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Date | Story | Comments from Joesephus | Gentle's response | Rating | 27/08/2005 4:07:00 p.m. | Allison's Long Weekend - Part 1 | That was interesting. (snip) I thought your story flowed. (snip)I find I am bit distrub by the widow aspect, (snip) I guess I just don'e see griving for a year then Okay lets have a wild weekend.(snip) it is well written and certainly sexy | Thanks! Well, if it makes you feel better, in Chapter 2, Allie's feeling a bit of consciousness, but I can tell you from observation of simular situations, if the relationship is healthy and there is proper closure, being a widow doesnt mean sackcloth and ashes. |
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20/08/2005 8:46:18 a.m. | Kimberly might not have been drunk | Well written, but too short. I found I wanted to know what each thought afterwards and how they dealt with it. | Thanks. |
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