This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Fanfiction
Why Mr. Ed was really famous
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"She did it again! Brought one of her giggling girlfriends in here, telling her pal that it was so big it almost reached the ground. Then the scamp put her hands around it and started pumping me up! Wilbur I just won't have it. You better reign that little filly of your's in."
"I can't believe she'd do this again, after I told her to leave it alone."
"Well, you're getting the truth straight from the horse*s mouth. Believe me I was afraid she was going to use her mouth and I'm just not into mixed species sex, with females." Ed winks.
"Ed! OK, I got it, please stop!"
"Wilbur I want to know you'll punish Carol good this time."
"Alright! Alright, tonight."
Ed was glad Wilbur endorsed his sage advice, this time.
Wilbur went back to the house to confront Carol. Just after dusk, Wilbur and Carol came back to the stable. Carol was in tears.
"Take off your clothes Carol."
As if she knew it was coming, she did as told. Ed snickered at her nakedness. Wilbur put a blanket over Ed's back.
"Up you go. Now Carol!"
Carol scrambled up to lay herself over Ed's back. Her butt sticking out on one side, her breasts hanging down on the other. Ed watched as Wilbur took up a riding crop.
"You will never touch Mr.Ed, there again!" With that statement said he let her have it. He whipped Carol's bottom good and hard. With each flinch and holler from Carol Ed felt increasingly vindicated. After a good long whipping Wilbur sent Carol back to the house naked and blubbering.
That night as Ed was eating his oats he mumbled, with a smile; "No one comes between me and my Wilbur!"
The End
The Mr. Ed TV series ran on CBS between January 5, 1961 and September 4, 1955. Mr. Ed was originally named Bamboo Harvester. He was foaled in El Monte California in 1949. His trainer was Les Hilton, who also worked with the mules on the Francis the Talking Mule movies. Mr. Ed was 9 at the time of Hilton's purchase. Mr. Ed was put to sleep in the 70's, after Hilton's own death. Mr. Ed's passing was done quietly and without fanfare. He had suffered from arthritis. More info at: http://horsefame.tripod.com/MrEd2.htm
© Copyright Peachesicu, 02 August 2003
Reviews
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
This story lacks depth in my opinion. It could have delved a little more into the story line especially since you only had a little over half of the word count allowed. I know fanfiction is often unrealistic. I try to suspend reality when reading stories, but this time I could not. Perhaps, because I have horses myself, all I can say is "yeah right". Sorry.
Kessily
I am a fan of this category and was of course very happy to be able to judge a story entered into this particular section. While I haven't seen Mr. Ed in years I do remember enjoying the show quite a lot. This story was hilarious...I can't see his wife, as portrayed on the show, every being so naughty (in a sexual manner) but it was a delightful read. I especially enjoyed the true facts that were listed at the end of the story. Very interesting!
C_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
I love this story, not only for the good dose of the crop that the bratty girl gets, but the
perfect placement of her bare and over the horse's back just makes a terrific mind picture, and that
little slight hint that Mr. Ed likes to be played with by his owner could be interesting to explore
sometime but I'd much rather see her not learn her lesson and get caught in the act next time that
would be a nice beginning for another story. :)