Penny Feedback
This was a response to a
direct challenge; someone told me I couldn't write "pure smut" if I
wanted to. This is the result. I'm a little disappointed in its
popularity relative to some of the other things I've written.
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# of
Ratings
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Avg. Heat
(1-5)
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Avg.
Writing (1-5)
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33
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4.03
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3.82
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More! More! More!!!
The story was hot because you could really sense
how much more Penny was satisfied by Marcus's big dick than here husband's
little prick. Very realistic!
I am not a big fan of interrcial, however you
certainly don't need to apologize for this story-- Part 1 seemed to have more
'zip' than 2 ??---maybe the 'I'll show them' motivation had waned because part
on WAS good ! and you DID show them that you could write"pure smut" I
enjoyed the way you wove the tale and made it believable, to the point that I
had serious thoughts that the narrative was a 'diary' and not a total figment
of your imagination. !! As your main character would say---"do it again!'
Keep writing them.
The "black man with huge dick"
fucks "lily white" shit is getting old. How about something new and
progressive? "Black girl gets the eating and fucking of her life by white
boy". After all, that is a trend in society that is catching up fast...
Bill was under developed. Penney could have
had Bill do anything to feed his submission.
Brilliant story, do you write many more of
this ilk -
No. -Pen
Excellent writing, I hope you will write more
wonderful stories containing smoke fetish and interracial themes. Thank you.
Very hot , you touched on all of my sexual
hot buttons. Smoking women, interracial sex (black man-white woman), and
cheating wives. Thank you for a very errotic story.
it made me cum