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Wish I'd written it! :-) It's very, very good! You've done wonderfully with the characters. I like the idea of different channels for different people. Having Tom face the TV signal at the end was a delicious piece of irony that I really, really love!! Kudos, man! You da KING!! :-)
I enjoyed 'Satellite AGX-69 Services' very much. Although
I'm not turned on by smoking myself, I can see where someone might find
it erotic. I liked the fact that Bayles was less cruel to the women than
Tom was, allowing them to be something more than just sex toys, while still
using them for his own purposes. I've always felt that any mind controller
who takes a beautiful and intelligent woman and turns her into a brainless
bimbo is a fool. It's like eating all the filling from an Oreo and throwing
away the cookie. You may get the best part but why not enjoy the whole
thing? Why not use the woman's body to fulfill your physical needs while
using her mind to make you money or make your life easier? I think that's
what Bayles did with Melissa and Jennifer and I applaud you for it.
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