Entropez
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| Date | Story | Comments from Entropez | Gentle's response | Rating | 18/07/2006 9:28:37 a.m. | Picture This 2 | I haven't even read the first one yet, but this was great. The descriptions had the predictable tumescent effect. Good thing I can read one-handed! I am looking forward to reading the first part of the story so I can see what his part of the break-up was. Certainly gravity should take some blame ;) | Well if you're not going to read them in order... :-) |
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30/06/2006 11:04:11 p.m. | Photographic Memory 6 |
Very nice finish! Although I was thinking it might end with |
Sorry to bleep your comments, but... It might not be over yet. :-) |
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30/06/2006 11:02:49 p.m. | Photographic Memory 5 | Hmmm, nice story the girls are telling to Paul. Would I be revealing myself as 'slow' if I mentioned the parallels between Jake and Paul? That obvious, huh? Okay, enough said. | :-) |
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7/06/2006 8:15:58 p.m. | Lust Letter | What can I say but 'WOW'? I'm going to have to write my wife one of those letters and see what happens next.. | *grin* Go for it! I think she'd be flattered :) |
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6/06/2006 5:06:54 a.m. | Wet | That was great. Zoe is certainly one of the most generous and kind-hearted lover a mild-mannered rapist could hope for. I really liked the comment about 'gentlemen' being patient lechers. | Someone gave me that line. I just built a story around it. :-) |
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6/06/2006 5:04:25 a.m. | Photographic Memory 1 | Steve really knows what she wants and lucky for Paul, it's him! I am looking forward to more of this story to see what happens; on camera and off. Bravo! | Damn, so I need to write more? :-) |
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24/05/2006 11:00:31 a.m. | Sally | You have a winner here. As Dr. Frankenfurter said in "Rocky Horror Picture Show": "I can't stand the antici.....PATION!" I liked the way you built up the story as foreplay in itsself. Bravo! | Thanks for that. Yeah, it's high the list of faves. |
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23/05/2006 8:45:56 a.m. | Stand and Deliver | Very nice! I liked the 'sauciness' of both ladies in getting what they really wanted; though finding such an eloquent and refined highwayman was a 'stroke' of luck. I can only imagine the look on her fiance's face when he recovers. | They do have some explaining to do... |
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25/04/2006 11:57:28 a.m. | It starts with a castle Part 6 | Very nice, indeed! Alys definitely seems like the type to make sure her 'animals' are well cared for. It would be a singular pleasure to feel her lips upon me. | Just remember, she's difficult to control! |
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19/04/2006 2:46:56 p.m. | 69s | I like the form, even as short as it is, because it allows you to really play with metaphor and reminds you of little love notes you might leave for a favorite lover when you have to leave earlier than expected or desired. A short flutter of the hand can bring back the great gasping breaths of the night before. The air is as fragrant as the memory itself. | You're quite the poet, aren't you? :-) |
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