Coven
That gentleness showed now. He pushed my skirt up just enough to give himself access to what he was looking for. His thumbs slid against my skin as his hands pushed the cloth up. He applied a little pressure to part my knees, and started to plant little kisses on my legs. Absolutely no pressure was required for my knees to part further, and I really did relax, though there was no way I was going to fall asleep.
Jul 2013
outstanding!!!!!!!!! loved the fun approach to it and the promise of more. where is Coven 3 when you need it?
Nov 2012
Really good little story.
Will read more.
Thanks for posting.
Jul 2012
A wonderful story, masterfully crafted. You must continue with these characters - the possibilities are legion...
Jun 2012
Not a great writer myself, so nothing literary from me--but those two are great, as usual from you. You to me are one of the very few on asstr (or anywhere else, for that matter) who pen literature, which happens to be erotic - or sexy - or both. Thank yo
Jun 2012
oh boy! THAT's what i meant about character development being a key to enjoying a story. But, in this case, the way you set up the situation was awesome !
Jun 2012
It's a fine story, just like the rest of your work. You have a wonderful touch with dialogue, as good as anyone I've ever seen, amateur or professional. I would love to see erotic films of your work; they would be so much better than 99% of porn....
Jan 2012
Now this is real nice little tale.
Jan 2012
Again, I like the reality of your writing.
Jan 2012
You are just being nicely honest. Again, thank you. It moves me.
Jan 2012
The story seemed very natural as well as the dialogue. Wonderful really.
Jan 2012
I just finished Coven 1&2 and they were great. Is there going to be a Coven 3some??
Jan 2012
I just finished Coven 1&2 and they were great. Is there going to be a Coven 3some??
Jan 2012
I love the dialog in your stories. The sense of mystery and the trust between the partners.
Jan 2012
Another great story.
Thanks for writing.
Dec 2011
Love sloppy seconds