This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody with apologies to McCartney
OTK
By
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Yesterday
Suddenly
Why I need this so
OTK
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The End
© Copyright Sem, 17 June 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I loved this poem. It's beautiful and fits my mood very well today. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us. I totally relate to desiring OTK so that stress and tension can melt away. Very good job.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Excellent parody! It plays superbly on the rhymes and rhythm of the original, and yet makes a perfect sense in kinky context. Fun to read, even more fun to sing. Really good.
C_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
I took a while to figure out how this fit into the song, but it finally did, and fit perfectly. I used to be a dj and it took me a while to click to which song it was for, but once I listened to the song a few times and read this piece it just clicked into place. I love it also cause that's exactly how it feels to me to be spanked, and it was very easy to identify with the release and contentment. funny how some time otk can really help...if they ever figure out how to bottle a spanking the pharmaceutical companies will all be twice as rich as they already are. :)