This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Fanfiction
A bit of Law and Order fan fiction, based on the show's characters from season five, because I find all four of them hot:
A.D.A. Claire Kincaid (Jill Hennessey, recently of Crossing Jordan)
A.D.A. Jack McCoy (Sam Waterston -- 'nuff said)
Det. Lennie Briscoe (Jerry Orbach -- also, 'nuff said)
Det. Mike Logan (Chris Noth, recently of Sex and the City, as Big)
D.A. Adam Schiff (Steven Hill)
Claire's Comeuppance
By
Miss Lee <justliloleme@lycos.com>
"You lost the case." Jack McCoy glared at Claire Kincaid, his hands on his hips. "What do you have to say for yourself?"
"I did not lose the case. The evidence was tainted."
McCoy walked around his desk and sat down, lacing his hands together behind his head as he leaned back in his chair.
"Claire, you've been screwing up a lot lately. Just because we're sleeping together doesn't mean you can get away with poor job performance."
"I have not been screwing up!" she said while stamping her foot. "It's the detectives. They're the ones losing cases for us."
Eyeing her, McCoy picked up the phone and dialed. "Yeah, Lennie, Jack here. Can you and Mike drop by after your shift ends? It's about the Sanderson case." Jack raised his eyebrows in rebuke as the female ADA stuck her tongue out at him.
Thirty-five minutes later, Kincaid found herself staring at her toes, every word from Lennie another nail in her coffin of a case.
"She told you the evidence was tainted?" Briscoe laughed. "I wish Logan were here to enjoy this with me."
McCoy crossed the room to lift her face so that her gaze met his.
"Claire, you lied. You know I don't tolerate lying."
"What do you plan to do?" Lennie said.
She shivered as she heard her lover laugh. "Something I do from time to time. Bend over the back of the easy chair, dear."
She did as she was told, chewing her lip the whole time Jack bared her bottom.
Lennie whistled. "You're going to spank her? Wow! You sure she doesn't mind my watching?"
"Watch, Hell. You're going to help," Jack said, taking his fraternity paddle off the wall before speaking to Kincaid.
"I'm going to give you twenty, Claire. After that, Detective Briscoe will spank you. You're lucky that Detective Logan couldn't join us."
McCoy positioned himself as a batter would, then let the punishing wood fly. Claire, in tears from mere anticipation, sobbed openly by the tenth stroke. By twenty, the deep ache, in combination with the surface burn, had her kicking and stomping and begging.
"Jack, owww, I promise not to lie. Not ever again. Please, report my poor job performance to the bar association and to Mr. Schiff, but no more, please!"
Neither man acknowledged her pleas as they gazed appreciatively at her lovely bottom clenching and unclenching with the pain, bright red and blazing hot.
"Lennie, your turn."
"Can I use my belt?"
"Please," McCoy said.
The first bite of the detective's belt made her screech. She'd experienced Jack's belt in the past, but Lennie's was unlike any she'd ever felt. Jack had to hold her down as the last ten welted her upper thighs.
The detective watched Kincaid attack her lover with gusto, writhing against him once her punishment was over.
"Claire, remember, we have a guest. I'll take care of you later."
Hearing her moan with desire, Briscoe cracked, "Man, I should have done this to my second wife."
The End
© Copyright justliloleme, 01 July 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
I swear not only did this female lose her case she lost her briefs <eg>. Letting a cop-o belt your baby is just kinky, and I object. I did like that he moved in to strike, for the record. It seems all the best points were made out of court. This FanFiction made me want to approach the bench and bend over. <g>
Nice FanFiction, good job.
Mary <GEMLADI(at)aol(dot)com>
I loved this story, and I also loved the way the characters were true to their form, and mannerisms, I found this to extemely well written, and it has me wanting to read a lot more, the flow of the story was excellent, a terrific job, but where is the next part? <smile>
Pablo <pablo(dot)stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I'm not the most devoted Law and Order fan, but I know enough to see that this captures the feel of the show, its conventions and characters, very well. The civilised, clipped dialogue is just right. And it does exactly what fan-fiction should, which is, while staying true to the genre, speculating different aspects and layers that we don't normally see.
Perhaps I missed a little of the convoluted plotting and exposition of a typical episode. A little of that, even in the form of parody, at the beginning of the story, would have given it an even bigger kick.
I'll leave it to true fans of the show to say whether the story is hot or not <smile>, but it worked nicely for me. And the last line is awfully cute.