This short story is an entry in the 2001 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Too Hard
By
NO! I can't do it. It's just too hard. How can I face him and tell him what I've done. He won't understand, he won't believe me when I tell him I didn't do it on purpose. I just can't face telling him. How do I admit I was selfish, thinking only of myself. I have to tell him now. But I can't. He's working, I can't bother him at work. I'll have to wait till morning. Yeah, first thing in the morning, he'll call and I'll tell him then.
Morning? That's a long time away. I can't wait that long, it's just too hard. I have to tell him now.
My hand shakes as I pick up the phone. I can't believe I'm calling him. My voice stutters as I ask to speak with him.
"Bill, I'm sorry to bother you," my voice barely audible.
"What's wrong?" He asks.
"IIII....went shopping and spent more than we agreed on."
"How much more?"
"EM... $45.00 more."
"Tami, I needed that money. I thought we agreed half for you half for me. And you spent more than your fair share."
"I know but...."
"NO buts Tami, you broke our agreement. Look, I have to get back to work. We'll discuss this when I get home on Friday."
"What are you going to do until then?"
"I'll manage, but I want you to know I'm not happy."
"I'm sorry honey."
"Not as sorry as you'll be when I get home, bye."
CLICK
Four days, I have to wait four days till he comes home. I have to be strong. But I can't, It's too hard.
Three days to go. What's he going to do to me. I can't think about it. It's too hard.
Two days; is there going to be mercy or is it going to be long and hard.
One day; he comes home tomorrow.What can I do to make it up to him. I'll cook his favorite dinner. I'll dress in my sexiest outfit. I'll be his little love slave. I'll do anything he asks, no matter how hard it is.
He was calm all through dinner; he even remarked how much he liked the outfit. Maybe he won't be so hard on me.
"We have something to discuss, Now! You know what you did was wrong, so let's get this over with. Stay still and take it like a good girl." He comands.
Through the tears I sob "I'm so sorry, please It hurts.
"It's suppose to hurt, You have a lesson to learn. Now keep quiet and stay still."
After only a few more minutes I start to breakdown. "I can't it hurts, Please it's too hard."
After a couple more minutes he begins to let up. "Shhhh shhhh, it's all over now." He whispers, as he wipes the hair from my eyes. And says the words I've been longing to hear,"you've been forgiven."
"But how can you forgive me so fast?" I sniffle.
With a soft touch and peaceful grin he whispers, "It was easy."
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Starting with a monologue and going into a dialogue...nice touch. I do so envy those who can write dialogue. Tami writes about guilt and forgiveness which seems to be a central theme amongst many spankos. The fast forgiveness part was a nice light touch. Also, the domestic scene is nice to see. Enjoyable story.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This is good at implying - implying the spanking, and the torment of waiting. Might have been better to imply the infraction too, $45 might not seem like a big deal to your readers. I like the contrast between hard and easy - and how quickly she was forgiven.