This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Line
Jim
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"Meg phone," Daddy hollered. "I'm coming," Meg raced to the telephone. Dad turns to Mom; "It's that Jim boy. It's safe to let her talk to him." Jim overhears the comment.
Jim walks by Meg's Mom as she is talking to her neighbor over the fence. "Hello Jim, Meg is inside. Oh, that's Meg's date." Jim heads up the walkway and overhears. Mom continues to the neighbor, "Oh, she's safe going out with Jim alright."
"Meg, Jim is at the door," Daddy yells. "So Jim, heard you got a brake job done on your truck." Jim nods yes. "Keeping it safe, good job."
Meg yells out as the door slams behind her, "Don't wait up. Jim will get me home safe and sound."
Meg feels free to pick out the restaurant they will go to, then she complains about their dinner. She picks the movie, then bitches all the way through it. She kisses, rubs and sweet talks Jim into a hard-on up at the lake afterwards, but refuses to allow Jim to explore under her clothes.
As they get ready to leave Jim opens the truck door for Meg to jump in and she comments, as she wiggles her butt at him. "Oh Jim, I always feel so safe with you."
Suddenly Jim has Meg's upper arm. He marches her to the back of the truck, pulling the tailgate down he sits and pulls Meg over his strong safe lap. He lifts her summer dress. Peels down her little panties and give her one heck of a lecture, about being a tease, along with a hard spanking on her bare hinny.
With Meg hanging safely over Jim's lap and in tears, Jim fingers her wet and reddened nether region and announces, "I maybe trustworthy but I'm not safe!"
The End
© Copyright Peachesicu, 25 June 2003
Reviews
Ted <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
The story suffers from too obvious a setup for the last line, and contains some spelling errors and awkward exposition.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I liked the premise of the story. Very clever use of the line too. I do quibble over the fact that the transitions felt a bit choppy to me and the spelling was a bit dicey. However, after reading over the story several times, I liked it more and more. I sure do like the imagination that made up the story.
I think that the thought behind the story and the fresh take on the situation more than makes up for any other flaws.
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)aol(dot)com>
Ah, this Jim guy sounds like the Boy Scout I always wanted to be! You know ladies, still waters run deep, and safe guys like Jim can be the most intriguing of all. Too bad most girls go for the bad boys rather than the good boys with a dangerous streak to them! Jim gets his own back, good and proper, just like a safe guy should. If you think this story line hit home with me a bit, and that I over rated the story as a result, you're probably right. I WAS Jim in many ways. Still am too.