This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Once Is Never Enough, Yea Right!
By
I plead, Temporary Insanity.
It was there.
Sticking out.
All bare, naked and cute.
The paddle was there too.
Within too easy a reach.
If it had been my bum you'd have picked up the paddle and swung!
Yes! You're the top! But...
OUCH!
OWWWW! I only swung once!
Wahhhhhh!
The End
© Copyright Peachesicu, 23 June 2003
Reviews
Kessily
I definitely understand the temptation here! I've been there myself <grin>. Very cute little piece. There were a couple of lines that didn't flow quite as well and they detracted from it a bit, but over all it was very well done.
Mary <GEMLADI(at)aol(dot)com>
I am not to sure if I would classify this as a mini saga, it seemed more of a poem to me, it was cute, and even a little funny, a tad confusing but all in all, a funny little bitty.
Pablo <pablo(dot)stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A cute little vignette, which will probably strike a chord for most people whose relationship has a clearly-defined top/bottom pattern. Even the most bottomish bottom (maybe especially the most bottomish bottom) can't resist the chance to bite off a little more than they can chew. Terrific use of very few words.