This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
The Appointment
By
She woke to the gentle buzz of the alarm clock. Her first reaction was to reach out and hit the snooze button, until a moment later when she realized that today was the day. She threw off her pajamas as she quickly got out of bed and stepped into the shower. With the steady rhythm of the water hitting her, she allowed herself a brief reverie as she tried to imagine how it would take place this time. She turned around, and the sensation of the water hitting her breasts only seemed to intensify the feelings she was having throughout.
She stepped out of the shower, dried off and went to her closet. She selected a black bra and matching panties, along with a white sleeveless top and a pair of denim jeans. She finished off with a pair of open-toed sandals. Stopping in front of the mirror, she took the opportunity to tie her long, golden blonde hair behind her head.
When she was finished, she picked up her keys and walked outside. She quickly found her Cabriolet convertible and got in, starting the engine and backing out. As if on auto-pilot, the car seemed to drive itself to the prearranged spot, an old abandoned farm. Her heartbeat quickened at the sight of his car parked next to the barn. She parked the Cabriolet next to his car and turned off the ignition.
Now she felt the hesitation that she always seemed to experience at this point in the process. Sitting there motionless in the driver's seat, she reminded herself that normal people don't do this sort of thing, and that somehow, her friends were all going to find out. But she knew she wanted -- needed -- to do this, and ultimately the fear of how she would live with herself knowing that she had not taken advantage of this opportunity won over. She stepped out of the car, closing her door. There was no need to lock it; there wasn't another soul for miles around.
Gingerly, she walked over to the barn and opened the door. As she stepped in, she noticed several crates in a corner. And suddenly their eyes met. He was sitting on one of the crates. He smiled and nodded in silent greeting. She nodded as well, acknowledging both his presence and the reason she was there. No confessions were necessary. Neither were lectures. She knew what she had done, and she knew what she needed in order to make amends. He did not need to ask, for his job was only to provide that catharsis and release. With still not a word between them, he looked down slightly and patted his right knee.
She slowly walked over next to him and stopped. She looked at him, almost pleadingly, as if to ask if there was any other way she could obtain her own absolution. Knowing this was part of her ordeal, he said nothing, merely waiting. She draped herself over his lap....
The End
© Copyright Mscott, 16 June 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahool(dot)com>
Great job on this story. I can imagine getting ready and feeling that anticipation that comes before such a meeting. Well described emotions and feelings. I really enjoyed watching this young woman get herself ready for her spanking, for something that she needed for her own well being.
Very nice.
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Nice build and an even read. It has me asking questions and wanting more, which is very good. But it also leaves me wanting. Overall, the descriptions and general story are good. The text is very well written. The story itself lacks some passion and some of the descriptions aren't really necessary. I like that her type of car was important but his wasn't. The originality isn't as creative, but the story line is a good one.
Keep up the good work. Try to convey some more of her feelings, there were some, but it would have been nice to see more.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msnl(dot)com>
Very effective, if a bit long, buildup, and the story ended at exactly the right point. I found the woman's hesitation, and her fears, very believable. The wordless scene between the two was especially well done; it's difficult to portray that type of interaction without words, and the author did an excellent job.