This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Babe Magnet
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
People say that being caned is erotic. I say that anyone who believes this is off their trolley. Being caned is bloody painful.
It is something I remember with repugnance even after forty years. I do not find the recollection erotic in any way. It haunts me. I often wake up in a cold sweat after dreaming about it.
"You are a disgrace to the school, Baker. You are deceitful, and a cheat. You have played truant on three occasions and have forged letters from your mother saying you were ill. This is the most flagrant example of shameful behaviour I have ever come across." I remember the headmaster's words well. They burned into my soul.
"I shall punish you, Baker, and punish you severely. You are a despicable, worthless, shameful member of this school. I should expel you, but that would not be a punishment to you, would it? Therefore, I shall cane you."
He glared at me.
Incongruously I could hear sparrows twittering in the trees outside his room.
Then he spoke again, his eyes glinting with disgust. "Get your trousers down and bend over that chair." His lips curled as he said it.
When I was in position, underpants and trousers around my ankles, he tucked my shirt up high. Then he started. Now it was the cane that burned into my soul, or more precisely into my bare bottom. I cringe at the memory of the pain from each stroke, even after all these years. How can anyone think that a caning is erotic? It is simply bloody painful. How can anyone beat someone, deliberately giving them unbearable agony? This is erotic? People who believe this must be mad.
But there are such people. Females, would you believe?
I remember the first girl who asked me if I had been caned at school. She wheedled the details out of me, and sickeningly clearly enjoyed talking about them, swilling them around her mouth as if she were wine-tasting. Saliva oozed from her lips as she drooled over the details. What did I feel like when I was taking my trousers down? What did it feel like when he pulled up my shirt? How did I feel while I was bending over waiting for the first stroke of the cane? What did the first stroke feel like? How much did it hurt, and so on. She couldn't get enough sordid detail. She loved the words "bare bottom," and repeated them as often as she could.
I was thirty at the time, still hung over from a messy divorce. I realised that the sordid details of my caning aroused her, God forgive her!
When I got her to bed, without much resistance may I add, she was wet with excitement. It was the easiest lay of my life, up to then.
I cringe at the recollection of every stroke of that caning. But it's an ill wind, for I must say the topic is a perfect babe magnet.
The End
© Valerie Meilong 22 July 2003
Reviews:
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
Very well written story. Could have had more detail of the caning itself and focused more on the caning. Author picked his words very well and had impact with most of them which is a very effective method given the short amount of words allowed. Would love to see this story without the restrictions of a word limit.
Kessily
Well, this is definitely not a Pro-spanking or Pro-caning story! Which is not a problem at all because it is still a very good story. The author did a very nice job of describing the emotions of both boy and man.
I could sincerely understand exactly why the man felt as he did and what lead him to that point was clearly explained. From the other side I could certainly see the attraction to details that the women feel. The dynamics of this piece are interesting and rather unusual for a story posted on SSS.
The man has no interest in it at all but the women do so he uses it. Not an unrealistic situation at all. Did I enjoy the story? Well, no not really but it was well written, it was very realistic, and I could completely understand the motivations behind the characters.
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Ok, I love this story. It is well written and very original. It has wonderful imagery and an insight to the poor character's disgust of caning. I enjoyed how the character then used the trauma to get the easiest lay of his life up until his 30's. I don't see ANYTHING wrong with it.