A Fan's Notes
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Chapter 293:
// this chapter starts with me really feeling for laura. instead of basking in all the glorious fucking with ada and marie in a distant city she is now tearing herself up over makeeda. it is so unfair for the fates to do this laura. one should be smiling at all the pussy you devoured and fucked hard and not over emotional turmoil. i am just so sorry that makeeda is acting so bitchy when they seem to hit off so well. true it was obvious they were afraid to go to fast but not this acting like a bitch about it. one is supposed to share positive emotions and love with women you have shared so intimately with and obviously connected. i hope we find out soon what her problem is. i have to agree with laura that the talk to me before sunday is a little ominous. i hate this vague crap when it it not face to face. i want it out and over with and this sly voice or email can really piss me off. // i have to smile at laura taking a drink to calm her nerves. sigh, i don't drink so that is not an option for me. i hate conflict so i am there with laura as she calls makeeda with fear and trepidation in her heart. she knows she is falling hard for makeeda and is desiring her as her new archangel and is being made to suffer for it. she finds makeeda at home and we get that stilted and pained conversation when love is being thwarted and one woman is really trying to hurt another. sigh, unfortunately this does happen and it is never fun. i know that feeling of having a lover blow off your tries at conciliation and wit. trying to get past her frosty manner and work on the problem. i see makeeda simply ignores laura's expressions of caring and desire. obviously, makeeda is hung up about something. still, you show how positive laura is. she doesn't let makeeda's manner get to her and make her reciprocate with a bitchy manner. women love to have anyone take them seriously and she starts to melt when laura despite her actions shows her total support when makeeda tells she is going to japan to sing jazz. laura is only happy because she knows this is what makeeda desires. to make it in the jazz world as a singer. makeeda senses no guile in laura and i think starts to realize how she is acting and starts to thaw and maybe is letting her heart feel what is buried for laura. // i feel so for laura because it's so obvious that we have two lovers out of phase. they know they feel for each other and one is falling much harder and faster than the other. laura is in the fast lane and makeeda is not even on the access ramp it seems. i feel for laura wanting to give her love to a new archangel and the other is still hesitant. i guess i have been more the makeeda than laura in the past. i do want to be sure when i give my heart and i can understand makeeda having these thoughts of going slow. her past lover burned her and she is hesitant and is honest enough to know that her career makes huge demands on her and she must find a lover who can understand this. i could handle that part easily but i must have my freedom. i need to have my angels and can't have my wings clipped. things become so stale and staid without the spice of variety and life. i hope that makeeda and laura can come to the same page of the book. i'm hoping that laura can convince makeeda on the joys of sharing and they can become the dynamic duo. a girl can dream can't she. // sigh, though laura is trying to confess her deep emotions to makeeda, she is still blowing her off and not in a good way. it really sucks when you tell someone you love them and they act like they never heard it. that is cold. laura is feeling that deep archangel kind of love and makeeda is not feeling it back it seems. i do wonder with her pregnant pauses. i think she is feeling deeply for laura but can't acknowledge it yet. i hope laura has the patience because i don't think i would. i can't stand repeated rejection when i'm feeling deeply for you or even when i'm trying to seduce a woman. such coldness really hits me. i need time to recover before my next overture. i give laura credit for trying over and over here. she is such a special woman. i guess i have to give credit to makeeda in that she is keeping the rules firmly in place. // laura is now saved from her maudlin thoughts by a phone call from the divine sara. i wish laura would not fret over sara having found a new lover with her "odious nurse". laura should lose this jealousy. i'm so happy when my angels find new women to love and fuck. life is so fucking short to waste on the silly green-eyed monster. i want all the pussy i can get and will never let silly petty emotions like this ruin possible relationships. i know many want and crave that monogamous relationship at least to begin with. i have to chuckle as i start fucking them as they realize that this monogamy is not what the poets and man's world tries to make it. one needs spice and variety to keep one's sex life vital and fucking hot. men have always gotten a pass in their endeavors while we are called sluts by the bastards. i do see society slowly changing in this and i have noticed younger women are so much more free to choose their own sexuality. i know the religious right is fighting back but we will be free. it will just take longer than my life to escape their grasp. oh well. i'll just have to be happy for my sisters to be. // after telling an innocent white lie about not calling her while in dallas, sara invites her over. laura may be tired but she revives immediately when she feels her cunt quivering over the fucking to come. i love the emotion you show in sara's response [Sara brightened. "Good! I'll put on a pot of tea. See you in a few minutes."] one can just hear the relief in her voice. she knows that laura has been strained over her relationship with her new nurse angel but she realizes that laura is coming over and soon they will be twining in the sensual fucking they share that melts wombs and makes cunts explode with scalding spasms of pure fucking bliss. those deep emotional fucks that leave one swooning and basking in pure radiant love for your woman. i love such fucks where you lie in each others arms covered in sweat as limbs twine as mouths clamp tight as tongues devour mouths and taste each other's pure essence. i see that laura is feeling conflicted about going over to sara's. she wants sara but is wallowing in jealousy and smarting over makeeda's rejection of her emotions. me i would be rushing over to sara's to fuck heatedly to forget my problem with a difficult angel. i would be so happy what sara has taken another lover and wishing i could get me some. i so love fucking new women. nothing is sweeter than an angel sharing a new love in her life with you. gods, the sex is so hot and glorious. we have nearly killed ourselves often with such heated, hard fucking. making ourselves scream in helpless rapture as cunts and assholes are fucked into paradise. // laura arrives and sara greets her and they pass pleasantries and then [Laura followed her up the stairs and into her apartment. There, sitting on the sofa in Sara's small living room, the same sofa on which Laura had sat a hundred times, was a tall, lovely, and very dark—much darker than Sara—woman wearing blue jeans and a pink tank top, with an easy, languid smile that seemed both friendly and laced with mysterious, potent sensuality.] oh geez, my belly would have spasmed so hard i know my breath would have hitched and i would have folded a little seeing this divine fuck angel and knowing soon i would be inhaling her clit down my throat making her scream. of course laura is true to herself and feels immediate jealousy. i love sara for working through this and introduces her new angel as sheena. i so love that name. i would be drooling see this woman. lets fuck!!!! laura is trying not to show her jealousy but i'm sure that she is quite frosty as she introduces herself to sheena. she should be warming the atmosphere and quickly get to the hot fucking that sara is so plainly offering. it is obvious that both these women are dying to fuck laura together. i would be so happy and touched with their desire for me. i so love my angels when they share with me like i share with them. // laura to her credit realizes that sara and sheena are not wanting to hurt her but are wanting to share hot soul stirring fucking to help laura accept this new dynamic. i would be so happy to be included in this new dynamic. she realizes that sara is showing some deviousness for the first time but i don't mind a little of this when done positively like here. sara is only trying to open laura up to a new dynamic in their relationship. i have done this in the past and helped women when they have done this with their lovers. one must do what is necessary to make new love happen. i so applaud sara here. sara is so wise. laura already is feeling deep attraction to this wonderful new woman. she can't ignore her eyes [Not only did she have that lazy, molten smile and alluring, I'll-bet-you-want-to-fuck-me eyes. She was also very black and smooth, with long, well-shaped arms and shoulders, completely visible due to the thin straps of her tank top, and full, swelling breasts under it. Long and slender with full breasts, very black. A combination Laura was exceptionally vulnerable to.] sara may not know the particulars of laura's other angels but she knows that laura is deeply attracted to attractive black women. she will let laura's very nature help her seduce laura. she knows that laura will start to feel the lust any red blooded lesbian would feel for this angel. i would so be devouring her exposed skin with my eyes and staring deeply into her eyes showing my new love for her and how i'm going to fuck her blind and tracing her breast with my eyes loving them already with my vision. i know my pussy would already be really wet by know. they would find sodden panties when they take them off me. // have to smile at the discomfort as sara leaves them alone to get some tea and sheena makes it clear that she and sara have come to know each other and their little likes and tastes. sheena realizes she is showing sara's other lover her intimate knowledge while she is still showing jealousy. i love these situations and know this sometimes awkwardness. sometimes surprise is the best way to get your woman seduced and sometimes a woman thinks she is ready but when it is right there before her eyes she can get skittish, jealous or feeling like laura here, being a little manipulated. a new situation can make a woman act negatively until you can calm and soothe her and then seduce her. it is usually up to her current main angel to do most of the work. lets see how things work here. oh geez, she is thinking of bolting. this must be prevented. one only needs time to make it work. if they bolt you might never get another chance. usually we read our women well and the seduction occurs and a few times things don't go well and it takes another rendezvous to get her. a few bolted and we never did get her to sleep with us but most women want it deep down. you only have to awaken the desire if hidden from themselves. once a woman experiences multiple partner sex she will be hooked for life. have more than woman loving your body simply makes one die from pure sexual bliss. // personalities are so different. laura is feeling like she is being used in a bad way where i would be almost bouncing over the coming sex. the women who know me know i am totally a slut who hungers for new pussy. i love meeting women in all ways. i would be going along with the seduction and making sure to respond positively and help things move forward if awkward like here. sara must sense this and quickly returns with the tea. she knows that laura will need some seduction and is wise to return quickly. they have that awkward silence while trying to figure each other out. love seeing laura inhaling sheena's essence. sheena must know from sara that laura is a true slut and that her pheromones must be affecting her. smelling a woman's scent always starts my pussy to juicing and quivering and my nipples tingling and hardening. laura knows to listen to her body and now must only overcome her jealousy. it is so obvious that sheena is offering herself completely and openly. i would be slavering with desire to consume her cunt and clit and maybe getting some tasty asshole. at least laura now realizes why sara couldn't resist this long, sexy vixen. // sara tries to get things moving forward with some small talk but laura is being a little bitchy and ruining the atmosphere of love sara is trying to setup. sheena senses this and i think she leaves the room to let sara have a time alone with laura to see if she can't get through her silly actions. i do love how laura looks at sheena's alluring ass as she leaves the room. she may be put off but she knows to always get a peak at a beautiful ass. i can almost hear sara's plaintive tone as she reasons with laura. i mean who could refuse this delightful woman if she is coming on to you. i will never refuse a pretty woman's advances. sara states the obvious and tells laura that things can still be hot and good. life flows and sometimes relationships change but one should always try to morph with the changes and partake of the glorious fucking that is always possible. love this observation laura makes of sara [Sara nodded and bowed her head a little. "I know. But they could still be very good." She paused and looked bashful and shy, like she must have looked as a fetching young school girl. "She and I are thinking of going to Jamaica on a vacation. We thought you might like to come along."] i love seeing the child like in my women. wow, i would be all over that trip to jamica with them. recently i went with dodie, frankie and took simonette and hillary with us down to the outer banks. dodie has a place down there and we spent a long weekend of intense, hard, glorious fucking. i think we fucked in every room of the place. we spent must of the time in the nude. it was heaven. i really loved watching dodie, frankie and simonette simply fuck hillary into a coma. she simply loves to fuck and fuck and boy did we wear her holes out. she had such a dreamy look on the way back home. // i have to love sara's solution to laura's silly resistance to this divine dance that sara has setup [There were a thousand ways Laura could respond to this, and she seemed to rifle through them all before she could trust herself to speak. Then, before she could utter a word, Sara's amazing pillowy lips were on hers, Sara's tongue was slipping through her teeth, Sara's hand was on her breasts through her clothes.] sara wants and needs laura and shows laura in the most pure way possible. with her sweet lips and soft hands. there have been times where such reluctance has presented itself to me or seen it between two lovers where one suddenly gets skittish or bitchy at the moment of truth. sometimes what seems intellectually wild and desirable is suddenly overwhelming or the green eyed monster appears. sometimes words are used to stroke and soothe but i find that the physical usually works best with soft words of love. these situations are setup with a good idea that the seduction is most probable and you merely must show the woman that paradise is near with the one who knows her best using her body and words to melt her defenses. i have been in a few situations over the years where i watched the one woman simply melt her reluctant partner before my eyes and soon we were fucking gloriously and i usually find the hard to seduce woman is the wildest slut of all. letting go is so freeing i have found. // wow, i see that is what sara is doing here. she is letting her tongue and fingers love laura while she whispers to laura's better side and encourages and cajoles to accept what she and sheena can offer. let go of silly jealousy and accept love. why fight what can only be heavenly fucking? i have never understood why anyone would deny themselves of any woman when she is offering herself to you. sometimes the truth is so enlightening. sara rightly mentions laura's other lovers and why can't she. laura knows she is right and reflects on her new love makeeda and feels her silly defenses start to crumble. sara is still dear to her and is offering herself and another beautiful angel to fuck gloriously. sara is so wise and warm that i desire her greatly. laura is fair enough to realize she is being a hypocrite and starts to melt. i can so sense that moment when a woman is finally crumbling to my will and she is melting inside and i move in for the love kill like sara here [On the other hand, Sara's ineffably soft lips on hers had the effect they always had, making her pussy flood and her blood race and her heart melt. I can't resist this woman, she thought. I never could. And Sara knew Laura was succumbing, yielding. She began sliding her hands under Laura's top as she was kissing her, pulling it up, fiddling behind Laura's back with the clasp of her bra.] my own cunt is flooding as i feel your tongue becoming alive with love and i feel you trembling and moaning softly as my hands slip underneath your clothes and as i stroke your flesh and knead your beautiful body then unclasp your bra. i love to turn the heat up with this and drive my tongue down her throat and so often watching her eyes roll back as her body vibrates with the beginnings of fuck need. // only you show how you use the right word at the right moment ["You want it," she breathed in Laura's ear. "You want it with us. I know you do. We will be so good together."] words alone can make your angel melt and watch her eyes roll back with new love. i so love your tenderness as laura strokes sara's face as they kiss and laura feels all the love she has hid from herself come flowing to the surface. finally laura is embracing what sara has so lovingly offered. i am so thankful each time an angel shares another woman with me. life is meant to be shared. i am grinning great big as sheena reenters the room and laura closes her eyes knowing that she is theirs now. she feels the seat cushion beside her being sat in and then feels what i so revel in. two beautiful women loving her tits as they remove her top and bra and fasten their lips on her nipples and start love sucking them. i so adore having two or more women loving me just for this. my cunt flows as both of my tits are love mauled and nipples swallowed and sucked hard. feeling two sets of hands stroking my body and fluffing my hair and having one woman continue to love my tits as the other mouth explores my upper chest, neck and belly making my breath heave and by belly bellow. i so love looking down and watching them love me and seeing them look at me with that smoky eye contact as you see the lust flare in their eyes and suddenly your nipple is sucked so hard and you feel hands love pumping your tit hard and maybe the other angel turns my neck to the side and suddenly i feel my flesh sucked in her mouth and sucked hard, pumped through her teeth marking me as her slut. making my mind white out as i scream in pure pleasure. // i love being loved like this and then feeling and seeing [She felt lips grazing her cheek and again opened her eyes to see Sheena's sensual mouth approaching hers. Their eyes caught only briefly before Sheena's mouth pressed down on hers, but it was long enough for Laura to let her know that whatever her earlier attitude had been, she was now completely theirs and looking forward to a hot ride. She let her mouth fall open immediately and responded hungrily to Sheena's kiss.] oh gods, i swoon at moments like this. our loves communicating pure love as her tongue enters and rapes my mouth. stroking and slithering with your dueling tongues and then driving her tongue down my throat making my eyes roll back and my throat moan long over and over. i so swoon when i feel a soft, long tongue invading and raping my mouth. i am so their as you show the emotion and sensing of the dynamics [This emboldened Sara, who quickly began to unzip Laura pants, while still sucking and tonguing her nipples passionately. She had her hand under Laura's panties almost immediately, two of her fingers sliding down to Laura's crotch and pushing into the squinchy wet soup of Laura's pussy quickly.] i so know sensing that it is time to move forward and finish the seduction. getting the last of the obstructions out of the way and slipping your fingers up her tight cunt and start working them in and slowly start pumping her hot tight cunt. i so love reaching her cunt and finding a soupy mess and feeling juices flowing over fingers and soaking my hand in love cream. feeling her pelvis starting to pump and feeling the instinctive fuck rhythm setting in. love hearing her start to grunt and moan as you piston her fuck hole and begin to work her now swollen and wet clit with your other fingers or palm. i so love hearing my slut and seeing her head start to twitch and getting those heavenly sudden jerks when a bolt of pure pleasure spears out of her cunt and sears her brain with pure fucking pleasure. // only you show the flow of lovemaking. other writers are so spotty in their writing that the reader seems to be reading a play with most of the pages missing. it is kissing, straight to some nipple and then straight to the twat for unimaginative sucking and then orgasm. ho hum. you show how two women flow in their lovemaking like [Sheena kissed her hard, stabbing her tongue deep into Laura's mouth. Sara was busily pulling Laura's pants down her legs, and her panties too. She slid off the sofa onto the floor, while Sheena's mouth traveled down Laura's neck to her breasts, which she began to stroke and suck even more heatedly than Sara had.] two mouths and sets of hands moving over you body making you melt in pure pleasure. i so love seeing sara hastily removing laura's pants and sliding to the floor preparing to bury her face in laura's hot soaked twat. i know i would press my face in so hard driving my tongue deep up her fuck hole. maybe moving my face up and down her cunt seam to get her juices all over my face and up in my hair making me feel all slutty and hot for it. had to smile at the sofa being to small for comfortable fucking. we made sure that all our sofas and love seats are large and deep to facilitate pulling your woman's twat to the edge and devouring our letting her comfortably lean back while you get up on your knees a little and dive your face hard and deep into her humping cunt devouring her hot hole and sucking and flicking her quivering clit for much soaked, sloppy devouring. // i am smiling great big as they finish stripping laura and most of their clothes by the time they reach sara's bed. they are so ready to fuck and eat some tasty white girl cunt meat. now you show how it feels to have heaven on earth [but for now she was theirs, and she lay down on the bed between them, with Sara behind her and Sheena in front. Sheena was kissing her mouth again, while fondling her breasts, and Sara was nipping and sucking her bare shoulders and squeezing her ass cheeks and pressing those amazing naked breasts into Laura's back.] two beautiful women sandwiching you as they love you with total focus and love. gods i so love reading sheena breathing whisperly her desire for laura as she alternates between devouring her tits and driving her tongue deep into laura's mouth stabbing down her throat and sweeping exploring every crevice and hollow with strong tongue strokes and probing. i always mewl when my woman devours my mouth with a firm strong and hopefully long tongue. // i think only you show how a woman with bigger tits uses them to let her lover feel their weight on you as she drags and mashes them into your body. hillary with her big pillowy tits really loves this. i remember one of our first fucks i was sitting on the sofa after a hot fuck with simonette and hillary got between my legs and settled her tits on my thighs and let their heavy weight heat my libido and my thighs and then started stroking them on my legs and then leaned up and dragged them up to my soaking cunt and swirled and ground them into my belly, cunt and thighs. i could feel them slicking with my sweat and fuck juice. i felt such love as i looked into this seventeen years old face and seeing pure lust and love for me. she has the face of an angel and the soul of a complete slut. needless to say i love her deeply as does simonette and everyone else whom she fucks. we all love her deeply and purely. sigh, have to love their in concert loving. moving down laura's body in time one devouring her front and the other her back. have to smile at the teasing when they avoid her aching cunt making laura scream for it in her mind. love the teasing as my twat is humping helplessly looking for relief and pleasure as i mewl and love drool in building need. // i love how you show that sara and sheena have a game plan here. you show how women think and love. they are making laura die for it to make sure she is completely under their spell. laura already is but they are making sure. sigh, love reading sheena kissing and nipping laura's midriff and belly on her way to tender red wet cunt meat and settling between laura's yawing thighs. love settling in between your legs and seeing and smelling your cunt up close with complete focus and fuck hunger. you show the flow again. others never let their women flow in their lovemaking. sara moves up from kissing laura's ass to her mouth and devours it again with that smoky eye contact that lets souls speak to each other in love and lust. i have come to marvel at how only you capture this flow and moving in loving your women. feeling your womb jump and cunt spasm as your eyes flash pure lust to each other. then sara moves up higher to dangle her lovely gourds into laura's face. i love having big tits dangled in my face. swallowing and sucking her tits or maybe having to chase around in mirth and rising desperation. sometimes i am forced to work for my tit meat. i just thrum when i get that nipple finally. // i see sara is in the mood for some play [Sara gently teased her by letting the bulging, dark, huge bulb of one delicious nipple brush Laura's lips as she groaned from the pleasure of what Sheena was beginning to do to her cunt. Laura chased it with her lips, then her tongue, but Sara giggled and kept it just out of reach.] i just smirk when i make an angel chase my tits when in this position. i love seeing them grimace in missing my nipples and hearing my aggressive lovers starting to growl and lunge in hunger. this is perfect mirth and hot lovemaking ["Ohhnn! Ungghh!" Laura groaned as Sheena's tongue lashed her exposed clit and then stabbed deep into the sopping wet furrow of her pussy. "Oh god . . . this is how bad I want it," she gasped, letting both hands sweep and up and capture Sara's swaying globe, then feeding Sara's bulging dark nipple into her mouth hungrily. Sara's playful giggle turned into a hot moan in midstream. "Ohhnnmmmmm . . . oh Laura!"] feeling your cunt fucked so well as you go for your tit meat. i love stuffing a tit into my mouth and devouring your nipple and aureole with hard sucks and fierce tongue lashing. i so love the sounds of pleasure i make in my woman. i so love stuffing a big tit in mouth and pushing your nipple deep for super hard love sucks and head pulling while lathing with my tongue. // love how only you show those sharp stabs of fucking pleasure that make it difficult to focus as you are loving your woman. feeling those clenches and gags as your feasting on a tit, cunt or asshole and you have to break contact for a moment to clear your mind or simply scream in fucking pleasure. i dream of those womb melting spasms of pure pleasure. other writers just say their woman is eating her woman out and you show what they are doing [Her body was alive and straining with need, her pussy pulsing wildly from Sheena's increasingly passionate love assault, which now included her fingers probing Laura's tight, greasy sleeve, as well as her tongue working Laura's clit frantically, and her thick sensual lips sucking it quickly from time to time.] it is all the adjectives and adverbs that make your sex so hot. words like probing, frantically and thick sensual lips simply adds so much. you now show the ramping up of sex. you show how sheena starts pistoning her fingers faster and harder and lashes laura's clit almost maniacally and sara is moaning hard as she is now pressing her tit roughly into laura's mouth and laura is sucking her pulpy bulbs hard and heatedly. love reading of sheena's obvious skill and adds yet more heat to finish off the love kill. only you capture that fierce fuck hunger that just makes things ramp and ramp. you show the emotion as well as the motions of fucking. only you marry the physcial and the emotional and thus your writings are the envy of the fuck gods. // gods, this is why i fuck [There was no way Laura could prolong this sweet pleasure, or keep her body from hurtling into the abyss of a killing orgasm. It arrived with little further warning. She felt her body seize up, her flesh everywhere stiffening and clenching, her breath paralyzed in the depth of her lungs. Even though all this sexual trauma she could still feel Sheena's tongue stabbing into her pussy, and Sheena's phenomenal lips on her clit. Sara's large, slippery, wet nipple slipped out of her mouth as a choked and gargled cry sought to escape, unsuccessfully. And then Laura was coming in hot furies, her body convulsing and flipping uncontrollably as both Sara and Sheena tried to hold her and help her get the most out of this excruciating orgasm. She whimpered and whinnied but could not cry out, so stunned and breathless was she made by the fierce shocks. But then it finally released her. "Auunnggghhhhh!" she almost roared. "Unh! Unh! Auunnggghhhh! Mmnnngggeeee!"] i so worship that moment of knowing the orgasm is almost upon me and then the next instant my womb is no longer straining but exploding deep in my belly and making my cunt spasm hard as bolts of hot come slush and flow out in jagged spasms of wet heat. so often i have felt that nipple slip from my mouth or lose all control of my mouth on hot pussy and simply feel my face press into a hot cunt as i feel my face spasming and slashing in her wet heat or i must lift to breath raggedly and or scream out my delirious pleasure. and your screams and hard groans of pure fucking bliss and pleasure are such a miracle ot read. no other comes close to hitting it so dead on. others sometimes brush the edges but only you capture all the sounds and volumes of pure fucking hot sex and rupturing orgasms. also love how you show so clearly women holding onto their woman to keep their place so you can keep your face buried in cunt, asshole or tit trying to prolong her pleasure. only you show how women strain and try so hard to give their women every ounce of pleasure possible. // sigh, now only you show that post coital bliss. laura basks in having two beautiful women getting on each side of her and wrapping their arms around her and love coo and kiss sensually. i know sheena and laura can feel a new deep love flowing as tongues twine and languidly move back and forth between tight fitting mouths. i so love tasting my essence in my angel's mouth who just went down on me. now you show (again as only you do) the mirth and sass of lovers who truly love and like their bed mate ["That was only my three-star special," Sheena murmured in a low, husky, sexy voice, her black eyes glinting with humor and newly minted affection. "Next time you get the five-star extravaganza."] wit alone can make me fall for you harder and deeper. really like the observation of laura feeling totally spent at first but lying between these two black angels soon has renewed strength and fuck hunger flowing in her veins. i love feeling myself coming alive after i have been fucked good and starting my loving in turn. // love the dynamic you show as laura turns sheena on her back and kisses her shoulders and neck and only then moving to her beautiful tits and loving those thick long nipples. i love how you love all your women. really love how you show two lovers meeting over a thirds tits like laura and sara here and having to detour to heatedly devour each others mouths with deep plunging tongues and love murmurs. i am like sheena in loving to watch this going on right above me but like sheena i must eventually draw your mouth down to mine and get some sugar too. letting our spittle mingle as we take turns kissing each other and watching those ribbons of love drool stretch between moving mouths. laura and sara then once more focus on sheena. i like how you show the difference in women. where laura is the type to writhe immediately, sheena is the type to languidly bask in your loving and slowly ramp up. i so love hearing those love sighs and seeing your body slowly start to undulate and hump. again, this beautiful writing so accurately shows the flow of great lovemaking. i will never tire on how you show this and make the loving so alive and vital. other writers leave out so much that their sex becomes listless and bland. makes me shudder to think that i would ever have to live this kind of sex. // more of that humor i so love as laura heads south for tender red wet cunt meat [Laura grinned back at her. "You do it. I think I have a date with her pussy. If it's okay with you."] sigh, one of the reasons i so love your writings is you actually describe in vivid detail your women's vaginas [She lingered on the way over Sheena's taut black stomach and smooth, velvety lower belly, but in seconds she had reached the long, parting red blossom of the girl's black-edged pussy, which was flooding inside with glistening fuck juice. It was one of those long, sinuous-lipped cunts of her dreams, a heavenly wet gash of dark pink paradise, and Laura pushed her mouth into it immediately, slithering her tongue into the juicy interior, which was warm, almost hot, a frothing wet raw mass of inflamed flesh.] what more can one add. i so love getting up close to my woman's pussy and seeing its beauty and just gazing at it and then moving in for my cunt meat and devouring her fuck hole and clit. as much as i love looking at pussies i could never give the beautiful descriptions that you do. i truly marvel at them. only you capture the sights, smells and sounds of a well fucked pussy. // other writers just say basically that the woman going down eats out her woman. you show the details of laura pistoning her tongue up sheena's fuck hole and then pulling sheena's clit hood up and attacking her little seed. i love finding that seed and making her yelp and spasm as i start loving her little seed of love. only you show how you move between clit, fuck hole and perineum to give her maximum pleasure and not overload any one area. love how you show sheena slowly getting wound tighter and tighter as laura consumes her hot cunt and sara is siphoning her nipples down her throat while her hands are kneading and pumping her tit flesh hard with focused skill. i love how you only you so clearly show a woman reaching down to caresses the woman's face going down on her and maybe digging those fingers into her scalp and gripping her head to start love pistoning her flooding cunt into her woman's hot sucking mouth. wow, you even show that connection of lovers as sara and laura make eye contact and silently and loving communicate that it is time for the love kill and really ramp up the heat on sheena. love taking that next level and simply inhale her clit down my throat with rapid tongue bats and head pulling while sara is sucking and teeth raking sheena's nipples hard. i so love working with another woman to simply kill our bed mate with killing bolts coming pleasure. // this is what i live for [This was about all it took to tip Sheena over the edge. Her body clenched, and her knees jerked up. A fierce jolt struck her. Only a distant, pinched off mewling came from deep in her chest. Her flesh shook, and then strained and shuddered as she began to come in long, rolling waves. "Auunnnggguuuunnnnn!" she groaned loudly, her ecstatic moans filling the small bedroom, her violent jerks making the bed shake. "Ohhnnnnggggg! Aunngghhh!" Laura and Sara continued what they were doing throughout the sharp convulsions of her orgasm, Laura's mouth glued to her spasming pussy while Sara's mouth was still lovingly fastened to one of Sheena's nipples. Sheena came and came until the sharpest spasms finally released her flexing body, and left in their wake only soft, intermittent, shuddering jolts that soon faded into slow undulations. Still, it was minutes before she fully recovered from this thrilling, shattering climax.] i live to make a woman's body simply tear itself apart with fucking bliss and having another woman working with me is the purest pleasure possible. i love to keep my mouth on you and feeling all the jolts and jackknifes rack your body. looking up or down and watching your co-worker doing her part and seeing your love victim simply dying form coming so hard. watching her body slacken into those divine aftershock undulations and sudden jolts that make her head snap around or limb twitch. really love the little detail of sheena's knees jerking up. one never knows how a body is going to respond to a crushing orgasm and love producing them to see what the current will produce for my enjoyment. // as usually happens when multiple lovers are playing and energy is still high the two women who just fucked the third into heaven are now ready for more fireworks themselves. i have so often worked loose from the still sighing angel still jerking slightly from feathery aftershocks still rocking her womb and me and my fuck partner simply fall on each other like the fuck hungry lionesses we are. i love how laura and sara let their sweet love simply ignite the fires of love like [She devoured Sara with her hands and mouth, sucking and squeezing her sweet flesh, dropping her mouth to Sara's incredible nipples, big puffy chocolate cupcakes, licking them hungrily. Sara knew how much Laura adored her nipples, and she smiled sexily, looking down at Laura's lips on them, holding her own breasts in her hands, feeding them to Laura, who now began to suck them with sharp, concentrated passion.] i so love devouring my angels tits and nipples and i swoon when she lifts them for me to make her nipples stand out for sharp devouring. i am so there when laura sucks super hard and makes sara whimper. i have always smiled when laura asks if she is doing it too hard and her current angel tells her "harder". i have found most women, most ot the time want their nipples devoured with heated passion while you love maul her tit flesh. makes them writhe, whimper and love drool. // as usually happens, sheena wants in on the loving as soon as she revives. women want to fuck women as much as possible. i like the next part where you simply tell the reader basically how laura and sheena are swarming sara's body. you show lovers just kissing, sucking, licking, kneading and stroking their woman. that feverish swarming where you are all over her body. i love just loving her whole body from just above her twat to her divine face. just flowing with another making your shared woman simply writhe with fuck need. love the mystical connection you show of how laura and sheena simply communicate on that soul level of lovers in sync. it is this closeness that only women can share. this sharing produces this [After a few minutes of this she was almost delirious with fuck-need, writhing and groaning between their swarming bodies, her thighs parted, her hands trying to force them down to her pussy, urging them to bring her sweet relief. Laura teased her, sucking her earlobe, pinching her large, swollen nipples, still damp with hers and Sheena's saliva.] i so love reducing a woman to primal fuck need of scissoring legs that are yawning wide inviting you to devour her simmering quim as she whimpers and pleads for it. i so love the slut in my angels. // of course i love the hot sexy talk. i am so happy that laura is finally talking dirty to sara. i need such sexy talk to make my body sing. then only you show that kissing that occurs during the hot fucking. other authors only have their women kiss during foreplay and post coital. they miss all the hot tongue and spittle sharing during the fucking that makes lesbian sex so divine. geez, my head is lulling as sheena works down the front of sara's body and finally arrives at her steamy cunt and immediately buries her face deep while laura works down and parts sara's ass cheeks and starts giving sara those loving hard tongue strokes down her ass crack that i so love giving. of course this makes sara whimper and hump like the slut she is. i so love working with another to make our woman simply melt with fuck need. i like the thoughts of laura deciding to take sara's asshole. i love taking women's asshole when they have never given it to their odious husbands and boyfriends. i show them what they have been missing. i know how to make a woman a total anal whore. i make them come so hard. // i am smiling as laura rushes off to her baby oil an lubes her finger and begins her divine work [Laura had one forefinger greased and slid it between Sara's ample buns before Sara knew what was happening. She snapped the bottle shut and pushed it down toward the end of the bed. Sara's body stiffened a little and she let out a tiny, surprised squeak as she felt Laura's finger. "Mnnneee!" She looked back over her shoulder at Laura, who was kissing and sucking and even biting her firm round ass cheeks while insinuating her finger deeper into Sara's crack.] i have always loved how you show so lovingly that initial discomfort and mild pain as your asshole is invaded. you show with your prose how a woman's face gets that heavenly look of pained focused as your finger or cock slides home. you show those sights and sounds of pained entry almost all women make and then you show how that changes to the sublime look of pure pained pleasure that radiates out form your skewered asshole and pumps pure pleasure to your throbbing clit and makes your tits thrum and your mind whites out with pure fucking pleasure. only you show how come anal sex is totally "rad". i so love gagging as fingers or cock slide through my sphincter and starts pumping my rectum making me love moan and thrash. // love the sounds you show as sara's body is ramping up ["Ahhhhhnnnnnnn! Oh . . . shit! Unngghhhhh!"] only one other author shows the sounds of lovemaking but his always all caps words. only you show those varied animalistic sounds of rutting and hot fucking. as usual you show how you ramp up the heat to crush your woman's body with a shocking violent orgasm. you show laura pistoning her finger harder and twisting it around while sheena is sucking and tongue fucking harder while introducing a few of her own fingers. only you show how more and more heat is added to finish off the love kill. other authors just don't show this. it is always simple oral sex basically. how boring as they depict it. while your sex is alive and vital with life. love the observation you make that laura and sheena can both read sara's body so well because of their deep love for her and keep in sync while they ramp up the heat until [At the same time, Sheena had begun fucking Sara's pussy more aggressively too, working her fingers into Sara's oozing slit not more roughly but much more rapidly, fucking her fast and wildly with them while still sucking Sara's throbbing clit. All this frenzy quickly became too much for Sara, who clenched and then came in a terrific eruption. "Ahnn! Ahnn! OOUUNNGGHHMMNNNGGGG!" she suddenly exploded, her body ripped apart by horrific interior sexual fireworks. "Oh! Oh! Auunnnggghhhhh!" she groaned, shattered again by succeeding shocks of a crushing orgasm.] this what i live for. giving my woman orgasms so strong she feels likes her cunt is going to sear her brain with pure fucking pleasure. only you show that sudden explosive explosion of pure pleasure that suddenly crushes you as your cunt rends itself with scalding spasms of pure fucking pleasure. i so love being in sara's place as my womb rends itself apart deep in my belly and makes my body jackknife and spasm around the bed as i scream my bliss as scalding spasms wrack my body with crushing spasms making my head whip around and feel that tearing deep in my belly as my cunt radiates pure nirvana into my veins and whiting out my brain as i love drool while my eyes spasm in the back of my head. only you make me feel this when i am reading an erotica story. only with your prose, sharp observations and vivid details and divine use of sounds actually capture the essence of coming super hard. only you make my pussy spasm just in reading your stories. // i love how you tell us that the orgasms your women are heavenly events that last for some time from initial shocks, to rupturing spasms and then feeling those wondrous aftershocks that gradually fade away leaving you spent. other authors just usually have their women come so blandly. while a few do show hard fucking orgasms they still forget to show that wondrous coming down in aftershocks and afterglow. they cut their orgasms short. i love seeing laura and sheena riding out the orgasm in their original positions giving sara as much pleasure as possible and only then moving up and wrapping sara in their arms and kissing in sweet post coital time. love the picture of the three sharing tongue and spit in languid love. i think sara has come to my way of thinking [Sara watched them patiently, almost lovingly. "You two guys are a team," she sighed softly. "You can do me together any time you feel like it. God, I thought I was going to melt."] sara knows how to go for the brass ring now. i love fucking one on one of course but i so love loving with more than one woman. it opens so many dynamics and possibilities. // i am so there as the fuck hunger fills laura as sheena stabs her tongue deep into laura's mouth showing her own hunger for laura's hot wet cunt. i so love kissing like this and dueling and twining tongues tight and slithering hard as our cunts flood with fuck juice readying themselves for more intense fucking. sara does what i like to do and scoots out of the way allowing laura and sheena to twine arms and legs and pulling tight as tongues plunge deep into warm mouths. really love the observation of laura reaching down and palming sheena's ass cheeks and squeezing and kneading them. i so love feeling my angel's ass filling my fingers as i feel its resistance as i love pump it and then while working her ass setting up a nice humping motion and getting her cunt to tribbing whatever part of my body it is touching. getting her wet heat all over me. feeling her mound rubbing and mashing into my body. it is these little things that other authors never give me. the little things in lovemaking that we all do and that makes fucking so delightful. sara wants to see her two favorite angels fuck in love for each other. i love to lie back after a great fuck and watch my other angels fuck each other while i watch and if not spent gently masturbate, else, i'll just watch dreamily. love the accurate observation of sara knowing that laura fucking sheena with her watching will make things so much easier during their next tryst. laura will have buried all her silly objections and will gladly partake of the delights of the flesh she and sheena can so freely offer. // more examples of the dirty talk that makes sex so hot [Sheena was equally hot, raising her hands to Laura's small breasts, lightly pinching Laura's nipples, sucking her neck. "I want to taste your pussy," she panted into Laura's neck. "I want to drink it and suck it."] these words just so fire up the libido. i love how you show your women's personality so subtly. sheena wants some sixty-nine and she goes for it. laura is not a big fan because both women rarely come together. sheena doesn't really care and takes control and positions them head to foot and makes it plain that this is their next sex act. i personally love for my bed mate to lead me. whatever you want to do, lead me on. surprise me with what you want to do next. i love how sheena fucks [There, without warning, she went to town on Laura's aroused, festering pussy, sucking Laura's cunt lips wildly and invading Laura's quim with both tongue and fingers. Suddenly realizing that she liked where she was too, her face nestled between this hot woman's silky black thighs, her mouth just inches from Sheena's delicious long pussy, all wet and deep red inside, squinchy with juice, Laura groaned and quivered. "Ohhhnnnnnnn! Oh shit . . . that feels so good!" she gasped, letting Sheena know that her hungry, forceful caresses were hitting the mark. She, too, quickly pressed her mouth into Sheena's glistening slit and began devouring it passionately. In seconds both of them were snuffling and grunting softly and panting as they licked and sucked each other voraciously.] i love getting busy on my woman's cunt and love it when it is done to me. gods, i love!!! your words. you excite so much when you tell us of laura and sheena's "snuffling and grunting" as they devour each other quims. i really love sixty-nine for this reason. feeling our bodies jerking and cunts humping while we make the sounds you mention. i love feeling her digging with her fingers to grip me tight while her other hand is pistoning fingers hard while she tries to inhale my clit down her throat and i her's when the dynamic allows it. // for laura she starts to feel her regret when she realizes she is not going to last with sheena's frenzied assault on her flooding cunt. me i don't mind. if on top i will ride out my orgasm with my face buried in your cunt while i scream or on your thigh when i simply lose all control of my mouth and very senses. then back to work to finish you off or a change of position is in order. since laura is on the bottom she can't help but let her head flop on the mattress as her strength gives out as her body prepares for nirvana. i love how sara simply can't watch anymore and inserts herself back into the lovemaking. sometimes i try to just watch but hot fucking right before your eyes so many times fills me with renewed hunger and i must rejoin like sara here. i love her swarming their bodies and kissing and kneading everywhere. love how she settles by laura's head and feeds laura her divine puffy nipples. i love lover's who know their angel so well. you show sara knowing how laura loves coming with sara's nipple in her mouth. only you show that almost mystical connection between women as they love each other. you show how we always try to give as much pleasure as possible and by giving you receive so much in return. // sigh, what a beautiful picture of sara using her hand to feed laura her nipples and looking down and gazing with love as laura sucks, nibbles, and pulls hard on her nipples and aerolas. you fill your sex with so much tender love it makes my head lull. i so love!!! that observation of laura's thighs clamping down on sheena's head as she gobbles her cunt as the orgasm approaches. again the little details others never show and thus they miss the pure heat you show. you now so perfectly show the end game ["Unnnhh . . . ummmmhhhh!" she groaned, sucking Sara's nipple hard and thrusting her quivering pelvis into the air, feeling Sheena's thick, sensual lips on her clit, feeling her whole straining body flare with sexual fire. For some reason, sucking Sara's nipple always made her come. At some barely predictable instant, her mouth engorged with the woman's incredible plump silky nipple, the floodgates would open, and she would be coming in a scalding, wrenching paroxysm. It was no different this time. No sooner had she sucked Sara's nipple deep into her mouth than the rockets began to go off deep in her womb, bursting so violently that she was forced to open her mouth and let the delectable wet bulb escape. "Auunngghhhh!" she roared, her body flexing and straining into a bow, then collapsing back to the mattress in sharp convulsions. "Ohhnnnngggg! Auunngghhhh!"] i so love humping my cunt hard like laura here when my orgasm hits. i want to feel you mouth pressing hard into my cunt as you suck my fuck hole and clit. i so love that straining of my twat into your mouth and humping hard as my cunt spasms and rents itself soaking your face in my cunt juice. other authors only say their woman come hard with a scream and spasm while you show your women's body straining and convulsing and simply wringing all strength from their bodies as their cunts use that strength to take their woman to heaven. // i so love how you show sheena not releasing laura's throbbing clit until she senses laura can't take anymore. again, you show that reading of a woman's body that great lovers do to give her woman the absolute maximum pleasure possible. only you show this so clearly and lovingly and i worship your writings because of it. i'm smiling great big as now sara is recharged and attacks sheena's body while laura is incapacitated with lassitude. i am so happy that laura can now watch with only a passing ghost of jealousy as she watches sara fuck another woman with her only watching. i hope that laura can fully accept this and accept fully the love and sex sara and sheena is offering. // sigh, i so love the tenderness and humor you show yet again as the story winds down ["May I join you?" she whispered to Sara, sidling closer. Sara looked up and gave Laura the most shocking, crazy-funny, cross-eyed smile she had given her in months. "Duh, cuckoo brain," she breathed, turned again to nearly swallow one of Sheena's hard, black, shiny wet nipples. "Why do you think I got you over here?" Laura smiled back. "Mmmmm, I guess this was it."] this lack in other stories has really become glaring since i discovered your writings. love how you show them getting sheena to writhing in a minute and with a few more minutes of intense fucking has her cunt simply exploding with scalding spasms of the purest fucking bliss possible. i so love making my woman's cunt explode like this as she jackknifes and flops all over the bed with limbs jerking and hitching and her belly bellowing or vibrating like jello. i so love each orgasm because they are so unique. really love the picture of sara and laura licking sheena's cunt juices off their lips and fingers. i love licking all the cunt juice possible. my mother always told me to waste not. // sigh, i love reading ot them lounging around for a hour love cooing and resting and then fucking heatedly one more time. i so love resting and then fucking again once flesh is renewed with vigor. i want as many orgasms for all as possible and want to swallow as much pussy and ass juice as possible. i want everything i can get. i am happy that laura has made peace with her new dynamic with sara and now sheena. happy that this divine interlude with sara and sheena has helped laura with her blues over makeeda. i find a good fuck always makes me feel so much better and more able to meet life's challenges. top
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// i like how the chapter starts with laura still basking with the sweet afterglow of the heated fucking she shared with sara and sheena. i so love basking in the memories of my last great fuck. i want to relive it all in my mind and in my pussy as it quivers and jumps in remember ecstacy. i love masturbating to recent fucks. unfortunately, laura is still pining over makeeda singing in japan and the unsettled nature of their current relationship. i would be unsettled to with makeeda distant and cold nature. i would be out getting all the pussy i could to help settle my nerves. when under stress i need lots of loving to help soothe my physic and soul. it seems maybe the fates are deciding to help laura with her problem. laura goes to a wedding of someone at work and meets a beautiful black girl. i love how laura zeros in on a potential bedmate. i am always looking and hoping for my next new fuck. i love how laura zeroes on this new angel and her considerable charms [this girl, though not conventionally pretty, was to Laura perfectly stunning in her lemon yellow, scoop-necked bridesmaid's dress, so dark and lovely, with a perfect smooth chest and perfect bone structure, as well as an infectious, easily-summoned smile accentuating her even white teeth.] i so know how to focus on the positive in a woman and start figuring out how to get in her in one of our beds. doesn't always work but a girl can dream can't she. // laura sees her opportunity and gets behind this angel in a conga dance line and laura starts getting to know the girl. i love how laura works to get to know this girl. you must get her attention before you can begin the sedcution. we find that jamilah is is a little tipsy and looking for a friend. jamilah is picking up that she is totally out of place here as the only black person and that other people while polite are only that. i so hate that subtle racism. i just wish everyone would see the person and revel in what makes us different. i am happy that you make this subtle comment. here is a beautiful woman that everyone should be trying to seduce and fuck wonderfully and they are totally ignoring and missing this wonderful angel. laura will never miss an angel and the opportunity to sleep with her. i so love the slut in laura that hungers for pussy and goes for it. i need as much cunt meat as i can get and i'm always seeking and looking for great new fucks and fucking all my current angels as much as possible. // laura starts the gambit by mentioning she needs to a nap before she drives considering her slight drunken state. i love how she puts out the idea of a bed and sees how jamilah will respond. yes!!!!! jamilah feels the same way. she is feeling a little wosey herself and is tired of the rejection and being the nice person she is invites laura to crash with her. i have worked similiar situations after parties, clubs or conferences and i see a woman who obviously needs someone to talk to and a friend and get to know them and then work to keep the friendship going at a more intimate place. some of them i have gotten in my bed afterwards when i sensed they could be seduced. i can just feel laura's elation as she sees the fates coming into alignment. laura shows her geniune liking for the girl and rapt attention and jamilah really wants to spend time with this woman who obviously likes her and is paying rapt attention to her. this alone will start to seduce many a woman. // they go to a hotel room the wedding party has thoughtfully provided all the traveling guests and they get to jamilah room. there laura is feeling bold but decides to hold back a little. jamilah seems like a novice and will take some seduction. laura lies back on a bed and makes a witty comment and jamilah tells her to sleep the night and laura is drunk enough to fall quickly asleep. when she awakens a little while later she sees jamilah in the other bed watching tv. laura does what i would do in this situation [Obviously she doesn't know what a slut is dozing on the other bed here next to her, Laura reflected, feeling her drowsy, half-befuddled mind begin to clear. And how I want to run my hands all over her nakedness. She is so lovely like this, not knowing I'm watching her. Admiring her. Wanting her.] i so love to gaze on the beauty of women all the time. the female form is just so perfect. the angles and swells of the female body. // jamilah senses she is being watched and looks over at laura. jamilah tells laura she has been asleep an hour and mentions she snores. i am smiling because laura does exactly what i would do. one would have to make her take it back and wrestle and pinch her to make her see the error of her ways. i know this would let me get my hands on her and see how her body language reacts. a woman who doesn't want a woman touching her is very obvious. you can feel the tension and coldness. instead of that frigid bitch state laura finds that jamilah is playful and laughs as laura pinches her arm a little. love the taunts that laura issues of jamilah taking it back which kind of ups the bar when you get her to say "or what". i love the ogooling [She scooted back a little from Laura on the bedspread, and her young breasts swayed under the cloth of her nightie. Laura could see the large dark circles of her nipples through the thin white cloth, even though it was sprinkled with the bluebell pattern. Jamilah had large, deeply black nipples.] i know my pussy would be jumping and juicing by now. maybe, just maybe, i will be dining on this woman's pussy in the very near future. i can feel my heart rate accelarte and palms start getting that sweaty feel as i feel the dance of love beginning. // sigh, i so love your seduction. now laura caresses jamilah's shoulder instead of pinching it and they both can feel the moment change. the moment of truth as arrived. will she freeze up or will she let you continue. i can feel my pulse beating in my throat as i take it to the time when she knows my true desires. jamilah makes the almost steroytipical ["Better be careful or someone'll think you're a lesbian," she said, with a half-grin. Without missing a beat, Laura said boldly, though softly, "I am a lesbian. Does that bother you?"] now we will know. yessss!!!! she doesn't freak and is not a religous right wing nut and has no problem with a gay person and is maybe even a little flattered that a lesbian would find her attractive. i love it when i tell them i want them and i can almost see the wheels turning. i have used this argument or something similiar many times over the years [Jamilah shrugged and giggled softly, nervously. "Do you think that would make me a lesbian? If I let you?" Laura shook her head. "No, I don't think so. But if you'd rather not . . ." Jamilah seemed to ponder it. "What if I like it?" Now it was Laura's turn to shrug. "Nobody will know but us. I can keep a secret. Can you?"] a lot of boyfriends and husbands would shit if they knew how many of their mates were getting pussy on the side. many women like having this secret and i'm always hoping to make you a bi or lesbian slut but i keep to that to myself to begin with. // i love getting my woman to that cat-eyed state where you know that you are flooding their body with sensuality and lust. It is now time to bring them home to your bed. i like the observation by laura that though jamilah is not classically beautiful she is [But at this moment, yielding to Laura, solemn with sexual promise and wonder, she was almost exquisitely lovely, luminous with the sense of mystery that pervaded the room, the mystery of new sexual adventure, and at the same time soft and glowing with easy sensuality and warmth for Laura.] i just melt for my woman at this time. i find you so beautiful with our mutual love that i soon find you be a total fox and so lovely to gaze upon. i am smiling as jamilah gets that little girl voice when laura compliments her beautiful skin. you know you are ensaring her heart when you hear and see this and you know now that you will dining soon on her hard humping cunt until it explodes in your mouth and you are swallowing her hot bolts of steamy girl cum. i love how only you show and detail those moments of a woman crossing each line on her way to seduction. other authors simply don't give us this loving details that make a seduction so magical and worthy of much masturbatory times in the future. // other authors always just have their women kiss right away mouth-to-mouth kissing. of course this is great, but so often lovers start with other parts of their woman's body and kiss and stroke it and work like laura here and only then devour her mouth. this foreplay just makes them so much more willing to feel your tongue conquering their mouth. i am drooling as laura starts at jamilah's shoulders, then works up her neck and finally seduces her ear with her warm breath and tongue. i am smiling great big when laura now asks jamilah if she can kiss her mouth and jamilah plays the game of saying she only thought she was going to kiss her shoulder. i love it because she has already allowed laura to consume her neck and ear. they both know that she is laura's. laura continues the sedcution nad further insnares jamilah's heart with true heartfelt compliments on her beauty. how sad that she is so lapping up the compliments. once agian it so clear that men are pigs and have not be telling this wonderful angel just how beautiful she is and lucky to be able to make love to her. i would simply tell her as many ways i can think of how beautiful she is. i want to compliment you as i devour your body. i feel so furtunate for every woman i have fucked over my life. // i like how you show how humor can pop up anywhere when laura gives jamilah the out that they can stop if she likes it too much and she replies [Jamilah made a funny face. "That sounds so weird. Like, if it feels too good we stop. Seems like if it feels too good, we should do more of it." Laura felt her own eyelids lowering, she was so overcome by sexual desire for this sweet girl. "Maybe we should just go with the flow, as they say."] you need to alwasys let your woman feel like she can back out if she wants. when you apply to much pressure is when they might rebel. i find slow and easy will quickly break her defenses down. get her to helping you in the seduction. like how laura just moves and starts kissing jamilah. one has to know when it is time to move things forward. jamilah has already told us she is ready for love and fucking and now you must let her body be overwhelmed with the plesaure that only a woman can give another woman. i love how laura takes her time with gentle moving of her lips and slowly bringing their mouths thighter as she slowly increases her caresses with her lips and tongue on lips. of course jamilah responds with that slow paring of lips that allows your tongue to slowly invade and conquer. i so love slithering my tongue through that narrow opening and starting to caresses her inner lips, gums and tongue. i love it when i get that hitch in her breath and shuddering and i can feel her tongue coming alive and quickly starting to twine with mine and starting the dance of tongue love. // of course i love the fingers caressesing face and shoulders as both women heat up. i love caressing your face and body as i start to clutch your body to mine. feeling our body heat start to build. have to smile knowingly as laura compliments jamilah on her kissing skills. any woman will melt a little with such compliments. like how you tell the next part [This time, as often happened with the second kiss, they were both more uninhibited. Laura kissed her hungrily. Jamilah responded by opening her mouth wider, and even thrusting her tongue into Laura's. Laura pushed her gently down onto her back on the bed. She kissed her neck now and sucked it too, then moved her lips over to Jamilah's other shoulder. Jamilah was panting softly and even mewling softly in a faraway voice.] i so love feeling the slut coming out. feeling her tongue hotly invading my mouth and dueling and twining with my tongue after exploring my mouth deeply. just makes me mewl with hot love. i so love to latch onto that tongue and give it some head as i suck that invader hard and hot while i bob my head on it a litle. i can feel their body rise in fucking pleasure as they start making those animalistic fuck sounds of a woman in heat. // i love that moment of taking it to the next level and she is totally accepting now. laura runs her hand underneath jamilah's nightgown and cups jamilah's breast and she is so accepting. the slut has won and sweet love is here. laura starts to pump that tit and suggests jamilah get naked and love how you show sweet love [Jamilah's eyes looked drowsy and swirly and very sexually aroused. She was no longer offering any resistance. "Aren't you going to take yours off too?" she asked, in an almost childish voice, letting her fingers trail across the sleeve of Laura's dress. "Yes . . . I am," Laura smiled, immediately beginning to unzip and pull off her clothes. "Why don't we just get naked and get under the covers?" Jamilah, an amused smile crossing her lips, watched Laura undress. "I think I'd rather just lie here on top of the covers. I'm kind of . . . liking this, you know."] i love it when my woman starts loving it when she is a newbie. i guess this is why everyone loves the game of seducing a woman new to lesbian loving. getting them to see the truth and rocking their world. i love my lesbian, bi and converted lovers but newbies have a specialness all their own. // they both strip down and laura tells her the truth when jamilah asks if she has made love to other black women [Laura dropped her hair and turned back to face her, discarding her limp bra at the same time. "A few," she breathed, eyelids heavy, her hands coming up again to Jamilah's nightgown and lifting it from the hem upward. "None as gorgeous as you, though." This was technically true since no woman was ever as gorgeous to Laura as the one she was currently making love to. And Jamilah was at this moment devastatingly lovely, soft and sexy and yielding, her young lean body amazingly black and smooth and velvety under Laura's fingertips.] no woman is more beautiful to me at the time than the woman(s) i am currently fucking. i give you my all when you are in my bed. laura proves her love by [She cradled them in her palms while kissing Jamilah again, an aching slow kiss, full of sensual tongue and emotion. While she kissed her, she rubbed her thumbs slowly back and forth across Jamilah's large black nipples, feeling the softer skin of her wide areolas tighten and the thick nubs in the centers grow harder. Finally, she dropped her mouth to one and sucked Jamilah's nipple into her mouth.] i so love feeling your nipples stiffen and lengthening as i play with them and drawing your tit into my hot loving mouth and start sucking and tongue lathing. i love feeling your body arching into me and your breath quickening as i get your tit all swelled with hot blood and passion. // i like doing this also [Without releasing Jamilah's nipple from her lips, Laura raised her eyes. Jamilah's face was twisted in a smile of intense pleasure. Laura sucked her wet nipple hard enough to make Jamilah's mouth twist even more sharply, and her brow furrow.] i want to see your face slashed with pleasure. only you really focus on the face to show the reader the pleasure these divine women are feeling. like laura asking for permission to love her other tit and then making her gasp when she sucks the other tit hot and hard. i love making my sluts grunt and writhe like the whores they are in my bed. love the communication you always show. women are so good at telling their lover how good she is making her feel. of course laura is the master communicator ["You have such beautiful big nipples," Laura panted, now sucking and licking them more passionately, pinching one damp one in her thumb and forefinger while she sucked the other, going back and forth between Jamilah's lovely breasts rapidly.] i find words with ones actions is such a potent combination. now you show again how you revisit areas. other writers never revisit an area once they leave it. laura knows to go up and give jamilah some hot schorching kisses while devouring her tits. it is this consuming her whole body that makes a woman melt in your bed. you show masterful lovemaking. by now jamilah is kissing back with hot fuck hunger for laura. hopefully, laura has perminately awakened her true lesbian self and it will now be on the prowl for all the pussy she can get. // i so love reading hot sexy talk ["Mmmm, all wet with sweet fuck juice for me to lick?" she murmured to the panting girl.] i love talking it and hearing it. it makes me so wet like jamilah here. sedcution should always involve the physical and the verbal. makes your woman's cunt a soaked mess waiting to be devoured. i have always loved how you show the reader what laura is doing as she slides south for some heavenly gash. how she loves the woman from her mouth and neck all the way down her body. you detail how laura kisses, strokes and kneads jamilah's torso , ribs and pelvis before she settles between jamilah's spreading thighs. other authors only show the kissing, breast play and then jump straight to the twat. they always just skip loving a woman's torso, belly and pelvis. i so love loving these areas making my women love whine and pant while their belly is heaving and torso is jumping to my caresses and kisses. sucking your belly flesh into my mouth and giving little love hickies. and of course one must always love her belly button with much sucking and tonguing. i have made women just spasm with this. // i am smiling great big as laura makes jamilah "oh", whine and mewl when she starts to play with her cunt lips. i love how laura so works her woman's body so that by the time she starts to play with her angel's kitty they are nearly driven up the wall. i like how laura quickly tries to learn a new angel's body and how it reacts. she quickly discovers that jamilah has a very sensitive body and reacts fully and strongely to your touch. i love easy comers but women with a longer fuze is nice too. you can love her body for long, long minutes without fear of her coming unitl your ready. no problem. one just adapts because in the end i'm going to give you as many orgasms as i can before your flesh and cunt are too exhausted to come anymore. love the belly button loving. love nubby belly buttons you can tongue, teeth and suck so fucking hard. what i really love is your divine descriptions of jamilah's oh so wet cunt [Oh my god, I don't want this ever to end, Laura thought. What a beautiful pussy! Jamilah's blossoming cunt was too perfect for belief, beautifully shaped, sexily puckered and wet and dark pink inside, and when Laura pulled the labia open even further with her fingers, she exposed a large wet expanse of raw flesh, larger than normal it seemed, a hot glistening wet patch of cunt meat that she suddenly felt a fierce urge to press her own flooding pussy against. I can't let her come until I've felt this, she thought, suddenly twisting her own body so that she could bring their crotches together.] i just fall in love with a divine cunt like this and just bury my face in it and devour for all i'm worth. sometimes i will just get her all wet and runny and rub my face all in her cunt. running my face from hair to chin in your hot wet cunt. smearing your essence all over my face. so many of my sluts love when i do this and i will let the temperature lower a little as i scoot up and let them lick my face clean and bury their tongue down my throat to taste themselves on my face and in mouth before i head south again. // with the above i love how you show the change of plans. only you show how you get a sudden idea in your head and you completely change what you had planned to do. this happens so often in lovemaking and only you show this flexiblity of lovemaking. i have never ever seen this in another writings. i have often woundered why over the years. love the observation of how plaint jamilah has become. i love reducing a woman into my compliant slut for the night. they know they can totally trust me to take them to heaven over and over again. i have always adored your moments of first contact [Laura felt her own body sag momentarily in the wild flux of emotion and sharp physical pleasure that flooded her flesh as she felt Jamilah's hot pussy sliding against hers. "Unhhh! Oh god . . .yes!" she too gasped, her head falling back, her body limp with sexual bliss but then quickly filling again with fierce sexual urgency.] i just melt when my cunt tribs another cunt and i feel our sopping wet heat squishing and mashing together in hot love. i so love feeling the juices soaking our thighs and pelvises and the sounds of sodden cunts being ground hard together. i so love the sounds of sodden cunts being fucked and plowed. // i so love seeing jamilah in a "groggy sexual trance" as she swirls her cunt into laura's. i have fucked like this for half an hour at times. just lying back and swirling our cunts gently in relaxed heavenly fucking of gentle pleasure. love how laura leans up and ups the heat with [Patiently, she gyrated her pussy slowly into Jamilah's, feeling their slippery, sensitive wet pussy flesh glide together, watching Jamilah's facial contortions, and her lovely young breasts and deeply black nipples sway and swirl as her body moved in response to Laura's gentle thrusts. Laura could still fuck her while leaning forward, and so she got her hands on them both, content just to squeeze them and watch the pleasure make Jamilah grimace.] i always love the show of a woman's breast moving on her chest. love grabbing tits like this when plowing my cock into her cunt or asshole and just love mauling them. so many want me to just love pump hard, squeezing hard and pumping in time with my deep spearing thrusts. sometimes scissoring and pulling her nipples hard to make her scream and ram her pelvis back into my ramming thrusts as i slam fuck them. so love watching those grimaces of pure fucking pleasure as their tits just radiate and spike their cunts and brains with pure fucking pleasure. // now you show how the flow of lovemaking just keeps flowing as laura is finished with tribbing and disengages from jamilah and swarms her body just comsuming her. i know that time of just love attacking whatever comes in range of my mouth and fingers. you just don't know what you will consume next. finally laura has taken jamilah to that fever pitch we all want to put our woman in and moves in for the love kill [She groaned as Laura's mouth finally found her beautiful pussy. And Laura was not gentle. The time for gentleness had passed, and both were tense and frantic for release. Laura tongued and sucked and fingered Jamilah's beautiful black-lipped pussy in a kind of frenzy she knew the girl had never experienced before, sucking her clit, sucking the entire little hood that covered it too, sucking the whole upper portion of Jamilah's flowing pussy into her mouth and lashing Jamilah's swollen clit with her tongue. Go ahead, honey, you can come now! she thought, wildly sucking Jamilah's flooding cunt, and squeezing Jamilah's delicious hard little ass cheeks with her hands.] i so love taking a pussy hard like this and just making it explode with hard humping spasms into my starving mouth. i so love sucking your whole clit and hood into my mouth and giving deep throat love sucks as my tongue lashes and bats your clit with hard head pulls. i so love the detail of getting your hands under her humping buns and grabbing hold and helping to love pump her cunt into your mouth. i so love rumps i can palm and squeeze in time with her humps as i help left her pelvis off the bed to hump my mouth hard. last night i was doing this to joann. with her nice petite frame i can so palm and control her ass checks as i squeezed and dug my fingers in each time i squeezed and pulled her ass up and her cunt hard into my mouth sucking her clit down my throat. it was divine having to half roll to keep my grip and continue squeezing and humping as she jackknifed and flipped around our bed screaming and gushing all over my face and down my starving throat. // joann came like this ["Annnggghhhaaauunnnggghhh!" she cried out, so loudly that Laura suddenly remembered, in the midst of this sharp climax, that they were in a hotel room, where passersby in the hall would hear their sexual cries. "Ohhnnnggghhhh!" Jamilah groaned loudly again, her body flipping and surging off the mattress as shock after orgasmic shock ripped through her silky flesh. "Ohhnnggg . . . oh god . . . oh shit!"] only you capture the truly harrowing orgasm that simply destoryes one's soul with pure fucking pleasure. i can just see jamilah's body spasming all across the bed dying from pure pleasure from her rupturing cunt. i think you are the only author to really capture the jackknifing that makes a woman's body spasm so hard around the bed. only you tell of the pelvis leaping up and limbs thrashing or how a body just surges and twists left and right in helpless bliss. you wo well capture the physical aspects of coming super hard that i so love reading. i so love all the hot bolts or streaming cunt jucie i am rewarded each time i feel that cunt spasming a fresh batch of come for me to swallow and feel all over my face. i so love laura cooing to jamilah to keep coming. these verbal ques can give an extra spasm or two of pure bliss and then additional aftershocks. i love watching with laura as jamilah slowly comes down as you watch her body hitch and twitch and her face getting those sharp grimaces of that divine aftershock pleasure that makes ones legs and arms just thrash out in that sudden one flex spasm of pure pleasure of a melting womb. // now you give me what i almost have never read elsewhere [In a smooth, fluid motion, she lifted herself up and straddled Jamilah's waist, reaching down to her crotch with one hand at the same time and spreading her cunt lips again with two fingers, then pressing all of her wet inner pussy meat into Jamilah's hard abdominals. "Oh godddddd, that feels good!" she sighed, rubbing her pussy back and forth on the silky, ripply heaven of Jamilah's stomach muscles.] i so love mounting a belly with some muscles and just sweeping and grinding soaking your belly with my juices as i ride my cunt down hard into your stomach feeling your muscles rippling my cunt flesh and mashing my clit hard as i pump down hard. i love how you show jamilah immediatley understanding this new to her fuck and starts to hump up and holding onto laura's thighs for leverage to hump up. women so quickly read on how to give their women total pleasure. sigh, what a divine detail ["Unh! Unh! Unh! Oh god! Unhhhhh!" Laura grunted, tossing her head back, then leaning forward in the sweet delirium that preceded her climax, reaching down to clutch both of Jamilah's luscious little breasts in her hands, now jabbing and bucking maniacally into the girl's hard flesh.] i love how you show laura's body just bucking with abandon to grind her cunt down hard for maximum pleasure. i have done this too using my woman's tits as an anchor as i love crush them as i pulp them in time to my thrusts. i love giving pleasrure while receiving pleasure. // i live to experince this [It only took about thirty seconds of this for her to explode in one of the most wrenching, rupturing orgasms she had had in weeks. It seemed to rip up through her body from the exact spot where her greasy cunt meat was welded to Jamilah's now-slippery stomach, shaking her and making her muscles stiffen and relax in a sharp rhythm of shocking pleasure. She fell forward helplessly so that her breasts temporarily mashed into Jamilah's face, then let forth a loud cry as Jamilah's lips found one of her throbbing nipples and sucked hard, bringing another fierce jolt of orgasmic rapture to her aching pussy.] i have so often collapsed like this when on top. i simply exhuast my body in hard fucking as i start screaming and jackknifing in pure pleasure. beautiful detail of jamilah giving all she can and sucking that nipple mashed in her face. i love sucking nipples and tit flesh into my mouth when i have it mashed into my face like this. i can just feel my womb explode again deep in my belly when i get a sudden nipple suck like this. your womb is shattered and suddenly this pure pleasure bolt makes the sharttered pieces shatter even more making your mind white out with pure ecstacy. when a woman collapses on me like this i will pull tight and suck what i can reach as my hands stroke and press down into me. // sigh, i love their post coital time of gentle kisses and caresses as they bask in new love. i am smiling as jamilah is surprised when laura talks of making love again after a short rest. having only fucked men jamilah is surprised that more intense pleasure is only a short time away. just another advantage of fucking women. we can fuck so much longer and better than only the best of men. our bodies were made for long fucking and mulitple orgasms over a night of intense fuckng. after a little cigartte back for jamilah starts the next round of fucking [Laura pulled her back down on the bed and kissed her joyously, hugging her hard, pushing their naked bodies together fervently. "I can't keep my hands off you, you sexy thing," she breathed, again sucking Jamilah's lovely black neck and shoulders, squeezing her breasts, dropping her lips to them.] i so love pulling your body to me and twining arms and legs like this as we once more thrusts tongues down each other's throats before starting to consume each other's bodies again in hot love. exploring again a body you have just discovered. feeling our sweat slicked bodies squirming and getting those sudden lurches as bodies slide quickly on wet flesh before clutching hands and digging fingers mate bodies tight in twined humping love as cunts and pelvises pump against anything they can press. // i love how jamilah has discovered how women know how to suck titties nice and hard making them feel like [Jamilah smiled and shook her head. "Shit, I love it. Makes my titties feel like they're gonna explode."] now we get something else that only you show. laura has loved the front of jamilah basically and now it is time to make love to jamilah's wonderful back and some booty naturally. hehehe. you are the only auhtor that i have ever read that shows loving all her women. i want to love all of you and a woman's back is full of little ergenous zones that make her cunt sopping wet and makes her asshole clench and spasm. oh yeah, i love how you start the festivites [She maneuvered Jamilah onto her stomach and began to rub her back, giving her the expert Laura massage that soon involved kissing and rubbing her own naked breasts against Jamilah's beautiful warm flesh. "Ohhhhh Laura . . . that feels so wonderful," Jamilah purred drowsily. "You're fingers are magic. If you keep it up, I might fall asleep."] i so love starting at your hair line and working down to your rump. i love how jamilah is right now swooning drowsily in love but soon i will have your writhing and begging for me finish you off. hopefully, with my fingers and then my tongue pistsoning up your clenching asshole. // i love the long journey to jamilah's ass and how laura spends long minutes kneading and kissing it making jamilah coo with happiness. i love hearing a woman compliment her own body and love reading jamilah admiting her booty is to die for. i really love experiencing this when loving your body [Jamilah enjoyed it for a few minutes, and Laura knew precisely how to make her enjoy it. She was enjoying it immensely herself. And the thick musky odor of Jamilah's reawakened pussy was beginning to drift up to her nostrils, letting her know that more sweet fucking was only minutes away.] smelling your cunt and knowing that sweet loving is only moments away. i so love the smell of a hot wet cunt filling our love nest. i have to smile at jamilah's comments about guys wanting to fuck her up her tight asshole. a beautiful ass is simply made to be fucked and i can't blame the guys for whinning for it. i have to snicker when jamilah shows her ignorance and claims that anal sex is only painful and she won't allow it to happen. i love how laura starts to seduce her to anal sex with letting her know that if done right by a woman or a guy with actual skill she will simply die from going to heaven from having her asshole ripping itself apart with with pure heavenly anal orgasms that make you scream in ecstasy and makes your body jackknife or pelvies vibrate like jello in pure heavenly bliss. i like her telling jamilah that she knows a black woman who finds anal sex to be "rad". you might not get her asshole the first night or next times but with patience and love i find i can usually have them soon on their knees and face pressed in the bed and both hands pulling their ass cheeks apart cooing and begging for me to slip my big cock into their tight sphincter and sliding up their spasming rectum. // laura realizes that jamilah will need a few loving tyrsts to wear down her silly resistence and knows how to get past this stage and back to loving [Laura did not reply but spent the next several minutes slowly fucking Jamilah's increasingly wet and tight little pussy with two fingers while continuing to kiss, suck, and gently bite her lovely round buns. Jamilah twisted and whinnied softly, her smooth buttocks clenching each time Laura gingerly sank her teeth into the firm dark flesh.] i so love pumping a tight wet pussy while i love her rump. i so love getting my fingers all soaked in love juice and feel it running and dripping off my hand. laura is a lot like me i see ["Oh, I'm even worse than you think," Laura smiled, parting Jamilah's hard ass cheeks with the fingers of one hand enough for her to wriggle her tongue down to Jamilah's pretty little dark rosebud.] i know to see what the limits are. so very often no is really just convince me. what is wrong wiht jamilah!! she obviously loved having her rose bud rimmed and yet she is not ready to give her asshole to laura. oh well. laura promises to not try and seduce her asshole anymore. i know to back off and get you later. her body told me she liked it and her reactions are more like this is not right because man's world has brainwashed her. she is flirting in her refusal. when i see this i so know that soon i will have what i want. // i love seeing a new lesbian slut letting go [Jamilah melted. She came into Laura's outstretched arms eagerly, letting herself be kissed, then kissed more heatedly. Laura's hands were all over her breasts, then the rest of her body. Jamilah's eyes glazed over, and her breath came fast.] i so love this clutching love and passion. i really love how how you show jamilah asking for some more trib action. women just instinctively setup an atmosphere that makes us free to ask for what we desire. the other may demure or back off but you don't feel like your asking for to much or being intrusive. you know that your woman wants to please you and everything is up to negiotation. i so love how you always take your time in your loving ["Mmmmm," Laura grinned up at her, holding one wet black bulb lightly between her teeth, "something to remember me by tomorrow." Jamilah held Laura's head in both hands and pushed her breast into Laura's mouth. "Don't think I'm ever going to forget this." Laura sucked and Jamilah whimpered happily for another minute.] i can take forever devouring your tits like this. // by the gods i love your sex. you show it all!!! you show the hot passionate fuck and now the slow sensual fuck [Laura then maneuvered her own body so that she could do a little more scissors trib with Jamilah. This time there was less urgency, less fresh wonder on Jamilah's part, and more intention to simply enjoy it and milk every last sexual sensation out of this peculiar practice. That being the case, Laura was determined to help her enjoy it totally. This time they began slowly, and Jamilah was a full participant, her eyes pulsing as they held Laura's, her hips undulating rhythmically in a smoldering fuck motion. Laura turned onto her side so that she could mash her wet cunt even better into Jamilah's, and held Jamilah's long leg close to her body, stroking Jamilah's smooth black calf and kissing her shin, feeling the slow, sensual shivers pass through Jamilah's lovely young body as the sexual fever began to rise.] i so love watching a newbie getting in tune with her bodies natural desires and going for the brass ring like here. i know i have spent long minutes in this kind of sensual scissor fuck. just genlty grinding and sweeping our soaked cunts in love. we leave such big wet spots as our pelvies and thighs get all slavered in hot love juice. i really love the detail of getting on your side to jam your cunt tight to hers and using that leg as an anchor to pump your love into your woman's hot thrusting cunt. i can feel my eyes fluttering here as i remember these sensual fucks of blissful fucking. i love how it will kind of flow from on our backs to side to side as we take turns leading and following and getting in perfect synch. getting quiet and listening to our sodden cunts squinching and slurping against each other and then letting our love coos once more fill the room. // of course sooner or later it is time to ramp things up [Laura loved it but could not stay in this position too long. She knew she might never have more than this one night with the delicious Jamilah and could not resist the urge to consume the girl completely. In only seconds they were whimpering and grinding energetically, their pelvises undulating in unison, their wet cunt lips and sopping crotch hairs sliding and crunching together, their pulses racing wildly. Jamilah especially seemed to let her true voracious lusts out this time, pumping back vigorously into each of Laura's swirling thrusts, groaning and mewling and letting her hands race over every part of Laura's body that she could reach.] i love sensual but it is the ramping and passion that truly makes sex so fucking divine. i really like how you detail their cunt lips and crotch hairs grinding in hard love. // one thing i have always adored about your writings is how you show the flow of lovemaking. other authors only show the positon the women start in. they never allow their women to move and change positons to add that variation to fucking that moves sex into the realms of the gods. first laura moves up and over and starts to kiss nad suck jamilah's neck while mashing her tits. this makes my women simply whine like the sluts they are as they writh underneath me in need. after this laura goes for the love kill [Laura could feel every little dip and rise, every little wavelet and surprising undulation in Jamilah's fresh sexual response, every slightest indication that she was either closer or not yet close enough to an ultimate meltdown. Jamilah twisted and coiled under her, finally lying back and gazing up at Laura as Laura herself rose to a perpendicular angle over her and began to slowly grind-fuck Jamilah's pussy in deliberate swirling hip motions.] this is one of my favorite positions as i often put one leg on my shoulder and pump your cunt hard and tight. i love pumping your pelvis down hard into the bed or floor spiking your cunt to mine. i want to feel everything like laura does her. i want to make you grunt and moan and feel the juices flowing and soaking everything underneath us. // really like the observation that good ole clit sucking is the truest way to love kill your women but when you sense that a trib orgasm is possible one goes for it. i love how you show two women getting in sync and reading each other's body as only women can truly do. that perfect giving and taking that only women can truly do. laura being the teacher leads herself and jamilah to perfect nirvana [Her small, firm breasts swirled as she pumped back into Laura's grinding thrusts, the large black circles of her nipples swirling too until Laura's fingers covered them, scissoring and tweaking them as she accelerated the pace. "Unhh! Unhh!" she heard herself panting as she fucked Jamilah, squeezing the girl's lovely naked breasts with her fingers, twisting Jamilah's damp, thick nipples, her own soft grunts mingling with Jamilah's gasps and tight little whimpers. "Mnneee . . . mnneee . . ." "Oh honey . . . are you going to come?" "Mnnneee . . . oh . . . oh Laura . . . yes . . . oh yes . . ." "Oh . . . me too!"] i have always sighed with perfect happiness when you detial a woman's breast swirling on her chest during our fuck rhythms. plus, you are the only author to truly show a woman doing more than one thing at once. only you use your hands to love your women while fucking her with your cunt or mouth. i would be denying my women so much if i didn't pump their tits and scissor their nipples like laura here. only you show this and i so thank you. of course, i love the love coo words that again only you show. other authors only have their women make sounds during the acutal orgasm and never, ever allow them to actually communicate to each other while they fuck. i would shrivel up and die if sex was reduced to this. // i always love the detail of laura reaching down to open their cunt lips to get as much inner cunt meat and clit grinding together as possible. striving for as much pleasure as our bodies can produce. i have always loved all the sounds of lovemaking ["Oh . . . come with me now, honey . . . come with me now . . ." Laura panted to her, gyrating more rapidly and roughly now, hearing the end of the bed hammer sporadically against the wall as she pumped harder and harder.] give me the sounds of beds rocking, springs singing and the sounds of cushions being pushed around. i have always loved how you show the ramping of sex. other authors just can't really catch this constant ramping up of energy, passion and love like here [And Jamilah met her each step of the way, gnawing her full lower lip, her eyes on fire as she pushed her groin roughly up into each of Laura's thrusts. Their undulations became sharper, more desperate. "Unnhhh . . . unhhhh!" Jamilah grunted softly. "Auungghh!" Laura groaned. "Oh yes! Oh yes, honey!" "Mnnnggeee! Oh!"] one thing you show so clearly is how most women get more vocal and louder as the orgasm approaches. some are quieter and you have to teach to let go but it is so fucking natural to go from softer and gentler to more gutteral and louder and only you capture this. one writer shows the volumn of lovemaking the only problem is he starts with the end game volumn without showing the ramping and it seems so unnatural to me when i read it. // it is cute reading laura thinking they are going to have a perfectly timed silmuteneouly orgasm but is a little disapponted when the timing is not perfect. this has never bothered me at all. as long as we both come that is the important thing. if silmutaneous, that is great but i just want us to come like here [The orgasm that overtook Laura was unlike any she had had for weeks, a glowing, swelling, radiant ember that grew in intensity inside her womb until all her flesh was paralyzed by the agonizing pleasure. It was so intense that she had to stop moving and was only vaguely aware of Jamilah's continued gasping and thrusting as she too hurtled for the finish line. And then she felt Jamilah shudder, and heard her cry out, a more unguarded cry than before. "Ohhnnggg! Mnnggeeeeee!" Jamilah wailed, her lovely supple black body suddenly flipping and surging off the bed, still scissoring Laura's groin and pumping furiously as an overwhelming climax shook her. Somehow Jamilah's cries released Laura's own and she heard herself groaning and whinnying as the last clenching force of her own orgasm faded. "Unnnhhhh . . . ohnnnnn! Oh god . . . honey . . . here, hold me . . . let me hold you," she gasped to Jamilah, twisting her body to embrace the still shuddering girl, now sliding against her and kissing her bare round shoulder as Jamilah continued to come.] i have exhulted when one orgasm soon triggers the other like here. having a woman being shattered against me can so quickly trigger mine if i'm close. i love watching a woman striving to reach her own orgasm. all that striving and huffing and chuffing and then seeing her face freeze and then being ripped apart with those wild grimaces and cries of pure unadulteraded pleasure as her womb rips itself apart deep in her belly. i'm just smiling with all the groans and cries of ecstacy. i so love giving voice to my pleasure and hearing my women do the same. then love the beginning of your post coital time as you pull your woman close and share your aftershocks. again this is someting only you really show. other authors will have them get in each other's arms after a great fuck but again no details to make it memorable and perfect for the reader. only you give the details that makes sex wonderful. i am just thankful to find one writer who has the skills and life experiences to show this. // love how the chapter ends with jamilah being so sweetly innocently surprised and oh so happy when laura tells her the night has just begun and more intense hard fucking is soon to be had and jamilah is like a little girl in the candy store. she is so fucking ready now. it is obvious she is deeply moved by discovering the wonders of pussy and lesbian loving. i know she will be finding herself girlfriends when she gets home. laura has shown her the truth and i think jamilah has the inner sense to listen to her true lesbian self and begin a wonderful journey of self discovery. a girl can dream can't she. top
Chapter 295:
// sigh, i have to feel for laura here. she is still all torn up over makeeda not calling. i have to give credit to laura for keeping her love burning for makeeda. i would be saying fuck the bitch and she would have to come back to me on her knees. i really, really hate rejection and the bitchy 'tude. i am very happy though to see that laura is getting some loving from amber and arthell. i am really happy with arthell getting more pussy. i remember her first time she sounded like this was a one time thing. now i see her hungering for more pussy. i can just see arthell looking up over laura's humping twat and making that smoky eye contact as she clamps those beautiful thick lips on laura's swollen, throbbing clit and sucking super hard while laura is screaming and thrashing around in a crushing orgasm of searing fucking bliss. i can just see arthell's head bobbing up with those hard humps and her face all slavered in cunt cream for her to lick and swipe off and savor as it travels to her stomach. i just wish laura could bask in these divine fucks and her masturbation in pure joy instead of being conflicted. makeeda is supposed to bring joy to the woman in her life and not this pain. she is being so selfish as far as i'm concerned and i'm impressed that laura continues to hold one and still giving makeeda more chances to come to her senses. i would be so fed up by now. there is always more fish in the sea to fuck and love. // finally, makeeda calls and laura only feels pure joy at hearing her voice and is totally honest and effusive in her support and praise of makeeda and her efforts in japan. i have loved laura for being able to be so positive no matter how negative the situations can be at times. she is tougher than me. i have to admit as pissed as i am at makeeda for her actions hearing the weariness in voice would start me to thawing. i so hate hearing women who are beat down by whatever. i just want to hold and coo to them. heck, it isn't even sexual all the time. i just want to protect and nurture. then, of course, once i do get you bucked back up i would like some hot steamy pussy but that truly is secondary to helping an angel in need. i do have to smile great big as laura is so bubbly over the prospect of meeting makeeda who is coming into town and wants to meet her. i always have to smile at such positive emotions. // have to smile again as laura gets so super excited over seeing makeeda. i know that feeling of elation and butterflies seeing a lover i haven't seen in a while. i get giddy over renewing our love with super hot fucking. laura does what i like to do. she sees makeeda first and gazes upon her without makeeda knowing. i remembering reading that there are three truths. the one i see, the one you see and the real truth. i love gazing at women when they don't know i'm watching them. seeing the truth that doesn't involve me. laura feels the love i always feel with a woman i love [this impossibly elegant woman with a spectacular body, with her rich smooth dark mahogany skin, whose face was unusual, plain at first, then animated and compelling as soon as she turned those startling hazel eyes on you.] i only focus on the things i find alluring about you and soon nothing else matters. i am totally besotted with you and must love you. why focus on any of the negatives. all of us are beautiful if we only look hard enough (okay, i'm not perfect in this but i try). // i like reading of laura and her love for makeeda. makeeda may of have been acting like a bitch but i will forgive quickly if you will just let me. once i am in your presence i want to forget the past and embark upon the future and once more renew our love for each other. sure is a shame that in man's world one has to be careful as they embrace and can't show to much passion in front of others in most situations. hopefully, one day we shall overcome. sigh, i see makeeda is still being frosty dammit as laura hums the song makeeda left on her voice mail. i know when laura hums a song she is feeling deep emotions and she is truly in love with makeeda. i would cringe and seethe a little with makeeda's "tight" smile. i would be thinking "come on girl, drop this shit". aha!! finally something i can sink my logic into. makeeda confesses she really, really missed laura in japan but she thinks it best they separate. i bet she is afraid that her love for laura will interfere with her career as a singer. this i can understand. one's dreams can really give one tunnel vision. i have tried to not be guilty of this but i have seen in others. hopefully, laura can overcome this fear. lets see. // laura does what i would do. i will try and avoid conflict but if the time calls for it and i care enough i will make you prove you don't want me. makeeda shows she cares enough to confront laura and i always think that if this happens they really want to be seduced out of their silliness. it is time for battle. she calls makeeda bluff so to speak and we see what i hope and long to see. i think makeeda was hoping for capitulation and laura's resistance startles her and we see the pain she is feeling in acting like this. when i see this i know they want me and i must only find the key and unlock their heart and then overwhelm them with love and passion and then really, really fuck them senseless in our bed until she is besotted with ecstasy and love. make them love you even more than before. makeeda hardens and it is cool to watch laura considering her options. i do this too. though, i am more calculating than laura is in this situation i think. i have prized my ability to think quick, though i will admit that a few times over the years i have been overwhelmed or just not sure what the hell to do at the precise moment. then you flow and try and recover. here laura is stunned and left temporary speechless. // i see this is a good tactic because makeeda is a nice person when she listens to her heart. seeing laura like this makes her confess she is very distressed over this situation. it is humorous to read their stilted, pained conversation as makeeda tries to break up and laura is not making it easy for. yeah for laura. finally, laura vents and blasts makeeda for being so mean and dishonest to be denying their love. she starts to curse her with her given name. i like how you show sometimes you just don't know what it is that will make your woman melt for you. sometimes i have had to just grope around almost blindly and then stumble upon the key like here ["Laura . . . Laura . . . stop . . ." she laughed and cried. "I forgot . . . I forgot I told you that name." She gurgled too, like Laura, and wiped the tears off her cheeks with one hand. "I never tell anyone that name. Oh, stop it . . . please!"] like i say, it is cute to read but not so nice to experience until you can look back on it and laugh together after a night of intense soul stirring fucking that heals and binds souls once more. arguments can and do lead to some really intense lovemaking. making up is so nice and healthy. i just don't want to overdose on it. my nerves couldn't take it. // i have to smile at laura's declarations of "i hate you" and "i can't stop seeing you". i know i have gotten maudlin from time to time with my own melodrama but i do try and not breakdown like this. i have felt both admiration and loathing when i see women who feel free to show this vulnerability. i am trying to get better but i really hate to get hurt on that soul deep level. but sometimes you must venture your true essence to truly acquire something of worth. like laura here getting what she so desperately desires and needs [She gulped and was unable to go on. They were clutching each other desperately, both suddenly realized. Then they were kissing hungrily, not caring who might see them. Laura could taste her tears and Makeeda's at the same time. Their teeth banged together hard.] i guess once joann and i had a real barn burner and we finally came together like this. she and maria have taught me that being vulnerable is okay, i just don't want to go there too often. i need to be loved and pampered and not hurt by the women i truly give my heart too. // i like reading laura using a joke about makeeda's swimming to reduce the tension and let love flow as they kiss hungrily again. letting their tongues and shared spittle cement their true love for each other. dodie and i bitch a lot at each other and when we make up we simply wear each other's fuck holes completely out. makes for heated fucking let me tell you. we pluck each other's nerve but we never hurt each other on that soul deep level that truly hurts. i have a big goofy smile as they hungrily plan to meet at laura's place after work to have some intense hard fucking to ripe their wombs apart in shared love and ecstasy. i see that laura is like me in that when she gets nervous or wants the time to fly she immerses herself in her work. often i look up at the clock and suddenly see it is time to go home and i wonder where the time went to. i know that nervous twitch in laura's belly when she meets makeeda at her place of work so makeeda can follow her home. that feeling of euphoria that makes you twitch and your breath sort of exhale from your body as you think of the wonderful fucking that is soon to happen when you get back to your love nest. i so love gently stroking my nipples and twat through my clothing getting them thrumming and ready for our heated fucking to come. a few times i got carried away and nearly killed myself when i made myself come while driving. you think you can drive and have an orgasm at the same time but it is very, very hard trying to steer and see the road when your eyes are bugging out of your head and your clenching the steering wheel for dear life while your screaming your head off and suppressing jackknifes so as not to kill yourself. makes for powerful orgasms though, when you know you have to control it. makes my eyes feel like they are going to explode out my sockets. needless, to say i don't do that anymore. // i like how you show that you never really know how you love will manifest itself. they both desire to fall on each other like starving wolves once inside laura's home but decide to hold off for a little while to let their libidos heat up some more with warm juices of love percolating. it is nice seeing them declaring their adore for each other but makeeda is honest enough to tell laura that she really tried to break away from laura. makeeda wants a career and fears laura might deflect her. i think that laura is too loving and honest to do that. if laura commits to makeeda it will be all the way and not make makeeda have to choose between laura and fame. i think laura is realizing that she will have to share makeeda with the jazz world if makeeda succeeds. laura is open and loving enough to do this i think. wow, i have to love the song. i am a sap for any song that sings of pure and untainted love. i guess makeeda is expressing her feelings through her craft. i am just happy that makeeda is finally verbalizing her true feeling for laura. no more of this frosty manner please. // i really like how you show the wit of laura [Laura said, very evenly, softly, pointedly, with a broad smile: "Damn you, Cynthia Brickus, I love you too."] if you have a sense of wit one should always use it in moderation. most women melt for a woman who is funny and witty. i now like how you show those moments of just letting your feelings and lust go and not knowing exactly where your lips and hands will travel next [Now there was no way they could keep their hands off each other. Except for this afternoon in the roof garden, they had not kissed for over a month, and they tried to make up for lost time. Laura's lips were all over every part of Makeeda's exposed skin, sucking her neck, nipping her earlobes, kissing her throat, her upper chest, her collarbones. Makeeda tried to do the same, though Laura was wearing a turtleneck sweater, which exposed little.] other authors always make things seem so pre scripted. of course many times you have a very good idea of your goals but many times when you first come together you do have this wild melding of kissing, sucking, nipping and groping that only you capture. i want to feel all of you and what the same from you. i want us twining arms and legs as we pull each other tight and grip tight while mouths consume exposed flesh. // have to smile at how humor can pop anywhere. they are desperately shucking their clothes while still trying to caresses flesh at it is exposed (which i so love to do) and they both break up laughing when they realize what is the hurry. i can see that humor. they do have all night but fuck hunger will make a girl in a hurry for her tender red wet cunt meat. i so love falling on a angel taking her clothes off and finishing the job while i consume her body with feverish kisses and caresses. i need you so badly. of course i am smiling great big when makeeda confesses she masturbated most nights about laura while in japan. i have so often smirked when women tell me at first they have never masturbated. there are some but please. we were all horny teenagers once. i so love playing with my kitty, tits and asshole and my body in general. i'm not conceited but i do love my body and love making it sing with soul crushing orgasms brought on by my own hand and toys. as much as i fuck i still make sure to masturbate frequently. i have many great lovers but still, no one knows my body as well as me. i so love bringing myself off and i give many a show for my angels. watching a woman pleasure herself is so fucking hot. i love getting a woman who claimed to have never masturbated to jacking herself off before me by her own hand. it doesn't take a woman long to love masturbating for an audience i have found. // i'm happy that laura is not jealous of the ghost of makeeda's former love and i smirk at makeeda having to tell some guys what team she plays for. i find most guys are cool about it or skittish but a few really feel they are meant to show me the truth. i may get some strange with dodie and frankie if i get crazy but please. the rest i love toying with and turning their words back on them and making them confused and frustrated. it is fun watching them get flustered. they can't intimidate me because i'm taller than most of them and they see i'm buff and know how to use it. hehehe. sometimes it is like teasing little boys. to bad makeeda passed up the chance for some gash in japan. i never turn down the opportunity for pussy when it is offered. i'm always afraid my destiny might change. i believe in getting all i can all the time. i'm just happy that laura is her archangel. with a body like makeeda one should be fucking each and every night or at least masturbating a couple a times a night. // oh geez, head lulling time [Also, by now Makeeda was down to her underwear, all black, and looking devastatingly sexy. Her black bra was hanging limply from her shoulders, barely still covering her breasts. Carefully, she and Laura lay her sheath dress across the back of a chair. This movement made the bra finally slide off, down her forearms and off her wrists onto the floor. She was now naked except for her panties.] only you capture those moments of beauty being exposed to your lustful eyes. i so love how you capture these wondrous moments of body's being exposed. i know my cunt would have spasm hard and my mouth would get that drooling feeling as her tits were exposed as her bra finally slides off. thank you for these magical moments. i am there as laura grapes makeeda's divine body and starts to kiss and knead it hungrily. i get so filled with fuck hunger as your body is exposed to me and i see all that wonderful flesh to consume and love. i see makeeda is like me in that she wants everyone to get naked as soon as possible. i just love being nude and fucking exuberantly. i want all our skin pressing together. // i love that image of them embracing and mashing their tits hard against each other flattening them out as nipples dig and rub. of course i love any mention of masturbating and especially like laura using the description of her frigging off to get makeeda all hot and bothered. i love telling my angels of recent hot fucks and masturbating to get their engines revving and their juices flowing. i like your cute style of having laura say i am going to do this or that to her woman and the reader only hears the gasped and moaned pleasure of the woman receiving the pleasure. this lets the reader fill in all the hot details from their own lives to fill in. i think this helps draw the reader in. i like how your writing is so varied and stylish. i always love the detail of laura feasting on swollen nipples and warm breast flesh and making her women weak in the legs and their pussies run fuck juice down their thighs. i love seeing love juice trickling down my women's thighs and slavering their pelvis. it just makes them glisten like angels of love. // i have always adored your beautiful visual of interracial lovers [They bounced eagerly together onto the mattress and bottom sheet. Makeeda's body was dark brown and gloriously shaped against the pristine white of the fabric. Oh god, I'm going to come just from looking at you! Laura thought, absurdly but very passionately.] their is nothing more beautiful than this contrast for my money. i love them getting naked and gasping their words of hot love and then doing that full body clench i so love ["Mmmm, come here and hug me. Let me feel all of you . . . all of this incredible body against me. I dreamed of this. Hold me and fuck me and never let me go." Laura was indeed in heaven. She and Makeeda embraced head to toe and kissed and rubbed their warm bodies together for a mere eternity, each of them savoring every scintilla of emotion and physical connection. Their deep confluence was so intense at this moment that Laura feared they both might be overwhelmed by it.] i so love pulling a lover tight and feeling our flesh heating as it coils. feeling our legs twining as arms pull tight and tongues plunge deep into each other's mouth and our twats start humping and grinding each other or thigh, belly or pelvis as our cunts start that instinct rhythm of love. // i love the words of archangels declaring their love for each other. once you find a special woman to share with you should always let her know just how special you think she is. we always try to make sure we give each other plenty of praise and love words at our home. i like seeing them really showing their love for each other like this. i'm not the best but i try and let my archangels know just how much i love and need them. i have to smile at makeeda lightening the mood a little with her playfully admonishing about "fucking" and laura telling it like i feel; loving and fucking are the same when archangels are involved. the emotional adds so much to the fucking. // wow, i really like what i'm seeing now. makeeda really enjoyed laura playing with her asshole during their last fuck and know she requests that laura digitally fuck her during their sex tonight. oh yeah, i love any kind of anal sex. not all women like anal sex and while i try and educate some just can't seem to get over it like makeeda's former lover it seems. i love all of our bodies and want it all. like laura i am always testing my new lovers to see what their limits are and to see if i can get them to expand their horizons as i'm willing to expand mine. they banter about this, which again only you show. other authors either have no communication what so ever or their lovers just always fuck in perfect sync from a script. only you show real life women communicating and expressing their desires and wishes and that sometimes negotiating that lovers do figuring out what the limits are and how their lovemaking will progress. i like how makeeda thinks ["I will," Makeeda smiled. "I'll come back for more, if nothing else."] have to agree that when you tell each other just how your going to fuck your lover that it is a powerful aphrodisiac that makes the blood boil with lust as your lover then does exactly what she said she would do. // i so love your gentle humor like laura telling makeeda she can say love or fuck but laura is "I am going to eat you alive. You decide what to call it." only you show the mirth and teasing of lovers. i so love watching laura devouring makeeda's nipples and makeeda whimpering for harder and deeper. women so love to have their titties loved hard. i am swooning a little as laura announces that she is going to worship makeeda's hard body. i so love kissing, licking and nipping a woman with a toned or hard body. it is kind of rare that i just luxuriate in worshipping it. i love seeing laura's fires burning hotter as she worships this goddesses hard body [As usual, Laura lusted for the whole woman, and she now spent a luxurious eternity kissing Makeeda's incredible hard stomach, letting her lips trace every ripple and nuance of muscle, feeling the soft invisible down that covered Makeeda's richly brown skin, letting her tongue dance around the girl's odd and alluring navel, a nubby jewel of flesh nestled in its own sculptured cavity. ] i love all bodies of course but i still worship at dodie, stacy, and polly's sculpted muscles. other lovers have nice toned body but muscles have a special allure all their own. we are not like brandy but we can flex and pose and make women gasp with our muscles suddenly in relief. makes them want to be completely fucked silly by us. you are the only author to really give us the detail of feeling a woman's downy hairs and how cute and special it is to rub your cheek against it. // like how makeeda puts a pillow behind her head and watches the show. this is something i like to do. it is like a free porno movie. i just love watching laura kiss all of makeeda's wonderful muscles and as she is loving her stomach, belly button and ribs and then gets her hands underneath her butt and starts squeezing her ass cheeks. again only something you show. this has always been a big kick for me. squeezing a woman's ass as i kiss her lower body and especially when i'm devouring her cunt and clit. just squeezing and helping her hump my face as i really squeeze on the upthurst to get her twat bucking hard into my starving mouth and flailing tongue. oh yes, now it is time for back worship that you really helped me learn to focus on [She coaxed Makeeda over onto her stomach and began kissing the girl's fantastic back as well as her hard, jutting buns. Though their souls already seemed knotted together, Laura remembered that they had done this only once before, and that the magnificence of Makeeda's body was endlessly fascinating and arousing. She lavished the same sweet attention on Makeeda's dark brown, muscular back and her jutting ass that she had shown the front of her body, and soon Makeeda was moaning and twisting under her, no longer wry and relaxed but now panting and eager for Laura to turn up the heat.] i love working from the hair line down to her ass and exploring every square centimeter with my lips and tongue and impaling her asshole on my tongue and fingers if she is so inclined. i love my lovers who are really wet and turning them over and finding a big wet spot and their groins making those little spidery tendrils of love juice between them and sheets before they break as i completely turn them over. // more teasing with laura saying cynthia brickus and makeeda whining to stop it. geez, i really love your mirth and humor. i mean this as a high compliment but i so love the fact that laura is such a slut. a woman should always go for the most pleasure giving and receiving. i am so happy to see laura being willing to give the anal sex that makeeda's former lover was too squeamish to really give freely and completely. a complete giving that makes your woman melt with love for you. makeeda has requested some digital love but laura [She pulled Makeeda's firm round cheeks open with her fingers and pushed her face between them quickly, knowing that Makeeda indeed was already fiercely aroused and would welcome this happy assault. "Unnhhh . . . oh! Unhhhh!" Makeeda groaned, her amazing buttocks clenching. With her thumbs Laura pried open the tight, shriveled little aperture, then quickly wriggled her tongue into the snug, warm cavity, pushing it in as far as she could. Having felt it herself, she knew how Makeeda would react. "Ungghh! Mnnnnggeeee! Oh! Oh . . . god . . . Laura!"] i so love taking a woman's asshole with my tongue. i so love working through her tight spinchter and feeling it gripping my tongue as i start pumping my head to drive my long tongue deep up her rectum. yumm!!!! i so love reading your anal sex. only one other author really explores this sex but again he makes it bland. he just basically says that the woman starts fucking her asshole with her tongue. only you give me the details of having to pry apart a woman with fleshy buns and then burying your face deep in that hot, moist crack and smelling her essence. feeling a woman's cheeks quivering and clenching in your fingers and then on your cheeks as you dive for goodies. and no one but you ever tells of using your fingers to pry open that apeture to help get it loose so your tongue can start pumping and licking its tasty treats. and especially those squeals you so often get as your tongue first teases her rosebud and then as it slides through and massages her rectum. only you give me all the wondrous details. again all i can say is thank you for the details that make sex so supremely wonderful. // sigh, something else only you really capture is hearing and feeling your woman simply dying from the pleasure you are giving her. with your wondrous details of makeeda whooping, clenching and writhing we so clearly see her body infused with rapturous pleasure. this is what i want to see in my woman [It was a sensation Makeeda had clearly never felt before, and she quivered and moaned happily, finally becoming so aroused, jouncing and squirming around, that Laura was afraid she indeed might come after all.] i love how you show more than the actual sex act like laura digging her fingers into makeeda's ass as she pumps her tongue hard and deep. i so love gripping and kneading an ass that i am fucking. i am always happiest when i feel your body getting the instinctive fuck rhythm and i feel you humping back up into my plunging tongue. i love how your sex just flows so naturally. other authors always seem to focus on one thing while you show the flow of great sex here laura turns makeeda over and discovers [All these preliminaries had aroused Makeeda's pussy to the point where it was now swollen and puckered, the wavy black lips shiny with juice and parted to reveal the glistening wet pink flesh within. Makeeda's large clit was now pushing out from it's black hood. Everything was ready for Laura's love assault, she knew. ] i know i have done my job when my foreplay and body loving has reduced her cunt to a swollen, red, wet pit of love waiting to be devoured. // love hearing their declarations of love and laura upping the heat with a clear statement of intent ["Lie back, my darling, and let me love you and fuck you to heaven," she murmured.] always love seeing my women part their thighs for me to settle between and devour. geez, only you capture the magical moments of first contact and or penetration [The next few moments were a hot blur for both of them. Makeeda's eyes rolled up as Laura's mouth touched her swollen, flowing pussy, and a tight whimper caught in her throat just as Laura's lubricated finger slid slowly but steadily up into her rectum. "Unhhhhh! Oh!"] other authors just blandly have it happen where my clit jumped and my nipples harden and tingled a little when i read this. only you catch these moments of magic. i just sigh and judder when i feel you lips first on my pussy and i feel anything penetrating my pussy or asshole. love how you make clear this magical moment but show how this magical moment must quickly give way to more heated fucking of pussy sucking and anal probing. love how you make clear that laura is turning up the heat my moving makeeda's clit hood back and starting to love suck it. then you give us [At the same instant she began rotating her finger inside Makeeda's ass and then sliding it more quickly in and out, fucking her gently, then more roughly and insistently, then sucking her bulbous clit, filled with glorious lust and happiness as she felt and heard Makeeda go completely out of control as a result of this sharp love assault.] one other author talks of good anal sex but no details again. i sure wish he would give me the details like this. i so love feeling my angel twisting and pumping that finger up my ass making me clench and whimper and moan. // i have always loved your dialog with makeeda whimpering and groaning which only you show and laura love taunting her with making her beg. only you communicate during sex while other authors only let them scream a little during orgasm. how sad. really love the detail of watching your lover's body clenching and jumping as you get her closer to orgasm and watching makeeda's fingers get that nervous twitching and roaming as they seek more pleasure. i really love watching my woman's fingers latch onto her nipples and twisting and pulling up and making them stretch and pull taunt and seeing her back arch and body quiver as she groans hard and humps harder. i love watching a woman pleasure herself. sometimes i will take those hands and place on my scalp and she gets the message and digs in and pumps my face hard into her hard pumping cunt. i so love feeling you jerking my head hard and tight into your hard humping cunt. help me tickle your womb with my tongue. // i so love those long minutes of just devouring your woman's cunt [The two of them had lapsed into a constant rhythm, a constant pumping and gyrating motion, that Laura knew meant the end was near. The rhythm accelerated. Makeeda gasped and grunted softly, pumping harder. Her incredible body strained and arched up off the mattress. Laura sucked and tongued her fat hard clit, fucking her ass even harder with her greased finger, sliding it in deep when Makeeda's pelvis rose off the bed, skewering her with it. "Auunnrrrggghhh!" Makeeda groaned.] i love this time of tongue fucking her cunt and then languidly licking her pussy slow and deep feeling out her hidden folds and then working out and sucking and licking her outer lips and worrying her lips and stretching out if they let me. then slowly sliding up and loving her swollen clit. sucking hard or soft, tonguing fast or slow and maybe gently nibbling. of course here we get the additional thrill of a finger fucking a clenching, quivering asshole hard and fast. pulling that finger out to suck clean and worm back in. sex doesn't get any better than this. // now makeeda falls into one of her jonelle type orgasms. they are super strong like mine but she does seem to slip into some trance like state that i have never seen of just deep wondrous star journeying. dammit, i want some. but i do have that super stiffening of my body at times where i just get so fucking rigid as my heels pound the bed and my fingers try to tear the mattress a part as a million sex volts rip my womb to shreds and make my muscles try to quiver off my bones. my breath just hisses between clinched teeth as my eyes spasm in the back of my head and my cunt spasms out hot bolts of come that make me vibrate as those hot gushing bolts soak my woman's face with hot come. i so know that feeling of feeling my sphincter doing this [Laura could feel the girl's tight rectum spasming on her deeply embedded finger. Maybe she was imagining it, but she thought she could feel the rubbery little bulb of Makeeda's clit throbbing against her tongue too. "Auunngghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Makeeda groaned, a soft, constant, tortured groan, her face grimacing as wave after wave of intense coming wracked her body, which alternately stiffened, then fell back in larger undulations, then stiffened again for another shockwave. "Ohhnnnggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" she moaned.] i like how only you really describe that clit getting super hard and feeling it throb as her pulse hammers through it. other authors just say she comes without showing the reader what happens to a woman's body during her actual orgasm. then the divine groans of a woman coming hard. i so love groaning out hard and screaming loud during my orgasms. i so often scream myself momentarily hoarse during sex. generally, i do have those super powerful spasms that just rip my soul apart with pure divine pleasure. i just wish i could have the number of spasms makeeda had here and then just swooning for what must be a few minutes of intense bliss. dammit, i want this for myself. what can i say, i'm a greedy slut. // love how you show that backing off you do when you woman is coming. most women can't take a lot of clit stimulation while their orgasm is at its peak and only you show that backing off a little to not over stimulate. only you show gently holding that clit and maybe gently, gently sucking or tongue lathing and reducing any penetration you are doing. then we see why makeeda is so special. she has five or six!! major spasms and then a ton of aftershocks. that is just unfair. i want some. oh well, i'm happy for her and jonelle. i so love your post coital time [Laura carefully slid her finger out and released Makeeda's clit from her lips. She slipped up next to her, kissing her cheek, gently massaging her breasts, waiting for her to surface from this cataclysm of rapture.] i love taking you in my arms and holding you close as i love coo and kiss and stroke your body. i am smiling as makeeda tells laura that first she makes her love her and then she seals the deal with out of this world sex. i know how to capture women with this kind of sex. so many het women are missing so much. i feel so sorry for women and heck men who have only known one lousy lover. they never got the experience to develop into great loves. // now you show so clearly how the woman recovering suddenly feels her strength recovering and now needs some of her woman. laura is suddenly on her back and makeeda is now taking control which i so love for my women to do. i see that makeeda wants laura to wash her mouth out. i have to smile since we love to kiss after some annalinglus and she would be shocked with our atm action. not all my angels are into this but the ones i love the most are. i guess birds of feather flock together. i know those little moments of magic emotion as you and your archangel bond a little closer. i like how laura tells makeeda ["By the way," she purred into Makeeda's beautifully shaped bare shoulder, "I don't think it's a 'bad' place. I think it's a yummy place. Anyway, you almost came while I was doing it. I had to stop."] with my more conservative lovers i am always trying to educate them to be more open thinking. i am always so happy when i get a woman to start giving me her asshole. starting with my tongue and fingers and soon my cock and then hopefully making her a complete nasty whore as slip my cock out her ass and watch her turn around and start slurping and licking my cock before sucking it for all she is worth and down her throat if she has the talent. // i love the observation how intense fucking can marry with genuine affection and love and make the sex so stunning. women who are actually deep lovers can share like this [but Makeeda's lips, Makeeda's fingers, her smooth skin sliding across Laura's, her soft murmuring, her tongue, her breath, all of it seemed to combine to draw Laura down into a whirling hot storm of passion and intense emotion that made her barely conscious of what was happening to her body other than to feel the throbbing hunger that seemed to swell up inside her.] like how you show that loving can be slow and sensuous as makeeda makes smoky eye contact as she devours with slow focus laura's little doves. other authors just have them fuck while you show the frenzied and the slow simmering love making. i love seeing that focused loving that makes you think you're going to come just from having your tits sucked well. now you show how lovers move in lovemaking. something again only you really show ["Mmmm, making you come is my best song," Makeeda grinned. She slid a little lower on Laura's body, kissing the firm, silky sweep of Laura's abdomen and her flat belly, but then kissing her way back up again. "I want that lovely pink passion flower in my mouth . . . but first I want this," she purred. "I've been thinking of it for weeks."] other authors always have their move south and never back north. // now you have makeeda initiating some nice trib action which i so dearly love reading and sadly find so rare else where. i like it when lovers lead me like makeeda here making laura happy to have someone else initiate beside herself. makeeda knows what she is doing and soon they are [The only sound was their panting and the soft, rhythmical noises the bed made as they surged into each other. But their eyes remained locked, and flowing between them was all the intense feeling and piercing sexual need they had stored up during their time apart. It was, Laura reflected, perhaps the sweetest and most intimate way to fuck, their hot, slippery, aching cunts sliding together, their fingers fluttering across each other's legs, their sexual desperation beginning to show in their faces, in their eyes. I am going to come, Laura realized. I don't know if she is, but I am certainly going to come. Any second.] sigh, nothing is more perfect than two wet sodden cunts mashing and grinding together in wet slippery love. i can just feel that heavenly mashing and squishing of my clit as our cunts grind hard together. one thing about trib is you often can make that smoky eye contact and let your love just spark and inspire harder grinding and humping. // i have always loved how you show that ramping of sex and then going for the finish line. a great lover like makeeda senses the end game and starts mashing hard and being aggressive. i see makeeda likes what i like and gets vertical over laura and starts grinding down for all she is worth. she then decides to get down and starts grinding almost face to face to get up close and personal. i like to use the spoken word to add heat to the fucking like here ["Come, baby, go ahead . . . come home to Mama . . . come now . . . come home to Mama . . ." she panted to Laura, synchronizing the grinding of their pelvises to bring the maximum pleasure to her, to make Laura come, as Laura was only micro-seconds from doing.] i have seen women eye's just flare and suddenly they are coming wildly under me just from hearing hot loving words like this. i so love reading laura's crushing orgasm and attendant screams of rapture. i so love hearing my women screaming from the fucking i have been giving them. love how they continue to softly fuck and this produces one more nice hard spasm of coming. i so love getting that one last spasm of purest heaven. // you never cease to amaze me how you show all the variations of lovemaking. they do share a brief time of languid post coital but the heat quickly starts to return with laura almost immediately getting heated again and starts to kiss all of makeeda's upper body. she is hungry for more loving. i have to love reading makeeda telling laura how fast she makes her come and even come fast while masturbating thinking of laura. that kind of talk just makes me preen and feel so good. i love how verbal makeeda is in telling laura all this. lovers should always share like this. the spoken word just adds so much to one's lovemaking ["Mmmm, I'm going to make you come twice again," Laura murmured, suddenly aggressive again, rolling Makeeda onto her back, moving her own body half on top of her. All this talk had recharged her sexual juices, even though she had just had a thrilling set of climaxes. "Maybe three times . . . or four." Makeeda looked solemnly, deeply, into Laura's eyes. "I believe you could."] i thank you for having you women do more than just scream out at orgasm. of course i want that, especially the way you give it but only you allow your women to communicate during the lovemaking. // i love how only you capture the romantic in sex. other authors are so bland that you can't really get any feel beside their words of their shared love but they don't show it in the actual lovemaking. sex has so many flavors and they don't show any of them. one author does you the sledgehammer approach to his sex that gets me going by sheer brute force but it is always the frantic, wild lust of great animalistic sex of women on the score. you show how after their initial fucks, laura and makeeda now fall into that mode where you move at a more languid pace and with archangels you do feel that emotional connection that once more binds you tightly to your woman(s). without the other things beyond sex you can't really have an archangel. you must love and more importantly like and cherish the person. pure sex is great but that alone will not keep you bound to a woman. you show this with laura and her archangels. now makeeda and laura are letting their emotion percolate to the surface and this produces [They had pleasured each other in sequence, but now they swarmed over each other without a definite plan, simply taking deep delight in the feel of their warm smooth flesh rubbing, their mouths literally drinking each other. There was no urgency, no sharp need, but an awareness that they were flowing together as they had never done up to this moment, more intimate, more intensely connected, their bodies moving in unison, their breathing rhythmical and harmonious, their physical needs closely calibrated so that their sexual temperatures were rising in tandem to the same levels.] i love how you show that flow of just loving what comes in range of your mouth and hands. falling into that near perfect sync of intense mated fucking. // oh yeah, i have to love this next part as laura gets on her knees and straddles makeeda's tummy and spread's her cunt lips and presses her warm wet cunt on makeeda's nice hard stomach. i so love this kind of trib. all that expanse to mash and grind my soaking cunt on. i love just sweeping in a grinding motion to just below your ribs and then down to your lower belly and setting up that back and forth motion. i just love being able to grind my clit for those long inches and feeling all that friction as my cunt drags along gushing and spasming and i'm grunting and thrashing. i so often have to grip my woman's ribs or love mash her tits to stay anchored as i jam and trash and start whipping my sweaty hair around and moaning hard. dodie will grab my hands and place them on her heavy tits and i know to start love crushing and watching her face grimace with intense pleasure as she grabs my hips and slams her stomach up into my grinding sweeps. pure heavy let me tell you. now you show that communication that leads ot the variation ot divine fucking ["You like that, don't you," she purred to Laura. Laura's eyes were rolling up, and she had to fight to bring herself back, to answer. "I . . . love that," she panted. "Lean down a little," Makeeda said, running her hands over Laura's small, dangling breasts. "I want these again."] only you show the communication of lovers expressing and more important listening to each others desires. this communication must occur for great lovemaking to occur and only show it. we are not telepathic and need this communication to get our loving in sync. // i love how you tell of that rhythm that you fall into after the first orgasms take the edge off and you fall into that more sensual fuck that brings lovers closer and binds soul. you can now focus and fuck with slow intense focus like laura and makeeda now. i love reading of them falling into a trance of sweet fucking as laura sweeps her soaked cunt up and down makeeda's hard stomach as makeeda love mauls her tits. i really love having my tits sucked and squeezed while i am being fucked. i love tribbing anything but having something i can just ride makes me gag with pleasure. i love making your stomach glisten with my juices and seeing them pool and then running down the sides of her stomach. when i'm being ridden i want to feel your juices all over my lower body and dribbling off me to make a nice wet spot. i know if i was writing this i would finish this fuck because once i get going i like to finish a trib fuck but you show often your woman will take you in another direction. sometimes i will wail as my woman takes me in another direction when i really want to continue on our set course but it turns me on so much when i led by my woman by where she wants to go and leads me by her will. // one thing i have so loved about your writings is you show so much more than the main fuck. here you show makeeda crawling onto laura after throwing her on her back and mounting her to press her down into the bed and is now sucking her neck and shoulder while love mauling her tits. i can tell you that i have never really read this anywhere else. maybe a little of this from the best but never the little details that fill lesbian sex. other authors only focus on the tits, pussy and maybe ass. their is so much more to love and only you show it. then you show a little digital action which other authors with the exception of one never show. yet again your writings are so beautifully unique in your perfect pictures of mind blowing fucking. geez, we do so much of that i only wonder why they don't show more of this great fucking. but makeeda is primed and needs more direct contact [But both of them were becoming so desperate to mash their hungry flesh together than even finger fucking had to give way to their urgency, and after a few seconds Makeeda was crouching over her, then crushing Laura against her hard body in a fierce embrace, her large silky thigh between Laura's, her thigh muscle rubbing directly into Laura's wet pussy, while Laura's rubbed hers. This was the way Brandi had often fucked her, Laura remembered, sending her into shocking orgasmic seizures, and she knew beyond a doubt that it was going to happen to her again.] i love the flow of your sex. ideas and desires just flow into our minds and leads us in unplanned paths that other authors never show. with all other authors, once a mouth meets pussy or a scissor fuck starts it will be finished with an orgasm with no variation and especially with no descriptions of using your hands and lips to love other parts of her body like you always show like real life lesbians. // i have read a few other scissor fucks but only you show that face to face trib where you get your thighs or sometimes you lie on your woman and just hump and pound your cunts together. i really love fucking this way where you can look eye to eye and swallow each other tongues and or kiss faces, hair and suck necks and shoulders. this is the wonderful state laura and makeeda are now in. all that wonderful grinding and friction and sweaty bodies slapping and slipping together in wet love. fucking like this always produces these sweet sounds of love ["Aunngghh!" she groaned as Makeeda's thigh swept up and down in her flooding crotch. "Ungghhh!" "Ummnngg . . . ahhnngggg!" she heard Makeeda groaning and grunting softly too.] i so now that clenching of thighs to jam and sweep up a splayed cunt. i love that warm wet heat slavering my thigh and feeling a hard thigh crushing my cunt lips and clit making me scream. i just swoon as a hard thigh is mashing and mauling my cunt, feeling my clit dragging across that muscle making it throb and burn with fucking bliss and feeling her thigh simply getting soaked with my love juices making it just slid and ram so deep and hard into open cunt making me gag and drool with fucking bliss. i am just so fucking happy to find one author who knows of this mind blowing way to fuck. // i see they achieve that rare and wondrous mutual orgasm where everything just seems to merge and you do feel like you are becoming one like [Then a weird thing happened. Laura only remembered it happening once or twice in her life before. A switch was thrown somewhere. A circuit was completed. Their two striving, struggling bodies were merged by an instantaneous lightning bolt, and the orgasm that occurred seemed to be only one, but experienced equally by two halves. "Auunngghhh!" she heard Makeeda groan loudly. And then her own strangled cries were intermingled with Makeeda's groans almost in the same instant. "Ohhnnnggmmnnggiiieee!" "Auunngghhhh! Unngghhaiiii!'] it is so wild to feel both of your bodies jackknifing wildly and hearing to two sets of screams filling the room as souls and cunts are ripped asunder with pure fucking bliss. what i really like here is your screams. other authors just say they scream or have it all caps spoken words. often i do curse and call your name and scream i love you but usually fucking also involves animalistic sounds of fucking pleasure and only you capture these guttural sounds of women in heat and fucking bliss. i sound them out and they are right on. coming hard just reduces us to our primal animalistic state where only the sounds of rutting sex is going to get vocalized. you make sex so primal and full of earth power with these wonderful vocalizations of women fucking hard and purely. // one reason i so love face to face fucking is this [They were kissing, teeth clanking again, their sobs of ecstasy flowing together into one frantic moan of sharp release as exquisite spasms of sexual rapture wrenched their shuddering, mated flesh. It was a very athletic orgasm, full of desperate grasping and fierce hugging and helpless moaning, and it went on and on until neither one of them could keep it going any longer. They were exhausted finally, loosening their grip, their flesh going finally slack, as Makeeda rolled gently to the side and slid off Laura's body, still panting, her eyes glazed as she smiled at the smiling, shattered Laura, who lay supine and destroyed beside her.] i so want to kiss and kissing during orgasm is simply the bomb. i love to have my mouth raped while i'm coming. i want to feel your tongue slamming down my throat while i screaming wildly in fucking bliss and feel you clutching me like makeeda here. grab my ass and slam our cunts together if tribbing like this or grab my ass and really grind super hard your thigh into my spasming, rupturing cunt as it scalds your thighs with splashes of hot come. i so love athletic sex like this where the sweat is whipping off our bodies and running down onto the woman on the bottom and bringing your body close so i can lick and suck it off your heated flesh. then as spent flesh collapses bring bodies tight as we slip and slide our bodies together with delightful friction as aftershocks make us mewl and jerk as tongues plunge deep down still moaning throats and twining in languid love. i so know that nose to nose smiling and gentle nose kissing after a great fuck. // have to smile at their loving surprised discovery that cunts nearly tore themselves apart their orgasms were so strong. my are often like this but i experience this so more often with my archangels and the women i really like because when emotion marries with great athletic sex their is no limit to the ecstasy you can reach again and again. i am smiling as laura sings again which she only does when she is feeling deeply and here it is obvious it's deep pure love and then makeeda stopping her with a deep passionate kiss. sigh, more great fucking. archangels are such a beautiful thing. top |