This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
To Be All That I Can Be
By
When I'm old and gray, I want to be known as that sweet old Lady who smiles at everyone. The one that makes the best cookies, and shares them. The Lady that has the cutest cat and that fluffy little brown dog she walks everywhere. I want to be admired for my pleasantness. People will want to be around me. Soft spoken, easy to laugh with yet sentimental enough to shed a tear with.
When I leave a room I want my light to go with me while leaving enough of a glow behind to embrace those that I leave behind ... but I'm not little Miss Fucking Mary Sunshine, so I'm going to need a helping hand to get there.
My mouth runneth over with emotional, temperamental, spewing that ain't easy to defuse. I have a very hard time holding in my jealously that is always on the tip of my tongue. The beast in me gets the best of me! Oh, My!
So, here I am over the arm of the couch. My bum up and saluting, naked as the day I was born. Promising promises as my hubby pulls free his belt to whip my ass....
"I'm sorry I stomped. Sorry I threw a tantrum. Sorry I called that body builder girl a no tit, all muscle, wants-to-have-a-boy's-body bitch, in that magazine you are always reading -- something you could go ahead and fuck in the ass!
"OOUUCCHH!
"I'm sorry I showed it to the old Lady next store and asked her opinion on your pornography!
"OUUWW!
"Oh yea! I'm sorry I'm getting a whipping and that I shaved your smart-assed dogs ass!
"OwwWW!
"Yes, I know, you don't have to tell me who's going to get fucked in the ass!
"YEEEAAAPAAAA!"
The End
© Copyright Peachesicu, 04 July 2003
Reviews
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
I know the category is adult but I found the story to be humorous anyway. The contrast of the sweet old lady ideal versus the language and images used was refreshing.
Maybe there could be a sequel where, this time, the spanker will write on his perspective of being all he can be, too.
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
Temper, Temper! Well she certainly racked up a number of transgressions. It was a different was to start this story. A goal that she is reaching for, followed by the trials she must suffer for her
to attain this goal. Considering her actions, I would say she won't be sitting too comfortably for a while. Nice job.
Pablo <pablo(dot)stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I had such a good time reading this piece. It's funny and clever and insightful. The slow disintegration of the genteel, almost sentimental language into something much more broken and everyday is brilliantly done. It also works as a great parody of a certain type of slightly over-precious writing about aging, the best example of which is probably Jenny Joseph's Warning.
Original, and skillfully done, this is a lovely bit of writing.