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Date Story Comments from AFW Gentle's response Rating
15/03/2006 8:18:49 p.m. Statuesque A really lovely story but one question? Why did mum ever give it up 8-) That's what mothers DO!
28/01/2006 11:16:09 a.m. The Road to Hell - Day 3 Well, now I did read chapter 3. A very cool phone sex scene. Of course the only time I tried it the phone kept slipping off my shoulder and hitting the floor. What I wouldn't of given for a speaker phone back then. Or a hands free kit!
19/01/2006 6:34:46 p.m. The Road to Hell - Day 2 A great story as usual. Also a little too real. Something about the best laid plans of mice and men keeps popping into this feeble brain. The operative word is LAID. I can't wait for the rest. No rush. :-)
5/11/2005 7:03:11 p.m. 69s Great idea and very well done. I don't know if I'd be able to keep it at 69 words, though. I tend to run off at the key board. :-) Well, it wasn't my idea, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
13/09/2005 7:26:09 a.m. Encounter Hi Beth, My second favorite way to wake up in the morning. Very well done. I am glad you liked it, indeed that is a good way to wake up!
4/05/2005 9:07:19 p.m. Alpha & Omega Ya dood it again. I have a twin story, but thats for me to write some day. Come on AFW. Out with it!
2/05/2005 6:31:39 a.m. Suddenly wide awake Excellent as always. Thanks. The rest of your comment would give the story away! :-)
5/01/2005 Next Time - Part 2 A excellent story, very romantic. But I guess it was the flow that made it a good read. It was almost like listening in on someones life, except for radio 2 playing in the background. Well done