All In the Game -- A Spanking Parody

This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments

Category: Parody (Based on "All In the Game" by Charles Dawes and Carl Sigman)

Don A. Landhill <DLandhill@aol.com>

Many a tear has to fall but it's all in the game,
All in the wonderful game that we know as love.
You play the naughty brat, and he give your rear a spat;
Then you're bending flat, paddle rising high above.

And then some times you feel small but it's all in the game
Soon he will lead you to bed where he'll tuck you away
And he'll kiss your tender cheek, and tell you not to speak,
knowing exactly how you play.

So long you will wait for his call but it's all in the game
and when he calls the play makes a wonderful time.
He will cherish and delight, and you'll play into the night
and all the fun will make your heart to climb.

The End

Reviews

Kessily
I don't think I have ever read the piece that this parodies, so I can't judge on the basis of whether or not it is an accurate parody. However, it was cute and definitely fun to read.

Huh Chuh <huhchuh@yahoo.com>
Beautiful. Excellent job. The ending left me all goose-bumpy and feeling good. I enjoyed knowing that they both know how to play the game and that they are both willing to expend the effort to play it. I love their understanding and their love for each other. I'm filling in the gaps of the parody with my imagination. It's lovely.

Mary <GEMLADI@aol.com>
This was a very cute poem, and hit close to home I loved it.

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