This short story is an entry in the 2011 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Verse

Longing

Jen

I yearn for your touch,
Your hand on my bottom,
It's been too long since
the last time,
When you changed my
pale skin to red,
And my demeanor from
stubborn to calm,
Making everything right
in the universe.

I need to feel all of it again,
Your belt scorching my skin,
The paddle demanding my
full attention,
All at your command,
I relinquish all control,
Needing only your power
to guide me,
Leading me in the direction
you wish me to go.

I miss these things,
And my longing is becoming
all encompassing.

The End

© Copyright 2011 Jen

Reviews

Lydia Carrol

Using uncomplicated words and phrases, this poem captures the feeling of longing well. The emotional intensity of this poem does not fall short of infectious.