This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga.
Going Shopping
By
Plierla Fesserla <PlierlaFesserla@hotmail.com>
"Look at this mess you two. I'm very cross. You've had all weekend." Trousers tugged down, underpants follow.
SMACK SMACK.
SMACK SMACK.
Skirt raised, knickers lowered. A like punishment administered. "Tidy up while I'm shopping or you'll feel my slipper."
"Jenny sweetheart; shopping time. Are you bringing Ken and Barbie?"
The End
© Copyright Plierla Fesserla, 18 August 2003
Reviews
Kessily
This mini-saga was not at all remarkable until I got to the last line and then the light dawned. It made me smile.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
This is so cute. What a fun idea. A budding lil spanko switch. Packed a lot of er wallop in so few words. I enjoyed the story.
Huh Chub <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I was pleasantly surprised by the ending of this mini-saga. I couldn't figure out if the main characters were children playing or adults make-believing. I love this story. I wonder if the little girl/boy playing with dolls will grow up to be a top or a switch. Great job!