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Toby

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Date Story Comments from Toby Gentle's response Rating
10/04/2006 8:02:23 p.m. Everything's A Blur The movement from present to past was flawless. Good story too. I'm loving all the responses. Yours is wonderful...thanks!
30/12/2005 10:01:57 p.m. The Game - Part 5 - Closure Great serial! My GF & I read it and we were amused. But I have to say my hunch was right on track. The clue is in the details ;) Is another serialized story in the horizon perhaps? Or is that too much to ask? =D It's too much. :-)
21/12/2005 7:36:11 p.m. The Watcher The plot was imaginative, the story is engaging and finely written. Your writing has never disappointed. Hope to see more of it. On a side note, it produced a much desired effect on my girlfriend and ... ;) Passed on to Lisa for comment.
26/08/2005 7:16:12 a.m. Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 Professional writing and an interesting plot. When will the second chapter come out? Pardon the pun ;) ooooh! it's coming! it's coming! ;-)