Mind Mistress-Ensnared Feedback
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# of Ratings |
Avg. Heat (1-5) |
Avg. Smoke (1-5) |
Avg. Writing (1-5) |
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2 |
3.5 |
3.0 |
4.0 |
Oh my but you do know how to
stir a girls wetness into many good vibrations.
I think the story line is a
piece of shit. –
If
you think I only put positive comments on my pages, you’re wrong. - Pen
I don't have a smoking
fetish, but the story still commanded my attention. It was hot enough that the
build-up wasn't tedious, as it often is when writers of erotica stray too far
from the genre. The payoffs were excellent as well.