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Complimentary Appreciation

by Mark Reed

Copyright 2003. All rights reserved by the author (that's me, Mark Reed). Posted here with permission.

Read at your own risk. If smut offends you, don't read this. If you're younger than 18, don't read this.


Ali moaned as Rod grazed his tongue lightly over her outer lips. He reached the top of her slit and began his down stroke, letting his tongue dig deeper into her folds this time. His upstroke started and he passed over her inner lips, lapping at the entrance to her tunnel. Ali's legs locked around his head and her felt her heels digging into his back. He inhaled her scent, taking in the scene of beauty before him, before he finally got back to the task at hand.

His tongue penetrated her deeper, pressing against the sensitive nerves of her passage, causing her to moan louder in pleasure. He imagined her face flushed red from the blood rushing through her body, frozen in a look of lust and twisted pleasure. He wiggled his tongue as much as he could and felt her muscles flexing in response, pulling him in deeper. He slowly withdrew from her entrance, feeling her squirm and tightening the hold her legs had on his head.

He moved his tongue slowly up her slit and readjusted her head until he was closer to the patch of soft fur which adorned her crotch. He found her nub with his tongue, feeling the vibrations of her moan through her legs, and gently wrapped his lips around the prize. Slowly at first, then with increasing frequency, he began to suck. Every so often he'd make a flicking motion with the tip of his tongue, causing Ali to jump and let out a small whine. The whine became a continuous sound, like a wordless incantation, as she grew closer to orgasm.

Rod sensed how near she was and moved in for the kill. He released her with his lips and circled her throbbing clit with his tongue, making sure to stay in contact with it the whole way around. Her hips lost all control and began to buck up and down frantically. Unable to continue to tonguing motions, he grabbed her nub with his firm lips and sucked furiously. Half a minute of thrashing and thrusting later, Ali came with a very satisfying scream. Her legs tightened against his head, pushing his face further into her crouch and cutting off his air supply. As he struggled for breath, a mouth engulfed his cock and began bobbing up and down on it quickly. The arousal he'd gotten from eating Ali suddenly bloomed, and he came with sudden, intense ejaculations. Finally Ali's legs went slack and Rod was able to look around again. Cat slurped happily at his dick and grinned at him saucily. She made one last tonguing motion under his head, then released him. "You've got an email, dear," she said.

Rod sighed and sat up. He gave Ali a quick kiss and Cat a promising smile, then sat down at his computer. Mark had posted yet another wise assed email to the group. Rod sighed and clicked the compose button.

Hey Mark,

Rod glanced over, suddenly distracted by Cat's swaying ass as she began playing with Ed Houle. He watched the flex of her muscles, an invitation which Ed quickly accepted as he began thursting digits in and out of her finger pie, and sighed to himself.

It's not like a pie (Rod glanced once again towards Cat, as she arched her back and moaned from Ed's busy fingers) where everyone gets a piece...

A sudden commotion at the door distracted Rod from typing. He looked over to see Heathen chasing a laughing Friday down the hall, towards Arty's basement. Okay, he thought with a grin, maybe everyone isn't getting a piece just yet. There was a sudden clap of metal on metal and Friday's squeal wafted back into the room. Rod smirked and corrected his prior assessment.

A compliment is like a smile...

Rod was distracted yet again when Ali crawled up to him and began returning the favor. She took his cock in her mouth, making slurping sounds and tonguing the slightly sensitive head. He felt himself growing once again at her attentions.

... that grows with the giving...

I jumped a little as her tongue flicked against the tip of his head. He moaned involuntarily and flexed his PC muscles, making his dick surge in Ali's mouth. She hummed appreciatively, which only increased his pleasure. She kept on humming, too, until he couldn't take it anymore. "Ali, dear, if you'll just let me finish this, I'll be right with you."

She released him with a lewd 'pop' and grinned lavisciously. Her face clearly showed she wouldn't be kept waiting for too long. Rod turned back to the keyboard and finished up his reply.

Each person that receives it gets the whole thing.

He was interrupted yet again as when Ali sat on his lap, straddling him. Obviously, she wanted to be the first person to receive the whole thing. Rod wasn't exactly in a position to stop her, either. He had just enough time to type out his name and click the send button before Ali's humping filled his mind with a lusty fog.

~Fin~


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