Night Music Feedback
This is my most popular story
ever. Many of the comments are from the original proxy posting on
alt.sex.stories, way back when. I'm just going to put up *some* of the
comments. New comments through the feedback system will take priority.
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# of
Ratings
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Avg. Heat
(1-5)
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Avg.
Writing (1-5)
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12
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3.92
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4.58
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Well written. Much better than nearly
everything else on asstr.
outstanding - please continue with the
characters
I'm sorry you're done with the Night Music
crew. I would have liked a story about the daughter or, maybe, throw in a
little Sci-Fi and write about their lives 50 or 100 years from now. Oh well. I
spent three separate evenings, working my way through that and savoring every
word of it.
I just got finished rereading the story
"Night Music" and I couldn't remember whether I had sent you a
message telling you how much I enjoyed it the first time I read it so I thought
I'd be safe and send you a message now.
are you thinking of writing more on night
music or continuing the universe?
Sorry... no.
I read your story Night Music and I loved it
very well written and I loved the characters. I felt the could have been real
people
I am a fan and author of vampire erotica. As
such, your story "Night Music" holds a very special place in my
literary heart.
Thanks for this story. It/s really hot. I
thoroughly enjoyed it.
Please tell the author that this story is one
of the best erotic stories I have read in 4 or 5 years. It isn't a
slam-bam-thank-ye-m'am story but has characters that sink their teeth into you!
[Sorry about the pun]
Hi There: I readed a bit of your marvelous
tale "Night Music". Itīs very fine! My english is not too goodm, then
I just readed first
some pieces of all the chapters, but certainly, what I readed is the class of
fantasy I like. Many thanks for the very good writing!
I just finished reading Night Music. I really
enjoyed it. Not just the erotic passages but the whole story. I'm glad that my
boredom made me check it out. Sorry to blather but I think this is the best
erotic story I've read in a long, long time.
I have often thought about the ultimate
vampire story and this is as close to it I've ever seen.
I had really enjoyed that story. Thanks for
the link that let me read all of it.
I just got back from break,and read the rest
if the story,and it was GREAT! But that can't be the end, I hope. I know others
have expressed similar opinions on Netnews, and I hope the author will continue
the story. It is fabulously written, and I enjoyed reading it a very much!!
In any case, this is one the best stories I have
read on the net. It is well written, and relies on the writing rather than the fetish
value of the its topic. This is a refreshing change.
You really should try to publish "Night Music".
Great story.
As an avid reader of vampire stories, this one
deserves a place in the top ten ever.
Your writing is very enjoyable. I see it is 7
to 12 years old so I don't hold out for another couple chapters. But if you do write
more, count on me reading them.
Excellent character development. Great story line!
Really would like to read more of this story. Many possibilities of development.