This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
In response to Natty's recent query with a similar subject line.
Must Spanking Stories Be Erotic?
By
Do I have to tell you why you're being punished?
Yes, sir.
For cheating on your homework, failing to pay the Visa bill, shoplifting, denting the car.... Are there any cliches I've left out?
Probably.
What?
I mean no. I mean, can't we do just one?
O.K. The Visa bill. Now get across my lap. Now!
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Oh, please, no more. I won't let it happen again.
I bet you won't.
Oh, that hurt so much.
We're not finished. I was just pausing to admire. Your bottom is a nice shade of pink. And the other, it looks so cute, nestled there like some damp, delicious fig or papaya.
Hey, I thought we weren't going to go there.
What do you mean?
You know. Must spanking stories always be erotic? I said I'd be in this story only if there was no sex.
But I didn't do anything erotic.
Yes you did -- that remark about my...you know. When you say that it's cute like some tropical fruit, that's erotic.
Thank you, Dean Martin.
Huh?
When your thigh feels my cock get as hard as a rock, that's erotic.
It's not funny.
No? A couple of readers just smiled.
Well, scusa me, but I thought this story was going to be just about punishment. Why does it always have to lead up to sex? Why can't it just be, I don't know, psychological?
You say role play and I say foreplay; let's call the whole thing off. I started out pretty well though, didn't I?
But then you spoiled it. You were trying to change the story.
With one lousy observation, a flattering one at that?
Yes. It doesn't take much, you know.
Stop arguing. I...told...you...not...
Ow, ow.
...to...talk...back...to....me.
Ow. I'm sorry.
Sorry, what?
Sorry, sir.
Get me the belt and bend over the end of the bed. Now!
Yes, sir.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Have you learned your lesson?
Yes, sir. Please no more. I'll never let the credit card bills go unpaid again.
Good. Now get up and stand in that corner.
Yes, sir.
I'll back in ten or fifteen minutes, and when I come in, I expect to find your nose against that wall, understood?
Yes, but.... Where are you going? There's just this one room in the story.
I'm going to see if I can get into a Mish-ele story some place. Sorry, but my condition right now is near-medical-emergency.
What? You mean you're going to find some Monica-in-a-thong to....
No, no, no. Can't say that in this story.
But....
No buts. It's corner time for you, missy.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
My bottom is still so sore. But, see, isn't it good just to lie here with me curled up like this?
Wonderful.
Did you really go to a Mish story?
Nah. Couldn't get in. Her characters aren't real big on threesomes.
Well, maybe after we cuddle a while, we could, y'know, take care of your medical emergency.
The sooner the better, nurse. But that's another story.
The End
© Copyright Bird, 14 June 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Who wouldn't want to walk into one of Mish's stories? I mean the men are usually "blew" and the woman left tingly and wet. I've dreamed myself into quite a few. This is a wonderfully fun and enjoyable spanking story. Different and well written. I adored the banter of the characters as to just what kind of spanking story this would turn out to be.
The idea that a delicious fig or papaya could be so erotically stimulating as to change the whole face of a scene was a tickle. Whether there are fig's or papaya's in a story or not, I adore a good spanking story and this was one of the best.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I loved this story. Very creative. Every excuse in the book. Every story in the book. Right here. 500 words. Sums it all up doesn't it? Very good.
Ladiejj <ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com>
Post modernism at it's finest...IF a tree fell in the forest would it still be ironic. I found this story to be very funny. Even though it was somewhat random in thought pattern it seemed to flow well. It made a point, but did so using humor. It is also somewhat realistic, I am sure many folks have had witty repartee during a scene. I do think that the dialog ran together a few times and could have been separated better. I like the way the characters know they are being watched -- by the reader of the story of course.