Tights
I wasn't going to wear any.
Jul 2013
Tights was delightful.
Apr 2013
I would love to give it to you after that. Very sexxxy!
Nov 2012
MUCH BETTER.
Nov 2012
It was too too short.
Jun 2012
really nice story! i enjoyed it! keep the good work going :) maybe you should have added some pictures but was good :)
Jun 2012
So very original. A great story.
Jun 2012
I loved it! I loved Zoe's irreverent attitude and the ending was unexpected.
Jan 2012
Sexy...it has all the elements of a GREAT piece of erotica...slow build up, emotion, and some hot "wanna play with yourself" sex.
Dec 2011
You made me smile.
Dec 2011
Loved it!! More, please!
Nov 2011
I just discovered your work after doing a search
for adult interactions with minimal sex. Tights
is a great story! It is a pleasure to read a well
written story without any typos! Now, for the
other 121 stories.
Feb 2011
I thought that your story was really cute. You did a goood job on it.
Feb 2011
Fantastic!!
Love the humor, the surprise was a treat without going the threesome cliche'.
Feb 2011
Great stuff. Spare but readable. And believable, too. Keep it up. No pun intended.
Feb 2011
i must admit that was fantastic. While i am usullay interested in the gory graphic details this was fascinating in it's ability to drage me into the dialoge of the characters. This was not actually an erotic tale at all it was really a brief chapter in a
Jan 2011
Excellent
Jan 2011
Interesting and innovative, I wasn't sure about Zoe from the beginning. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.
Jan 2011
Lovely tale, beliveable dialogue. very human, not otherworldly. Pleasant comes to mind. Keep it up, that's what I ntend to do.
Jan 2011
Way above the usual run of the mill for erotic writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Jan 2011
Very nice story, just enough of a tease!
Jan 2011
dug it. Great character interaction.
Zoe, yeah!
that banter with a woman really gets to me.
Great tempo.
so I'm gonna read more of yours, if I can find it.
Dec 2010
Nice story, it drew me into the feelings of the people. Also, you nicely set the scene that brought up memories for me. Well done.
Dec 2010
Well written, which is exceedingly rare in erotic fiction, it could do with a little more back story, extremely enjoyable, I do hope you decide to continue, as this story shows immense potential to be a great series.
GBF: Series? Well, I did write a follow-up...
Dec 2010
As always a very sexy and gentle story with great overtones of romance and doing the right thing!
Dec 2010
I did read your story named Tights and found it rather good. Perhaps not something I will desire to read again, but it was a good read.
Good sex and interesting characters. Keep the good work.
Dec 2010
I loved the way your characters have ...uhm... character. And the whole thing is so believable.
Nov 2010
GREAT STORY
Nov 2010
Both chapters Excellent.
Nov 2010
Both chapters Excellent.
Oct 2010
Well at first I was disappointed at reading the second part. Your writing is very skilful, but I think I had made up my mind that the first part was a good stand alone.
However the last line changed my mind. I had the company of a Zoe for over fifty y
Oct 2010
I think your friend was right. I suspect that you felt it was alright too, but wanted to see if any one else agreed. Looks like we have plenty of company in agreement.
The short story is a neat, and difficult format. I believe you have it down pat.
Sep 2010
I think you're not done with Zoe and Louis. At least I hope not.
Thank you yet again.
Sep 2010
I loved it.
Sep 2010
Great sequel to Tights.
Sep 2010
I liked it very much. You seem to have a way of making the story about more than just the fucking yet do not ignore that either.
Sep 2010
You write very well. I scour through lots of erotica to find exactly the sort of stuff you do. Bravo.
Aug 2010
The humour is actually better than in the previous story.
Aug 2010
Delightful.
Aug 2010
If I were 30 years younger
Aug 2010
You turned Zoe into quite the character with just just a small hint of it in "Tights". But the story is very believable and , as usual, well written with great dialogue/banter. I personally think you should take it even further with a few more "chapters"
Aug 2010
Just read "Tights" and it seems to have a lot of potential. Zoe must be a real character which I'm sure you will use.
Aug 2010
omg
Aug 2010
Both stories were excellent!
Aug 2010
Both stories were excellent!
Aug 2010
Perfect mate, ideal follow up. That's an eleven out of ten for myself and the woman, though I note we're both too sore from following along now to be able to give a longer review.
Aug 2010
Now, THIS is a story with characterization! Ya wanna talk about plot, Nah, These two are all about who they are and how their bodies and minds interact, what they say vs. what they do and how 'they' create the story line. A really tight fit with the first
Aug 2010
I loved it, especially the ending. I'm still laughing.
Aug 2010
Sexy as hell! The character development and pacing kept me on the (literal) edge of my seat.
Aug 2010
You always have a dialogue far superior to anything in real life. I love it.
Aug 2010
Great, great story.
Aug 2010
A remarkable talent. Please keep 'em coming.
Thank you for sharing my day.
Aug 2010
Its was all i ever hoped for. Romantic, slow, intimate and fun. The banter is really well written, even if i got confused sometimes as to who was talking.
Aug 2010
pretty darn good story.enjoyed it. thank you.
Aug 2010
A nother winner.
Aug 2010
You have the most wonderful exotic and interesting was of making reading so exciting, sexy and funny all at the same time. Truly you are a master at this.....Thanks for your very obvious hard effort, time and work.
Aug 2010
I liked the story. I found it a very nice blend of mind and body. I probably much older than your characters, however I can remember strange relationships from the past.
Aug 2010
Damn! Very, very nice!!! Reminds me of my college days, now well and far behind me.
Aug 2010
Quite a nice turn of events -
The first part of the story gave NO clue of the second part.
Aug 2010
Loved the ending
Aug 2010
You got it. Its perfect. I wish I would have thought of that.
Aug 2010
And the scene with Stanley is both delicious and inspired.
More please.
Aug 2010
Fkn well done! And couldn't hav cum at a better time ;-)
Aug 2010
I like the story a lot. Between Zoe and Claire, Louis doesn't stand a chance.
Jul 2010
I love the setup, and while a lot of your stories feature a near constant smart-ass conversational tone, this one pulls it off really well.
Jul 2010
Great so far...just needs a long, detailed wild or romantic hot sex scene to "close the loop."
Jul 2010
I like the little tease and give back by holding off, at least for a few days, if I could handle it. you seem to like short stories, but this could have several chapters.
Jul 2010
It's near-perfect, just as it is. Don't add to it - less is more.
You write really well, a diamond among all the ASSTR dross.
Jul 2010
Leave it as it is. We can imagine what happens next, can't we ?
Jul 2010
To add anymore to this story would be to make it less.
It's just perfect. Keep up the good work.
Jul 2010
Your friend is right. It is damn near perfect, as is. You've set the scene, elevated the tension and dropped the penny. No need for a blow by blow.
Jul 2010
... I like this one best.
Jul 2010
Really enjoyed it. Good as is or can be added to.
Jul 2010
I like it! I think they should do more than spend the weekend at his place.
Jul 2010
It's a great start but there is so much more that needs to make it a great sex story.
Jul 2010
Good story. It was simple, well-written, and enjoyable. You could leave it just as it is, but I certainly don't think it would hurt if you continued.
Jul 2010
Good Story, young nice dialogs, can stand like it is, and - one wants to read more
Jul 2010
I want you to continue this because I thoroughly enjoy your writing. I want you to leave it because short stories are fun, and (this is going to sound weird, but I'm too tired to come up with a different way to put it) this story is balanced the way it is
Jun 2010
It _is_ fine just the way it is, but I'd also like to get to know the characters better, so I wouldn't mind a continuation.
Jun 2010
Perfect the way it is...sometimes leaving something to the imagination is good. Everyone can write their own ending in their heads
Jun 2010
I really enjoyed it, I love the somewhat loopy characters and the dance. It's great as is but if you went a little farther in this little "dance"
it would be great.
Jun 2010
Sometimes short and to the point is perfect. I have read many of your other offerings and know that you could embellish this quite well but why mess with perfection ?
Jun 2010
The story itself is nice; it's short and sweet and fun and teasy; and I like that, for once, there's no actual sex - diversity is, in and of itself, great. And it has promise of something longer.
Jun 2010
It is fantastic; the thing about short stories is they don't need tidy endings - they just need a good place to stop writing.
Jun 2010
Well............ It 'could' end here, however,..... the story seems 'incomplete' [uh] [frown]. It's cute but somehow seems so flat, so two dimensional like a cardboard cutout.
Jun 2010
Great beginning, Gentle; and I am glad to see you being creative again.
Hummm yes, the tail should continue.
Jun 2010
Honestly, it's was not your finest effort, however, it stands out as one of your better efforts.
Jun 2010
It is just fine the way it is. A followup would be an interesting challenge, but needs to be a different story and should not be set any earlier than a month or two after this.
Jun 2010
Did I ever tell you how much I love your dialogues?
Jun 2010
Nice twist at the end...very nice. A bit drawn out, perhaps. The bloke seemed a bit too dense to be real. But I guess Zoe didn't care if he was well-endowed in the BRAIN, just between the legs.
Jun 2010
yes it is just fine the way it is. Yes it could be the beginning of something else. All in how you feel your characters feel.
Jun 2010
nice...ends classy, not that I ever mind the smut in the end but this is as always well written and well done.
like the twist on the date and how you leave it to the reader to patch up the rest... good!
Jun 2010
I think it's good as it is mate, you have a bunch of sexual works and this works excellently as an anticipatory piece. I think you got a little tired near the end and moved faster than you normally do to this point, but that's no criticism. I suspect ther
Jun 2010
It is a wonderful short story in the true sense of the words and i can fully understand leaving it be.
Jun 2010
I've given your question a bit of thought. What I learnt in English class a *long* time ago was that a short story should end without resolving all of the conflicts. It can *suggest* a resolution and leave it to the reader to work out their own conclusion
Jun 2010
I think it needs to be finished somehow. You don't have to make a multi-story publication out of it (although don't let me stop you from doing so), but right now it lacks closure from my perspective.
Jun 2010
Just found your site and read a couple of short stories, I liked them so I am going to save your site in my favorites so I can read them all.
Jun 2010
No. Good just as it is
Jun 2010
Perfect as is. Why go further?
Jun 2010
Short, but I really liked the story.
Jun 2010
This story stands alone. Very tight. Gets the point across. Every now and then a quickie can be a good thing.
Jun 2010
Every time I stop in to take a look at something you've just put out, it's pretty much the same reaction: sexy, fresh, crisp dialog, short enough for a quick read, and .... where's the next installment?
Where should it go from here? Slow, hot. With a k
GBF: No, no, no. No. :-)
Jun 2010
Its a nice little story but it definetly needs more.
I was thinking that zoe and louis spend a fun and sexy weekend together and zoe reveals other more devious plan for their relationship.
I see this as a slowly evolving story about a long hidden crus
Jun 2010
I like it. A lot. Yes, it could easily be more. And no, I'm certainly not telling you where to go. ;)
Jun 2010
I like it the way it is too, but "Can't be done, buddy" is what some folks call a real cliffhanger.
You can't stop now. Sorry!
Zoe wants Louis to fuck her, so you have to bite the bullet (or Zoe's nipple)and write chapter two.
Just start, it'll write
Jun 2010
I'm normally all for more prose, but in this case I think your friend has a point. There's a beginning, a middle, an end, and the audience is for the most part happy with the ending. So let it lie.
Jun 2010
Well, it's a fine start but yes there needs to be more! Several installments more I would hope. Mr Dim-and-Nameless needs to prove to Zoe that chivalry is not dead and give her a bed for the night at the very least. Tough, I know, but a guy's gotta do
Jun 2010
You could extend it but it is very good on it's own.
Jun 2010
My opinion is that the story stands very well by itself. You are, after all, a master at short fiction.
But, if you do continue with the story, I'm sure it will turn out all right. You are, after all, a master at short fiction.
Jun 2010
I quite enjoyed it, but I like the way you write, you know that.
It works well as it stands.
But, if I were Louis, and fifty years younger, I'd take her home and if she were agreeable, give her a gentle but firm good girl spanking, for the way she dress
Jun 2010
Great short teaser, but it leaves me wnting to get to know the characters better. I just know Zoe is going to tease Louis within an inch of his sanity...and he is going to get soooo lucky. I wanna watch!!!
Jun 2010
I read "Tights". I like it. The women are real
Jun 2010
It is great as usual Gentle, but it kinda stops in the middle doesn't it? You just can't leave poor Louis standing there with a hardon after 3 hours of staring at Zoes panties and drinking and dancing.