This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
Bus Driver's Delight
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Keaton Patterson woke with a big smile. Today was the day and life would surely be better. Keaton worked the noon to eight shift driving a city bus. There was one run that he dreaded: the 2:55 because it stopped at the Middle School at 3:10 and collected a score of rowdy kids that made his life -- and that of the adult passengers -- hell. But today was going to be different for new local ordinance went into effect.
Because he was anticipating what he would do, the day crept and then he stopped by the school and the usual pack of monsters flashed their bus passes and flocked to the back. Five minutes later a book hit the windshield. He pulled over and locked everything.
Slowly he walked to the rear where rowdies were. A hush fell over the bus as the ex-football player loomed larger and larger. Even the rowdiest were intimated. He returned the book the little seventh grader. Then he grabbed the ninth grader ringleader. "You been asking for this for years and now you're going to get it; and get it good." The three sitting on the long bench moved quickly as he motioned to them.
He sat down and pulled Arthur John Hollman close and yanked his belt open. His cargo pants fell exposing his fancy boxer shorts. As the youth yelled in protest, Keaton yanked the youth's boxers to his knees and pulled him over his lap but not so fast that the others couldn't see his equipment.
Then, in full view of all -- schoolmates and adult passengers -- he began to spank the troublemaker. Arthur was not little, not fragile so he could spank hard and fast. The way his own father had spanked him many times many years ago. Soon the youth's protests that he had no right and this was assault, battery and sex abuse and that he would sue turned into pleas to stop and promises to behave. But Arthur was not deterred and continued until the youth was reduced to a blubbering little boy with a flaming red-hot bottom in front of all.
Eventually, he stopped and placed the disgraced boy facing the rear of the bus with his pants still about his knees. "You stay there until your stop, ARTHUR JOHN HOLLMAN." the boy's bottom glowed like a pair of stop lights for all to see.
"Yes, sir." the youth managed through his sobs.
"And next time I'll use my belt, boy."
As Keaton Patterson, local hero, returned to the driver's seat, the adults applauded. The kids were absolutely silent staring at the red lights until each departed.
Yes, Keaton Patterson decided, the new law was going be make a big change. Imagine, in this modern day and age that the City Council would pass a law authorizing students to be spanked by those in charge of them in school and on the school bus. And the city bus was a school bus because they used their school passes.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 02 July 2003
Reviews
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)aol(dot)com>
I rated this story highly because of the innovative plot concept used so effectively. The underlying idea, that put-upon adults finally get fed up with the teenagers and take matters into their own capable hands, is a fond wish of and fodder for many a spanking story. The author has
taken the old rubric and spiffed it up with a new idea that tickles our fancy. Nicely done.
SirHal <janhal(at)midsouth(dot)rr(dot)com>
I loved this story. You managed to push a lot of my reader buttons with this one.
I had to check the word count two times. You sure did manage to get a lot into just 504 words. I kept thinking that you had to of used a lot more then that. Good job. Your word pictures were brilliant and clear. I am not going to use this story to pull out my soap box but I think we need more of this in today's real life. I also don't approve of child abuse in any form. I don't see this story as being child abuse. I know some that might disagree but, at least in my mind, the spankee was old enough to get a good old fashion spanking. I can not help but wonder what you would be able to do with an unlimited number of words. Please, keep up the good work.
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
The idea of having a law that allows corporal punishment for troublemakers has been used in stories but using parents or other authority figures.
I liked this story because the law was used by a bus driver. I also liked the teen being made to do cornertime -- in a bus! What original and delightful ideas!