This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Thrill of a Lifetime
By
Zad Zadigski <zzadigski@yahoo.com>
Linda had always had this fantasy, to be spanked in front of a group of people. Not only to be spanked, but to be given a hard spanking on her bare bottom. She couldn't understand how the very respectable mother of three grown children could still have such fantasies, but she did.
At age 48, she was sure that her chance for this had passed her by. But she had met Sophia online in a spanking chatroom and finally in real life. Sophia had convinced her that she still had a great figure and told her about a Fetish Night that was going to be held at a local nightclub. Sophia had even convinced Linda that no one would recognize her if she wore a wig and a mask.
Besides Sophia had insisted, "most people are going to be looking at your well rounded behind. Who will be there that has seen your bottom often enough to know its you?"
The big night came. Sophia had gotten a French Maid costume for Linda and found her a partner, a handsome young man named Jerry. The big night came. There were at least three hundred people in the audience. The spotlight lit up the stage where Jerry called his French Maid, Fifi, onto the stage. He lectured her for her carelessness. Then he announced that the only proper punishment was a spanking.
Linda said nothing, she was afraid that someone in the audience might recognize her voice. She was put over Jerry's lap. The little skirt was flipped up. He spanked her ruffled panties. Then he pulled those down to expose her flesh colored thong and her bare cheeks. He spanked her almost bare bottom with his hand. Then he used a paddle. He had Linda over his knee for almost forty minutes. It was a very sexy spanking and Linda was glowing in more ways than one when it was done.
Linda hurried out of the nightclub, ignoring the applause and compliments, and convinced she had gotten away with it. That is, until she heard a horrified voice say, "Mom, is that you?"
The End
© Copyright Zad Zadigski, 31 August 2003
Reviews
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
What a great story. I will be thinking of this for some time to come. The story was well constructed. The word pictures were clear. The ending was a blast. It does leave one single question. What were her children doing there? Maybe we will find the answer to that question is Chapter two of this story. I hope that this writer continues to provide us with more stories. Don't know what else to say about this story but keep up the good work.
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
Linda's characterization was so vivid, I was seeing her as a real person. I was cringing right beside her with the line, «"Mom, is that you?"» Yeow!
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
The ending has me confused, was the daughter in the club or just walking outside of it when Mom ran into her? This was a well written first spanking in front of a group story. The spankee's tension was well done.