This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Edge
With Help from a Friend
By
He had to do the shopping; the cooking, the cleaning, the errands and he had to help me bathe and dress. I had a painful back injury, pinched nerves, and slipped discs. I was a mess.
I could no longer go horseback riding, camping or dancing, some of our favorite activities. The stress on our relationship was taking its toll.
My husband is a kind, considerate, passionate lover who loves me very much. Deep down though I knew he felt cheated by my limitations. I have always been a freaky lover, anything goes and he loved taking advantage of that part of my libido.
Lately though he was almost afraid to touch me, fearing I would break and I did not help matters as I was often out of it on medication. It had been a year, one month and three days since we had played out a dramatic discipline scene. I felt lost, hopeless and I am sure he felt more of the same.
On Tuesday of this week, after hubby had left for work, I took up the laptop as I sat in bed. I was going to go on line when I realized he had not signed off. My sneaky nature took over and I started to peek-a-boo through his emails.
To make a long story short I discovered he'd been having a online top and bottom relationship with a girl across the country. I was hurt but I guess not shocked. He told her he loved me but that his frustration at not being able to play with me, as he wanted to was really getting to him. I knew I had to do something. I called my best friend for her help....
When hubby got home I heard him call out to me, but I could not answer. When he came into the bedroom and saw me, he started to tear up.
"Are you sure?" I nodded as best I could. I watched as he rolled up his sleeves.
My tits were wound up tight with rope that snaked around them and then my neck. They were turning a fetching color. My hands were pulled up and apart, then tied above me to separate bedposts. My ankles were bound to a spread bar and then pulled up and tied separately to the same bedposts above my head. I was in the diaper position totally exposing my sex and anus. My boobs were torpedoes sticking up between my spread thighs. I held his riding crop between my teeth.
In the mirror above me written in shocking red lipstick were the words:
Master please whip me.
I need it hard and long!
Your loving sub slut.
The End
Author's Note: I feel this fits the edge category because it is something that would be very hard for me to do on my own without being told to do this by my Top and Master. Also to have to ask a friend to get involved is something that is pushing me to the edge of my comfort zone. I have to take her into a very personal part of who I am and who I am with the one I love. In addition, this is not a simple OTK spanking scene but a BDSM scene. Hope that explains it. Happy Camping.
© Copyright Peachesicu, 10 July 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Great job writing this story. I agree that this fits into the edge category in terms of daring on the part of the woman choosing to submit without being asked, commanded, or ordered to do so. I imagine that her submission is all the sweeter for her choosing to give this to her husband. Once again, Great job!
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Although this couple is involved in more heavy duty-type play than anything I've ever done, I could feel the frustration in both partners at the limitations placed on their activities. I didn't find the story that edgy, but then, I'm not involved in that type of relationship. The author's comments at the end did make sense.
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
My interest soared to the very end. Emotions ran high, as they both felt cheated, missed what they had shared. Characters are well developed, the flow of the story excellent! Excellent realistic story!
This seemed very real to me, as my mom and dad went through the same thing. My dad even carried my mom to the car, for her doctor's appointments.
A story everyone can relate to if they've had any back problems or any limitations in their own life. Though everyone is not into BDSM, we can all relate to the story. Injuries such as these would cause us to miss what we shared in our lives with our partner. Whether it be motor biking, water skiing, or horse back riding, etc. Whatever the couple enjoyed together!