With Author's commentary

Why did I start writing erotic fiction? Or sex stories if you prefer. Well, it's because I've been reading the damn things for years. I'm not mentioning any names, because I've long forgotten them, but every time I ran across a story on ASS or a website that, for lack of a better term, sucked I couldn't help but think, I can write better stuff than this.

So I did. I don't pretend to be the best, or anywhere near the best, but I do assert that I'm far from the worst. This isn't arrogance, this is based on the fact that I've read some really shitty stuff in the past. I don't just mean that I was turned off by the story matter or anything like that, I mean it was shitty. As though the author was writing at a second grade level. So condensed and lacking of content that it was as though someone were trying to tell the story of Great Expectations in five paragraphs or less.

Another thing I was having problems with was that the sex stories were more sex than stories. Many of the stuff I was reading could be seen as little more than Letters to Penthouse. There's nothing wrong with a good stroke story every now and then, but I was distressed to think that more than 50% of the stories were stroke stories. I've always thought the eroticism came from the situation and not the act of sex. Some of the best erotic fiction I had read HAD NO SEX IN THEM! I determined that when I wrote my sex stories that I'd try to make the story a little more prominent than the sex.

Fortunately it looks like the quality of Erotic fiction has gone up lately. That may explain why I don't write as much of it as I used to.

Legion of Super Heroes
The first series I ever wrote was Brainiacal Genius. I've enjoyed the LSH since I was twelve, so if I was going to write an erotic fan fic it was going to be about them. There were so many eras to pick from but I was most familiar with the rebooted Legion so that's the one I wrote about. If you read the series, this all takes place shortly between the first and last story in LSH v.4 #100, after the time standed team in the twentieth century returns to the thirtieth century. If you haven't read the series I think you can still understand what's going on.
Of course I'm also into the really kinky stories. The mind control, the non-consensual, the D/S, the fetish stuff. So I incorporated a lot of that into these stories.

Brainiacal Genius
Part one: Death and a Statue
Brainiac 5's plot to turn his former female teammates into sex slaves begins as he turns Kid Quantum into a piece of erotic art. This was the first thing I ever wrote and posted onto ASS, it kind of shows.
Part two: Lamp
Brainiac 5 decides that he ought to find a use for Spark, so he turns her into a rubber encased lamp. For some reason I've always been turned on when other authors wrote about the special latex or leather fetish gear their characters wore, so that's why Spark gets a new costume rather than walking around naked.
Part three: Powerless Slave
The enslavement of Kinetix. I've always enjoyed storied where an arrogant woman is forced to become a powerless slut for her master, so I though Kinetix, the Legionarie who was always looking for more power would have been the perfect choice for this enslavement. Looking back though all the characters were turned into powerless sluts so I probably should have had Brainiac 5 make Kinetix into some sort of human toilet or something.
Part four: Messenger and Dogs
I've long thought XS & Triad were the sexiest of the LSH. I've always had a thing for comic book characters who were never certain about themselves, and despite their heroics always had an overpowering sense of self-doubt. So of course Brainiac 5 takes special care to turn them into slaves. In fact this is the longest part in the series, and not just because two different heroines are being subjugated. No, it's because I wanted to take special care describing how they get subjugated. Reading this I think you can really get a sense of how into comic books I am, especially when I describe XS' background. Reading this you can also see that I really enjoy it when characters are forced into situations where they end up losing that which makes them Them and turned into toys. I think its a common fetish amongst mind control fans.
Part five: Babe
Brainiac 5 infantizes Umbra. The erotic parts never really worked for me, but I had to do something with Umbra. I should have turned her into the powerless slave, her natural arrogance would have made her perfect for the part. Actually I originally planned to make her into a maid, thinking that the white lace would contrast nicely with her blue skin, but I decided against it. I should have gone for it, I could have had Brainiac 5 deluding her into thinking that if she was a good maid she could earn her way back to fucking M'onel. I should mention that it is in this Part that I wrote my first m/f sex scene.
Part six: The Tour
Even though this entire series was a fan-fic it didn't really have a fan-fic quality that most others do. By that I mean I didn't make characters I thought should be together end up together. Here that changes. I've always wanted Andromeda and Brainiac 5 to figure out they love each other and get married. (Or if you're an old school LSH fan, Brainiac 5 and Supergirl.) So here I did that, even if it is in a really fucked up way.

It's Not Easy Being Green
That's right, I'm a muppets fan. But that aside, this was a story about the Emerald Empress. In the reboot Shrinking Violet was the Empress for a while, and in my last LSH series she had been turned into a coma case. When I had been writing the first series I thought about making Violet shrink on a cock making it fill her entire body, but I didn't want Brainiac 5 to have sex with anyone, and I didn't want him to use dildoes so I just sort of turned her into a throw away character. When I thought of the Empress I realized that I had a chance to use Vi.
In the comic book one of the coolest Emerald Vi scenes is when she turns the Legion into the Emerald Legion, mind controlled servants for the Eye. Their costumes turn all green and kinky, it was in effect a situation of lost identity, which as I've said really turns me on. In fact that's why I like any erotic enslavement story, the slave is forced to give up her own identity and only take up the identity her master wishes. (Yes HER, I get no kicks out of men being enslaved or losing their identites.)
Speaking of the whole eroticism of a woman losing her identity, I really have to credit Robert Jordan's popular mainstream "Wheel Of Time" fantasy series for using the situation of powerful women enslaved into docile slaves. I don't think there's been a book in the series without that happening. The Seanchan play a significant role in the book, they are a race that enslaves sorceresses with magic collars. The enslaved sorceresses are deemed property, not humans, and forced to do whatever their mistress commands. And a majority of the series' characters are sorceresses.
Also, fellow internet erotic fiction Author Steve Zink is really the expert when it comes to stories where characters lose their identity and are turned into someone else. Altough Steve seems to enjoy physical transformation being part of the process, and deals with transgenderism more than I would like. (Transgenerism, like men being enslaved, does nothing for me, and at times puts me off.)
Story wise, this is the first sign of my feelings about monogamy, that being I'm for it. It is a theme that will run through the rest of my stories.

Saturn Sucks
I'm a fan of LSH. I'm a staunch advocate that Saturn Girl and Lightning Lad/Livewire belong together. How then do I write an erotic story about Brainiac 5, the hero of my LSH stories, enslaving Saturn Girl? I think I got around that pretty well.

Paybacks Are A Bitch
Sigh, I'm just a fanboy. Here I make all the couples I think should end up together, well, end up together. (Except for M'onel & Umbra, but that's going to be my swan song. The last piece of erotic fiction I write will be a LSH story.) You see, erotic fiction wise at least, I enjoy writing about a certain type of relationship; the "losing your virginity to your one true love which you'll stay with forver" relationship. I'm just a hopeless romantic at heart. I'm also a sick human being, because what turns me on is stories dealing with betrayl, deception, and helplesness. That's why I really like the LSH stories, I get to write about both factors of my mind.
The original title for this story was going to be "Fire and Iron" since it was going to only focus on the Ferro & Inferno relationship. But I didn't like the idea of Triad being in love with Chuck Taine and not ending up with him. (It's another relationship in LSH I'm an advocate of.) So I decided to put include their relationship in this story as well. I think it works as a really fucked up interpretation of true-love conquers all.

Other Fan-Fics
The great thing about writing fan-fics is that you don't have to spend a lot of time creating your character in the reader's mind. They already have an idea of who the character is, know what they look like and how they act. Anything you write just builds on that. But what if you want them to do something that would be erotic but out of character? Do what I do, use a liberal amount of mind control.

Justice Club: Young Justice
Young Justice vs. a strip club. Yenoc has a really great series called "Justice Club" about heroines who are brainwashed by a powerful psyhic into working at a strip club. Great guy that he is, Yenoc invited others to turn the series into a franchise. It wasn't long before people took him up on the offer, and here is my contribution. Yenoc's Justice Club seems to take place in a world where all the comic books universes are one. My story takes place after his sixth, and you can experience a lot more in my story by reading those first, but it also stands very well independently of them.
This story was written while I finished up Brainiacal Genius so it has a similar tone. It doesn't deal with as many fetishes, keeping to the mind control and super-hero ones.

Wonder Mike & Joan of Arc
This may be taking the idea of Fan-fic a little to far. You see, Wonder Mike is an erotic author who specializes in extreme celebrity stories. His stories often have atractive female celebrities engaing in gang-bangs, masturbation with strange objects, and of course, bestiality. It's the beastiality ones that often have me laughing, since he enjoys having the women get fucked by animals whose penises would never be able to fit any woman's orifice using real life physics. Still having a woman being fucked by a whale doesn't seem outlandish in a Wonder Mike Story. And before you ask, I did ask his permission.
I orignally meant this story to be part of this grand series organised on ASSD. It involved erotic authors traveling through time on a magic train and doing erotic deeds to historical fingures and in historical situations. I wrote this one before I read the fine print which said "NO NON-CONSENSUAL SEX". Whoops.

GI Joe: Reunion Invasion
There was a problem when I wrote this story, I'm a fan of both the cartoon and the comic book. The continuities are very different, in the comic book the relationship between Scarlet and Snake-Eyes is a central theme. But I also loved the semi-romance between Mainframe & Zarana in the cartoon. So I decided, fuck it, and used elements from both.
When I first wrote this I refered to the GI Joe known as Lady Jaye. After looking at some other people's fan-fics I did what they did and changed the name to Lady Jane. I thought they knew better. But after checking in a toy magazine I realized it was Lady Jaye. So I changed the damn name twice. Then there was me screwing up and mentioning GI Joe as a DC comic when it's supposed to be a Marvel one. And I changed Dreadnaught to Dreadnok. All these changes happened after I sent the story to five different sites. Shit! Shit! Shit!

The Broken World
The Broken World is where I stage all my fantasy stories. It is a place where science and magic have both been developed but unequally around the world. It isn't strange to have a country still in the Dark Ages be next to one with nuclear energy. I didn't intend for this to happen, but all my different fantasy stories seem to work better this way.

The Baker's Wager
This was my version of a fairy tale. A baker and his wife, a noble, are made to play in a series of games by a wizard. Here is an example of the weak being used as toys for the powerful. And the first story I wrote about adultery.
This is before I came up with the concept of the Broken world. It's more of a straight fantasy setting. But later I used a character from this story in another Broken World Story so I decided that this too took place in the Broken World.

Peter and The Wolf
I've never understood is this is a bestiality story or not. Yes Peter begins to insert his cock into a wolf, but she turns into a human the second it's in there. I didn't think it was a bestiality story when I wrote it, but someone asked if they could put it on their zoophilia story page.
When I wrote this I had no idea it would spawn a series. I just liked the idea of a woman who had to have a cock in her or she couldn't be human.
This is really where the Broken World concept started. Magic co-existing with science. The reason I did it was because I needed to come up with a way that Peter could survive as a hermit without leaving the house for months at a time. Wouldn't his food rot? Then it came to me, what if he had a refridgerator? From there I just had to ignore the contradictions of magic in a technological society.

Magician's Wolf
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Finally, a damned story with an unhappy ending. Not much I can say about this one except that I wanted to write a story where a woman was being fucked by wolves while an evil magician watched. I thought it would make a cool sequel to Peter and the Wolf: While Peter is away the magician kidnaps Clara knowing about her curse and then watches as wolves fuck her. But as I'm writing it the story evolves into this long tale about Peter learning the truth about his beloved "wife" and Clara's search for identity.
I have a tendency to write happy endings. I think I'm trying to balance things out since most of the stuff on ASS end pretty shitty for one character or another. Either a wife is sleeping around on a husband, or someone is being raped and sold into slavery, or something like that. It might also be because I get so into the characters I'm writing that I want them to end up happy. The thing is I read a lot of happy endings on ASS that don't make sense.
I'm all for a happy ending if everything leading up to that ending makes sense. But when the happy ending is pulled out of nowhere or it doesn't match the tone of the rest of the story it pisses me off. It doesn't feel real. So when I found mysef in a situation where either a happy or a sad ending would work I decided to go with the sad one. With everything else that lead up to the ending the sad one made more sense. And since it made more sense it was more intense.

Conventions of Magic
My original idea was simple, a wizard falls in love with another wizard's crony and is forced to watch as his beloved is punished for it. The story I have here has that in there, but it also shows how Wizards, Witches, and other magic users behave in the Broken World.
It is here that I decided that all my fantasy stories took place on the same world. I use characters from both the Wolf series and Baker's Wager, and if you've read them first then you'll appreciate a lot more many of the secondary characters' dialogue. Some of the situations here are going to lead into the final story in the Wolf series.
More than any other Broken World story I think this one best illustrates how science and magic co-exist in this world. The magicians are unrestricted in their uses of either, and so are able to live in a world where both are common place.

Wolf's Bane
Prologue
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
The Prologue and part one take place during Conventions of Magic and Parts two and three should occur between the the last moments of Conventions of Magic, SPOILER DO NOT READ REST OF SENTENCE IF YOU HAVE NOT YET READ CONVENTIONS OF MAGIC during the three years the characters miss through time travel. This is the last story in the Wolf Series, although the characters will make an appearance in one more story. I wasn't completely sure how to end this, because I enjoyed both the Aethis and the Clara character. If either one of them ultimately became triumphant the other would be miserable. The owl wizards could represent the two parts of me battling to decide which character should have the happy ending, but in truth the owl wizards were just my way of adding some humor to the story. Truthfully, I think I took the easy way out with the ending, it's too much like the "everyone's happy" ending of my LSH story "Saturn Sucks"

The IYA Society
The In Your Ass Society started off with me just experimenting with different styles of writing. I decided that a group of terrorists that went around shoving different things not commonly associated with sex into the assholes of innocent women was an idea meriting the experiment. I came up with dozens of scenarios, many of which I'll try in the future. But after a while I decided to give a motive to these terrorists, and I decided to use my favorite concept, cheating loved ones.
I decided that these IYA folk would be the avengers for the men in all the cuckold stories that were powerless to stop their significant other from cheating on them. I took it one step furhter and made the people shoving things in a woman's ass the front for the real organization.

The In Your Ass Society Chronicles
Tales of the In Your Ass Society
The originals, just quick scenes of women getting things shoved into their anal canal unvoluntarily. I should write more of these since they're so quick and easy to write.

The In Your Ass Secret Society
Part One
Part Two
Part Three: The Raid
Part Four: Vengeance and Some Emotional Crap
Most of my favorite sex stories involve an innocent young woman being maniulated, raped, overpowered, or drugged into slavery. Then the girl usually gets turned into a prostitute, a stripper, or a gang's fuck toy. A lot of times these women will have a husband or boyfriend, making the enslavement that much more tragic. I started coming up with ideas where the husbands and boyfriends were unwilling to put up with such things and fought back, which never happens in thses types of stories. I began to realize that such a scenario could never work because the reason the husbands never fought back in the original stories was that the one enslaving their wife was always stronger than the sensitive husband.
But I really liked my idea of husbands rescuing their wives and trying to rehabilitate the now cock hungry whores. So I began to think about ways that they could go about this. Then it came to me, what if they all banded together and rescued their wives as a team.
My mind pondered that idea and the IYA secret society emerged. Not just any team, but a ruthlessly organized paramilitary organization with access to advanced weaponry. SWAT Teams storming brothels where all the whores were wives being blackmailed was a common image in my head. That's when the IYA took shape in my mind. The vignetes where women were having stuff shoved in their asses could be the front, meant to take attention away from the IYA's real goal. And maybe all the women getting shoved up their asses could be cheating wives, the other antagonist to weak husbands. Yes! Vengance for all!

The Origin of the IYA
When I first came up with the concept of the IYA I envisioned a crack team of cuckolded husbands getting revenge on their tormentors. I came up with a series of 9 stories. The first two were supposed to be short vignetes with little plot and even less depth. They were to seem like nothing more than that. Then I would unleash this incredible series of stories which used the activities in the first two stories as a front to hide this incredibly elaborate secret society that avenged cuckolded husbands everywhere.
The first three IYA stories I wrote followed this plan. But after I wrote the third story I realized that I really didn't want to write the others. I had already began my descent into tedium. It was getting harder and harder to write the sex scenes, scenes which if left out make a sex story just a long analysis of relationships. So I decided to write two more, and then quit.
Origin of the IYA was to be the fourth story in the series. It was also the one I always knew I would have to write. It originally started with the main character being a serial killer who went into hiding and established a new life. Then when he found out his wife was cheating on him he began his reign of terror anew. That wouldn't work though, because why would someone like that start an organization like the IYA, or any organization for that matter. Then I thought about making the main character have an atom bomb, but I threw that idea out pretty quickly.
The Jet Lag Story
The Jet Lag Story has no real title. It is simply a story I wrote when I was in the throes of Jet Lag. As a result it bites big time.
Originally the Jet Lag story was supposed to be Part 5 of the IYA series. Part 5 was to consist of two stories of men who only skirted on the idea of joining the IYA. In the end neither needed the IYA's help. However poor outlining and the fact I wrote it when I was jet lagged resulted in the mess that the story is today. The other story, the one not included in the Jet Lag Story, was about a guy who finds out that his new bride has been his uncle's sex slave for yeaers. He confronts both his uncle and his wife but neither is willing to end their D/S relationship. The husband sends his father to talk to the uncle, but the uncle just has the wife fuck the father and that is that. Finally the husband talks to his cousin, the cousin confront's his father, refuses the offered sex (since the 2 cousins are really close), and gets the evidence needed for an annulment. The wife, torn up about losing her husband, realizes the D/S relationship is unhealthy for her and leaves the uncle.
Part 6 was about the IYA stumbling upon a Secret Society of Women mercanaries that killed the blackmailer and slavers commonly found in cuckold stories but unlike the IYA this new group took the victimized women for their own sex slaves. Part 7 was about a guy who cheated on his wife, but then to get back at him his wife became a slut wife. The guy saw his wife going beyond revenge and asked for the help of the IYA. The IYA would then have to decide if they wanted to help a man who essentially brought his own misery upon himself and did not have it thrust upon him by others, like the members of the IYA. Part 8 was to be a long story about how the IYA was torn apart by corruption and splinter groups. Then finally Part 9 was to be a group of IYA vignettes, like the first two stories, which all took place in the future.

Misc.

Secrets of the Bride
I enjoy adultery stories, even if the concept does piss me off. When I read fiction I like the idea that two people are meant for each other an no one else. I know it doesn't happen in the real world, but hell, I like my fiction like that. And yet I can't get enough of reading about relationships broken apart by betrayl. Although I notice that when I write a story about the concept the ending doesn't turn out as ugly as most others.
I've had requests for a sequel to this, where you learn how the couple reconciles, but that never really interested me. What I wanted to write about was the Bride's betrayl and how it ruined her relationship with the Groom.

Reap What You Sow
For all my love of stories dealing with betrayl I forgot that I also enjoyed the ones where the victim is just the victim. She is put through inhuman situations, forced to perform, and the bad guys are never caught. As a reader you don't care because you aren't identifying with the victim, you're identifying with the torturer. When I realized that everything I had ever written, with the possible exception of Brainiacal Genius, was written so that the reader understood the pain that the characters were feeling I knew I was in a rut. I wanted to write something where the reader was just enjoying the humiliation of the victim, not forced to understand it. So I wrote this.

Complex #533
This was my entry into the Iron Writer Competition. I was up against Frank McCoy and our subject was the Camera Club. I won with a 3 to 1 vote. (All Iron Writer competitions are won with a three to one vote.) I half suspect that I won not because of the quality of my writing but because Frank McCoy's story focused on rampant incest and incestual orgies and that tended to put some of the judges off. Regardless this is far from my best work since it was a rush job, and if you read it you should be able to spot some pretty big plot holes.

Face of Perfection
To me the worst part of Slut Wife stories is the way so many of them end. The husband can't stand between his wife and the cocks she loves, but he still loves her, so he sits back and watches his wife fuck around on him. In some the husband is turned on by the fact that his wife fucks around, in which case he often licks men's cum from her cunt afterward. That's always stricken me as very gay. In others the husband is given no choice in the matter.
I touched on it during the IYA Secret Society story, but I left it at the fringes, preferring to deal with the scenario of unwilling wives. Secrets of the Bride was about a woman who hated that she was cheating on her lover, but not about a woman eager to do it.
Face of Perfection was the story about the True Slut Wife. I kept the bulk of the story very much like all the other slut wife stories I had read, but I changed the ending. I never understood why in all the slut wife stories there were only around six that had the husband putting his foot down and saying no, and even in those six it made no difference, the wife just went back to her slutty ways.
I changed that, I had the husband become so enraged that he became the dominant figure in the relationship again. And boy did it work. I got more responses to Faces of Perfection than I have for any other story I've written. Every e-mail I've gotten has said the same thing: "It's about time someone wrote a story where the husband reacts like he would in real life."
The complaints I've gotten on this story have all concerned the ambiguous ending where it's uncertain if the husband will forgive his wayward wife. I did that on purpose. I've also gotten a lot of requests for a sequel. I'm thinking about it. I might even merge the Secrets of the Bride Sequel and this sequel into one story.