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Date | Story | Comments from stosh79_00 | Gentle's response | Rating | 16/07/2005 1:28:49 a.m. | The Watcher | this is a good story with a great ending. I myself am a voyeur and like to watch couples go at it...and i think this was well written | Passed on to Lisa for comment. |
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3/03/2005 7:31:59 p.m. | Chocolate Strawberries | not bad i just posted a short story of my own should be out tomorrow or next day it s called Kim and Denise More than Neighbors anyway good luck and Keep Writing | Good luck to you too! |
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20/12/2004 | The Shower | good story, could have used some more details about the people involved, ever think of expanding story to turn the flat into a brothel? | I can understand wanting more details, but a brothel? |
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