sweet

emotion all the stronger.  you know how to make the reader wait and

hunger like laura does for these wonderful fuck angels.  i know that i

am the spice that dawn wants from laura.  many of my angels over the

years have wanted and needed my loving to add the heat, spice and raw

lust that has been lacking from their regular mates.  i give them that

little shot they need to keep going.  if possible, i try and help and

encourage to take that heat back with them.  but some are like Hanh Phuc

Chu and are just gentle lovers and i give their lovers what they can't.

kind of like a public service i guess.

//  another thing i like about your story arch is it allows you to show

tendencies and likes of your women like here [Dawn, wearing the crisp

white shirt and tight white jeans Laura had long been familiar with

[Dawn was quite aware of the appeal of her deeply black skin against the

blinding whiteness of her shirt and pants, opened the door at Laura's

ring, and their eyes locked.]  you are the only author, and i have read

many, that does this.  other authors just keep their characters so bland

and boring.  also, it takes time and chapters to allow this to develop

and your will and skill has allowed this to happen in laura's universe

and i am so thankful.  i have also like the humor that you show in your

stories.  i guess you must have a sense of humor in real life to use it

in your story like here when laura mimics what dawn says when they meet

and dawn tells laura she looks so fucking good.  i so love wit in my

women and so love reading it.  it makes your women so alive and i dearly

wish other authors would let them women have wit and humor.  i love how

you detail the little moments where their is humor shown.  but what i

really like is showing that hunger for your woman that you feel deep in

your soul and deeper in your womb.  all the desire and build up to meet

your angel quickly goes where nature truly intends women to be [From

that instant on, the apartment house might have burned down around them

and they would not have paid the slightest attention.  Without speaking

another word, they came together in a devouring kiss, undressing each

other while with their open, colliding mouths each tried to swallow the

other.]  sigh, you so perfectly capture true love.  i so get aggressive

at moments like this if my lover is not herself aggressive.  i pull my

woman tight to my body as our arms twine and legs slide between each

other and our tongues duel in fierce love as they plunge deep down

cawing throats.  kissing you deeply and twining our tongues in tight

love as they slither and wrestle wetly.  i so love to ride your twat up

down my thigh as our breast mash and rub all over each other as we

quickly undress.  sucking and biting skin as it becomes exposed to my

hungering eyes, fingers and mouth.

//  i so know that divine moment of coming hungrily together in each

other's arms as your bodies press tight and limbs twine in renewed

love.  [Laura was too busy sucking her smooth black neck to care.  She

got most of the buttons on Dawn's white shirt unbuttoned before just

ripping it open and popping off the remaining two in desperation.]  i

have torn and had my clothes ripped and torn often over the years.  i

just get so fucking excited that i can't help myself.  i have to grope,

kiss and nip your flesh as it becomes exposed.  i so love to kiss your

face and shoulders all over and then ram my tongue down your cawing

throat before devouring your exposed skin.  sucking and gnawing on your

neck and then really suck deep into my mouth and bruising your neck as

you scream and thrash in pleasure.  like the cute detail of tripping

over discarded clothes on their way to the sofa.  getting there and

doing what i so love to do [Quickly, pushing Laura down onto the sofa,

Dawn wriggled out of the thin shoulder straps of her bra, freeing her

large, beautifully shaped, very black breasts.  Her big, slightly puffy

nipples were even blacker, pitch black, black as obsidian, and nearly as

shiny, and Laura's mouth was drawn to them, as ever, immediately.  She

had one thick, plum-like nipple in her mouth before Dawn could even skim

her panties down her thighs.        "Unhhh!" Dawn gasped.  "Oh

yes!"        "I love your body," Laura panted, sucking Dawn's nipples

voraciously, and filling her hands with the springy globes of Dawn's

breasts.]  i have always swooned over your details over the breast

play.  only you describe the breast, aureoles and nipples and make the

readers mouth water as laura works their tit meat so good.  i love how

you always detail your women using their hands on their women's breast.

others just don't give the details of this.  a few nights back i was

lying on my back on the sofa and had shari and her divine full tits in

my face.  she was lying on top of me and i had each full gourd in my

strong hands and i was pulping and pumping them as my mouth sucked her

nipples and pulled her tits taunt with my pulling head as she hissed and

gurgled and arched her back pushing her tit deeper into my mouth.  i

moved from tit to tit and gnawed her nipples and bit into them and

pulled taunt as she thrashed and moaned guttural and whimpered "oh what

you do to me".  i loved looking up and seeing her face slashed with the

divine pleasure that laura gives her lovers.

//  i really like this next part where you talk of laura and dawn

struggling with each other in a loving way.  i have never seen it so

clearly put when two women are squirming, kissing and groping and they

are almost mystically determining who will be on top and who will be the

submissive.  unless the roles are set this is so true and just cool to

read.  i like how you show them flowing around each other and just

coming to the realization that laura will be on top to begin with.  with

my angels that i am not so close to it is very interesting to me so see

how this dynamic plays out.  if they show any aggressiveness i get

submissive but if i sense they want to be submissive i go into aggressor

mode and take control and this does change and flow and a lot of times

you go from sub to dom in the same fuck.  i have never seen this

explained in erotica.  again just your mastery showing again.  i am

humbled because i would never show this in a story.  i would just have

it happen.  when in control this is how i like to love my sluts [But

right now Dawn was surrendering her breasts to Laura and deeply enjoying

the experience of being devoured, her head lolling back, her eyes

rolling up, and sweet, soft mewling sounds coming from her throat as

Laura tried to ingest her shiny wet black nipples.        "Do it

harder," she panted, her eyelids heavy, gnawing her full lower lip.

"Give me the Laura special.  Yes!  Bite them.  Yes!  Ungghh!"]  i always

want to do this to my women.  i want to make your thrash, eyes roll back

and hear you gurgle and scream out in pleasure and lust.  i so love to

make my women beg me to do it harder.  like teeth raking and biting

shari's nipples and gnawing her aureole's hard as she screamed and my

pulled face hard and deep into her bosom as i worked her tits with total

focus and love.

//  i like the observation that laura will give dawn a nice hard fuck

because she knows that dawn will be fucking her hard in return.  some

women like to only give and some receive but i am like laura in that i

love to give and take good hard fucking.  i so love it when i fuck dodie

or joann hard and then they in turn fuck my body hard and deep.  i love

how you show the thinking of your women and go into the dynamics of

their relationships.  other stories it is just straight fucking and

seduction.  only you show how relationships have so many relationships

and interactions.  you then show dawn stopping laura from going down on

her and asking for some trib action.  again you are the only author to

show your women communicating and taking the loving in directions that

were not initially planned.  you are the only author to show the

lovemaking flowing.  this is so true.  other stories just seem so

scripted where you show how dynamic loving is.  i have often been lead

down courses i didn't initially plan on.  i like how you show them

scooting together on the sofa to do an upright trib fuck with their legs

intertwined to get their pussies nice and tight and rubbing as your

mouths kiss hungrily and your tits mash and swish against each other.

[Laura kissed her aggressively and began to swirl her hips in a slow,

deliberate motion.  Dawn began to swirl back.  Their tongues danced and

stabbed, and their hands squeezed each other's breasts.  Laura, wanting

to feel more of Dawn's pussy against her own, reached down to spread her

labia with her fingers.  Dawn's mouth had slid down Laura's shoulder to

one of her breasts, which she was sucking hungrily.] this is how i love

to fuck.  our pussies stroking each other with our mouths kissing

hungrily with my hands working your tits and stroking your back,

shoulders and ribs.  i have always loved how you show this so clearly.

using your whole body to love your woman.

//  i am smiling as laura gasps she is coming soon and dawn tells her

not to so she can devour her sweet doves some more making laura gasp and

moan.  i love to work my woman as long as possible to give her maximum

pleasure.  i so adore siphoning a nipple deep into my mouth and deep

throat sucking and tongue lashing as i watch your face slashing and

grimacing up close as i work my magic.  you have always show perfectly

that ramping up that great hot sex usually produces [Their mouths met

again, and they were now pumping each other so hard and so fast that the

sofa moved on the hardwood floor and made a rocketing sound.  Finally,

sucking was no longer possible, real kissing either.  Both were

breathing too hard, pumping too hard, and they knew that an orgasm was

imminent.]  i have to chuckle at the scraping sofa.  i often fuck my

women hard enough to make the furniture sing or hear your back and ass

smacking the floor.  i am not sure i have read by another author the

squeaky sounds of bumping furniture.  i so love hammering my love slut

and hearing the bed hammering the wall or the sofa / chair legs scraping

and slamming the floor.  i love seeing my slut's body jolting as i slam

and grind my body into hers as she grunts and groans and the bed is

adding its own sweet voice to the lovemaking.  just hearing such sounds

makes me fuck you harder as it inspires me.  sigh, i am loving reading

laura urging dawn on to reach her orgasm as she pumps and grinds her

body in focused love.

//  as usual you show the end of a great fuck [The sofa's legs were

still rocketing off the hardwood floor, and the two of them were panting

and mewling and even grunting, mashing their bodies together, sucking

and biting each other's neck, sweating and squeezing and whinnying as

unbelievable hot spasms began to engulf them both at nearly the same

instant.        "Mnnnngggnnneee!" Laura cried out, wrenched by a sharp

lightning strike of hot coming, feeling Dawn's body leap in her arms at

almost the same moment.        "Ummnnggphhhh!" Dawn gurgled, not moaning

or crying out so much as completely slammed and crushed by a fierce

uprush of sexual pleasure too.]  you show the raw heat of a great fuck

and the sweet magic it brings.  you are the only author that shows women

mashing and rubbing their sweaty bodies all over each other as tongues

plunge in deep love.  other authors seem to have their women fucking

each other so far away from each other even though they are up close and

personal.  only you capture that closeness of great lesbian sex.  then

your sounds are simply so fucking divine.  other authors have them

scream words often always in all caps and then say they groan but you

give the actual sounds of a woman cawing, moaning or groaning.  it was

probably your ability to capture the sounds of devastating orgasms that

first caught my attention and intellect.  then you use words like

"slammed, crushed, fierce" and such that just adds so much.  we have our

definitions of those words and they add to our reveling in your glorious

stories.  i simply swoon when i hear my angels making such noises as

they jolt and thrash in my arms or beneath my slamming body.  i so love

to experience this in real life.  recently, i took camille up the

interstate to visit hillary and simonette.  simonette was in classes all

afternoon and had something to do that night so of course nature took

its natural course.  soon i was naked and trib fucking hillary face to

face as i pounded her mound and wallowed our bodies together.  our

mouths devoured each other as camille kiss and stroked our pumping

bodies.  soon hillary was coming violently trashing and exploding up

into my pressing body as she screamed and groaned gutturally.  soon i

joined her in a jackknifing orgasm that had me slamming her body hard

into the mattress as she swooned, moaned and drooled.  i rolled over and

took camille in my arms and slammed my tongue down her throat and twined

our limbs tight as we rocked and humped.  i kissed her silly and then

devoured her tits with hard sucks and pulping of tit meat.  i slide

between her open legs and feasted on soaking wet cunt meat and candy

stalk clit.  i so love working a sodden cunt and hearing all those

squishy sounds as our cunts filled the room with sweet musk.  i so swoon

in the same sounds you show chapter after chapter as camille thrashed

and cawed as she came violently as hillary joined us and sucked her

nipples fiercely and we watched camille simply die from cuming as her

body jolted and jackknifed and we pressed her down to continue our feast

as she went multiple and simply screamed pure love as she came so

fucking violently as her limbs went spastic and pounded the bed and us

in ecstasy.  my face and neck was soaked in cum as i licked my lips as i

watched the sisters roll into a sixty-nine and took the loving even

higher as i watched and i masturbated to a screaming, crippling orgasm

that i timed to camille's orgasm and then kept myself going as hillary

mounted her sister's face and soon came crushingly as i came again

gloriously with fingers pounding my pussy and the other hand swirling my

clit as i almost passed out as i came so fucking hard as i kicked and

stiffened and gurgled and let a out a few piercing screams of ecstasy.

//  i have to love how you show them wringing every gram of ecstasy from

their fuck [They clung to each other, whimpering and twitching as dual

orgasms shook their bodies and ripped helpless little cries out of their

constricted throats, until at last the sharpest shocks dissipated and

dispersed into long, aching tremors.  Still they clung to each other,

gasping, giggling softly.]  i so want to feel every hitch and shudder of

your body as it is pressed against mine and feel that sweet lassitude

beginning to fill your body.  i love how you show the post coital

cuddling as they continue to hold each other other as their orgasms

slowly become history and share each other's body warmth and cuddle.  i

have always loved dawn's gentle ways as she chucks laura's chin

playfully and quizzes her about makeeda.  she has no jealousy just like

me.  i so love to know about your other angels and heck, even about guys

if they really know how to fuck.  i love their their gentle time

together and then how laura gropes her ass as they now head to the

bedroom for some fun and loving.  i love to grope and fondle my women

whenever i can.  skin is made to be loved.  i am smiling as dawn starts

to tell laura about how her lover won't fuck her like she wants it.

hard and dirty.  i satisfy that need in several angels that can't get it

from their lovers.  it is amazing how many women and even men won't give

in to their women's needs and wants.  that is where i come into the

picture.  i so love to give to angel what she isn't getting at home.  i

so love to fuck them like they want and need it.  i have to smile at

dawn's description of a good nice hard fuck ["Like . . . hammer fucked,"

Dawn grinned.  "Like 'the tongs of hell,' as the preacher used to say,

when I was a kid.  So I remember it for weeks."]  what a beautiful way

to describe nice hard loving.  i again have to smirk at laura's sour

face with the description.  i preen and primp when my women tell me i am

such a fuck angel.  i have to love laura but simply shake my head at her

lack of kink factor.  i guess her going overboard in the past with karen

has made this natural part of her personality bury itself deep in her

subconscious.  i love the conflict but wish she would just give in and

partake of all the joys that good hard kink gives one.

// i like this next part because it really reminds me of me.  [Another

thing she shared with Dawn, Laura remembered, was some incredibly

exhausting sessions of sex, wherein each pushed the other to the very

limits of her stamina.  They had in the past often fucked until neither

could lift a finger.]  this is how i so live to fuck. to wring every

last ounce of ecstasy from all of our flesh.  i want to feel my body

torn apart by orgasm after orgasm and see your body experiencing the

same.  i so love it when joann and maria take turns eating me out and

making my body simply explode with ecstasy as they suck my cunt inside

out and they are finger fucking my cunt and asshole so good and if toys

are on the agenda i feel loving cocks plowing my fuck holes.  this

afternoon i was so in heaven as i was leaning back on the sofa as maria

was devouring my cunt with wild gusto and joann was on the back of the

sofa grinding her swollen wet cunt down into my devouring mouth and she

just groaned and growled as her cunt ground my mouth.  i gripped her ass

cheeks and mashed her cunt into my mouth and i sucked her clit down my

throat as i started smacking her ass hard and raking her back with nails

as her body just started to jam my mouth hard and she started screaming

and cursing in spanish as she came joyously and hot cum poured into my

mouth and down my cheeks, neck and down my tits.  i so love her sweet

essence pouring down my gulping throat.  she lazily slide down onto the

sofa and that freed me up to grip maria's hair and hump fuck her face as

it rocked back.  she was finger fucking me hard as my cunt squished and

her mouth lashed and sucked my clit until i was screaming and jolting my

ass up off the cushion as i felt divine spams ripping my soul apart with

fucking bliss as i jammed my cunt hard into maria's mouth as i held my

taunt body up off the cushion and let the spasm fully consume me and

then i sank to the cushions only to feel another crushing spasm rip my

body as i rose up again cursing and mewling as i pulled maria's face

into my cunt as she sucked and tongued lashed my exploding clit and felt

her fingers pounding my flowing cunt as i simply died and went multiple

as i felt spasm after spasm crippling my body and soul with bliss.  her

face was covered in cum by the time i collapsed in pure exhaustion of

satiated bliss.

//  i have always loved how you show those interludes of just basking

with your lover and just kissing and cuddling between hot fucking bouts

[Instead of letting her get away with this, Laura grabbed her delectable

naked body in both arms and wrestled her down onto the sheet.  What

began as a wrestling/pinching/tickling match quickly turned into a

deeply sensual kiss expressing all the depth of feeling they actually

had for each other, after a lengthy up and down relationship that had

included a brief but scorching period of 'true' love.  Laura kissed

Dawn's body from toes to forehead, as she had promised, lingering

especially over her long, sinuous, very black back from her shapely

sacrum to the nape of her neck.]  just getting close to your woman and

letting your souls bind as flesh slides and glides over each other and

tongues slide deep down moaning throats.  i so love to have our legs

twined and our arms pulling and stroking while tongues are flowing down

throats and faces are receiving little love kisses and love running your

fingers through her air.  this lets the body re-energize and get ready

for more heated fucking.  you now give us that negotiation that i so

love.  we have dawn ask about the toys and laura asking what she wants.

i love it that laura has enough toys for dawn to get to choose.  other

stories just have the dildo.  their is an infinite variety that you can

have.  we have quite a collection and so do most of our main angels.

gives us variety in our playing.  i love asking a lover what she wants

and then getting just the right toy and other implements of pleasure.

you are the only author, i have never seen another do it once, show

women going over a collection of toys and deciding together what they

will do with their play.  again i have to be thankful that you created a

universe where this happens and that you have kept the universe moving

forward so laura and her angels can know about, select and play with the

toys.  again, you actually created a real world that your women can live

in and actually breathe in and i so appreciate it.  others are stories

and this is about a special woman named laura and the sweet black angels

in her life.

//  i have always loved dawn's sense of humor that mirrors mine [Dawn

was gripped by a tight little shiver, as if Laura's words had scored

deep.  "You got that one right.  I think you better be nice to my little

rectum at first.  It hasn't had anything inside it since you were last

busy raping me."]  i am always acting like i "got the vapors"  when i am

about to love raped.  i  mock complain about how my pour mouth, cunt and

asshole were so shamelessly abused last time and poor, poor me.  my

lovers just smirk at me as they get ready to fuck me so fucking hard yet

again.  i am like dawn here as i love shake with need with the knowledge

that soon my cunt and asshole will be fucked so hard so soon.  i have to

smile at the humor as dawn and laura banter about how laura abuses her.

you are the only author that shows this gentle connection between

lovers.  other authors only try to capture the heat of sex and not the

soft times between lovers.  of course it was the hot fucking that

initially drew me in but then you really set the hook deep when i

discovered that this is an author who knows how to show hot sex so well

then added sweet true emotion on top of that.  i have been hooked ever

since.  i like how you show that dawn loves the rough hemp rope when she

is tied up.  that is the kind i like.  i want to feel those damn rough

fibers digging and torturing my flesh.  i want to feel those fibers

digging in when my tormentor hooks her fingers under the rope or pulling

on a knot and making them dig even deeper making my shake, curse and

writhe if all bound up to make it work my flesh deeper and harder.  i

can see that kink loving is coming.  yipee!!!  i am smiling goofily as

dawn requests that laura tie her tits up tight and feel free to bite her

hard since she wants her tits synched up hard.  yes, dawn is my kind of

woman.

//  i have to smirk at poor laura.  she so tries to deny her kink factor

and her lovers are continuously coming up with new ways to get their

kink.  i am smart (i think) but i seem to have little imagination for

ways to do things like you seem to know.  i have to smile as dawn comes

up with a more punishing way to tie her tits up.  me i simply look down

as they are tied up by my tormentors and i usually look confused as i

try to figure out where they are going until they suddenly get near the

end and they pull the ropes or other bindings tight and i hiss and groan

as they ropes dig into my flesh.  i so swoon as i feel my tits being bit

into or my arms / legs are immobilized and sometimes my neck is locked

into the bindings and i feel that delicious tension as they make my neck

go taunt and i feel the rough rope biting into my neck, tits and belly.

my archangels especially love it as i squirm around feeling that prickly

rope tormenting me and sometimes when the draw it down beside my mound

making it flair and all swollen as it digs into the sensitive sides of

my mound and that area where my thighs meet my pelvis.  i feel so

helpless and dirty.  i fucking love it!  i like reading laura asking if

it hurts.  i mean that is the purpose isn't it.  i love laura and her

innocent ways.  i love how she tries to overcome her squeamishness and

deliver the hammering fucks her women need.  i so believe giving my

whore exactly what they need as the scream, cry out and curse me as i

love abuse the writhing flesh.  i so love looking down and seeing

hillary and camille looking like this [In fact, simply looking at Dawn's

spectacular naked breasts made her horny, and all this focus on them was

making her even hornier.  She wanted to grab them and suck them fiercely

and push Dawn down on the mattress and fuck her till both of them came

in glorious eruptions of ecstasy, just as they had earlier done on the

sofa in the living room.  The harsh, bristly rope bit into the flesh of

Dawn's firm breast, making her black skin shine a little where it bulged

at the edges—Dawn had really cinched it tight—and making Dawn's

coal-black, slightly puffy nipple swell and gleam.  The center stub of

her nipple, thick and springy, pushed up hard from the swollen areola.]

i mean their nipples swell up so tight and high.  i will force a couple

fingers of my left hand under the rope and start jerking the bindings

hard as i make their tits shake and roll.  i will slap their nipples

hard while calling them whores and fucking niggers as they groan and

plead for me stop which only makes me slap their faces with resounding

smacks that make their heads rock to the sides and i grab their hair and

jerk their head all around with hard jerks then jerk to a sudden stop

and slap viciously again their crying faces and their tits and bellies

as they weep and moan.  i really like to hook my fingers under the rope

and jerk up hard lifting their bodies some and making the rope dig into

their poor flesh where i am jerking.  sigh, their cries for mercy as i

jerk them up and the tears they weep as i slap their worthless faces

hard and smack their strangled tits and whip their sopping wet cunts as

they weep and their bodies jerk in pain and need.  i so love watching

their running cunts instinctively humping the air and how hard their

nipples are as i bend down and suck hard before slapping their bulging

tits more while mock complaining that they are such black whores for

loving all the slapping and cursing.  i ask them if they are worthless

shits and they just shake their heads yes silently.  i ask them if they

need more punishment and they just whimper and i scream at them to

answer me and they whisper yes as my right hand again smacks their

crying faces so fucking hard.  i love how it just sounds so loud in the

room as they cry and cower.  of course their eyes are burning holes in

my soul as they look so intense and just make that hard eye contact as

they turn their face once more to me as i call them ugly names and smack

them again and pull their hair.  of course, the next time it will be me

looking up as my face is killing me and my tits are tortured as i scream

and writhe in pained ecstasy.

//  i am smiling as dawn explains to laura how to tie her breast up

tight and then whines when she sees laura thinking things over and not

seeing hot lust filling her eyes with desire to fuck dawn like she wants

and needs.  i love how you show being so coy as she works her charms and

slowly seduces laura to her ways.  she knows that laura is a slut and

deep, deep down wants to fuck dawn like a heated whore.  you show how

life flows and morphs with our desires while other stories just seem so

scripted.  you show hesitation and laura being demure (which makes me

pull my hair) and having to be seduced by her angel.  sometimes i want

things one way or maybe my angel wants me to really rough them up and i

have to balk.  i just like the give and take you show.  life is so

infinite and you are able to capture it in your universe.  i have loved

how you show your women total whores and sluts as they gleefully plunge

into great sex like here ["Oh, don't be silly," Laura said, taking the

end of the rope.  Inwardly, she shrugged.  If you want it, darling . . .

better me giving it to you than some weird stranger.  "Give me those

beautiful boobs and let me tie them so tight that you weep."

"Oooohhhh," Dawn smiled playfully, scooting closer to Laura on the

mattress, one amazing breast swaying, the other bobbing only slightly,

being already semi-tightly bound..  "Sounds like I might get more than I

bargained for."]  i am so like dawn when i know that good hard fucking

is coming my way.  i just jump up and down and love shake with need.  i

feel my cunt pour juice all down my thighs and on my belly if lying when

i am being tied up or handcuffed and my woman is cursing and abusing

me.  i so love to have my belly smacked and whipped and and then

slapping my twat making my hips launch off the bed and make my body

writhe and roll around.  i so love it when joann or dodie will roll body

roughly onto my back again and smack my cunt even harder for being so

disobedent i have always loved dawn and carmela for their mirth and love

of life.  they know that sex is the key to a very happy life.

//  i like how you show that women can have different perspectives on

the same situation [Laura clenched her teeth so that she wouldn't laugh

over how ridiculous they were both becoming.  But she knew Dawn didn't

view it that way at all.  She watched intently as Laura carefully and

patiently tied up her completely scrumptious naked breasts with the rope

until they were taut and bulging and swollen, just the way Dawn wanted

them, and more brutally entrapped and strangled than Laura had ever done

before, to anyone.  The extra coils of rope in the middle of each breast

seemed to bring extra discomfort as well as sexual excitement to Dawn.

She was actually panting and quivering a little by the time the last

knot was secured.]  when receiving i am always overly excited and ready

and sometimes i have my angel being like laura.  it is so cool you show

the difference in women.  i love teaching women how to let their inner

slut out.  i met a woman at work, katie, and we hit it off right away.

it didn't take me long to seduce her.  it was so cute seeing her fall

for me even though she thought she was totally straight.  i so loved

seeing her shock when she came so violently over and over.  i was riding

her trib style face to face and i whispered to her spank my ass.  she

hesitated and i begged her some more and the started spanking me softly

and i begged and jammed her twat harder.  i loved it as she got into it

and soon her hands were stinging from slapping my ass so hard.  soon she

was happy slapping my face and pulling my hair and giving me love

bites.  i could just sense her inner kink slut and i was so fucking

right.  after about a month i asked her if she was a bad slut for

punishing me so.  i smiled as she whimpered yes and i slapped her face

so hard she tumbled off the sofa and landed on the floor.  she looked up

at me with pure lust and need.  i ordered her on her knees and ripped

her clothes off and proceeded to spank and slap her for being so fucking

mean to me.  i so loved seeing her petite body shaking and mewling as i

pinched her little nipples and pulled them up taunt and then slapping

her face and twat.  i so loved teaching her right and taking her asshole

cherry with my big dick.  i so love new lesbian love sluts.

//  i so love this declaration of need and want ["Oh god, Laura, it's

just the way I imagined it.  I'm almost coming already."]  you have

always been very good at showing raw heat in your stories.  i love

seeing women in that wanton state where they are begging you to fuck you

hard.  just thinking about fucking always makes me so wet and hot for it

and i so love dawn for being just like me.  i also love dawn's sass.  i

am always talking trash to my rougher lovers knowing they are going to

fuck me even harder than i'm talking about.  i am so there as ["Answer

me, Laura," Dawn panted.  "Are you going to fuck me?  You better tie my

hands or I'll scratch you.  What will your honey think when she sees

scratch marks on your back or your shoulders?  And you better gag me.

I'm going to scream."        Unfortunately, Laura realized, Dawn was

right.  She would scratch, and she would scream.  It was all a part of

the potent fantasy they were acting out, the violation, the danger.

Screaming and struggling were almost mandatory, and Dawn was very good

at both, being young and strong and very willful.]  i have noticed about

the "straight" women we fuck.  a lot of them don't  clip their nails

close and keep the nice and smooth.  i recently went with dodie to

service such a slut and, geez, did i come back with scratches down my

back and all over my shoulders as she hung for dear life as my fingers

and cock plowed her flowing cunt.  i loved the pain and it only made my

slam my cock harder into her squirming body.  dodie and i looked like we

had been a cat fight.  i love to have my hands tied up and my arms

immobilized.  i love to grab a hold of you and when i can't the

frustration just makes my fucking orgasms so much stronger as my arms

thrash and jerk against my body it tied too or jerking in the air or

bucking my own body or my lovers if free to.  i can just feel my fingers

clawing the air when bound up as pure fucking bliss blasts my fingers

and makes them spasm and claw.

//  i love how you show laura getting aggressive with her lovers.  i can

give it to you anyway you want but when i go into dom mode this is how i

like to do it.  [Laura pushed her down onto her back, hovering over her,

growling.  "You cunt, yes I'm going to fuck you in your big, beautiful,

black ass.  And I'm going to gag you and have my way with you and fuck

you until you scream and beg me to stop."]  i want to get physical with

you.  i want to growl and curse you and if you like it physical give

that to you.  i want to give what i like to receive.  i want you to feel

my strength and my aggression.  i love to give you a curse and then

sting your ass, tits or face with a good hard slap.  what i really love

about your story is dawn's reaction.  other authors would just have

laura growl her threat and proceed.  you have dawn getting all mock

pissy about her ass being called large.  i love the character you give

your characters.  you just make the women sing and the story thrum with

passion and verve.  i so love sluts who show off their wares.  i am

smiling great big as dawn spreads her legs to show her sopping wet cunt

and lifts her pelvis to show the nether regions to her asshole.

thinking hard, i think you are the only author who has this subtly in

their stories.  i mean maybe other authors having them flaunt themselves

at the beginning of the story in an overt way but not this soft way.

they may have their character primp and strut in front of their

seduction target but not this flaunting of their beauty after the

initial love kill when you are stoking the fires of love.  i so love

humping my cunt in  my woman's face or softly massaging my tits and

making my nipples flare for her hungry gaze.  like the observation of

only saying dawn had a big ass to add spice.  if you have any rump i am

calling you a "big ass whore" and so on with any other body part you are

proud of.  if my woman likes dirty talk i find all kind of things as

seeds to add the hot spice.  i want to use you whole body to fuel my

dirty talk and want you to use my body to fuel your naughty talk.

//  i love dawn because of her fire like here ["You have a beautiful

ass," Laura said in a hushed tone of voice, stroking the bulging black

moons with her adoring fingers.  "I want to kiss it and lick it and bite

it."        "Promises, promises," Dawn hissed.        "But I also want

to taste this delicious black pussy," she murmured, sidling closer,

slipping between Dawn's yawning thighs.  "Will you come if I lick your

beautiful pussy?"        "I might, you bitch.  I told you, later."]  i

love how you allow your women to have personalities and totally

different qualities.  some are soft and some are hard and full of sass.

it is the variety that adds spice to life.  i so love fire.  recently,

frankie was acting all bitchy with dodie in front of us and dodie

smacked her face hard and grabbed her by the hair and threw her

squealing body on the carpet and began to roughly disrobe her and smack

and spank her.  after her ass was cherry red and all naked we all

grabbed and jerked her up onto the sofa and smacked her face and tits as

we kissed her deeply and super sucked her nipples.  we worked her upper

body as dodie feasted on her swollen, red cunt and sucked it inside out

while we kissed her and gave her hickeys and love bites.  she cried out

and cursed as she came gloriously her body ripped apart by horrendous

jackknifes and flips that we used our forearms to keep her in place as

we sucked, kissed and bite her making her going multiple as she died

from fucking bliss.  i am so there watching dawn's body writhe and

squirm in her bindings.  i love to see that strained thrashing and

settling between your thighs and seeing your running cunt like laura

here.  smelling your cunt filling my mind with pure happiness and seeing

your fuck juice all over your cunt and cunt hairs if not a shaver.  this

is what i live for [This close, the odor of Dawn's wildly aroused cunt

was almost overpowering, making Laura's head pulse and her body vibrate

with urgent lust.  With the fingers of her free hand she spread aside

the wiry black filaments of crotch hair and slithered her tongue

directly into the wet, warm, tangy center of Dawn's gaping pussy.

"Ohnnuungghh!" Dawn gave a strangled cry and quivered sharply.

"Unghhh!"]  i so love spreading your petals and driving my tongue deep

into your cunt and scooping out dollops of fresh, steamy cunt cream.  i

so love diving my tongue deep into your twat and feel your heat and

wetness as it wiggles through your petals and sucking your cunt lips

out.  gobbling your cunt so i can hear the types of sounds that only you

capture.  again you are the only author that shows how we don't always

yell whole words all the time or have one sound that we make over and

over.  a few have gotten me hot their first story but when i soon see

the same sounds or all caps words over and over again it simply loses

something.  only you capture how like no two fucks are the same no two

fucks produce the same types of vocalizations.  this is what first

hooked me with your stories.

//  sigh, i so love dining on tender red sopping red cunt meat.  other

authors usually just basically say that one woman is going down on the

other.  ho-hum.  this is what we do ["Mmmm, you like that, don't you,"

Laura purred, now licking the beautiful slit slowly from top to bottom,

then back to the top, pulling back Dawn's perfectly shaped clitoral hood

and tickling the exposed berry of her clit with the tip of her

tongue.        "Oh god . . . Laura!" Dawn panted.  Her head flopped back

on the mattress.  "Oh . . . unngghhhh . . . oh god!"]  i never know from

chapter to chapter what i will read in your stories.  i mean i know i

will find hot cunt gobbling but i never know how laura and her angels

will be wolfing down cunt meat.  like i said earlier other authors are

so damn bland will you know how to use killer words to make the sex so

damn hot like "insinuated; miniscule fold; festering pussy; teasing

tongue-stabs".  it is little wordings like this that make the sex so

much hotter.  you use words like these and then you make it so clear how

the woman receiving is feeling from all the hot loving be done to her

body.  they react like this ["Oh Laura . . . you're not fair!" Dawn

pleaded.  "You're such a mean bitch!  I need it!  Give it to me!"]  i

love to get this sassy talk or the pleading to continue or increase the

heat or when they have come hard and they are whimpering for me to back

off and i keep testing their body to see if i can coax just a little

more pleasure from their flesh.

//  i so love reading laura inserting her finger into dawn's tight

asshole.  i have loved how you tell of the woman receiving feels that

initial jolt as her rosebud is probed and then invaded.  i love how i

feel that penetration and how my body clenches and hisses and then sighs

as that finger(s) slide into my asshole.  laura uses her ever handy baby

oil.  i use that too but i love to get your cunt all wet and juicy and

get my fingers all sloppy with your cunt juices or slobbered over with

my spit and do it the natural way.  i so love worming fingers under your

buns or turning you on your side or belly.  getting up on my knees and

pulling an ass cheek back and letting you feel my fingers circling your

anus and rubbing up and down your ass crack and making you mewl for it

and seeing my lover hitch as i press in on your rosebud and then back

off making you die for it.  then slowly twisting my middle finger as i

drill into your sweet asshole and then sink my finger into your rectum

and oh so slowly start to pump your asshole and worm my finger around

giving you anal pleasure.  i have to smile as laura must back off

because dawn is so wrapped up she is about to cum.  i often have this

problem where my woman is going to cum on my fingers.  sometimes i back

off but i usually can't resist and start to pound your box or shit hole

and drive you to powerful wrenching screaming orgasms.  i so love to

take my bitches over the edge into paradise.  of course i love how you

show laura stoking dawn's fires by encouraging her verbally with soft

taunts and love murmuring to raise her internal fires.  again you are

the only author to have their women talk to each other during sex.

letting them communicate and ignite their wombs with even more desire

and letting the sweet bonds of love flow even stronger.  i really miss

in other stories that seem so dry and barren without this kind of

dialog.

//  you show the kink factor that can add so much spice to good hard sex

[Also, Dawn's breasts being so trussed and elongated made them look odd

but still wildly desirable.  Laura always wanted to suck them, but now,

in their grotesque state of entrapment, more so than ever.  Still

rubbing Dawn's wet pussy with her fingers, she raised her head up to the

swollen globes.        "I want to suck your nipples.  Look how they're

so shiny and swelling."        "Bite them!" Dawn panted.  "Please . . .

Laura . . . do it!"]  i have grown to like being tied like this.  i love

having my tits trussed up hard and ropes around my thighs, twat and

stomach pinching me hard and my arms bound to my thighs or behind me.  i

so love feeling the pain of the ropes pinching me and having them pulled

taunt.  funny thing is i don't like so much tying you up.  i kind of get

confused and frustrated because i keep screwing up the knots and

bindings.  i let someone do the tying if at all possible.  when over at

dodie's and frankie, maria and myself were very bad and our mistresses

needed to put us in our places.  of course we got the snarling, cursing

treatment.  dodie took maria and myself and joann took care of frankie.

dodie got out her velcro warps and rope and soon had my tits strangled

tight and my arms bound to my thighs and my twat hemmed in with loops

around my pelvis.  she then did maria the same way.  sigh.  i so loved

how she smacked and whipped us as we writhed and rolled arournd and she

would grab a trussed tit and smack our nipples hard making me hiss and

maria scream out.  for a change of pace being tied up is so fucking cool

and rad.  i just love how it digs into my flesh and how my restricted

movements somehow make everything more intense.  maybe because it makes

me think just how much i fucking wish i could kick and thrash around and

feeling the ropes and velcro preventing it just makes me want to

explode.  when my orgasms hit i just shriek and moan gutturally as i

feel my arms trying to tear my bindings apart as they tense and jerk as

i so desperately try to stretch as i so love to do.  my muscles just

bulge and i feel the rope digging in and it just makes me thrash and

jerk all the harder which makes my womb just explode and burn in my

belly making my scream, drool and eyes roll back in pure unadulterated

fucking bliss.  gods, i so love to come that hard every fucking time if

possible.

//  dawn is my kind of slut demanding the the rough treatment and laura

knows exactly what she wants [Of course Laura knew that by this Dawn

didn't really mean 'bite' them.  Nobody did.  It was a way of saying,

'Handle them roughly.'  Suck me, chew me, bite me, savage me, tear at my

beautiful trapped body as if you wanted to devour it like a wild beast

and make me come gloriously, shockingly, in the process.  Laura knew the

feeling.  She began to lick Dawn's beautiful, distended, swollen,

engorged black nipples teasingly.]  i so love getting a hold of a full

tit like maria or dodie's and massaging them roughly in my hands and

pumping them with hard squeezes.  taking my teeth and sawing my teeth

back and forth on them or putting my teeth together and running their

nipple roughly over my teeth back and forth dragging their stiff nipples

hard as they gurgle and moan.  then licking and gently sucking like

laura here and then ramping up again.  you show so clearly how the

variation is what drives  your women wild.  other authors are just so

boring in their straight ahead speed.  you add so much by showing the

communication i so love.  a woman fires her lover up by moaning and

telling her lover how good she is making her feel like dawn here.  it

just fires you up to love her with even more focus and drive to make her

tell you even more how much you are pleasuring her.  i am so happy to

find one author who shows this and not only once but over and over

again.  you capture the words and sounds so perfectly.  a few have half

way mastered one or the other but you have mastered both.  it sort of

surprises me that i only found one.

//  i see that we will have some ball gag action.  this is something

that i took the longest time to do.  i love giving head and doing deep

throat but the idea of having that damn ball in my mouth and leaving it

there for long minutes was something that just made me freak.  but i

decided to overcome.  i started out by doing it while masturbating and

left it in as long as i could before taking it off and slowly i mastered

my fears and inhibitions.  when i finally could get through my crushing

self pleasuring orgasms while keeping it in i knew i was ready when my

mistress needed to put one in my mouth.  i have to admire dawn for being

so ready so young.  she is suck a liberated and free slut that i so

totally love her.  she and carmela are just so me.  i have come to love

being like dawn here [Dawn writhed and tried to smile, knowing that

sweet relief, at the end of a short period of really rough fucking, was

about to occur.  She continued squirming while Laura quickly checked the

harness and made sure everything was secure and ready.

"Ummphnngg!" she grunted at Laura, as if to urge her on, to get Laura to

hurry up.]  i feel like such a whore when my master puts in on and

synchs it up tight and feel it pushing into the corners of my mouth and

my tongue is all pissed off being restricted.  i love it!  i do love how

a gag makes your grunts so guttural like you are able to capture

perfectly.  i am so happy that whatever you show you capture so well.

it makes the sex so much hotter and the orgasms so much more harrowing.

i am so like dawn in that rough sex makes you come so fucking hard.  i

wish all women realized that.

//  one thing that i think you have always done so well is capture the

moment of penetration so well.  you have blistering foreplay that leads

the women and reader to the point where they are fucking dying for it

and then you always deliver that special moment like [She crouched

between Dawn's sleek black thighs, guiding the large, ridged appendage

forward with the fingers of one hand, nestling the knobby head of it

between Dawn's tight buns.  Dawn had a very tight as well as fleshy ass,

and Laura had to use both hands to get the dildo into her.  But once

well-positioned, it slid in easily since she had lubricated the passage

moments earlier.        "Unngghpphhhgg!" Dawn groaned as the entire long

pole slid up into her rectum.        "Ohhhh, there we go . . ." Laura

purred to her, pushing it in with her hips slowly, seeing the water come

to Dawn's eyes.  "You are going to come so hard."]  i so love guiding my

love cock to your anus with my finger and edging my cock to your

sphincter and pushing my cock into your oh so sweet asshole.  i so love

feeling my woman's body judder and then as it relaxes starting to work

my cock deep into her shit hole and stroke in and out as i increase the

depth and power of my thrusts.  i so love grabbing a hold of my

archangels hips in spoon and working my hips as i start to plow my cock

so hard into their asshole as they moan and press against me.  soon i am

pile driving my cock into her sweet asshole as she moans and massage her

tits and kiss her back and shoulders.  pulling my cock out her wet

asshole and rolling her over and pushing her head down and moaning as i

watch my cock slide into her mouth as she sucks her ass of my cock and i

grip her head and start to pound my cock deep into her mouth.  i so

dearly love my sluts that can deep throat like myself.  i so love to

hold their heads tight and slide my dick down their throat and then

shove it all the way down her throat and hold her lips at the base as i

pump my hips and i feel her mashing her face down hard to take my dick

sliding up and down her windpipe.  then rolling her back over and

shoving my dick hard up her shit hole making her sag and moan

deliriously.

//  i love how you show how foreplay builds your woman up to a burning

fire and leaves her a raging need to come fucking hard.  dawn is already

at a fever pitch with the cock sliding up her bung hole.  i love to get

my women so fucking hot and wet by the time they take my cock their

pussies are flowing and their assholes are quivering waiting for my

cock.  you always take time to first set the situation and scene and the

develop the foreplay until we have the sweet final conflagration.  i so

love het position because i can just spear my cock so hard and deep into

your cunt and asshole.  i remember when we handcuffed hillary and

camille to the bed like dawn her with one on each bed post and we were

just slam fucking their squealing bodies as i heard the cuffs clank and

jerk as their arms spastically jerked and pulled hard on the cuffs.  i

was face to face with camille as i kissed her face and sucked her tits

and then as sank down onto her body and just rammed my prick deep into

first her ass and then her cunt and back and forth.  i loved how she

squealed as my cock impaled her and i pulled it from her creaming

asshole and got on one knee and lowered my pelvis down and made her

clean her ass off my cock as she sucked and hummed before slamming it up

her cunt with all my strength and slammed fucked her as i put my mouth

by her ear and whispered what a fucking whore, bitch and a worthless

nigger as i slammed my hips down into her cunt.  she kept whimpering "oh

baby, i love you so" and suddenly in mid declaration this animalistic

groan was ripped form deep in her throat and her body went into wild

spasms as it bucked and jerked up into my pile driving cock as i

suddenly heard screams and shrieks as simonette took hillary over the

edge.  i just kept slamming my cock into her cunt as her legs kicked in

the air over my hips as i sucked her neck into my teeth and sawed her

sweaty flesh as she just groaned and moaned so gutturally and came so

long and gloriously.  when i uncuffed her finally she kissed me so

deeply and sucked my tits so good before she sucked me off to several

pussy rending orgasms as i humped her face for all i was worth.

//  i so love pounding your body and feeling our bodies smack together

as my cock slides fully into your hot fuck hole.  fucking you het style

and grabbing the top of your shoulder to jam you down onto my cock and

sink it in all the way.  to fuck you with a steady hard rhythm that a

subtly change and thrusting from different angels to work your cunt and

asshole from all angles.  hearing those soft watery sounds of a cunt in

love and pleasure.  sensing that the end is near and ramping up my

fucking until i am slam fucking you if your are totally into it or just

ramping up if a gentler soul.  working your body hard and total focus to

deliver the kind of orgasms that only you show.  orgasms like this

["OOUMMPPFFGGHHH!  AUUMMMBBNNGGHH!  UNNGGHMMMPPHH!" Dawn groaned into

the ball gag, her lovely young glossy black body flipping and surging

and jumping off the mattress, churning and then shuddering wildly as

killing spasm after spasm ripped through her flesh.        Laura held

on.  Mostly she was concerned to keep the strap-on dildo embedded in

Dawn's body, if anything simply to give her something to push against

while she had this stupendous, wrenching climax.  When she grew certain,

from a glance and a finger touch, that it was still there, she stopped

thrusting and merely clutched the quivering, whimpering girl hard

against her own body, wanting Dawn to get the maximum physical as well

as emotional power out of this cataclysm.]  this is what i live to give

my women.  to hear and feel them come like this.  i want to watch and

feel if close against you all those heavenly spasms and jackknifes.  i

love to feel but also have some separation at times so i can see clearly

all the divine movements of your body being torn apart by fucking

bliss.  i love to look down and seeing your body bucking and jackknifing

and seeing your face torn apart by bliss at grimaces and your eyes bulge

and or roll back and those sweet sounds of women in bliss and love.  you

are the only author to truly capture this.  i have come to be so amazed

at how boring or the few that are good but use the same orgasm over and

over until they become bland.  oh well.  only you make each unique and

so fucking powerful.  i love how you end the fuck with laura sinking her

cock deep up dawn's asshole and impaling her as she comes gloriously and

dies on her rod.  i love to pull you tight and hear your moans and

whimpers up close as you come back from your travels to the gods.

//  this is how i want to leave my woman after i have fucked her.  i

want to see that i simply blasted your soul with ecstasy.  [Slowly, very

slowly, the spasms began to die away.  Dawn was still breathing in a

noisy, labored way through her nose, and without really releasing her

from her embrace, Laura managed to rip open the Velcro strap of the ball

gag and remove the wet ball from Dawn's mouth.  She could see little

streaks of tears in the outside corners of each of Dawn's eyes, the

aftermath of a truly horrific climax.  With the fingers of one hand she

brushed aside the strings of slobber that had escaped Dawn's mouth along

with the gag.]  you have always been able to capture truly great

orgasms.  for some reason most other authors really only make it seem

like they come without the unique dynamics that make each orgasm so

wonderful.  they just seem so bland.  one other author makes the orgasms

special that unfortunately came to seem the same after a while.  only

you take the time and has the memory and imagination to make each orgasm

seem so horrifically supreme.  orgasms are supposed to tear your body

apart with bliss.  of course, they are not always that strong but you

even capture that.  you now give me that sweet communication that i

like.  laura whispers to dawn how wonderful her orgasm looked and dawn

is her sassy self barking about being released from her bindings.  i

have always adored how you make each woman unique.  some are sassy, some

are frosty seeming at first and some are sweet and shy but all are

unique as individuals.  that makes the sex so much more supreme.

//  when you have been giving your lover the rough loving it is nice to

bring her down like so [She untied the ropes, freeing Dawn's hand,

kissing the welts the bristly hemp had made.  Dawn rubbed her wrists

while Laura then untied the coils of rope from her magnificent breasts.

The ropes left marks in Dawn's incomparable black skin, but the shape of

her gorgeous full breasts quickly returned, now that they were free of

restraint.  Her large, deeply black nipples gleamed.  Looking at them,

giving them this close attention, again aroused Laura's lust, but she

knew they must be a little sore and hypersensitive at this moment from

having been so lovingly abused during Dawn's recent excruciating visit

to paradise.        Nevertheless, Laura cupped the wonderful globes

tenderly in her palms.  "I want to kiss them some more," she

confessed.]  i so love to take you in my arms and kiss and lick your

sore spots and whisper how much i love you and cuddle while we bask in

our love for each other.  i so love to kiss the rope lines on your body

and kiss and soothe your face, tits and booty that i had been smacking

and whipping earlier.  this cuddling truly allows you to bind with your

lover.  i know i feel so much closer when my bitch mistress lover is

kissing and comforting the body she has just been love abusing.  i just

want to stretch out and purr as they coo and worship me.

//  it is so true how good hard fucking can make you hungry and very

thirsty.  they want to fuck heatedly again but sometimes the body simply

growls at you to get some food and drink in me now!  I love how the

chapter ends with sweet promises of sweet fucking ["Good," Dawn hopped

off the bed, her glorious, wildly sexy nakedness again giving Laura a

thrilling fit of hopeless lechery.  "There's a Chinese restaurant only

two blocks from here.  Get dressed, we can walk there."  She bent close

to Laura on the bed and kissed her.  "Then back here for round

two."        "And three?" Laura smiled.        "And four.  Come on,

now.  I'm hungry."]

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Chapter 308:

//  i love how this chapter starts out.  it focuses on something that

only you capture.  this only works because only you have created a

universe that flows with time.  a few other authors have created a

universe but everything seems so forced in their universe; i.e. boring.

you show women coming into laura's life and like it happens so much at

first it is small.  with this new delicious bonnie we have a woman who

it seems still only sees laura as a customer at the eatery she works

at.  this is how love so often starts.  small.  i so love looking at

women and seeing if my gaydar pings at all.  i so long to gaze at their

faces and wonder if they are soon to be a hot lover.  gazing with lust

(hidden at first of course if necessary) at their breast, hips, ass and

mound if clothes are right.  only with this universe you have created do

you have the time to let things setup.  you have taken chapters between

first appearance and seduction.  i sure hope we don't have to wait that

long here.  i like how you make clear that bonnie doesn't see anything

yet in laura.  she is friendly and this immediately gives laura hope

until she sees that she is friendly with others.  i have had that happen

many times over the years.  i so hope for the quick love kill and then

see that she is just friendly with everyone.  i like how you show that a

lot of girls have that "girl next door" charm.  in other stories you

either never learn anything about their looks or their drop dead

gorgeous.  i love women's faces and breast but who can resist such an

ass [had an ass shaped very much like Makeeda's: not a hard, high,

compact bubble ass like Jane's or Dee Dee's, but more like Dawn's and

Makeeda's, a fuller version, still a beautiful bubble ass but a

swelling, curved, opulent, though not at all blubbery, rump.  You wanted

to dig your fingers into its resilience.  Laura, hopelessly oral, wanted

to kiss each round black moon for an eternity.]  i remember when we

first met shari her tits were divine but it was her big, firm ass that i

fell in love with.  i'm smiling thinking recently, we were on her sofa

naked and she was sitting on my lap as her cunt rode my stomach and we

were kissing deeply as i dug my fingers roughly up and down her back

making her groan deeply in my mouth.  i suddenly started smacking her

ass with hard slaps as she squealed in my mouth and her body lurched

into mine.  i broke our kiss and pushed her back and gripped a tit and

made her nipple swell and then slapped it hard repeatedly and then her

other nipple and then her ass with hard quick smacks as i called her a

fucking whore and nigger.  i toppled her on the sofa on her stomach and

got on my knees on the floor and then proceeded to whip her ass with my

hard smacking hands as she whimpered and gurgled as i kept asking her if

she was a whore and slut.  she kept whimpering yes.  after punishing her

good i got up on the sofa between her legs and spread those divine buns

and slithered my tongue deep into her asshole as i slipped two fingers

into her wet cunt and fucked her hard as i raked the front of her cunt

wall and worked her shit hole with my tongue and other fingers.  i loved

hearing her cry out in deep pleasure as her cunt exploded on my fingers

and her sphincter pulsed and gripped the three fingers i had worming and

pumping her asshole so fucking good as i gritted my teeth pistoning my

fingers hard and deep.

//  i am smiling as laura feels a little guilty falling for a guileless

angel.  she girl is one of those type that is simply friendly and just

makes you fall for her.  i fall for such women all the time and try and

get as many as possible as i can into my bed.  time and other angels is

what holds me back.  sigh, to be a billionaire and have all the time and

money to seduce all the women we possibly could.  have to smirk when

laura first sees that bonnie lingers her finger contact with all persons

when giving back change.  i am always judging your tactile contact and

how long and firm.  i love gauging that and eye contact and trying to

get a feel of my chances.  while trying to size up a new angel i am

always happy to get a call, text or email from a former angel like

arthell here.  i always feel my heart pitter patter and cunt pulse with

want when i hear from one of my honeys.  you now get show something that

no other author gets to show.  we see that arthell has not been in

laura's life for about four months.  other one shot stories of course

can't show this and the few other stories of multiple chapters simply

don't show this flow of life.  they focus only on bringing new women on

stage to fuck.  that is great in it's way but it is so nice to read how

life really is.  we have our main angels that we focus on but have other

women that we seduce or meet and fuck and they can easily slip from you

life and bed when other pressures intervene.  like how you show here,

with laura at first trying not to overwhelm arthell with new emotions.

i like you showing that.  that is something i am very aware of and know

to let her adjust and make sure she knows that we are lovers but i

already have archangels and let me show you a wonderful world of sex and

love.  then in trying to go slow with her newbie, laura's life moves on

with sara and her split with sara and then makeeda becoming her new main

love.  it happens so easily, you mean to call and you don't and then

mean to do it tomorrow.  then you don't and soon she starts to fade from

your conscious.  she goes from up front to the rear and then she is out

of your life.  then if she comes back in you so feel that love returning

and you simply must have her in your life.  i just feel my cunt

quivering and nipples tingling when an angel reenters my life.

//  you now give me that delicious dialog that i crave and only you give

me.  i feel myself feeling so alive when i verbally joust with a angel

on the phone.  i love it when a woman tries to get me jealous and i

wittily respond that i am not really jealous and i miss and want you.  i

so love the back and forth like you show here ["My Cynthia," Arthell

charged ahead, "has forbidden me to call you, but I got so horny

thinking about you that I had to call you anyway."        "Oooh, you

better make sure she doesn't find out," Laura teased her.  "She might

cut you off."        "Maybe you'd be surprised to know," Arthell said

smugly, "that she can't get enough of this beautiful body, as you just

called it.  She doesn't want to share, but believe me, she kind of wears

me out.  I need a change.  I need some Laura."]  i just feel my cunt

hungering and my heart beating with love and want.  to get back at them

i often start whispering to her how i am going to suck her clit down my

throat and finger fuck her so fucking good.  how my cock is going to

pound her twat and asshole if so inclined.  i usually get them breathing

heavy and begging to see my yesterday.  i love it when i can turn the

tables on them.  i so know how to talk trashy and dirty.  you really are

the only author to have lines of dialog.  other stories it is so

sparse.  i guess in the harem story line we have dialog but it is so

scripted and hollywood.  their is never in real wit or any tension

between the women like you captured so many times over the years.  i am

fist pumping seeing that arthell has taken a female lover.  she has

discovered real love and i so hope she never goes back men except for

some good sport fucking.  i am giddy thinking of these two women, one

black and one white, fucking themselves raw.  it is so beautiful to look

down and see a woman of color devouring your cunt or her body lurching

as my cock spears into her cunt or asshole.  i so swoon when i'm

slamming a large dick up a latina or black woman's asshole and then

rolling back and guiding her head down my torso and slipping my cock

into her mouth as she sucks her ass off my cock as she moans and sighs

and i grip her head and slide my dick down her throat and see her lips

around the base of my shaft as i rabbit fuck her throat and see her dark

skin bulging in her neck as my cock slides so deep into her gullet.

//  this is how i feel about an angel that has my attention [It was

true, she did need some Arthell.  It took only this brief conversation

for her to see this sweet girl naked in her mind's eye, the lovely long

Arthell, all various shades of dark brown, ready to be kissed (Arthell

loved kissing) and licked and stroked and sucked and eaten alive, which

Laura was especially adept at doing.  Ready to whimper and cry 'Oh

fuck!' as she came in Laura's arms.  This would take her mind off that

wonderful, tempting little Bonnie in the alley sandwich shop, and off

Tonya and Ty, who were now subtly competing for her attentions, and off

her joy, her heaven, her own Cynthia, that is, Makeeda, who was blithely

continuing with her career in L.A. while Laura was as usual fucking like

a lecherous bunny at home.]  i immediately review in my mind's eye all

the things i so love about your body like laura here.  i have always

loved how you have laura detail what it is exactly she loves about her

woman.  you make them so alive unlike other authors who keep things so

bland.  i l like it when we see that laura is thinking of multiple women

she desires to fuck hotly.  i so love thinking about women and how i am

going to fuck them.  i have to smirk to myself when a woman whom i had

to work to get into my bed is now like arthell here.  she is begging

sometimes demanding that we meet as soon as possible like yesterday.  i

so love putting a woman in tune with her true inner slut.  i like how

you show the unique qualities of arthell.  you work so hard to make your

women unique and so lovely.  these women are alive and so vital.

//  thinking of arthell coming back into laura's life reminds me of

denice.  i met her through the classic add "bi-curious" add in the local

what's happening paper.  a stay at home mother of two with a husband

flyboy.  she is a brunette with a nice figure and auburn hair.  she got

her sister to set the kids and we got together and we wound up fucking

like crazed minks.  i could tell she was so fucking stunned when i

sucked her cunt inside out and finger fucked her into oblivion.  i made

her cum and cum and made them last so long she was totally overwhelmed.

we fucked a  few times and then drifted apart.  i meant to call but

didn't and she didn't me.  then about two weeks ago she called and told

me she had been busy (fucking her female neighbor) but wanted to see

me.  i told her i had plans to go see shari and cindy but she could come

along if she wanted.  it was so cute hearing her nervous voice and doubt

but i soothed her and bucked her confidence up.  shari and cindy were

stunned when i walked with anohter unannounced quest.  they quickly

greeted her and i smirked when cindy cupped the back of her head and

brought their mouths together hungrily.  denice swooned as they quickly

stripped her as they drug her to the bedroom.  sigh, i masturbated as

they took turns eating her cunt to ruin as she shrieked and jackknifed

all over the bed.  then the strap-ons came out and she watched us wide

eyed as three dicks surrounded her.  she got on her knees and began to

give us hot, wet sloppy head with spit drooling off our cocks and down

her chest.  i got on my back and she straddled me and rode my cock

cowgirl style until cindy pressed her down and she looked at me with

wide eyes as she knew what was going to happen.  i loved how her face as

it sort of froze and she keened as cindy's dick slide fully up her tight

asshole.  soon her body was jolting with our dicks pummeling her fuck

holes.  then cindy pulled out and kneed over to our heads.  denice

looked confused and then shocked as cindy gripped her head and pressed

her lips against her glistening ass dipped cock.  shari then punched her

cock hard into her asshole making denice cry out and cindy slipped her

dick into her mouth.  gods, i so loved how at first she grimaced but

soon her mouth was sucking that cock hard and her head rotating on the

shaft.  then shari stuffed her cock into her mouth as cindy again fucked

her shit hole.  we kept changing positions and i loved straddling her

hips as i got up over her and slammed my dick into her asshole and then

pulled it out and slammed it in and out gripping the base with one hand

to spear her asshole repeatedly as she grunted and moaned.  she came

three times as we fucked her three fuck holes for all we were worth.  i

so loved seeing cindy and shari's black flesh mingling with ours as we

fucked through the night.  i am still smiling as denice looked at me

with fright and lust as she watched cindy sink her fist up my asshole

and shari fisted my cunt and i died as i undulated back and forth on

their fists and died screaming in fucking bliss.  since then i have

fisted denice in her bed.  soon her asshole will know my fist.  the next

morning she fisted my poor asshole.  i normally like to rest my poor

sphincter but i grimaced through the pain to let my newbie fuck my

asshole with her love fist.  she knows that soon she must now give me

her sweet shit hole.  and anyways, the pleasure was soon pouring from my

ruined asshole making me swoon in fucking pleasure.  i gagged as she got

into it and slide it so fucking deep into my asshole and sucked my clit

with vicious sucks as i pulled my nipples taunt and twirled them hard in

spit covered fingers.  i am smiling great big hearing in my mind shari

and cindy egging her on to slide her fist deep up my colon as she

twisted it and and fucked my shit hole so fucking good.  i just had to

rise up on the balls of my feet and hump her face desperately as

horrendous detonations ripped my body apart with pure fucking bliss.  i

so love to hump hard when a spasm rips my womb and hold my belly taunt

as i feel pure nirvana blasting my soul apart with ecstasy.

//  another thing your story line allows and you take full advantage of

is to show how your feelings for your women can be so different.  other

stories are all the same seeming.  simple seduction and then that is it

or the few multiple chapter stories women come in and out the story but

it is just sex (nothing wrong with that) but no character development.

all the women are basically the same and react the same (wild lust -

nothing wrong with that) but it just makes them story about fucking

(nothing wrong with that) but it is not how women are with it each other

in life.  we feel emotions as well as lust for our lovers.  you show

that here showing how with dawn they fell on each other like starving

wolves.  dawn is aggressive like me and this is how to greet me.  but

arthell is much more like maria and she would greet you more gently [But

seeing Arthell, though it was equally thrilling, was totally different.

The girl was positively angelic in a baggy white cable-knit sweater that

set off her rich, smooth brown skin to perfection.  Her black eyes

sparkled and her fantastic mouth, which Laura had always craved to rape

and ravish, curved upward in a delighted smile.  Her firm young breasts

pushed out under the bulky sweater, and her delectable bottom swelled

under her black pants as she turned to shut the door behind Laura.]  you

show how arthell is a more gentle soul but still her soul hungers to

fuck like a whore.  you then describe her body so lovingly.  i so love

looking into your eyes and seeing them sparkle with life and

intelligence.  love reading about her clothing which other authors never

tell me.  i love your clothes because i know soon they will be coming

off.  then you tell me of her physical charms that make me soon fall in

love for her.  your word pictures are so vivid and loving and make me

hunger to fuck her hard and deep.

//  you now give me that dialog i so love.  this is women being coy,

especially arthell, and witty.  i love how arthell is delaying their

coming together and teasing laura about not getting enough chocolate

knowing that laura is a connoisseur of chocolate.  i love laura's

thoughts about her eating habits [If only you knew, darling, Laura

thought.  The other day I had my dark chocolate, and today it's time for

my milk chocolate.]  i love wit and the turn of a word and you are the

only writer has the ability to do this.  when a woman delays like here

it simply fires up my soul [But Arthell—and this was where she differed

drastically from Dawn—not only liked to play coy.  She was coy.  She

slipped out of Laura's grasp.  "Now slow down," she laughed fetchingly.

"We've got all evening.  You don't have to be jumping all over me the

minute you walk in."]  this sass is so alluring and fills me with the

desire to fuck you so long, hard and deep.  i will make you come so hard

and repeatedly for teasing me so.  i guess that is why i am always being

teased so much.  i am so there as laura shows her curiosity about

arthell and her new white lover.  i am so happy to see laura like this.

in the past she used to get so jealous needlessly.  now she wants to

know all the details and lets any jealous thoughts being soothed and

overwhelmed with sweet desire.  i am so happy when a newbie spreads her

wings and takes other lovers.  it makes me so hot and horny.  i want to

even here about males fucking you.  camille will tell me about some

black studs at her college.  i was just setting in her bed with hillary

as we looked with lidded eyes as she described their power and how they

slammed their cocks into her body and how they beat her face and tits

with their cocks and how good it felt as they fucked her three fuck

holes and she sucked their cocks covered in her cunt and ass and how she

took their cocks down her throat and felt their cum shooting down her

throat and their cocks spurting hot semen into her cunt and asshole.

she is begging me to join her for some sport fucking and i know i will

have to partake of the male black cock very, very soon.  we went wild

after her stories and fucked each other hungrily and simonette and judy

came in later and joined us and we fucked the whole night through and

shared our willing flesh over and over.

//  i like how laura immediately bucks up arthell when she complains

about her skinny legs.  no one is perfect and one simply looks at a

person and see her best points an soon everything is beautiful about her

and you want to consume every square centimeter of her body.  i am so

happy that arthell wore her dress and that cynthia was so open with her

lust.  it brought them together.  sweet love was born through hot lust.

it was cute arthell apologizing for men liking her body.  that is so

innocent.  i may not have use for men most of the time but it is always

thrilling to be lusted after.  laura is so right ["Don't apologize to me

because people of both sexes want to fuck you," Laura murmured, with a

deep, meaningful glance.]  take things and make them positive.  i have

always loved that about laura.  i like how you show cynthia taking

advantage of her car breaking down and insisting that they use triple-a

instead of arthell changing it.  i like a girl that can do such simple

tasks.  i love how cynthia made sure the service is used thus "forcing"

arthell to drive her back to her place.  i mean cynthia knew that her

chances of success would have gone down considerably if she didn't get

arthell to use the service.  i mean arthell may have been feeling like

"hot jelly" on the inside but she may still have denied herself new love

if cynthia had not worked her wiles.  i love how you show that arthell

was feeling her womb quiver and yet she still felt hesitancy on her

part.  how cynthia worked her charms to get arthell back to her flat

where she could press her advantage.  she knew that getting her angel

back to her love nest made her chances go way up [Arthell shook her

head.  "She wouldn't let me.  Said it would be criminal to scuff up my

beautiful knees on the hard old asphalt.  Isn't that cute?  So, we

called Triple A, then went back to her place.  She was very sweet.  She

said she knew I might not be gay, but she wanted to do me.  She hoped it

wouldn't spook me, or drive me away."]  arthell had experienced that

burning eye contact that tells you so much.  that a woman wants to eat

you alive.  i love how you show real life situation unfolding and how to

work your charms to get your woman.  you show the nuances of life and

how to be subtle and i so love it.  most authors are always using a club

and you show how real life is full of colors and shades.  it is this

married with blistering sex that so captivates me with your stories.

//  simonette told me how she had worked her magic this semester on a

young innocent angel.  an indian girl in her glass, nidhi is her love

angel's name.  she had been working on her with her charms.  the girl

had confessed to her that her boyfriends had left her cold for some

reason.  of course we knew why and knew we must educate her.  she is

dark brown skinned that we both love.  she has long black hair and dark

black eyes.  she wears saris a lot and has that cute british accent.

she is shy and very well mannered.  simonette knew she was smitten but

she had to fight to overcome her senseless defenses.  she didn't want to

spook her but i had trained her that her continuing to be "friends" was

all you needed to know.  about half way through the semester she finally

seduced her and ravished her within an inch of her life.  they have been

fucking like rabbits but she was simply not wanting to do threesomes or

more.  the girl wants to get into computer security so we talked about

it and i invited them to come to the central office after hours on a

saturday.  it is quiet and dark and no one comes up to our server floor

and i have control of all the security.  i let them in and set all the

locks and turned all the access codes to manual override entry.  we were

totally safe.  we showed her all the servers and appliances and i took

her into the main room and then turned the overhead lights off to let

her see how pretty the glowing and blinking lights were.  i watched as

simonette moved and took her in her arms and began kissing her face

gently.  i noticed nidhi weakly pushing back moaning that i was there.

so i moved in behind her and pulled hair to the side and began to kiss

and nibble her neck while murmuring how beautiful she was.  her sari had

open areas along her ribs and i moved my hands in and started to stroke

her warm flesh with strong strokes along her ribs and down to her hips.

i smiled feeling her quiver and the little jolts now hitting her body.

i watched as simonette wormed her tongue deep into nidhi's mouth and i

felt that moment when she gave in.  her body just juddered and sagged

and started moaning deep in her chest and whining when simontte broke

her kiss for air before plunging her tongue back down her throat.  we

have a small couch along one wall and we gently moved her to there and

sat her down.  gods, she is so fucking beautiful as we quickly stripped

her and ourselves.  simonette settled on the floor and dived her face

into her mound and started to gobble her cunt with gusto and quickly had

two fingers pumping and raking her front vaginal walls.  i was on the

couch beside her slamming my tongue down her throat and inhaling her

nipples with my patented deep throat sucks and little spittle build up

and then clamping onto her stippled aureole and and sucking hard while

swirling my tongue around her nipple will pumping her c-cup tits with

harder and harder massages.  i loved watching her body tense and jolt

and finally a scream tore her throat apart as wild jackknifes tore her

soul apart.  i pressed her down into the sofa with one arm and kissed

her deeply while simonette pounded her cunt hard with three raking

fingers and i could hear her sodden cunt squishing wetly.  she bucked

and thrashed and finally she started to come down and i started to suck

on her nipple long and hard while pulling my head back and pulling her

tit taunt and so slowly letting the nipple slide through my wet lips and

letting my teeth rake her swollen nipple until it popped out my mouth

and then i dived on her other tit and did the same to that nipple and

repeated continuously making her mewl and drool until her cunt was ready

and simonette ramped up again and sucked and finger fucked her to

another crippling, thrashing orgasm that had her legs kicking and her

heels pounding the tiled floor.  i milked her tits so hard and good

while sucking her nipples deeply making her whimper and talk in hindi as

she basked in nirvana.  then i got to eat her sodden cunt to a glorious

orgasm before we rode our cunts on her face as she took turns sucking us

off lying back on the sofa and down on the floor devouring our sodden

cunts on the edge of the sofa for the next couple of hours with us

fucking her with our fingers and some dildos simonette brought in a

carry bag.  i loved it when she was humping my thigh and simonette

pushed her down and pushed a butt plug up her asshole and fucked her

hard as she cried out and gibbered in english and hindi until my thigh

was covered in cunt cream and she collapsed on me and whimpered and

groaned as her body was consumed with another orgasm that rippled her

flesh and made her stiffen and hiss out and then undulate with more

spasms of fucking bliss.  our tongues twined so tight in new love.  she

was once so shy and now i have watched simonette, hillary and camille

pounding all three fuck holes with large dicks and making her do atm

with her begging for it and banging all her holes in turn and last time

i was with them she did double vaginal as her cunt was stretched tight

and she begged for it like a whore.  i love seeing women embrace their

true selves.

//  i like laura's radar eyes as she is trying to figure out if arthell

is wearing a bra or not.  i am always observing such things.  i love

observing your whole body.  i just want to know.  adds spice to the

game.  i then really like discovering that cynthia has big full boobs.

i love all size breast for different reasons, but nice full tits have a

special allure all their own.  i have always enjoyed my full rack and

playing with my tits when i masturbate.  i love to milk and pulp my

tits.  sucking on my nipples and slapping my tits and especially my

aureole and nipples nice and hard.  it gets me so hot for penetration

and then adding so much during my fucking my cunt and asshole and then

working after my orgasm to draw out my pleasure.  i so love devouring

marie, dodie, shari, or other's nice big tits.  i just half lie on them

and suck and pulp their tits as i look at their faces and how it slashes

and grimaces as i work my magic on them.  i love the dialog you have

here.  lines of it that other authors never give.  flirtation and desire

just flows in their words and we see their love just building and

building.  i like see arthell being so much more open and wanton in her

actions.  she knows her telling laura about cynthia is setting laura's

panties on fire.  i so love your dialog ["What's to tell?  She went down

on me.  I went down on her.  God, we fucked the rest of the afternoon.

I think I had about five or six orgasms, and she had about twelve.

She's like you, she can come and come."        "Oh god, Arthell, I think

I'll die if you don't let me kiss you," Laura said, feeling her pulse

rage.        A soft, low, guttural laugh escaped from Arthell's throat.

"I love it when you get all hot and bothered like this.  I feel like

you're going to tear off my clothes or something."]  i so fucking love

sass and i would be love raping arthell within an inch of her life with

such sass and teasing.  i just love how you allow your women to have

such dialog.  it makes your stories so vital and hot.

//  i love how you show that all this verbal foreplay and banter sets

one's soul on fire and ignites your pussy with fire and lust [Laura

finally put a stop to all this coy delaying by crushing Arthell's mouth

with her own.  She was so close to the girl on the sofa by now that just

moving forward an inch or so was enough to back Arthell into the corner,

and she pushed her lips into Arthell's big, thick, transcendently

sensual lips aggressively.  Arthell did not resist and opened her mouth

easily to Laura's hungry assault.        And it was at least as heavenly

as Laura had anticipated.  Both of them loved to kiss, and they now

spent about fifteen minutes doing it.  Their tongues coiled wetly and

Laura sucked Arthell's thick lips and nipped them playfully, hungrily,

with her teeth.  She got one hand under Arthell's sweater, onto her warm

back, and dug her fingers urgently into the smooth flesh.]  i so love

taking my angel's face in my hands and bringing our mouths together

hungrily as our arms bring each other close and our hands grip hair and

shoulders to anchor ourselves as our tongues duel in hot love.  i love

how you tell us they spend fifteen minutes kissing.  i easily can kiss

this long.  i so love to wrestle wetly with you tongue and suck on it.

suck your lips out and gnawing on them and running my tongue along the

inside of your lips and along your gums and teeth.  feeling your tongue

spearing down my throat and it tracing my mouth and you sucking and

pulling my lips taunt.  as we slowly disrobe each other and stroke and

then begin to kiss and nibble the slowly exposed flesh.  i love it that

arthell says fuck all the time.  i love to say all the nasty words and

my women know to give it to me.  to talk like whores and sluts.  i love

it that you actually have dialog in your stories that allow this hot

dynamic to be shown.  then i have to smile when arthell digs to see if

laura and amber did it.  i would be telling her all the hot details to

make her even wetter.  sigh, i have to smile at laura's half answer.

she is just more demure than me.  i love to talk about sex and go into

details about how i fuck other women.  i feel my belly lurch when i tell

her the hot details and i see her eyes glaze over, her breathing hitch

up and she gets those little tremors of rising want and need.

//  i love it when my woman sees my want in my eyes ["I'll bet you

could," Arthell smiled, lifting her arms to help Laura pull the sweater

over her head.  "I love having the two of you.  Nobody ever seemed to

want my body as much as you two do.  I mean, maybe guys did but were too

shy to mention it.  With you two, it's like I'm sugar candy or

something."]  i want to totally consume and devour your whole fucking

body.  i have always loved the mirth in your stories.  laura finally

gets her sweater off and arthell only has her bra on and she delays

things a little for a little more kissing.  i so love to kiss and neck.

i will devour your mouth, throat, ears, face and upper body for hours if

you want.  i love the little details like laura kissing Arthell's

shoulders and seeing them slowly disrobing each other and ogling each

other's boobs.  i like how you show us laura's thoughts and how she

likes the fires burbling and heating up knowing that she will simply

fuck arthell within an inch of her life.  i love it when women make me

stew and shows sass.  i have to smile at arthell and laura herself being

so pristine with their clothes.  i just shuck them off and get to the

fucking.  often i have to go clothes searching during a down time and

get them in up in a safe place.  of course i like all the dialog you

give here.  i have always marveled at how only you actually have your

women talk during their lovemaking.  i mean we constantly talk during

our lovemaking.  of course you have silent moments when you are busy

gobbling pussy, boobs or asshole or your concentrating as you ram fuck

your woman or your body is juddering and shaking from a nice great hard

fuck but we always talk between such lulls.  dialog like this [Laura

bent close and licked her dark brown throat as she was flinging her bra

aside.  "I like to suck yours too," she murmured.  "Who gets to go

first?"]  i would so hate to fuck in silence like other authors do.  you

make lovemaking so real and breath taking.

//  they get up to go to the bedroom but love has a way of making plans

change a little [Instead, they kissed again, standing by the sofa they

had been sitting on, this time embracing so that their naked breasts

mashed completely together, stroking each other's naked back with their

fingertips.]  i can't wait to take my slut in my arms and pull our half

naked bodies together and wrap our arms tight as tits mash and tongues

plunge down swooning throats.  i want to feel your nipples poking mine

as i run my hands all over your naked flesh and clamp my fingers into

your hair and mash our mouths and worm my tongue all around your mouth

and down your throat.  kissing over to your ears and breathing hotly

into and worming my hot wet tongue into your ear.  kissing down to your

neck and suck on it roughly and then clamping and sucking harshly giving

you a hickey as you writhe, whimper and often scream in raw passion.  i

love the little details.  they make it into the bedroom and we find that

her girlfriend keeps her bedroom like a pig pen.  i keep our bedroom

immaculate.  just how i was raised.  i love the little details and

arthell telling laura how her mother would have killed her for such a

room.  i mean we never get little dialog like that from other authors.

never the little day to day real life comments of real life.  then you

have the lovemaking slowly ramping up ["Mine too," Laura said idly,

though she was much more absorbed in drawing tender circles of love on

Arthell's enchanting brown naked back with one fingertip and following

it with her lips.  "You are a hundred different shades of brown," she

murmured, licking Arthell's shoulder blade.]  little things that set the

soul on fire.  love the comments about Arthell's skin color.  i so love

women of color.  thank you so much for loving the whole body.

//  one thing that stands you apart is how you love the whole body and

show that a woman's whole body is something to desire and want like here

[Laura grabbed her and crushed her voluptuous mouth again with feverish

kisses.  She kissed her neck, her shoulders, her perfect collarbones.

She recalled how seeing those collarbones for the first time had sent

flames of happy lust licking through her pussy.  It had been weeks after

that before she had actually seen Arthell naked for the first time, but

the glimpse of her collarbones under the lapels of her shirt had been

enough to kindle Laura's fervent sexual interest.        "I love your

collarbones, do you know that?" she murmured,]  of course i adore tits

and ass and will swoon if tight jeans show your mound well.  though i

may get hot with your assets, it is often the shape of your eyes, the

perfection of your clavicles, the swell of your hips, the planes of your

face, the length of torso, etc.  i scan your body and find what is

appealing and soon i think your whole is so fucking hot and desirable.

i have met women and i only saw one thing hot about them but soon i get

to know them and see them more clearly and i must have their whole body

to consume totally.  i so love to kiss your whole body.  i will kiss you

silly then your face and then down your neck, work that feverishly and

then your upper body and back up and down and back and forth until my

woman is swooning with need.  i so love to kiss your collarbones and

suck on them up and down from your throat to your shoulders and then

your shoulders and give you love bites that make your breath hitch and

your mound twitch and jump with rising need.  love the communication as

laura lovingly murmurs about her beauty as she works down arthell's body

to her divine full tits and makes arthell do what i live to make my

women do ["Unhhh . . . oh!" Arthell gave a tiny gasp as Laura drew one

large, dark brown nipple deep into her mouth.]  i live to make you

whimper and gurgle and gasp with helpless pleasure.

//  sigh, your pictures of a woman's beauty is so fucking divine [It was

true, Arthell was delicious palette of differing shades of brown.  Her

breasts were brown, and her nipples were brown too, only a darker

shade.  Laura found herself remembering, as she sucked and tongued this

saliva-wet, pulpy beauty, that Arthell's pussy was also brown, like dark

molasses.  Most brown girls, Laura knew from deep experience,

nevertheless had black pussies, black labia, even some of the lighter

girls, like Shontay; but some, like Arthell, had pussies that were just

as brown as the rest of them, only a deeper shade of brown.  She could

hardly wait to bury her face in it.]  you are the only author who

actually describes her women's body.  you are unique in this.  i have

grown so tired of not finding about women's bodies in other stories.  i

still devour the sex but really miss this.  i just prop myself up and

gaze with love at your pussy.  even my archangels i'll just look and

gaze with renewed love at their perrrffeeecccttt pussies.  love how

laura moves in on arthell's tits.  i so love sucking that nipple into my

mouth and working with all my skill.  using my lips and tongue to drive

you wild.  last night i was working both of my babies tits so well.

joann i just stuffed almost her whole tits in my mouth and deep throat

sucked and teethed her tit meat and sucked her long nipples with up and

down motions of my head and letting my tongue run along the slopes of

her little doves.  taking my hands and grinding her little doves down

into her chest and rotating my palms crushing her nipples and tits with

my strong hands.  her helpless whimpers and drooling as her hands came

over mine and helped me crush her tits cruelly.  when i was working

maria i pulped her tits with my strong hands.  sinking my fingers deep

into her tit meat as i pulped and milked her tits with strong squeezes

as i pulled in and up on her tits as i timed my super sucks with my up

squeezes.  lifting her tits up and kissing and mauling her underside

breast meat and kissing all around and clamping on her thick nipples and

sucking so fucking hard as i slowly pulled my head back until her tit

was stretched taunt and i squeezed my teeth tighter and then slowly

pulled my head back forcing her nipple through my clenched teeth as my

spit and tongue worked the nipple as it slipped through my lips.  i so

love her keening and please don't stop and cries of "i love youuuuuuu".

//  love the detail of them huffing and chuffing as they remove their

clothes in that fevered fuck hunger that women inspire in each other.  i

know that accelerated breathing when i'm all amped up and ready to

fuck.  then you show them wrestling that often happens when you first

get naked.  i love that serpentine twining of limbs and rolling around

as we clench and kiss deeply.  i feel my pulse hammer as i wrap my arms

and legs around you or vice versa and our flesh heats and i feel our

skin rubbing and sliding and i feel fingers roughly running down my back

and my ass being clenched and squeezed and our tits mashing and rolling

as our upper bodies writhe.  i love being being submissive and feeling a

strong lover slamming her tongue down my throat and roughly kissing down

my cheek and neck and then clamping on and sucking my neck cruelly as i

jolt, moan and scream when overloaded with pleasure.  my woman sinking

her fingers into my tits and beginning to pulp and maul as she sucks and

tongue bats my swollen aureoles and nipples and pulling my nipples taunt

and making me drool as i stuff my tit deep into her mouth and i feel her

teeth sinking into my tit and raking my nipples.  soon i am doing what

arthell loves and needs to do ["Oh fuck!" she gasped to the ceiling, her

eyes fluttering down to watch Laura's mouth trying to swallow one of her

throbbing nipples.  "Oh shit . . . oh fuck!"]  i so love having a potty

mouth and hearing it.  one thing that you have always shown so well is

the back and forth of loving.  other authors always have one sex act

finished fully before they start the next act.  you show how lovemaking

morphs.  laura is feasting on Arthell's full tits but arthell needs some

and begs laura for it and now laura is on her back and arthell is

showing her rising skill and need.  she works laura's breast with total

focus and love and has laura reacting like a woman who is having her

tits worked so well ["Ohhnnnn!  Oh god . . . honey . . . honey!" Laura

gasped, her head tossing violently on the sheet.  Her body was roiling

with sexual fire.]  i so know that wondrous feeling of good tit loving.

feeling my head lull to the side and drooling all over myself as i keen

and moan as my tits are mauled and sucked so good.  i love having her

working my tits and then grabbing a hold of a tit with one hand and then

squeezing hard as she calls me a whore and worthless slut or cracker

bitch and then slapping my nipples hard as i hiss and hump my mound.

such pleasure as she then sucks and tongue lathe again before slapping

again while cursing me and telling me how am worthless and need harsh

punishing as i whimper and moan yes and nod my head yes when they ask if

i need more punishment.

//  i like how you show so many of the things that lesbians can do in

their lovemaking.  one thing i like about having multiple lovers is

because you can learn new things and techniques to old ideas.  this is

something that us big tittied women can do for our lovers.  [Laura was

momentarily mystified, but an instant later she realized what was going

on.  Arthell moved closer to her, and suddenly she felt the globe of one

of Arthell's delectable breasts pushing into the crack of her ass.  Then

she felt Arthell's fingers prying her buttocks apart, then the stiff nub

of Arthell's nipple sliding up and down her asscrack and all the way

down to her pussy.        "Ohhnnnnn god," she gurgled, gasping and

giggling softly.  "That feels so good."        "Let me see if I can

touch your clit with it," Arthell panted in a hushed, solemn tone.]  i

love using my aching stiff nipple to work your clit all around or run up

and down you slit and poking and twisting in your rosebud.  i just grab

the bottom of my tit and squeeze near my nipple to elongate my tit and

stiffen my nipple and i do my magic.  oh yeah, i love saying something

and then seeing arthell working her nipple into laura's asshole and then

running down to her clit and rubbing it.  i will pull my tit up and suck

and drool on it or look down and let my spittle rope down.  my angels

love looking up and see my drooling spit all over my nipple and seeing

it roping down and breaking off and falling over my tits and belly and

making me look like a porn slut with spit all over me.  i love feeling

like a whore.  using the spit as lubrication to work my nipple along and

into your cunt and asshole.  i so love it when lovers like maria, dodie,

shari, hillary or camille use their nipples to such advantage.  having

big boobs definitely has it advantages.  i just sigh and wiggle my ass

back into your nipple rubbing and poking my sphincter and rubbing up and

down my wet slit and then buzzing my clit all over and especially when

they stiffen their nipple and poke and make my clit squirt and squirm

around as it pokes from its hood.

//  getting it doggy style is always heavenly but getting it on your

back is equally divine.  i like seeing laura nearing the popping stage

and then using changing positions to relax and control herself.  usually

i'll just come since i recharge so fast but then i often hold it to make

the cum so much more womb rending.  you show the details so fucking well

["Yes!" Laura gasped frantically, now churning her hips instinctively,

gyrating her pelvis, surging, yearning, aroused almost as much by the

sight of Arthell rubbing her lovely young breast and nipple against her

pussy as she was by the erotic sensation of the girl's hard, stubby

nipple rasping against her erect clit.  "Yes . . . I am!   Unh!  Unh!

Do it hard!  Yes!  Ungghhh!"        But Arthell had other plans.  She

knew that Laura was going to come in only seconds, but she could not

resist the impulse to put her mouth on Laura's pussy too, before it

happened.  "I want to kiss your pretty pussy," was the way she put it,

smiling at Laura and dropping her mouth quickly to Laura's oozing love

flower.]  often other authors just have the motions of fucking and i

don't mean the physical motions.  they just say it is happening without

any details.  you tell us that laura is working her hips frantically as

she works her clit against the nipple worrying and rasping her clit.  i

know that desperation as the friction builds and you feel your clit

being pushed and prodded so fucking well.  i have brought many a woman

to orgasm with me rubbing my nipple furiously up and down over her clit

and i'm clenching my teeth and chuffing as i work her clit hard and fast

until she explodes and moans gutturally and is thrashing and jackknifing

wildly in bliss.  i love using my whole body to drive you over the

edge.  feeling your wet juices covering and soaking my tit and chest as

your cunt humps and splatters hot steamy cum all over me if you are the

kind of girl that gets so fucking wet.  the more cunt cream on me the

better.  i need my payment though so i often do what arthell is doing

and head a little south and latch onto her cunt and start sucking and

gobbling with wild lust driving her over the edge so i can drink down

her hot steamy flow or spurting cum.

//  i have always admired your skill at pacing.  other authors just seem

to go full speed ahead once the lovemaking takes off.  maximum force is

applied.  you show how one should take your time at times.  arthell

instead of gobbling laura's cunt and finishing her off immediately she

goes slow.  i so love to flix a clit my tongue and making her jump and

sucking those cunt lips into my mouth and worry them as i clean them of

cum and then stretch them out and pull taunt and letting them snap from

my lips.  probing her slit and licking her groove up and down and using

my nose to plow her clit and mashing my face hard into her fuck hole and

failing my tongue in her cunt petals.  bending low and pushing her legs

up and back and licking her perineum and then moving down as i tilt her

back and licking her asshole and tongue probing her sphincter before

moving back up and again loving her wet, squishy cunt.  you show the

communication i so love.  laura is active in their lovemaking and she

pleads for some more nipple fucking.  i am smiling as arthell happily

obliges and lets her woman know she is going to give her all to her.

about a week ago i took shari and cindy over to dodie's since my babies

were at a conference.  i watched as dodie was settled between shari's

thighs and propped up with one arm as she used her other hand to flare

her nipple and guide it as she used it to plow shari's wet slit.  i

loved the look of concentration on dodie's face as she worked her tit

fast up and down shari's slit and then focused on her clit.  dodie has

thick nipples that rise up like little bullets and she was using it to

scrape and plow shari's swollen, shiny clit.  sweat was dripping off

dodie's face as she worked her tit hard, swiping and poking shari's

clit.  finally it had the desired affect. something like [It was not a

wrenching, jolting series of spasms but instead a slow ooze of liquid

fire that spread through her flesh like a hot fluid radiating

excruciating rapture, flooding her veins with flame, seizing her heart

and broiling her mind until she was simply shuddering and moaning

helplessly in the grip of a glowing ecstasy.

"Ohhnnnnnnnn!  Mmmmnnnnaaauuuhhhhhh!  Oh!  Unh!  Ohnnnnnnn!" she moaned,

writing and pushing her pussy up into Arthell's lovely breast as the

girl kept rubbing her nipple vigorously into Laura's flowing slit.]  i

loved watching shari's eyes bulge and her legs kicking out and spasming

as her body was writhing.  me and cindy had latched onto her nipples

were sucking hard and pulling them taunt and pulping her tits as she now

screamed when dodie moved her mouth down and sucked her clit down her

throat and was super sucking and tongue batting i know.  it was so

beautiful watching several orgasms tear her body apart as guttural moans

and some raw screams of pleasure filled our love nest.  cindy and i

started necking as we watched shari slither around and clamp her mouth

onto dodie's wet, swollen cunt and dined on tender red cunt meat.  i

eyed as frankie now in a strap-on got a pillow under shari's hips and

drooled spit into her asshole and quickly wormed two fingers into her

asshole and reamed it out and then sank her thick ten inch cock straight

down her asshole and simply pounded the shit out of her as she jolted

her face straight into dodie's cunt.  i so love multiple partners

because the fucking just flows on and on.

//  one thing that other authors seem to do is not have any

communication during post coital time.  i really miss that in their

stories.  this is when the world is so fucking wonderful and we just

sigh and tell our women how wonderful they are.  i like listening to

laura telling arthell how wonderful she made her feel and we have

arthell telling her how she loves cynthia doing her with her nipple and

not always coming.  i just like the little sharing you give in your

stories.  it is the little things that draw you into your women.  sigh,

laura is so like me ["Let me kiss the beautiful breast that just took me

to heaven," Laura murmured, her eyelids still heavy with drowsy,

simmering sex, her body still craving Arthell's lovely young body, in

spite of the amazingly sweet orgasm she had just experienced.]  my women

are always amazed how much stamina i have.  i may be groggy at first but

unless i have simply been hammered fucked over and over i quickly revive

and i'm ready to go again and i am all over you or opening myself up for

another hard fuck.  now the loving moves on to some nice breast

slurping.  i love lying on my back and have my women feed me their tits

like here [Arthell planted her palms on the mattress on either side of

Laura's head and settled in for a long period of allowing Laura to feast

on her dangling breasts, throwing her head back and shutting her eyes

and moaning softly as Laura's lips on her large dark brown nipples

aroused more and more urgent needs in her young body.  For her part,

Laura was in ninth heaven, slurping and kissing and sucking the firm,

swaying globes, stroking Arthell's large wet nipples with her tongue and

pinching them with her lips, nibbling the thick, protruding centers,

relishing each moan and gasp that came from Arthell's tight

throat.        "Oh fuck . . . Laura . . . you're making me die!" Arthell

gasped, gnawing her large lower lip.  "You have to do me . . . I'm

getting so horny.  So wet.  I want to be fucked by you."]  i am

aggressive in my tit loving and love having tits feed to me like this.

smaller ones i just devour totally and try and swallow down my throat.

bigger / fuller tits i pulp and stretch out with my mouth and get those

nipples all stretched out and let gravity help me pull them tight and

let slip through my lips and teeth as i apply that little extra pressure

just before they pop out my lips.  then i aggressively lunch my head up

and swallow her tit meat again and again as i repeat.  i often make them

collapse in need and i have to roll over and finish off my tit meal as

they swoon, whimper and drool.  i love loving you like this so i hear

those sweet words of love.  i live to make my whores beg for me to fuck

them like the sluts they are.  i want your cunt a soupy mess before i

ever get there.  that tells me i have done my job.

//  after i know i have reduced my woman to a pleading wreck of need i

will still do this ["Mmmm, I could do this forever," Laura purred,

holding one full breast in both hands and stuffing her mouth as full of

Arthell's large bulbous wet nipple as she could get into it, then, after

sucking it for a full two minutes, moving to the other one for the same

treatment.]  i so love devouring your tits that i will spend hours if

possible devouring your tits and mouth and working your whole upper

body, ribs and belly getting your pussy ready for my loving mouth.  i so

love to kiss and muzzle your ribs and belly and slowly kiss, nip and

muzzle up until once more i am devouring your tits and then up to your

mouth and then back down to your heaving bosom and once more devouring

like a starving lioness.  as i have reflected in the past, other authors

just concentrate on the mouth, breast, vagina and maybe the ass.  i mean

those areas are oh so yummy but they miss so much.  areas that you never

fail to explore [Laura was by now frantically hungry for every inch of

this delicious girl's long and slender brown body, and she swarmed over

Arthell with a sharp passion, kissing and sucking her firm, smooth

flesh, sliding down between her thighs, forcing them apart, slowly

approaching the ultimate feast with her busy mouth.  Still, she had to

pause to caress with her tongue the girl's charming little belly button,

now enhanced by a tiny, sparkling jewel that had not been there when she

and Arthell had last made love.        Arthell also had magnificent

naturally hard abs that Laura could not ignore.  She had to kiss and

caress them hungrily for a long time before descending again, rubbing

her chin in the silky black patch of pubic hair that spread out above

the delectable inflamed brown pussy that was her ultimate destination.

She could already smell it, smell the thick musky nectars and the

perfume of throbbing desire that was flowing there.]  i so love this

kind of loving.  this last weekend my young archangels came for a

visit.  joann and maria took simonette to the master bedroom and took i

took hillary and camille to the second master bedroom and i spent an

hour doing the above to their squirming and panting bodies.  i kissed

and stroked their heated flesh.  i would be sucking camille's nipples

down my throat while frigging her slit and above me hillary was slamming

her tongue down her sister's throat and gave her a few hickeys.  i felt

my cunt convulse as hillary wetly and roughly kissed camille as she let

spit drool from her mouth all over camille's face and throat before

sliding down to camille's throat and she sucked and pumped her flesh

cruelly as her sister jolted and cried out.  i sucked her nipples out

taunt and used one hand to pulp her tit while my other hand pounded

three fingers into her slit and curved up to rake her g-spot and i just

pounded her slit so fucking hard as pre cum squished out her sloshing

cunt.  i rested my head on her bosom as i pounded her fucking cunt with

three fingers and my knuckles pounding her mound.  i started biting her

tit meat and moved down to her nipple and sucked with my whole strength

while hillary kissed her deeply.  finally she came like a wild bucking

bronco.  her body lurched and exploded off the bed as wild cries were

torn from her throat from her mouth she had ripped from hillary as she

screamed and rolled right and left as we roughly held her in place as

she came and came.  then we gave hillary the business and then it was my

turn.  life is so fucking good.

//  i love seeing laura moving south to paradise.  i like seeing her

kissing arthell's thighs first.  i so love to work my way to my woman's

love flower.  kissing and muzzling her thighs and that crease where

thigh meets pelvis.  i will kiss all around your mound and kiss, muzzle

and suck the area above your mound.  if you have a thatch i will kiss

and lick your patch and suck and pull on them.  i will plow with my nose

moving down to where my mouth hungers to go and do this [Slowly she

began to tongue the swollen, blossoming wet slit of Arthell's long, dark

brown pussy, delicately opening the thick outer lips with her fingertips

to expose the red glistening trench they concealed, then insinuating her

tongue subtly inside, wriggling it in as deep as she could, until her

own lips were pressed hotly against Arthell's vulva.  She tongue-fucked

her slowly this way for half a minute, during which she could actually

feel the lust level ratchet wildly up a few notches in each of their

bodies, especially Arthell's, who began to groan and twist more and more

vigorously, as if she could not wait to be finished off but needed it

quickly.]  i so love to press my mouth into your mound and feel it flare

around my lips as my tongue slides deep up your fuck hole and wiggles

and probes all your folds and undulations.  sucking that tender cunt

meat into my lips and working as my tongue flails and slithers into your

cunt meat.  sucking hard and then stiffening my tongue and pounding my

head back and forth as i tongue fuck you hard and deep.  then running my

tongue up and down your slit with broad strokes and sucking your cunt

lips into my mouth and stretching out and worrying as i slurp them into

my mouth and work clean.  moving around and kissing your mound and outer

lips and down to perineum and maybe down to your asshole and ream it out

before moving back up and getting more tender red sopping wet cunt

meat.  massaging your belly and ribs as i devour your cunt with total

focus and love and reaching up occasionally to tweak and pull your

nipples hard and mash or pulp your tits as you groan gutturally and

writhe in rising need and love.

//  i love it that arthell has a potty mouth with all her "fuck".  i

love to talk like a cheap whore.  it just streams out my mouth.  new

lovers who knew me some before hand are usually shocked.  i just don't

curse outside the bedroom.  i like how you show laura getting to know

arthell and knows that her saying fuck means she is getting close.  she

is like me and often uses her knowledge thus [Plenty of time for that,

my sweet, she thought, pulling back a little, reducing the heat level,

withdrawing her tongue, licking the edges of Arthell's delicious brown

flower but not tormenting the most sensitive nerves, unwilling to bring

on the climax until she herself was ready.]  often i will go ahead and

finish off the love kill knowing i will get more shortly but often i

will delay to make your cum so much more deviating.  plus, i need lots

of wet cunt meat and cunt juice to at least temporarily sate my hunger.

i need lots of cunt meat and plenty off sweet asshole to make my mouth

and belly happy.  i simply can't get enough cunt jizz and ass juice.

plus, i like to get what laura gets here.  moans of need and want.  i

live to make my women beg for it like arthell here and whine that i am

being "cruel".  it is not cruelty but deep love.  i love seeing the fire

in their eyes and the look of desperation if i have really wound them

tight.  you are the only author to really show this backing off.  others

will simply say they back off and the next sentence they proceed again.

only you give the details that shows the woman actually dying for it and

how their bodies get so fucking tight needing it so.  like ["Oh!  Oh!"

Arthell half-collapsed, realizing what Laura was doing, responding to it

by letting her muscles relax momentarily, as if to gather strength for

the final run.  She looked down at Laura, raising her head momentarily

and with difficulty from the bed, her black eyes fiery and desperate.

"Oh . . . you're mean!"]  i know they are totally under my spell when i

hear such words.

//  of course when you are gobbling pussy it is almost necessary to

start using your digits [Arthell simply gasped and yielded, her head

flopping back into the twisted, soiled sheets, her breath accelerating

again as Laura renewed her loving assault on the girl's flowing pussy.

"Oh Laura!" she did whimper, as Laura slid two fingers up into the soupy

furrow and began stabbing Arthell's exposed clit again with the tip of

her tongue.]  i so love working a sodden cunt with my lips and tongue

and then slipping two fingers up into her wet fuck hole and start

pounding her nice and hard and making sure to curve my fingers from time

to time to rake her cunt walls and slither through her inner folds.  i

so need to feel your juices all over my fingers and starting to soak my

knuckles and hand were they are pounding and grounding into your mound

as i drive my fingers deep.  super sucking your clit as i work you

squishy fuck hole.  taking my slippery cunt cream covered fingers and

using them to fork and rub you nipples and using my fingers tips to

twirl and pull your taunt, erect nipples before slipping back into your

hot tight cunt again.  i love working your cunt with total focus and

love and feeling it loosen up and slipping in another finger like laura

here [had three fingers inside of it now, slowly thrusting in and out,

bringing small, tight yelps of pleasure from deep in Arthell's chest,

and causing a glassy look of surrender to pass over her glistening black

eyes.  She whimpered softly in rhythm with their slow gyrations, her

glassy eyes holding Laura's, her thick, sensual mouth slack with

abandon.]  i really like using three fingers to pound and rotate in your

love channel and really fuck you hard.  i live to make my women swoon

like arthell here.  i so smile when i hear the helpless little moans and

gurgles.  i look up quickly and i see their head lulling from side to

side and cries of harder and deeper.  sucking and tongue lashing her

clit savagely as i feel her hips start to go spastic and her voice

starts to whine and waver in rising need.

//  oh yeah, i like how this fuck is proceeding [Laura had four fingers,

then her thumb too, into Arthell's wet, expanding pussy almost

unconsciously, then realized that she could go ahead and push her whole

hand inside, and only an unbelievable ecstasy would be the result.  Oh,

she will come so hard! she realized, working it in slowly, watching

Arthell's stretched pussy lips yield to the loving hand, watching her

knuckles disappear into the swallowing trench.        "Unhhmmppfffggg!"

Arthell grunted softly, a look of alarm mixed with sublime sexual

pleasure suddenly passing over her contorted face.  "Oh fuck!

Ungghhh!"        "Yes, honey . . . yes, honey . . ." Laura purred to

her, reassuring her, calming her, but also slightly twisting her hand

inside Arthell's tight, clasping pussy to let her know the sensations

were real.]  i like how you show that sometimes it just must happen that

you give her your love fist.  i so love wedge fucking you and then

slowing down and slowly sliding my thumb into your wet swollen cunt and

slowly worming it forward until my knuckles are at your fuck hole.  our

regular lovers love to receive and give fisting and just relax and moan

so long and deep as they feel the knuckles at the vaginal opening.  it

is so neat to see a woman's reaction the first time she is fisted.  i

like the little detail of laura comforting arthell and letting her know

that getting fisted is so fucking divine.  i use words and sweet sex to

make her crave my fist.  when i fisted denice the first time she

completely froze up and stared wide eyed down at my hand with my

knuckles pressing into her fuck hole.  she whimpered and started to pull

back but i used my other arm to press her down and hold her still and

started to suck her clit with soft rhymic sucks and drooled on it as i

tongue lashed it.  she whimpered and her head thudded to the mattress

and i sank my wedge into her tight cunt.  she moaned and whimpered as i

worked my wedge back and forth slowly as my knuckles worked through her

folds.  i slowly worked her cunt and slowly formed my fist and started

to pump her cunt.  i worked her pussy as i got up on my knees to get the

leverage to fuck her good.  i pumped her cunt and occasionally bent down

to lick and suck her clit.  i had to slow down a few times as it took

her a while to cum and slowly pump before ramping up again as my

strength to pump her hard returned.  i could sense when she was falling

over the edge and started to ram my fist into her as i rotated it right

and left and i sucked her clit into my mouth and sucked for i was worth

as i polished her clit with my tongue.  sigh, the pure screams of pure

heaven and ecstasy as her body jackknifed and rolled from one hip to the

other and her cunt bucked into my fist as i gritted my teeth and sank my

fist down to her cervix as she keened and screamed as her legs kicked

the bed and her fingers tore at the mattress.  sigh, women in orgasm is

the most beautiful sight in the world.

//  you always give the reader the details of what the women are feeling

and thinking.  i get so tired of other authors just describing (vaguely)

what the sex act is and then never tell us what the women are

experiencing.  i mean they never tell us why in the world we fuck.  by

giving us there experiences we get to feel their joy and ecstasy.  i

love how you show us the subtle shocked experience of arthell as she

sees laura's wrist jutting from her vagina.  that is half of the

pleasure is seeing your pussy or asshole stretched around an invading

fist.  i love how you show her just surrendering to the pleasure the

lesbian gods have to give.  a woman just surrenders her body to you and

you proceed to fuck her to heaven.  love the detail of arthell staring

at laura's fist pumping her pussy.  i love when a woman new to fisting

is hypnotized by the sight.  it is showing these details that make your

stories so special.  the details just draw us in and make us one with

the stories.  you give us the communication that women give each other

during sex ["I can't . . . believe . . . you're doing . . . this . . ."

she finally panting in a barely audible voice.        Laura smiled.

"Why?  Doesn't it feel good?"        "God, it feels fantastic!" Arthell

gasped.  "I think I'm going to come if you just keep it up for another

five seconds."]  hearing such words will make me cum instantly and i

love saying such to my women and hear their keening pitch up and their

bodies pumping harder and if close falling over the edge into crushing

bliss and jackknifing and flipping bodies.  you make your sex special

because you do so much more than just say they are fucking a certain

way.  not only to you show us the wonderful act itself and the loving

communication you actually show how the fuck just flows and continues to

the finish line [Again they lapsed into a slow, percolating rhythm, this

time laced with the more rapid and audible sounds of Arthell's labored

panting as she neared the finish line.  Her hips began churning faster,

and juddering a little each time her clenching buttocks rose off the

bed. She dug her heels into the mattress and swirled her pelvis up into

Laura's hand.  Her eyes rolled up uncontrollably under her eyelids, and

her thick, sensual mouth went slack.  She pinching and twisted the

large, plump nipple of one breast with her hand.        "Oh fuck!" she

cried out in a tiny, faraway voice.]  you always start with the foreplay

and then thrill us with the divine penetration.  you make it so

magical.  then you show how the fucking just continues and ramps up

until your woman is nearing the heights of ecstasy and she is about to

be torn apart with mind crushing pleasure.  i so cherish all your

details that other never give: examples like, "slack mouth, rolled up

eyes, heels digging into the mattress and swirling hips".  it is these

details that make it so clear the pleasure arthell is experiencing and

by transference the reader.

//  you show us the continued ramping up as laura bends down and starts

to suck Arthell's clit with loving sucks.  i so bask in Arthell's

frenzied response.  we can so clearly see her rising pleasure.  i love

when a woman under my loving assault stares down her belly at me as i

work my magic.  i make that hot eye contact and will increase the heat

with more savage sucks on their clit or fuck hole or drive my cock

harder or deeper into her pussy or asshole making her neck cord up and

quiver and then seeing her had crash back to the mattress or floor with

a thud.  i love hearing her curse and cry out her pleasure and laura

encouraging her on.  this is what i do and i love reading it in

stories.  sadly, alas, only you do it, which makes me love your stories

so fucking much.  i love how you detail their loving connection.  you

make it so clear with your words that laura is so observing her woman.

other authors don't give us any details to make us think such thoughts.

we see arthell's lovely body approaching heaven.  i so love seeing your

tits rolling and whip lashing on your chest and the way your pelvis and

belly are working and clenching as you pump your soul to ecstasy.  i

especially crave the sounds of a woman chuffing and crying out as her

body strains for heaven on earth.  i just love it as she gets louder and

more demented in her vocalizations as you see her face slashing with her

cries and her eyes rolling back and spasming so fucking hard or maybe

she is squeezing her eyes shut so hard it looks like she is in extreme

pain.  [Laura herself luxuriated now in the feeling of being so united

with Arthell, their bodies linked so intimately in this experience that

in seconds would shatter the poor lucky girl with a crushing orgasm.

She took in every detail of Arthell's smooth, dark, straining flesh, her

rippling abdominal muscles, her sleek clenching thighs, her lolling

breasts and swollen dark brown nipples, which Arthell herself plucked

and twisted in an increasingly frenetic fit of yearning for her climax.]

//  you capture the crossing of the finish line as we see arthell crying

out more and louder and laura encouraging her on.  you show that so

well.  how a woman is losing control and her lover is egging her on with

loving words and maybe your own sounds of chuffing and cursing if your

working hard driving your cock so deep into her cunt or asshole or you

wedge fuck or fisting is making you work hard and both of your are

vocalizing your striving.  her to go to heaven and you to take her

there.  we work so hard for this heaven on earth [By now Arthell was a

wreck, grunting softly, gyrating, panting wildly, her face torn by a

delirium of overheated sexual need.  Laura knew it was only seconds

off.  She placed the flat palm of her free hand on Arthell's taut,

heaving abdominal muscles, feeling a little lick of flame in her own

pussy at the sensation of the hard flesh rippling and rising and falling

under her hand, and bent her lips again to Arthell's small clit, sucking

it at first gently, then harder, meanwhile thrusting even harder with

her hand inside the girl's flooding pussy.  And Arthell finally began to

come.        "OOOO GOD!  OH FUCK!  AUUNGGRRRHHHNNMMMGGGG!" she cried

out, her body jackknifing into the air, then falling back into an

amazing fury of thrashing spasms.]  you capture that finishing off your

lover.  other authors just tell the style of fuck and the basic motions

while you show laura placing her hand on Arthell's belly and pressing

down to feel her muscles rippling.  i find women die when i press down

hard on their belly with my hand or forearm.  they just love the

pressure it causes in their wombs.  then how laura bends down and sucks

first gently and then savagely arthell's clit and making her die from an

all caps orgasm.  i so love raw screams of pleasure.  i just love seeing

a woman ripped apart with bliss.

//  sigh, you show the finishing off of a harrowing orgasm so perfectly

[Laura had never seen anybody come any harder than this, except perhaps

for Jonelle and Makeeda in their "I'm dying right now" versions.

Arthell unleashed a purple fury of an orgasmic seizure, flipping and

surging and shuddering off the mattress, digging her heels sharply into

it and almost flinging her quaking pelvis up into Laura's arm.  At any

other time Laura would have been instantly flung off to the side, but

this time her hand was embedded up to the wrist in Arthell's lovely,

quaking body, and they were so solidly linked that all she could do was

hang on for the ride.        "Unngghh!  Annggghhhh!  Ohhnnggmmnnggrr!"

Arthell groaned, finally, after a fierce period of flipping and

shuddering, beginning to slack off and settle back into the sheets, her

breath ragged and uneven, punctuated still by tiny squeals and squeaks,

her thighs still clenching as she came down from this devastating

climax.]  i mean isn't this so special.  we see how this orgasm is so

supreme.  when other authors just basically say she came and then

compare it to this and it is no comparison what so ever.  the other

wonder is how you make each orgasm so fucking unique.  you capture it

all and i thank you so much for it.  all the little details like digging

heels, her pelvis having shattering quakes and of course the

vocalizations.  i so love the details that get burned into my memory.

simonette and hillary are between semesters and we were at simonette's

with her mother away.  we had been fucking hillary hard with our

strap-ons for about thirty minutes i guess and she had come twice.  i

could tell we were ramping up for the grand finish with me on my back

slamming my cock up into her streaming cunt and simonette behind ram

fucking her spasming asshole.  sigh, hillary was propping herself weakly

up on her hands with her tits swishing my tits and throat.  i was

gripping her hips to help slam my dick deep into her tight cunt.  from

time to time i would move my hands up and pulp her tits and then take

one in both hands and squeeze in behind her aureole and then clamp onto

her nipple and suck and swirl her nipple in a pool of salvia and then

pull her nipple slowly out my lips while increasing the pressure of my

lips and then teeth as it popped free.  moving from tit to tit.  i

smiled as simonette roughly jerked her head up and her tit out my mouth

as her cock covered in hillary's ass juice was now pumped into her mouth

and then rammed down her cawing throat.  we fucked her like this for

long loving minutes.  i swooned when i saw simonette now on her feet up

over hillary slamming her cock straight down her shit hole balls deep.

i watched her bend down as she concentrated and sweat dripped off her

face and tits as she slammed her cock so hard and deep.  hillary just

started quaking and her body would sort of compress and then she would

moan and caw dementedly as her neck spasmed and her face slashed

horribly as wave after wave of wave of ecstasy pummeled her soul.  she

would lurch forward with her body shuddering as she whimpered and moaned

gutterally.  she would then sort of compress her body and then lurch

forward again as her face just slahed and her eyes sqeezed shut and

tears leaked out.  her hands landed on my shoulders and her fingers

spasmed into my flesh and her tits were mashing on my chest.  she came

so fucking long as her face was so beautiful for so long as it spamsed

and slashed.  i slammed my cock fully into her sloshing cunt and held it

deep while simonette just pounded raped her exploding asshole.  i loved

hearing hillary crying out several times as simonette speared her

immolating asshole so fucking well.  she slowly collapsed on me as her

body quaked and juddered with strong aftershocks.  i so basked and

reveled in her sweaty flesh mashing into mine as our sweat merged and

and osmosis brought us so fucking close.  we kissed so deeply and then

simonette pushed her glistening cock between our lips and we monaed and

groaned cleaning hillary's ass juice off simoette's love cock.

// i love how you tell us that it takes several minutes for arthell to

come back to earth.  i love making my women swoon on the mattress and as

they gasp and look around blankly and keep croaking something like i

can't think straight,  oooohhh, i feel sooooo fucking good and such.  i

like listening to arthell's initial shock of being fisted.  i have heard

that so many times over the years but i find they are soon craving it

and i love seeing new possibilities growing in a woman.  i so find that

once a woman discovers something wonderful and new she simply needs it

in her life.  you show that so clearly here [Arthell's eyes widened

comically.  "I'll bet it didn't feel as wonderful to you as it did to

me.  I never knew you could even do that.  Your whole hand?  Shit, I

thought I was going to explode when I came.  Wait until I show

Cynthia."]  i love it when i show a woman something new to her and she

wants it over and over with me and wants to use it on her angels or find

angels to use it on.  thus, new skills are learned and spread out to

give other women new experiences and pleasures.  i so love to help

spread the ways of great fucking.  i love it when arthell is already

quizzing laura about fisting her in return.  i so love it when a newbie

to fisting is so anxious to do it back to me.  i so live to give and

take love especially new kinds of love.  have to love how this chapter

ends with arthell drowsy but already thinking of fucking all night

long.  just like i want my women to think.  i want to fuck and fuck

until every last drop of ecstasy has been wrung from our spent flesh.

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Chapter 309:

// laura starts this chapter with some sweet reminiscing. this is something that i do a lot. we see that laura is reveling in sweet memories of randi. wow, what a hot fucking surprise. one thing i love about your stories is i can never guess who may be coming next. i can sense that bonnie is not to far into the future but you still might draw that out and i so fucking love it. not all love kills happen quickly. i love how laura reflects on her past loves. she is seeing the positives of randi. her beauty that so touches the heart and your wet pussy. i love how you show us her innate beauty [She didn't know if any of them felt about Randi, and Randi's exquisite face, the way she herself felt, and so the erotic power it had over her might be unique, though she found it hard to believe that. Just looking at Randi's face, or remembering it, would make her wet.] i too will think of lovers i haven't seen both recently and more remotely. i too will just think of what i find so pretty about my angels. i like how you created this universe that allows laura to do this. no other author has a universe that allows their women to come in and out laura's life that allows such reflections to occur. other stories are too short and the few that i have found that are multi-chapter simply don't allow any true emotions to occur. just sex (hey - that's great of course) but still i like reading real life emotions and character development. it is nice to read real emotion. i too have missed randi and i can see laura thinking back on a sweet angel who for a while was an archangel. what is also cool is how you have a real life trigger to these pleasant revelries of past love. laura is going

to charlotte, north carolina which is the new home of randi. this is simply so true life. i too have angles slip from my mind until something like this comes up. an event that reminds you of past events or the possibilities of a future meeting. something that makes your clit twitch and your nipples throb with memories of past love. laura reflects on their great sex and how stirring it was to laura's soul and pussy. i love it when laura tries to focus on the positives about her angels.

// of course randi was an angel who brought her negatives to a relationship. this is something else that i have always loved about your stories. you focus so much on the emotions in women's relationships. over the years i have talked some about my relationships and at the most i may hint at the down times but that is all. if i was writing erotica i would never bring up the negative times. all i would want to write about is the positive and lets fuck!!! that is how most other authors are. a few hint at the jealousies that most of us fight but hinting is all. because other stories are so short they can't even come close to showing how a relationship can slowly fade away or maybe blow up on you. you are not other authors. you show how we can often ruin relationships if we are not careful. during randi's time with laura you showed the awful jealousy she felt toward rhonda and nate when they partook of randi's charms. you showed how randi flaunted her sex with other partners knowing it would harm laura. this is what elevates your writings to the level of literature. you show the whole of the human experience. i used to roll my eyes at laura in her extreme jealousy. i used to have some of that back in college but i learned to overcome the green eyed monster. it really only tore me up. then we had randi constantly digging laura by crowing about her sexual exploits with others knowing how it would affect laura. so petty and yet so true of many women. this reflects real life and thus it rings so true. i have sighed, gotten fired up, excited, sad and other emotions over the years with this story arch. this is what a story is supposed to do the reader. you

just don't expect to get it in erotica. i am thankful to have found a writer who brings such subtle facets into her story writing.

// i am smiling as laura reflects over how randi got her so angry and hurt with randi's stories of making it with rhonda and nate. i couldn't have much sympathy for randi when she was dumped for stevie. i am a big believer when the fates get back at a person. my angels regal me with stories of their sexual exploits and they make me so hot and horny. camille has been telling me about her trysts with studs at her university. hillary and simonette could care less but i have been listening with rapt attention and begging for details as my pussy gets so wet. a few weeks ago she invited me out for a double date with the clear idea of some sport fucking. i had to agree with a hitch in my pussy. we out to a club near her school with steven and aaron. we had a good time and i got to hear music i don't normally listen too. we were joined by shawn whom everyone seemed to know and no one seemed to care. i was really excited as we got back to camille's apartment. soon she and i were naked on our knees with her sucking off steven and shawn and i was working my magic on aaron. they were all buff and aaron is almost eight inches with a cute down hook to his cock. i so loved hearing these bucks grunt and curse us as we sucked them good. aaron gritted his teeth and squeezed his eyes shut as i sucked his cock head hard and fast and pumped his shaft. he started rabbit fucking my mouth and then slowly slide his dick down my throat. i groaned feeling his hips shake and his cock filling my gullet. when he pulled it out my mouth i loved seeing my spit all over it and falling off his rock hard black cock. i looked over and saw spit all over camille's face and down her chest and tits as her bucks slapped her face hard with their hard dicks. soon i was on my back on the floor with my feet pinned by my head as aaron slammed fucked my cunt while his sweat dripped on me. i could see steven and shawn pillaging camille's fuck holes and taking turns on her asshole and sliding their cocks from her asshole and letting her clean them off with her twisting mouth and fluttering tongue. i had a huge orgasm and aaron slipped his dick into my asshole and fucked me good until i was pounding the floor with my arms as i came again feeling his cock spewing bolts of hot semen deep up my spasming asshole. we fucked through the night. when the guys were recharging camille and i fucked in 69 and used a double headed dildo to fuck each other good. i swooned when i was dp and then felt two black dicks slipped up my asshole and they fucked me into a screaming orgasm. aaron held his cock deep in

my asshole as steven fucked his cock on top of aaron and sawed it fast and furious into my shit hole until i felt both of their cocks spewing semen into my colon as i went into a multiple orgasm as i screamed and thrashed between them. in the morning i masturbated as i watched the three bucks fucked all of camille's holes as they constantly switched up and she deep throated cocks right out of her asshole and cunt. at the end steven was straddling her hips and pile driving his cock straight down her asshole while aaron was launching his hips up off the floor to spear her cunt. sigh, shawn had her hair fisted as he pumped his cock slowly down her throat and then pull it out to her suck his cock head before sliding back down her throat. they are skilled cocksmen and i could see them silently communicating and they just started pounding the hell out of her as they speared her three fuck holes. i kept myself on the edge as they roared and i watched

them slam the dicks deep into her body and i watched their hips coil and strike as their cocks emptied their semen deep in her asshole, cunt and down her throat. i then came violently as i screamed and thrashed around in the chair i was in. i shakily walked over when i recovered enough to stagger over to the bed and pulled steven's dick from camille's asshole and licked it clean and then aaron's cock and then gently tongued camille's swollen cunt clean of semen and cunt cream. i so love sharing love like this.

// before i move on i just want to thank you for the "tone" of your story arc. a lot of stories are kind of vapid or banal but, hey, simple sex stories don't need to be deep or good in a literature kind of way. just give me the sex. then one has what i call the basic classic story. basically a virgin is seduced. again i love it but i mean after many years of reading these stories they do kind of blend together. then you have a few who have created a universe that continues. i can think of three and they were exciting at first because you had a flow to the story but they seemed so hollywood very quickly. it is episodic. one chapter doesn't really flow from the previous ones. again it is just good ole sex. then you have the stories where you have people being hurt either physically or mentally and those i find boorish and avoid them. you show the positive and negative in your stories but they fit. they reason they seem right is because you have made these women real. life is not all roses and sunshine. you show how the negative is part of our lives. but you focus on the positive and show how a woman can grow and improve herself and i have always loved that about laura. i give you so much credit for being willing to impart so much reality into your stories and how you deal with everything in such a positive manner. it is a treasure to have such a skilled writer writing lesbian erotica.

// i like laura reflecting on how randi changes her look. i have seen that in black women. some really like to change their look. kia is like that. she started hanging with frankie and dodie about six months ago. every time i see her hair it is totally different. it is amazing what you can do with extensions. i love how sometimes she puts purple and red in her hair. she is an aerobic instructor and is so tone. it is like having different women in your bed. the first time i made it with her i was doing aerobics' with her, joann, dodie and frankie in dodie's exercise studio over the garage. i was gasping like a fish and even dodie was huffing hard. i know they were making us big weightlifters die on purpose. i kept eyeing everyone's tits rolling and shaking. when we were finished sweat was just dripping off our bodies. i was lying on my back moaning and gasping. i watched dodie and frankie peal off joann's tights and were kissing her deeply and licking her sweaty body. kia came over and sat down beside me and took her leotard off and then took my clothes off. soon we were rolling around on the mat covered floor. i was inhaling her small tits down my throat and quickly slide two finger up her tight pussy. i kissed her deeply as i finger fucked her and moving down to suck her nipples hard making them little bullets. i loved looking at her deep brown lithe body undulating and jerking. i found her gspot and just pounded her hot box until her body was jerking and jackknifing as i worked her through several orgasms and just gently worked her sodden cunt until her clit had settled down and i then settled between her thighs and dined on sodden cunt meat. i ate her long and slow and savored her tangy cunt juice as i worked her long slit and lips before i inhaled her clit while tongue polishing it and heard her loud shrieks as her body jackknifed and rocked from side to side as i sucked her clit with rhymic hard sucks as her hands clenched in my hair and drove my face hard into her up thrusting cunt. i loved how her body went limp and she just mewled and moaned softly as i took her in my arms and i stroked her body as it hitched and we kissed in deep love as our tongues coiled languidly and i explored the depths of her mouth.

// i like how laura tries to get over thoughts of randi. i love it when you have the "game is a foot" as sherlock would say with bonnie. i love reading laura seducing new women. i am already drooling over laura seducing this young sweet angel. i love how you can take your time in this universe you have created. only by having multiple chapters can you have this sweet dynamic. i like how you show that at this stage laura is not sure of her success. just like real life. i have tried for women and simply got no where or been rebuffed sometimes cruelly dammit. i like how you show that bonnie is a friendly girl who doesn't ping the gaydar particularly. i will always make nice and flirt subtlety always hoping for a score. i love seeing a woman trying to get her woman. i love reading laura making gentle conversation with this lovely bonnie and trying to find the keys to her heart and pussy. only you take the time to develop things slowly. last chapter laura only got to gaze with longing at her love prize and now we get some conversation. one most start with the first step. i too use this approach all the time. simply showing sympathy and empathy will get you so much. i too feel this when i am after a seeming neophyte to lesbian love [She was looking too intently, she feared, at Bonnie's perfect black neck, and her earlobes where they were visible under her fringe of short black hair, and her sparkling even teeth, and her shiny black eyes, and her red fingernails, and her shapely forearms, and the way her small breasts pushed out against her blue golf shirt, evidently the 'uniform' of the sandwich shop since the other two employees were wearing that shirt too. I must stop scrutinizing her this way, Laura cautioned herself. I look like a predator, for goodness sake.] i love how you look at the whole woman. you see it all. i too notice your ears, arms, throat and so many other things about you. i want to devour you and realize like laura that for now you must hide your hunger to suck her pussy inside and inhale her nipples down your throat. i so love how one's swells and curves fill out your clothes. such things makes my pussy wet. i love how you show laura hiding her raging lust and working her charms on her woman. i so love working on a woman and reflecting back when she is in my bed and coming so fucking hard and i am looking down at her swallowing my nipples and devouring my pussy. showing my newbies how a strap-on can fuck you so good. it makes me tingle just thinking about it.

// i like seeing laura adjusting her line of seduction as she gets bonnie talking. she makes a comment about window shopping at bloomingdale's and changing to target when bonnie comments about her salary level. i love trying to get her comfortable around me and getting her to share time and herself knowing that this will in time lead her to a bed and sweet fucking. i love seeing laura pressing for them to meet and bonnie starting to take a liking to laura and agreeing to meet. unfortunately, they can't do it that day though bonnie is willing. i have had to delay an initial meeting and i so worry that something will fuck it up. oh geez, i have to love how you throw in the unexpected. this is makes your stories rock! laura agrees to a meeting tomorrow with bonnie and only later remembers she is going to charlotte tomorrow. then you have her trying to go down and let bonnie know and she has gone home. whoa, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned. that is going to be so great reading how laura works to repair this. you are the only author that would set the situation up and then throw in this monkey wrench. i mean in real life things do get crossed up like this and then you have to work so hard to repair the damage. i love to read these kind of dynamics in your story. i can never know how you have your women resolve these set backs. what is so wonderful is the resolutions are always true to their characters that you have created. it will be so cool to read how laura explains to bonnie and will see how bonnie responds. she seems so nice but no woman wants to feel like she has been stood up. it hurts our ego too much. again this is

more like literature than erotica.

// i am smiling great big as the fates intervene. i don't really believe in such things but i do feel it when things like this occur. laura is worrying in how to find randi and lo and behold randi is at the show she is at. when you think about it randi is in the same industry but still the chances that she went to a company and that business is at the show is still slim. i feel my pussy pulse when i sense such things. i am like laura and feel no remorse or feel man's world bugging me when i have no problem desiring women in a sexual way. when i go to shows and conferences i am on the prowl from the minute i get to my hotel. i am looking for fellow predators and women to seduce. men have had this right from the dawn of time and only now are we acquiring the same right. dammit that is so fucking unfair! i am smiling as laura views randi so wonderfully. i too wonders sometimes why a booth is not lined with people fawning and dying to get in the greeters pants. i like the observations you make sometimes [In fact, only a few people lingered there, and most of them did not seem especially struck by Randi, or indeed by anything else, but had the bland, slightly bleary look of the usual trade show attendee, suffering from too little sleep and too many dull speeches.] i have drifted off a few times during boring speeches. and i know that slightly tired feeling of great fucking through the night. i am so happy that laura is no longer jealousy like she used to be but she still worries to much. she remembers her fate induced meeting with sara and their soul blistering sex. she then remembers how it bothered her when she thought about makeeda. i mean

makeeda has given her permission to have other angels. she should be fucking gloriously and dining on sodden cunt meat and plunging strap-ons hard down willing cunts and assholes. it is nice though in the fact that laura is not a cookie cutter type of character. other stories they just fuck without any thought or emotional input. laura is a real woman who cares and worries.

// i have mentioned this with deshona and now i see it with randi. you show growth in so many of your women. deshona started out as a cold hearted bitch and now she is so much warmer. makeeda seemed a little stiff to me at first and yet you are now showing her to be so much lively and frisky. in the other stories of multi chapter length i saw absolutely zero growth in their women. life is not like that. we all change with the experiences of life. you show that here with randi [And she was hot. Laura could vouch for that. If there were sexual styles, from the sweet and modest along a range to the combustible and dangerous, Randi surely landed somewhere near the latter. And yet now, as Laura came nearer, she realized she had been viewing Randi through the lens of the past, and yet here was an altered woman before her, still gorgeous and wildly attractive but now somehow refined and reserved, wearing a sensible brown business

suit, with darker, muted lipstick and braids not so outrageously provocative in their array, not beaded and extra long, but only shoulder-length and very finely and tightly done.] i love seeing that randi has toned down a little and matured. this is something that only you show. this is literature again. you don't have to do this and yet you do. subtle can be so much more addictive than fiery. i have to smile as laura is a little flustered when randi sees and greets her. it is cool and reserved. friendly but not overtly friendly. she has to get used to being in the south and not in california . we have to be a little more understated here. i love fucking women right under the conservatives fucking noses. especially when i am eating their wives cunts to ruin and they are begging for my wet pussy and their legs are spread so wide to take my cock and they give me their assholes when they haven't given it their husbands. hehehe. again you are showing the subtly of your writing. you are hinting at the pressures women face when we choose not to follow man's rules and regulations.

// i so know that careful treading when in the south. last summer i was in atlanta for some training. as soon as i got to my hotel i went to the lobby and scanned things and its restaurants and bar. their was a hot blond bartender, angela, so i went over and struck up a conversation. we exchanged pleasantries and made small talk. really got no where but left with her smiling at my wit. over the week i got to know her better and finally on thursday night i got her to go out with me after classes were over. i wined and dined her and had her happy and loose. she had told me of her fiancé and i told her i was in a relationship but vague enough to obfuscate. she was a little tipsy when i invited her up to my room to share a little more "girl talk". we lied down on the bed and we talked while i stroked her arm lazily. i go up on an arm and gazed down into her perfect nordic features and deep blue eyes. i had worked my magic that week and her eyes fluttered shut as our mouths came together. i am smiling remember how she moaned and opened her mouth to my tongue. soon we were clenched and rolling around on the bed as i raped her mouth and rapidly undressed our bodies. her body was so pliant as i sucked her rock hard nipples and i started to massage her heavy full tits. i worked her twenty-two year body perfectly. i sucked her cunt off to several monstrous orgasms and licked and tongued her asshole. she was hesitant to go down on me so i let her finger fuck me and she quickly mastered it and i came so fucking hard and the next thing i knew she was between my legs eating me out like a crazed whore. i had to slow her down and give her guidance but she quickly got into it. i grabbed the back of her head and i ground her face all over my cunt until it was covered in my cunt slime and she reveled in it as my cunt gushed hot dollops of cum into her gulping mouth as i shrieked and groaned gutturally. i always bring my strap-on to such things and i fucked her cunt so good. i groaned so deeply when i was on my back and she was riding me and took my cock and sank her asshole down on it. gods, i loved how she fucked her asshole. i pushed her up and laid her down on the bed and guided her head to my cock lying on my belly glistening in her ass juice. she looked back at me with primal heat and only hesitated a few moments before shoved my cock into her mouth and cleaned it thoroughly. i fucked her asshole so good as she cleaned it off again and again. i finished her off in pile driver position as she played with her clit and she came so fucking hard. her eyes were so fiery as i helped her strap in for the first time and i got in spoon position and she fucked my pussy so good. she growled in my ear that she wanted my asshole and she shoved her dick into my clenching asshole. she got a little rough but i loved it. soon my asshole was been fucked with her powerful thrusts. she pulled out and now guided me down to her cock and her eyes rolled back as she watched me do my atm magic on her dick. i loved rolling over and getting her dick back into my asshole and then rolling over and licking and sucking it clean again. i loved how she kissed my neck and shoulders and squeezed my tits so hard as she pounded my asshole to oblivion and i came jackknifing and screaming against her body. her growls as she slam fucked my asshole made my womb melt and erupt pure pleasure into my exploding mind. i usually wake early to make love to a newbie to cement her new love of women. i was pleasantly surprised when i awoke to her hovering over me and her bending down to kiss me deeply and soon she was devouring my pussy and moved to 69 to cement our new love. we email and she plans to visit this summer and will stay with us. she is exploring her new world down in atlanta and i love hearing about the women she is fucking. not sure where the fiancé is now but he is is not with her. yesss!!!!

// you now give me that delicious dialog that i so like. other authors never really have any back and forth speech between their women. just enough to advance the seduction of the story or make it clear they are both hot for it. here you have two old friends getting reacquainted and letting each other know they want each other. loved the flirting with comments about each other's beauty and laura being a sex fiend. this is two women making sure the other knows that soon they will be having hot sex very soon. this is so like old lovers coming back together. you show randi being herself when she is still attacking a rival, deshona, even though she is continent away. sigh. i like how you show laura has grown when she doesn't put randi in her place. she is trying to be civil and forgiving to randi's weaknesses. i try to do that myself. you now do some of your humor that you use from time to time. [She held up her left hand with the gold wedding ring on her finger. Randi looked floored. Suddenly she looked around the convention hall too, as if in her delight at seeing Laura she had neglected her duty to attract potential customers to her company's booth. She swallowed nervously. "I don't believe it," she said. "You got married?" She leaned closer again, dropping her voice. "Somebody who loves black pussy the way you do, Laura? Shit, you love it more than most guys do. What would your husband think if he saw you diving into my black pussy?"] i can see why these women keep reacting the way they do when laura mentions she is married. that would be my first reaction. i so love how they seem so confused and flustered when laura tells them this. i can just see randi's face and its total consternation at hearing laura is "married". i so love how laura banters about randi wanting some of her pussy. i find women just fall under my spell when i use humor and wit on them. the "harem" author uses humor but he does it through situations with three weird male characters in the story (they never get any and don't seem to want to) who are there for comedic relief. only you do it through wit in dialog. i tip my hat too you. it just flows from the lips in such a natural way. this is real life characters reacting and bantering with each other.

// i have to smile at laura putting randi in her place when she takes another dig at deshona. i can only take so much nastiness myself. i don't anyone attacking any of my angels. i do believe in not harming a woman's work and i am smiling as laura and randi make plans to meet at randi's place. this is how to part with a lover [You better go," she said. "You're making me lose it." Again she leaned close to Laura, dropping her voice. "I mean, I know some people who pass by here want to fuck me, but you've actually done it. And you're going to do it again."] there is a convention in dc i go to every year. i have two women i meet up with there. lauren is a mixed race runway beauty and abby a dusky woman of jewish heritage. last march abby had lucy with her and it was little disconcerting because she was so straight. me and lauren wanted to ditch her after the sessions so the three of us could have fun in the suite we had reserved. lucy was so pleading in not wanting to be left alone that abby brought her along. you talk about uncomfortable. she kept prattling on about her husband and two children. i noticed that abby was getting her tipsy and insisted on bringing her back to our suite. oh well i thought, lets see what happens. if abby wanted to risk her job so be it. lauren and I sat on the sofa and cuddled and stroked each other as abby put the blast on lucy. in her drunken state, lucy was quickly overcome with desire. abby sucked her off to a killing orgasm and crawled up her body and sat on lucy's face and soon lucy was eating her out with gusto. abby reached back and jerked her off to another orgasm and lucy went wild on her pussy and brought her off to a gushing orgasm. we quickly moved in and fucked lucy ourselves. our tongues and fingers explored her pussy and soon her asshole. the alcohol was quickly burned off but her sexual need was in overdrive. she took turns sucking us off over and over as we sucked her off. abby told us she wasn't worried because lucy couldn't risk her marriage. the next day she avoided us but later that afternoon we heard a knock on the door and in she walked and stood so nervous. we quickly stripped her and fucked her senseless and got our strap-ons out and fucked her totally. she squealed and cawed as we took her virgin asshole and introduced her atm and ass to pussy. we had her on her knees on the floor and body on the sofa as we raped her asshole and flipped her over and slide our cocks deep into her mouth and did triple penetration on her as we did ring around the asshole and i picked up her petite body and she hung to me like a child as i worked her up and down my cock and lauren and then abby slipped behind and cupped her ass checks and slipped their dicks into her asshole and we fucked her so good and i would set her down to rest and let her clean our cocks before she now leaped back into my arms and we pounded her body up and down on our dicks. i loved feeling her gripping my hips and slamming her dick into my spasming asshole and then slipping it out and moving around and sliding it down my throat and thrusting her hips to fuck my throat so good. i have to smile as she just died when we fisted her pussy and her shocked look at then dying with her body rolling and jackknifing with a fist jutting out her fuck

hole. she was even more shocked when i slipped my fist into lauren's asshole and fucked her so hard and deep and she died from a truly harrowing anal gasm and watching her sinking her fist so deep into my asshole then abby fisting my cunt as they dp fisted me to a horrendous orgasm and then we did abby with our fists. it is so hot to see a dark brown fist jutting from my asshole and a dusky fist pounding my pussy and feeling those fists twisting so deep an feeling them slipping and sliding against each other so deep in my bowels as i came screaming and bucking. gods, it was like pure geysers of pure nirvana were exploding from both my cunt and asshole and sending shock waves to each other that only rended my mind with pure fucking bliss. then lauren slipping her slicked fist deep up abby's asshole and me groggily and then totally focused, working her cunt to ruin. lucy is not leaving her husband but now we will have a foursome in march.

// like the little details of daily living that you put in your stories. you have laura not really being able to focus the rest of the day because of her upcoming rendezvous with randi. i have had that happen when i can't really focus because i know soon heated fucking will be happening. it really is so hard to concentrate when such lovely thoughts are on your mind. you then reinforce how it is when you live in a conservative area. i mean one should never really flaunt it unless in a totally safe environment but in the good ole south it is better to be demure and safe than flaunt it. i fully understand laura being a little nervous arriving first at randi's. being dressed conservatively really helps but anyone hates to be alone in a strange place. i can defend myself but i am always nervous in such situations. i also understand randi not showing any overt emotion when she greets laura in front of her apartment. we and most of my angels do not live in predominately gay areas in our local cities. we know if we don't rub anyone's nose in it, it will be alright. why make a stink anyway but it sure sucks having to be careful. hets get to kiss and smooch in the front yard if they choose. though, now that i think about it, watching that is not all that exciting. i always want to show my affection but doing it in public with people i don't know watching is not really my thing. though starring in a porn movie would be cool. strange how i think. again, i have to admire you showing this little facet of the lesbian life style. this is something that i have never read in other stories except maybe in passing. again, it is this universe that you have created. you have the

time to bring this up in the natural flow of your story that other simply can't afford to take. you have already provided so much and laura hasn't even kissed randi yet.

// you now show how one needs to be adaptable. laura is having thoughts of slow dining on randi's pussy and slowly taking her to the peak. randi being tired wants to take a shower and salaciously asks laura if she wants to join her. who can refuse such a request. i love how you show lovers need to be pliant and willing to go in the direction their lover wants to take it. other authors just have the sex happen. lovers never get to talk about their wants and desires. i love how you show the day to day aspects of loving. i am smiling as laura is ogling the dark brown flesh that is exposed as randi is taking off her clothes. randi is just getting ready to take a shower and laura is heating up. for me just taking off clothes is so damn sexy. a strip tease is nice but in a way kind of scripted. both have their special charms. again you cover all the bases in your writings. you have them bantering as they prepare for the shower [Laura stepped closer to her and let her lips brush Randi's cheek, which made her pulse leap and flutter. "I promise to give you the best soaping you ever got," she whispered. "And I think I can do it."] it is little comments like that this that stoke a fire deep in your belly. like this observation [This banter, though fun, was driving Laura crazy. She wanted to grab Randi roughly as they stood there next to the bed and drag her down on it and tear her clothes off. The waiting was getting to be intolerable. But she controlled her desires, realizing that one could hardly want more excitement than to be naked in the shower with this delicious woman.] i so know this. delaying a little adds so much to the sex and the resulting womb rending orgasms that will follow. one thing i like about your stories are the little details. like here with them not really looking at each other as they get ready for the shower. that is a small detail that no one would but you would add. i like how this is unlike me. i want to look at you intimately immediately. i will fuck you wherever and then fuck you in the shower a little later if my hunger is simply raging. it is the small asides that make your writings so captivating and not cookie cutter. other stories just focus on the sex and not small details that make things real. of course laura can only control her hunger to such a degree [Laura could not resist leaning forward a little and brushing Randi's bare shoulder

with her lips, as she had earlier brushed Randi's incredibly soft cheek with them. "I think it'll be hot enough," she murmured, letting her eyes pulse with sexual innuendo.] one must ignite the fires of love.

// this is why i love fucking in the shower or tub [She entered the steam and spray, and Laura was right behind her. Randi pulled the glass door shut behind them, which made a loud clank as the latch caught. They were instantly shiny and wet, and so close due to the constricted space of the shower stall that their wet bodies were now touching, which acted like a match to their need. Suddenly they were embracing and kissing hungrily. The water was indeed a little hot, Laura noticed, but she was so busy devouring Randi's mouth that it did not bother her.] there is something about shower spray or seeing my lover relaxing in a tub with her cunt humping at the water line or on the tub edge or the seats that we have in the corners of our master bathroom. i get really aggressive in such an environment. i so love warm water stroking my body as i pull you into my arms and devour your mouth and suck your nipples fiercely and start to finger fuck you hard and deep. of course i love the gasped declarations of lust and them spending long minutes devouring each other's mouths and their fingers digging into each other's flesh. recently, i had joann in our large tub and i sat in front of her her and used my knees to keep her torso floating up and i simply devoured her pussy like a madwoman. i so loved watching her head resting on a towel on the ledge and face grimacing and slashing as she cried out when i sucked her clit taunt and super sucked and tongue drilled. her body flopped and her legs kicked water all over but we didn't care. i slowly wormed two fingers into her tight asshole and rammed and reamed her hard as i used my other hand to clench a butt cheek to help anchor her. i ordered her to pull her nipples and pulp her tits. i loved watching her head thrash as she pulled her nipples up and taunt and then rammed her hands down onto her tits and mashed them into her chest and rotated her palms harshly and repeated until she was keening and i saw her eyes roll back. i moved my free hand and vibrated her clit hard as i tongue fucked her pussy and was almost instantly rewarded with hot spurts of steamy cum as she screamed and screamed and pulled her tits up by her nipples and really jerked them hard as she cried out and died from fucking bliss as she kicked water everywhere until she collapsed in spent bliss. i so enjoyed taking her in my

arms and cooing to her as she was spaced out and drooling and whimper how much she loved me as i then kissed her so deeply as our love was once more renewed.

// i have loved the sass of your women [Randi giggled and squirmed, so that Laura could feel even more of her wet, slippery flesh against her own. "I'll bet you say that to all your little darky whores, Miz Laura," she laughed.] such words always inspire such in me [She sucked the flesh between Randi's neck and shoulder, and raised one hand to Randi's wet breast, squeezing it hard and then sliding her mouth down to the large, swelling, shiny wet black nipple. She sucked it deep into her mouth, then squeezed and sucked at the same time, so hard and almost maniacally that Randi yelped, and quivered. "Aiiieeee! Oh! Ungghh! Laura . . . I forgot how you really like to swallow it." "Mmmmm, I am going to swallow it. And the other one too. God, your body makes me so horny."] i so love to pulp your tits as you moan and groan and i ask if you like and you whimper yes as i squeeze even harder. sucking your tit meat into my mouth and sucking and tongue lathing hard. sucking rhymically and pulling your tit meat taunt in my mouth and letting it all slowly slip from my clenching teeth and maybe some teeth. then sucking all of your small tits or if large as much as i can and then sucking my mouth full and super sucking and then backing off a little and letting my tongue worm all over your nipple and aureole with as much down pressure as possible as i continue to suck hard. they just whimper and die for me. i love glancing up and seeing your eyes rolling back, face slashed or eyes scrunched up so tight you seem like you are in agony as i hear whimpers and occasional crying out of pure ecstasy. love how they then kiss some more with slow building passion. i love to kiss and kiss. to start slow and explore your mouth gently but i most soon rape your mouth and explore all corners of your mouth and then suck your tongue into my mouth and give it hard head and suck your lips out and stretch them taunt and nipple and naw as you caw and moan. i want to put you totally under my love spell.

// foreplay is great but one most eventually move down south for pure heaven on earth [But Laura was paying little attention to this by now, having embarked again on the pleasant task of licking the water off Randi's long, shiny, naked black body, licking and sucking it everywhere, dropping to her knees and pushing Randi's pelvis back against the wall of the shower stall. Randi had one of the biggest, ripest, juiciest clits in creation, and Laura suddenly wanted to feel it inside her mouth, and feel Randi's body shudder as the sharp spasms of scorching lust wracked her body. She had not long to wait. With her thumbs she spread apart the copious, water-bejeweled bush of Randi's pubic hair to expose the girl's thick, meaty pussy, and her gorgeous fat clit, which was already poking out, swollen and oblong, like a tiny penis. You would think a long, thin girl would have a long, thin pussy, but not Randi, who had a juicy, fleshy trench that Laura was eager to assault. And being this close to it now, she could smell the ripe, musky odors of Randi's arousal, formerly masked by all the billowing steam that the shower water threw up.] i bet most readers have never seen a clit like randi's. what is wonderful is the fact that I can say that. again you have given us a beautiful description of a woman's vulva. i just read three stories today and they talked about licking pussy and sucking clits but that was it. not one single description of the actual vulva and clit. i sure find that weird that only one author ever describes a woman's passion flower. over the years you have shown the different kinds of pussies we have and made each one unique like we are in reality. thank you for describing in such loving detail our passion flowers so lovingly. i too so love to spread open your pussy and gazing with love at your wet slit and licking my lips and swallowing in need. already planning how i am going to devour you to a screaming orgasm.

// this is the beauty of a nice big fat clit [She curled her tongue around Randi's large, protruding clit and heard the girl moan, felt her thighs clench, saw her pelvis shudder briefly. "Unnhhuunnhhh!" Randi groaned, pitching her groin forward into Laura's face, reaching down to hold Laura's head by her wet hair.] i love all pussies and clits. they all give you unique joys. i was at camille's and we had fucked heatedly until exhaustion one afternoon. before we went to get hillary and simonette she suggested we shower together. we both knew that what this meant. soon the shower was going and we heatedly clenching and devouring each other's mouths and mashing our big tits together. i slammed my tongue down her throat and worked down to her neck and gave her a hickey on each side of her neck as she mewled and screamed out once. i then swallowed her nipples down my throat and loved bite and sucked her ample tit meat all over. i made sure to pump her tits harshly and smacked her tits hard all over as she whimpered and moaned. i settled on my knees and looked at her shaved mound and swollen clit. it is like randi's. i call a clit like this a little thick candy canes. so fucking sweet. i clamped onto her clit and started to give her thick clit head as my lips clamped onto her stalk. i sucked and ran my tongue all over it as i teeth raked it gently. i so love it when i get this rare treat. i clenched her thighs and super sucked her clit and then reached up and pulled her nipples in time to my sucks making her squeal. i growled up to her work her tits and i swallowed her clit and worked with total focus and love. i loved squinting up through the spray and seeing her pumping her tits hard and pulling, twisting and mashing her nipples and clenching her aureoles and pulping making her cry out. i clenched her ass cheeks and pounded my mouth up and down her clit stalk as i super sucked and tongue drilled. gods, her screams of orgasm were deafening as her back slammed the wall and her mound slammed up into my mouth as i pulled her ass cheeks into me to drive her stalk through my lips. she went multiple and poured pure cream down my throat as i sucked her fuck hole now and used my pinched fingers to run up and down her stalk on all sides and squeeze her throbbing clit making her mewl and buck and giving her tons of extra

hard aftershocks as she whimpered she loved me and wanted to fuck me. i loved looking up her wet heaving belly as her slitted eyes bored into mine with promises of hard fucking. and boy did she!

// as i mentioned, a few nights ago i read several stories on the internet. i spoke of how other authors don't describe their women's bodies. the other thing that they don't do is describe how they go about their loving. i mean all they ever say is they sucked so and so's clit, pussy and tits. they just say they kiss and give head. they just say they fuck with a strap-on. that would really be boring in real life. it makes it sound like their is only way to fuck and do foreplay. geez, come on. i have a whole plethora of talents doing what i do. i use them all in an infinite variety to drive my women crazy with need and shrieking orgasms. you describe what laura and her lovers are doing and you show such variety in your descriptions. things like this [Laura sucked the fat grape gently into her mouth and began laving it inside with her tongue, at the same time encircling Randi's quivering hips with her arms and digging her fingers into Randi's firm, smooth, wet buns.] now this is how we fuck. doing unspeakable things to drive your woman wild. especially love the detail of digging your fingers into her buns and massaging them as you devour her cunt and suck her clit. love how you have developed a universe where laura can compare randi's ass to other lover's and love them all. i like the detail of laura using her strength to hold randi up as her strength weakens. i guess we have better water heaters here. i see that laura notices the water getting lukewarm and they decide to take the loving to the bed. i love leaving the shower or bath and getting the dripping water off and going to bed still very damp and then fucking like total whores as we fuck to oblivion.

// of course i love how randi tells laura that she wants to come so bad and needs it. that communication i so love. i would hate it if my women never told me how good i am making them feel. other authors do have a little of it but only at the moment of orgasm. you show how we communicate during our whole loving tryst. i have to smile at how you show the changing of gears. i was positive that laura would finish her dining on tender cunt meat and now you have randi begging for trib action. i have to give you credit. you just make your sex so spontaneous. life is like this. when we suddenly want something different we go with it. other authors don't show this but you do. i am so happy for that. again this makes your sex so unscripted and vital. you are the only author that does this, yet again i fear. love how you have shown over the years all the variations. i love face to face but laura seems to love that sitting up and moving forward and doing your love grinding so you can clench, maul and kiss your love slut. i love how you mention eye contact. that hot, boring eye contact just ramps me into overdrive. i pump you harder and suck you deeper like here [They began slowly, but there was no way the rhythm could remain slow for long. Early in their gyrations their eyes locked, and from that moment on they could not tear them apart. Laura pressed her wet pussy into Randi's, which was a thick, meaty cauldron of squinchy cunt meat and tangled, cushiony pubic hair, and they both gasped and whimpered a little at the sweet intensity of it at first, of feeling the slippery warm wetness of their cunts sliding together as they rocked and pumped gently against each other. "Oh god . . . I am going to come!" Randi gasped softly, looking up at Laura with happy desperation in her glittering black eyes, as if surprised for it to be true. "Do it a little harder! Unhhh! Ohhnnnn . . . yesssss!"] sigh, i so live to make my woman beg for it and whimper. i will just love you harder and read your body so intimately to make you moan harder and squeal more as i drive you towards nirvana. i almost always gag when our pussies come together and start that divine grinding and mashing or sweeping and pounding of each other as our pussies meld and melt pure pleasure to each other.

// i like how you tell the reader about one's history with a lover. when you disrobing your woman you mind drifts back to great past fucks and you feel your body love shake with new need to relive such blistering sex. only you have a universe where the years flow that allow you to show this. i so love trib sex for reasons like this [They were nearly perpendicular, with Laura sitting up and Randi flat on her back, her firm round breasts swirling as Laura pumped her in an increasingly vigorous rhythm. Laura could never get enough of her present lover's body, and this was no different. Randi's thick, gleaming, swirling black nipples drew her mouth irresistibly, and soon she was leaning down, grinding less since it was harder in this position, trying to swallow one, then the other, while Randi moaned and sucked her full lower lip. "Unhhhhhh! Oh! Oh shit . . . Laura, yes, do it hard! Yes! Ungghhhh! Oh!"] i so love to ride you like this and throwing your leg over my shoulder and grind you down into the bed. i so love doing hillary with her soft tits. i just grind and sweep my cunt up and down the v of her splayed legs. grinding and jamming her cunt into the floor. her tits just roll and whiplash as i work her body so fucking good. reaching down and pulping one of her tits and mashing and crushing her aureole and nipple making her cry out and whimper with need. smacking her face hard and smacking her tits as i call her a whore and a fucking nigger. listening to those harsh guttural groans. bending down and inhaling a nipple and kissing and driving my tongue down her throat. i remember doing her like this as she thrust up

and i anchored myself and just rammed her down into the floor as i kissed her calf and cursed her. she just screamed like a banshee suddenly as her calf pulsed and juddered in my grip and her elbows pounded the carpet and fingers tore at my thighs and floor as she wailed in pure fucking ecstasy. i screamed at her to pull her nipples and twist them and watched her come again as i pumped her like the fucking whore she is and her eyes rolled back and spasmed so fucking long as sweat poured off her face and tits as she now gurgled and hitched in pure bliss. i so loved uncoiling and kissing deeply as our arms pulled tight and legs twined. of course the bitch fucked my silly with a strap-on in my ass while pulling my hair and wrenching my arms back and she hooked an arm around my throat and throttled me as i came so fucking hard with my arms flailing in the air as she used her free hand to jerk my head back by the hair viciously and gave

me hickey on my stretched out neck as my eyes bulged and i couldn't really scream out in fucking bliss as i started to convulse and my belly was ripped a part. i thought my eyes were going to get stuck in the back of my head they spasmed so long in the back of my head. she just let me sink on the mattress and speared my poor asshole again after i came around and soon had me ramped up again and she shoved her cock repeatedly down my throat straight out my spasming asshole. i just purred cleaning my ass off before she shoved it up my cunt and asshole again before jerking my head down her belly and making me use my tongue to lift her cock up off her sweaty belly and lick it clean before skull fucking and screaming and cursing me and forcing her cock down my throat until my lips were kissing the fake balls and then cupping my chin and clenching my hair and fucking my throat as i gagged and spewed spit when she pulled it out my throat. then down my asshole again before i had to hungrily clean it again. i so love it when she lies on her back and grips the back of my head and pounds her cock up into my throat and jams my throat down fully onto her cock as my lips lick the base of her strap-on. she thrusts so hard up off the mattress driving my head up as i feel her cock filling my throat as she pounds her dick deep and fully down my throat as i swoon and gag. gods, i came so fucking hard yet again. she made me feel so fucking good.

// one thing i like is how you show that positions do actually change while you are fucking [This led to squirming and writhing together, to frantic thigh-tribbing, then to feverish kissing and slobbery tongue-sucking, then back to their original position, with Randi flat on her back and Laura sitting up.] by showing this you show how active good hard fucking is. other authors with a few exceptions (though not as good as you) just make it seem like everything is so calm and boring. like the old "wasp" joke about the woman not enjoying the sex because she moved during sex. of course all this delicious fucking is for this divine event ["Oh god! Ummmnngghiieee!" Randi cried out, her body arching and quivering, and began to come in great, surging spasms. "Oh! Annnggghmmnniieeee!" Laura was very close behind her. She fell forward onto Randi's surging body and held her in a vise grip as sweet honeyfire began to boil through

her own veins, and hot clenching bliss gripped her womb from the inside out. "Unnngghh! Auuunnggghhhhh!" she almost roared, feeling her flesh glued to Randi's still-shuddering body. "Oh god . . . aunngghhhhh! Ohhnnnggggg!"] you make each orgasm so fresh because i never know which adjective and adverbs you will use to describe them and then your divine vocalizations. this you are really, really, really unique on. others never show the variety sounds we make. if they do have a particular sound they use that one over and over again until i am almost pleading them to stop for the love of the gods. again they forget that variety is the spice of life. if i had to live their orgasms i would be having major problems very, very quickly.

// i love reading that they are totally destroyed from their heated fucking. that is how i want to feel after a great fuck. i recharge quick but i want to feel that "i'm totally fucked" feeling. i so love to twine with my lover and feel our sweaty bodies sliding and slipping against each other as we gently talk and kiss deeply and lick and nip each other's faces and upper bodies. i love the bawdy joking about laura growing a dick so she can fuck randi even harder. that is how i want to be fucked! i love the gentle time you show as laura sits outside the shower and they talk. i always want to fuck but of course there are times when i or she needs to recharge and we just share like here. i have liked how you show post coital time when lovers just share and talk to each other. i have always felt that this time is almost as important as great fucking. this is when women bind on that truly emotional level. sad but true about randi being at the booth because she is eye candy. it is still a man's world and having a hot babe can't hurt. we lesbians and bi chicks love em for the same reason so i can fully understand their thinking. years ago i went to a photo shoot involving some male weight lifters back home in florida . i was with a friend who was assisting the photographer. it was almost cruel as they evaluated the women who were scantily clad in the photos. one extra pound was noticed and any lack of tone was cruelly remarked upon. i saw him eyeing me and i knew he wanted me to pose but i just gave him the evil eye after all his catty remarks. hell, the women were great looking and i fucked two of them that night any ways. hah!

// they get back to my favorite place, bed. i have to smile and smirk a little when randi tells laura how she was fucking with nate and rhonda but how laura was her archangel. sadly, she had a bad way of showing it. alas, that is so often the human condition it seems. we so often fuck up what we have. i like the observation that rhonda takes care of her women and is taking care of yvette. i love it when women take care of their archangels. i mean i feel sorry for randi but acting like she did it is only natural that what goes around comes around when rhonda dumped her for stevie. i love it when laura starts asking randi about her current love life. i think randi is wise to find a lover on her level at the company. she won't be using her for advantage. they are together so they can share sweet fucking. wow, i am really smiling now that we see that she has a second lover, a black dykey woman. i don't mind a soft butch but women who try to look like men simply turn me off big time. i can't blame randi for liking her because she knows how to give it hard and dirty. that is my kind of woman. hey, her white lover sounds like me a little ["Oh, that's the other one. She's white. Blonde. Kinda pretty. Even whiter than you. She looks like a sheet. Makes me look even blacker, when we're together. She's a fool for my braids and my body. Like you.] i am their with laura as she encourages randi to tell her how she came onto her white lover. wow, that is cool. pretending to look at something requiring her to expose her breasts. now that would catch my attention! that tale would simply get my fires to raging let me tell you.

// recently i was over at shari and cindy's. we were sitting on the sofa and they told me how they met recently cindy's old commander from the military who had just gotten out. she is a black woman, tameka, who had turned a blind eye to all the lesbians under her command. she was just divorced and they were having a girl's night out. they went to some bars and were a little tipsy when they got back. of course you know what happened. i was mesmerized as they told me how they sat on each side of her and began to snuggle and kiss her lightly. how she weakly fought them off and they just overwhelmed her and were soon driving their tongues down her throat and giving her hickeys and love bites all over chest as they disrobed her blouse. they gave such vivid details as they described sucking her nipples and squeezing her tits and then quickly shucking her pants and panties and then falling on her totally soaked cunt and sucking her off to screaming, crippling orgasms. i smiled great big when they told me how she buried her face for the first time in pussy and couldn't get enough of it. she begged and moaned for all the cunt cream she could get. how they rode her face as their cunts exploded in tameka's mouth and the way she sucked their clits into her lips and pulsed and sucked them. then breaking out their strap-ons and plundering her pussy with hard pounding sex and getting her into the harness and letting her help blast her former crew member. the way her eyes bulged when shari slipped her dick into cindy's asshole while tameka was fucking her pussy. i can just see tameka's face in my mind's eyes as she saw shari stuff her cock straight from cindy's asshole down cindy's throat. the shocked wonder. they told me tameka jumped at the chance to pound cindy's asshole and pulled her hair harshly when cindy begged for it and started to torpedo her asshole with hard plunges pulling it all the way out and with shari's encouragement pulled her dick from cindy's asshole and made cindy set up and then "forced" her cock into cindy's mouth and humped her mouth with atm action. she really got into the rough sex. cindy was smiling as she told me how shari was on the bottom and tameka behind her raping her asshole so hard and when cindy started coming tameka looped an arm around her neck and throttled her while hissing in her ear what a jungle bunny and nigaaaaa she was as cindy clawed the air and choked out cries of pure bliss. of course this loosened up tameka and her virgin asshole was pounded wide open and they even did double anal on her that first weekend and

pulled their cocks out at the same time and forced her around and down and moaned as tameka stuffed both cocks in her mouth and cleaned them thoroughly and then gave deep throat action on the their cocks in turn before they fucked her dp and double anal again and again as she kept atm'ing their cocks. they gave suck vivid details at how she cried out and wailed as their two cocks stretched her asshole so wide open and sawing their cocks into her asshole and how she cum so violently as her body jolted and whiplashed in the throes of pure ecstasy as shari reached up to choke her and cindy ripped her head back by the hair making her shriek and gurgle. can love get any better than this. i can't wait to get at tameka myself.

// like this detail ["She gave me her address as we were leaving. Just slipped it to me, like we were spies or something. God, my heart was pounding. I was so excited, but I didn't want anyone else to find out. The rest is history. As I said, she was like you. She fucked me so much I thought I wouldn't be able to go to work the next day."] i love seeing the excitement and secrecy and how they fucked so much that randi's legs were weak the next day. i so love reading of the excitement in our women. i love feeling that need and being wet for it. as always i love your dialog that you allow your women to have. dialog that i don't get in other stories. you need to express yourself to each other to truly bond and stoke the fires of love like here [Laura nipped her enchanting earlobe. "And your big clit," she murmured, slithering her tongue into the whorl of Randi's shiny black ear. Randi giggled. "You like that, don't you. You white girls all love my big fat clit. You like to suck it till I scream."] i mean other authors just have their women fuck in silence and no dialog to fire up the womb with blistering need. i love telling a woman what i am going to do to her and if a newbie seeing her wide eyes and a current lover seeing her shaking with the knowledge that she has that i will totally deliver the goods so to speak. love the little details that you give me like randi pursing her thick lips. sigh. now we find out about wilma, the black lover, and how she gives randi the rough treatment. i have to love how wilma fucks randi so fucking hard with the blue strap-on. we have some blue, green and soft pink dildos. dodie has a tiger stripped cock that is about eight inches and thick. it kind of makes the eyes cross when you see her walking towards you with her tiger cock waving before her. you are truly the only author who uses the witty repartee in her stories ["She certainly sounds like my kind of girl," Laura grinned. "But how do you know how a Martian fucks?" Laura teased her. "Maybe they're very gentle and sensitive." "And maybe they're like a deranged pile-driver too," Randi deadpanned. "You want to give it a try, Miz Laura Martian?"] i guess other authors just aren't witty like you. i am famous for my wit and have used it to seduce many a newbie and making my angels love me so.

// love how you show the loving morphing with the lovers. randi is kind of angling for some dildo action and laura wants to dine on some succulent fat clit stalks. i love how you show women working on what they want to do. often the sex just flows but we are all giving both verbal and non-verbal cues to our desires and wants. i like reading how they are discussing getting a little kinky and talking about who is bigger and how that strength can be used. i love it when dodie and i get in the mood to see who is the badder bitch. she is stronger in raw strength but she doesn't have a chance against my martial arts skills but i almost never use them on her. last time we got into it was in her gym over the garage. not sure what the problem was but she was plucking my last nerve again and i told her to fuck off. next thing i know i have her grabbing my hair and throwing me on the mat and jumping my ass. we wrestled around with your hands groping and grappling. she got on top and ground my face in the mat and pulled my top up and unhooked my bra and rolled my over and slapped my face really hard making my head rock over and she pulled my shirt and bra off roughly. geez, she wormed a hand down my shorts and started to jerk me off roughly and riped my shorts off and started sucking me gutturally. i came so fucking hard. she had me by then. i just let her lead me to her bedroom where she got out her swivel whip and whipped my ass and back all over as i screamed and whimpered. she used a butt plug on my asshole and jerked my clit off as i was on my hands and knees as she kissed my back and ribs as she worked my fuck holes until i had such a horrendous orgasm that i collapsed on the mattress in a spasming, thrashing heap. then frankie came home and joined in abusing me the rest of the afternoon and night. they handcuffed me to each bed post and spanked, whipped and slapped me while they jerked me off and rode their cunts all over my face and stomach. i so love it when my sweaty flesh is covered in girl cum. i loved looking up and jerking my arms and legs as i worked my stomach to help them rub off on my tummy and how my face was smothered by their cunts mashed over my mouth and how they rode their cunts roughly up and down my face and my nose and chin plowed their soaked furrows and leaned forward and shoved their asses in my face and i tongued their sweaty bung holes. then coming all over my face until cum was in my hear, eye lashes and all down my cheeks and neck.

// i love it that laura can now reflect on randi's other lover's as she pulls her close. i am so happy she can let her angels have other angels and have joy in it. i always want my lovers to have other lovers that i can hear about, learn from maybe and hopefully fuck soon and again and again. i so love that coming together of bodies as arms and legs twine and bodies are pulled tight as bellies rub, tits mash and mouths devour each other. i so love to feel my tits mashing out against your body and feel our nipples poking and raking across each other. loving each other and going down her body to devour her beautiful tits like here [She lingered over Randi's exquisite naked breasts, squeezing and sucking them gently, then more passionately, knowing how Randi liked it, knowing that some hard sucking would quickly bring desperate whimpers from deep in her chest as her thick, black nipples became hard and rubbery and shiny with warm spittle, standing up sharply from the firm round balls of her breasts.] i love loving tits. loving their whole mass and really working your nipples and making them supper erect so i can love and devour. i so love squeezing your tits in a rhymic motion and then adding my sucks in time to my massaging. i will often pull back and make eye contact and then dive fast onto her nipple and aureole and suck hard into my mouth and just supper suck as i pulp tits and suck and pull my head back stretching out hour tit and just sucking very hard as i let it slowly escape my mouth. i make my women love sluts when i do this to them. i love my kinky sluts where i will start slapping their tits hard making them whimper and moan before devouring again and kissing the underneath flesh and creases making her mewl and gasp how great i am.

// i like how you show the woman giving pleasure receives pleasure from giving like here [These reflections, on top of the sheer joy she was already experiencing from sucking Randi's firm beauties, made Laura's cunt flare and throb and ooze excitedly.] other authors rarely mention this. you always do. i mean my soul just soars when i make my woman cry out, writhe and whimper with my loving ministrations. it makes me redouble my efforts. when you react to my loving i will strive to even make you do it more just like laura does. i like how you emphasize this. women live to give their woman maximum pleasure. i agree with laura about tattoos and piercings but if women want it i will make sure to fawn and flatter the tattoos and play with the piercings and jewelry. i like to drill your belly button and kiss all over your stomach and ribs. i find newbies just swoon when i focus so much attention on areas they are not used too. men

as usual just focus on the your tits, pussy and ass. this is why i like focusing on suck areas [Randi's body quivered, then strained and arched a little, and she raised her hands to her breasts, twisting her damp nipples in her fingers, which only made them harder and more pointed.] i so live to see your body reacting to my actions. i love it that randi is playing with her own nipples. i will encourage and order my women to play with their nipples and pussy. i will be sucking joann or maria's tits and focusing on them and will tell them to play with their wet cunts. i will tell them them to play with their slits, finger fuck their fuck hole and to play with their clits. i love just working my tit magic and see them working their cunts more and more desperately. glancing down as i swallow your nipples and seeing your cunt cream covered fingers working your love hole and flicking your clit. then your body exploding and your face slashing horribly as you cry out in our joint ministrations and smelling that heavenly rush of cunt nectars filling our love nest with that musky rush of heavenly scent of women in love.

// i so love working south and doing this [Laura did not reply but merely smiled and kissed her way lower, finally reaching the thick, curly black forest of Randi's pubic triangle, using her fingers to pull the hair away from the girl's delicious, meaty pussy, which was by now slick and oozing with juice, already gaping slightly open, inviting her tongue. Randi's large clit was impossible to ignore, standing out like a flagrantly extrusive button of bliss at the top of her festering, glistening, fiery pink slit.] i want to have done my work like laura and finding my woman's cunt all swollen and wet and waiting for me. i have always admired how you show so clearly what foreplay does to a pussy. other authors don't show this and thus miss so much. i always feel like i am coming home when i settle between your thighs. i am smiling great big as laura is so anxious to devour randi's clit and succulent cunt but knows it is always better to go

slow and really destroy randi with great cunt munching. you are again the only author to talk about the thoughts that go through your mind when you are loving your women. they way you want so bad to make her come so fucking hard. this is always my thoughts when i go down on you. i will make you explode! this is what i want to hear when i start to devour you [Randi grimaced with pleasure, panting and gnawing her full lower lip. "Nothing . . . like . . . Laura's . . . tongue!" she panted, her head falling back, as a deep groan began to rise out of her chest. "Oooaaannnhhhhhhh!"] i just redouble my efforts when i hear such encouraging words. maybe this is why my women are telling me such things. i just plunge my tongue deeper and worm it more and suck your clit hotter when i get such encouragement. i so love to hear my woman groaning gutturally or gibbering out she loves me when i am sucking and tongue lathing her clit. i just bask and smile and suck harder and tongue bat faster to make you really my love slut slave.

// like the observations that randi has already come once so the initial pressure has been relieved and now you can really devour her cunt and not have to worry about her coming to quick. i so love to dine and have quality time with your pussy before it is time to deliver the love kill. i just like the idea that you explore these thoughts in your women. other stories just have the sex happening and the characters never give us any deep thoughts. just the direct response to the stimuli. that is great because that is what stokes the fires of love but it is nice to actually hear the thoughts that goes through our minds as we are working our woman's body. laura is so right when it she thinks that the key is taking your time. i think that is where we have it all over men. men just want to pleasure their dick. we want to pleasure and love our woman. now you give us rich details of such loving [She tongued Randi's thick, wet, black cunt lips lovingly, sucking them gently, insinuating merely the tip of one forefinger into the wet pink chalice, as if to tickle awake the secret nerves that lurked there waiting to be ravished into fierce attention. Her tongue did not even approach Randi's huge, swollen clit for a good two minutes as she patiently and tenderly ministered to every other part of the girl's inflamed pussy, finally slipping her finger in deeper, letting her middle finger join it, fucking Randi's clenching wet cunt slowly and rhythmically with them while continuing to explore every minuscule portion of wet cunt flesh with the tip of her tongue.] now isn't this so much better than just she was sucking her clit and finger fucking her woman. this is what other author's so tend to give. i want details of the woman's vulva. each is unique and i love you telling us the details. geez, that is so good how you show laura loving her pussy all over but not her clit. i so love it when i get a woman all horse and panting for it. begging for me to take their clit in my mouth and work my magic on it. having them whimper and curse me that i am so "mean". i so love slipping first one finger into your tight, not, wet pussy and then working in the second finger. i usually save my third finger for the finish line when i am pounding your cunt so hard to drive over the edge as i curve my fingers to rake all your inner cunt walls and folds raking all your nerves and g-spot if you have one.

// love the detail of how randi started out kind of passive but laura's loving tongue is now getting her revved up. i love my calmer women getting wound up as i work my oral and digital magic. i am always glancing up at your face to see how i am doing. if you are not responding enough for my tastes i will use one of my patented tricks to make your breath hitch and your breathing to get more harsh as your face slashes in dire pleasure. i love that randi goes straight for her own nipples. i love sluts who pleasure themselves. my more tame sluts i have encouraged repeatedly to self pleasure themselves till they now hungrily pleasure themselves as i fuck them. i so love to play with my nipples and pulp my tits or play with my clit when your are drilling my pussy or asshole. i have always loved from the beginning how you show that ramping up of sex. laura has started out slow avoiding the clit but now ramps it up to another level [Laura smiled up at her but did not reply; nor did she pause in her expert ministrations, now licking a long swatch from the bottom of Randi's gaping hot pussy all the way to the top, where for the first time she let her tongue flick Randi's engorged clit. "Ahhhhh!" Randi gasped, her smooth, sleek, black thighs clenching. "Oh god!" The thick wet grape seemed to quiver and swell under Laura's quick tongue. "Unnhhh . . . unnngghhhh!"] oh yeah, this is how it is done. i love that initial swipe of a distended clit and making her jump and writhe. i so know that quivering of a fully erect clit as i swipe and tongue polish it. i just feel my eyes quiver and roll back as i latch onto your clit for the first time and start to suckle on your rock hard clit. just sucking and tongue lathing as you whimper and caw and i feel pure happiness flowing in my veins. i really love that tongue strokes from the perineum up to the top of your slit. working all your intimate flesh from bottom to top and back down again. again only you give the details of this actually happening. i get so tired of just reading "sucking her clit". just feeling that slimy bead between my lips and over my tongue as i work your love button and my mouth is filled with your sweet essence and your musk is flooding my brain with pure blissful intoxication of female scent.

// sigh, i never can predict where you are going with your story. i so love reading laura feasting on randi's little "penis" clit and feeling and tasting that juicy meal in my mouth as i suck and tongue lathe it. but you again show real life and how a sudden change in plans can come into your mind and changing the loving. i love this about your writings. i do this so often. i am so there as laura decides to really concentrate on randi's front cunt wall and see if she can get a g-spot orgasm to explode and shred randi's divine cunt. i so love to work your cunt like this. even if you don't have a g-spot per say, there are definite lots of nerve endings there that are always dying for stimulation. i have to smile as laura

contemplates giving her slut an orgasm that is so devastating and the fairness of such an act. hehehe. that is my goal always. i live to rend my woman's womb to shreds and have them screaming and make them go multiple and fuck them hard and prolong the aftershocks until they are in a stupor of spent love. i so live for moments like this [Laura mused, twisting her hand around so that her two fingertips were now rubbing the forward inside wall of Randi's tight, buttery slit. Almost immediately, Randi realized what she was doing. Either Laura had done it before, or one of her other lovers—maybe this firecracker lesbian Wilma she kept mentioning—had found the secret button. Randi's eyes fluttered open. "Oh god!"] i love twisting those fingers up and focusing on your g-spot area. i just love to piston your cunt hard and rotate them around and get your pussy all sopping wet and loosened up and then starting to slowly focusing on that magic area and then back off a few times and then bear down and rake those divine nerves for all i am worth. at the least they make you come so fucking hard and the best it simply destroys you as you come again and again. i so love feeling your cunt juices soaking my fingers and hand and hearing the sodden sounds of your cunt as i pound and pound it with focused love. then hearing your guttural groans as i feel your body beginning to tremble and shake as your orgasm starts to approach and i start to swallow your clit with savage sucks or if i'm up on all fours i bend down and super suck your nipples as i use one hand to pulp your tit as i suck and pull your nipple out taunt and i bark at you to whipsaw your clit with your fingers. oh gods, the way my sluts come so fucking hard as i work their tits and make them throb and burn pure pleasure to their immolating cunts as their fingers are a blur over their clit or using two hands and one hand is forking their clit making it swell as the other hand is slapping or buzzing their clits as pure screams or demented gibbering fills our love nest as they jackknife and jolt all around in our bed or flopping around on the floor.

// i so love the detail of randi's eyes widening as she feels nirvana starting to approach and how her body is starting to tremble and shake. again it is the small details that you give that add so much to the story. it is this that makes your sex so devastating. love how laura releases randi's fat clit to speak words of love to randi ["Yes, honey, yes!" Laura said again, this time more sharply, urging Randi on, urging her to let go and be swept up in it. "Oh!" "Yes!" Laura sucked the fat grape back into her mouth again, and a split second later felt Randi's entire pelvis twitch. At that instant she knew she had touched the spot. "Oh! Ungghhhh!" "Yes!"] your dialog is so on. this communication simply makes you come so much more violently. i have wondered why other authors are so quiet in their sex. i so love to communicate and spur my lovers on and the ones who are quiet i am always working on to be more vocal and demanding.

camille was over my house and i was in bed with her while simonette and hillary were with joann and maria. i so remember releasing her clit form my death suck and teeth raking and growling up to her to come fucking hard and how she whimpered. i just gazed at her shiny swollen clit and dove on it with my lips sliding on it and i began to give her mini cock head as my head bobbed up and down and my face mashed into her mound as i super sucked and wormed my tongue all over it. her head was thrashing and her body was jolting. i wormed my fingers in and started to rake her g-spot and heard her voice scale up and start keening. i was raking her for all i was worth as i used first two and then three fingers to rake her g-spot as i sank all the way down on her thick clit and let my drool flow as i sucked and tongue bat all over at super speed. she just tensed up more and more as i watched her start to squeeze her tits hard and moved them up and she sucked and bit her nipples hard. suddenly, 'fuuuuccccckkkkkkk" was screamed into the air and her body went into powerful convulsions as i felt hot cum spurting around my raking and now pounding fingers as her cunt juices splattered out her cunt as i pounded and then raked her g-spot as she shrieked and jackknifed up and down and jolted and rolled right and left. i reached up with my free hand and choked her as her eyes widened and then rolled back as she choked out more shrieks and came one last monstrously time as her body was consumed by monstrous rolling spasms that left her totally spent and she weakly begged me to let her clit rest. i backed off for a minute as i slowly rotated my fingers in her swollen cunt and then gently ran my lips up and down her clit as she shook with powerful after shocks and i watched her pull her nipples until her tits were stretched taunt and she shook her tits hard and then slammed her hands down to mash and pulp her tits before pulling her nipples up again until her tits were taunt again and going back and forth between stretching and mashing as i watched her face so slashed with bliss as i suckled on spent clit and let my fingers bask in wet warmth.

// now this is why i fuck you so hard and good [There could hardly be anything in life more exciting than this, Laura realized in the split second between Randi's twitch and the full arrival of a crushing, thunderclap orgasm. Randi was sharply wrenched by the fierce shock of it, her long, lean body stiffening, the breath cawing in her throat, her fingers still tightly clamped on her own nipples, pinching them between fingertips and palms, almost tearing at them, her beautiful face contorted in a fury of excruciating pleasure. She could not cry out, but her body began to quake and shudder as waves of orgasmic shock poured through her. "Anngghhh!" she finally managed to croak, then took a quick breath, then screamed in a long, piercing wail. "Aanngghhiiieeee! Oohhhhnnnnnngggg! Oh shit! Auunngghmmmnnnggg!" She jackknifed and surged up off the bed, straining, jerking. "Yes, honey, yes!" Laura panted to her, still rubbing the spot inside Randi's pussy where she had discovered the jackpot, then sucking her clit again, knowing that successive waves of thrilling spasms were still possible, feeling overjoyed when Randi's body again gave in to a few more sharp jolts. "Unhhh! Ohnnggghhh! Auunnngghmmnneeee!" she wailed again, this time turning and thrashing in the rumpled sheets, digging her heels into the mattress and thrusting her pelvis up into Laura's face, her hips shaking and her face grimacing wildly as another sweet, less powerful but probably equally blissful climax shook her flexing body.] now isn't that so much satisfying that just saying she came hard. you need the details to make the reader understand just how wonderful orgasms are. you show how the body is jolted apart and the sounds we make when our bodies are being apart with bliss. i really mean it when i say i have never seen one author use the realistic sounds you do. so many fuck in silence and others just use arrgghhhhh and nothing else or have them always scream in all caps. at least go between lower and upper case letters. i so love how you have laura encouraging randi on and how this spurs randi to greater heights of ecstasy. plus, you use several paragraphs to detail the pleasure flowing through randi's veins while other authors just say it happens basically. now i have to give the harem author credit but after a few chapters you discover he uses the same formula over and over while with you i never now how you will describe the divine moment of heaven on earth. thank goodness for you is all i can say!

// i so love the dreamy post coital time you give the reader. we get to see randi all blasted by her killer orgasm and just basking in great big O. laura is keeping her fingers deep inside randi's spent cunt and feeling their love twine. i so love this time when gentle conversation is made and love deepens. i find most women quickly recover enough for me to slowly pump their cunts with my fingers. i will slowly pull out and suck clean and bury again in their spent pussies and twirl around and then bring them out and feed them to my tired slut and let her clean my fingers off as i slowly pump them in and out her mouth. i will slowly move up her body and start to suck her nipples softly and pull taunt to make her clit jump twitch. i will suck and tongue lathe and then let her nipple pop out and move over to her other tit or just stare down at her tit and make eye contact with her and dive down on her tit and suck it voraciously up into my mouth again and slowly suck and tongue stab it to prolong her pleasure and make her clit throb out every last ounce of pleasure possible. of course this often leads to heated fucking again. lucky me! always love your sweet words of love ["True," Laura shrugged. "I almost came just looking at you." "You say the sweetest things, Miz Laura. If you were that close, then I guess it won't take me a minute to get you off." She began to kiss her way down Laura's body.] love how they fuck to exhaustion through the night. i so love to fuck until my cunt is ruined and my asshole has been pounded and my muscles are so strained and tired. i feel so fucking perfect! it is such a shame when you can meet some angels so rarely and have to make the most of your time by pure fucking to make it last until next time. a little mystery to end the chapter is nice ["Isn't life sweet," Laura said, with sharp irony. "We can have each other even when apart." "Sometimes it's better that way," Randi said mysteriously, opening the door.] i too often think of other great fucks when i am fucking my current woman. i so love marrying the past with the present.

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