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Date Story Comments from Achronos Gentle's response Rating
24/09/2005 9:42:52 a.m. Kimberly might not have been drunk You have a quite a talent with those final sentences! You reading these in bulk?
24/09/2005 9:41:26 a.m. This is the girl... Excellent! I love the rhythm of it. Sex is like that. :-)
17/08/2005 6:51:01 p.m. Digitally Part 4 Take this for all four parts: very good! This one you could turn into one of those repeating serials if you wanted to; the kind with twenty-five chapters in book one. Of course, to keep things interesting you'd really have to push the plot as far as it can go -- in *every* direction. Thanks. 25? Are you insane? :-) I thought I WAS pushing. :-)
17/08/2005 6:50:21 p.m. Darkness Reigns Very nice! Thank you Achronos. *smiles* Sometimes direct is best.
3/08/2005 11:23:25 p.m. Alice Pt 4 very good. thank you for writing it. Not at all. Thank you for READING it.
3/08/2005 6:43:16 a.m. Alice Pt 4 You're really going to have to get worse at this if you expect people to stop demanding MORE MORE MORE GIVE ME ANOTHER PART RIGHT NOW. See? I can't help myself. Goddam! :-)
3/08/2005 6:42:27 a.m. Alice Pt 3 Cute and colourful. Going to try more like it? Nah. Think I'm done. *Smiles* Thanks for the compliment.
24/07/2005 2:20:18 a.m. Angel Beautiful piece. Perfect blend of sexiness and romance. Kudos! Wonderful, thank you.
8/07/2005 8:11:02 p.m. The Quiz My comments are the same for both stories: Great! I love stories told primarily through dialogue, especially when they still work *as* stories on paper (or screen). It's one of my favourite things about Robert Heinlein's style, and you've captured the same sort of vivid and breezy dialogue. Kudos! You have no idea how much this paragraph pleases me. You've made my entire week! If there is just ONE person I'd like to base my work on, it's Heinlein. I'm over the moon! Thanks very, very much.
8/07/2005 8:10:40 p.m. Next Time - Part 2 My comments are the same for both stories: Great! I love stories told primarily through dialogue, especially when they still work *as* stories on paper (or screen). It's one of my favourite things about Robert Heinlein's style, and you've captured the same sort of vivid and breezy dialogue. Kudos! You have no idea how much this paragraph pleases me. You've made my entire week! If there is just ONE person I'd like to base my work on, it's Heinlein. I'm over the moon! Thanks very, very much.
6/07/2005 8:38:17 p.m. Life Great continuation! It would be neat to continue the cycle with a third story another decade on: "Twenty Years After". I actually always intended three stories. It's complex... Thanks.
6/07/2005 8:37:40 p.m. Sally You've got a gift for packing maximum punch into a minimum of prose. Great story! Thanks for that. I'm just lazy! :-)
6/07/2005 8:37:19 p.m. Terry Wow. How do you do that so deftly?! Huh? Do what?
6/07/2005 8:36:23 p.m. Silent Neat. The theme is worth spending more time on someday -- not necessarily for erotic value, but for the impact of the imagery. Well, as you can see from some of the other feedback, your opinion is not shared by all. Thanks just the same.
6/07/2005 8:35:50 p.m. Alpha & Omega Compelling image. Freckles... mmm... Yeah, mmmm...
6/07/2005 8:35:29 p.m. Lisseth and the Bargain Very nice. Delicious humour! Pleased you liked it.