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Date Story Comments from Tramp Gentle's response Rating
19/07/2006 8:20:42 p.m. Gathering in the Green It's dark, to be sure. I love the way you've done it though. The writing is lovely here. The images are vivid and the picture that you've painted is compelling. You should be proud of this little piece. It's exceptional. Oh, my. Thank you, Tramp.
7/07/2006 9:04:26 p.m. Picture This I like it, sir! I like it muchly! Yes, I do. Oh, good!
4/07/2006 7:45:39 p.m. Photographic Memory 5 That, sir, was very hot! I think the world would be a better place if we all learned to share more, don't you agree? :-) Well, a little competition isn't a bad thing...
4/07/2006 7:44:50 p.m. Photographic Memory 4 Ooo! Hmm, I must be going to the wrong beaches... ;-) No, just at the wrong time!
24/06/2006 4:59:18 p.m. Photographic Memory 6 Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! :-)
16/06/2006 11:15:08 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 Ok, I'm completely sucked into this now... what happens next?! Damn, I'm not remotely ready this time.
16/06/2006 11:12:04 p.m. Photographic Memory 2 This is a great story. More please! :-) Wow, I'm lucky I posted the next chapter then...
4/06/2006 12:46:41 a.m. Lust Letter Oooo! Oooo, mmm... that was GOOD FOR ME! What can I say? I'm not worthy! :) SO glad it was good for you Tramp. I quite enjoyed it myself!
29/05/2006 4:18:18 p.m. Photographic Memory 1 That was wonderful! No pressure, but I think this is already shaping up to be one of your best series. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing your tales with the rest of us! NO pressure? :-)
29/05/2006 3:57:45 p.m. Photographic Memory Prologue Oooo, now that was titillating! I love the way you've described the photographic element. As with everything in life, luck does indeed play a major role there. I'm off to read Chapter One... Best of luck!
9/05/2006 9:57:16 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 7 Helluva story, sir. Yep, HELL of a story. :-) I give it an "8". You just liked the stable action. :-)
3/05/2006 7:36:15 p.m. Next Time - Part 2 Mmmm, oooo, that's better! :-) So... You like this one? :-)
3/05/2006 7:34:43 p.m. Next Time - Part 1 The sex was lovely! Very believable, very real, very sexy. I can very much relate to a girl who wants to experiment but isn't ready for everything. But the ending! How fucking sad for them both! I'm off to read part 2 now. Am I just being a glutton for punishment? Oooo, I hope this ends well...! You get a 9 for the story and a 7 for the ending - averaged out to an 8. Oh, oh. How much trouble am I in? :-)
24/04/2006 9:18:40 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 6 Very sexy! Ooo, yes, very. Mmmmhmmm. So that's a yes? :-)
9/04/2006 4:56:28 p.m. Wet Gentle, you always did give the best dialogue, and WET is no exception. And congratulations on the Golden Clit award, it was long over-due! Thanks Tramp. Want to help celebrate? :-)
24/03/2006 6:12:39 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 5 And all this time I thought servant girls had it rough... They LIKE it rough!
18/03/2006 2:59:10 p.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 3 Ooo, this just keeps getting better and better! More please! :-) Passed on to Cam for comment.
12/03/2006 3:35:43 p.m. Tennis panties Thank you! That was definitely diverting. :-) :-)
26/02/2006 11:23:16 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3c You do 'innocent, but sexy' very well, you know that?" That's because I *am*! :-)
23/02/2006 8:10:32 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3b Ok, this should be one of those ones where you've written it all already because I AM HANGING ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! Who are those people?! :-) Not telling!
27/01/2006 6:57:03 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 Nice work sir! Thank you Ma'am
13/01/2006 10:06:24 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 Delicious! I like these two, I hope the eventually take it to the next level... There's another level? :-)
4/01/2006 7:07:17 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 1 I like this! It's not so much "loss of innocence" as it is "gain of sexuality." Hmmm, do you think that "loss of innocence" implies technical loss of virginity? Nope. :-)
29/12/2005 4:01:53 a.m. The Chieftan Oooooo! My thoughts exactly
29/12/2005 4:01:15 a.m. Linoleum Quick and rough. I don't normally like quick and rough, but this was good for me! :-) Well, this was the first time I've ever written something quite so abrupt... the whole thing actually has a plot with it, though this scenario didn't happen in context to the full story.
18/12/2005 7:46:37 p.m. The Game - Part 5 - Closure Oh, nicely done! I had a hunch about who it was, but I never expected THAT to happen! YUM!!! :-) :-)
10/12/2005 7:16:33 p.m. The Game - Part 4 - Risks I love the fact that you've taken us so far without revealing Birch's identity! This story, it's like leisurely sex on a Sunday afternoon - it's just building, and building, and building... I don't know how much longer I can wait for the climax! I'm not going to comment!
2/12/2005 8:20:43 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Brief, but intense. No one has time, you see...
26/11/2005 3:13:12 a.m. The Game - Part 2 - How To Play Funny how so many people just think of sexy clothing as affecting other people, when in all actuality the person most affected is often the wearer. Thanks Gentle, ch. 2 is every bit as good as ch. 1 - and ch. 1 was YUMMY. Yummy is workable...
19/11/2005 8:07:53 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit I like everything but the knife, and as far as the knife goes I'm beginning to not care. Hey, if it didn't make you nervous, what would be the point?
26/10/2005 4:19:40 p.m. Hail Part 2 Oooooo, that was delectably erotic! Very, very nice. Oh, good!
26/10/2005 4:04:12 p.m. Hail - Chapter 1 Mmmm, that was nice! And I very much want to know what's in store for Hail! On to Chapter two... You know, I'm a little surprised it took you so long. :-)
24/10/2005 12:42:28 p.m. Steak please I loved it! I giggled all the way through!!! :-) Damn! :-)
22/10/2005 11:07:31 p.m. Summer I enjoyed the conversational tone, like she was telling me about it over coffee. Thanks for another nice little story about a fascinating situation! Thanks Tramp. You stay right there, and I'll get you a cool drink.
21/10/2005 7:06:02 p.m. White Witch Another fine fornicating frolic! Alliteration is such an underused art. You know any other 'f' words? :-)
21/10/2005 12:53:53 p.m. White Witch I LOVE IT!!!! :-) That's a yes? :-)
19/10/2005 8:47:29 p.m. Wake up call I enjoyed this story, it was very loving and very realistic. You know, I think medical science should fund research into this revival technique. You should send a copy to the May Clinic or one of the other high-profile research hospitals. Coma patients everywhere will thank you! :-) Realistic? How do you KNOW? :-)
19/10/2005 8:45:53 p.m. Twas the night Heh. Hehehehehehe. AAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Hehehe. Heh. ***sigh*** Where on earth do you get these bizarre and wonderful ideas?! :-) Well, from you, half the time, Tramp! :-)
11/10/2005 6:15:56 p.m. Dear John That was kind of beautiful! I wish I'd read it before my man went on his business trip last month. It would have given me a very naughty idea. Oh, now you have to tell us!
10/10/2005 5:47:36 a.m. Tiros and his Nemesis Mmmm, mmmm, mmmm. I think you are the god of erotic fiction sir. I particularly loved the repeated use of the word "phallus." What a great word! It implies a whole different level of masculinity and fertility, and it makes me drip! I'm surprised it took you this long to find it! :-)
30/09/2005 9:02:54 p.m. Ghost Mmm, there's just something about guitar players... I love the way they hold it, strum it, move against it...damn.
25/09/2005 1:32:53 p.m. The one with the jeans Very enlightening! I'm so glad I came here on 2-for-1 Day! Hey, whatever I can to to improve sales!
21/09/2005 10:16:04 p.m. This is the girl... And that was a "10". And I'll be in the ladies' room if you need me. ...don't change a thing sir. Don't change a damn thing. I better make sure I knock. :-)
12/09/2005 7:34:28 p.m. No Sequel Wow. WOW! Can I say the obvious? Shucks...