Focus Group Feedback
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Oh my do please continue. let us, the reader know what
Pleasures
Libby has learned as well as their new dress code.or lack
thereof. Hot bodies needlots of sex.
Not only did you provide a
story line, you provided character details such that the reader felt that they
understood the characters motivations and reasoning. This allows the reader to
become far more involved with the story than if it were strait action. Another
thing that I liked about the story was that the method used required a number
of sessions rather than a one time gotcha-your-mine, session. This caused the
method to feel far more plausible than if only one session was needed. There is
something to be said about having to work for something. It takes thought,
skill, and a greater amount of risk. I
do have three things about the story that I was unhappy with, the lack of any
sex scene, the abrupt ending, and the incorrect story codes… Over all I
enjoyed the story, but I was disappointed with the ending. I look forward to
reading your other stories and will keep my fingers crossed in hops of you some
day dropping the last portion off this story and continuing on with it. I would
have rather had you end the chapter before the one-year-later bit and never
written another chapter than to have it ended the way it did.