Queen Alice Feedback
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# of Ratings |
Avg. Heat (1-5) |
Avg. Writing (1-5) |
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6 |
4.57 |
4.17 |
I liked your Queen Anne Story.
Decent story, but do me a favor; dump the 1st
person perspective and switch to 3rd person.
This is GOOD stuff, keep it coming!!
Mas cool! Write more!
More, please!!!!!!!!
I also liked the first person point of
view. I'm sure most of the males on this group will especially like the
mistress to be the storyteller. Putting the reader in the place of the
'victem' also combines for a strong effect. Over all, Pretty good.
Please tell him we said, "MORE MORE MORE
ME MORE MORE MORE !! PLEASE! THIS is great."
cool story...made me hard!
Great, please keep it up.
I liked it, and would like to see more.
Brilliant, the ultimate fantasy.
Extraordinarily hot. Keep 'em
coming!