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Lisa

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Date Story Comments from Lisa Gentle's response Rating
20/07/2006 8:37:54 p.m. Gathering in the Green A dark tale as in the state of the atmosphere, the events taking place in the 'green.' I love the bold leap into writing such a non-gentle, non-romantic story. It was romantic in the way you wrote it, I think if spoken in any other voice would have made it ugly, dreary, and horrific. In my opinion, I do hope you continue to write these kinds of stories, they're so raw with familiarity. It seems more honest, more innate, if that makes any sense. Everything can't be romantic with a sweet or twisting plot. It's a well-rounded STORY that took me on a short journey, after it took my breath away. This one was fuller, if I might say that. So much to see in my mind's eye while reading that I couldn't stop. Oh, thanks Lisa. That means a lot!
7/07/2006 9:05:15 p.m. Picture This This is very entertaining for a start. Start? :-)
24/06/2006 5:03:34 p.m. Photographic Memory 4 This is really sexy. No sex, but all the right equipment... Good compromise, huh?
24/06/2006 5:00:43 p.m. Photographic Memory 5 I just thought it was sooooo damn sexy Oh, good, just what I was after!
16/06/2006 8:09:27 p.m. Photographic Memory 3 Such a light, romantic story. I always love your humor. Coupled with the poetry of your words, it's well worth reading on a lazy Saturday afternoon. Damn, it's only Friday! :-)
10/12/2005 12:42:48 a.m. The Game - Part 4 - Risks Like isn't the word. It's like someone slowly undressing and seducing me. Intensely sexy. Lemme get the light. :-)
2/12/2005 8:23:39 p.m. The Game - Part 3 - Taking your turn Yes, I'm thoroughly intrigued with this Birch person.
19/11/2005 8:15:01 p.m. The Game - Part 1 - Opening Gambit Oh yes!
7/11/2005 10:47:19 a.m. 69s Ohhh...I love a challenge! I think I knew that. :-)
1/11/2005 6:55:03 p.m. Under The Desk That's mighty potent to have three visuals going at once, too arousing for this type of setting. Familiar and fresh comes to mind, and I like the idea of imagining under the desk. If I was at a desk in a more inconspicuous spot, I could say, 'I did, too!' Must say that for later, say...lunchtime. :-)
1/10/2005 5:35:19 p.m. The Gauntlet Damn, that was hot. I don't have a gun in my panties, but you could find some evidence there, Sherlock. I laughed, I moaned {internally}, I anticipated...I appreciated. Perfect. ;D Long way from perfect, but I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Lisa.
14/09/2005 5:57:24 p.m. No Sequel Well, you've cooked up another one. Exciting, intriguing, a tad frightening, with a touch of WOW, all the ingredients to a satisfying story. You're certainly not clueless when it comes to great dialogue or turning me on or making my jaw drop with a surprising ending or tickling my...well you get the point. Oh, thanks. :-)
16/08/2005 7:16:55 a.m. Darkness Reigns Magnificent!!!! Thank you Lisa!! *beams*
13/08/2005 10:09:32 a.m. Hey gorgeous The forecast said 'light drizzling',but as the reading progressed it became heavy showers. Then it just started fucking pouring and not even a small amount of fabric could stop me from getting soaked. I enjoy how the story started with nice conversing...that can be an overdose of it's own, for some people, anyway. Very sexy, Mr. Firm. ;) This WAS you, right? :-)
27/07/2005 4:41:11 a.m. The doorstep HOLY SHIT! Thanks Lisa.
5/06/2005 5:07:31 p.m. The Swap Part 5 Such a surprising and deserving ending. This last part was truly marvelous and was even more sexier, if that's possible. I want to be just as seductive as you when I grow up! Hee hee. Thanks Lisa.
3/05/2005 9:01:10 p.m. Suddenly wide awake I adore the right-hand scenes. Men are such sexy creatures, well, most of them. I laughed out loud when their identities were finally given away. That was just my intention. Thanks.
15/03/2005 6:47:01 p.m. It started innocently enough I'm glad you remembered. Incredible sex with an unplanned audience (sort of). Not for real...? It can happen. ;) Remembered?
15/03/2005 6:45:16 p.m. Lancelot and The Damsel Seeing that you narrated an erotic story with a few rhyming, but coherent phrases...I'd say that is pretty impressive. Or does that mean I'm easy to please? Whatever the case, I give 10's if you can make me squirm! ;) I take is scaring you with spiders doesn't work? :-)
11/03/2005 9:02:07 p.m. It starts with a castle Part 3 This, my friend, is a very peculiar story. In my opinion, there is a vast difference between this one & the others, but then, I've only read about 20 so far. It arouses my deeper senses and has created an appetite for more. For now, I'll settle with more of your take on this tail, I mean tale. You got any more coming? I'm hungry again... More? Not yet...
11/03/2005 8:59:57 p.m. Chocolate Strawberries Lunchtime now, needed a quick snack...strawberries seemed to have satisfied my hunger. For now, at least. Thanks again. You already commented on this one!
9/03/2005 7:22:18 p.m. Kitty Reading this story brought back a few memories. I can appreciate the dialogue a great deal, because it is definitely fuel for a situation like that...it's good to have sexy friends in faraway places. ;) It must be better to have them close, surely?
8/03/2005 7:33:12 a.m. It starts with a castle Part 2 Mentally evocative. This is going to be a very interesting journey, I think I like 'Alys.' I like that she is honest, curious, and...fun. "It's okay to be alittle slutty sometimes," right? She hasn't BEEN slutty.... Yet!
6/03/2005 8:43:44 p.m. Chocolate Strawberries My, my, but the temperature has risen.
20/02/2005 It starts with a castle A man who likes an audience, how sexy is that. I can't believe I haven't read this yet, I adore 'ancient' stories! Your descriptions are hypnotic. Thanks Lisa. I appreciate that.
6/02/2005 Tiros and his Nemesis Not having the space to comment on every eye-catching paragraph, I will just state that this is an astounding story! To be a butterfly on the wall while he tended to his own pleasure, that is always pleasing for me to imagine. The way you tell a story definitely gets my juices flowing...for my writing. ;) Thanks Lisa. Best you give me another story to post then!
16/01/2005 The Quiz Stories are an insight to our own desires, I'm thinking... and you possess such a delightful imagination. One could get lost in that mind of yours. Looking forward to the next story. Thanks Lisa. Your optimism is contagious.
18/12/2004 The Shower And I thought my showers were erotic. I'm thinking I need a little company...what do you think? Such a sophisticated, knowlegable, and absolutely sexy way you have for telling a story. I'm off to the showers... Hope you have fun.
13/12/2004 Twas the night Geez, man, you went to another level on this one. I knew you were talented, but... Here's to that never-ending rollercoaster that is called your mind, which I always enjoy riding. ;) Aww shucks Lisa, thanks.
25/11/2004 The Swap Part 4 I'm still feeling it in the pit of my stomach. Feels nice though. I know I said that each story gets more and more erotic and delightful, but that was the 'honest truth' and part 4 was even more erotic than the last. You've certainly wrote another stroker of a story. Thanks Lisa.
20/11/2004 Lisseth and the Bargain I don't beg, but you sure would make a girl swallow her pride just to ask you for more. The story was fantastic, the dialogue was excellent, the sex was wicked and marvelous... You can stay. Alright? Just there. Thanks.
20/11/2004 A Quiet Meal I don't say much when I read, maybe the occasional moan might slip out if something is said just the right way. 'Holy crap' kept coming to mind as I read each paragraph after their meeting. This was highly erotic. My new favorite for sure. Gotta go check the mirror and make sure I didn't puncture my bottom lip when I bit into it. Hey Lisa, don't hurt yourself! And thanks.
7/11/2004 Summer I haven't read all of your stories, but this one was very different from the ones I have read. The 69 is always a favorite of mine. Your description of it was very sensual to say the least. The mixture of voyeurism, 69, and masturbation...very intoxicating. ;)
6/11/2004 Late Summer Sun Oh, to be a butterfly floating by her ear when he whispered. Such a beautifully written stimulant. You 'did it' again, Gentle. ;) I had a very nice orgasm this morning and the words and images allowed me to relieve that in a short period of time. I love the feelings your words spread throughout my abdomen and down to my thighs...and other hidden regions. ;) This one was sooo very sensual to me...
26/10/2004 The Billy Goats Gruff - and the Troll LOL...very nice ending. Silly, indeed, but I couldn't stop reading. How could I read such a story and it be a turn-on at the same time? Well, that's obvious and you have such a way with words...I vote 10's if you can make me feel it... Thanks Lisa
3/10/2004 The one with the jeans 2 for the price of 1 is definitely the perfect summary for this one. You've managed to stimulate 2 places with 1 good prod. ;) I was about to read a different story, but this TITLE got my attention. Hmm...I have to say that I am very pleased with it.
3/10/2004 The Joining Well, that's enough to set me off! I would say that your talent should be put into screenwriting. But then, we wouldn't be able to use our imaginations, therefore, arousing the mind as well as the genitals. That's why I believe romantic, erotic literature to be a step above pornography, I get more out of the bang...
28/09/2004 Eelas Wedding Mmmm...that was very erotic. A sensual, silent movie is what it felt like. Floating on air, kind of like the "floating" sensation you get when you've reached that point. A fantasy story, but not so surreal that it's not familiar. Definitely one of my new favorites.
21/09/2004 Dear John Very romantic. I especially loved the ending. One of my favorite things. ;)
16/09/2004 The Ritual Yeah, it works for me. I haven't read all of your stories, YET, but this was alot different from the ones I have read. The way the story flowed even made an orgy sound sensual and romantic. I like fantasy stories and I can't imagine why your stories take me to another place other than just "smut." Romantic is what comes to mind. It seems the story doesn't have to be just fantasy, it reminds me of a few things. Thanks for sharing.
2/09/2004 Silent Spectacular! I hope you have a desire to write a few more in the future. You already commented on this one. You must be keen...
31/08/2004 Now I lay me down to sleep Just had to read another before signing off...you are SO good at this. ;)
31/08/2004 Men are scarce I must say you have a very unique imagination. Very descriptive. You are so very good at what you do and I can't wait to read more of your "imagination" in your other stories. You know, when I read that, I couldn't remember what the story was about. It makes sense now. Thanks.
29/08/2004 Nancy 1st story? I wish I was lucky enough to write a 1st story this well. Still, I enjoyed it and would never have guessed it to be a first. Lisa-Marie, you say the nicest things.
29/08/2004 Donna Well, that was a delightful surprise. Another funny and witty story. I like the "energy". Love the concept of what brings two people together. Look, I tried to find fault...I was not successful. ;) Awww.... Thanks.
23/08/2004 Tom Having a feel for your type of writing, I didn't know what to expect when it first began, but I knew YOU knew what you were doing. I was right....there are certain times when I feel like having a Tom #1 and MANY other times when I want a Tom #2, kinda like twin brothers in one body. ;) Hmmm...
18/08/2004 The Swap Part 2 Wow....that was a worthy Part 2 in my opinion. I love the intensity. And as usual, you have me wanting more. ;)
10/08/2004 Sleep Therapy This story had a lot of combinations. A slow build up to becoming very sexy, I actually anticipated reading each paragraph. I enjoy reading an erotic story that I can also get a few laughs from. And I really enjoy reading the way you write them. Hope you give us more. No pressure! ;)
5/08/2004 Bus Stop I gave it an 8, because it made me laugh. I wanted to do that a few times myself and a man's embarrassment is kinda cute. sometimes ;) It never is when I do it!
17/07/2004 Blue Angel very nicely written, as usual ;)
13/07/2004 Carmine Wow...I liked it.....stories like this really get my attention, why, WEREWOLVES of course :)
13/07/2004 Orange I just read the story "Orange" and I would voted it astounding....believe what you want, but I have read a several stories, but this one I could feel all around, all on me...
12/07/2004 Silent ...anyway, I'm a big fan of the werewolf/vampire bit, and I'm well aware that I should not expect any more of these :) just wanted to say it was written very well.... Not expect... But the chance always exists... :-)