This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Verse
This song has a great little tune with it, too. <grin> It's the type of song that I am sure will be added to as the years go on...and on...and on! Feel free to write your own verses but remember folks, you heard it here first.
Vanilla Daddy
By
Steven <Otkforu@smilingwithteeth.com>
Zprymantis <zprymantis@smilingwithteeth.com>
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Vanilla Daddy is coming to your town;
Vanilla Daddy it's not an imposition,
Vanilla Daddy is not considered crass
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The End
© Copyright Steven and Zprymantis, 01 September 2003
Reviews
Pablo <pablo.stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I think I miss the tune here, which the piece needs to be whole. I very much like the idea of ironically celebrating vanilla desires, and it's that which this piece does best.
Kessily
I really wish the name of the song this was parodying was included. It's really hard to rate because of that. I do think the lyrics are cute and funny. And...Ripple is one of my favorite songs too so extra points for that!
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Humm, sour grapes against someone's Vanilla Daddy? <g> This was a fine verse. Made me remember a few Vanilla Puppy's I've had in my past. Thanks for the fun contribution.