This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Ageplay
Clothes Call –
By
Rosy B. Goode <RosyB.Goode@newsguy.com>
Auntie Rose stood in the doorway, surveying the mess. A profusion of lacy petticoats, pretty ruffly dresses, Hello Kitty panties and more lay strewn about her guest room, while Terri lay on the bed, coloring busily.
"Terri, you told me you would fold your clothes."
"I'm busy. It's only a few things. I'll do it when I'm done"
"You are supposed to finish your chores before you play, Terri, and you got out just about everything you brought."
"It helps me decide, if I can look at them all. I'll put them away later." Terri continued coloring, the tip of her tongue poking out between her teeth as she colored in the sky behind the fairy in her coloring book.
"You had better start folding right now, and then you will get spanked for every minute it takes you to get it done."
"But I was going to do it in a minute, as soon as I finished the sky! Really!"
Auntie Rose looked at her watch. "The clock is ticking, Terri."
Terri stood up, wailing, "It's not faaaaiiirrrrr!"
"I'll decide what's fair in my home, young lady, and you'll do as I say if you want to visit."
Terri looked pouty, but she was also folding clothes as quickly as she could. She did not want another five minute spanking like last time!
"I don't see why I always have to do my chores first, when coloring is more fun!" she pouted.
"You know the rules, dear. The clock is ticking."
There were more clothes than Terri had thought, and it took longer than she'd hoped, but finally Terri folded the last little pair of panties and everything was piled neatly on the dresser.
"That took six minutes, Terri." Auntie Rose pulled out the chair from the vanity and sat down. "Now come here quick or I will add more time."
Terri hurried over to Auntie Rose, bottom quivering in dread.
"Since you were willful and pouted, we will start on your bare bumbum." Without ceremony, Auntie pulled down Terri's pink panties and pulled Terri over her left knee, wrapping her right leg over the little girl's legs and flipping up the little skirt. She wrapped her left arm around Terri's waist and held her securely.
The hairbrush came down briskly as Terri owwwed and wailed and apologized and made frantic promises and wiggled what little she could. At last she just lay sobbing, while the brush spanked on, covering her thightops and round little bumbum with layers of burning spanks until her bottom was bright red and stung terribly. Finally it stopped. Auntie Rose stroked her hair until her breathing smoothed out.
"All right, sweetie, your punishment is over. Now give me a hug and promise to do better and you can color some more."
Slowly Terri stood and then hugged Auntie Rose. "I'm sorry Auntie. Next time I will do my chore first."
"That's my good girl," Auntie said, and Terri ran back to her colors.
The End
© Copyright Rosy B. Goode, 31 August 2003
Reviews
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
This was my second Auntie Rose story to review. This time I didn't need somebody to point out that it was age play. Knowing that ahead of time, made this story even more enjoyable. The words pictures are clear and enjoyable to look it. I had no problem seeing the pink panties as they slid down her legs to crumble at her ankles. Maybe Eve will read this and we can see it on a DVD some day. I know that I would be in line to purchase it. The author has the ability to write very good stories and still stay within the words limits of the SSC. Good job! I have added Auntie Rose to my list of stories to be looking for on SSS. I wonder just how much that author of this story writes for a living. I would love for the author to email me with that information. If they don't write for a living they might want to give it a try. Keep up the good work. Thanks for allowing me to review this one.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
I haven't read a good Auntie spanks willful niece story in a long time. Rosy B Goode's story has me feeling very Goode indeed. I was all tingly and secure by the time I finished the read. Ouchie good child spanking story.
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great Great story! Though Auntie Rose's discipline may be a bit rough, if this was in fact, a very young girl, as described in the story. However, we know, this is in the Ageplay category, which makes the story very enchanting. I enjoyed it immensely! Well written and structured. Great descriptions that painted the scenes quite well. Glad I got to read it, for it is truly a great story!