Innocent Feedback
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# of Ratings |
Avg. Heat (1-5) |
Avg. Writing (1-5) |
Avg. Hypnosis Scenes (1-5) |
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6 |
4.5 |
4.83 |
4.75 |
Can't wait for additional parts, as usual, although your writing clearly shows it is well thought out and carefully edited
A lovely job of an introduction to a wonderful seduction? Where is the rest please!
Just loved the story and will be looking for more in the future,thank you.
when is the next chapter coming out
I cant wait to read more.This story is
excellent.Im so hot and wet and cant wait to get into bed and masterbate.Please
let me know when the next series begin.
Your current project - "The Innocent",
is looking like a fresh departure from most of your other works. Not too 'Sci-Fi', more down-to-earth, making
your storyline very plausible in today's World. You've taken a simple 'white
slaver' storyline and gave it a v detailed treatment - a nice departure from
most other authors.
I've always liked your attention to detail, and this story delivers.
Cant wait to read more chapters of this...
Having a long affair with erotica and
especially hypnosis on both a reading enjoyment level and practicing level, I
must say I truely enjoyed your story. So much so that I signed up for a
local hotspot coffee house and stopped in the middle of a busy day to
read. I'm really surprised that I had never read some of your writing
before but now I'm about to devoure you index.