This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Sometimes it's real
By
Kent Stoneking <kentls01@msn.com>
Across his lap, her bottom bare. The hairbrush descends.
"How could you fall for that? The oldest scam in the book!"
The doorbell rings. He sends her to the corner.
A black man, heavily accented English. "Mrs. Cavanaugh?"
"She's ... indisposed."
"Please give her this."
A certified check for $4.2 million.
The End
© Copyright Kent Stoneking, 25 June 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
This makes me wonder why the top didn't believe her. Perhaps the top should be spanked for a basic lack of faith? This might be a nice way to end this couple's evening. Great job creating wonder and mystery. I loved seeing them win money. Thank you!
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
ACKKKKK this is wonderful. Oh I want to read a sequel to this one. Well written, made me read it more than once to get the full impact. Yes, a whole story in 50 words. Very very good. The author got it all as far as I'm concerned.
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
This story needs more words to make its point but unfortunately for the category its entered in the point is to make your point with few allowed words. This one misses its mark.