This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Alarm!
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
My cane landed squarely across her bare bottom producing a vivid stripe. She screamed.
"Complete silence!" I demanded. "Two extra for making silly noises!"
The cane slashed down again. A second scream.
"Another two extras," I said gleefully.
The shrilling of the alarm-clock woke me up. "Damn!" I said aloud
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 07 August 2003
Reviews
Jessie
I really don't see a story here, just a few sentences. I'm afraid I don't see any point to it. I'm aware that this is a difficult category in which to excel, but this is just uninspired
Kessily
This little piece felt slightly disjointed, which shouldn't come as a surprise when you get the end and realize what's happening. I liked it. It was a cute little piece, nothing fancy but still fun.
Ladiejj <ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com>
This is a great mini-saga. The author gives us a complete story. This story is
so enjoyable because it is so real to life. How many of us has this happened to. This
story is vivid, erotic, and also funny. The last line is a great ending to this enthralling
story. This story made me smile.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
I liked this little mini-saga alot. I would have only change one word: «shrilling», I would have said the scream of the alarm clock, but that is this author's view, not the author who wrote the quite nice mini-saga. Poor boy to learn it had all been a dream but what an ouchie dream.