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Chapter 302:

//  i have to like how this new chapter starts with.  i too love bangs.

recently, i went back to bangs.  i had not worn them in about ten years

and my archangels just love it.  i think it makes me look like i'm in

college again.  i am happy that laura loves bangs too.  i sure do.  it

just makes a woman look so cute.  i am happy that laura can still feel

the fires burring when she sees a new a woman that touches her soul and

libido.  one should always go with the desires for a new potential angel

in ones life.  makeeda is off again furthering her career and laura has

every right to seek love while she is away.  i am happy that she is

finding such bliss with makeeda but without new pussy it would so

quickly get old and stale i have found.

//  i have to smile at the conspiratorial whispering between laura and

rhonda.  they are both ogling tonya.  i am happy that laura and rhonda

have buried the hatchet.  time is to short to be catty and wasting time

fighting when one could be looking for pussy.  i see rhonda does like to

needle laura about her wandering eye and laura still spouts bullshit

about being "pure" for makeeda.  rhonda knows laura too well.  i do not

do women at the work site but once we get away i fuck their brains out.

i do have a few like valencia and colandra that sort of fit the rhonda

model.  the main difference is we fuck each other blind when we can.  i

so love sinking my face deep into her cunts and slamming my strap-on or

fist down one of thier fuck holes.  but what i really love is that we

watch and plan on the new girls and pick off the newbies that we can.

valencia is working on this new hot blonde in accounting with 36dd

tits.  she is giving us updates on how she is weakening her defenses and

i know soon she will be raping that girl to heaven and back over and

over again.

//  i like how tonya is so young and alive with sass.  i am getting

older now.  so i love finding younger women and high school girls to

seduce and fuck.  makes me feel so young and alive.  i love taking a

fifteen or sixteen year old that simonette and hillary have sent to me

and devouring her cunt and asshole and then with my acolytes sinking our

cocks and fists up her fuck holes and make her swallow our cocks or

sucking four fingers we're fucking her mouth with and watching her eyes

roll back and her body bucking and jackknifing wildly as her throat caws

around the cock down her throat or fingers gagging her mouth.  i think

tonya with the hot sassy eyes is cable of such hot fucking.  how can one

resist such beauty [After all, the girl, Tonya, with her heart-piercing

bangs and sassy smile, was incredibly fetching.  Her shoulder-length

hair was chestnut-colored and red-gold where it swished around her neck

but her bangs were black.  She wore a thick white plastic clip over the

top of her hair, from ear to ear.  Laura's heart was pinched.]  i so

love it when black women color their hair with red, orange or purple

coloring and highlights.  i so love clips and combs in hair.  makes me

want to take them out slowly as i devour your mouth with my long tongue.

//  i am reveling in laura breaking the ice with tonya and finding her

so receptive.  i have to smile with laura getting a little flustered

with tonya telling her she has noticed laura.  me it is like oh yeah.

no time wasted in breaking the ice.  i can immediately start my

seduction.  i can start giving her my full charm and subtly showing her

my beauty.  i would be feeling my pussy twitching and pulsing with

wetness setting up our lunch date.  the dance of love is on.  i would be

back at my desk squirming and squeezing my thighs in delightful

friction.  i have always loved how you so tell me the skin coloring of

your women [She had a very pretty face, with sensual lips and sparkling

black eyes, even white teeth.  She wore a subtle mauve eye shadow that

was very effective in highlighting her complexion, which was not really

black, not dark like Carmela's, for example, but more a deep tawny brown

or rich caramel.  Laura had to catch herself since she was falling into

the girl's shiny black eyes, even though Tonya did not appear to be

especially deep.]  maria is so light skinned while joann is a dark

skinned latina and i so worship their different hues.  i too do the

mental fist pump that laura is doing.

//  sigh, i sure do wish she would stop that beating herself up over

makeeda.  makeeda has told her very clearly that she has her permission

to get the pussy she needs when she is away.  honor makeeda's wishes by

dining on succulent cunt and tasty asshole is what i keep telling

laura.  one needs new love to keep the spice of love going in one's life

with you archangels.  oh boy, i can see that tonya is my kind of girl.

she likes to go to swing parties i see.  oh yeah baby!  it might be with

guys but i love women who go for the pleasure that women are supposed to

deny themselves.  i am pumping my fist again when laura ups the ante

["They may not be more exciting, but maybe they have a little more . . .

you know . . . the 'f' word?"      "Fucking?" Laura blurted out, but

softly, in order to gain Tonya's confidence.  You can be blunt with me,

darling, said her smile.      Tonya laughed, a quick guffaw that almost

made her spew out a little food.  She quickly covered her mouth with her

hand, her eyes tearing up with mirth.  "Oooohhh, you said the word!" she

laughed.]  i always take an opening offered.  if she is killing me with

her words and actions then i kiss her off but when i see that my new

soon to be lover is responding i lay on the charm and up the heat every

chance like here.  i love getting them to loosen up and start talking

dirty and sexy.  it helps me to seduce them.

//  oh yeah, i love seeing that tonya allowed six guys to do her.  i

have had four guys do me at once (back in high school) and loved it.

hard cock slamming deep into me, pleasuring me and then i can tell them

to get lost.  i have to admit i was stunned when Tonya said that they

did not fuck her in the ass.  i was flabbergasted.  i just assumed that

with all those cocks that were plunging up all her fuck holes.  i mean

the gods gave us these fuck holes to use.  if you have multiple cocks

and strap-ons on hand USE them.  sometimes now i go to dodie and

frankie's for a little het party.  dodie was gone and frankie called me

and said she had three men coming over and did i want to join.  i did.

i don't have much use for men really, but feeling frankie bucking her

hips, slamming her eleven inch strap-on up my cunt while these guys took

turns raping my asshole and doing ring around the roses with me cleaning

their cocks straight out my asshole with my greedy mouth.  so fucking

good.  then fucking frankie with the guys slamming our cocks deep into

her screaming body and finishing her off with a cock up her cunt and

down her throat with my fist deep up her shit hole pumping and twisting

hard.  again, i am always saddened when women don't truly fuck with

their all.  give yourself completely to pleasure and you will be

rewarded so divinely.

//  i am smiling at laura being peaked with curiosity and arousal at

tonya's story.  in some ways laura is kind of innocent to me.  she is

fucking hot and makes love like a goddess but she is so less kinky than

me.  sigh, the typical male ego raises its ugly head i see.  they want

the woman to be theirs totally and get all overly emotional when things

don't go their way.  it is the violence that i hate so.  all the stories

i read in the paper on on tv about men killing their women.  just

another reason i am disgusted with men generally.  they just can't stop

abusing us when they can.  they know i would kill them if they ever gave

me that kind of shit.  i so love laura's loving ways.  she reassures

tonya after her telling laura her story.  she fears laura thinks bad of

her but laura tells her ["I certainly don't think you're a whore.  I

think you're . . . really attractive."]  such a story would have me

soaking wet and dying to show her why women rock the world in bed.  let

her see what a strap-on can do and start working on getting me some

virgin asshole.  i so love licking and finger fucking a virgin asshole

and then slipping my cock deep up her colon and make her die from a

sphincter shredding anal 'gasm.  i find offering my asshole to them

freely and watching me die from heart rending orgasm has them dying for

me take their asshole hard and deep and soon their screaming and

careeming around the bed in the throes a truly harrowing anal orgasm

ripping their sphincter to shreds and are soon begging for me to to fuck

their ass harder and more violently and with encouragement i have them

soon begging for my love fist up their asshole.  of course i give it to

them!!!

//  i like how laura doesn't blanch when tonya knows she is a lesbian.

i use this as time to start the hunt moving full speed ahead.  once it

is out and she is still with me i know that if do everything right i

will eventually have her.  might take some time but almost always i

succeed once i get them interested and fascinated.  i have heard many

times that maybe i could go down on them but not the other way around.

i love laura's answer to tonya's declaration ["Don't worry about it.

It's no big deal.      I've had lesbians come on to me before.  Two of

them.  One was fat, but the other one was pretty.  She was black.  I

didn't want to do it, though.  The thought of going down on another girl

makes me gag.  Not so much her going down on me, just me going down on

her.  Know what I mean?"      Laura smiled ironically.  "I guess I

don't."]  let her know that her thinking is not really logical.  i love

it when a newbie simply goes insane with sucking my pussy inside out and

they are almost addicted sucking me off again and again drinking down my

gushing cunt nectars and moaning deeply and sucking me hard for even

more orgasms and cunt cream.  a few times i have had  to push them away

really hard and roll up in a fetal position or on my stomach pushing

down tight to keep them from sucking my cunt even more raw.

//  i know the dance well.  the woman is obviously interested and wants

it but man's brainwashing is fucking her up.  i smile like laura here

and let them know that i am available anytime.  i will constantly work

on them.  i always get their phone, email, IM and such and then slowly

work on them with subtle compliments and easy going stroking and showing

interest in their every day life.  show genuine interest and soon they

are opening up and revealing more of themselves.  i so love watching

them fall for me slowly and they don't even realize they are helping me

in seducing them.  it makes the ultimate seduction so fucking magical.

oh well, things don't fall into place for laura.  i see that makeeda is

enough to keep laura happy when she is in town.  i sure wish that laura

would fuck all the women she can get when makeeda is away.  makeeda

being the loving woman she is has given her permission.  i would die

without pussy for any length of time.  i shiver to think of laura's long

periods abstinence.  i would die, i know it.

//  finally, tonya reappears into laura's life and the game is afoot

again.  ["Hi," Tonya said brightly, smiling a huge, beaming smile.

"Still like my bangs?  You haven't said a word to me in weeks."]  i

would know that my charm has been slowly wearing down her defenses and

it is time for the love kill.  laura is a little cross at the wait but i

am very easy going.  when a new angel is being difficult i simply

partake of other angels until she is ready to come to my loving arms.  i

so love taking the game to the next level in new love and bonding.  i

always love reading your flirting and how a newbie has be guided slowly

usually.  tonya is making sure they get together and when laura can't go

to lunch she easily gives in asks laura to her house.  my cunt would

have clenched hard and soaked my panties.  i now know she is mine.  love

how women start to preen when they have confidence coursing through

their veins.  [Now Tonya flirted shamelessly.  She was wearing a skirt

with a fairly high hem, above her knees, and she crossed her legs

suggestively, watching Laura look at them.  Laura, exercising her

self-discipline to the fullest, had not really looked hard at Tonya's

legs, ever.  Some days Tonya wore pants to work, and the days when she

wore skirts Laura would studiously keep her eyes level, not daring to

look down at the girl's legs.  It was somehow as if she knew that once

she did, she would be lost; or even farther lost than she already was.

This time there was no escape.]  i love it when a woman gets confident

and sexy with me,  i just feel my animal lust rising and my desire for

new tender red cunt meat filling my mouth.  i do believe you are the

only author that shows the slow flirting and breaking down of walls.

sometimes the walls do crumble immediately, but, usually it takes some

time and one must work at various speeds like you show to bring the

woman to your loving bed and arms. i want my pussy now but working for

it makes it taste all the sweeter in my sucking mouth when a lesbian

virgin cunt is rending itself inside out pouring hot steamy cunt fluid

down my gulping mouth.

//  i just felt my stomach contract hard ["Mmmmm, you like something

maybe even better than my bangs," she said under her breath, looking

meaningfully at Laura.      It was the most blatant invitation Laura had

had in months.  It was like Tonya was saying: Okay, I've changed my

mind, I'm ready to let you fuck me now.]  i live to hear such words from

a newbie.  i can just feel lust burning my soul and clit and new love

blooming in my heart for my soon to be lover.  i don't know why laura

gets cross here except to let tonya know she is control.  me i love to

be lead even by a newbie and don't mind letting her put me under her

spell.  it just makes my heart melt for them with deeper love.  i am so

happy reading ot them going to tonya's house.  i would be all wet and

dreamy on the ride to tonya's place.  nothing is more pure than new

love. wow, i love how i never know how your stories are going to unfold

[They were driving by IKEA before Tonya spoke again.  "You know, I might

as well be honest.  I was hoping you might have one of those strap-on

things, like lesbians use.  Don't they?  Like, I dig being fucked, you

know?  I never came from having my pussy licked.  I just don't think I

can do it that way.  I like being fucked."      Laura swallowed again,

gripping the wheel more tightly again.  "You know . . ." she said

softly, in fact barely audibly, "we could stop by my place and pick it

up.  I mean, at least that's not against the rules."      A gusher of

uncontrollable laughter bubbled up from Tonya's throat.  "No, I guess it

isn't.  Why don't you."]  i had women be like this with me.  "no, no,

no" then give me everything.  i recently took a new lover at work,

bellisa.  she is a beautiful black woman.  i worked on her for six

months before she fell into my loving arms.  when her husband went

overseas recently she invited me over for dinner on a friday night, only

as "friends" of course.  i wound up spending the weekend and by the end

of the weekend she had eaten me out repeatedly and tongued fuck my

asshole like a rapid dog.  we sank my strap-on deep into our cunts and I

took her virgin asshole with my cock and later my fist.  gods i loved it

when she ripped my asshole wide open with her cock and then gaped my

shit hole and reamed my red bowel meat, doing it over again and again

with her wildly stroking and plunging tongue before fucking me to a mind

blowing anal 'gasm.  i am just thankful, that i found an author that

shows the slow seduction and how the chase makes the eventual sex so

devastating and bonding.

//  i love how you give me things to dream about.  we find that tonya

lives fairly close to laura and makeeda.  if this happened to me,

needless to say, soon joann, maria and i would be walking to her house

and seeing what happens.  i just so wish that makeeda could see what she

is missing.  the mind blistering sex she could share with laura and all

the sex could be having around the world.  so many women to fuck and so

little time.  i never want to think about what could have been.  i want

to have all the women i possibly can.  sharing with archangels and true

angles is just so magical.  i am smiling great big with the look on

tonya's face when she sees the bag in laura's hand that contains her

strap-on.  i love seeing open desire and lust on a newbie's face and

knowing i put it their.  laura knows how to make her women simmer in

their own juices and die for it when laura gives it to them.  laura is

put off my tonya's attitude but i would be going along happily [Inside

the house, she threw Laura another meaningful glance and tilted her head

toward the hallway.  "Follow me."]  the dance of love is now complete

and now lets fuck!!!  laura is a little more gentle and wants to have

some conversation.  nothing wrong with that and will happily talk and

chatter while your nerves settle.  i always want to learn more about you

but if you are ready to fuck, so i am.  I'm always ready to fuck.  i

like how laura is so like me and then again so unlike me.  you show the

individuality of women.

//  laura gets tonya to make some time.  i like reading laura because

she is so different in some ways.  she likes to go slow.  i will too,

but if the woman wants to go fast then i'm your girl.  i love sass in my

women and tonya would have me completely under her spell [Tonya tilted

her head to the side and let her tongue dance briefly outside her lips,

an enchanting little gesture that mingled with her head-tilt to make

Laura's heart flutter.  The girl could be so faux ingénue that Laura

could barely stand it.  "I like it . . . with the right person," Tonya

said softly, following Laura to the sofa and sitting down next to her,

close.]  i would simply kiss her completely silly and have her begging

for me to take her.  i love a challenge and then meeting the challenge

with flying colors.  i like how you show that the spoken word can be as

powerful as one's physical charms [Tonya smiled broadly.  "You want to

know why we're here?  It's exactly because of that, because you say

things like that.  You are the one who's the mystery, Laura.  I never

met anyone like you.  Not just because you're a lesbian, but just anyone

like you, anyone who talks like that.  You make me quiver inside when

you talk like that."]  if one is intelligent and gifted with the gift of

saying just the right thing to charm a woman's panties off then use it.

i love making women going ga-ga eyed when i saw something sweet and sexy

and i see them literally melting before my eyes and their defenses

crumbling before my will.

//  i so love kissing women who now how to kiss.  i love teaching but

having a woman who is already skilled gets the heat flowing immediately.

[Tonya seemed to get into it, too.  She discarded her clinical,

matter-of-fact manner and uptilted her beautiful mouth to Laura, who

quickly pressed her own into it.  It turned out that Tonya not only knew

how to kiss but was very talented at it.  Her full lips curved into

Laura's, and her tongue slithered out quickly to meet Laura's, curling

and coiling around it.]  sigh, i so love wrapping my long tongue around

a probing tongue and feeling our love flow between us.  feeling our

tongues flow form mouth to mouth and giving a sucked tongue hard hard

with my bobbing mouth.  i am smiling as laura again compliments tonya on

her bangs and makes her womb melt a little more.  like i said, the

spoken word can be so powerful.  then seeing tonya gagging and murmuring

in love as laura kisses her as only a woman can.  men simply kiss to get

permission to move south while we derive deep soul pleasure when we kiss

each other.  we feel it and it shows in our kissing.  for some reason

other authors only say they kiss while you actually show why it so

magical between women.

//  i like how you show the patience that women are capable of

generating.  Laura wants to take her time and kiss tonya thoroughly and

make her her total slut.  i love the gentle detail to laura running her

fingers over her face and brushing her bangs.  i love to have that done

to me and doing it to my women.  i want to devour you but i love taking

the time to love your whole face.  kissing each square centimeter of

your precious face.  i love the feel of your skin and doing braille on

your features.  i love to run my fingers through your hair and sieve you

strands through my spread fingers.  i just love watching my woman melt

before my eyes.  her eyes going unfocused and breathing becoming shallow

with rising lust.  taking a newbie slow and putting her in a dream state

so i can do this.  [Laura was now close to devouring Tonya's mouth.  She

could not control her hunger.  She kissed Tonya's smooth brown neck, and

her jaw, and her chin, and her ear, stabbing her tongue deep into it and

breathing, feeling Tonya's body clench at the feel of Laura's warm

breath going into her ear.  She got one hand under Tonya's sweater and

for the first time felt the smooth, warm, firm muscles of Tonya's back,

her fingers sliding up to the girl's bra strap.]  i so love to spear my

long tongue down a swooning woman's throat and watch her eyes roll back

and her whole body shudder wildly while she keens into my devouring

mouth.  Sigh, drilling an ear will melt any woman and then latching onto

her neck and sucking that tender flesh fast and furious between my

teeth.  I recently did that to a ninth grade girl simonette and hillary

had just seduced and had over for a weekend of education.  i loved her

screams of rapture and her hands pounding my shoulders and ears and then

pulling my face hard into her neck as i made her our total and complete

slut for the weekend (she already was but i like to preen myself).  we

got our strap-ons and raped her fuck holes as she wailed and begged for

it to never stop.  deep into the night, it was so beautitul watching

this fifteen year girl strap and synch herself into a strap-on for the

first time and then sinking her cock deep into simonette's waiting cunt

and fucking her wildly and watching her skill level rise throughout the

deep night as she fucked us all repeatedly in our pussies and willing

assholes.  by the next night she was on her knees drilling us doggy

style in our dripping cunts and spasming assholes and whipping our asses

in complete control, ordering us around like the total whores we are.

//  i so love seeing tonya croak out that she is ready for hot fucking.

i swoon when i get a lover ready for hot lesbian loving.  i am just

thankful that i have one author that shows us the foreplay that truly

makes sex so fucking wonderful.  it is the build up that makes womb melt

and ready to explode in fucking bliss and ecstasy.  your taking it slow

allows the reader to bask and revel in the foreplay and get as heated as

the lovers in the story.  my pussy is moist just reading this.  i love

seeing little facets of my women.  seeing all the stuffed animals would

make me beam and just think she is so fucking special.  i love how all

women are so unique.  they decide doing it on tonya's mother's bed.  i

can remember as a kid getting a blast out of doing it on my parents or

my girlfriend's parents bed.  it was just nasty and forbidden seeming.

now i love doing married women in their husband's bed and making them

come like never before and watching her asshole take my cock or fist and

seeing her face burrowing deep into my cunt as my hands are jerking the

back of her head as i ride their face like a bucking bronco.

//  so many authors just have the woman capitulate immediately.  That

does happen a lot but usually you need to keep an eye on things and give

her an additional shot of charm and love to finish the seduction.  here

you show tonya getting the jitters and needing that soothing on more

time.  i love how you show laura giving the final seduction to bring

tonya to her bed ["Come to me, my angel, and give me those sugar lips

again," she murmured softly.  "Laura is going to take you to heaven."]

I love saying something sexy and loving like this and just watching them

going goofy eyed and melting for me.  I then take them completely.  oh

geez, this next part is magical.  first the sass of tonya sticking out

her tongue at laura.  that would drive me up the fucking wall with lust

and love.  they then come together in that standing body clench i so

love.  mouths coming together in hungry exploration and tongues flowing

deep.  legs twining and pulling bellies tight as hands clutch and stroke

heated flesh.  i am swooning with laura palming tonya's ass and then

pulling her sweater up and over her head.  oh gods, seeing all that

wonderful flesh being exposed and feeling it in my hands against my

heated flesh.  grabbing her head and tilting our heads as i slam my

tongue down your throat and pull your heating flesh to my body as we

moan in deepening love.

//  again i love how you fill you women so much sass and fire.  tonya is

openingly loving her own body in the mirror.  i love to see women so

proud and loving of their bodies.  makes me want to love them with my

all.  i will fuck them so hard and deep.  i am smiling at tonya and

laura deciding what is best about tonya's body.  tonya loves her tits

the most.  and squeezed them for laura.  i too love my tits and will

squeeze and make them bulge for them but i'm an ass girl myself.  i love

to watch an ass in her jeans or dress and dreaming of loving it with my

fingers, tongue, fist and cock.  pulling my thick cock from your asshole

and then falling on my knees and gaping your asshole as i plunge my

tongue and lips deep into your rectum and ream you out with total love

and focus.  so love the squeals of love and begging for me to take their

asshole deeper and harder.

//  i'm smiling when laura has had enough to teasing and sass.  i love

it but sooner or later one must get down to serious loving.  i too have

to just grab my preening angel and slam my tongue down her throat and

run my fingers into her slit and start rubbing her kitty making her body

purr and start hitching while her hands clench me too her body and she

starts that mewling that tells me she is my total whore and slut for the

night.  sometimes i will be preening to much and joann or dodie will

just grab me and throw me down on the bed or floor and start fucking my

wildly as i jerk and scream in rutting fervor.  love the little detail

of clothes getting in the way of sliding naked flesh and getting naked

quickly for heated fucking.  i love whores but i always want my kissing

and foreplay.  sometimes i am like tonya and want it right always and

many times my forceful angels just take me hard and fast which makes my

womb melt and cunt flow like a river.  but i always love devouring my

whole lover's body before i dine on tender red cunt and asshole or

getting my cock ready for some good ole het fucking.

//  i see that tonya is still stripping and i love that sass of her

making sure her body is being worshipped by her lover.  i want to see

that and revel in a woman with a hot body and showing and preening it

for me.  makes me die for it.  one thing that i have always loved about

your writing is you actually describe the woman's body and make the

reader die for it also [It was firm, compact, tight, chiseled, the kind

of body, Laura realized, that would've made a bodybuilding expert like

Brandi Pearson livid with envy, for Tonya had as a gift of nature the

kind of sculptured flesh that others had to work months and years to

attain.  And she wasn't muscular in any way, as Brandi, for example,

was.  Her chiseled abs and hard thighs and perfect round breasts were

completely natural, merely the result of great genes.  Laura was

mesmerized.]  i so love the shit brick house body.  that tight body that

is simply designed to be fucked really hard.  i keep my own body up just

so i can be fucked hard all night long and give that strength back and

make women die all night in my enfolding arms and legs.  pressing my

strong body down onto hers underneath me on the bed.  grinding down on

her making her know i am going to fuck her to heaven with my strength

and skill.  i love it when they wrap their arms and legs around me and

pull me down on top of them as i slam my tongue down their throat and

tilt their head over and suck their neck like a dying vampire and their

screaming insanely pulling my head to their neck as our sweaty bodies

hump and grind against each other.

//  they finally get naked and you show that ramping up of hunger that

makes one's womb simply flip in your belly with wild desire and need.

[Laura was all over her the moment she climbed onto the mattress.  She

kissed Tonya ravenously, much more aggressively than she had done up to

now.  Her hands raced over the girl's marvelous smooth warm

flesh.        "Oh god, you really want to get to it, don't you," Tonya

gasped, giggling softly with surprise.        "Tonya . . . you are very

beautiful," Laura panted, filling her hands with Tonya's springy young

breasts.  "I knew I wanted you . . . but now I want you double."]  i

love overwhelming a newbie with the passion, skill and focus that only a

another woman can bring.  ramping up the hunger and making her writhe

and squirm for it.  i just bask and preen when a woman is so shocked and

overwhelmed with the love and passion that only women can bring.  i

always love reading your words of love and worship.  showing a woman

your true love will always make her melt for you and give herself to you

completely.  other authors make the seduction so bland and crass while

you show how each seduction is so magical and special.

//  i so love reading your descriptions of women's breast.  you show so

clearly what i love with women of color's bodies.  there can be so many

hues and variations in skin color of their breast, nipples and vaginas.

it is like opening a wonderful present and never knowing exactly what

you will discover.  you then show that devouring of tit meat that i so

love.  sucking a thick rubbery nipple deep into my mouth and sucking it

hard and deep.  lathing that nipple or tongue stabbing it hard with my

tongue.  sucking hard with hollowing cheeks.  raking the nipple with my

teeth and pulling that meat out with my pulling head.  i have always

smiled when laura backs off and asks if she is doing it too hard when

the woman is obvious dying from it.  she asks tonya is she is doing it

too hard and she of course croaks "harder."  me i devour their tits hard

and whisper if they want it harder.  i so smile when i almost always

hear a croaked or keened "harder" and i pour on the heat and hear such

divine screams of rapture and want.  i love sinking my teeth into her

tit and areola and having her back arching and grabbing my head and

stuffing my mouth full of tit meat begging for more.  gods know that i

love to feel hard teeth nips and teeth rakes of my nipples and areolas

making me die and scream with burning pleasure.

//  you give me some of that detailed loving that makes my womb burn

with need and want [Laura sucked it again, then the other one, switching

back and forth, sucking gently, then harder, until Tonya was writhing

and panting rapidly.  Her breasts were indeed marvelous, but there was

no way Laura, as orally obsessed as she was, could keep her mouth off

the rest of Tonya's young, hard body.  Her stomach and abs and ribcage

and belly and the smooth shallow groove that ran the length of her torso

from her breastbone to her navel were enough to occupy Laura for another

hour, it seemed.  She ran her tongue over the dips and cambers and firm

muscles of Tonya's delicious body, then kissed it, then sucked it, while

Tonya watched this adoration with mute fascination, merely panting and

stroking Laura's hair while Laura worshipped her naked body.]  that

devouring of bunched tits.  i love going back and forth and leaving spit

all over them and massaging the tits hard with my fingers sinking deep

into tit meat squeezing and milking pure pleasure from them.  i have

made some women cum just from my intense breast loving.  sigh, who

wouldn't swoon reading laura devouring tonya's whole body.  kissing,

licking and sucking each square centimeter of tonya's body.  i love to

kiss ribs and that hollow between them and every camber and plane of you

tummy and rib edge.  i so love kissing a heaving belly.  this slow

meticulous loving of the whole body is something only you show.  other

authors focus so much on the mouth, tits, and pussy that they miss all

this divine flesh to love and focus on.

//  I have to smile at tonya totally overwhelmed by laura's total focus

on her body.  she has only had men and thus, doesn't know what it is

like to be made love to with total focus.  i have simply driven hets and

bi's who have forgotten wild with my focused loving.  i deliberately

make love to their whole body and fuck them over and over to simply

drive them insane with pleasure.  i have had women break down weeping

and declaring their undying love for me after a night of long, hot

fucking.  i make them my total slut and whore who will jump off a

mountain backwards for me.  i never take advantage of them and help them

see just how wonderful sharing love can be.  i help them to see that one

should share their love with many partners and fully partake of all the

pleasures the flesh can give and all that women can offer and take.  i

love opening up a totally new world to them.  i love reading laura

loving the whole body because i know how overwhelming it is.  i just lie

back and let them take my body and fuck me blind when on the receiving

end of my wonderful angels loving.

//  i have to smirk at tonya being so anxious for the strap-on.  i can

understand it because that is her frame of reference.  when i have had a

newbie keep going about how great male sex is i make sure to fuck them

to insanity with my long, thick cock.  i pin their ass to the bed and

grudge fuck them hard and deep.  i love to roll those legs back and use

my arms to keep their feet in the air as i slam my cock straight down

their cunt and impale their ass on the fucking mattress as they wail in

ecstasy.  taking my cock and slamming straight down their tight asshole

and making them scream for it as i stretch their asshole wide open and

then gaping their asshole before taking their cunt again.  fucking both

holes until their completely delirious and when totally under my spell

taking my cock straight from their asshole and watching them hum and

purr as they clean their asshole off my cock before i slam it backup

their spasming cunt and keep fucking them until their cunt or asshole is

shredding itself apart on my pile driving cock.  They are then

completely mine.

//  i love to fuck you het style but i need my tasty gash like laura

here [She surmised that she was committed by now to fucking Tonya with

the strap-on, which would be okay, but first she wanted to taste the

girl's incredible body entirely, and that meant her sweet pussy too.

She slid between Tonya's parting thighs, covering both dark golden

columns of flesh with hot kisses, drawing closer each time with her lips

to the oozing, slightly open seam of Tonya's young pussy but not yet

touching it.]  i so love to just gaze at a festering pussy and inhale

its intoxicating aroma and look at your pussy from all angels and bring

my nose to just over you cunt and inhale deep your unique smell of

aroused pussy.  i so love big thighs that i can kiss and smooch and lick

up and down and message with my strong fingers reveling in their

strength and suppleness.  i know that confidence that laura feels when

she is about to devour a lesbian virgin's cunt.  i love that shocked

look that comes over their face as their head rocks up and they look at

you wild eyed and you see total love and lust filling their orbs and you

know that true love is once more blossoming as you devour her pussy like

it has always dreamed of being eaten.  watching eyes roll back and

seeing her neck cord up tight and jerk hard on tense muscles and then

sucking her clit extra hard with rapid tongue bats and watching her wail

in ecstasy and then her neck goes nerveless and her head disappears as

it crashes to the mattress with a hard thud.  pure heaven on earth let

me tell you.

//  i have always loved how you show slow.  me i so love reading of your

slowness and asides.  other authors are just full speed ahead.  so am i

at the time of the love kill but one needs plenty of slow skillful

loving and foreplay to make a woman's womb shatter with piercing

ecstasy.  of course many times you fuck like rabid bunnies at the drop

of a hat but that only works if most of the time you do it right and

work the body full to make it so taunt that you can love kill her to

pure fucking ecstasy.  i love this precious detail here [Finally, after

several minutes of skillful teasing, she was there.  She rubbed her chin

playfully in the curly patch of hair above Tonya's slightly puckering

slit.  Tonya's pussy was extremely beautiful, a long, thin slit,

completely black even though most of Tonya was dark gold in color.  A

wet glimmer of pink showed between the barely parted lips, which Laura

was almost too enchanted to touch with the tip of her tongue.]  i so

love to do this and or run my nose through your patch if you don't

shave.  i love to rut around and plow the furrows i like to say.  play

with your clit with my nose.  sigh, love the word pictures of her

beautiful cunt.  so perfect and i bask in each pussy you describe.  i

love reading your pictures of old lover's pussy's.  i will eat up each

word picture you give me.  i am simply addicted to pussies and bask in

each one i devour and each one i devour by proxy through your wonderful

stories.

//  have to smile at the g-spot determination.  i don't always find it

but when i do i thank the gods and will go their again and again when

the mood is right.  now you give the loving words that other authors

never use.  their women are forced to fuck without loving words flowing

from lovers that truly ignite the soul with love and desire,  ["Oh

honey, you have such a beautiful pussy . . ." she breathed to Tonya.

"Are you going to let me kiss it?"      "Unhhh!  Oh!  God, yes Laura . .

. please.  Ohhhh . . . you're making me feel . . . wonderful!"      Now

Laura insinuated the tip of her tongue between Tonya's long, thin, black

cunt lips, into the wet pink, and then pushed her tongue in further,

parting them.       "Oh . . . shit . . ." Tonya gasped softly, her eyes

rolling up briefly.]  i love both the words of love from laura and what

you show the woman receiving feels.  women express themselves so freely

and i am thankful that one author captures this.  women love to let

their women know just how wonderful you are making them feel.  part of

it is selfish because we know it will inspire her to love you harder and

more focused.  i love feeding my angels egos and feeling them ramp up

their loving even more and taking me to fucking heaven.

//  sigh, so love the details of laura beginning her feast of succulent

black cunt meat.  feeling those thighs clamp on your face and humping

you hard.  pushing those thighs back or up and back and devouring

seeping red cunt meat.  swallowing her tangy nectars with greedy gulps

as tongue and lips consume her cunt.  stroking her body with your hands

before sinking fingers hard and deep up her clenching cunt and or

asshole.  taking your time to work her from her asshole up past her

swollen clit.  working her juicy slit and clit over and over as you move

all around.  hearing those clotted whines and moans of rising ecstasy.

working her slowly harder and deeper making her begin to writhe in

ecstasy.  you being a great author show the slow beginning so you can

then show the ramping up of love to a whole new level that is still

before the final conflagration ["Ohhnnnnn!" Tonya moaned, writhing,

panting, looking wildly desirable to Laura, who in spite of herself

accelerated the tempo a little, now probing Tonya's wet pussy with two

fingers, reversing them to rub the inner front wall of Tonya's pussy,

searching for the g-spot.      At the same time she began seriously to

tongue and suck Tonya's firm little clit, spreading her pussy lips apart

with her thumbs so that it emerged from its hood, lashing it with her

tongue and hearing Tonya whimper and groan.]  working that clit hard and

working that frontal pussy wall or driving and twisting your three

fingers hard and deep up her spastic asshole.  working her harder and

seeing her body clenching more desperately while louder and more

desperate wails fill our love nest with pure love.

//  you keep pouring on the fucking heat and i love how you show laura

encouraging tonya on with loving words of hot sex and urging onwards

toward her orgasm.  i have found, just telling a woman to cum when she

is on the razor's edge just pushes them over explosively like here with

tonya.  thank you for so lovingly showing this wonderful dynamic and

what it produces [It was so stupendous that Tonya could not make a

sound.  Instead, her lovely hard young body quaked and shuddered

uncontrollably as truly shattering convulsions gripped her.  Her entire

pelvis rose up off the mattress, juddering wildly in midair, as Laura

struggled to hold on, her lips still pressed to the girl's spasming

pussy, her fingers still embedded in it and rubbing the secret spot

vigorously.      "Mmmnnggggniiiieee!" Tonya finally wailed, but in a

distant, soft whinny more than a scream.      Then she fell silent again

as fresh spasms wrenched her.  Her muscular body clenched, then quivered

deeply, her heels digging into the mattress, her hips churning as she

pushed her pussy into Laura's face.  Then another clotted cry escaped

from her throat.      "Anngghhhh!  Ohnnngg!  Ummmmmm!  Oh . . . shit . .

. Laura!"]  gods, i love having a woman's cunt lifting off the bed with

those ragged desperate humps of a bucking and shuddering pelvis.

placing my hands if free under her buns and helping her hump my face in

the air as i rise up on my knees to devour that wonderful cunt meat in

mid air.  i so love to dig my heels hard into the mattress and lift

myself up as my cunt is devoured by a hot mouth or my woman is slamming

a hard dildo up my exploding cunt or asshole and sucking my clit down

her throat as i hump wildly and tear at the mattress with my clenching

hands and scream out how much i'm in love with her and telling her i'm

her complete slut and whore forever.

//  one thing i love about g-spot orgasms is when you get a gusher.

hillary is like that.  i remember the first i time went for her g-spot

after simonette told me she had one.  i was sucking her clit hard and

raking those nerves for all i was worth.  i could tell she was close but

i got a little distracted.  simontte was slapping her heavy hooters and

face hard.  she then fisted her hair with one hand and lifted her head

up and was smacking her cruelly while calling her a worthless "slut",

"cheap whore" and a "no good fucking nigger" and such.  hillary was

moaning piteously and i had sort of stopped pumping her cunt and sucking

her clit watching the show.  she reached down with a grip of iron and

stated to pump my hand.  getting the message i got to pumping hard and

fast.  still watching i saw simonette reach down and grip both of

hillary's large areolas with her cruel clenching hands and she ground

and twisted hillary's heavy tit meat and lifted her tits up while

pulping her thick nipples.  suddenly, hillary screamed like she was

being flayed alive and her arms pounded down on the bed repeatedly and

her whole body stiffened and vibrated.  i was hit right between the eyes

with a hot gush of pure heavenly cunt juice.  stunned i blinked and her

second squirt hit me right in the teeth.  i got my bearings immediately

and opened my mouth wide and clamped onto her exploding cunt.  gods,

three more heavy spasms of pure divine cunt nectar filled my mouth and

poured down my throat.  the excess poured out my mouth and soaked my

face and chest and smeared my hair.  as her cunt was still trembling and

splattering cunt juice i wallowed my face and hair in her messy cunt.  i

was in pure heaven and have been back repeatedly for more divine gushing

cum.  i love pay backs and later watched hillary whip simonette with a

belt putting red welts all over her pale skin before she raped her

asshole with a twelve inch dildo.  she pounded simontte so hard and deep

with such forceful love.  simonette came so hard she almost passed out

in ecstasy.  then it was my turn to be abused and love raped!!

//  i have to smile at the stunned wonder on tonya's face.  i have seen

it so many times over the years.  that is what lesbian loving produces.

pure heave on earth.  i like reading this [Laura kissed her, and if

Tonya was disturbed by the taste of her own cunt nectars on Laura's

lips, she did not show it.  For Laura the kiss was incendiary.  Oh god,

I want to fuck this lovely girl! she thought.  I want her to fuck me

until I come just as hard as she did.]  actually, i am surprised at how

so many supposedly hets love the taste of vaginal cum right off the bat

or maybe a little hesitant at first but then they quickly become so

addicted and are constantly at your cunt for more.  a few times i have

to roll over and press my cunt down on the bed or floor for self

protection they are so desperate for more cunt nirvana.  i love it of

course, but i hate having my cunt worked so hard and fast she actually

blows out and then i'm out of commission for hours while my clitty

recovers.  just give me a little time to recover after my kitty has

gotten a few orgasms under her belt.

// i love reading of tonya gushing about her recent trip to the star

filled heavens and you can just see that a whole new world has been

opened to her.  i so love being the one or part of a group that has

shown a woman the truth.  i love seeing the need in laura and her

telling tonya she needs some loving.  again that communication that i so

love and get so little of in other's stories.  i live to hear this from

a newbie [Now Tonya looked sheepish.  "I guess . . . I could try it.

Maybe it wouldn't."]  i just give them my biggest doe eyes and simper to

them my need and love for them.  i will take two of their fingers and

run them through my slit and then slowly pump my tight cunt and bring

her soaked fingers up to my mouth and suck clean with an open obscene

show and then fuck myself again with her fingers and this time feed them

to her.  she always accept and i love seeing her eyes flutter shut and

her moans of hungers.  i then gently push down  on her head as she

almost flows south to my weeping aching cunt.  sometimes they hesitate

but i just whimper and undulate slowly and tell them how much i love

them.  i so swoon seeing them settle between my legs and i slowly pull

their head forward if i need too and soon i have ravenous beast

devouring my hot, red, swollen cunt with wild abandon and i'm freely

humping their face while i clench the back of their head and ride their

mouth hard and fast until i come screaming and pouring hot cunt nectars

into her mouth as she gulps it all down and is soon begging and pawing

at my worn out kitty for more and i freely give them their fill.  i so

love giving myself totally to my new angels and cherished dear lovers.

//  laura is willing to take the loving in another direction.  me i want

you to go down on me as soon as i can.  i don't really feel complete

until you eat me out to a screaming orgasm and you loving every second

of it.  i will delay if i sense is necessary.  giving them a few more

orgasms or letting them jerk me off but you will be going down on me

soon and loving it.  laura positions tonya for some sweet tummy fucking

i see.  i love how you show laura positioning and coaching tonya in

their lovemaking.  i have come to find so boring when other authors just

have the sex act happen like something from a bad broadway play.  you

show the dynamics and communications of women in love and loving.  i am

so their as laura gags with the heavenly sensations of nice hard stomach

rubbing and grinding your cunt ot nirvana.  i also love how you show the

shock a woman who is suddenly exposed to how this feels.  they may know

basic trib but for a lot this is so exciting and new.  i love my

weightlifter and aerobic girlfriends.  we have such wonderful stomachs

for stomach fucking.  dodie has taken a personal trainer, natalie as a

new lover.  she is so fucking toned.  our first threesome together dodie

rode her stomach hard while i rode her face like a bronco buck.  we both

came so hard and saturated her body with our cum.  i was facing dodie

and we kind of collapsed into each other holding each other up.  we then

recovered and reversed our positions and i rode her wet, slimy stomach

while dodie rode her face from her nose to her chin with hard aching

sweeps of her shaved cunt.  riding dodie's juices on natalie's stomach

had me coming within two minutes and i spasmed and screamed until i

collapsed on the bed in a twisted heap.  i watched dodie ride her face

with wild grinding for several minutes.  i finally recovered and got up

on my knees in front of dodie and bent down and sucked her nipples hard

while i pulped her tits and then bit into her areolas and raked her

nipples cruelly.  gods, dodie just screamed and grinded down on

natalie's face as scalding waves of cum poured from her rupturing cunt

as dodie clenched both fists in natalie's hair above natalie's forehead

and pulled her face up hard into her cunt as natalie sucked it inside

out and swallowed all her cun with wild snorts and grunts of pure

happiness.  she was one fucking mess.

//  of course you capture a truly rupturing cunt rubbing orgasm so well

["Unhh!  Ohnnn!"  And then it was there.  One second it was not there,

and the next a sharp leap of flame flared up in a hot spurt inside

Laura's pussy, and suddenly she was wrenched by hot spasms of coming.

"Auunngghhhh!" she cried out, pitched forward physically by a jolt.

"Oh!  Aunngghhhhh!"      Her hands landed on the sheet on both sides of

Tonya's head, above her shoulders, and, steadying herself there, Laura

whinnied and gyrated her crotch down into Tonya's body as the sweet,

piercing spasms of sexual release ripped through her flesh.]  one night

i was riding cindy's toned stomach with my open, splayed cunt while she

humped up forcefully into my flowing pussy.  i had both hands dug into

shari's ass cheeks as she stood over cindy and had her hands clenched in

my hair and was humping my face as i humped cindy's pussy.  i so love

receiving and giving at the same time.  i started working her clit with

hard deep throat sucks while i wormed two fingers up her asshole and

pumped it hard with my twisting fingers.  suddenly shari was screaming

and jackknifing as her pelvis bucked and humped madly up and down my

face and jamming my mouth and bruising my lips.  she weakened and

flopped down on the bed and jolted and flopped and i could finally lean

forward and grab a hold of the sheets like laura and within one minute i

was screaming and slamming my stomach down into cindy's grinding

stomach.  i slowly collapsed as i came and cindy latched onto a nipple

and suckled softly and hummed as i half laid my weight on her and

continued to scream and jackknife in ecstasy.  i came so fucking long

and hard.  my cunt was simply ruined.  i groggily rolled over with

cindy's petite body on me and soon she was asleep with her head on my

breast and drooling away while gently snoring and shari snuggled up

underneath my arm and her body pressed to mine.  sigh, two beautiful

black women snuggled on my body while our cum and sweat covered bodies

warmed each other in deep love as we snuggled beneath a draped sheet.

//  i love how you show that laura rides out the aftershocks for a full

two minutes of purest heaven of a ruptured cunt that can just slide and

rock over those hard planes and cambers while your cunt weeps and flows

cunt cream that rolls over her sides and soaks her back and bed.  i have

had heard words like this many times over the years ["I never knew you

could come that way," she said, her voice soft and awestruck.  "I mean,

anybody.  I never knew anybody could come that way.  It makes sense, of

course.  You were pretty horny.  And you just needed some . . . rubbing,

I guess."  She looked down at the shiny wetness Laura's pussy had spread

over her stomach muscles.  Her face broke into a broad grin.  "I guess

my tummy is even sexier than I thought, right?"]  i so love reading your

women discovering great sex.  other authors just make it so bland.  many

do have the declarations of love that good hot fucking produces but they

forget to express the joy and wonder women feel when they finally

discover life shaking sex and love for the first time.  you show that

wonder that a newbie has when she is shown just was is possible with a

woman as a lover.  i love seeing and hearing words spoken in an almost

awed voice.  taking my awed lover in my arms and snaking my tongue down

her throat and watching her eyes roll back as i take her heaven yet

again and watch her soul simply melt for me and i make her my total

slut.

//  of course i love the kissing and cuddling during the post coital

time.  i so love taking a lover in my arms and pulling our bodies tight

as i snake by long tongue down her throat and our legs twine and our

tits mash and squeeze out and nipples gently dig and probe temporarily

satiated flesh.  i so love to gently rock back and forth on my back with

my lover on top of me and our tits all mashed together and our still

sweaty and cum covered flesh squirming against each other as pure love

flows through our spearing and twining tongues.  you are the only author

who gives me this post coital time and i am so thankful for it.  we

women cherish this so much and i wonder why even other female authors

just don't show the cuddling and languid kissing and caressing.  they

always seem to kiss once and go straight to sleep.  yeah, you do reach

that fucked out stage and you go to sweet slumber with your angels but,

hey, come on we women love to cuddle, stroke, kiss and talk during the

sweet after glow and i'm thankful that you show it so beautifully and

well.  love the detail of laura fluffing her bangs and tonya being so

captivated by it.  i will do anything once i see it makes you ga-ga eyed

for me.  i want you to fall totally in love with me and become my total

slut and soon become a wonderful lover that our intimate circle can

share and love deeply.

//  i have to smile at tonya's declaration of being hetro.  i just smile

at them.  we all have a lover or two that only seems to be comfortable

with her initial lover but i find we can quickly show her just what she

is missing.  given time we have made almost all see the light.  once

they see just what they are missing they simply go wild and you almost

have to beat them off with a stick.  it is fucking wonderful.  tonya is

falling.  she just doesn't know it yet.  laura is wise to take her one

stage at a time.  i just take them as fast as i can and no faster.  get

her comfortable with herself and me and then take her higher and higher

with soul crushing orgasms and plant the seeds that i have other

archangels and angels just as good as me and let me share you with

them.  once they do they never ever go back.  they are like little girls

in a candy store going wild with lust and love.  i love how you capture

this slow education and seduction to a new life style and way of living.

//  i so love getting a newbie to this stage [Laura smiled lazily,

knowing that for the present she had this delicious girl in her power.

She wanted to comply with this sexually electrifying request, and yet

she was in no hurry to get there.  "I hope you'll let me enjoy these

again for a few minutes first," she murmured, holding Tonya's very firm

naked breasts in both hands and dropping her mouth to them.  "You have

marvelous breasts, my darling.  I love your thick candy nipples."

Tonya watched Laura's lips on them.  "I love the way you . . . play with

them.  The way you suck them.  Unhhhhh!  You do it hard!"]  you so know

when you have her under your spell.  i have loved watching laura over

the years seducing these beautiful women and showing them the truth.  i

have basked and reveled in every one of her seductions and masturbated

to many a crushing orgasm with these divine fuck angels.  screaming and

thrashing around in my chair or bed as my cunt gushes cum all over my

body and bed and my fingers or dildo slam up cunt and or asshole.  i

have lain their spent with their first orgasm and then start reading

again and have to jack myself off to another screaming searing orgasm

when they have another blistering orgasm in the story.  sometimes i have

absolutely wrecked my bed along with laura and her angels.  i so love

reaching the end of a story all spent and sweaty and covered in cum and

totally besotted and happy with life.

//  nothing in life can better than taking a woman's tits again after

her first orgasm and working them with total focus and love.  working

fast and slow / hard and soft like laura here.  you show that variation

in lovemaking that other authors never show.  by not showing this

variation they make lovemaking seem so boring and same seeming.  that

would quickly become so boring and make one jaded.  only you show how

you keep loving making so fucking hot by constantly changing your style

and focus.  this keeps it fresh and your woman totally yours in bed.

sure makes me your total whore and love bunny.  i so love working my

angel and reducing her to this [After a few minutes of this, Tonya was

twisting and whimpering softly again.  "Ohhnnnnn . . . I think we better

get on with it.  I'm getting so wet for you."]  i live to hear such

words from my women.  i know i have given them the pleasure they deserve

when i  hear such words.  sigh, i love the next part when laura traces

her loving fingers down tonya's beautiful stomach and runs her fingers

through her sodden slit.  i so shudder with fresh love when i stroke my

woman's cunt and find it a soupy mess.  i just run my fingers up and

down her slit getting them all soaked and greasy with her slimy love

juices.  using my slicked fingers and forking her clit and giving her

rapid squeezing frigging making her pelvis jump, teeth clench and eyes

bulge with overwhelming pleasure.  a foretaste of the ecstasy i'm about

to give her.

//  one thing i have always liked about your stories is you show the

flow of lovemaking.  we get to see that laura would dearly love some

trib action and thinks of scissor fucking tonya but yields to tonya's

wishes.  i do this all the time and i know my angels do so for me.  we

women always want to give to our angels and will morph the lovemaking to

truly satisfy our lovers.  here laura gets in the strap-on harness and

is armed for action.  i love how tonya is awed at the ridges on laura's

cock.  that is one advantage we have since our cocks are man made we can

have ridges, upswept curves, two cock heads, obscene heads, etc.  we can

be so varied with our equipment so to speak.  i have always enjoyed how

you take your time in your lovemaking.  most authors just have the women

fuck but you show how taking your time allows you to bask in the beauty

of your women [Tonya did not speak but rolled onto her back and spread

her thighs.  The ripples and cambers of her hard stomach nearly made

Laura swoon with surging lust all over again, and the red-gold glinting

of her hair falling around her neck and shoulders only supercharged the

effect.  This is the view those lucky boys get just before they plow her

pretty little trench, Laura realized, looking down at Tonya's

magnificent naked body lying there to receive the hard, jutting

projectile that protruded from her groin.  She smiled and caressed the

hard yet silky flesh of Tonya's marvelous midriff with the fingers of

her free hand.]  i so love to pause and look at the beauty that is my

angel.  memorizing all her swells, curves and all the glories that are

her breast, pussy and ass.  you really are the only author that gives

details of her women.  this is what really brings them alive and lets

the breath and truly feel.  i so love watching tonya spread her thighs

in offering and love.  i so love seeing that as i get between your

thighs and get ready to sink my cock deep up her cunt or asshole.

//  again you make your penetrations so special.  other authors just

basically have it happen.  the sinking of their cock into their woman's

love holes.  i so love reading laura guiding her cock to tonya's love

hole and slowly pushing it in deep.  i so love to work my cock so

lovingly into my slut.  sometimes i will run my cock head up and down

her slit getting it all slicked or taking my cock and slapping her slit

and clit with it as her pelvis humps and judders.  sigh, i so love your

penetration ["Unnhhhhh!" Tonya gasped softly, her eyes going briefly

glassy and rolling up as the sensations of being penetrated by it

overcame her.  "Oh god yes . . . all the way . . . unhhhh!  Oh

shit!"      Laura did slide it slowly all the way in, then waited,

hovering, watching as Tonya absorbed the full range of sensations that

came from being completely crammed by it for the first time.]  you

capture so perfectly the feel and reactions of feeling a large cock

sliding deep into your body.  i so love taking a long hard dildo up my

cunt or asshole.  i just gag and feel my body shudder as i feel long

inches sliding up my pussy and feeling that cock head buried so fucking

deep in my belly.  i so love to be impaled.  i am smiling great big when

tonya is gagging feeling a cock deeper in her body than ever before.  i

love taking our longer strap-ons or dildos and sinking them balls deep

into a newbie and seeing her eyes bulge and her grunts and groans of

ecstasy.  i so love giving a woman sensations and pleasures she has

never experienced before.

//  another thing i like about using strap-ons is the fact that we are

not limited by what nature gave us.  tonya has never had a man with a

cock larger than the ridged dildo which i'm guessing is seven maybe

eight inches in length.  tonya seems adventuresome and i'm sort of

surprised she hasn't seen at least one man with something near

equivalent.  laura is right though, the hardness of plastic, ivory or

maybe some cool stony material and those ridges can sure make it seem

longer.  we keep a large variety and different lengths in our arsenal

and so do our other main angels. some angels have small vaginas and some

just can't take much in the asshole so we use special small cocks on

them.  now that simonette and hillary are deflowering girls in high and

middle school i have used some of my smaller cocks on their virgins and

near virgins.  then as their fuck holes are stretched out we sink longer

and thicker cocks deeper and harder into their yearning fuck holes.  i

remember when they seduced a virgin moral majority type, kathy.  a

beautiful brunette with perfect upswept tits.  they had taken her cherry

a few weeks before but they invited me over to hillary's house to help

break her in to strap-on sex.  she nearly swooned when she knew a thirty

something woman was going to be fucking her too.  that first night we

used our little five and six inch cocks and worked that cunt open and

took her asshole repeatedly.  gods, her screams and wails of ecstasy and

the way she pounded her asshole down on plunging cocks and hummed in

pure happiness when we feed her our cocks straight from her asshole.

now we pound her fuck holes with our ten + inch cocks and even do double

vaginal and double anal raping of her willing body.  i so swoon in love

when i see hillary sliding her large black cock hard in her asshole as

my pale pole slowly worms through her sphincter and is soon riding on

top of hillary's cock and we are pumping both poles in her stretched

wide open asshole and simonette is fisting kathy's hair and pumping her

cock, skull fucking kathy's drooling, gagging mouth and i see kathy

gripping simonette's ass cheeks to drive her throat deeper down the cock

that was just plundering her asshole so fucking deep.  i ask, can life

get any better than this.  so much lust and love to share and give.

//  i guess it is obvious that most would call me kinky and loving hard

fucking.  but i need the gentle and soothing fucking to get the fires

ramping and burning hard.  starting slow more often than not and having

my woman take me higher and harder until i'm writhing and screaming in

need.  other authors first just make the sex so boring seeming.  they

first give no details and then just don't have any pacing to it.  it

just seems to happen.  always a some fairly fast speed but with so few

details that it just seems to happen.  you show us all the speeds and

you so lovingly show the sensual fuck that ignites souls and cunts like

here ["Oh . . . you like it . . . don't you . . ." Laura cooed softly to

her, kissing her ear, her forehead, brushing the fatal bangs aside to

reach the smooth dark skin with her lips.        Fucking her slowly and

patiently this way gave her the opportunity to brush her own naked upper

body lightly against Tonya's and to savor each place the girl's smooth,

warm skin touched her own, to feel the swelling mounds of Tonya's firm,

almost hard, young breasts, to feel the rivets of Tonya's thick, hard

nipples slide against her own breasts and her ribcage when she came up a

little, pushing the dildo deeper into Tonya's pussy, which was now

apparently adjusting to the full length of the strap-on.      "Unhhhh!"

Tonya gasped.  "Oh!  Unhhh!"]  sigh, so fucking beautiful.  this is why

i so love face-to-face tribbing and strap-on sex.  with most lesbian sex

we tend to have our face near where the action is.  here one can have

one's mouth kissing, licking and nipping your lover's wincing and

moaning face.  i so love to loop my arms underneath their shoulders and

then just stroke their face as i kiss it all over.  pulling her upper

body close so our nipples can dig and drag into each other's tits and

our heated flesh can slip and slide with our sweaty bodies grinding and

squashing into each other.  then locking eyes and slowly sinking my

mouth down to hers and plunging my tongue down her throat as i watch her

eyes roll back and her arms and legs loop around me and pull her humping

body tight as she moans deep into my throat.

//  i am so there as the rhythm is picking up and the fucking getting

more forceful.  i so love the ramping up of a good hard het fucking.

i'm just thankful i never got brainwashed early in my life and made into

a pc lesbian.  i fucking love!! fucking strap-on fucking.  i want and

need to feel cocks and fists sliding deep and hard up my cunt and

asshole.  feeling my body melt around your cock or fist and my body is

just juddering wildly and i'm screaming my love to you and tearing at

the sheets or carpet in my wild need.  i live to hear this from my

angels ["Ohhhnnnggggg!  Ohnnnnnn . . . so goooooood . . . so gooooood .

. ." she moaned to Laura.  "Do it faster . . . unghh!  Yes, like that!

Faster!"  Her eyelids fluttered open, and her dark, glistening eyes

caught Laura's with a sharp insistence.  "You can do it hard!  Yes!  Do

it harder!  Yes!  Unghh!  Anngghhh!"]  i have smiled at the difference

between laura and myself in this area.  laura is more refined than

myself i guess.  she always restrains herself to some degree.  she has

to really get excited to really slam fuck her lovers.  me, once i hear

harder and faster i will immediately ramp it up and start giving it to

you just like you are begging me.  i will soon have my body coiling and

lunging forward with all my strength and slamming your body down,

forward or up if doing me cowgirl style.  i so loving seeing your body

jolt and roll with my powerful thrusts and how sometimes i get that

echoing of your moaning voice as i'm hammering fuck your willing body.

gripping your hips or ass to slam back and down into my plunging cock.

gripping the base of my cock and ripping it out your fuck hole and then

spearing forward with a lunge of hips to sink completely up your fuck

hole again as you wail in ecstasy.

//  love the detail of tonya rubbing her clit as they fuck.  i do that

all the time.  i love the additional stimulation that just makes me come

so much fucking harder.  now laura has finally gotten heated enough to

fuck like i need my angels to give it to me [They were panting and

pumping more violently than ever now, their bodies colliding, their hot

flesh rubbing urgently, and their muscles clenching.]  i so love feeling

you pressing down into the mattress or hard into the carpet.  feeling

your belly slapping down into mine as our tits mash and squash.  they

way they fist their hands in my hair and pull my neck back and taunt and

are simply pounding their cock deep into my cunt or asshole.  then

twisting my neck to the side as i loop my arms and legs around you and

sink your teeth into my neck and suck my flesh hard and cruelly as i

scream and claw your back and hump with all my strength to take your

cock completely up my cunt or ass.  oh yeah, you give the wonderful

detail of that first tremor of your orgasm that makes you cry out and

lurch up wildly into the hard fuck your receiving.  that whiting out of

your mind that knows that soon crushing ecstasy will be ripping your

womb with pure fucking bliss.

//  fucking WoW!! this is how to finish off your lover with a beautiful

het fuck.  this is absolutely guaranteed to take her heaven for a

lengthy trip [Finally, when she knew Tonya couldn't hold out much

longer, that she was going to come in only seconds, Laura almost scooped

her body up with her free arm, looping it around Tonya's neck and

embracing her, crushing her own body into Tonya's beautiful writhing

flesh, and fucking her with sharp, quick rabbit jabs, bringing her to

the pinnacle.  At the same time she devoured the girl's sweaty neck and

shoulders and ear and cheek and gasping mouth, sucking her flesh and

lips, piercing her pussy with the strap-on, feeling Tonya's body leap

and spasm violently this time as the first jolt struck her.      In

contrast to the first time she had come, this time a loud shriek was

almost ripped from Tonya's lungs as the first supernova of coming

wrenched her body.        "Anngghhmmnnggiiieee!" she cried out, her

breath instantly cut off as huge, wracking spasms gripped her lovely

flesh.  "Ungggh!  Ungghh!"]  how do you do it time after time.  a

another perfect fuck that is totally unlike your pervious work.. simply

amazing.  i love it when an angel rabbit fucks me at the end with those

lightening fast strokes and my stronger lovers when they pull me in a

death grip and crushing me down into the bed with their body weight and

feel our sweaty flesh pressed together everywhere.  i so love to feel

your mouth kissing, nipping and give me hard love bites.  i want to be

marked.  i always scream wildly when you suck my lips into your mouth

and gnaw and pull them taunt.  them i'm coming like tonya here.

screaming with all might and feeling my body simply jackknifing and

buckling wildly up into your pressing weight as the constricted

movements make me come all the harder and buck all the wilder as you jam

and slam me back into the bed as wail in helpless ecstasy.

//  i so love reading a great fuck.  it makes my womb quiver and now my

panties are pretty soaked.  i'm so fucking ready for some hot fucking

let me tell you.  i love how the orgasm simply crushes tonya like no man

has ever made her come before i'm quite sure.  i am smiling great big as

tonya begs for laura to keep her cock buried deep in her still clenching

cunt.  i so love to keep your cock or fist in my cunt or asshole as i

gently ride down from the heavens.  i just love feeling that impalement

deep up my body.  i simply bask when i hear this from a newbie [Tonya

was so blasted by her huge orgasm that she apparently didn't even

realize Laura was kissing her like this for the longest time.  Then her

eyelids fluttered open, and she gave Laura one of her patented ingénue

smiles.  "I think you made me come twice," she confessed.  "No," she

shook her head as Laura pulled herself up slightly, preparing to

separate their two sweaty bodies, "I don't mean the one before and then

this one.  I mean, this one was really two."  She grimaced slightly as

Laura pulled the strap-on dildo out of her body.  "God, I never came so

hard, ever."      Laura smiled indulgently.  "I'm so glad."]  we sort of

think it is our mission to educate as many women as possible to the

truth.  only women are able to give true divine fucks night after

night.  we love the body and the soul and nothing can match that.  i

just preen when i hear that gasped and when their eyes are still agog

when they whisper how wonderful they are feeling and how they falling in

love with the lesbian lifestyle.  i just mentally pump my fist in

victory.

//  i like how you show that just fucking your woman can feel your body

filling with fuck hunger again and needing to be fucked hard yet again.

i have always marveled how you capture that magical moments after great

sex.  for some reason only you show this magical time.  others just have

them fall asleep or right back to fucking without any loving interaction

and shared words and mirth of love [She pounced.  They tussled, and

Laura rolled Tonya onto her back.  She kissed her ravenously, driving

her tongue deep into Tonya's mouth, her hands sliding down to the girl's

fine round ass and squeezing it passionately.  They were loving and

laughing at the same time so hard that in a few seconds neither one of

them could breathe and they had to stop.  They pulled slightly apart.

Tears of laughter streamed down Tonya's cheeks.        "I never met

anybody like you," she laughed.  She put up her hand with the spread

fingers in front of her face, the same hand she had used when telling

Laura that the guys had not put their cocks in her 'rectum,' another one

of her fetching gestures.  "Anybody.  You are so much fun.  Nobody ever

made me come that way and laugh so hard afterward."]  it is this and

mirth that so makes women fall in love with each other.  men are simply

pigs in this area.  you show how words and genuine gestures captures the

love of our angels.  thank you for showing this and doing it so lovingly

and wonderfully.

//  i'm all dreamy with how you end this chapter [Tonya turned soft and

pliant, kissing Laura slowly and tenderly, a side of her nature that

Laura had not seen yet.  "You know," she finally said to Laura,

solemnly.  "I think I might be able to get over . . . you know, that

part I . . . when I said I might . . . you know, gag?  I think I might

be able to do it without gagging now."        "Oh?" Laura smiled.

Tonya nodded.  "Something about you, I guess.  Something makes me just .

. . want to do it.  And I know I won't.  Gag, I mean."        Laura

merely smiled and kissed her deeply and gave her a long hug.  "I'm sure

you won't," she purred.]  thank you for ending this chapter this way.  i

am dreamy thinking of tonya burying her face deep and hard in laura's

cunt.  i know she will be addicted soon.  i was from the first time i

had my face in a beautiful pussy.  i so love watching a newbie become

addicted to cunt meat and then almost having to beat them off with a

stick as they simply go crazy for pussy juice.  we have had newbies

almost wear joann, maria and myself out.  they beg and whine for our

cunts and spend the night sucking us off over and over again until our

cunts are simply ruined.  sigh, life can't get any better than seeing a

woman realize her true self.  something i get to see over and over again

in your wonderful and divine stories.

 

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Chapter 303:

//  this chapter starts with two interesting dynamics.  feelings of

loneliness for laura and then that meeting of a former angel when things

haven't gone right.  we have all felt these negative emotions which i

hate.  i feel for laura because she is limiting her natural desires to

love in trying to be "true" to makeeda.  i just wish laura could be more

free.  i mean makeeda has given her express permission to have angels

while she is away.  i so love makeeda for this.  joann and maria are

away at clients, seminars and training a lot.  i miss them dearly but i

so love this time to be free and devour my other angels in my life and

maybe work harder at seducing a newbie i am working on or maybe help

dodie, simonette and hillary finish off a love kill.  we so believe in

sharing and going for love.  when i am away on business i sometimes have

an angel waiting for me where i'm going or if not i look for prey at the

conference or training center.  before i go i always make sure to do my

research on the internet if going to a new place and find all the

lesbian bars and swing clubs.  it can be such a blast going to a club

and just presenting myself as being open for invasion so to speak and

watch the dance of love begin and see who will be taking me home or back

to my motel room for hot fucking.

//  the first thing i have an answer for but meeting a lover that things

didn't quite work out makes me very nervous and down right afraid

sometimes.  i have meet by accident women whom things didn't go like i

planned and been humiliated in public with cursing a few times and once

or twice getting slapped hard in the face.  i just take it because i

know i am usually partially to blame.  sigh.  i so hate fucking

conflict.  if i see you coming and you don't see me i am running like

hell behind something and wishing i could dig like a prairie dog out of

the room.  you would see concrete and dirt flying if i could pull it

off.  meeting her and getting all flustered and saying something like

["Sara."  Long, painful silence, accompanied by awkward staring.  "I . .

. I didn't know you were a 'Saks' kind of person."      That sounded

awful, Laura knew.  It sounded like she was saying 1) I didn't think I'd

risk running into you here, and 2) You don't usually shop for such fancy

and expensive threads.]  i so hate it when i put my foot in my mouth and

then try and fumble and recover.  i hate it when you can feel the

tension in the air and it is making the skin prickle with that electrify

feeling of fright and warning.

//  i have to smile with sara being witty and firing back she was

"looking for laura" and making laura die of embarrassment and blushing

furiously.  i always love the good come back even when if it is at my

expense.  i just admire wit though maybe not at the time.  the gods know

i try to use soft wit in these situations and acting as meek and humble

as possible.  i hate conflict and will do anything possible to defuse

the situation.  i will take all the blame if you want and will try and

make it clear i am fault and will do anything to make it better.  they

awkwardly try to break the ice and i so love it when you get a

breakthrough like here [Laura followed her out of the store.  "You

certainly don't look like a freak," she mumbled gracelessly.  "You look

. . . good.  Great, in fact."      Sara smiled, and Laura did detect a

flicker of that same bittersweet longing she herself was feeling in the

smile.  After all, how could we not feel that way about each other? she

reasoned.  We had life-altering sex in each other's arms for over a

year.]  i so love it when i see the thaw start and i try to fan the

flames and at least get us to the point where we can part on a nice

parting and maybe something more.  one can always hope and i watch my

failed lover closely to gauge her reactions and emotions.  sometimes

love has a second chance and i will take it if it is offered.

//  i have always smiled at the predicaments that laura gets herself in

by not being honest about her true nature.  she is a complete slut like

myself and loves and needs lots of pussy to keep her happy.  sara is the

jilted lover here and one should expect her to make reference to the

lover that replaced her`.  she does and laura gives her patented "what

are you talking about" routine and sara points at the gold band on her

ring finger.  hurray for sara.  laura needs to be honest about her true

self.  i have a ring on my ring finger but i have no problem telling a

new lover what it means exactly to me.  how i am totally in love with my

archangels and they with me but we are free and open with our love and

by the way do you want to fuck them too.  i have always smiled and

chuckled when laura tries to hid her other dalliances and they are

discovered and then she has to squirm and get all uncomfortable.  it

does add comic relief and shows a cute side of laura.  she is one

dynamic and vibrant woman and i love seeing all her facets and how she

is like and unlike me.  it is just so cool that you have created

characters that actually do have facets and that we get to discover them

and sympathize or chastise the women for these character traits.  no

other stories really give me characters that i can truly care for and

love.  i so love masturbating to their soul shredding sex and i am not

sure i would if they were not so alive and real to me.  i feel like i am

there with them sharing love and womb shattering sex.

//  oh geez, i hate seeing others in pain.  we discover that sara saw

from the beginning the spark that was between laura and makeeda.  that

is such a shame.  she probably saw laura slipping away from her even

though she herself was desiring new pussy and the joy that brings one in

life.  the shame is if that had been me i would have seduced makeeda

(well maybe not, that monogamy thing is definitely not my thing) or a

woman that i discover is looking for great mind blowing sex.  i would

seduce with the full knowledge of sara and as soon as the angel is under

my spell then she would be coming back to our place and we both fall on

her like starving wolfs and with sara's tastes she would be sinking her

fist into the girl's tight cunt while siphoning her tit meat hard and

i'm ripping her asshole wide open with my love cock, kissing and

stroking her from behind and reaching around and squeezing and pulping

her tits flaring her nipples for sara to suck hard and hopefully teeth

rake hard to make the woman come like the furies of hell are after her

ass.

//  sigh more sadness.  we discover that shenna went to the cdc in

atlanta.  i so hate when an angel leaves our sphere but we understand

that life moves on and that shenna had to move on to make her life

better.  if one is not an archangel then one must accept them moving

on.  we have all turned down job opportunities that would take us away

from here and each other.  we will not separate and we have formed to

many ties to the area.  we love our angels and don't want to leave

them.  we could always start anew in another area but we are getting a

little older and don't relish the thought.  we bask in our network.

seeing sara's eyes cloud with sorrow would get my protective gene going

and i know my old love for her would jump and flare with seeing this

pain.  i just can't stop wanting to soothe and comfort an angel in need

even one that maybe didn't part on the best of terms.  i just want to

take you in my arms and make love to you over and over until the pain

has faded and i am making you come so fucking hard that you start to

forget about the past and start accepting new love and all the

possibilities that it has to offer.  i see that laura feels like me [By

now the throbbing emotion deep inside Laura had turned from bittersweet

longing to a raging sorrow and pure physical hunger.  "You didn't want

to go with her?" she asked, elaborately making conversation in the

effort to control her desire.]  i know my desires would be spiking so

fucking hard and my cunt getting wet with past memories of great sex and

sudden dying to get more of her sweet cunt and asshole if so inclined.

i never tire of fucking old flames and angels.

//  i love reading of old love coming to life again.  they are awkward

and trying to figure how to get into each other's loving arms.  love the

detail of sara going by laura's old place to see if they could talk.

that would make my heart melt and my cunt wet knowing that indeed you

were trying to repair the rift.  i have had women come to me and tell me

they are sorry and ask for forgiveness.  i always do.  i simply can't

stay mad and will take you into my loving bed and fuck you to insanity

making up for lost time and if kinky i will definitely rough you up for

making me hurt.  i have made women die from the ass blistering and ass

rapes they have deserved.  screaming for it and telling how worthless

they are for doing me wrong and begging for their ass whipping and

slapping their face hard and pulling their hair like the worthless whore

they are for me.  i so love getting into the game and then later that

night i am being love raped and abused and dying form pure pleasure and

ecstasy.  laura offers to take sara for a drink but sara demurs being

sensible about drinking and driving but also testing the waters about

makeeda [Sara made another face, but this time instead of being funny it

was inexpressibly sad.  Laura felt it was sad in an unintended way, and

she looked across the street at Union Square briefly, embarrassed.  "You

better hurry home to her, then," Sara said softly.  "She might be

waiting."

"Don't be nasty, Sara," Laura said, but not sharply.  "She's out of

town.  She's in Holland."]  gosh i love how you capture human emotions.

one just doesn't plunge ahead like they do in so many other stories.  it

is human nature to feel out the situation and see where everything

stands.  sara needs to know if she has a chance with laura and exactly

what the status of makeeda is.  i know my heart would have fluttered

hearing she is away.  when i hear the significant other is away i know i

am so much closer to getting my woman.

//  i so like seeing love finding a way to heal frayed emotions.  though

they parted on terms that left pain for both of them and one can clearly

see the awkwardness that has come into their relationship they still

struggle to try and recapture the lost specialness they had in their

relationship.  it can be so difficult to recapture the past but

sometimes you can get it all back and sometimes you can't quite get all

back but you can find love and comfort and maybe build another new and

different relationship.  They decide to go back to sara's place and see

if they can find some magic.  they are playing with fire and they know

it.  i am so happy for them.  they should let the fires of love ignit

again and let it consume their flesh in sweet ecstasy.  i find great

fucks can so soothe the flesh and the mind and one should bask in the

balm that sweet intense orgasms give one.  one thing that happens when

you try to reconnect when bad emotions have soured the relationship is

your emotions can be all over the place.  i sometimes feel like i have

aqueducts in my eyes when i am nervous and not sure of myself or

situation like here [As soon as the words came out, she knew she had

made a grievous mistake.  Whereas Sara had seemed the one who was

vulnerable to tears while they were standing on the sidewalk outside

Saks, now Laura unaccountably welled up and spilled over.  She had to

set her wine glass down as her body was suddenly wracked with shocking

sobs, and tears streamed down her face.      And then the sobbing was

gone as quickly as it had started, but not before Sara had set her glass

down too and embraced Laura warmly, patting and smoothing her hair,

comforting her.      "Don't, Laura . . . don't," she whispered.  "You

don't have to cry."  She held Laura for a long time, then made a little

stirring as if she were preparing to back off.]  i hate pain and

confusion but i love finding an author that shows the down side of

relationships.  i hate going through such times but they do happen.

other authors keep it to just sex and other's always explore the

beginning of relationships.  by developing this dynamic universe you

show they entire gamut of relationships.  the beginning, middle and sad

to say sometimes the end.  now you are showing how sometimes maybe one

can reconnect.  lets see what happens.  i so love seeing your honest,

real emotions.  you dialog seems so alive and real.  i guess because it

is.

//  over the years i have some bad situations and a lot of those stayed

bad but sometimes we have been able to repair the damage.  i hate

conflict and tend to flee it but if the other woman will give me a

little slack and show me a little love then we can hope to repair the

relationship.  i am so sighing at this magical moment [But Laura did not

want to leave this embrace.  She could feel Sara's warmth, and her

breath.  She wrapped her arms around Sara too.  Her quick flood of tears

had rubbed off on Sara's cheek, which was wet and shiny.  Sara's

fantastic pillowy lips were only an inch or so from hers, and she could

not prevent herself from pressing her mouth into them and kissing Sara

with sharp, searching passion.  At first Sara did not kiss back, as if

she were ambivalent over this dangerous moment, but then she did, her

fingers digging into Laura's flesh through her clothes as her tongue met

Laura's and her lips moved aggressively.]  i have been in variations of

this.  a lot of negative passion has been flowing and then suddenly you

are in each others arms devouring each other like rabid dogs.  i

remember one time i fucked up on the phone and the next day i got a

really devastating email.   a little while later something happened to

her and i sent her a real short email offering her my condolences and

support.  well she started emailing me and soon we were conversing

again.  we finally got together and it was a lot like this.  one minute

we are talking and crying and the next we are rolling around on the sofa

and then floor slamming our tongues down each others throats and ripping

our clothes off.  like i say, i hate the negative in relationships but i

am happy to find an author who explores the darker side of relationships

and shows how sometimes you can recover from a bad slip-up.  it is

impossible to describe the relief and love that flows when your tongue

is sliding down her throat and then soon deep into her pussy and

asshole.

//  one thing i have heard but never said myself is this is wrong.  love

is never wrong.  i want you and will fuck you like i have never fucked

you before to show you my love.  i just smile as i ripe their clothes

off and literally consume their flesh and have them screaming how much

they missed and loved me and never want us to part again.  i simply

think i have gone to heaven when i a woman i thought lost to me is

grinding her cunt hard into my mouth with her hands clenched in my hair

and slamming her pubic mound into my mouth mashing my lips and allowing

my tongue to probe her deepest cunt folds.  i love how you capture that

moment where they are gazing deeply into each other's eyes and then

clothes are flying and heated flesh is being grasped desperately as love

is renewing itself and once more flowing intimately between lovers.  i

like slow but i also love to have things start hot and heavy like here

[Sara wore her usual office attire, white shirt and black skirt, and

Laura, who was always careful undressing another, as she hoped the other

would be in undressing her, threw caution to the winds, even popping a

few buttons off Sara's shirt in her haste to get it off.  It was only

half-off, still stuck into Sara's skirt at the waist but gaping open

down the front, when Laura reached inside and pulled Sara's bra straps

down her shoulders as far as they would go, until they were stopped by

the shirt sleeves, then forced down the cups of her bra and exposed the

magnificent breasts she knew were hiding inside them.        "Oh god,

you are so beautiful!" she exclaimed, as if she had never seen Sara's

naked breasts before.]  i don't mind buttons being popped off and

zippers ruined.  i can get them repaired or get new clothes.  makes me

feel loved and wanted when my woman is so desperate for me she is

ripping my clothes form my body.  makes me swoon.  i have always

worshiped how you have your women be so communicative.  other authors

just have them fuck.  i so love reading your women telling their woman

just how much they desire and want them.  just telling a woman how

beautiful you find her makes her simply melt for you and want to give

you her all.  plus, i love how you show that one should always find your

old lovers special and appealing.  i never tire going down on joann,

maria and dodie though i have so many, many, many times in the past.  i

still want them totally and completely and see the absolute beauty that

they are.  i can close my eyes and see them so clearly in my mind's eye

and i feel my crotch twitching and getting wet seeing their naked glory

and feeling their cunt and asshole humping my tongue, fingers and fist.

// i love how you show totally consuming breast meat [Laura's hands were

all over Sara's naked breasts, and she lowered her lips to one dark,

bulbous nipple and quickly sucked it into her mouth.      "Oh!  Unhhh!"

Sara half-moaned, looking down at her nipple disappearing between

Laura's sucking lips.      Laura was delirious.  The feel of Sara's

plump, soft, huge black nipple in her mouth made her briefly crazy,

giddy with sexual heat, and though she tried not to be too rough, she

ended up sinking her teeth into it a little too hard.   Sara

yelped.      "Aiiyyeee!"  Then she suddenly laughed.  "Oh god, Laura,

you made a flame flash up inside my pussy when you did that," she

dissolved in laughter.]  i so love kneading and pumping your tit meat

hard and milking pure pleasure from your tits.  i work your tits with

total focus and love.  unlike laura i sink my teeth into your aureole

and nipple and make you die from it.  like sara says it makes you go up

in flames.  i so love it when a lover with bigger tits cups and squeezes

her tits and begs form me to assault her nipples and devour her tits

with sucks, tongue batting and teeth rakes and teeth sinking.  they so

thrash and their legs kick around as they moan and beg for me to never

stop and take them harder.  i order them to pulp their tits as i teeth

rake their nipple stems and they simple scream in pleasure and a few

even come like this.  i just smile as my ears are filled with sweet

screams of pleasure and i suck your tit deep into my mouth and deep love

suck while my hands help pulp your tits with pure love and focus.  i

love it when my tits have been loved hard and are covered with love

bites and those marks of rough working hands.

//  sigh, you have always been able to capture that ramping up of heat

so well.  you start with delirious kissing and just ramp and ramp [They

grabbed each other in this state, mostly undressed but still with a few

pieces of underwear hanging from their bodies, and fell together on the

bed.  Their mouths met in a fierce, wildly hungry kiss.  Laura twisted

her body intentionally, wanting to feel Sara's flesh crushing into her,

Sara's breasts mashing into hers.  She dropped her hands to Sara's

substantial bottom and squeezed Sara's large, firm cheeks hard.]  this

is what i live for.  a full body clench with our bodies mashed and

slithering against each other as our sweat is building up and beading on

heated flesh.  rolling back and forth with twined legs and arms pulling

tight and tits mashed and flattened against each other and feeling

nipples sinking into breast or dragging across her chest.  i so swoon

feeling a tongue plunging down my throat making my eyes roll back and

spasm and feeling her twisting my neck to the side and sinking her teeth

into my neck and pumping my flesh as my fingers rake her her back and

clench her head and pull her head tighter to my neck as i push  my neck

up into her sucking mouth begging her to mark me.  i am a bottom girl so

i love reading laura rolling on the bottom and feeling sara 's weight

pushing her down and feeling her breast mash into hers and grabbing her

ass and humping sara down onto her body.  i so love it when first joann

or maria will ride me like this and then the other.  grinding her sweet

flesh into mine in sweet tribbing until we  both cum hard and then the

other mounts me and rides me like a cheap whore until we both cum so

fucking hard.  i so love working a big ass with my fingers as we hump

and grind against each other.

//  i love the detail of laura digging her fingers into sara's ample

buns.  i so love to knead and maul big asses.  so much to love and

worship.  you are the only author that glories in the wonders of ass

worship.  one other other has plenty of ass play but he lacks your

dreamy prose of great butt loving.  i have always loved how you show

wide  open passion and loving.  sara is in frenzy mode is attacking

laura's tits like i like having my tits loved [She now had dropped her

mouth to Laura's breasts, and her hands too, and was mauling them with

thirsty passion.  Laura's hands flittered up Sara's naked back to her

head, which she pulled into her chest, pushing her breasts hard into

Sara's face, panting, even whimpering excitedly.      "Mmmmnnggg!  Oh!

Mnnnggeeee!  Yes!  Yes!"]  i thrill when my lover is working my tits

hard and milking pure from my aching tits.  i so love it when they are

pulping my tits and sucking my nipples and aureoles hard and teeth

raking and hard love nips.  i too will pull your face deep into my bosom

stuffing your mouth full of my firm tit meat.  i am in heaven when my

woman makes me scream like laura here.  i am just happy that one author

focus on the steps of hot fucking.  other authors just breeze through

breast play and i don't get to revel in the steps that make the womb

shredding orgasms possible.

//  i like you showing laura grabbing sara's wrists and holding them

down.  i love it when my women take my wrists like this and hold them

above my head and make it plain that i am their complete slut to take

like how ever they want.  i swoon when they take my arms and twist them

behind my back and make me squeal and whine looking for mercy and they

just abuse me and make me cry and beg for mercy and then they fuck me so

hard and deep.  laura and sara are not so kinky but just seeing the

wrist play makes me wet.  here laura holds her in place and swishes her

little doves in sara's face inticing her to do what sara does best [Sara

was eagerly up to the challenge.  Without the use of her hands, she

could only chase Laura's swelling coral nipples with her lips, raising

her head briefly off the sheet.  It was a game, but a deadly serious one

since both of them were raging with sexual fire.  Soon Sara caught one

aching nipple in her mouth and sucked it in deep, sucking so sharply

that a gargled cry of incredible pleasure escaped from Laura's

throat.      "Oh!  Unnggghmmmnngg!"]  i so love latching onto a tit that

is being swished around in my face.  feels me with such fuck hunger.

what i like about your writing is you show this mirth and the fun of

fucking.  other authors just show the women sucking tits blandly while

you show the mirth and fun of women at love and i soooo love it.

//  love how you show the breast loving continuing and continuing.  sara

works laura's tits with long minutes of hot loving.  i so love how you

show the loving lasting long minutes of hot fucking.  when one is

feasting on tit meat time can just kind of stop flowing and you simply

devour your woman's tits as she whimpers and squirms in ecstasy.  i love

sucking tits hard and pulping them in my strong hands as they whimper

and beg for me to take them like the whores they are.  i am smiling with

laura being loved hard and going crazy and finally being filled with a

frenzy and returning the favor.  i so know that feeling of being fucked

hard and suddenly you are fucking her hard.  you are just overloaded

with pleasure and suddenly your brain tells you to fuck her with your

all and you are.  only you capture this ebb and flow of hot fucking and

i so love reading it.  it makes me all tingle all over and get wet.  i

so love reading laura siphoning sara's thick nipples deep into her mouth

and sucking hard making sara cry out in pleasure.  only you really

capture the flow of this that allows the reader to revel in the loving.

it just sings while other's just reads along.  they can get me hot

because i am so sexual but only yours really makes my cunt flood almost

instantaneously when i come across hot sex like here.  this is just so

real and on target and i worship it.  i so love how you capture the flow

of loving between women.  you show how we long to take pleasure and then

give it back with your all like laura here devouring sara's pulpy

nipples and making her scream out.  shari has swelling nipples and

recently cindy and i staked out a tit and devoured them with our

squeezing hands making her nipples swell up and we bit hard into them

and gnawed her aureoles and pulled our teeth hard up her thick long

nipples as she screamed in wild ecstasy and her hips were bucking

wildly.  cindy finally reached down and buzzed her clit with her fingers

and shari simply exploded as she jerked violently on the bed.  her body

jackknifing like she was being electrocuted.  we pressed down on her

upper body to keep it in place so we could love abuse her throbbing tits

while her pelvis bucked violently.  she was so beautiful screaming in

bliss while her hips exploded off the mattress and limbs spasmed out of

control.

//  oh fucking yeah!!  i so fucking love trib fucking and i simply adore

face to face trib.  i am getting dreamy seeing laura settle between

sara's loving thighs and seeing their wet, slavered groins coming

together.  i so love to feel a woman's mound rubbing and buffeting my

twat in this position.  you really are the only author to capture

tribbing and you amaze me by actually showing all the variations one can

do with this dynamic form of fucking.  [Almost imperceptibly, their

lower bodies began to move together in unison.  Sara had let her thighs

gape to make to easier for Laura to settle between them, and their

effortless rhythm brought their groins together without a real prior

intent, simply as a result of their slow undulations.  They had tribbed

often in the past, but never in this particular position, though Laura

came slowly to realize that this was a natural for them, and she

realized by looking up briefly into her eyes that Sara did too.]  this

form of tribbing is so divine with the face to face loving it allows.

that is one thing i like about good ole het missionary fucking.  love

the details of laura's mound and sara's puffy mound.  having meaty cunts

does make it easier but humping hard and with skill makes any pussy

humping simply fucking rad!!!  i guess i am addicted to joann and

dodie's flowers for tribbing.  they have big cunts like mine with thick

splayed lips when engorged and simply waiting to humped hard and pounded

to ecstasy.

//  sigh, love the detail of their cunts all slavered with each other's

juices.  i so love that slicked humping when bodies are slicked with

sweat and are sliding and grinding across each other's upper chest while

our groins are humping each other.  i so know that feeling of a clit

sliding across my wet intimate splayed cunt meat and mine at times doing

hers and feeling that jolt of pure sexual electricity this produces.

and just sinking into a divine state of fucking [They began kissing,

their wet nipples now pressed together, their tongues slowly coiling,

not moving their pelvises for fear of dissipating this sweet intensity

of intimate connection.        "I'm inside you," Laura repeated softly,

panting, unable to control her panting.]  now this is sweet fucking.  i

so love it when our tongues are flowing deep and our tits are mashed and

squashed and the one on the bottom is gripping her woman's ass and

humping her down into her up humping twat.  i just swoon when i feel my

lover's twat mashing down into mine and her cunt is dripping or

streaming sweat cunt nectars into my messy cunt and her clit is raking

through my folds and those divine jolts when clit to clit swipes make

you both hitch and huff and sometimes scream in pleasure.  i so love it

when dodie is pounding and in turns grinding her twat down into my open

vulnerable cunt and our big hooters are mashed and grinding together and

her long tongue is raping my throat as she swallows my groins and sighs

of deepest pleasure.  i so love her when she stares hard into my eyes

and just slams her cunt into mine and slowly brings her head back down

and slithers her tongue deep down my throat again making me her slut.

//  geez, i so love writing something and then seeing this [The longer

they remained in this position, the more the lubrication from each of

their wet cunts seemed to encourage them to pick up the pace, to

actually begin fucking, instead of simply remaining stationary in

sublime enjoyment of this union.  Laura began to move a little, gyrating

forward, sliding her pussy up inside Sara's until her clit actually met

and mashed briefly against Sara's, giving them both a happy jolt of

sexual electricity.      "Unghh!" Laura groaned.      "Hhhhh!  Ahhnn!"

Sara gasped.]  thank you, thank you for showing such a divine fuck.  i

can just feel myself falling in love when fucking like this.  i took

belissa last weekend over to dodie and frankie's and watched them trib

fuck her like this in turn and watched her simply melt in love with them

as she had a scalding orgasm with each one humping her hard until she

was clawing their backs and biting their shoulders and bucking up wildly

as her womb exploded and her choked screams filled the living room.  i

let her rest for a long while before i rode her face hard to a screaming

orgasm and then she rode my face like a wanton whore until her exploding

cunt filled my mouth to overflowing with her gushing cunt nectars.  i

have to smile at laura's discovery here (i'm just happy i was shown how

to fuck like this almost from the start) [She had never felt her vulva

inside another woman's pussy before, or her clit, even though she had

tribbed a thousand times, and it thrilled her with deep emotion,

especially because it was Sara she was inside of.  We're going to come

together, she thought.  Together.  Oh god, I still do love her, in a

way.  I know I do.  I know she knows it.]  i saw this look on belissa's

face of star struck wonder as her puffy mound was pounded to ecstasy and

her cunt meat and dodie and frankie's just melded and melted together

until they were lost in nirvana.

//  laura is going for the sensual slow trib fuck i see.  where your get

your cunt meat all splayed and pressed into each other and sweeping your

flowing cunts back and forth and getting that wet squishy mashed cunt

meat.  i so love that slow dance of soul fucking where you just mash

your bodies into each other.  i just swoon when our sweaty bodies are

slipping and sliding against each other and our heaving bellies are

bellowing against each other and our mouths are clamped tight while pure

love flows between our twining tongues.  i love to fuck like this and

then ramp it up and slam fuck our groins hard until we tire and then

wiggling until our splayed twats are mated again and soul fucking again

like this.  i so love fucking like this because ["Sara . . . Sara . . ."

she breathed, almost inaudibly, letting her tongue explore Sara's mouth,

then kissing her neck and round shoulders, moving her upper body a

little so that she could feel Sara's marvelous naked breasts sliding

against her own.]  i am just sighing watching laura sliding her tongue

down sara's moaning throat and their tits mashing and digging.  i can't

really kiss joann when we trib like this but i love it when her head is

just right height to devour my tits like she dying for fresh milk.

pulping my tits with her petite hands and her mouth and teeth are

tearing at my long stiff nipples making me keen and cry out in ecstasy.

//  my belly flips when i read their loving words of synching their

souls and getting bodies in sync to go for a perfect timed mutual

orgasm.  only you show that communication that women share when we

fuck.  our loving words and thoughts that allow us to reach heaven on

earth.  i so love communicating with my fuck mates and giving her my all

and i so thankful that i found one author that who shows this.  it is

this communication that lets us fuck so divinely.  now you show [The

gentle rhythm of their fucking did not change, did not slow or

accelerate; instead, they seemed to concentrate on the feel of their two

naked bodies totally mated, their skin touching everywhere, their

sensitive nipples mashed together, their lips still intermingling, their

tongues coiling.  In contrast to the usual increasingly urgent pumping

of normal trib fucking, they were very calm and almost motionless, their

bodies moving in a sensual, synchronized harmony, as they approached

together as slowly as possible the ultimate moment.]  other authors

always show full pedal to the metal and miss the gentle fuck.  i love to

ramp it up at the end but i need to fuck slow like this a lot.

sometimes you do fuck like this until your souls bind and incinerate

themselves in pure ecstasy.  i have tribbed fucked for close to an hour

at times as we just simply sweep our loving cunts into each other.  i

just love that relaxed rocking of hips that can be done in any trib

position and you feel pure love flowing between your cunts into each

other's souls and you slowly ramp up and feel your body tensing and

yearning.  that coiling that simply tightens your womb until it explodes

and scalding waves of ecstasy are blasting both of our bodies as we jam

our cunts into each other and our screams fill our divine love nest.

//  you capture this dreamy state perfectly [The gentle rhythm of their

fucking did not change, did not slow or accelerate; instead, they seemed

to concentrate on the feel of their two naked bodies totally mated,

their skin touching everywhere, their sensitive nipples mashed together,

their lips still intermingling, their tongues coiling.  In contrast to

the usual increasingly urgent pumping of normal trib fucking, they were

very calm and almost motionless, their bodies moving in a sensual,

synchronized harmony, as they approached together as slowly as possible

the ultimate moment.]  i have always marveled how you can show the

intense final conflagration and yet show the gentle fucking that truly

binds souls.  it is truly amazing.  you are able to capture it all and

thus stand supreme in erotica writing.  i so love reading your dreamy

fucking.  it sets my womb all a twitter and ready to explode in

ecstasy.  again you show that divine communication of women in love and

taking each other higher and higher.  i love how women use words to take

us higher to the heavens of divine fucking.  other authors for some

reason won't allow their women to simply talk to each other.  that's

maybe how hets fuck but we lesbians love to communicate to our love

mates.  when i fuck guys we just fuck and that is great.  i will never

say no to great orgasms but only women know how to take it even higher

and a lot of that is the communication we do with our words and loving

body communication.

//  wow!!! this is why face to face tribbing is so fucking divine [She

knew she was coming and yet felt Sara's flesh clench and shudder sharply

even before her own killing bliss gripped her.  This was not a normal,

jolting orgasm, on either side.  Instead, they were enveloped by a hot

cloud of throbbing ecstasy, their bodies quivering together, their

breath jagged and arrhythmic as wave after wave of the most exquisitely

intense coming Laura had ever felt streamed through their clenching

flesh.  And through it all they kept their groins moving smoothly

together, Laura rotating her thighs upward a little more persistently

now to bring their clits actually together with each thrust,

intensifying the deep spasms of their shared orgasm.      "Ohhhnnnnn!

Oh god!" she heard herself gasping in a choked, throttled voice as the

first five or six most severe spasms waned, enough for her to catch her

breath.      Sara was whinnying uncontrollably throughout, and yet in a

soft, distant, trance like way, the sounds flowing out of her lungs but

not loudly, only feathering Laura's ears with the sweet, apparently

almost unbearable bliss of her climax.  It was like suspended animation,

their bodies linked in heavenly paroxysms and their breath intermingled

as they kissed sloppily and hungrily during the entire event.  It went

on forever, but finally even their steady rhythm could summon no more

rapture.  They had milked it for everything and suddenly grew limp and

exhausted.      Laura figured they had each come three or four times,

the subsequent orgasms smaller than the first one but no less

agonizingly intense.  "I came forever," she whispered into Sara's

marvelous ear, kissing her cheek, running one hand up to Sara's breast

and squeezing it affectionately.  "I could come forever with you."]

erotica is filled with the big simultaneously O but it is hard to

achieve but when it does it is simply divine.  only you truly make it

the magical event it can be.  so love the details of wet tongue kisses

and multiple orgasms riping one's cunt to shreds and throttling the mind

with fucking bliss that truly units souls in love.  i so love that

humping and you are both coming so fucking hard.  your eyes are glazed

as you stare at each other and you can see the wonderful hard jolts

ripping her body and making her face slash and you  both are screaming

or gurgling in fucking bliss.  i so luxuriate in our sweaty bodies

rubbing, mashing and then that sudden jolt hits hard and your body slams

hard into your lover or hers into yours and you feel your sweaty love

just merging you bodies and soul in purest love and ecstasy.  i am just

so thankful that i have one author that produces soul crushing orgasm

after orgasm that makes me wet and ready to masturbate or fuck.

//  sigh, they have repaired a lot of the pain i think with their

wonderful lovemaking.  i mean how can't this dynamic not make your soul

sing [Laura reluctantly peeled herself off Sara's body, literally

peeling away since they were stuck together by a thin film of sweat.

"Sara," she said, lying beside her, running her fingertips over Sara's

beautiful dark brown flesh and darker nipples, "I don't think we ever

made love that . . . that beautifully.  Even when we were together."]  i

mean great sex can fix so many wrongs in the world.  i am glad they are

putting the past pain behind them.  it is silly to hold onto it.  i just

wish sara and makeeda could share laura together.  i think these two

women have connected with laura the deepest and the sex between them

would be soul blistering and maybe they could follow joann, maria and my

example.  hey, a girl can dream can't she.  the pain is still their some

i see.  i wish they could so learn to share and forget the past and make

a new future.  they just need to make makeeda see the light.  i love

reading them fucking their bodies into a stupor of spent love.  i so

love fucking my body into an almost coma state of spent bliss and ruined

pussy, ass and tits.  i want to be totally exhausted, ruined and totally

fucking happy!!

//  have to smile great big at the parting humor ["We should eat

something," Laura half-groaned as she rolled over, trying to rouse the

languid Sara.  "You fucked me too much.  I'm hungry."      Sara came to

life and kissed Laura on the nose.  "You shouldn't be hungry.  You ate

enough black pussy to last you for a week."]  i really love your humor!

i see laura is leaving and sara is still ready to fuck more with some

rest.  i would be ready to eat, sleep a little and then back to the

fucking.  i so love to fuck!!  oh well, they part with their friendship

restored and promises to call and get together.  sigh, i love how this

chapter ended.  sara is definitely in my top five women in laura's

life.  i guess her, ada, mavis, dawn and deshona are my archangels in

this story and would love to make a harem of them.  fucking gloriously

with them all the time and bringing the rest of these beautiful fuck

sluts into our beds and fucking O so gloriously. of course, laura would

be over all the time.  i think i could teach her a few things.  :-)

 

 

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Chapter 304:

 

 

//  i really like how this chapter starts by what and what doesn't

happen.  i can see some real growth and character development here.  i

am just so fucking elated to see that makeeda took a lover while away.

i am so happy for her and the french woman.  i am hoping that makeeda

will find more pleasure while away from laura.  but why i am really

happy is now i can dream even more!!  now i can hope more that soon

laura and some other angel will be dining on makeeda's delicious cunt

and ramming cocks deep into her fuck holes.  sigh, to have laura riding

her face hard while some angel like carmela is inhaling her cunt and

makeeda and laura come so beautiful together while their screams fill

the room.  the other thing that fills me with so much happiness is the

fact that laura is not having her stomach "curdle" as it has done so

much in the past.  i always felt so much for her to feel such silly

emotions.  instead of rejoicing in the love her angels are receiving she

always wasted herself in silly jealousy.  i always revel in my lovers

taking other women and i'm so happy that they are experiencing love in

another's arms.  i always want to hear ALL the details and often will

masturbate to devastating orgasms or get so hot i have to jump in the

middle of the story and suck your pussy inside out and swallow your

sweet cunt juices convulsing from your immolating cunt.  what i really

find wild about this is the fact that i am doing this.  seeing true

character development is such a blast.  and i really enjoy seeing women

grow.  laura is leaving her jealousy behind and makeeda is opening

herself to new possibilities.  i have to thank you for creating a world

of real women that are allowed to grow and change and better yet, become

more than they were.

//  i am smiling great big as laura tells makeeda about carmela.  it is

a shame laura still feels she must edit out sara and tonya.  i want to

hear it all.  old loves and hot wild fucks.  i want to hear all the

details so i can close my eyes and see the hot fuck in my mind's eyes.

i have masturbated to many womb shattering orgasms to such stories.  i

do wish that laura felt free enough to tell makeeda the full beauty of

carmela.  i would tell my archangels all the details about carmela to

fire up their desires and then getting her in our clutches and fucking

her so hard.  i love carmela so much because she reminds me of me at

that age.  she wants pleasure and goes for it.  i can see us filling her

with our cocks and fists and her spending the weekend eating our pussies

and assholes repeatedly and dying for more our fuck holes.  i know she

is insatiable like me.  i am happy to see that makeeda has put two and

two together and knows that laura is attracted to black women.  i love

reading she is totally comfortable with it.  again i am hoping that she

is loosening up and someday she and laura will be falling on some lucky

fuck mate and devouring her sweet flesh.  a girl can dream can't she.  i

see a softening a little of makeeda and i am loving seeing her growth.

i am smiling see her humor start to show ["Mmm, you like that dark meat,

eh?" Makeeda said, grabbing her harder now and nuzzling her neck again.

"I guess I better marry you twice and chain you to the bed next time I

go away just so the sistas don't kidnap you.  Once they go to bed with

Laura they'll never be able to let her go.  I know I can't."]  i have

found makeeda to be so serious and demure and love seeing this other

side to her.  i find all the changes seem to fit the women so well and i

love reading them.

//  oh yeah i like the developments i see here.  tonya at work has let a

friend know about laura and now they want to fuck laura gloriously.  i

so love reading this.  tonya was a supposed het only until laura has

shown her the truth and now she is making angels of her own.  sigh, i so

love new love.  i smile great big when we bring a het newbie into our

ring and soon she is dying for cunt meat and is slurping all of our

pussies with wild abandon.  i can just feel my womb quiver as i look

down my belly at my cunt grinding a woman's face as she staring at me

all cat-eyed and knowing she recently would have thought it almost vile

to be burying her face in my hot wet cunt and loving it so divinely.  i

just wish that laura would not shoo her off with her monogamy with

makeeda and vice versa with them.  i love character development and

would love to see them immediately stop this foolishness but i can trust

you in your character development of these women.  sometimes in reading

a story the changes in attitude and character just seem to happen

without a sense of reality under pinning it.  your women grow

organically with the story.  i really see this with deshona.  she was

such a cold hearted bitch and it seem to fit her.  over the years you

have shown her thaw and become much warmer.  she can still be biting and

very direct but she is so much more a loving caring woman who is now a

glorious lesbian loving women and sharing her new warmer self with

them.  i just smile each time she appears in a story because i just

marvel at the growth she has undergone.  i am just so happy that i

discovered a story that allows this kind of pussy tingling growth of

character.

//  my pussy is wet thinking of tonya, laura and this ty having

blistering sex soon.  i so love the magic of new multiple partner

pairings.  i have been sweet on belissa lately keeping her hunger for

pussy satisfied.  she is simply insatiable for cunt meat. i was over at

cindy and shari's and started to wax poetic about belissa's beauty.  i

described in loving detail her nice orange sized tits and awesome ass

and long slit with thick cunt lips.  and how she comes so fucking hard

and wants to fuck and fuck all night long.  how she is going to ditch

her loser husband when he comes back.  they went nuts with desire.

whining for her.  i called over to belissa and she told me to come

over.  i drove over with two hungry sluts in tow and when belissa opened

the door i could see her total shock and consternation.  i almost felt

bad until cindy drew belissa's head down and slammed her tongue down her

throat and shari pulled her shorts off and clamped her devouring mouth

onto her cunt.  all was forgiven as belissa was soon nude on the floor

with the girls raping her body to shattering orgasms.  their deep black

flesh was so beautiful together.  cindy nearly sucked her cunt inside

out while shari rode her face hard and it was so beautiful watching

belissa and shari coming at the same time with wild cries of ecstasy and

jackknifing and bucking bodies convulsing in bliss.  later that night i

watched as they positioned her on the edge of the sofa and cindy slipped

her fist up belissa's wanting asshole and then shari slipped her fist

into her tight pussy.  they slowly worked their fists into her willing

body and slowly stroked the fires of love in her shaking and groaning

flesh.  they worked her into a frenzy of wildly undulating and shaking

flesh.  i so loved watching belissa moan and keen for it and cindy's

forearm sinking up her asshole and twisting out and bumping her fist

against the inside of her sphincter before sliding deep up her colon

again while shari was plunging and twisting her fist so deep into her

tight cunt.  she screamed so fucking loud my ears started ringing and

her body lurched and jolted mightily.  her head slammed against the sofa

back and her neck corded hard while her pelvis bucked and her legs

kicked wildly.  it was so fucking beautiful.  they worked her throughout

her whole orgasm until she let out one last shrieking scream and then

collapsed in complete exhaustion.  for the next two minutes she just

mewled and her spent body was rippling with strong aftershocks.  cindy

sitting on the floor was kissing and licking her thighs and pelvis and

shari was kissing, licking, nipping her tits, shoulders and neck.  it

was heavenly watching their sweat run down their body in rivulets of

spent love.  they have the trick of flexing their fists in your spent

holes and you get this feathery feeling deep in your ruined womb and

asshole.  twice belissa seized up and her face grimaced and her teeth

gritted while she moaned deeply before going back to having her flesh

rippling. i smiled as cindy and shari finally slipped their fists from

her spent body and sidled up beside her and they all moaned softly

cleaning off belissa's cunt and ass juice off their love fists.

//  we then discover that allisha is dying for laura too and again,

heniously, laura is putting her off too.  sigh, so much pussy to devour

and laura is not partaking of the joys of life fully.  yes, i know i am

a complete slut.  life is so short and i feel that it is just plain

awful to forgo all the pussy you can get.  i would be with these women

so quick i would be giving myself whiplash.  at the first hint i would

be with them devouring their cunts and slipping my strap-on hard and

deep into their willing flesh.  i so live to get that phone, email or

text message from a newbie telling me she is dying for it and can't wait

to fuck again.  i just feel my womb flip and body shake as i immediately

reply with my desires and make arrangements for us to meet and to fuck

long and hard.  i am just so happy that you are showing these women

learning the truth and feeling their new desires growing and

blossoming.  i so love watching a woman becoming addicted to pussy.  i

know that once they feast often on pussy they are hooked and will always

feel the desire clawing at their womb to fuck and love women.  i so love

teaching women their true selves.  i do have to admire their respecting

laura's wishes to wait until makeeda leaves.  i find it a waste of sweet

fucking but they respect laura and the person she is.  one thing i have

always liked about your stories is you always show the best in women.

sure you show the occasionally jealousy and how we hurt each other even

though we don't mean to.  you show how most women want to love and

cherish the women in their lives.

//  sigh, i so love the fates showing their sweet threads of love.

jamilha calls out of no where right when makeeda has left town.  i feel

the love shakes come over my body when i sense such things in my life.

laura pulls up the kind of mental images of her angels that fill me head

[Laura had two pictures in her mind of jamilha.  One, in her

bridesmaid's dress, bright yellow with a scoop neck, her beautiful,

smooth, sleek black skin wonderfully exposed and contrasted with the

bright-colored fabric, the yellow flowers in her shiny black hair making

her look like some fresh African queen of the May.  Two, sitting nearly

naked on the bed next to where Laura was napping, in her flimsy little

nightie with small bluebells all over it, even more of her delicious

black skin now exposed, puffing on a cigarette and watching TV, the

large circles of her deeply black nipples showing a little through the

fabric of her nightgown.]  my mind is filled with memories of hot sweet

fucking but just as much is visions of my angels of them just being

them.  i so love finding an author that shows these small moments that

bind souls and melts wombs with desire and love.  i so day dream of

visions of my angels when i first met them and what they said and their

initial impressions they made on me.  i am so hyper aware on how your

clothes accentuate your beauty.  i can just see those flowers in

jamilha's hair.  i would swoon with new love for her.  you show how

laura seeing in her mind's eyes these sweet visions of jamilha will

marry with her memories of their hot fucking and they fill your body and

soul with the sweet need to fuck her over and over again until she is

totally spent and your complete love slut for the night or weekend.  you

are the only author to show sweet memories like this and they make me

all warm and tingly just reading them.  thank you for showing the sweat

along with the white hot heat of intense fucking.

// i am mentally fist pumping at his part.  jamilah calls and is

desiring to meet laura and she makes it clear that she wants to fuck in

a heavenly tryst.  i am just so fucking happy.  i like how you show the

hesitancy of jamilah.  you show the slow coming around that most hets go

through as they discover their true nature.  i like how you show jamilah

is taking her first steps towards her destiny.  i like how laura is soft

and gentle with jamilah as she is taking her first steps to a life of

lesbianism.  i so thank the gods when i help a newbie discover her true

self.  i love iniatiting a woman into lesbianism or bi-sexual life.  i

am not a pc type of lesbian that must get them to fuck only women.  i

have no problem with dodie and frankie fucking men whenever they feel

like.  sometimes i even join them now.  joann curls her lips at our

indiscretions and maria is bemused.  she shucked her catholic upbringing

long ago and has no desires for male cock anymore.  hearing jamilah say

she thinks she is a lesbian now makes my heart soar and sing.  only this

story arc allows you to show laura seducing a newbie and then slowly

converting her to a true woman.  once a woman discovers her true love of

pussy can she can become all she was meant to be.  i so love your dialog

that only you write.  laura is kind of pumping jamilah for info about

her new orientation and she responds her new feelings ["A lesbian,"

Laura whispered into the phone, smiling.        "Yup."       "What did

you decide?"       "I'm calling, ain't I?"]  this kind of dialog i never

get in other stories.

//  Laura meets jamilah the next day and i love how you contrast her and

laura's other recent angel tonya.  i like how you show that jamilah is

not conventially pretty but laura sees beyond all that.  tonya is more

classically beautiful in her lines and angels and, thus, people will

gravitate towards her and not the jamilah's of the world.  their loss.

in another story with multiple chapter's by sandy she has lots of women

but all you really get is eye and hair color, height and general build.

here you show jamilha's uniqueness [She had a delicious lean body and

beautiful very dark skin, but her face was a little odd due, Laura now

remembered, to her too widely spaced eyes and her slight overbite and

flat nose.  When you first glanced at her, you might think: Oh, this

poor little homely thing, how does she get along?  And yet it was a very

expressive face, full of infectious gaiety and fetching shyness, and

seconds after you looked into Jamilah's deep black eyes you no longer

thought her homely.]  a little while back i met a woman, nicole, through

the local swing magazine.  i liked her wit on the phone and chat room.

when i first met her it was even for me a little bit of whoa.  this girl

is really plain.  the beauty of it is that soon i thought she was a

complete fox.  her personality caught me up like it did on the phone and

i quickly noticed her beautiful eyebrows and lashes and soon the rest of

her became pretty and i was diving deep into her cunt and slurping away

with complete gusto and drinking down her steamy cum.  i love cuddling

with her after long hot fucking and just stroking her pretty auburn hair

and face.  i like how you show not all women are classically beautiful.

//  i then like how you talk of the fact that tonya is brash and jamilah

is submissive.  i like the fact that women are so different.  i love

both types so much.  the brass ones take me like the slut i am and i can

be the dom with the submissive ones who do not swing in their tastes for

dominating.  i love the lioness that takes me and makes me hers but i

also love bringing along a shy flower and fucking her blind and trying

to get her to open up.  i love bringing out a hidden freak and getting

her to express any aggressive traits she may have and let her learn on

my willing flesh and then i get to abuse her with intense love.  i like

how laura gushes on about jamilah and how pretty she finds her.  laura

is naturally nice but i think she know to really compliment your shyer

and less sure lovers.  i like watching them preen and puff up with

confidence.  i just smile goofily at them.  i have always loved how you

show your lovers showing their love for their women.  i just don't get

that communication in stories from other authors.  i love the banter

between them as laura teases her about her being with a lesbian and

coaxing jamilah to admit her burning lesbian desires and how she is

embracing her true self.  i so love hearing a newbie expressing to me

the new desires burning in her veins and getting her to express it more

and more and seeing her accepting her true self with more confidence and

wanton desire.  i like how laura leads things along when jamilah needs

her to in finding a place to fuck with both of their homes being off

limits.  i have always loved your humor like here with jamilah waiting

for laura's mind to find a love nest [Jamilah waited, patiently,

expectantly, as if Genius were cogitating on the other side of the

table.]  had to smile at that.

//  laura comes up with a hotel room and i am smiling as jamilah shyly

thinks friday is a good night so they can fuck the night through and not

have to worry about work.  i love seeing her fuck hunger already showing

so clearly.  i so love seeing the slut in my angels coming out.  ["You

know, I have one request," Laura said, bursting on ahead, as if to

overcome all Jamilah's shyness and nerves.  "Can you bring that little

nightgown with the bluebells all over it?  You know, the one you were

wearing that . . . first night we were . . . together.?"]  that is just

so fucking cute.  joann has a light blue outfit that drives me wild when

she comes strutting in with it on.  i like it when you have your lovers

attire driving your women wild.  other authors never show how we love

seeing our angels in their clothes or nighties so we can salivate as it

comes off.  not only that but you use this opportunity to show how a

more experienced lover like laura and myself use words to soothe and

make our angels hot to fuck ["Good."  She leaned across the table and

whispered.  "Just the memory of you in it makes me wet."      Jamilah

tittered nervously, and Laura pulled back.  Had she gone too far?

Really?" Jamilah asked softly.      Laura nodded.  "Really.  Bring

it."       "I will."]  other authors show seduction but only you show

the gentle loving words we use to make our newbies comfortable and so

ready to fuck heatedly.  i so love calming a newbie and seeing the fuck

hunger filling her eyes and her body shaking with desire to inhale cunt

meat and devour sweet asshole.

//  other stories have so few kilobytes that you can't show the juicy

stewing of having to wait for a love rendezvous of sweet hot love and

fucking.  i like seeing her getting the hotel room reserved and calling

jamilah and hearing the nervousiness in her voice as she discusses their

coming tryst.  i so smile and beam when i hear it in a newbies voice and

know soon i will be devouring her cunt and she will be screaming and

jackknifing around on the bed in a harrowing orgasm.  i am so their

observing jamilah with laura when she arrives at the hotel all nervous

and anxious to fuck.  like laura i revel in each angel's unique beauty.

i like how you show the awe laura feels at seeing her lover.  other

authors just seem so bland in describing their lovers.  here you show so

clearly the absolute love laura feels for jamilah.  i adore how you show

laura's love of her dark flesh.  i love all women of color and love dark

black skin though the brown of a latina's skin and her black hair is to

die for.  i so want to love my angels and make her feel like queen of

the world but of course i will make her feel that way because i am going

to fuck her to heaven and back like here [She experienced a weird

combination of feelings, wanting to embrace and shelter the darling

thing and at the same time tear her clothes off and run her mouth all

over that magnificently dark naked body.]  i am smiling great big at

laura using humor to soothe jamilha's nerves with her jest about not

biting.  i then have to smile at jamilah seeing the size bed and getting

the love shakes knowing that soon hard loving fucking will be happening

on it.  i have seen newbies almost shake apart with nerves and need at

this moment.  i have always admired how you show actual loving dialog in

your stories ["Come here and let me have that marvelous mouth," Laura

murmured, pulling her close.  "I wanted to kiss you all during our lunch

the other day."]  other authors are just so crass in their stories.

almost no dialog and what i get is so rudimentary and basic that it

doesn't move like yours does since it is real and life affirming.

//  i love how you have so much dialog in your stories.  most other

stories are basically action with very little real interaction between

the women.  here we have laura and jamilah bantering about desire and

love.  i am smiling as laura sucks on jamilha's neck and she is shaking

with want.  i so love clamping on a slut's neck and working her tender

sweet flesh.  with my more gentle angles i nibble like laura here but

with training i can convert most into kinky sluts with my mouth clamped

tight and sucking her flesh hard and fast making her wail in ecstasy and

pulling my mouth tight to her neck as i mark her as my bitch and then

offer my neck to be marked as her bitch.  i have always loved how you

show the beginning of sweet love with your slow seduction of newbies and

filling them with want and need.  i am grinning with jamilah being so

skittish and being worried about something happening to them in the

hotel room.  i mean, come on girl.  why even think such thoughts.  i

love how you and laura use humor to defuse such thoughts ["Mmmm," Laura

hummed, kissing her wonderful smooth black neck again, nibbling her

earlobe.  "They also get eaten alive by hungry women like me."]  you are

the only author to show humor in your stories and love it.  i live to

make my women "lol".

//  sigh, i so love the pacing of your stories.  other authors always go

straight from the mouth to the breast and then to the pussy.  well, of

course, i do that a lot but most of the time i take the time to devour

my angel like laura.  it simply makes their cunts and assholes explode

with ecstasy and bliss when i go in for the love kills.  i am so there

as laura loves her neck and jamilha's is twisting her neck to make it

completely available.  i would soon have her begging me to rape her neck

with hard love sucks.  then stroking her back and working down to her

ass and loving and squeezing it feeling those gluts in my strong hands

pumping love into her body.  you show this so clearly here [Finally her

lips found Jamilah's very sensual mouth and they kissed.  It was a slow,

romantic kiss.  They were still standing by the chair where Laura had

deposited Jamilah's overnight bag.  She continued to clutch Jamilah's

marvelous bottom in both hands, now coiling her tongue slowly around

Jamilah's, kissing her patiently and warmly, not too aggressively yet,

but with simple, uncomplicated passion.]  i am just so thankful that i

found an author that shows true passion and love.  for some reason only

you show the slow easy lovemaking of seduction, foreplay and ramping of

sex that ruptures and melts wombs.  i so swoon as my tongue slams down

my slut's moaning throat as our legs twine and stomachs mash into each

other as my hands squeeze and pump her rump.  you show the slow that

leads to the hard fucking later on.

//  love the real life dialog you give us of lovers connecting and

binding tight.  i am so there as i hear jamilah timidly asking if they

will be fucking the night through.  i smile when i hear a newbie or shy

girl whimpering for more sex and fucking.  i take them in my arms and

say sweet things to them like laura does and i love watch them melt with

love for me.  i have had to wait like jamilah made laura wait while she

built up the courage to follow her heart's desires.  i am passionate and

will fuck other angels until you wise up.  i love you besotting my mind

with so much sweet dialog in this chapter like [jamilah shook her head

and grew solemn.  "This is kind of a big deal to me.  Going to bed with

a girl.  I mean, the first time . . . it just happened, you know?  We

were there . . . we got jiggy.  It was fun."      "Fun is hardly the

word for it," Laura deadpanned.  "You fucked my brains loose, you little

sex demon."  She nipped Jamilah's chin, then her cheek, then pinched one

of the hard round moons of her ass through her clothes.      Jamilah

jumped back, laughing.  "Did not.  You were the demon.  You . . . got me

when I was half-naked and vulnerable.  You . . . seduced me."]  this is

so real life it makes my head spin.  i have heard words like these over

the years.  i so love reading it.  your dialog allows us to get to know

these women as individuals and thus, we are able to fall in love with

them along with laura.  we see jamilah as the sweet almost innocent,

timid angel she is.  other authors just keep their women as objects to

fuck with no individuality.  i will take your stories every time.

//  i am loving how your story arc allows past events to mingle with

current events like ["Speaking of half-naked," Laura flirted blatantly

with her.  "Did you bring that little nightie that would make the world

want to devour you if they could only see you in it?"]  only by creating

this universe can we see such sweet interactions.  only one other story

currently is multi-part and it doesn't have anything even remotely as

sweet as this.  it is so sweet watching jamilah being so innocent in her

actions as she shyly goes into the bathroom to change.  now laura

reflects on her lovers like i love to do [While she waited she found

herself recalling what a beautiful pussy Jamilah had.  Of course every

lover had a beautiful one, from Sara's plump, pudgy little beauty to

Jane's sinuous and parabola-shaped masterpiece to her own darling

Makeeda's black sculptured orchid of paradise.  But Jamilah's, Laura now

remembered, was as exquisitely shaped as any she had ever seen, or

tasted.  She sat on the edge of the bed, having reveries of its long

black petals unfolding to reveal a wide magenta expanse of wet inner

flesh, its beautifully shaped hood coming to a point at the top over the

round pinkish bead of a tasty and exposed little clit.  The whole thing

was a feast in which Laura could indulge for hours, and she almost

licked her lips in anticipation.]  you are the only author who describes

their woman's vagina's and i bless you for it.  each woman's is unique

and i love reading this.  this is one of the first things that grabbed

me about your writings.  this is the well spring and only you wax poetic

on our passion flowers and i so fucking love it.  i do find each angel's

pussy to be perfection as i am going down on her.

//  i am so there as jamilah walks back into the room and laura sees her

breast swaying underneath her nightie.  i almost drool watching my

angels breast sway underneath their nightgowns.  i so love seeing

nipples poking through the sheer material.  i so swoon when i remove her

nightie and devour her tits and swallow her nipples down my throat with

hard sucks and if ample of bosom i love pump and milk pure pleasure from

your tits.  i am smiling with jamilah fishing for compliments and then

preening when laura freely gives her words of love and admiration.  i

love telling women how beautiful they are and how i so desperately want

them and will devour their cunt with complete abandon.  i always smile

when you have laura pumping up an angel who probably has heard that much

love cooing.  i think all women are beautiful in one way or another and

will focus on the one until it seems like she is  a complete fox.  i

love reading laura being so positive with the women in her life.  you

show that so lovingly here [Jamilah smiled pertly.  "Why do you think

so?  You know, Laura, nobody ever thought I was as pretty as you do, my

whole life.  Nobody.  Why do you think so?"      Laura took her hands

and pulled her close.  "Because I have eyes, my darling."      "You just

like my pretty little body," Jamilah said, squint-smiling.  "Go ahead,

admit it.  I got a pretty body, I know that."]

//  i am basking in the gentle lovemaking that you bask the reader in.

you have laura kissing and nipping jamilha's black shoulder and upper

chest.  only you (really) show this loving of the whole body.  i so love

kissing a woman's body all over and tasting her divine taste and

inhaling her heavenly scent.  it is this start that makes the end race

to heaven to so fucking rad.  you show more divine tender loving with

[Laura had already shed her blouse but still wore her bra and skirt.

Jamilah looked down and placed her dark, shapely hand on Laura's arm,

then her shoulder.  Then with the fingers of both hands she unfastened

the clasp between Laura's bra cups.  The bra fell loose, exposing

Laura's naked breasts.]  i so swoon when my lover takes my clothes off

and her hands are stroking my flesh.  i so love to bend down and kiss

her hands or arms as they stroke my upper body or face.  i can just feel

my womb melting when i am stroked by my lover.  i am groaning as jamilah

cups and squeezes laura's breast.  i just moan and cup by hands over

yours and encourage you to squeeze and start pulping my tits with

intense love.  oh gods i love them getting almost completely naked and

getting on the bed and pulling their bodies tight and caressing each

other's bodies.  i am almost swooning with this [Jamilah's hands were

all over Laura's nearly naked body, slipping underneath her panties to

cup the moons of her ass, since Jamilah had very long arms and could

easily reach them.]  i can feel my womb flip with my angel cupping my

ass underneath my panties and working my ass cheeks and pumping my ass

full of pleasure.  i so love your ass worship.  other authors almost

always concentrate on the pussy or just go straight to anal sex without

this divine foreplay.  i so love to have my ass worked hard and feel my

woman working down my ass crack and then slipping several fingers up my

clenching and wanting asshole.

//  now more of that communication i so love.  jamilah murmurs for laura

to get naked and she wants to remove her nightie and then laura

expresses her desire to do it herself.  i love to have my woman tell me

how to please her.  i can just see jamilha's divine flesh coming into

view to my starving eyes.  only you give me the moments of seeing an

angel's sweet flesh slowly coming into view to my eyes.  seeing it and

feeling my pussy juice run down my thighs and my mouth salivating with

wild lust.  [Now they were silent for a long time as Laura kissed every

exposed inch she could reach with her lips of Jamilah's smooth black

skin, slowly working the thin, short nightie off her body, first the

shoulder straps, then the whole thing, sliding it down, exposing

Jamilah's wonderful small perfect breasts.  She cupped them in her hands

from below, brushing Jamilah's deeply black and large nipples with her

thumbs.]  i can just feel my stomach hitch and cunt flow at moments like

this.  wow, you capture so perfectly what i was just thinking [She

looked up at Jamilah, locking their eyes together, but said nothing,

though both could hear their rapid breathing.  Laura remembered as if

for the first time how oral she herself was, how she wanted to put her

mouth on every part of Jamilah's delectable body, how she wanted to lick

it and suck it and chew it, even, and bite it and swallow it.  I want to

consume you, darling, I want it all, I want all of your delicious black

body inside my mouth.]

//  you now start that breast worship i so adore.  laura is working

jamilha's breast and making her cry out in ecstasy about how hard she is

sucking her nipples and tit meat.  i am smiling as again laura frets

from hearing jamilha's cries of ecstasy.  i revel in it and will suck

you harder and pulp your fits fiercer as you cry out and trash around on

our bed of love.  last night i was sucking joann's little titties into

my mouth.  i just can't quite get them all in my mouth and i clamp tight

and suck so hard while pulling my head back and pressing in with my

fingers on her pulled taunt tit meat.  gods i so love her screams and

her pulling my head hard into her breast while arching her back to grind

her tits into my mouth.  then taking her little doves in my hands and

pulping and mashing them as she kicks and thrashes.  later i worked over

maria's full tits and sucked and bit her tits and pulped and rolled her

tits in my strong hands.  i love how she just shakes and whimpers in

pleasure.  of course i teeth raked and mercilessly sank my teeth into

their nipples and aureoles as they screamed in pleasure and crammed my

mouth with their tits pulling my face tight.  i am smiling again as the

communicate again.  with laura wanting to rub her pussy on jamilha's

stomach and jamilah wanting some sweet trib action.  i so love your give

and take.  laura being sweet and more experienced gladly goes with

jamilha's desires.  she knows like me that soon her pussy will be

rubbing away on that divine stomach exploding and gushing cunt cream all

over that lovely tummy to bend down and lick and kiss up.

//  i like how you show what patient easy loving can do to a lover.  i

want to make my woman a tub of melted butter waiting for me to finish

off the love kill.  this is what i live to see ["Oh god . . ." Jamilah

finally gasped after several minutes of writhing and panting as Laura

devoured her naked body.  "You're . . . gonna make me come, Laura . . .

even if you don't get to my pussy.  Ungghhhhh!"  Her hips squirmed and

juddered a little in the air, and Laura wondered if she were not telling

the truth.      "Oh, I'm going to get to it all right," Laura panted,

smiling, maneuvering both of their bodies since Jamilah was writhing and

squirming almost out of control.]  i have made all my angels beg and

keen like this with my focused love.  i live to make you my total love

slut.  wow, i love how you show fucks can be so different.  with sara

their trib was sweet slow but you make clear this trib is rough and

hard.  i love it so both ways.  slowly sweeping cunts forever until our

wombs explode in ecstasy but how rough and urgent just makes your sweat

pour off your bodies as they jolt and slam into each other until wombs

explode and shred themselves in ecstasy.  oh yeah, my favorite scissor

trib position.  my woman on the bottom and me on top grinding and

sweeping down.  grabbing her leg and throwing over my shoulder and

riding her like a fucking whore till i make her die from coming so

fucking hard.  i am swooning as they spread their cunt flesh to expose

inner cunt meat and mashing together as their juices flow and mingle

slipperly together.  i can just feel myself gag at suck sensations as i

work your cunt and mash it so good with my sweeping and jamming pussy.

//  sigh, such sweetness [Jamailah was looking up into Laura's eyes.

"Ahhhnnnnnnn!" she moaned, her own eyes rolling briefly up, then down

again quickly to regain their locked focus on Laura's face.  "Oh god!"

She smiled.  "I dreamed of this."]  i will work your pussy harder to

make those eyes stay rolled back in your head.  i so love watching them

spasm and twitch in the back of your head.  i love how you show what is

going on in your women's minds.  other authors just have them fuck with

wild abandon.  her you show laura trying to go slow but knows her desire

for the girl must be satisfied.  usually i lose it and simply devour my

slut and make her come quick because i know i will take her again and

again until her cunt is totally spent and ruined.  i will drink from

your cunt and asshole until they have nothing left to give.  i want to

leave you smiling goofily and drooling on our bed.  oh yeah, i love the

ramping up of the heat.  laura is jamming jamilha's cunt and reaches

down to massage and work her tits with total focus and love.  geez, my

stomach just clenched with laura bending down and inhaling a nipple.  i

so adore watching your women love you women with their all.  you love

the whole body like i do and i so love reading it.  other authors just

can't multi-task in their loving.  they miss so much.  you show how you

pour on the heat on her whole body to make it totally melt for you.

//  i like how laura compliments jamilha's breast when she gets the

opportunity.  one should pour on the love words to make your woman

swoon.  i have always adored your work because you bring this front and

center.  wow, i love the detail of seeing love bloom in jamilha's eyes

as her orgasm approaches.  i live to see it in a new lovers eyes

especially when she is a newbie and you see a whole new world blooming

in her soul and you know she is becoming a lesbian whore slut who will

love cunt meat for the rest of her life.  sigh, you sure know how to

show the love kill ["Oh yes!  Oh yes!" Laura gasped, now leaning

forward, placing her hands on the mattress on either side of Jamila's

head, fucking her now intensely, more intensely than ever, fucking the

sweet, lovely girl hard with her own pussy, rolling Jamilah's pelvis up

off the bed with each hard thrust, feeling the wet and hair-fringed

flesh of Jamilah's splayed pussy open against her own, as if to receive

this fierce surge of lust.]  i so love ramping up the sex level and just

pound fucking my love slut to heaven.  i so know that anchoring my

clenched hands in sheets or pulping a kinky sluts tits with strong

hands.  i so love bending over dodie and pulping and rolling her tits

hard as i pound her cunt with my cunt or love cock and see her neck

cording up and her teeth clenching as her body begins to vibrate with

approaching ecstasy as spittle sprays from her clenched teeth.  pounding

her mercilessly until sweet love is once more blooming like here

["Ungghhh!  Oh Laura!  Ohnnggggg!"      "Now . . . honey, now!" Laura

gasped to her, feeling their straining bodies in synch, completely in

harmony, ready to burst.      "Oh!  AWWWONNNNGGGG!" Jamilah suddenly

cried out, her lean body jackknifing under Laura's as the first paroxysm

of a sharp climax ripped her.]  i so revel to see one of my dearest

angels screaming and feeling her body rock and jolt with devastating

killing blows of orgasmic bliss.  dodie's eyes just flare wide open and

stare deep into your eyes as her screams fill our love nest and her face

slashes horribly with dire bliss.  she is so fucking beautiful like

this.  a movie star beauty dying from bliss in my loving arms or lying

underneath taking my pounding cock in her sweet cunt or asshole.

//  here you make this fuck totally divine and rad by having a mutual

orgasm.  i just scream along with my lover when such paradise occurs.  i

just shed tears of pure esstastic bliss when our bodies are slamming and

jamming against each other when we lost in bliss.  i love full body

contact and i love to collapse on my lover or pull her down on me when

were both coming like here [She fell forward onto Jamilah's body,

writhing against her, luxuriating in the feel of Jamilah's silky black

flesh against her own smooth skin, embracing her and still pumping her

though more with her thigh now since their groins were no longer

intimately mated.  But Laura had to feel Jamilah's young body against

hers everywhere.  Her fingers bit into the girl's resilient flesh, and

she kissed her neck, her cheek, her ear.]  not so long ago i was riding

hillary like this with her leg over my shoulder riding her hard as she

humped up with all her strength and her large tits were rolling and whip

lashing all over her chest.  i started coming hard and with hard jerks

of my spasming body i jammed her flowing cunt hard and with my body

jolting hard.  i reached down and started choking her harshly and

watched her face slash and her eyes roll back and spasm hard.  suddenly

she was coming violently with choked shrieks and slamming arms on the

bed with her calf slamming and jamming my shoulder and neck.  she then

gripped my hair with her clenched fingers and pulled me roughly down and

our mouths came together tight as our tongues wetly stroked our pure

love to each other.  our bodies just slammed and wallowed against other

as we rolled over and over on the bed our legs twined tight, twats

wallowing against slippery thighs, and our arms wrapped around each

other's bodies.  sigh, it was heaven slowly coming down from heaven in

each other's sweaty arms or bodies soaked with sweat and twats soaked in

our love cum.

//  i bask with them as they love coo to each other about how great

their fuck was.  you again are the only author to show post coital time

for some reason which i find strange.  i mean all women love this time

and i am so surprised that only one author touches upon this time after

time.  the author of the "sandy" stories has lots of sex but no sweet

post fucking bonding and sweetness.  i mean great sex is truly bonding

but sweet words make it so much stronger.  love this truth [Jamilah

chewed her full lower lip as if embarrassed, but then stretched lazily.

"It was a little fast, wasn't it.  Guess I was hornier than I

thought."]  i so know that post coital kiss that starts sweet and ends

with fiery passion as you feel your cunt once more twitching, burning

and pumping out cunt juices readying itself to fuck once more.  i love

to help the shy flowers like jamilah open and fuck with the wild abandon

that is every woman's right but man's world tries to strike down.  i

think jamilah is naturally reserved and, thus, man has really stunted

her natural sex drive.  i love to talk nasty and have my shy types just

twitter and shake with nervous sexual energy as i get them used to being

open and free.  i love watching laura getting them to admit that they

indeed do love to hear dirty talk and to do it in turn.  all women have

it in them deep down i think.  i don't usually have to dig to hard to

get them to express it and fuck with wanton hungry and with lots of

guttural language and cursing as they fuck me with abandon.

//  sigh, i love the gentle kissing and caressing they now share as the

bask in a great fuck.  i love that lassitude that fills me but love even

more the fuck hunger that soon infuses my pussy with renewed desire and

once more i must fuck you with my all.  i see laura is once more

initiating the loving again that gentle way that starts the fires to

smoldering leading to the raging inferno.  [Before very long she was

unable to keep her voracious mouth off the girl's delicious flesh, and

she found herself maneuvering Jamilah onto her stomach so that she could

have full access to her wonderful sinuous dark back and her gorgeous

up-jutting little ass.        "Mmmm, you don't know how beautiful you

really are," she purred, nuzzling Jamilah under the shoulderblades,

giving her long, sensual kisses on the nape of her neck.]  you showed my

how to love whole back.  i was kind of an ass girl before.  i simply had

to get to your butt.  but now like laura i will kiss, massage, nip, and

knead from your hair to your sacrum.  kissing and muzzling all those

divine cambers and slopes.  i love working your back and just gazing at

your rump knowing that soon i will love it as much as you will let me.

so thanks for the heads up on loving a woman's back completely.

//  love reading of the actual back worship and seeing jamilah cooing

from the loving.  i love making my slut all gooey and goofy eyed for

me.  i so love the gentle ways you often start your loving.  like the

sudden jolt of humor ["You gon' fuck it . . . like you did my stomach?"

Jamilah smiled, looking back over her shoulder.]  i always love sass in

my women.  i see that jamilah has been thinking about some anal sex.

laura had planted the seeds of anal pleasure by talking about dee dee

and got jamilah to thinking.  i am always telling newbies and neophytes

about what i do and like.  i love seeing the shock and then interest and

slowly drawing them in until i have them dying to do what they initially

found disturbing or frightening.  i like her discovering a friend loves

anal sex too.  you are surprised sometimes when you get your friends to

open up.  i love the fact that jamilah is becoming liberated by laura's

loving to find new things in her friends.  i do like how you talk in

your stories.  they go back and forth about the pleasures of anal sex.

i always give you credit when you tell that some find something not that

rad.  here laura says that some do not find anal sex to be great or even

pleasurable.  i always think it comes down to mental inhibitions but

some probably do have an unusual number of pain receptors in their

rectum area.  poor women.

//  i am smiling great big with laura saying she has had over a hundred

killer anal 'gasms.  i lost count long ago and crave more and more.  i

simply die when my asshole is exploding and shredding itself in fucking

bliss.  i have to grin at jamilah wanting the anal 'gasm without any

pain.  i mean no pain, no gain as the saying goes.  the pain soon fades

to be replaced by pure fucking paradise.  my belly is churning thinking

of a thick cock or fist sliding up my shit hole and filling my colon

with ecstasy.  i chuckled at laura's telling jamilah she doesn't have a

cock herself with jamilah trying to get comfortable with asking for some

nice anal sex.  i love how you have laura so loving and gentle with

leading jamilah forward in her exploring a new and exciting way of

making love.  i can see that jamilah is so soft, pliable and

submissive.  the type of woman you fuck so hard and deep once you get

her to let go of her fears and inhibitions.  a while back joann seduced

one of the junior partners.  jill is a hot blond with a fucking killer

ass.  her domineering controlling boyfriend finally dumped her and joann

swooped in and quickly claimed her.  jill is one fuck cat in bed.  joann

had told me she loves to be really roughed up in bed like me.  i went

over to jill's place with joann and we quickly proceeded to fuck her

hard and grinding our cunts into her devouring mouth.  gods i so love

fucking a submissive slut hard.  i was on my back slamming my cock deep

into jill's tight cunt and joann was straddling her hips slamming her

big dick down her shit hole.  i reached up and started slapping jill

hard making her face jerk from side to side as she moaned and then i

choked her.  oh gods, she took her hand and squeezed harder on my hand

around her neck and her eyes rolled back as i choked and jerked her head

back and forth.  her hair hanging down and whipping around and her half

choked groans were so fucking hot.  joann was ripping her asshole wide

open when jill came wildly and joann fisted her hair and jerked her head

up and back and viciously pulled her back until her back was bowed as

jill gurgled and massive jolts shook her heavenly flesh into ecstasy.

we fucked her holes hard prolonging her bliss as joann continued to pull

her hair cruelly and i slapped her face and pulped her hanging tits.  i

think turn around is fair play and later that night i was straddling

jill and she was gleefully slamming her nine inch cock hard into my

pussy and joann was pounding my asshole so hard and good.  i could feel

the pressure building and begged jill to slap and choke me.  she eyed me

and demurred and whimpered.  i told her i needed it so bad and she had

nothing to fear.  i whimpered and begged more.  suddenly she slapped me

real hard making my head swivel hard.  i moaned deep and she saw i truly

wanted it and i saw her eyes flare.  she slapped me hard repeatedly and

then gagged me with her four fingers fucking my mouth hard like i had

done her earlier.  i so love that slutty feeling as spit drooled and

roped form my moaning mouth around her pounding finger wedge and soaking

her tits and chest.  i started coming hard and she choked my throat hard

and i pretended to try and remove her hand and she squeezed my throat

even harder making me go multiple as joann jerked my head with short

vicious jerks and raked my back with her other hand.  gods, i came for

over a minute it felt like with multiple orgasms ripping my womb,

asshole and mind apart with pure fucking bliss.  i have been with jill

since and we fuck each other so hard and totally abuse each other to

total fucking heaven.

//  wow, i love reading this [Jamilah crinkled her nose.  "You know . .

. I never really 'made love' before.  I just 'had sex.'  Know what I

mean?  This is kind of like making love.  I mean, with you.  I like

it."]  jamilah is discovering what lesbian sex gives a woman.  pure

heaven on earth.  we finally discover laura has her strap-on in the car

and goes got get it but jamilah is wanting to do some cuddling.  i have

to love her quite shy nature.  she just wants to make you love her

gently and then finish her with a mind blowing love kill taking her

harder and harder as she learns to accept her true inner slutty self.  i

see they make some gentle love with jamilah confidently going down on

laura and sucking her off to a explosive orgasm.  i so love experiencing

a newbie's growing passion and skill.  i revel in looking down my

heaving belly and seeing her all cat eyed as she is devouring my cunt

with new confidence and i feel her sucking me harder delivering the love

kill and i hold eye contact as long as possible as my womb explodes and

i am screaming and jackknifing around on the bed and my mind whites out

with fucking bliss.  i so live to feel your mouth sucking hard and

gulping down my flowing fuck juice with your tongue fluttering my fuck

hole and your lips mashed hard into my mound.  i have to smile as they

doze and then laura mentions having dinner and all jamilah wants is more

divine fucking.  i love seeing jamilah blossoming into the true slut

that lives in every woman.  i have adored the scope of your work that

allows us to see the growth in your characters.  yours are the only

stories in erotica that show this.  this is more literature.  these are

real living breathing women for me.  they grow and change with time.  i

pump my fist every time i see an angel grow and become more than she

was.  i am always trying to grow and become better and love reading it

in your stories.

//  laura goes to the car to get her strap-on and i love how when she

returns the fires are already raging in her womb.  just seeing jamilah

in all her naked glory makes her cunt pulse and get wet.  i so love

looking at my lovers and feeling this [Laura was filling her eyes for

the umpteenth time with Jamilah's darling, perfect little naked breasts,

the large round deeply black nipples making her mouth water.  It had

been only minutes since she had been filling her hands with them and

sucking them thirstily, and yet this view of them again, as Jamilah

stood holding the strap-on dildo in her fingers just in front of them,

made a hot little pulse fire up deep in Laura's pussy.]  sometimes it

almost hits me like a fist and i sort of hitch and fold a little as i

feel my womb contract in want and need and fuck juice runs down my

thighs.  i love how you show laura being so in tune with her inner

sexual self.  we are both always so ready to fuck long and hard.  you

now give me that loving dialog that only you give.  other authors may

give a hint of it but you show true love between your lovers with them

fully expressing the reason they find their current mate so irresistible

[Jamilah laughed softly and looked down at Laura's lips on her body.

"Nobody ever kissed me all over the way you do," she laughed.

"Mmmmm, you have the smoothest skin I have ever touched, you know that?"

Laura murmured, brushing her lips across the supernaturally soft black

skin of Jamilah's chest.      "You probably say that to every

girl."        Laura shook her head.  "Not true.  You have marvelous

skin."]  without these loving words i don't feel jamilah would be

growing and blossoming like she is.  we women need to be told how

wonderful and beautiful we are to fully grow and blossom.  we need

stroking unlike men whom just seem to always think they are the total

shit.

//  like the humor of "doctor laura" and how they mock her.  i hate the

bitch too.  she is a complete hypocrite preaching what she didn't do

when she was young and vibrant and not that old shriveled old prune she

is now.  that is one bitch i would never fuck and that is saying

something.  i am smiling at jamilha's skittishness.  i can understand

her going for the six inch dildo when getting her first ass fuck.  start

small and grow into the pleasures of bigger cocks sliding so lovingly

down your asshole.  geez, jamilah won't give it a rest i see [Jamilah

squinted and giggled.  "You better not hurt it," she warned.  "I still

don't really think it don't hurt."]  when i come across angels like this

i have to give them tons of foreplay and gentle loving and lots of

tongue fucking of her asshole.  i will spend an hour on your ass loving

it and snaking my tongue deep down your rectum and gaping your asshole

and worming my tongue all around your rectum and slurping and drooling

spit down your shit hole and tongue fucking you hard.  i make women come

from this alone.  i so love tongue fucking a rump as she is screaming

and jamming her asshole back into my tongue as i slurp up her oozing ass

juice.  just be sure to work her tits and clit as you do your anal work

and you can make her cum so fucking hard.  i usually get them to work

their tits and clit and let me concentrate on their tasty asshole.

yumm!!!

//  hum, interesting thoughts here.  i see laura is not really into the

taking of jamilha's asshole.  she feels that the passion is missing.  i

know what she means but i don't let that stop me feeling it will come

but i do try and avoid it.  i always work to make my women writhing and

begging for it.  i guess jamilah is being mechanical in her responses

here.  once she feels her ass giving her pure nirvana she will change.

i see that laura is having trouble getting jamilah to relax.  now that

is important.  one must let the sphincter relax unless your a pro and

like the pain of a more forceful entry which can be rad in its own way

as your lover takes you roughly when she is in dominitrix mode.  have to

smile at jamilah squealing without really being penetrated yet.  that

has happened to me so many times.  but laura is patient and inserts a

greased finger slowly and lovingly into jamilha's tight asshole and

slowly works her anal magic on her.  i so love feeling my tongue and

then finger(s) sliding up a virgin asshole and knowing it is mine and i

am the first.  i just close my eyes and feel my womb quiver in pleasure

as i feel your sphincter clutching my tongue or finger.  slowly pumping

that divine rose bud like here [Laura decided not to rush things.  If

she liked this, why not take advantage of that?  She twisted her finger,

embedded in Jamilah's tight little rectum, and slid it in and out in a

slow, sensual motion.  Jamilah panted and swirled her ass back into

Laura's hand.  Laura could feel the girl's body slowly loosening,

heating up, welcoming a more vigorous approach.  She increased the speed

of her moving hand, softly biting Jamilah's shoulders, pushing her own

naked breasts into Jamilah's sinuous back, getting very aroused herself

now, wanting to fuck the darling girl, and fuck her hard.]  i so know

that feeling of working her sphincter open and your lust and love for

her asshole is flaring and you know soon you will be fucking her asshole

so good and hard and she will be dying from a truly harrowing anal

'gasm.

// okay, i didn't see this coming.  jamilah screams out in raw pain with

the penetration.  laura being so less kinky than me she immediately

stops and removes herself from the harness.  i have to give you credit.

you are willing to show when things fail.  i would never do that if i

was writing erotica.  i tell of my successes here but i do have failures

and i hate them and try to never mention them.  you have done this

before and i admire it.  you are willing to show this and you do show

laura adapting to her lover and changing her methods to give her woman

pleasure.  i want to give my woman paradise on earth but i am different

than laura here.  once you have told me you're giving me your sweet

asshole i want it.  i mean laura fucked her asshole with her finger and

it didn't hurt.  the pain receptors are the same, doesn't matter the

diameter so much.  though i have to admit some women seem to have a ton

of a pain receptors there and are simply cursed with it and can't

partake of anal sex which is their great loss.  also, i think it is

mostly mental and man's brainwashing that prevents them from truly

enjoying what nature has provided us.  i have to smile as i admit that

you are brave enough to show in your stories that some women can't do

this.

// me, i will pour of the foreplay more and see where that gets me.

then i let them take my asshole.  this is how i got belissa.  she was

reluctant and squirming away from me when i brought my cock to her

asshole so i put her in the harness and let her fuck me in the ass.  she

was soon completely into and driving her cock balls deep into my

squealing body and drove my body through the bed as my orgasm hit.  she

pounded my asshole so fucking hard as she slammed me again and again

into the mattress.  i loved hearing her grunts of effort and the way she

grabbed my hips to lunge her cock hard down my asshole making me scream

in mind blowing pleasure.  when she was finished she looked at me with

slit eyes and handed me the harness and she watched me suck my ass juice

off the eight inch cock and then she got on her side and i took her

sweet asshole spoon and then her on top as she pounded her asshole down

for all she was worth.  i begged her to suck her sweet ass off my cock

and swooned watching her slip off the cock buried up her shit hole and

flop on the bed and suck it clean before taking it hard in her cunt and

asshole for long pounding fucks over and over again until her asshole

rode itself to destruction through a fierce anal orgasm that had her

screaming and drooling in fucking pure bliss.  now she can't wait to

give me her asshole and she just spends long periods of time eating my

asshole out.  she has bought some anal plugs and glass ribbed dildos

with round heads and uses them to fuck my asshole and then gapes me and

worms her tongue so deep into my rectum licks it all around.  i so love

anal whores.  she loves to get on the end of her sofa and fold herself

over the sofa arm with her asshole high in the air and will pull her ass

cheeks wide exposing her rosebud for me and just moans and keens as i

slip my ten inch cock down her asshole and pounded her so hard.  i

skewer her shit hole with hard long strokes and then short rabbit

strokes and then ripe my dick out and walk over and fist her hair and

pull her head to my waving cock and smile as she moans with pleasure

cleaning my cock before i slam it down her asshole again and again.  she

comes so fucking hard with her legs kicking around her feet pounding the

floor and her body squirming and bucking down into the sofa as i get a

foot on the sofa arm and just rape her asshole lovingly as she comes so

fucking hard and long.  i so love fucking a woman's asshole and taking

her to heaven.

//  i will try logic.  without getting to dirty and i mold my

explanation to the woman but i ask her basically if she cried out in

pain the last time she took a shit.  sorry for the language.  unless she

has a medical condition then answer is going to be no.  i tell her that

a sphincter basically doesn't care which direction the penetration comes

from.  up or down and if doesn't hurt one way it won't hurt so much the

other way if you will let your mind go.  that often works.  then their

is the medical way.  i carry in my purse a bottle of anbesol.  i put

some on my finger and rub along their gum and then tap and rake it and

they don't feel anything.  i then explain that it works the same way on

the sphincter.  it will deaden the initial penetration and once it

starts to fade you will be in paradise.  i like to try it the natural

way but this does work.  you just need to get your asshole accepting and

soon it will will be wanting long hard cocks and hopefully fists sliding

hard and deep.

//  i am so opposite of jamilah in the love of anal sex.  a couple

nights ago dodie was over with frankie out of town.  she is six foot

plus amazon like me and i can lie on her body with my back on her torso

as i support myself some with my elbows some.  she was sliding her

strap-on slow and deep up my clenching asshole.  joann and maria where

pumping their strap-ons into my cunt.  they took turns fucking me good

and letting me suck my juices off their cocks in turn.  joann was

fucking my pussy when i felt her cock slip from my dripping cunt and

then by eyes bulged and body hitched when i felt her cock head worming

into my sphincter along side of dodie's sliding cock.  dodie sensing

what joann was doing pulled my legs back and brought my tender asshole

clearly into view.  i felt my whole body judder and i whinnied as

joann's cock slide into my stretched burning asshole.  i was squealing

and crying out in pleasure.  i so love to be fucked so hard.  i was

cursing and begging for her rape of my asshole.  my womb melted feeling

their cocks slide in and out my asshole.  then joann slipped her cock

out and walked up and i moaned deeply feasting on her cock covered in my

ass juice and Maria slipped her cock into my stuffed wanting asshole and

fucked me hard.  they fucked me back and forth feeding me their cocks

and somewhere along the line dodie flipped me over and i straddled her

face to face as she lunged her cock up my shit hole and both my babies

in turn straddled my hips and slammed their cocks hard into my screaming

asshole along side dodie's ramming love cock.  i simply swooned as i

felt two cocks sliding deep up my asshole and my other baby gag fucking

my throat with her hard cock sliding over my tonsils and down my

larynx.  then my orgasm simply ripped me apart as i screamed and cried

out in fucking bliss as i went multiple and died of pure pleasure.  i

came and came as my asshole was raped so fucking good and joann gripped

my hair and jerked my head up and she proceeded to gag fuck me with her

eight inch cock like the whore i am.  i so love gasping and choking on a

hard cock while my womb is shattering itself.  so many miss the pleasure

that good hard anal fucking gives one.  why deny yourself such divine

pleasure is my question.

//  but, alas, like i said sometimes a woman is just not able or into

anal sex.  no problem really but i do feel they are denying themselves

needlessly.  laura is no where as kinky as me and she easily and almost

gladly i sense backs off and takes jamilah the way the more traditional

way.  in the end, it all comes down to your lover what she wants and

needs.  i just think one should try and educate her if possible.  i love

reading how laura pours on the loving heat to take jamilah off her

recent pain [In truth, fucking Jamilah in the ass was the furthest thing

from her mind at present since Jamilah's tears just tore at her heart

and fanned her lust equally in the same instant, making her want to

devour the sweet young thing.  She kissed Jamilah ravenously, and

Jamilah responded, forgetting her fear of the invader, now that it

clearly was not going to happen, and giving in quickly to Laura's

overheated lechery.        "Oh god, yes . . . yes!" she panted against

Laura's neck as Laura swarmed over her lovely lean body.]  tears of true

unwanted pain kill me and i will work very quickly to bring on the gasps

of pleasure that laura is eliciting from jamilah here.  forget the pain

and lets fuck hungrily.  i love how you show that laura is so positive

and only wants to give jamilah pleasure.  laura is not selfish and only

wants to deliver pure pleasure to her lovers.  i have felt very contrite

and bad when i pushed a woman to hard in something and will slave to

make amends and let her do whatever she wants until she is completely

satisfied and besotted with happiness and love for me.

//  i am so there with laura with as she inhales jamilha's sweet body.

stroking her body and sucking her tits hard with gentle teeth rakes

giving her as much as her sweet nature can take and then devouring her

cunt.  i so love to bury and wallow my face in a swollen wet cunt.

driving my tongue deep and sucking your cunt meat into my mouth and

polishing your clit until your clenching and cawing working towards the

divine finish line.  now you really totally surprise me.  [But, even in

the heat of her need, Laura realized that before making the girl come

she could deliver one last surprise.  After all, Jamilah had liked the

finger.  Only the thick dildo itself had made her flinch; not the

finger.  And her little asshole still had to be lubricated somewhat from

their adventures just minutes ago.  Quickly Laura had her finger between

the girl's hard, clenching buns, and she slid it back into Jamilah's

rectum before Jamilah even had a hint that it was coming.

"Unhhhh!" Jamilah gasped, her eyes suddenly watering as she looked into

Laura's.        It was a stirring shock of recognition, and for a moment

Laura wondered if she were going to scream again and plead for Laura to

stop.  But then she bit her full lower lip and nodded.  She nodded

again.]  after such a failure i would be so careful.  i would maybe

stroke around her rectum and look up begging for permission.  after a

failure i get so shaken an hesitant.  i find pleading works a lot of the

time.  i so love it when i feel her giving me what she can.  i know

laura's womb is flipping feeling jamilha's warm tight sphincter now

clutching her pumping finger.  i so love you showing laura taking a

woman to new heights.  hopefully soon, jamilah will let go and lovingly

take a love cock deep down her fucking asshole and let laura or some

other angel take her to anal paradise.  she will never give it up once

she sees the light.

//  to me this heaven on earth as i wetly devour a swollen cunt and i

work her asshole with my fingers or dildo and i see those heavenly jolts

hitting her body harder and more frequently and i know the big O is

coming soon.  like here [Jamilah arched and threw her head back, her

bowed body quivering and gleaming with a fine sheen in the soft light,

her firm breasts shaking a little as she strained and whimpered, her

thick black nipples gleaming almost deep purple like swollen plums.

Laura had to hold on, but her finger was still embedded deep in the

girl's tight rectum, and she now twisted it vigorously, then plunged it

in and out, fucking Jamilah more sharply now with it, and sucking her

clit hungrily.]  i so love that arching and stiffening of my lover as

she grinds her cunt into my mouth and her asshole down on my invading

appendages.  taking her asshole harder and harder and feeling her ass

juice flowing down my fingers or my wrist and forearm all coated if i'm

plunging my fist deep up your spasming colon.  sucking her turgid clit

into your mouth and supper sucking and slapping it with my tongue as

your screams of bliss fill the room.  sucking her entire upper cunt into

my mouth and pulling my head back stretching her cunt meat taunt as i

tongue buzz her straining clit and feel that shiny nub underneath my

buzzing tongue.

//  my ears are singing as i hear laura encouraging jamilah on to orgasm

and then watching her being crushed by fucking heaven on earth like this

["Annghh!  Angghhh!  OH!  OH!  AUUNNGGHHMMNNGGIIEEEE!"        And this

time her convulsions were so violent that she actually did fling Laura

to the side.  Laura's finger, well-greased, slipped out of Jamilah's

ass, and she could feel the smear of warm pussy juice all over her lips

grow clammy as her mouth was separated prematurely from Jamilah's

undulating body.  But Jamilah was in a kind of paradise that could not

be marred, and Laura was quickly back in place, inserting her finger,

which slid in easily, and then drilling her tongue directly into the

soupy, inflamed furrow of the girl's beautiful pussy, fucking and

tonguing her passionately enough to bring on another orgasm before

Jamilah had quite exhausted the first one.        "Ohhnnnggggggg!" she

wailed, frantically pumping.  "Yes!  Yes!  Ungghhh!"        Oh, you're

going to have another one, honey.  I know you are! Laura thought, wildly

and intently administering to this girl's beautiful, straining body to

bring forth another shattering ecstasy, even as powerful as the

first.        "Oh!  AUUNNGGHHMMNNGGIIEEEE!" Jamilah roared, coming again

in a fierce, leaping spasm that nearly flung Laura away again.]  now

this is why i fuck.  to give my woman all the pleasure that a fuck

possibly can.  turning on the heat to make her go multiple and feeling

her cunt mound jamming and mashing your mouth.  as she goes multiple

usually her cunt just pours and gushes divine cunt nectars to gulp and

swallow and inhale the divine odor filling your mind with bliss.  love

the detail of being bounced off and then quickly reattaching to your

lover and sucking her cunt inside out and slipping your fingers back in

her cunt and or asshole and pounding her to another orgasm if the gods

had decreed it.  i so love fucking you hard to sweaty heaven and back.

//  i so love watching a woman come down from heaven like here [This one

looked to Laura—and she knew they could be—almost painful, from the way

Jamilah grimaced and shuddered and groaned as the piercing spasms

wrenched her delicious flesh.  Finally she collapsed, moaning and

mewling, still squirming as if to avoid or absorb aftershocks that were

nearly as intense as the climax itself.  Laura carefully extracted her

greased finger and pulled back a little, unwilling to make a quick

withdrawal, and yet eager to embrace the still half-swooning girl and

soothe her.]  i so love seeing the love lights in her eyes and knowing i

put it there and knowing that i have made her a true lesbian slut and

whore and knowing that i have opened a door for her.  with an old lover

seeing i have yet again given her the pleasure she so deserves.

//  love how the chapter ends with jamilah all gushy about her womb

shattering orgasms and how she wants more.  music to my ears hearing say

she wants more booty orgasms and how she no longer wants to do men.  i

would quickly show her my other angels and open her world totally to

fucking pleasure and bliss.  i am smiling great big as jamilah asks

about fucking laura in the ass and laura telling her can't wait.  i get

the sense that soon that cock will be sliding deep in jamilha's sweet

asshole and that laura will be seeing the wonder of pure pleasure from

jamilha's eyes as they lock eyes as laura strokes jamilha's sweet virgin

asshole so good until it really goes off in a devastating anal orgasm.

lucky them!!!  another masterpiece i must say.

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Chapter 305:

 

 

//  i like how this chapter starts.  laura is exhausted from hot fucking and yet her fires are yet re-igniting for more hot fucking and intense lovemaking.  i know that feeling so well.  going into work the morning after all night fucking and feeling all fucked out.  my body is all love aching and my cunt and asshole are totally exhausted and yet seeing so many beautiful woman around me soon has my body reviving and begin to feel that tingle in my nipples and clit and i know that once more my body is ready for more hot fucking.  a glance or text message can have my pussy so instantly raging and my nipples rock hard that i simply must fuck soon to once more feel that glorious rupturing of womb and asshole while nipples throb madly and my clit is exploding pure fucking bliss into my brain.  i see that laura and tonya are thinking similar thoughts of love when tonya appears in laura's office and boldly asks if makeeda is out on a singing trip.  i so smile when a newbie comes to me and boldly or often shyly hints, begs, demands more intense lovemaking.  it makes my heart sing with new love when i see the inner slut coming out in my new lover.  usually, i immediately let them know my intense desires though sometimes i am impish and i act dense and obtuse and smirk when i see the confusion and often desperation in their eyes and actions until i let them know that as soon as we are away from prying eyes and man's world i will rock their world to the depths of their souls.  if in the right place i will take her in my arms and snake my tongue down their throat while i pull them in a full body clench and hump their twat on my strong thigh while i squeeze their tits hard and massage their ass with intense love.  i so love the unfocused eyes and hard breathing as they fall totally under my spell and i know soon she will again be burying her face deep in my cunt and she will be giving herself to me totally.

 

//  i so love how you show the individuality of women.  you show the shy flower in jamilha and now you show the woman who is totally confident in her beauty and is full of sass like here [Tonya smirked and ran out her tongue, her sassy and sexy gesture she knew drove Laura wild.  This was the girl who had posed in front of the mirror, admiring her naked body and asking Laura which parts she thought were best, moments before allowing Laura to fuck her for the first time.  She was not a shy, blushing flower.]  other authors have the seduction of women but they are so bland.  they are usually the nice, shy girl but we never really get to know the woman.  i feel like i know jamilha and love the quirks and mannerisms you have given her.  she lives and breaths to me.  i so love her and long to eat her pussy inside out and drive my long tongue deep into her clenching asshole.  tonya is a confident woman who knows her body is to die for and flaunts it.  i am so putty with such women.  i just want to worship them all night long.  i love how you take the time to show this confidence and show her unique style and the underlying beauty underlying her confidence.  her licking tongue and bangs would make my heart melt with love for her.  i love how you take the time to show us with multiple chapters these gorgeous and vivacious women.  women who are so unique and charming.  i can just feel her in my arms as i pull her roughly against my body and tilt her head back as i slam my long tongue down her throat making her gag and groan before turning her neck and sinking my teeth into her throat and sucking hard and cruelly making her scream in raw pleasure and want.  making her my total fuck whore for the next day or night.  i so love reducing a woman to jelly in my arms.  sigh, i love how this is developing.  tonya tells laura that her and her friend are dying to have a threesome with laura.  of geez, i felt my womb quiver.  i so love!!! threesomes.  i like how she describes her friend so lovingly and her small titties and how dark and beautiful she is.  i am surprised that they are so interested in lesbian lovemaking but yet haven't fucked yet.  what a waste but i now that self denial to make a hot tryst all the more magical when it happens in a certain way.  i am fist pumping when i discover that tonya wants their tryst to happen this very night and laura rushes to make it happen.  sigh new love is in the air.  i can feel my entire body shaking and aching for new love like this.

 

//  recently, joann announced that a fairly new lover, vanessa (a divine black woman with an hour glass shape) and her partner were coming over.  she told us of vanessa's classically beautiful face, full tits and ass and how she was a submissive slut like us.  her partner, jill, was a dom and they were coming over to get to know us all.  i am smiling thinking of me and maria on the sofa when they arrived.  i nearly wet my panties.  vanessa was so fucking dark and jill was a tall leggy cuban with that divine mix of races with very dark brown skin and has long frizzy hair with a slight red tint and all toned and hard with small b cup titties.  jill ordered vanessa to sit with joann and she sat between us.  we made some small take and got to know each other a little before jill took my face in her hands and brought our mouths together hungrily and slammed her tongue down my throat.  my eyes rolled back and spasmed so fucking hard.  she then turned and she took maria's wanting mouth and had her immediately swooning.  i saw that vanessa was already on her knees with joann's slacks around her ankles and sucking joann's cunt hard.  jill ordered us to strip as she stripped and soon she was on her knees sucking me off to a devastating orgasm.  gods her tongue was like a serpent slithering so deep into my cunt and her mouth like a vacuum on my clit.  she sucked maria to two bucking, screaming orgasms.  by then joann had sucked off vanessa a couple of times.  jill is a total butch and fell on vanessa' cunt and sucked her off and then joann as joann rode her cunt up and down her face getting it soaked with yet another layer of girl cum.  jill was by now a total

fucking mess.   sigh, then jill and joann got themselves strapped in and they first took vanessa so fucking hard.  i was on my knees beside the bed and looking up close as joann's cock slide so deep into vanessa's asshole and hearing her moan she needed to taste her asshole and seeing joann slip it out her clinging asshole and take her dripping cock to vanessa who hungrily cleaned it up.  they took turns raping her holes as she sucked her cunt and asshole off their cocks.  oh gods, she was clenching the mattress with her hands as joann slammed her cock up into her flowing cunt and jill pounded her cock balls deep into her asshole.  her body just bucked and twisted as guttural moans and demented gibbering issued from her cawing throat.  they fucked her continually as she came three times close together until she was prostrate on joann's petite body and their mouths kissing so fucking deeply as vanessa was in a satiated heaven of fucking bliss.  then slowly jill and joann disengaged and i watched as jill took maria by the hair and brought her mouth to her cock covered in vanessa's anal orgasm and maria moaned deeply while her eyes rolled back sucking jill's cock down her throat and joann got maria on her side and slipped her cock deep into maria's cunt spoon style.  they fucked her so good and then it was my turn.  that is the advantage of multiple lovers.  the love and fucking just continues and continues.

 

//  i have to smile as laura is a little hesitant when she discovers that she must go over to ty's before tonya arrives.  actually, i like to have someone smooth things in a new introduction when it is an intimate setting.  in a swing party or such then to hell with it an lets fuck.  i have to love how comfortable tonya is with her new reality.  she is smoothly setting up a threesome with her best friend and is totally comfortable with it.  i have to love a woman who is so comfortable with her new found desires.  so often i find newbies to be skittish and need lots of soothing as you help them blossom and grow in their new found freedom.  i like having the woman who knows the other to ease the situation but it is not totally necessary.  i am confident when i know the women want me and i also know i can defend myself.  it is just over the years i have had a few really weird situations occur when i flew solo into a few situations that i keep my senses really up and running when meeting multiple women on the fly.  i will go never the less and just be nervous.  i see tonya knows how to handle the situation [Tonya looked at Laura as if she were crazy.  "You gonna let that stop you?  You didn't even know me either."  She made a sexy face and slithered out her tongue.  "And look how we hit it off.  You just tell her you're Laura.  And if I have to let myself in when I get there, well I know how to do that."]  i have to smile at tonya.  i am sometimes surprised at how some women just take to lesbianism like a duck to water.  she has tasted sweet pussy and now wants to taste her best friends gash and dine on her succulent cunt meat.  what all women should want!!!

 

//  one thing i have always liked about your stories is you allow basking.  in other stories the sex just happens seemingly.  the authors just have them fuck or you have the obligatory first refusal and then seduction if that kind of story.  but the women just do it so to speak.  other authors don't show that delicious anticipation and simmering lust that makes your pussy quiver and blood rush.  you show what i am talking about her so well [Laura could feel herself getting wet right there, standing on the thronged Market Street sidewalk in front of her building.  She was amazed.  All the hot sex she had had in her life, all the beautiful lovers, all the wrenching orgasms in the arms of the most gorgeous girls in the world, and even a few under the pile-driving thrusts of some heroic males, and yet she could still overflow with sexual heat and fluids at the mere hint of going to bed in a few hours with Tonya and her friend.  She wondered if Tonya were feeling the same way.  Suddenly, Tonya winked at her, ran out her tongue again lubriciously, fluffed her fetching bangs with the fingers of one hand, and Laura knew that she was.]  you capture that lust racing in your blood that makes your mind almost a little dizzy thinking of burying your face deep in a lover's cunt and inhaling her juices in gluttonous glee.  i am just smiling at the raw wanton lust in laura and tonya's sass.  i just so adore women who preen and primp for their women.  i love confidence and i am cheesing when tonya tells laura the two of them will wear ty out.  i love such talk and then doing it.  i want to fuck my angels to complete exhaustion of worn out pussies and gaped out assholes if so

inclined.

 

//  i have always like how laura and myself are so alike and yet different.  we both dearly love to fuck wildly and often but she is so much more prim than myself.  she worries that ty might think of her as a lecher while i would be thinking hell yeah i am.  i do like see this conflict though.  other authors just have the women fall in love (without true emotion) and we never really get to see their inner workings.  just their love and lust.  your story evolving has allowed the reader to get to know these women as individuals and see how they are unique and vibrant.  laura is a real woman with thoughts, emotions, strengths and weaknesses that we get to see and i love that.  you have created a world populated with vibrant women for us to love and fuck with in our imaginations and do i imagine heated fucking with these divine women.  i have always loved at how your women compliment each other's beauty.  ty does with laura and immediately sets her at ease.  i have found words of praise and compliments always put women at ease and ready for fucking.  one can always find something beautiful about every woman.  tell her this and she will melt for you before your eyes and soon in your loving arms.  i adore laura and her ability to see the beauty in all women.  of course laura returns the compliments and i know ty feels her body becoming even more ready for hot, soul blistering lesbian loving.

 

//  i have to agree fully with this observation [Ty laughed softly.  She had a beautiful African face, with a high forehead and thick, very sensual lips.  Laura wanted to mash her own lips against them immediately.  She could never understand why thick lips had once been a stigma since she wanted to crush them with hot kisses herself.  It was so odd that whites hated blacks and yet wanted to be tan themselves, and loved Angelina Jolie for her thick lips but despised them on such a ravishing creature as this Ty.]  actually i don't see much of this after moving away from home.  i always hated such speaking.  i have always been around women of color and have loved them always.  i just drooled over their skin color since i can remember.  i was surrounded by latinas and wanted them from early on.  i so love nice thick lips so i can suck, nibble and pull on to make my women moan and their eyes roll back as they quiver and shake in my loving arms before i mash our lips and slide my tongue deep down their moaning throats.  i just adore kissing a black woman or dark skinned latina silly and then turning her neck and sinking my teeth into her neck and sucking her flesh into my mouth and sucking hard making her scream and feeling her fingers digging or scratching up and down my back and shoulders.  i just love seeing that dark skin before my eyes and tasting her sweet essence in my teeth and lips.

 

//  i have noticed that you like for your women to wear midriff blouses or cutoff tops.  thank you!!  all the women who know me wear these kind outfits for me.  i simply drool over such skin revealing outfits.  i am a face person but i will simply follow you around like a puppy staring at your stomach and back.  i simply adore all that skin being exposed.  that wonderful skin and seeing your ribs and the muscels and planes of your back.  i can just see ty and  all that wonderful dark skin rippling and glimmering to laura.  i love seeing all women's stomachs but the darker the skin color the more it allures to me.  it is almost hypnotic.  even a little color like dodie's dusky skin makes me drool and whine for my woman.  i also love the confidence i know a woman's has in her body to show it off so.  when out and about i like to show my body off because i know it's toned and hot. i just like to use class doing it.   i love it that your work is filled with beautiful women filled with confidence and willing to show that confidence.  i hate man's world trying to crush that out of us.  another thing i have loved about your work is you have filled it with women who are so different physically and yet you show how they are all beautiful and deserving of being devoured.  tonya is that classical built like a shit brick house body of almost perfect proportions while you show that ty is [Ty had a slim, almost boyish figure, with not much in the way of hips or breasts, and an ass that was beautiful and shapely without being a hard, high bubble butt of the sort that made Laura's insides quiver.  That, at least, she thought, was a small relief.  If the girl had jutting breasts and a

curvy high butt, Laura would have felt her lust engine revving into high gear, but now it was only idling and rumbling a little internally.  This girl's charms were more than physical, she could see.  Ty was gorgeous and had a sly smile that told you she knew it; she knew every small manifestation of her physical charm and didn't need the obvious T & A to get your heat up.]  this is so fucking true and thank you for showing it so clearly.  i love all body type and love the lithe, limber thin frame that just writhes as you fuck them hard and deep.

 

//  i am smiling as laura needlessly tries to control her rising lust and how they softly speak to each other and get to know each other as love slowly simmer between them.  i have always loved the easy conversation in your stories.  other stories simply don't allow their women to talk and know each other.  i admire how you take half your story just setting up the situation so when the womb blistering sex starts that the reader sees the woman's soul torn apart with screaming bliss.  i love to fuck but i want to get to know you and after i know you i want to know all about you and i think laura shares this trait.  thank you for showing your women as individuals with distinct personality.  like how you show ty here with the sly smile that tells you she is (a) intelligent and (b) knows she is hot and that her cunt is going to taste so good as you devour it.  geez, sorry to hear about tonya's aunt and i sure hope tonya makes it to this rendezvous of love.  i see ty has some weed but i am glad that laura is only having wine but i would take some coke or juice.  yes, i know boring but i want complete control of myself at all times.  half to smile at the fancy wine storage.  i have been at wine tastings and marveled at all the antics they do with all that sipping, swishing and spitting.  i just raise an eye brow and smile.  as i have said i simply adore your wonderful dialog like here ["Yup," Laura said, licking her lips.  "I've never tasted such good, or expensive, wine.  I'll have to send your father a thank you note."      "Maybe you'd rather thank his daughter instead," Ty flirted lazily.  "After all, I'm the one who purloined this bottle for you."      Purloined, Laura thought.  This girl is educated as well as beautiful.  "I would like to thank her," she purred softly, following Ty's lead.  "I would like to do more than thank her."]  i actually felt my belly clench at this divine dialog.  i so love the dialog of seduction and new love.  only you, and i do so mean this, are the only author that has witty and real life dialog in your stories and it just makes me giddy to see real women falling in love and showing intelligence and wit.  it is this as much as the sex that makes me hunger for each new chapter.

 

//  i like how you provide background information on your women.  other authors barely tell you anything in the here and now.  we see that tonya and ty have know each other since high school and we discover that ty is not as adventurous as tonya.  i am smiling at the image of ty pulling tonya away from the studs fucking her hard.  she was "saving" her.  heck girl, the fun was just getting stated.  i would have slammed my tongue down her throat and try and get her to succumb to my charms and then let the hot fucking begin!  all those hard cocks and some fine cunt meat at the same time would have been heaven.  you give us that background info that allows us to come to see these women's individuality and what makes them special and unique.  you now you give the reader some of that delicious dialog that i so love and adore ["I know.  I guess I'm . . . nothing special when compared with her," Ty said, almost inaudibly, with genuine though not

tortured self-deprecation.      "You are very special," Laura said, through her hypnotic trance.  "Very.  I want to kiss your fantastic mouth."      Ty smiled slyly and put down her wine goblet, smiling again her sly, alluring smile.  Who could resist it? Laura wondered.  "If you want some of this . . . you better just take some of this, while you've got the chance," Ty whispered, her black eyes murky and suggestive.]  i so believe in bucking up any angel when i sense any doubt in her innate beauty and charm.  laura does it too and i adore her for it.  so many bi curious women are like ty.  you just have to set the spell and she willing and quickly releases her desires and gives herself to you.  i love laying on the charm and seeing her eyes go soft and/or cat-eyed and she tells me she wants me to fuck her with my all and make her my love slut for the night and more.  only you give the reader this gentle succumbing to desire.  other authors only give the rapid and often crass giving into love and lust while you so catch that coming together of souls that always seems right on and so fucking true it makes my head spin.

 

//  oh geez, my womb just clenched so fucking hard in my belly [They moved in slow-motion, it seemed, as if walking under water.  Ty slid fluidly out of her chair and Laura glided out of hers.  One step brought them together.  Laura raised her hands to Ty's face.      "You are very beautiful, Tyshell," she whispered.      Sly smile.   "You think so?"      "I do."  Laura pressed her mouth down into the voluptuous lips.  Ty's mouth immediately opened to her.  It was warm and wet and alive.]  i know i keep harping on this but this is just so fucking so special and rad and womb quivering.  i guess the build up and character development just adds so much to this magical moment.  you craft your story such that we love these women and want to be there with them in our minds as sweet love blooms.  then you just have a special talent for making it seem so real and alive.  other writings are just formulaic that it still turns me on but there is such a sameness to it that it is not special.  this stuff rocks my soul.  i am with these women as their whispered words of love bring them into each other's arms and you feel her body pressing into yours as your arms encircle each other and your tongue flow deep into each other's mouth and twine, slither, and spear in hot moaning love.  i so love pulling my woman tight to me as i get my thigh between her legs and ride her cunt up and down my leg as my hands clench and massage while my tongue slams down her throat making her quiver all over and those helpless love moans as i so often watch her eyes roll back and spasm hard as she love shakes and whimpers in love and need.  i love pulling my mouth back and seeing spit

rope our mouths together and she looks at me love struck and she closes her eyes as i bring our mouths together again and i spear my tongue back down her throat and let my hands stroke her heating flesh as i hump her cunt hard on my thigh

knowing her panties are by now a sodden mess of running fuck juice.

 

//  my womb would clench with the words of tonya walking in on us.  sigh, more hot love to partake and give.  i have so many times seen this nervousness ["Well, here it is," Ty said, entering the master bedroom and stopping by the huge California King bed, like Laura's, which she had persuaded Makeeda to adopt when she had moved into the house they now shared.  "That should be enough room, I guess," she half-giggled, a little nervous.      "More than enough," Laura almost gurgled with excitement.  She drew Ty to her again, kissing her smooth black neck, running her fingertips up to the skin left exposed by Ty's midriff blouse. "You have such beautiful skin I want to touch it everywhere."]  a newbie knows she is about to be initiated into the forbidden world of lesbian love and i just smile at the fear and any hesitancy.  i do what laura does here and turn on the heat.  i so love the feel of a woman's soft skin.  i so swoon as my fingers get

underneath your clothing and i start to stroke and knead your heated flesh as my slut shakes and shimmies against me.  i run my hands up and down your back, trace your ribs and stroke your belly in a strong circular motion as my mouth devours yours and i kiss your face all over with soft kisses and kiss up and down your neck.  i will kiss and nibble on your neck.  i so often sense that they want it all and often suck your neck flesh between my teeth and i pump your flesh between my teeth as i mash my lips into your neck.  i so swoon with the screams of raw passion and her hands pounding my neck and shoulders and then gripping the back of my head and crushing my head into their neck as i make them my total love whore.  recently i was sucking shari's neck so fucking hard and she groaned gutturally as she dragged my mouth to the other side of neck and moaned for me to mark her and i sank my teeth into her neck as she loved screamed and thrashed in my arms as we rolled around on the bed.  sigh, i then love bite her full tits all over and her taunt belly as cindy watched and then i devoured her sodden cunt until it exploded and gushed divine cunt nectars down my gulping throat.

 

//  laura's loving ministrations has ty begging laura to take her.  i am so smiling as ty asks to be taught how to love women.  i love women who are not all confused and brain washed by the religious right and are just needing that push to discover their true selves.  i like the seduction but i love nice and easy and ready hot fucking.  i love how you show that gentle falling into love.  you give your stories the time and situation to allow the specialiness of seduction to shine.  other authors always seem so rushed and forced in their stories.  you then show how you whisper to finish the love kill to make your woman all soaking wet and ready to fuck.  ["You know everybody wants to fuck you," she breathed into Ty's ear.  "You're completely gorgeous.  I'm sure even Tonya wants to fuck you and always has.  She just needed me along for an excuse."]  i like here showing laura helping to make ty even more ready to fuck with tonya and take their friendship to the next logical step.  i love how laura is always helping new love to bloom and grow.  i love to help women seduce best friends and maybe family members if possible.  i have always adored how your women actually talk to each other beyond the basic conversion that is prefabricated that other authors give us.  i have to smirk at ty not caring to wait for tonya to show up.  i love women who are confident enough to admit they are ready to fuck and lets get going.  i feel my body heat up reading ty querying laura as to why her clothes are still on with laura busy disrobing ty.  i so adore sass and fire in my women and i just love shake with even more desires thinking of devouring my sluts hot, wet, wanton cunt.

 

//  i have to love how you show laura always working to make her angels feel so special and loved.  she makes sure her women know she finds them totally hot and worthy of being fucked hard and totally consumed in loving lust.  [She had unfastened Ty's black bra before starting to undress herself, and it fell limply from the girl's gleaming, perfectly round shoulders, though still concealing her small breasts.  Ty saw Laura looking and played shy ingénue for her, holding the bra up against her breasts demurely with one hand.       "Mine aren't as big as Tonya's," she said softly, as though she were compelled to confess it though it didn't matter at all to her.        "Tonya's aren't very big either," Laura said, flinging her own bra to the side, exposing her own delectable small breasts and looking down at them. "Mine aren't either."       Ty smiled lazily and now dropped her own bra.  "Mine are smaller than either of yours," she murmured, looking down

at her enchanting little swellings, as Laura was.]  i love how laura works to make ty feel totally comfortable and then confident in her chest measurements.  i work so hard to make my women comfortable with me and any partners and with themselves.  some women with small cup sizes do get intimated with my full bosom but i simply worship and love their little titties or flat chest like a starving wolf and they so soon see that are just perfect to me and are stuffing all their tit meat into my hard siphoning mouth and flailing tongue moaning and drooling deliriously.  i like how ty is both shy and coy with her actions holding her bra in front of her divine doves and then casting it away now that laura has bucked her up.  i so love seeing confidence flaring in my angels eyes and seeing fuck hunger burning.  seeing her nipples hardening and her cunt slicking with fuck juice..

 

//  sigh i love the little details you tell the reader [They were indeed very small breasts, more swellings than globes, but Ty's nipples were large and dark, surrounded by small, puffy aureoles, jutting jewels on each mound.]  shari's cindy has little titties like this with puffy aureoles that get all engorged with blood and rubbery and covered in steeples.  i just suck so hard on them and gnaw on them with my teeth and sink my teeth hard into her thick nipples and pull my teeth up hard making her scream and her body lurch around on the mattress.  i so adore sucking her tit down my throat feeling her fingers digging into my scalp as her back arches deeply and she grunts stuffing her little tit fully into my mouth as i squeeze in around the base stuffing her nipple deep into my mouth.  just deep throat sucking in a guttural rhythm making her thrash and gurgle in bucking, fucking bliss.  as usual you show laura overwhelming her lover.  she kisses ty deeply raping her mouth while rubbing and mashing ty's little titties making her swoon.  besot your woman with divine fore play to make her cunt a fucking wet, swollen love flower ready to be totally consumed.  i am so happy for ty that laura is showing her how lesbians love all breast meat large or small.  i have had women with small breast tell me the same thing when i devour them completely and spend a long time just sucking, licking, kissing and nipping them over and over again until she is in a dreamy, aroused state of total wanton sensual pleasure.  i live to make my woman all besotted and ready for the ramping up of love.  i am smiling great big as laura disrobes ty of her remaining clothes and gets the bed

ready for love.  i so love getting my newbie virgins ready for the main course of their first taste of lesbian loving.  knowing soon another newbie's cunt will be gushing hot divine cunt nectars down my gulping throat and hopefully a tasty asshole being skewered on my long tongue.

 

//  another thing i like about his part is how you constantly show loving the whole woman.  it seems to me all other authors once they start moving south on a woman's body they are like geese hell bent flying south for the winter.  they simply can't deviate.  start moving down her body and keep going and damn the torpedoes so to speak.  you show that detouring and working the whole body i simply adore and worship.  i am just to fucking thankful that i found one author to show this.  last night i was devouring frankie's long hot slit and driving my tongue deep up her fuck hole as she gurgled and grunted.  i then moved up and kissed, licked and murmured her mound, belly and lower ribs as she whined for me to suck her cunt some more.  of course i ignored her and took my time.  i love to detour and let the cream build up.  i finally settled between her wide spread legs and saw milky cum all over slit and soaked cunt lips.  i swooned when her hands gripped my hair hard and her head rose up and she made hot smoky eye contact and crammed my face into her cunt as it flared around my lips and my long tongue slide deep up her fuck hole.  i sucked hard suctioning up her cunt cream.  she was humping driving my head back as my tongue flailed her fuck folds.  i brought my hand up and buzzed her rock hard clit fast and furious and reveled in seeing her neck cord up and shake with micro tremors and her face slash horribly.  Her eyes spasmed wildly and the rolled back and her head flopped back on the mattress with a nerveless thud as she keened and her fingers sank hard into my scalp as she started to buck like a whore in heat.  gods, those guttural

groans of bliss filled my soul with pure happiness that only soared as she quickly reached her peak and fell over and groaned wildly and screamed her purest joy as her ruptured cunt pumped pure divine dollops of cum down my starving throat as her body jackknifed and rolled like a ship in a storm as divine explosions tore her flesh apart and cunt sucked hard on my tongue in its wild contractions.

 

//  i like reading of them stripping the last of their clothes off and getting the bed turned down.  i love falling on the bed with my lover and twining our limbs tight as tits mash, bellies meld and arms pull tight as tongues stab deep into hungry mouths.  i swoon as we roll around first me on top then her as our bodies start to heat and slip an slide and if like me turning her neck and sucking her neck into my mouth and working cruelly marking her as my slut as she keens and trashes against me and then turning my neck and marking me as her whore.  you show that ramping up of the heat that makes my womb quiver and cunt wet.  [And for the next several minutes she gave Ty's wonderful little mini-breasts the loving they had never apparently received up to now.  In sequence, she sucked each one almost completely into her mouth, squeezing the base with her fingers at the same time, and strangling Ty's thick nipple deep in her throat, pinching it with her tongue and vacuuming it with her glottis until Ty was beating the mattress with her elbows and whinnying deep in her chest.      "Mmmnnngggeeee . . . mmmnnngggeeee!"]   the seeds of love have been planted now it is time to feast.  i have always enjoyed the details you provide.  other authors always say that the woman sucks her nipples.  no matter the size of the breast it is the same.  i mean i devour your tits according to your bounty.  full, heavy tits require one kind of devouring and small tits another kind.  you thankfully show this.  i think women with small tits just go crazy with intense breast loving since they as a rule are not used to it.  especially if straight.  i think a lot of it is mental and i am so

happy to oblige.  sucking your entire tit into my mouth and sucking so fucking hard.  pulling my head back with my teeth clamped on to soft flesh at the base and pulling back while sucking and tongue batting your engorged nipple letting her feel my teeth rasping her base flesh.  they just kick, grunt, gurgle and pull my head so hard into their tits as their heads thrash.  i love the declarations of love i have heard loving them as their back arches as deep as possible as a sweet scream of love is ripped from her throat.  i have to smile great big.  i have never heard the "glottis" reference before.  i love it!!! now that is deep throat sucking i must say!

 

//  sigh, i love laura so dearly because she is so like and not like me in some ways.  she is a total whore and slut like myself who realizes that love should never be denied.  one must embrace every encounter one can.  i guess now that i think about it she does deny herself some which would make my soul shudder.  i guess where we differ the most is in our love of rough kink.  i have to smile again as she is inhaling ty's tits and she backs off when ty is dying from it.  [Finally, Laura realized that she might be overdoing it and relented, releasing Ty's second shiny, saliva-wet breast, and raising her head, kissing the girl's enchanting face.  "I'm sorry if that's too hard."]  i am chuckling here.  me, i attack her tits even harder.  i watch closely her face, and body language and listen to the quality of her grunts and such.  plus, i always let them know to communicate to me.  some need gentle loving but most who started soft i have quickly taught to take higher and many come to rival my tastes and i so fucking love it.  of course, ty begs for more of the rough sucking.  it makes one soul burn and soar.  we see that ty is near orgasm from this divine tit worship that only women know how to truly deliver.  geez, you now besot the reader with that perfect love making yet again.  you are making cunt clench with this [Without speaking, Laura simply began siphoning up Ty's pretty little breasts again with her mouth, at the same time sliding one hand down the girl's taut, heaving belly, between her squirming thighs, dipping two fingers into the wet, warm, soupy furrow of her tight pussy, and rubbing her clit slowly and sensually as she sucked.  Why waste opportunities? she thought.  Why postpone Ty's orgasm just so that she, Laura, could have her fill of feasting on the girl's marvelous lean body?  If there was one orgasm arriving this quickly, there would be several others after it.]  again that loving the whole body that i so do and revel in reading.  you know how to pleasure the whole woman and make her body so fucking tight approaching the precipice.  making it strain and throb with love and want.  i so love sucking joann's tit into my mouth and supper sucking while my fingers rub her clit harder or harder or pound three fingers hard into he wanton cunt making those wet squishy sounds that make me pound her hot, wet, flowing box even harder as her hips rotate up into my pounding fingers.  you really are the only author to show using your hands and mouth to love the so much more of your woman's body.  working as many erogenous zones as possible to make her die and go to heaven in our loving bed.

 

//  i am feeling warm and fuzzy watching laura take ty's body higher and higher.  i so love seeing your body going taunt on me and your voice becoming more desperate.  feeling your body jerk and hitch more spastically and seeing your face slash harsher.  working you with loving focus until this happens [Laura was sucking harder now, and her fingers were swirling Ty's hard little clit roughly around in a tight circle.  Ty's hips were jerking, her stomach clenching, her thighs leaping in spastic twitches.        "Oh yes . . . oh yes . . ." Laura purred to her, sucking the girl's hard, thick, rubbery nipples one after the other deep into her throat.        "Oh god!   AUUNNGGHH!" Ty suddenly shouted, her body making a wild, nearly airborne twitch.        Then she made only a distant wheezing as a sharp, violent orgasm began to wrack her.        "Aunngghh!" she shouted again, but not as loudly this time, her beautiful face torn by a grimace of deep ecstasy.]  only you capture the pure rapturous wonders of lesbian orgasms.  i so swoon reading working ty tighter and then pushing her over the edge.  i so swoon as my tongue bats your rubbery nipple and my head is pulling and then mashing down into your tit and my fingers are soaked in your hot flowing cunt nectars.  working you hard until your cunt is bucking wildly and your body is lurching up, down, right and left.  hearing those divine cries of love being ripped from deep in your soul.  i so love to pound my three fingers hard into an exploding cunt feeling those contractions on my fingers and feeling them baste in your hot spurting juices.  the beauty of having two archangels is i can be doing this to maria and joann is devouring her other tit maniacally or kissing her silly or giving her a hickey making maria scream in helpless, deepest love.  other authors just have the woman orgasm quickly while you show the woman ramping up and then the destroying orgasm.  only you show that reaching the edge that i so love reading.  other authors show foreplay but the end game always happens so quickly that i kind of feel cheated.  you revel in the end game i worship reading it.  thank you.

 

//  i love how you show laura moving up to kiss ty deeply after her divine orgasm.  i so love post coital time.  i like how laura is still gently swirling her clit as they kiss dreamily.  feeling her clit slowly softening and those flows of cunt cream flowing from her spent cunt.  feeling our tongues twining in deep love and pulling her tight to me and twining our limbs as pure love flows between our hot, sweaty flesh.  i have to smile at ty's declarations of wonder at her strong orgasm and thankfulness.  i hear that so often from newbies.  it is so often a wonder to have such strong orgasms and total focus on themselves.  lesbians live to give this and it so besots hets.  i so love rocking their world!  i love putting women into this state with my lovemaking [Ty smiled so hard she could hardly speak for a few minutes.  This was not her habitually sly smile but a broad grin that naturally followed a great, unexpected orgasm.  Laura knew that smile, having had it herself several times.  ]  i so know that the love is only starting.  that before the night is through cunts and maybe assholes will be totally exhausted and satiated.  i have to smile at ty wanting laura all to herself.  she has discovered nirvana and doesn't' want to share.  i will love you how ever you want.  if tonya doesn't show up then i would fuck you blind but to myself i would hope she shows.  i would so want them both and help them discover how their relationship should truly be.  as lovers and friends.

 

//  have to love seeing this [Laura embraced her and pushed her entire naked body into Ty's for the first time, feeling the girl's deliciously slender body everywhere pressing against her flesh.  She snaked her tongue into Ty's ear.  Mmmmm, she may never show up at all," she murmured.  "And then we can fuck like this together all night."]  i so love that full body clench of mated flesh.  feeling our skin rub and skid along each other as we kiss deeply or explore necks, ears and shoulders like here.  kissing and tasting her divine face and upper body.  i have seen this next part so often.  a newbie burning with desire for my body [Instead of replying, Ty gave her a meaningful look and then began to kiss Laura's shoulders, her throat, the top slopes of her breasts.  She filled her hands with them and looked again up at Laura as her tongue found one of Laura's nipples.      "I think I could do this too," she whispered, sucking Laura's nipple gently, then more voraciously.]  i swoon when i see the look of hot desire and then total pleasure as they start to love my body and i can see so clearly their love of my body and how they are affecting me so deeply.  i just feel my eyes roll back when a newbie mashes our mouths tight and her tongue stabs my mouth voraciously and her mouth sucks my nipples so hard and deep and she grunts and worms all over my body as she claims me as her love slut.

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// geez my cunt clenched at the thought of a good spanking.  maybe sometime soon.  i so love getting my ass blistered or seeing it done.  not to long ago i was over hillary's with simonette.  she started making a show of acting bitchy with simonette and i watched simonette steam and warn her to back down or else.  hillary got even more pissy and i watched with hot lust when simonette stood up and slapped hillary so hard she stumbled off the sofa and onto the floor.  simonette then threw her squealing body down on the sofa.  she slapped her some more as she stripped her jeans and panties down around her ankles as hillary sobbed and bitched.  i smiled as juices slicked her twat, belly and smeared her thighs and when simontte ripped her shirt and bra off her nipples were rock hard.  simonette sat on the sofa and roughly pulled hillary across her legs and proceeded to spank her harshly.  hillary screamed and cried while twirling her ass into the resounding smacks.  after a few minutes of this simonette cursed hillary as a wanton nigger for soaking her jeans with cum when she was supposed to be punished.  i smirked as hillary eyes rolled up with the "n" word flying around.  simonette then rolled her over and feel to her knees and fell like a starving wolf on her swollen, wet as a river cunt.  simonette garbled out for me to continue punishing hillary as she sucked hillary's soaked cunt into her mouth and devoured it gutturally.  i got on my knees beside hillary and started to smack her face hard making it rock to and fro and slap her tits cruelly making them jiggle and whiplash while i called her a worthless nigger, and all the other racial

slurs she taught me.  she really craves this verbal abuse and comes so fucking hard when we racially insult her.  i reveled as she whimpered and cried out as i pulled her nipples hard and pulped her tits and smacking her face from time to time making it rock to the side while cursing her like the black nigger whore slut she craves to be called.  i watched her body start to shake and vibrate and then an ear piercing scream filled the room as her legs kicked out and her arms pounded the sofa, herself and me as her body jackknifed and turned wildly.  i grabbed two hand fulls of hair and jerked her head violently back and forth and ripped her neck back cruelly as i made her neck cord up hard as her eyes

spasmed in the back of her head and her body went multiple and she just shrieked when i let her breath normally before stretching her neck cruelly back again.  she was so beautiful watching her tits roll and whiplash with her thrashing and sweat pouring off her shaking flesh. when she was spent she just smiled lazily and gurgled out how she loved us so fucking deeply and please never stop fucking her so good and hard.  of course later that night she whipped me and simonette until we were covered in red welts and whipped our tits and cunts as she made us masturbate to orgasm while she punished us with her belt and slaps and curses.  we came nice and hard for her as she commanded us.  i so loved leaning my head over seeing simonette's pale flesh all red and marked from our punishment and knowing she saw the same on my body.

 

//  i know that feeling of wanting to make a lover come hard and have her other lover(s) see it and be jealous.  i can be competitive.  but mainly, i want to increase the heat and let more love flow hotly and freely between us.  i am feeling laura's rapture as ty with no hesitation devours her cunt.  i so love fucking women who are not in any brainwashed state and have been merely waiting for a catalyst.  i like seducing the women who need my guidance but having a woman freely show her slut is so nice too.  i can just feel ty worming her hands under my undulating buns and squeezing my buns as she helps me hump her devouring mouth.  i can feel my womb melt in new love when a woman sucks me off so wonderfully like this.  stimulating my ass just makes my cunt throb and pulse with increased pleasure.  some women are just sexual like ty and simply want to embrace pleasure and can easily accept their bi or lesbian desires.  with me it accepting my desire for a nice hard male cock from time to time.  one needs to break down all barriers possible.  i just shrug and hold my palms out when joann and maria roll their eyes at my antics sometimes.  i love ty for being so open to her self.  i know that loving warmth that fills laura as she experiences ty sucking her off to a pulsating, rupturing orgasm.  i always look down as i come for the first time in a newbie's devouring mouth.  i just feel my womb explode as i see her wild pleasure as she tongue fucks me hard and sucks my clit down her throat so hard i worried a few times is she might ripe it off.  grabbing the back of her head and holding it in place as i sweep my rupturing, flowing cunt up and down her face mashing her mouth and nose across my fuck hole and clit and seeing her dreamily smiling as my cunt nectars smear her face and she is swallowing with hard gulps and grunts my cunt flow.  they all seem to love it so and i just feel my womb contract pumping their new hearts desire into their starving stomachs.

 

//  have to love the post coital declarations of rapture and new love.  i bask in the post coital that you give us.  this is the time of true bonding and flowing of new love.  of course basking and new love produces this [With that, she pushed her mouth into Ty's wide, voluptuous mouth, and in seconds they were kissing hungrily again, rubbing their naked breasts together, clearly recharging the heat that was making them crave more.  When they briefly stopped kissing, Ty was panting harder almost than Laura, and her black eyes were throbbing.]  this is what i live for.  to plant the seeds of rampant lesbian desire and then water it with pure love and watch it flourish and grow.  sigh, how do you do it time and time again.  you show so perfectly hot lesbian fucking like here [She kissed Ty's shoulders and small breasts and took the rest of the scenic route on her way to the girl's pussy, which up to now she had caressed with her fingers but never directly kissed.  We'll take care of that, she thought, nuzzling Ty's charming little navel and licking her flat abdominal muscles, then kissing the insides of her hard, sleek,  dark brown thighs, which now brought low, passionate moans from Ty's throat.        Ty had a copious black bush of hair in her crotch, which Laura spread with her fingers to reveal a beautifully shaped long blossoming pussy, with an already protruding pink bud of a clitoris at the top, swollen and hard.  The black labia were extra-large, almost floppy, and Laura licked them eagerly, spreading them too with her fingertips to reveal the glistening pink trench inside, which she slithered her tongue into immediately.]  i have to scream that it is

the details that make this so fucking perfect.  other authors just have the same boring licks and caresses with no details.  kissing the shoulders and then using the word "scenic" which says so much.  loving her whole body basically.  sigh, i so love kissing, licking, muzzling and nipping bellies and thighs.  hearing her breath hitch and belly leap up with a soft kiss or hard nip.  hearing her swoon and belly softly undulating up if i am focusing on kissing, stroking and giving that deep massage that makes some women's wombs melt with need and want.  kissing up and down her ribs and muzzling and kissing the line of her rib cage across her torso.  looking up and seeing head lulled to the side and her eyes slitted and sometimes love drool flowing from her slack mouth making a mess of her face and rolling down her throat and wetting the sheets.

 

//  got to love how you actually show a woman's vagina.  other authors only give a mannequin description.  only you show the unique shape, length, lips and color of a woman's passion flower.  you show here that ty has long meaty cunt lips that let one suck them fully and worry and pull taunt as you shake your head like a dog with a bone.  i love the whimpers and screams this illicit.  sucking those lips taunt and grazing my teeth on their slimy meat.  pulling my head back until they pop from lips and fall all splayed on her mound.  sigh, other authors just have have the woman drill her tongue into the pussy.  you give the little details like brushing her cunt hair back and to the sides if she doesn't shave or trim close and pulling her lips apart to expose her fuck flower.  i so love kissing and licking your lips out and then spreading out with my fingers if long and licking them up and down and then settling between her thighs and slowly sinking by tongue deep up her cunt as she groans in ecstasy.  you now show the little details again like this ["Unhhhhh!" Ty groaned, arching her back a little, which made her whole lean body go briefly taut in a way that juiced Laura's lust up to a fever pitch.        "Oh honey, you have such a beautiful pussy," Laura murmured.  "I love this adorable pussy.  I'm going to eat this juicy flower until you pop."]  other authors gloss over the beginning happenstance of lovemaking.  they only give any details when the end game is upon the women.  i so love sinking my tongue deep up my whore's cunt or asshole and feeling her body judder and arch or pushing her rump back to drive my tongue or fingers deep up her asshole or pussy.  i just smile when i see my woman's body going taunt and shaky and those helpless keens of pure pleasure that only inspire you to redouble your efforts.  then you actually again have that communication that women use to encourage your women on and stoke your own fires.  going slow on her cunt to enjoy all those sudden hitches and sudden jumps of her pelvis jamming her cunt into your spearing tongue.

 

//  you now capture something that is so true but never saw in print before.  the quality of one's moan's.  you by far capture the guttural qualities of women's vocalizations.  how it can be soft or loud.  how it can be harsh or soft.  but i think this is the first time how you show that some women have a tendency to make sounds that scale.  me most of my grunts, moans, groans are deep and guttural in my throat.  dodie tends to rough and gritted out.  joann screams high pitched while maria tends to caw and draw out her moans and screams.  but shari and camille do this a lot [Somehow these helpless little upward-keening moans really turned up the spigot on Laura's lust, filling her with extra hot desire for the delicious squirming girl, and she began sucking and devouring Ty's streaming, inflamed pussy even more heatedly. ]  i love that up thrilling of their moans and pleadings.  shari will say something like "fuck, shit or goddamn" and draw it out with that upward scaling that is just so fucking hot.  sinking my cock deep and hard into her asshole and hearing her moan "fuuuuuuccccckkkkkkk" with that upward scaling that makes me grab her big ass cheeks and ram fuck her asshole as she curses and moans mashing her cheek into he mattress with her ass high up in the air.  looking down as i straddle her hips and pound my cock balls deep into her shit hole.  seeing her face slash and grimace and tears run down her cheeks.  seeing that sublime smile and pulling my dick out and reaching down and pulling her head up by the hair and cupping her head with one hand and my other hand underneath chin and pounding my cock down her throat as she gurgles and moans and pushing my cock all the down her throat feeling her grab the back of my thighs to pull her mouth down my cock.  rabbit fucking her throat as spittle drools out and throwing her back down and spearing my cock deep into her

asshole again as she moans and gurgles out her pleasure and telling me to rape her black asshole harder.  letting her constantly clean her asshole and cunt off my deep pounding cock.

 

//  i have always liked how you show the woman giving pleasure gets pleasure by what she is doing to her woman.  lesbians derive so much pleasure by the pleasure we give.  laura is driven wild by ty's vocalizations.  i so know that feeling.  just hearing you keen, moan and scream only ramps up my desires and wants.  i want to take you ever higher.  i am in heaven when eating a sodden cunt and hearing you moan and gurgle more gutturally and wildly.  feeling your body shudder and your back arching humping your cunt hard into my face.  feeling your thighs clamp on my face or feeling your whole body mashing down onto my face harsher and wilder if riding me as i take you closer to the edge.  i strive with all my focus to do this [Until Ty suddenly exploded again without warning.  One second she was keening and twisting, and the next she was arching and shuddering.        "Ohhnnnggggg!   Aunnngghhh!"        "Yes!" Laura panted to her, her own face covered with sweet cunt slime.  "Yes!"        "Ohhhhh!" Ty moaned, another cute little up-keening moan.  "Ungghhhhh!"         Her long, lean body clenched, and her pelvis shuddered visibly.  Then she fell back to the mattress.]  you show the foreplay that leads to this.  it is the work of building the tension and stroking her fires that leads to soul rending orgasms.  i so love taking a woman over the edge and feeling her cunt jamming and humping my mouth so fucking hard feeling her cunt lips flaring around my mouth as i suck her inner cunt meat into my lips and tongue flail as she shrieks in orgasmic bliss.  i so love getting my hands under a humping ass as it rises off the mattress and clenching my fingers into her ass and helping her hump up into my mouth.  pulling her exploding cunt into my mouth as i suck her clit down my throat and tongue buzz as she screams and jackknifes in helpless pleasure. sucking and licking for all i'm worth until her body is spent and it crashes down on the mattress exhausted.  then gently tongue lathing and licking her spent clit and cunt as she whimpers and aftershocks ripple her cunt and belly.  i so love licking up every dollop of cunt nectars my starving tongue can find.

 

//  yippee!  Tonya has arrived.  i have to like he way she makes her salacious appearance.  i love it when a willing lover joins the party so speak.  i have had a few situations when the appearance was not expected or desired but this is the magical coming together of long time friends discovering their true love for each other.  over the years i have helped best friends seduce their friends and i am just so proud.  i like how you show that often desire is simmering just beneath the surface only waiting for the proper catalyst to come along and unleash it.  i am feeling happy tremors as tonya and ty hungrily eye each other and they murmur that they have been hungering for each other and not even realized it.  i like that sass you show ty has when she asks tonya if she is complaining even as tonya is stripping to join the festivities.  sass that makes desire burn in your veins.  this is how you introduce a third woman into your bed of love [Tonya's eyelids were suddenly heavy, her body supple and compliant, as she realized she was about to do some catch-up, and that both Ty and Laura were going to drown her in the warm bath of lust they had been busily cooking up in her absence.  Laura, being a breast fanatic, could not keep her lips or her fingers off Tonya's marvelous little golden globes, but even though she was very hungrily sucking and squeezing them, she couldn't help but notice that above her head the two friends were kissing with a heated fervor that could only confirm how long they had wanted to do this.]  i so know that coming together of women in love.  i always love it when i see a woman with cat eyes and know the fires of love are raging in her womb.  this is the dynamic of three lovers or more.  you are just not sure how the dynamics will work.  while you are loving your part of heaven others can love their piece of heaven.

 

//  i have to smile at tonya fishing for compliments.  i notice most of my angels do this a lot.  they now they are hot but what woman doesn't want to be told she is hot and desirable.  joann and dodie are especially guilty of this.  they just preen and soak all praise and will shamelessly seek more.  i love seeing the verbal interplay and how love soon replaces words with moans of love [Ty stopped the words by slithering her long tongue almost completely down Tonya's throat, and again they kissed and squirmed wildly, now whimpering, mewling, undulating.  "I think . . . maybe I did," Ty smiled slyly, surfacing for air.  "I don't know whether I knew it until now, but I think I did."        "Oh god, yes!" Tonya gasped as Laura slipped up, still holding both saliva-wet breasts in her hands, and kissed her and Ty both hungrily on the mouth, lingering over Ty's fantastic voluptuous lips.]  i love it when an angel slides her tongue down my throat or

wildly strokes her tongue all around my mouth.  it makes my eyes roll back and spasm hard as my nostrils flare with harsh breathing.  geez, only you show laura still milking and massaging tonya's tits while moving up and kissing both women.  you so remember to love all and everyone.  i love moving up maria or joann's body and kissing both of them deeply.  joann is a drooler and i love kissing her and seeing drool rope our mouths together as i pull back and feeling her spit all over my lips and chin as i move over to spear my tongue down maria's throat.  feeling their fingers dig into my flesh as we all seek to get closer and rub against each other.  i like the detail of laura focusing on ty's lips.  i so love to nibble and stretch out your lips as they quiver and you grunt and keen in helpless rapture.

 

//  i have always liked how you show laura's easy going nature.  i am so with her as she kisses down tonya's hard firm stomach.  i so love kissing down a firm tummy.  i can spend hours i think kissing and muzzling a firm tummy.  kissing all the cambers and planes.  i just love to rub my cheek against those muscles dreaming of rubbing my cunt against them until it explodes in fucking ecstasy.  i love working down and smelling your cunt and the juices flowing from it filling me with giddy happiness.  but like laura i will demure to others first knowing that i will soon be devouring the sweet pussy myself with gluttonous glee.  laura asks ty if she wants to have tonya's pussy first.  of course ty is eager with her long simmering lust spiking her desire.  i so love watching a newbie getting almost feverish with her first taste of pussy like here [The sly smile on Ty's beautiful face modulated into one of sweet, eager lust, and she squirmed around between

Tonya's thighs, bringing her mouth up to the girl's oozing, blossoming pussy.  And then she proceeded without hesitation to do to it what she had done to Laura's only twenty minutes earlier, as if eating pussy was something she had been preparing to do her whole life.  Fascinated, Laura watched as Ty began to lick Tonya's swollen cunt, then to tongue-stroke and suck her protruding clit, then to fuck her a little at the same time with two fingers, until Tonya was quickly almost out of control with need, writhing and panting and whimpering frantically.        "Oh!  Oh!  Unhhhhh!  Oh god!"]

 

//  i so know that observation you make of tonya's flexing body exciting one so.  i so love working a woman's body and seeing it hitch and jolt and the way her body will often list to the right and then left.  seeing her muscles flex and churn as you work her tits or cunt.  i love working with another which gives me a little more freedom to look into your eyes.  sometimes i see that heavenly slashing and sometimes that far away stare of helpless rapture.  sometimes i will be kissing and pecking her face and i will whisper down and tell my love mate to suck her clit hard as i stare at her face up close.  oh gods, to see her eyes flare and helpless slashes and twitches of her face as ecstasy rips her mind apart with

fucking bliss.  it is so heaven to work with others to make a woman cum so fucking hard.  it is the little details that make your work stand out so.  you then do again what other authors don't do and that is the communication of women to each other.  you have that whispering between lovers encouraging and urging.  when i hear a lover urging me on i can just feel my womb so deep in my belly clenching and my clit throbbing harder as my soul strives for nirvana on earth.  i just feel my belly tightening and thighs quivering as that delicious tension fills my body.  i have to smile as laura feels her body reviving watching tonya's body building up to her climax.  it doesn't take long for another woman's pleasure to fill my body with raging lust and need for more orgasms.

 

//  you have shown the foreplay and then the direct loving that leads to what only you truly capture the wonders of:  the female orgasm [But before she could pursue these reflections any further, Tonya was suddenly coming.  Her body twitched, and bowed up, and then shuddered visibly.  She cried out sharply.        "Auunngghhh!   Oh god, yes!  Mmmnnuunnggggg!"         Ty held on.  Her mouth was glued to Tonya's pussy, and her fingers were plunging, but although Tonya came hard, it was no g-spot extravaganza as Laura remembered.  Still, it seemed to be an emotionally as well as physically thrilling climax for both of them.  Ty was beaming, still licking Tonya's pussy while Tonya gasped and panted for breath, looking down her body in awed gratitude at her friend.  Laura lay beside them, taking it all in, lightly stroking Tonya's wildly desirable body with her fingertips.]  i can't help but repeat how you capture the wonder of a super orgasm.  only you capture the various sounds we make in our orgasms.  others always use the same sounds or just say they screamed out.  you always vary your vocalizations like real life.  we may have our tendencies but even then it varies.  i so love the detail of ty's mouth glued to tonya's cunt as it convulses and pumps pure love cream down your gulping throat.  i so love pumping my fingers hard up an exploding cunt as my mouth sucks her fuck hole hard or vacuuming her clit for all i'm worth.  i love to have your cunt mashing and bucking hard into my mouth as i ride your orgasm out, feeling my head being bucked up and grabbing your thighs to control your wild bucks and jackknifes enough to keep my mouth glued to your exploding cunt feeling my eyes roll back as dollops of hot cum fills my mouth, sometimes to overflowing as i gulp down wildly and suck and tongue flail for more.

 

//  love how you mention things and not have them happen right away.  laura is thinking of getting the strap-on from her car but you show we might think something but our bodies require immediate fucking.  i see that laura thinks like me.  she wants to be sandwich fucked by these two divine black angels.  i am swooning with thoughts of these two divine fuck angels rubbing all over me and fucking my cunt and asshole so good.  i am smiling as laura starts to undulate around and whine for their attention.  i too have been lying on the bed and watch my angels debate and sometimes argue over how they will love me.  i have to smile and giggle as they debate about who gets my pussy or asshole.  i will just shake my tits, hump my cunt and roll on my side and pull my ass cheek back exposing my asshole to their hungry gazes and soon i am swarmed as they take my body so good.  i like how you show a woman knowing her lovers, even if new.  laura is wanting some anal play and knows that tonya is too prim and proper but ty seems to be so sexual that she instinctively knows she will take to anal sex if already not a pro.  love the ghetto talk.  it is amazing to see women who normally talk the king's english dissolve into ghetto talk.  it is so natural for cindy, shari, hillary and camille that i just love listening to them talk trash and beg to be taken like the black whore, sluts they are.  i have to smile as tonya goes through her act about not having her booty invaded and ty so readily takes to it.  it is the diversity of women and their attitudes, desires and abilities that make love making so fucking rad.  you capture this uniqueness so well.  other authors just don't have their women have individual traits.  they are seduced but it is like the same woman over and over again.  you show how some women are docile and need lots of time and effort and some are just fuck cats that are ready to experience

new things with a freedom that i so wish all women had.

 

//  i always enjoy reading your dialog of your women.  i constantly bemoan how other authors don't show their women communicating.  they communicate just enough to have the seduction but never that communicating of women in love.  you show the banter and mirth of women in love.  i so love watching your women interacting and showing their love and mirth for each other.  sigh, like i say it is the little things that make your work sing so [Laura watched her slim, naked black body—she was much darker than the golden Tonya—with undisguised hunger as Ty popped down the hallway to the linen closet, then back into the room and to the bed, her small breasts moving sexily.  Laura helped her spread large bath towels down between them while Tonya watched.  But when Laura glanced up at her, Tonya was again all sass and sex, sticking her tongue out alluringly, especially at Laura, then shimmying her delectable young breasts, as if she

were just luxuriating in having these masterpieces jutting from her body.]  you so lovingly show both of these women's body that are unique.  you actually show how women's bodies are built so uniquely and their personality with tonya wiggling her tongue salaciously and shimming her tits.  i can just feel my mouth drooling seeing her swish her tits around on her chest and knowing soon i will be inhaling those nipples down my throat and pulping her tits as she whimpers and begs for more.  i so love working medium sized tits in my strong hands.  i love to squeeze them and make the aerola's and nipples flare as i teeth rake and sink me teeth into them.  i love looking up and watching their faces slash and their legs kick and thrash.  just pulping their tits as i call them whores, sluts, bitches and whatever ethnic slur is appropriate.  i know they so love it when their backs are arching so fucking hard and shaking as their hands mash my face deep into their bosom as i snuffle and suck like a starving wolf.

 

//  geez louise, i so fucking love how you actually show women's personalities in your stories.  tonya of course takes the front to avoid the booty and ty takes the back.  this is so true to their character that you have given them.  i so enjoy reading your stories because i get to meet and come to know these angels.  i like also how you show laura's thoughts.  she notices that ty is a lot like me and gets down to business pulling her ass cheeks apart and preparing to invade her sweet asshole.  now how you show that telephany that we women have.  ty senses that laura really wants the mashing of bodies she communicated earlier and moves to kiss and press against laura's back.  i am swooning as tonya drives her tongue down laura's throat and ty kisses and muzzles laura's  neck and ear.  i so feel my womb flip when i feel my angels nipples digging into my back and her cunt humping my hip or ass cheeks getting them all smeared in cunt cream.  i like how you show tonya's love of kissing with their mashing of lips as tongues flow deep in twining love.  i just gag and melt against my woman as our tongue battle and flow from mouth to mouth as our spit mingles and flows freely and down our cheeks and chins.  i feel so much love as maria rapes my with her flailing tongue and joann is kissing, licking, kneading and nipping my back, neck and ass.  you now besot me with the communication that i so love in real life and swoon to read ["You want me to fuck your pretty ass with my finger, Laura?" Ty whispered.  "Is that what you want?"        "God . . . yes!" Laura gasped into Tonya's moving lips.  She was becoming frightfully aroused by these two.  "Yes .

. . yes!"        "I love being fucked in the ass," Ty murmured, still wriggling her naked body into Laura's.  "I don't think Tonya likes it, but I like it.  And you like it too."        "Yes."]  it is this communication that one doesn't get from other authors.  just the words of women in love and stroking their women verbally to take them higher and higher.  it is amazing how my angel whispering or screaming at me makes my belly clench violently and my womb flip over and if on the edge words alone can make come violently and make me go multiple if the dynamics are right.

 

//  i revel in the details [All the while she was asking these questions, she was kissing Laura feverishly and squeezing her breasts, pinching her nipples, sometimes so hard Laura was on the verge of crying out.]  that is how i love to be loved.  feeling your tongue sweeping my mouth and twining with my tongue as you squeeze my tits hard and pull my nipples stretching out my nipples and pulling my aerola taunt.  i love moaning in your mouth as you pulp my tits and work my nipples hard.  i so love watching you and your dialog as you show women expressing their needs and desires.  i love seeing tonya making sure the strap-on is in the car and that laura will be getting it soon.  only you show women expressing their desires and striving to get them fulfilled.  i have felt this so, so many times and crave an infinite number more [From that instant on Laura could remember nothing but a whirling, swarming tornado of thrilling sexual sensations engulfing her body from nearly every angle.  Behind her Ty had slid down her back again, and she felt the girl's invading hands between her clenching buns, felt Ty's long greased finger sliding up into her ass, making her whole body almost leap and shudder with a piercing spasm.  Tonya was not to be outdone by her friend and had slid down too, parting Laura's thighs, immediately beginning to eat Laura's throbbing pussy with a voracious hunger Laura barely thought her capable of.]  i live to give but i love receiving multiple women's attention.  feeling them all over my body.  loving me as they suck and nip my flesh and probe my fuck holes.  i'm feeling asshole spasm and clench reading laura taking ty's loving fingers invading and pumping her rectum with love.  i so love feeling your hand slapping my buns as you twist and pump your fingers into my shit hole.  ripping them out to let me suck clean or being greedy and sucking clean yourself.  i am smiling as you show the competitive nature of women and tonya is inhaling laura's cunt and clit to prove her mettle.  what in life can be better than feeling your asshole being pumped hard and deep while your other angel is snaking her tongue so deep into your clenching cunt and sucking your cunt meat into her mouth as her tongue flails and polishes your screaming clit.

 

//  sigh, i so love seeing tonya forgetting her old fears and doing what all women should be doing as she spreads laura's cunt lips and dives her face deep into laura's wet cunt and sucks her cunt meat so lovingly.  i feel so wonderful each time i see a newbie eating a wet, swollen pussy with abandon and glee.  you show this so perfectly.  i like the passion you show as they fuck laura so hard and well.  you show both women loving with their all as they both use their mouths to suck cunt meat and ty to kiss and lip suck laura's ass while both of their hands are pumping laura's fuck holes with fervor and skill.  i just feel my body stiffen and shudder as fingers are pounding both of my love holes like this.  feeling both of their fingers rubbing and sliding against each other in that area between my love channels.  it just makes me melt deep in my belly with pure love for my angels.   as always you show that ramping up of heat that  makes your feel like it is on fire with need.  you are the only author that shows the fire starting slow, then building and only then the confligeration that scalds wombs and punishes minds with fucking bliss.  ["Ungghhh!   Ungghhhh!" she gagged, gyrating her hips, pushing her pussy into Tonya's face, her body flexing and then stiffening briefly each time Ty's two fingers speared her ass, sending a flying shower of sexual sparks through her whole lower body.]  i so love you detailing how laura's body is flexing and juddering under the loving assault.  i so know that stiffening and wrenching up the sexual tension as your womb tightens deep in your belly.  i so love it when i can hump my pelvis back and forth and feel myself being fucked in both of my fuck holes.

 

//  oh yes!  I see laura is going for the platinum ring.  she croaks out to ty to pull her hair.  i so love it when my angel grabs fistfulls of my hair and pulls back so fucking hard or when they choke me with their arm around my throat or throttle me as i caw and sputter while my womb is immolated and cunt ruptures pure fucking bliss to my brain.  i just find that pain and throttling sets my soul on fire and brain with ecstasy like here ["Oh god!" Laura cried out.  "Auummnnnggg!   Unghhhh!"        'At this moment, she felt Ty's fingers grazing her scalp as the girl grabbed a fistful of her hair.  Laura had a lot of it, and in this split second she found herself recalling Shontay, and how she had always exclaimed 'All that hair!' though Shontay had never done this.  Ty had a fistful of it, and she yanked back Laura's head with a sharp jolt, just as streaming rivers of fire began to pump through Laura's flexing body.        "Auunnngghhh!   Mmmnngggg!  Oh!  Aiiieeeee!" Laura screamed, giving full vent to the spouting furies of a shattering orgasm, which only dipped momentarily to be engulfed by a second one, as both girls continued fucking her, even as she was coming, with relentless passion.  "Unghh!   Ungghh!  Aaiiieeeeee!" she screamed again as Ty yanked her head back again, the hot daggers tearing at her scalp but somehow fanning the flames in her spasming pussy and her plundered asshole, making her come even harder the second time.]  i so love feeling my head being pulled back hard until my back is bowing and my breathing is harsh.  i so love feeling trapped and like a whore when i feel my woman choking me and shaking my head.  i so love clawing at the offending arm or hands and pretending to be trying to remove as they squeeze harder and shake me more violently.  i just feel my womb shredding itself so deep in my belly as waves of pure fucking ecstasy shatter me as i usually go multiple and my brain is simply scalded with fucking bliss.  i can feel my orgasms beginning to wan when i suddenly have my head ripped back again and my hands are clawing the air and i'm spraying spittle out my tight throat and i am suddenly coming violently again as i feel pure ecstasy searing my cunt and brain with fucking bliss.

 

//  of course laura is destroyed and relishes the sweet post coital time that follows [Laura was only slowly coming to her senses.  She enjoyed their soft, murmuring banter but it only half-registered in her consciousness.  Her two orgasms had been stupendous, and in truth her scalp did hurt a little, still throbbing from the hair pulling.  But she was still pressed between the warm, naked bodies of these wonderful girls and was not about to move and bring this marvelous experience to a premature conclusion.]  again something only you capture is that sweet basking with your lover after great sex.  i so love lying all over my lover or pulling her spent body on top of mine as our sweaty flesh presses aginst

each other and i gently stroke her body and our tongues twine in sweet love.  i then like how again you show true life dialog as ty is giddy over the rough sex and tonya is mock scandalized.  only you show the unique character of all your creations and i adore each woman in your stories.  i am smiling as tonya regally demands that the strap-on be produced for her pleasuring.  i love it!  [As she watched, Ty knee-walked on the mattress closer to Tonya, around Laura's body, approaching her friend, reaching out and caressing Tonya's cheek.   Again her low, sultry, Lauren Bacall voice breathed forth, and she smiled in her slow, sly way.        "And are you going to fuck me with it?  Is that your plan?"        At this moment, Laura realized, she herself might as well have been gone.  Or invisible.   She knew there was an undercurrent of lust between these two, and now she saw it emerge full scale.  While Ty touched Tonya's face, Tonya's hands rose up to Ty's small, naked breasts and enclosed them, and then they were kissing in the most achingly sensual way, while Laura watched.]  i am always grinning great big when i help friends discover and consummate their true desires for each other.  i feel deep down we all want our closest friends as lovers it is just man's world brainwashing that prevents so many women from seeing the truth.  you can almost feel the magic in the air at such times as this.  i can just feel my womb quiver watching to two friends come together for the first time and feel my mouth water as i watch their lips meld and tongues flow from mouth to mouth in new love and lust.

 

//  ah yes, the sweet details that only you give.  other authors only really talk about the sex and some do a fairly well job but it is still the setup, seduction and straight to unimaginative sex.  then they forget to give the small moments that marry with the exuberant and exhilarating sex to make one's heart melt with new love.  you give us this with sweet details like ty fluffing tonya's bangs while murmuring that she had always wanted to it and showing tonya twisting ty's thick, long nipples as they continue to kiss on their knees.  i love doing that on a bed as our arms twine around our bodies and our mouths hungrily devour each other.  driving my tongue down your throat and if it has been a while, twisting your neck and giving you a cruel hickey as i feel your body lurching and squirming against mine, as our tits mash and sweaty flesh humps and grinds.  i so swoon feeling you pulling my mouth into your neck as you scream in pained ecstasy as your belly heaves into mine as bodies just slam together and i pull tight and we fall to the bed as we roll around in a full body clench devouring each other in sweet love.  laura goes and gets her strap-on and does what i like to do.  sneak up and see what is happening hoping to see this [Ty was on her back and Tonya—the same Tonya who had told Laura once that the thought of licking another woman's pussy made her gag—was busily, even hungrily, doing exactly that to Ty's.  It was such an erotic tableau that Laura was paralyzed at its beauty.        She lingered, watching them, as long as she could before Tonya spotted her out of the corner of her eye.  She laughed softly and looked up from Ty's splayed crotch, purposely revealing her thick, sensual lips all smeared with Ty's cunt juices.        "Guess I got used to it, eh?" she laughed, acknowledging the expression on Laura's face.  "Ty's tastes really good.  Just as good as yours."]   i am fist pumping reading this.  tonya has accepted her true nature and two close friends are now lovers.  what could more perfect than seeing this moment and knowing i made it happen would just make my heart sing.  i so love a newbie becoming addicted to cunt meat and devouring and smearing cunt cream all over her face as she devours sweet pussy.

 

//  i constantly bemoan the lack of true feelings in other stories.  i didn't really realize it until i started reading this in your stories ["You want me to do it to you?" Tonya whispered to Ty.        Ty nodded, at first without speaking, nodding slowly, solemnly.  Then she replied, also in a whisper.  "I've wanted to for a long time."]  now this is true love and it makes my head spin reading such sweet words of love and poetry.  all i can say is a great big thank you.  i can feel the love as laura helps tonya in the harness and ty spreads her thighs so tonya can sink her love cock deep into her wet swollen cunt.  i love seeing laura doing what i love to do [Laura moved to the side to give them plenty of room.  Though she already again craved to fuck them both, separately or together, she was quite willing now merely to observe what promised to be a sexually as well as emotionally stirring encounter.]  i so love to watch women fuck and see, hear and smell it all.  i recently did this with hillary and her sister camille.  last year hillary decided she needed to have her two year older sister.  i have no problem with incest between siblings or closely related cousins what so ever.  i love the intensity they bring to the bed.  i can't tolerate parents doing their kids.  that is violating the scared trust of parent to child.  now once the child is an adult and can freely choose that is another matter.  i and simonette had been helping hillary to butter up camille over the school year and she quickly seduced her sister once she came home for the summer.  it is funny, their religiously conservative parents think they are so pure and hillary is a lesbian slut and camille has been wolfing down cock forever.  now camille gets all the cunt she can and still likes dick a lot.  i had not seen much of them for about a month when simonette called and asked to come over with the sisters.  joann and maria were out of town and felt my womb quiver with love for my young archangels.

 

//  when they came over i marveled again at how like hillary, camille looks like and yet different.  she is a little shorter, and slimmer with tits that are big but gourd shaped and not pillory like sierra's.  camille is several shades darker than hillary and more black.  hillary is that rich dark brown chocolate color.  i just saw that they were in deeper love now.  i led them to my bedroom and took simonette and we sat on the love chair near the bed and i told hillary to fuck camille hard and good.  i had the details of how camille likes it hard and rough.  they quickly stripped and pulled the sheets back and got in a standing tight hot full body clench as their hands roamed and groped and their mouths mashed together as tongues speared deep in groaning mouths.  sigh, they fell on the bed and rolled all around as they devoured each other's mouths and squeezed asses and tits with loud moans and declarations of hot , true love.  finally, hillary got on top and held camille's hands down on the bed and starred deep into her sister's eyes until camille was helplessly cawing, whimpering and humping her twat up and staring in deep love into hillary's eyes.  it is this deep connection that incest brings and i envy this soul deep love that only sisters, cousins, and adult women and their mothers or aunts can share.  oh well.  sigh, hillary slowly moved her head down and devoured her sister's mouth making her moan and swoon before tilting her head and making camille scream when she gave her long, cruel love bite making camille tear at the sheets and then roll around with hillary again on the bed until hillary pushed her down again and worked down to her large tits.  she squeezed and milked hard pure love form her sister's tits and made her puffy aerolas swell up with her hard squeezes while gnawing and swallowing her nipples down her throat making camille hump her soaked twat in her sister's pressing tummy and watching her eyes roll back and spasm as her head thrashed.  i was setting on the side of the bed now watching the show with simonette.  slowly, hillary worked down camille's body and simply ate her cunt inside out and devoured it with snuffling grunts and load moans of pure happiness.  it was so beautiful watching camille hump and half roll as she ground her cunt into her sister's face.  her fingers dug deep into hillary's scalp as wild convulsions ripped her womb apart. she came violently with soul ripping jackknifes and screams of bliss and ecstasy.  she came down and hillary rolled onto her back bringing camille down on her supine body.  she raised her right leg at the knee and settled camille's soaked cunt on it.  she slowly started to hump her sister up and down her slicked thigh and i felt my cunt quiver as i masturbated watching camille groan gutturally and clench her fists in the sheets while grinding her cunt meat and little stalk of a clit up and down hillary's thigh.  soon she was bucking up and down while growling.  then that slut simonette got some anal beads from our drawer and settled them down and stuffed the four blue one inch beads into camille's ass with the pull ring ready for action.  soon the harsh humping began again and i watched as camille arched her back while hillary inhaled her nipples and squeezed her tits and then her ass.  it was so divine how camille arched and pushed her tits all over her sister's face allowing hillary to suck and maul them as she whimpered and cursed.  finally, i could see another powerful orgasm approaching as i worked my clit harder to cum in time with them.  simonette stopped her own masturbation to jump up on the bed and grabbed the pull ring.  camille's eyes bugged out and a scream filled the room as her body started to jam itself down wildly up and down her sister's soaked thigh and her body was torn apart with wild shudders and undulations as demented harsh groans tore from her throat.  simonette then pulled the anal beads from her spasming asshole with hard jerks as the spasms wracked her sweaty flesh.  that just made camille go multiple as her body jackknifed and smashed down onto of hillary's sweaty flesh.  she screamed like she was being flayed alive and her body smacked and wallowed all over hillary's.  she finally started to come down as she

whimpered and their mouths came together tight in love and tongues flowed from mouth to mouth and cheeks hollowed as they suckled on tongues.  i had come violently too and i felt a womb contraction aftershock watching simontte slowly clean off the anal beads dripping in camille's anal juice.  and the loving was just starting!!

 

//  i just described good hard good fucking without the romance that is truly there but need and want masks it.  you show the tender side of fucking.  i love how you show both.  i relish the memories of brushing my tits against yours and feeling our engorged nipples spark pure pleasure into our tits.  slowly lowering my body until our tits are mashed and nipples digging into tit meat as our bodies twine and tongue stab deep down cawing throats.  you capture this here [Tonya's thick dark-caramel nipples brushed Ty's jutting black nubs, and they paused in their kiss to look down at their delectable naked breasts brushing.  Ty could not resist lowering her mouth to one of Tonya's breasts and snaking her long tongue around Tonya's swollen nipple.  Tonya's eyes rolled up.  Laura felt a gush of warm fuck juice flooding her cunt.        "Do you want to know how long I've wanted to do this?" Ty whispered, looking meaningfully up at Tonya while still holding and licking the girl's perfect breast.        Her lips parted, panting softly, Tonya shook her head.        "Since I first saw you naked that time when we were fifteen.  At the swim party, when we were changing."]  again i swoon and marvel at the tender emotions you always capture.  here you show new true love blooming and how two best friends have finally found their true destiny because of laura.  i am smiling at these words of love and desire.  your dialog is so true and on target.  i get so tired of the tried formula that most authors use.  i want sex of course (lots of it) but i long to see the true emotion of women in love that you capture chapter after chapter.  only you show such sweet lines of dialog that just flows so naturally in your stories.

 

//  i like this moment a lot [She opened her mouth and slowly sucked Tonya's entire bulbous nipple into it.  Laura thought she herself was going to have a brief, happy, sympathetic orgasm just from watching them as their passion heated up before her eyes.  For Ty sucked Tonya's firm, perfectly shaped breast gently at first, but as it became clear how much Tonya was enjoying it, Ty let more of her lust surface, and soon she was sucking harder, and squeezing the firm globe with her fingers.]  i so love to watch.  watching for the first time as camille swallowed hillary's large nipples and sucked on them so hard as she pumped, squeezed and rolled her sister's ample bosom.  then later mauling simonette's full b-cup tits.  she love crushed them in her strong hands, making her nipples flare as she teeth raked and then mashed her face deep sucking her mouth full of firm tit meat and the moving back and tongue lashing and sucking her nipples fiercely.  i just dreamily stroked my cunt and worked a dildo in and out my clenching asshole.  love how you detail that ty spends long minutes working tonya's tits getting them all wet and swollen with need.  making my slut moan and whine in pleasure milking her tits hard and deep and sucking her tits for all i'm worth.  i am smiling great big as they express their deep need to each other and tonya croaks that she needs ty's love cock.  i just smile as my angels beg for me to sink my cock into her cunt or asshole.  last night i swooned as dodie spread her thighs wide as i got between her knees and sank my cock slowly up her tight cunt until it was buried completely into her hot, streaming cunt.  watching her lower lip quiver, and her eyes flare and then go opaque as my cock started to sink deep in and out her cunt.  i started in the basic push up position and pumped her cunt hard and deep until her head was lulling and she was moaning piteously.  slowly sinking down until our sweaty bodies were mashed and slipping against each other and i rotated my hips working my cock as our tits mashed and i kissed her deeply and all over her face in turns.

 

//  i so know sitting beside women fucking and so enjoying the show.  love the details of laura basking in their skin color.  i so love women of color.  i love dark but cream for the golden hughes of tonya's skin.  it makes me so fucking wet.  i like how laura always wants to fuck you but i will gladly sit to the side and observe if i can sense that women are truly bonding or it is a special moment that requires me to wait my turn like here [She wanted to be a part of this and yet did not want to break the solemn connection that linked these two in the smoky, pulsing current of their sexual need.   They were kissing again.  They seemed not to be able to get enough of slow, sensual kissing, and squeezing and caressing each other's breasts.  Tonya was now hovering over the supine Ty, the strap-on dildo bobbing obscenely, almost hungrily, between Ty's thighs, the bulging head of it only inches from her swollen, puckered cunt lips.  But they were kissing again, and in no hurry.]  geez, only you capture these special moments.  other authors just rush through the sex scene and missing such special moments like this.  thank you for showing the tender in love as well as the raw hot heat of new love.  i so love to hesitate my cock above your slit or run my cock up and down your slit and buzzing your clit with my dick as your twat humps up and you beg and curse to sink my strap-on into your slit.  more hot pleading of ty for tonya's cock that makes your womb melt to give your lover what she wants and need.  by giving us all these sweet details and moments you make the penetration so special and magical [Looking down, Tonya grasped the ridged brown shaft of the dildo with her thumb and forefinger and guided the head of it into the wet, splayed groove of Ty's open pussy.  Then she raised her eyes to Ty's again as she slowly pushed it in.  Laura watched the entire seven or eight inches disappear into Ty's body, then watched the look of sublime pleasure pass over Ty's face as she felt it penetrate her.        She gave a long, low groan.  "Ahhhnnnnnn!"]   i so live to hear your moan of ecstasy as my cock slides up your tight cunt or into your spasming asshole.

 

//  i have always loved how you depict strap-on sex.  other authors just basically say the woman doing thrusts her hips and fucks her woman.  that would be so fucking boring in real life.  i really marvel at how boring they make it seem.  they just make it mundane.  only you show the actual fuck that draws the reader truly into the loving and allows the reader to bask in the sweet sensations and emotions like here [They were fucking missionary style, and their bodies were very close, pressed together tightly, Tonya clutching Ty's dark shoulders and burrowing with her mouth in Ty's long black neck, pushing the cock deep into her body with every thrust.  Ty's long legs were in the air, flexed at the knees, yawing slightly outward each time Tonya's pelvis plunged deeper into her groin.  Her wet, black pussy lips, as Laura had noted earlier, were larger than normal, and Laura was fascinated and aroused by the way they clung to the dildo shaft

as Tonya withdrew it for another thrust, like the lips of a hungry mouth that could not bear to let go.]  now this is why we fuck het style.  i so love how you show tonya gripping her lover's shoulders to anchor yourself as your hips rotate and thrust to drive your cock hard and deep into angel's cunt or asshole.  i love to press my lover down when on top and lunge my cock hard into her body making her jolt and judder as i pull her down by the shoulders to spear my cock deep.  feeling our sweaty bodies mash and slide while our mouths clamp tight and our tongues flail deep in each other 's mouth.  i too love to watch long cunt lips grip a cock.  joann, shari, hillary and camille have lips that just ride back as a cock is sliding out and then roll back as your dick slams back deep into her squealing body.  when doing pile drive and looking down and seeing your lips gripping my cock just makes me slam fuck you until you're gurgling and juddering in

bliss.

 

//  you are right how het sex can allow both bodies to get into the sensual rhythm of flexing and surging bodies.  i just feel my womb melt as i often gag and gurgle as our pelvis work in perfect unison.  one to drive her cock deep into her lover's cunt or asshole and the woman receiving tilting her pelvis to let her lover's cock sink deep into her willing body.  i love it when i can drape my thighs over your hips and just thrust my cunt or asshole up and groan deep in my chest as a thick, long cock slams so fucking deep into my jangling cunt or burning asshole.  being goaded on by my lover like tonya urging ty to come fucking hard on her dick.  i so adore how you show women urging and gasping to her lover to urge her on to cum with her entire soul focused on ecstasy.  This is what i live to see ["Oh . . . god . . . now," Ty gasped, losing control herself, tossing her head, churning her hips frantically.  "Do it faster!  Unh!  Unh!"]   i just feel my soul soar when my woman is losing it and falling over the edge of orgasmic bliss.  i just love seeing that losing control and the way her eyes often roll back and spasm hard as i watch her head jolt and lull to the side as my cock slams so fucking hard into her body as i feel the shock of my thrusting hips slamming into your pelvis or ass cheeks and thighs.  oh gods, you so know who to show that ramping up of sex.  you so know how to show that sex usually starts slowly and ramps to that final confliguration of pure bliss on earth.  working your woman to the finish line like this [Tonya could hardly do it any faster, but she did, clasping Ty's shoulders from behind tightly with her hands and spearing the girl's sweet pussy rapidly with the dildo, stabbing it in deep, mashing her own breasts into Ty's and fucking her sharply.  They were fucking furiously, wildly, panting crazily, whimpering.  Laura realized that she had dropped one hand to her own crotch at some point in the last few minutes and was vigorously rubbing her own clit as she watched, feeling the warm gooeyness of her own juices smearing her fingertips.]  perfection in words i must say and then seeing laura jerking herself off.  i so love watching hot sex right in front of my eyes.

 

//  i constantly complain about other writers orgasms.  they are just so generic and so lacking of details.  a few give details but if they write multiple stories i can so soon see the same basic pattern in their descriptions of orgasms.  it is just so bland.  while you on the other hand are a wonder.  i truly never know what the orgasm will be like.  this is how it is in life.  each one is unique.  you capture by actually showing the woman in orgasm.  others just say she comes while you show the physical manifestation of bliss ripping her body apart.  you show the vocalizations of orgasm.  and you show how it varies.  others use the same sound over and over or the same basic shouted words.  you show life and love with such loving prose [And then the telltale upward swoop of Ty's keening, just as she had keened when Laura had fucked her, just as she was approaching her climax.        "Ohhh!   Ohhhhhhhhh!"   Upward, keening, her moans closer together, her body churning, flexing, her beautiful dark flesh straining, her hips gyrating wildly.  "Ohhhhh!   Ohhhhhhhhh!"          Tonya crushed the poor girl's body under hers, burying the cock in Ty's pussy, then simply holding on tight as Ty's body erupted in clenching spasms of hot coming.        "Annnghhiieeee!" Ty suddenly wailed.   "Ohhnnnmmgggg!   Ungghh!  Ahhnnggiieee!"         Her lean, flexing dark body unleashed a truly stupendous orgasm, and the mere sight of her having it was enough to send Laura over the top again herself.  She felt the hard, sympathetic jolts of her own orgasm rip through her belly, felt her fingers grow even wetter, felt the throbbing of a sweet, excruciating climax in her pussy. 

But Ty was still coming, her long legs now locked around Tonya's hips, though Tonya was no longer thrusting.  But Ty was.  She was milking the last ounce of shuddering pleasure out of this wrenching climax, her face paralyzed in a mask of sublime sexual bliss as she quivered and moaned softly through the end of it.]  you capture it so perfectly.  the one fucking working hard to make her woman cum so fucking hard and then the shattering orgasm ripping ty apart.  you show how ty's orgasm is actually affecting her body with bliss ripping her womb to shreds.  all i can do is be so thankful that i found an author who captures the wonders of great lesbian sex.

 

//  i like how this chapter ends with laura basking in her self pleasuring and being happy to watch ty getting in the strap-on as she prepares to fuck tonya to heaven.  i think laura is exactly like me here [Laura grinned at them.  She showed them where her hand had been while Ty was groaning through her climax.  "Don't you two mind me," she said, with a sparkle in her eye.  "I think I'll keep until round three.  Watching you two would make anybody come."]

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