A Fan's Notes

(reflections while reading Laura's Story)

[used by permission]

 

Early Rina - Chapters 9, 11, 12:

I like how this chapter starts. It is obvious that the previous chapter has been filled with divine fucking. It is cute the reaction of Karen when the doorbell rings. She doesn't want anything to interrupt their fucking. Laura checks and it is Rick. As you know, I'm only into women, but I can understand Laura at this point in her journey. She is still coming to grips with her true desires. I have to admit, that when I read this story the first time, it was geez, there goes Laura again, running back to a male to prove her hetness. I fully understand it though. She never had lesbian tendencies until she met Karen. She feels the need to prove her "straightness". Plus, I think of Laura as extremely bi and I mean extremely bi for women. Still, she has an itch from time to time for male cock. Thus, I can understand why Laura feels cunt nectars running down her thighs at the site of Rick. Her first threesome is about to commence. Plus, that is such a cute description of Rick outside, with "fuck" written all over his eyes.

I have to admit; I don't like the way that Rick just pushes his way into Laura's apartment. I would punch him in the throat and throws his ass out. Still, I am so happy that he does. I do like his brashness. It shows his fire that he brings to fucking. From their past conversations, Laura has told Rick about her female lover who makes her die of coming. He wants to experience every male's fantasy, getting in between to rutting lesbians. I like how he handles Laura here as she tries to stop him in the hallway. [He pulled her over against the wall and shoved her back into it. Then he slowly removed her bathrobe, running his hands all over her naked body, ending at her breasts, which he cupped in his palms, pinching her thick nipples lightly, in a way that he knew turned her on.] I like his roughness. He knows Laura is such a physical woman and sexual stimulation will quickly weaken her defenses.

It seems that Laura confessed to him that she herself has dreamed of a three way. Her dreams are about to come true. It will be funny when Rick walks into the bedroom and sees Karen tied up. Rick is pretty calm about what he finds. Typical male, all he can think of is how he is going to fuck these beautiful women. I had totally forgotten how these earlier chapters went. I haven't read these in a year and half. I thought Karen would be immediately receptive but I see that she is not happy at this situation. I like this because this feels real to me. She may be a fuck slut like me, but no one wants to have an uninvited person crashing the party. For me, as long as it is a woman I'm cool, but a male would send me through the roof. Karen is in the mood for lesbian sex and thus, her mind is not ready for this. Laura on the other hand has been longing for this and immediately starts to try to sooth her and get Karen accepting of this turn of events.

I love how Karen is not accepting of this turn of events at first. She is watching a man with a huge cock disrobing before her and she's totally vulnerable with her trussing up. I had forgotten that the kinky sex had started this early. Laura continues to comfort her ["Her name is Karen," she said softly. "Karen, we're going to fuck you together. Oh god, baby, won't it be wonderful!"] Karen is still resisting but Rick strips and unleashes his big cock and joins Laura in destroying Karen's resistance [He joined her on the bed, and between them they kissed and squeezed and sucked Karen's beautiful, imprisoned breasts and bursting-plum nipples until the black girl was keening hysterically and nearly climaxing already.] Even in the beginning you had a way of describing a woman's body that made and makes me swoon.

Laura quickly brings her to an orgasm with some cunt tongue fucking and clit sucking. From the very first fuck, I fell in love with your vocalizations ["Unngghmmmnnrriieee!" Karen groaned into the gag, wincing and straining in her tight bonds.] At this beginning stage of the Laura Story, the sex always came fast and furious. I love and much prefer how you take so much more time with your sex now. You develop it with exquisite slowness and then just paragraphs of divine sex. Still, these early chapters had a special quality of their own. The sex came so fast, with such glorious orgasms that it used to put me into a frenzy. Plus, the sheer numbers of orgasms got me. I can come a lot, but nothing like the stratospheric numbers in these early chapters. But, all these orgasms and resulting squeals of rapture again got me into a frenzy. Rick immediately inserts his huge cock completely up into Karen's tight cunt ["Mmnggg!" Karen groaned, a grimace of shock spreading over her beautiful face as she realized the size of the massive cock cramming her tight young pussy.] Karen has another orgasm in seconds.

Laura has to get involved again and starts to lick Karen's clit while Rick continues to stroke his cock deep. Then Laura has a suggestion that makes me swoon ["Put it in her ass," Laura murmured to Rick. "Then I can suck her pussy at the same time."] I love to have my ass fucked balls deep while my cunt is eaten. Rick kind of surprises me with concern about the size of his cock going up Karen's asshole. I guess this is the first use of the famous baby oil bottle. I love how Laura nearly faints with desire when she returns from the bathroom with the baby oil and sees Karen's face torn with ecstasy with another orgasm as Rick's cock continues to rip into her tight cunt.

I like how Laura here helps with the taking of Karen's virgin ass [But she swallowed her misgivings and pulled Karen's delicious, round, firm, black buns apart so he could gain entry. He started by widening Karen's rectum with one oiled finger. Karen grunted and moaned softly as she felt the penetration.] This is such a hot picture. Karen once more protests what is about to occur. She is soon to learn the errors of her ways. I love Laura murmuring to her here and then the penetration ["Oh baby, it's going to be so good," Laura reassured her, kissing her neck, murmuring hot obscenties in her ear. "We're both going to fuck you. You're going to come so hard!" She saw Karen's face suddenly become paralyzed, and water appear in her eyes. Tears slid down the beautiful girl's cheeks, and Laura realized what was happening. She looked down and saw the huge stiff tube of Rick's cock sliding into Karen's shapely ass. The baby oil lubricated it so well that he pushed it all the way in.] Oh yeah, I can feel a huge fake cock sliding up into my tight asshole just reading this.

I love how Laura continues her assault on Karen's quim and Rick attacks her backdoor [Laura knew that the two of them would come any instant. Obviously the sensations were so intense that they couldn't hold on for long. She filled her hands with Karen's beautiful firm buns, pulling them apart and squeezing them, watching Rick's massive piston as he buried it deep in Karen's ass, then withdrew it to the rim, then plunged it sharply into her ass again, bringing fiery yelps of exquisite pleasure from Karen's muffled mouth. "Awwwnnmmmgg! Ooohhhhh! Awoommmmgg! Ohnngg!" Karen groaned as he hammered his huge cock into her ass again and again, grunting himself and wincing as the terrific pressure pinched him.] I love how Laura helps with the ass rape by pulling Karen's buns apart. Of course we have those screams of rapture. Other authors always just talk about the fucking without any details. While you on the other hand talk of pulling the cock to the rim and then driving it in deep. You talk of how it drives in "sharply". These descriptive phrases are just so powerful

Of course Karen has a wonders to behold orgasm [Suddenly, Karen screamed. Her body shuddered with wild spasms, and a transcendant expression of sublimely intense pleasure passed over her face. Her orgasm seemed to remove her to another plane of being. She groaned and twisted in the ropes and in Rick's and Laura's embrace, coming fiercely, agonizingly, shaking and sobbing as fresh waves of coming burst inside her body.] Oh yeah, this is what first hooked me on your writings. Of course Rick comes with much dumping of jizm up Karen's waiting asshole. I love the idea of Laura rubbing herself to an orgasm also. One does have to take care of one's needs. It is cool to read of Laura's torment over helping in this "rape" of Karen. I do feel for Karen here when she begs Laura to remove the ropes now that she has had her body plundered. They are starting to hurt. It is cute to watch Karen look at the rope burns under her breast. Of course Laura is able to take her mind off her small hurts [Laura kissed the spot, then took Karen's breast in both her hands and lovingly, tenderly, caressed and gently sucked Karen's large, soft nipple into her mouth. Karen moaned, and threw back her head.] Laura knows how to take Karen off her slight pain. Laura is ready for another round of lesbian sex. I can understand Rick watching in fascination.

CHAPTER 9

The chapter starts with Laura and Karen very quickly bringing themselves to several quick orgasms with pussy kissing and titty fondling. This quickly revives Rick's cock. He evidently is enamored with Karen. He wants to once more bury his cock in her wonderful ass. I fully understand. She has a meaty ass. I go wild for those. I think Karen is ready for it this time. I think Karen might be trying to deflect Rick when she mentions Laura hasn't been fucked by him yet. Rich knows what he wants. [He began to saw it up and down in the crack between Karen's round, black buns. Karen's eyes rolled up behind her eyelids. She bit her full lower lip. "God . . . I don't think I can stand for you to do it to me again," she groaned softly. But Rick wasn't asking. He was very insistent. "You'll come even harder this time," he panted.] I have done that; saw my cock up and down their crack, letting them know what they are about to receive. I like Rick's confidence here. Fortunately, he is able to deliver.

I love how Rick positions Karen the way he wants. He gets her off the bed and on all fours on the floor. Love that detail of Karen's up tilt ass and where Rick is standing and crouches down behind her and guides his cock into her yummy rectum. I think I would have had to tongue fuck it for a little. He buries it in deep. I so dearly love Karen's clinched teeth groan of pleasure and pain. Nice detail of their being enough lubrication and jizm to let the cock slide in deep with one nice strong stroke. Like I say, only you really know how to make each sex act so FUCKING HOT [Rick held her hips in his hands and began sliding his massive cock in and out of her, bringing soft whoops of exquisite pleasure and pain from her throat with each deep thrust. Laura was so aroused from watching them that she could feel her own asshole clenching each time Rick's enormous prick slid deep into Karen's ass. And Karen was not flat on her stomach this time, but on her knees. Her wonderful breasts were dangling, luscious, her large black nipples gleaming and swollen.] With your descriptions I can feel that monster (strap-on) sliding into my tender bowels and causing me that exquisite pleasure tinged with pain. Love that mental picture of Karen's divine hanging tits.

Laura did exactly what I would do in this situation. She rolls underneath Karen and starts to inhale her nipples. Then you nearly drive me crazy with this wonderful scene [Rick was grunting and reaming her hard, drilling his huge cock deep into her ass, which made Karen wail and groan in agonizing pleasure and pain. He leaned forward over her back, his hands beside hers on the floor, his body directly above her, and slid his huge monster of a prick all the way down into her ass. Karen moaned and quivered, wincing as her whole body filled with intense sensations.] As I so often say, only you really show the wonders of sex. You vary it. Other authors just make their sex so boringly the same. I love how this position allows one to piston your cock straight down into your lover's ass. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

I always love how you have your lovers always so active and fully participating in the sex and again your wonderful descriptions of the payoff [Laura dug her fingers into Karen's smooth, beautiful back, pulling the girl's hard breasts down to her mouth, sucking and biting Karen's plump nipples, turning Karen's desperate groans into a keening whimper of mad rapture. She reached down with one hand and rubbed Karen's clit with two fingers, rubbed it hard, holding the girl while Rick hammered his spurting cock deep into Karen's ass. And then Karen came, gurgling helplessly on a shattering uprush of cataclysmic sexual spasms. The orgasm hit her so hard that her arms collapsed and she fell onto Laura, moaning and screaming as wave after wave of fierce coming shook her writhing flesh. "Ungghhh! Owwnnggg! Anngghiiieee!" she cried, squirming and shuddering, her whole body clenching each time Rick's piledriving cock plunged deep into her ass again.] Love Karen falling down on Laura in rapture and her body convulsing in rapture. Like how Rick just continues ripping his cock in her spasming ass, prolonging Karen's pleasure.

I think we now get Laura's first heartbreak. She gets out from underneath Karen and Rick and watches what is an obvious attraction between them. She can immediately see the attraction between them. I had totally forgotten the ass to cunt penetration. This is again something you just don't see in erotica. It is so hot to read. A few women have really loved this. One just needs to take proper precautions during or afterwards to be on the safe side. Laura knows she is in trouble when Karen and Rick make that deep eye contact and start fucking again while gazing deep in each other's eyes. I do love how they fuck here [Soon Rick looped his arms under Karen's knees, raising her legs up in the air and rolling her ass up off the floor. Her wide open, glossy asshole, still wet with his jism, was now more easily available. He propped her calves on his shoulders and with one hand guided his cock first into her ass, sinking it deep, then removed it and plunged it into her cunt again, alternating holes until Karen was howling and grimacing with ecstacy.] That is fucking hot!!

I feel for Laura here though. Even though her body is responding to what she is seeing it would hurt me here to watch two lovers of mine falling all over each and completely forgetting about me. That would be cold, especially if I had set it up. I fully understand Laura removing herself from the room. Doesn't really help though for she can still hear Karen's squeals of pleasure. Their orgasm really destroys Laura. This is the first manifestation of Laura's jealousy showing itself. At least Rick and Karen do have the decency to look abashed as they leave Laura's apartment to obviously continue their fucking elsewhere. It is nice to see that Laura misses Karen far more than she has ever missed any man. This keeps Laura in a zombie like state for the next two weeks.

Now her second angel enters her life. The woman with the to die for nipples. Laura now meets Rina in the work cafeteria. It is amazing how things work. She would never have met Rina if she hadn't changed her lunchtime and then spilled her soup, which caused Rina to help her cleanup, and this started their friendship. You are already so beautifully describing these women [Rina was gorgeous. Her face looked like Whitney Houston's, though she was much darker. And her body was more voluptuous, with a tiny waist, full, jutting breasts, and long, willowy legs. Laura wondered why she was so instantly attracted to another black girl. Was it as if she were trying to replace Karen? Was there anything else to it?] I think Laura has discovered the answers to her questions.

I think this is the first dose of angst where Laura beats herself up over desiring one of these black angels and feeling she absolutely has no chance of success. I like how she feels Rina would call the cops if she only knew what Laura was thinking. At this time, she is probably right. We discover that Rina has a boyfriend and that he is a total jerk that likes a lot of sex. Seems Rina finds him oversexed. He is probably very demanding and doesn't satisfy Rina like a woman would. I love as always that Laura loves all of her women [She giggled softly. Laura was in heaven. When Rina had leaned close to her, she had breathed in the girl's perfume and gazed deeply into her big, dark eyes and let herself imagine what it would be like to kiss Rina's smooth black velvet cheek. Rina's full, sensual lips had been only inches away. Laura's heart had accelerated.] Laura tells Rina of her love troubles leaving out that important fact of lesbianism. We already know that Laura finds Rina beautiful but we now discover that Rina feels the same about Laura. There is hope. Laura does wonder if she is coming on to strong but Rina is happy with the compliments. They arrange to go out the night after next.

This has Laura in a happy state where she can ignore her heartache over Karen. She worries over her desire for Rina but goes with it. I love how Laura moons over Rina [On Rina's beautiful face, full, sensual mouth, even teeth, flashing eyes, dimples. On Rina's jutting breasts, narrow waist, full hips. On Rina's long, sleek legs. On Rina's high, perky ass. God, she's so beautiful! Laura thought, feeling her throat catch. I want to fuck her so much!] I am right there with Laura in my desire to fuck this angel. You always make these women so beautiful and desirable with your word pictures of them. I don't need the photos to make me long to bury my face in their steamy wet cunts and dining till they come screaming in my waiting mouth.

My body would have jangled when Rina said she wanted to go back to her apartment instead of going out. I would be thinking to myself, "all alone". I am half way home with this straight girl. I would be looking for signs. Rina immediately says she wants to wear something cooler because of the heat. I would be very interested in what she comes out with. Laura is getting jealous knowing that Rina and her cad boyfriend fuck in this place. When Rina reappears Laura's and my lust goes off the meter [For Rina had changed into cutoffs and a bright yellow midriff blouse, and little else. The faded-jeans cutoffs were as high and tight as hot pants, and her long, shapely black legs were completely naked. The shorts clung to the sculpted moons of her delicious ass. The midriff blouse left her smooth black stomach exposed, but at least she still had on a bra under it. Laura gulped, realizing how hard it would have been to control herself had Rina's breasts been loose and naked under the blouse. It was hard enough now.] I would be thinking that this woman wants me, flaunting her body like this with our first time alone. A woman can dream can't she? That is an awful lot of skin to be showing to a woman you just met. I think subconsciously, Rina desires lesbian sex with Laura.

Laura can't help but lusting after Rina when she stands on her tiptoes to get glasses for some wine. Again, Rina is showing off her legs and ass to a woman. Humm? They make small talk about her animal boyfriend who is sex hungry. Laura really compliments Rina on her beauty and constantly worries if she has gone to far. I can understand that with a straight girl. You have to try to seduce them but you can't come on too strong or else they will get too skittish and bolt. We find that her boyfriend likes to fuck often and is rough. She needs a lesbian to show how to fuck often with tenderness and only as much roughness as she desires. Now Rina takes it to another level. Notice that I say Rina and not Laura. Again, as it so often seems to happen, these women and not Laura are the ones to racket up the heat. She now wants to remove her bra to get "comfortable". She wants it. Maybe subconsciously, but she wants it. To make it even worse for us lesbians she doesn't remove her bra underneath her top, she takes it off the top and THEN removes the bra. I would be climbing the walls by now and trying for some pussy. Fortunately, Laura has more control than myself.

It is so cute Rina just sitting there and removing her top and letting Laura keep her eyes open. I agree that she likes being an exhibitionist. More seduction. I am so happy that Laura kept her eyes open [She had thought nothing could be more perfect than Karen's breasts. She had been wrong. Rina's were sculptured, pear-shaped globes, with gleaming, bulbous nipples that swelled up from the surface. They were unbelievably firm, exquisitely round and equal, with a deep, curved separation between them. Her nipples were even bigger than Karen's, puffy black satin with thick centers, swollen, overripe fruit.] Oh geez, Rina's breast are made for lesbian sex. I would love maul her breast for hours. Rina can't but help noticing Laura's stare. She is not upset even though she remarks that Laura is staring at her tits like men in her life. She is amazingly accepting. She then squeezes her breast in self-admiration. She is doing this in front of a woman who has been staring at her breast in lust. I really think that she wants it on a subconscious level. She is not doing this like Randi or Deshona would be doing it with a knowing knowledge of their actions.

Rina's innocence allows Rina not to see Laura's excited breathing. Laura feigns sickness to hide her rising libido. Rina in her desire to be helpful asks what is wrong and then offers to take Laura to the bathroom. She bends to look at Laura and this puts Laura up close to her marvelous breast. When Rina stands, Laura can see the undersides of Rina's breast. I would be dying here. I know my eyes would be riveted looking up her cutoff. When Rina supports Laura to go to the bathroom, Laura can't resist temptation [She helped Laura, who tried to act wobbly, to her feet. Laura couldn't help realizing how the tables were turned. She had done exactly this with Karen, although her motives had been different from Rina's. As she stood up, she couldn't stop herself from sliding one hand up Rina's taut midriff to her breasts. Laura tried to act casual, as if it were an accident, but her hand enclosed one exquisite breast, squeezing it gently. Suddenly, Rina's body froze. A sharp expression of alarm seized her face.] I would have to have taken the same exact chance.

Rina totally freaks out. She asks what Laura is doing and demands that she leaves immediately. Laura pleads innocence but it doesn't work. Laura tries the "I'm not really that way" line but it doesn't work. Poor Laura ["Just go," Rina said, shutting and locking the door, click, as Laura stood outside in the hall, coat over her arm, feeling again the panic of loss.] I think these early seductions really capture the frustration one can have playing with straight women. Their signals can be all over the place. The want too and then they also don't want too. It is like three steps forward and two back. A few times I have really pulled my hair out. As I have matured I realize they are having to overcome family pressure, society brain washing and, often, religious right dogma. Still, it can be very frustrating.

CHAPTER 11

It seems that Laura went to Rick to try and forget her women problems with some hard heterosexual fucking and Rick is just the guy to deliver a hard, savage fuck that has left Laura's body aching. I like my sex rough a lot of the time so I know how she is feeling. Makes me feel loved and wanted. Unfortunately for Laura her true lesbian desires are starting to come to the forefront. She still longs for Karen and Rina and her dance in hetsville only makes her feel worse. Laura's mind starts to be filled with dreams of them and then dreams of them together. Now Laura's dreams are filled with women. She is awakening to her true lesbian nature. This goes on for two weeks and she slowly starts to numb herself to her these women and is finally able to start to get them out of her thoughts.

Then Laura gets a big surprise that would have shocked me. Laura's doorbell rings and who is there but Rina. I fully understand Laura's heart jangling here. Rina is sending those conflicting signals. She is going to the house of a woman who clearly made a lesbian pass at her. She is setting herself up to be seduced. Her subconscious mind is leading her to her heart's true desire. Rina really kills me with that bright nothing has happened in the past greeting. I have gone through that a few times. Sometimes one has to have patience to get your woman in bed. Rina invites herself in but Laura hesitates a moment until [But Rina really did have throat-catching beauty. Her hair was cut fairly short, and she had a long, black swan's neck, exquisitely smooth and flawless, as well as perfectly sculptured clavicles and shoulders. She wore a scooped-neck blouse that showed off her deep black skin and perfect bones. It also showed the beginning of the valley between her astonishingly beautiful breasts, which made Laura swallow uneasily. She knew she really did still have an ulterior motive.] Even from the beginning you caressed these women's bodies with your prose.

Laura invites her in and torments herself over Rina's spectacular ass. Rina shocks Laura completely when she says she jumped to conclusions the last time and got angry for no reason and just wants to pick up anew and become friends. I thought it cute how Laura thinks to herself she would drop a glass if she were holding one. I know how she feels about "am I really hearing this". Laura goes with the flow. If she can't have Rina she can at least have her as friend. It is always humorous to read of Laura castigating herself about desiring these women and it is the other women setting up the situation for her seduction. I Love It. I had to chuckle when Laura asks what made Rina change her mind and she replies that Laura doesn't look like a lesbian. She is not "butch" looking. Geez. It seems everyone thinks that Laura is straight. Laura uses this to her advantage by using her sex with Rick to get them talking about sex. Rina is shocked when Laura talks about getting both holes fucked hard. Rina is shocked about the ass fucking but Laura lets her know that the pain quickly passes and the pleasure is unbelievable.

I like how Laura uses the talk of het sex to get the juices flowing in the angel she is about to seduce. She is getting the woman worked up and thus easier to seduce. Now that Rina is comfortable talking about sex she mentions that lesbian sex is "exciting but sick". She has given herself away. The hook is in the mouth and all that needs to be done is set it. Rina is confessing thinking about lesbian sex excites her. Laura's first advance excited her and that is why she reacted so strongly. Wisely, Laura offers her more wine and they head into the kitchen with Rina a little tipsy. Laura jokes about Rina not falling so she won't have to catch her and have Rina think she is making a pass. Rina giggles and then Rina does slip and breaks her wine glass and cuts herself. I love how this mirrors the first seduction in this epic.

It is tender and touching the way that Laura sucks her wound to get the bleeding to stop and how Rina's body starts to tremor with feelings other than pain. Rina pleads with Laura to continue sucking her wound to clean it. Seems Rina is very averse to pain. Laura can only obey her. I believe Rina was going to be seduced no matter what, but this is fate stepping in and saying no more playing around, let the sweet loving commence. Love how they both realize that sweet hot fucking is soon to start [Laura raised Rina's hand to her mouth again and began to lick and suck the wound, looking into Rina's eyes from under her eyelashes as she sucked. Rina did not look away. Her eyes smouldered this time, and burned directly into Laura's. Laura had seen that look before, but never from Rina.] I have always found you the master of the slow gentle seduction. You never hurry it. I can just feel the emotion as Laura slowly brings Rina's hand to their mouths and slowly moves it to the side all the while keeping that smoking eye contact. I have had something like this happen in a few seductions and it is magical. You can see it in their eyes that they are dying to be taken into the world of lesbian love. Then you so gently bring their lips together. Other authors always have the woman being seduced falling almost immediately and turning into a lesbian pro but you keep it real and sweet with [Clearly Rina was not convinced that this was a totally good idea, but she didn't resist. Her lips curved into Laura's, and she accepted Laura's gently probing tongue into her mouth, yielding, soft, and pliant. But she did not kiss Laura back, not at first.] A straight woman must be brought slowly into our world if she is truly reluctant and unsure. Gentleness always wins the day (with a few failures). I think most straight women are totally overwhelmed with the gentleness they experience with their first lesbian encounter. I think most are used to being pawed at my males. We love, they fuck.

Laura knows how to keep the kiss gentle and slowly stoke the fires in Rina's body until [Both were afraid to stop kissing, afraid of what would happen next. And then their kiss changed. Rina's tongue coiled together with Laura's, then slipped into Laura's mouth. Laura's sensual lips moved more passionately, searchingly against Rina's open mouth. Laura's fingers slid past Rina's cheek and slipped behind the girl's head, then down to the back of her neck. She felt Rina's hand in the small of her back, pulling her body closer.] My pussy spasmed a little when Rina sobs moan that she returned because she desperately desires lesbian seduction. You then have the wonderful dialog of Rina saying its wrong but Laura reassures her that if she desires it, it can't be bad. I know Rina's heart must have beat with joy with this realization. Rina shows her growing unfettered desire [This time their kiss was all fire and need. They tried to drink one another, and when they finished they were both panting and trembling. Laura couldn't keep her lips off Rina's long smooth neck. She kissed the girl's ears, her cheeks, her throat, under her jaw, along her chin, then devoured Rina's delicious mouth again, quivering as she felt the girl respond by frenching her hungrily] Rina is awakening to her true desires.

You keep it real and sweet with Rina still hesitant but clearly anxious to continue. She needs some reassurance that Laura is willing and able to give. It is so sweet Laura taking the time to go slowly with Rina. To calm her nerves. Laura makes it clear she won't continue if Rina doesn't want to and asks if Rina wants to talk about it first. I love Rina's response [Rina shook her head again. Then she leaned her head forward and caught Laura's mouth with hers, giving Laura another searing kiss, which she followed by kissing Laura's neck and ears and cheeks too.] Rina has listened to her heart. Still, when she gets into Laura's bedroom she is shaking with fear. She wants it, but is not sure how to get there. It is cute how Rina's fear evaporates when Laura asks her to remove her bra like the last time. Laura knows how to stroke one's vanity. Now Rina is getting in the spirit and coyly asks Laura to remove her bra also. First Laura removes her bra and Rina is stunned by Laura's beautiful breasts. Now Rina shyly removes her bra and once more Laura is agog over their perfection. I think Rina's response says it all ["You're staring at me again," Rina smiled.] The dynamic has turned 180 degrees.

You now start your patented ratcheting up the heat [She cupped Rina's face in her hands and kissed the girl again, heatedly. Her hands dropped to Rina's breasts as they were kissing. She cupped them, squeezed them, filled her hands with their spongy resilience. Then she dropped her mouth to them, holding one perfect breast and caressing Rina's incredibly thick and puffy black nipple with her tongue, then sucking the large soft bud into her mouth. "Ahhhh!" Rina gasped, her body trembling with excitement.] I am convinced almost all other authors would say they kissed and then Laura sucked her nipples. You say they kissed heatedly and then Laura first caresses Rina's tits with strokes, squeezes and then licks the nipple before sucking the bulb into her hungry mouth. You then show Rina's reaction. Wow, no wonder my panties are moist right now. You actually describe what is happening. What a novel concept it seems when comparing it to other writings.

Where other authors will mention the breast worship, it is only a sentence or two before they move on. Only you keep it going for paragraphs like you do here. You have Laura laying Rina on the bed and then brushing their breasts together and then Rina grabbing Laura's dangling breasts and feeding her nipples into her now hungry mouth. Laura now does a breast 69 and [She bunched Rina's incredibly firm breasts up in her hands and devoured the girl's bulbous, silky nipples, giving Rina the skillful, clever treatment she had perfected with Karen, arousing the girl to a frantic fever pitch. She could tell how uncontrollable Rina had become when Rina could no longer make love to Laura's breasts but had to fall back onto the mattress, surrendering her body completely to Laura, moaning and squirming wildly.] Love producing that total surrender from my loving. Laura is ready to escalate the lovemaking and communicates her desire (something only you do) ["Oh baby . . . oh baby, Rina . . . I want to fuck you, I want to fuck you so badly, I always wanted to fuck you, I want to kiss your wet pussy, I want to suck your clit . . .

I want to fuck you and fuck you . . ." she murmured softly as her hands pulled the jeans down past Rina's squirming hips.] I never tire of your lovers talking to each other. The spoken word can be the most powerful aphrodisiac.

You never fail to show these women's excitement with their squirming body and labored moans of pleasure. You are so gentle and loving with the way that Laura kisses up Rina's clinching thighs and approaches nirvana. I swoon a little with Rina's moans of pleasure. I can never get enough descriptions of Laura's cunt flooding with fuck juice and trickling down her thighs. Love that detail of Laura running her fingertip up and down Rina's flooding crease and lightly rubbing her clit. I think you are so on target with Laura thinking she wants to give Rina the most spectacular orgasm she has ever experienced. This is how lesbians think; we want the most for our partner. Laura starts to take Rina to heaven [So she took it slowly, patiently exploring every crevice and fold of Rina's delicious pussy with the tip of her tongue. She slid her hands under the girl's incredibly firm buns and cupped them with her palms while her mouth sucked and probed the girl's sweet, flowing cunt.] You are the only author that really details how these loving ministrations affect their love mate ["Oh!" she panted, writhing, pressing her elbows into the mattress, her fingers racing over her own jiggling breasts and scissoring her thick, swollen nipples. "Ohhhhh! God, Laura . . . please! Please!"] Always love the

details of elbows digging into the mattress. Shows that wild abandon.

You then keep the loving cunt worship going for several more paragraphs with wonderful details like sucking breast, deep plunging tongues and clit swipes. Laura has already learned the skill of prolonging the pleasure with cycles of rising and falling passion reducing her lover to helpless need [By now Rina was a moaning, shuddering wreck, reduced to a state of sexual need she had never known before, her body tormented by the urge to have a climax. She dug her fingers into the hard flesh of her thighs, grinding her hips in futile fuck-motions, grabbing her luscious breasts and pinching her large nipples, moaning and gasping incoherently. Laura knew Rina was ready.] You are the only author to detail that almost tormented clawing of thighs in sexual abandon and pinching ones own nipples in lost lust. Finally, Laura knows she is ready and finishes her off with her first lesbian orgasm [In seconds Rina was on the edge, keening and whimpering hysterically. Laura knew what was coming. She poured on the heat, sucking Rina's clit, hand-raping her pussy at the same time. And suddenly, all the breath seemed momentarily to leave Rina's arching, shuddering body. Then a sharp scream of ecstasy escaped her throat as her lovely body erupted in frantic spasms. "Ungghhh!" she groaned. "Unnggmmnngghiieee! Oh! Ungghh! Oh god . . . anngghiiieeeee!" she cried out as a fierce orgasm shook her flexing body.] Sigh, this is the stuff of wet dreams. I will never tire of Laura's new lovers shocked cries of exctacy when they have their first lesbian orgasm.

Of course Laura tries to do what every good lesbian tries to do [Laura knew how to milk every last ounce of excruciating pleasure out of the girl's climax, and she manipulated Rina's beautifully-shaped pussy with her lips and fingers until Rina was gasping and moaning through the aftershocks of her orgasm, panting and mewling in sweet, seemingly endless bliss. Then, finally it was over.] I bask and revel in this, prolonging and drawing out my lover's pleasure as long as humanely possible. To fill their body with sweet bliss. If I am fucking a woman with a lot of heterosexual experience I always long and become giddy if I am told I'm the best fuck they ever had. Rina confesses she somehow knew Laura could fuck her blind and wants to reciprocate. Laura tells her to just do what makes herself feel good. This is always a good place to start. I love that gentle exploration of a lesbian virgin who is eager [And Laura was lost in a trance of loving Rina, of finally having what she had wanted so long. Her body sang under Rina's cautious hands, trembling, yearning, aching for the girl. She moaned and churned her hips in slow motion as Rina licked her pussy and tongue-stroked her clit, trying to prolong it, not wanting to come yet so that it wouldn't stop.] You capture that initial hesitancy just perfect. I like how Rina senses that she is now in control and likes it. I love how you always vary the sex. Rina is tonguing Laura's cunt, then moves to her breasts, French kisses Laura and then moves south again for some tender cunt meat. I absolutely love this tender declaration ["Ohhhnn . . . I never knew what I was missing

with you," Rina murmured, tonguing Laura's sensitive clit so skillfully that Laura was nearly climbing the wall in seconds.] I find most lesbian virgins are like this. They may have doubts later, but while in the act, they love it.

I love how you touch on the fact that Laura's orgasm is so strong because it is Rina tonguing her love swollen cunt and Rina prolongs her exctacy [Rina's thick, sensual lips closed over her clit, and Laura exploded into wild ecstacy almost immediately. Her orgasm was doubly powerful because it was Rina who had given it to her, and she felt her body bloom and throb with a heavenly fire, expanding and exploding through firebombs of coming. "Anngghhh! Oh Rina! Unnmmnngghiieee!" she cried out, flipping and surging off the bed, her flesh quivering and flexing as Rina's tongue kept jabbing to life fresh little arrows of pleasure in her cunt.] I hope you never get tired of me repeating how this writing of yours is such a masterpiece of eroticism. You are truly alone sitting atop of Mount Olympus. You are Zeus and we are you loyal subjects awaiting your next gift from on high.

I love Rina even more when she continues to tongue Laura's pulsing pussy and makes Laura erupt with another cunt twisting orgasm. The girl is a quick learner. You are the only author to give us truly tender and touching dialog ["Wow, you had two orgasms," Rina whispered. "Why are you crying?" "Because you're so wonderful," Laura sobbed softly. "And because I wanted you so much, and it was so much better than I dreamed. I think if you touched me, I'd come again. Right now."] This is lovers showing love and tenderness to each other. Now Rina is emboldened and drops her hand to Laura's cunt while she kisses Laura. Rina rubs her to another sweet orgasm. I love the wonder in Rina's voice; she can't believe that she is causing all this pleasure in Laura. All of your women are so sweet and just basically good. Rina was truly a special woman.

CHAPTER 12

This chapter begins with Laura stroking Rina's body and murmuring words of sweet sex. Rina is shocked that Laura wants her again so soon after such thrilling sex and is even more shocked when she realizes herself that she is ready for more sex herself. It is kind of cute when Rina remarks about Laura's skill and how she learned it. Laura as her usual way doesn't want to talk to about any other woman except the angel she is with. Laura knows how to stop this kind of talk [She sucked Rina's huge, bulbous nipple into her mouth, squeezing the smooth, resilient globe of her perfect breast as she sucked. "Ahhhh!" Rina gasped softly, eyes rolling upward.] I never get tired when your women express their divine pleasure. Laura increases the pleasure [Laura held both of Rina's breasts in her hands and sucked the girl's delicious nipples until Rina was mewling softly and moaning with need. Rina's nipples were stiff and wet with Laura's saliva, and she squirmed as Laura squeezed the full round balls of her breasts. Laura sucked them harder, and Rina whimpered.] I simply can't get over how you are the only author to make her sex so real and hot. I have come to really wonder what other writers are thinking when they use the same old boring descriptions of sex. Laura coos to her to come and starts to finger fuck Rina with the wonderful detail of her scissoring her clit roughly between two fingers [Laura opened her fingers slightly, letting Rina's slippery clit slide between them. Then she scissored them and moved her hand roughly, sucking one of Rina's popping wet nipples at the same time. Rina moaned and churned her pelvis rapidly, in hot, quick, jerky fuck-motions. She cried out and came sharply. "Anngghhh! Oh! Anngghh!" she groaned, wincing as stabbing spasms of pleasure wracked her lovely, straining body.] So many writers just say their character came hard; you actually describe how they are coming hard.

I really love how Laura thinks. Rina is a young, vibrant, strong woman. She can take some orgasms. Laura has just finger fucked her and now she moves down to her pussy and sucks her cunt relentlessly till she has another almost debilitating orgasm. I love how this leaves Rina [By now Rina was groggy with sex, limp and languid, her eyes murky and her mouth slack, her body pliant.] Laura is ready for another variation of divine fucking [She quickly manuevered her legs so that she could press their hot, wet pussies together, manipulating Rina's limp body like a wrestler about to pin her opponent. She kissed Rina's mouth and neck, bringing Rina back to life, and then slid her body closer until their cunts met.] I always love trib when it makes its appearance. I love how you are always loving the whole body [Their bodies melted together, coiling and embracing, while their groins gyrated in a slow, molten rhythm. Rina was in a sexual trance, her body completely vulnerable to Laura, who fucked her with increasing force, sucking Rina's nipples thirstily, dipping one hand between their rubbing bodies to maneuver her clit into Rina's.] I am always amazed when an author talks of a sex act and only does that one act. It is like the joke about not being able to chew gum and walk at the same time. In this situation they would be just rubbing their cunts together and nothing else. I am so thankful that I discovered a writer that shows how lesbians really fuck. Loving the whole body.

Laura continues to jam their cunts together until they have a simultaneous orgasm. I had to smile when Laura then gets up and jams her cunt down into Rina's and produces yet another series of simultaneous orgasms. It is cute seeing Rina so totally confused by the number of orgasms she is experiencing. I then had a great big smile when Rina hesitates saying fuck and then Laura ["To fuck you?" Laura whispered. "Isn't it exciting to say it? I love to fuck you. You made me come too. You fucked me wonderfully."]

You then give us some of that dynamic between women. Laura starts talking about making Rina come like she herself has in the past. This immediately makes Rina think of Laura's other lover, Karen. She immediately starts picking up her clothes and crying. Of course this gets Laura all in a panic. Laura uses the ages old line, but it still works [Laura shook her head. "It was just sex. With you it's different."] Rina gobbles it up and is once more happy. Laura tells her that now they can shoot for a plethora of orgasms. Rina has been pacified and is ready for some more loving [Laura held out her arms to Rina, who hesitated only a few seconds before letting herself be embraced again. They kissed heatedly, with urgent, thirsty passion.] Rina is ready for some more hot lesbian fucking. I almost swoon with this passionate declaration ["Rina, I need you, I can't get enough of you, I want you, I want to eat you and swallow you and drink you and fuck you and suck you and rape you . . ." Laura murmured, swarming again all over the luscious girl's naked black body, arousing Rina again quickly. "Oh! Oh god, Laura, yes! Please! Don't let me go! Fuck me, do it to me, do it all to me, don't let me go!"] It is so nice to see such real and passionate emotions in erotica. Most writers only simulate emotion, with one or two exceptions, only you deliver the thing. Not only do you deliver real life emotion, you have delivered it for 266 chapters now.

It is wonderful how Laura fucks Rina into another string of orgasms that leaves Rina totally spent. I love how you allow your lovers to actually fall asleep in each other's arms to rest their bodies for some more hot fucking. When they awaken Rina asks if she should stop. She has yet to learn completely about Laura. Rina is being truthful when she talks of her pussy being raw and not being sure she can take anymore. Unless one is fucked out, one can continue, but boy, it sure does make your pussy burn with the next orgasm.

Now Laura and Rina get in the shower to wash themselves and revive flagging bodies. The water works its miracle and not only revives their bodies but the libidos. I just love how you show the white suds on black flesh and Laura's shaking in lust [The white suds smearing Rina's glistening black skin aroused Laura so much that she was shaking with lust as she kissed the girl's wet flesh everywhere. She found herself kneeling on the shower stall floor behind Rina's glistening, wet buttocks, kissing and biting the firm round buns, running her fingers inside Rina's asscrack, making the girl squeal and quiver with sexual thrills.] I love Laura's exploration of Rina's virgin ass. I love Rina squealing in shock and pleasure. I simply love Rina pulling away in shock and then thrusting her ass back into Laura's hungry mouth when Laura rams her tongue up her rectum. Rina is learning to enjoy all the pleasures her body can provide [Laura had little trouble drawing Rina down to the floor, Rina got on her hands and knees while Laura, behind her, gave into every perverted urge she had. She slid two fingers into Rina's cunt and got her thumb on Rina's hard clit, while at the same time she tongue- fucked Rina's asshole. In this way she had Rina whinnying uncontrollably through an ecstatic orgasm in under a minute.

"Auunngghiieee!" Rina squealed, losing her strength and nearly collapsing, as the shower water crashed down all around them.] That is just so beautiful. The water beating down on them while Laura rapes her asshole and plunges her fingers deep into Rina's quim. That is just such a beautiful scene to read, so hot. I myself love that pounding of water on our bodies and the way sounds get amplified and distorted. You always make it so beautiful when Laura's lover is totally spent after their orgasm.

Love seeing Laura roll them over still in the shower and devour Rina's swaying breasts. I would never grow tired of love mauling those glorious breasts and especially her mind blowing nipples. Rina reciprocates by hand fucking Laura to a gagging orgasm. They now get out and dry each other off and spend some quality time relaxing and basking in each other's company. Rina continues to marvel at discovering at how much pleasure her body is capable of. After resting and eating for some time, Rina's hunger for Laura is reawakened. She is now the aggressor. She opens Laura's robe and starts to devour Laura's breast with skills she has picked up form Laura. I always love it when you tell of Laura's enthusiastic new lovers quickly picking up on lesbian loving. Desire and longing to give back to your experienced lover are the greatest motivators. Rina gets excited and gets rough with Laura's nipples. I have noticed new lesbian lovers often get excited like this. I love rough so I revel in it. Laura doesn't have to ask hard for Rina to give her the pain she wants. Laura doesn't have to worry about Rina's past innocence, she has accepted her lesbian desires. I love this next part [Rina was so aroused from fucking Laura that she was getting pretty rough anyway. She grabbed Laura's pussy, sinking two fingers in deep, jamming her hand into Laura's clit. And her mouth tore at Laura's aching nipples, her teeth clamping tentatively, then harder, into the flaring, throbbing buds. But not hard enough for Laura, who was keening and quivering on the edge of an exquisite climax.] I love being fucked like this. This then leads Laura to the kind of orgasms that this rough treatment leads one ["Anngghnnmnmggiieee!" Laura exploded in a rupturing orgasm, gagging and squirming uncontrollably on the sofa as wave after wave of shattering pleasure broke over her shuddering body. She moaned and writhed for minutes as the electrifying spasms raked her flexing body. Finally, it was over, and Rina was holding her and kissing her.] I really do believe that having my lover hold, kiss, stroke and cuddle me during my aftershocks does prolong my pleasure. Men just don't give this post coital time and het women are missing so much because of it.

I find it so cute that Rina is totally shocked by the strength of Laura's and probably her own orgasms. She is learning the truth. Lesbians do it better. We focus on our partner totally and thus are able to give so much to our lover. Rina is a gentle woman and needs to be reassured that a little nipple teething is okay. It is funny when Laura finds her repeating the words Karen used to get Laura to attack her nipples ["They hurt for your teeth," Laura said, blushing suddenly as she realized she was repeating Karen's words to her.] You then have them have fun with their sex. You always have exuberance and joy and the fun is always there, and only you make it so clear and picture perfect [She pulled the delicious girl down on top of her, and they wrestled and struggled playfully together on the sofa, before spilling off onto the floor. Wrestling with Rina was more exciting than Laura had ever thought it could be, and Rina clearly felt the same way because in a few minutes they were panting and moaning again with sexual need.] So many authors make their sex seem so mechanical and almost forced. Only you truly show the fun, mirth and

spontaneity that lesbians engender in their lovers.

They now fall into a 69. I really like how you talk about focusing on each other here. Working with skill to bring each other off together. I find this to be very hard. Which every woman has her magic spots hit first usually loses her concentration. It is very hard to keep in sync. I will eat cunt like crazy and then wind up squealing with pleasure and losing all track of everything. I'm just crying out my rapture. But sometimes the simultaneous orgasm is achieved as here [This time they did a true sixty-nine for the first time, each girl carefully bringing the other along, shaping the flow of arousal, aiming for a dual explosion. When one seemed about to pop, the other pulled back momentarily, concentrating on getting to the same level herself, then returning to the task. They manipulated one another with great skill, even though both were shaking and moaning with feverish lust, and when the double orgasm finally arrived, it throttled them both with horrific spasms of pleasure.] That is a heavenly feeling, feeling your lover's body quaking and spasming in pleasure in time to your body. Both moaning out your pleasure, often with your mouths glued to your lover's spasming and gushing cunt.

I like the observation by Laura that as the body becomes exhausted often it takes rougher sex to achieve orgasm. I do sometimes get like this with exhausting sex, and do like to be roughed up more as the sex continues. I just feel so hot and slutty after a lot of sex that I like to be roughed up. I do reach a point though where my body just gets too sensitive for anything more and I have to quit. If I don't I will pay for it for the next few days. It is so cool to see Laura thinking about how Rina feels about this. She is considering her lover's desires and needs. I feel most men would just do what THEY want. Lesbians try to get in tune with their lovers wants and desires instead of their own. This dialog shows this ["I hope you don't mind," she murmured, "but I can't get enough of you. No man ever wanted you as much as I do." "I know that's true, baby," Rina purred back. "Because no man ever fucked me as much as you have tonight. Or made me come so many times."

"Mmmmmm, you like that?" Laura asked. "I love it."] That says it all.

Laura goes south for some more cunt candy. I will never ever tire of you describing your women's vaginas [Laura slid between Rina's long, shapely legs and began to lick the girl's pussy again, awakening her clit skillfully. The puffy, glistening black petals of Rina's cunt, with their slick pink insides, invited her tongue, her lips, and she quickly had Rina climbing the walls again, and coming again in a few minutes. And once Rina was in a state of overheated frenzy, Laura wouldn't let her down.] Laura now makes her come again like a machine gun. At this stage of your story you were embracing this part of the genre. It is super hot to read. I wish it were true in real life. If the most oversexed woman in the world came like this after such a marathon fuck session, I think one would only find a puddle of come and great big smile. Unfortunately, our bodies aren't that strong. It sure is super hot to read though. Like I say, your stories now get me hot with their rich depth of details, but these earlier stories kill my with their overdrive fuck marathons. Both are equaling enthralling though I do prefer your current style.

Finally Rina is completely overcome (pun intended) and begs for mercy with a great big smile on her face. Your stories always leave me with a great big smile on my face.

 

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Chapter 28:

This chapter starts with Brandi once more moving out of Laura's life. Laura is totally accepting of this. It is hinted at that in the past she was distraught but Laura has come to realize that this is the way it must be. Brandi will never be anything more than a sometimes lover who will only be able to give here very brief amounts of her time. I am very happy that Laura has made peace with this. I hate to see Laura torn up over her lovers and their other life away from her. It is nice the photo Brandi gives Laura with her autograph saying that Brandi truly does love her deeply. Cute the "thigh" remark. Like the video that Brandi sends Laura. I do remember the masturbatory frenzies Laura had with the tape. I would be starry-eyed over Laura also if she gave me 27 orgasms in one fuck session.

I love it when Laura remarks to herself her aching pussy and nipples. I don't want hurting with big time pain, but I do love that ache from having been loved hard and long. Makes me feel loved and slutty. Laura gets her tape and masturbates to it for two months. I remembered Laura's long down times in the beginning of the story. I am so happy that she has enough angels now to keep her schedule full. At this time, she doesn't have enough angels to give her all the lesbian love she needs. I smiled when Laura goes into masturbation frenzies when the tape first arrives but finally settles into a more sedate masturbation after the initial rush.

We now get to the namesake of this chapter, Yvette. I have skimmed to refresh my memory and see that Laura has been running into her at work and they have formed a business friendship. Yvette has even picked up on things when Laura comes in all aching from a night from Karen and remarked to Laura on getting fucked hard. Yvette has the wrong sex in mind though. Laura is shocked and unsettled when she is thrown into a project involving Yvette. Laura has become attracted to her and is afraid of how she will control herself in her presence. After a week of exhausting work Laura suggests they finish up at Laura's apartment and have some dinner. At this point, Laura is innocent in intentions. Yvette agrees.

I love how once at her apartment, Laura starts to really notice Yvette [At first, they were working so hard that she didn't really focus much on how attractive Yvette was. True, she couldn't ignore the girl's beautiful face, smooth chocolate skin, and lean, tall body. But Yvette dressed in a very businesslike way, in suits, skirts below the knee, high collars, definitely not provocative at all. She was aloof, professional, and rarely let down her guard. She was also married, and had a small child, which tended to throw a wet blanket on whatever physical attraction Laura might feel for her.] Again you describe the whole person. Almost all other authors only really detail the sexual aspects of their characters. By describing the sum total of Yvette, this makes her a complete woman. A real person the reader can fully identify with. I like how her clothes are so severe. This and the married status really put an initial damper on Laura's desires. I like this because we get to see the slow simmer and rise of Laura's lust. While eating, Yvette takes off her jacket and scarf to reveal her sheer blouse that shows her bra straps. Laura is totally turned on

and discovers she wants Yvette desperately. Whenever I can see bra straps or slips I always notice and usually feel a little jolt.

You again describe Yvette so totally and lovingly [And from that moment on she couldn't keep her eyes off the girl. She knew that if she didn't stop staring, Yvette would notice the change, and become withdrawn, or possibly angry. But the curve of Yvette's firm ass under her skirt suddenly became a glimmer of throat-catching beauty to Laura. Yvette's delicate, perfectly-shaped throat beckoned her lips, Yvette's sensual mouth invited her, Yvette's high, small, jutting breasts captivated her, Yvette's friendly, open eyes and infectious giggle filled her with desire. At one point, she caught herself looking down at Yvette's calves, since her skirt had ridden up a little, revealing perfectly shaped, long, long legs. In fact, Yvette was nearly all legs, several inches taller than Laura.] I simply can't get over how you are the ONLY author to so fully describe their women. You have described Yvette from head to foot. I really like the fact that you always describe the little things that make them so unique and endearing. Here, it is Yvette's friendly, open eyes and infectious giggle. These are the things that make us individuals. This is what draws us into these women and then allows us to experience their joy and rapture when the sex occurs.

Yvette catches Laura gazing at her but she isn't upset only curious. I think this shows that Yvette is a nice person. She doesn't freak or think badly of Laura without reason. Yvette is still unaware of Laura's true desires. Laura asks Yvette why she covers such beautiful legs. It is sad but true that Yvette has to doubly prove herself to the business world to prove her worth to corporate America. It is a little funny reading this now after seeing how Yvette has discovered how to use her body to get ahead in business. It is almost a complete turnaround. It is just so cool to see how your characters grow and change over the chapters. Laura compliments Yvette on her legs and again she takes it as a compliment and doesn't get angry or defensive. Yvette has become totally comfortable around Laura and thinks nothing of stretching thus causing her breast to strain against her top. She can't know that this sends Laura's lust meter off the scale. Laura is now in her humorous state of I'm dying for her and I can't have her. I love Laura looking with longing on Yvette's little doves. I always thought this makes the sex so much hotter when the seduction finally does occur. The reader gets to feel the elation Laura feels when she is finally successful.

They relax over some martinis and Yvette remarks over being hot and wishing she good dump her work clothes. I know both Laura and myself sat up on the edge of our seats when we heard this. Laura offers her a sweatshirt to get comfortable in and Yvette accepts even though it is cutoff at midriff level. I think this starts some wonderful dynamics here. Yvette goes into the bathroom and changes out of her work clothes and puts on the sweatshirt. What I like here is she still wears it, though it barely covers her breast and then comes out only wearing her panties and this sweatshirt. I know she consciously isn't thinking of lesbian sex and we woman are very comfortable with each other, but still. Wearing this in front of a woman you barely know. She is sending out clear signals. Yvette remarks she should have worn her skirt but she wanted to be comfortable like Laura suggested. I fully understand Laura's gulping here. Yvette is wearing the cutoff that Laura herself finds very provocative and would never wear for a man because of this. Not only does Yvette wear it, she has removed her bra also. She is really sending off signals.

They quickly down the first round of martinis and decide for another and head into the kitchen. While moving there Laura can't help but gazing at Yvette's breast swaying just barely out of site with the cutoff. Yvette clad only in her bikini panties is completely exposing her spectacular ass off to Laura. Laura who feels herself getting excited and wet. Now Yvette catches Laura staring at her body and still doesn't get upset. Laura covers by commenting on her taunt midriff. Yvette still not angry preens and explains she does a lot of setups to keep her abs rock hard. (I can't but help noticing that these abs are made for pussy rubbing). Now I know she is pushing the envelope. With a woman she barely knows she offers to let the woman feel her abs while striking a provocative pose. On some level she is trying to be seduced. She is unknowingly heeding her true desires. Sweet hot fucking lesbian sex. This is heightened when she has to coax Laura to feel her abs. Laura tries to refuse but Yvette is incessant. Yvette is forcing the issue. Her pussy and heart are knowingly leading her unaware actions.

The situation continues ["Taut, huh?" Yvette whispered. "Taut. Very." Slowly, Laura let her hand climb, until her knuckles were nearly touching the fringe of the sweatshirt. Yvette's eyes didn't tell her to stop. She kept going. Her hand brushed one of Yvette's naked breasts, then cupped it, then squeezed it gently. Yvette's eyes grew curious, as if in slow motion.] This is such great stuff. In a normal voice, Yvette's comment doesn't carry that much emotional freight, but when it is whispered it changes to a clear invitation for lesbian seduction. SHE is leading Laura on and not the other way around. I have always found this so cute with Laura, she is the lesbian, and yet it is often her "prey" who leads the situation to the sweet final seduction. Laura is very bold here by moving her hand up and cupping then squeezing Yvette's breast. I can fully understand Laura. Yvette is shouting out through her actions, seduce and fuck my brains out, my sweet Laura.

As so often with skittish straight women, Yvette now turns 180 degrees. She has led Laura here and now asks Laura what she is doing. It is time to start pulling my hair out time. Laura being her sweet self immediately backs off. Laura was always so cute when she started to lie and tell Yvette she had never done that before and didn't know what came over her. Yvette though clearly excited chooses to let everything drop since Laura isn't going to force the issue. Back in the living room, Yvette now sits across the room from Laura. A clear signal and yet she [Yvette sat across the room. This time she didn't tuck her long legs up under her body. Instead, she crossed and recrossed them, as if tempting Laura to look. And Laura couldn't keep her eyes off them. Her prior three girl lovers had had gorgeous bodies, each of them, but not one had had legs like Yvette's.] She is still sending those signals. Yvette again asks Laura if she wants her. This breaks

Laura and confesses her desires. Again Yvette is not angry. She calmly tells Laura that she appreciates her honesty but she must now leave. She goes to the bathroom to change. Where there had been hot and throbbing now the feeling between them is cold and stiff. They feel awkward in each other's presence. Laura still can't stop herself from gazing with longing at Yvette's sweet flesh as she walks to the bathroom. Yvette sends those mixed messages to the very end. When Laura offers to call her a cab, Yvette mentions she will get her husband to pick her up, with an emphasis on the word husband. But when Laura confesses again her desires for Yvette and stokes her cheek, Yvette instead of getting angry or pulling back, takes Laura's hand and gently kisses her palms. Yvette may be fighting herself, but she wants Laura. No questions asked.

 

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Chapter 30:

This chapter starts with Laura recovering yet again from a tryst with Karen. As I know it has become evident, I like it rough but Karen was just over the top with her passion. She and Laura really hurt each other here. I mean really hurt each other. I scanned over chapter 29 and they used a table with the leafs removed to compress their breasts. Wow. That was really a blast to read. That is just so original. Still, it is over the top in a way I can't really define within myself. It is just this going out of the way to cause real pain and using techniques that Joseph Mengila would have used. I like to be roughed up, but only in the flow of natural sex, like hair pulling, spanking and some slapping. I know there are a lot of persons out there who love this kind of stuff and I know they were in real heaven with these chapters of BDSM.

With the next chapters I could really relate to. I know about masturbating each day to take the edge off. That is not a problem now with my current home life. Joann and Maria are minks too and with our other women we keep ourselves satisfied. In the past though, I would have to masturbate three or four times in a day when I couldn't find any companionship. I smiled over the fact that Laura has a masturbation tape of Brandi. Wish I had a magical videotape like this. Then I had to smile about using the bathtub faucet to pound water into my pussy. I know about getting just the temperature right and the water flow exactly right and then crabbing down into the right position and letting that heavenly water pound my cunt into orgasm. I also have used the vegetables as you describe here. I have always been partial to cucumbers and the occasional large banana. I remember as a teenager there was a Filipino family that lived near me. They had their yard filled with Filipino vegetables. What I discovered was that their cucumbers look like someone melted candles in a bottle. Very irregular shapes. I had to relieve them of a few on a regular basis. Those irregular shapes felt so divine in my cunt and ass.

Enough reminiscing about the past. Laura has been masturbating trying to forget about Yvette who she has to work with constantly on the same project they were working on at Laura's apartment. It is killing Laura having to act all business like with Yvette and thinking to herself that Yvette now hates her. That would have me an emotional wreck with that dynamic hanging over my head. Laura is surviving because there are two of other members to the work group. On the second day tough the other two members leave for lunch. Even at this point in the saga you had a way with making things so special [But on the second day, when the other two went to lunch, and Laura was alone with Yvette in the office, she suddenly felt Yvette's hand on the back of her neck. She froze, then relaxed, turning her head, her eyes full of questions.] That is just so tender and special that other authors just don't know how to do. My feelings for Yvette jumped a level with this tender moment. It is amazing how much emotion can be conveyed with such a simple gesture.

Yvette makes a confession that would be sweet music to my ears and my pussy. She can't forget that night when Laura made her pass. I Love It. I am a big believer in the planting the seed approach. If you can just get the woman thinking about it seriously, the idea of making love to a woman, then most of the battle has been won. Her desires and natural curiosity will more often than not win out. Then when you get her into your bed you then fuck her brains out and give her the best sex she has ever had in her life. She may eventually run away, but she will never forget it. Yvette evidences this very clearly. She is dying with need. She closes the distance between them and is about to kiss Laura. Laura has to remind Yvette that they are at work. Yvette gets up and closes the door and returns [Yvette straighened up. She walked to the office door and shut it. Then she came back. This time she took Laura's face in both hands and kissed Laura's mouth aggressively, slipping her tongue inside as soon as Laura's lips parted.] I love Yvette showing this aggressiveness. When listening to her heart and body she shows her true desires. Then she does what unfortunately a good percentage of straight women do [But then, as if shocked out of a trance by what she had done, she pulled back, wiping her mouth, her face distraught and stricken with dismay. "My god, what am I doing?" she said out loud.] Then they let what society and their fucked up rules interfere with their heart's desire. I love how Laura tries to deflect her distress by saying to ignore it and pretend it never happened. I have had good success with just gently embracing them and cooing to them to trust their heart, their soul, to let me show them pleasure they never dreamed existed and gently stroke and lightly kiss in gentle sensuous way. I think of them as new colts that need a gentling hand to calm their nerves.

Yvette continues to show her initial confused emotions by next saying she wanted to kiss Laura and they immediately kiss again, this time a slow sensuous kiss filled with emotion. Then Yvette makes the cute admission of having never kissed another woman. That is so sweet to hear. Then Laura gives them an opportunity to get themselves ready to meet the other team members. To hide their true thoughts. This leaves Laura in a real quandary when she worries the rest of the day away wondering if Yvette will let her fears and societies brainwashing keep her from acknowledging her true heart's desires. Laura stews and worries until the end of the workday. Finally Yvette approaches her ["I called my husband and asked him to pick up my little girl," she said, bashfully. "I told him I'm working late."] YES! Laura has succeeded in showing Yvette the light. Laura then calmly remarks that they could back to her place as if they were going to work some more on the project. One does have to maintain appearances.

It is cute and true how Laura gets nervous once they get back to her apartment. Yvette is naturally nervous and Laura wonders why she is feeling butterflies. I have felt this often. I always get nervous with a new lover. Most is pure excitement but some of it is my great desire to deliver. I want my new lover to think that I am one of the most considerate, skilled lovers she ever had (I do shoot for the greatest but I try to be modest). Plus, with a straight woman I feel the nerves because I want to seduce her but I don't want to force myself. I try to be so considerate while I work on crumbling their defenses if there are any. I find with a little work most turn into passionate lovers in bed. They just need to be shown how to let go and follow their true desires. This is what Laura proceeds to do with some faux pa such as ["You don't have to wait for me to ask," Laura smiled. "I really like you. You can have anything you want." She only realized it had sexual innuendoes after she said it. And now both of them were more uncomfortable than ever. Laura made them each a martini, hoping it would loosen them up, knowing how much Yvette seemed to love martinis.] I would be doing the Laura blush right about now. This is one of your little touches that so humanize the story.

They fix some drinks and go into the living room and sit across from each other being uncomfortable. Laura comes up with a novel and totally hot idea that I fear I would never have thought of (though I will remember for future use if it arises). Laura suggests ["You know what I'd like," Laura said softly, as if musing aloud. "Just to take up where we were before, you know? When you were wearing that old cut-off sweatshirt of mine? And we were just sitting here . . . joking?"] Wow. That is so cool. It immediately recreates a sexy environment and gets Yvette thinking about the events that have led to her own initial mental seduction. Again you are a wonder to behold. This immediately gets Yvette comfortable and allows Laura to get equally comfortable. Oh yeah, sweet loving is on the way. Laura gives Yvette the cutoff sweatshirt again and Laura changes into a fishnet top (fucking hot) in her bedroom. Love that subtle exposing of sweet flesh. I love how Laura leans against the door and breathes deeply to compose herself because she can't believe her good fortune. They now reappear in their sexy upper ware and their panties (Yvette coming out in panties only in the last chapter told be she was a lesbian in waiting). I love the confidence that Laura feels wearing this outfit and the situation she is now in [She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror. She winked at herself. I'll have her in this bed in twenty minutes, she told herself.]

Back in the living room they both admire each other's gorgeous bodies. They both find the other beautiful. I like how you show the conflicting emotions in Yvette [Yvette said nothing. Her eyes were smoky with fear and hunger and excitement and dread.] She desires it, but she is still unsure. I like how Laura works to get Yvette more comfortable ["Because I think you're way more beautiful than me. I couldn't believe you'd be . . . attracted to me, even if it wasn't so . . . you know, so . . ." "Unnatural?" "No," Yvette shook her head. "Just . . . odd, I guess."] Sometimes I have said things to get my woman in bed that made me grrrrrrrrr a little inside. I am so happy that Yvette said "odd" and not "unnatural". That really gets me, though I hid it well. There is nothing unnatural about me!

You are always so subtle [Laura ran one finger along Yvette's brown foot, then up her extraordinarily perfect calf to her knee.] Other writers just don't do this. I didn't really miss this until I discovered your writings and now you have totally spoiled me and now find their writings so inferior. I am so happy you have shown me the light. Yvette can't but help and admire Laura's top and Laura offers to let her see it by [Laura pulled the net top slowly up her body, over her naked breasts, then up over her head, shaking her hair free.] Wow, I love her aggressiveness here. I love Laura racketing up the heat like this. This next part is perfect as it captures the dynamic of Yvette's rising lust and Laura suddenly unsure what to do next [Slightly shocked, Yvette just stared at Laura's half-naked body, her eyes caressing Laura's jutting breasts and swelling coral nipples. But Laura was suddenly uncomfortable. God, what do I do now? she wondered.] I felt this way a few times in my younger days, trying to be extra sexy and then wondering what the hell to do next.

Yvette stares at Laura with smoldering eyes and puts her drink down and closes the distance between them and they share a sensual soul binding kiss. Yvette is falling under Laura's spell. I like how Laura keeps the heat only simmering by keeping the only contact just their mouths. Now Laura asks to feel Yvette's hard abs again. I just so adore this gentle pacing and slow seduction [Solemnly, Yvette nodded. Laura put her hand on the girl's smooth, warm midriff, feeling the firm muscles of her belly. Then, slowly, she raised her hand, letting the other hand join it, bringing them both up under the fringed sweatshirt and cupping both of Yvette's naked breasts, squeezing them gently.] This is soul stirring beautiful. It makes my pussy wet. They now kiss ravenously with much devouring of sweet tongues and you now give us your patented word picture [Laura could barely reign in her strong desire as she saw Yvette's beautiful, smooth, dark brown body, her breasts exquisite upswept globes with puffy black nipples. She kissed Yvette's swan- like neck, then her bare round shoulder, then lifted one perfect breast in her palm and lowered her lips to it.] As I so often have to repeat, only you truly caress your women and show them to be the beautiful creations that they are.

Now Yvette sheds her top. Laura quickly starts to overwhelm Yvette with her caressing and sucking of Yvette's beautiful breasts and nipples. Yvette tries to reciprocate but is totally overwhelmed. Laura now pushes her down onto the sofa cushions [Still sucking and tongueing and squeezing both of Yvette's exquisite breasts, she pushed the girl back into the soft sofa cushions and began removing Yvette's panties while she sucked.] Laura is increasing the love and heat. I love how you describe Yvette's beautiful nipples filling Laura's mouth. I can't just feel them in my hungry mouth and me love mauling them. Yvette whimpers that she really is about to come just from this. Laura is never one to let an opportunity like this pass [Laura realized that Yvette was going to come just from this. Just a little help would send her over. She had Yvette's panties only halfway down the girl's firm, smooth thighs, but she quickly slid her hand back up to Yvette's wet pussy.] I love how your women are always striving so hard to give their partners the ultimate pleasure they can produce. This shows the love and thoughtfulness that most lesbians bring to the table. Yvette begs to be finished off and Laura delivers [Laura knew just how hard to suck, and her fingers found the hard little berry of Yvette's clit. She rubbed it sharply, and Yvette burst with a violent uprush of coming. "Ungghh . . . oh! Anngghiieeeee!" she cried out, her lovely body flexing and shuddering as fierce spasms wracked her flesh.] This is how you addict straight women to lesbian sex. Give her mind-blowing orgasms that rend the flesh with sweet burning pleasure like they have never known before.

Laura now tries to string the orgasms together. Laura goes for it [It was long, with glossy black lips curving in a parabola that concealed a hot pink center. Swollen and flaring from its hood at the top was a thick, bulbous clit that Laura attacked immediately with her tongue, quickly bringing Yvette to another gasping, whinnying climax. Now Laura slid her hands under the girl's gorgeous buns and squeezed them while stabbing her tongue deep into the fiery, runny furrow of Yvette's cunt. She didn't want Yvette to stop coming, and she knew how to keep it going. God, I just know this girl has a g-spot, she suddenly realized. She comes so hard and so fast. I know I can find it.] I love how even in the beginning of this saga you so lovingly describe these women's vaginas. I can never get enough of your descriptions. Then you give the details of how Laura attacks Yvette love swollen vagina. You tell the reader how Laura is accomplishing her divine attack. This allows the reader to experience this divine fucking.

Laura then goes for the g-spot and discovers that Yvette has one and immediately starts to rub that spot that I wish I had and of course Yvette nearly dies from coming. These are the type of orgasms I love delivering [Yvette's luscious body suddenly stiffened. A throttled scream came from deep in her throat, and she began flipping and surging and coming in violent shocks, an orgasm so severe that she nearly propelled them both off the sofa with her wild motion.] I feel so happy and content when my bedmate screams in rapture like this knowing I'm the one who just took her to heaven. You describe your orgasms so well that you are the only author that can truly describe her characters coming down from the first crushing, throttling blow of a great orgasm. Plus, you are the only author to really describe a woman screaming out her pleasure ["Ungghh! Ohnnngg god! Unaahnnggiiieeeee! Oh . . . oh Laura! Oh! Auunggnnggiieeee! Oh Jesus! Anngghaaaiieee!"] True, not all women are screamers, but most you can get to vocalize their pleasure more and more with gentle coaxing. One needs to show ones pleasure if your partner desires to hear your sounds of pleasure. With your vivid descriptions and sounds you allow the reader to experience the lessening of the shockwaves to the aftershocks to that sweet afterglow. You give it all to us and for that you have my eternal gratitude. Yvette is totally stunned that women can come like this and now wants to reciprocate but is unsure. I love how she lets Laura know she wants to go down on her "God, yes". That says it all. Laura comforts her by just telling her to do what she would like and let instinct guide Yvette. I find this works almost all the time with a little instruction her and there. As long as they have enthusiasm, they are quick learners.

This is perfectly captured by Yvette here [Yvette needed little encouragement. Starting slowly, tenderly, within moments she was devouring Laura's sensitive nipples, digging her fingers into Laura's springy, round breasts and sucking hard, bringing Laura to the brink in under a minute. Laura looked down, her lust heightened by watching Yvette's hungry mouth on her saliva-wet breasts, by watching her nipples inside Yvette's mouth and feeling the wild spurts of sexual mania it inspired at the same time.] Yvette has lost any inhibitions and listening to her natural desires and thus is immediately into the sex and not hesitant. Always love that little detail of saliva on the breast. Now Yvette is ready to head south for some nookey. I really love Yvette's complete acceptance of this new wonderful world she has just discovered. Oh geez, my belly just clenched with [Laura opened her thighs, letting the girl slip between them. At first Yvette was again hesitant, but in a few seconds she slid her tongue deep into Laura's wet, aching pussy, and Laura surrendered completely, moaning and digging her fingers into her thigh muscles as she uptilted her cunt to Yvette's mouth and gyrated her pelvis slowly in gentle fuck-motions.] As you know I love that clenching fingers into ones thighs. I always want

to see that tongue sliding in deep and the surrender the woman receiving feels. Things you have captured from the very beginning.

She quickly brings Laura to orgasm and clings to Laura with happiness. I have always adored the way you convey these new lesbians joy at this new world Laura has just shown them. You are able to perfectly capture the joy these new converts are feeling. I have to come to bask in Laura's conquests. I myself enjoy this so much when I have experienced it. With Laura I get to experience again and again. I am writing this part just after chapter 267 and I am hungering for Shaniqua's seduction. I love to see how each of these unique and beautiful women react to the world that Laura is about to lovingly show them.

Laura now gives Yvette some loving instruction ["I promise you," Laura said softly, "that if you take my clit in your lips and just suck me softly but constantly, and give it a little tongue at the same time, that I can come four times before you let go." "Really?"] That would make me explode and I love Yvette's innocence here. Yvette gets back to her new joy and quickly makes Laura explode with girl come into her happy waiting mouth. Like real life though, she doesn't even quite get to Laura's instructions, Laura is so excited. One's plans sometimes don't happen as completely planned. They now rest. Laura now reflects on the beauty of Yvette and her model perfection while her past lovers were beautiful in their own way they can't quite match Yvette classic lines [But Yvette was long and sinuous, with smooth, deep chocolate skin, small round breasts, a fantastic round ass, and legs that made Laura's throat catch. She also had the most beautiful pussy.] Her pussy is truly a masterpiece of the gods. Made to be sucked and tongued to sweet orgasms in you waiting hungry mouth. What is even better is that Laura now tells

Yvette is so beautiful. One must tell your lover and not only think it. When I was younger I used to be very guilty of this but I have learned to say what I feel and perceive. Tell Her how Beautiful you find her. It really makes them beam I have discovered and savor.

Laura now does something that used to really bug me at first. She goes to pains to tell Yvette that she has a boyfriend. That she truly isn't a lesbian. I understand her reasoning here. She is on a journey of self-discovery and is still getting comfortable with her new perceptions of her true sexual orientation. But, being a lesbian I did use to cringe. Laura is just so VERY bi toward women that men hardly figure anymore except as a walk on the wild side once in a blue moon. Still makes for incredible fucking in your hands though. You make this lesbian blush over her love of your het fucking. You make it so honest, hot and refreshing. Now Yvette wonders over how only Laura has been able to elicit these tremendous desires and emotions in herself. I think Rhonda has also succeeded. If I remember correctly, after Laura opening new vistas to her, Yvette has slept with other men and women to advance her career. I can't wait to refresh my memory. I think that only women truly get her off though. Only women truly connect with her and make her die from coming. Yvette herself says [You know, if I'd known it was like this with girls, I don't know if I'd have ever got married."] Yes!! Laura once more stokes the fires deep in Yvette's belly with ["I guess you'll have to come to me for that," Laura said, cupping the marvels in her hands, lowering her mouth again to the protruding, thick black nipples. "Oh god . . . you're making me horny again," Yvette panted. "How can I be horny after coming that many times?"] Laura is showing her the wonders of lesbianism. There is oh so much pleasure waiting to be discovered.

Laura now starts the fires raging with some digital magic [Laura dipped her hand into the girl's crotch, quickly finding her soupy pussy and taut little clit again, scissoring the swollen bud between two fingers while she toyed with one delicious big nipple, curling her tongue around it, then sucking it gently, then more insistently, until it was hard and rubbery, the center stem pointing and stiff.] I love to scissor a woman's clit and feast on her nipples let me tell you, with plenty of kissing and cooing thrown in. Only you ever write of these things. We then discover that Yvette's husband doesn't make Yvette have nipple orgasms because he doesn't suck long or hard enough. Yvette's breast-feeding has made her nipples less sensitive. What I think is obvious here is that most men just don't foreplay with women's breast nowhere near enough. It is just a way stop for the penetration. Also, I sense a glaring lack of communication. No asking of what can I do to increase your pleasure. This is something women do just because it is our nature to do this. Laura love mauls Yvette's nipples producing a rolling fiery orgasm that just rolls though Yvette's body, producing waves of gentle exctacy.

Laura now wants some heavenly pussy-to-pussy fucking. I love how you describe her inching their cunts together and Laura positioning their legs. The shock of that first contact and Yvette nearly swooning. Now Laura proceeds with this wonderful fuck [Laura held her, dropping her mouth again to one of Yvette's beautiful small breasts and sucking her nipple, very hard this time, sucking a big chunk of the hard round ball into her mouth too. Yvette sagged in her arms, nearly swooning, and to bring her back Laura began churning her hips slowly, pushing the wet warm meat of her pussy into Yvette's, fucking her in a simmering, undulating rhythm. Yvette responded very quickly, churning back, moaning softly and kissing Laura's neck, digging her fingers into Laura's back.] Even in the beginning you had your lovers doing multiple things at once, wonderful descriptions of women's vaginas and that digging of fingers I so love. No wonder I was immediately hooked.

They fall into a gentle rhythm of sensual fucking, their mated groins grinding together in mutual bliss. Finally, a rupturing orgasm arrives for both [They pumped . . . quivered . . . moaned . . . pumped. And suddenly they both erupted in whinnying convulsions of coming. "Oh! Oh god . . . anngghhiieeee! Oh yes! Ungghhhaaieee!" Yvette cried, climaxing in wild undulations. Laura came only seconds afterward, feeling a huge cloud of white-hot ecstasy swell up and burst deep inside her pussy, then fill her trembling body with intense bliss.] Again, from the beginning you describe with multiple lines if not paragraphs of descriptions of the orgasm itself. The best other writers might give is a sentence or two if I'm really lucky and the vast others just say they came hard. Yawn, wake me up please. And truly only you actually let your women vocalize their exctacy. What a novel concept this must be to other writers. Not only do you vocalize the pleasure you have always come up with novel and heavenly ways to describe these orgasms destroying these women with hot, soul stirring exctacy. They are so overwrought that they continue fucking for a while with more gut wrenching pussy destroying orgasms.

After resting Laura starts to message Yvette's back [Laura gave her a back rub. Yvette had a beautiful back, shapely and smooth, tapering to a tiny waist, then culminating in a magnificent ass. Her buns were smallish but perfectly round and high, and when Laura began kissing them, she could almost hear the floods begin again in Yvette's pussy.] You have really made me into a back worshipper like Laura. Love your loving words stroking Yvette's back and that great line to end the paragraph with. Oh geez, it's pussy clenching time [In about a minute, Yvette was moaning, twisting, clenching her asscheeks. Laura slipped a pillow under her belly to elevate her ass slightly, and bring her pussy up too. Then she pulled the girl's beautiful dark moons apart and began exploring the crack of Yvette's ass with her tongue.] I love exploring a virgin ass. Knowing I'm about to show her pleasure she never dreamed of before. I too love running my tongue up and down the crack and then slowly focusing on the sphincter. I can't say it any better than this [By now Laura was tongue-fucking the girl's asshole, giving Yvette sensations she had never imagined, let alone experienced. She squirmed frantically, her twisting, sleek body arousing Laura even more. Laura began licking her pussy too, running her tongue up and down, stabbing quickly in, then moving to the other orifice, stabbing there. Yvette went wild.] I love giving and receiving. Loving both holes at once. Yum! Of course Yvette has a soul crushing orgasm when Laura love assaults her clit while reaming Yvette's asshole with a long forefinger. What woman wouldn't? I will never tire of your showing us these women's pleasure ["Auuunnggghh! Ohhnnnggiieeee!" she cried out, her face torn with ecstacy as Laura continued to fuck her hard, bringing her to another climax.]

Yvette now becomes a tornado of lesbian fucking. Going wild on Laura's body. Consuming Laura with lesbian lust. After she has exhausted Laura they share some post coital time with [Laura smiled and pulled Yvette down on top of her, luxuriating in the feel of the girl's long naked body pressing against her everywhere.] I always long to feel my lover's body pressed close to mine. Cute how Yvette worries she may have hurt Laura in her frantic need. We have a little gentle jealousy with Yvette getting a little pensive over Laura's other women lovers. Laura tells her little white lies of having only two women instead of three women and telling Yvette none can match her passion. Sometimes it better to tell a little white lie than hurt someone. Why cause pain when you don't have too?

They go for one more round of lovemaking and Laura quickly gives Yvette a debilitating g-spot orgasm. When Yvette recovers she immediately starts to return the favor. She runs her fingers over Laura's runny cunt and asks ["Oh baby, you're close," Yvette murmured. "Yes." "You want me to suck it?" she asked, again bringing a low moan of need from Laura's throat with her finger on Laura's clit. "Yes. Hard." "Do you want me to do anything else? To make it stronger?" "Fuck me," Laura panted. "Just fuck me hard and fast. I want you. I love you to fuck me, Yvette. I can't stand the thought of it being over."] You are the only author who actually has her characters communicate while making love. Asking and inquiring, expressing their desires and wants. I really mean that you are the only one. Other stories have almost no communication during lovemaking. Their characters fuck with no communication. How boring and almost a little sad. After Laura is brought to blissful orgasm, Yvette has to work her way through this new affair. I love how she quickly shakes off any guilt and quickly declares her desire to meet Laura as soon as possible. The way I look at it, since society won't really accept our relationships and us then we aren't really committing adultery when we fuck married women. I think we are only giving what they really need.

 

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Chapter 31:

This chapter starts with Laura reflecting that her hunger for Yvette remains just as strong as before their coupling. I find sex with a woman only makes me want her more. To discover more and more about her sweet flesh. Laura also realizes that Yvette is her first lover at the company that works in the same part of the company as herself. They will be seeing each other on an ongoing basis. When Laura does meet Yvette, we immediately discover that Yvette's hunger for Laura if anything has only grown for Laura. Yvette whispers to her in the hall to meet her in the office of Yvette's boss who is out on business. Laura knows it is dangerous but can't stop herself. Just having Yvette whisper this in her ear makes Laura wet with need. I myself have avoided the actual act of sex at work. I have fondled and deep kissed but stayed from the "act". One of these days I will have to do it though. I just need to be very careful. Once Paul and I came on a couple fucking their brains out in the guy's office that is buried in the bowels of a building. He didn't know we have master keys to get to our equipment. I wish you could have seen Paul's face. Hehehe. I wasn't really fazed too much; I was to busy oogling Sandi's hot fucking body.

Once they are in the room the immediately start to devour each other. They quickly start to disrobe and Laura takes Yvette breast as soon as they are exposed ["Ohhhh!" Yvette gasped as Laura's lips closed over one of her thick, bulging black nipples. "God . . . bite it!" she whimpered. Laura bit the swollen bulb gently, and Yvette's knees sagged. She was so close to a climax that she nearly came standing up. "God . . . Laura, I'm going to come!" she gasped. "Ohhh! God, bite it again."] I will never tire of how describe a woman's breast or vagina as all "swollen" and the other plethora of divine words you use to describe our most precious of treasures. You make love to these women bodies with your heavenly word brush strokes. It is fun to read of them worrying about getting caught. They move from the door to the couch.

Laura pushes Yvette onto the couch and kneels before her and [pushing up Yvette's skirt and pulling down her panties. She skimmed them completely off, over Yvette's white sneakers, then fell on the girl's beautiful, long, perfectly-shaped wet pussy with her mouth, tonguing and sucking it until Yvette spilled over in a sharp orgasm.] I love the hunger here. Pushing your women down and getting those damm panties out of the way and burying your face in her marvelous cunt and feasting until she comes with much hip pumping into your starving mouth. Laura brings her to another crushing orgasm. I love how you describe how even though Yvette is groggy from her brush with heaven she immediately hungers to return Laura's love. Lesbians always strive to give back to our lovers. Men just don't do this or even feel it, I think. Love their wild abandon here, fucking like "wild animals".

I had totally forgotten how forceful Yvette could be in her lovemaking, it makes my pussy clench with hot wet need [Laura's eyes rolled up as Yvette slid two fingers under the elastic of her panties and into her soupy cunt. She helped Yvette get her own blouse unbuttoned, then moaned softly as Yvette nearly ripped off her bra and devoured Laura's breasts. It was like a rape. Yvette's mouth and hands mauled Laura's naked breasts, bringing her to the edge of a sharp orgasm in just seconds.] I so love to be taken roughly. Dawn and me have so much in common. Yvette quickly devours Laura's sweet pussy to shattering orgasms. Lesbians always long to reciprocate. I agree with Laura that the thrill of worrying about getting discovered can add to the thrill. I have felt this back in college and doing women in their house when their husbands or lovers could find us.

I love it when Yvette tells Laura that she told her husband she felt ill so she wouldn't have to fuck him. She dreams of Laura. The way it should be. Laura thinks that it is time to finish their lovemaking but Yvette demurs. Laura tries to setup an after work romp but Yvette won't have anything to do with that. She must have Laura NOW! [Reluctantly, Laura let Yvette undress her. Carefully, the girl removed Laura's skirt, her silk blouse, and unfastened her half-removed bra. Except for her stockings, Laura was naked. She looked down at them. "God, leave them on," Yvette panted. "It's so sexy with them on. Your legs are so beautiful."] I so dearly love your women complimenting each other. This so clearly shows their burning love for each other. Yvette informs Laura that she doesn't want her to come until Yvette is ready. She needs to dine on pussy until her heart is satisfied. I know that feeling very well. Yvette takes it easy on Laura's nipples to prolong the pleasure [Yvette caressed and kissed and sucked Laura's sensitive breasts until Laura was ready to scream. After two or three minutes of it, she was twisting, squirming, her muscles clenching, soft, desperate moaning coming from her throat. "Oh god, honey, I need it," she moaned to Yvette. "Ohhhnnn . . . oh god, honey,

I need it, I need it."] I always long to make my lover plead for release and begging me to take them to heaven. Killing their sweet flesh with excruciating pleasure.

Now Yvette teases Laura to keep the pleasure flowing [But Yvette had learned her lessons well, learned them from Laura. She turned to other parts of Laura's tense body, caressing Laura's thighs above the line of her stockings, teasing her, making Laura want to feel the girl's lips on her pussy, her tongue there. Laura panted and twisted frantically, cupping her own breasts--still wet with Yvette's warm saliva, her nipples erect--in her own hands and squeezing them sharply.] I always want my orgasms but I loved being teased and made to beg and love doing it to my lovers in return. Now that I think about it again, I think you are one of the few authors who have real honest to goodness teasing to prolong the chase. Just another thing to make me love your stories so much. Teasing reduces me to what Laura is experiencing now [When Yvette's mouth finally reached the wet, puckering slit of Laura's inflamed cunt, Laura nearly cried out with hot ecstatic excitement. Again she turned her face into the pillows, whimpering as her hips churned frantically, pushing her cunt up into the girl's mouth.] Again those wonderful words like "puckering and inflamed" used to describe Laura's love swollen cunt. I never tire of this. Then the always hunger to read of bucking a pussy into a waiting hungry mouth.

Yvette love mauls her clit until [Her face torn with ecstacy, her body arched and shuddering wildly, Laura bit off her own screams deep in her throat and came in torrents. She could not believe how she could let herself have such a total, shattering orgasm when only a thin wall separated her from discovery by her fellow workers. And even Yvette seemed stunned by the power of Laura's climax.] Know the feeling in a lover's house (as a "friend") and her husband is sleeping in a room right down the hall. Poor saps never even suspect or are wise enough to play innocent. I am only providing what they can't provide. Having to hold a scream inside has its own special power though I much prefer screaming my exctacy. They finish and Yvette makes plans immediately to go to Laura's house for some more much needed fucking. Once Pandora's box has been opened, if a woman is wise, she will never close it again. It was touching seeing Yvette fret over her child. One's child does come first, that I completely agree with that. Still Yvette does come over and they fuck glorious until 2:00 a.m. in the morning. No man can match the pleasure we can provide. I fully understand Yvette hungering to get as much lesbian loving as she can get. I am happy she has Rhonda to give her what Laura can't always provide.

We now get one of the first doses of Laura's angst with ["You can't blame me for loving you," Yvette confessed to her softly, during one pause. "Nobody ever made me come the way you do. It feels like I'm going to pass out."] This bothers Laura. She loves Yvette back in return but Laura can sense that Yvette is getting a little clinging with her love. I can understand this; lesbian love does make one agog. Still I always strive to gently let them know that I love them as a person and bedmate but not that deep romantic one and only kind of love. I admit, sometimes it has not been pretty. It usually works out though, fortunately. Yvette has a family that she needs to maintain and let Laura give the pleasure and true deep connection that only lesbian lovemaking gives a woman. Let the man supply the worldly needs and we will supply the truly wonderful sexual aspects. Laura reflects on Karen and Brandi and hoped for future couplings but basks and revels in the here and now and the way Yvette has turned into a fuck demon who has discovered all this new pleasures her body can provide. It is no wonder that Yvette is totally hot for it. I think Laura is so wise when she informs Yvette to continue to let her husband have sex with her and just fake it. Keep him happy and not suspicious. This makes everything so much easier. No need to be jealous of this, I know it is me they long for and if they have a thing for male cock I can't really compete with them on that and I have learned to just accept it. Just don't go running back to hetsville because of society and its fucked up rules.

The next day she meets Rob and her pussy immediately gets wet for him. Laura was much more bi in those days. I am so pleased that she now only gets a man in her life once in a blue moon now. I smiled when she dispenses with the trivialities and asks Rob back to her place to fuck. They both know that they want. Of course Rob accepts the invite. I sure would have. At her place she gets into a sexy teddy and gets very wet. I did grrrrrr when she thinks to herself that she isn't a lesbian. Laura is still only in the beginning phases of her personal journey of discovery. It is nice that Rob is an accomplished lover [He caressed her cheek, then kissed her mouth. Laura responded quickly. Rob was a good lover, and she knew some very high-quality screwing was in store. She also knew, from before, that he was intrigued by her sexual ambiguity, that it heightened his lust for her.] As a lot of bi girls say, "who wants to say no to an orgasm"? I know that is most men's fantasy, to be the meat between a lesbian sandwich.

Cute the comment about Laura telling Rob about having to spank Karen when she nearly ripped Laura's teddy. That imagery must have got Rob's dick to quivering. Rob is, alas, telling the truth when he says [Rob's eyes widened, and he grinned. "She couldn't fuck you as hard as I can, because she doesn't have one of these," he said, taking Laura's hand and dropping it to his crotch, where she felt the coiled power of his huge, jumping penis under his pants.] As powerful as I am, I can't match a well-built man's power pound for pound. I can focus my chi and deliver a devastating blow in a fight, but a woman just doesn't have the muscle density of mass to match a man. Sigh, it is a shame. We use skill to overcome this, but it would be nice to have that raw power.

Before Rob can proceed, Laura drops to her knees and quickly pulls out Rob's ten-inch shaft of iron. That is the one thing I miss from my experimentation days is sucking a real live dick and making it come in my mouth. I am more than happy to play with a woman's fake cock. It is amazing how many love for me to give it the full treatment. I have come a long way since my experimenting days. I have learned to deep throat and know how to put on a hot visual show. Wish they could make a nice warm fully pliant dildo that could somehow take a woman's juices and explode it in mouth and throat. Oh well, I do so enjoy putting on a show for my lover if she desires it. More than happy to let them fuck my titties too it they want like Rob does here [First, knowing how men loved it, she held his twitching meat between her breasts, smothering it with them, rolling them over it, squeezing the iron-hard shaft between the smooth, warm globes. Then she took it into her mouth and toyed with the swollen head of his prick for several minutes, licking and sucking him until Rob was groaning and panting uncontrollably. Finally, when she knew that any more sucking would bring on a premature explosion, she stopped and looked up expectantly at him.] You have always known how to make any sex so hot. You use just the right level of detail in your detailing of fellatio and describe it in your usual magical way. I always looked at your het sex as just kind of close my eyes and pretend it is a woman with a strap-on. Your het sex is so good it makes this lesbian blush.

I am impressed that Rob does inquire of Laura on how she wants to be fucked. My estimation of him went up a few notches. Laura is evidently in her kinkiest mode and requests to have her wrists tied to the bedpost and her breast tied up and be fucked up the ass. Can go for the first and last but please skip the second. I love this feeling of vulnerability here [Laura was completely vulnerable, on her back, looking up at him with fear and crazy lust, her breasts throbbing, her large nipples flaring, bulging, shiny and dark with engorged blood. Rob squatted between her splayed thighs, swabbing his enormous cock with K-Y jelly.] I'm nearly swooning here thinking of being taken like this. Restrained with my lover swabbing her big cock with baby oil or my flowing juices and knowing she is soon to be invading my waiting asshole and take me however she wants. Yum!!!

To keep from making to much noise Laura requests that Rob gag her. This is something else I personally don't like. It makes me nervous. If I have to keep quite, kiss me while screaming or let me scream into my hand/arm or your body. The other just feels unnatural. For Laura though, she likes it. Rob again is gentle while gagging Laura. I'm again surprised. I then love how Rob prepares for his monster invasion of Laura's yearning asshole [Buttering up one forefinger with K-Y jelly, he slid it up into her asshole and began to fuck it, widening it for the monster. To make access easier, he slid a pillow under her buns, raising her wide-open groin so that her cunt and ass were both totally vulnerable.] Of yeah, my asshole is clenching thinking of this. Now we have the sweet invasion [When he removed it and began to pull apart her buns with both hands, she began to whimper and shake. The greased head of his cock kissed the puckered ring of her asshole, then slowly entered her. She shut her eyes and clenched her teeth, keening softly, panting, as it slid deep into her ass.] I really marvel how you are so able to capture all the facets of lovemaking. It is this skill that lets me enjoy this het sex so much. I have completely stopped reading any other het stuff. It is just so boring. No details or something like an engineering dissertation.

Laura like myself feels that big spear of pain upon that initial penetration. We both know we just have to hang on for a little while before the pleasure blooms and soon fills ones body with burning bliss. I had forgotten Rob's skill [They were both paralyzed for a couple of minutes, but then Rob began to fuck her, slowly, inching his huge member out of her ass, then sliding it back in, rubbing her clit at the same time with two fingers, until in no time Laura was whooping and quivering uncontrollably.] Rob really knows how to pleasure the whole woman. From what I have heard and the het porn I have seen men seem to only concentrate on their cock (how typical) but Rob on the other hand [Rob's huge, stiff prick ripped up into her ass, stabbing her to the quick, while his mouth tore at her bulging nipples, and his hand mashed her clit. She came in sharp, convulsive spasms, groaning and writhing, her body seared by the scalding sexual explosions.] Not bad for a guy. They both have crushing orgasms with Rob pumping loads of hot jizm up Laura's spasming asshole. Sigh, I wish they could make a strap-on that could do that realistically.

Laura is not finished and begs Rob to take his cock out of her ass and spear her cunt. He does but does have the courtesy to ask Laura to let him clean it off first but Laura can't wait. He buries his reviving cock deep into her tight pussy. He is soon sucking her nipples hard just like Laura and myself love it. Soon her body is burning with pleasure. Because he just came he has staying power and rams his battering ram deep and hard into Laura. They both again have crushing orgasms. Laura wants to continue like she has learned she can do with women but realizes that she must let Rob rest his manhood. Men are just built differently. After letting him rest Laura determines to give him a supreme blowjob. She uses the new skills she has learned from her awakening lesbianism [She knew just how to do it, concentrating wholly on his pleasure, teasing his wet, jumping prick with her lips and tongue until he was shaking and moaning uncontrollably. She teased him the way she and Karen had learned to fuck, bringing him to the brink of an orgasm, then pulling him back, exciting him wildly, then backing off just before he came. Rob was frantic with need. "God, Laura . . . just do it!" he begged. "Please! Do it!"] Love that begging. Doesn't matter who is doing it. She titty fucks him a little and then finishes him off [Laura relented. Holding his stiff cock and heavy balls in both hands, grasping them roughly, which she knew would excite him further, she took the swollen head of his prick into her mouth and began sucking him hard. Rob was so close that he came within seconds, great spurting jets of semen leaping from his jerking prick into her mouth.] This is the only thing I miss from het sex. Someone really needs to develop a strap-on / dildo that can do this realistically. Love feeling that jerking and the load blasting into my hungry mouth. I just can't stand the packaging it comes with it.

They end with some more fucking after resting a little. Rob parts with a wistful inquiry about making it with Laura and her mystery (to him) lesbian lover. That is something that I'm sure will be quite hot when I get to it.

 

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Chapter 32:

This chapter starts with Laura and Yvette in the white-hot passion of a new affair. They can't get enough of each other's beautiful sweet flesh. They fuck every chance they get. They risk sex in the office and fuck in Laura's apartment regularly. They finally fuck in Yvette's house but Yvette is a little repressed with her little girl next door in her bedroom. We discover that Yvette just doesn't really enjoy sex with her husband. We find that she does it as little as possible and fakes it when she does do it with him. How sad. This goes beyond homosexual or heterosexual sex. I have observed enough couples that have been together for some years and they have let their sex life just go to hell. Men have it easier because they come so much easier but there are plenty of them who don't really enjoy it all that much. Couples just stop communicating and trying. They just let their sexual selves atrophy. I absolutely refuse to do that. I believe communication, having fun, keeping an open mind and staying aware of getting in rut is what couples need. Great sex is not a given, one must constantly invest in it with your partner(s) to keep it fun and spontaneous. Oh well, time to get off the soapbox.

Finally, Yvette's husband is going out of town and Yvette gets her mother to take the kid for the weekend. Laura is sure glorious fucking is about to ensue but something wonderful happens to make it even better. She meets Chanitra, Yvette's sixteen-year sister. It is lust a first sight. Laura is still shocked at how she can find yet another black women who sets her pussy on fire. We find that Chanitra is beautiful [The weather was warm, and Chanitra was wearing cutoff jeans and a skimpy halter. She didn't yet have a woman's body. She still had the enchanting, smooth, lissome body of a girl on the verge of complete womanhood, and the sight of it nearly made Laura come unglued. Chanitra's skin was somewhat blacker than Yvette's, very black, and her long legs were even more shapely than her sister's, if that were possible. They rose to willowly thighs and the most perfect bottom Laura had ever seen, even more perfect than Rina's, high and sculptured and round, a more beautiful ass than anyone could imagine possible. Her small, jutting breasts were concealed by the thin halter, but the rest of her upper body was naked, and

sleek, and smooth, her back a masterpiece, her midriff taut and glossy.] I will never tire of how you so lovingly describe your women. I have just read a few other stories recently and except for the usual eye and hair color and general bust size and the fact they have a nice ass, I don't really know anything about how they look. I will take your loving descriptions any day.

I like how you describe Chanitra at this age. Teenagers run the whole gamut of the perfectly proportioned young woman's body, to the layer of chubby baby fat to the kind like Chanitra who have come into their height and still have to wait for the rest of their body to catch up. Chanitra is so lucky that soon Laura is going to be instructing her about lesbian love. I hungered for such instruction at her age and if the girl is mentally mature enough I'm more than happy to teach them in return now. I want girls like Chanitra who have already started their sexual exploration but who want a woman's touch or wish to now explore their gay side. My moral issue is leaving the truly innocents for someone else. Chanitra eats dinner with them and then leaves. Laura falls on Yvette with a passion that Yvette more than happily returns. It seems that Yvette has a deep hunger for soul satisfying lesbian sex. Her hunger is deep and needs serious fucking to calm. After they fuck themselves out, Laura stares at the ceiling trying to come to grips with her awakening desires. Before Karen she would never have looked twice at Chanitra. Fortunately, for Laura, she has been awakened to her true nature. Now she fully accepts her desire for black women and hungers for new women when one catches her eye.

Unfortunately for Yvette she is suddenly sent out of town on a business trip. I would have been fuming if I were she. Five glorious days of fucking reduced to one. That is totally unfair of the fates; let me tell you. Laura is thrown into confusion when Yvette tells her she can pick up her suitcase because Chanitra is house sitting. Laura is consumed with lust knowing she will meet Chanitra. Laura wonders if she is a virgin and what it would be like to seduce her. Laura is both attracted and repelled by the idea of Chanitra being a virgin. Laura has to pickup the suitcase. Again, Chanitra is wearing her provocative outfit. My gaydar would have been whirring immediately. She is wearing this outfit knowing I'm coming. My hopes would be making my pussy wet right about know.

As usual, you give the little details that make your work so endearing [The girl had a fetching little crinkle-nosed smile. Laura had been so busy looking at Chanitra's spectacular body that she had scarcely noticed her beautiful face.] Chanitra leads her to the bedroom to pickup the suitcase. My gaydar would be working harder here. I love how even at this early stage, so many of Laura's angels were seducing HER [Oh god! Laura thought. It was all so obvious. Chanitra bent over to pick it up, and Laura's eyes lingered long, lovingly, even lustfully on the girl's perfect long legs and incredible bottom. Chanitra couldn't help noticing the way Laura was looking at her as she turned and gave Laura the bag. "You fucking my sister, aren't you," she said in a quiet, matter-of-fact voice.] My pussy would be flooding right now, knowing I was soon to be making love this sixteen year old angel. Giving her pleasure like she never believed possible. Hopefully making her a dedicated lesbian slut for life.

Laura is her usual flustered self and blushes profusely. It is Chanitra who has to console Laura and calm her down for the seduction to continue. I Love It!!!! Laura apologizes for staring at Chanitra but ["I don't mind," Chanitra crinkled her nose. "Kinda like it. Why do you think I wear these, anyway?" She did a graceful little pirouette, showing off her sleek black thighs and incredible high round ass. Laura tried not to crave the girl's delicious body.] I so adore Chanitra's confidence she has in her body, even at this young age. She already knew of its power over men and now she is discovering its power over women. Now Laura nearly swoons when Chanitra tells her almost like a sister that she has done it a few times but that guys just don't have any skill. This would be the sweetest music to my ears. I would soon be teaching her the truth. Laura can't really believe that this angel is allowing this to happen. Actually, Chanitra is leading it.

Laura can't help but whisper that Chanitra's ass is so beautiful. We discover that Chanitra goes to great pains to make sure this fact is seen by all ["You like it?" Chanitra grinned, turning again, sideways, and sticking it out provocatively. "You know, I don't wear anything under these. Just fold up a piece of toilet paper and stick it between . . . you know where, and the cloth. Pretty sexy, huh?"] It is these details that make these women so endearing and real to me. These details make my pussy hunger for them. Chanitra asks Laura if she wants to see her ass. Laura tries to do the right thing and asks about Yvette. Chanitra tells her that Yvette will never know. I love Chanitra's attitude. She will let nothing stop her from experiencing this lesbian seduction. Your making my pussy flood now [Chanitra unbuttoned her cutoffs and let them slide slowly down her spectacular legs. Already Laura could feel her cunt throbbing and oozing, fluttering excitedly. Chanitra kicked the cutoffs away from her feet. She turned, and Laura's eyes feasted on the gorgeous, round, beautifully shaped bottom.] With my pictures of Chanitra I can just closes my eyes and see this. I can supply the background ambient details and put Chanitra in this and feel it all.

I smiled great big when it is Chanitra who directs Laura to sit on the bed so she can stand in front of Laura and show Laura her ass and its sheer perfection [The girl was so receptive that Laura stopped restraining herself. Her hands grew more aggressive, cupping, kneading, squeezing, her fingers gradually invading the shadowy crack between the perfect, gleaming buns. She bent forward and kissed them, running her lips and tongue all over them, nipping the taut flesh gently with her teeth.] I love how Laura now that she is comfortable lets her hunger loose. Reading this makes me realize that I don't think I have ever read of a character worshipping an ass. They may tongue fuck a yummy asshole or plunge a strap-on in a waiting rectum but a woman's ass is never worshipped. Again just the glaring deficiencies of other authors. Sigh. Thank goodness I discovered you.

Of course Chanitra starts to quake with desire. Laura now has Chanitra lean over the bed and place her hands on the bed spreading her cunt treasure for [Then Laura slipped to her knees behind the girl and came up under Chanitra's perfect ass, slipping her tongue deep into the wet open cleft of Chanitra's pussy.] Setting her thinking, I'm not sure I have even seen this basic position in erotica. It is always the classic missionary variations for other authors. Laura quickly takes Chanitra's lesbian cherry [Her thigh muscles and her buns clenched, making her more desirable than ever to Laura, who knew she could make the girl come quickly, if she chose to. Gently, she pushed and urged Chanitra forward, face down on the bed, pushing the girl's sleek thighs apart and lowering her mouth to Chanitra's clit at the same time. It only took a few sucks to bring on a sharp, surprising climax. "Aunngg! Oh! Oh . . . annggg . . . aaiingghiieeee!" Chanitra cried out, her body shaking as a strong orgasm gripped her.] Chanitra has been shown true pleasure. There are some skilled men out there but it is women who truly know how to pleasure a woman to the depths of her soul.

I love how Laura coaxes as many orgasms out of Chanitra's young flesh as she can. She slowly ups the heat each time. She adds breast worship to the attack while finger fucking her hard. Then a little later she adds a finger coated with Chanitra's own cunt cream up into her warm asshole and pounds her rectum while tonguing Chanitra's divine cunt for another monster orgasm. I can just imagine all the cream this divine cunt must be pumping out in exctacy. Cunt cream for me to swallow in my greed. Laura is still dressed and Chanitra needs to return the love back to Laura [Chanitra reached up, pulled Laura's face down to hers, and kissed Laura with a scorching, searing kiss, unbuttoning the back of Laura's blouse as they kissed. "I want you," she panted into Laura's ear. "Want to fuck you too, like you did me."] I love it when a woman embraces her true lesbian self and doesn't let society's fucked up rules get in the way.

You capture perfectly the way these young teenagers take to sex. I have nearly been consumed by an awakening lesbian. [She almost ripped Laura's expensive silk blouse in her hurry to get it off. Her lips were on Laura's neck and shoulders, dipping between the cups of Laura's bra, hungrily kissing the shadowy valley between Laura's breasts, while her fingers worked at the clasp behind Laura's back. She got the bra off and took one of Laura's aching breasts in both hands, sucking the nipple deep into her mouth.] Chanitra is a tornado of lesbian fucking and quickly brings Laura to a crushing orgasm with just breast mauling. Like a good lesbian Chanitra now hungers for more [But then Chanitra was quickly removing the rest of her clothes, skimming her skirt and panties down her legs. And then Laura felt the entire naked length of the girl's delicious body against hers as they coiled together, kissing and caressing with a sharp, feverish urgency that she didn't remember feeling since she and Rina first discovered each other.] Again you are the only author who really allows their women to coil together. To luxuriate in each other's bodies all twined together and feeling all that wonderful flesh pressing against each other. Again, I find this strange. I sort of understand this in het stories but not lesbian fiction.

As so many lesbian virgins do, Chanitra goes into overdrive to satisfy her new found lust [For a near-virgin, a certain virgin when it came to girl- fucking, Chanitra was a hot and urgent lover. Her long tongue slithered up inside Laura's flowing pussy, her lips closed over Laura's clit, and she mouth-mauled a straining, sobbing, groaning Laura into two more climaxes in only a few minutes. They were quick, wrenching, violent climaxes, and Laura was still panting and sighing as Chanitra slithered back up to embrace her.] I have had this happen to me a few times. Most women need some time to get comfortable with this newness but a few take to it like a duck to water. A virgin or near virgin will just maul my pussy to quick orgasms. They just don't want to stop. Orgasms that are two closely spaced and leave me feeling raw and in need of letting my kitty have a prolonged catnap. They just go nuts, not that I'm complaining. I always love the passion of your women.

They now have some nice post coital time and Chanitra tells Laura she understands why Yvette is fucking Laura. Of course Laura frets and says she isn't trying to break up the marriage. Chanitra is wise enough to know that she and her sister are only looking for great fucking that they have discovered that Laura can provide this. They are only taking advantage of what the gods have provided them. Laura is so happy that Chanitra is so fun loving and carefree. They quickly stoke the fires deep in their bellies [Laura kissed her passionately, and her kiss aroused Chanitra, who began squirming, pushing her small hard naked breasts into Laura's, panting, even whimpering. Laura couldn't believe how lucky she herself was. This delicious girl! So young, so beautiful, so exuberant and energetic and ripe and eager for hot girl-fucking. With me! Laura thought. God, she's so beautiful!] This is how I feel with any new lover. I always feel so honored and fortunate to be making love to them and try and show them this through my lovemaking. Again I dearly love all this pressing of sweet flesh. I always hunger to feel my lover's body coiled with mine. Clutching her sweet sweaty flesh to mine.

Laura now uses her lesbian talents and prolongs the lovemaking. I love the description of a teenagers hard young breast [Chanitra was very deep black and had young, new, hard little breasts with popping, bursting, gleaming large black nipples that swelled up from the surface of her breasts like ripe plums. They were sensitive, too. Even the touch of Laura's tongue on her nipples made her moan, made her body strain and quiver.] I will never tire of you use all the adjectives to describe a woman's anatomy. Now Laura starts Chanitra to the brink and back until Chanitra's body is wound up like an over tight spring. She devours Chanitra's nipples ["Oh I will, baby, I will," Laura murmured, nearly swallowing one of Chanitra's delectable thick nipples, bringing short, hot yelps of ecstasy from the girl's throat.] I love swallowing a woman's nipples this way and the cries it produces.

Laura continues teasing Chanitra until she goes for some pussy-to-pussy fucking. She quickly mounts Chanitra and starts that delicious rhythm of love. Of course Chanitra nearly swoons when she feels this wondrous feeling for the first time. Laura enfolds Chanitra [She embraced the girl's lean, smooth, beautiful body, pressing their naked breasts together and kissing Chanitra with scorching, devouring passion. At the same time, she let her hands slide down the girl's fantastic back to her ass and dug her fingers into the perfect moons, jamming her cunt forward into Chanitra's and grinding her hips sharply.] My belling is clenching feeling Chanitra's cunt grinding mine while I dig my fingers into her sweet ass pumping her into myself. Only you give me the details to let me do this. My pussy thanks you so much.

They both come almost together with your patented screams of rapture. I love how Laura ["Anngghh! Oh, oh . . . mmnnnggghhhieeeee!" she cried, clinging to Chanitra's straining body, luxuriating in the feel of their two silky wet throbbing pussies pressed together while they both came wildly.] Can't get enough of that clasping close of a straining screaming lover and in this case jamming your flooding spasming cunt into hers. They now kiss softly with love. Laura reflects that though Chanitra is still a teenager she is now a woman. A teenager who has learned of lesbian love has crossed the threshold to womanhood. Girls who fuck boys are so cheated as far as I'm concerned. Chanitra is beaming because of this wondrous gift she has just discovered and lets it be known that she wants more.

Chanitra eyes go murky with need and Laura is more than happy to comply. Laura decides it is now time to thoroughly explore the masterpiece that is Chanitra's ass [Finally, she pulled the hard round buns apart and began to explore the crack between them with her tongue. She knew Chanitra had never experienced anything quite like it, and the girl nearly went wild, moaning, squirming crazily. The hotter Chanitra became, the more relentless Laura became, until finally she was tongue-fucking the girl's asshole and scissoring Chanitra's clit between two fingers at the same time, bringing Chanitra to a seizure of coming that seemed more wrenching and total than even their cunt- kissing shared orgasm that had preceded it.] It doesn't get any better than this. Burying your tongue in your lover's clasping asshole while you frig her to a convulsive orgasm.

They fuck themselves out again. They now coo and bask in each other's presence. Chanitra is still stunned that a woman can come like this. She then gets afraid that Yvette will somehow discover that they have been fucking exuberantly in Yvette's own bed. That is a high in and of itself. Chanitra begs for a little more loving. Laura then proceeds to love her slowly and with great skill. Laura spends twenty minutes making slow patient love to Chanitra. Making Chanitra tight with a desperate need for release which Laura delivers [This time Laura couldn't resist fucking Chanitra's ass and pussy at the same time while sucking her clit, and the girl nearly passed out as a wrenching, excruciating orgasm throttled her arching, shuddering body. She screamed so loud that Laura was afraid the neighbors might hear. Spasm after spasm of fierce pleasure wracked her beautiful body, finally leaving her as limp as a rag, panting and moaning in Laura's arms.] I would be basking after delivering such a devastating orgasm to my lover. Seeing her all destroyed with pleasure, lying their with a big fat smile on her face. Laura leaves her sleeping like a baby in Yvette's bed. What a tender way to end the story.

 

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Chapter 34:

Laura discovers Chanitra waiting for her at her apartment. Laura is coming back from a weekend vacation where she has been fucking gloriously with a model. Chanitra is all cute in her exuberance over seeing Laura until she sees in Laura's appearance that she is coming back from a sexual interlude. Chanitra then breaks down and sobs. Chanitra still needs to learn that Laura must keep her freedom to pleasure her other angels. Chanitra needs to mature a little in this. A lot of women can use a little of this maturity. Once Chanitra gets over her bout with jealousy her lust burns through [And all Chanitra obviously wanted was to drown her adolescent jealousies in a hot orgy of frenzied fucking with Laura. She already had Laura's blouse half-unbuttoned, and her hands were darting underneath and behind, looking for Laura's bra clasp. Panting and hot, Laura pulled back a little.] You are always able to so vividly capture the raw heat of lesbian need. This is one the first things that hooked me with your writings. You actually give honest to goodness lesbian lust that I can just immerse myself in and revel in it.

I guess Laura was roughed up the last chapter but Laura feels herself rising to the challenge [Raped twice in the same day, Laura thought. But the girl's phenomenal, hard young body made her feel the same way. She pulled Chanitra's shirt up over her head and they kissed and unclasped each other's bra at the same time. Now their kiss suddenly turned romantic and lanquid, full of exquisite tenderness and feeling, unlike any of her kisses with Yvette or with Sandra.] You are the only author to show tenderness and sensuality in her lovemaking. Plus, you show how dynamics can flow so easily in ones lovemaking. One doesn't know where it will lead one. Other authors make their lovemaking seem almost scripted. Yours always flows like real life. Love how at this point they are moving almost in synchronicity.

You are always giving little details that make your chapters so pleasing to read [They stepped away from one another to let their loose bras fall to the floor. Then they moved back into a hot embrace, pushing their naked breasts together and exulting in the exciting sensations.] Other writers miss so much by focusing only on the physical act of the main acts of lesbian love. It is the small details that make anything so much greater. Chanitra confesses of her dreams of Laura and Laura consumes her young breast ["Oh Chanitra oh baby you're so beautiful," Laura purred, sucking the girl's other breast the same way, pulling half of the hard round ball into her mouth, driving Chanitra crazy with pleasure.] I love sucking as much of a breast into my mouth as I can. Sucking it in deep and love sucking the nipple and tonguing the breast.

Laura's assault produces ["Take me to bed," Chanitra whispered hoarsely, tugging Laura toward the bedroom. "I want you to . . . do me, please, quick."] Love producing that need. I smiled at the gentle humor of Chanitra nearly breaking her neck stumbling while disrobing going down the hall. Once there they disrobe and Laura proceeds to consume Chanitra producing great need [Laura had not seen her so aroused even when they were doing it for the first time, in Yvette's bed. Chanitra was wild with lust, her delicious naked body arching and quivering, flexing, sleek and sinuous as she begged Laura to fuck her, over and over. And Laura did not hesitate.] Other authors would describe the actual physical acts. You detail how the one being made love to responds. These are the details that really draw the reader in. It is the emotions and need that truly make sex so special.

Laura quickly takes Chanitra to heaven with you showing even in the beginning with beautiful word pictures of a woman's body in the throes of a crushing orgasm [Chanitra's lovely face was torn with rapture, her muscles clenching as fierce spasms of pleasure shook her, her firm breasts jiggling, her thighs flexing, her taut stomach quivering. The spectacle of Chanitra coming was nearly enough to send Laura over the edge again.] You show us all the details. Other writers almost show none. A few give me some and I am almost thankful for even that much because it so rare. Only you truly show this wonderful moment in a woman's life. We then have the interesting dynamic of Laura only being able to coax one more orgasm out of her worn out flesh. What I really like her is that she continues to make love to Chanitra throughout the afternoon. This captures a wonderful dynamic about women. We want to give pleasure, even if we are too tired to receive more ourselves. I have been in this situation, fucked out, but that didn't stop me from giving gladly and freely. I love to make my women come and they feel the same way in return. I feel that once a man has his pleasure the vast, vast majority stop. Why continue? They have received their pleasure. This is so fucking selfish. Grrrrrrrrr. To enforce my point, Chanitra tells Laura that next time she will devour Laura's cunt. She has been denied and she will demand a full course of divine tender cunt meat when they meet again. Yum!!!!!

Laura and I now receive a great shock. I had totally forgotten this part. After sleeping for twelve hours and feeling refreshed and horny she gets a visit from Yvette. One look through the peephole tells it all. Yvette is livid. Chanitra in her schoolgirl immaturity has told Yvette that Laura is dumping Yvette for herself. That is a danger with teenagers, they are still just teenagers. Laura tries to do damage control but Yvette is too livid. Soon Yvette is crying showing her feelings of loss and betrayal. Laura tries to stroke her but his is absolutely rebuffed. The ending of this confrontation is poignant. Yvette whispers plaintively that she "loved" Laura and how could Laura betray her like this with her own sister. Laura tries to console her and we can see that Yvette almost gives in. She yearns for what she fears she has lost. She leaves with the parting shot [With a bleak smile, Yvette nodded. "I'm sure," she whispered. "I . . . have a husband, and a little girl. I'm not a lesbian. You can turn Chanitra into one, but not me."] Actually, that is a good parting shot. Laura vows to herself not to let this be the end, even though she is not sure how to get her back at this stage. I can't wait to rediscover myself!

Now Karen calls and is herself in need of some sweet lesbian loving. I really don't think I caught this the first time. Karen situation parallels Laura's. She was seeing a guy she was losing interest in but had almost seduced his beautiful sister when he comes in on them with them just commencing their lovemaking. The girls freaks and gives Karen the infamous "I'm not gay" line. I truly hate that or all its sisters. My first line back at them is "fine your not a lesbian, your bi." After that I just ask the woman "what do you want. Not what does society, family or husband want, but what do you want in your heart." I have found that if can just get them to listen to their inner voice I can get them to see the truth. Women let others rule them way too much. I love it when they see the light and they get that tremulous smile and then I take them to heaven.

I love how you are always showing that Laura never tires of her lovers. She is always excited when she sees their sweet flesh being exposed to her [Karen's breasts were large but perfectly formed, jutting and firm, with swollen, glimmering black nipples. Laura could feel her blood pounding as she looked at them. She had sucked and licked and kissed and even bitten them many times, bringing Karen to fierce explosions of coming. And yet, she never had enough. And neither, apparently, did Karen.] We know to worship our lovers and see them for the beautiful beings that they are. Wow, this is a totally hot visual [Karen leaned over the easy chair where Laura sat, putting one hand on each arm of the chair and swaying her perfect breasts in Laura's face.] Just reading that makes my pulse leap.

Of course they talk of biting of nipples and rough sex but they are still gentle here [Karen's naked breasts were so close to her lips that her warm breath was reflected back. Karen leaned even closer, brushing Laura's face with the smooth round globes. The feel of Karen's soft, bulbous nipples against her face was almost ecstasy itself to Laura. Her hands came up to capture the swaying balls of flesh.] One can just see Laura's rapture here. Laura quickly takes one of these magnificent globes deep into her mouth and starts to gently love maul this heavenly treat. Karen gasps out that she only lets Laura rough her up in sex. This is reserved for Laura alone. With other lovers she has to concentrate to get off, but with Laura it just happens and quickly. I would have been beaming with that compliment.

I will never tire of how you actually show and explain what your women are doing while they make love. Other authors never really show mechanics of their lovemaking. They are just in bed, on the floor or in a chair. But no details, only a singular focus on purely the sex itself while you [Laura was now treating Karen's other beautiful breast the same way, sucking and squeezing it, squeezing it harder now that Karen had asked for it. The stuffed chair she was sitting in was big, and Karen straddled Laura's thighs with her knees, pushing her naked breasts into Laura's face. While Laura sucked her nipples and squeezed her breasts, Karen inched down the zipper of her jeans.] Just these little details add so much heat it is unbelievable. It is also unbelievable that other authors don't do this.

I love how you show Karen having to stand back up to get her clothes off and then quickly straddles Laura and feeds her a beautiful breast back into her waiting mouth. Love how you show Karen frigging herself while Laura uses both hands to maul Karen's tits. I love rough sex so I like my nipples and breast to be bitten and mauled (just don't get cared away) so I like this next part [Laura's fingers bit into the firm round balls of Karen's breasts, squeezing them brutally, while she nipped at the large, bulging, wet nipple in her mouth with her teeth, teasing Karen, making her whimper and tremble frantically. Then, quickly, she delivered, sharply biting Karen's nipple. Next she released it from her lips and shoved the other one in, biting it sharply too.] Of course Karen's cunt explodes in exctacy. This is a wonderful detail [Laura dropped one hand to the girl's groin, gripping Karen's own fingers, which were slippery with her flowing cunt juices. She had never felt the girl, any girl, so wet.] I always want to feel my lover's juices flowing from her trembling cunt.

Laura sees that Karen can take another orgasm so she switches places with Karen in the chair. I love eating out women in a chair. It just puts everything at the right level [Karen was still stunned by the force of her climax. Quickly, Laura switched places with her, laying Karen's pliant body back in the chair, and then dropping to her knees between Karen's splayed, glossy black thighs. The sleek inner part of Karen's thighs was wet with cunt ooze, and Laura pushed her mouth directly up against the swollen lips of Karen's beautiful pussy, raping the girl with her lips and tongue.] Love how you show Karen's body all limp and plaint. I love maneuvering a woman after a killing orgasm into a new position and then slowing bringing her along until she revives and then you consume her cunt in a fit of passion until she has another orgasm in your warm waiting mouth, swallowing all the cunt cream her cunt pumps out.

I one thing I love about writing these glosses is I will write something expressing how you are making me feel and what I would do in a given situation and then I read the next part of the chapter and you capture perfectly what I had just emoted on. It is truly awesome when I experience this. This is what I read after my last comments [Her face was wet with pussy juices, and the tangy flavor on her tongue sent her into more violent paroxysms of lust. She tongue-stabbed Karen, and sucked her clit, swallowing the flood of juices, sucking more, harder, pinching Karen's large, thick nipples sharply, until suddenly Karen's luscious body arched, quivered, and she erupted again in a string of shattering orgasms. Her strangled cries of ecstasy were so loud that Laura was afraid the neighbors would hear, but nothing could make either of them hold back. Karen had two violent orgasms in a row before finally collapsing, panting, moaning back into the chair cushions. Laura slid up her body, lying half on top of her, kissing her, still fully clothed.] I love making my lover go multiple, knowing I am filling her body with almost unendurable exctacy. Thank you for always delivering truly mind-blowing sex that I can just revel in. You show true love and heat. Great detail of pinching your lover's nipples to increase the arrows of pleasure piercing her flesh during her orgasm.

They now head into Karen's bedroom where they quickly strip Laura's clothes off and then fuck leisurely for hours. With them, the sex does get rougher, probably crossing over the line I am comfortable with. Glad it hasn't crossed the line yet. They are almost ready to call it quits when Karen's doorbell rings and it is Rick and his brother Jamie (I have totally forgotten their relationship to Laura – I'll get to them eventually). My first thought when I read this is "double penetration". My pussy is getting a little moist here. It is a cute dynamic when Jamie is a little overwhelmed by what he sees and starts to demure and Rich tells him to shut up. Rich knows that soon he and his brother will be burying their cocks in some hot tight pussy and hopefully tight ass.

I love it how Karen and Laura feel their bodies revive. A new dynamic will always revive my flagging body. I do like how Rick awakens Karen's flesh [Rick came over to her. He kissed her aggressively, removing her bathrobe at the same time. Jamie's eyes were popping out of his head. Rick filled his hands with Karen's luscious naked breasts. He dropping his mouth to them, and quickly had Karen moaning, and Laura's pulse racing.] Sweet debauchery is about to commence. It is cute how Laura always gets hot and bothered when she sees these guys big cocks. That is what I like about strap-ons and dildos; they are always as big as I want them. I thought this was neat how Jamie helps Karen to mount his brother [She could see from the enraptured expression on Karen's face that she was completely pliant for them, ready to take anything they had to give. Rick quickly lay down on her back at the edge of the bed, with his feet still on the floor. Jamie guided Karen over to him, and he slipped the huge fat pole of his cock up into her pussy as she straddled his hips, dangling her delicious dark breasts in his face.] Karen is totally bi so really gets off on having men fuck her. So is Laura but she only wants them as "a taste of strange " now and again.

I love how Karen pleadingly tells Jamie where the baby oil is so he can lube up his cock. It is obvious she needs some rough dp treatment. I have felt this desperation myself, hurrying Joann and Maria along in this. When I want it, I want it real, real bad. As always you capture that supreme moment of penetration [He stood behind Karen, kneading her luscious, round, black buns with his hands, then slid the huge, gristly, oiled shaft between them and up into her asshole. Karen shut her eyes and clenched her teeth. She didn't even moan, but held her breath, wincing sharply as the enormous stalk penetrated her.] I can just feel that huge shaft piercing my tight sphincter and pushing into my warm bowels. Oh geez, my asshole is clenching here just thinking about this. When Joann and Maria get home I know what they will be doing to me.

I love how you describe the fucking starting out slow with nice long slow plunging strokes and then evolving to quick piercing rabbit thrusts. Since Karen has mounted Rick, he is able to love Karen's nipples with loving violence. This sends Karen to heaven with a rupturing orgasm. Nice detail on how you keep your cocks pumping through the orgasm to add to your lover's pleasure. They now ask Karen if she wants it the new way. We quickly discover Karen likes double vaginal penetration. Jamie pulls his cock out of Karen's quivering asshole and then [But they could. She heard Karen groan as Jamie used his fingers to open her cuntlips further at the bottom. But as soon as he got the ballooning head of his stiff cock inside, he just pushed it all the way into her.] Damn his eyes for not being gentle here and working to expand Karen's vagina. Guys are just so damn insensitive. Though, to be fair in this case, with Karen, true piercing pain is a huge turn on so maybe they are giving her what she wants. Karen quickly revives and soon they destroy themselves with awesome orgasms [The two men ripped their huge cocks up into Karen's pussy, and Karen began to come, wailing and squirming hysterically, pinned between Rick and Jamie as they too reached their orgasms. For the next ten seconds Laura watched the evidence of excruciating pleasure transfix their faces as they continued to writhe and strain through the clenching fury of their shared climax.]

I like how Karen spies Laura and asks if Laura could use some hot loving. Karen is only doing what women do by nature, pleasuring our bed partner ["Are you feeling left out?" she said, coming over to Laura, embracing her, beginning to make love to her, fondling Laura's breasts and twisting her nipples, just hard enough to make Laura relish the threat of more brutal passion.] All of your women are just so special. Some might go over the edge sometimes like Karen does with her BDSM and Shontay with anger filled jealousy but this just makes them more real and all the more to be loved by me (plus always leads to hot, hot sex). Your characters are real live breathing women who exist someone out there in this vast land of ours.

I like the dynamic here that you show with Karen. Her pervious fucking has her hot to pleasure Laura. I now this feeling well, having been fucked good, I hunger deeply to do some serious fucking in return [And being so savagely fucked by Rick and Jamie had only stoked Karen's fires. She swarmed all over the moaning Laura, sucking her nipples and probing her wet, throbbing pussy, rubbing her own luscious body against Laura's, bringing Laura quickly to a fever pitch of need.] A good fucking gets my libido raging to return the favor. I love having someone outside of the direct fucking watching me come. I love watching too. I just love propping myself up and watching the show while I masturbate.

Karen quickly brings her to a monster orgasm and all these hot visuals have gotten the boys revived. They quickly mount Laura and bury their big cocks deep into her loving holes and start savagely fucking Laura. I love having big strap-ons thrusted deep into my holes. I am just sitting her thinking of the bliss that Laura is feeling. I can just feel those poles plunging deep into my body driving me wild with need and then rupturing orgasms that leave me destroyed with bliss. Now Rick and Jamie almost take it over the line. When I read this the first time I was a little mad at them. They don't really communicate with Laura as to whether she wants two cocks in her cunt. For most women this over the top. Laura is nearly undone when she feels her cunt filled to the utmost with two huge cocks. Laura being my girl quickly adjusts and relishes this pleasure of being absolutely filled with cock and feeling those poles inching and sliding against each other as they work your screaming cunt until you start to die from coming so fucking hard. I bet Dawn would love this kind of fucking. I like how Karen moves in and consumes Laura's nipples until Laura has a shattering orgasm.

I think it is kind of cute how this chapter ends with Laura wondering about this last coupling. She loves her sex rough from time to time, but this was really at the limit of what she can take.

 

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Chapter 71:

I like how this chapter starts out with Laura reflecting on her just happened tryst with Yvette. I love reveling in a recent fuck. Just closing my eyes and letting my memory wash over me. The sights, sounds, smells, taste and the movement of our bodies as we made love. The sex acts themselves. I sometimes just walk around with a smile on my face remembering. When I get some free time, like when I am at lunch and relax and focus on my recent tryst I can just feel my womb clench and quiver with remember ecstasy. I feel myself getting a little wet. This so often works me up that I am dying for my next fuck. It really helps me to focus on my surroundings and being always ready to find new women and setup rendezvous with my angels. I so love having them in my bed that I am always longing for my next angel. Even though Laura is glowing over Yvette she is thinking about Tracy. I am like this. I never diminish my adore for a current lover but I so love to fantasy about a woman I haven't had yet. There are so many!!! I fantasy in general but when I think I am making progress in seducing a new woman my fantasies become so much more focused and powerful. I can so easily see us in bed together screaming out our pleasure and love as our wombs explode with shared ecstasy. I so love bringing a new woman into my bed. Especially, when she is bi-curious or hasn't tasted the forbidden fruit in a long time. These women are especially insatiable in bed. They are starving for the loving they have been denying themselves for way to long.

Laura is wondering about Tracy's age especially since she has two kids. I too wonder about all the little details of the women in my life. Even the friend-girls, heck even the guys I know, I like to know about their lives in general. I just don't want to fuck them or have to put up with inane come-ons. Reading this chapter reminds of why I sometimes wanted to pull my hair out. I know that this story is about the progression of Laura from a woman who didn't even consider woman at all to a woman who only wants women in her love life with a once in a blue moon male for a taste of strange. That we got to follow her progression to her true self. At this point in her saga Laura has realized she is a lesbian and she is having a hard time with this new found knowledge. This is actually quite accurate for the vast majority of women. Being gay in the real world can be very, very hard. With society's brainwashing it can be so hard to overcome this bias. I was fortunate that I had wonderful supportive parents and totally accepted my true nature. I totally admire them for that and they have the love to let me live my life the way I want. They only ask me to be safe and to think of others and be fair to them which I really try to do. Laura is still having to overcome her brainwashing and is just beating herself up over her true lesbian self. When I was reading this through the first time I was just rooting for her to overcome this self-abuse. I was so happy to read the story over the chapters and see her accepting and eventually reveling in her true self. Yeah!!!

I have always reveled in my love of the female body. I freely and without guilt desire and crave their bodies and souls. I dream and fantasy about how beautiful they are and how lovely they will be in my arms totally naked. How their bodies while thrashing and spasming with my loving caresses and how their cunts will be gushing love juices into my mouth devouring them and their screams and animalistic sounds of pleasure. Geez, fantasizing about sex is half the fun of it. I would hate to be beating myself up over my desires. I would be totally black and blue let me tell you. I had to smile as Laura's period ends and she pulls out the grocery bag with Tracy's phone number on it. I know that giddy, slightly embarrassed feeling when you are trying to make those first feathery connections beyond simple friendship. Knowing that the seduction has truly begun and trying to coax her into your longing arms. I so love the chase and the gentle coaxing and guiding of the fates. Leading her, hopefully, to my bed. Getting them to accept their true desire and nature. Tracy is her usual easy going self that I know the previous chapters have shown her to have. Tracy is the kind of woman that you just yearn for. They both have days off from work and Laura makes plans for them to spend the morning together since the kids will be in school till three. I love that time when the kids are in school and the man is at work.

I love how Laura is being so patient and non forceful here. She is just going to get in the presence of Tracy and let her beauty and natural charm slowly win the day. This is how I seduce women. I am big believer in letting my looks attract them and then really win them with my personality and charm. I have found women just lap up true sincere attention. They just so love to have you really focus on not only their looks but their souls, personalities, hopes and dreams. Just listen to them and you have won half the battle. I like how Laura asks hopefully if Tracy will mind coming to her place. Laura knows that seduction happens best when you are in an environment where you are totally comfortable. I love seeing the giddy feeling Laura is feeling here [Laura realized by the time she hung up the phone that her heart was pounding with excitement. Wednesday was still three days away, and she could hardly contain her excitement. On top of that, Cecilia insisted on a visit, which Laura was incapable of resisting. And they fucked with such a white-hot frenzy that she was afraid she would have nothing left for Tracy, if she ever did manage to get the girl into bed.] I so love that feeling I get when I feel I am making real progress in getting my newest conquest. I don't hide or flaunt what I am and I think that if they are spending time with me that is a signal in and of itself. I only need to help them along with their inner most thoughts and desires. I always love of reading of Laura having sex with an angel outside the current chapter's focus. It doesn't matter how hotly I fuck if I can rest for a few hours I'm almost always rearing to go the next day. The only time I might want more rest is when I have been roughed up with good hard het fucking. Still, I will find a way to fuck you if the opportunity presents itself.

When they meet Laura is both chagrined and relieved a little I think when nothing happens between them. Laura fixes them breakfast. While fixing breakfast she observes [Tracy looked extremely fetching in tightish jeans and form-fitting red jersey. Laura realized she had been attracted to her initially for her face, without paying much attention to her figure, which you couldn't much judge anyway in her store uniform. But now that she could see it, Laura's desire only ratcheted upward quickly.] I know that feeling when I have only seen a woman in non revealing clothes and then seeing them in much more flattering clothes and feeling my panties getting all moist with joy. I know things are starting to go my way when a woman is dressing up for me. Showing me her body in ways that show off her best assets. [Tracy had a beautiful ass and firm, jutting breasts, swelling hips, tiny waist, longish legs, even though she was shorter than Laura.] I have sometimes been frustrated like Laura here when nothing happens when it absolutely should. I am very willing to take my time and even accept something not happening, heinous though that might be. I am not just good at trying to be super aggressive like a lot of my girlfriends. Joann, Maria or Dodie just seem to know how to be real aggressive in a sexy cool way. It is amazing how fast they can reduce a stone cold straight female into a raging lesbian slut. I prefer the slower approach of Laura. I am just not aggressive that way. In bed yes but not in seduction. Patience will almost always be rewarded.

I too am amazed sometimes at how a woman can be just so oblivious to my charms and desires. Some girls are just oblivious and want to be buds. With girls like this I have to work a little to ignite a little flame I then stoke into a burning fire of need. I just have to be patient sometimes. I like Laura's total good nature. She is frustrated by the end of the day but is happy with her friendship with Tracy. I love women for just being themselves and thus can find pleasure and content in just learning about them and soaking up their personality. I do what Laura does here if I don't have an angel to relieve the frustration. I masturbate my kitty until it roars with satisfaction. The kitty must be fed. I love how Laura doesn't obsess over Tracy but gets plenty of loving with Barbara (yah!), Cecilia and Yvette. I am always so happy to see Laura getting plenty of loving from her other angels while waiting for the main angel to see the light. Their loving allows Laura to take her time with Tracy allowing things to simmer for several weeks. I know how to play this game all the time sending signals and slowing reducing their resistance and letting their true lesbian self shine forth. I so love showing a woman her true self.

Things are going along in this time of waiting until she goes to visit Tracy on a Saturday and discovers that Tracy's kids are out of the house until the afternoon with their grandmother. What I really love here is when you know that your woman has crossed a line within herself [And when she saw Tracy, Laura knew they would never be just friends. Laura would not be able to stop at that. Tracy wore white shorts and the same form-fitting jersey she had worn on her first, breakfast, visit to Laura's apartment, except that this time she wore no bra underneath it.] I get so giddy and happy when I sense that a woman has started to cross over to her true self. I have reveled every time I have seen this by a woman's dress or her mannerisms. She is finally listening to her true lesbian self. When I see a woman dress for me without her bra, or form fitting jeans or dressed to the nines if going formal I know that soon she will be in my bed. I know I would be feeling that joyful weakness that Laura feels here when she observes this [The white shorts, very short, emphasized the sleek black shapeliness of her legs. And the outlines of her breasts were clearly visible through the jersey, round and jutting and plump though firm, with thick, swollen nipples that protruded, just the kind that made Laura weak with lust.] When a woman dresses like this for me I know that she is longing for me to finish the seduction and show the delights of lesbian love if a newbie or finish the chase if a bi or gay woman.

I love the sexy confidence that Tracy has when she captures Laura gazing lovingly at her breasts. Laura may be embarrassed at getting caught but Tracy is like any woman and is happy to have another person checking out her assets ["I wouldn't expect you not to notice," Tracy winked. "Men, you know, they get these big eyes when they see these."] I love her sass and confidence in her looks. We discover that Tracy has those wonderful pear shaped breasts that I just so love devouring over and over again. Sucking those wonderful nipples while messaging these wonderful mounds of paradise. I don't blame guys for wanting to take pictures of them. Laura tells Tracy that such beauty shouldn't be hidden. Laura sensing that the fates are aligning in her constellation asks Tracy if she is willing to show her their beauty. I, myself, always get nervous and giddy when I get so forward as this. I only do it when I know I will be successful like Laura here. Tracy can't resist showing her charms and teasing Laura. I am absolutely convinced that when a supposedly straight is being all coy and seductive like this they secretly want me to seduce them. Their conscious mind may be surprised but I know deep down in their soul they are desperately craving what I can give them.

I so love the teasing dare for Tracy to proceed and the real life last hesitancy on Tracy's part. She wants it but she knows she is about to cross a line. It is only a matter of working my wiles to finish the seduction. Many times I have felt Laura's joy here [Grinning, Tracy lifted the red jersey up over her breasts and over her head too, pulling it free and tossing it on the sofa. Her breasts jiggled fetchingly, and the large black circles of her protruding nipples gleamed. Laura tried to control her face, the desire she felt. Tracy's breasts were shockingly beautiful, it was true. They were a little too big for her small size, but only a little, with amazing, ripe-fruit plumpness, and thick, bursting black nipples that made Laura swallow nervously, hungrily.] The moment where patience has paid off and my woman is revealing her wonderful body to me for the first time. I am smiling great big thinking of Laura's elation at her first sight of her new lover's breasts. Seeing my woman's flesh is such a divine moment. I so love the uniqueness of each woman's body. That is such a cute detail with Tracy lifting her heavenly gourds with her knuckles. She is eating up Laura's rapture. She knows, somewhere in her subconscious that she is leading to her own seduction. I so love it when a woman is helping me to seduce her and her conscious mind is not even aware that her true desires and inner lesbian voice is beckoning her on to discover the delights and supreme joy that only another woman can give a woman. The vast majority of men are simply not able to pleasure even the body completely let alone the soul. They are simple to selfish and self

centered.

Oh gosh, my head just lulled to the side when Tracy sees that Laura is hesitating and takes matters into her own hands. Her soul is leading her now and it will not be denied lesbian lust. Tracy has seen the truth. Tracy closes the few steps between them and while still lifting her beautiful breasts says ["They're even better close up," she murmured, her eyes still fastened to Laura's, throbbing and wide.] It is amazing how often women will help in their own seduction once you have worn away all the fucking brainwashing that the world heaps on us. You have just got to get them to listen to their soul. I so adore how you make the first moments of truly coming together so special like it is and should always be portrayed. First Laura reaches out with hesitant delight and so gently cups Tracy's breasts. I so love getting my first feel of my lover's breasts. Feeling their weight, feeling their size and shape like a blind woman and feeling her nipples rasping into my palms. Gently squeezing and feeling how pliable they are. Each woman's breasts are so unique and heavenly. I love how you show the magical spell falling upon them [Tracy just shook her head, her eyes never leaving Laura's. Slowly, still cupping Tracy's beautiful breasts, Laura's face came closer, until their lips brushed. They kissed, a long, patient, sensual kiss. Laura's tongue entered Tracy's mouth tentatively, but Tracy's coiled around it, then entered Laura's mouth, and soon the kiss grew hotter.] Sigh, I so adore those first magical kisses. Getting your fist taste of your lover. The sweetness of her lips, feeling her teeth with your fist tentative swipes and then when they part letting your tongue snake in and exploring its new home. I so love how women are so different in how quickly they respond to your first kisses if they are newbie or have been away for a long time. Some you have to work your magic on for a few minutes but others are like Tracy and gladly and eagerly accept their destiny. I can just feel my belly clinch and cunt spasm when I feel my lover's tongue coiling with mine and then thrusting into my mouth to take my mouth and tongue with her own. I get all wet and gushy when I feel a new lover swirling her tongue as far as she can deep into my mouth and coiling with my tongue. Feeling her nip and nibble my lips and raking my tongue with her teeth. My pussy is getting wet just thinking about it. I love for a woman to get all hot and confident and hold my face firm with her hands while she melds our mouths tight to give her maximum penetration down my throat, stroking my trembling mouth with wild hunger. I love to be taken control of.

It is so true how you can just see the fire you have ignited in their eyes. Kissing really does set a woman on fire [When their lips finally parted, their eyes burned into each other's. Laura kissed Tracy's smooth black neck, her shoulder, then dropped her mouth to one exquisite breast, cupping it from underneath with her palm and teasing the large nipple with her tongue before sucking it into her mouth. "Ohh!" Tracy gasped. Laura sucked the thick, silky bulb gently, kneading the firm, plump ball of Tracy's breast with both hands at the same time. Before sucking the other one, she lifted her mouth and kissed Tracy again, rolling Tracy's wet nipple in her fingers, pinching it lightly, exciting Tracy, who moaned while still kissing Laura back.] For some reason you are the only author to show how one kisses from one destination to another. Here from Tracy's lovely mouth to her mouth watering pears. Other authors just skip over the flesh between while you show how skilled lovers kiss and taste the flesh between. This turns a simmering flame into a raging inferno. I so love kissing a woman's flesh and getting her taste in my mouth. Her unique essence. I so love cupping a breast and slowly kissing and licking my way up to her nipple and then working my magic on it. First gently brushing, kissing and licking and then slowly increasing the passion and directness of effort. I have reduced women to Jell-O with just my breast worship. I so love kneading a breast while I draw that sweet silky bulb into my mouth. I so love feeling a nipple sliding past my lips into my starving mouth. Lathing her areola and feeling the little steeples on it. Feeling that nipple stiffen and harden in my loving mouth if not already rock hard. I love sucking and tongue lathing trying to make a rock hard nipple even that little impossible bit more. Working for this brass ring always makes my women hiss and I can feel their body's just clench in burning bliss radiating from their engorged nipples. You again are the only author who brings front and center the going between breast and mouth. Only you show the wowness of raping your woman's mouth and then working her breast with your mouth and going back and forth. How your salvia leaves her nipples nice and lubricated so your fingers can pull, fork and squeeze her nipples with ease and allow you to really give digital pleasure to by now blood engorged nipples. I so love pulling and squeezing nipples while kissing a woman and feeling her animalistic groans reverberating from deep in her chest into my mouth. I live to make my women make the sounds of sluts in heat.

I so adore hearing Tracy say she is so glad that her children aren't home because she doesn't plan on stopping. Laura peppers her with more kisses and while sucking one nipple, forks and pinches her other nipple. This produces the usual sagging of knees. Tracy pants that they need to head to the bedroom NOW! Laura has shown her soul the truth. I like how you show that once a woman accepts the correctness of their lesbian self they so quickly get into it. Tracy gladly and quickly helps Laura get her top off. I can just her Tracy's sighs of happiness as she presses their naked breast together while once more kissing heatedly. I so love pulling my lover close while necking as we get more and more naked. Feeling our sweet heated flesh rubbing and our nipples rasping into each other, burning pleasure and need into our bodies. This is what I hunger to hear from a straight or bi-curious female ["Oh god, I want to do this, I want to do this," Tracy repeated over and over. "God, I want to do it all with you, oh Laura!"] I always do much mental fist pumping at such sweet words. I have finally shown them the truth. I love removing the last vestiges of clothing and maybe having to scorch them with some more kisses and breast worship to get over any silly last hesitancy. I never mind extra kisses, stroking, kneading and breast worship to complete the seduction. More candy for me. Tracy has fallen under love's spell and gladly divests herself of her last clothing.

Laura notes Tracy's evidence of pregnancy. She has a few stretch marks and a little swelling of the belly but I worship these areas with my women who have had children. I let them know I love and worship the body they bring to our bed. They just completely fall under my spell when I coo and worship their complete body and fu-paw any remarks they make about their body. I love them completely. After some more foreplay Laura slides between Tracy's yawning thighs and begins a gentle exploration of her new lover's quim. I so love getting to know a new pussy ["Ohhhnnn . . . oh yes . . . ohhnnnn yes . . .

Laura," Tracy moaned, her body quivering as Laura caressed her and explored every fold and crevice of her pussy.] I to want to get to know every square centimeter of a woman's vagina. Learning its complete geography and all the secret nerves that will make her jump and squeal. All I can say is amen to this next part [Something in her loved this first time, the first time with all of them, especially those, like Tracy, who had never been to bed with another woman before. It was a challenge to give her a sexual experience so much more powerful than she had had from anyone else. And Laura was very good at it.] I so love this time to and yes I want to make it better for her than any man has ever done for her in the past. Very few men have the skill and inclination to give pleasure like a lesbian. To selfish. I want to see her soul explode with ecstasy and her screams of the purest rapture pouring from her star struck throat. This is the type of orgasm I deliver to a newbie showing her just what she has been missing [She tongued and sucked Tracy's clit and pussy until the girl was gripped by an agonizingly complete orgasm, one that wrenched her repeatedly and stole her breath, leaving her just a beautiful, exploding wreck of incredibly intense sexual pleasure. Her luscious, smooth black body writhed and quivered, and moans of agonizing bliss escaped from her throat. "Unhhh . . . ohhnnnnn! Ungghh oh . . . god auunnghiieeee! Oh Lauranngghiieee! Oh god, yes!" she gasped, coming in sharp spasms as Laura kept tongue-fucking her passionately.] I just smile into their cunt as I continue to devour it when I hear my name shrieked out especially when it gets all syllabic in her keening. I so love the bucking and thrashing of a woman in a complete body orgasm. Some orgasms are gentle but I strive to give the pile-driving orgasms that have my women flexing and straining like they have a thousand volts pumping out of their cunts into their thrashing limbs.

Love the cute detail at the beginning of this and how Laura starts up the loving again [And then, when she began to come down from it, bleary-eyed and panting, her forearm crossed over her forehead, her body still undulating with aftershocks, Laura poured on the heat again, now beginning to hand-fuck Tracy's pussy as she slid up the girl's body and began to suck her nipples again.] Tracy is being loved plundered. I have often chuckled to myself when a woman is amazed how she will never have to fake an orgasm again when she is making love to another woman. They are simply incredulous when they make this discovery. We always make our women come. Some have fucked me just to try to prove me wrong and leave me totally satiated and complete lesbian sluts. They simply didn't understand what women can do when we focus our unselfish selves on each other. I so love taking a woman to a second orgasm when she is coming down from a devastating orgasm. I so love frigging a gushing cunt feeling my fingers completely lubricated and sucking nipples while kneading her breast or body with my free hand. Sometime I kind of have to use my hand to hold them in place they get so wild. Doesn't hurt to give come scorching kisses too. I love hearing this from a woman who has never experienced this before ["Oh . . . oh god, yes! Unhhh . . . oh Laura oh god Jesus oh shit oh god you're making me come again . . . oh! Oh now . . . again, oh Jesus oohnnngghiieee!"] I can just hear the wonder and ecstasy and the addiction beginning. Some run away from the truth but most simply can't live without this loving once

they have experienced it. They simply can't go back to not experiencing such beauty and wonder by just sleeping with their husbands or boyfriends. They come to me and my friends for what they have been denied for all their sexual lives. Pure, unadulterated pleasure. I simply adore how this fuck ends with Laura cradling and stroking Tracy while cooing to her. Holding her in a cocoon of love while she returns to Earth from her trip to the stars.

I love Tracy explaining she never came like that before with any man. I have thought this often when Tracy confesses she knew she wouldn't deny Laura if Laura tried to seduce her. I love getting women to that place where they are helping me to seduce them. Getting their bodies and souls whispering to their mind to let go and accept the love I have to give them. She now has the embarrassed moment a lot of newbies have when they have been pleasured by a lesbian or bisexual and are not sure how to give pleasure back. I love to gently encourage and reassure and then having them start getting experience [Gently, she rolled Laura onto her back. Laura looked up at her solemnly, knowing what was coming, loving the girl in her sweet innocence and openness. She moaned softly as Tracy kissed her neck, her shoulder, the valley between her breasts. Then Tracy's lips found one of her nipples, sucking it softly, then more excitedly.] I so love feeling a newbie taking her first tentative steps in the giving of lesbian loving and seeing the confidence and hunger building and growing within her. It is so true that giving pleasure will work yourself up that when you start receiving pleasure you are already wound up tight. I have found almost all women go nuts when they pleasure their first set of breasts. They are like little girls in a candy store. They are simply gluttons for your tits and devour them with glee and focus. I like how Laura encourages Tracy here ["Oh . . . oh yes oh god Tracy," she panted, whimpering and twisting, holding Tracy's head in her hands and pushing her breasts into Tracy's face. "God, girl . . . suck hard!

Oh yes! Ungghhh!"] You need to let her know she is doing things right and gently coach where she needs instruction.

I love the communication when Tracy senses Laura is near and Laura responds to her inquiry with a plea for her to frig her gushing, spasming cunt. Oh yeah, I love coming like this [Tracy dropped one hand between Laura's flexing thighs, bringing two fingers up to the oozing wet cleft of Laura's pussy. She sucked one of Laura's nipples again, and rubbed Laura's pussy sharply, and Laura spilled over in a torrent of coming. "Auungghh! Unghnnmmiieeee!" she wailed, grimacing in a seizure of ecstasy, turning her head aside into the pillow to muffle her cries. Her body arched and shuddered as the spasms wrenched her, then slowly died away, leaving her panting and shocked by the power of her climax. Tracy was smiling and kissing her, still fondling her breasts, as she drifted back up from the hot, swirling fog of rapture.] I love being on the edge and then having some fingers pumped up my cunt with hard nipple sucks. I just scream as I thrash my way through a cunt searing orgasm. I love arching my cunt up into the pumping fingers. If I am on my back and not restrained I love arching my cunt up high by planting my feet and lifting up. It tightens my stomach muscles which just makes me come harder. I love looking up my torso through grimacing eyes and seeing my lover pounding fingers or fist up my spasming, gushing cunt. Seeing her rise up with my pelvis thrusts and that look of concentration they have while focusing on my cunt and watching their fingers or fist closely as it pumps ecstasy into my destroyed cunt and exploding womb. They sometimes get their face right down next to my cunt to see all the details. I love clenching hard with my stomach muscles while my lover pumps and twists her fist deep in my cunt which is thrusting a foot or more off the bed. Sometimes I can just pump like this for ten or fifteen seconds of the purest bliss on Earth before my strength gives out and my torso crashes back down and I just quiver and quake and drool in ecstasy. I have sometimes wondered if my eyes would get stuck in the back of my head when they roll back from such prolonged ecstasy.

Of course Tracy is wide eyed at seeing the pleasure she now knows she can give. Tracy quickly confesses that she urgently needs some cunt candy and moves south to get some. I love Tracy for learning from Laura and kissing all the way down Laura's body until she gets to Laura's swollen, puckered flower of love. I have all kinds of reactions when a newbie gets to my cunt. Some dive right in and some hesitate at the first taste. I love seeing them deciding if they like it and not one hasn't and then they dive like a man discovering an oasis in the middle of the desert. Some go crazy and have to be restrained a little and some need coaching but quite a few seem to really kind of instinctively know like Tracy here [Tracy made love with her mouth and fingers to Laura's pussy, licking it sensually, stroking it with her tongue and probing the wet, squinchy depths with her fingers, until Laura was biting her lower lip and quivering helplessly. Only after arousing Laura to this feverish frenzy did she raise her tongue to Laura's clit, again stroking it slowly. But before she could do it very long, Laura burst in a fierce explosion of coming.] I so love looking down at a woman new to eating pussy and just seeing her totally focused and totally enjoying my cunt. I love seeing (and feeling Hehehe) her licking my cunt hard and then swallowing my juices and diving back in for more smearing her lips, mouth, nose and cheeks. They become such gluttons so quickly and I so fucking love it. I love the detail of Laura kneading her breast and pulling her nipples up to pump pleasure to her rupturing cunt and searing brain and Tracy keeping her mouth glued to her new found fountain of nirvana. I just smile when a newbie can't get enough of my cunt juices and licks her tongue around her lips and cheeks trying to get every drop of my essence she can. I will run a finger around my face and down my throat to try to get every drop of my lover's essence. How true when you show Tracy moving up to enfold Laura in her loving arms to love coo to her while she comes back to Earth.

I had to smile when Tracy has a hard time of thinking of their lovemaking as "fucking". When we are brought up to be demur and not like such talk. Fortunately, very young I decided I would determine what I would do and not do and I like to talk like a whore in the bedroom. I believe in comportment outside of it but inside I want to show my women the true slut I am. I strive to teach all my women this truth if they haven't already discovered it. I like how Tracy confesses that she determined to sleep with Laura if the opportunity presented itself because Laura is beautiful but just as important she is nice. I know my looks attract a lot of interest but I really think it is my easy going nice demeanor that really hooks them. I was born with whatever innate beauty I have but my personality is something I molded and I am more proud of that. When I look in the mirror I really just see me. Of course Tracy confesses that no man has ever made her come like this before. I like Tracy ticking off the fault of men in general ["One, men don't like you when you put your kids first. Two, men don't like it when you're more successful than they are. Three, men like to booze and shoot hoops and jive around with the sluts instead of staying home and living decent. And four," she leaned over and kissed Laura, a deep sensual kiss, fondling Laura's naked breast at the same time. "Four, they none of them can 'fuck' me the way you do." She grinned and giggled.] So very true.

Now that their flesh has rested during their post coital time of bonding Laura feels the fire returning and kisses Tracy and kisses down for some more tit candy ["Oh girl, your boobs are so beautiful," Laura murmured, licking and then nearly swallowing one of Tracy's big, bulging, silky nipples, feeling it tighten and stiffen in her mouth, hearing Tracy moan and feeling her twist excitedly.] I get such pleasure feeling a nipple stiffen and enlarge in my lips and feeling my woman start to thrash around. I love all this digital lovemaking which other authors just do way too little of ["Oh god . . . fuck me, girl, fuck me, I can't wait," Tracy panted, churning her hips, pushing her pussy into Laura's hand. "Do it like that . . . ohhhnn yes, like that . . . oh . . . unh! Unh! Oh Jesus oh shit . . . unhh! Anngghiiiieeee! Mnnnggeeeee!" she cried out, coming quickly, in jolting shocks, her body shuddering helplessly as her climax wrenched her.] I so love frigging a cunt and feeling it spasm and clench my fingers and then taking my soaked hand when I am finished and bringing it up to my lips and I just start to clean off her juices. If I have noticed she seems squeamish about her own juices I just make smoky eye contact while cleaning my fingers and then will slowly move my face closer and then move my index and middle finger I have deliberately left unclean and whisper to her to clean her essence off. They just look at me with such love and swooning bliss as they open their mouth and greedily suck their juices off. It doesn't take me long to show them just how wonderful they taste. I love watching a woman I have shown this masturbate herself and watch her

pump her fingers in her wet cunt and then snatch her fingers to her mouth to lick clean and dive back down and keep this up until she comes I feel the same joy when I show her the joy and wonderful taste of licking and rimming assholes and tasting her own fingers when pleasuring her own asshole. Fortunately, in college I was shown the pleasure of sucking my own ass juices off a dildo. I so love ass to mouth. I remember my initial reaction of "you have got to be kidding" when she pulled her dildo out of my ass and scooted around and placed the head of her cock at my mouth. She shot back that I had had my tongue buried deep in her asshole a little time before and I then remembered how I love to suck my own finger(s) when fucking my own asshole while masturbating. I remember smiling up at her and opened my mouth and moved my mouth down onto her cock and proceeded to give it head and completely lick the length of the shaft to get all the taste possible. I remember how Joann and Maria were so gleefully surprised when I eagerly took their ATM overtures and I gladly leaned my head back on the edge of the sofa so they could deep throat me with their cocks. When Dodie and her new love Frankie (whom Dodie and I showed the pleasures of this kind of sex) come over and we will take turns being the willing recipient while we take turns doing DP, TP, double anal and double vaginal and plenty of ATM on each other. We come so fucking hard and repeatedly from this divine five way het orgy. I really can't blame Laura for avoiding this after Rob and his brother took her double anal when she was unprepared and without permission. It has left an unpleasant taste in her mouth she will probably never lose. Bastards.

As I have guess I have made clear over the glosses I love it wet. I love devouring a cunt that has had an orgasm or two because it is now totally swollen and if her skin is light colored really red with passion. They are just so wet and juicy and I'm love devouring and rubbing my face in it to get her juices all over my face and neck. Often I will then scoot up and let them lick my lace clean. I feel like a kitten being loved by her mother before scooting south for more cunt cream. I so love falling on a sweet, tender, swollen cunt like a famished lion and doing this [And Laura was voracious. She assaulted Tracy's oozing pussy with her mouth, insinuating her fingers into the crack between the girl's hard round buns at the same time as she stabbed her tongue deep into Tracy's glistening crack. She didn't actually introduce her finger into Tracy's asshole, but she rubbed it suggestively with her knuckle, slurping and sucking Tracy's cuntlips hungrily, lashing Tracy's clit with her tongue, fucking Tracy altogether much harder than she had yet done. And Tracy went delirious with sexual excitement. She writhed and churned her hips frantically, moaning and mewling almost hysterically as a fresh orgasm approached. The more her sexual excitement peaked, the harder Laura fucked her, finally sliding two fingers up into Tracy's greasy warm channel and raping her with them as she sucked Tracy's clit, bringing the girl to a jolting, wrenching, horrific climax.] I like the detail of Laura not penetrating Tracy's asshole here. She is showing Tracy the pleasure of having her rosebud stimulated without taking her asshole without permission. We lesbians know how to show new pleasure in stages without taking something without permission. Soon they are ready for more direct loving of their assholes and soon your fingers and tongue will be wiggling and plunging into her bowels and through her clenching sphincter. Soon after that if she is into toy play it will be a dildo plumbing the depths of her rectum showing her the pleasure of cock induced anal orgasms. Another convert. I love how you show the ratcheting up of the heat. You show how you can devour a streaming cunt with only enough clit action to keep her climbing and save using your fingers and hard clit sucks with tongue lashing in your mouth for the coup de grace. It simply makes a woman's cunt explode with ecstasy. It truly does destroy the body with much trashing and pelvis pumping. Of course one needs to do it all ways and devour many times just to make sure you have done it right. Hehehe.

I love watching Tracy's flesh really shuddering through a hard orgasm that totally spends her strength and leaves her with total lassitude of bliss. I always had to smile when Laura gets all flustered when Tracy asks about other women in Laura's life. I like talking about them and trying to find out as soon as possible if I can introduce them to my other angels. Laura shows her tragic flaw when she gets all jealous just thinking of Rhonda sleeping with Yvette. Me, I am always happy when a woman gets to experience the pleasure of another woman. We deserve as much pleasure and bliss as we can get and only through multiple women can you really achieve this I believe. Each woman brings her own unique style to her lovemaking. Tracy is totally cool when she has no problem knowing Laura has others. Tracy knows that Laura's skills can only have come from having many lovers. Tracy is very wise in this. I love how Laura is now so enraptured with Tracy she pleads for Tracy to take her rough and Tracy willing obliges [Tracy needed little encouraging. She began to devour Laura's body the way Laura had just devoured hers, sucking Laura's nipples, then pinching the wet, stiff buds in a way no one had ever done to her, making Laura's breasts fill with fire, and her nipples burn and throb wildly. The sensation made Laura nearly climb the walls.] I love feeling that knowledge and confidence in a new lover to show her my need and love of rough sex. Feeling her just devouring with super hard sucks, teeth rakes and pinching, twirling of pulling of my nipples with her fingers.

I love how you use the technique of Laura pleading for Tracy to devour her cunt and you don't show it but you only hear the results ["Yes, do it hard! Unh! Oh! Unh! Harder . . do it harder! Unh! Oh god . . . oh ungghiiieee! Anngghiieee! Yes! Oh Tracy yes harder I can come again yes! Ungghhiieeeee!"] Nice change of pace. I love how Tracy continues to lap and finger fuck Laura's plundered pussy until no more pleasure or cunt cream is left. I love for a woman to be a total glutton on my sodden pussy. Trying to get every drop of cream she can. I love reading how they rest and fuck the rest of the morning and afternoon. I so love resting to fuck some more. They part with promises to meet again as soon as possible and with Tracy desperately tying to devise ways to get the kids out of her hair to have more divine trysts with Laura. Got to love Tracy's thinking.

 

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Chapter 75:

This chapter starts with Laura having just gotten a lot of action it seems. She has fucked Barbara (yeah!!), Jonelle and then Barbara again. Wow. I love Laura getting all this action. Fucking two wonderful women so close together. The beauty of this is you still have the taste of the first lover still in your mouth when you are kissing the second woman. Sometimes you have to shower and brush your teeth to remove the evidence but it is wonderful when you have angels who just don't give a damn. Then you come into their arms with another's woman's musk still clinging to you. I will fuck a woman greedily and then go home with her scent still all over me. It simply drives Joann wild with lust. She will start sniffing me or Maria like a dog in heat. Often she will just grab the one of us who just got lucky and throw us on the bed and just leap on us tearing at our clothes to get at us. When Joann is in the mood though, it is punishment time for being such a two timing whore. I always act defiant and tell her I will fuck any damn woman I fucking feel like. She quickly breaks me down and has me whimpering my shame and defeat. Taking and teaching me again that I am her worthless slut and her bitch to be fucked hard and repeatedly until I once more recognize she is the alpha bitch in this household. I nearly die from coming so hard and repeatedly. I so love being "broken" and punished. Maria always takes the tact of breaking down and weeping her shame and begs for mercy. Of course this is the exact opposite of what she gets which is exactly what she wants. Joanne punishes her most lovingly and severely. We get much hair pulling, slapping and harsh spanking. Often with handcuffs and being tied up to make sure we remember exactly where our place is. Did I forget to mention that Joann then fucks our brains out with multiple orgasms that leaves us screaming and thrashing in bliss so dire we think we are going to be left insane. Just reduced to sweaty, bleary eyed love drooling utter slaves. This is just one reason we love Joann so deeply and completely.

One thing I have always loved about your stories is the fact that you show actual true emotion. Other authors focus exclusively on the sex. A few have tried to capture something more but they just don't seem to know how to pull it off. You say so much with so little. We see Laura longing to just see Jonelle and bask in her company. She knows Jonelle is at her sister's and wishes she had her phone number. She desperately wants to fuck her again. But almost as important she just wishes to see her beautiful face in the now and present. She longs for Jonelle's mere presence. Laura has the beautiful nature of marrying her intense sexual longing with her feelings of love and friendship. That is so cute when Laura breaks a fingernail answering the phone the next morning hoping desperately it is Jonelle. Had to chuckle at that mental picture. I have felt that feeling of hoping it's that certain woman I am trying to seduce or an angel you have a falling out with calling you or hoping she will let you talk to her if you are calling her.

It isn't Jonelle but it another wonderful angel, Tracy. As soon as I recognized her voice I would quickly focus my complete attention and devotion to this wonderful angel. I am a big, big believer that a "bird in the hand is worth two in the bush". I am very sensitive to tone of voice and body language so I know I would have focused on Tracy sounding "funny and distant". I would stay neutral in what this means but I get very hyper sensitive and in tune with you trying to find out exactly what is going on and happening. Tracy asks to see Laura which can only mean one thing. Sweet fucking. Oh yeah. When I hear words like this I just feel a rush and tingling rush trough my skin leaving me warm and happy. This joy is evidenced by Laura smiling great big into the phone talking to Tracy now. She knows that soon this wonderful woman's pussy will be humping desperately into her mouth. That when the time is right she will be sucking that clit and hood into her mouth for rapid butterfly stroking with the tip of her tongue while sucking hard which only makes the head pull back making that bundle of paradise stretch and become taunt. Keeping that delicious friction going until she is simply and screaming her soul out with echoes of bliss pounding off the walls of your love nest. Then moving your face forward to lick and gobble up lots of tender cunt meat and delicious cunt cream. Of course Laura agrees to this and tells Tracy she can see her after work. Tracy pleads her case that if Laura waits that long they won't have any time to fuck before she must pick up the kids. Of course Laura agrees to leave work at two o'clock to give them time to fuck intensely and gloriously for a few hours. The fucking Republicans have defined my position as exempt and thus I don't get overtime. It isn't really that bad because I get comp time. This allows me to take vacations with this time and then take off early when I need to meet wives when their husbands are at work or hookup with Dodie. Over the years I have fucked some of my co-workers and we love to take off early and go to one of our places to fuck. A few after I got to know them and knew they would be responsive I take home after working my and my archangels schedules in sync and have Joann and Maria come home on us and burst in on us. I love the shocked and fearful look that turns to wonder as they fall on her and fuck her like two she-demons in heat. They look so fucking stunned as their cunts are absolutely devoured by one of them as the other simply inhales her tits. They come so beautifully and completely with much screaming and head thrashing and I love seeing my archangel's head jerking back from our newest love victims hard twat thrusts. We then fuck her blind and make sure she spends a lot of time burying her face in our twats as she sucks us off getting her face and hair all saturated in girl come.

Laura frets some over Tracy's tone of voice but gets through the day to discover [But before Laura could get it out of her, she had hung up. She nursed her finger through the morning, then hurried home. Tracy was already there, looking wildly fetching in a yellow sweatshirt that showed off her pride-and-joy jutting breasts, her hair swooped low over her forehead in beautiful bangs. Laura, for all her pining after Jonelle, and her surprisingly deep soul-fucking with Barbara, wanted to grab Tracy and rape her on the spot.] I have had to learn over the years to not fret about what I can't change. I used to drive myself crazy and almost always it was no where near as bad as I thought it would be or actually turned out positively. I love how Tracy is advertising her best assets. I think women should always highlight themselves and feel the utmost pride in themselves. The world tries to take so much from us. We need to be proud of ourselves and the bodies we were blessed with. It doesn't hurt to try and maintain and preen it though. I admit I am a little vain about my looks but I work so hard to maintain my looks to keep myself attractive in my angels and potential angel's eyes. I want to do everything possible to make it easier to get my women into my bed. I love bangs myself and find them so cute and adorable. I love to just kiss your forehead, muzzling through bangs to plant gentle kisses while rubbing my cheek in your hair and smelling your hair. I am so "Laura" in the fact that I am so ready to fuck. Unless I have absolutely fucked myself out I am ready for more sex. I thank the fates that I don't have a clit that gets super sensitive after sex and that I can recharge fast. I would scream if I couldn't fuck like a banshee. I will absolutely jump from one bed to another if the opportunity presents itself. Life is too short to ever deny oneself the opportunity to fuck a pretty woman. I know that my cunt would have spasmed and belly clenched when I drove up and saw Tracy waiting for me. With her eyes veiled with the heat burning from within. A fire that only I at that moment can put out.

Laura is still at that point in her journey where she is not totally comfortable with the knowledge that she is a lesbian. Her lust which she never experienced with men continues to amaze, confuse and frighten her. I am so completely happy that she accepts she is a lesbian who likes a taste for real dick once in a blue moon. I know some lesbians like that (when I tell them they are really bi, they get very pissed – over the years I have come to accept this definition of orientation). I think I am totally gay because I just can't bring myself to fuck guys again though intellectually I think I am stupid to deny myself a good fuck if I can find a skilled male lover. Dodie's husband left her for his young PA. She is totally fucking happy but played the part to make sure she got the house, cars and a big alimony. He just wanted his new play toy. Dodie is basically gay but liked to fuck her husband as a taste of strange. He was very good in bed. Now she has Frankie living with her and they both are exploring their lesbian bi side with forays with some good looking and extremely skilled boy toys. They have tried to get me to join them for a night of debauchery with their boy-toys. I think about it but something just stops me. It is not the sex. It is the male animal himself. I simply detest their ego. I'm afraid I might have to break one of them over my knee or get beat to a pulp trying to mentally dominate me. I know I am being silly really. As much as I like sex I should explore what a guy can give but I just can't. So far all I can do is fantasize about male fucking. My body hums but my mind is just not in it. Maybe I can convince myself. We will see.

I smiled when Tracy joked about going inside so they can swap spit and not have everyone know they are Lesbos. I know most people can do without big displays of affection in public but it is a shame that gay people have the additional weight of our love being a stigma. It is so fucking unfair. Of course this flusters Laura who at this stage gets discombobulated when she contemplates her gayness. I know that elevator ride up must have been a simmering one. Keeping quite waiting to get inside your love nest and take your woman in your loving arms and doing unspeakably beautiful things to her. I love how Tracy's hunger makes itself so evident ["Tell me you haven't been dreaming of these," she smiled, reaching behind her back and quickly unhooking her bra. It slid down her arms, exposing her beautiful, plump breasts, her big nipples popping and swelling. Laura was stunned with lust. Tracy held her breasts in her hands, cupping them, as she had done before, offering them to Laura.] Oh Yeah! Raw lust is in the air. No seduction is needed or wanted. Only raw need. I love for my angels to be confident in themselves and show themselves off so brazenly and confidentaly. This so means they are happy and proud of themselves. I if come upon a woman who needs to be shown and told they are beautiful I am very happy to tell them I find them so fucking desirable and beautiful. It can be so hard to try undo the damage society does to our self images. I know some women I haven't been able to totally reach this because their insecurities are so deep but I keep trying and hoping that I and others can get them to see themselves for the beautiful creature they are and fuck the fucked up views man's world tries to put on us. Tracy's sass would be making my cunt jangle and weep cunt juice with tremors of joy and happiness.

I would be croaking like Laura here and getting revved up with Tracy's sass ["God, they're beautiful," Laura swallowed. "Aren't you going to . . . you know . . . kiss them or anything?" Tracy asked coyly.] I love breasts and I nearly swoon when my angels make a point to offer them to me. It is so amazing how such short spoken sentences can add so much heat to the moment. Hearing those words would give me tunnel vision on her tits and I know my mouth would start to salivate with hunger. Other authors would just have Laura assault Tracy's inviting breasts but you give us so much more with your wonderful words. You have Laura leaning over to throw the bolt on the door and while leaning into Tracy she gently brushes her cheek with her lips. I love the subtleness of your lovemaking. So often such gentle kisses and gentle stroking can produce such delightful tremors in your lover. I love bestowing such a kiss and feeling my lover just treble with the beginnings of lust and need. I love giving such pleasure with such a small gesture. I can just feel my happiness as I kiss down her divine throat with some nice gentle licks and maybe a very gentle sensual love suck on her pulse point to get her blood pumping and then kissing down her shoulders and rubbing my cheek against her soft skin and gentle swells of her muscles before I kiss down the plane of her chest to her inviting tits. Some of my skinnier lovers I love to kiss and breathe lovingly and hotly on her exposed upper ribs and kiss their lines before I move down for some divine tit meat. I can feel my heat and happiness as I know am about to devour her tit.

I love how we see Laura's lust igniting and [Laura took the breast in both of her hands, squeezing it as she sucked, pushing Tracy back into the wall. Tracy's nipple was wet with Laura's warm saliva, and stiff, rubbery, but Laura wouldn't let it go. She sucked and tongued it, then nipped it, then pinched the wet, erect bud with her fingers and tickled it with her tongue at the same time, driving Tracy wild.] I love the passion of Laura pushing her lover into the wall as she fastens her hands and mouth to Tracy's tit. I love squeezing a tit and feeling its firmness and pliability. Each woman's tits are so unique. I love to love massage at this stage. Kneading them and getting them aroused and getting the blood to flowing. I am so there devouring Tracy's tit. I love getting them all wet with my salvia which makes working my finger magic so much easier and I just love to see them glistening before I bend my head back down to pull that blood engorged nipple back through my lips once more tasting her essence before I start to suck, tongue lathe and gently teeth rake again. I would have to move for some good heated kissing while working the button to her pants open or lifting her dress or whatever and working my fingers under her panties and starting to rub her slit and getting my fingers nice and lubricated and then bringing them up to lick clean. This often seems to stun a newbie. I see then I have some teaching to do. I love making eye contact while I clean my fingers off. They so look like a bird in a cat's hypnotic gaze. I then trail my fingers back down and rub her slit some more with maybe forking her clit some before I work a couple of fingers up her hot wet cunt. I then start to pump her while feasting on tit or giving her some more hot kisses while stroking with my free hand. I so love it when they start to swirl their hips into my finger fucking and feel the tremors starting and the mewling commencing. I will bring my fingers up from time to time to lick clean and share with my lover. I love getting a woman to lick her juices who is at first squeamish. I will lick one finger and move my face to hers and press the other finger to her lips. They always open up and soon they are greedily sucking their juices clean. I then go back and get them soaked again with some hard pistoning and then offer her both fingers. Sometimes I have to whisper "please baby", and they oh so beautifully part their lips and take my fingers and suck my fingers hard till every drop of their essence has been greedily tasted and swallowed. It is amazing how quickly some grab my hand and just suck my fingers hard and fast while making smoky eye contact. Women so love quickly learning to love their own sweet divine essence. I then reward them with a good hard finger fuck and plenty of tit sucking and deep throat kissing until they are coming against my body with hard spasms and rocking with much clutching and slobbering kisses. I love it when I am rewarded with that first hard spasm that just throws my lover's body against me suddenly and they just scream out in ecstasy or make those clenched teeth sounds of animalistic keening and joy. According to what I am doing at the moment of orgasm I always try to add breast loving, neck nibbling or kissing to add to her pleasure. I love fucking a woman standing up because their orgasms always leaves them so weak kneed that I have to support and hold them close as they come exaltatingly in my arms and then get so limp

as the sweet after glow fills their body.

Tracy is moaning out her love and murmurs that only Laura really knows how to love her tits. Only a woman can truly understand the pleasure that a woman has when her breasts are loved. We know what we like and thus how to do it so right. Cute picture of Laura kissing Tracy while massaging one tit wet with Laura's salvia and one still dry. Laura drags Tracy to her bedroom and quickly gets her stripped down. No time or need for any foreplay here. Tracy needs it and has made that very clear to Laura. Tracy is like me and pleads with Laura to get naked too. I want to feel our skin rubbing together and I need to see your lovely body fully revealed to me. I love this next part a lot. As I have made clear, I love skin to skin contact. So I really love how Laura straddles and then pins Tracy on her back and clasps her wrists together above Tracy's head with her hands and brings their bodies together for this [Both of them watched, fascinated, sexually electrified, as Laura lowered her dangling breasts to Tracy's, brushing her thick coral nipples against Tracy's swollen black ones. Finally, their breasts were mashed together and their mouths kissing hungrily, almost frantically. They were both so aroused that Laura knew this would be no patient, drawn-out coupling. She had never had a really urgent, uncontrollable, frenzied, animalistic fuck with Tracy, but they had one now.] This is something I just adore. Having our bodies molded tight as we deeply explore each other's mouths and our tits are mashing and rubbing together. Our nipples digging into each other's tit flesh. I love to settle between her thighs and starting up a nice trib fuck. Rubbing and humping until one of us is coming hard with much smacking of thighs and grabbing and pulling bodies tight together as one body spasms against another through crushing spasms of purest bliss. Then holding close until the lucky one recovers and then moves to bring her lover to orgasm.

Geez, you now have them doing what I wrote with a very nice twist [Neither girl could control her lust. They were all over each other, squirming, sucking, biting, squeezing, rubbing. Laura, who was already on top, bunched up Tracy's hard, plump breasts in her hands, sucking the shiny, bursting, black nipples hard, while at the same time rubbing her thigh sharply up and down in the wet groove of Tracy's pussy.] Can't get much better than rubbing your thigh hard and fast into her slit while bunching up her tits for a nice meal to dine on while tribbing her slit. I love to work her tits hard and well and feel her arching hard to get as much pleasure as possible. I love looking up from this position and just seeing the pleasure flowing across her features. Giving her nipple a good hard suck or teeth rake or ramming her slit harder and just seeing that pleasure that is so intense it could pass for pain cross her face. I so live for giving this kind of pleasure. My heart sings when I am able to make my women caw deep in their throat and I see their body coming alive with shockwaves of pleasure that I, Barbara, am giving her. I love feeling my lover gripping my flesh or running her nails up and down my body. I love seeing love welts on my body form her passion. I love the burning trails they leave on my body. I often hear my women yelping for harder nipple sucks and teeth rakes. It feels so fucking good you can't help but plead for harder and more until you reach your own personnel limit. Women so love reaching that limit and feeling their tits burning and thrumming with pleasure that just makes you caw and writhe with pleasure.

You again show the dynamic of lovemaking that only you bring to the reader's table as it were. Other authors always finish the love act as it is started. Laura is feasting on Tracy's tits and one assumes will trib or frig her off or move south for some tender cunt meat. You show how Tracy is ready to take charge at this moment and rolls Laura over and love assaults Laura's tits before moving to Laura's gash for her own cunt candy. This is real honest lovemaking. The give and take of two lovers asserting and giving in and expressing themselves in the unique way that humans have been blessed with. We don't have to follow the rutting script that the Elk must follow. Only you capture this and I am so happy to have the Goddess of Erotica constantly bestowing this upon her loyal subjects. This lack doesn't detract from other stories really it just makes them bland seeming, but your adding it makes you stories seem so real life for me. Laura is a lot like me in the fact that if I haven't come yet I am usually so excited by our foreplay and making out that I usually come fast once my lover works my cunt. I need that first come to take the edge off.

Also, like Laura, once I have been given my first orgasm I'm very ready to give back like Laura does here [But it only whetted her appetite. She was all over Tracy again while the aftershocks were still hitting her. Again she had Tracy on her back, kissing her mouth voraciously, hand-fucking her rapidly, devouring her breasts again, sucking, then biting her nipples, as Tracy had begged her to do. Whooping and panting hysterically, her luscious body flexing and twisting, Tracy came in a hot burst of ecstasy, whinnying helplessly as wave after wave of coming shook her. "Auunngg! Oh Laura . . . sweet Jesus oh god I'm . . . oh! Ungghhnnggiieee! Ohnnggnneee!"] Often I will be moving in on my lover while my body is still jerking and hitching from aftershocks. I love post coital time but sometimes I need your body to bad to revel in sweet lassitude. I love getting to work while my womb is still rumbling with sweet aftershocks. I love the full love assault here and the fact that Laura takes her digitally. I love frigging a hot pumping cunt while I am feasting on her tits. I love feeling my head having to keep up with her arching more agitated body. I love sucking and squeezing with my free hand and working her cunt until the sweet explosion of ecstasy arrives. I love the jackknifing body and holding her down with my free hand while I suck her tit hard and pump her spasming cunt, feeling it clamping on my fingers and her shrieks of coming. I love angling my head and looking up at her face all contorted with sweet blissful anguish and watching her throat muscles work as she is keening or screaming out her pleasure as I suckle her sweet tit. I love seeing the love blush on her upper torso if she light skinned enough. I love gentling my ministrations as she is coming down until I enfold her in my arms and just bask in our sweaty bodies radiating warmth and love to each other as we twine our tongues in languid love.

Nice detail of the kind of frenzy fucking that can't really be described [Both of them were slightly out of breath, and Laura held Tracy while she came. But neither of them wanted to stop. They clawed at one another, kissing heatedly, tongues intertwining, legs intertwining, hands groping in each other's wet pussy, kissing and fucking themselves into another orgasm, a simultaneous one this time, an explosive burst of rapture that wrenched them both at once.] Sometimes one just needs to leave sex as raw and frantic to really describe it accurately. Another beautiful digital orgasm. Sigh, I so love this twining of bodies while pumping each other's cunts hard until you come hard together or close together. Feeling our agitated bodies rubbing, squirming and spasming against each other as much as your entwined bodies allows. I so adore that friction and jerking as our mouths feed each other ecstasy with our stabbing and twining tongues. I love swallowed screams smothered by our twining tongues and clicking teeth.

The fire is still burning brightly and they quickly recover and move to a sixty-nine position for another round of sweet debauchery. [They assumed a sixty-nine position and began slowly, but within seconds were both again out of control. Laura's fingers bit into the firm dark moons of Tracy's ass as she buried her tongue in the girl's flowing dark-lipped pussy, then fastened her lips around Tracy's nubby, purplish little clit. At the same time she could feel Tracy's mouth devouring her own hot slit, tongue-stabbing it, sucking Laura's cuntlips, then her clit, sharply. "Ungghh!" Laura groaned, closing her eyes against a sweeping delirium of sexual bliss that instantly flooded her body. She couldn't even keep eating Tracy. The hot, torrential flood of an orgasm swept her away, and her clenching, shuddering body nearly burst with rapture. She held onto Tracy, pressing her cheek to the girl's smooth dark belly and coming exultantly. "Oh god . . . oh god!" she gasped as the shocks began to weaken.] I prefer bottom but I gladly take top like Laura is here. I love looking down and seeing that love swollen cunt beckoning my tongue. I love to lick up and down that slit and tongue fucking hard while holding onto her thighs as an anchor to piston my head back and forth as I spear her cunt with my tongue. Then arching my head a little and grabbing a hold of her clit for some serious licking and love sucks. I love to mash my face forward to bury my nose in her cunt as I inhale her clit. I love to get a good hold of her clit and hood and suck into my mouth and pump my head while tongue lashing. Then releasing and moving down and forward to bury my face in her delicious cunt for more love cream and then back up for more clit dining. You are so right on when Laura has to simply stop her loving ministrations when the pleasure besots her brain with pleasure. I have often done the same thing, laying my head on your belly or thigh will I feel my womb coiling and then trashing against your body and wailing like a forlorn banshee. For some reason this position tends to make me stiffen like a board and I vibrate and mini-thrash as a million volts of purest ecstasy explode out of my womb to stiffen all my muscles with the purest bliss. I love it when my lover grabs my ass and humps my cunt into her mouth which my hips are swirling on adding to the force of my downward humps. While also pulling my cunt so very tight against her mouth as her tongue just flails my clit or plunges up my slit prolonging my ecstasy. I so adore it when a lover gets a finger lubricated in my juices and works it in my asshole at just the right time and continues to pump my sphincter hard throughout my orgasm while working my ass cheek with her other hand. I love knowing that my cunt juices are just flowing down her throat. This thought alone makes me come harder. I will just scream and scream while lying on top of you spasming and jackknifing while I come so exalting I am simply incapable of loving you while I am being throttled with such sweet ecstasy. I sure do love how you describe devouring a hot wet swollen cunt begging to be devoured.

Sigh, I know this part so well. My body is thrumming with bliss and my head feels like it weighs a ton and it is lying on your belly or thigh as my thrashing ceases. As I become aware again I can feel your pelvis pumping, begging for me to do my job. I love moving my head and gazing with love once more on your cunt I have gotten all swollen and wet. Geez, I can feel my strength just flowing back. Often I will switch to another position to finish you off but if we stay put I just dive my face back into your cunt deep. I want to feel your vulva flaring around my mouth and all your wet slicked heat covering my lips as I dive deep for tasty cunt cream. Laura focuses on working Tracy's cunt slowly until a soul shattering orgasm rips Tracy's sweet flesh apart with bliss. When on top I love grabbing your ass cheeks at the end and humping your cunt up into my while I buzz saw your clit. I love helping your pelvis buck off the floor when the spasms start. I love to settle my weight a little more on my woman so I can feel all your jackknifing and bucking against my body. I don't crush them at all but I want to feel every spasm ripping your body. Plus, a lot of women tell me they love bucking and rubbing against my body when they are coming. I love riding your body down as it becomes spent with the sweet lassitude of bliss. Some women like me to wiggle around a little at this time to feel our sweat slicked bodies rubbing against other for that last skin to skin contact.

I so love this time in our lovemaking [Now, having nearly wiped one another out in a frenzy of wild fucking, they lay together exhausted, whispering, finally content, the hottest fires at least temporarily doused.] You are the only author who has white hot scorching sex and this sweet post coital time. I love that time of gentle bonding of twined limbs and sweet whisperings of love. Sharing our love and dreams. Tracy is marveling at their wild passion and how it generates such screaming orgasms. No man has ever given her such pleasure. Even the great cocksman I think don't really focus on the woman as a rule. They know how to use their cocks but don't know how to pleasure the whole woman like a lesbian. Tracy is my kind of slut because she has immediately fallen in love with nipple teeth rakes, love scratching and gentle love bites. Women should fuck like animals. It is our birth right. I hate the world for trying to reign in our natural urges. I love the observation you make that while nipples may ache after such rough loving it is ["They throb a little, but it only reminds me of that climax. I never had one that strong, not even with you. I'm going to miss it."] A breast and cunt love feeling that sweet pain of having been fucked exactly like they were meant to be. I love having my breast, pussy and asshole love aching the next morning after a good hard pounding. It only makes me long for my next pounding. Tracy is a lesbian slut in the beginning of her awakening.

Unfortunately, it is also angst time. It seems Tracy is leaving and both Laura and I find that totally heinous. Tracy has been promoted but she must move to another city. Sigh, I can only be happy for her. She must advance her career so she can take care of herself and her two little angels. I have mourned when women have left my life but I fully accept it. We must live our lives wherever it leads us. Some though, I still see from time to time, and it is such sweet fucking we have. Tracy knows that they will probably not see each again. Sigh. Laura accepts this and uses her last time with Tracy to such good

affect ["You're a pervert, that's all," Laura teased, squeezing one of Tracy's incredible plump breasts and twisting the large nipple in mock menace between her thumb and forefinger. Tracy's eyes went glassy. "I'll give you two seconds to put that in your mouth and do the same thing to it," she breathed.] I am smiling. I love that slow racketing up of the heat for another round of sweet fucking. I love seeing my woman's eyes go glassy or cat-eyed. You now do that neat thing where you don't show what is happening but we hear the results of the ministrations ["Mmmmm, like this," Laura asked. "Oh . . . yes!" "And this?" "Yes! Ungghh! Bite it, Laura."] This is such a cool effect.

Tracy pleads for another round of rough fucking and Laura delivers. She gives Tracy several more gut wrenching orgasms. I know that feeling of having my strength returning for another round of sweet fucking. I love fucking until my body is totally spent from good hard or gentle loving. Then taking your lover in your arms as we drift off to sleep love cooing to each other. I love seeing Tracy having to beg for mercy. Her body is totally spent. It is such a sweet sad moment when Laura cries silent tears of loss and Tracy wraps an arm around her to comfort her. Women showing love and commiseration. She loves Tracy but not like her current archangel Jonelle. Laura just feels so much for each of her angels that she hates losing any of them, though, Laura knows deep down that this is the way of life. One thing I so love about your story arch is that we get to witness this sweet pain of separation. Other stories don't have the breadth or time to develop these aspects of relationships. Just one more thing to hook me about your writings. I have lived some of these separations and emotions and it is cool (in a slightly sad way) to see real life in this story arc. I so love reading these elements in your story line.

I find this next part very interesting [Tracy sat beside her on the bed, comforting Laura, one arm around Laura's shoulders. "I don't know . . . do you ever feel like sex between you and me is so good . . . partly because it's wrong?" she asked, musing out loud. "I feel that way sometimes. Like we're too hot, too hot, know what I mean? Like, I don't want to start thinking I'm a lesbo, and have to do it with every pretty chick, you know? Just because it's so damn hot and fine, like it just was with us. No man can do that to me, but maybe I shouldn't be letting you do it to me either. Giving me a false sense of what's

possible. Am I making any sense?"] Needless, to say no other author EVER touches this subject. I have had discussions like this in the past. Trying to get women to accept their true sexual self. It amazes me when I hear that it is too good. I want to pull my hair out when I hear this. This is so fucking sad when women have been brainwashed into thinking great sex is wrong. Is our world fucked or what? I have helped some women accept their true sexual orientation and others to accept their bi nature or simply relish getting a taste of strange as much as they want (hopefully a lot!!!). I so love showing a woman the truth about herself and giving her the strength to proceed with her new knowledge. I so hope that Tracy has contemplated this over time and is now accepting everything she said she loved about lesbian sex and is now in the arms of many beautiful women down in Monterey. She so fucking deserves it. They part with promises to keep in touch which as time has shown didn't happen. Alas, like real life again. You capture so much of real life. Other stories always end happily ever after. Angels do leave your life.

The chapter ends with Laura's current archangel, Jonelle, calling and saying she has a spare hour to come over and fuck. I receive phone calls like this when the significant other is away and can we get together. Most times I can but when I can't they get all pouty and sometimes bitchy which always makes me feel bad. Laura can work her in and Jonelle wastes no time in getting to Laura's apartment. Laura marvels that despite her recent hot fucking she is immediately ready for more. This is how I am. Just give me an hour or two and I ready for another round of at least limited fucking and hopefully much more. Maybe not full steam but I always want to fuck as much as my body can give me. I love the observation that Laura has an orgasm that rivals Jonelle's because her body is so spent that it takes her a long time to come and her body is so spent that [She realized that it must be the sexual exhaustion of her body that made it harder for her to come, and yet when she did finally come, her orgasm seemed to equal those Jonelle had already had, a deep, intense, blooming, endless explosion of almost excruciating bliss.] I have had a few orgasms like this. When that last orgasm in a string of orgasms is so fucking intense and painful that your body feels like it is on fire and you just scream out your raw unadulterated pleasure. Unfortunately, I just don't fall into the swoons that Jonelle and Laura has here. I do swoon but not for what must be these heaven on Earth extended lengths that Jonelle achieves. Drat!!!! Still I can't complain, Hehehe.

The chapter ends with Laura observing that another woman is leaving her bed that night. She is extremely sad not knowing if she will see either of them again. Laura bonds so fiercely and is so jealous that her partings are hard on her. It seems she has become more comfortable with various lovers moving on with their lives now. She has her special Sara and she has learned to take what her other lovers can give her. I am so happy that Laura has come to this knowledge and has found the happiness her angels can give her. I smile when my lovers with men in their lives leave me to go back to their other life. I revel in the special sex we just shared knowing they come to me to truly satisfy their needs. I so love slowly showing them the truth and always hope to convert to lesbianism or fully accepting their bi nature and teaching them how to prowl for hot sweet pussy.

 

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Chapter 82:

Before I started this chapter I had gone back and scanned to see where Laura first meet Camille. I see that Rob her then husband had remarked to Laura that she might like Camille because she was black. This was after one of their incendiary fuckings. It is humorous because at first Laura is her usual insane jealous self. Later Rob sets up a dinner date between himself, Camille and Laura. A way of breaking the ice between them. It seems that Camille will not let Rob poke his dick up her ass. I can't blame her in the sense that she needs to be having a woman doing that but I understand Rob here. Laura and probably other lovers allow him to fuck them up the ass and he feels deprived because his own wife will not perform a sex act that he truly desires. I can't blame him for trying to get Laura's aid in this. Of course Laura is immediately captivated by Camille's beauty and elegance.

The reason I glossed the earlier women was because they were among Laura's first lovers and thus very special to Laura. Camille is different. I am reading these chapters again now because she was always so classy seeming to me. She just exudes a certain air that always attracted me. Also, she has that voluptuous body that I find very attractive. I love all body types but a voluptuous body gives you so much to love to. She is built a lot like Ada without that personal body trainer hardness. She is a woman made to be loved by other women all night long. I have always been a sucker for a woman who is not oriental but has that slight oriental cast. I was always sorry that she only appeared four times. I hope now that she has shed herself of that cad Rob she has found herself some nice women to show her how to really live. I can't wait to read these chapters with this divine woman and some scorching anal and dp action.

This chapter starts with the planned seduction all setup. Laura has been invited over to have dinner and Rob had to "suddenly" leave on business. Laura arrives and is greeted by this vision of beauty, of a woman, that you always give us [Laura arrived at seven on the nose and found the delicious Camille wearing a white evening dress that dipped between her large jutting breasts, showing off her exquisite smooth upper chest and sculptured clavicles, as well as her beautiful golden neck. She was even more breathtaking than Laura remembered her from the restaurant. Her waist was tiny, and her soft brown Chinesey eyes alluring.] I will never tire of how you paint these women in such loving word pictures. It is these word pictures that get the reader to immediately loving these women and longing to bury your face in her hot steamy cunt and suck her love juices dry.

Of course Laura's pulse leaps a little at this wonderful vision. We "discover" that Rob has been called out of town. Laura compliments Camille on her outfit and comments that she is underdressed. Camille is a little embarrassed by her overdress and asks Laura to watch over things while she gets more comfortable. As of yet, one can sense nothing more than two women getting together to share some quality time. Again I have always loved how these women so help Laura along with their seductions. Camille comes back into the room wearing [Camille left and returned a few minutes later wearing a pale yellow lounging outfit. Laura's practiced eye saw that she had also removed her bra, even though her breasts were so firm they barely moved under the thin fabric of the lounging shirt. Her large nipples could be detected, though. But Laura tried not to look.] My lust meter would have immediately started simmering. Here is a woman showing me her breast. While the situation is still innocent I would be starting to flirt big time and looking for her flirting back. Lets see what happens. I smiled with Laura trying not to stare at these divine breasts shaking before her.

You now have them fix themselves some drinks to relax and they move to the living room and they start to converse. I notice that it is Camille who leads things here. She comments on Laura looking like Stephanie Seymour and then commenting that she found Stephanie to be so beautiful she would consider switching for her. Yeah!!! Soon my face would be buried deep in her waiting cunt with her experiencing pleasure she never knew possible. I am always smiling when these women lead things along. Camille now remarks ["I even bought a couple of those things, you know, that she was wearing? God, they're great. You ought to see them. Men just . . . I mean Rob, you know, just about explodes when I wear them."] I think Camille must have wanted Laura from the very beginning. Her cunt must be swimming in juices for Laura. She now takes it further and asks Laura if she might want to see some of the outfits on her. I know I would almost be

swooning at this point. This woman wants lesbian fucking. Period.

I so love how you pace these reverse seductions. Laura is hoping but is still shocked when [Laura thought Camille would return with two or three sexy teddies, on hangars, just to show them. Instead, about two minutes later, she returned wearing one. The situation so surprised Laura that she almost choked on her cocktail. Quickly, she gulped an ice cube and tried to maintain her composure.] I Love This!! This is wonderful to read. This woman, Camille, acting all innocent coming back into this room with this woman she barely knows dressed for seduction and now poor Laura is all in a quandary trying to decide what to do. Of god, this teddy is so divine to see [The teddy was made entirely of pale turquoise lace, which concealed almost nothing. It was cut so high that the leg openings rose to Camille's very tiny waist, revealing every inch of her firm, golden thighs, almost as large as Brandi's, and as shapely. Her full breasts strained at the flimsy lace, and her large, dark nipples were clearly visible.] Maria has a body much like Camille's and I have seen this heavenly body in such treats. I am nearly swooning thinking about her dressed in this outfit.

Camille is showing her body off in a provocative manner knowing the effect she is having on Laura though she does begin her coquette act. Laura can't help but comment that with this beauty, so much like Karen's she "looks good enough to eat." Camille question her about that and walks over to Laura on the sofa She is not shy, her husband being away must be emboldening her and also, I think she must have been having lesbian thoughts for quite a while to be so straight forward in her seduction here. Camille is being insistent [Camille came over to the sofa where Laura was sitting. Now she was close enough to smell, a wonderful, ethereal perfume, and close enough for Laura to see the cleavage between her young, jutting breasts through the thin lace of the teddy.] I cringed the first time I read this and Laura said she had only slept with one woman in the past. I hate Laura lying about her true nature. I guess she is still not comfortable and maybe thinks this will help Camille to feel special and not think her a predator.

I really like this next part. It is so slow and sensual in it's pacing. A few authors draw things out till I pass out in a coma of boredom while most others just skip these sweet moments [Now Camille sat down on the sofa next to her. Laura could barely stand the temptation. Her head reeled from the lovely perfume. Camille's sensual lips were only inches from hers. The fantastic teddy was held up only by two spaghetti straps. Under it Camille's jutting breasts nearly touched Laura's arm. Camille's eyes, deep brown, wide, questioning, locked into Laura's. Without saying a thing, Laura lifted one hand and slowly tugged one of the spaghetti straps off Camille's delicious, gleaming brown shoulder. It hung halfway down her arm. Her breasts were so large that the teddy could not drop away by itself. Deliberately, also slowly, her eyes never leaving Laura's, she raised her hand and pulled the other strap down from her other shoulder.] It is this slow movement of the seductions occurring here that really get the juices flowing in your pussy and the excitement building in your veins until you think you are about to explode. I just love how Camille drops that second strap with never varying her eye contact.

I have always loved how you show the slow exposing of flesh as being such a wonderful thing. Seeing a new lover's flesh exposed to your dazzled, besotted senses. Feeling the wonder deep in your pussy knowing that soon these new treasures will be yours [Now the teddy slipped down, exposing Camille's magnificent breasts. Her nipples were very large, dark brown but not black, with wide areolas and pointy centers. Laura raised her hands to Camille's breasts, cupping them, as her mouth met Camille's.] I love how they start their kissing slow and not immediately with tongue but soon their hunger rises and they are deeply exploring each other's mouths. I always long for how your women communicate with each other [Laura kissed her neck, and her ear, and her golden shoulder. "You're so very beautiful," she whispered.] Even in real life I think too many lovers forget this important facet of lovemaking and communication in general. Tell your lover how

much you love and treasure them.

Next you start to give me that wonderful breast worship that I so adore. I love spending lots of quality time on a woman's breasts. I think all women do. We love to make love to this special area on a woman's body. I love how you show Laura planning to love her breasts extra well making sure that soon Camille couldn't stop this seduction if her life depended on it [She cradled one luscious, hard breast in her palm and lowered her mouth to Camille's nipple. With her tongue, she explored it, licking the wide areola, flicking the center stem, teasing it with her lips, then sucking it all the way into her mouth. She held Camille's breast in both hands while she sucked it, and Camille held Laura's head in her hands, watching, sighing softly, then panting more excitedly. Laura knew, having been here before, exactly what it would take to have Camille begging to be fucked in only a few minutes, and she carefully worked to bring it about.] Other authors hint at slowly working a nipple into your mouth but you are the only author to bring it front and center. You also show something I love to do when I am having intense breast stimulation. I love holding a lover's head in my hands and just kind of bending down and watching as I arch my tit into her loving mouth. I can just watch like this for a long time as I feel firing streaming through my body. I just love it and love begging them to never stop and to love me. Sometimes I will be watching like this and they will do something wonderful to my tit and I can just feel my body spasm as I arch my back as hard as possible to thrust my tit deep in their mouth and throw my head back keening like a wild animal with my eyes now squeezed shut.

Soon the upper persuasion has Camille begging for lower invasion as planned ["Oh god, Laura . . . god, it feels so good!" she moaned. "God, I love the way you suck me. Oh god! Unhhh!" "Mmmmm, I want the rest of you too," Laura murmured, still kissing her naked body as she tugged the flimsy teddy down Camille's legs.] Camille is totally willing but this signals her total surrender to lesbian passion. I love that detail of working her teddy the rest of the way off. Other authors would never have left it partially on like this and would have missed this wonderful detail. There is another author that writes these really long chapters called "celebrity harem". He spends long paragraphs of supposed seduction but after the first couple chapters I get no heat any more. He just doesn't capture true seduction (though the readers of his work think he is a writing god). This one paragraph blows away his formulaic writing [She wanted to explore every inch of the delicious girl, but Camille was already approaching the urgent stage. Her eyes were glazed, her hips churning involuntarily, and Laura knew she was on the verge of coming. She kissed her beautiful long golden midriff, then her breasts and nipples again, then her mouth, hungrily, demandingly. Camille moaned into her teeth, arching her back, almost begging Laura with her body alone to do it, to finish it.] This is what sweet surrender truly is and you capture it consistently.

Love Laura whispering to Camille if she is ready and she whimpers "yes". Cute moment when Camille notices Laura is still dressed and begs her to get naked to do it right. I totally agree with this. I always love a totally naked woman though I accept that some like to dress in their sexy stockings and such. Laura is quickly naked and ready for business. I love Laura's assault on Camille's cunt. You are the only author to really show working your tongue up your lover's love channel and then running it up to tease and tickle the clit. Some show this in passing but you give it loving detail [Laura was an expert at this, and in only seconds she had Camille shaking and clenching and twisting, moaning heatedly. She stabbed her tongue deep into Camille's pussy, then drew it out slowly, running the edge of it along Camille's swollen clit. When she knew the girl had reached the point of no return, she began to concentrate on the clit totally, flicking and stroking it with her tongue, until Camille suddenly gasped sharply.] I love how you show your lovers sensing the end coming and concentrating on the clit and love working it till your lover is screaming in rapture and pumping her cunt into your loving mouth.

I love how you tell of Camille's voluptuous body quivering in exctacy. I love a body with some flesh on it. They just quiver and jiggle so beautifully when an orgasm is ripping their body. A slender woman just doesn't jiggle like this. All women are beautiful in orgasm but there is just something about a voluptuous woman body being ripped by pleasure. Now Laura does something that I so adore [She was truly shaken by it, and was still gasping and quivering when Laura slid back up to kiss her. Laura was very aroused from Camille's orgasm, and rubbing her naked body against Camille's aroused her further.] I never tire of rubbing my body against my lover, especially after a stunning orgasm when she is all slacked and hopefully slicked with sweat. I love hearing Camille's shocked declarations of having never come like this in her life. She is right. Only a woman can truly bring another woman this kind of soul shattering pleasure. As almost always happen, the newbie is now dying to return the pleasure. She may let society fuck with her in the morrow, but in the heat of the moment they want some sweet cunt candy. Camille is ready ["Oh Laura, I've never done this, but I want you so much," Camille murmured, squeezing and sucking Laura's breasts passionately.]

It is a real neat detail Laura knowing that Rob is soon to appear but doesn't let that stop her from getting terribly excited as Camille first loves her breasts and then moves south for nirvana and quickly brings Laura to a crushing orgasm [Laura was very aroused, and it took only a few touches of Camille's tongue against her clit to make her come. A sharp, wrenching climax shook her body, and she cawed helplessly as it blinded her with quick rapture. "Unngghh! Oh! Unngghiiee!" she cried out, coming sharply.] Now Rob makes his "unexpected" appearance. As you know I can do without men but I have never worried with you bringing men into the story. You always make it so fucking hot. These men with big cocks that know how to rip them up tight cunts and tender assholes. I love seeing Camille all discombobulated having caught them in the act and Laura being so blasted by her orgasm just lies there and lets the game proceed. I had to grin when Rob [But by now Rob was grinning, unbuckling his pants. "I don't know," he said. "Maybe I'll forgive you both if you let me join in. What do you think?"] Rob knows that with Laura's help, he will soon be burying his cock deep in his wife's lovely ass. I do feel for him if Camille has been denying him this pleasure. Camille is soon to discover what she has been missing.

Laura helps dispel Camille's prostrations about this being so new to her. Laura is helping things move forward. Cute detail of Laura trying to act surprised by all this. Of course Rob is the typical male. Foreplay is just not in his vocabulary. Of course, Laura has got Camille's pussy all nice and lubricated. Rob gets right to work [But Rob was out of his clothes almost instantly. He came up behind her, guiding his huge, jumping cock with one hand, sliding it up under her beautiful naked ass and into her pussy, pushing in deep.] I so love reading your great details of penetration. I love reading of a huge cock lunging up a tight hole. Makes my belly quiver with pleasure. I do love how Rob gets the proceedings going [He encircled her with his arms from behind, squeezing her breasts and pumping into her hard. It didn't take him more than two or three strokes to get all of them into it. Laura quickly took Camille's large, hard, beautiful breasts from his hands and began tonguing and sucking the girl's wide brown nipples thirstily.] I love wrapping a woman in my arms from the rear when I'm spearing my cock deep into her cunt or ass. Squeezing her tits and rubbing her body with my hands while I kiss and coo to her while rubbing my flesh against her sweaty flesh. I love stroking in a nice steady rhythm and then coiling myself and then lunging hard and completely balls deep into her hole while I grip their waist to help impale them on my plunging cock. It just makes them squeal with pleasure.

It seems that Camille squeals like I do ["Ohhnn!" Camille moaned, giving herself up to it eagerly. "God, yes! Fuck me, both of you fuck me, yes! Unh! Unh!"] I so love to vocalize my pleasure. I love reading that Camille is a wild cat in bed. It seems this vigorous fucking is bringing that out. This is something that Rob had told Laura about. Joann is this kind of lover. When she gets wild she gives love bites and leaves red marks from her finger scratches. I love passion. Laura and Rob work in tandem to really start getting her off [Camille was wildly beautiful, she loved fucking, and Rob and Laura fucked her vigorously, bringing her quickly to the edge. In addition to sucking Camille's huge, gorgeous nipples, Laura dropped one hand to the girl's dripping slit and rubbed Camille's clit, scissoring it between two fingers as Camille approached the point of no return.] Love that oh so true detail of using your fingers to frig a clit to help a woman jamming her cock into a cunt to get her lover off. So many lovers just forget to use their hands while using a strap-on to help their lover get off. Always love that detail of a cock being jammed or hammered up a tight cunt. They soon give Camille a devastating orgasm that wrenches her sweet flesh that Laura helps along by lightly biting her aching nipple. Oh yeah! This sudden squirt of sensation can sometimes produce a second immediate orgasm

I had to love this next part. One thing that I have always admired about your writings is how you show a woman being lead to new pleasures. Even though Camille will be protesting she never really tries to stop the proceedings. She may be moaning for things to stop but her body betrays her. She doesn't "really" try to stop the seduction. I have experienced this. I love seducing anal virgins and taking their virgin assholes with my cock. Sometimes I get such a clear no that I drop it but usually you get that feeling that you can seduce them. Maybe not the first time but with repeated seductions you will get her tender asshole. I will usually first take their asshole with my tongue and finger(s) and bring them such sweat pleasure that way. I have now shown them what pleasures this can bring and they are then ready for the next time to take it to the next natural step and lose their anal virginity.

I usually find it easy to now get her to let me really show her heaven. She now knows I can take her to heaven with my abilities in skills in the art of anal fucking. With a woman who has shown a real skittishness I work to make it so fucking special. I usually start after a good het fucking and while she is still on a sexual high I will then coo to her and start massaging her body and gently turn her over and start kissing and caressing her back and after a time move down to her ass. I then slowly start to kiss and lick her ass checks and caress her ass with great patience while telling her that I will make her feel even more special than when I took her with my tongue and fingers. I give them a taste of my oral skills again to remind them of what anal pleasure is all about. I slowly work to the crease and then slowly pull her cheeks apart and start to kiss and lick her crease slowly working down to the crack. I take plenty of time to explore and taste thoroughly. Then I lick her crack with increasing passion with strong tongue strokes form top to bottom. By now pleasure is flooding their anal area and they desperately want to proceed. Now it is time for slow licks on the rosebud and then working your thumbs to the side and opening it up for slow licks around the rim and then slow tongue strokes

into just the rim (that always makes them jump and moan) and then working that tongue in with increasing force until I'm am fucking her hard with my tongue plunging as deep as I can go with much wiggling around and licking of her bowel walls. Yumm!!! Instead of making them come like this it is time to take it to the next stage.

I now start to introduce my cock in her ass crack and rub it up and down her ass crack from top to bottom with slow stokes. I want her to feel that cock stroking her ass flesh and know that soon it will soon be plunging deep into her asshole. Another thing I like to do is open her ass cheeks and place my cock in it and pours some baby oil in and then push her cheeks closed and then work my cock up and down that divine crease and let her feel that bulbous head working her ass moons like I would when fucking the valley between a woman's tits. I then ask her if she is ready for my cock or does she want me loosen her up with my fingers. Most want this and I get the baby oil and lube up a my forefinger and middle finger and slowly work first one and then the second finger in deep and then start stroking them in deep and increasing strength. Soon they're begging for the real thing. I then slowly start concentrating on her anal rose with my hungry cock and then ever so slowly work it around her sphincter with little dips to excite her and then with slow increasing pressure, while cooing to her about how I will be taking her to heaven, I start my penetration. I continue to coo to her while I press her ass checks open to penetrate that virgin asshole. I so love taking an asshole that has never known a hard dick thrust lovingly into its warm depths until the woman is dying from a soul searing anal orgasm of epic proportions. By now they are usually grunting and swirling their ass into my cock and softly begging to be taken. Music to my ears. I always feel so victorious when I feel my cock starting to work into and then past that tight sphincter. That slow penetration up a virgin asshole. Yummy!!! Soon their asshole is loosened up and they are swirling their ass into my loving steady strokes and then when the time is right I'm plunging my cock balls deep into their squealing flesh. I make them die with pleasure from my cock thrusting deep into their ass. Producing their first ass pounding anal orgasm from a loving hard cock. Hope you didn't mind my waxing poetic but I love you for taking these women's virgin assholes that I couldn't help get nostalgic about how I have seduced some very reluctant anal virgins. I so loved seducing them that I still have dreams about it and long for my next anal seduction. I so love showing women the pleasures our bodies can give.

What I wrote above I think you capture here. You show Laura always working the situation to where the woman is really begging for new experiences. Laura uses love and lust to lead the way to new divine pleasures. I had to smile at Laura showing Rob where the baby oil is. Love the detail of Rob swabbing her cock with baby oil. Laura now uses that verbal cuing I was talking about ["Oh baby, you want us to fuck you more, don't you," Laura purred, sliding down the girl's beautiful golden body. "You want me to suck you, don't you, and take your clit in my mouth and make you die of coming, don't you."] Laura is laying the groundwork for the anal seduction. Camille is going crazy with need. Laura buries her face in Camille's streaming cunt and laps away devouring divine cunt cream while filling Camille's body with hot need. All this pleasure weakens Camille's denials and streams pleasure into her body making her ready for even more pleasure from her soon to be penetrated asshole. This next part is what you always handle so well. Rob now starts to slowly work her big thick cock up her tight asshole. Camille is surprised and reacts as expected ["Oh god!" Camille cried out. "Please . . . no! Oh god, Rob, not that, please! Ungghh! Owwnnchh! Ohnnggg!"] I feel though that you always show how though the woman is protesting she is really starting to love it already. You show this by the moans of pleasure. If she really wanted to stop she would be truly screaming and twisting her body away. This is a woman protesting but really wanting to give in. This is hard to capture with the written word but you capture it so perfectly. When trying to seduce a newbie woman or trying to show a woman a new way of loving I always listen to her body language and tone of voice. If she wants me to really stop I will immediately know. Like when Stevie made it very clear that she couldn't take that large two-headed dildo. That was plain and clear and Laura totally respected that. They so respect that. I will not do what they really don't want to. Sometimes after seeing this from me, I have been giving what I wanted to begin with. It is amazing what respect will bring one.

I love how you capture that pain of anal penetration that I think most women feel. Especially when it is still a new sensation and one is not used to it yet [But both Rob and Laura and the baby oil were too much for her. Rob's huge greased cock slid all the way into her ass until she was impaled on the massive shaft, whimpering pitifully, and then moaning in a low, unearthly way that Laura recognized, having done it herself. Camille was paralyzed by the pain of having his gigantic cock shoved all the way into her ass. She winced and quivered, moaning, tears finally sliding down her cheeks, teeth clenched.] I always wince and moan pathetically when I am penetrated. Some women it just seems to go right in, but I definitely feel it. But you capture so well how your body is filled with so much pleasure when that pain fades to ecstatic pleasure radiating out from my asshole.

Camille continues to softly sob but she is also starting to "whimper excitedly". Her body is showing Camille the way. Laura continues to encourage her with love cooing and ["Oh yes . . . oh yes," Laura panted, again squeezing her phenomenal breasts and sucking her big brown nipples. "You're going to come so hard, baby, so hard. Yes . . . let him fuck you, let him fuck you, yes."] I so believe that talking to your lover is so important in helping your lover reach maximum pleasure. You now capture how anal pleasure quickly floods ones body [And now Camille did begin to respond, as the pain disappeared behind the wild fuck-hunger that began to overcome her. And the true hellcat in her that Rob had described began to come out too as she squirmed and whinnied uncontrollably, churning her pelvis down into each rising thrust, her ass crammed full of Rob's massive organ. Her fingers raked Laura's shoulderblades as she arched her back and flexed her body, her face a mask of sublime ecstacy as Rob fucked her harder and harder.] I love for a lover to fuck me back when I am doing strap-on. I want to feel her rocking her pelvis into my thrusts. Working to bring herself maximum pleasure. I love the detail that now that Camille's asshole is stretched out and accommodating Rob cock as he is ripping his cock harder and deeper up into her tight asshole. I will always be so appreciative over how you describe a lover ripping their cock hard and deep into a tight love aching hole.

I love fucking women with a strap-on with just myself or with other women. It is all so hot and exciting. I love the detail of pulling the cock to the edge of her rectum or even out and the plunging it back in hard and balls deep. They love it. The great thing about my living with Joann and Maria is that I often get to do what Laura does here while Rob is ripping his thick cock up Camille asshole [And her mouth on Camille's cunt actually brought on the fierce, killing explosions she had foreseen. Laura slid two fingers up into Camille's slippery pit, stabbing Camille's swollen clit with her tongue, then sucking it sharply. Rob took another furious lunge of his cock up into his wife's asshole and groaned loudly as he came first, spewing rockets of jism into her.] I so love working with another woman to help bring the other off. I love inhaling a hot swollen cunt while a strap-on is ripping up her ass. I love that teamwork to bring my lover the maximum pleasure possible. It doesn't get much better for me than this. I love how you show the heat always increasing till the fiery conflagration. So many other authors either start at full speed ahead or just plain don't capture how the passion and action almost always pickups as ones bodies are filled with passion and pleasure. Liked the always hot detail of Rob's dick sending jets of jism up Camille's tender bowels.

Next you capture as always the wonderful moment of orgasm and how Camille is being ripped apart with pleasure [This, and Laura's wild attack on her pussy, sent Camille quickly over the edge. She came in shocking convulsions, keening and cawing as the breath left her lungs, her body jerking and flexing uncontrollably as the spasms wracked her. By the time she did start moaning, Rob's hand covered her mouth to muffle her passionate shrieks. Again and again he stabbed his spurting cock up into her ass as she screamed and shook with fresh paroxysms of rapture.] Again you are the only author "bar none" who truly captures the throes of extreme exctacy that fills a woman's body when she has truly been fucked well. That look on their face of such excruciating pleasure, the body flipping in exctacy and the animalistic sounds of unbridled joy. This is how a woman comes when she has been soul deep pleasured. I love the way that Rob keeps jabbing his spurting cock deep into Camille's spasming asshole. This so prolongs the pleasure feeling that cock plundering your asshole that is already tearing itself apart with pleasure. You always show how to prolong the exctacy with maximum stimulation.

I love the banter after this love ass rape where Camille mock complains about her aching booty but Rob teases her that she really loved it and she immediately answers [Camille too burst into a wide grin. "Gosh, you're right," she agreed. "I even like him up there. Wow, I never came like that." She ran her finger up and down in her asscrack, coming up with dripping gobbets of Rob's cum. "And look at this lovely stuff coming back out."] Camille is like me in that she likes her sex hot and messy. It sure is a shame that she disappeared from the story but that is life. Lovers who simply seem to melt away on the breeze and you suddenly realize one day that they gone from your life. Sigh. Love how Camille now kisses Laura deeply and says it is her helping that made the orgasm so special. She is right, having a helper working with you while you fuck a hole can really add to the pleasure.

Here Laura has to wait for Rob to get his strength back before she can get her reaming. That is something we don't have to worry about. I have watched Joann fuck Maria or another woman up the ass like Rob (she fucks like a man, hard, deep and great energy – just the way we love it) and make them die of coming so hard from a total anal orgasm. She then pulls out gently and locks eyes with me and I know I will soon be taken to heaven. No waiting. She loves for me to get on my knees and kind of twist my body a little with the side of my face on the bed. This just opens me up for invasion. Sigh, I get dreamy typing this thinking of her lubing up two fingers and working my asshole open and working her big cock slowly but forcefully up past my clenching sphincter. Then she just pounds the shit out me until I too join my bedmate in the exctacy of a total anal orgasm. You are the only author who makes me feel this when I read your stories. I love to feel the exctacy of having a strap-on ripped up my tight asshole and pounded balls deep until I die of coming.

One big advantage of Rob needing down time to get his monster recharged is that this easily allows Laura and Camille to re-couple for another round of heated fucking. I love how Camille seems to be energized by sex and her body thrums with the desire for more fucking. She and Laura kiss with deep tongue and Camille immediate wants more of Laura's little doves. She devours her divine meal ["Ohhh I didn't get to suck these nearly enough before," Camille murmured. "You were so eager. But now I'm going to get my fill of them." "Suck them hard, girl," Laura whispered to her, throwing her head back. "Suck hard."] I always love how you have your lovers communicating their desires and needs to their lover. Laura is letting Camille know what she needs. Camille is more than happy to comply with love sucks and teeth nips. I love how Camille is a total fuck slut when making love [Camille pushed her back into the sofa cushions and scooped up both of Laura's smallish but perfect breasts in her hands, squeezing them hard and swallowing Laura's bursting, aching nipples. Then she kissed Laura's neck and Laura's mouth, murmuring hot fuck-words to Laura, how she was going to help Rob fuck her, how they were both going to fuck her as hard as she herself had been fucked.] Camille with her desire to take the initiative in hot fucking reminds me of my beloved Dawn. Camille knows how to fuck and is eagerly taking up this new lesbian love with verve. I hope now that she is away from Rob that she is fucking beautiful women left and right. Love her fuck-words of hot love.

Camille wants new sensations and makes her request for some hot cunt-to-cunt fucking. Seems Camille has some ideas of lesbian lovemaking. I love how their already sopping wet cunts come together and their hot swollen cunt flesh start grinding together with lots of love juice for slippery grinding. You mention something here that is true. Trib fucking cunt-to-cunt can be such a slow sensual dance of lovemaking. Gently rocking your cunts together for long, long minutes of pleasant gentle bliss while lying on your back. Even when in a more aggressive position and pumping down on a woman, it still tends to be a long pleasured filled process. But, sometimes the need is just to great and you're rocking your hips hard into each other making hard long sweeps up your lovers twat and then grinding down hard on the reverse stoke like you capture here [When she had done this with others in the past, Laura remembered it had been a slow, grinding, simmering fuck that built over minutes to an explosion. But not this time. Both she and Camille were wild with lust and urgency. They pumped one another frantically, whimpering, whinnying helplessly, their bodies flooded with hot, pulsing need. And the orgasm was there in less than a minute, shattering them both.] Again I love how you capture the wild abandon of animalistic fucking in total fog of hot lust. I can just feel a hot cunt mashing and grinding my cunt in this wild abandon. Of course they come with much groans and moans of crushing exctacy.

Of course Rob is totally excited and his cock is finally ready for another round of plunge the pole up the booty hole. I love Camille's wild excitement at the prospect of her now helping her husband to assault Laura's waiting asshole. I am so giddy how she quickly disentangles her groin from Laura and quickly makes a sandwich out of Laura as Rob swabs a finger and starts to loosen Laura's backdoor. Camille presses Laura tight as Rob starts to inch his rock hard cock up Laura's waiting asshole. Loved the tears of pained pleasure Laura sheds here. As you know I will never turn away rough and I love how Rob and Camille make love in this fashion [But these two were not going to show her any more mercy than she and Rob had showed Camille. Rob did not stop pushing until his huge stalk was all the way deep inside Laura's ass. The familiar sensation of being crammed to the splitting point swept over her, and she quivered, moaning softly, her body throbbing wildly each time he moved even slightly.] This is the reason I want my strap-ons large. I want that feeling of being stuffed full and feeling like I am being split in two. I want to feel each minute sensation of that cock in my cunt or ass. I want to feel my cunt or asshole contracting on that thick invader. I want to feel every feature of it as I clench that loving invader with my love muscles or sphincter. I never tire of how your lovers work their cocks in until their thighs are making loving contact with their fuck-mate.

You now capture the beauty of having two lovers loving you at once. We don't always fuck the three of us together. Sometimes we just need a break and one of us will just watch and masturbate or go sleep in our "break" bedroom or some combination of us are off fucking other angels. We often bring other lovers home but again the dynamics are always different as to how we couple. But most of the time we like to fuck together just the three of us. We bind on such a deep spiritual level that it makes our couplings so intense. It is this change of rhythm that keeps everything so hot and dynamic. [It had been a while since Laura had been fucked by two people at once, and she quickly realized that nothing was possible but absolute submission. Inspired by her beauty, they both began fucking her hard, very hard. Rob held her hips steady as he speared her flaming ass again and again with his gigantic stiff member, bringing helpless squeaks of pain/pleasure from deep in her throat. And Camille was going crazy with lust too, her fingers plunging in and out of Laura's pussy while her mouth tore at Laura's nipples.] You capture so many things here. First, being love assaulted by two lovers does make one docile in receiving their loving. Your body and soul are just overwhelmed by the forces loving your body. Two dynamic women loving your body at once. Plus, I love the power of your fucking. When you are being penetrated you need power in the strokes

to achieve maximum pleasure.

You capture this with Rob holding Laura's hips firmly while he pile drives his huge cock up her spasming asshole and the helpless sounds of pained pleasure this produces. Some women have a hard time with this at first. They know how to stroke with great skill but are just brought up to be to gentle with our bodies. Joann tells me Maria was like this at first, though you couldn't tell it now. Now she just fuck slams her lovers when she is finishing them off after a wonderful fuck. When I have a woman making love to me like this I get in missionary and just wrap my legs around her hips and grasp her body with my arms and hands and whisper to her that I am not a fine porcelain china doll. I am a woman who needs hard fucking. I throw myself into her stokes and rock and pull with legs and arms until she is plunging into me with wild abandon. I just keep whispering to her to fuck me hard and deep and how much I love her for pleasuring me like I need it. Sometimes I know they worry about this forceful fucking by that is quickly dispelled when I come in groins and screams and my body is jackknifing and flipping underneath them. They quickly figure out they have done it just right. They are like Randi when she first discovered Laura's strap-on. They totally become besotted with the sense of power this gives them. The power I know Rob must feel as he uses his strength to hold Laura's hips firmly in place while he powers his dick repeatedly with great force up Laura's clenching asshole. This is how you pleasure a woman with strap-on sex. Very few women don't love hard fucking after they have discovered just how truly satisfying it is.

The beauty of multiple lovers is the fact that while Laura is experiencing divine pleasure from having her asshole plundered she is receiving another dose of bliss from Camille plunging multiple fingers up her tight cunt while love mauling her tits. That is the wonder of two or more lovers. Your whole body is plundered with pleasure. I love how Camille goes a little wild and leaves love scratches and bites on Laura's body. I love being marked like this. I love how Rob and Camille know how to keep pouring the hot loving on as Laura orgasms to prolong her pleasure as long as possible [Her body was raked and scorched by explosions of ecstacy, and both Rob and Camille kept fucking her hard throughout. Finally, Rob's cock spewed gobs of jism up into her ass. Camille had slid down between Laura's thighs, and her mouth on Laura's cunt brought Laura to one last, excruciating climax, coinciding with Rob's and nearly making her black out from the intensity. "Awwonnngg! Ungghmmggnhiieeee!" she wailed, coming in waves of blinding rapture, her body flexing and flipping uncontrollably as one shock after another hit her.] I so love to have a hot mouth sucking my cunt hotly while a cock is being pile driven up my spasming sphincter. I just scream like Laura is doing here. I can't help but scream out my extreme pleasure of orgasm. I know that feeling of almost blacking out or as I like to call it "whiting out" as I just lose all contact with reality as my cunt and womb are ripping themselves apart in the most dire contractions of bliss imaginable. I really do feel sometimes like my cunt is trying to tear itself inside out And I Love IT!!!!!!

I love Camille for doing what I love to do when watching Rob and Laura go at it [All of them seemed to collapse in a pile of writhing, spasming flesh, panting and groaning, and Laura realized that Camille was even masturbating herself into another orgasm as Rob and Laura were surfacing from theirs. The beautiful girl's hand was furiously rubbing her wet pussy, and suddenly she stiffened, cried out, and came sharply, her glazed eyes fixed on Rob and Laura as the bliss shook her body.] I still love to masturbate often and will not miss an opportunity to pleasure myself when I have a hot fucking going on before me.

Like how they continue to fuck while the energy holds out. Love the detail of them resting to get their energy back and then fucking heatedly again. Using the shower to revive themselves and then fucking excitedly under the pounding water. That is always a great way to fuck. It seems that Camille has by far the most staying power. Of the three of us, Joann is like this. She is a veritable fuck machine. Sometimes it is embarrassing that Maria and I being so much bigger than Joann are the first to cry surrender. Joann really, really loves to fuck. And like Camille she will mark you with love bites and nail rakes to show that she has fucked you. She doesn't really draw blood just leaves love whelps all along your back. I really like how Camille is immediately ready for more hot fucking. She is a fuck slut after my own heart ["Mmmmm, I know," Camille grinned. "Just the way I like it. Hard, fast, and hot. And now, even kinky."] This is a woman comfortable with her sexuality and wants to embrace it. I love her for it. This is a woman who is very liberated in seeking her pleasure. I wish all women were allowed to have this sexual freedom and discovered the supreme bliss that only lesbian lovemaking brings.

 

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Chapter 90:

Though this chapter is about Camille it starts with the fact that Yvette is just leaving her apartment and now Sholandra is calling her pleading for some loving. I guess that Laura has been avoiding her because of the scratches that Camille put on her during their last tryst and maybe other recent poundings. I love the fact that Sholandra is dying to have Laura in her bed again. Laura is using the old standard I'm having my period to fend her off. This was a totally cute comment by Laura about being so dead tired that even this couldn't make her come again [But she was also dead tired. I couldn't come again if she were licking me and Karen were flogging it out of me at the same time, she thought. And Brandi was thigh-fucking me, and Barbara was . . .] That is way beyond cute. Laura is so tired that she pushes her off tomorrow to telling Sholandra that indeed her period has past.

Now you give us a great treat of some hot phone sex. This is something I just haven't ever done for some reason. I am not much of a talker on the phone for some reason. I love how Sholandra starts things out with a simple question of do you know what I am doing now. I love what she tells Laura ["I took off my bra while we were talking. I've got one of my boobs in my hand, and I'm licking the nipple."] That is fucking hot and immediately sets the stage for some great phone sex. Of course this gets Laura's full attention. I love how Sholandra reminds Laura about the size of her large nipples and then makes sure Laura can hear her slurping her nipple into mouth and love sucking it. My pussy would be dripping wet by now hearing this. I love how Sholandra is continuing to pour on the heat ["It's all wet and shiny," Sholandra purred into the phone. "And hard. The center is pointing. Don't you wish you could suck it?" "Yes!" Laura breathed.]

Sholandra goads Laura about sucking her own nipples and proceeds to pleasure herself even more ["Now both of my nipples are wet. I can feel them throbbing. I'm going to suck them harder. Wait. I'll be right back."] I so believe in this. When you masturbate you should always aim for maximum pleasure. Do what you body loves the most. I know every secret nerve in my body and how to stroke my erogenous zones and how hard to stroke fingers into my cunt and asshole for maximum pleasure. Laura experiences what I almost always do. I may think my flesh is completely worn out but the right stimulation almost always revives me [Laura was riveted to the phone. She realized that her sexually exhausted body was coming to life again as she listened Sholandra was moaning softly. Every few seconds Laura could hear the wet pop of her lips. She had feasted on those delicious young breasts, those plump, soft black nipples, and she could see everything in her mind's eye, even the ecstatic expression on Sholandra's beautiful face.] Having Sholandra tell me what she is doing and having tasted that same sweet flesh would ignite a fire deep in my womb that would need serious masturbation to put out.

Of geez, Sholandra is really taking it to the max. She starts to rub her cunt with the receiver. I am just sitting her staring thinking of hearing that rustling of phone over panties and wishing I was that phone. I smiled great big when I see that Laura is starting to get desperate with fuck need. She is almost ready to invite Sholandra over. Sholandra keeps applying the heat to Laura ["I'm going to take my panties off. Can you wait while I take my panties off?" "Yes," Laura swallowed. She realized she was panting softly herself, and her heart was racing.] All I can say is Wow!! Sholandra removes her panties and lets Laura know that she has her legs spread wide and is now touching herself. Laura may have thought she was completely fucked out but she is discovering otherwise [Laura only belatedly realized that she had slipped one hand down under her bathrobe. She was naked underneath, never having dressed after Yvette's departure. Her finger ran up and down the wet, puckered cleft of her own pussy.] I so love trying to coax one more orgasm out of my spent flesh. They are just so fucking intense, powerful and blissful as they rend my cunt to shreds in exctacy. The pain is so worth it.

Sholandra lets Laura know that she wishes she was there with her and delivers a killer line with ["I'm holding the lips open so I can see the pink insides. I wish your tongue were sliding into it."] Oh yeah, this woman knows how to masturbate. I so love reading both of them pleasuring themselves by now ["I thought so. I'm pinching one of my nipples now, and . . . tickling my clit. Unhhhh! Oh! God . . . I'm going to suck it, my nipple, god . . . it feels so good." Laura was frantic. She untied the sash of her bathrobe and held the phone receiver between her head and shoulder, rubbing her pulsing cunt with both hands.] Sholandra now takes it to the maximum level and starts rubbing the phone directly into her sopping wet cunt. Now that is a beautiful mental picture. I can close my eyes and just see Sholandra doing this and imagine Laura hearing the sounds a wet cunt must make on a phone while you hear Sholandra's screams of exctacy ["You are fucking me," Sholandra panted. "Unh . . . unh! I'm going . . . to come. Right . . . now! Unnghh! Oh! Ungghhiieeee! Oh Laura I . . . I'm coming unnghhhnnnn! Auunnggghh! Oh!"]

Laura experiences an orgasm like I was mentioning earlier [Laura's own orgasm, at the end of the long string she had just experienced with Yvette, was a tight, stabbing, almost painful clutch of sharp spasms. She bit down on her own helpless squeals, unable to keep them from escaping. "Mnnggeee! Ohnngmnnggeee!" she squealed, almost mauling her clit with her fingers. "Oh shit!"] Sholandra is so happy that they came together over the phone and tries one more time to get an invite over but now Laura's flesh really is spent. Sholandra shows her jealousy when she is happy that this masturbation session shows that Laura is not with another woman. Laura picks up on this but quickly realizes that she is just as jealous when she contemplates Rhonda having gotten Yvette in her bed and knowing that she hungers for Sholandra also.

They meet again the next night and commence to fucking like two animals in the rut. They simply can't get enough of each other. Give me a night to rest and I am completely ready to fuck the next night. I always long for my next orgasm. I love how Sholandra just surrenders and lies back so Laura can devour her body. Laura asks Sholandra if her nipples are sore from her love mauling and Sholandra replies yes but with a very important "but" ["They stop hurting when you suck them," Sholandra whispered. "Mmmmmm, can't get enough, can you, you little tramp," Laura grinned, sucking one of the girl's fat, pulpy black nipples deep into her mouth.] Music to my ears. I always want my sore nipples sucked more. They may be even sorer later but I will never turn down the opportunity for more pleasure. I'm addicted to it. They end their marathon fuck session with one more cunt wrenching orgasm apiece before exhaustion claims them to sleep. I love fucking until sweet exhaustion claims me and my lover and we fall asleep with our spent sweaty bodies all entwined in rapturous sleep.

Fortunately, for Laura she gets some down time and gets three days to recharge her spent flesh. The fates now intervene with a most pleasant surprise: Camille. They meet in the grocery store. Evidently Camille must be dressed to show her body to maximum affect and Laura is immediately in lust. They meet with lust already simmering on the surface and Camille asks [Camille leaned close and whispered in Laura's ear. "Does that mean you want to screw me and wish my husband wouldn't come between us?"] Wow, I love this woman's directness. I kind of have this kind of confidence when I have had a woman and I am sure where I stand with her. They quickly banter back and forth trying to get from the grocery store to a bed. Camille makes it clear that she wants Laura alone for some serious fucking while Rob is out playing golf and wants to hurry and get back to her place and commence fucking. Neat detail of them trying to act like they are not picking each other up in the supermarket. I had to smile a little at Laura wondering about Camille and her lust for Laura [She could have any man, Laura thought. Why does she want me?] I know exactly why she desires Laura over any man.

It seems that Rob and Camille are doing well for themselves with the Porsche and the expensive wine. Laura heads into the bedroom while Camille gets the wine and they have a toast that leads to [They linked arms and drank a very romantic toast, eyes locked, smouldering. Without unlocking their arms, they shared a very slow, sensual kiss, their tongues coiling together in a patient, simmering dance of passion.] Oh yes, the slow stoking of the fires deep in their bellies. Love how Camille gives Laura the complement of Stephanie Seymour not being as good as Laura in bed. Laura now requests that Camille be a little careful with her scratches since they cause her problems with her other lovers. More of that communication between your lovers that I so love in your stories. She teases Laura a little about giving her a hickey instead but ["You know I wouldn't," Camille said, softly. "I'm just teasing." She removed the finger and began taking off her own blouse. "Lucky girl. She gets to fuck with you all the time. I have to wait until my husband is out of town or playing golf."] I sure hope that Camille has now found herself women to give her kind of loving she truly deserves.

I love how Laura's eyes water with lust when Camille removes her top and she sees those breasts straining against her bra. I know my lust meter would be pinging at ten here. This is an absolutely hot detail [She reached behind herself and undid the bra. Laura did the same to hers. They took them off together, let them drop, then pushed their naked breasts into each other, kissing ravenously this time.] That is simply fucking HOT!! More of those details that make you reign supreme in lesbian erotica. It is such a nice change of pace to have a woman take charge of the lovemaking so completely like Camille is here [She sucked one of Laura's nipples hard, then held it gently with her teeth, wagging her head to and fro, looking up at Laura from beneath her long lashes. Laura was wildly aroused. She recalled that last time Camille had insisted on fucking her first, reversing Laura's usual sequence, and this time was no different.] A lot of Laura's current lovers know how to be aggressive in expressing their needs but Camille is a take charge kind of woman. Love that playful wagging of the head with her tit treat in her mouth. Cute detail of her looking up at Laura like that, with wild lust in her eyes.

Love that communication again when Camille queries Laura if her nipple play hurts and make her wet. Camille knows how to use the spoken word to move the sex forward. Camille moves the sex forward at a fast pace [This time she was a little more insistent. Her hand quickly found Laura's very wet pussy and stroked it aggressively, while her lips sucked and pinched Laura's sensitive nipple sharply.] Camille is a wonderful fuck slut after my own heart. Love this verbal discourse where Camille makes sure how much loving Laura wants ["I want to fuck you, Laura. I've dreamed of fucking you since our last time. I want to fuck you . . . hard." "Honey," Laura panted, eyes glazed, "you can fuck me as hard as you want." "Mmmmm, you like it that way too, don't you."] This is something men just don't do. Taking the time to really find out what their woman wants in bed while lesbians just do it by nature.

When I am really excited I come easily like Laura does here. Having a woman work my overheated flesh over just makes me come quick that first time [Laura nearly swooned as Camille poured on the heat. Her mouth devoured Laura's breasts, trying to swallow Laura's nipples, while her long, sinuous fingers scissored Laura's clit as they slipped inside her pussy. She fucked Laura hard, plunging her hand into Laura's pussy, sinking her teeth into Laura's nipples. In only ten or so seconds, Laura came in shocking, rapid convulsions, whimpering hysterically. "Oh! Unghh! Onnggmnnnggeeee! Oh! Oh god mmnnggeee!" she wailed, her body twisting and flexing under Camille's swarming body, coming hotly, sharply, groaning with each fresh spasm.] I love how Camille already knows how to continue to work Laura's breast while plunging fingers deep into Laura's convulsing cunt and, thus, giving Laura maximum pleasure.

Laura is stunned by her quick powerful orgasm but Camille lets her know that is what she wanted to deliver and wants the same in return. Laura starts to deliver with some more of that intense breast worship that I so adore [She squeezed them sharply, and ran her tongue all over Camille's wide brown areolas, nipping at the protruding centers with her teeth, making Camille gasp and quiver with excitement. Then she held one large breast in both hands and slowly sucked the wet, excited nipple in deep, sucking hard and pinching it between her tongue and the roof of her mouth. She had done this to others, to Sholandra and Yvette only recently, and it drove them all wild. It had the same effect on Camille.] I will never tire of how she uses both hands on a large tit to fully control and massage it while she works the nipple with tongue and lips before she sucks it in deep to massage it with her tongue deep in her mouth and then giving it deep love sucks when tries to swallow the nipple down her throat. I so love pulling on a tit that is lodged deep in my mouth sucking for all I'm worth hearing my lover gurgle in lost rapture and abandon.

I love how you never forget to have your lovers compliment each other on their beauty. Camille must know she has beautiful tits but hearing Laura tell her this must bring her great pleasure. When Laura realizes how sensitive Camille breasts are she [Laura realized that Camille might be like Karen. A little rough treatment of her breasts, and she spilled over. She sucked and squeezed the luscious brown balls of flesh even harder, more passionately.] Laura always aims at trying to give her lovers the most pleasure possible. I love how you detail Laura only increasing the heat and Camille arching her back to cram her breast as fully as possible into Laura's hot mouth [Laura did it a lot harder. While sucking one large nipple, and teasing it with her teeth, she pinched the other one, twisting it, feeling Camille's writhing body arch up off the bed as the sensations grew even more intense. God, she is going to come! Laura realized.] Finally Laura senses that just a little more rough treatment will send Camille over the edge and she delivers what Camille needs to reach heaven [Now Laura let it all go. She sank her teeth into one of

Camille's big, round, wet nipples, more roughly than she ever had before. And Camille froze, keening deep in her throat, then came in a loud burst of groaning. "Awwwoonngggg! Oh . . . oh! Awwwuunnggggg! Oh god! Mmmnnggeee!" she cried out, thrashing wildly about under Laura, coming fiercely.] I so long to give my lovers such pleasure and hearing those screams of rapture knowing I am the one who caused them. I just feel so content when I hear them vocalizing their pleasure.

Laura now does what I would do. If I have brought a woman off just by working her breasts I still have not been paid my fee and quickly move south for what I know will be sopping wet tender cunt meat just waiting for me to lick and devour like Laura does here [Laura scarcely gave her a minute to recover from this wrenching orgasm. She slid down between Camille's shapely, golden thighs and slipped her tongue into the girl's long, sinuous wet pussy, slurping and sucking it passionately, until Camille was quickly coming again, her luscious, voluptuous body surging and shuddering through fresh hot spasms, her voice clotted with ecstatic moans and strangled cries of rapture.] I simply must have a woman's cunt in my mouth for a sexual encounter to feel really complete. I must taste her essence and I always desire to have that cunt pumping love juice down my throat while it's spasming through an excruciating orgasm of bliss and love.

They fuck heatedly for the next hour and Camille once more loses control. I would take it in stride as long as they aren't deep but would remind her to please try and follow my wishes. I love the fact that I can create that kind of loss of control but I did ask you not to scratch me. It is amazing how scratches of love don't hurt like scratches in anger. Love does make everything so much better. Cute remark Camille makes when Laura asks her to not try and kill her [Camille embraced her. "I never wanted anyone to stay alive as much as you," she murmured, slipping her tongue deep into Laura's mouth.] They must part because the odious Rob will be returning soon. Camille expresses some jealousy knowing that Rob wants Laura again to bury his cock up her ass. Laura discovers that Camille is letting Rob fuck her up the ass but needs to be a little drunk first. His size I think is playing with her mind. Enjoy the fortune of having such a dick sliding up your asshole is my thinking. They force themselves apart knowing that if they stay together they will commence to fucking heatedly again, especially with Camille's great sexual stamina. That is the beauty of most women, that with the proper stimulation they can fuck with stamina and verve. They part with promises to call each other and Camille jokes that she hopes that her scratches don't cause problems with Laura's other lovers but Laura can sense the slightest hint of jealousy. Can't blame these women for wanting this divine fuck angel all for themselves.

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Chapter 102:

We find this chapter opening with Laura doing some shopping in the drug store where she first met Barbara and now she runs into Rob. They immediately open the banter with Rob commenting that she looks like Stephanie Seymour but she can't compare to the woman that Laura is. What a dynamite comeback Laura uses here ["Only a man who's fucked me in every orifice could say something like that," Laura whispered, leaning close.] Hehehe. I love it. Rob starts angling for some pussy and Laura inquires about Camille and how he can be tired of her black beauty. Rob then informs her he is hoping for a nice party since his brother Eric is in town and how about a fuck party. I love how Laura's lust takes control here ["I'm not. Actually, I was thinking of a . . . shall we say, party? My brother is in town, staying with us. I thought maybe you could join us for dinner . . . and then---" "I accept," Laura said, cutting across, so quickly that she even surprised herself.] I love the kind of woman Laura is. She will never pass up the chance to experience erotica pleasure. She is a woman that needs to be fucked hard, deep and

regularly. Just like me.

Even Rob is surprised at her quick acceptance and we discover that Rob has no problem with his brother fucking his wife if that is what they both want. Rob believes in open relationships too it seems. I am glad he is willing to give his wife that freedom. They arrange to meet at Rob's around 7:00. My belly would be clinching with such a rendezvous of hot fucking awaiting me. Wild fucking with total abandon. Since Laura doesn't do this on a regular basis she starts to get a little case of the nerves and remembers how she got double penetrated by Rick and Jamie and they totally plundered both her holes. I know she must have been in heaven. Laura gets really excited thinking of having Camille in the mix and how men fuck so hard and relentlessly as they drive their cocks up your holes. This forcefulness is something that must women must be lead too. This driving your strap-on with wild abandon into your lover. Men with their male ego just don't know any other way than plunging for all their worth with usually little imagination or foreplay. Oh well.

Laura arrives at seven but for some reason Camille is not present but we meet Eric and find he does have a boyish charm about him ["Rob told me you were even better looking than Stephanie Seymour," he said, kissing her hand with a gentlemanly flourish. "But I didn't think he could be exaggerating."] She immediately wonders if his cock is as big as his brother and wonders where Camille is. Rob stammers she will be back shortly and this does make Laura wonder if she has been setup. Laura quickly realizes that it doesn't really matter. She wants pleasure and knows these fuck studs can deliver. I love how you have them spend a half hour [They had a drink to relax, and made idle conversation, shot through with an undercurrent of sexual innuendo. All three knew what was going to happen eventually, and so they enjoyed the simmering buildup. Laura had worn some spectacularly sexy underwear, and she was able to luxuriate in the knowledge that they would soon discover it.] Other authors would just have their characters just start fucking. I thank you so much for giving us real life scenarios in your stories.

After Camille still doesn't appear Laura decides she needs to start moving things forward. She follows Eric into the kitchen when he goes to make another drink and starts to flirt with him. I always love you showing us this flirting ["Not too strong," she cautioned. "I won't be able to do what I want to do." He grinned back at her. "And what would that be?" She made him put the bottle down and turn around. "You might be surprised." "Surprise me, I'm ready," he said, closing his eyes.] I always thank you for this real life flirting. Laura now undoes her blouse so Eric can gaze at her breasts encased in her sexy bra. Eric is so cute with his boyish reaction and fear of where Rob is. Laura knows how to allay his fears [Laura caressed his cheek with her fingertips. "He's already had these. In his mouth," she added. "Wouldn't you like to catch up?"] I so love your flirting and seduction. I love Eric's gasped response that Laura is beautiful.

Laura knows how to move the seduction along [Her bra opened in front, and she reached down and undid the clasp. Eric watched her exquisite naked breasts come into view as she pulled the lacy cups aside. Laura cupped them in her palms and offered them to him.] Eric is of course in immediate lust but I have to love how he is so tentative with his initial sucks and Laura has to encourage him that she won't break. That is all he needs to hear and he now devours her tits with wild abandon [He did. He grabbed her breast with both hands and tried to swallow her throbbing nipple.] Must guys are clumsy but they usually do know how to do things hard even if it is without much skill or imagination. I love how Laura uses the counter here to lean back and enjoy Eric's hungry mouth [After a few seconds he moved to her other nipple, doing the same. He was wildly hungry for her breasts, and it excited Laura. She held her shirt open and leaned back against the counter as he ravished them, sucking and squeezing her breasts passionately.] Soon Laura is moaning and begging Eric to suck her more ["Ohhnnnnn!" Laura moaned, throwing her head back, pushing her wet, aching breasts into his face.] I love how you always are able to convey the way a body just controls you when lust is raging through your veins.

Eric is again little boy cute when he is embarrassed when Rob is attracted to the Laura's moans and comes in the kitchen and catches them in the act. Laura keeps things moving forward nicely when she says that Eric won't mind sharing and lets go in the living room to get comfortable. She is leading the scenario for hot fucking. I love it. Leading things along so your body can soon embrace the sweet intoxication of hard fucking sex. I like reading of them getting Laura naked and laying her on the sofa and Rob immediately gets on his knees and buries his face in her sweet pussy. Rob does seem to be a very good lover. Eric quickly gets naked and feeds his big dick into her eager mouth. I do miss feasting on hot dick. I so loved taking that tube in my mouth and loving it. I just couldn't stand the man attached to it. I like giving head to strap-ons when my women want it but I miss the warmth and pliability of a real cock. I love how you make it so clear that the men want Laura and she wants them. I love the passion and lust you show that permeates the air.

Rob strips and gets on the floor and [Rob had quickly undressed too, and now he lay on the floor next to the sofa and pulled Laura down on top of him. He kissed her roughly, guiding his mammoth cock up into her pussy at the same time. Laura could taste her own cuntslime on his lips, and she gagged softly as the monster penetrated her.] I have been in this position so many times kissing a woman with my juices on her lips and in her mouth as she guides her large cock up into my tight cunt. I so love the feel of a big strap-on with a nice bulbous head pushing up my tight vagina pushing into my clenching muscles making way for its invasion of my depths. I love shivering and moaning with deep penetration. It is so cute that Rob has to guide Eric along with the penetration of Laura's ass. He seems almost befuddled by this godsend. They have to guide him to get the baby oil to prepare the way.

I really like this next part [Now Rob settled into a slower rhythm, fucking her slowly, scooping her dangling breasts up in his own hands and sucking her nipples thirstily as he fucked her. Laura wasn't kidding. She was wildly horny, almost on the verge of coming already.] First I have to commend Rob for doing what most men just don't do and is giving Laura maximum pleasure by loving her breast. Men just way, way, way to often only focus on their unimaginative fucking with their dick. What I like how is how you show Rob working his cock with a slow sensual rhythm of fucking. I love to be pounded but I am not anywhere near as satisfied as I desire if i don't get me some slow love fucking to get my juices flowing and my nerves heightened with pleasure. This prepares the way for the rough stuff to come.

Laura pleads with Eric to hurry and fuck her with Rob before Camille gets back and Eric is still almost in a fog that he is going to get to fuck such a beautiful woman in the ass. Finally he gets the baby oil [The next few minutes were incredibly exciting for Laura. Rob continued to fuck her very slowly and skillfully from beneath, sucking and licking her nipples at the same time, while Eric lubricated two fingers with babyoil and set about the task of loosening her asshole to the point where it could accept his monster cock. After a couple of minutes of this, Laura was ready to come unglued.] Sigh, such bliss. A big cock sliding up my cunt with skill and love and my lover licking my nipples with lots of love sucks and plenty of deep throat kissing and feeling my lover's partner loosening up my asshole with her fingers for a much bigger invasion to come. I love feeling that tension building in my ass knowing that it will soon be receiving such divine pleasure while another lover fucks my cunt. This is such a beautiful way of fucking. You just make my pussy moisten with this [She moaned and gyrated, her body quivering and stretching as they manipulated her flesh, her cunt impaled on Rob's huge prick, which slid in and out of her in a smooth, relentless rhythm. Now Eric decided she was ready. He

swabbed his enormous pole with the oil, and then Laura held her breath as she felt him beginning to introduce it between her cheeks.] You are simply the only author that knows how to start slow and sensual like real life lovers to build up for a total configuration of mind blowing and cunt searing hot pounding sex.

You capture that pain of penetration of a huge cock being pushed up your tight asshole [Hot tears squirted from Laura's eyes. She bit her lip and tasted the blood. It was like having a thick, red-hot pipe shoved into her ass. Her body cried out in pain. She dissolved into a trembling, whimpering mass of helplessness, gurgling and gagging incoherently as the enormous tube of stiff gristle penetrated her ass, sliding in deep.] I have cried many a tear and pleaded for mercy and used my palm to urge my lover to go slower. I want this penetration but self-preservation does make me quiver and moan with minor fright. I love the pain because I know that soon pleasure will be pouring from my impaled asshole to my womb and cunt and soon whole body. I so love feeling my lover pressing her cock up my ass despite my supposed pleas until I feel her thighs bumping against my ass. I want your cock balls deep in my ass. I want maximum penetration in both of my love holes.

Nice true detail I have never read elsewhere where knowledgeable lovers know how to pause to let their impaled lover get accommodated to being totally filled with cock [Rob had stopped fucking her too, and they both were just letting her get used to it. But there was no question of that. Her tormented body felt like it was just about ready to explode. She whimpered and moaned, twisting between them, agitating their stiff cocks within the tight clasp of her asshole and her wet pussy, driving both men crazy.] One thing I do miss about strap-on sex is that I can't pleasure my women with my churning pelvis or when I clasp the cocks with my cunt and sphincter. Of course I'm really clutching those poles ramming up my ass and cunt to give myself maximum pleasure but it sure is nice to give pleasure back. I do so wish I could give that pleasure that men receive from this. In a way I guess this is good because this makes it so easy for the woman doing the fucking to totally concentrate on giving pleasure. I just wish I could give the pleasure back on a direct physical level. I loved hearing a guy grunt with pleasure when I clamped down on his dick with my tight cunt or sphincter.

Laura has now gotten accommodated to her cocks ["Unngghhh oh fuck me you guys do it, do it hard and fast!" she panted deliriously to them. "Fuck me, quick, do it!"] She is now ready for some good hard pounding just like I would be, though I do like to have what the guys deliver here initially. They guys show skill by not taking off in a wild fuck dance but slowly ramp up their stroking [They began to fuck her slowly, and for the next minute and a half the three of them settled into a kind of rocking motion, the two enormous cocks sliding deep into Laura's body, then sliding back out again, then in again, Laura wincing and moaning, waiting for the pain to be overshadowed by the sexual excitement she felt swelling below the surface of her agony.] Reading this almost makes me delirious thinking of getting cocks worked so rhythmically up my cunt and ass, that wonderful in and out stroking my womb with pleasure. Feeling my body fill with pleasure and that need to take it harder and deeper for even more pleasure that I know such a fucking will give me. Though I love to be pounded as I have endlessly made clear one needs this sensual rhythmic fucking that ramps up to let your cunt get fully lubricated and muscles ready for deep pounding and one needs to let your sphincter get ready for the hard fucking to come. One thing about this stage of fucking is that I can concentrate on the feeling of the cocks in my cunt and ass. I kind of think of getting pounded as a total body experience where I get overcome with sensations from the penetrations, the gyrations of all the pounding, all the grunting and moans, grasping hands and a lover hugging my body to coil and strike deep with her cock, the slapping of bodies. It is just a total overwhelming of my senses with fucking pleasure. But while I am getting sensually fucked I can focus on the feel of the bulbous head of the cocks pushing up into my clenching cunt and pushing threw my bowels. I can focus on clamping down and just whimpering with pleasure as the cocks rub my tender flesh with exctacy. With dp I can focus on that thin membrane between rectum and cunt and feel those cocks rubbing against each other. Divine. This just prepares me for the pounding I need to finish me off with a soul screaming, cunt rupturing orgasm of pure heaven.

You now take the fucking to the level that I always long for in good ole het fucking and especially when I am getting dp or tp [In only seconds Laura was being mercilessly ripped and raped by them. All three were in the grip of a relentless sexual urgency, and Rob and Eric speared her body with their huge, hammering pricks again and again, while Laura writhed and moaned, completely sandwiched between them, impaled on their plunging hard cocks. They fucked her harder and harder each second, piercing her to the quick, jabbing their pricks deep into her. Laura knew she had never been fucked so hard, so brutally, in her life. "Ungh! Owwnchh! Shit! Unghh! Oh god! Unghh . . . anngh! Oh . . . please! Ow! Ummggnnffunggh! Auugnhh!" she gasped as the two men nearly tore her to pieces, their fingers biting into her flesh as they raped her.] I love to be fucked slow and then ramped up with more vigorous fucking but this is the end game I need with this kind of sex. I need to feel those cocks spearing up my spasming body and the feel of bodies slapping mine as my women plant their cocks deep into my willing body over and over. I want to be loved abused. I want my women to coil their bodies and launch their cocks deep into me with total force. I want to feel my body buffeted between their bodies as they make me their fuck toy. I myself and almost every woman I have fucked like this makes these kinds of noises of lost fuck abandon. It only inspires more vigorous harder spearing. I thank you for capturing this rough fucking that isn't demeaning in the slightest. This is just a woman who desires to be pounded from time to time. This is a woman who knows how to pleasure her body and is not afraid to go for the brass ring. Also a very nice detail of your lover grasping your flesh or wrapping her arms around torso or over the shoulders depending upon the position to help her get that additional leverage to really rip her cock deep into your love aching hole. I FUCKING LOVE YOUR SEX!!!!!

You of course keep the sex totally hot and moving forward towards exctacy that the reader gets to go along for. I love how Rob takes Laura's hips, being on the bottom, which really gives him leverage, and holds her hips still enough to rip his huge cock deeper and harder into her cunt. Geez, my womb just spasmed here. I love it when a woman(s) are spearing me with all the power they have Wish most women had the strength that men are just born with. Again, women use skill and imagination to make up for the power difference. Must women can be shown how deliver nice powerful fucking. I just have to teach them how. While Rob is plundering her cunt, Eric is pounding down into her inflamed asshole. Finally the guys start to break and Eric sends jets of come up her plundered asshole. Like Laura, I do miss feeling a cock ejaculate up my ass and cunt. It really could send me over the edge. Love your howls of exctacy ["Awwoonggg!" she howled, writhing between their hard, relentless bodies, coming in wild, throbbing spasms. "Ohhhnn god! Auungghhiieeeee!"] I have howled like this many a time during such

sweet pummelings.

Camille finally shows up and it is quickly evident that she is totally surprised and shocked by what she has stumbled on. I guess Rob didn't clue her into the night's

festivities. That is a cute picture of Laura on the carpet with dick up her ass and cunt and having Camille come in on this. I had a great big smile when I read that. Rob and Eric quickly pull out of Laura and she starts to apologize but Rob starts to put things at ease with ["It's not her fault, honey," Rob said, grinning foolishly as the three of them disentangled their bodies.] And then jokes about Eric succumbing to Laura's beauty and then he Rob tried to save Laura. I always loved the humor you interject into your stories and especially how Rob is using it here to keep the atmosphere light enough for things to proceed. Laura quickly picks up that Camille almost immediately loses her shock and is now more curious and Laura sees her checking out Eric's dick with the obvious beginning signs of lust.

Laura knows that the guys will need time to recharge their batteries and decides to move things forward. I love Laura's confidence that she can quickly get this fuck slut into the sex drama unfolding. As usual I love your dialog and banter ["Actually, I was waiting for you," she whispered smokily, her face now only inches from Camille's. "They attacked me." "It looks like you really resisted hard," Camille said, sardonically.] Camille quickly starts to kiss Laura and massage her breasts. Camille is already ready to move to the bedroom at the first hint of this from Laura. They will leave the guys in the living room to recuperate. Loved the walking down the hall hand in hand and then Laura kissing each square inch of this voluptuous woman's body as she exposes it while removing her body. I love to kiss, lick and caress my woman's flesh as it is exposed to be. It is these small details that add so much for me when I am reading your stories [Camille's were not dark but burnished golden globes with large dark brown nipples, which Laura finally exposed by unfastening the bra clasp and pulling the straps down.] This is how women truly make love and no other author captures this, which is quit sad actually.

Laura now attacks her breast until her nipples spring up and then she devours these divine treats. Soon Laura gets her on the bed and I love reading Laura pulling her blue jeans off and then her "wispy" blue panties off. I know I would be smelling the divine odor of hot wet excited pussy with their removal. The guys have returned and their dicks are hardening with the show but Laura could care less right now. I really love this next part ["Oh yes . . . oh yes!" she gasped as Laura's mouth and fingers explored her soft, sleek belly, and her thighs, drawing closer and closer to the pink, runny cleft of her long, brown-lipped pussy. "Oh . . . Laura yes! Please! Unhhhh! Unh! Oh god!"] I so love reading of a woman kissing and kneading a heaving belly and loving a woman's thighs with sweet caresses. I will never tire of you describing a love swollen cunt all wet and runny with fuck juice.

Another thing that you do is always give word pictures of your women reveling in their pleasure when other authors only talk about the fucking and maybe say that they are being pleasured but only you paint the word pictures that allow the reader to fall into the fucking with the women themselves like here [Without even raising her head, Laura could feel the two men behind her drawing closer, to get a better view. She was about to make Camille come, and she wanted them to enjoy it too. Already Camille was churning her hips spastically and squeezing her own magnificent breasts, twisting her wet, erect nipples, her beautiful face and intriguing Chinesey eyes caught in an expression of almost unbearable rapture.] For me to truly enjoy reading erotica I need to see things like churning hips, a woman squeezing her own breast and her faced slashed with pained exctacy. This is what I see when I am fucking my women and I want to read it when I read erotica and you never let me down.

You now show us how oral sex is done [Laura slid it in all the way in, tasting Camille's tangy juices, which flowed copiously from her excited pussy. She tongue-fucked the delicious girl for several seconds, letting her tongue slide slowly out along the engorged nub of Camille's clit, feeling the girl's wonderful body quiver each time.] Laura is pleasuring the whole cunt like all good lesbians do. You show as always how verbal encouragement helps things along when Laura gives Camille verbal encouragement when Camille cries out her pleasure. Finally, Laura knows it is time to take Camille to heaven [Now Laura slid two fingers into Camille's cunt and began fucking her slowly with them, while her tongue moved to the girl's swollen clit, teasing it, until Camille was crazy with need. She was even more aroused than Laura had realized, and only a few sucks of the small, engorged bud had her coming fiercely, groaning, her lovely body arching up off the mattress, quivering as each new spasm wracked her. "Aujngghhhh! Ohnngghh! Oh . . . shit! Ungghhh! Auungghhiieee!" she cried out, flipping and surging, coming hotly, as her husband and Eric watched from the side of the bed, and Laura continued to lick her flooding pussy.] I so love to devour my cunt meat for long, long minutes of feasting, drinking down every ounce of love juice I can. I want to pleasure the whole vagina as much as I humanly can. Then when the time has come, I take myself to heaven as well as my lover by literally consuming her clit with all the skills and passion I possess until she comes with screams of rapture while she pumps cunt cream in my mouth and all over my face if she is a copious comer and wild bucker.

I love how you show the finish for Camille with her whole voluptuous body quivering with exctacy. The guys have now revived and I like how Camille is so ready to fuck her husband's brother [A small smile cracked Camille's lips. "Are you going to let your brother fuck me, Rob?" she asked coquettishly.] Rob quickly lets her know that yes, he has no problem with Eric fucking her but he will be joining him. I love Camille's seeming reluctance but this is a fuck cat like myself and Rob knows she wants it. I love this next dynamic [But before Camille even had a chance to reply, Eric had lain down beside her, then rolled her on top of him and slid his massive organ up into her still-slippery pussy.] I so love to have my lover just take control of my body and make me pliant to her desires. I love aggressive lovers who quickly and strongly position me for strap-on fucking and take my cunt for themselves. Getting themselves in position and then forcefully guiding me onto their cock and stroking it into my warm wet cunt. When you are well lubricated you are ready for immediate fucking. One thing I thank you for is that your men pleasure their women with more than just their cocks as here [Her luscious full breasts were dangling in Eric's face, and he grabbed them with both hands, feeding one of her nipples into his mouth and sucking it sharply. And now Laura was pretty much brushed aside as the two of them began to fuck Camille very aggressively. Rob had brought Laura's bottle of babyoil with him from the livingroom, and she watched him quickly oil his cock with it and climb up behind her wife on the bed. "Auunghh!" Camille groaned with pain and alarm as she suddenly felt his enormous prick slip into her ass and slide in deep.]

This was brought home to me a few months back. One night when Joann and Maria were out fucking I was home alone. I didn't seek companionship because I had had a hankering to get some tapes with good ole het dp, tp, atm, double vaginal penetration, double ass penetration sex. Joann especially would have gone ballistic if I brought those tapes home with her in the house. I went to our x-rated store and found a couple tapes that fit the bill. The actual sex got me extremely hot and I masturbated fiercely. As the fire died down some I noticed something though that took away from the delightful fucking. All the guys did was use their dicks. No kissing, kissing of breast, cunt lapping. When fucking there was no caressing or stroking of flesh and definitely no words of cooing. Maybe these guys were only doing a job but I get a sneaking suspicion that this is how they fuck all the time. For them, it is all about their big dicks. It is that male ego I so detest. After a while it seemed a little hollow without what you give your men. Men who love with all their bodies and try to fuck their women as something more than a mannequin. If you did this with your het chapters I would never enjoy these chapter like I do.

Another little thing I thought of as Rob got on the bed to mount Camille is how I love this moment. If I am not sunk in a total fuck delirium and can notice these things, I love feeling the mattress dip around my pelvis when I am in missionary on top position and getting fucked and thus can't see behind me. I love how this dipping means my other lover is preparing to invade my waiting and aching with desire asshole. I just love feeling that little squirt of desire knowing what this dipping signifies and my first partner stilling her motions to allow the other to mount me. I love how you tell of Camille being sandwich between the men and them spearing her aching love holes with loving violence. It may have some pain at first but I know that is quickly swept away with warm exctacy radiating out from your stuffed and hard fucked hole(s). I love this next paragraph [They fucked her hard and vigorously, plowing both her cunt and her ass sharply with their massive poles, bringing pathetic cries from her as they stabbed her again and again. Watching, Laura was torn by sympathy and yet wildly aroused by the spectacle. She knew they had fucked her this hard too, and she had exploded in killing orgasms, exactly as Camille was about to do.] The great thing about strap-ons is that you never have to worry about them getting soft and your women can fuck you as long as it takes for you to reach that longed for cunt tearing and womb shattering orgasm(s).

The end is over too quick for Laura to join though she wants to. Of course I love it when you describe Camille coming extravagantly while the boys pump much jism up her spasming cunt and quivering asshole. Of course the guys are completely destroyed and pull their polls out and start to rest. Camille is already ready for more while joking a little about her new experience ["If I knew it would be like that, I would've run in the opposite direction," she grinned, speaking softly to Laura, but obviously not really meaning it.] Laura takes her back to the living room for ["Leave them in there, I want to fuck with you," Laura whispered, slithering her tongue into Camille's marvelous brown ear.] I love how they fuck all sweaty and covered with sex jism. I love fucking when covered with sweat and my lover's juices all over me. I love fucking hot and wet so to speak. I love seeing my women covered with love sweat and our juices on their bodies.

They fuck first pussy-to-pussy until a sweet explosion and then get in a 69 and hungrily eat each other's what must be totally swollen, gaping, completely saturated cunts. Yum!!!! They come again and drowse off in each other's arms. The guys have revived and now they quickly pair off with the women with Eric taking Camille again. The women come quickly but the past comes have given the men staying power. I love this chapter so far. Now things change. Only twice while reading Laura did I run into a part I didn't like. The reason I didn't like it is because Laura is about to be violated. Karen did it once and now it happens when Eric with encouragement from his bother starts to insert his big cock up her cunt for a double vaginal penetration. She is truly screaming in pain and the guys don't stop. Eric can't even get it in and must get the baby oil and lubricate his cock and then works to get it in. She is so beyond pain she can't scream anymore and the guys just fuck her until they come quickly fortunately because of the tight fit in her now engorged cunt.

I truly hated these guys for that. True, when you fuck like Laura you may get in a position like this but this episode represents what I detest about men so much. They couldn't have given a shit about Laura here. All they were worried about was their damn cocks and their needs. They didn't give a damn about Laura. I wrote in an earlier Camille chapter I love to try and seduce and cajole women into trying something new but I always listen to them. Usually I can seduce them, but when I hear a clear "no" then I stop. No means "no". Also, I would never do something without first letting them know what I was about to do so I can discover how they feel about it. I can't even contemplate doing something against a woman's will. This just shows men and their fucking egos and how they think the whole universe revolves around them. When I think about this part of the male species I really, really have no use for them. They think they are the center of the universe solely because they were born male. I hate them for that. I fully understand how Laura still harbors ill will when she meets Rob with Chanitra. I give Laura credit for being able to bury the past for current pleasures. Rob does know how to fuck. I never, never want to see my sweet Laura hurt and I could rip out Rob and Eric's eyes for this.

After this debacle is over, Laura quickly gets dressed and leaves these fucking pricks. I had totally forgotten this was the chapter of the infamous double vaginal fucking that truly hurt and violated Laura. I really burned with anger when my memory was refreshed. I feel sorry for Camille. She is sorry and there was really no way for her to stop the proceedings. There is no way these women could have controlled these powerful men. Men use this power to try and dominate us. Fucking assholes. Laura is angry with Camille and I can understand why but was happy to see her softening towards Camille when Camille starts to gently cry. I detest these men for poisoning this relationship between Laura and Camille.

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Chapter 104:

This chapter starts with a shock to Laura and the reader. Laura is shopping and suddenly sees Rina's ghost shopping not sixty feet away. I can only imagine the shock that must be coursing through Laura's body here. I like how you detail the confusion of emotions that Laura is feeling at this vision of lost beauty before her. I like how you have Laura following this woman around. The woman senses Laura and moves away but Laura follows her to another floor of Macy's. Seeing this woman is infusing Laura with need [The closer she got, the more the woman looked to her exactly like Rina. Her pulse hammered with anxiety, dread, weird fascination, and the same old longing she had always felt for Rina, beautiful Rina.] Laura finally screws up her courage and approaches the woman. I like how you detail the woman's reactions as less than friendly [The woman looked up, her eyes distant, becoming quickly but only vaguely hostile, a broken-privacy kind of quick anger. But she was so gorgeous, heart-stoppingly gorgeous, that Laura could barely continue.] Another wonderful seduction is about to commence. Yes!

I love the whole dynamic you have here. Laura tells Trina her name and Trina informs Laura of her name. Like how you emphasized the rhythm in her and her sister's name. Then Laura rushes with letting Trina know she was "good" friends with Rina. Trina shuts down some over this and asks if Laura knows she is dead. I'm sure this sudden mention of Rina must be painful for Trina. To have it hit her so suddenly. Laura tries to arrange to spend more time with Trina but Trina initially sends clear signals to leave her alone. I think then, Trina is intrigued by the passion Laura is showing and agrees to take Laura's phone number and call her in the future. I can imagine the flutter in Laura's belly wondering if this vision of her lost love will indeed call her. Liked the rebuff Trina gives when Laura tries to get her phone number ["Maybe you could give me yours," she said, trying not to sound desperate. Trina looked at her as if she couldn't be serious. "Don't worry. I'll call you," she said. "When I get a chance. Don't worry."] Damn, your writings are just so real life. With all the hopes and fears of real life. Liked the way Laura watches Trina walk away with all those emotions that must be showing on her face. All those conflicted emotions of hope and despair of maybe not seeing her again. I smiled when she realizes she has her full name and runs to a public phone and indeed finds her number is listed and writes it down. I dearly love this whole setup of reintroducing "Rina" into the story. It feels so humanely possible.

Laura runs into my namesake after work and Barbara quickly invites herself over for some serious loving. I really liked Barbara because she was a lesbian. I think her and Kim are the only two full lesbians in the story. Like I say now, I want Laura's women to be straight so I get to experience them losing their lesbian cherry. While Barbara of course doesn't look anything like me, I am happy to see we are the same sexually [She was a true fuck-maniac like Laura, almost inexhaustible in her needs, and her stamina.] I liked how you show the great positive influence Laura has had on Barbara. Barbara has skinny legs but Laura finds them to be perfection and must importantly has constantly told Barbara this and this has built her self pride up. In the past she covered her legs now she proudly displays them [Barbara had somehow overcome her needless embarrassment over her thin legs, perhaps because Laura, who felt a sharp twinge of lust deep in her pussy every time she looked at them, had praised them so much. She had taken to wearing short skirts, which showed them off spectacularly.] In fact Laura compliments her on her legs currently and Barbara just beams with self-satisfaction.

Now you are clever enough to change the dynamics and have a little of that back and forth between lovers trying to make each other a little jealous and a lot hot. When Laura compliments Barbara (strange typing my name), she sassily shoots back that someone else thinks the same way. I love how she is baiting Laura, trying to get a rise out of her. We discover that an Angela Cartwright is ogling her legs. It is funny when Laura of course jumps to a conclusion and assumes it must be that "witch" Rhonda. Had to smile a little about no one looking like the proverbial, stereotypical "dyke". They now trade shots at each other with Barbara asking about Sholandra and Laura firing about Barbara boffing Rhonda. I like to think that this next part captures a lot of my essence [Barbara came closer, a seductive glow in her eyes that Laura recognized, a mixture of hard lust and melting tenderness, if that were possible. It was, from Barbara, who could display both at once. "Rather be bopping you," she whispered.] It is time to stop the games and get down to serious loving.

They start with long sensual kissing that slowly starts to heat up and then their hands begin to roam sweet flesh. Laura squeezes one of Barbara's thighs and Barbara starts to undo Laura's blouse. The note with Trina's phone number falls out and Laura nearly freaks out recovering it off the floor. I can just see that in my mind's eye, making out with a woman and having this happen. It is quite humorous. I love the little zingers you put in your stories. For me, they give the quirky reality of real life. What is doubly cool is how Laura recovers with clever caresses [She knelt on the floor, grabbing the paper, her bra gaping, her naked breasts jiggling. She held onto the paper, but trying not to break the rhythm, she caressed Barbara's beautiful black thighs from this angle, kissing them now, running her fingers down Barbara's long, shapely calves, but kissing her way up, toward her panties.] Barbara never even really notices the slip of paper.

You are the only author I think who really allows her women to press their flesh together in a real way. Other authors only really have their characters press their flesh together in the throes of orgasm. You use it as foreplay [Laura's naked breasts now pressed against Barbara's thighs as she tugged down the elastic at the top of Barbara's panties. Both were wildly aroused. They struggled out of their clothes as quickly as possible but couldn't make it any further. Barbara sank to her knees, then further to the floor as Laura skimmed her panties off.] This is such a major turn on that I am glad real life doesn't reflect what most authors give in their stories. The sex would be nowhere as hot in real life if it did. I like how they continue to strip and sink to the floor. They are not going to make it to the bedroom. You get me aroused anywhere near a high pitch and I want to fuck right where we are at. I can't wait to have my cunt candy. I'm a bad, greedy little girl, I know.

I never tire of how your women kiss the sweet flesh as it is exposed and the obvious relish this inspires in them [Laura unclasped it and removed it slowly, enjoying every inch of Barbara's smooth black skin that came into view. She kissed the places the straps had covered, turning Barbara around slowly so that her mouth came to Barbara's naked breasts. She held them in her hands and licked and sucked the round gleaming nipples until Barbara began to sigh uncontrollably.] I love to have my women remove their clothes but I equally hunger to be the one removing their bra and panties and slip if one. Knowing I am unmasking sweet treasures I will soon be devouring. I love how Laura murmurs to Barbara while sucking her nipples and whispers sweet innuendos to her. Whispering what you are doing to your lover and asking her about her pleasure makes them so wet. Telling her what you are going to do to her. I sure love having it done to me.

Laura's fingers find Barbara's cunt a wet mess and Laura decides so make Barbara beg for it ["You want it?" "Yes." "Beg me." "Please . . . Laura." Barbara's dark eyes swam with hot lust and need. "'Please, Laura, fuck me, please, Laura,'" Laura quoted, teasingly.] This teasing and communicating is such a turn on and fun I can't understand why authors don't do this. I can't imagine anyone never teasing or have been teased, thus, I wonder why authors don't write this. I am happy that my avatar has many of my characteristics.

I like how Laura is really teasing her with "fuck me Laura". That is adding so much heat to this. I love hearing the potty mouth and I love Barbara calling Laura a bitch for teasing her and saying that Rhonda never makes her beg. I love this goading to add heat to the fucking to make the loving harder. Laura bites a nipple to send a zinger through Barbara's body and then moves south to paradise [Quickly Laura slid down her delicious, smooth, silky black body, between her thighs. Barbara's pussy was so wet that her juices were smeared all over her inner thighs. With her fingers, Laura parted the girl's swollen cuntlips and slid her tongue into the glistening pink crease.] I love having a wet mess waiting for me when I get to woman's crotch. Lots of love juice for me to lick up and rub my cheek against. Yum!! This is what my lovers will almost always find when they reach my cunt and thighs, plenty of love juice to savor. I do get really wet.

Barbara is crying out from the first lick and Laura is able to bring her off quickly because she is so wound up from the teasing that Laura gave her [She was only seconds away from coming, Laura knew. She drew her tongue out, sliding it across Barbara's engorged clit. Then she attacked it vigorously with her tongue, stabbing and poking it, licking it roughly. Barbara exploded in ecstacy. "Auungghhiieieee!" she cried, her lovely lean body straining and shuddering as sharp spasms of coming ripped her. "Ohnnngg! Unh! Oh . . . Laur . . . unngghiiieee!"] I love how you show Laura just attacking that tasty clit. Other authors just say it is attacked while you detail the licks, stabs, poking and sucks that a lover uses to assault a woman's center of sexuality. This is what makes your oral action so hot to read is you telling the reader what is being done and thus we can relate it directly to our lovemaking. This really draws the reader into the sex while the other scenes I read don't. I always get a little squirt of fire when a lover starts to cry out a lover's name and can't quite finish when you rob them of the ability to articulate. That always tells me I driving them insane with pleasure. I Love IT when you give it to me in your stories.

Laura now slides up Barbara's body and a after a few moments rest to let her clit rest she starts to kiss her while she frigs her to another orgasm. I love how you detail that this orgasm is feathery in its touch, sweet rolling waves of bliss instead of pile driving blows of exctacy. Barbara recovers and spends the next hour giving so much pleasure to Laura she can't lift her arms anymore with sweet lassitude. I love to just fuck and fuck my women like this. I want my orgasms but I love giving pleasure so much. I always want to fuck my women into sweet oblivion. Laura is able to forget Trina for a short while but she can't forget like I couldn't. I like how Laura tells of the last orgasm Barbara gave her was painful in its intensity. You are the only author to show how that last orgasm in a string really rends the flesh that has already been exhausted with bliss. I love that feeling when I feel like my pussy is being turn inside out and my womb is exploding with so much pained pleasure I feel like I am going to die in bliss. It really does tear me apart. After an orgasm like that I do need some serious down time before I am ready to go again. Got to let that sensitivity die away.

I like how all this fucking is going on the floor. I am like that a lot. Once you get my motor running I want to fuck right there and then. I will fuck just about anywhere I feel safe. I can just see them rutting around on the floor in heat. They get up and put on some robes and rest their flesh to let their bodies revive so more sweet intense fucking can ensue. Barbara now brings out Mr. Prickles. A dildo with ticklers on it. It is nice to have a variety of dildos. I usually want to use my fingers but sometimes that just is not deep enough. I like the ticklers as a nice change of pace, feelings those run along your cunt sleeve or tender rectum. Especially when you twist it while plunging it in deep. Seeing this and hearing Barbara talking about what she is going to do with it gets Laura's motor running in overdrive. Her satiated body is coming alive again.

I don't know if I have told you how I love eating a woman out on a chair or sofa. You capturing perfectly scooting her buns up to the edge so her tender open cunt is right on the edge for you to just munch on. I can just get so comfortable and I can eat pussy like this for hours. Just savoring this tender cunt meat begging to be devoured. [Barbara's eyes were swimming now too. She parted her thighs and scrunched her ass down and forward in the chair, presenting the wet, puckered pink cleft of her wet black-lipped pussy to Laura's mouth. And now Laura took her time, feasting on the girl's beautiful pussy with all the cleverness she could summon, bringing Barbara to another long, excruciating, drawn-out orgasm that left her panting and gasping for breath.] Love that of parting of thighs and nestling between them and seeing that flower before you and then opening it up and diving in like a bee seeing nirvana. Sorry for going on but I really love eating pussy like this. Feeling my woman get more and more excited and humping up into my starving mouth and then coming with much moaning and pumping out of divine cunt cream.

They now retire to the bedroom for some loving. It is kind of cute reading of Laura being a little leery of the tickler because of the vicious fucking some of her male lovers gave her but she has totally healed and finds [and it didn't hurt, except in the odd, prickly, irritating but pleasureable way that the weird dildo hurt. In Barbara's skilled hands, it rubbed her into an hysterical fit of uncontrollable coming.] You capture this so perfectly. I, like my namesake, like to feel these projections of ticklers sweeping up my rectum. It is very intense but oh so worth it. I discover that Rhonda is squeamish about fucking in the ass. Hopefully, Laura, Yvette, and maybe a hoped for Deshona entering the picture can teach her what she is missing.

I think that Barbara's pickle is a little bigger than ours. They get some baby oil to give Mr. Pickle a baby oil bath. I love how Barbara turns over for the invasion [Now Barbara turned over onto her stomach. She had an incredibly desirable lean body, with a spectacular round, firm ass, high, hard cheeks, the kind of ass, like Chanitra's, that made Laura quiver with lust when she saw it. She pouted up at Laura. "Tell me you don't want to fuck me with Mr. Prickles in this ass," she winked.] I love that priming of the pump letting your lover know what you want. This description of Barbara's ass leaves me a little dreamy [Barbara's ass was a paragon of beauty, uprising sculpted dark moons of firm flesh, with an inviting dark crease between them. She wanted to lick it and suck it and bite it and let Mr. Prickles have his way with the tiny ring of pleasure that hid deep in the crease.] What a cool description of Barbara's anus. Geez, makes me want to bury my tongue in it and just tongue fuck it for long delicious minutes.

I really, really like this next part. I have felt the tremor that runs through Barbara's body when Laura gets out the baby oil. Barbara knows what is coming. I feel that flutter deep in my womb when I get visual stimulation of what is about to happen to me. My mind racing with the pleasure I am about to receive. You now you give us some beautiful ass worship and running fingers through a deliciously wet cunt. Other authors when they decide to use some dildo action; they seem to forget that you can still use your mouth and fingers for some wonderful foreplay. It doesn't get any better than what you give here [She lay the still-capped plastic bottle next to Mr. Prickles on the bed and began to make love to Barbara's extraordinary ass herself. She caressed and kneaded the firm balls with her fingers, digging them into the hard, resilient flesh, marveling at the perfect roundness. Then she began to kiss them, and run her tongue all over them. This aroused Barbara amazingly, and she began to moan and squirm. Laura knew Barbara's pussy was getting wet, and she slid her hand between the girl's sleek thighs to the wet blossom, smearing them with juice. "Unh! Oh . . . Laura!" Barbara gasped. Now Laura's tongue was exploring Barbara's asscrack, probing, slithering in deeper. She pulled the girl's firm cheeks apart, burrowing her tongue into Barbara anus. "Annghiiee!" Barbara squealed in delight, quivering, squirming harder. "Oh . . . Jesus!"] Love that setting down of the dildo so Laura can worship Barbara's wonderful ass and the smearing of cunt cream all around Barbara's thighs. I simply adore how Laura works Barbara's total ass and how she slowly narrows her attention and then finally that wonderful penetration of Barbara's tight anus with Laura's loving tongue.

What is so wonderful about your writing that the last paragraph is so much more intense than what other authors give and you are only getting started. Laura now greases two fingers and inserts them into Barbara's tight ass and starts a moderate rhythm of plunging fingers to loosen up Barbara's backdoor for Mr. Pickles. I love feeling my ass being rammed with loving fingers. That is divine but especially knowing that I am only being prepared for a bigger invasion to come. Of course Barbara is almost coming. Laura starts frigging Barbara's cunt while now working three loving fingers up Barbara's asshole. Wow, this is getting intense. I love it!!! Now it is time for Mr. Pickle to be lubed up. I'm thinking we need to get one this size. Barbara is beside herself with need ["Quick . . . quick! Oh god!" she panted, biting her lower lip.] I love reducing my lover to this level of need and want.

Now we start to have the pay off. How can you capture sex so perfectly? I can just feel this monster invading my tender bowels driving me insane with pleasure. Only you are able to inspire this in me. For that you have my deepest thanks. [Laura straddled her thighs from behind and moved the monster slowly in and out of Barbara's ass, fucking her with it gently at first while Barbara hissed and gurgled hysterically, tears pouring down her cheeks. After about a minute, Laura began to rotate the prickly dildo as she slid it in and pulled it out, causing sensations that nearly pushed Barbara over the brink. She whimpered and bleated uncontrollably, her luscious black body now covered by a thin film of sweat, gleaming and glossy, writhing in a fierce mixture of pain and pleasure.] I love how you never forget to capture what is happening to the woman being fucked. My head lulled to the side when you gave the detail of twisting that dildo up into Barbara's asshole. That is how I want it. Deep, hard and with lots of twisting. My belly just did a "Laura clench". I know that my girls will be fucking me in the ass tonight and I them. It will be beautiful.

You now have the wonderful detail of Laura reveling in the pleasure she is giving. Other authors never really make this clear. The wonderful pleasure the giver receives in giving pleasure. You know how to constantly increase the fire and pleasure level [To help, Laura leaned forward over Barbara's sinuous naked back, dangling her naked breasts across it and whispering in Barbara's ear as she pushed and rotated the dildo more roughly into the girl's engorged asshole. "I'm fucking you, girl," she breathed. "Fucking you in the ass. Unh!"] This drives me nuts having my lover whisper to me what she is doing to me and making loving threats. I love how you have the "unh" showing the effort Laura is making to ram that wonderful dildo deep up into Barbara's clenching asshole. I am telling you that you are the only author who lets her women communicate to each other in their lovemaking. It is this communication that can add so much to your lovemaking. Sometimes you are quiet in concentration but other times you talk to your lover like here ["I'm fucking you harder! Ungh! Raping you . . . in this beautiful . . . ungh! . . . ass!" "Auugnhh! Ohnngghh . . . shit!" Barbara cried out. "Yes, yes!" Laura panted, shoving it in deep, twisting it mercilessly, viciously.] I will never tire of your loving details of a loving vicious "love rape".

Sigh, you are the only author in lesbian erotica (don't know if any het authors capture this) that details what it is like to have an anal orgasm. Other authors just say they have an orgasm but one is able to achieve an orgasm just from the anal stimulation and it is different in quality as you detail [A shattering orgasm wrenched her. Barbara's lean body stiffened, straining, shuddering, then undulated in wild spasms as a shocking anal climax wracked her. A clotted, desperate cawing came from deep in her throat, and a sublime expression of killing rapture spread over her face as the orgasm gripped and throttled her. Laura had experienced it herself, and she knew what the girl was going through, how an anal orgasm could be so much more severe than anything else, how you felt your whole body exploding in ecstacy.] I can just feel my bowls spasming and my sphincter grabbing a hold of that invader in my exctacy.

After Barbara recovers they both coo over my Mr. Pickles. Barbara asks if Laura wants to get a little Pickle treatment but Laura has to demure. Rob and Eric have recently fucked her viciously in her ass and double penetrated her cunt, though, while healed are not ready for any more rough treatment currently. Barbara being a woman quickly and gladly makes tender love to Laura. We always adjust to what our lover needs and requires. The chapter ends with this wonderful [She proceeded to make love to Laura slowly, tenderly, paying back Laura with tenderness for the rough treatment Laura had given her, at her request. And for the over-the-top orgasm. She drew it out for a half hour, then brought Laura to a very deep, very satisfying climax, not the end-of-the-world kind that she herself had had, but an intense one nonetheless that left Laura glowing and fulfilled as they said goodbye.] You are so able to capture all facets of lesbian love. The whole total spectrum. I know those people who are discovering you from "Jane's" must be getting a total education to lesbian love. You are simply and plainly the master.

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Chapter 105:

This chapter starts out with Laura contemplating the meeting with Trina. I like how she is truly wondering if she will meet with her again. I know she must be in a quandary seeing Rina through Trina. I love this about your stories. From Laura's perspective she really doesn't know if she will see Trina again. This is so real life; one doesn't know where it will lead. Then we have the miracle of Trina calling Laura. I can just feel the elation that must be coursing through Laura's veins. I can understand Trina being fascinated with Laura knowing she had a connection with her lost identical sister. They arrange to meet after work. I like how Laura can't hide her enthusiasm and the reader can sense a little ambivalence coming from Trina.

In her excitement Laura arrives ten minutes early and is greeted by this sight of Trina's arrival [Laura could hardly stand her butterflies. She was there ten minutes early. When Trina arrived, several men on the sidewalk nearly had whiplash. She was dressed in a tight, short skirt and a tight orange sweater with a scoop neck. Her full round breasts jutted out, and plenty of cleavage was visible. Her legs were spectacular. Watching her, Laura realized that Rina would have looked exactly thus, if she too had had a baby.] I can see those men stumbling over seeing this angel walking by. Knowing that Trina suspects the truth about Laura I am amazed that she dressed this way. True, she wants to show off this body from the gods but she is also doing this before a lesbian. I think the fires are burning ever so lightly in her soul. They are only waiting to be fanned to full life.

The beauty that is Trina quickly starts the nectars to flowing in Laura's pussy. It is almost impossible to have such beauty near one and not respond to it. Trina starts to question Laura about her and Rina in a tone that is definitely not friendly. Trina is trying to get a handle on who Laura is. I smiled that while she is getting grilled, Laura is looking at Trina's breast which are a little bigger than Rina's because of pregnancy. I have had that happen, a woman is talking to me about something serious and I am thinking about fucking her. I can't help myself. Trina is able to sense that Laura is a little discombobulated. Trina now throws a bombshell. She tells Laura she knows Rina was involved with a lesbian at work. Laura does her famous blush and Trina must know now that this is the woman. Instead of attacking she mentions that Laura looks like Stephanie Seymour. This is kind of a strange segue with Trina talking about teddies and matters that are sexy in nature.

Laura makes the mistake of demurring about talking about her beauty and Trina now directly confronts Laura about being the "lesbian". I guess I did cringe a little when Laura said she didn't really see herself that way. She just knew she loved Rina. With a love a lot more honest and pure than that bastard boyfriend. She loved the person. Laura starts to silently cry tears of her loss. It was a touching moment when Trina reaches over and dabs the tears away with a napkin. I think this was a small bonding moment. Trina apologizes for the lesbian remark and compares it to the "nigger" word. I agree, that "nigger" is a lot worse than "lesbian". A lesbian is what I am; it is only what others make it that makes it bad. "Nigger" is just a horrible word period. Now we get the famous "you don't look like a lesbian." I have developed the comeback line of "you should have seen me before the operations." If you don't look like the dyke stereotype people are just so surprised. I am one hundred percent woman. I love this line from Laura [Laura smiled wanly again. "I'm just like you. I eat and sleep . . . and hurt. And fall in love."] That about sums it up.

Now Trina gets outright mean and says things I am not sure I could forgive her for. She says what she and Rina did was wrong and because of it Rina lost her life. That is simply cruel and untrue. It was the fucking boyfriend who committed the crime. Laura gets up and leaves with dignity and this parting remark ["I loved her," she said, in a weak, trembling voice, but looking straight into Trina's eyes, not avoiding her. "I loved her. I didn't kill her."] I give Laura so much credit for forgiving Trina for these spiteful words. I know Trina is hurting and probably fighting an attraction to Laura but this is simply cruel.

Before I go on with the story I want to comment about these two first appearances of Trina. By taking the time to have these two meetings we are building up the whole final seduction. We are coming to know Trina both outside and inside. We see her seeming ambivalence and we are left in state of wondering what will happen next. Like what happens in real life. By setting up this contentious situation, the final seduction will be so much more explosive. Other authors make their meetings and seductions seem so preordained and scripted. Your initial interactions always seem so real life.

Laura goes back to her apartment and consumes some wine to take the edge off her pain. She now gets a ring on the doorbell and hopes it is Yvette but discovers that it's only Eric. I am so happy that she longs for a woman to ring her bell and not some man. It seems he is in the doghouse for shoving his cock up her cunt with his brother's huge pole up her cunt already. This is the one of only two times where Laura really was hurt and I didn't like it at all. In their male arrogance they never let Laura have a say. That scene hurt me reading that. I never want to see Laura really and truly hurt. It seems like Eric is truly contrite about his contribution to the situation. I guess he just got caught up in the heat of the moment.

I really like these heterosexual chapters before Laura discovered the joys of strap-on sex. I loved these chapters because of the penetration. I have never had much use for the political correct lesbian crowd. I have never bought into that using a strap-on means I have penis envy or receiving means I want a man. I love to fuck period and love being penetrated and like the sense of power using a strap-on gives me. I love the details you provide in your het chapters. The moment of penetration, the feeling of a huge cock stuffing your cunt or better yet, asshole. Enfolding your lover with your legs and arms in missionary or having my legs put on my lover's shoulders while they pump one of my love holes. Having my body pounded with a nice hard, long, loving fuck. You capture all these so well.

Laura is wanting to be fucked hard to forget Trina and humorously, Eric really does seem to want to apologize and having sex is not really on his mind. Laura sets out to get his priorities right. Like the typical male, after a kiss his engine is soon going full speed ahead. I love a striptease no matter who Laura is doing it for [Laura unbuttoned her blouse, slowly, tantalizing him, enjoying his mounting sexual excitement. Then she removed her bra slowly, reaching behind her back, unclasping it, letting the cups slide away from her breasts, looking at his eyes.] It is cute how Eric is tentative and Laura [But he was remarkably tentative, even gentle, at first. She still held her breasts for him, cradled in her palms, and he lowered his lips to one, pushing them into her soft nipple, then sucking the nipple inside. She knew from this point on it would be fast.] I love how you are able to racket up the heat in such a believable way.

Eric quickly starts to savagely suck Laura's nipples causing her cunt to get on fire. I like it when you have one of your women ask to have something done and we don't see it being done only hear their gasped response of it being done ["Suck the other one!" she panted. "Please! Yes! Oh yes, do it hard! Ungghh!"] Laura quickly drags him down the hall to the bedroom. It is time for some serious fucking. I do have to chuckle when she is yet again shocked at the monster that springs to life when she rips his pants and shorts down. I do love to read anything dealing with oral love [She caressed it with her fingers, bringing her mouth close, extending her tongue toward the ballooning, silky, swollen head of his penis.] I did like giving head and still do on strap-ons though I miss the payoff. Sure do wish they could come for me. I had to chuckle again when Eric pleads for not to give him head. He knows he can't last if she does. He pleads to come inside her and she quickly strips and they get on the bed.

This kind of reminds me of a lesbian virgin going nuts on her first cunt candy [She knew he would know none of the fine points about eating pussy, he would be no Barbara, or Karen, but Eric made up for it in wild enthusiasm. His tongue was everywhere, his mouth devoured every bit of Laura's excited pussy, and when his lips touched her clit she was so excited that she came immediately.] Laura is so wrought that she immediately comes and I again chuckled when Eric is not sure she is coming. That is humorous. Like a guy, he figures it's now okay to bury his cock in her pussy now. He buries his huge cock into her pussy, filling Laura completely. I love how Laura flings her arms around him to embrace her body to his ["Oh, shit, Eric," she groaned, throwing her arms around him, pushing her naked breasts up into his chest. "] I loved reading this in your het chapters. All the variations that you can have with het sex and thus strap-on sex. Other authors just have the stroking. You have all the little things that women like to do when they are being fucked the old fashioned het way.

Love the detail of Eric kissing Laura's neck and her cunt clinging to his massive pole. I love seeing a cunt clasping to a pole as it strokes out. It is just so fucking beautiful. Eric starts out smooth and gentle but quickly loses control and is ramming it home with all his might. I love being rammed hard with piercing strokes and balls deep. I adore how Laura raps her legs around his hips, opening herself for his savage strokes ["Unh! Aiienngg! Ohn! Ungh! Aiieenggg! Oh shit, it hurts! Ungh! Aiieenggg!" she cried out, locking her legs around his thrusting hips, clenching her teeth and squealing through them each time his gigantic cock pierced her throbbing pussy to the quick.] Sigh, this is good fucking. I love the communication as they whisper to each other their incipient orgasms and thus edging each other closer to the explosion of sweet bliss. Sigh, I wish they could make a strap-on that could give nice spurts that seeming swelling before the explosion and that jerking and I love the grasping of your lover in the throes of exctacy [They came at almost the same instant. Laura felt a gusher of cum squirting into her, string after string of warm jism leaping from Eric's prick into her clasping pussy. She was wrenched by a paroxysm of lightning, her whole body shaken by an intense wave of sharp coming. They clutched each other desperately, groaning and shuddering through a very intense shared climax.]

That is kind of tender of Laura to bath his cock in warm water and then giving him a loving blowjob with another resulting explosion on her face. That I didn't like in the past. I want that come in my pussy, ass or mouth; in me not on me, just my preference. This is smart on Laura's part. She is emptying him some trying to increase his endurance. Don't have that problem with a strap-on. Laura doesn't like it that much, a face full of sperm, but it does have that porn starlet appeal and takes it with good nature. This is such a truthful line ["I like girls for the same reason," she confessed. "When I make them come, they're so grateful, like you are. Then they'll do anything for me."] Eric wants to know what the difference is and Laura lets him know that women can come and come and men can't. End of argument. Also, we are better lovers in my humble opinion. Hehehe.

Eric takes the news with aplomb and Laura feeds her nipples into his mouth and he mauls them, sending fire into Laura's body. Laura thinks of Mr. Pickles and her asshole clenches with the desire for a good reaming. I know that feeling well. Just thinking about having my asshole taken lights the fires deep in my belly and rectum. I love how Laura feels the fires igniting in her asshole. The more she thinks about it the more she feels the need to make it happen. Laura is lusting to be reamed. I am happy that she has discovered strap-ons and what they can do for a girl. I love it how she flirts with Eric, batting her eyelashes when she hands him the baby oil. No wonder his dick starts to twitch back to life. It is cute how she asks him to be gentle with her when she knows that once he gets going, he will be plunging with wild abandon up into her clenching asshole. Just the way I love it.

I love the variation of Eric wanting to see her face (that communication I love) and Laura quickly rolls over and [She lay on her back and scooted a pillow under her buns, so that her ass was raised up. Then she lifted her legs and propped her heels on his shoulders. Eric grinned and opened the plastic bottle.] I love having my lover place my heels on her shoulders as she is fucking my brains out. Makes me feel wide open. I love how you detail that Eric lubes his fingers and fucks Laura's warm asshole for three or four minutes loosening her up and then the longed for invasion [The next twenty minutes were among the most excruciating as well as the most blissful of her life. First Eric greased his fingers with the babyoil and fucked her asshole with them for three or four minutes, until it was relaxed and open, ready to receive his massive club of a cock. Next he swathed the twitching monster in oil, until it was bobbing and glistening between Laura's thighs like a swollen, purplish salami. She clenched her teeth as he began to push it into her.] I love the fact that this is twenty minutes of pure heaven of rough ass fucking. I can just feel my asshole be taken like this. Yum!!

Laura is soon shedding tears of pained pleasure. I love how Eric works to bury his cock all the way into Laura's impaled ass. I want it all the way too [Eric held her hips and kept pushing until the whole thing was embedded in Laura's ass. It felt like a tree. Laura could barely breathe. Her entire body was clenched into a rigid, throbbing, flaming nerve of fierce pain.] I love that initial burning pain knowing it will soon fade to burning pleasure. This you capture so perfectly [And yet it began to wane. Each time this happened to her she forgot that the body adjusted, that the heart-stopping physical pleasure of the anal, all-body orgasm that awaited her was always preceded by this moment of excruciating agony. The pain began to bleed into a kind of horrific, intense rapture.] You just have to survive that initial pain for nirvana waiting at the end of the ride.

I like how you show Eric falling into a fuck trance and raping Laura's ass and that was a cute line about Laura being an angel and taking it up the ass. I like how you have Laura pleasuring herself. I love playing with my clit will be being fucked [Her legs were propped up, resting on his shoulders, and Laura massaged her own clit with one hand, knowing this would be over quickly. Eric reached down and fondled her breasts while he fucked her, then finally slid her legs off his shoulders and bent down to suck her nipples. At this point, both of them seemed to go crazy, swallowed by a wild firestorm of lust.] Very rarely will another author have their characters change basic fuck positions. I love your variations. I love to be rammed hard so I really love how Eric is ramming her asshole ["Ungh! Ownchh! Unggh! Oh! Anngghh!" Laura gagged, her whole lower body rising off the bed each time he speared her with his fierce huge cock.] Nice detail of how Eric is being driven crazy by Laura's tight sphincter clamping his plunging dick. I love clamping down on the shaft on the in thrust. Lucky guy, that is something I don't get to feel with my strap-on. I can feel the resistance but not the pleasure. Does make me focus on my lover more though.

You finish this wonderful ass rape with a belly clenching finish. Again, I think you are the only author who always remembers to give the noise of a bed or sofa being worked hard by lovers fucking their brains out. I love the detail of Eric's cock pumping come up into Laura's tender bowels. I do miss that (more work on that wonder dildo). These two paragraphs so perfectly capture the pleasures of a good ass fucking [And it nearly did kill them both. Through the wild fury of their driving lust, Laura could hear the headboard of her bed hammering against the wall as Eric jabbed his enormous prick deep into her ass again and again. Their moans and yelps and groans intermingled in a fierce cacophony, and it all came to a head in devastating explosion. Eric came first, squirting yet another long, jerking string of cum into Laura's plundered asshole. The feel of the warm jets shooting deep into her body made Laura come herself, almost instantly. It was a shattering, agonizing orgasm that shook her entire body ruthlessly, knocking the breath totally from her lungs, leaving her a cawing, quivering wreck as wave after wave of shocking rapture wrenched her.] I love how you always describe the vast pleasures of an anal orgasm. It does just rack the body with divine pleasure. All that pleasuring sparking out from my impaled asshole.

I love how Laura contemplates past "rapes" and how she felt devastated. She wonders if this not the best one yet. I am like that. I so often think that the current orgasm is the best yet. I love that same thing in Laura. I am always longing for that next orgasm that absolutely tears my body apart with mind-blowing pleasure. Eric does show some boyish charm by worrying over hammering her so hard. Laura may complain about the rough fucking but she loved it and will do it again the next chance she gets. I always long for my next banging. Eric is cute begging to fuck her again and Laura gives in and rolls over on her back and presents her pussy for impalement. Eric tries for gentle but it is just not in him [But his relentless energy quickly took over again for them both, and in a few seconds she was swirling her hips back into his thrusts. This time he leaned forward and reached around her body to get his hands on her breasts. He squeezed them, then began spearing her pussy as violently as he had earlier speared her asshole.] I love how he plows her while mauling her tits. Of course Laura comes like an exploding star.

They part with Laura thinking to herself that Eric has helped her to not think about Trina for a small time and tells Eric to not be a stranger. He may know how to fuck but still, I do prefer the girls. Hehehe.

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Chapter 106:

Laura starts this chapter reflecting that her body is recovering more quickly from being pounded by the likes of Eric and Rob. Her body is adjusting to loving rough sex. I am glad she is not making any more comments about having so many men in the same frame of time. I am happy she has left that behind. The fucking Eric gave her did help for a small time to forget the pain of Trina's cruel remarks. She then goes into a funk for a few weeks contemplating the words of Trina. I am happy that she seeks constant relief from Yvette and Sholandra. I love the fact that Trina doesn't come running back to Laura quickly. It is taking weeks for Trina to try and come to terms with the feelings coursing through her body. I can totally understand Laura getting loving from her women to get through her problems. A good fuck can really take your mind off your problems.

Finally Trina calls and is immediately contrite and sorry for her rash words. Laura does not let her off the hook easily and gets Trina to admit she meant her words at the time. Trina has come to realize the honest emotion between Laura and Rina. I give Laura credit for meeting Trina again. I am not sure I could have opened my heart again to her after such a complete trashing. Laura is such a loving and forgiving person. I always love how you plant the seeds that the other secretly wants lesbian love. Not only does Trina want to meet Laura, she wants to meet her "now". Then to add to the undercurrent she readily agrees to come to Laura's apartment after telling Laura her kid is with her mother. My belly would be fluttering a little here. Maybe there is hope.

I can totally understand Laura's confused joy here. Trina is willingly coming to her house, the house of the "lesbian". She is coming with an almost seeming determination to get into Laura's presence as soon as possible. I can feel Laura's cautious joy. I smiled when Laura resolves to herself to keep her sexual desires under control. She is just so happy to have another chance to be in Trina's presence. Laura meets her at the entrance and we discover immediately that there is still ambivalence on Trina's part ["Couldn't you just buzz me in?" Trina asked.] I guess she is still conflicted. Laura is just happy to see her. Again I notice what Trina is wearing going into the presence of a woman who seduced her sister [Trina looked spectacular, as Laura had feared she might. She wore tight jeans and a tight red sweater, gold hoop earrings, very large, and boots. She was to die for, Laura realized. I've never seen anyone so beautiful except her sister, she thought. Laura realized that her pulse was racing.] Those conflicted signals straight women so often send out.

It is again interesting how Trina is the one working to get the atmosphere more comfortable by joking if Laura is planning a party with Laura then asking if Trina wants any drinks or snacks. Again Trina is setting up the scenario where her seduction will happen. She desires the love and joy her sister found with Laura. I like how they go into the kitchen to fix some drinks and Laura can't help but remember this is where she initially seduced Rina. Finally Trina asks the question I know she is dying to ask ["Did you live here when you and Rina . . . you know?" Trina asked casually, looking around.] Trina is trying to get the conversation centered on sex. She must have been thinking about this for weeks now. Laura confesses that it is. I love what Laura is thinking at this [At first Trina looked at her hard, but then looked away nervously, as if she were uncomfortable about seeming interested in what Laura and Rina had done here. I fucked her almost every way it was possible to fuck her, Laura wanted to tell her. She loved it. We both loved it. Yes, in there, in my bedroom. We fucked. We moaned and came in each other's arms. Yes, we did.] Trina's words and actions are breaking Laura's resolve to keep sex out of her thoughts and imagination.

They share a tender moment remembering Rina and her loss. That is a touching moment. I am happy that Rina's boyfriend is locked away until he is middle age the fucking prick. Trina starts to cry and Laura wipes away the tears of hurt and loss. Still, these tragic moments have brought their emotions and needs close to the surface [Their faces, their mouths, were very close. Laura, having kissed several beautiful women, could not keep her eyes instinctively from falling to Trina's sensual lips. But then she self-consciously raised them again, quickly. She caught Trina looking down at her, Laura's, mouth. I'm going to do it, Laura thought. I can't stop myself. She moved her mouth even closer, until their lips brushed. Laura kept moving, pushing her mouth against Trina's, kissing the girl before Trina could pull back. And Trina did not try to pull back.] I love how I never know how a seduction is going to occur. This is so gentle, loving and true. Their shared love for Rina is bringing them together now in sweet love that will soon express itself in sweet lovemaking and soul soothing pleasure.

I love Laura's tentative exploration of Trina's mouth. She knows that she has to go slowly. I love how you detail the slowness of this initial exploration. As you know I love kissing so I'm almost swooning over these sweet details [Miracle of miracles, she kissed Laura back, not eagerly or aggressively, but warmly, her full lips curving into Laura's, then parting slightly, as if to invite Laura's tongue. Laura didn't know how far to go. She raised her fingers again to Trina's smooth, wet cheek, caressing it tenderly, then tentatively slipped the tip of her tongue into the gap between Trina's lips. Trina's tongue met hers. Their tongues did not coil passionately together. Instead, they met and touched and caressed, infinitely tender, tentative, then withdrew. Laura let her mouth slide away to Trina's cheek, then to her neck, then up to her ear.] I love this oh so slow acceptance by Trina. She needs to be brought along like a new borne colt.

We see Trina's continued ambivalence when she doesn't want Laura to thank her for letting this seduction occur. Laura slowly increases the heat with a more probing kiss and running her hands up underneath Trina's tight sweater to caress her sweet back. Trina is slowly allowing herself to completely fall under the spell she has unconsciously cast [Then, without speaking, she sat back from Laura and with crossed arms pulled the sweater over her head in one motion. Her hair was slightly mussed, and she shook her head to right it. Her breasts jiggled slightly, inside her bra. They were much larger than Laura had imagined.] I love this gentle slow escalation you have here. So many other authors keep everything moving at such a breakneck speed. Slow can be so nice. Trina makes smoking eye contact that can only mean one thing; "make sweet lesbian love to me". Laura of course is a little perplexed at this sudden change in demeanor. Being my girl, she quickly gets over it and proceeds with this sweet seduction. Of course, it is Trina who is really leading it along. Trina reaches behind her back without any prompting and undoes her bra clasp to reveal [Her naked breasts were breathtaking to Laura. Just as exquisite and perfect as Rina's, only much larger, riper, round, jutting gourds, beautifully spherical. And her nipples were huge black satin bulbs, swollen soft fruit, protruding a good inch from each dark, gleaming breast.] My mouth and pussy would both be flooding now. I love the whispered declarations of beauty. Trina still needs to realize that her beauty mirrors her sweet departed sister.

Laura can no longer deny herself these treasures that are now exposed before her. I love the slow pacing. I would be moving slow too, but the hunger burning in my belly and womb would be intense [She leaned forward and kissed Trina again, filling her hands with the girl's extraordinary naked breasts. This time their kiss was more heated, and Laura couldn't keep her hands from moving, squeezing gently. Trina was very yielding, unbelievably so to Laura. I can't believe you're letting me do this, she thought. Laura kissed her long beautiful neck, then dropped her lips to one of Trina's huge nipples. She licked it lovingly.] I love all breast and nipples but these kind of nipples are such sweet treats because of their rarity. I can suck, lick and lightly bite nipples like these for hours. Trina immediately starts to gasp in surprised pleasure. Only another woman truly knows how to love a woman's breast.

I will simply never tire of how you detail so beautifully and vividly the loving of a woman's breast. Only you do it the justice it deserves. Only you give the details and paint the word pictures necessary for the reader to fully immerse herself in this most pleasurable of pursuits. [Laura opened her mouth and took it inside. Trina's soft nipple was so large that it completely filled Laura's mouth. She remembered how the first time with Jonelle, she had taken all of Jonelle's breast completely into her mouth. But Trina's nipples were the biggest she had ever seen, or sucked. Trina's nipple was so big that Laura could suck it and stroke it with her tongue vigorously at the same time. Trina loved it, and she squirmed and moaned some more. Laura could feel her pussy filling with juice, and she knew Trina must be feeling the same thing. She released the wet nipple and kissed Trina's mouth again. This time they kissed passionately.] I could die happy with this divine bulb inside my loving mouth. I can just feel that stiff bulb filling my mouth and my tongue lathing around it and pulling it in deep and giving it deep love throat sucks while pressing by tongue around it. Yum! I can just taste her sweet flesh filling my taste buds. I need to confess that my panties are a sopping mess right now and I feel the need for an intense masturbation session coming on real soon.

I love how Trina tells Laura that her nipples aren't as sensitive since her child's birth. I bet no man has bothered to find this out or put Trina in the right frame of mind to tell them this. Laura happily adjusts to this wonderful news [Laura dropped her mouth to Trina's other nipple, and she did do it harder this time, sucking the huge bud hungrily, squeezing the magnificent firm ball of flesh with her fingers at the same time. "Ohhh! Oh!" Trina moaned, her body quivering, responding sharply to Laura's mouth.] I would be inhaling her nipples right now with loving violence. I love the visual details that you always flood me with. I usually get the feeling that most women fuck in a sterile environment while reading other stories because they give no details of the women's surroundings while you [She had leaned back, and Laura had half-pushed her, into the sofa cushions, where she now writhed as Laura devoured her naked breasts. Laura held the wet globes and kissed Trina's mouth, this time in undisguised lust, a searching, demanding kiss.]

Laura now confesses into Trina's ears what I would be doing now ["Oh girl, I want to make love to you," she breathed into Trina's ear.] Wow, you then give us this masterful plot twist. Trina balks. This is always possible with a straight woman. The further the progress down the road of lesbianism the more likely they may bolt if they are skittish to begin with. Trina knows gives the infamous "I'm not really that way" line. Pulling my hair time. I nearly go nuts on the inside with this. Sometimes I lose them forever, but patience usually wins. Patience that Laura shows here. Even though her heart is being battered again, she allows Trina to bow out with dignity. I love Laura's noble character here. She is so understanding and forgiving. These are qualities that I aspire too. Laura tells Trina she would never force herself upon her and Trina knows she wouldn't. Trina is a responsible woman who is just having a hard time overcoming society's brainwashing. I am so happy that she has discovered Laura who is helping her to overcome these artificial barriers. I love how Trina is making this so difficult. Though my cunt would almost be exploding with repressed need I love this development. It does happen and is a blast to read. Plus, I get to read this without feeling the direct heartache

that Laura is feeling, though I know what she is going through here.

Laura has the courage to ask for one more kiss. I am not sure I would have been that brave. Laura is so wise. She is planting a parting seed that will bloom deep in Trina's soul and bring out her true lesbian self [She was remarkably open and yielding, letting Laura's lips curve into hers, letting Laura embrace her. After a few seconds, she embraced Laura too, at first gingerly, then more firmly. Their breasts mashed together, and their tongues became entangled. They were both panting softly when they pulled back.] Trina has really won the battle by letting Laura kiss her again. She will overcome her brainwashing and will soon be embracing pleasures she never dreamed existed. I like how she almost whimpers with her pleas to leave. She is really confused right now. She needs time for her true self to bloom. Laura lets her depart with a sweet declaration that she loves her and not Rina's ghost. That was a truly sweet line. Love how you end the story with Trina still being noncommittal about calling Laura. Love that ambiguous ending, so real life. You are simply a wonder to read. Thank you.

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Chapter 107:

1 I took a detour to get here. I went to "girl index" and saw that chapter 110 was the next Trina but I soon discovered that Trina appeared in the chapter with Kim so here I am at chapter 106. Not that I am complaining, another great chapter of divine sex I am sure. One thing that is nice about reading these chapters again after so long is that they are totally fresh. Plus, Kim is one hundred percent lesbian, which I have got to love completely. Now on to the chapter and divine fucking!!!

I liked the observation that Laura makes about thinking and hoping that Trina will come back to her. Her past experience has shown that once she has gotten a woman her first taste of lesbian love they come back for more. This is true for me to a large degree though I definitely have my failures. That is one of the things I like about this story is that Laura never fails. Yeah! She may get her heart kicked around some and have grave doubts of success, but in the end she will succeed. If the seeds have taken root it is hard for the woman to resist. All you have to do is combat all of society's fucked up brainwashing, which always can't be overcome sad to say. All one can do is try and hope for the best.

I then liked how Laura strips and masturbates to relieve the pressure. She has gotten terribly worked up and not been given relief. I can understand that. I guess that is a big difference between Laura and myself. I get a lot of sex but I still love to masturbate. I just love making love to myself. Does that make me narsisictic? As good as my lovers are they can never be as in tune with my body as I am. I love playing with my clit and nipples and fucking my pussy with my fingers and or dildo. For me I guess it is just another dynamic to sex that I don't want to deny myself. I have often gotten so worked up reading your stories that I need immediate satisfaction and see these women in my mind's eye as I bring myself to soul shattering orgasms. I come so hard. I love it so.

I did like reading of Laura fucking Barbara and almost calling Karen thinking of the three-way with Chanitra. I can just see them taking strap-ons and pounding her holes until she howls with an orgasm that is tearing her body asunder with pleasure. Now she gets her phone call from a true lesbian. Kim, the golden panther is on the prowl. I love Kim's direct manner ["I'm dying to fuck you," a familiar husky voice breathed into the phone.] I am just not that confidant to do something like this, makes me think I'm so pretensious. I wish I was. I love it. I love how Kim teases Laura being more beautiful than Stephanie Seymour and is there a woman in her apartment licking her pussy. Geez, that kind of sexy talk from a sex partner you rarely see can't help but set your pussy on fire. I would be her sex slave for life right then. In their flirting we quickly discover that Kim has the money and time to fly to San Francisco. Must be nice to have that kind of money and time. I would be flying the world screwing beautiful women if I did.

I like how Kim can't help but yank Laura's chain. She remarks that while Laura is away she will have plenty of time to find other lesbians. Laura does live in San Fran after all. Laura may be joking but she means it [Laura flushed. "I'm . . . sorry. I have to draw the line. No one but me."] Of course Kim only wants her. Kim will arrive on the morrow and Yvette calling and having Laura come over while her husband is away saves Laura from want. I love that. Fucking while the man is away and giving the pleasure that only I can provide. Fucking her brains out.

Kim arrives around dinner time and after Laura picks her up, Laura asks if Kim wants a bite to eat and Kim [For the first time, Kim touched her. She put her hand on Laura's knee and ran it quickly up under Laura's skirt, caressing Laura's thigh. "I want to eat your pussy," Kim said softly. "Nothing else."] That would be it for me. I am her sex slave for the whole visit. My pussy would be gushing all over my crotch and thighs getting her fingers wet. Damn, I just did a squirm in my chair and had a Laura clench [But Kim was not to be denied. Two of her long fingers slipped under the elastic of Laura's panties and then directly into Laura's very wet cunt.] Joann has a lot of this quality and this is why Maria and I are so under her spell. I love how Kim is taking Laura, caution be damned. Eventually Kim does relent in her attack but only because Laura will kill them in a crash if they don't. I really believe that if Laura had pulled off on the emergency lane, Kim would have gone down on her. I sure would have been tempted. The only thing that would have stopped me is the fear of trying to get back on the damn interstate. It never hurts to be told that you are the best fuck that that person has ever had. I would be beaming just like Laura. It is so nice to be complimented.

Kim being the wonderful aggressive, confident woman she is, is not finished. [Now Kim hiked up her short skirt, then slid her panties down her thighs to her ankles, then slipped them over her high heels and off. Laura, eyes glued to the road, nevertheless took quick glances. Kim spread her thighs and ran one long finger up and down the wet, glistening crease of her pussy. Laura's hot blood hammered in her throat.] If is started something like this I would have to bring myself off. Laura gets her to hold off since they are near her place. I like how Laura is nervous going up the elevator because Kim didn't put her panties back on and wondering if Kim will kiss in such a public place. I would never initiate such a thing but I would never stop it either. I love being taken.

I am just totally floored by Kim's aggressive confidence ["Lock it tight, Laura. I don't want anybody to interrupt what I'm going to do to you."] I am almost swooning here. Laura not to be outdone promises some serious fucking in return. Kim is soon on the attack [They kissed for the first time since Dallas, and it was like two famished tigresses suddenly unleashed on each other. Laura was glad she was wearing an old blouse, because Kim ripped it while trying to get it off. She herself tore a button from Kim's top. Their mouths devoured each other.] Like the tigresses allusion. I can't afford this too often but I love having an aggressive lover ripping my clothes off in her haste. It makes me feel all weak and vulnerable. Makes me want to be your total fuck slut. I love being made to feel submissive and this really does it to me. My lover is taking what she wants. They head to the bedroom and Laura removes her bra to save it being torn and Kim [She reached behind to unfasten it. Kim bit her neck. "Ouch! Shit! Did you have to do that?"] This is a difference between Laura and myself. My pussy would be flooding and I would be grabbing the back of Kim's head and arching, exposing my neck and pressing her mouth into my neck for more love bites. It makes me SO wet. I love the pained pleasure it gives me and being marked.

So often you are able to capture the beauty of a slow sensual seduction. But you are also able to equally capture the heat, hunger of desperate need. Laura and Kim are tearing at each in their desperation to have each other's sweet flesh. They almost tear each other's clothes in their haste to remove them. They immediately start to tear (in a loving way) at each other's breast in need. Finally Kim gets her lips on what she needs so badly [If anything, this only made them more eager. Now Laura got her mouth on Kim's breasts, sucking Kim's nipples hungrily. Kim's hand found Laura's wet pussy and invaded it. She scissored Laura's excited clit between her fingers.] That is so hot, hungrily sucking your lover's nipples while you frig her soupy cunt and rub her clit. I love feeling that bundle of love nerves working between my fingers and feeling my lover twitch in response.

Kim has the kind of hunger for pussy I do and attacks with complete dedication [She was not to be denied. She slithered down between Laura's yawning thighs, and Laura groaned as she felt Kim's mouth assault her pussy passionately. Kim was an expert and forceful lover, using everything at her command. Her tongue penetrated Laura's pussy quickly, and her fingers caressed Laura's clit at the same time, while her other hand invaded the crease between Laura's buns to tease her asshole.] I love to press my mouth as completely as possible into my lover's snatch and caress my tongue around and deep as possible into my lover's warm buttery channel. Love feeling all that twitching and clasping of her love muscles. I love lapping up her love cream rewarding my loving ministrations. I like to think this describes me and my passion and technique [Few others did it so well, and in a matter of seconds Laura was quivering, arching her back, gyrating her hips frantically, her whole body filled with wild sexual need.] I love filling my lover's body with such need. This is what I live for.

Laura comes gloriously like you allow all your women ["Auungghh! Oh . . . unngghhh yess! Ohnnggg god yes! Ungghh! Oh . . . Kim ungghh! Auungghh!" she cried out, thrashing in the sheets until it began to wane.] For me this is such a huge turn on, listening to my lover scream out her pleasure and this is one of the things that instantly captured me about your writings. To add to my pleasure you give the beautiful visual picture of Laura's body thrashing the sheets in helpless pleasure. I so love seeing this and trying to prolong all the screams and spasms of pleasure. She wonders how she can be horny despite her recent fucking with Sholandra and Yvette. This is something I never wonder. I am always ready to fuck the next day after a nights rest. My body always revives immediately if I think I am going to be making love. I hunger for my lovers. You writings always hits my buttons [But now it was Laura's turn. Kim was glassy-eyed, her lips still smeared with Laura's cunt juices. Laura pulled her down into the rumpled sheets and kissed her aggressively. "I'm going to eat you alive," she murmured.] It is amazing how much of your stuff I love so. I love kissing and licking my come off my lover's face, mouth and fingers. I love tasting my own essence.

Like all women, Laura immediately returns the favor and goes down on Kim and brings her two orgasms with her mouth. A woman needs to return the love she has just received. You allow your women to truly show their feelings and gratitude [Finally, she propped herself up on her elbows, still panting, her face a fetching mixture of satiation and bewilderment. "Laura . . . sometimes I thought it was a dream, but I was right," she gasped softly. "Nobody ever fucked me like you do."] It is always so warming to hear what a great lover you are. Laura is the sweetest of dreams. A dream that can become the sweetest reality. They then proceed to fuck gloriously over the next day. I love having the time to fuck at a leisurely pace, resting and refueling when necessary and see how far one push ones own flesh and the flesh of your lover(s).

You now give me one of those plot twists that is so original and such a kick to read. Laura leaves Kim at home while she goes to work. Okay, no big deal. Kim has two more days to stay. I was floored when Kim remarks that a beautiful blond visited her while Laura was at work. That can only mean one person: Rhonda. And the reader knowing Rhonda and Kim knows only sweet debauchery could have resulted from that meeting. I would be salivating asking for details but Laura has another point of view. Of course Kim makes it obvious they have fucked [Kim looked away, her lovely face not exactly guilty, but secretive, and yet tempting Laura to probe further. She gets a kick out of making me jealous, Laura realized.] Kim is like me, she knows how to get the rough fucking she needs. Kim soon confesses her "crimes" ["I . . . couldn't help it," Kim pouted. "She's really beautiful. With that great body and all. She fucks like a hot little bunny. But then you know that." Kim glared provocatively at Laura.] I Love It. This is a game Maria and I play with Joann. Her acting all innocent and we confessing our "indiscretions" and then she makes us oh so sorry. Hehehe.

I love how Kim is taunting Laura here. She is firing up Laura's jealousy knowing that will make her fuck her hard and deep. When Joann lets us know the mood is right we do this taunting with Joann, and then expressing our ability to get fucked better by others. She really knows how to act it up. She is a spitfire already and she plays off this when she is getting into dom mode. I love how Kim is nuzzling Laura's neck while Laura's temperature is rising. Trying to act all coy and innocent at the same time. Kim is right though; Rhonda and Laura are both divine fuck bunnies who love their black angels. They can never get enough of that sweet dark flesh. This catches all these beautiful dynamics [Kim came close again. This time she caught Laura, nuzzling her neck. "Just like you, eh?" she whispered. "And me. She's a great fuck, by the way. If you haven't tried her. If you only go for us colored folks, I mean." Laura smiled malevolently. "You bitch." "What are you going to do about it?"] My belly would be clenching if I were Kim. I would know that I am about to taken just the way I want it.

I am always amazed how I write about how I feel about something and the way I would react in a given situation and then the very next thing I read is me to the "tee". I am sometimes amazed. Case in point [Laura knew, and she knew Kim knew, that both were sexually very aroused by this event. The atmosphere was electric. Kim's green eyes burned. She was daring Laura to retaliate, which did not mean going out and screwing Rhonda herself, which of course she had already done anyway. It meant screwing Kim, but in some new, unpredictable, dangerous way. Kim was even breathing hard.] Kim is reacting exactly the way I would arousing Joann or some other dom into action. You add so much to the heat when Laura drags Kim to her bedroom and we discover that Kim has deliberately left the bed a rumpled mess. I can just smell Rhonda and Kim's scent on the sheets. I love the brazenness her. This is Fucking HOT. Wow, this is great stuff. Then I love how Kim is playing her part to the hilt [Kim, sullenly, began to undress, never taking her eyes from Laura's. When she was down to her underwear, Laura reached under the bed and pulled out the coils of rope she frequently used with Karen, and had used also on Brandi. Kim's eyes widened. Then she smiled.] When Maria is being submissive with Joann she is the complete helpless damsel while I prefer the defiant princess who fairly quickly has her will broken. Kim is taking more my approach.

I broke out into a great big smile when Kim remarked how kinky Laura is when she sees the rope. If Laura only ties her up to restrain her and not strangle parts of Kim's body then I'm with them. Lets find out. I love the anger in Laura's belly. I can just see that angry sex crazed look Joann gets when she is tying up my ankles and wrists. She can really make me wonder sometimes. She really knows how to play her part. My belly just did a Laura clinch [Kim was very obedient. "You're not going to hurt me, are you?" "What do you think?" Laura teased, looping the rope around Kim's ankles, tying them quickly to the bed frame.] I hope I don't come across as a little weird with how I can get so into this. This is the reason I love your writings so. I can just immerse myself into your stories and marry it to my experiences and thus achieve so much satisfaction. It is cool how Laura removes her clothes slowly knowing how Kim hungers for her body. I really like how she teases Kim for over a half hour (I would be puddle of need by then) and finally straddles Kim faces and rides her to orgasm then rides her tit / nipple to another orgasm (I'll have to remember this scenario for future use).

Of course all this teasing and satisfying ones own needs has the desired affect on Kim ["Laura, let me come, please!" Kim begged frantically. "Please! Make me come, let me come, do me, do me hard, I don't care how hard you fuck me, I can come in two seconds! Please, Laura, oh please! Do me . . . do me now!"] I love making my women beg, but when I'm in dom mode, this is exactly what I am aiming for. Will I give them pleasure now? I love making them guess. Other authors usually have their character fuck with no words while you use words to stoke the fire and set the next stage [Laura smiled maliciously. "Fuck you hard?" "Yes!" Kim's green eyes burned wildly. "Mmmmm," Laura teased. "I can do that." "Oh . . . please!" Kim begged.] You show your total surrender when you beg for your own violation. It is time for the fun to begin. I love how Laura thinks [Looking at Kim's long, beautiful, thin, golden body, Laura recalled the time she had fucked Karen in the ass with a cucumber. Being a salad kind of person, she always had one around. She went to the kitchen and found it, admiring it as she returned to the bedroom. It was a long fat one.] I think I have told you that I am intimately familiar with cucumbers and what they can do for a girl. I can't wait to read the next paragraphs.

It is such a interesting dynamic when Kim blanches at the huge cucumber and states she doesn't want it her pussy and Laura informs her it is going up her asshole. One thing I have always admired is how you can show rough sex and being "taken" and still make it clear that this is what the women want. Kim is only playing her part to the hilt. She wants exactly what Laura is about to deliver. She may plead and glower but she wants it and you make sure the reader knows this. You never demean your women. Even in her wilder trysts with Karen and Earlene, no matter how violent, it is still based on mutual respect and love.

Kim may say that nothing goes up her ass but she soon swoons when Laura gets out the gag and baby oil. ["Oh god!" Kim moaned. "You can't be serious."] This is the sound of a woman who wants exactly what she is about to receive. I just want to reinforce what I said; Kim wants everything she is getting. She may say one thing but her body language tells the truth [But she gnawed on her full lower lip as Laura got the towel, then scrunched up a pillow under Kim's ass to raise it up a little, spreading the towel over the pillow. Laura knew that however much Kim dreaded what was about to happen, it also aroused her sexually. She was actually shaking as Laura lubricated two of her own fingers and began to prepare Kim's asshole for the vegetable invader. "Ohhnnnnn!" Kim moaned, twisting, her face contorted with fear and frantic sexual excitement. "Nobody touches my ass! I told you! Nobody! Ungghhh!"] It is just so important to me that you never degrade your women. This is glorious love raping. This is women who have a strong sub /dom trait expressing their love for each other.

I am smiling like a great big fool here because Kim is whimpering about being taken and yet Laura is having to be careful because Kim is so close to coming. Laura has to watch her closely to prolong the pleasure. I guess I can understand the gag in this case. Kim will be screaming when that cucumber invades her waiting rectum. I noticed that though Kim evidences fear at the gag she in no way tries to prevent it being put into her mouth and having the harness tightened. This is further proven because Laura fastened it so slowly to prolong the teasing pleasure. Geez, I get a little wet with the threats Laura is giving here about Kim screwing Rhonda and what she is going to do ["Oh, it's going to feel so good, and hurt so bad," she cooed. "Little Kim is going to come so hard."]

As always you capture so perfectly the pleasure of penetration. True there is pain in this penetration but it is the pain of pleasure. I can just feel that cucumber sliding up my rectum. I especially love those little rough areas on the skin of a cucumber. They are just so intense as they rub your tender rectum and bowels. That is so fucking intense, I love the size of regular cucumbers but I still buy at the international store the Filipino cucumbers because you can't match those irregular projections going up your ass. I have shown a few women these beauties. These next two paragraphs are sheer bliss [But she was patient. She slid the end of the cucumber into Kim's ass and watched the girl's face as it glided into her. Kim started by wincing, but quickly her beautiful face froze in agony. Her long, lean body stiffened, and she gagged, snuffling for breath, tears leaking from the corners of her eyes. A deep groan of exquisite pain came from deep in her throat, throttled by the ball in her mouth. Laura pushed the green torpedo in deep. Kim's lovely long body was paralyzed, clenched in pain, impaled, every smooth muscle in her long silky golden midriff straining, her thighs corded with effort. Laura knew that the slightest touch to her clit would make her explode in a fearsome blast of ecstacy.] Wow, that is beautiful how you capture Kim's body all stiff and straining from that impalement. That is just so fucking true and hot to read on the printed page.

I love how you detail what Laura is doing with her cucumber [Slowly she rotated the cucumber in Kim's ass, first rolling it, then slowly inching it in and out, fucking her with it, bringing soft, choked sobs of mingled pain and rapture from deep in Kim's chest. But this couldn't go on for long. Thirty seconds of it brought Kim to the absolute brink.] For me, that rotation and making that cucumber skin caress every inch of your hole is absolutely divine. To finish Kim she lowers her mouth into that paradise of a cunt and flattens her tongue and love swipes her distended clit until Kim explodes with coming. Then Laura lets her come down and penetrates her and turns her fingers and finds that spongy miracle spot and produces a string of g-spot orgasms. The women I can find one do come like they are being torn apart and you can really prolong their coming. I do envy them. I will never tire of how you so vividly capture a woman in the throes of crushing exctacy [The bed shook as she writhed and wrenched her long arms and legs and thrusted wildly with her groin, groaning in the throes of a killing rapture, her luscious long golden body quivering and flexing.] Cute detail of Laura keeping her mouth glued to Kim's spasming cunt and risking being knocked cross-eyed. I have gotten a sore lip and hurt mouth quite a few times over the years keeping my mouth glued to a woman's cunt during orgasm. I have to get every ounce of cunt cream I can. It is just something I have to do. Hehehe.

I love that detail of the cucumber lying between Kim's thighs having been ejected during her thrashing around in her exctasy. I love how Kim is almost worshipful of Laura and what she can provide ["I wish I could keep you locked in the basement and just take you out when I need that," she said in a soft, hoarse voice.] Then it is interesting hearing Kim say a man has never slept with her. Maria and I have both partaken of that fruit in the past and never want another taste. Joann says she has gayness in her blood and has herself never even kissed a guy. Wow, what a compliment, only Laura has found Kim's g-spot. Laura is my girl. Kim now makes love to Laura with slow gentleness. I love how you don't always follow the rule of reciprocity. Other authors almost always have this. The women mirror each other in their lovemaking. You have the originality to show that this is often not the case in reality. Variety is the spice of life.

We now have the sweet moment of Kim trying to get Laura and Rhonda together but Laura is nowhere near ready for this in her life at this point. Now it is bombshell time. [Downstairs in the street, as they headed for Laura's car, they ran into Trina. Trina looked into Laura's eyes. Her face froze. "Trina, I---" Trina didn't say anything. She turned and walked in the other direction.] For me this is the real life elements that lifts your story into the realm of great literature. You are able of catching all of life's vagaries. I absolutely didn't see this coming. Then we have real life complicated individuals who show all their desires and insecurities. Laura tries to make peace and Trina won't even let her touch her. Trina correctly observes Laura's taste for afro-American women. Trina shows the conflict that blacks seem to have between light and dark colored black skin. I love all this conflict and insecurity. Then Trina spits out that Laura really loves Rina's ghost and not her. I love all this dynamic and complicated interactions.

They part with Trina saying she wanted to make peace about the pervious night. I know that once the apology was given that soon she would have been in Laura's bed making sweet love. I think Trina knows it too. Laura tries to tell her how much she means to her but Trina leaves with a great comeback [Trina smirked, looking beyond Laura at Kim. "Guess I'll never know," she said, then turned and walked away.]

Of course Kim wants to fuck her and Laura chastises her for her desires. Kim is like me and says what is wrong with wanting to make love to a beautiful woman. Kim tries to help and gives Laura some advice on how to get Trina. Use the I'm sorry, I won't do it again and tell her you are going back to your girlfriend. Laura may tell little white lies but something this involved and detailed is beyond her honest nature. Kim is right that many a divorcee is dying for some loving and can be easy to capture with the right flirting and stroking.

I loved the sweet parting as friends at the airport. I love how you show these women as such normal individuals with separate and distinct lives. I love them all.

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Chapter 110:

This chapter starts by reflecting on why I am not sure if I will be reading the Karen and Earlene chapters again. They are just so over the top for my personal temperament. I know that a lot of women love sex like this but I don't. I love it rough but not this intense painful kind of sex. Sex that actually leaves my body and specifically my pussy and tits actually in acute pain. I love that aching feeling but not any sharp kind of pain. I just can't get off on whips and such. It is just too intense for me. I love my orgasms but I don't want to achieve them through true pain. I am happy that Laura has left this true BDSM behind her. I found it fascinating to read the first time but not again. I know many love this but it is just too intense for me.

I will have to read the chapter with Laura, Karen and Chanitra. It sounds like it was a sweet intense fucking without any extremes. It is cute how thoughts of Chanitra lead to thoughts of Kim. Both of them being so carefree and loving sex so much. The only problem is those thoughts of Kim leads to thoughts of Trina and the pain of their last meeting. I really feel for Laura here. I hate causing anyone pain. Laura then reminisces about the night Trina removed her top and bra and let Laura make sweet love to her breasts. Obviously, she is close to lesbian seduction; she's just confused. Society has brainwashed her to her true desires. Laura then wonders if she should try and play the mind games Kim suggested. To me it is obvious that Trina is dying for Laura to lick her pussy to sweet explosions of bliss. Plus, I like the fact that it is not only fear that is conflicting Trina here [After all, Trina's jealousy of Kim, and especially Kim's light skin, certainly complicated things. It wasn't just simple fear of girl-girl sex.] Usually, it is more than one thing that motivates a person.

Laura finally decides that she has nothing to lose by trying Kim's suggestion. The only problem is that her body is completely abused from her last tryst with Karen. I can't conceive of allowing myself to be mauled so bad that it took ten days for my breast to recover from severe trauma. I don't mind a little bruising and love bites but having my breast and vagina actually hurt is just so heinous. I can't do that to myself. I guess I love myself too much. That does sound narcissistic doesn't it? While Laura is healing she has to refuse Yvette and Sholandra. Of course they both get pissed off. I never want to have to refuse women for any reason especially self-abuse. After Laura is healed with ten days rest she goes to the library and uses a reverse phone directory. I like the effort she is putting into finding Trina. I know she almost seduced Trina but the past rejections would probably scare me off. I admire Laura's perseverance here.

Finally, Laura is ready and she goes to Trina's apartment and a little girl answers the door. She is a little surprised but then reflects that some of her other lovers have children and they are passionate lovers. These women need lesbian love to truly satisfy them no matter their family situation. The little girl is cute as a button and Laura realizes that when this girl matures that she will be desiring her also. I know that feeling. I see all these early teen girls in the mall and at the park and I gaze at them. I definitely am attracted to their physical beauty but they are too young still. I always think to myself when they get to upper high school years they will be ready for love. Trina comes to see who is at the door and can't help but smile a little. Her and Laura have shared magic moments and she can't help but recollect them. Trina invites Laura in when Laura tells her she has to speak to her. We discover that the cutie is named Shawnee. Trina takes Laura to the kitchen to talk and once their Laura completely forgets to tell the lies that Kim had prepared for her. I like that in Laura. She may tell a white lie in the heat of the moment or a little one to not hurt a lover but she is too honest to outright lie. I have always been attracted to Laura's basic honesty and pleasant demeanor.

Laura starts to confess her attraction and begins crying. Trina is touched but doesn't buy the old friend line about Kim. Trina knows the score. Of course Laura's deep red blush gives away her guilty thoughts. I love how you capture how the whole dynamic can change in an instant. Trina is being friendly and conciliatory and then Laura says the wrong thing ["She felt bad too," Laura said. "Bad because she thought it hurt you." " Now Trina bristled. Laura had said the wrong thing. "Hurt me? Why should it hurt me? You don't owe me nothin'."] We as a species can be so fickle. You can never really be sure when you might say something to offend or upset. Again I think you so perfectly capture real life. Laura knows she has to work some more to recover the progress she just lost. That line would have made feel better but it upsets Trina. You are showing how each person is so individualistic. I Love It.

I like the comment about Laura trying to control her crying, to not be so weak and womanly. I feel this way. Most people think I am so strong and confident but the people I really care for know that I can be easily wounded and reduced to Laura's state. I hate myself for being so weak sometimes but I can't help it. Sometimes I can blubber just like a baby. Trina is touched and tells Laura to not be embarrassed and apologizes for her cruel remarks about Kim's "high yellow" skin color. I agree with Laura when she tells Trina that she loves her dark skin color. I myself love the darker hues. I have always been more attracted to women of color than white women. Trina still doesn't fully grasp that Laura is attracted to her and not Rina's ghost. I smiled great big when Trina preens when Laura tells her that she finds her skin hue to be a huge turn on. What woman doesn't like to be complimented? While I love women to be confident in their essence like Chanitra and Kim I am also touched by the honesty of a woman who is not vain about her looks ["You do think I'm . . . beautiful, don't you," she said, unable to believe it.] I love the dynamic that each woman brings with her.

As so often happens with a lesbian virgin or a newbie who is still so skittish, very awkward moments arise. You know they want to proceed but don't know how and the dynamic won't allow you to move things ahead. Laura realizes it is time to go home. She can't make any more progress. I would be a nervous wreck with all these near misses. I love the chase but I can't take much rejection before I call off the hunt. I love how they part. Though Trina is showing ambivalence she is also showing a desire to keep moving forward [Trina touched Laura's hand once more at the door, a gentle, not unfriendly brief touch of closeness, as if she too couldn't resist the need to touch Laura.] These are the signals I need to continue the hunt.

I love reading about Laura servicing her other lovers. Sholandra has become quite quarrelsome over her rejections and to satisfy her needs and for some spite is now sleeping with Rhonda. Laura takes her to bed for an athletic night of fucking. A marathon of fucking. I love fucking a new love like this. Fuck and rest, fuck and rest until your and her flesh is worn out. With a lesbian newbie they are almost always in a stupor of bliss not knowing that so much pleasure is possible. I love being the one to show them. We pros know this already and fuck with wild abandon knowing what is awaiting us. You capture this perfectly with Sholandra [By morning Sholandra could barely move, nor could Laura, but hey were happy. Sholandra, like Brandi had been, was as pleased as a little girl in her first party dress that she had come so many times. She had not known it was possible.] I love that lassitude of a divine night of intense fucking. I love being a woman and being able to fuck like this with other beautiful women. Sex with guys wasn't that bad (I just couldn't stand all their bullshit and they left me cold after the fucking stopped) but sex and the connection with women is just so superior to anything else. Heaven on Earth is having a pussy exploding in ones mouth and feasting on all the love cream pumping out in exctacy and then cuddling. I had to chuckle at the ulterior motive of Laura hoping this keeps Sholandra out of Rhonda's bed.

A week passes with Laura slowly putting Trina in the past with a melancholy ache and then Trina calls. I am like Laura in this. If I have been rejected then I pull back and the other woman must come to me. I need to see real interest to try again. I can only have my heart kicked around so many times. Trina tells her that her daughter is with her father and she didn't feel like hanging with girlfriends and wants to watch a movie. Yes!!! She wants to spend time with Laura, a woman she knows wants to seduce her. She is dying for it. Laura goes over with some wine and resolutely telling herself not to get her hopes up. Just try to reconnect. I have always loved Laura trying to suppress her hopes and then being so joyfully surprised when the seduction does occur. Still Laura knows that she and Trina have come so close to consummating their love.

I got a great big kick out of what greets Laura when Trina opens the door [She forced herself not to think of it while she drove. It was a hot night, and Trina met her at the door in very short cutoffs and a red midriff top, reminding Laura briefly of Chanitra. Trina was exquisitely gorgeous. Her legs were long and beautiful, though not willowy like Yvette's. Instead they were muscular and shapely, more like Brandi's though not as short, or bunched with muscle, just sleek and beautifully formed. Laura tried not to stare, either at Trina's legs, or her smooth black midriff.] I never tire of how Laura tries to control her feelings and then when she meets her newest angel and they are dressed in a way that sends ones gaydar off the scale. Trina is exposing her bare flesh to a woman who has repeatedly tried to seduce her. The messages are conflicting still, but she is showing a deep, maybe unperceived, need for lesbian fucking. She needs it. Laura wonders if Trina is trying to torment her with this exposing of flesh; I think Trina is crying out for lesbian seduction. I love Trina's thighs. I know I would be humping it the first night of sex plus I have learned from you of having a thigh battering rammed into ones cunt. I love that forceful raping and rubbing of my cunt. I come so hard. I love smearing a thigh with my copious love juice.

I love how your women compliment each other so freely. This is something that men as a rule just don't seem to do well. Laura gushes over Trina and Trina goes on about how Laura looks like Stephanie. They then settle down with some popcorn and watch a movie that Laura finds a little boring but doesn't let on. Can't do anything to damage the moment. She is getting closer and can feel it. I love how you capture the magic of suddenly realizing that soon you will be fucking your latest conquest. That one has been successful [They sat at opposite ends of the sofa, with the popcorn between them. 'Serpico' was okay but a little boring, and occasionally each one caught the other's eye but then quickly looked away. We are going to fuck, Laura suddenly realized. It's only a matter of how we get there. That's why she invited me here.] My pussy would be flooding with precome knowing that soon my face would be buried in my new loves cunt. Only you truly setup situations that allow the reader to feel this supreme joy of a beautiful seduction. You achieve this by developing this whole scenario over several chapters. This allows you to develop the scenario like real life. It flows and yet the events themselves have a stop and start feel to them. I thank you for giving me literature in

erotica.

After the past problems Laura knows she has to go slow. They watch the movie for another hour and then Laura suggests some wine and goes to the kitchen to get some glasses. Trina follows her in. The kitchen is small and soon they wind up face to face. I love Trina placing herself in this position. Soon they have to act on their hunger [She set the glasses on the tile sinkboard, next to the wine bottle. Her eyes were shining again. Laura had not seen her this calm and open and receptive. She reached up one finger and ran it along Trina's jaw to her chin, then traced it around the girl's full, sensual lips.] I so adore this slow gentle seduction. This oh so gentle pacing. Then we have the beautiful moment of Trina stepping forward and they bring their mouths gently together and slowly, sensually start to explore each other mouths almost chastely. Soon nature takes its course and Trina quickly becomes more receptive to her true lesbian self [When their tongues coiled together, they finally embraced, and Laura's hands went directly to the smooth, warm skin of Trina's waist. After a few moments, Trina's rose to Laura's shirt front and began to unbutton it. Laura was thrilled and shocked. A sharp excited shiver went through her body as Trina kissed her neck.] I can just feel Trina's warm flesh in my hands as I caress and stroke her waist and the feel and taste of her tongue in my receptive mouth. I would be moaning my head off. The quaking of my flesh as Trina started to unbutton my clothes. My knees would be shaking with need. I would be dying with Trina tugging my shirt out of pants. My musk would be filling the air with my need. This is just such great fucking stuff. You make my pussy quiver with such happiness. You just make it melt with need, all swimming in fuck juice.

I like how the fancy bra and panties blow Trina away. I don't wear this kind of undergarments so I really love finding it on other women. Joann and Maria love this stuff. I love how you show Trina quickly warming to her true lesbian self. If women will just let go it so beautiful. The ones who can't can really lead to awkward moments. I work my whole seduction to try and minimize this. I love Trina [Trina unfastened Laura's bra and pulled away the cups. She cupped Laura's naked breasts in both hands and lowered her mouth to them. Trina had clearly never done this before, but after a few tentative licks she began to suck Laura's nipples and squeeze her breasts with a slow, thrilling sensuality.] I love a newbie partaking of her first forbidden flesh. I love her learning her new self on my willing flesh. It is worth the often tentative and sometimes clumsy technique. I love showing them a new world and being their initial teacher. It is amazing how quickly most get into it. Once they do they usually become animals.

Trina is amazed at Laura's nipples being so sensitive since hers became a little desensitized with childbirth. Trina is ready to head for the bedroom but Laura wants to play a little more in the kitchen like she and Rina in the past. This next shows how you capture so much with vivid descriptions of actual interaction between your characters. You make each situation unique and wonderful [She unfastened Trina's bra in the back. Because Trina's top covered her shoulders, the bra straps wouldn't come off, so Laura pushed up the cups, exposing Trina's shockingly beautiful naked breasts. She gently removed Trina's hands from her own breasts, then pushed hers into Trina's, kissing Trina at the same time while their breasts mashed together.] I get so tired of other authors giving absolutely no details. It is just removed the top and bra and sucked the nipples. Story after story, it really does get boring. You never let me down with making everything so special.

The fires have been started and now Trina kisses with passion and thrusting tongue. I love how Laura draws that bulb into her loving mouth [Now Laura took one of Trina's large, firm breasts in both of her hands and lowered her mouth to it, sucking the huge nipple all the way in, feeling Trina's body quiver.] I have one lover who reminds me a little of Trina's breast. She has nipples a little like Trina's though she has small breast. A lot of areola that protrude thickly then blossom when fully excited. Her areola is almost 3/4 of her breast. I just licked, mouthed and tongued them and gave her breast and especially nipple deep throat love sucks. All that areola gives me such a treat to love torment. I just love attacking them and getting them infused with blood. She really loves how I attack them so passionately. The men in her life have never given them the treatment she craves. That lack of communication again. I love how each woman's breast are so unique and such treasures to discover.

Now in the bedroom, they strip down for loving. I love how you spend paragraphs detailing their unclothing and how they help each other to remove their panties. Again, only you show us. Other authors just give a sentence of them removing their clothes. This is cheating the reader in my opinion. I love how you show Laura leading the lovemaking with her experience [But their eyes were locked together and never broke apart. And now Laura, as the experienced one, took over, slowly kissing and caressing every inch of Trina's spectacular naked body, as she had always wanted to. To Laura, Trina was miraculously beautiful, a reincarnation or exact replica of Rina. Laura feasted on her flesh, spending long moments again sucking her huge soft nipples, feeling them tighten and point inside her mouth, hearing Trina whimper, feeling her squirm.] I love leading a lesbian virgin into the garden of delights. Looking deep into their eyes as I reveal wonders to them they never knew existed. Making love to their whole body and not just to their pussy like they are used to.

I love how Laura kisses and worships Trina's belly on her way to some sweet pussy and then when she arrives [Both her tongue and her fingers arrived there at the same time, her fingers parting the wet, swollen labia and her tongue slipping down over Trina's protruding clit and into the glistening trench below it.] I so love opening a pussy and reaching inside deep with my tongue for the sweet nectars within. Burying my face and having my nose rub up against her clit. I will often move my nose into a clit. Conversely, sometimes I just move and grind my chin into the slit when I am loving the clit. It adds stimulation and I get divine cunt cream on my face. I love being rewarded for my efforts. Hehehe. It doesn't get any better than this for me. I love eating pussy so dearly. I love how Laura is immediately in tune with Trina's body and knows she has to back off already or she will come. We women just easily read our lovers body. Laura is right; no man can lick pussy like a woman. Period.

I was surprised when you have Laura rotate around and scissor their legs. I love how your lovemaking is never predictable. This again mirrors life, who knows what you may do next when making love. I almost never see trib in other stories, fortunately I discovered you [Quickly, she sat up and twisted her body around to get one leg over Trina's thigh and slide her own flooding, throbbing pussy closer to Trina's. She leaned forward, panting and whispering. "Hold your pussy open, honey," she coached.] I love the coaching that Laura is giving Trina. I love having my lover tell me what she wants me to do. I love to be guided by my lover, showing me how to love her better.

They quickly start to gasp their pleasure and Laura sets up the rhythm [Trina was on her back, being fucked by Laura, gazing up into Laura's eyes, her beautiful face grimacing in a seizure of fierce sexual excitement, her hips churning in rhythm with Laura's. The feeling of their warm, wet pussies grinding and mashing together was the most sublime sensation Laura had ever felt, and she knew Trina felt the same way just from the look in her throbbing, shining dark eyes.] I love tribing in this position. Sitting down on my lover's crotch. I love pulling a leg up and placing it on my shoulder. I use it as an anchor to grind down hard as I can into my lover's open cunt. I so love feeling her warm greasy inner cunt flesh pressing and grinding into mine. I come so hard in this position. This is captured with this here [They pumped, panting and twisting, their churning hips pumping faster and faster. Trina's body clenched, and she shut her eyes, then began to come in shocking spasms.] I love that increasing rhythm and grinding and then the rupturing orgasms. I love feeling all that warm juice flooding our groins and flowing everywhere from our spasming and pumping cunts. Sigh, I love the cries of exctacy crying from their pleasure struck souls.

Oh geez, you did it to me again. I write what I love to do in this situation and then I read it (you are always making my head lull to the side) [She clung to Trina's long, shapely black leg, scissoring Trina's thigh with her own legs and pushing her hot, spasming cunt into Trina's as the two of them vibrated together through an intense shared ecstasy. As it began to wane, they slowly untangled their bodies, but Laura was not content to leave it at that. She settled between Trina's firm, glossy thighs and pressed her mouth again to the girl's pussy, tonguing Trina's clit and quickly arousing her again to a fever pitch.] Laura is using that leg as a rudder to ram her cunt down into Trina's and feeling your cunts exploding together. Then I love how Laura isn't satisfied and moves between Trina's thighs for some sopping wet cunt candy. I love eating a pussy right after an orgasm. It is so wet and juicy. All that juice making my face wet and such effluence to lick up and savor. Then I get to drill into that wide-open pussy and get more cunt cream pumping out for my lapping tongue.

I love how you detail Laura working Trina's cunt with patient loving skill. Now that Trina has come, Laura can more easily control the flow and speed of the lovemaking. She can take more liberties while working Trina's love swollen cunt [Laura was tender and impassioned by turns, sliding her tongue deep into Trina's pussy, then drawing it out and up, across the girl's engorged clitoris, until Trina was quivering and moaning uncontrollably.] Love how you show Laura varying her technique to drive Trina wild with need. Other authors only know full speed ahead from the start or almost immediately get to full speed ahead. Oh god, I love how Laura finishes her off ["Yes . . . yes!" Laura murmured, turning up the heat quickly, sucking Trina's clit now and squeezing her hard round buns with both hands.] That would produce an all caps scream of rapture from me. I love how you detail the sweet afterglow of great sex [She arched her back, flexing and shuddering in the grip of fierce, rapturous spasms. This orgasm was so supreme that the aftershocks were still shaking her as Laura slipped up to embrace her, kissing her, cupping her delectable breasts, holding Trina while she quivered and sighed through the last waning feathery tremors of coming. It was several minutes until she emerged from the knockout punch.] I love kissing my lover after orgasm and tasting my orgasm in her mouth and vice versa. I love holding a woman close to me after as she is coming down from a supreme orgasm. I love feeling all those ripples and shakings of love passing through their body and knowing I or another working with me caused it. I call them love tremors and I love feeling them rippling through my body from my closely clasped lover.

Of course Trina is totally stunned and is totally in awe. She wants to reciprocate but is not sure what to do, like a lot of virgins. Some want to go first but the vast majority want me to show them the way. That is always a good way to start by telling them to do what they would like and then instruct with gentleness and love. Trina needs to learn how to talk dirty. I love it when Laura says, "fuck" over and over. I love it. This really helps a woman to loosen up and start to like this. I always love opening my thighs for my lover [Laura relaxed and opened her thighs widely, sighing as Trina slid down between them. Trina's lips found the smooth skin of Laura's inner thighs, and then Laura gasped in sharp pleasure as the girl's tongue touched her very wet labia.] Makes me feel so loved letting my lover at my flower.

You always capture the thrill of oral sex and I am setting here thinking of the women I have introduced into lesbianism and the love I feel for them when they start to devour my cunt with enthusiasm. I find must women who shed the world's patriarch bullshit will devour my cunt with a little encouragement and quickly build up skill with a little gentle coaching. You capture this perfect with Trina shedding her past inhibitions and letting her soul guide her thoughts and actions. I adore Trina here [Again Trina was tentative, shy, cautious, but her desire soon got the better of her. She parted Laura's swollen cuntlips with her thumbs and slid her tongue deep into Laura's pussy, bringing a groan of delight from Laura, who quivered uncontrollably and arched her back, pushing her pussy up into Trina's mouth. "Yes . . . yes!" she panted softly. "Oh yes, baby, do it . . . just like that, yes! Ohnnnn!" Trina began to hum and purr softly too as she ate Laura's pussy, licking and probing it, tongue-fucking it, until Laura was shaking and mewling. Already aroused from fucking Trina, Laura was right on the edge of a shattering climax, and Trina's loving, passionate tongue quickly took her over.] I often purr and hum while feasting away on a cunt or tit. Women love that vibrating I can produce. I know I would be grasping the back of Trina's head here and rewarding her virgin mouth with my exploding cunt's love cream. Pressing her mouth to my cunt and lifting my head to watch her swallowing my love cream. I can just see her mouth and throat working as she swallows my juice. Sigh.

Still unsatiated they quickly move into a 69 position and bring each other into a needed orgasm to calm their fires of lust and love. Trina is totally surprised that women can fuck like this. This is just something that women can do and I thank the fates for that. They talk and rest for a while and then Laura cannot deny herself these breast made by the gods for lesbian love [She seemed primed for a total, sensual assault on the gorgeous dark globes, and Laura was eager to deliver. She straddled Trina's midriff and scooped both luscious balls up in her hands, devouring them with a sharp passion and urgency she had not dared to show earlier. Her fingers dug into Trina's hard, round breasts, and she filled her mouth with the girl's huge, plump nipples, sucking them hard, teasing them with her teeth, until they were swollen and fiercely erect, the stiff centers protruding from the wide, puffy areolas.] I would have to make love to these nipples for hours. I would dig me fingers in so hard and suck so deep. I can just taste them in my mouth and feeling those bulbs stiffening in my mouth and the back of my throat as I suck in as deep as I possibly can. Lathing my tongue all around that bulb, I bet those nipples would feel wonderful as I stroke them with the underneath side of my tongue. They are so big and stiff.

I never tire of how you slowly add to the heat. Laura uses her hands to knead and pull nipples while she kisses Trina and then starts to frig her [Laura's hand dropped to Trina's crotch and found a soup of warm pussyjuices, more fluid than she had felt yet in their encounter. Trina had oozed copiously because of Laura's hard sucking and squeezing of her breasts and nipples, and she was churning her hips, frantic to come.] Love that detail of a cunt pumping out cunt juice from the joy of having your nipple sucked. I love finding a cunt swimming in fuck juice. Feeling that juice washing over my hand. Oh geez, you really know how to finish a woman off after all this wonderful loving [Laura knew that the slightest touch would bring her off. She rolled to the side and embraced the beautiful writhing girl, again guiding one plump wet nipple into her mouth while she tenderly slid two fingers across the warm, slippery blossom of Trina's open pussy. She sucked hard on Trina's huge nipple just as her fingers found Trina's exposed clit, and Trina came in a quick, shocking seizure. "Auuggnhhhh!" she cried out, her body buckling as the spasms wrenched her. "Ohhnngg! Unmgh! Oh . . . shit! Ohhnnnn!"] You are the only author who really knows how to show the process of a loving lesbian fuck, how it builds up to the wonderful orgasm. Only you give the details and make them so thrilling and true to life. This is lesbian sex plain and simple. You then show Trina wracked with the pleasure that only a lesbian can supply [The pleasure was excruciating. Her luscious naked body clenched, shuddering as the impact of each orgasmic wave shook her flesh, her breath caught in her throat. Then it escaped in a tight, pathetic whinnying that was enormously arousing to Laura, since she knew the deep, helpless rapture that caused it.]

Laura senses that Trina has one more orgasm in her and moves down to her cunt and spends a little time to get all the cunt candy she desires and then brings Trina to another wrenching orgasm. I just know that Trina's cunt is a soupy mess by now. Juice everywhere. Yum!!!!! I think Trina is now Laura's love slave. I think this captures lesbianism perfectly ["I love to make you come," Laura said. "You're so beautiful when you come."] That says it all. They continue to make love until the flesh can't take anymore. Trina speaks words that are magic to me. She doesn't think any man will be able to please her now. Damn right! Trina then demands more lovemaking and they make love through the night. I love fucking as long as the strength holds out. Then going to sleep holding your spent lover close to your body all entwined together.

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Chapter 112:

One thing I have always enjoyed about Laura's Story is the way you have Laura bond with the women she truly bonds with. There have been women that she was attracted on a purely physical level. Women like Kim, Taneesha, Shayla and a few from the beginning of the story. These women Laura has only coupled with on a sporadic basis. More of a one night stand kind of relationship, though this doesn't really fit. I know one night stand and it is just sex. Laura always connects with her women on an emotional level. She binds at least a small part of her soul to them. I myself have tired of the faceless women who you can't really remember a week later, except for the scorching sex. I want a connection. With Laura when she truly loves a woman I love how she quickly makes love to her again. I feel this so cements the relationship. This forms the deep ties between Laura and her angel that allows the love to flow between them. I have always adored this quick reunion of new lovers. Discovering new flesh is oh so sweet, but having a long-term relationship has its own sweetness. Making love to a woman who knows your body like her own and vice versa. Knowing all the secret nerves and what she craves makes me wet with need. This is what Laura gives her lovers and vicariously

through them, me.

I like how the chapter starts. Laura has just finished with an orgy of lovemaking with Yvette and yet she still hungers for Trina. This is how I am. I always hunger for a lover. Just give me time to rest up and I'm ready to go at least half speed ahead. I never want to deny myself an angel, even if I have to give only because my pussy is exhausted. I am never too tired to fuck a woman. It is cute them having to make sure that Shawnee is asleep. They then quickly fall onto Trina's bed and quickly fuck themselves into quick orgasms. They have to work that edge off.

Another thing I like about Laura is how she compares her lovers both emotionally and physically. We see who they are. Different in their actions and motives and physically we see how each women is a creation of great beauty [The beautiful voluptuousness of Trina's body was so different from the lean, long lines of Yvette's that the contrast thrilled Laura. They were both richly black, about the same hue, but of course Trina's breasts were large, her nipples huge, and it was like being in bed with Rina and Trina at the same time.] Other authors always have the young nubile body for all their characters and thus are unable to draw the distinctions like you do. Life would be boring if we all basically looked the same. Egads, that is embarrassing when Trina's daughter opens the door and catches them in the middle of a 69. Little children are so wonderful in their trusting. Shawnee easily accepts that they are loving each other and accepts it for the natural event that it is. I give Trina credit for so calmly explaining this to her daughter. She is very calm and level headed.

They giggle and flirt waiting for Trina's daughter to go back to sleep but their need becomes to great. This next part is just simply fucking hot [She parted the skirts of her robe with her hands, and spread her firm, shapely, sleek black thighs. Her delectable long pussy was completely visible. She ran her forefinger up and down in the wet, pink channel. Laura reached over and loosened the tie of Trina's robe, pulling it open, looking at her peerless breasts. Then she slid down off the bed to her knees, between Trina's thighs. She looked up into Trina's face, then extended her tongue until it grazed the swollen labia of Trina's open pussy.] I love for a woman to reveal her treasures and stroke herself before me. I love watching women masturbate to orgasm for me. I love just setting and watch a woman pleasure herself until I see her body tightening up and then the resulting explosion of exctacy. Watching her body coil, rock and buck in helpless pleasure. I especially find it hot Laura pulling Trina's robe open and then getting off the bed on her knees and tonguing Trina's delectable pussy. I love being on my knees and having a woman hump my mouth with her cunt. Riding my face to orgasm.

I love the banter between them as Laura starts to lick her to orgasm and Trina is starting to breath in a labored fashion. She knows being quiet is going to be hard and Laura does too but doesn't stop her loving assault on Trina's sweetly flowing cunt. I can't stop either once I get my woman's cunt to pumping love juice down my parched throat. I love this word picture of Trina in the throes of pleasure [Trina was still sitting straight up on the edge of the mattress while Laura licked her pussy, and her large round breasts jiggled as she panted, her thick, swollen black nipples gleaming above Laura's face. Laura had never seen anything more beautiful than this woman's naked body.] This is how I feel; each woman is a masterpiece of beauty that I long for. I want to pleasure them totally and show my great love for their sweet flesh. I always adore the way you describe a woman's breast jiggling around. You are the only author to capture this visual.

It is cute when Laura tells her to lean back and grab a pillow. I hate stifling my moans and screams of coming but sometimes it is necessary and it does have its own dynamic. I just want to have to do it rarely. Love Trina's flailing [She turned her head, flailing with one hand and pulling a pillow close to her face. Laura made her come quickly. It was a violent, wrenching orgasm. Laura was glad Shawna didn't walk in while it was going on. Trina's body convulsed. She whinnied sharply into the pillow, her hips churning, quaking as the spasms rocked her.] I love how you always talk of hip churning and wrenching of hard comes. You allow me to feel these women's orgasms. I love to kiss my lover while I or she is coming down from the blissful high, it makes feel almost like we are one, that peering into her soul with love and gratitude [Laura crawled up onto the bed with her. She embraced her, kissing her very passionately, seeing the throbbing love and gratitude in Trina's glassy eyes as the aftershocks of her orgasm washed over her quivering, delicious body. Tears leaked from the corners of Trina's eyes.] This is what lovemaking is all about. This connection of souls that only two women can achieve. Others can only strive for the brass ring, we actually achieve it.

I always enjoy how you show such full enthusiastic teasing. Other writers talk of teasing and may say they teased their partner but they don't really show the reader. We get no details and thus no warmth from the teasing. You give us the details and show us the exuberance that comes with teasing. The love and mirth such as here [She quickly had Laura on her back, dangling her incredible breasts and nipples in Laura's face, giggling softly as she teased Laura, watching Laura's mouth chase her nipples, catching one briefly, then, as it grew slippery with her saliva, despairing as Trina pulled it away. But it quickly turned into more than play, since they were desperately hungry for each other's flesh.] I can just feel thus heavenly treats escaping from my mouth and my head moving up trying to recapture my nirvana of tit flesh. Feeling those wonderful bulbs slip from my hungry lips and questing tongue make my pussy wet with hunger. I love how you show that the reason we tease is because of the fire it ignites in our womb. It does make you want to consume your lover's sweet flesh with desperate need.

I love how you detail Trina now thrusting her tit deep into Laura's hungry mouth and Laura consuming it and Trina then starting to frig Laura off to a mind blowing orgasm [Trina's wet nipple slipped from her mouth, and Laura came in sharp, rapturous convulsions, unable even to cry out as the deep, shattering spasms rocked her body. Trina crouched over her, fucking her excitedly as she came, then covering Laura's mouth with her own when Laura's breath finally returned in long, agonizing moans. It took several minutes for Laura to recover her senses.] I always love that true detail of losing a nipple from your loving mouth when you must groan out your body's excruciating pleasure of orgasm. I love how Trina continues to fuck during her orgasm prolonging the bliss and then finally kissing her as she comes down from the orgasmic high. I love that intermingling of breath from the labored breath of divine sex.

I never tire of one of Laura's lovers telling her that she never came like this with a man, that now they doubt that a man will ever satisfy them as deeply in the future. I love showing them the truth. I always chuckle when one of Laura's lovers use some Ebonics with her ["We dirty little hoes jist aballin' and ballin'," Trina joked.] They now coil together in a sensual love dance now that the initial fires have been banked [Still hungry for one another, they coiled together again, this time fucking slowly, building a simmering rhythm, taking their time, each skillfully tormenting the other until they were both moaning and twisting uncontrollably. Their smooth, naked bodies slid together as they kissed, then turned slowly into a sixty-nine position, where they had been earlier when discovered by Shawna.] I love fucking after the initial hunger is satiated and one can just concentrate totally on your woman and almost get inside her flesh. Becoming one with her sweet straining flesh. I love how you capture all the different facets of lovemaking from the frenetic to the slow and sensual. You give the reader all facets of lovemaking.

I love how you show that sweet lovemaking draws you so close to your women. The more you make love together the closer you become [They lay entangled together, enjoying the deep, throbbing intimacy, for a long period. Laura had not felt such emotional depth in fucking since her last moments with Jonelle. She realized that something new was beginning with Trina, something very deep, and that Trina recognized it too. They were more solemn with each other now, after this climax. Their relationship had grown from thrilling sex into a much deeper emotional bond, and neither of them knew quite how to approach it. "Can you stay the night?" Trina finally whispered to Laura as they lay, embracing, in the dark.] I love lying in my lovers embrace after an orgasm has spent my energy. Just lying in her sweaty embrace luxuriating in her heavy breathing and feeling our wet bodies sliding together with our body's slow natural rhythms. True deep soul satisfying sex does draw you closer to your women. You have shared something that vast majority of women deny themselves. Only lesbians truly know how to share themselves in this deep mystical way.

They have a sweet parting. They want desperately to sleep together for the night but don't dare with Trina's daughter having caught them in the act of lovemaking. You show their hunger for each other with their sweet words at the door. As usual you are able to show the gentle humor that lovers who care for each other have ["Don't put your tongue in my mouth or I'll drag you back over to that sofa and fuck you senseless," Laura whispered into Trina's thick, sensual lips. Trina giggled and deliberately slithered her tongue between Laura's teeth. "Dare you," she whispered back.] You are the only author who has these little everyday moments of sharing and mirth that lovers always share. These moments are so powerful and truly help you bond to your lover. They part with promises with sweet debauchery for the morrow.

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Chapter 114:

This chapter starts cutely with Laura all in a panic with her tryst with her most recent angel to grace her bed. It is humorous to see her panic over getting some necessary loving. I am writing this after 268 so sometimes one's fears are founded. I have to agree with Laura about Sholandra. Sometimes it simply impossible to refuse a woman when she is demanding that you love her. Are you supposed to turn away from that? I don't think so. Laura is totally in character with her guilt over her indiscretions. She wants to love each woman totally and completely but she can't bring herself to make it exclusively and this causes Laura much consternation and lately true pain. I do feel her pain she is experiencing for Sara right now. You are able to make these strong emotions so strong for the reader.

Trina of course suspects nothing and is very happy to see Laura. They have a nice dinner together and Shawnee is happy to see Laura. I like little kids. I can fully understand how Laura is becoming totally turned on by Trina. I have been in that situation a few times. I leave one woman to go to another. My body quickly revives with thoughts of the sweet loving I'm about to receive from my new angel. I so dearly love to fuck. I can feel Laura's lust rise when Trina puts her daughter to bed and comes back out wearing a nightie. I know my pussy would be flooding with fuck juice. Knowing that my lover is hungering for my body. That soon I will be removing this lovely creation of fabric for the even more divine flesh underneath. Knowing she bought it just for me would almost make me swoon with love.

I will never tire of how you so lovingly describe a woman's body [But Trina's jutting breasts and protruding black nipples, and the slenderness of her waist, and her swelling hips, and her incredible smooth black skin were all silhouetted through the filmy fabric, making her indeed, to Laura, the most exquisite thing she had ever seen. With Sholandra Laura had come about five or six times, but she could instantly feel the warm juices begin to flow as she looked at Trina.] Amen, to Laura's body recovering with fresh fuck need with her new angel. Of course Laura is totally overwhelmed with Trina's beauty. I love how they start to kiss and then you describe first Laura running her hands along the outside of the babydoll and then cupping her hands underneath. This detail alone adds so much heat to the sweet sex flowing between them.

I never tire of this [Trina took Laura's whole ear inside her mouth, kissing and frenching it in a way that made Laura nearly come on the spot.] My ears are a very erogenous zone for me. My pussy just floods when my ears are kissed and caressed. I love how Laura wonders about her lust for Trina but she answers her question [How can I want this woman so much? Laura asked herself as she stumbled toward the bedroom behind Trina, letting her eyes devour the firm black moons of Trina's extraordinary bottom just beneath the hem of the flimsy babydoll. She had her hands on them before the door was even shut.] Seeing such beauty makes one's pussy burn and wet with need. I must have these treasures when the opportunity arises. I can't deny myself. I never tire of the beauty of the female body and spirit.

This next part is so far above what other authors give. Their sex is routine, though sometimes it is still written well enough to be hot. You are able to make your sex seem so spontaneous and life affirming while other authors make their sex seem so scripted. This evidence by ["You have the most beautiful ass I ever saw," Laura panted, pushing Trina forward face down on the bed with her naked ass perched on the edge of the mattress. Laura was a quick, hot whirlwind of lust. Without even removing her own clothes or Trina's nightie, she fell to her knees beside the bed and pushed her face into Trina's crotch, kneading and squeezing the firm, dark globes of Trina's spectacular ass and driving her tongue up into Trina's streaming wet pussy.] I love falling onto my knees and burying my face in a steamy hot wet pussy. I love slurping a hot quim and getting her juices all over my face as I feast. Love Laura kneading that firm ass while feasting. I would have to rip that nightie to the side and open Trina's crack and thumb her sphincter open and plunge my tongue deep into her hot asshole.

I love how Laura murmurs to Trina how wet she is while she is eating her and how Trina is rotating her cunt and ass back into Laura's starving mouth. Then Laura does what I just described above [She slipped two fingers up into Trina's warm, slippery cunt, and began fucking her with them. At the same time, she found the girl's tiny, pinched-closed rectum and began to tickle it with her tongue, finally wriggling her tongue inside. Trina nearly went crazy and came in five seconds, a whinnying seizure of ecstacy, her squeals muffled only by the bedspread as she pushed her face into it, trying not to wake her daughter as Laura killed her with hot fucking.] You kill me with the detail of Trina hiding her squeals of exctacy by burying her face in the bedspread. I can just see her face pressed down into that bedspread and her throat working and hearing that muffled sound. My pussy is spasming here as I just think about this beautiful scene. You finish it off with that wonderful detail of Laura continuing to slide her tongue in and out of Trina's hot asshole. That is Fucking HOT!!!!

I love how Laura's hunger is not satiated. She must have more of Trina's body that is made to be fucked by another woman. She rolls Trina over and quickly strips her nightie and proceeds to devour her tits and quickly brings Trina to another whinnying orgasm. I know each time I got to her breast I would have to worship and love hard, those nipples. Such wonderful hard plump bulbs. I love finding a woman with such nipples (some close but I have yet to find such hard bulbs). I would spend hours worshipping them. Of course Laura devours her cunt into more orgasms making Trina scream into her arm. I love that screaming in my arm when I have to keep quite. I can just feel my cunt pumping and mouth clamping on my arm as I restrain my screams. I love to scream but this does have its own charm, especially screaming in my lover's neck or having her swallowing my screams with her hot tongue down my throat.

Neat dynamic of Laura doing all this fucking with all her clothes on. This is quickly remedied. Love the detail of Trina consuming Laura's sweet flesh as it becomes available and then what Trina does with Laura's nipple [These moments were absolutely thrilling for them both, since Trina took her time, kissing and stroking every inch of Laura's skin as it came into view, and Laura was already frightfully aroused from her rape of Trina. She watched Trina's sensual lips closing over one of her nipples, feeling it being sucked into Trina's warm, wet mouth, feeling Trina's tongue swirling around it, then pinching it up against the back of Trina's front teeth.] You are making my nipples burn with need. I will be needing relief shortly. I love that communication of Trina worrying about her rough loving and Laura telling her to love her nipples harder. Harder is better.

That is such a wonderful moment when Trina is removing her panties and finds them ripped. I chuckled when Laura panics because Sholandra ripped them in her haste. Fortunately, Trina has pussy on the mind [But Trina wasn't in the mood to pause either. Her lips were on Laura's smooth belly, on Laura's inner thighs, and Laura was back in heaven, groaning softly as Trina's lips finally reached her wet, blossoming pussy.] I know what it feels like to have my pussy explode with little direct stimulation. Sometimes I get so wrought up. Trina uses broad tongue strokes and hard clit slurps to bring Laura to a crushing orgasm. Trina is like me and needs more cunt candy. She rolls Laura and tells her she wants some of Laura's sweet ass.

Sigh, instead of some sweet ass worship we get angst. Trina quickly discovers the scratches that Sholandra just put there. Trina is no dummy and Laura can't bluff her way out of the situation. Since she slept with Trina the night before, she can't bluff or lie. Trina is of coursed pissed. I would want to know all the details and can I sleep with her too, but Laura's women want her all to themselves as a rule. I can't blame them to a large degree. She is such a special lover.

That is rather touching how Trina knows that neither of them are saints but she had to change a lot of her views of herself to make love to Laura and to find Laura so soon loving another woman is hard for her to accept. From Trina's view I can fully understand it. You define your characters so well that I can get into their minds and fully understand their thinking. This is something else I so love your writings. I love how Trina puts on a robe signaling the end of the lovemaking and I feel Trina's pain when the tears are coursing down her cheeks. Laura has hurt her deeply. She won't let Laura talk or try and explain. I can feel the pain and anger that Trina is feeling when she won't let Laura touch her as Laura is leaving the apartment. I feel for Laura when she has these painful partings but I have come to so dearly love her bringing these women back into her bed. Also, I love how most of the women slowly come to make peace with the situation and hopefully, open them up to having future relationships with other women.

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Chapter 124:

I started this chapter because Bernice is the one woman looking through the "girl's index" I couldn't quite place how she came into the story. I am not talking about the sex but how, she, Bernice was met by Laura. I simply couldn't place her. I went to your "Girls Index" and clicked on Bernice's first chapter and was little surprised when Cecilia came up as the girl of the chapter. I quickly discover why things are the way they are and my pussy became very glad. The actual chapter starts with Cecilia calling Laura and asking her why she doesn't call anymore and her husband is going out of town for three days. Music to my ears. I get a lot of sweet pussy while the "man" is away. Plus, we have a surprise waiting for us and I think I know what it might be. Now Laura waxes poetic over her last tryst with Cecilia. I can fully understand. Cecilia breasts were full of sweet milk and Laura was able to satisfy her craving for baby's milk. I love reading of Laura getting all wet and having this sweet milk set her belly on fire. I can just see Laura latching onto Cecilia's swollen nipples and see her cheeks work as she sucks that warm milk down her throat.

I think I will have to be reading the proceeding chapter rather soon. It seems that Kim has fucked her asshole hard and deep and very, very well. It is still tingling and throbbing from Kim's reaming. From your wonderful adjectives of reamed and rammed and "baseball bat" I am thinking a nice big invader pounding deep in Laura's asshole. Yum!!!! Now Cecilia does indeed informs Laura that Bernice is the surprise. She has been talking to her about Laura and obviously telling her what a glorious fuck Laura is. Now that my memory has been refreshed I hope the two of them are regular lovers. At first Laura is suspicious. If that comes out of left field like this I can see her being surprised. Cecilia knows how to remove this needless concern ["Let me put it this way," Cecilia said, conspiratorially. She whispered into the phone. "Don't you think two hot wet little black pussies are better than one?" Laura's pulse leaped excitedly. She nearly dropped the phone because her hand began shaking. "I . . . I only want you," she stammered.] Oh yes, my pussy is spasming a little here and I am just reading this and experiencing it like Laura is. I so love getting new pussy that I would be hot, bothered and nervous also. I would be tripping over myself to get to Cecilia's house. I have been in a few situations where I got an unexpected extra woman in the scenario and I was so ecstatic.

Cecilia continues to talk up Bernice. She wants to make sure that Laura is totally primed for some hot threesome fucking. Evidently, the tryst is setup for a week in the future. I guess Kim must be in town because Laura fucks both her and Allison gloriously over the week. I so love reading of Laura fucking her other angels while waiting for the opportunity to fuck the main angel of the current chapter. When Laura arrives at Cecilia's she is naturally a little nervous because she and Cecilia have been intimate many times and Bernice is still a stranger to her. I have been the odd one out before and I am so thankful when the other women help break the ice. While reflecting on the situation, Laura notices [On the other hand, Bernice did have the "wild body" that Cecilia had raved about. She was not statuesque like Cecilia, who had a beautiful classic figure, with a tiny waist and perfect proportions. Bernice was shorter, full-figured, with bigger hips and huge, jutting breasts. But she was also pretty, and also very black-skinned, like Cecilia.] I am so thankful that women come in so many shapes, sizes and colors. I feel like the little girl in the candy store with so many beautiful women to make love to. I am always amazed at how women are each so beautiful in a way that is totally unique to them. It makes each a woman a treasure to savor and taste and value like a priceless treasure.

I enjoy making love to women who have little or no lesbian experiencing and seducing the women who obviously wants seducing. Leading them to new wonders and joys is always so much fun but one does have to help them overcome their awkwardness and shyness. It is nice to meet women who when they look at you [Clearly Bernice knew what was going on. She kept looking at Laura, then at Cecilia, looking at their bodies, as if she were trying to imagine what they looked like in bed together. When her eyes caught Laura's, they seemed to smoke and throb. Laura wondered if she had ever done it with another woman before.] A woman who is definitely sexual and is a predator ready to fuck. I love seeing lesbian heat in the eyes of a new woman for me. It is cute reading of Laura waiting and not so patiently waiting for an opportunity to have Cecilia alone to herself for a few moments. Laura is like me. She is not going to make the first move with a woman who is a stranger to her (I am like this unless that is the only way to move the affair forward to glorious fucking). Finally, Bernice leaves them alone when they she goes to the bathroom. I love how Laura and Cecilia waste absolutely no time in coming together and ramming their tongues deep into each other's yearning mouths. Ah, to feel that first coming together, of lips and deep thrusting tongues. I'm getting squishy here just thinking of a lover's tongue sliding and twining with my tongue and then moving to explore and sweep my hungering mouth. I love that first passionate kiss that turns up the heat so mightily in my already simmering body.

Wow, I really like what I am reading here. Cecilia has known Bernice for years but has not done it with her yet. Now that Laura has awakened her true lesbian lusts she must have this woman. She has told Bernice everything she and Laura have done and how they do it often and Bernice is here now ready to be seduced. I simply love all that this says about Bernice. She is my kind of woman. Laura is still awkward and unsure but Cecilia [Cecilia kissed Laura's nose. "You are a worry wart. Leave it to me. Don't you want to 'fuck' her?" Cecilia beamed. "I just love to use that word. It makes me feel so . . .

evil."] I can't wait to see what happens next. I love how Cecilia goes on and on about Bernice's tits. They must be absolutely divine. It seems Bernice is now ready to have things proceed now that they had time to get to know each other over dinner. When Bernice comes back from the bathroom she [Bernice reappeared. Laura sat on the sofa. Cecilia disappeared to do something related to the baby. Bernice sat down on the sofa too, at the other end from Laura. "You and Cecilia been . . . friends for a long time?" she said, nervously breaking the ice.] I know my pussy would be melting and running with this slow moving forwards toward divine fucking. I so love these moments of that coming together. I get all warm, fluttery in my belly and tingling in my hands and fingers. I can feel myself coming alive.

They banter a little about Bernice knowing Cecilia for years and yet knowing that their relationship is about to changer for the better. I think it is cool that Laura really desires for Bernice to desire and like her. That is how I feel. I want people to like me. I smiled great big when Laura asks Bernice if she can sit beside her. I love this almost innocent way. This way you get that slow buildup that makes one all tingly like [Bernice swallowed. Laura knew instantly that she had never gone to bed with a woman before. This was new, and a little frightening, to her. "Yes," she said softly.] This gentle moving forward that makes the one being seduced almost swoon with building desire. As usual you give the wonderful details like Laura tracing a soft line down Bernice's jaw line and then circling and caressing her lips with her fingertip. I love pounding sex but I simply adore soft, gentle foreplay. I love how Bernice is anxious and a little scared and yet is not hesitant [Her eyes burned into Laura's. She might be uneasy, but she wasn't turning back. Laura's face came closer, and Bernice didn't move. Her dark eyes throbbed.] Sometimes you get that woman who says she wants this new experience and yet it like three steps forward and two back and one forward, two back, etc. It is a thrill fighting through this, though; sometimes it can get a little exasperating. Last year, while her husband was on tour, Simonette told me she wanted to explore her bi feelings she had repressed since puberty. Of course I was willing to help. Hehehe. I nearly pulled my hair out. I went to her house but she just couldn't quite give into her desires. Finally, I just gave up and told to go bed and I would sleep in her guest room. I had tried everything to calm and seduce her and she was just too nervous and worried about being "gay". Grrrrrrr. I went to bed to read and after a while started to masturbate. While doing that she came in. I didn't stop and just locked eyes with her while I masturbated to a crushing orgasm. When I came I made sure to dig my heels into the mattress and arch my back high in the air and just let my twat hump desperately in the air as I continued to pump my cunt heard with three fingers. Through my shrieks and grimacing face I made sure I kept our eyes locked hard. She just stared at me with awe and building desire as I came back to earth and she simply stood up from sitting on the edge of the bed and removed her extra large t-shirt and got in our now love bed. I fucked her extra long and hard for payment for all my frustrations. She really died from coming so hard. I can close my eyes and still see her racked body convulsing through crushing orgasms and the sounds of ecstasy exploding from her throat in desperate sounds of new found pleasure. Needless to say, she gets plenty of pussy now whenever she can work it into her schedule which she keeps as open as possible. Smart girl.

Fortunately, Laura doesn't run into that skittishness here. Bernice may be nervous but she is serious in exploring this new feeling [Their mouths came together. Laura kissed her gently, slowly, but soon forced her tongue between Bernice's teeth. Bernice met it with her own, growing more excited.] I love a woman who has the confidence to move forward. Love this virgin love though because everything starts so gentle and innocent. That slow kissing with just lips and then slowly playing her lips and teeth with your tongue and feeling her excitement build until with gentle sweeps of her teeth she parts them to allow that initial exploration of her sweet mouth. Love the slight variation here also where you force things a little and use gentle pressure to get her to allow access to her mouth. No matter what you do you are guaranteed low moans of wonderous pleasure when your tongue first meets hers and the dance of love begins in her sweet mouth. Naturally, Laura starts to undo the buttons to Bernice's blouse. The time for delay has passed. Now it is time for love. Laura tells her she needs to see Bernice's large breasts. It never hurts to express to your women exactly what you are feeling and how much you find her to be beautiful. It just makes them beam with love and melt with warm pussy juice.

I like the observation that Laura makes about Bernice. Bernice's breasts are large and to lust for but Laura makes the observation that she isn't totally enamored with large breasts. She loves them when she sleeps with a woman with large breasts but she doesn't crave them. I have known a few women who really searched out women with big tits but most are like Laura and me. We love a woman no matter her bust size. I love Maria, Dodie, Polly and others with large breasts but I don't anywhere near obsess on them. Men on the other hand with a lot of exceptions do obsess over breast size. Sometimes almost to the point of hilarity. What you do that goes so beyond all other authors is you go way beyond the description that she has big tits. You actually give us vivid details like [But Bernice's were much, much bigger. Laura bent forward and kissed the deep cleavage between them. Instead of removing Bernice's bra, Laura just pulled the straps off her shoulders, then tugged the bra cups down. Cecilia had been right. Bernice's breasts were incredible. They were not huge and shapeless, or pillowy and soft, or haplessly hanging bags of flesh. They were instead magnificently hard and firm, like full bursting young gourds, with the largest jet-black nipples Laura had ever seen. Bernice's black areolas were so wide that Laura knew you could never get the whole thing into your mouth.] I now have a very, very good picture in my mind of what Bernice's breast look like. I can see them, taste them and heft their weight in my palms. I love those large areolas that are like small saucers. I can't wait to see how Laura loves these large breasts with these wonderful areolas and nipples.

I like it when Laura compliments Bernice on her breasts and she responds [Bernice smiled sweetly. "Everybody says that."] I like the fact that she is used to getting compliments. A woman should be made to feel special. When breasts are large enough to heft I love to do what Laura does here [This movement made the huge beautifully shaped gourds of her young breasts sway in a way that made Laura dizzy with lust. Bernice laid the bra beside them on the sofa. Laura cupped one huge, amazingly firm breast in each palm. She ran her thumbs over the huge black nipples.] There is something about feeling that weight in

your palms. I love it. I love big nipples that you feel resisting your finger strokes and bending them over with strong sweeps of your fingers and then pinching and pulling. I love how Laura does her famous using both hands to hold and squeeze Bernice's tit as she draws that long nipple into her mouth. I can just close my eyes and feel that nipple on my tongue as I get my first real intimate taste of her nipple. Then lathing it with my tongue with gentle clamps and sucks. Then drawing more of her breast in and then loving it strong and hard. I love women with extra sensitive nipples like Bernice that you drive just wild with your ministrations.

I love making love to breasts. To me it is a blast how each woman has such unique breasts. I simply love how I can love them according to their unique shape and size. Here you have a bounty to play with [Laura couldn't stop herself. She sucked as much of the huge, deep-black nipple into her mouth as she could fit. Bernice moaned again. Laura sucked it and tongued it and sucked it, harder, feeling the thick, rubbery center spring up inside her mouth, feeling Bernice's body quiver as her sexual excitement grew.] With a large breast I love stuffing my mouth to overflowing and with large nipples, nipping, sucking, tongue lathing and raking with teeth. Feeling that bud enlarge and stiffen in my mouth. For me that is a huge turn on feeling that bud come to life. I always want to maintain tongue contact or up against my cheek or roof of my mouth. I just so dig feeling a nipple engorging and hardening. Once it is fully erect I so love to play with and then place as deep as possible in my mouth and then giving deep, hard love sucks. It makes my women quiver and moan with need. I love running my fingers in their cunt when doing this because I can feel them just starting to flood with fresh fuck nectars. I love how you continue to describe Bernice's gourd like breast. You are always adding new and exciting details about these women. I love how you make it clear that Laura has got Bernice's nipple completely erect with need and pleasure. I can just suckle a large nipple for hours I feel. Now Laura moves to the other breast and uses both hands which I so love to do. I love squeezing and kneading a large tit while I work my oral magic on her nipple and areola. Plus, I am always making detours to kiss, nuzzle, lick and gently love suck the rest of her breast no matter the size.

Love the detail of Bernice thrashing her head in helpless pleasure. One thing I really love to do is while making love to my woman's breasts and looking up at her beautiful face. Then when I get her notice I work her nipples extra hard. I love the resulting head thrashing, keening, and all those beautiful expressions of pleasure so intense it looks like pain. Makes me suck all the harder. I love feeling her hands grabbing my head and pulling my face hard into her soft tits while she makes animal sounds of rutting pleasure with her face all scrunched up. While doing this exact thing to Bernice, Cecelia walks back in and clearly expresses her thinking [It was this moment that Cecilia chose to return. "Mmmm, you guys got started without me," she said in a smoky, sexy voice.] I'm sure she left the room hoping to find things moving forward nicely upon her return. I so love seeing sex before my eyes that I know exactly what she is feeling now. I love how Cecilia gets on the couch and scoots Laura over and [She forced Laura to move over and scooped up Bernice's breast, the one Laura had just left, in both of her hands, lowering her mouth to the still-wet nipple.] I love how you then tell of Cecilia having a long attraction for Bernice seeing her in the gym and desiring and not knowing how to get her. A couple years ago, Dodie took a new lover Katy and Dodie discovered that Katy desperately wanted her best friend Lindsey. Katy arranged for Lindsey to join them in their workouts in Dodie's gym over her garage. Over several months they seduced her without her even knowing it until she just melted in their arms when the time came. I have since fucked them myself and they are totally hot and absolutely have a fuck hunger for pussy. My kind of girls!!

Love the detail of Cecilia slurping Bernice's nipples already wet with Laura's salvia. That is a huge turn on for me. This is such a truism [Both she and Laura devoured Bernice's huge breasts and nipples passionately. Laura knew how it felt. Having both breasts sucked at once was doubly erotic, and Bernice squirmed and whimpered uncontrollably. Cecilia turned to Laura.] I simply moan, drool, and show the white of my eyes when I have two women working me like this. It really sets my pussy on fire. I am thankful how your women don't love in silence. Laura suggests taking things into the bedroom but Cecilia wants to make love on the sofa. That give and take I so love with your stories. The beauty of multiple lovers is the overwhelming affect you get. While Laura is unfastening Bernice's belt and unzipping her skirt while Cecilia is simply inhaling her nipples. With only one lover I would not be able to pleasure her as directly while removing her clothes. With another I can get the necessities done while my other lover keeps our woman soaring on the clouds of lesbian pleasure. You show this here as well using the spoken word as its own fuck aphrodisiac ["Do you want us to fuck you, baby?" Cecilia panted to her. "Do you want both Laura and I to fuck you and make you come?" "Oh god . . . oh yes!" Bernice gasped, totally consumed now in sexual need, twisting in the sofa cushions, arching her back, pushing her huge incredible breasts up into Cecilia's face.] I love asking a woman if she wants me to fuck her and getting that whimpered or shouted "yes".

This next part is simple pure hot fucking lesbian magic for me. You capture so many things I love and think is so true. Please bear with me while I detail and wax poetic. First I love the detail of Bernice arching her back into Cecilia's loving ministrations on her breasts. Other authors never really show the woman receiving instinctually responding like we really do. That instinctual thrusting to increase pleasure. Now you have Laura where I would dearly love to be [Laura tugged down Bernice's panties, slipping them over her feet and tossing them aside. She pushed open the girl's large, splendid thighs, exposing the wet salmon-pink seam of her pussy. It was a beautiful, fat, succulent pussy, not a sinuous long slash like some but puffy-lipped and very shiny with juice. Girl, you're going to come like you never thought you would, Laura said to herself as she began to lick Bernice's inflamed wet quim.] Here you so loving tell us of Bernice's passion flower and its innate beauty. I have been in this position so many times, removing a woman's panties and then spreading those thighs and just staring and inhaling her passion pit. I know I must get cross-eyed and drool with lust. Then moving in like Laura does here and starting to run my tongue up and down that slit getting my first taste of her divine nectars. I am always thinking that I am going to take my women to heaven so I understand exactly what Laura is thinking here. All my focus is on giving maximum pleasure and thus receiving it right back at me. I live to give. I can just feel Bernice's soft thighs. I would be caressing and kissing them as I spread her open for my loving mouth.

I think you are so right that most men (there has to be exceptions) at best only give a few little licks and a suck or two and then think okay I have done my job and now time to poke her unimaginatively with my dick until I come and then I can roll over and go to sleep. Instead women strive to give this [After that, it was almost impossible to hold on as Bernice hurtled toward a cataclysmic orgasm. Cecilia was devouring her huge black nipples, and Laura, realizing it wouldn't last much longer, was bringing her to the very edge, stabbing Bernice's clit with her tongue, bringing soft whoops of agonizing pleasure from the shuddering girl. Suddenly, without much warning, Bernice's body seized up, and she stopped moaning.] I love how Laura and Cecilia are only focused on giving as much pleasure to Bernice until she is taken to heaven. I love having a woman helping me drive my lover to heaven. I can just feel that stiff nub being assaulted by my tongue. The bigger the clit the more I get to give it strong tongue strokes feeling it against my tongue as I worry it with pleasure with hard tongue strokes and feeling that nub in my mouth when I suck it in with her surrounding flesh into my mouth to love stroke and start sucking harder and harder. Until it is deep love sucks bringing her to a crashing orgasm with plenty of buzz saw tongue fluttering to really drive her insane with my love sucks.

This is what I really live for, bringing my women this [Then she burst in a great, howling rush of hot coming, her body flipping and surging off the sofa, undulating as the spasms of her sharp climax wrenched her. "Aungghhh! Oh . . . aunnggh! Oh oh shit auunngghiiee!" she cried out, straining, quivering, coming sharply.] I just so bask in their pleasure especially when I can feel her clit quivering and hardening in my mouth or feel their vulva pressed against my while in the throes of orgasm. I want my orgasms but this is what I truly long for. I have often wondered about the next part when Bernice confesses ["You didn't warn me it would be like that," she half- whispered, still stunned by it.] I have had so many women tell me that no man ever made her come like I have or with lesbians and experienced bi women they say men can't match lesbian lovemaking and yet they still get something out of their relationships with men. Something they must have an instinctual need for that I can't grasp. I am really loving Cecilia more and more when she says it is time to go in the bedroom because now it is her turn because she is "horny as a tick". She seems so comfortable with her needs. The man supplies the necessities of life and the women supply's the truly memorable lovemaking. I sure do hope that Cecilia and Bernice have continued this liaison and expanded it to other women. Plus, one can't help but get excited with Cecilia's comments of milk for Laura.

I love the dynamic of Bernice pulling the bed cover back while watching Laura and Cecilia strip each other. I would be smiling great big watching that show. I love seeing raw naked lust before my eyes. Finally naked, Laura and Cecilia fall onto the bed. I love how you describe this [She and Cecilia tumbled onto the king-size mattress, coiling together and kissing hungrily.] I love that twining of flesh and hungrily exploring each others mouth in raw wanton hunger. Licking and sucking tongue and exploring her gums, back of her teeth, under her tongue, the roof of her mouth. I want to know her mouth intimately. I think it is humorous and on target when Cecilia is a little greedy when she wants Laura all to herself but Laura wants to make sure Bernice is intimately involved all throughout this tryst. This is how I am; I always want to share. Joann is like Cecilia here, she is a wonderful lover but don't get in the way of her and her tender cunt meat. It really is amazing how many times you have this general dialog with a newbie ["I . . . never did it before," Bernice smiled shyly, stretching out next to Laura. "Did you like what I did to you?" Laura asked, driven almost delirious by Cecilia's hot mouth on her wildly throbbing nipples. "God, yes," Bernice said. "Then do it to me."] The skill may be a little lacking in the beginning but a woman now heeding her true desire will absolutely attack your cunt with a wild passion that will soon have you soaring the clouds on the crescent wave of orgasmic bliss. I love propping myself up and watching a newbie's face as she savors my cunt for the first time. They completely love it.

It seems that Cecilia has a little kinky side to her personality. She wants to squirt her milk into Laura's passion slit while eating her. Now that is a mental picture let me tell you. I like things hot, wet and nasty and this really fits the bill. Yum!!!! Instead Laura pleads with Cecilia to feed her sweet momma's milk. Cecilia being a woman quickly gives her lover what she wants and needs. Bernice evidences the wild enthusiasm of reveling in her first taste of pussy and Cecilia shows the mirth women bring to lovemaking [Without speaking, Bernice slid down between Laura's thighs, and seconds later Laura felt her tongue on her pussy, licking her, flicking her clit, growing quickly more confident and tongue-fucking Laura's pussy more and more aggressively. Meanwhile, the gorgeous Cecilia was dangling her swollen black breasts in Laura's face, moaning and panting as Laura chased her bulging black nipples with her mouth.] A woman new to lesbian love may not exactly know how to love a clit with intimate skill but ALL women know this is the magic button and a newbie really zeroes in on the clit and will lick and suck with wild abandon. Plus, most women will lick and probe all around in a frenzy. They might not being doing it exactly right but I love the wild enthusiasm and that often alone will send me over the edge. I love Cecilia dangling those breasts letting Laura chase those milk swollen nipples.

I love how Cecilia begs Laura to hand fuck her. I love it when you have your women communicate their needs and desires. I love to have my women tell me what they want. Bernice is sucking cunt with the enthusiasm of a newbie and now warm mother's milk is sliding down Laura's throat from her starving sucks on Cecilia's nipples. I envy Laura here. Cecilia comes quickly with these love sucks and Laura ramming her fingers up her tight cunt. I like the mental picture of Laura coming quickly behind Cecilia because of the twine stimulus of mother's milk now overflowing her mouth and a starving mouth inhaling her cunt. I have always loved your vocalizations of pleasure and the great detail of a nipple escaping your mouth during orgasm ["Oh! Unngghh!" she groaned, her hips churning frantically. She tried to keep Cecilia's flowing nipple in her mouth, but it escaped as she cried out. "Ungghh! Ohnngghgh! Auunngghh! Oh god yes yes! Ohhnnggg!"]

I really love how you show the beauty of having love making in front of you. Bernice is totally excited by what she is seeing right before her eyes. It is almost impossible to not get excited with two beautiful women making love right in front of you. The only time I can't get myself roused up is when I have just totally fucked myself out. I can remember times trying to get revived and all I could do is croak a little and flop around a little. My flesh was totally spent. Bernice doesn't have this problem. Her body is nowhere near fucked out. I love reviving to fuck gloriously again. I love how you say Bernice "swarms" over their supine bodies and latches onto Cecilia's milk swollen breast. She needs some warm mama's milk. I love her willfully seeking pleasure and Cecilia so freely giving it. But like all women, Bernice wants to give pleasure also and quickly starts rubbing Laura's pussy. Of course this quickly revives the two women even as they are coming down from their orgasm high. It is neat how you show Bernice is moaning right along with them because she is deriving so much pleasure by her giving of pleasure.

I think it is pretty cool how you describe this as a confusing fuck. They are simply writhing together as they suck, rub and undulate together in their frantic need. Both Bernice and Laura quickly latch onto a tit and start sucking mother's milk with greedy abandon driving Cecilia wild in the process I am sure. I have been involved in many a threesome where we simply writhe together like a nest of garden snakes, sucking, rubbing, tonguing, tribbing in many positions until we explode with coming. I love how Laura once more latches onto Bernice's large nipples and sucks her to orgasm. I love having a tit in my mouth when I make a woman come. I'm desperately trying to pump burning pleasure to her spasming cunt. What I so love about your writings is you show how your sex doesn't have to just end after the initial sex. One can ratchet up the heat to even higher levels of ecstasy as here [Bernice ended up on her back with both Laura and Cecilia fucking her. They each had a grip on one of her huge breasts, sucking and tormenting her gigantic nipples passionately. Cecilia's hand was in Bernice's pussy, rubbing it excitedly, while Laura's had slipped under her firm buns to her asscrack, and she was slowly insinuating her forefinger up into Bernice's ass.] One simply takes their women higher. I love to have that finger or two worked up my clenching asshole when I am being taken higher and higher. It is such a spark to womb and belly. Conversely, I love getting my fingers lubed up in my woman's cunt juices and work my fingers past her tight sphincter and start stroking and twisting my fingers with little raking motions into her bowels. Stroking pleasure into her asshole. I grinned great big when Bernice just turns her head towards Laura with that big question in her eyes. Are you fucking me in my asshole? and oh my god it feels SO good and its going to make my cunt have a searing orgasm like [A few seconds later, Bernice came with shocking violence, her body convulsing under Cecilia's and Laura's rough caresses, her cries of release throttled inside her throat by the fierce uprush of her climax. Her hips churned wildly, and Cecilia's and Laura's hands worked miracles, while their mouths devoured the girl's incredible huge black nipples.] I so adore how you show women working hard to give their woman maximum pleasure by continuing to work her pussy, breast and or asshole while she comes to give her the maximum pleasure her body can give her. I so adore and worship having my body worked during orgasm to give me maximum pleasure. Most of my women are so great at this and I'm teaching the ones who need more skill at this.

Now Bernice comes like I want all my women too, with great shocking loving violence. Their sweet bodies ripped apart with divine pleasure as evidence here ["Awwoonngggg! Ohnnggmmm! Oh shit . . . awwoonngggg!" she moaned, undulating, her pretty face torn with ecstasy, her very large, delectable breasts jiggling frantically as she came.] Other authors have their women have great orgasms but they forget to really show it. The women may scream out once and convulse a little but you show a truly great orgasm. You show how a woman's face is absolutely slashed with pained pleasure during orgasm. I just gaze with hypnotic fascination at a woman's body during a woman's orgasm. I love it and long to produce such grimaces of pleasure. Then you show with great clarity a woman's breasts racing and rolling on her chest as she rocks in ecstasy. Plus, only you really capture the jackknifing, buckling, flipping and ripping contractions of heavenly orgasms. I so love to feel my body reacting in such a manner with soul divine pleasure exploding out from my spasming cunt.

I love how you show the stroking and whispering of afterglow when you stroke and cradle you lover while cooing sweet love to her. Gently bringing her back to Earth from her orgasm high. Now Laura is ready to be the Oreo middle between her current angels. Smart girl!!!! Love Cecilia's response ["Mmmmm," Cecilia grinned. "You mean you be wanting me and Bernice to pin you between us and fuck you, right?"] Living with two women I get this a lot and am so thankful [Both girls smiled and began to swarm all over Laura's naked body. Bernice kissed her, frenching Laura ardently, then dropping her mouth to Laura's breasts, sucking Laura's nipples feverishly. Cecila was behind her, kissing her naked back and shoulders, her hands encircling Laura from behind and squeezing Laura's breasts as Cecilia sucked them.] I love to have my tits worked by one woman while another works her magic with her mouth. I love to have all my body loved and want to be kissed, caressed, and stroked all over my body. I really like that phrase of surrendering her body to her women. I do that. Giving myself totally to my women.

I like how you show Bernice's confidence growing with each taste of pussy [Bernice slid down to her pussy again, and now that she had done it once, seemed determined to improve her skills, licking and tongue-fucking Laura's hot, wet quim in a heated frenzy. Laura nearly climbed the walls, held in check only by Cecilia's beautiful naked black breasts brushing her face, Cecilia's swollen, bulbous nipples teasing her lips.] This is so true. When a woman accepts her love for pussy she wants more and more and quickly at that. I love giving my wet pussy to my newbie lovers with their wild enthusiasm. I have often had my cunt being devoured while another lover stuffs her tit into my hungry mouth. What heaven on earth. Receiving pleasure while I am giving it. Now Laura starts her "nuclear meltdown" stroking Cecilia's breast hard to pump warm mother's milk into her greedy mouth. Greed like this is such a good thing. That is such a sweet detail of Laura weeping tears of joy with this divine orgasm. Cecilia with her milk sensitive nipples has the wonderful pleasure of coming also. I have almost come with breast loving but never the brass ring like Cecilia here. I am deeply envious of her.

It is so cute when Bernice is all wide eyed seeing orgasms like this right before her eyes. I have been in this situation before and I love seeing this stunned wonder on their faces. I love the sweet banter and caressing with words. Cecilia lets Bernice know that she, Bernice, is still new to this sweet lesbian loving and will quickly learn all its secrets. I smiled great big when Bernice shakes her head vigorously no when Cecilia asks if she is ready to go home. I have to love a girl like that. I like reading of long time friends finally consummating their love for each other. I have hand the honor of helping this sweet communion to come to pass. Helping one woman seduce her long time friend into the world of lesbianism and more importantly hot lesbian fucking and loving. Being a voyeur I really like this next part [Lying beside them on the huge bed, she propped up her head on her hand and watched them. Even though she had just had a very intense climax herself, it was wildly erotic, especially because both women were already so desirable to her. They kissed it seemed forever, infinitely sensual, their wet pink tongues intermingling while they caressed one another's cheeks, ears, hair, necks. Then their kissing grew hotter, more urgent, and Laura could hear their breath quicken.] I love watching women make love right before my eyes. Then you caress me with the sweet details of slowly twining tongues in a dance of love. Then you give the detail that absolutely no one else gives of stroking and caressing your lover with you hands. I love to caress my women and to be caressed. The tactile adds so much to the sweet pleasure

in our mouths.

I like you showing how Cecilia is learning and making love to Bernice's breasts with slow patient focus and using gentle strength to pour love and pleasure into your lover's breasts. This is shown here [She let Bernice feel her teeth on the wide, black areolas, but never bit them, letting Bernice instead relish the anticipation, sucking them hard, then catching them in her teeth again, making Bernice sigh and quiver.] This is how you really drive you women wild with pleasure and fuck need. Laura observes this tit loving and realizing the desire and lust Cecilia has had for years for her friend. Now the women get in a sixty-nine and start sucking and tonguing with abandon. I have a big smile when Laura is starting to get horny seeing this great loving. This is why I love watching women make love before my eyes [Finally, they were squirming and writhing, their beautiful smooth bodies wriggling together, their panting and whimpering more and more desperate. Laura knew they were going to come any second, both of them, and she watched as Cecilia again shifted position, bringing her swollen breasts to Bernice's mouth, giving her wish.] You never exactly know what you are going too blessed with seeing.

Now it is time for Bernice to experience warm mother's milk. She wants to experience what she has seen Laura experience. She places a plump milk swollen nipple in her mouth and sucks hard to get the milk flowing down her starving throat while also using her free hand to frig Cecilia's sopping wet cunt. Again you show how you use all your abilities to love your women. Other authors seem constantly to forget this using of mouth AND hands to love your woman. Of course this has to be the result [Bernice's mouth flooded with Cecilia's milk, so much that it leaked out the sides as she sucked and groaned, coming immediately. Her hand in Cecilia's pussy, as well as her sharp, insistent lips on Cecilia's flowing nipples, quickly made Cecilia come too, a slow, undulating orgasm that wrenched her delicious flesh.] I like my sex hot and wet and this leaking of warm milk is a real turn on for me. I love feeling a sweat slicked body rubbing or even just gently undulating or resting against mine.

I love Laura's greed here. This kind of greed is such a good thing. Greed that is inspired by tender sopping wet cunt meat calling to you like here [Laura could not keep herself from them. Bernice's fat, wet, succulent pussy was close to her, and she had her mouth on it in a second, stabbing Bernice's clit and bringing her to a second, jolting orgasm. This one took Bernice by surprise as it welled up out of the very intense orgasm she was already having and transformed it into a fierce, wrenching explosion.] So many times I have had to answer the call of sweet pussy that needed complete devouring until it was pumping spastically into my starving mouth with my woman screaming out her extreme pleasure. I so love having a woman come in mouth pumping her love cream onto my starving questing tongue. Ah, sweet rupturing orgasm with the losing of your tit treat ["Auunngghh!" she groaned, her face contorted in rapture as Cecilia's leaking nipple slipped from her lips. "Ohnngg! Oh shit . . . yes oh god Laura . . . unh! Unh! Fuck me yes yes! Auuggnnhh!"] I FUCKING love your sex. I feel another masturbation session coming on. I'm in real need here. Then later tonight I'm going to fuck Joann and Maria blind.

They are not quite finished with this magical, mystical union. Cecilia and Bernice must give Laura one more orgasm before they part. They need to make Laura the Oreo one more time. I love it when lust just controls the body and makes one seek yet more pleasure. I love fucking until I am just fucked out. I want all the pleasure I can grasp. I really like this description of this sweet fucking [This time they both fucked Laura, taking turns sucking her nipples and licking her pussy, then squeezing her between their smooth, delicious bodies and literally rubbing her into a hot, squealing climax that left her breathless and stunned.] I so love the rubbing of bodies. I just swoon with this heavenly friction. I love feeling a woman's body rubbing me from head to toe if possible. Finally, Laura must part to get ready for work the next day. I fully understand her looking on Bernice and Cecilia in Cecilia's bed completely naked knowing they will be fucking heatedly again once their flesh has rested enough to commence sweet fucking again. Laura leaves with a promise from Cecilia that Bernice won't get all of her sweet mother's milk. How sweet. I am smiling great big.

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Chapter 129:

This chapter starts off with Laura in a little bit of a quandary. It seems she has repaired her relationship with Sholandra. Reading these chapters again now out of sequence I can't remember what caused the rift and the wonderful sex is unknown to me now. Sholandra is a fuck cat like me and I know it must have been heavenly. I love women who are wild and demanding in bed. I think of women like Joann, Sholandra and Jane as wild, hard, take control kind of lovers. What I really love about this saga is it has allowed you to show so many different kinds of lovers. You have lovers like Dawn who is like me who likes it rough and fucks with focus but without that wild take control streak. Then you show us the Tamara, Jonelle, Trina and my Maria. I think of these women as soft, pliant and submissive to differing degrees. With your stories I get to relive making love to all these kind of lovers. I have always thought of myself as kind of a mirror. I always try to reflect back to my lovers what they need of me. Plus, I try to be with good, nice women because that brings out the best in me.

One can tell that Sholandra is a woman who likes fucking with Laura and Rhonda but is not really gay or that bi. She has her male lovers and she really needs to cut her fingernails. Reminds of the joke about what you call a lesbian with long fingernails. Dateless. Joann who likes to rake you keeps her nails nice and very short thus she only leaves welts which quickly fade away. With her wounds she has to worry about Trina who evidently is very jealous. I make that clear up front that I am seeing other women and that I want to love you but don't try to clip my wings. Of course, Laura has the same exact feelings as Trina. It kills her when Sholandra upon their time of parting announces she plans to fuck Rhonda this very night and Laura knows she has at least one male lover. This having other lovers has always hurt Laura deeply like Sara with Evangeline. Me, I love my women to have other lovers and I'm always hoping to get an invite so to speak. I am like Dawn, why be jealous.

I had to smile when Laura in her thoughts of jealousy over Sholandra contemplates the woman she has made love too in the past three weeks and beats herself up over it. She thinks of herself as a slut. I have always thought of that as man's world trying to control us women. They are out and about and have multiple partners and they are just getting some and proving themselves and if I do that I am a slut. Well, my answer is fuck them. Back in World War II they encouraged women to "entertain" the troops and then tried to crush us when they discovered that we liked this freedom to "play the field" and then made laws to crush our new found freedom. FUCK them!!! I love looking back over my recent past and seeing the woman I have fucked. I deserve to have this freedom with out the guilt that man tries to place on our neck.

While continuing to beat herself up one night she gets a most wonderful discovery. Who is waiting at her apartment for Laura to get home is the divine Bernice. Of yeah, this happens to me from time to time and I have done it to lovers. Showing up at a lover's place unannounced hoping for some loving. It is wonderful with my home situation or if one is totally single. Feel free to drop by any time. I would almost never not be able to invite you in for what we both know we want. When I show up unannounced it almost always for one thing: I want you bad and need to have right then. Lets see how things

progress. This may seem trivial to many readers but I really enjoy the fact that you let your characters just converse in that everyday kind of way that reflects real life ["Hi," she smiled. "Can I hold your groceries?" "Bernice!" Laura smiled. "What are you doing here?" "Give me those before you drop them." Laura gave her a playful frown. "Only if you come upstairs and have a pork chop with me, so I won't have to eat alone."] I like this so much because this is the kind of conversations that occur in real life. Other authors keep the dialog to a minimum or the conservation around the sex act or seduction itself. I always have to smile when Laura frets over her comments being taken sexually. Though, she immediately realizes that Bernice is at her place for only one reason. To Fuck. I would say the same basic thing with the whole idea of getting her in my bed, sofa or on the floor as soon as possible to fuck her glorious body.

I really like how instead of them getting right into the sex they instead actually cook a meal with Laura doing the salad and Bernice cooking the pork chops. How real life!!! I simply love these little touches that remind me of real life. Cooking a meal knowing that the dessert will be sweet, sopping wet cunt meat dying to be devoured. Cunt cream sliding down my greedy throat. You give us real life when Bernice makes it absolutely clear why she came over [Drying off her hands, Bernice turned to Laura in the kitchen. "Nice as this is," she said, "I didn't come over here to cook and wash dishes." She grinned

saucily at Laura. "And what did you come over here for?" Laura acted naive. Without answering, Bernice walked past Laura into the living room. Laura followed her. Bernice turned. Slowly, she began to unbutton her blouse.] Seduction is sweet and such a pleasant experience but I love having women where we know exactly what we want and get right to business. Letting your woman know that you are hot for her and you need her to put your fire out that only intense prolonged fucking can do. Repeated orgasms to wring my flesh with sweet wrenching bliss until I am satiated and exhausted. Holding my spent lover(s) close to my sweaty body and going to Morpheus in each other's arms.

I like how you tell of the flutter in Laura's cunt while she watches Bernice remove her blouse. I always feel that happy little flutter deep in my pussy that tells me that soon sweet fucking will be commencing. I love that warm tingling feeling that sweeps my body and flushes my skin with desire. I like how Bernice asks Laura if she wants to remover her bra or should she do it. I am equally happy either way. I love for a woman to undress for me. Just sitting their and watching her reveal her sweet flesh to my hungry eyes. Never knowing how she will reveal herself to me. Conversely, I love to remove the clothing myself and taking the lead in unwrapping my present. I can feel myself taking Bernice's off. Reaching around her from the front and feeling the warmth of her body on my arms as I reach for her clasp since it is in the back. I would be up close feeling those breasts pressing into mine. I can feel our faces almost touching and our eyes making that smoking contact with our mouths seeking each other by the magnetism of our desire. I can just feel myself unclasping Bernice's bra and then moving my arms to embrace her and pull her face to mine as I bury my tongue deep into her warm wet mouth feeling her tongue twining with mine and slithering deep into my waiting mouth stroking my mouth and tongue with her desire for me.

Bernice removes her bra for Laura revealing her heavenly breasts to Laura. I know my pussy would pulse with cunt cream seeing that bra go limp and start sliding off her tits as she skims her straps down and off her arms. Of yeah, I am head lulling here thinking of how I feel when an angel's breasts are revealed to my starving eyes. Knowing that very, very soon I will be feasting on them and hearing my woman keen in the pleasure I am sucking, licking and kneading in her breasts knowing that I making her pussy sopping wet with need. Other authors just say the bra comes off and never, ever describe the woman's breasts while you [Laura couldn't take her eyes off them. She had forgotten how hard and elongated, gourdlike, they were; she had forgotten how huge Bernice's jet-black nipples were. How could I forget? she wondered.] This is what I need to form a mental picture of Bernice's heavenly gourds of tit flesh. Huge nipples to be swallowed and sucked hard. Laura leads her to her bedroom.

Here, Laura strips off her own blouse and bra and now does what I simply and love to do [Now they were both naked from the waist up. Laura moved forward until her nipples brushed Bernice's huge ones, remembering how excited she and Sholandra had got doing the same thing only yesterday. She and Bernice both looked down at their nipples touching. Laura's arms went around Bernice's shoulders, and Bernice's hands moved up Laura's back as their mouths came together. They kissed tentatively at first, then more aggressively, their mouths curving together, their tongues intermingling.] As I guess I have made clear I love kissing and I'm very tactile. I love that removing of one's top and then bringing our naked boobs together and pressing them together. Feeling our tits flattening and mating while our harden nipples dig into each other. I love moving in close and mating our bellies while our hungry mouths meld tight while we explore each other's mouths. Holding each other's heads with our hand(s) to keep that divine pressure of locked mouths tight and strong. Stroking and caressing every crevice and secret crease before stroking our tongues as deep as possible into our mouths. Twining and sucking on your lover's tongue, sliding up and down its length. This just makes me all tingling especially in my tits and pussy. I can just feel my love nectars spiking. One thing I have never read is that moving your thigh into your lover's crotch and making a nice snug fit. Nature always takes over and soon your groin is sliding up and down that heavenly thigh. If we have gotten at least our thighs and groins naked soon I have her thigh all slavered up and I'm humping for all I'm worth. I love to lean back holding onto her shoulders and just sweeping my cunt hard into and up and down on her thigh. My lovers know to hold onto me when I come because I find that tension from leaning back and working my stomach muscles so hard makes my womb just explode and tear itself apart when my orgasm shocks and rips me apart with soul deep ecstasy. You are guaranteed to hear a lot of screaming while I trash around lost in total ecstasy. My legs always give out and I need support as I whimper into your body, holding you tight to me so I can feel every beautiful inch of your skin pressed against my as my orgasm fades away into those heavenly aftershocks that just make me mewl and twitch while I feel those heavenly aftershocks and tremors deep in my belly.

You now give me that communication that I have come to crave so. Bernice tells Laura that she loves fucking with Cecilia but she can sense deep in her soul that fucking with Laura will bring her soul deep pleasure. Cecilia is a great fuck but she is merely the pupil while Laura is the master. I love reading your women communicating their desire and love for each other. In real life I think we are all guilty of not expressing ourselves enough to the women in our life. Telling how much we desire them and want them in our bed. And for those we have a true relationship with expressing our pleasure in their very company and how wonderful they are and how much we enjoy being in their presence. I know this and still I have to remind myself to express the obvious to my archangels.

I have always marveled how you capture the simple things in lovemaking like [Laura brought her hands around Bernice's naked upper body to her large breasts, cupping them, squeezing them gently. They were phenomenally firm.] Other authors just rush through these heavenly moments in their hurry to suck nipple and eat pussy which is the grand prize but showing this slower side of lovemaking is what makes sex so special and that only you really capture. I liked the comment of guys fucking her big tits. I love for women to fuck the valley I make with my tits. I love feeling whatever the cock shape is pushing through my pressed together tits. With the bigger ones I like and giggle when I feel them hitting my chin and bending my head back and down and sucking the head. Wish I could make it come in my mouth. I always wanted a man's come in me and not on me. All this talking of titty fucking has gotten Laura's motor revving [She lowered her mouth to one of the gourd-shaped globes, cradling it in her palm, and ran her tongue sensually all over Bernice's huge areola and nipple. Bernice trembled. Laura opened her mouth and sucked as much of Bernice's nipple into it as she could fit. She could feel the huge bud thicken as she sucked and tongued it. Bernice moaned softly.] Oh yeah, I love that moment of cradling a beautiful breast and lowering my mouth to her beautiful flesh. My first kisses and light tongue stroking. Smelling her divine skin up close and getting my first taste of her tit flesh. I just love breathing in deep when I get my nose near my women. Never sure how I am going to love your breast initially but I love that moment of first drawing that nipple into my mouth. Feeling its unique qualities and feeling it harden and stiffening if I haven't already excited to the max. I so love feeling a nipple swelling and becoming turgid in mouth. Hardening and making it ready for hard tongue lashes and deep throat sucks interspersed with gentle tongue lathing and sensual suckling. I so worship and adore the fuck sounds this produces in my lovers. Feeling their back arch and them grabbing my head to press in tight. Bringing my hand up to their arched back and pressing in to help them to lock their breast to my starving mouth.

I love smaller breasts like Joann's but I love breasts like Dodie and Maria. Breasts where you strain to swallow as much nipple and areola as possible and yet so much is left to worship and adore and make love too. I love seeing Bernice's knee's weakening with need and Laura guiding her over to the bed. Laura is in love with her extra sensitive nipples. I love them finishing stripping once on the bed. Their fuck hunger must now be satiated. Bernice requests something I have shown many a woman how to do ["I want you to suck my nipples real hard," Bernice said softly, her eyes full of murky sex. "I never felt anybody do it like you. Not even Cecilia. I thought I was going to come, when you did it over at her house. Sort of feel that way now, too."] Man's world has so brainwashed women to not be forceful and strong and thus they are shocked when they are shown how good strong lovemaking just makes their bodies explode with fucking pleasure. The only hard the vast majority get is clumsy het fucking. I show them the real way to het fuck. Strength with skill.

Bernice is one of those lucky girls who can come with breast loving alone. I need at least some good hand clitoral stimulation. I'm more than happy to masturbate while you put all your efforts pleasuring my breasts. I love helping a lover get me off. Bernice is one lucky girl being able to get there with just Laura's mouth and hands on her breast. I really, really love how Bernice expresses that just this sweet coupling and this talk almost has her coming once again showing what sweet communicating can stimulate. Women love the soul and mind and thus such bliss as this is so routinely produced. You now give

me the details that no one else wants or even desires to give it seems. They always just talk of sucking the nipple without any true details while you give [Now Laura held one of Bernice's breasts in each hand and began to lick and suck the huge black nipples hungrily. It took only a few seconds for Bernice to become almost delirious with sexual excitement. She panted and squirmed, looking down at Laura's mouth on her nipples, gasping each time Laura sucked her hard. Laura let her feel just a touch of teeth on her areolas, guessing that it was what had made her so excited at Cecilia's, what had made Laura different. And she was right. Bernice shivered sharply each time she felt Laura's teeth on her nipples, and Laura knew she could make her come. Laura held both firm gourds in her hands, squeezing them ever more roughly, and sucking Bernice's wide jet-black nipples voraciously, pinching the wet buds in her fingers, sucking them again. Bernice went wild.] Other authors might give one of these details and think they have done a good job but only you just make them flow like a sweet newborn stream. This is how lesbians truly love their lover's tits. We do everything basically. You are the only author to really detail how this loving affects their creations. You actually show us the divine pleasure Bernice is feeling. Other authors only say they felt the pleasure without showing us. That is like watching a movie with your eyes closed. You miss half of what is happening.

One thing I have always enjoyed is relishing and reveling in the vocalizations of your women in the throes of pleasure ["Oh! Oh god! Ungghhh! Oh Laura . . . oh god! Yes! Yes! Hard . . . harder! Yes yes! Unghhh!"] I try and teach the quieter women I make love to express themselves and their pleasure. I long and need to hear my women's pleasure. It turns me on and strokes my ego I must admit. I will almost beg if I have to get you to express your pleasure. Don't let man's brainwashing fuck with your ability to express the pleasure that is pouring through your pores. You show how Laura is continuing her love assault on Bernice's lovely nipples and how Laura eggs and encourages Bernice on in her reach for nirvana. I love to hear and feel the bed moaning and quaking in the passionate throes of Bernice's body bucking as her orgasm approaches. I can only recall a few women I have had coming with just breast stimulation but I have seen many times while loving a woman's breast that bucking and swirling of hips in an uncontrollable dance of need and lust. I so love that especially when I reach down with one hand to frig her channel and clit to push her over the edge. The result being what I live for ["Auuggnnnhhh!" she groaned, thrashing under Laura, her body undulating as the waves of ecstasy poured through her. "Ohnngg! Unghh! Oh god! Auungghhiiieee!" The orgasm gripped her very hard, and aftershocks from it were still making her quiver involuntarily as Laura gathered the girl into her arms, kissing her cheek, and purring to her, squeezing Bernice's incredible breasts more gently now. As the fierce pleasure released her, Bernice turned her lips to Laura's. They kissed deeply, a more emotional kiss than before, especially from Bernice.] I so love frigging a sodden cunt and sucking a woman's tits off in this basic position because I then take them in my loving arms when I can't pump anymore pleasure into their bodies and I get to feel them coming in my arms and their screams are so near my ears and I can see the small details of the sweat drops and rivulets on their skin, dilated eyes, the nipples swelling and hardening just that extra fraction. I really swooned at that heavenly detail of Bernice limply turning her face to Laura and their mouths coming together and kissing their deep love for each other. I love kissing in those first moments of post coital time when you just feel your souls twining with your tongues as they stroke each other deep in our languidly hungry mouths. These kisses are just so languid and softly passionate. My pussy just quivered here thinking of such kisses. I need some real, real soon I do believe.

You now flood me with the sweet banter of lovers in love and play. Bernice gushes that Laura is the best. Cecilia is rocking her pussy but Laura is rocking her soul. I love Laura's confidence in her abilities ["You're right, I do know things," Laura whispered to her. "I know how to make you come better than anybody."] Bernice is just giddy over how Laura sucked her so hard and gave her just the right level of love nips on her nipples. All this talking of Laura's supreme skills is getting Bernice excited yet again. Verbal banter and foreplay always gets me hot, excited and wet. Bernice is ready to give pleasure and loves Laura's breast and then moves to Laura's pretty pink pussy. I too have had women of color just coo and gasp over my pink kitty. White skin does highlight our beautiful cunts. By now Laura is pleading with Bernice to make love to her quivering flower. To drink deep its divine nectars of love and passion. I so love to have my woman attack my cunt with total focus and deep hunger [Bernice did. She had no shyness but went full-speed ahead, sucking and tongue-fucking Laura's aching pussy, sliding two fingers into it and fucking Laura with them while she licked. Laura went wild. She writhed and undulated, thoroughly enjoying Bernice's hunger for her pussy, feeling the pressure build, the tension mount. When she was about to come, she panted to Bernice.] I love having my woman just devouring my cunt with mouth and fingers and starting that almost mystical coiling and building of tension deep in my belly. Feeling those first feathery contractions in my womb though sometimes I am given no warning at all before my womb just explodes with sudden pulverizing shocks of crushing, heavenly pleasure. It feels like a pile driver is shocking waves of the purest bliss out from my rupturing cunt. I so love feeling my cunt and womb exploding and tearing me apart with sweet tearing bliss.

We know how the neat addition of verbal encouragement adds to the loving with Laura pleading with Bernice to move up so she can suck her nipple when she comes. What lover can resist that kind of wonderful plea? I love the mental picture of Bernice moving up and Laura's hands reaching out to feed that wonderful tit to her starving mouth and Bernice moving her body to help this heavenly moment occurring. I can just feel that nipple and then areola slipping into my warm mouth and feeling her nipple stiffen and areola steeple. I so love lathing that beautiful tit flesh while suckling. Then clamping down with hard sucks and strong tongue strokes with some good pulling back with my mouth to increase that tension in her tit. Bernice works to give as well as receive and starts to frig Laura with her fingers. I so love feeling fingers pumping my channel and scissoring my clit or maybe three fingers frigging up my cunt with a thumb swirling over my clit. I so love being in this basic position and looking down and seeing my woman digitally loving my cunt. Just the visual makes my belly coil with additional tendrils of pleasure. Laura doesn't last long with this divine stimulation and the result is [Bernice's nipple slipped from her mouth as she groaned and thrashed, climaxing in deep, shocking tremors and shuddering sharply as each one rolled through her. It was a terrific climax, and she was still stunned by it for minutes afterward. Bernice hadn't moved, and still swished her amazingly firm breasts in Laura's face.] I have had many a nipple slip from my mouth when groans and screams erupt from my clenching flesh. I so love screaming out my pleasure. I always love reading of your characters orgasms. The sheer crushing bliss you make so clear they are experiencing. You are the only author who gives me the bliss. Other authors just don't quite do it. They don't give the details that you do. They really only say it while you show it through your loving words. I like how this orgasm ends with that gentle mirth of Bernice gently brushing Laura's face with her beautiful tits. That is so cute and loving at the same. I'm smiling remembering when this dynamic from well endowed lovers has been done to and for me. I love that weight and smooth rubbing of tit flesh on my face and with the nipple making its soft furrows. I love these little things you show of lovers sharing themselves.

I am smiling when Bernice comments on how her tits just seem to make people come. I think I know why!! They're fucking wonderful. They continue making love for the next hour and half. I love reading and thinking about fucking for hours. The thrilling cunt searing orgasms such fucking produces. Sigh. Love the final orgasm with Bernice straddling Laura and feeding her tits again to Laura's starving mouth and frigging each other off. I can just feel their weight against my face and my mouth stuffed to the brim with divine tit flesh with me performing my magic on them. Sigh, what a lovely position knowing how Bernice would feel as she came trashing and squealing against me. Using one hand to frig her off and the other to clasp her as close to me as possible to inhale her tit as I came too. Our bodies smacking, grinding and sliding against each other in our mutual orgasm. I know I would lose that tit with my thrashing and I would try to squirm up and lock mouths to plunge my tongue deep in her mouth, stroking and twining our tongues hard together. Letting our moans of pleasure intermingle and feeling our whole bodies quaking together in sweet soul binding bliss.

Time is running short and they are totally fucked out. I love the giddy feeling that Laura is feeling watching Bernice stuff her breast back into her bra. I would be thinking I can't wait to suck them again and to fuck this divine creature as soon as possible and to share her with others. I love reading that Bernice so easily accepts this true part of her nature. She is not letting man's world fuck her discovery of her true self. I think all women have at least some gay tendencies at their very core but most will never allow this to escape because of the brainwashing they have endured. I think the world is changing though and younger women are so much freer in seeking this inner nature out. Eventually we will overcome man's fucking control. Their stupid laws and perversion of religions.

I had to laugh when Bernice hears, as she is leaving, Randi on the answering service whining for Laura. Saying she has gotten rid of her boyfriend and needs to feel Laura's tongue deep inside her cunt and vice versa. Laura is her usual mortified self but Bernice is amused. She is not jealous and likes the idea Laura has multiple girlfriends while she has multiple boyfriends. Bernice knows how to seek out pleasure. Hopefully with time her bi nature is swinging to the female world like it has for Laura. Keeping the guys for a taste of strange from time to time. They part with promises to keep in touch after Bernice teases Laura about Randi's phone call. What woman wouldn't want to have Laura's long tongue snaking up her hot frothing pussy stroking out promises of bliss and love?

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Chapter 139:

This chapter starts with Laura reflecting on Trina whom she is deeply in love with at this time and Randi. With Randi she is remembering glorious fucking from the previous night. I always felt for Laura when she has deep pain over one of her lovers. Reading these out of order I am not sure why Laura is reflecting on Trina. I know why she is basking in memories of Randi. This is one hot woman who knows how to fuck. I have always loved Randi's fuck hunger. We find that Randi and Laura are sharing some mild BDSM. This is the level I like. I like having my wrists and ankles tied up. Blindfolds are okay too but I do miss not seeing everything but if my lover wants it I am game. I love feeling helpless. I just don't want the pain that Karen and Earlene shared with Laura. I have no desire to explore the "murky" depths that Karen liked to explore. Finally Trina calls Laura and we discover the reason for Laura's melancholy. Trina is getting married soon and Laura is all tore up over the soon to happen nuptials. Laura though she has other lovers but she can't stand to share her lovers with others. I have always thought of this as Laura's tragic flaw. Laura has really beaten herself up over this over the years. I always feel a little sad when I see Laura in such pain.

Though they tell each other they miss each other, Laura cannot bring herself to let Trina meet her for a rendezvous of sweet lovemaking. It seems that just seeing Trina would hurt and making love to her would kill her. I would not have that problem at all. All I want is for you to make time for me to be in your life. We love answering the "bi-curious" ads in the area. So often this is married women looking for that first taste of lesbian loving. It is such a thrill teaching them what they are missing and finding ways to meet and fucking their brains out. These women are often staving for good loving. They absolutely go freaky and demand orgasm after orgasm and you almost have to tear them away from your pussy when they just don't want to stop their gluttony on your over sensitized pussy. I love showing a woman the world of bisexuality. Let the man provide the security they need and we will supply the soul satisfying sex and show them how to get even more pussy. I always desire to make them lesbian sluts and whores and I mean that in only the most positive way. Women should always seek the sexual satisfaction that only lesbian lovemaking can provide. Most men just can't. Most don't have the skill and the ole male ego just blinds them to their glaring deficiencies. Of course we are always happy when a truly unhappy woman leaves her cad of a man and embraces the world of lesbianism. Just wish the court system would catch up to the 21st century and remove this fucking male bias that men continue to perpetuate. Geez, I really hate to see tears streaming down Laura's face contemplating Trina's upcoming marriage.

I love reading that Trina even though she is soon to be married she is lying on her sofa and while thinking of Laura she has an orgasm. I love relaxing on the sofa and being totally naked. I can put one foot on the floor and my other leg on back of the sofa. Thus, I am totally opened up for some intense masturbation. I like moving my legs around to change angles and the way my muscles are tensioned. I so love feeling my cunt when it starts to leak cream and then erupts with gushes of cunt nectars. I don't ejaculate like Deshona but my cunt just pumps out a hot, heavy stream of cunt cream during most of my orgasms. I love rubbing and pumping myself on one of our sofas or divan and fighting back that approaching orgasm. I know my body so I know how to hold it off for several close calls and then letting my body get all tensioned and coiled up and then getting slicked fingers vibrating over my clit while I fuck my cunt with my other hand or squeeze my tits and nipples or pump a finger up my clenching asshole. God, I have had such crushing orgasms like this. We have a large living room and sometimes all three of us will get in our favorite love nest and we will just masturbate together. I so love pleasuring myself and looking over and watching Joann and Maria pleasuring themselves and watching them come. We usually work at our own speed but sometimes we bark out our current state and work to come together. I so love it when our house is filled with our screaming, cursing at the top of our lungs and those animalistic sounds of rapture that women make when their wombs are exploding with crushing bliss. I so love humping my exploding cunt high in the air while looking over and watching both Joann and Maria's bodies bucking and jackknifing in rough time to my body. Just this visual will making my belly clench hard deep in my womb and give me extra contractions of fucking bliss. It is as if our wombs are helping each other reach the heights of heaven over and over. Sometimes we will just gaze at each other with love in our post coital time. We know then that when we have revived we will start with another round of self pleasuring and voyeurism. I love watching others and having someone watching me masturbate or fuck. Sex is just so beautiful to watch and I want to be in your sexual movie if you will let me.

I really feel that Laura should have made an immediate rendezvous of sweet lovemaking but Laura is not me. Trina is able to get a promise from Laura to call her soon. Trina needs it bad and I hope that Laura was soon able to overcome this needless remorse. Trina has made it clear that her marriage will not stop her desire for her. I would be giddy. Free pussy whenever she can work it into her schedule. I love having women that I only fuck from time to time. Gives me plenty of time for new pussy and fucking my regular angels and my archangels. Plus, the absence makes our coupling so fucking intense and soul satisfying. I live in a military area and I love fucking women when their men and women are away and then having my free time when they are concentrating on their spouses and partners. I like to quickly introduce these women to my other lovers who like variety like myself. Keeps them happy and the newbies are like little girls in the candy store. So many flavors to choose from. I had to smile great big that despite her turmoil of emotions when she hangs up with Trina, Laura discovers that her cunt has gotten wet. Despite her emotions her body and soul still long for Trina and the glorious fucking they could have shared. Hopefully, Laura has learned to listen to her body and soul more over the years.

As sometimes happens the fates intervene. Laura is feeling down and one of her angels comes to her in her time of need. I have had this happen a few times. Especially when I was still unattached. Now I have two archangels and Dodie to sooth me when life is crapping on me. I would be feeling blue and suddenly from out of nowhere I would get a phone call or knock on the door and I would soon be fucking gloriously and my problems don't seem so big anymore. Laura's doorbell rings and when she answers she hears ["Laura, it's Bernice. Remember me?" Then she whispered into the mike: "I need some loving."] I so love hearing this from one of my women. Knowing they need and want me. They desire the fucking I can provide. I had to smile great big when Laura almost breaks her neck hitting the button to let Bernice in [Laura almost broke a fingernail in her haste to press the Open button. She met Bernice at the door and let her in. Bernice was not an intrinsically beautiful woman, physically, like Trina, or Shavon, or even her best friend Cecilia, who was totally gorgeous. But she was very attractive, and had a new hair style that made her look even prettier. And then, of course, there was her figure, which could stop traffic, Laura was sure.] I love how you make it clear that Laura doesn't expect or need absolute perfection in her lovers. I love women who are average looking as much as I love the beauty queens. I think almost all women are beautiful. Sometimes you just have to look a little longer and let the personality win you over and before you know it you are dying to have her in your bed. I love playing the whole field. I will gladly take the diamond in the rough and polish it with hard, intense all night fucking. They will be your total slut from then on.

Again you are the only author to tell the reader what their women are wearing. How Bernice's blouse has deep cleavage to make the mouth water. Seeing those great tits displayed to my starving eyes and drooling mouth. I get so turned on watching women in their blouses. Hell, even sweaters, dresses, shirts, etc., that only show the outline make me look with lust and desire. Just seeing the swell of her breasts makes my pussy moist. I always love it when your women compliment each other with comments like they are good enough to eat and men must drool on the beauty that is their bodies. You show that

fucking doesn't always just happen as it does in most other stories. First they share a drink to relax and get comfortable in each other's presence. You show how delaying for a short time has its own rewards [She brought the drinks back and sat down beside Bernice on the sofa. She could feel the wetness between her thighs already and wondered if Bernice were feeling the same. Bernice, eyes twinkling, clinked Laura's glass with hers.] I so love feeling myself getting wet anticipating the sweet pussy I will soon be devouring. I love feeling my pussy simmering with lust and desire. Really gets me hot and focused on fucking my current angel into a coma of totally spent bliss.

I love their toast to love and Bernice focuses on "hot love". I chuckled when Bernice refers to Randi's comments in chapter 129 and calls her pretty pussy a "sugar doughnut". That is just so fucking cute. I love how Bernice has absolutely no jealousy and is happy that Laura has other lovers and inquires about them and is happy when she discovers that Randi is black. I love women who aren't jealous and don't have rancor when you need other angels. I find you just have to be very honest up front. More often than not they are quickly happy to be introduced to other women who highly desire to fuck their brains out. I am so happy that Laura has now accepted totally and completely her love for black women and is not concerned with needless guilt or thoughts of being a closet racist. I think she is the exact opposite. To her black is truly beautiful. Laura is simply and plainly drawn to black women and I am happy she has stopped making it into something more than that. It is shame that this country has its past history that this even comes into play.

While flirting with Bernice we discover that Bernice has a white boyfriend and that he likes to fuck her titties with his dick and came while fucking her tits. I like how Laura slowly proceeds with her seduction [Laura was so aroused she could barely sit still. Her eyes drifted down again to Bernice's spectacular cleavage. She reached over and slipped one forefinger into the crease between Bernice's incredible hard breasts.] You are the only author to really give me these nice little moments of seduction and lovemaking. Wow, that is one hot visual you give us with Bernice lifting her come splattered tits to her mouth and licking the come off and then sucking her nipples. All I can say again is wow. I always wanted come in me but that would be hot as hell. If I was into guys I know I would be doing this a lot. Getting my protein and then pleasuring myself with lots of nipple lathing and sucks. I am happy that Bernice is happy with her white boyfriend. I would prefer she find a woman with a nice strap-on but my goal is these women's happiness. I like how after she got herself excited with her tit self pleasuring and the man goes down on her and sucks her off nice hard and fast. Sounds like he is okay in bed. I love to have my women tell me about sex because it has this affect on me ["Certainly sounds like you did. You're really making me hot, just describing it."] I may not want to fuck a guy but I do get hot when a woman tells about a man plowing her cunt or deep fucking her asshole or the details of giving head. Sex just makes me hot. Period.

I like how this talk of sex leads to the sweet banter that only you explore in your writings [Bernice smiled slyly. "Are you hot, Laura? Are you hot for me?" "Come into the bedroom and let me show you." "I thought you'd never ask."] What I like is how you will set something up and then you show how things can take little detours. Instead of heading to the bedroom right away, Bernice has other ideas. She decides to take matters in her own hands [But before Laura could even stand up, Bernice began unbuttoning her blouse. She knew she was a walking masterpiece, and thoroughly enjoyed the way people, obviously men or women, were captivated by her magnificent breasts. She quickly slipped the blouse off her shoulders, and sat there in her lacy, champagne-colored bra, the fabric diaphanous enough for Laura to see the huge dark circles of her nipples underneath.] I think you show clearly that clothes can add so much to a seduction. I can just see Bernice's fingers unbuttoning her blouse. I can just see each of those buttons being worked through their eyehole with her beautiful black fingers. Then we have her heavenly gourds lovingly encased by this diaphanous creation that so loving highlights her huge nipples. I know I would be drooling and staring with naked lust at her tits. My mouth would be starving to start devouring these nipples calling to me with their siren call of lust and love.

I love how you show a woman falling under her own spell of seduction ["You want to take it off for me, don't you, Laura," she murmured, her voice smoky, her eyelids heavy, her whole face intoxicated with sexuality that said fuck me, fuck me.] I so well know the feeling of weighted need that courses through my veins when I am play the croquette. I love feeling that lust building in my body. I would love to be in Laura's place and seeing Bernice getting all cat eyed with lust. It always makes my blood boil when I see lust so clearly written on my woman's face. I so love seeing my women's eyes getting all heavy with seething lust and seeing so clearly in their eyes that they want me to fuck them hard, completely and repeatedly. My goal is to always to fuck like you have never been fucked before. To make your womb explode with cunt searing orgasms until your flesh is totally spent. I so love giving but of course I want you giving onto the giver. A girl does need her full quota of orgasms. I can fully understand Laura's hands shaking with lust when she reaches to unclasp her bra. I so often myself just shake with desire when disrobing my women. I never tire of my women and always desire them again and again. I try and make each time with any woman as special for her and me as possible. I just adore and so love my women that I almost swoon and get all mushy inside each time I have their wonderful flesh underneath my fingers and mouth.

Geez, you are just so romantic with your writings. Other authors just have the bra removed while you give me [She got the clasp free, and the bra collapsed, sliding off Bernice's dark, gleaming shoulders. Laura did not wait for her to turn back around. She kissed the nape of Bernice's neck and slipped her hands under the girl's arms, grasping the huge, hard gourds of her spectacular breasts and squeezing them, then pinching Bernice's gigantic jet-black areolas with her thumbs and forefingers.] I am simply agog at how you so capture the true essence of lovers at play. I can just see that bra coming free and slowly sliding off her shoulders and the straps doing that slow dance of seduction down her arms. Other authors just remove it. Ho Hum. Other authors just have their woman go for the breasts while you do what we do. Embracing our woman and kissing her neck and reaching and taking her breasts in your hands. I love large breasts when I cup them and I can just feel their weight and their pliability when I squeeze and message my lust and love into them. Loving the whole breast knowing when I reach up for her nipples I while find them hard and straining as I tweak and squeeze and gently pump them knowing my woman will soon have her head lulling back onto my shoulder and mewling out her pleasure. I love having a woman in this position and taking a hand and positioning her mouth and bringing our mouths together to explore her divine oral orifice while I continue loving her breast. I so love feeling her moans of love filling my mouth and soul. Giving her nipples a good love tweak and just feeling her gasp hotly into my exploring tongue and mouth. I so adore loving a woman's tits like this and feeling her pelvis start that unconscious swirling of need, knowing that soon my fingers and tongue will be exploring the depths of her sweet vagina and maybe tasty asshole.

As usual I write something and then you show a variation of it. Bernice gasps out her excitement and Laura expresses her lust while Bernice is looking back at her over her shoulder. Laura doesn't waste this divine opportunity and locks their mouths together for some deep tongue stroking and twining. My belly always clenches and my pussy quivers and moistens when our tongues dart, dance and twine within our mouths. I so love capturing a tongue and sucking it like a cock. It makes my women crazy as my head bobs on her tongue while I suck her tongue hard and tight while I'm lathing and batting her tongue inside my mouth. Then releasing her tongue and capturing a lip and love sucking and messaging it gently before locking our mouths together again and snaking my tongue deep into her willing mouth. I like how you always capture all the facets of soul kissing. It so ignites the fire deep in your wet cunt and quivering womb.

Cute how Laura can't take the time to take Bernice to her bedroom but instead takes her on her sofa. Sometimes one must make love on the spot. While Laura can't come herself with breast stimulation alone she has the skills to make Bernice's sensitive nipples bring her to orgasm and tells her this and then proceeds to deliver. Bernice is one lucky woman. Laura has done her foreplay because Bernice is afraid she will come immediately. Laura wants her naked like I want my woman. For some reason I like for everyone to be totally naked of clothing though I will gladly acquiesce to any desire for erotic clothing or partial disrobing if that is what my woman wants. Just my preference. I so love getting naked and kissing like they do here and squeezing, messaging, pinching nipples like Laura here. I so love feeling breast in my hands and loving them. I get all cat-eyed myself when a lover holds her breast up for me to devour which I immediately do. I may start off gentle and slow (and some women want only this) but most want what Laura is giving here [She sucked and slurped and bit it, and did the same in a passionate frenzy to Bernice's other nipple too, her mouth chasing back and forth between the large,

shiny, wet beauties. And Bernice began to come almost immediately, throwing her head back into the cushions and groaning ecstatically as the spasms wrenched her body. "Auuggnnhh! Oh! Oh god . . . ohnnggg! Ungghh! Oh Laura yes auungghhh!" she moaned, twisting and shuddering in a fierce climax.] While I have only made a few women come from only breast loving they do so love the passionate assault on their blood engorged tits and nipples. I love getting them all slavered up with my salvia and using that lubrication to add my finger play and just seeing the light glisten off my salvia. I am huge fan of working nipples back and forth as your mouth darts from tit to tit. Doing it to a rhythm or loving one breast completely before going to the other one. Not falling into a rut with a long time lover. I so love working my women's breast passionately and reaching down and frigging her cunt and then when she is right at the edge moving up to her clit and buzzing my fingers over her engorged clit or pressing it between two fingers and frigging it directly. I so exult in the screams of pleasure this produces in my women like Bernice here. This is what I live for. Having my ears filled with the sounds of ecstasy and seeing their body flipping and jackknifing. Pulling her to me to feel those shudders of bliss rocking her as she continues to make those animalistic sounds of ecstasy with maybe screams and cursing thrown in. I so love it.

Laura being a complete slut like me knows that Bernice's cunt is now all swollen and flooded with delectable cunt cream and moves down Bernice's body and hungrily devours her cunt until Bernice has another sweet orgasm this time in Laura's mouth. Yum, all that tasty cunt cream to swallow in gluttonous glee. I smiled when Bernice wishes Laura could teach this to some of her boyfriends. Guys are too concentrated on their dicks and I really doubt you could begin to teach this to the vast majority of men. I love how Bernice sets up and pushes Laura down. She has received pleasure and now she is eager to give pleasure. I love how you show lovers remembering what their partners like. Here it is Bernice's knowledge that Laura loves to feel her breath taking gourds rubbing against her flesh and she gives Laura just what she craves [Bernice hovered over her, knowing the pleasure Laura got from the huge, hard, beautiful black breasts dangling and sweeping across her body, feeling Bernice's nipples brush her own. Bernice kissed her neck, her shoulder, then her breasts, one by one, focusing finally on one of Laura's throbbing nipples and tormenting it with her lips. She was not a shy or tentative lover, and she sucked it aggressively, then Laura's other nipple, squeezing Laura's breasts as Laura had squeezed hers and devouring Laura's nipples hungrily.] I love any size breast rubbing against me but nothing is quite so heavenly as when they have that wonderful weight of large breast pressing down and into your yearning flesh. I love how you show Bernice is a hungry voracious lover and love assaults Laura's aching

nipples. Love the kisses Bernice bestows on her way to Laura's breast and brushing Laura with her nipples on her way to Laura's breast. True lesbian lovemaking as only you truly show.

I love the communication of need and appreciation shown here ["Oh god . . . eat my pussy, eat my pussy, Bernice, oh please, I'm going to come, any second oh oh!" Laura panted, quickly losing control. "Honey, you got such a sweet little wet pink pussy," Bernice murmured, sliding lower down Laura's twisting body. "I've had a few dreams about your beautiful pussy, Laura, and I couldn't wait to get back here to taste it again."] I love pleading my need and hearing it from my lover and I so love it when you show lovers telling their lovers just how wonderful their bodies are like we always should in real life. Cute detail of Laura wanting to suck Bernice's nipples while she comes but she is to far gone and instead comes with gut wrenching spasms of the purest bliss pushing her gushing cunt into Bernice's slavering mouth. I can just see Bernice slurping and swallowing Laura's pumping cunt cream. I so love swallowing those warm divine nectars as a cunt is pumping them out for my starving mouth. Rewarding me for my loving focused work. A girl does need her pay after all. I have always adored your sounds of lovemaking and those chocked off lover's names we so often gasp or grimace out in our ecstasy.

I can see that Bernice is my kind of lover [In the middle of her orgasm she realized that Bernice had moved up, dangling her large breasts in Laura's face while her hand continued to fingerfuck Laura's pussy and scissor Laura's clit roughly. Quickly, Laura scooped up one firm dangling gourd in her hand and fed Bernice's huge deep-black nipple into her mouth, sucking it so sharply that Bernice cried out in surprise.] Laura is able to come again and Bernice knows this and moves her body to give Laura what she craves and now brings off Laura digitally. I love frigging a totally love swollen cunt. Feeling my fingers completely inundated with her cunt creams slavering my fingers and palm. Feeling it trickle and drip off as I piston my fingers in her cunt and then scissoring her clit with varying degrees of angels and pressure. I always hunger to suck a lover's nipple while fucking. I love feeling a tit filling my mouth while my cunt is being fucked so well by a lover. I want to taste her flesh and feel her nipple against my flailing tongue and feel her breast flesh pulled taunt as I start giving her hard throat sucks. It so pleasures me while I get to pleasure also. I love it. This is how I loved to be frigged [But her hand really raped Laura's throbbing pussy now, bringing Laura from one orgasm to the next. She sucked Bernice's incredible breast and came unbelievably, whinnying uncontrollably and pumping spastically with her hips as the jolting spasms shook her flesh. As the last jolt hit her, and the spasms died away, she fell back to the bed, panting, whimpering in the aftermath of shock, wondering when an orgasm had last driven her to such delirious heights.] Oh geez, I can just feel those shocks deep in my belly and how my pussy is just exploding and spasming and the friction of her fingers buzzing my clit and the feel of her fingers pumping and her hand ramming my vulva. I come so exaltedly when my pussy is hand fucked so well as this. Sigh, I can just close my eyes and remember my cunt exploding in heart pounding, soul shattering pleasure from such hand rapes. I have been left a mewling, head lulling, drooling, love slut after such divine fucking.

I love how you tell of them exciting each other in turn and thus sparking another love session with little rest breaks to let the kitties recharge until the flesh just gives out in sweet lassitude. I love fucking my pussy into sensitive oblivion of satiated gluttony. It just feels so swollen, raw and completely fucked out. I just feel so completely loved and worn out. All I want to do is snuggle and go to sleep with my lover entwined in my arms. I like how Bernice comments as she is leaving that no man has fucked her as hard or as well as Laura. Lesbians just know how to love a woman's body. That is all. If society would just leave us women alone I think so many more would discover this simple innate truth. I do hope that Bernice and Cecilia are still fucking each other's brains out every opportunity they get.

 

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