This short story is an entry in the 2011 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Verse
Classics
In her bedroom she waits, alone and apprehensive, sent there for childish crime.
should be condemned unheard. Why is it always I
For his girls are her father's special pride
"She needs a dose of strap, she was sassy and unruly. Frank
On your part? You know you favor Betty, and that prejudice
"Oh no, this time she's fairly earned her punishment
And so her crime received its well-earned punishment
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The End
Author's note:
This is a Sestina, see http://spankingartwiki.animeotk.com/wiki/Sestina, http://www.public.asu.edu/~aarios/formsofverse/reports2000/page9.html, and http://www.uni.edu/~gotera/CraftOfPoetry/sestina.html for more details.
Also, in this case, the end-words in their initial order, taken in pairs, form a set of literary references.
© Copyright 2011 John Marks
Reviews
Barraster
Bravo! A sestina is not at all easy to write, especially this trobar clus. I think one was entered last year or the year before - perhaps by you since I don't know who you are - and I enjoyed it then and now. I wish you could have provided the music that used to accompany a sestina. All that aside, it also told a fascinating story of domestic punishment, jealousy and tension. Ah, maybe the musical accompaniment should be played by a strap on a bare bottom.